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hi...i'm new in this thing.
i just wanted to post this because........i like this paring very much. :) well....i'm a fan of no3b, i started watching mendol ikemen idol and thats what got me in her. i'm not the best writer but i will do my best in every story that i will do.  :) i alos posted this in tumblr.....i'm an idiot.
i hope you guys like it because its a rare paring, and i like rare parings :)

this fanfic is dedicate to FoF, my favorite author.


prologue

It was a sunny day in March, the flowers bloom, the birds sing with joy, the blue sky is not crying. Two people are enjoying themselves by talking to each other after they declare their love for one another. This love was unique; not because they were the same sex, but it was different from others. Like a butterfly and spider. One was the set up the web and the other one got caught, yet both of them got caught.

“So how long have you been in love with me?” Minami ask

“Well….i realize a have feelings for you 3 months ago”

“That’s a really long time”   

“How about you?”

“The same as you”

As the two hold hands, they look into the sky. How clear was the sky but soon it will become a thunderstorm?

“Would you like to eat something” ask Haruna

“Do you have katsudon”

“No, but I can make it”

“I love you”

“I love you too”

Days have pass, they decided to keep their relationship a secret. Is this a sin of two people or is this a sin of the lovers? Their love was clear like water, loving like a rose, and joy able like a toy. One night, they were at butterfly’s house. That night was their first time.
Cloths are thrown everywhere, kisses all over their bodies, the paradise waits for them. One gets drunk with pleasure and the other one loves the sensation and the pleasure.

“You are everything to me”

“I will always protect you”

“I love you”

“I love you”


As the days pass their love grew and flourishes. There was no rain only sunny days. The wind blew freely without worry.

“do you want me to tell you a tale that has been passed on by my ancestors”

“Yes” Haruna cuddle closer to Minami

“It’s called, “spider and butterfly”, one day a new bloom butterfly flew away and ended up in a place where butterflies and spiders live. She made friends with the butterflies and the spiders.” Minami said

“What happen to the butterfly?”

“Well…the butterfly met a spider that was charming. Soon after they were friends but that was not what the spider desire. The spider wanted more. Since the first time the spider look at the butterfly, the spider fell for the butterfly. The butterfly didn’t notice when the spider put up the web. Slowly but surely the butterfly got caught in the trap. But the spider didn’t notice that it was also caught. Soon after they realize they were in love, but there was a problem. In the place where they live there was a rule; not to fall in love with a butterfly or a spider….each other.” Minami said while hugging Haruna

“So, what happen to them?”

“One day a black widow found them together but didn’t say anything at that time. The black widow came to see the spider and threaten the spider. The black widow wanted the spider for herself, so she told the spider to come with her and if not the black widow would tell about the relationship. The spider decided to go with the black widow. Without telling why the spider left the butterfly because if they discover they had a relationship, the butterfly would be killed.”

“That’s sad”

“I know, poor them”

“So what happen?”

‘The butterfly was destroyed, so was the spider. They couldn’t do anything just suffer. Then after a long time the spider realize that it didn’t matter if the “community” found out about them the spider and the black widow  parted. The threaten came true. The “community” was angry with the spider and the butterfly. But that didn’t stop the spider the spider and the butterfly. That day it rain; the web wasn’t destroyed and that show that their love was stronger than anything in the world”

“That’s amazing”

“I know, my grandma told me the story”

Days of happiness only to be destroy. Days of joy only to avoid…….

The couple lives happily in harmony until……….








i have a queastion....how do you update a fanfic here, without making another topic......i just don't know. :?
« Last Edit: October 21, 2017, 09:19:33 PM by sophcaro »

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly
« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2012, 04:51:40 PM »
Hello :D Welcome to the family !  :welcome

Nice fic !  :on GJ:

Very sweet ~  :shy1:

As for your question, You'll click REPLY if you want to update it  :hee:

And if you want to change the Topic Subject, look for your first post and you'll see MODIFY then change the Subject  :hee:

Hope that helped ~

Updato soon :D
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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly
« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2012, 04:41:49 AM »
Wow. You dedicated a TakaHaru fic for me? And it's not even my birthday yet. *bawling my eyes out*  :farofflook:
But seriously, thanks for that!  :)  :)  :bow: :bow: :bow:
TakaHaru is one of my fave pairings in AKB. Sadly, there aren't much fics about them for me to spazz about.  :nervous
And well...truthfully, I've actually forgotten about them since I'm more focused on my other favorite.  :nervous  I know right? Eff me right?  :nervous
But when I read this, it made me remember. So thanks for that.  :) It also made me remember that I have an unfinished TakaHaru fic as well.  :nervous  :nervous
Though I am curious as to who is the spider and who is the butterfly in their relationship. I mean, I could easily imagine both TakaHaru as a spider and as a butterfly so...yeah it got me thinking.  :lol:

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Days of happiness only to be destroy. Days of joy only to avoid…….

