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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
« Reply #20 on: January 13, 2013, 04:48:33 AM »
Hahahaha i like it, can't wait until Mayu's appearance.

And about Sae, she's such a playboy. At the end of chapter 3, Sayaka sounds like a mad yandere, anything could happen to her fiancé lol

Thank so much for a new Mayuki fic, it's awesome >:]


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Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
« Reply #21 on: January 17, 2013, 12:17:21 AM »
Hello again everyone, Surprised much! You guys got many points here...Im  :inlove:
@ cisda83   : Hahaha…thanks back…yes you are pretty right  :love: And you got the blue point, the eldest is…and some clue there go  :yep:
@ DC2805       : Hahaha, I bet you more… im waiting :lol:
@ sakura_drop_    :  Thank you…take some cookies while waiting..  8)
@ XxRoByNxX78    :  Your guess correctly, grandma take rest now..lol, hey waits! you can get much red in this chap... XD
@Chanaline   : Thank you..,and you got the gold clue one!  :w00t: Their answers were right… she wait for him in out
@Playgirlz   : haha, Mayu preparing in some where… and thankyou…MaYuki 0(^^)0

Well, here the next… let's see the rest fore, a long journey wait for us. Arigatou gozaimaz!



CHAPTER 3 – Temptation



The rumors about the destruction of sacred and hallowed fountain in the pond palace predictably have spread rapidly throughout the palace. Everyone began to talking about the destruction of one of the fountain. They began to assume an assortment. Some say that it was a sign of something dangerous to come to the palace. Others say there is an evil curse came to threaten.

“Master, rumors are already spreading around the palace?" Adviser said.

"We could not let it continue. Commanded all the inhabitants of the palace, do not let this news out of the palace. People outside the palace should not know this. Our King did not want any unrest in the community beyond. "Command Ochano firm.

"What about the water, master? Increasingly, the water continues to flow irregularly at a messy, very heavy sometimes... "The court lady said with pale face.

"And most recently, the sound of water roaring sounds tight ... we were scared with all this..." Other Naishi attendant added, and appeared frightened face.

"It was destiny. All that happens is the will of heaven, as well as running water in the ponds. The fountain could not be cured by ordinary people."Said Ochano seriously and try to explain calmly. He tried to hide the same tension as perceived advisers.

There were held ceremonies massive exclusively for seven days. This is all they can do now.


Two weeks later.

"I cannot wait to deliver this good news to our sisters." Said Atsuko smiled happy.

"I would not wait for their arrival..." said Tomomi face flushed with embarrassment.

This morning Atsuko and Tomomi went out from one meeting in Shishinden. They and some domesticity minister have finished a meeting with the King Yashusi. They discussed the removal of the daughter’s room and prepare rooms for the fiances.Two daughters face was beaming. Their father has announced that start tomorrow, the fiances will be staying at the Gosho palace. They will be given a private room. Their activities were transferred to the court, by not leaving their learning and working activities. Previously, they stay in the pavilion, respectively, in the western of Kyoto, and the eastern outskirts of Kyoto.

Atsuko and Tomomi ran to the weaving room, where the five sisters are working on the craft of weaving fabric.


(In the weaving, Ogakumonjo)

The five princesses were diligently working on woven paper. This is one of the skills they have mastered. Classes are held every afternoon weaving lessons. The daughters are very good at making crafts woven. Already some of the work they create and impress the observer of the art in the palace. Sayaka, Rena and Yuki are the cleverest weaving produces beautiful work. The four other relatives had to admit, they are less competitive than the third. The door opened. The princess stopped weaving, turning. Two teachers and a guard in the room were paying homage to the princess and left the room.

"Time to break my pretty sisters ... I will convey something of the father's word." Said Atsuko smiled. The five daughters went to Atsuko and Tomomi were already sitting in front of the rest area.

"Listen carefully. They will be staying at the palace. Start tomorrow! "Said Tomomi explained enthusiastic. Her eyes look towards her sister's face one by one.

