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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #20 on: November 06, 2012, 09:43:59 PM »
Thank u! Thank u!!  :inlove:

i really love the second song.. I'm GONNA WRITE SO MUCH WITH IT THE VIBE IS PERFECT FOR THIS FIC!!!!  :bow:

Don't call me sama and yes i miss a lot your comments and many other comments but i think i got kinda used to the "thank you!"  :catglare:

So thanks to everyone!!  :cow:

Thanks Yuukimoko It makes so excited with your comment "i really thought no many people would like this one but great it worked even though i only write to please myself!!)  :shakeit:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
« Reply #21 on: November 07, 2012, 03:36:21 AM »
Oh oh oh oh you HAVE to update as soon as possible O___O I want to read it so badly ><

And what kind of game is this? lol buy the popular girls for on night? And also freshman?? I'm confuse this part

Btw, I love your works so much. I wonder where all the ideas come from?? xDDD Thank you, love it <33333333333

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
« Reply #22 on: November 07, 2012, 07:07:02 AM »
NICE FIC~
i wondering what illness that Mayu have,
something regrading to the hearts??
buying student for 1 night huh~!
Yukirin will buy Mayu?

Looking for the next update.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #23 on: November 07, 2012, 07:37:12 AM »
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH. 4

~At the recreation area~

"That girl! That girl!" Yuki says mad as she sits

Sae looked at her mad friend and also sitted "wow she made you look stupid!" 

Yuki gave Sae a death glare "she'll pay me back!" 

<Flashback> In french class

Repeat after me "La Tour Eiffel est le frances fierté.."  the teacher says 

Yuki's accent was terrible so the teacher made her repeat again 

Someone laughed on the back for Yuki's accent and Yuki thought it was Mayu so she turned around 

"Can you do better nerd?" She asked yelling at Mayu 

Mayu got back to earth "what?" she asked as she gets up

"i asked if you can do better? you little.." 

Mayu interrupt the taller girl "it's not my fault you have a little brain!" she replied 

"what did you say?" Yuki asked mad 

"can you count to ten?" Mayu asked 

"Eh!" Yuki says looking at Mayu as counted fast" une, deux, trois, quatre, cinq, six, sept, huit, neuf dix ... Dix, neuf, huit, sept six, cinq, quatre, trois, deux, un"  

"Can you repeat that? if you can you can talk to me but you don't so" Mayu says and then sitted 

Everyone was quiet and Yuki didn't know what to do so she just sitted feeling embarrased and stupid

~End of the flashback~ 

Yuki took a deep breath then got up and walked away 

Sae frowned "where are you going?" she asked
 
Yuki walked around the campus for a few minutes till she found the freshman that gives her headache sitting on a bench reading something 

Yuki walked slowly behind her and snatched the paper 

"Hey!" Mayu says as she tries to get her paper back but Yuki was taller so she couldn't reach it 

The taller girl smirked "what's this?" she asked 

Mayu tries to catch the paper "give it back it's mine!" 

[( ) <- what Yuki says]

Yuki read the paper loudly "list of things to do.. 1.Fall in love (What a cutie!)  2.go to the beach with my love (so cheesy this thing!) 3.go to.. (eh!) 

"Yuki Baka! Baka!" A crying Mayu says as her she puts her hands on Yuki's chest not relizing that she's cupping the taller girl breast 

The two girls had eye contact then got red 

"Eh!" Mayu reacted and pushed Yuki who slipped on the floor then the shorter girl run away 

Yuki was in a sitting position then noticed that the paper was next to her,she grabbed it and save it on her blazer pocket 

~ At Mayu's room~ 

Mayu closed the door fast,she was still blushing and just by thinking about Yuki's soft chest makes her heart aches so she took a little bag where her pills were and took some to calm herself 

Once relaxed on bed,Mayu saw her hands "they are just perfect fit for my hands..what am i thinking? i'm such a pervert!" she murmured blushing 

For the next few days the two girls ignored eachother..

