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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 18
« Reply #120 on: April 19, 2013, 03:39:08 AM »
Minna! Sorry it's been a while but here's the update! Also check out the new poll!
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Chapter 18

The next day everyone headed to the palace where Torigoya and her guards were waiting. It was almost time for battle but Yuko wanted to talk to Torigoya first. The two walked to the middle to meet up and then Yuko said,

"Are you sure you want to do this? There has to be a better way."

"No Yuko. This must be done. If you hand over Center then we could all go home peacefully." Torigoya said.

"I'm not letting you take Jurina. Give me Rena and we can deal with the impending invasion another way."

"I refuse. Now shut up and fight!"

Torigoya pulled out a knife and with that the battle began. Yuko and Torigoya started to fight and the others soon swarmed in. Black and Nezumi went after guards like the others did and they were fairly easy to take out. Minami, Atsuko and Daruma were in the front making a path and taking out most of the guards on one side. Meanwhile Shaku, Gakuran, and Choukoku were on the other. They were all fighting small ones but what Black was wondering was where was Gekikara? Black looked around and couldn't see her anywhere. Black thought Torigoya had Gekikara hidden somewhere but where? Black looked around in hopes of finding her but she was nowhere. She suddenly felt a tiny tap on her shoulder and when she looked over she saw it was her.

With a wicked smile on her face and glowing red eyes, Gekikara grabbed Black and slammed her into the ground. Then she started running dragging her across the ground through all the people and then finally throwing her into a pile of wood. Nezumi rushed over to her help and Center went after Gekikara. It was now just those two as Black watched a battle between Gods unfold.

Center was the first to attack by shooting a couple fire balls at Gekikara but were useless as she easily knocked them back. Center shot one more and used it for cover as she jumped up and tried to strike down upon Gekikara. However Gekikara moved out of the way and tried to attack Center. She raised her hand and was about to come down on her but then Center moved and got behind her. She wrapped her arms around Gekikara's waist and pulled her down.

When they were close enough she let go, Gekikara slammed hard into the ground. However it didn't effect her as she got up and cracked her neck as if nothing happened. Then she charged at Center with amazing speed and this time when she attacked she played a little trick on Center. She aimed to the left so naturally Center moved to the left however Geki faked it and hit right hitting Center right in the side. She was sent flying back and landed hard. Gekikara laughed as she watched Center get up and go after her once more.

Center threw more fire around Gekikara sealing her in a contained area away from the others. Center knew things were going to get worse and if she didn't want to hurt the others then they were going to have to stay out of it. Center faced Gekikara and she charged at her once more with a sword made of fire. She slashed forward but missed as Gekikara moved back and then made a blade of dark energy. The two clashed swords as they fought in the barrier. Center was trying to strike her arm or leg but Gekikara was aiming for her heart and neck. Center didn't want to kill Gekikara so she did her best to try to only hurt her enough to back down. Center managed to slash her arms twice and leg once but it still wasn't enough. Center aimed for Gekikara's leg but missed and Gekikara took this as an advantage and cut Center's side.

Center went down but backed away trying to recover from her wound. However Gekikara was relentless as she came down again cutting Center's shoulder and back. Gekikara stepped on Center to hold her down and then impaled her sword on Center's arm. She twisted it making the wound bigger and Center screamed in pain. Gekikara lifted the sword ready to attack again but something stopped her. Center looked up and saw something was holding Gekikara back holding her sword up. Looking carefully, Center saw thin black threads coming from above. Center looked up and saw Nezumi holding Gekikara. At the same time Black came down and pulled Center back.

"What are you doing?!" Center asked.

"We're here to help." Nezumi said.

"This isn't your fight."

"It is now!"

As Nezumi said that Gekikara broke free of the threads and aimed to attack her. Nezumi stepped back and Black came up hitting her straight in the stomach. Gekikara backed up but she wasn't able to move as Nezumi wrapped more threads around her legs. Black came down and managed to made a small cut on Gekikara's neck making her howl. Black was about to finish it with a blow to the chest but then Gekikara swung her body forward making Nezumi fly towards Black. Black had to back away as Nezumi slammed into her and Gekikara broke free.

 She was about to take out Black but then Center came from behind and stabbed the back of her knees. Gekikara fell down and then Center pulled out some knifes and stabbed them on the back of the elbows. Gekikara couldn't move for the blades were in too deep making it the perfect time to finish Gekikara. Center jumped up and aimed down ready to knock Gekikara out. Then to her surprise Gekikara smiled as she got up and drove a blade into Center's stomach. Center fell back and fell to the ground out cold.

"Center!"

Nezumi tried to run to her but Gekikara got in the way and punched her hard in the chest sending her flying. Black tried to attack but Gekikara easily flicked her off. Gekikara turned to Nezumi and gave her a wicked smile. She walked over and tied her arms back with her own thread. Then she pulled out a knife and held it against Nezumi's arm.

