i'm alive
when i rereading my fic i realize that it wasn't dark enough so i will make it like that.
at first i though i would be a 7 chapter fic, but now i think is going to be longer......how much i hate it...i'm a person of few words.
enjoy
p.s will not be updated until next 2 weeks.
Chapter 4
A cold sunny day, the tree without leaves, only the scenery of fall. In a tree you can see two people sitting under it. The cold breeze of fall.
“Your black widow let you come?”
“She had to go with her parents for the weekend”
“Where?”
“osaka”
“Oh….so what is it that you wanted to ask?”
“Well…have you talked to her?”
“Yuko?”
“Yeah, her”
“She said it was okay, it’s not your fault she is in love with you”
“That’s good”
“So, how is life?”
“Not so well”
Ring…ring…ring…
“Can you wait a little I have to answer this?”
“Okay”
“Moshi….sorry I was talking to my cousin….Umi…she is not a….I didn’t yell....I’m sorry…..you’re coming back tomorrow….ok…see you tomorrow…..bye”
“Whip” Umi said in a whispered
“What”
“Nothing”
“So, you heard any news from your butterfly”
“My Haruna….i haven’t seen her”
“Why”
“Atsuko doesn’t let me go anywhere”
“That’s cruel”
Umi turn to see a couple nearby and…
“You could be happy” Minami turn to the way her cousin was staring at and then look back at Umi.
“How”
“When it rains” Umi said in a whispered
“What”
“Nothing”
“Do you want to come with me to South Korea and USA?” Umi ask
“You know I can’t “
“Yes you can…let me ask my aunt”
“My will let me but Atsuko won’t”
“She doesn’t control your life”
“I know she doesn’t but remember what I told you, she will kill herself”
“Yes I remember, but that doesn’t mean she can control you”
“You don’t understand that I care for her as a friend”
“If you care for her as a friend why don’t you just stay friends”
“She will kill herself…..she is not thinking right”
“Well, talk to her”
“Ok”
Umi stood up and look at same couple that she saw early. “Hey is that Mariko and Haruna?”
“What” Minami turn where Umi was looking.
“Don’t worry Mariko is Miichan’s girlfriend” Umi wrap her arm around her cousin’s shoulder.
“Let’s go to your house, and let me ask my aunt if she will allow you to come with me”
-somewhere in the park-
“I want to ask you something” Mariko looks at the tree where two people were sitting under it. Then Mariko realizes that Haruna wasn’t answering.
“Haruna” Mariko waves her hand in front of Haruna. Still no answer.
“Haruna” Mariko almost yells at her.
“What”
“Airhead….I want to ask you something” Mariko said.
“What is it?”
“Do you want to be with Minami?”
“No”
Mariko look a little shock.
“I thought you love her” Mariko look at Haruna
“I do, but…..it’s just that….you wouldn’t understand it” Haruna said in frustration.
“Tell me”
“Okay, the day we broke up she was with Atsuko. She told me “I was only playing with you”, and some days later I had to stay after school; I heard something that
make me think she is with her because Atsuko will commit suicide”
Mariko just looks at Haruna like if she already knew what she meant because in reality she did knew.
“I know” both if the stop walking. Haruna look shock.
“I know why she broke up with you and what u said is true” Haruna’s eye wide.
“What”
“A day before she broke up with you, she came to me for advise and I reminded her the tale of her ancestors” Haruna felt betray
“The tale…she told me that tale but that was a really long time, so I don’t remember well” Haruna try to think.
“You will remember one day now let’s go it’s almost twilight” Mariko told Haruna while she look at the two people who were sitting under a tree leave.
“See this is why I live alone…..never worrying about time”
Haruna lives alone ever since her parents die when she was 15 now she is 17. Her grandmother is the only one that cares enough to give her money for school and food.
-Somewhere in osaka-
“Mrs.kojima, have you visited your granddaughter lately?”
“Who is this?”
“I’m Madea Atsuko and Haruna’s friend”
“Yeah and…why are you calling me, is she alright”
“Oh she is more that fine”
“What do you mean by that?”
“You should look at the entrance of your door”
“Why”
“You will find something about Haruna”
“Okay”
Mrs.kojima walk to the entrance of the house; telephone in hand, she saw an envelope.
“I see it.”
“I want you to open it; there you will see photos of her doing something”
Mrs. Kojima did so, see saw a photo of Haruna kissing Minami. Mrs. Kojima couldn’t believe what she saw; she never thought that her granddaughter will do such
things. Mrs. Kojima picked up the phone again…
“What is this?”
“That is what your daughter is really doing; she is going out with a girl that is no good to her.”
“How do you know all this?”
“Because the girl who Haruna is kissing is my friend”
“WHAT... I can’t believe my granddaughter would do something like this, why are you telling me this?”
“Because I don’t want her near my friend.”
“I just can’t believe it… I just can’t”
“You better believe it”
- Minami’s House-
“HI aunt, how are you?”
“Fine, thank you, Umi”
In a big Mansion the Takahashi Family live. Well only Minami’s parents and her, Now Umi lived in another mansion with her parents. They were both the richest families in Japan. Minami’s dad was the president of the Takahashi Company while Umi’s dad was the vice president. One day Minami and Umi will be in charge of the company.
“So how is your father?” Minami’s mom asked.
“Well… he went to a business trip to South Korea.” Umi sat in the couch.
“That’s great”
“And talking about trips… Aunt Ray will you let Minami come with me to South Korea and the US” Umi asked as she look at her aunt.
“And what about school… you almost have your finals.”
“School… Aunt, I and Minami are way smarter than those kids besides I will ask for the work.”
“That’s right mom, me and Umi are smarter than those kids… don’t you remember we only wanted to be in a public school to experience what it feels to be in one”
Minami said.
“So can we?” Umi asked.
“Okay you can go, but be careful.
Now both cousins were jumping like little kids, “So immature” Minami’s mom thought.
“Well.. When are going?” Minami asked.
“In December, and don’t worry we’ll be back before Christmas.” Umi told Minami.
“I have to go now. Bye cousin, Bye Aunt” and with that Umi left Minami’s house. She looked at the clock and saw it was 11:00 pm. Minami knew Atsuko was coming
back tomorrow and it was going to be a pretty long day.
please don't hate me.......
please give some ideas or Recommendations
.....untill the day comes.....