~The day of the event~

Kashiwagi San! I'm Kitahara Rie from the school paper is it truth you're not going to participate in today's auction?  she asked while the two walks the hall 

yeah that's truth! Yuki answered 

well such a bad news.. you have many girls who wanted to buy you! do you have other plans? Rie asks

no,i'm still going and to buy! Yuki says with a smile 

"seriously? who?" Rie asked 

"well that's a surprise!" Yuki answered as she walks faster and leaves the newspaper's girl behind 

~At the recreation Area~

"Sae chan we love you!" A bunch of girls shouts 

"i know try to buy me please!" Sae says with a cute pout

"Ahhhhhhh!!!!" All the girls screamed 

Mayu and Jurina looked at those noisy girls 

"they's re ruinning my ears!" Mayu says pouting 

Jurina kept eating 

"how can you eat with a noise like that?" Mayu asked 

"how can you just eat vegetables?" Jurina asked 

"i'm used to it.." Mayu says as she looks her watch then pulls out some pills from her pocket and took them 

"what are those?" Jurina asked with her mouth full 

"vitamins!" Mayu answered 

Jurina kept eating

Jurina chan please buy me! Mayu says 

"why?" Jurina asked 

"well i don't want to spend my time with somebody creely like those girls!" Mayu replies 

"ok,i think i can do that!" Jurina says 

"thanks!" Mayu replies

~After an hour~

Everyone were preparing for the auction,everyone was already gathering at the school's Coliseum 

Jurina was already in the buyers zone while the ones who just were watching were in other area 

Yuki made herself in the buyers zone also 

Jurina looked at Yuki and pouted 

Yuki smirked "ohh  look what we have here Rena's little sister!"

Jurina ignored her 

"I think i'm going to buy Rena she's so cute!" Yuki says teasing the younger girl 

Jurina pouted and soon the auction started 

 The headmaster gave some words about the charity event and bla bla bla..

The first one to appear in the in the runway was Sae giving a charming smile and a wink

*All the girls shouted for her showinb how popular she was with the ladies*

"$50!" The first girl says 

Sae played with her short hair 

all the girls shouted again 

$70

$90

$120

Sae smiled and winked again 

$170

$200 Another girl shouts 

"This is getting hot!" Sae thought

$220 Chiyuu offered 

"okay 220 1,2,3 selled to the girl with a black shirt" The man says smiling 

"Wow 220 just for a couple hours..i wouldn't spend my money like that!" Jurina murmures 

"Sometimes lonelyness make you do stupid things!" Yuki replied serious 

"Our next girl is Matsui Rena!" The man says 

Yuki smirked and offered "$70"

Rena was shocked cause Yuki was trying to buy her 

Soon Jurina pouted and offered $100 

Rena smirked "maybe she's just doing it to mess with Jurina!" she thought

another girl called Airin offered $130

"Airin.. that's weird" Rena thought 

Jurina offered $150 while Yuki offered $170 

Airin offered $200

Yuki offered $240

Jurina sighed "got my money.. whatever!" she offered $300 

*Everyone was shocked*

Yuki only smirked while Airin pouted 

"Okay 1..2..3 selled to the girl with green slips!" The man says smiling 

I win..I WIN!! Jurina shouts smiling "ehh wait a second! what about Mayu?" she thought then facepalmed herself

Then was the turn of some unknow girls..

"Our next girl and the last is Watanabe Mayu.." The man says while Mayu comes out 

She smiled and she was wearing a white simple dress that suited her 

Everyone shouted "Kawai!" 

Mayu blushed and soon a girl offered $60 

another girl offered $100 

Sasshi offered $130

Milky offered $160 

Lovetan offered $180 

180 at 1..

Yuki offered $200 

what!? why she's offering money? Mayu thought 

Sasshi offered $220 

Yuki pouted then smirked and offered $300 

"No way!" Mayu murmures 

Sasshi sighed and offered $320 

"c'mon You can't buy me!" Mayu murmures with sweat drops on the side of her head

Yuki offered $400 

Mayu pouted "i'm so dead.." 

"What?!?" Sasshi reacted

"i'm rich!" Yuki says with a smile 

Sasshi gives up 

"Sold to Kashiwagi San!" The man says happy 

 Mayu's inner self: NOOOOO!!! 

The auction ended with a speech 

"okay remember that it's only till 12:00 pm and don't forget to give the midnight kiss!" The president council says with a smile 

~Backstage~

"I'm sorry Mayu.. i was going to buy you but She said she wanted to buy Rena so" Jurina says beggin for forgiveness

Mayu sighed "don't worry.. it's going to be a long night!" she murmured 

"hello there,sorry for interrupting well i'm not really sorry so let's go!" Yuki says as she takes Mayu's by her wrist and takes her somewhere 

