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Re: The Mad House update chapter 7
« Reply #60 on: June 30, 2012, 03:30:05 PM »
that fighting scene was AWESOME :on GJ:

mayuyu...that's what you get if you messing around with rena,you bring her beastly alter ego -gekikara- out and you got pawned :kekeke:

rena goes on rampage and owning... :cool1:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 7
« Reply #61 on: June 30, 2012, 04:09:21 PM »
YES YESSS GEKIKARA POWARRRRRRRRR.

Mayu should use some magic power/chakra/spirit etc from mangas to see if it works LOL

And how can mental hospitals allow their patients to carry knives LOL

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 7
« Reply #62 on: June 30, 2012, 04:17:14 PM »
Geki!!!!  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

OMG, EPIC FIGHT!!! Sory anzai-san, but I'm glad she beaten Mayu and not the other way around  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

Yes, I indeed also think Mariko is one crazy here  :rofl: :rofl:
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 7
« Reply #63 on: June 30, 2012, 04:17:32 PM »
Chapter 5
Tokyo Mew Mew!!?? Jurinaa!!  :hiakhiakhiak:
aaa Thank you miyumi-san for adding mayuki  :hee:
 :cool1: yeeeii Jurina wins  :onioncheer:
Chapter 6
Rena is so cute when she is calm  :nya:
Atsumina has always the first step I'm looking farward for Mayuki's interactions more than others   :luvluv2:
Chapter 7
First thank you that you decided to continue this fanfic  :farofflook: I really love it!  :shy2:
as always Gekikara is always scary  :badluck:
I was worried about Mayu  :fainted:
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 7
« Reply #64 on: June 30, 2012, 04:45:10 PM »
so hilarious..so much madness!

LOL..continue pliz..


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Re: The Mad House update chapter 7
« Reply #66 on: June 30, 2012, 06:11:01 PM »
Wow...the fight scene is very scary...but totally awesome

Rena is very super scary...
Who could Mayu survive with all the stabbing

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 8
« Reply #67 on: June 30, 2012, 10:32:01 PM »
This chapter goes out to all the Atsumina, Kojiyuu, and Mayuki fans. Please enjoy and now, let the love quarrel begin!
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Chapter 8

Mariko was heading down to the lunch room when someone stopped her from behind. She turned around and saw Takamina and Yuko staring at her teary eyed. She was suprised at how they were almost the exact same height.

"What is it?" Mariko asked.

"We need your help!" Yuko said.

"What?"

"Haruna and Acchan have been spending more time together and have been completely ignoring us!" Takamina said.

"Why?"

"Well Acchan is still mad about me putting her in a straight jacket and locking her in the time out room."

"Did you apologize?"

"Yeah! I even tried giving her the strawberry milk she likes but she still rejected me." Takamina was ready to start crying.

"Alright calm down. Yuko what's your problem?" Mariko asked.

"Acchan won't let me go near Nyannyan and now I can't see her! I miss her so much!" Yuko said.

They both started to cry in each other arms. Mariko thought they reminded her of drunk men who lost their wives.

"Alright quit crying. I'll go talk to them." Mariko said.

"Thank you!" both Takamina and Yuko jumped on Mariko almost making her fall over.

Mariko walked to Haruna's room where the two girls were. She walked in and found Acchan doing Haruna's nails.

"Hey." Mariko said.

"Hi Mariko." Haruna said.

"Hi." Acchan said.

"So Acchan I heard you dumped Takamina. What's up with that?"

"This is punishment. She locked me in a room and put me in restraints."

"She only did it because you were getting out of control."

"What was that?" Acchan shot Mariko and evil glare.

"Nothing. Haruna don't you miss Yuko?" Mariko asked.

"A little. But it's a lot more peaceful not having her constantly bugging me." Haruna said.

"Yuko is a mess without you. She's out side crying her eyes out with Takamina."

"Really?"

"See for yourself." Mariko said pointing out the window.

The two looked out the window on the door and saw Takamina and Yuko hugging each other while still crying and occasionally shouting their partner's names.

"Losers." Acchan said.

"They're weird." Haruna said.

The two went back to their regular activity. Seeing how she wasn't going to get anywhere by talking, Mariko decided to use a differnet approach.

"Hey Acchan."

"Yeah?"

"You got any rope?"

"Yeah. Why?"

"I got an idea."

A couple minutes later, Mariko had dragged Yuko and Takamina into a room and tied them to chairs using the rope Acchan gave her.

"Hey what's going on?" Yuko questioned.

"What's the meaning of this?" Takamina asked.

"Time for some marrige counsaling." Mariko said.

"Girls!"

Haruna and Acchan walked in and sat in the chair across the two who were bound.

"Acchan!" Takamina said as she tried to get out of the ropes.

"Nyannyan!" Yuko said as she started to squirm.

"Both of you settle down. We're going to talk everything through and hopefully conclude to a fair understanding." Mariko said.