I love that. It's sad but sometimes true.  :)
Is this your first fic? If it is or not, I'm sure we'd see more updates from you.  XD
About your question, well I think ChuuuPuffss-san answered it but if ever you are in a pinch about anything, please feel free to pm anyone of us around here. I'm sure they'd be happy to help out.  :)
Well, thanks for the read umichan:bow:
Oh yeah, and  :welcome to the world of akb fanfics.  :)

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly
« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2012, 05:07:49 AM »
Welcome! XD

Nice story! Though there's not a lot of TakaHaru fanfics out there, but I find them cute together and also really rare couple. Good job, I like this couple too.

Please continue writing for the fun!! XD
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That is the most beautiful thing in the world

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly (Butterfly POV) chapter 1
« Reply #4 on: August 19, 2012, 05:04:37 PM »
hello......thank you for reading this fanfic. well right now i'm going to post the first chapter of this fic.  :)
i thought that some people would read it and that it would hace taken time to see a coment from some one, but i fangirling when i saw the first coment. later that i
found out that FoF comented in my fanfic........i was in shock.....i was fangirling, even my mom told me to stay calm(she doesn't know i write fanfic.....i just tell her i write scary stories then she doesn't bother me). Well....thank you to those people who comented, and thank you FoF you made my day :) :) :)

(Butterfly POV)
 chapter 1

In the scent of your perfume I get lost. I never thought I would fall in love with you. I got caught in your trap. Seducing me with your charm. I’m only a butterfly caught in the trap of love. Even if you are not my girlfriend, I get jealous of the girls you flirt with especially your best friend. But at the end of the day, I know I’ll be yours again. Every night; since 3 months ago, we make love. Only with few words like, “I love you”, “you are everything to me”, “I will always protect you”, we consume our love. I like the sensation of your hands roaming thru my naked body. The way you kiss me, the way you go inside of me. It’s the ultimate pleasure. The only secret we keep from the public is our sin.

“I told you I don’t like you flirting with other girls” Haruna said angry

“It’s only a persona, I’m sorry” Minami brought her hand to cup Haruna’s cheeks.

“I love you” Minami and haruna shared a passionate kiss.

I thought you would always be with me, but I was wrong. The thunderstorm came to fast. I was destroy when I saw you and Atsuko kiss. You told me……

“I’m sorry; I was only playing with you”

My heart fell slowly to the ground. I ran as fast I could only to find myself in my room. Remembering all those nights, I only cried more. Sorrow and pain, only those two feelings. Later I realize why didn’t I stayed and ask you why. The days pass as if what we had never occur. I miss the sensation and the pleasure. I even pray to be with you one more night, one more kiss, and one more “I love you”.

Two months have passed, I acted like it didn’t hurt me I heard you have a happy life with her, and you even stop flirting with other girls. But why is it that every time we see each other, your eyes tell me. ”please take me away from her”. Sometimes that look worries me but I tried to ignored or it probably my imagination. My friend yuko tells me not to worry and hugs me, but I never return her hugs because from the corner of my eyes I can see you staring at me. A jealous look from the unforgotten. I wonder, do you get jealous of yuko? Days have passed I heard you have problems. I only imagine the worst, but I ignored.

“Yukirin, have you heard what happen to takamina” ask sae in their classroom

“No, what happen to her” answer yukirin

“Well….she got slap by Atsuko , can you believe that” said sae

“Really that’s bad” yukirin said while walking near sae

“I know I hope you never slap me” sae said seriously

“I will if you don’t stop flirting with other girls” yukirin look at sae

“It’s part of who I am…..and you know I will always love you” sae kissed yukirin on the lips.

It’s been 3 months since we broke up, I still feel lonely. You still give me that look and I want to know why. One day I had to stay afterschool. That day I understood why you were with her. As I pass the hallway, i hear two people moaning. Inside I saw you and Atsuko making out.

“I…love..you…mi..na..mi.” said Atsuko between kisses. Haruna at hearing this started to cry. She wanted to run but something stop her.

“Haruna” Minami moan aloud. Atsuko push her and slap her.