"You remind me of a rat~"

With that Gekikara started to carve the word RAT into Nezumi's arm. Nezumi screamed and squirmed trying to get away but Gekikara held her good. As Gekikara was finishing the last line Black got up and saw what was going on. She quickly ran over and drove her sword deep into Gekikara's shoulder. Gekikara turned around smiled. She pulled the sword out and then punched Black in the chest sending her back. Before Black could even get up Gekikara was on top of her and giggling. Gekikara took Black's sword and stabbed it into her shoulder twisting it deep. The sword pinned her down keeping her from moving away. She leaned down and said,

"You look tasty~"

Then suddenly Gekikara bit down on Black's shoulder and bit of a chunk. Black screamed as Gekikara swallowed Black's flesh and licked the blood from her lips. She was about to go in for seconds but then Black pulled out a hidden blade and stabbed Gekikara in the stomach. She pushed her back and then ran over to Nezumi to see if she was alright. Nezumi wasn't hurt as bad but Black was in worse condition than her. There was a loud roar and when the two looked over they saw Gekikara.

"Let's play a game!"

Gekikara came at them ready for another attack. Nezumi tried to move but Black pushed her back and then headed towards Gekikara. Black was preparing to move around Gekikara and go in from behind but Gekikara was fast and she was forced to move the other way. That was the fatal mistake as Black felt Gekikara punch her in the chest.

"Tag!"

Gekikara's fist penetrated through and gripped her organs.

"You're it~"

Gekikara pulled out and Black saw her own heart in Gekikara's hand. Slowly everything turned dark as Black fell down. The last thing she heard before she completely faded was Nezumi calling her.

"YUKI!!!!"

"M-Ma...yu..."

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Holy Jesus what's going to happen to Yuki?! Find out next update~

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 18
« Reply #121 on: April 19, 2013, 03:58:23 AM »
No!!!!! Yukirin!!!!!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 18
« Reply #122 on: April 19, 2013, 04:35:57 AM »
"Gekikara pulled out and Black saw her own heart in Gekikara's hand"

OMG!!!! :OMG:  don't tell me black gonna die
 
I love all you're story and I can't wait for the next chapter
you're one of my favorite author
hehehehe maybe because I ship Mayuki so much

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 18
« Reply #123 on: April 19, 2013, 09:02:09 AM »
Wah... Geki is really strong even Center is not able to defeat her

Great action scene... I like it lots.. very vivid description

What... Yuki's heart got taken.. there is no way she can be alive...

Was there going to be a way to save Yuki... I mean there is magic there... so there might be a way... right?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 18
« Reply #124 on: April 19, 2013, 11:41:57 AM »
I dont know what to say  :shocked

The first time i ship NezuBlack...
And GekiCen too


Sooo ~ Geki'll murder all of them and then live happily with Torigoya?????
Then how can she remember about her lost sister?

You got me curious Miyu-san
PU•RE•PUREPA  PU•RE•PUREPA  PU•RE•PUREPA  WARETE BARI BARI
PU•RE•PUREPA  PU•RE•PUREPA  PU•RE•PUREPA

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 18
« Reply #125 on: April 19, 2013, 10:12:36 PM »
shock... Geki became a cannibal...
when I told my friends about Geki, they said frog....
weird.......... gah! Yukirin!!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 19
« Reply #126 on: April 20, 2013, 12:42:42 AM »
Update minna! I hope you like it!
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Chapter 19

"YUKI!"

Mayu watched as Yuki's body fell to the ground and Gekikara was giggling while holding her heart. She watched in horror as Gekikara drank the blood from her heart and then tossed it aside as if it was nothing. The barrier was down and Gekikara was free to go back to her killing spree. She jumped away and ran after the other people. Meanwhile Mayu was in sorrow as she walked over to Black and fell to her body. She carefully held her body and kept it close to her.

Tears flowed down Nezumi's face as she held Black's body. Images of all the times they spent together flashed through her mind. She remembered the moment they first met to the moment she died. Nezumi's heart was breaking as she stared at the expressionless face of her partner. Nezumi cried and cried holding onto Black like a doll. Then something cracked inside her and a new feeling arose. Feelings of anger and hate towards Gekikara. She wanted to kill her and tear her limb from limb. Make her pay for the death of Black. Nezumi stood up and stared at Gekikara.

"I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!"

Nezumi charged at Gekikara without any plan or sneaky scheme. She was running on pure killing instinct and was heading straight for Gekikara. Nezumi pulled out a special kind of thread she had made a long time ago for intense battles. The thread was made of indestructible metal and coated in deadly poison that would kill any normal person. Nezumi shot the threads and created a cage around Gekikara and her and sealed it shut.

"Neumi's lair..."

Gekikara started at Nezumi with an irritated look.

"Mou I hate cages!"