"What?" Yuko said looking confused.

"We're gonna talk and then make everything better." Mariko said.

"Ohh ok!!"

Mariko wondered if the girl had the brain of a squirrel as well.

"Good. Well then first will start with Haruna. Haruna please tell Yuko what you don't like about Yuko."

Haruna paused and thought about it for a while. Then she started to speak,

"Well she's always clinging herself onto me and always chasing me trying to kiss me."

"That's because I love you!"

"Shhh! Let her speak and then it'll be your turn." Mariko said.

"Thank you. Anyways, I don't like it when you come out of nowhere and try to groupe me. It's weird and perverted and I don't like it at all. Ok I'm done."

"Alright now Yuko, what do you not like about Haruna?"

"NOTHING! There is nothing I don't like about Haruna." the squirrel girl said.

"Alright. Now Haruna tell me what you like about Yuko." Mariko said.

"Well I guess I like her smile. And some of the faces she makes are really funny. Oh and she always manages to make me smile whenever I'm sad." Haruna said.

"Very good. Now Yuko your turn."

"I like EVERYTHING about Haruna. Her hair, her eyes, eye legs, her lips, her nose, her smile, her boobs-"

"Ok that's enough. Now Haruna, could you please tell Yuko what she could do to let you feel more comfortable around her."

"Well if she stopped popping out of nowhere and the kissing and grouping then I think I could adjust." Haruna said.

"Really?!" Yuko said with her eyes practically sparkling.

"Yeah."

"Ok. Then Yuko do you think you could do these things?" Mariko asked.

"YES!"

"Alright. Then I'm going to untie you. But if you do anything that upsets Haruna, I'm tying you back up."

"Ok!"

Mairko untied Yuko and she immediately ran over and jumped on Haruna's lap. She hugged her and clung to her like a cat.

"Nyannyan! I love you sooo much!" she said.

"I... love you too Yuko." Haruna said blushing.

"HOORAY!" Yuko said as she continued to hug the girl.

"Alright next is Takamina and Acchan." Mariko said.

"Acchan. Tell Takamina what you don't like about Takamina."

"I don't like her being short or her boring stories. She's mean to me when I'm just trying to get what I want and won't listen." Acchan said.

"Ok thank you. Now Takamina it's you're turn."

"I don't like how you act like a spoiled brat." Takamina said in a nasty tone.

"What'd you say you midget?" Acchan stood up.

"Hey calm down. We're only talking, no fists." Mariko said pushing Acchan back in her chair.

"Now Acchan what do you like about Takamina?"

"Well I like how she treats me like a princess and a sister." Acchan said blushing.

"Good. Now Takamina."

"I like how she's always there for me when I'm lonely." Takamina said doing the same thing as Acchan.

"Alright now Acchan tell Takamina what she could do to make you feel more comfortable." Mariko said.

"Well just be nicer to me. You're so mean when you get angry." Acchan said.

"Ok and Takamina."

"Could you please try to be a little nicer to me too? It's kinda mean when you call me a midget." Takamina said.

"Deal."

"Alright then I'll untie you."

Mariko untied Takamina and the two embraced like lost lovers reuniteing that you see in movies. Everything was now better. Haruana has learned to accept Yuko and Yuko not to be super pervy. Acchan and Takamina both learned to be nicer to each other and now everything was peaceful. Mariko left the two couples to let them adjust. She felt pretty good knowing things will be a little easier now. Mariko was walking down the hall when she ran into Yukirin.

"Oh sorry Yukirin I didn't-"

Mariko froze at the sight of Yukirin. She couldn't believe what she was seeing. Standing before her was the yellow ranger from the show "Power Rangers." Yukirin had the whole costume and everything. All she was missing was the head piece. Yukirin saw Mariko staring at her and began blushing.

"Yellow Ranger!" 

Runing down the hall was the pink ranger. She ran over to Yukirin and took off her helmet. Suprise, suprise, it was Mayuyu.

"What are you doing? You forgot your helmet." Mayuyu said as she put the yellow ranger helmet on Yukirin.

She just noticed Mariko staring at the two.

"What? We're cosplaying as the Pink and Yellow Ranger. Got a problem?"

"Uhh no." Mariko said.

"Um Mayuyu maybe we should stop. This is embarrassing." Yukirin said.

"No way! We still need to defeat the villians." a light bulb popped into Mayuyu's head just now. She looked over at Mariko and gave her a devilish smile.

"Hey Mariko go get your nurse. I need you guys to do something for me."

"What is it?"

"Just do it. I'll explain later."

Mariko had no idea what the Cyborg was planning. But then ten minutes later, she finally figured it out.

"Man why do I have to be the side kick!" Miichan said as she came out in a bug costume.

"Because you're shorter. The side kicks are always shorter. Plus there was no way I was going to be whatever that is you're wearing."

"It's a fly!" Mayuyu said as she came down carrying a pink gun.