“Are you thinking about her again” Atsuko look mad

“I’m sorry…I didn’t meant to”

“I’m going to kill myself” Atsuko said while grabbing a pencil

“Please don’t, I love you….please don’t commit suicide” Minami tries to get the pencil

“I should...so you and that slut would sleep together” Atsuko push Minami and try to stab herself, but Minami took the pencil.

“Please don’t kill yourself….i already left her for you so don’t”

That day I went to my house with a lot more questions.






all day listening to Bad Boy from Big Bang and number six from Alice Nine...........

the next chapter will be updated next saturday because i have a something to do :D it will also explain why the spider did what it did.
 thank you

......until the day comes.....

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly
« Reply #5 on: August 19, 2012, 05:24:39 PM »
WOW! This is interesting!!!!
So, Takamina loves Haruna but broke up with her to be with Atsuko, because she threatened that she will kill herself or kill Haruna?!
Can't wait for the update!!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly
« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2012, 09:33:37 PM »
Wow this is def interesting :D Thanks for the update :) Aw poor Takamina in a difficult situation. She loves Haruna but broke up with her so Atsuko wouldn't kill herself. Meaning Minami does care for Atsuko alot but not in the same way she loves Haruna apparently. Please continue the fic :)

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly
« Reply #7 on: August 20, 2012, 12:36:40 PM »
My friend actually was the one who informed me about your fic. She read it and told me about it. Plus it's TakaHaru, how can I not read that. :lol:
And uh...I'm glad I made your day a bit better.  :nervous Though you really shouldn't fangirl over me.  :nervous  :nervous
Wow. So Haruna is the butterfly eh? And Takamina is the spider.
And Atsuko threatening Takamina for her affection?  :shocked Dark! Me likey!  :twothumbs
Poor Takamina. Being in that situation is just...rough.  :smhid But again, me likey!  :lol:
Do continue!  XD

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly (Butterfly POV) chapter 1
« Reply #8 on: August 23, 2012, 05:34:44 AM »
Hello....
i'm  just here to aks something to you guys...... who do you think is the black widow?


and also here is teaser for chapter 2



''look if you don't want Atsuko to kill herself, just tell her that you love her''  Mariko said seriously

'' but wouldn't that  decision affect your relationship with Haruna'' Miichan question Minami
........................


My hands roaming thru your naked body its the ultimate pleasure. Sniffing your perfume. Stepping into fascination, making you my girl, my woman, my lover. Not wanting this paradise to end, we end up having 2 hours of sleep.
.......................

Later that night i cry for a really long time, that night i cry my heart out.
......................

and  that was my teaser .
please tell me who do you think is the black widow?

...... until the day comes......

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Isn't the black widow Atsuko then? My Atsumina fangirl is screaming no XD but well, Takamina and Haruna were together first so Atsuko shouldn't intervene, lest threatening to kill herself. I would get mad too if Takamina and Atsuko were together first and then Haruna came in the scene to break them like that.

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hello...its me again.  :)
i'm here to drop off the fic. i'm here doing a heechul gif hunt, so my personal mesaage will be brief.
Thank you to those people who read my fic, it makes me feel so happy.
well here it is chapter 2



chapter 2
(spider POV)



Without realizing I fell for you each minute. A taste of Eden, a taste of you. You fell in love with me. My charm; the glorious soul. I only set up my trap…my web…for you. Seducing you slowly, but surely. My trap caught both of us, yet I was its owner. We are a secret because my parents would send me away from you and the school is also a problem. Paradise waits for me, every night. It has been 3 months since we got together. Stepping into fascination; I get drunk with pleasure. Every night is fireworks. Sometimes I wonder if you think I’m experience…well I’m not.
The way I kiss you, the way I go inside of you is only natural. The way your hands roam thru my naked body is the original sin. I forget how to breathe when your lips are on mine. My only sin is loving you more that my own life.

“Haruna, I will always love you” Minami kiss Haruna’s forehead

“Remember that every time I’m not with you” Minami kiss Haruna.

Without knowing, my life was about to change. That day change my life. Thunders shock me. I felt something on my lips at first I thought it was my Haruna, but when I open my eyes it was my best friend. I push her.

“Hey why did you kiss me?” Minami said while removing the sensation of her lips with her hand.

“Because I love you” Atsuko approach Minami and kiss her again. Minami still conscious of what was happening; push Atsuko to hard that she end up in the floor.

“I’m sorry Atsuko….I didn’t meat to push you that hard” Minami tried to pick up Atsuko but was stop by a tear.


Atsuko got up and star to run. Minami chase her all the way to the school’s rooftop. She saw Atsuko climbing the fence that surrounds the roof.