Dark energy oozed from Gekikara's body and surround her giving her a protective shield. Then she pulled out a large battering ram with spikes on it and charged at Nezumi who was ready. She moved out of the way and landed to the side leaving a trail of thread behind her. When Gekikara was in it she pulled the threads and made Gekikara trip and tangle herself in the thread. She was caught in Nezumi's threads and there was no escaping the damage she was going to do. Nezumi wrapped a thread around Gekikara's arm and said,

"How do you like being torn apart!"

With that Center pulled the thread and Gekikara's arm was sliced right off. Gekikara laughed as her arm fell to the ground. The laughing irritated so she tore off the other arm and a leg as well. Gekikara was still laughing and Nezumi was becoming more and more angry. She was going to take off Gekikara's entire head but then something happened. Gekikara herself turned black and then faded into a dust. It was then Nezumi realized that Gekikara was a clone and the real one was somewhere else.

"Peek a boo~"

"Oh sh-"

"I see you!"

Gekikara swung her bat and hit Nezumi in the side sending her flying into the thread. Luckily Nezumi wasn't cut by the thread and simply got back up. However Nezumi was horribly shocked when she saw Gekikara standing there with a hook and a chain. Gekikara threw the hook and it grabbed onto Nezumi's shoulder digging deep. Nezumi tried to get away but Gekikara pulled her in and then punched her sending her flying once again. However Nezumi had one of her own tricks for when Gekikara had hit her Center had placed a small capsule on Gekikara's arm.

"Boom..."

There was an explosion and Gekikara's arm was sent skyward. Seeing that she had lost her arm, Gekikara was a little shocked that someone was able to do that much damage to her. However she smiled as she watched her body grow back a new arm.

"Now that's not fair." Nezumi said.

"Life isn't fair!"

Gekikara kicked Nezumi so hard that she broke through the cage of thread. Nezumi flew back and hit hard while Gekikara followed with a wicked grin on her face. She held the hook in her hand and this time wrapped it around Nezumi's leg. It was a tight grip and there was no way Nezumi was going to be able to get out but then suddenly something came in fast and knocked Gekikara back. It was Yuko who had somehow defeated Torigoya and was now over to help Nezumi. Yuko grabbed Nezumi and pulled her back as the hook went flying above her head. They looked over and saw Gekikara with an extremely angry look when she saw Yuko. The sight of Yuko made Gekikara's blood boil and made her want to tear her apart. Gekikara went after Yuko this time but was not successful as Nezumi got in the way and tripped her with the threads. Yuko ran up and punched Gekikara in the chest and then the stomach. To marks appeared on the areas and Yuko smiled.

"2 point blast!"

The marks exploded sending Gekikara flying high into the air. Yuko wasn't done though as she jumped up and then punched Gekikara in three spots.

"3 point blast!"

Gekikara was sent back into the ground and Yuko came down with one more powerful blow. However Gekikara moved out of the way and Yuko missed. When she tried to search for her Gekikara jumped on her and pinned her to the ground with her hand around her neck. The two fought for their life as Yuko tried to get loose of Gekikara's deadly grip.

"Re-Rena stop... I-It's me Yuko!"

"Yuko is dead! She's dead to me! I hate her like she hated me!!"

Gekikara tightened her grip but Yuko rolled over and was now strangling Gekikara.

"I never said those things! They're lies Rena why won't you listen to me?!"

"Because you're a lie!"

Gekikara kicked Yuko off her and slammed her face into the ground.

"You were nothing but a lie to me!"

Gekikara took Yuko and forced her deep into the ground making a huge hole. She was about to go back for more but then Nezumi came back with more threads wrapped around. Gekikara grew angry with Nezumi and decided to end it. She pulled on the the threads making Nezumi come closer. Then she held one hand out and dark energy gathered around it. When Nezumi was close enough Gekikara shot the energy and was heading straight for Nezumi. Thinking fast Nezumi quickly disconnected herself and then burrowed deep into the ground. She watched as the area above her was completely destroyed in one blast. She came back up and said,

"You have to better than that now."

"RAWR!!!"

Nezumi braced herself as she was getting ready for another attack. She was going to avenge Black's death no matter what even if she had to die as well.
 
"Yuki..."

"Huh?"

"Yuki..."

"Who's calling me?"

Yuki opened her eyes and saw a girl looking down on her. After a while she realized that girl was Sado. Sado helped her up and brushed off her clothes.

"Am I dead?" Black asked.

"Well kinda. Your spirit is in a in-between state where your body is dead but your spirit isn't. Take a look around."

Black looked around and saw everything around her was frozen. The sight was incredible and Black had a hard time believing what was happening.

"Not everything is frozen Yuki. I just paused the scene from your last memory before you technically died. Looks like things were getting rough down there seeing Gekikara holding your heart and all." Sado said.

"Why am I here?"
 
"You're here because the big guy up there told me he wanted you to stop Rena and Jurina and prevent them from destroying the world."

"Why me?"

"Well you died first so that's one reason and another is you have something neither one of them knew."