"And you need to put on your goggles Fly Queen."

"But I can't see anything!"

"Do it!"

"Fine!"

Mariko put the goggles on that were supposed to replicate the eyes of a fly. But it only made her vision worse.

"Alright now when Yukirin and I come in, you guys just say the lines we gave you. Ready go!"

Yukirin and Mayuyu came in their Pink and Yellow ranger outfits.

"Halt evil doer!" Mayuyu said.

"Release that cat!" Yukirin said reffering to Jurina who was forced into this and was now tied to a chair wearing cat ears.

"Never!" Mariko said giving an evil laugh.

"Fly girl attack!"

"Yes my queen!" Miichan said as she charged at the two Rangers.

"Yellow use your Thunder Sword!" Mayuyu said.

Yukirin pulled out a fake sword and struck Miichan down by hitting her in the head.

"Ahhh I'm dead!" Miichan said falling to the ground.

"Curse you Yellow! Well let's see how you handle this!" Mairko said as she pulled out water ballons that were supposed to be acid bombs.

"Take this!" Mariko threw one at Yukirin and it hit her right in the chest.

"Ahh I'm hurt!" Yukirin said falling down.

"Yellow!" Mayuyu ran over to her side.

"Yelow stay with me!"

"Pink forget me. You must defeat the queen." Yukirin said in a dying voice.

"No! Not without you!"

"Do it for me... Do it for justice." then Yukirin pretended to die.

"YELLOW!"

"Ha ha ha! Looks like you're all alone!" Mairko said.

"You'll pay for that Fly Queen!"

"Bring it on!"

"Time to use my secret weapon!"

"Secret weapon?" Mariko thought. Mayuyu never mention a secret weapon.

Mayuyu walked over to the side and pulled out what looked like a small pink bazooka.

"Pink Ranger's secret weapon! Lovely Pink Cutie Bazooka! Prepare to die!"

Mariko shot off the bazooka and something went flying straight at Mariko. Luckily, Mariko moved out of the way before it could hit. There was a loud crash followed by a cloud of ash. When it cleared up, Mariko saw a huge hole in the wall where the bazooka had fired.

"What the heck is that thing?" Mariko asked.

"A bean bag shooter. They use it in riot control. I got this one online so I just painted it pink and now it's my Lovely Pink Cutie Bazooka." Mayuyu said.

"That thing could seriously hurt someone!"

"Yeah I know which is why I had you play the villan and not Yukirin."

"I'm sorry Shinoda-san!" Yukirin said.

"Hey you're supposed to be dead!" Mayuyu shouted.

Yukirin died once more.

"Anyways, I would suggest you start running. I still have five shots left."

"You gotta be kidding me!"

Mariko started running like crazy as the pink otaku chased after her with the bazooka. As she was running, Mariko thought,

"Man what is wrong with this otaku?!"   

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Well there's chapter 8. Please tell me what you think! I tried my best into putting what everyone wanted so I hope I've made you all happy with the results. Thank you for reading and be expecting the next chapter very soon!

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 8
« Reply #68 on: June 30, 2012, 10:44:55 PM »
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"Losers." Acchan said.

"They're weird." Haruna said.


I really laugh at this!!
yukirin and mayu being power rangers! your good miyumi san!
I love my atsumina here..thank you!!! make more of them :*
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« Reply #69 on: June 30, 2012, 10:58:00 PM »
I'm laughing so hard at the power rangers part.. :rofl: :rofl: mariko even take part in it.. :lol: :lol:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 8
« Reply #70 on: July 01, 2012, 02:37:51 AM »
<facepalmed> what the hell is this Power Rangers thingy? XD I'm echoing Flean-san's laugh.. :rofl: :rofl:

but damn that bazooka, it's the real deal! :lol:
I've just thought about it, how could real weapons get any access to the facility?
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 8
« Reply #71 on: July 01, 2012, 06:36:34 AM »
I wonder where Mayuyu got all those things  :lol: :lol: looks like she has many secret weapons  :lol: :lol:
My tears come out a bit while reading the power rangers part, it was sooo  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Poor Takamina and Yuko crying for their waifu~ but at least they get their waifu back~  XD XD

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 9
« Reply #72 on: July 01, 2012, 06:57:40 AM »
I've been getting a lot of questions lately on how do the patients manage to get such dangerous weapons into the facility. So, I will let the patients answer your question with their own story. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 9

A couple days after the Power Ranger battle, Mariko started to wonder how everyone was smuggling in such dangerous weapons. This was a facility with security guards and cameras so everything should be pretty tight right? But yet somehow people manage to smuggle in dangerous weapons like knives and bazookas. Mariko decided to look into the subject and find out what was the cause of the weapon smuggling. Mariko first suspected Mayuyu had something to do with it. She mentioned that she ahd ordered her bazooka online so that must mean she orders weapons for other patients to right? Mariko walked into Mayuyu's room and found her on the bed reading manga again.

