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-From Past To The Future- Chapter 4.5: Famous Fathers
« on: January 19, 2013, 08:34:33 AM »
Hi guyss,, Ojii-chan heree (LOL)
It's my first post in this forum~~
Well..... I wrote fanfics and fansubs so much. But I've never post it before in anywhere *Forever Alone*
but seeing your fanfics here, really makes my hand itchy and want to post something =A="  :dizzy:
So here it is  :glasses: yoroshiku onegaishimasu  :kneelbow:






From Past to The Future


Prologue
One thousand years ago in the land of Spira. There is a city….. Very----very big city that never sleep. This city is full of lights, it also have many high-rise building and waterfalls. The city is known as Zanarkand. Zanarkand is a highly technologically city in this era.
Zanarkand also has the best blitzball team in Spira. It's name is Zanarkand Abes. There are many great players in there.





*About Blitzball, Blitzball is a sport that looks like football.
This is what that I could explain / know about blitzball (LOL):
1.   5 Players for each teams
2.   The members are mixed. It can be both of boys and girls
3.   You can use hand or foot. Since you play this underwater XDD
4.   Blitzball have stadium too. In the stadium, there is an energy ball in the middle of a demi circle. When there is a game, the energy ball will filled with water.






But they are just ruins right now. The stadium, those high-rise buildings, the waterfalls... nothing remains.

They live in the abundant pleasures in that time.



Until that happens.......












Okay, so that's for the prologue that I wrote few years ago, really bring backs memories  :farofflook:
This story is just like FFX , credits to Final Fantasy X  :))
But of course with AKB characters and pairings. I really love this story when the first time I played the game until now.
That's why I decided to wrote it with my own words using AKB characters and pairings  :on lol: can you guess who is the main pairing in here?
I think all of you already played this game.
So..... should I continue to post??  :)
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Re: ~ From Past To The Future ~
« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2013, 08:45:21 AM »
This look so cool!   :on GJ:
Who will be main pairing? AtsuMina? MaYuki? SaeYuki or KojiYuu!?  :dunno:
Please update chapter 1 fast!  :tantrum:
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Re: ~ From Past To The Future ~ (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2013, 09:08:43 AM »
When reading the prologue, I was like  XD It's FFX!! XD
Wonder how the story goes~
Looking forward your next update  :D

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Re: ~ From Past To The Future ~ (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2013, 02:52:56 PM »
Nice!  :hee:

I wonder who the main pairing is......

Oh! Can you have kuminon couple here?

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Re: ~ From Past To The Future ~ (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2013, 04:35:29 PM »
huooo...... it's really hard to write somethimg using this stupid cellphone (~_~メ)


@Correnereyes -san: Huooo are you curious about it,, nee Correnereyes-san? Hohohohohoo ( ̄︶ ̄)
okay okay-- Ojii-chan will post the next chapter tomorrow ~
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@Ichikawa -san: Ehm.... well it will just like FFX AKB's version LOL -dryhgeac vun naytehk-  39! Sankyuu~~ <(_ _)>

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I will try to add them if you really want it ╰( ̄▽ ̄)╭
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Re: ~ From Past To The Future ~ Chapter 1: Where it All Begins
« Reply #5 on: January 20, 2013, 08:38:10 AM »
From Past to The Future
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Chapter 1 : Where it All Begins


-In Zanarkand at nighttime-
There are several people standing around talking to each other. Then a guy runs to the crowds and inform something.

“Hey! *pant* It’s him! *pant* h-he is here!” the guy said still catching a breathe

It gets people so excited. And they run off somewhere with that guy who informed. With no one around, a short person magically appears out of nowhere, walking where the other people went before disappearing again.


-In the place-
A guy comes out, ladies shout crazily and cheer for him. He approaches the crowd of people.


“Wow~ what do we have here” the guy thought while approaching the crowd
“Can you sign this? Pleaseee” a kid said that holds out a blitzball
“No probs!” the guy said, and then taking the blitzball that handed by the kid and signs it
“Ma-tsu-i Ju-ri-na” he said when signing the blitzball then returns it to the kid

“C-can you sign mine too??” asked another kid
“Me TOO!!” Another kid interrupt
“Hey, slow down kids! Take it easy” said Jurina

“Ahh Jurina-sama is so gentle~ he really kind to the kids” said a girl in the crowd
“He’s so perfect!!” Said another girl

Jurina heard that all, then winked to the girls

“Kyaaaaaaaaaa~” screamed the girls when they saw Jurina’s deadly wink

After signs the blitzball, then he walks up to the girls

“Can I have your autograph?” asked the one of them (girls)
“OF COURSE~” said Jurina

Jurina signs her blitzball then turns it back to her

“Hey, there is something on your hair.” Said Jurina
“Eeh?!”
“Here” Jurina touches her hair and handed a leaf that was on her hair which one make that girl blushing so madly “T-Thankyouu, Jurina-s-sama!” sand the girl

“Good luck tonight!” said the fans

“Nothing to worry about!”