"And what is that?"

Sado walked over and touched her chest lightly. Then suddenly a mark appeared on her chest and spread down to her arm. The mark was like some kind of chain that connected her to Gekikara.

"What is this?"

"When the Matsui sisters were staying with you, your father had Yuko and I place a binding spell on them. Gekikara is bounded to you and Center is bounded to Nezumi."

"Why?"

"To insure that if something happened then someone would be able to control them. You're kind of like an owner so to speak." Sado said.

"What do these chains do?" Black asked.

"You can control Gekikara. The reason why you couldn't use them before was because they're a safety trigger that only activated when you died."

"Well that's a major downer."

"Yes yes but now it's time to send you back. You still need to activate Nezumi's as well. When she connects to Center, her power will grow much stronger than Gekikara's."

"Won't I increase Gekikara's as well then?"

"No because you can control how much power she is allowed to use. Just take it away and she's back to being normal."

"When you said activate Nezumi's... Are you saying I have to kill Nezumi?"

"No no just touch her the same place I did and the spell will activate. Now get going you're missing one hell of a battle."

"Thanks Sado."

There was a bright flash of light and then suddenly Black opened her eyes. She looked around saw Center still on the ground and Gekikara was now causing havoc in the battle. The others were down and the only ones left were Yuko and Nezumi. Black quickly ran over to Nezumi and when Nezumi saw Black she almost started crying.

"No time for tears just come here!"

Black grabbed Nezumi and touched her chest. When she did that the mark appeared and the chain connected her to Center. Soon after Center stood back up and was now more powerful than ever. Center and Nezumi didn't know what was going on but she was happy to see that she was alright and then ran off to fight Gekikara. She charged at Gekikara who was ready to fight back but then Black pulled the chain binding the two. When the chain was pulled Gekikara fell hard to the ground. Center moved in and gave her a hard punch to the face. Then she went in for a kick to the side and stomach and other punch to the chest. Center threw Gekikara into the air and slammed her back down hard but wasn't done yet. She came in fast with another round of hard blows. Then finally Center told Black to pull the chains hard for she was about to do the final move.

Black grabbed the chain and was about to pull but Gekikara sprung up and tried to attack Black. However she was too slow as Nezumi got in the way and threw smoke bombs in her face. Nezumi and Black escaped while Gekikara was left stunned and confused. Black grabbed the chain and pulled extra hard causing Gekikara to basically glue herself to the ground. There was no escape and Center was moving in for the final move. With all her energy Center summoned something was was very familiar. It was the move Sado used only it was much bigger and more powerful.

"Sakura Dragon!"

Center launched the dragon and it came down on Gekikara hard and not stopping for a while. Then finally when the ash and smoke cleared, the only thing that remained was Gekikara out cold but still alive. How she was alive no one knew but Nezumi wasn't going to stand for it. Nezumi ran over and was going to stab Gekikara but Yuko pushed her back.

"That's enough!"

Black rushed over and hugged Nezumi trying to calm her down which she did and Nezumi cuddled in Black's hold. Meanwhile Yuko walked over to Gekikara and asked Black to transfer the bind spell to her. Black didn't know how to do that so Yuko walked over and touched her chest. Black watched as the mark disappeared and then reappeared onto her. Yuko didn't need Center's spell because she thought Nezumi would keep a good hold on her. Yuko picked Gekikara up and said,

"I think it's finally over."

"I don't think so!"

They looked over and saw Torigoya weakly standing supporting herself against a spear. She limped over to the rest of the others and said,

"I surrender but the enemies are just around the corner. You guys killed all of our guards and now there is no one left to defend the palace."

"Well I think we can fix that. All we need is Jurina and she can defend everyone." Yuko said.

"Maybe but what you don't understand Yuko is that there are a large number of them do you really think Jurina can handle them all?"

"I think so. Right Center?!"

"Yeah!"

"Then tomorrow we battle!"

"YOSH!"

That night everyone rested long and well for the big battle tomorrow. Of course everyone was going to fight except Gekikara and Yuko but Center was the main power source behind it all. Black was resting in her room when she felt someone sneak into her futon and wrap their arms around her waist. She turned around and saw Nezumi smiling at her.

"Mou I was so scared when I saw you die.. How did you come back?" she asked.

"Well let's just say I had some help from an old friend." Black said,

"Well I thank them because now I have my Yuki back."

Black smiled and kissed Nezumi's cheek.

"I'll always be here for you."

The two kissed each other goodnight and then slept together in each other's arms.

The next day was the big battle and Torigoya was right when she said that there were many. It looked like there was a sea of soldiers in the battle field all waiting to attack. The size in numbers was great but Black's size in power was greater. They waited for the signal and then they were off into the battle field. Black took her sword and sliced through several guys who all went down in a matter of seconds. Meanwhile Nezumi and Center were tearing it up together as they took down several guys at once. Center summoned the same fire lion and set it lose on the men. However there were still more ready to battle and they weren't giving up. In the distant background Black hear shouts and screams followed by loud roaring. Black looked over and saw Daruma and Acchan taking men down while Takamina was protecting them keeping the other soldiers from hurting them.