“Atsuko, what are you doing” Minami sounded worried.

“If you don’t accept my love, I will commit suicide” Atsuko turn to Minami.

“Are you crazy” Minami almost shouted.


“Crazy for you” said while taking another step. ‘What should I do’ Minami thought.

“Please come back down here so we can talk” Minami got closer.

“No” Atsuko took another step. Minami ran to Atsuko and grab her.

“I will think about it if you come down


My life had a lot of questions and answers but with that question; will I leave the person I love the most to save my best friend, I didn’t have an answer
Seeking for advice, my search was useless. The pedal of the bloom flower. The sad melody of my answer.

“So what do you think I should do”

“Well…if I was you and Haruna was Miichan and Atsuko was…..Sayaka, I would choose Miichan” Mariko said while looking at the person sitting beside her.

“Aww….you are so sweet” Miichan wrap her hands around Mariko’s shoulder.

“But in your situation” Mariko pointed at Minami; who was sitting in front of her.

“I would choose Sayaka” Miichan unwrap her hands and push Mariko.

“Look, if you don’t want Atsuko to kill herself, just tell her that you love her” Mariko said seriously

“But wouldn’t that decision affect your relationship with Haru-chan” Miichan question Minami.

“How did you knew about me and Haruna…..if I haven’t told anyone except for Mariko and Umi” Minami was kind of shock.


“well the glares you give two each other, the way you and her hug, and I have seen you walk in and out of her house” Miichan said

“Stalker” Minami whispered

“What”

“Nothing”

“Well…leave your butterfly and go with the black widow you spider” Mariko said while looking at Minami.


Later that day I realize what she meant by that.

My last night with the person I love the most. Very slowly I get drunk with pleasure. My web caught you, now I have to let you go without knowing why. When your lips are on mine I forget how to breathe. My hands roaming thru your naked body; it’s the original sin. Going thru every inch or your body. Stepping into fascination, making you my girl, my women, and my lover. Not wanting this paradise to end; we end up having two hours of sleep.

‘So this is our last time’ Minami thought while kissing Haruna’s neck.

(on sunday i'm going to put a scene that has that in it....if you know what i mean, but it going to be in tumblr)

The next morning, my hands were wrapped around Haruna’s slim body. Her head was resting in my small chest. The sensation of her arms around me. If only time stop. I slowly try to get out of your bed without waking you up. I got dress and I saw you waking up.

“Minami-chan, why didn’t you wake me up” said Haruna while rubbing her eyes.

“Because you are so beautiful when you sleep” Minami smile

“You are so sweet” Haruna smile

The most wonderful view is your smile. If only…..

As I put on my jacket, I walk to you. You tell me to sit down so I did. I put the best smile I had and…….

“I have to go to my house and change my cloths” Minami said

“Ok, I will see in school”

“Yeah” Minami smile faded away.


I stood up and walked to the door. I wonder if a last glimpse of a goddess would be a sin. The door-shot came too fast. I took a step and something got my attention. “Our last kiss” Minami whispered. Without thinking, I turn around and open her door. I saw you and my body couldn’t control itself. I ran to you, and pull you towards me. The sensation of your lips is my desire. A soft and tender kiss for our first.  A passionate and loving for our last. A step forward a step backward until we fall on your silk sheets. The pleasure and desire grows, but I have to stop it.

“I have to go, goodbye” Minami said while trying not to cry.

I got out of that. As I walked; I try not to cry, but the sadness is too powerful. I ran to my house as I cry.

Later that afternoon, I summon enough courage to tell Atsuko the biggest lie of my life and summon enough courage to tell something horrible to Haruna.

Later night, I cry for the longest time. I cry my heart out.





i tiered....... :) sorry if there is any gramar errors.....
 tell what you think

i will update next saturday.......i don't want to go to school


.....until the day coms...

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly (Spider POV) Chapter 2
« Reply #11 on: August 26, 2012, 04:06:17 AM »
PLEASE UPDATE YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.

WHO'S THE PAIRING?

I AM FAN OF ATSUMINA. (SHARE)
hello.

I am a fan of AkB48.

I really love their songs.

I really like their fan fiction.




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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly (Spider POV) Chapter 2
« Reply #12 on: August 26, 2012, 05:31:47 PM »
i realize something horrible...i'm going to school tomorrow and i would not be able to update next saturay day.
so here is chapter 3...enjoy it .

all day listening to blue flame from alice nine and monster from big bang.

enjoy and also thank you for all the people who read this fanfic....even though its not a atsumina.....

i don't know why i don't like atsumina..well sometimes i do, but most of the time i like takaharu....and i think it because i read a takaharu from FoF....it was my second fanfic that i read in this forum.