"stop! stop!" Mayu says but Yuki wasn't listening and took her to her room 

~Inside the room~

Yuki took off her shirt 

Mayu covered her eyes "what are you doing?" she asked terrified and all red 

Yuki took off her skirt then took another clothes from a drawer and put them on 

Mayu was still with her eyes covered 

Yuki looked at the younger girl then got closer to her,she could feel that Yuki was standing in front of her "is she naked?" The younger girl wondered as she puts her hand on her chest and takes deep breaths 

"Hey are you okay?open your eyes!" Yuki says while shakes Mayu 

"no, i don't wanna see you naked and die!" Mayu shouted 

Yuki laughed like crazy "what would i be naked in front of you?" she asked 

"what?!" Mayu slowly opens her eyes and sees Yuki dressed with a big tshirt and shorts 

Yuki smirked "don't tell me you thought i..wow you're such a pervert,i thought it was an accident when you gropped my chest a few days ago but i guess i was wrong!" she says while covers her chest 

"No! no! i'm not a pervert!" Mayu says all red 

"Are you sure?" Yuki asked teasing 

"what? no! you're the pervert that brought me to her room and started taking off her clothes!" Mayu replies 

"first those clothes are unconfortable and second i brought you here for this!" Yuki says as she points to her desk which have a bunch of books and papers on 

"what's that?" Mayu asked 

"my homework.. you know i'm pretty lazy so i bought you to make my homework (all month homeworks to be exact!"  Yuki says smirking 

"A whole month homework!" Mayu says looking all the papers 

"Yeah that's nothing to you.. a first class smartass so c'mon i didn't bought you to talk to me!" Yuki says as she turns on the tv and her play 3 

(Note: Yuki's butler repair the room a few days ago) 

"what i got myself into!" Mayu thought with a depressed aura as ahe sits and starts making Yuki's homework 

Yuki looked at Mayu and then smirked and kept playing tennis 

"So much homework!" Mayu shouted irritated 

"c'mon Mayuyu you can do it!" Yuki says smirking while plays 

Mayu pouted and kept writting 

~ After a few hours~ 

Yuki noticed that Mayu fell sleep on her desk,she looked at the computer "almost done..after all you're really smart so smart that scares me!" she thought then Yuki stole a glance to the watch 12:30 pm 

She looked at Mayu sleeping face again "you have to give me my midnight kiss" she thought as she leans closer and gives her a kiss on her forhead 

Mayu moved which caused Yuki to freak out for a moment but tried to wake the younger girl up but it was impossible so she decided to carry Mayu to her bed then putted the blanket on her and also get on bed to sleep

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #24 on: November 07, 2012, 08:25:41 AM »
this chapter so funny..the auction..hahahaha XD

thank you for a faaasstt update!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #25 on: November 07, 2012, 09:15:31 AM »
Hehuehue so mayu was the most expensive girl on that auction huahuahua

Maybe Yuki's heart is melting... ><

Too curious about what is going ti happen in the morning huahuahua

Thank you for the update o/

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #26 on: November 07, 2012, 12:34:30 PM »
 first I want to say sorry to be a silent reader these days I really dont have time to comment but this fic made me have the urgent to comment and say something
a new fic and it is an excelent
cmze-san's fics are always the best
my top1 fic is my sister's girlfriend but with this new one I cant really choose
In this fic
mayu is really ill
and yuki is really arrogant person this kind of story is really my type 
I really want to know the next
I am really exited!!
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #27 on: November 07, 2012, 01:12:46 PM »
HAHAHAHAHA SO CUTE XDDDDDDDD

You're not that bad eh Black-san? <3333

Yuki is a good girl, I wonder what made she turned like this? Maybe because of her parents.

Btw, thank you for updating xPPP it was good! *thumbs up*



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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #28 on: November 07, 2012, 01:50:23 PM »
LOLS~
Because of Rena, Jurina broke her promise with Mayu,
So Chiyuu brought Sae,
And Yuki brought Mayu~~
what will yuki do to the asleep Mayu??

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #29 on: November 07, 2012, 01:58:08 PM »
LOL since when yuki called mayu mayuyu~ hahahaaha little by little they became closer..

This one its hilarious too cmze-san!! Loved it

I'm curious about what number 3 mayu's to do list...go to what? That's make yuki shock? (Eh!) Maybe its something pervert? LOL

So rena and jurina spend one night...

Mayu is so smart that scared yuki...(She's scared you yuki,and then she's make you madly in love LOL)

Thank for the update cmze-san...





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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #30 on: November 07, 2012, 03:16:03 PM »
Woaaaahh!! Wouaaaaah ! :mon crazyinlove:

I love it!!! It was really funny!!