“Hohohohhoohohoho it feels sooo good seeing the girl’s reaction, glad there is a leaf on it so I can touch her hair~” Jurina is in his dreamland.

“Ano! Can you sign this one too?” said another girl handed her blitzball, but she got no answer from Jurina
“Etoo, Jurina-sama?”
“Oh sorry sorry!” Jurina snapped out from his ‘dreamland’. He signs her blitzball, spins it on his finger & gives the blitzball back to her.

“Oh, If I scored a goal, I will do….. this!” said Jurina raises his arms to the sky “That will mean is just for you two!” said Jurina flirting the girls which one makes them giggles

“What seat?” asked Jurina

 “East block, in the front row~”
“Fifth from the right!” the other girl continues

“GOT IT!”

Jurina turns back to his fans “Well.. gotta go, cheer for me!” said Jurina winked again

When Jurina is about to go, he heard the kids from before calling for him.

“Se--------no!”
“Teach us how to blitz!”said the kids
“Hey, I got a game to play!”
“Then teach us after!”
“Hmmm……. Dunno………. Maybe tonight..? hmm…”

The short mysterious person from before is behind Jurina. No one seems to see him or even hear him. Except for Jurina

“You can’t tonight” said the mysterious person
Jurina looks at that person for a second then looks back to the kids, “I mean…. Tomorrow.. Yeah, Tomorrow!” said Jurina to the Kids
“Promise?” asked the kids
“Promise!”

Then the kids do a series of hand motions and conclude by bowing to Jurina.

Then Jurina walks to the stadium. On the way he stopped in front of a billboard, and stares at it intently. It’s a guy with a bird on his right shoulder. Jurina smirks and begins to run.
There is a voice of a Blitzball announcer is heard as Jurina runs trough the streets.


"I was in a coffee shop, running away from home when I heard the news. Our hero, Kumi, gone, vanished into thin air! My dad must have been his biggest fan. I knew how sad he'd be. Heck, we all were that day."
"Zanar," I says to myself, "What are you thinking?""
"I went running straight back home. We sat up talking 'bout him all night."
"My dad and I never talked so much. Whoa... Didn't mean to reminisce, folks."
"Anyways... Ten years later, the Memorial Cup tournament is today!"
"The two teams that have won through to the finals are...of course, the Abes from A-East and the Duggles from C-South."
"I know there's a lot of people out there today to see the star of the Abes!"
"In just one year, he's become the team's number one player!"
"He's Kumi's blood!, and the new hope of blitzball! What kind of super play will he show us today?"

“I…. I hate this” said Jurina to himself and keep going to the stadium

"Will we see his brother's legendary shot? I don't think I'm the only one excited here, folks!" the announcer said again



-In front of the stadium-

“Aaaahhhh Finally!” said Jurina

“HEYYY LOOK IT’S JURINAAA!!” said A man out loud makes everybody looks at Jurina

“Oh no….”


Jurina runs as fast as a cheetah. Glad he manage run inside the stadium.



-Inside the Stadium-

“Yikes that’s creepy” Said Jurina to him self


Jurina is sitting alone in a pool of water, eyes closed. His eyes open, as a ball of energy in the middle of a demi-circle begins to expand. Flocks of people enter the stadium. Jurina stands up, much to the enjoyment of the fans, as they cheer. We see an overview of stadium. Far away, a mysterious man clothed in red with sunglasses stands on a highrise. He holds up what appears to be a white jug, as a massive tidal wave approaches Zanarakand. Back to the man walking through Zanarakand, as the huge tidal wave has now turned into a ball of water, which gets even closer to the city.

