Untitled fic (AtsuMina) - COMPLETED

[whiningwillow]

sorry if the update is taking too long, there's so much stuff going on...issue on Miichan, Tomochin's graduation announcement..*sigh* too many darn things are happening ; A ;

[TakaminaBG]

In this situation I prefer TakaTomo.
It doesn't matter with who Minami ends up with, As long as she is happy, I'm ok with it.
Good job with this fic. Can't wait for the update!

[whiningwillow]

Chapter 11

It's 12 in the afternoon, lunch time. Tomochin is absent today because she went to the doctor for her regular check up. I guess I'll be eating alone on the rooftop.

"Minami!" It's Oshima-san "Do you mind if I eat with you?"
"Sure sure. Good timing, I was looking for someone to go with"

We went upstairs to the rooftop of the school. It's empty as always. I placed the green mat over the concrete floor.
"Nee Minami, thank you for everything."
"Ehh? Why the sudden thanks Oshima-san? I didn't do anything or so"
"I'll be migrating to the states. New York." I was shocked by the sudden news. I felt a thug in my heart, a friend..leaving.
"When? Why? Why now Oshima-san?" I asked
"Tomorrow morning. I think I'll find myself there." she pointed at the bright blue skies "I want to fly, travel. Like a bird, Minami. Nee, tell me, what do you want in life Minami?"
I stared blankly at the bright blue sky. I didn't answer. It seems I don't know what I really want. I gave a deep faint sigh.
"I should be going now Minami" she stood up and fixed her things on the mattress
"Ehh? Where are you going Oshima-san?"
"I'm going home now. Thank you Minami" she took off. Her presence slowly disappeared as she walked away.

Her question kept repeating on my mind. 'What do I want in life?'. I stared again at the sky that is turning gray, threatening to burst out millions of water droplets. The school bell rings, but I didn't bother to move an inch.

Rain started to pour, but I'm still here. I didn't move from where I'm sitting at. I didn't know why. I curled up into a ball, my arms around my knees while lying my back against the wall. Raindrops continue on ravaging me, but I didn't mind it.

What do I really want.....

Then, rain stopped, but I can still hear it hitting the surface. As I opened my eyes, an umbrella is above me.
"You don't want to get sick right?"
"Ehh Tomochin? I though you were in the hospital? What are you doing here?"
"I miss you already so I came here" she handed over an extra umbrella "Get up. Let's go to the infirmary"

Shinoda-san, our school's doctor, is kind enough to lend me extra clothes. The clothes are quite big for me since she's a tall slender woman. She's a real beauty.
"Taka-chan, please rest here for a while ok?" I answered with a nod.

"How did you know where am I?" I asked Tomochin, who is sitting beside the bed.
"I just know it Minami" she answered with a smile "By the way, what are you doing there?"
"I talked with Oshima-san, she said she is going to the states tomorrow" I stared at the plain white ceiling which gave a gloomy feel "Another good friend, gone"
I looked at Tomochin's face, she looks sad upon hearing the news. They have been classmates for quite sometime, I guess they're close to each other.

It's already 4 in the afternoon, and it's still raining hard. I think I caught a cold. Shinoda-san gave me some antibiotics and a prescription. She really is a good doctor.
"Drink this Taka-chan, so you'll be ok in no time"
"Are you ok now Tomochin? What did the doctor said about you condition" I asked
"Nee Minami.." she interrupted
"..." Im quite puzzled. The room was suddenly filled with silence. This feeling, I know this. Something's not quite right.

"Destiny is such a cruel thing isn't it? My heart is always breaking since I can't do anything about it. This reality, this fragile reality, there's no way I can change it." tears started falling from Tomochin's eyes. I rushed to her side and held her tight.
"What's the problem Tomochin? Stop crying so sudden.." I held her tightly with these small arms of mine.
"I guess I'm too late isn't it? Minami, I want to be with you, that what I feel right now..but...I think it's just a dream now"
"Wha..what are you saying?" I can't find the words to say. What does she mean? I don't understand.
"You still love Maeda-san right, Minami?" she whispered "I want you to be happy Minami, that's because I love you.."
"Stop saying nonsense Tomochin.." I was at loss. Everything is still a puzzle. I don't understand what is happening right now.