ANd for the Mayu list, I agree with kurogumi-san... something pervert??? :mon psst: XD

Yuki play PS3... :mon gamer:
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
« Reply #31 on: November 08, 2012, 01:37:53 AM »
No Mayuyu will die T_T
a few mistake in french sentence but your fic is awesome!
Chiyuu~ wanna know what she will do ^^

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
« Reply #32 on: November 08, 2012, 09:32:11 AM »
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH. 5

(The next day)

Mayu slowly opened her eyes,soon she reacted and relized that she wasn't in her room,she looked at her right and notice Yuki sleeping face next to her while her arm is holding Mayu's waist

Mayu blushed and looked at the older who was a few inches away from her face,she slowly gets closer to Yuki's face or lips 

*Mayu can feel how her heart races as the more closer she gets to Yuki*

"Knock! Knock! Yuki!" Someone shouts

Mayu soon freaked out and pushed Yuki away who end up falling on the floor 

"ouch!" Yuki says

"Yuki open up!" Sae shouts 

Yuki looked at Mayu  then got up and opened the door 

"Why so noisy so early?" Yuki asked rubbing her eyes then notices Sae 

Sae entered fast to the room and closed the door 

"what the hell?" Mayu thought while sees Sae in her underwear 

Sae pouted "What the hell is she doing here?" she asked as she covers her body 

Yuki looked at Sae "what the hell are you doing in underwer?" she asked 

Sae sighs "it's longs story.. that Chiyuu is going to pay me back!" she says 

~Flashback~ Last night

Sae and Chiyuu were walking hand in hand through the campus 

"Chiyuu let me say you look really hot tonight!" Sae says with a charming smile 

"Yeah i know!" Chiyuu replies with a smile

Sae stops walking and pulls Chiyuu to her then looks at her in the eyes "I'm glad you bought me" she says as she tries to steal a kiss from the shorter girl 

Chiyuu dodged the kiss "not yet.. handsome!" she says as she walks ahead and goes to the pool 

Sae follows her "another 10 girl!" she though as she goes after Tomomi 

~Next to the pool~

Tomomi takes off her black shirt and skirt while Sae stood there watching 

Chiyuu winked at Sae "C'mon take off your clothes!" she says with smile 

*Sae starts to takes off her clothes  fast then jumped at the pool*

While Sae swims,Chiyuu picks up her clothes and Sae's

Sae gets out of the pool and noticed that Chiyuu is gone and took her clothes,she tried to open the doors to get out but it was locked 

Sae spent the night locked there till some cleaning lady opened the doors and found Sae on the floor 

Before she could recognize her,Sae got up and left running through the courts 

*Luckily there wasn't many people around because it was so early but the people that was around took pictures lf her while she runs* 

~End of the flashback~

"and your room was closer so give me clothes!" Sae says as she open Yuki's drawers 

Mayu got up "okay i think i should go!" she says while walks to the door 

Yuki looked as Mayu leaves 

"what the hell she was doing here?" Sae asked 

"My homework!" Yuki says as she sits on her desk 

Sae takes a look on the paper work "but we already did this,we asked that Mocchi girl to do our homeworks! don't you remember?" she asked 

"yeah!" Yuki replies with a smirk 

"so mean you made her re do your already done homework!" Sae says grinning 

~ At Mayu and Jurina's room~ 

Mayu entered to her room then sitted on her bed and thought about this morning when she was about to.. "kiss? no way!"  she thought 

Jurina also opened her eyes and got up but she wasn't alone 

"careful Rena chan we don't wanna wake Mayu up!" Jurina whispers

*Mayu heard everything and smirked* 

The two Matsui get off bed and noticed Mayu sitted on her bed smiling 

"you were up!" Rena all red says not so happy 

"Good morning Mayu chan!" Jurina says with a smile 

"I gotta.. i should go!" Rena ackwardly says then walks away 

Jurina smirks "she's cute when she embarrased right?" 