;Blitzball match;

much brawling and passing occurs. The fans cheer. Someone gets knocked out of the water into the stands. And Jurina just scored a goal.
1-0 for Abes! The fans cheer more and more

"Take THAT!" Jurina said to the opposite team

Everyone rushes towards a loose ball. Jurina jumps into the air, above the sphere of water, as the ball is sent up out of the water to reach Jurina. He prepares to do a bicycle kick, when he sees the massive ball of water. The water ball sends out dozens of huge water bullets which smash into Zanarkand. Everything gets engulfed in water. Jurina hangs onto a girder above the stadium, as the stadium below is destroyed/engulfed in water.
Jurina falls.

“Ughhh” Jurina trying to gets up, realized   that he returns to the entrance of the now-destroyed, soaking wet stadium. Dozens of fans begin running away for their lives.

“What the hell is happened in here?!” Jurina shocked and begins to run as well but then he sees the man clothed in red

“Wha—“
“MAYU!”
“What are you doing here?!” Jurina asked

“Waiting for you” he said emotionlessly then walks away. Jurina follows him.


In the streets of Zanarkand.  People are running through the streets of Zanarkand. Jurina is moving around aimlessly. All of a sudden, time freezes. Jurina looks around frantically. The short mysterious person from before appears again.

"It begins."

Jurina turns, looks at the little person and goes "What?!”

"Don't cry."

Time unfreezes. Jurina gasps, and looks around

"What the...?" Jurina said looking for that mysterious person
“Who the hell is him?!”

When he was looking around, Jurina found Mayu down in the street, "Hey! Wait!"
Jurina runs down a street, where he meets Mayu again
"Hey, not this way!" Jurina said to Mayu
"Geez, you such a crybaby” Said Mayu

“Look-“ Said Mayu
Jurina looks up at the large ball of water that Mayu was looking at, hovering over Zanarkand, and gasps "We called it ‘Sin’…” He said again

"Sin?!”

“Yea.. Sin” answer Mayu

Tentacles smash out of a nearbye building. Hundreds of small pods eject from the tentacles, landing on the ground. They turn into small bug creatures which surround Jurina in a demi-circle. He aimlessly tries to fight them off with his hands, but eventually falls backwards

"Catch" Said Mayu
He hands Jurina a sword. Jurina takes it, and holds it high in the air, before nearly dropping it
"A gift from Kumi."

"My old man?"

Jurina moves forward, swinging the blade. The bug-creatures move backwards. Jurina falls backwards onto and stands up again

"I hope you know how to use it."

They began to fight, don’t know where Jurina learn to fighting, but he just can doing it kind of good. Mayu just smirks and holds his giant sword with his right arm

"These ones don't matter. We cut through!"

They killed some bugs. More fall

“Hey, this is kind of fun ha-haha” said Jurina looking at the sword in his hand
"Don't bother going after all of them. Cut the ones that matter, and run!" said Mayu

They cut the ones that matter, and they run. More fall behind them

A loud noise occurs. Jurina looks at Mayu, who begins to run to the noise. Jurina follows. They come face to face with the big tentacle monster, surrounded by a few of the bugs from before.

Then they fight the Sinspawn Ammes They eventually defeat it, and it blows up.
Mayu runs ahead, Jurina follows. They return to the area near the start where Jurina was looking at the billboard. He looks up at it again while running with Mayu

"Heck, What are you laughing at, old man?" Jurina said to Mayu
"Mayu! Let's get out of here!"

"Hmmph We're expected." Mayu said with emotionless tone

"Huh?" Jurina looks at the running Mayu "Gimme a break, man!" then follows him

Jurina and Mayu fight a lot of ugly bugs on the way. They swing their swords agains the bugs. And stopped. There are so many bugs on their way. They even can’t returns back

Mayu looks at the bugs "This could be bad." And he found a piece of machinery
"That--knock it down!" Mayu said to Jurina, pointed to that thing

"For What?!”
"Just do it! And you will see!”

They attack the machine. The more they hit it, the more it crackles with energy. Eventually, it explodes. Then it falls of the bridge, creating a massive explosion. All the bugs are destroyed. The bridge itself begins to blow up.

"Go!"


They continue to run, avoiding the bridge which is blowing up. Jurina makes a huge leap and grabs onto the edge of a broken part of the road, which is diagonally facing upward. He hangs onto the ledge. Mayu standing above Jurina' hands.

"Mayu! Mayu!"

Sin is now above them, and appears to be a large wormhole which is sucking things in. Mayu looks up at it

"You are sure?" Mayu said looks back to Jurina, “This is it” then he picks him up by collar of his shirt
“Hey! Put me down!!” Jurina yelled
"This is your story, Jurina” Mayu stopped for awhile, “It all begins here.