"It means that we can meet them every day! Yay." Atsuko jump little bit.

"Ah..,that's very good news my dear sisters...I did not think this plan as soon as... "Kojima said and hugged Yuki tightly. Yuki smiled, replied back.

"This means that we will get married..." Yui said smiling happily and shy.

"Exactly one of us..." Rena added, her eyes showing the same happiness with others.

"And I'll make sure, I do." Sayaka said confidently. She looked towards her sisters, vanity smile tugging at her red lips.


(The next day)

Kai, Yuko, Sae, Minegishi, Rino and Jun had arrived at the palace. They entered the main gate on the front, south, side of the Palace. The six men were directed toward the individual rooms in Otsunegoten. Rooms that will be in the building they occupy the same room with the other members of the royal family. The room is set for a family member who is not married, men and women are not in a row. While member of the family who are married get a spacious and large. Rooms at Otsunegoten set with a very neat and synergic. It was very spacious, comfortable and beautiful.


(In one of the room’s fiance)

The six young men entered their rooms. After they put the goods and equipment to learn, they were gathered in one room. Kai who was putting books into the storage, stop the activity so come see his friends.

"Ah, so tired...Finally, we live in the palace now. So, soon we'll get married. "Said Jun, lay down on the floor (tatami).

"W-what ... married..?" Yuko glared to Jun, and pulled his shirt so that he wakes up.

"Aarh, let me. You is why Yuko? (grumble) You scared? (laughs) "Said Jun while release the grip of Yuko from his collar. He thrust his face with eyes jokingly. Minegishi embrace Yuko neck and ruffled his hair. Kai and others joined tickling Yuko.

Grekk! The door opened.

"My Yuko, here! What you doing guys? Let him go, only me who should hug him like that. Got it? "Kojima in and ran towards Yuko, take him from them and immediately hugged him. Dang! Yuko was shocked and embarrassed. All his friends burst out laughing.

"Princess Kojima..,you should not be in here, do not you?" Kai said politely, as far as he knew, women was not allowed to enter men room without guards, both unmarried, or vice versa. Although engaged, should only be adjacent room.

"Indeed. I just could not stand long. I miss him so much..." Kojima spoiled. She still clung to Yuko in trouble breathing. However, is not good for men to deny a woman.

"And I could not bear to see her..." muttered one of them who stood alone in the corner, looking other side.


(At night, In the main dining room, Seiryoden)

After a day in the meeting room briefing and preparations to launch a new activity at the palace, the young nobles were gathered with the daughters. Dinner time was only attended by the daughters and their fiances and Yuki. They are very fun to enjoy this dinner, because it was the first night for their new sense of togetherness, six pairs of lovers who are intoxicated by romance. They were joking and teasing each partner. Yuki who was sitting next to Atsuko and Tomomi also dissolves in the atmosphere was pleasant. Ochano watching from a distance, gently smile, happy to saw the daughters. But...when he saw Yuki, his face instantly turned wistful.

"Where is your mate..? Princess ... where is he...where is he..." Ochano said in his heart, his eyes looking towards Yuki who were laughing merrily. His mind constantly asked without stopping.

Suddenly, tears dripping bit by bit. His hand was slightly shaking. He felt very guilty for not been able to find a partner to accompany princess Yuki. Because sadly, and could not hold back his tears, Ochano away from that place. He promised himself that he would not give up.

An hour had passed.

Atsuko, Kojima, Yui, and Rena went together into the main break with their partners. Tomomi and Minegishi went for a walk into the main hall to see the soldiers practice. Sayaka and Sae chose to go alone to the park near the building of their rooms. And Yuki went to pray.

"Sayaka my princess, I'm going to walk around a bit. I want to memorize the rooms in the palace..."said Sae gently holding Sayaka, wistful eyes and tried to reveal the truth.

"I thought we'd talk all night...I do not want to be alone..."Sayaka spoiled whining to Sae. She leaned her head on his shoulder.