"What do you want?" she asked.

"I wanted to know how everyone somehow gets weapons into the facility." Mariko said.

"What does it have to do with me?"

"Well, you said that you had ordered your bazooka online. So I thought that you ordered weapons for everyone else too."

"Nope."

"You're lying."

"Here look at this."

Mayuyu walked over to her computer and pulled up a website called "weaponshere.org" It was a website where you could order all kinds of weapons from guns to swords and even bombs. To the side, there was the name Mimi written in red curseive.

"Who's Mimi?" Mariko asked.

"That's the owner of the website. They're the ones who deliver the weapons to me.This is where I get my weapons and sometimes my cosplay costumes. I own the cosplay cutie weapon's pack."

Mayuyu showed Mariko the weapons that she had ordered that came with the pack. There were a lot of guns.

"Where do you hide all of them?" Mariko asked.

"I hide them. But I'm not going to tell you. I only use them for emergencies." Mayuyu said.

"Ok... So is this how everyone get's there weapons. By having you order them for you and then they pay you?"

"What do I look like? A black market?" I only order weapons for myself. Although that's not a bad idea."

"Forget it. Anyways, thanks for telling me this. Don't worry I won't tell anyone as long as you don't try to kill me next time."

"No promises there." Mayuyu said as she continued to read her manga.

Mariko left the room fearing if she stayed any longer then something bad would happen. The next stop was Jurina's room. Mariko remembered Jurina had two hunting knives that she once saw on a TV program. She walked in and found Jurina on the bed and Rena was nowhere to be found.

"Where's Rena?" Mariko asked.

"She's getting certain tests done. The heads want to make sure she doesn't act out like she did before." Jurina said.

"I see. Well I wanted to ask you something."

"What is it?"

"Where did you get those knives that you used when you fought Mayuyu?"

"Why? I'm not going to tell you." Jurina hissed.

"Come on. I want to know. I might want to own a pair myself." Mariko lied.

"Well, as long as you don't tell anyone. Wait a minute."

Jurina walked over to her desk and pulled out a white sheet of paper.

"Here."

She handed it to Mariko and began to read it.

"This is Mimi. Please fill what you would like and I will see if I have it in stock."

"Who is Mimi?" Mariko asked.

"My supplier. Everytime I need new weapons, I fill out that sheet and slide it outside the door at exactly midnight every Sunday. Then the next day, I'll find a package with my name on it and inside are the weapons I requested." Jurina said.

"And you get them for free?"

"Yep. This Mimi person doesn't charge me anything. They only ask that I not meet them in person and keep ordering from them. Last week they gave me a great deal with the samurai warrior pack. I've got like three katanas stashed in this room."

"I don't want to know. Anyways, thanks for letting me know. Do you know anyone who might know who this Mimi person is?" Mariko asked.

"Umm no one I can think of. But whoever it is, it's someone with access to the outside world which could be any of the staff here."

"I see. Thanks for the tip."

"Let me know if you find out who it is. I would really like to meet Mimi and thank him or her in person." Jurina said.

"I'll do that."

Mariko walked out of the room with a lot of questions in her mind. Who is Mimi? Why do they only come in on midnight and on Sundays? If it's someone who works in the facility then it's probably someone who has the night shift since they come late. Mariko walked over to the bulliten board where all the doctors and nurses write in their hours. The only ones that had night shift were Sayaka and Takamina. So it was one of those two who was behind the whole master plan. Today was Sunday so it was time for Mariko to become a detective and investigate. She first decided to search Takamina's desk for any clues. When the small midget left, Mariko slipped in before the door completely shut.

"Gotta find some kind of clue." Mariko thought.

She began searching the desk. Nothing looked out of the ordinary. When she looked through the shelves the only thing she found odd was a scrap book full of pictures of her and Acchan. Mariko was pretty mortifyed seeing the picture of Takamina and Acchan at some Chirstmas party. Takamina was in a reindeer outfit and Acchan was in a santa suit. She didn't want to know what they were doing. Mariko kept searching and still found nothing.

"Well it looks like there was nothing here." Mariko thought.

But then, Mariko saw a small black folder under the desk. Mariko pulled it out and on the cover it said, request forms.

"Is this it?"

Mariko looked through the folder and was only disappointed. These request forms were forms Acchan filled out saying what she wanted from Takamina. One of them said a whip, hand cuffs, a ball gag and a latex suit. Mariko didn't want to know what Acchan and Takamina were doing when she wasn't around. Just then, Mariko could hear Takamina coming back. She quickly put the folder back and left before Takamina came in. Now Mariko knew that there was no way Takamina was the culprit. Which only means one other person. Sayaka. Mariko walked to Sayaka's office and found her reading some papers. She had to get out if she was going to look around.

"Hey Sayaka." Mariko said.

"Oh hello Mariko." Sayaka said.

"Hey I'm not sure if you knew this, but I saw Sae running down the hall wearing something on her head. It looked like her under wear."