"Black get down!"

Black ducked down and watched as Shaku and Gakuran shot large spinning blades taking off the heads of several guards and then Choukoku carrying a large sword and slicing down several others. Everyone was putting in an effort to fight their best and help the others. Torigoya was also putting up a fight as Black watched her take them down with her spear piercing several men at a time. Black had to keep up with the others if she was going to contribute to the battle so she started fighting off others as well. With every slice Black took down several guys all not standing a chance against her. However suddenly there was a loud scream and Black looked over to see Nezumi on the ground in pain. She could see something burning her flesh and making her go down.

Up ahead there was something on Center as well that was probably causing Nezumi to feel the pain. There on Center someone had thrown sealing tags that were powerful enough to stop Center from attacking. Whatever Center felt Nezumi felt and things were getting bad for her as more tags were thrown onto Center. Black tried to run towards her but men got in her way and pushed her back. The last thing she saw before completely being lost in the sea of men was someone stabbing Nezumi in the chest and her going down.

"MAYU!"

The anger in Black grew to a point that became unbearable and now she was furious. Something in Black snapped and a powerful anger bursted into her veins. Her eyes glowed black and everything around around her darkened. The only thing she could see were the heat signatures off all the men. Everything was red all accept one which was blue. The blue thing was Nezumi and being blue only meant one thing. Black's heart snapped and the anger exploded inside her. Dark energy surrounded her as something started to form around her. Soon after the body of a snake was created with her at the head.

"Black Viper!"

 Black took a deep breath and charged at the men slicing them all down. She went row by row killing all the men in her way. She was moving at an incredible speed as no was able to touch her. It was as if everything was slow and she was moving too fast. Black kept cutting down every person she saw without even blinking. However she wasn't the only one who was in the action. While chopping down everyone she heard someone shout,

"Fire Wave!"

Black looked over and saw Center shoot a huge wave of fire the size of a tsunami over the soldiers. The wave came down and took out all the men burning them to a crisp. Black was protected of course and kept cutting down any of the men who tried to escape. She kept killing and killing until there was no life left and even then she wasn't stopping. She just kept killing until she heard a voice.

"Yuki!"

Black stopped and looked over to see Nezumi.

"You can stop now! It's over!"

Black calmed down and the viper vanished. She ran over to Nezumi who weakly held onto her.

"Mayu we need to get you help." she said.

"It's ok Yuki I'll be fine. It's not that bad."

As she said that Nezumi started to cough up blood.

"Ok maybe it is bad."

"I don't want to lose you!"

Black hugged Nezumi tightly and started crying.

"There there it was ok. We had a fun time while it lasted nee?" Nezumi said.

"No no I won't lose you!"

"Yuki..."

"Perhaps I can help."

Black looked over and was surprised to see Sado or at least her ghost.

"Don't worry Black the big guy doesn't need Nezumi either. He needs her to watch Center as well so he sent me to do a little favor for him."

Sado placed her hand over Nezumi's wound and soon after it healed completely.

"Well now that that's taken care of I should get going."

Sado turned around and was about to leave but then Center shouted,

"Sado wait!"

"Sado turned around and saw Center. She smiled and said,

"You've grown Jurina. I'm so proud of you."

"Do you have to go back?" she asked.

"Yes I do I'm sorry but don't worry you're time will come and we'll see each other again someday."

"I don't want you to leave though."

"Now Jurina I've taught you better. Don't cling to dead people they're dangerous."

"Yes Mariko..."

"Good. Then I have to go. Take care of yourself Jurina I'll be watching."

With that Sado left and all was quiet. Nezumi took Black's hand and said,

"Let's go home."

"Un lets."

Days had passed since then and things were finally back to normal. Yuko went off to rule the palace and watch over Rena and Jurina who were happy to finally be reunited. Everyone else went back to their homes and were living peacefully. However Black and Nezumi were back at it killing people who deserved to die. They were just finishing up a guy when Gekikara and Jurina suddenly came up. 

"Yo Center. It's been a while." Nezumi said.

"Same to you." Center said.

"What brings you here?"

"This."

Center handed Black a note and she read it aloud.

"Hey guys it's Yuko! It's been a while since we all hung out so I was thinking maybe we should all hang out! I'm throwing a big party on the beach so everyone is invited to come! Bring your party attitudes because it's going to be a big blast!"

"So are you gonna come?" Gekikara asked.

"Sure might as well. Black and I could use a vacation."

"Then it's settled! We'll see you guys there. Come one Rena let's go eat some of that new  Melonpan that came out. You seem to like it a lot."

"Yay let's go!"

The two vanished and Nezumi walked over and hugged Black.

"Can you believe it Black? We're gonna have another vacation!"