"Yes .. I will not be long, I promise." Said Sae, fake smiled. He released his hand from her arms, and go. Sayaka face looked disappointed, but still let him go. Sayaka was walking to her room alone. She looked back, hoping he did not go.

Sae walked into the main hall. He saw the soldiers were practicing in the middle of the dark night. He also saw a laughing Minegishi intimate with Tomomi. Then go to Omima, then he got to where he wanted. He looked around to make sure no one is looking. He walked over to where prayer was. He saw a girl who was praying at a small temple next to the house. He went quietly, and stood in the corner of the wall.

Finished praying, Yuki stood up and pack up. Suddenly she was startled by a voice from behind.

"I'm so glad to find people who like to pray at night, because it means I have friends to do the same thing. May I join you? "he smiled.

"Sae. You were not with Sayaka? "Yuki asked curiously, seeing Sae come alone.

"I was with her, but she was exhausted and I want her to rest in order to recover her body. I do not want her hurt. So, can I join? "Said Sae again.
 
"Oh sorry, here of course. Please pray here, I'll get the equipment first. Hope my sister get well soon..."Said Yuki friendly smiled. Quickly and pick up the equipment in the box of prayer shrine. Sae continued to stare at Yuki, he praised her beauty and her body in his heart and smiled to his self meaningfully.

When finished, they both came out of the temple. Minegishi the accident is still around, seeing them together, and then approached them. Yuki was pleased to see, she told to Minegishi that Sae participated in the temple and prayed. Minegishi just nodded, said nothing. In his mind, he did not believe it, because he knows, Sae hate prayer and temple.


A month passed.

For a moment, the inhabitants could forget about the sacred fountains. Till this time, no significant events occurred. They believe, god of the sky has heard their prayers and protect the palace from things that are not desirable. Special prayer ceremonies still performed by the elders.

The young nobleman demonstrated his diligence in learning. They competed to show it off to the king. They think that someone who is getting married later is who will occupy the throne. So, they prepared well everything. Try not to disappoint the king and the court, which were trust them. The minister was pleased to see a healthy competition and is open.

Besides that, the relationship between the daughters and the fiances is getting better and showing affection in very beautiful rhythm. King Yashusi was very happy to know this fact. The inhabitants of the palace revelers participate, as day after day they passed with six pairs of lovers such harmony. They love to see their daughters play in the park with a lover. It became its own entertainment for anyone looking. Since one of the most beautiful in this world is to see the lovers unite romance with her partner.

Yuki dissolves in the same happiness. In every leisure night Yuki always pray in the temple, to be grateful. Almost every night anyway, Sae follow Yuki to pray at the temple. Yuki did not think anything, unsuspecting slightest, because Sae is very good at hiding the real intent.

Each day he lied to Sayaka. Ignoring Sayaka and was more looking for an opportunity with Yuki. Sae felt he had fell in with Yuki. Her good looks, and the kindness that have been misinterpreted by Sae. However, Yuki is still not aware of this.

Without knowledge, Minegishi know what it makes. Secretly, he always follows every night to see what was done, Sae with Yuki at the temple. Although no matter what happens, Minegishi suspect something.


(In the dining room, Otsunegoten)

This afternoon the seven princess and mates had lunch together. Incidentally today, all can gather. At some time ago, we can be sure there are two or more people could not attend. Especially Yuki and Sayaka, because Yuki was so busy studying and being outside the palace. Whereas Sayaka prefer more attuned to events with his father to seek more attention from ministers and colleagues.

The servants came into the room one at a time, preparing food on the table. They tidied up seat cushion and a flower pot in the corner of the room. After making sure all clean and tidy the servants out of the room, invite the girls and their mates to enter. Kojima, who had been holding hands Yuko, forgot to remove it. Sae intentionally sat next to Yuki.

"Look. We are so blessed by the heavens in, my friends. We are given health and our brides are beautiful and good. “Kai said to everyone. He smiled proudly, see Atsuko gently. Atsuko blushed and hugged Kai from the side.