It goes blank, Everything goes white
"Hey! Hey!"Jurina keep calling for Mayu 


Then there is Zanarkand, which seems perfectly normal, except for a huge pillar of flame in the background

"My...old man?" Jurina, floating in this very surreal version of Zanarkand, descends. He sees a small kid

"I thought about a lot of things..."
"like where I was, what I'd got myself into."
"I started to feel light-headed... and then, sleepy."


It goes white again

 
"I think I had a dream."
"A dream of being alone."
"I wanted someone--anyone, beside me..."
"so I didn't have to feel alone anymore."
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Re: ~ From Past To The Future ~
« Reply #6 on: January 20, 2013, 09:51:28 AM »
This will be Wmatsui fanfic!?  :nya:
Juriboy is here again!!  :shy2:
Please update soon!  :prayers:
It is really nice!  :farofflook:
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Re: ~ From Past To The Future ~
« Reply #7 on: January 20, 2013, 10:23:05 AM »
Ok this story reminds me of a video game I had just played yesterday Final Fantasy X. ^•^

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Re: ~ From Past To The Future ~
« Reply #8 on: January 20, 2013, 10:54:31 AM »
@Correnereyes : I dunno~~ maybe---  :hehehe:
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@negi08 : Yes it is  :hee: Hope you like it~ You have to play FX-2 too then  :)
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@TTLuver497 -san: Aaa really? Thank you! 39 39~ sankyuuu  :kneelbow:

Here is the chapter 2








From Past to The Future
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Chapter 2 : A thousand years in The future




A bird's eye view of a large structure is shown. The sky is dark. Jurina is on the ground, and he wakes up and slowly gets up. He looks around in that place and started yelling. Hoping someone is in there.

“Anybody there??????” He asked, but no one replied. “Mayuu?” he calls for Mayu, but still no one answered. “Heeyyyy!!!!!” He yells

Jurina looks up. A bird flies away, towards the large structure. Jurina try to swims towards it, then finally reaches it. He walks along a stone structure and looks at the water below. All of a sudden, it breaks. He looks around the watery area. He descends into the water. Suddenly, a group of fish surround him, and he's forced to fight them.

“What the?!” Jurina a little shocked when he saw that toothy fishes, “I guess it’s time to fight then!” He takes his sword (that Mayu has given to him), then started to fight. He sliced the first one into two pieces, then he tries to do the same thing to the other one, but the fish managed to avoided his attack and bites Jurina.

“Ouch!!” He screamed in pain and try to take some air, then dives into the water again, “You will pay for this! You just woke up the big tiger!!”  The mad Jurina kills off two of them, so only one remains.
“Gotcha! You can’t run away from me!” when Jurina was about to knock it down,  A massive fish creature approaches them, knocking over some stones along the way.

“Heck, AGAIN?!” Jurina thought. Then he dives out of the way, as the big fish gulps the little fish. The big fish sees him. And the big fish began to approaches him. “You gave me NO CHOICES!” then he started to fight ‘again’.

Jurina tried to swing his sword to that BIG fish. He missed, the fish ready to take a revenge attack. He makes Jurina wounded. When he was pushed by that fish, he tried to looks around, and sees a gap he can swim into. He begins to swim to the opening as quickly as possible, as the fish gains on him. The fish nearly has him entirely in its mouth as Jurina averts disaster.

Jurina, flung through the gap into another section of the building, lands safely into a thin layer of water. Several stones from above collapse and block the passage. Then he stands up

"I had made it out of the frying pan...and into the freezer."  Jurina thought.

He enters another section of the building. It's huge, and entirely empty. He looks around again

“It’s so cold….. I-I need fire----“

Jurina finds somewhere he can make a fire "The remains of a campfire. With flint and tinder, I could start another fire here." He finds the necessary flint and tinder and the fire is made. He warms his hands above the fire, and then lies down, looking up at the high dome ceiling. Then he heard a strange sound comes out from his stomach "I need food! Aaahh!"


[FLASHBACK]

"What do you want?" asked jurina

"It was a bad call, Your team lost because of you." Mayu said emotionlessly

"You just came to say THAT?" said Jurina with ‘WTF’ face

"Tsk, It's been...ten years." Mayu smirks “I thought you'd be crying. Hahahahahaha"

"Who, me?!"

