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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 3
« Reply #160 on: August 24, 2012, 10:27:26 PM »
 :panic: KojiYu part is finished OMG they tried to dominate each-other  :smhid  :inlove:

 :shocked At first when you said that you're loosing reader I tough that was because it might turn into a sad ending or something!
But he** no I'm still here reading I ship AtsuMina after all (not a ship but CRUISER!)

Oh Lord that was hilarious again  :rofl:
KojiYu making out...
SaeSayaka trying to protect innocent people eyes...
Takamina fighting with Acchan ( in a hot way)

Oh but her poor heart   :(

Thank you for your update!
About "tokyo DOOM" I tough it was a joke first but well
I'm praying and still supporting 48 family and wishing for the best


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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 3
« Reply #161 on: August 25, 2012, 02:52:24 AM »
So happy the pacemaker works! Takamina would have died, good chapter

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 3
« Reply #162 on: August 25, 2012, 06:56:19 AM »
OMG my kojiyuu smexy time thanx :D.... dont worry i hope you feel well I support you :D nad im waiting for your fic doesnt matter what happen

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 3
« Reply #163 on: August 25, 2012, 11:51:42 AM »
 :on cloudeye: I don't know why whenever I'm reading Atsumina fanfics... my heart hurt~~

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 3
« Reply #164 on: August 26, 2012, 03:54:20 AM »
YEHEY !!! (HAPPY)

YOU FINALLY UPDATE THE CHAPTER THREE !!!

GOODLUCK..!
PLEASE UPDATE..!
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT..

THANK YOU
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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 3
« Reply #165 on: August 26, 2012, 06:11:03 AM »
Finally i manage to read your atsumina fic,
I love atsumina couple...

Ne miyumi-chan...sae-chan going to shanghai are you ok?LOL hope you fine
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 3
« Reply #166 on: August 26, 2012, 08:11:17 AM »
Wow I just moved into my new dorm and I've been slowly reading this story. My Internet connection is anything but fast haha. Well I am really loving this new atsunina fic. I actually thought it was going to be a zombie story at first because of the title but I really like this idea as well it's really interesting. I hope for Minami that the heart thing works out for her in the end. Well I'm excited for the new chapter and I'm looking forward to it :)

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 3
« Reply #167 on: August 26, 2012, 07:24:12 PM »
Mariko is doctor? will she trolling Minami?  :lol:
Love that pace maker thing, it helps Minami from dying.
Ahh~ that fight scene between Atsumina is speechless  :w00t: Acchan trying to peek inside Minami's shirt...
Kojiyuu couple is always~ doingsmexything~  XD XD
Mayuki and WMatsui are cute~ lol at Saeyaka guarding the room for Kojiyuu couple..  XD XD

Your school is starting? no wonder the update has been slow down. It's okay, I'll be waiting for the next update  :)

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 4
« Reply #168 on: August 26, 2012, 08:14:05 PM »
Minna! I just wanted to tell you all thank you so much for showing your concern! I was a little depressed at first and needed some time off. But now I'm back and better than ever! So now I finally give you a long awaited update!
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Chapter 4

(Day 4)

It was another boring day. It was raining outside and her mother was gone. Minami had nothing to do. So much for living her life to the fullest. How can she when she's stuck inside.

"Maybe I should go out."

Minami opened the curtain and saw how hard it was raining.

"Then again maybe I should stay inside."

Minami walked over and turned on the TV. There was nothing on so she turned it off.

"What to do what to do..."

Minami walked around the house and tried to find something to play with.

"I know what I can do!"

Minami ran to her room and pulled out a toy sword and some stuffed animals. She placed on the table and three others on the couch. Then she took a blanket and tied it around her neck making it look like a cape. She took her sword and aimed it at the stuffed bear on the table. In a deep voice she said,

"Join me Luke. Together we can rule the galaxy as father and son."

Then in a high voice she said,

"Never! I'll never joined the dark side! You killed my father!"

Back to deep voice.

"Luke, I am your father!"

"Noooo!"

Minami swung her sword and knocked the bear off. Then she turned to the ones on the couch and took them down.

"Nooo stop please!"

"Hahaha the dark side rules!"

WOOSH!

"Look out it's rebel forces!"

Minami pretended that there were people shooting at her.

BANG BANG KABOOM WOOSH!

"Hahaha your lazers are nothing against me!"

"He's too strong! Retreat!"

"Haha dark side rules!"

Minami was having so much fun that she almost didn't hear the cry outside.

"Takamina!"

Minami looked over and saw Acchan standing outside her house soaking wet. It was raining so being outside without an umbrella wasn't going to help. Minami but away her toys and ran down stairs and opened the door. As soon as she did, a wet Acchan came running in.