"At least my wish was still granted even if it's for a while..."

"Even if the last moments come, don't cry, be sure to smile Minami."

"I only have months to live..."

"I have cancer..."

[TakaminaBG]

My TakaTomo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are kidding, right? She can't..... she can't possibly DIE!!! Oh MY GOD!!!
My tears can't stop!
If you are going to kill Tomochin, at least give some pervert TakaTomo moment!
Update SOON!!

[stepk]

Noo Tomomi
 
 

[cisda83]

What tomochin is dying... even when she did get Minami.... she can't be with Minami...

That's too cruel...

Ah Minami is going to do...

Can't wait to see the next

And Thank you for the update....

 

[miayaka]

wait!! what? why?
tomochin!!  i shipped atsumina but i dont want her to die..
looking forward for the next update 

[aoi_sora]

yuko = leaving

tomochin = dying

T^T

update soon and thanks...

 

/o/

[whiningwillow]

Chapter 12

Time. Its the only thing that is permanent. Yes, it moves it's numbers, but it's presence will be eternal. You can't stop it or halt its progress if you want to. It will pass. It will devour everything, but it's mere existence will always and forever be there.

If only I can buy time.

If only I can stop it..

I feel so useless. It's always like this, can't do anything for anyone. I want to say something, but I can't utter even a single word. This feeling, just like last time, when she left.

Memories flash in front of me, like a film rolling. Our memories as kids, growing up and doing childish things. The memory of the bazaar. The huge crowd around us, then fireworks shoot above, skies filled with wonderful patterns and colors.

"I believe that if you love someone it need not be that the two of you became lovers. Showing your love to that person is enough" Tomochin faintly whispered "Minami, thanks for being my wonderful best friend"
"You're not gonna die Tomochin. No...no..." my embrace tightens with each second. "It's not true..."
"It's much better if we part this way. Promise me Minami.." I cannot stop the tears from falling. My eyes started to hurt. This cant be real.

It's 6 in the evening. The rain already let up. All I can see outside the window are the orange lamp posts that filled the streets with light.

We walked aimlessly across the damp quiet street. Our hands intertwined. We walk wherever our feet lead us under the cold night sky. Still, I can't remove the fact that this girl beside me now is dying. She's still smiling as if everything is okay.
"Nee Minami, what do you like about Maeda-san?"
"Ehhhhhhhh????!" I was completely caught off-guard "Wha..what are you saying?"
"I know what you said last time during the bazaar was just because of the spur of the moment" she continued "I know that you still love her. You were always crying and crying and pretending that it's nothing."

Acchan. Acchan. Acchan. Hearing just her name makes my heart race. I can clearly remember everything, our moments, our time with each other. It seems that one does not simply forget. Feelings doesn't fade that easy. What do I need to do?

We traced the park that we used to play when we were kids.
"Feels nostalgic isn't it Minami?" Tomochin pointed at a familiar tree "I rescued your cat there when we were kids"
"Hahahaha" I suddenly remembered that incident when she fell upon rescuing my cat "You look silly after you fell Tomochin"
"It hurts you know. My butt really hurts after that"
"Nee Tomochin, let's go to the swing"

We sit on the swing under the pale night sky. We swing back and forth, cherishing our moments together. But somehow, I feel sad, this may be our last happy moments together. I know that in the next few days, she will be subjected to tests and treatments that will tire the already deteriorated body of hers.

"Nee Minami, I have one last wish.." we stopped our tracks. Tomochin gazed upon the sight of the moon above us "Would you mind fulfilling it?"
"Of course Tomochin, you're my bestfriend after all" I answered.
"Get her back.."

[Elo]

nooooooooooooo tomochin
you killed tomochin 

yosh atsumina is back 

update soon 

[stepk]

atsumina will be back 
but tomochin you can't back   
thanks for update

[cisda83]

Ah.. Tomochin... poor Tomochin...