"You're right. We are also grateful, to get you guys. "Rena said, then turned to Jun. June clutching Rena’s hands, as did not want to take it off. Yui and Rino were doing the same thing. Sayaka smiled a little, seeing Sae's face gently. Everything smiled delightedly.

"We can be happy because father was always does his best for us... or that let us pray for him first..." Tomomi invites all to pray. Everything bowed his head with wisdom. Silence.

Suddenly they all were surprised by the shouts of Yuki.

"Kyaaa!" Yuki cried out in shocked. Her hands pushed her backward table and reflexes. Her face was a little tense, she put her hand on chest as her heart would fall out.

"Yuki. What's the matter with you? "Atsuko asked worried. All turned to Yuki curious.

"... (Sigh) ... no..." Yuki did not continue her words. She shook his head. Everything was surprised and since Yuki did not say anything, they continued the meal.

Yuki realized that the hand that is trying to grope her thigh is.


(In the reading room, Ogakumonjo)

A man was lowly sliding door and entered. Yuki was waiting for him inside. Yuki was sitting and reading a book seriously. Realizing his came, Yuki turned. She invited him sit facing her. He sat and smile happy in front her. Yuki did not reply.

"Well. What do you mean you did ‘that’? "Yuki asked curtly. She put her book and stared at him seriously.

"Ohh-that. It's nothing...You do not exaggerate..."He replied, smiling tease. His eyes narrowed meaningfully.

"What do you mean exaggerating?" Yuki asked and fell unpleasant.

He stand, he turned and sat down next to Yuki who was silent. Yuki did not budge. She kept looking straight ahead, waiting for an answer. She tried to hide her tension. Ten seconds silence. He, who could not stand longer about the beauty of Yuki, tries to move closer. Yuki could feel his high desire. He tried to grope Yuki waist from the left. Lightning reflexes of Yuki, immediately throw away that men hand quickly and sharp, she up and away into a corner fast. She stood barge and no look him. Her heart ticked fear.

"My sister loves you very much. Do not do things like this. This is shameful. She must have been very hurt if know. "Yuki said softly, so as not to offend him. Then she quickly walked toward the exit. Leave without looked back.

Heave shocked on his head, his face redden. He feels ashamed and snubbed. He hit the table two times, pushed it hard away to the wall. Still could not believe with what he got. He realized this is the first time being rejected.

“How dare you...reject me!!”His face was full of angry.



Haah, hope you enjoooy  :)
« Last Edit: January 17, 2013, 04:46:56 AM by Young Sun J »

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
« Reply #22 on: January 17, 2013, 09:23:44 AM »
No! NO! NOOOOOO! It seems that Sae will do something bad to Yuki!!

NOOOOOOOO! Mayu Hurry up and come!! You say that it is a Mayuki but we don't see Mayu. You torturate me... Mayu! Mayu! Mayu! Mayu! (Sorry I became crazy....)
When will (s)he appear? :banghead:

I'm so sorry for Sayaka! Sae you're bad guy!! :angry:

Young Sun J-san I don't need you to update fast... I just want Mayu to appear!!! XD (I am one more time sorry)
« Last Edit: January 17, 2013, 09:53:15 AM by Chanaline »
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
« Reply #23 on: January 17, 2013, 01:48:42 PM »
ASDFGHJKL DX

DAFAQS WRONG WITH SAE! MAYU SHALL COME TO THE RESCUE NAOOO DX

I WANT MY MAYUKI SCENES NAOOO! DX

Lol -Tries to be patient-

Update with MaYuki scenes soon :3
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
« Reply #24 on: January 17, 2013, 02:04:28 PM »
MAYU~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

SAVE YUKI~~~~~~~~~~``


HURRY~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
« Reply #25 on: January 17, 2013, 05:14:41 PM »
Thas its sae go away seriously every mayuki fic u always come in an wreck it lol an it gets annoying however when Mayu comes into this fic i cant wait for her to kick the crap out of you na her to win Yuki's heart without even trying now back off sae