"Ah jeez! I told her to quit doing that."

Sayaka got up and rushed out of the room leaving Mariko to do what she pleased. Mariko started to look around and found nothing wrong. But all the drawers in her desk were locked which made her seem very suspiscious of Sayaka. Mariko has found the culprit and now all she has to do is catch Sayaka in the act.

Later on that day, Mariko pretended to leave but actually snuck back inside using the back door. She hid in a janitors closet and pulled out a lap top. Then she opened up three screens that showed three live footages of different halls in the building. She got the cameras from Mayuyu who happily gave them up in exchange of a Sailor Moon magic wand that Mariko used to play with when she was little. It was eleven o clock which means an hour till show time. Mariko sat there and waited until it was time. Then when the clock on her phone stroke twelve, it was time to catch a culprit.

"Let's see what we can find." Mariko said.

At first there was nothing. But then, in the third camerea, a dark figure appeared in the hall. Looking at the footage, Mariko thought the figure looked too short to be Sayaka but too tall to be Takamina. The culprit was someone else. Mariko quickly ran down to the hall where she saw the figure. When she got there, there was no one to be found. It was dark so she couldn't see anything but Mariko could feel like someone was there. Some one was watching her waiting to attack.

"Show yourself!" Mariko shouted.

Mariko's heart was racing. She wasn't sure if it was due to fear or excitement but it felt like her heart was about to pop out of her chest. Mariko could hear shuffling coming from the darkness around her. Not feeling safe, she pressed herself against the wall and tried feeling for a light switch. She eventually found it and flipped the switch. The lights flickered on and Mariko didn't find anything. But then something tapped her on the shoulder causing Mariko to scream.

"AHHHHH!"

"Ahhhhhh!"

Mairko recgonized that irritating voice. Mariko turned around and saw Miichan staring at her.

"Gachapin?!"

"Hello." Miichan said.

"What are you doing here?" Mariko asked.

"I forgot my cell phone. I was on my way out when I saw you in the halls. What are you doing here?"

"Nothing I forgot someting too. Anyways, don't scare me like that. You almost gave me a heat attack."

"Sorry."

"Well I'm going to leave now. I'm really tired so I'll see you tomorrow ok?"

"Yep!"

"Alright see you later Gachapin!" Mariko said turning to leave.

"Goodbye!" Miichan said.

Miichan waited until she heard the back door open and close indicating Mariko had left. Then, she walked over to a room and stopped in front of the door. Miichan pulled out a small brown box and left it in front of the door. Then she also left a business card that had the name Mimi on it. Once the package was dropped off, Miichan quickly got up and left without leaving a trace. As she walked out into the parking lot Miichan thought,

"It's a good thing Mariko didn't catch me. Otherwise she would've spoiled all the fun."

Miichan smiled with an evil grin and pulled out of the drive way happy as ever knowing she made another successful delivery.

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Well did you get it? Did you figure out who Mimi was? Well if you didn't figure it out, the culprit was Miichan! "Mimi" represents the mi's in "Mi"negishi "Mi"nami. Pretty clever right? Anyways, I hope this answered all your questions about how the patients got dangerous weapons into the facility. I hope you enjoyed this interesting mystery chapter and tell me what you think! Also, the website mentioned was not real. Please do not go to it. It's only a story!   

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 9
« Reply #73 on: July 01, 2012, 07:24:43 AM »
LOL so it's miichan!!
AtsuMina S&M?!!! The princess is actually so evil!!! Hahaha!!

Mariko and Miichan are alike lol, wanting the patients to get into trouble.
Please make some smexy parts for Mayuki!!!!

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 9
« Reply #74 on: July 01, 2012, 10:31:15 AM »
that gachapin really need some 'extra treatment' :on voodoo:

just wait until mariko found out :kekeke:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 9
« Reply #75 on: July 01, 2012, 12:24:37 PM »
Oh, chapter 8 was brilliant, of course, because there was sugary KojiYuu  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

And I laughed so hard at chapter 9  :rofl: :rofl:

your updates are full of win, plz continue  :bow: :bow:
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 9
« Reply #76 on: July 01, 2012, 05:40:02 PM »
updating this everyday made me happy  XD
miichan's new nick- mimi
atsumina having the scrapbook thing  :love: so cute

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #77 on: July 01, 2012, 09:33:38 PM »
Everyone! Thank you so much for enjoying my stories. This is chapter 10 and I've decided to make this a 2 part chapter. So the story you are about to read is Chapter 10 part 1 and part 2 wil be on its way. This chapter will have a variety of swim suits and survival skills. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 10 part 1

"Hey Mariko are you excited for tomorrow?" Takamina asked.

"What is it?" Mariko said.

"We're going on a trip tomorrow."

"Really? We're allowed to take trips?"

"Yeah. The director of the facility says that the patients have to go outside and get some fresh air. If we keep them locked up then they'll really go nuts."