"What were you doing out in the rain?" Minami asked.

"I wanted to come and see you." Atsuko said.

"Why didn't you have an umbrella?"

"I forgot it."

"Well let's get you dried off so you don't get a cold."

Minami gave Atsuko a spare change of clothes and then had her sit down in the family room.

"Here drink this."

Minami handed Atsuko some tea.

"Thanks."

"So tell me why you were outside my house in the middle of the rain?"

"Well I wanted to see you so I ran out the house. It wasn't raining when I left."

"Jeez. You should really think before you do something like that. What could have happened if I wasn't home and you were stuck waiting out there?"

"I would've kept waiting."

"Baka."

Minami lightly bopped Atsuko in the head.

"Excuse me for a moment."

Minami got up and walked into the kitchen. She grabbed a glass of water and quickly took her pills. Then she walked back into the room only to find Atsuko gone.

"Acchan!"

Minami started to look for her but didn't see her anywhere.

"Acchan?"

Minami checked everywhere. Upstairs, downstairs, under the beds, in the bathroom, outside, even behind the couch. Atsuko was nowhere to be found.

"Maybe she left already."

Minami started to walk towards her room when she heard a thud. It came from the closet in the hall. Minami walked to the closet and when she opened the door, she found Atsuko only she had fallen asleep. Seeing Atsuko's cute sleeping face made Minami want to squeal inside. Everything about her looked so tempting. But Minami held back and quietly woke up Atsuko.

"Acchan..."

"Huh? Takamina?"

"What were you doing in my closet?"

"I was going to surpirse you when you came by. But you never did so I got tired and fell asleep."

"Mou you scared me. Here let's get you to bed."

Minami carried Atsuko up to her room and set her on the bed. She tucked her in and then went down stairs.

"She might have a fever."

Minami went back upstairs and checked her temperature. It was warm so Minami decided to run out and get apple sauce. When she came back, she took the apple sauce and put it in the microwave. When it was done, she sprinkled some cinammon on it and then got some milk. (this is what my mother did for me when I was sick)

"Acchan."

Minami quietly walked in and found Acchan still asleep.

"Acchan."

"Minami?"

"Sit up. I brought you some food."

Minami helped Atsuko sit up and then fed her the apple sauce.

"Thank you Takamina."

"It's no problem. Now you get some rest. I'm gonig to call your parents and have them come pick you up."

"No!"

Atsuko grabbed Minami's arm and held it tightly.

"What?"

"Don't call them."

"Why not?"

"Because I want to stay with you."

"Atsuko you know you can't stay here."

"Please. Just for tonight."

Tears were starting to form in Atsuko's eyes.

"Well alright you can stay here. But only for tonight."

"Thank you Takamina."

"Good. Now get some rest. I'm going to go in the other room."

"No!"

Atsuko pulled Minami down onto the bed and snuggled up to her.

"Stay with me." Atsuko said.

"What if I get sick?" Minami said.

"Not my problem."

"It will be if I do."

"Well then I'll just take care of you."

"Ok sounds good to me."

Atsuko wrapped her arms around Minami and hugged her like a teddy bear.

"Don't ever leave me ok?"

"Alright Acchan I won't."

"You promise?"

Atsuko held out her pinky finger.

"I promise."

Minami held out hers and grabbed onto Atsuko's. Then the two slowly started to pass out. But one thing Minami wondered was why didn't Atsuko not want her parents to come. She guessed that it was something only Atsuko knew and doubted she would ever get an answer from.

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Minna! Again thank you so much for understanding and waiting. Now I am back and ready to write more. So please tell me what you think and look forward to the next update! 

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 4
« Reply #169 on: August 26, 2012, 09:09:11 PM »
I think they are starting to fall for each other. I'm curious why Acchan didn't want her parents to come.
AHH! I WANT THEM TO KISS ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 4
« Reply #170 on: August 26, 2012, 09:22:57 PM »
SO cute atsumina... but I wanna know why atsuko dont want that minami talk with her parents

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 4
« Reply #171 on: August 26, 2012, 10:47:41 PM »
 :w00t: Yes another chapter, I hop Maeda's parents aren't abusing her or anything? I liked the chapter! Keep it up lol

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 4
« Reply #172 on: August 26, 2012, 11:15:13 PM »
Atsumina is so cute!!! I too wonder why Acchan didn't want her parents to come either, I can kind of guess already though.
I'm glad you're feeling better though :D

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 4
« Reply #173 on: August 26, 2012, 11:20:00 PM »
Welcome back :) Thank you for updating the fic, and glad your feeling better :D Aw, it was a cute chapter with Minami taking care of Atsuko:D Hopefully she can keep her promise somehow to never leave her!!!
Thanks again for the update, excited to read the next chapter ^^