The mysterious short person from Zanarkand comes--

"You cried." Said the mysterious person


[FLASHBACK ENDS]


Jurina is sitting down as the fire withers and dies. There is something running along the wall of the Ruins. Jurina falling asleep, quickly wakes up and looks around. He looks at the dying fire. "Hey, wait! Wait! Don't go out on me!" He said try to save the dying fire. “Just hold on. I'll get more wood!"

Jurina looks around he sees the big bug on the wall. The large insect runs around the walls, and then jumps down, face to face with Jurina. “Whoaaaaaa!!!” he tried to reach his sword and fights again.
Partway through the battle, one of the ruins' doors blasts open. A group of people walk through, holding guns, led by a strangely-dressed girl with goggles. The fight continues, and ‘who the heck is the girl that fighting on his side?’
The girl is quite strong, she throw a grenade  to that insect

"You on my side? Cool!" said Jurina

The creature eventually dies.    Jurina comes face to face with the strangely-dressed girl. She lifts her visor/goggles. Jurina stares with his mouth open for a moment, before breathing a sigh of relief
 
"Whew! That was close!" Jurina said in relief
Someone walks up behind Jurina and grabs his hair
"Hey, lemme go!"

Several more people surround Jurina and point guns at him, "Fryd ec drec?"  ("What is this?") A guy asked
"Y fiend! Eh risyh teckieca!"  ("A fiend! In human disguise!") another guy said

One of them pulls a knife and holds it in front of Jurina's throat "Oac! Ed ec cu!" ("Yes! It is so!")

"Fa gemm ed?" ("We kill it?")

"Fyed!" ("Wait!") the strange girl speaks up, "Fryd ev ed ec risyh?" ("What if it is human?") said that girl again.

"Drao yna dra cysa eh taydr!" ("They are the same in death!") The person with the knife points it at the girl

"E vunpet ed! Fa pnehk ed fedr ic!" ("I forbid it! We bring it with us!") said the girl
Then She walks up to Jurina "Cunno." ("Sorry.") said the girl

She knees Jurina in the stomach. He falls unconscious


-In a large boat-

A large boat is floating on an ocean which spans as far as the eye can see. Jurina wakes up. He's surrounded by the people from earlier. One of them turns around and sees he woke up

"Ced, lybdeja!" ("Sit, captive!") said one of the guys then he hits Jurina who falls back "Hey, that hurts!" said Jurina

"Hu sujehk, rayn?" ("No moving, hear?") the guy said readies to give another punch to Jurina "Whoa... Okay okay.." Said Jurina

Two more people approach him. The girl from earlier, and a guy with a blonde Mohawk "Caynlr res!" ("Search him!") He begins to do alot of actions with his arms to signify swimming, all the while grunting

"Right. Whatever…" Said Jurina

"Tu oui hud cbayg?" ("Do you not speak?") He shows Jurina a necklace of some sort and points to it, grunting once more

"I said I don't understand!" said Jurina

"Ehcumahla!" ("Insolence!")

One of the Al Bhed points his gun at Jurina's chest. The girl speaks up again "Fyed!" ("Wait!") the girl said, "He said you can stay if you make yourself useful."

"You...You understand me?" Asked Jurina. He gets hit in the back by one of the guy's guns "All right, I'll work!"

Then Jurina approaches the girl "Oh, almost forgot!" Jurina walks over to the side of the boat

"What's this? Some kind of crane?" asked Jurina. The mohawk guy yells at him "Rao, oui! Kad yfyo vnus drana!" ("Hey, you! Get away from there!")

"Okay, okay!! You don't have to shout!" said Jurina. He returns to that girl

"We found some ancient ruins right beneath us."  Said the girl "It's not active now, but there should still be some power left…. We're gonna go down there and activate it..."  she paused, "and then we should be able to salvage the big prize! Let's get to work!"

"Roger!" Jurina said in agreement

They jump over the side of the boat, into the water. They make their way to the underwater ruins. They travel through the ruins, powering up certain devices as they go along. It's not long before we see that they're not the only ones in the Underwater ruins...they return to where they began, and they meets a monster (again) that’s kinda like an octopus.

“Hell, AGAIN?!” said Jurina.
“What?” the girl look at him. “It just a fiend!”
“Yeah.. Just ‘a’ fiend she said”  Jurina thoughts “There are so many things that I don’t know about this place.. Where the heck am I?”

“Heyy, don’t just stand there! Come here and help me beats this thing!”said the girl still fighting with that creature. “You said it’s just a fiend! I thought you could do it alone!” said Jurina

“Okay okay! Follow my instruction!” said the girl. “You, Attack this creature, I will swim to the other side and attack this thing with a grenade!” the girl continues,, still fighting with that creature. “Hurry up, I can’t hold it anymore!!”