Yeah... she's so great, willing to part with Minami... when she needed her the most... right this moment more than ever...

I think she wanted Minami to remember her in her beautiful self not her deteriorated self...

She even asked Minami to get Atsuko back... soon more than later...

What's Minami going to do...?

Is Minami going to be with Atsuko now... or later after Tomochin died...?

Thanx for the update

Can't wait to see the next

 

[sopiyah]

atsumina forever....

waitting for your update.....

nice fanfic..... 


 

[whiningwillow]

sorry for the slow update..this "maybe" the second to the last chapter of this fic ^_^ thank you guys for supporting and giving feedbacks to this fic

Chapter 13

It's 23rd of December and it's already snowing. Looking outside the window gave me a sense of longing for someone. My parents are always going here and there, leaving me alone in the process. Tomochin has been going in and out of the hospital. Oshima-san always send letters telling her wonderful experiences in the states. And Acchan, haven't got any news about her..I don't even have a chance to see her in school.

"I guess I need to take a stroll" I said to myself.

I grabbed my purse and my winter coat and went straight out the door. The sight of kids making snow angels on the ice-filled ground made me much lonely (how I wish I could do that with someone). I walked across the cold and icy streets, walk to wherever my feet takes me.

"Taka-chaaaaaan!" a familiar voice yelled out to me. To my surprise it was Shinoda-san.
"Shinoda-san, it nice to see you here. How are you doing?" she looks nice as always. It's like she's radiating a godly-like feel.
"I'm fine Taka-chan. How are you doing?"
"I'm fine too, Shinoda-san. I'm just strolling around since theres nothing much to do at home."
"Come with me. Let's go out. I'm meeting with a friend, I'll introduce you" ehhh? Wait..what?

"KARAOKE?!" I exclaimed "What are we doing here Shinoda-san?"
"We're gonna have fun Taka-chan!" she answered with a laugh that gave something-bad-is-gonna-happen feeling "Ah, there she is"
A tall beautiful woman walked towards us. She's really beautiful and gave a princess-like feels. She has curls on the end of her hair. Every guy she passed by was at awe, even their respective girlfriends were at awe too. She's shining.
"Nyan-Nyan!" Shinoda-san ran towards the girl and hugged her.
"Please stop calling me Nyan!" shouted the girl "It's been years Mariko"
"Can't stop myself Nyan-Nyan. Hahaha"
"Eh? Who is that girl?" She ran towards me and looked at me closely "KAWAII! Who is this Mariko? She's cute and..chibi!"
What?!!!!! I really don't know if It's a compliment or what. Hmmmmppfff, this girl.
"I forgot to introduce her Nyan-Nyan." Shinoda-San walked towards us "Taka-chan this is Kojima Haruna, the friend I'm telling about. Nyan-Nyan this is Takahashi Minami, a frequent in the infirmary in school"
Shinoda-san whispered something to Kojima-san.
"EHHHHHHHHHHHHHH??!!!" Kojima-san suddenly exclaimed "High schoolers nowadays, but Taka-chan, Good job!"
"Ehhh?! What did you said to her Shinoda-san?" I was so curious suddenly. The expression of Kojima-san was huge.
"Nothing nothing Taka-chan. Let's go!"

Days surely pass so fast. We were here in the same place together few months ago. We were singing together, having fun like we are doing today. She was here back then, singing a song for me. She whispered 'Nee Minami, that's for you..' I blushed, I don't know what to do. I held her hand secretly and whispered back 'I love you Acchan..'

"Christmas is coming! Do you have plans Taka-chan?" Kojima-san asked while twirling the silver fork over the plate.
"I don't have any Kojima-san. Maybe I'll just stay home and treat myself to something" I answered. I guess I'll spend this Christmas alone.
"I heard you're into L Taka-chan. Maybe you want to.." Kojima-san whispered "With the two of us.."
"Ehhhhhhhh?!!!!!!!"
"Stop teasing the kid Nyan-Nyan. I know what you're trying to do" Shinoda-san said "Don't mind her Taka-chan"
Kojima-san pouted in disappointment which is cute, much like Tomochin's.