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
« Reply #26 on: January 17, 2013, 05:28:47 PM »
im curious about what mayu's entrance is gonna be like :? :yep:
cant wait to see her appear :P
bad sae!! naughty sae you should stay with sayaka :smhid
great fic :cow: :deco:
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
« Reply #27 on: January 17, 2013, 06:14:56 PM »
So rarely to see Sae and Sayaka as the villains in fanfics! Hope yuki wont get hurt by the evil couple... :shocked

very amusing to see princess kojima getting all clingy on a "shy"  :oops: yuko! haha! :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
« Reply #28 on: January 22, 2013, 12:40:24 PM »
Wah... Sae... is a horrible person...

Somehow I feel bad for Sayaka for falling in love with Sae... where Sae seems to only like someone because of her beauty.... since in this story it said that Yuki is the most prettiest of them all. Even if she is also nice I don't think Sae cared about that at all.

Well what's going to happen next... can't wait...

Thank you for this update...

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Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #29 on: January 24, 2013, 03:12:41 PM »
Hello again everyone, waaaahh  :shocked:
@Chanaline: oh god...gomen gomene.. you know, I'm being crazy too..  :banghead: but, Mayu still on the way...hold on please.. :deco: *together
@ChuuuPuffss: gomene...please waiting, once more..let's stay mad patients  :sweatdrop:
@sakura_drop: im joining you...*pray pray pray..  :panic:
@ XxRoByNxX78: yes, you pretty right..! Mayu is top  :thumbsup
@mayuki_daisuki: let’s wait bit more...thankyou..MaYuki  :heart:
@DC2085: yes, we could fine here...oh you knew it? And..gomen for your hope.. :(
@cisda83: pretty right...you realized it..thanks back.. :deco:

Today is my day off, so I could finish this chap..already tried faster. Arigatou gozaimaz!



CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety


Two weeks later.

Lately Yuki often did not attend the dinner and a get together in the lounge room with her sisters. She chose to eat with her grandmother and more often chose alone in the den. No longer pray at the temple. Something repeatedly bothering her without stopped. Some servants and royal guards were aware of the changes attitudes princess Yuki and started talking about it. They are worried about the state of princess Yuki.

"Yuki, my dear sister, what happened to you? I do not see you as usual..."Rena said softly.

"Did something happen to you Yuki..?" Tomomi asked.

"... There is nothing wrong with me, sister... do not worry about. Let’s continue reading." Yuki said with a sweet smile.

 "You're never complained about anything. I hope you are fine..."Rena said, the anxious sister. Tomomi nodded in agreement.

"I'm sorry my sisters, I could not say actually..." Yuki muttered softly.


(In the lounge, Shodaibunoma)

Minegishi which provoked emotions, instantly appealing Sae’s shirt, then directed a blow to Sae’s head. Before the second blow launched, Kai grabbed Minegishi and pushed back away from Sae. Jun was deftly capturing Sae who want to come forward to fight back. The two faces flushed with anger. Minegishi was wheezing and looking forward to the blow again. Yuko helped capture Minegishi body from the side and push up stalled on the wall.

"You want to hit me or what? Hah!" Sae said upset.

"You deserve beaten hard, damn you Sae!!" Said Minegishi sneered. Sae escape from Jun and intend to reply Minegishi, but the shot missed, hit Yuko who was near Minegishi.

"Ouch!! What the hell are you! Lousy you..."Yuko said angrily, holding his left face, his eyes squinted. Without further ado he's delivering hard blows to Sae’s face. Sae whimpered pain, and retreated to the back.

"Stop you! What did you do to him!! How dare you, Yuko!"Sayaka who saw it, ran and pushed Yuko until fall. Kojima surprised, ran to Yuko.

"Sister! Don’t do that to my fiance! You do not know what happened."Kojima was defending. She helped Yuko standing and bolstered away from Sayaka.

"What? You think I don’t see it!"Sayaka was mad, Sae approached her.