Mayu only nodded "i don't really understand these two!" she thought 

~After a few minutes~At the entrance of the room's building~ 

*Everyone was looking at something*

"what's going on?" Jurina wondered while takes Mayu's hand and pulls Mayu with her 

*Everyone were looking at the white limo* 

Rena and Sae also were closer to the limo 

Soon the limo's door opened revealing a mad Yuki who took a stone from the ground and broke the limo's window

Rena and Sae grabbed Yuki to stop her from ruining more the limo

"what the hell is she doing?" Everyone wondered 

The limo accelarate and left fast 

Yuki was so mad that she punched Sae's face and pushed Rena aside 

"No way!" Jurina says and run to Yuki and jumps on her 

*the two girls were rolling on the floor*

Rena took Jurina while Sae grabbed Yuki and separted the two girls 

"You know you are a poor idiot!" Jurina shouts while tries to release to keep fighting with Yuki 

"shut up stupid kid!" Yuki says as she tries also to release 

Jurina removes the hair from her face"I feel pity of you.. pretending to have everything when you have nothing just servant people who cares about you and do you know why? BECAUSE THEY GET PAID!! " she shouted 

Yuki released from Sae's hold and walks to Jurina to look at her in the eyes "You don't know me!" she says with her eyes red and also her nose ready to cry then she walked away 

Rena let go Jurina then looked at her "that was mean!" she says as she also walks away 

Sae brushed her check

"Sae chan you were so brave!" Many girls says 

"My cheek hurts! who wants to rub it?" Sae asked and many girls answered "Me!!" 

*Everyone went to class*

 ~After a few minutes~ 

Yuki hid herself on the pool area,she took off her shoes to put her feet into the water then she looked at her reflection "Jurina is right...i'm alone nobody cares unles they get paid!" she murmured as some tears rolled her cheeks

Mayu looked at the sad Yuki and for some reason hurts her look at Yuki like that "so vulnerable and fragil" she
thought 

"Nobody pays me and i care!" The cyborg girl says 

Yuki turned her head then wiped her tears fast "Mayu.." she whispered as her lips wanted to form a small smile while she sees the younger girl getting closer with a first aid kit

Mayu sitted next to Yuki and started using the first aid kit,She cleaned the blood on Yuki's lip 

"it hurts..you're terrible as a nurse" Yuki says in pain with a weak smile

Mayu pouts "well it wouldn't hurt if you wouldn't act like animal and try to punch everyone around!" she as she still cleans the wound on Yuki's lip 

Yuki looked other way "you're right.. sorry" she says sad 

Mayu smirked "not to me silly,to Sae chan and Rena chan,they care a lot about you!" she says playfully 

Yuki pouted "who said i was apologizing to you?" she asked with a smirk 

Mayu smirked then gets up and offers her hand to Yuki to help her get up 

Yuki takes her hand then gets up and puts her shoes fast "Mayu i read on your list of things that you wanted a more lively life!" she says with a smirk

"what?! give me my list back!" Mayu says 

Yuki takes her hand and pulls her with her 

~After a few minutes of walking~

"what's this?" Mayu asked seeing bars 

"freedom!" Yuki replies as she moves on of the bars making a big hole "come with me Mayuyu!" she says extanding her hand 

Mayu looked back but then grabbed Yuki's hand 

<Yuki putted the bar on it's place>

The two girls walked away from the school..

"where are we going?" Mayu asked as Yuki keeps holding her hand 

"anywhere!" Yuki replied with a smile 

The two high schoolers got first to a restaurant,they ate and chatted a little then Yuki wanted to enter to an arcade 

The two girls played many games and in all of them Mayu won 

Yuki pouted first but she was having fun anyway 

"You're cheating!" Yuki says a little annoyed

"ha! i don't cheat,i'm just way better!" Mayu replies smirking 

"Let's go to that machine,who can get the best present for eachother?" Yuki says 

The two girls played 

Mayu grabbed a cute white cat while Yuki could only grab a tennis ball 

Mayu smiled "that guy wanted to kill you.. for trying to destroy that machine!" she says looking at Yuki 

Yuki pouted "That stupid Machine didn't wanted to give me what i wanted! Just a tennis ball i wanted that cute duck for.. Me!" she blushes 

Mayu blushed also "here you can have my cat.. that tennis ball looks intersting!"  she says with a smile 

*The two girls traded their toys*

Mayu saw a photobooth in the arcade "let's go there!" she says happy and takes Yuki's hand *Yuki blushed for the sudden touch* 

(The two girls entered to the booth)

*The first picture was the two girls possing with their presents
*The second picture Yuki putted her arm aroud Mayu's neck 
*The third picture Yuki got closer to Mayu's face 
*The fourth and fift picture were Yuki and Mayu kissing on the lips

Mayu broke the kiss and got out the booth,Yuki smiled then took the pictures and save them on her blazer 

"why she kissed me?" Mayu wondered all red "my heart is beating so fast! does she wants to kill me?" she thought while someone grabbed her hand 

"Yuki.." Mayu murmured looking at the smiling girl 

"Look a street singer.. that's on your list!" Yuki says as she walks closer to the singer and payed her to let them sing without Mayu noticed 

"I don't know how to sing!" Mayu says nervous 

Yuki smirkd "c'mon is going to be fun besides life is one time so you gotta live it up!"