"Oh boy..."

Black was excited but something in her told her that the vacation wasn't going to be as relaxing as she hoped it would be.

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Hope you enjoyed the update! 20 will be the last chapter so I hope you enjoyed the story so far!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 19
« Reply #127 on: April 20, 2013, 02:01:58 AM »
Lol crazy chapter we have here. Too bad about WMatsui, I was expecting their reunited to be heart-warming.


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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 19
« Reply #128 on: April 20, 2013, 02:28:43 AM »
YEYYYY!!!!
Finally WMatsui is reunited
i hope the next update will have a lot more WMatsui scene in it
thenk for the update :twothumbs

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 19
« Reply #129 on: April 20, 2013, 03:12:31 AM »
whew~~~
compared to the other fanfics of urs that I've read
this one has the most normal ending
I mean I loved all the other ones
but they had a strange, really strange twist
now, I can't wait for the next update...
just hope saturday school doesn't make my dad take away the internet

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 19
« Reply #130 on: April 20, 2013, 08:33:54 AM »
WOW love all that fight scene

But but but about WMatsui, why so strange to each other?????
i loled the Black-spirit scene
please update the last chapter soon




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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 19
« Reply #131 on: April 20, 2013, 02:57:08 PM »
Rena and center could be controlled by the binding chain...

Wah... Sado is so great after she died... can heal dead and major injury...

Ah... yeah... Yuko went back to rule the kingdom...

She could have done that from the start.... so Rena and Jurina no need to be seperated...

Yeah... it finished now...

Thank you for the fic... I enjoyed reading it

Can't wait to see your other creation

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 19
« Reply #132 on: April 20, 2013, 08:08:03 PM »
Woaaah what was it??? It was so cool!!

Yuki is not dead! Mayu too! And Yukirin super power!!!

And JuriRena are now together yeah!!!

Thank for this story!!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



Married?!-Mayuki fanfic (maybe it will have another pair)

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 19
« Reply #133 on: April 21, 2013, 05:31:50 PM »
MIYUMI SAN,MAYBE ITS MY FIRST TIME COMMENT IN YOUR FIC
IT WAS ONE OF GOOD FIC THAT I EVER READ,REALLY
MAYUKI~ LOVE THEIR INTERACTION
CANT WAIT THE NEXT UPDATE
WHAT HAPPEN IN THEIR VACATION?
YOU WANT TRY SMUT SCENE? GREAT!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #134 on: April 23, 2013, 02:43:21 AM »
Vacation time! I hope you guys like the update. Let's see what Yuko has planned shall we?
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Chapter 20 part 1

The next day Black and Nezumi arrived at the beach early in the morning. When they arrived there were already people there. Choukoku, Gakuran, and Shaku were there along with Yuko, Center and Gekikara. However because it was so early Shaku and Center were sleeping and Nezumi was getting close to passing out as well. Black had Nezumi sleep next to Shaku while she went over to talk to Yuko.

"Why are we here so early?" Black asked.

"Because there's some cool stuff you gotta see. Don't worry once everyone arrives they'll be here!"

"Who?"

"You'll see~"

Soon after Atsuko and Minami showed up along with Torigoya. Once everyone was here  Yuko woke everyone up and said,

"Minna! Welcome to my party! Are you ready to have some fun?"

"Yeah~"

"Then let's begin!"

Yuko pulled out a whistle and blew into it. However no one could hear a sound coming out of it except Nezumi who said it sounded like a high pitch squeak. Soon after there was a splash coming from the water. Fearing it was another octopus Black hid behind Nezumi. To everyone's surprise though what jumped out wasn't a octopus but two dolphins. Soon after more came out and started jumping around in the water. Everyone cheered in excitement as they watched the dolphins do all kinds of flips and tricks. Then one of the dolphins swam over to Yuko who handed it a small fish.

"Thanks guys!"

The dolphins cried back and then left. When they were gone Yuko turned to the others and said,

"Now the fun really starts."

Apparently Yuko had a bunch of games planned for everyone to participate in and something in Black told her it was going to be a long day. The first game they had was a simple one. It was a race from one end of the beach to the other end. The only thing is it was about a 5 kilometer race and Black was not ready to run. Black was not going to put any effort into running but somehow Yuko knew everyone would not want to try so she had a plan to get everyone moving. In a cage there were a bunch of wild boar that were angry and hungry. Yuko also tied truffles around everyone's head and that made them more wild. They couldn't kill the boars so the only choice they had was to run. Yuko got behind the cage and told everyone to get ready.

"Ready.... GO!"

Yuko dropped the cage and everyone ran. Black could hear the sound of wild boars running after them. Black ran as fast as she could to avoid the crazy things. When Black looked back she saw two of them were right on her. The only three ahead of her were Choukoku, Center and Gekikara. Gakuran had had fallen behind and Black thought she was one of the boars. Shaku and Atsuko were watching from the side while Minami was watching them. Black felt envious of Minami for not being in this crazy race. Not paying attention, Black didn't notice Torigoya run ahead of her leaving Black behind with a bunch of boars.