"This mess was raised because the act of your men. Did not you hear the embarrassing rumor? He interferes with princess Yuki."Jun explain carefully.

"That was a big lie! Yuki definitely a tease, I know he is good! Don’t arbitrarily. Watch what you say, Jun!"Sayaka denied hard.

"That’s right. You do not know I always continue to dodge, but...She continues flirt. Realized, a woman alone, without lover, began to naughty...You know what I mean? Like a.."Sae have not had time to finish.

PLAAKKK! PLAKK!! Atsuko and Kojima gave heavy slaps at Sae’s face both sides.

The sisters did not like the greeting him. Minegishi and Yuko starts hooked, moving forward but Kai and Jun managed to hold them tight. Kai could feel the power of the huge anger of these men. Sae could be killed by them, easy.

"Damn you!!”Atsuko and Kojima said simultaneous.

“She is not a woman like that! Watch your mouth! "Atsuko stared Sae with disgust, with burned face.

"Shut Up you damn!! We will not let our ears hear the useless chatter of your mouth!!"Jun pointed Sae sharply. His hands were clenched tightly as if to punch.

“If your mouth kept going like that, I make sure you will not be smiling tomorrow!”Kojima added sharp. Her face turned daunting.

"What the hell is this?! Don't do that to my fiance! Why you guys discredit us! This is Yuki's fault!!"Sayaka feel broke, and then approached her fiance who was screaming in pain.

Suddenly, they felt strange tensions in the silence. The heat enveloped the room and their hearts. The atmosphere is very uncomfortable. Thus, brotherly, sisterly relationship began to deteriorate.


(In the boardroom, Seiryoden)

"Princess Sayaka act too early. She has given permission for foreign investors to put weapons in storage in the North. Now the border security kept coming to us. "A principal officer of the court said worried.

“Princess Sayaka intends to take advantage of them. We thought she didn’t know that the gun was not the weapon used."The minister explained.

"That's illegal, master." Yama said regret. Yashusi king closed his eyes for a moment.

During one week, the border security came to the court because of the reports of illegal arms smuggling through the court. The court has strongly denied, and tries to prove that the statement was not true. But, princess Sayaka have been first brought investors to stay and asked taxes and tributes were very high. There are tensions between the palace, the border security and foreign investors. Knowing the situation, princess Sayaka was chose a hands-off and leaved the case to the court. The ministers and court officials were working hard to save the palace of the deteriorating situation.


At Night.

(In Sayaka’s room, Otsunegoten)

"Everyone thinks I'm wrong?! Stupid." Sayaka said, slapping the table.

"You calm down, I was equally worried about you. We must keep your reputation as a potential queen. I do not want you to be dragged in this issue. "Sae tries to calm Sayaka. Hearing the last sentence, Sayaka was offended. She stood facing the face close.

"I dragged?? What kind of talk! It was your idea! You should be dragged! "Sayaka snapped.

"What?? You also agree to receive many tributes that right? Do not blame me! "Sae snapped back. Sayaka was surprised upset.

PLAKK! Sayaka gave a slap to Sae. His face flushed and his eyes were irritated. They looked at each other.

"(Sign)...I never blamed you. I've always obeyed your word. "Sayaka said in a tone of disappointment, turned away and walked quickly toward the exit. Sae slumped, holding his forehead, feeling dizzy, he let Sayaka left the room.


(In the main room, Seiryoden)

King Yashusi was sitting and resting with his wife, looking very tired, sharp frown at the thought of so many things. Faced with such problems, Yashusi often moped. The health condition of the noble king was increasingly unstable, as he was often thinking of all problems in one time, and never slept soundly at night. His heart was growing anxious. Seeing such a state of husband, the queen had approached.

"My majesty, you have been looking sad for days...What is it bothering you? Maybe I can help you... "The wife asked in a soothing voice.

"Oh honey, I am getting old. I could no longer lead this kingdom well. I have been thinking of stepping down...I want to be hermit. But..."Yashusi was stopping the sentence. His face shows his eyes glassy and mounting fatigue.