"Good point. So where are we going?" Mariko asked.

"The director owns a private island." Takamina said.

"I heard it even has its own hotspring resort!"

"Oh that'll be nice."

"Yep. I just hope I don't lose the stick drawing."

"What?"

"You'll find out when we get there."

All the doctors, nurses, and patients were loaded into a bus and taken to a dock. There they were loaded onto a boat and taken off to the island. When they got there, everyone was taken to a large building. They were immediately greeted by staff and had were led to their rooms. Mariko was sharing a room with Sayaka since Sae was sharing a room with Yukirin and Mayuyu.

"Hey Sayaka is it really ok to be out here? I mean there's more patients than doctors so if anything goes wrong then we'll be out numbered." Mariko said.

"Oh no don't worry. All the staff here are military trained soldiers. They know what to do if things get out of control." Sayaka said.

"Really? That's kind of scary."

"Well safety first."

"You're right."

"Alright lets go meet up everyone else in the lobby. We have something to decide before we go out and have fun." Sayaka said.

Mariko and Sayaka went down to the lobby where all the other doctors were.

"Alright everyone before we head out, we need to decide who is going to stay behind and be the life guard." Sayaka said.

Everyone gathered around Sayaka where she pulled out four sticks.

"Whoever loses has to be the life guard."

Everyone drew a stick and in the end, Mariko lost.

"Great. And I was really wanted to relax." Mariko said.

"Don't worry you'll still get to relax. You'll just be sitting on a chair."  Takamina said.

"Great."

Everyone went out to the beach. The weather was beautiful for beach frolicing. Sadly, Mariko could not enjoy it. Mariko was propped up on a chair that was six feet high and was given a pair of binoculars. She also was given a red two piece that said life guard on it. At least she would get a good tan line. Pretty soon the others came out in their swim suits as well. Takamina was wearing a blue two piece that had flowers on the front. Acchan followed after wearing a pink two piece with ruffles on the front and back and sparkles.

"Come one Takamina!" Acchan said.

"I'm coming!" Takamina said dragging thousands of beach toys, floats, and umbrellas.

"Poor Takamina. She's like Acchan's pack muel." Mariko thought.

Soon after, Haruna and Yuko came out. Haruna was wearing a red two piece with a heart on one side of the front and on the back as well. Yuko was following after Haruna in a green two piece with a star pattern on it.

"Nyannyan let's go play in the water!" Yuko said.

"Ok!" Haruna said holding Yuko's hand.

Mariko watched Haruna and Yuko walked closer to the ocean. Haruna backed away everytime a wave got near her trying to avoid the water like a cat.

"Come on Rena."

Coming out form the building was Jurina and Rena. They were wearing matching orange swim suits only one had a lemon on it and the other had a banana.

"Let's get you a floatie and I'll take you out into the water so I can finally teach you how to swim." Jurina said

"Ok. Can it be the blue one with the fish on it?" Rena asked.

"Sure." 

Rena was acting like a five year old. But to be honest it was pretty cute.

"Hey you guys give me a hand!"

Mariko looked over and saw Yukirin and Sae dragging Mayuyu along with them. Yukirin was wearing a white two piece with black dots on them while Sae was wearing a yellow two piece that had smily face on the bum area. Mayuyu however was wearing a one piece that you wear during gym class in middle school.

"I don't wanna go! Let me read manga!" Mayuyu said.

"No Mayuyu you're getting some exercise. You're not reading manga and being locked inside all day."

"No!"

"Come on Mayuyu! It'll be fun fun fun! If you don't play with Yukirin then I'll play with her!" Sae said.

"Don't you dare touch her!" Mayuyu said as she stood up.

Everyone was out having fun and Mariko just sat there and watched. She was getting hot though being so high up and close to the sun.

"Hey you thirsty?"

Mariko looked down and saw Sayaka on the ground holding a bottle of water. She was wearing a plain black two piece and to be honest, she looked pretty good in it. Mariko also notcied Sayaka had a six pack. This was the first time Mariko had ever seen them and now this explains why Sayaka was super strong. Mariko came down from her high chair and gladly accepted the water.

"Thanks." Mariko said.

"Turn around so I can put sun screen on your back." Sayaka said holding a bottle of sun screen.

Mariko turned around and Sayaka began appliying the lotion. It felt cold on Mariko skin but also very nice.

"You know you don't have to sit up there all day."

"Seriously?"

"Yeah. As long as you can see everyone then you're fine. Plus I'll be watching everyone too so go out and have fun." 

"Alright!"

Mariko and Sayaka walked over to the area Mayuyu and Yukirin were. They were sitting under an umbrella and Mayuyu was reading a manga. Sae, Yuko, Haruna, Jurina and Rena were all in the water.

"Hey guys. What's up?" Sayaka asked.

"I'm trying to get her in the water." Yukirin said.

"I told you I'm not swiming." Mayuyu said.