Chapter 3
(Black widow POV)



The sensation of your hands roaming thru my naked body, I only wish. I fell in love with you. You didn’t set up your web. Slowly, slowly, and slowly you became everything to me. It hurts knowing you are forbidden, than you are someone else’s desires, but what hurts me the most is you are some one else’s.
Atsuko run to the roof where Minami was, she wanted to tell her that she did well on of her test, but was stop because she heard some noises coming from the other side of the door of the rooftop.

“I told you I don’t like you flirting with other girls” Haruna said angry

Atsuko open the door a little to peek who was in the roof.

“It’s only a persona, I’m sorry” Minami brought her hand to cup Haruna’s cheeks.

At this point Atsuko was shock. Her eyes went wider when she heard…..

“I love you” Minami and haruna shared a passionate kiss.

She stood still and for some reason her heartache


Since that day I realize I was in love with my best friend, but also realize that no one is worth her love expect me. I didn’t spoke a word of what I saw. Silence is killing me. After 3 months I told her “I love you”. With without knowing, I was acting differently. A magical day and I finally heard the most beautiful words; “I love you”. She was mine and only mine. My own love turned into….. I wanted to be yours but something happen.

Atsuko was in Minami’s house, since Minami’s parents are on a business trip. They started talking about schoolwork then Atsuko kiss Minami and one thing led to another. Lucky, they were in Minami’s bedroom. Slowly Atsuko made its way to Minami’s neck, but-

“Haruna” Minami moan aloud instantly Atsuko stop whatever she was doing.

“Why are you thinking about her?” Atsuko said angry. There was silence,

“I’m sorry, I didn-“Minami was interrupted when Atsuko slap her.

“You know what….I’m going to my house, see you later” Atsuko ran to her house. Later night she receive a lot of messages from Minami.


Jealousy and fear grew over me. Without controlling it, my love for you grew but also my insecurity.

“Can you believe Minami is still flirting even though she has a girlfriend” Jurina said.

“Really…that’s horrible, but who is her girlfriend?” Rena said

The two girls where talking in their classroom. Then Tomomi, Miichan, and Atsuko came in.

“It’s Atsuko”

“Really?” Rena look surprised

“Yeah that’s Minami’s girlfriend”

“We should tell her”

Jurina and Rena walked where the three were sitting.

“Hey..Atsuko, we have something to tell you”

“What is it?”

“The other day we saw Minami flirting with Sayaka”

“What”

“…and also Maria-san”

“……”


“…I’m going to kill those b-“

“No…you know she is like that” Tomomi said

“On what side are you in”

“On neither”

“Calm down Atsuko” Miichan was trying to calm down Atsuko

“I won’t …..Let me find her” Atsuko got out of the classroom. The rest of the people follow.

When she got to Minami’s classroom, she saw Minami and Umi talking…

“Look, I’m going to talk to her next month, but I don’t guaranty you anything” Umi-chan said

“Ok, but please tell her is not my fault that she is in love with me”

“I will….I hope you find happiness with your butterfly”

“That’s impossible…I’m with the black wid-“

Minami was interrupted when Atsuko slap her.

“What was that for” Minami almost shouted

“Because you are cheating on me”

“No I am not”

“Yes you are”

“How”


“You are flirting with other girls”

“….that’s not cheating”

“Yes it is”

“No it-“another slap Atsuko interrupted Minami. Everyone didn’t dare talk. Until…

“Stop hitting her” Umi said angrily

“Who the hell are you”

“I’m Umi Takahashi and I’m her cousin” Umi look Atsuko. Like those dramatic stares

“So”

‘So, do you know who I am?”

“No’

“I’m the president of the school council and I’m your sempai”

“Are you going to do something?”

“Yeah” Atsuko look mad and was about to slap Umi, but Umi stopped Atsuko by grabbing her hand

“That doesn’t work on me “Umi unhold her hand and bowed to Minami

“I’m sorry….I will leave now, and don’t worry about what we talk early…I’ll talk to her” with that Umi left


After that accident, everyone heard that I slap Minami. Welcome to my nightmare. The dreams of life turn into a tornado. I just want to be with her forever, but slowly I lose myself into my in worries. I will never eat.




i hope you enjoy it.....i'll see you next two saturday.

....until the day comes.......