"Ah! A band will perform today. I guess it's our lucky day guys" Kojima-san pointed at the small stage across.
"I wonder what they will play" I asked my self

"Merry Christmas everyone. Our first song is called 'Forever'"

I suddenly felt a tug on my chest as the band starts playing. It's as if I already heard the song before. I heard this before, I'm sure of it.

~~We can keep walking forever
Together, now and forever
This love I clutch close to my heart
Will never change, this one unique
“I love you”
Don’t forget this promise we’re making
Because you’re more important to me than anyone else
I want to make the dreams you told me about come true, little by little
"I love you.."~~

"That was a nice song Acchan"
"It's because I made it for you Minami"
"Ehh?! Really?"
"Of course. Do you like it?"
"I love it Acchan"
"Promise me Minami.."
"Promise what?"
"That we'll be together forever.."
"I promise Acchan.."
"I love you Minami.."
"I love you too Acchan.."

"That song was composed by a friend of mine in school. She hopes that this song will reach the person she loves even though they are away from each other. I hope you guys liked it" the band received a round of applause.

I rushed out from the place leaving Kojima-san and Shinoda-san behind.
"Where are you going Taka-chaaaaaaaan!!!!?" Shinoda-san followed me.
"Im just gonna get something at home Shinoda-san!"

I ran without thinking anything. I want to be with her, that's how I feel. Darn you Acchan, making me crazy at times like this.
An unexplainable feeling rushed throughout my body as I was nearing my apartment. There's a girl standing in front of the apartment door. It's....


"Acchan...?"


"Minami..."


\(^∇^)/ 高橋みなみ X 前田敦子

[Archie28]

ATSUMINA!  

the chapter was so sweet... 

nice update 

[cisda83]

Tomochin is still busy going in and out of the hospital by herself... ah.. so sad....

Hehehe... Haruna is so cute and funny... but as usual very attractive...

Takamina's description... cute and chibi.... very funny but very accurate

Ah... finally... Takamina able to meet Atsuko...

What's going to happen with Atsumina?

How about Tomochin, Yuko, Mariko and Haruna?

Can't wait to find out what's going on next...

And Thank you for the update

 

[FNK23]

yeaahh, finallyyyyyy 
why acchan in minami apartment ? do she miss minami ? 

[Haruko]

jeej it was a funny haruna, what about the treesome thing? jaja i laught a lot.. but aww kojiyuu..


yeah atsumina is together well.. almost,,

[stepk]

stay together...
atsumina

thanks great update 

[whiningwillow]

Chapter 14

"Wake up beautiful" a familiar voice whispered, waking me up from the deep world of slumber.
"Acchan..it's too early and it's a Saturday. Could you let me sleep me a little longer?" I opened my eyes but only halfway-through thinking that she'll let me continue on my adventure into the wonderful world of dreams.
"..Mi-na-mi.." I can feel her tongue tracing lines behind my ears. I can't help but moan in guilt. Her hands started roaming under the sheets. The combination of her tongue and her hands are like partners-in-crime, robbing my body of control and sanity.
"Acchan..can..we do this later? It's..too early" my words doesn't seem to reach her as she continues her advances.
"I-ta-da-ki-masu.." my body submitted to her as it can no longer sustain any more of her. Breakfast, Maeda Atsuko-style.

"Nee Acchan.." I looked at my lover who's lying beside me, arms wrapped around my dead-tired body from the morning routine "Let's go out today.."
"Ehh? That's so unlikely of you Minami" her fingers wandered across my upper half which gave a ticklish feel "I thought I could..you know..all day, only the two of us here"
"Acchaaaaan..how many times do you think we did this, this week?"
"Hmmmmmmm..I stopped counting at 15" her finger starts tracing circles on my belly button "Let's just stay here Mi-na-mi.."
"Hmpf..it's our 23rd time already. Can we just get up and go out? Come on, we can do this some other time. And stop those fingers Acchan, you're starting again" I stood up and put on my shirt that's lying on the carpeted floor.
"Minamiiiiiiiiii!! I don't want toooooooooo!" she's always like this. Throwing a tantrum whenever I'm forcing her to get up from the bed.
"Stop acting like a baby Acchan! Get up!"
"Well actually I'm a baby, your baby" I hate to admit it, it's corny but I like it.