"Fine then I guess I'll go swim with Sae and the others then."

"I'm coming with you!" Mayuyu got up and followed Yukirin out to the water.

Mariko looked over and saw Takamina and Acchan talking about something. She decided to walk over and see what they were doing.

"Hey Takamina why aren't you getting in the water?" Mariko asked.

"Because I can't swim." Takamina said.

"I offered to help but she wouldn't let me." Acchan said.

"Because you almost drowned me last time!"

"Well how was I supposed you needed air?"

"I was splashing and flailing around for air."

"Still I didn't know."

"Well if it'll help, I can teach you." Mariko said.

"Really?"

"Yeah."

"No fair! Then I want to be taught too. We'll be swim buddies!" Acchan said.

"Alright. Lets go pick out the floaties!"

The two ran off and came back with tube floaties.

"Look we match!" Takamina said showing off her rubber duck floatie. Acchan had the same one only pink.

"What are they? A married couple?" Mariko thought.

"Alright let's get in the water then."

The three girls walked out into the water and joined up with Yuko and Haruna.

"What are you guys doing?" Yuko asked.

"I'm teaching Takamina and Acchan how to swim." Mariko said.

"Oh can you teach us?" Yuko said.

"But don't you know how to swim?"

"No. And Nyannyan can't either right?"

Yuko looked over at Haruna who was staring into space. She must be having a seizure again.

"Hey Nyannyan."

"AHHH!"

Haruna woke up and Yuko startled her making her fall over. Mariko had to qucikly fish her out so she wouldn't drown.

"Uhh maybe Haruna should stay out of this. I don't want her having a seizure while she's under water. Yuko why don't you go over and make a sand castle or something with her." Mairko said.

"Ok! Let's go Nyannyan." Yuko said as she took Haruna back to shore.

"Nice call." Takamina said.

"Yeah. So then let's get started. Takamina give me your hands."

Takamina was about to grab Mariko but then Acchan pushed her out of the way.

"No Takamina is only allowed to grab my hands!" Acchan said.

"Alright then Takamina grabbed Acchan's hand." Mariko said slightly irritated.

Takamina took Acchan's hand.

"Now Takamina I want you to try kicking and Acchan slowly pull Takamina along."

The two did what Mariko told them and so far everything was ok. Then Mariko told Acchan to let go and when she did, Takamina was moving on her own.

"You're doing it Takamina!" Acchan said.

"Hey I am! Thanks Mariko!" Takamina said.

"Don't forget abour me!" 

"And you too Acchan." 

"Yay!"

"Well I'm going to check on the others. I'll leave you two be." Mariko said.

Mariko left the two love birds to do whatever they wanted. She walked over to Jurina and Rena. Rena was in a tube floatie while Rena was holding onto her.

"How are you two?" Mariko asked.

"Good." Jurina said.

"I'm swimming!" Rena said.

"That's good. I was gonna see if you two needed any help but it looks like you two got it."

Just then there was a scream and splashing. Mariko turned around and saw Yukirin and Mayuyu.

"Mayuyu calm down! There's nothing in the water." Yukirin said.

"Yes there is! I felt it on my leg!" Mayuyu said clinging onto Yukirin.

"It's probably just seaweed."

"Ahhh!'

Mayuyu started to freak out again causing Yukirin to stumble.

"Stop it Mayuyu the top of my swim suit is coming undone!" Yukirin said.

"Bring me back! Bring me back to shore!"

Mayuyu was completely ignoring Yukirin's cries.

"Mayuyu!"

Then in a blink of an eye, Yukirin's top came undone and Mariko saw a whole different side of Yukirin.

"Nooooo!"

Yukirin dunked herself into the water with Mayuyu still clung to her. Her face was bright red.

"Mayuyu let go! I have to fix my suit!" Yukirin cried.

"No! I don't want to. There's something down there!"

"Shinoda-san help!"

Mariko finally snapped out of what she saw and quickly helped her fellow doctor. She managed to grab the strings and retie the top of Yukirin's suit.

"Thanks. Alright Mayuyu let's get you back onto shore." Yukirin said as she slowly made her way back to land.

Mariko stood there rethinking her views on Yukirin. But then everyone was called in because Miichan had gone out and bought snacks. For once the Gachapin was useful. As Mariko sat there eating some water melon she asked Sae,

"Where's Sayaka."

Sae finished gulping down a melon slice and said,

"Out there!"

Mariko looked out and saw Sayaka surfing the waves. She looked pretty cool too.

"Go Sayaka!" Takamina said.

Mairko noticed that Acchan wasn't with Takamina.

"Hey where's Acchan?" Mariko asked.

"That's weird. She was with me a second ago."

"HELP!"

Everyone looked out and saw Acchan in the water without a floatie. Then, a huge wave came by and swollowed her up. She went down and didn't come back up.

"Acchan!"