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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly (Black widowPOV) Chapter 3
« Reply #14 on: August 26, 2012, 06:50:02 PM »
Wow, I really like this. It def has a dark twist to it which is something new :) It's really sad though, poor minami, she def doesn't want atsuko to hurt herself but she's unhappy :( & I also do feel bad for Atsuko though, she is def in the wrong but she does love Minami, she's just handeling everything so wrong though! Great fic :) Can't wait for your next update :D

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly (Black widowPOV) Chapter 3
« Reply #15 on: September 03, 2012, 07:12:57 PM »
i'm alive

when i rereading my fic i realize that it wasn't dark enough so i will make it like that.
at first i though i would be a 7 chapter fic, but now i think is going to be longer......how much i hate it...i'm a person of few words.

enjoy

p.s will not be updated until next 2 weeks.

Chapter 4



A cold sunny day, the tree without leaves, only the scenery of fall. In a tree you can see two people sitting under it. The cold breeze of fall.

“Your black widow let you come?”

“She had to go with her parents for the weekend”

“Where?”

“osaka”

“Oh….so what is it that you wanted to ask?”

“Well…have you talked to her?”

“Yuko?”

“Yeah, her”

“She said it was okay, it’s not your fault she is in love with you”

“That’s good”

“So, how is life?”

“Not so well”

Ring…ring…ring…

“Can you wait a little I have to answer this?”

“Okay”

“Moshi….sorry I was talking to my cousin….Umi…she is not a….I didn’t yell....I’m sorry…..you’re coming back tomorrow….ok…see you tomorrow…..bye”

“Whip” Umi said in a whispered

“What”

“Nothing”

“So, you heard any news from your butterfly”

“My Haruna….i haven’t seen her”

“Why”

“Atsuko doesn’t let me go anywhere”

“That’s cruel”

Umi turn to see a couple nearby and…

“You could be happy” Minami turn to the way her cousin was staring at and then look back at Umi.

“How”

“When it rains” Umi said in a whispered

“What”

“Nothing”

“Do you want to come with me to South Korea and USA?” Umi ask

“You know I can’t “

“Yes you can…let me ask my aunt”

“My will let me but Atsuko won’t”

“She doesn’t control your life”

“I know she doesn’t but remember what I told you, she will kill herself”

“Yes I remember, but that doesn’t mean she can control you”

“You don’t understand that I care for her as a friend”

“If you care for her as a friend why don’t you just stay friends”

“She will kill herself…..she is not thinking right”

“Well, talk to her”

“Ok”

Umi stood up and look at same couple that she saw early. “Hey is that Mariko and Haruna?”

“What” Minami turn where Umi was looking.

“Don’t worry Mariko is Miichan’s girlfriend” Umi wrap her arm around her cousin’s shoulder.

 “Let’s go to your house, and let me ask my aunt if she will allow you to come with me”

-somewhere in the park-

“I want to ask you something” Mariko looks at the tree where two people were sitting under it. Then Mariko realizes that Haruna wasn’t answering.

“Haruna” Mariko waves her hand in front of Haruna. Still no answer.

“Haruna” Mariko almost yells at her.

“What”

“Airhead….I want to ask you something” Mariko said.

“What is it?”

“Do you want to be with Minami?”

“No”

Mariko look a little shock.

“I thought you love her” Mariko look at Haruna

“I do, but…..it’s just that….you wouldn’t understand it” Haruna said in frustration.

“Tell me”

“Okay, the day we broke up she was with Atsuko. She told me “I was only playing with you”, and some days later I had to stay after school; I heard something that
make me think she is with her because Atsuko will commit suicide”

Mariko just looks at Haruna like if she already knew what she meant because in reality she did knew.

“I know” both if the stop walking. Haruna look shock.

“I know why she broke up with you and what u said is true” Haruna’s eye wide.

“What”

“A day before she broke up with you, she came to me for advise and I reminded her the tale of her ancestors” Haruna felt betray

“The tale…she told me that tale but that was a really long time, so I don’t remember well” Haruna try to think.

“You will remember one day now let’s go it’s almost twilight” Mariko told Haruna while she look at the two people who were sitting under a tree leave.

“See this is why I live alone…..never worrying about time”

Haruna lives alone ever since her parents die when she was 15 now she is 17. Her grandmother is the only one that cares enough to give her money for school and food.

-Somewhere in osaka-

“Mrs.kojima, have you visited your granddaughter lately?”

“Who is this?”

“I’m Madea Atsuko and Haruna’s friend”

“Yeah and…why are you calling me, is she alright”

“Oh she is more that fine”

“What do you mean by that?”

“You should look at the entrance of your door”

“Why”

“You will find something about Haruna”

“Okay”

Mrs.kojima walk to the entrance of the house; telephone in hand, she saw an envelope.