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 4
« Reply #174 on: August 26, 2012, 11:41:00 PM »
So cute~ And lol the star wars antics rofl

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 5
« Reply #175 on: August 27, 2012, 04:02:33 AM »
@TakaminaBG: Don't worry they're big kiss will be coming up very soon. Just wait a little londer and soon they will have it.  :P

@Haruko: Everyone will find out soon why Atsuko doesn't want Minami to talk to her parents. Sooner or later.  :lol:

@sasumiofjp: Thank you! I will not let you down.  :)

@Sasshii: Thank you. And if you know already don't tell anyone! It's going to be a surprise.  :roll:

@arrow27: Thank you for welcoming me back. I hope you like this next chapter!  XD

@kahem: Yeah Minami can do some pretty fun stuff when she's alone.  XD

Minna! Here is chapter 5! I hope you all like it. Now it is time to share some love with everyone else in the family. Now then let's get started shall we?
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Chapter 5

(Day 5)

It was another boring day at school for Minami. She was just sitting at her desk with Atsuko staring out the window when suddenly, Yukirin walked over.

"Hey Takamina Acchan I need your help." she said.

"What is it Yukirin?" Atsuko said.

"It's about Mayuyu. I feel like she's becoming too dependent on me. I need her to learn how to stand on her own two feet."

"What do you mean?"

"Well lately, Mayuyu has been really leaning on me for help with everything. She's practically the daughter I never had. I need her to learn how to do things on her own without me being there for her."

"So what do you suggest we do?"

"Well I have a couple ideas but it maybe difficult."

What Yukirin had in mind was basically trying to get her to do things on her own. Example one was lunch. Mayuyu always relied on Yukirin for her food. This time, Yukirin wasn't going to give her any food and she was going to need Minami and Atsuko's help to make sure Mayuyu doesn't force Yukirin to give in. They sat at the table waiting for Mayuyu to walk over.

"Yuki-mama~"

"What is it Mayuyu?" Yukirin said.

"I'm hungry." Mayuyu said like a little kid.

"Well go get in line and get some food."

"But the line is too long and by the time I get back I won't have enough time to eat."

"I'm sorry Mayuyu but you can't have any of my food today. You're just going to have to buy some on your own."

"But I forgot money."

"Then have Acchan or Takamina buy you something."

"But I want you're cooking! You always cook the best food."

"You mean it?"

"Yeah!"

Mayuyu gave Yukirin that killer cyborg smile that always made Yukirin give in.

"Well alright. Since you said my cooking was the best."

Yukirin pulled out another lunch and handed it to Mayuyu.

"Yay! Thank you Yukirin."

"Yukirin."

Minami and Atsuko looked at her with a disappointed look.

"I can't help it! She has that cute smile that I can't resist!"

Since plan A failed, it's time for plan B. Plan B was to get Mayuyu to do her work on her own. Most of the time she copies off Yukirin even though she is perfectly capable of doing the work herself. It was duting study hall Mayuyu came over to Yukirin with her text book and worksheet.

"Ne Yukirin help me out." Mayuyu said.

"No Mayuyu. The teacher said you can't get help from anyone else." Yukirin said.

"But I don't get any of it! I want you to help me!"

"Get Acchan or Takamina to help you."

"But they don't know any of it."

"Yes we do." Minami said.

"Stay out of it midget." Mayuyu growled.

Minami decided to stay quiet fearing what might happen if she interfered.

"Come on Yukirin just help me a little bit!"

"I said no Mayuyu."

Mayuyu started to cry.

"Wah! Yukirin...hic...doesn't love...hic...me."

"Now Mayuyu don't say that. I do love you."

"No you don't...hic...you won't help me...hic."

"If I help you will you stop crying?"

"Maybe..."

"Alright then I'll help you."

"Yay!"

The tears stopped and a huge grin appeared on Mayuyu's face. Atsuko leaned towards Minami and said,

"She played her like a fool."

"Tell me about it."

Plan B failed so now it's time for the final plan C. Plan C was going to have a couple kids gang up on Mayuyu and try to attack her. When she cries out for help no one will come and save her so she's on her own. To make the plan real, Yukirin got actual thugs to gang up on Mayuyu. She was walking in the court yard when they approached Mayuyu.

"Hey cutie." one said.

"Heard your looking for someone to play with." another said.

"Why don't you play with us?"

"Go away!" Mayuyu said.

"I don't think so."

One of the thugs tried to grab Mayuyu but she smacked him with a school bag.

"Ahh that hurt! You're gonna pay for that!"

"Yukirin help!" 