"But what...my husband...?" His wife asked again.

"Our Eldest..." He sighed.

King Yashusi told her wife that he could not yet decide which one of the daughters would succeed him. According to the reigning traditional law, the most rightful successor would be Princess Sayaka as she was the oldest daughter. But the king himself did not think she would fit the position, knowing her traits. Besides that, she frequently made a tactless decision that caused bad situations. The queen who heard that, smiled.

"My husband, when the next full moon night...go to Ninna-ji temple, sleep there." The queen said softly. Yashusi King was following the advice of his wife. He would go to temple to pray and sleep there.

Ninna-ji Temple is a holy shrine dedicated kings who are facing a big problem or do not have hope in face of problems. In temple there is a sacred statue of the god of the sky. Many elders past and previous kings always used to sleep in the temple to ask for a way out.


(In the temple, Ninna-ji)

Today is arrived. Tonight is a full moon occurs, it means the right night to pray and worship in the temple. The king did not waste this golden time to ask for directions to the lord of the sky. Once finished the prayers, the king was lying in a bed of wooden boards covered with mats only just. He took a small pillow and starts his sleep.

Obviously, his anxiety and perplexity good king is known by Azusa who dwells in other world. When Yashusi was supreme asleep, he dreamed. In his dream, he heard the voice of Azusa.

Azusa said, "O great king, do not worry. It is time that you relax. Leave the palace. Leave the throne to the youngest daughter. Perform your desire up to become a hermit."

An hour after he woke up, his worries gone. In the morning, he went back to the palace to meet his wife. He recounted the incident in his dream. Hint of other world was really comforting him and empress.


One week later.

(In the main hall, Shishinden)

The King gathered his daughters, maids, his faithful adviser Ochano, governors, Ministers and other dignitaries of the kingdom. He delivered the order Azusa of other world that it's time he step down and hand over the kingdom to the youngest daughter, Yuki.

"Today the king Yashusi will announce something very important for all of us." Ochano said in front of all those present. King Yashusi was standing and smiling to everyone, looking into all angles.

"It has been revealed to me the order of the sky, the greater Azusa. It is time for me to abdicate. And who will replace my position is Princess Yuki. "King Yashusi smiled proudly towards Yuki.

"I am..? Father..! "Yuki was shocked, her eyes blinking rapidly, she turned to her mother and her sisters.

She still could not believe what she heard. She never thought would be queen before, she slowly stood up and smiled at all the royal family as she saluted. All present stood and saluted.

"Yukii ..!" Five sisters simultaneously shouted with joy. They turned to each other, respectively, and then embraced. The fiances joined cheered and clapped.

"It is beyond our expectations. So who would be king? " Jun said curious.

"It's very exciting." Yuko said.

"Yes, I wonder, who is he? That will accompany the princess Yuki? "Kai was curious.

The queen and Ochano were smiling happy and proud to see Yuki. All governors, Ministers and dignitaries cheered the good news. The servants and guards thank each and hugging each other. They are happy that finally the youngest daughter will be queen Kyoto Gosho. The news was received with delight by most all of the contents of the palace, except by Sayaka and Sae. They pretended to agree, even though deep down inside they get heavy shocked and angry. Sayaka becomes inflamed and could not stand up, pound the table and walked toward the exit. Sae followed her from behind. No one noticed they were leave.


(At night)

(In the main room, Seiryoden)

Sayaka refused the decision. She could not accept that her father favored Yuki over her. Feeling she was deserved to be queen.

 “It’s supposed to be me, Father. I’m the eldest daughter!” Sayaka said, complained hard. King Yashusi smiled.

 “Sayaka, to be a queen takes more than age. There are many other qualities that one must possess,” explained King Yashusi wisely.

“What does Yuki have that I don’t..?” Sayaka pouted.

“You’ll find out when Yuki has replaced me,” King Yashusi answered. After the discussion, Sayaka went back to her room.