Mariko was about to go out but Takamina was quicker. She ran out there with a floatie and started kicking like crazy. She looked like a human motar boat. Takamina managed to find Acchan and quickly brought her back to shore. Then she performed CPR on the fallen princess. There was nothing at first but then Acchan coughed up water and started breathing again.

"Acchan!" Takamina said holding her in her arms.

"Takamina!" Acchan cried.

"Don't you ever leave me again ok?"

"Yeah." 

The two ended up crying. Mariko was glad that the two were safe. It was close call and she was amazed at how fast Takamina was in the water. Maybe that was the power of love.

After the whole beach incident, everyone turned in for a nice relaxing dip in the hotspring. Mariko and the other doctors went in one bath while the other patients went in another bath. She could hear Haurna and Yuko struggling on the other side. Ahh poor Haruna. When the bath was over, everyone walked into the main dining room and had a feast meant for a king. Then after, Mariko got changed into her pajamas and walked into the game room. There she saw Acchan, Takamina, Jurina, and Rena.

"Hey Mairko!"

Mariko turned around and saw Miichan only her face was bright red except for her eyes where her sunglasses would've been.

"Is that sunburn?" Mariko asked.

"Yeah. I passed out while tanning." Miichan said.

"Ha stupid Gachapin."

"Hey!"

Jurina walked over to Mariko and handed her and Miichan table tennis paddles.

"You and Miichan versus Rena and I." Jurina said.

"Sounds fun!" Miichan said.

The four girls gathered and soon more people showed up. Jurina had the first serve and she slammed it at Mariko. Mariko hit it back just as hard as Jurina. The two hit the ball at each other faster than the previous shot unitl Jurina finally hit it and it nailed Miichan right in the head.

"Ouch! Hey what was that for?"

"Sorry but that was our point." Jurina said.

"Stupid Gachapin!" Mariko hissed.

The game continued and became very intense near the end. But on the final point, Jurina shot it and it flew past Mariko winning the game.

"We won!" Jurina said.

"Yay!" Rena said even though she didn't do much.

"Good game." Miichan said.

"Yeah."

Sae came in the room more excited than usual.

"Hey you guys Sayaka brought fire works. We're gonna go light them on the beach. Come on!"

"Oh boy fire works!"

Everyone went out onto the beach where everyone was already out. They were standing a safe distance away as Sayaka was lighting big ones that went off into the night sky and then exploding making everything bright.

"Another one another one!" Sae said.

"Alright hang on Sae." Sayaka said.

"Acchan let's light sparklers." Takamina said.

"Yeah!"

Everyone had their own sparkler. Yuko was chasing Haruna with hers and Jurina was making sure Rena wasn't going to be hurt. Mayuyu was spinning them around while Yukirin was trying to avoid getting hit. Mariko herself had one and watched it die down. When she went to light another one, Sae ran over with a huge firework. It looked like she tied a bunch of them together with one fuse. 

"Sae don't you dare light that!" Sayaka said.

 But it was already too late. Sae lit the fire work and the count down started.

"Everyone get down!" Sayaka shouted. 

Everyone took cover and quickly hid behind something. There was silence but then BOOM! The fire work went off and there was bombardment of fire and sparks. Mariko almost got hit by one if it wasn't for the tree she was hiding behind. The explosions lasted for about four minutes. Then when it finally ended, everyone came back out.

"Is everone alright?" Mariko asked.

"Yeah!" Takamina said.

"Acchan and I are alright!"

"Yukirin?"

"Mayuyu and I are fine!" she said.

"Sayaka?"

"Yeah we're fine. Sae what were you thinking?" she said.

"Haha that was awesome!" Sae said.

"Jurina?"

"Rena is fine and so am I!" Jurina said.

"Yuko?"
 
There was no answer.

"Yuko? Haruana?"

There was still no answer.

"You guys were is Yuko and Haruna?" Mariko said.

"They could've ran inside." Acchan said.

"Go check."

A couple minutes later, Acchan came back.

"They weren't anywhere." she said.

"Where could they have gone?" Jurina said.

"Hey look!"

Yukirin pointed at a flip flop pointed in the direction of the forest.

"Don't tell me..."

"They ran out there!" Takamina said.

"Oh no."

Now two of Mariko's patients are missing and it's up to her to find them.
 
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Well there's part 1! Part 2 will be on it's way soon. Keep reading to find out what happens to Yuko and Haruna! Thank you for reading and tell me what you think!

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #78 on: July 01, 2012, 09:46:31 PM »
I LOVEEE the MAYUKI moments~~~~~!!!!!!!!
they where the best~ but a little without emotion....and loved the jelous Mayu~

and I liked the Wmatsui and Kojiyuu moments too~

update soon~ :tama-mad:
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #79 on: July 01, 2012, 09:46:56 PM »
aha! gotcha! you updated yehey!!
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"What are they? A married couple?" Mariko thought.
YES THEIR GONNA BE SOON!! right?

Kojiyuu missing???! whoaaa
wmatsui are sweet

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