Two of the guys grabbed Mayuyu and held her down while the other was going at her shirt. Meanwhile to the side, Yukirin, Minami and Atsuko were all watching. Minami saw Yukirin's hands turned to fists and was about to walk over. But then Minami held her back. She knew how much Yukirin wanted to help but if she wanted the plan to work then she would have to leave her.

"Yukirin!"

Mayuyu was crying now and her shirt was half torn. Now the thugs were going after her skirt.

"Yukirin!"

Yukirin herself started to cry a little but she held her place. She wanted Mayuyu to learn how to be brave on her own without her help. The thugs had gotten her skirt off and were now going after her panties. But then there was a loud smack and one of the thugs being shot five feet into the air. Minami looked over and saw an angry cyborg standing in nothing but a bra and panties.

"You wanna play? Fine let's play!"

Mayuyu walked over and grabbed one of the thugs by the hair. Then she started swinging him aroung and around and around. Finally, she realised him and sent him flying over the fence.

"Ah you bit-"

Before he could finish his sentence, Mayuyu punched him in the face knocking out three of his teeth. Then she kicked him in the privates and elbowed his face as he came down. As for the third one, he pissed himself as Mayuyu came over and grabbed him by the collar. She leaned back and then head butted him so hard that Minami thought she heard a loud crack.

"Mayuyu!"

Yukirin couldn't hold back any more and ran out to Mayuyu.

"Yukirin!"

The two hugged and Mayuyu started sobbing in Yukirin's arms.

"I was so scared!" Mayuyu said.

"I know Mayuyu I know." Yukirin said.

"I called your name but you never came."

"I'm sorry Mayuyu!"

As the two lovers were crying in each other's arms, they didn't even notice one of the thugs get up. He grabbed a stick and was going to whack Mayuyu with it. But then Yukirin stopped him.

"Touch her and you die!"

Yukirin took the stick and whacked the thug in the shin. Then to finish him off, she kicked him right in the gut sending him flying back.

"Yaya! Mamarin is so strong!"

"I'm sorry Mayuyu. I'll never leave you alone like that ever again."

"You promise?"

"I promise."

"Good."

Click!

"Cause now you're never leaving me again."

"Eh?"

Yukirin looked down and saw her left hand handcuffed to Mayuyu.

"Mayuyu!"

"Now you can't leave me!"

"Mou this isn't what I meant!"

Meanwhile, Minami had snuck away to secretly take her medicine. While she was taking her medicine, she didn't notice the figure sneak up behind her.

"Hey!"

"AHH!"

Minami felt her heart jump which wasn't good. She turned around and saw Mariko standing behind her.

"Mariko? What are you doing here?" Minami said.

"I came to check on you." Mariko said.

"Well I was going fine until you showed up and almost gave me a heart attack."

"Sorry I didn't mean to do that. Anyways I have some good news and bad news."

"What's the good news?"

"The good news is, I recently found a friend who maybe able to help you. I messaged her and she said she'd be here in a couple weaks."

"What's the bad news?"

"The bad news is that pace maker is running out of battery power and is going to have to be changed soon. The problem is we don't have any more batteries for it and the next shipment isn't going to be in for another couple days."

"How much longet does it have?"

"About a day in a half I think."

"You think?"

"I don't know. Anyways, when that thing goes out, you have to be very careful until we get you a new one. Got it?"

"Got it."

"Alright then I'll be going then. I just wanted to tell you that. See you later."

As Mariko walked away, Atsuko came over.

"There you are Takamina. I was looking for you." she said.

"Sorry I thought I saw something." Minami lied.

"Oh well come on class is about to start."

"Uh right."

Minami was worried. She was afraid that the pace maker would run out and something bad was going to happen. She could die. Before she was wanting to die but now she's afraid of dying. Minami doesn't know why there's a sudden change but she does know that she has to get the batteries quick before it runs out.

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Oh no what's going to happen to Minami? Will the battery power go out and something bad happen? Or will Mariko come in and save the day? Find out next time in my next update! Please tell me what you think! Oh and I updated my OS. It's a mayujuri so check it out.

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 5
« Reply #176 on: August 27, 2012, 04:35:37 AM »
Wow, thanks for the quick update :D Great chapter as always. Lol at Mayu and Yuki, so great :) & that's trouble for Takamina that her pace maker stop for a few days! Can't wait to find out what happens :D


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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 5
« Reply #178 on: August 27, 2012, 09:15:16 AM »
Oh geez no more batteries! She might as well just sleep all day with her crazy friend, good chapter

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Re: 48 Days update Chapter 5
« Reply #179 on: August 27, 2012, 09:29:13 AM »
Mayuki so cute~
Cyborg is Machiavellian smart lol

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