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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 3
« Reply #20 on: December 13, 2012, 01:09:44 AM »
wow Acchan is brave
I wonder which role Tomochin will play here

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 3
« Reply #21 on: December 13, 2012, 05:37:29 AM »
thanks for the support again guys..i'll be updating in 30mins. :)


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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 3
« Reply #22 on: December 13, 2012, 05:46:44 AM »
No kisses!?!  :cry:
Please update soon SOON!!

jajaj everybody wants atsumina kiss.. but it ok We need to know how acchanfall in love..

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 3
« Reply #23 on: December 13, 2012, 06:27:55 AM »
Chapter 4

If I was a bird, I would fly to the distance. Fly to a place where no one could see me, but the sky and the sea. I would forget everything, leave everything. Fly until my wings give out. I would fall to sea and die drowning..down down down doooown..

"Uwaaaaaaaaaaa!" I gasp for breath. Im breathing heavily. A nightmare, it's as if im drowning for real.
I look at the clock, it says 5:50AM. Its been 5 days since we started our relationship, and things are going quite well. We usually hang out together after class, its either in her house or mine, and.. we usually.. nevermind.

Today's another normal day, nothing special and nothing in particular.

*beep beep*
Ah, I just recieved a text from Acchan.

    -I cant come with you today Minami. I have some things to attend to today. Please go ahead of me, I'll make it up to you tomorrow I promise-

I guess I need to go home alone today.

"Minamiiiiiiiiii!" its Oshima-san. She looks energetic as always. She runs towards me
"Hey Oshima-san, how are you?" she looks exhausted from that running.
"Ano, do you want to hang out together tomorrow? We dont have any class anyways" She asked "You can bring Maeda-san along. You look so close to each other eh. Is there something between you two?"
"Ehhhhhhhhh???!!! No no no, there's nothing between us. Plus uhmmmmm..she's just my tutor" my heart starts beating fast. Shit, that's just a lame excuse I made. What to do? What to do? Waaaaa!
"And you're just blushing right now hahaha" Oshima-san gave a evil grin on her face. "So you're an L nee, Minami hahaha"
"Ehhhhhhhhh?!!!!! No no..what are you saying Oshima-san. Stop!" I turned, hiding the redness of my face. I can just tell anyone about us, Acchan help me!
Oshima-san continued laughing, argh why does she have to be like that? Hmmmmmp.
"See you tomorrow Minami!" she ran towards the opposite direction. "Bring Maeda-san along!"

I feel as if someone is following as soon as I left the school's 'Heaven's Gate', I feel so uneasy right now. I looked around hoping to find someone, but theres no one I ran towards the nearest 24/7 store to ease the tension and bought an energy drink. Yosha! Time to run!

Run! Straight ahead! Left! Right! Right! Straight! Left!
*THUD!*
I fell down hard, butt-first. Ack! I felt a sharp pain on my butt.
"Im so sorry. I wasn't looking..eh, Tomochin!?" I bumped onto my childhood friend. I grabbed her hand and helped her stand up. "Im so sorry. Soooooo sorry!"
"No worries Minami, I wasn't looking either" She dusted off her skirt with her hands. "Im sorry too"
"Ano, It's been a while since we talked to each other. How are you doing these days, Tomochin?" I asked though it looks pretty awkward in some extent.
"Pretty fine, I guess. Math is killing me right now" She said.
"Im sorry for being so sudden, but can we walk together since we live next to each other. Do you have any other places to go to?" I shamefully asked.
"I dont have any other place to go. Is something wrong?"
"Uhmmm..nothing nothing. I just thought that we should have a small talk since we didn't talk to each other for a while" I cant tell her that I feel so strange right now, because she might be creeped out.

We walked together along the narrow streets of the asphalt jungle under orange sunset.
"Quite nostalgic isn't it? When were in grade school we used to walk together like this" Tomochin recounted "I kinda miss the long walks we used to do.."
"Haha.. Me too" we recounted the past experiences that we had, everything feels like were kids.
We arrived at the front of my apartment. At last, no more stalker feeling.
"Ano, thank you so much Tomochin. I had fun" I said "I hope we can do this again"
She just nodded and smiled, I was expecting her to answer but didn't.
"Jaa matane~" I waved my hands and walked inside the gate of the concrete building.
"Wait! Minami.."
"What is it Tomochin?" I looked at her.
"...I like you..."

Girl's feelings are quite unpredictable. Me, even I can't understand myself.

"Tomochin, no.." I said to myself as I hide myself under the sheets.

OTL 高橋みなみ X 板野 友美??





my next update would be next week, since there's a lot of stuff to do in school..thanks for the support guys :)   :imdead:


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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 4
« Reply #24 on: December 13, 2012, 07:26:03 AM »
what?! eh?! tomochin?!? majide?!?!wait not.. let my atsumina alone.. :O

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 4
« Reply #25 on: December 13, 2012, 01:24:49 PM »
Hum... Takamina don't cheat on Acchan! lol


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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 4
« Reply #27 on: December 13, 2012, 03:21:14 PM »
oh tomochin go for the girl of maeda

This is danger  XD

waiting next chapter

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 4
« Reply #28 on: December 13, 2012, 09:39:16 PM »
Oh my I think something's coming to break atsumina
TAKA!! please think of acchan always  :cry:
looking forward for your update
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« Last Edit: December 15, 2012, 03:25:59 PM by miayaka »

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 4
« Reply #29 on: December 13, 2012, 10:13:55 PM »
My bias is going to be a obstacle for atsumina i see nooo

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 4
« Reply #30 on: December 15, 2012, 03:49:23 AM »
I'll be updating later, because I found out that the submission of our projects will be next year :onionwhip:

freedom!!