One was about to bite her clothes but Black managed to escape. She ran super fast and managed to get past Choukoku. However Choukoku went super woman on Black bolted past Black, Torigoya, and Center. Black was once again in the back with the boars behind her. It was then Black decided to use her super speed that she hasn't used in a long time. Black focused all her energy into her legs and then took off speeding past everyone. Black caught up all the way to Gekikara who she couldn't get past. Somehow Gekikara was able to keep up with her and Black was amazed. However suddenly Gekikara smiled and pointed behind Black. Black looked back and saw Nezumi also there. Behind her though was a very very large boar that caught up to her and was extremely angry.

"Black help!"

 Nezumi jumped onto Black's back back making her lose balance and almost fall over. However Nezumi pulled hard and managed to get her back up. Everything became heavy as she held Nezumi while trying to run. Up ahead the finish line was almost there and Black was close. Wih all her strength Black ran through the line and came to a screeching stop. Soon after Gekikara, Torigoya, and Center came in followed by Choukoku and Gakuran. Black was so tired that she fell to the ground and started panting hard. She couldn't believe that all those boars were after them and she managed to escape. Black looked over and saw the boars were just standing there staring at them. They weren't going past the line which was very strange. A whistle was blown and the boars ran back into the jungle. Meanwhile Yuko walked over and said,

"And Black is the winner of our first game!"

Everyone weakly clapped and then Yuko said,

"Now onto the next!"

Everyone groaned saying they were too tired to move but Yuko didn't intend for them to play. It was the kid's turn and because Nezumi hitch hiked onto Black she was competing as well. The game they had to play was something similar to buried treasure. On the beach there were a bunch of X's on the ground and their job was to dig up whatever was under. Whoever found the treasure first won and got to keep whatever was inside. Nezumi was really into the game when she heard money was involved and was ready to dig away. When the go signal was given Nezumi ran off and started digging like crazy.

She went to one spot and started digging and she found a chest. When she opened it though the thing inside wasn't gold but a snake. Nezumi screamed and threw the chest back into the ground and buried it. Yuko had set up fake treasures to make the game more interesting and apparently they were dangerous ones. The next one Nezumi opened had bees in it and the one after that had beetles. Every chest Nezumi dug up there was something bad in it. At one point when Nezumi opened a chest there was a baby bird in it. It was cute in the beginning but then the mama came down and nearly took of Nezumi's head. Black couldn't help but laugh as she watched Nezumi run away from the giant bird.

"Found it!"

Black looked over and found Atsuko holding up a small chest with gold and jewels inside. Shaku also found a chest full of candy and the only chest left was one full of slugs. Nezumi pouted and was a little ticked off about not finding anything but then Yuko walked over and whispered something. Nezumi got the perviest smile Black had ever seen and the high fives Yuko. When Black tried to ask what did Yuko say Nezumi told her nothing. Black suspected something but she decided to let it go when Yuko said it was time to eat. However dinner wasn't exactly going to come to them. They had to get the lunch. The game was to go out and gather as much food as they could and whoever brought the most back got to eat first while the others watched. Black and Nezumi set out and found some bananas and oranges to take along with some pineapple and kiwis. While there were hunting, they heard some strange rustling coming from the bushes. They started to walk towards the bushes but then suddenly a bunch of boars came running through.

"Forward Daruma!"

Black watched as Atsuko and Minami were riding Daruma and chasing the boars. Looks like they were going after the meat. Black and Nezumi decided to head back where everyone had brought the food they caught. There was a wide variety of foods that everyone found but they were missing Center and Gekikara. Not knowing where they were, Black and Nezumi started looking. Then suddenly there was a loud boom coming from the distance. They looked out and saw Gekikara carrying an octopus on her back that looked cooked. Center had a proud smile on her face while carrying a bunch of fish. Everyone agreed that Center and Gekikara won the gathering challenge. Everyone ate happily but Black refused to eat the octopus. Nezumi decided to joke around by taking a tentacle and placing it on Black's shoulder but as she got close, Black suddenly turned around and sliced the tentacle almost taking off Nezumi's hand.

"Hey take it easy!"

"Don't mess with me." Black said.

When dinner was over, the sun was setting and everyone decided to relax and enjoy the sunset. Some of the other decided to play in the water while Black sat on the shore and watched. Nezumi walked over and sat next to her and said,

"Having fun?"

"Yeah." Black said.

"It's good to see everyone."

"Yeah it is...."

"Nee are you ok?"