I feel at ease whenever Acchan is beside me, this naughty, romantic, intelligent and wonderful girl. But sometimes, I ask myself "How long will this gonna last?". I'm thinking all about  the wonderful days ahead, my plans, her plans, our plans. All I want is to be beside her eventhough she's always tiring me up from all the 'you-know-already' stuff.

We walked across the lively streets of this busy city, streets that seem so boring and common, but eventually transforms into streets that are full of wonders. My fingers are intertwined tightly with hers, never wanting to let go.

Acchan suddenly stopped in the middle of the street. She looked straight into my eyes as if trying to say something.
"Is something wrong Acchan?" I asked "Is there something on my face? Is it dirty?"
"Let's go to the park Minami. It's been ages since the last time I went there"
"Eh? Why do you want to go there Acchan?"
"Dunno. Let's go"

The park is filled with people. It's usually busy during Sunday's but surprisingly it's filled with much people today. There's a lot of kids running around, their parents were just looking over. A kid suddenly tripped, I think she's around 4 or 5, she looks so darn cute while crying. Her father picked her up and brought her back to their table.
"I wonder if we'll have a kid like that" Acchan pointed at the cute girl who just tripped "I want kid who looks just like you Minami. A cute girl who wants to be a cabbage when she grows up"
"Idiot. Stop bringing my childhood memories. I really don't know what am I saying back then. I guess, I must have really liked cabbages when I was a kid" Acchan's always teasing me. Even in our most private time, she can't stop teasing me.
"Ah! Let's go there!"
"Where?" she pointed over the boats on the river. Boats that shaped like ducks where you pedal to make it move.

"It's been years Minami. I really miss these duck boats here"
"Well it really looks like you really miss riding one. When was the last time?" we pedaled across the calm waters, trying to avoid our fellow duck-boat-mates.
"I think when I was 6 maybe. All I can remember is riding  one of this with my father" we pedaled faster and faster "How about you Minami?"
"Me? Hmmm..all I can remember is riding this with my mom. Well, were pretty much close back then" I suddenly remember the times when I was a kid. It saddens me, but what can I do "My parents use to take me out always. Parks, malls, countryside or wherever. But now, they're pretty much engrossed with each other, forgetting that they still have a daughter"
My feet stopped. Tears involuntary fell down from my eyes. I feel heavy, as if I can't breath. Thinking about the current situation of my family, always make me look miserable.
"I'm sorry Acchan. I shouldn't be crying right now. I should be happy right now right? I'm sorry. I'm sorry for ruining this boat ride.." I wipe my tears with the end the scarf that I'm wearing.
She held my arms with her warm hands. And..Acchan's lips touched mine. It was comforting, as always. Ever since we've been together, it was her kiss that makes me feel so special.
"Minami, being with you alone makes this experience special. It's okay to cry, cry as long as you like. Remember, I'm always here Minami." Acchan wiped my tears with her delicate fingers.

We watch the sunset as the day turns into dark. We're still in the water, not minding where the river takes us. My head is on her shoulders, she's singing me a song. A song she made long ago.
"Nee Minami..if the time comes, I want to adopt a kid that looks like you"
"Don't bring up that cabbage again Acchan." I pinched her cheek, making a bright red spot "But I want a kid that looks like you too, and we'll have a happy family. That's my dream."
"Then I should work hard and make that a reality" Acchan held my hand tightly

"Stay by my side forever Minami.."

"I will..I promise"

The moon shines brightly above us, witnessing our promise with each other.





this is a flashback ^_^