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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 4
« Reply #31 on: December 15, 2012, 11:20:54 AM »
Hello.

Please Update !!!

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hello.

I am a fan of AkB48.

I really love their songs.

I really like their fan fiction.




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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 5
« Reply #32 on: December 18, 2012, 01:06:42 PM »
Chapter 5

*beep beep*


     -I had so much fun yesterday Minami. I didn't know that Maeda-san is a good singer. I hope we could go out again some other time, a picnic I guess. Good night Minami. May your relation with Maeda-san..hehehe >))) before I forgot, get well soon-
                  xoxo Yuko


*beep beep*


     -Nee, Minami. Can I come over today? I'm so worried about you right now. I'll bring over the photocopied notes of your class today. About the other day, I had fun with you guys. And, uhmmmmm..can I stay there for tonight? Please? Get well soon Minami. I love you :*-
            :heart::heart:


I skipped class today because of this darn fever. 38 degrees Celsius, I feel like a log for god's sake. Where the hell I got this?


Yesterday is the first time I went out with friends, so unlikely of me, since I usually stay at home and do nothing; of course, if Acchan wasn't there, I wouldn't go.


*doorbell rings*


"It must be Acchan.." I said to myself. I tried getting up, but drastically failed.


My bedroom door opened. It's mom.
"Minami, Acchan is here"
Acchan entered the room with papers on her hand. That must be the notes she was talking about.
"Mom, can she stay here tonight?" I asked.
"Sure sure, no problem. Acchan, please take care of her ok?" mom went outside and closed the door.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I dunno if I really need to put this but, O_O sorry :((~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Acchan gave me the 'stare' as soon as the door closed behind her. She removed her glasses and moved towards me very slowly.
"..Mi-na-mi.."
I was powerless to resist, but but..
I hid myself under my green blanket, thinking that she might hold back.
"You're not going to do this to me again. I won't let you Acchan.."
Her weight soon pinned me down the bed, she's on top of me. I can see her godly image through the sheets.
"..Mi-na-mi.." I can feel her lips pressing against mine through the thin fabric that separates us. I tried fighting her cruel advances, but..it's too damn good.
"Acchan, wait.." I moved aside the object  that hinders  our lips from meeting each other "you might.. get.. sic..k"
She interrupted me with a flurry of kisses; deep, warm, moist. My head is going blank as her advances became more and more aggressive, I want her to relax, to do things slowly, but...


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ O_O ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


I think that my fever have gone from 'bad' to 'worse'. From all the commotion we made. I feel like a kettle filled with boiling water.


Acchan fell asleep beside me, we're exhausted and tired. She has this habit of making me tap her gently until she falls asleep. She looks like a cute kid when sleeping. I kissed her cheek and followed her into the world of deep slumber.


Its 9:00PM, I was awakened by the sound of the alarm. I feel much better, I think so. I get up and walked slowly to the door. I hear a familiar voice upon nearing the door. I descended the stairs leading to the living room. Tomochin was there..talking with Acchan.


Memories of what happened last time flashed on my mind. I'm frozen from where I am standing. I tried going back up, but Acchan saw me.


"Oh, Minami is here, Tomochin" Acchan assisted me to the couch.
"I'm here to visit you Minami." Tomochin handed out a basket of fruits "I was worried when Oshima-San told me that you are sick"
I'm can't utter any word. All I feel is the awkwardness of the situation.
"We talked about a lot of things, Minami. I was surprised when Itano-san told me that you are childhood friends." Acchan said while peeling an apple.


Their conversation continued for 30mins. until Tomochin decided to leave. I didn't say anything. I kept silent the whole time.
"What's wrong Minami? You're not saying anything the whole time" Acchan asked.
"Nothing nothing. Let's go back up to my room." I pulled her towards the stairs "I feel sick again.."
"Ok, I'll get your dinner later."


That time, when Tomochin told me that she likes me, I answered "No.." but she pulled me and,
.
.
kissed me..

(・・?)板野 友美 X 高橋みなみ X 前田敦 ??


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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 5
« Reply #33 on: December 18, 2012, 01:47:39 PM »
Takamina surely can't resist Acchan  :luvluv1:

Even though I am a big fan of Atsumina, TakaTomo is my hidden favourite pairing :shy2:

I can't wait for the next update!  :tantrum:


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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 5
« Reply #35 on: December 18, 2012, 05:04:09 PM »
cheering maeda atsuko for the win! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
make taka yours only!!
p.s.
I like atsuxtomo also btw hee hee hee

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 5
« Reply #36 on: December 18, 2012, 08:49:35 PM »
Atsumina? or takatomo?  :? support to ammm .... both   XD

Please update soon  :twothumbs

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 5
« Reply #37 on: December 19, 2012, 02:24:51 AM »
Uhhh
TAKATOMO! ATSUMINA!
i want takatomo moments Too LOL
Can u make it?
TEHEHE arghhh i dunno
Please update soon muahh

Dont forget to make some takatomo
moments and make acchan jealous
WHAHAHA THANK YOU
Atsuyuu ♥ Takayuu ♥ Atsumina ♥ Mayuki

YOSH! I'M BACK! FINALLY!!! (notreally)
Been inactive these past few months. =__=
ARRRRGHHHH DUNNO WHY!

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 5
« Reply #38 on: December 19, 2012, 05:42:50 AM »
Go ACCHAN!!! Go TOMOCHIN!!!
God, can't we have... like... both!!! I mean AtsuMina and TakaTomo?  :banghead:
Please update soon!!

jaja atsuminaaaaaaaaa  :rock:

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 5
« Reply #39 on: December 19, 2012, 03:40:17 PM »
im half-way through on chapter 6 (even though my chapters are short..) /o/


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