Black didn't have time to answer because suddenly Shaku came out carrying something. Everyone gathered around and Shaku revealed a strange plant with a bud on it. The plant was blue with a red tip and purple leaves. It really was a strange plant and they didn't know what it was. Suddenly Nezumi reached out and touched and it when it did the bud opened revealing a beautiful flower. Everyone stares at it in awe however only Black noticed a strange powder go into Nezumi's body. Nezumi collapsed and Black instantly became worried. A couple minutes later Nezumi woke up and looked around. Black felt relieved and was glad she was ok however when she reached out to touch her, Nezumi backed away.

"Nezumi?"

"Mistress... P-please... Don't hurt me!"

"Eh?"

When Black tried to touch her Nezumi backed away and hid behind Yuko.

"Mistress?"

Everyone was confused by Nezumi's strange behavior and wondered what was wrong. Black explained what she saw and then Torigoya suddenly said.

"Ah I thought this plant was familiar! This plant was used in many ceremonies for royalty. They're harmless when they're developing and bloomed but in the process of blooming it releases a pollen. If someone inhales the pollen it causes memory loss!"

"So what is she remembering?" Black asked.

"Let me look."

Torigoya took a look into Nezumi's mind and then said,

"She sees herself as a little girl back when she worked in a palace."

"She remembers working for my family." Black said.

Black turned to look at Nezumi who was still hiding behind Yuko. Nezumi thinks she’s a little girl and that she works for her. She thinks that she’s a servant. Realizing this Black felt terrible seeing her closest friend fear her afraid of being hit. Black remembered how terrible she was treated back at the palace and that only made her feel worse.

“How long will she stay like this?” Black asked.

“We don’t know for sure but let’s find out tomorrow. It’s a little late now so we should all reset. Maybe a good sleep will help her.” Torigoya said.

“Alright then let’s sleep. Goodnight.”

Everyone went off to sleep but Black tried to get Nezumi to sleep with her. Nezumi followed Black’s orders and got under the blanket with her.

“Mistress… Why are you being so kind to me?” Nezumi said.

“Because I care about you and you’re important to me.” Black said.

“Are you sure? I’m not a bother am I?”

“Not at all. I actually prefer you here with me.”

“Well… Thank you mistress.”

“Anytime Mayu..”

Black reached over and held Nezumi close to her and kissed her forehead. She could feel Nezumi’s face get warmer telling her that she was blushing. Black started to stroke Nezumi’s hair and soon after she fell asleep. Guilt and regret filled Black’s heart when she remembered how horrible Nezumi was treated at the palace. She remembered the day when Nezumi was caught trying on her clothes and her father had her beaten and locked in a cellar for a very long time. She even remembered a time when one of the guards tried to rape her but Gekikara had stopped them. All the pain Nezumi had to endure for Black made her sick and want to throw up. Her heart ached with the pain that she should have felt back then. That night Black swore that if Nezumi was not better by tomorrow, then she would treat her like her own little sister. Black was going to make up the lost happiness that Nezumi never got to feel.

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I hope you guys liked the update. Look forward to what is going to happen to Nezumi! The next chapter will be the last one so I hope you had a nice time reading all the crazy adventures!

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #135 on: April 23, 2013, 06:17:57 PM »
Mayu must recover...I want the old evil mayu back  :grin:
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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #136 on: April 23, 2013, 07:19:00 PM »
Mayu must recover...I want the old evil mayu back  :grin:

agree what you say!

never thought that mayu's past will be so pity...  :OMG:
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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #137 on: April 24, 2013, 12:06:16 AM »
mayuyu~~
gah.......... now gets a bit confused as I thought yuki's dad was a nice, but stupid person......
........I cant believe that chapter 20 is basically the end......
I wonder what awkward things will happen......
Yuko........... dont do anything too stupid

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #138 on: April 24, 2013, 07:46:31 AM »
Wah... very good update as always...

I like the way all of them playing around...

Although the running with boars chasing them was a bit too much and also dangerous...

And also the treasure hunts were bad too... but the one that seemed to be very unlucky is Nezumi

Ah... Nezumi lost her memory... what's going to happen to her?

She had very bad childhood memory...

Can't wait to find out the next one

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: Silent Killer update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #139 on: April 26, 2013, 03:05:29 PM »
MIYUMI SAN I COULDN'T BELIEVE THIS GOING TO THE END,LOVE IT!
HOPE YOU MAKE MORE MAYUKI IN THE FUTURE,MAYBE AN OS?PLEASE~ HEHEHE

WHAAAT?? YUKI WILL TREAT MAYU AS SISTER?NO!! THEY ALREADY HAVE A HEAT NIGHT!

I REMEMBER HOW BLACK AT FIRST NEVER SPOKE TO MAYU AND NEVER CARE SOO MUCH LIKE NOW,AND ITS SOMEHOW TOUCHING ME,
MAYU ALWAYST THE ONE WITH INITIATIVE,BUT NOW,MAYBE WHEN NEZUMI LOST HER MEMORY,BLACK TRYING TO BE THE ONE CARING PERSON TO HER,HOW SWEET.
BUT STILL HOPE HER MEMORY'S BACK


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