“I see it.”

“I want you to open it; there you will see photos of her doing something”

Mrs. Kojima did so, see saw a photo of Haruna kissing Minami. Mrs. Kojima couldn’t believe what she saw; she never thought that her granddaughter will do such
things. Mrs. Kojima picked up the phone again…

“What is this?”

“That is what your daughter is really doing; she is going out with a girl that is no good to her.”

“How do you know all this?”

“Because the girl who Haruna is kissing is my friend”

“WHAT... I can’t believe my granddaughter would do something like this, why are you telling me this?”

“Because I don’t want her near my friend.”

“I just can’t believe it… I just can’t”

“You better believe it”

- Minami’s House-
“HI aunt, how are you?”

“Fine, thank you, Umi”

In a big Mansion the Takahashi Family live. Well only Minami’s parents and her, Now Umi lived in another mansion with her parents. They were both the richest families in Japan. Minami’s dad was the president of the Takahashi Company while Umi’s dad was the vice president. One day Minami and Umi will be in charge of the company.

“So how is your father?” Minami’s mom asked.

“Well… he went to a business trip to South Korea.” Umi sat in the couch.

“That’s great”

“And talking about trips… Aunt Ray will you let Minami come with me to South Korea and the US” Umi asked as she look at her aunt.

“And what about school… you almost have your finals.”

“School… Aunt, I and Minami are way smarter than those kids besides I will ask for the work.”

“That’s right mom, me and Umi are smarter than those kids… don’t you remember we only wanted to be in a public school to experience what it feels to be in one”
Minami said.

“So can we?” Umi asked.

“Okay you can go, but be careful.

Now both cousins were jumping like little kids, “So immature” Minami’s mom thought.

“Well.. When are going?” Minami asked.

“In December, and don’t worry we’ll be back before Christmas.” Umi told Minami.

“I have to go now. Bye cousin, Bye Aunt” and with that Umi left Minami’s house. She looked at the clock and saw it was 11:00 pm. Minami knew Atsuko was coming
back tomorrow and it was going to be a pretty long day.




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please give some ideas or Recommendations

.....untill the day comes.....

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly Chapter 4
« Reply #16 on: September 04, 2012, 12:45:34 AM »
Thanks for the update :) Glad Haruna knows for sure now why Minami is with Atsuko :D She'll be having trouble now though with her fam :( & Atsuko's love for Minami is pretty toxic, hope Acchan changes and can see what shes doing is wrong.
Thanks again for the update, I look forward to your next chapter :D

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly Chapter 4
« Reply #17 on: September 23, 2012, 12:32:51 AM »
hello...i'm just dropping off my fic...

its been a really long time sience i update this....and well.....i was lazy and i started school......

well for my shot.....don't worry i will update them....


enjoy...


The tale of a spider and a butterfly




-Akihabara school-


“Class as you can see we don’t have any books, so we have to share them with the next class” the teacher said

“Haruna is in the next classroom right?” Umi lean forward and whispered to Minami. Minami nodded.

“Grab your things and let’s go to the next class”

As the class walked to the next class, Minami and Umi were talking.

“Are you okay” Umi ask

“Yes why”

“Haruna is in the next class”

“So…it’s not like I am nervous….am I nervous?...god I’m nervous” Minami almost had a panic attack in the middle of the hall way.

“Calm down everybody is staring at you”

“Sorry”

The other classroom teacher was telling people wear to sit. Finally it became Minami’s turn.

“You will sit with Haruna over there” the teacher was pointing where Haruna was sitting at. As in slow motion Haruna look at the direction where Minami was. She was
shock.

“Just go and sit down” her teacher point out.

Haruna just stood there froze. Minami made its way to Haruna. She didn’t even dare to make eye contact. Thankfully, her cousin was told to sit with a girl behind her.
This was really awkward, the atmosphere wasn’t a good one. Minami turn around to her cousin who was talking to the student she was sitting beside. Nothing to do now. In this world of wonders, two spirits walk the same path, yet they don’t know.

“Ok people turn to page 48 in your text books”

Without both realizing that they were reaching for the book, both their hands made contact. Both froze and slowly turn their heads to look at each other.

“Haruna” Minami whispered. Minami look at their hands and slowly retracted her hand.

“Could you open the text book”

Haruna didn’t say anything but did open the text book. The class went on without them talking until all the students finish.

“You have 20 minutes until school day is over, so talk” the teacher announced.

Minami not wanting to talk to Haruna, she turned around but to her surprise Umi was talking to her partner.