(In the Sayaka’s room, Otsunegoten)

Sliding the door loudly, and slammed into the side. Sayaka entered and began to take anything nearby, and then thrown in any direction. Wild eyes full of hated, drove mad by her anger. She paced back and forth, full of anxiety. Occasionally she yelled annoyed. Sae only be silent about his fiancee. He's also deeply regrets for what was decided by the king.

“My father is being unfair!! He is planning to crown Yuki instead of me. I am his oldest daughter for God’s sake!” moaned the princess. Her fiance, became angry at once.

“It can’t happen that way. You’re the real queen!” shouted him.

“What do we do??” Sayaka panicked. Her hands were clenched tightly.

“We need to get rid of your impudent sister!” said Sae aloud. He said to himself, that this is a good time to revenge for the rejection, Yuki had done against him.

After a long discussion, they decided something.


(Near a cherry blossom tree)

A self walked slowly around the tree. Been a few days, rabbits and squirrels in the garden that always accompany play, has not looked back around the cherry tree was. She was looking for something missing, not them. But something deep she has not been found until now. She was sitting under a cherry tree, facing the sky, closed her eyes and smiled softly. Slowly she sniffed, feeling a little breeze against her face gently. Small clouds in the sky revolve slowly, covering most of the crescent moon. Start one by one small leaves of the cherry blossom trees falling. The wind took the leaves toward her. Without realizing it, tears dripping slowly on the cheek of the beautiful princess.


***

Behind all the smiles were the tears
And behind all the comfort were the fears.
Everything you think you see on me,
Was not everything there was to me

It disappeared far away, it scattered in the wind
I could not catch my feeling so it made me sad
I put down my hopes like disappearing waves
In this great heart-like pain, my embrace is lonely

Nobody knows the solitude of my heart


*** 


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« Last Edit: January 24, 2013, 03:32:15 PM by Young Sun J »

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #30 on: January 24, 2013, 04:11:34 PM »
That was an impressive chapter~

Though, I hope Mayu appears in the next one -Sobs-

Still being patient! :3
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #31 on: January 24, 2013, 04:15:07 PM »
where is Mayu????  :shocked
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #32 on: January 24, 2013, 06:26:21 PM »
I want my no no no... Yuki's Mayu!!!! I think I can't hold on... XD

Oh noooo! What Sea and Sayaka have planed???

Yuki is lonely... poor her!!! Don't cry  :cry: (the end is Yuki, right?)
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #33 on: January 24, 2013, 06:49:56 PM »
bad sayaka and sae!! :angry:
yukirin!! :cry: your not alone your prince charming will come soon (hopefully "mayu") :heart:
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #34 on: January 24, 2013, 07:12:36 PM »
Somehow I have wrong image in my head that they're wearing Chinese traditional clothes instead of Japanese one, lol.  :nervous

I like this! Very intriguing. Can't wait until mayuki met each other!  :twothumbs
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #35 on: January 24, 2013, 10:29:24 PM »
when mayu  :(????

don't cry yuki

bad sae bad

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #36 on: January 25, 2013, 12:51:45 AM »
F*ck!
Can i kill sae now? XD
Sayaka deserved someone better....

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #37 on: January 25, 2013, 01:39:38 AM »
Mayu, if u do not appear in the next chapter... *prays*

I think I won't be able to write until Mayu appears... I'm getting anxious...
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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #38 on: January 26, 2013, 04:41:28 AM »
Wah... Sae is really crazy... just being reject... he wants to kill the girl.... Man... honestly just because she hurt his pride.

Sayaka.. is a stupid girl... keep listening to her fiancee all those bad decisions. Severe her right to have her taken down from replacing her father.

I guess they are going to make Yuki evacuate the palace... meeting Mayu outside palace... right? Then Mayu helps Yuki regain her position as the heir of the kingdom.

Thank you for this update... can't wait to see more...

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Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
« Reply #39 on: January 31, 2013, 12:23:06 AM »
Hello there, I was adding opening on prologue  XD kindly check it now guys..

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