They singed in the street  JUJU - ashita ga kuru nara

Mayu listened to Yuki's voice "wow,she's really good on this!" she says as she looks at Yuki who's holding her hand while she sings 

Mayu got lost on Yuki eyes,she sang her part not caring of people like it or not,she just wanted keep staring at Yuki and feel this strange feeling "could it be butterflies?" she thought 

Soon the noise of people clapping brought her back to reality

"You did it good Mayuyu!" Yuki says with a smile as she looks at the people gathered clapping 

Mayu was shocked "when they bacame many?" 

Yuki only smiled 

*Soon the two girls got back to school*

~In Mayu's room~

Mayu smiled as she closes her door then she pulled out the ball and puts it on her desk 

"She's.." Mayu thoughts were interrupted

Mayu chan where you been all day? Don't you have to take your vitamines?" Jurina asked 

Mayu's happy face then turned into a sad one as remembers that "everything was to good to be truth!" 

~Meanwhile~

Yuki bumped with Rena and Sae in the hall 

"Yuki chan!" Rena says looking down

Yuki smiles and hugs both of her friends "did i tell that i love you? she asked still smiling like an idiot 

Sae and Rena looked eachother "No .." 

"well i do and very very much!" Yuki says 

"are you drunk?" Sae asked 

Yuki breaks the hug then walks to her room smiling while she sees her white kitty

Leaving a shocked Sae and Rena

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 

Offline clubhappy

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
« Reply #33 on: November 08, 2012, 10:26:46 AM »
Wow they've already fall for each other  :wub:
MAYUKI~!!!!!

Wonder if Yuki would still bullying Mayu? Or will Sae or Rena get jealous and do bad things to Mayu?  :?
Can't wait for the next chapter  :P
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
« Reply #34 on: November 08, 2012, 12:17:19 PM »
Wow it iis really a great chapter!!

I love Mayuki!!! :wub: They kissed  :shocked .... :w00t:

I love the end with Yuki, Sae and Rena, Yuki is so an idiot XD
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
« Reply #35 on: November 08, 2012, 12:41:47 PM »
Oh my! That was fast! :heart:

I wonder why Yuki kissed Mayu... Who cares? XD that was may favorit part *.* i always wanted to kiss someone inside a photobooth \o/

What more was on Mayu's list? ><

Thank you for the update \o/

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
« Reply #36 on: November 08, 2012, 12:48:26 PM »
wow wow wow~
Mayuki now was so close,
so Yuki have become more truth to herself.
Mayu didnt take medicine the whole day??
OMG.. Mayu careful Yuki still need you.

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
« Reply #37 on: November 08, 2012, 02:33:14 PM »
They out of school...LOL..

Mayuki have a lot of fun..

Yuki heart melt...she's even granted one by one mayu to do list...
She's even kissed mayu~ aww that scene is really make my day..always smiling when read that part

I wonder the next day, in the class they will shy to each other LOL
Maybe spend lunch together...always together anywhere everytime everyday LOL

If yuki kissed mayu really often~ well i'm worried mayu illness...

Oh and about jurina warn mayu when she's forget her vitamin...and when jurina worried mayu in the initation  night,
Is she know about mayu's condition? Jurina is not stupid...she may investigated about mayu record...well maybe

I wonder if yuki's know about mayu condition...she will surely sad...


Ahhh cmze-san..this day you update so many fic that i always loved soo much! Thank thank thank!

Ok i wil waiting the next update...now this one is my number 1 my favorite..well my sister girlfriend is still but now this one is the Hotter fic i read..that always i check every hours LOL
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
« Reply #38 on: November 08, 2012, 04:19:06 PM »
Yuki and Mayu kissing 4th and 5th photo...  :on bleed:
I am in Paradise.. :on gay:

Yukirin so funny  :lol: and bold  :shocked: but I  :heart: it!

Love your fic, can't wait for the next update  :cow:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
« Reply #39 on: November 10, 2012, 01:30:23 PM »
Yuki wanted to make Mayu happy  XD
Mayuki kissed  :inlove:
Yuki will kill Mayu heart attack Mayu is a pervert  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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