“So, you think we will have a good grade on this”

“Yeah”

“By the way my name is Umi”

“My name is Jyou”

‘Thanks so much for having a cousin in class’ Minami thought irritated. She turned around only to feel awkward. Both Haruna and Minami look into different directions without making eye contact. Then minami felt someone tap her shoulder. “Talk to her already” Umi whispered. “About what” Minami whispered. “Anything”. “Okay”.
Minami turn around to talk to or try to talk to Haruna.

“So….how is your classes” Minami studded a little. No answer came from Haruna. She just kept looking at the window. ‘Why is she talking to me’ Haruna thought.

“How is…life” silence, awkwardness and worried at the same place. Haruna still didn’t answer, but—

“Why did you break up with me” Haruna said flatly while looking at the window. Minami was shock at hearing this. Minami remember she told her she was playing with
her, but never gave a reason why. Minami didn’t answer and started to look at the clock. It was 3:45, five minutes until it’s time to go home. Those 5 min were the longest of her life.

Ring…

Minami rapidly stood up, went where Umi was; grab her hand and drag her from the classroom.

“Call me Jyou” Umi was dragged to the hall way then stopped.

“Why did you drag me for?”  Umi sounded a little upset.

“I couldn’t handle been with the person I hurt” Minami started to walk to the exist of the school. “Wait” Umi yell.

Umi ran towards Minami but was stop when she saw Atsuko walking towards her cousin. “Minami I was looking for you” Atsuko approach Minami

“What’s wrong?” Atsuko asked worried

“Nothing lets go” before they could walk out Umi appeared.

“Wait” Umi said

“What” Minami sounded upset

“My dad is going to come today…..talk” Umi vowed to Atsuko. “Bye, Minami….Atsuko” with that Umi went to her car.

“Can we go to the park?” Minami asked Atsuko


-some other place but in school-


“Grandma?” Haruna look at person who was standing in the hallway.

“Haruna, my child” Mrs. Kojima walked where Haruna was. She gave Haruna a hug and look at her.

“We need to talk, honey” Mrs.kojima took Haruna’s hand and drag her from school.

In the process she saw Minami and Atsuko holding hands. That made Haruna sad and angry.


-At the park-


Minami remember what her cousin said to her yesterday.

“Atsuko how was your day?”

“It was wonderful, and yours?” Minami at this point froze a little. She didn’t wanted Atsuko to know she was with Haruna

“It was okay”

“So, what are we doing today?”

“I don’t know, we have to tal-“Minami was interrupted when her cell phone rang.

“Hello…at the park….why…my uncle….oh about that….okay….see you later”

“Who was that” Atsuko said with a jealous tone.

“My cousin, she told me my uncle wants to see me” Minami took at her watch.

“Well…I’ll drop you at your house”


-At Umi’s house-


“Yes dad, I already told Aunt Ray and uncle Kai” Umi was sitting near Minami while her dad was in front

“Are you both sure you want to go?”

“Yes, we just want to go somewhere before we spent our full time to collage” Umi look serious.

“Yes uncle we want to explore” Minami said.

“Okay girls you can go” both cousins were jumping like little kids.




Thanks for reading.....
comment please.....if you have an idea or a recommendation......feel free to tell me



.....until the day comes....

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly Chapter 5
« Reply #18 on: September 23, 2012, 04:38:53 AM »
hello.

Umichan..

I am happy because you update!!! :D

Please update your work..

it's very nice..  :twothumbs

i can't wait for your next chapter..

thank you..

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Re: The tale of a spider and a butterfly Chapter 5
« Reply #19 on: October 24, 2012, 08:43:58 PM »
I LOVE TAKAHARU :inlove: AN I LOVE YOU FIC IS SO INTERESTING, POOR HARUNA SHE HAS TO HANDLE ALL THE SITUATION :mon waterworks: , AND MY DEAR TAKAMINA IS SO WEAK OVER ACAHAN :mon emo:, BTW ACAHN IS SO CRAZY LOVE MAKES HER CRAZY :mon crazyinlove:,, I THINK HARUNA SHOULD DATE SOMEONE I DON'T KNOW JUST SO THIS WAY TAKAMINA REACTS AND DO SOMETHING , THAY DESERVE TO BE HAPPY  :mon pray2: AND ACHAN WELL .. SHE NEEDS HELP  :mon dunno: , PLEASE CONTINUE YOU FIC IS SO AWESOME , I'LL BE WAITING TO THE NEXT CHAPTER :mon cute:, AND SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLISH KEKEK

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