“Hey, Isn’t it dangerous if you throw a grenade in the water?!” asked him, “Just do what I said! Hurry up!” the girl yelled “Wait!” Jurina swim to that creature and replace that girl’s position to fight that thing. Just doing what that girl said. And that girl began to swim to the other side, then give Jurina a sign to avoid that creature and throws the grenade.

“Wow, cool”
“Like just I said! My plan is always working!” said the girl. They leave the Underwater ruins and return to the ship

"Fa vuiht dra airship!" ("We found the airship!")
"Dra naluntc fana nekrd." ("The records were right.")

Jurina  jumps back on board, and shakes the water off of him. Some of the Al Bhed are speaking, and begin to walk to the door leading into the boat.

"Huf, ruf du tnyk ed ib?" ("Now, how to drag it up?")

Jurina follows the people. One of them turns to speak to him "Oui, uidceta!" ("You, outside!") He hits Jurina. Jurina steps back.

"Hey, I helped out, didn't I?" said Jurina. The people enter the ship, as the door closes behind them.

-8 minutes later-

On the deck of the boat, Jurina is lying down, then he heard that strange voice came from his stomach again "Uhh...hungry."

Someone approaches and kicks him in the shoulder. It's the girl from before she's carrying a plate of food. She puts the tray on the floor for him. "Whoa! Right on!"

He scarfs down the food so fast that he begins to choke. The girl goes "Hey!" and tosses him a jug of water. He opens it and drinks, concluding in a relieved sigh.

"It's 'cause you eat too fast!" said the girl. Jurina stands up, laughs, moves around, and stretches. The girl walks up behind him

"Hey!" 
"Hello there. What is your name?"

"Hmmm…. Why you asked?"
"Whoa! You really do understand!" Jurina  goes "Woo hoo!" and laughs
“Okay okay.. It’s Minegishi Minami” said the girl
"Why didn't you say so earlier?" said Jurina
"I didn't get a chance to!" said the girl, "Everyone thought ‘oui’ were a fiend." Minami said looking down. "Uh..."we"?" Jurina said confused

"Oh, ‘oui’ means ‘you’." She said. Jurina pauses then spoke again "Who are you guys, anyway?"

"We're Al Bhed. Can't you tell?" said Minami. "Wait. You're not an Al Bhed-hater, are you?" she asked "I don't even know what an Al Bhed is." Jurina answers

"Where are you from?"
"Zanarkand." He smiling pridefully  "I'm a blitzball player. Star player of the Zanarkand Abes!" Jurina said out loud

"Did you hit your head or something?" said Minami
"Um, you guys hit me." Said Jurina. Minami laughed and apologized for what just she and her friend did to Jurina “Ahahahahhahahah sorry about that” Minami tries to stop then asked him again, "Oh, right... Do you remember anything before that?"

"So I told her everything there was to tell about Zanarkand..."
"About life there, blitzball, and Sin's attack..."
"and about how Mayu and I were engulfed in this light."
"I just said things as they came to mind. But then I started to wonder."


Minami looks solemn. And Jurina turns to her "Did I say something funny?" Jurina asked
"You were near Sin." She said "Don't worry, you'll be better in no time. They say your head gets funny when Sin is near.” She looks at Jurina “Maybe you just had some kind of dream?"

"You mean I'm sick?" asked Jurina. "Because of Sin's toxin, hell yeah." Answer the girl

"You sure?"
"Yeah, there is no Zanarkand anymore. Sin destroyed it a thousand years ago."
"So...no one plays blitzball there." Said Minami

Jurina is visibly surprised. He turns to look at her

"What do you mean, a thousand years ago?" Jurina said still surprised "But I saw Sin attack Zanarkand!" he pointed "You're saying that happened a thousand years ago? No way!" Jurina yells

"You said...You play blitzball?" Jurina goes "Uh huh"
"You know, you should go to Luca."
"Someone might know who you are, or you might find someone you recognize."

"Luca?” He said. Minami shakes her head, walks around a bit, then returns to Jurina and taps him on his back

"Okay, leave it to me! I'll get you to Luca, promise!" said Minami, "You'd rather stay here?" she continues. Jurina says "Uh uh"
"Okay, I'll go tell the others. Wait here." she begins to leave, then turns around
"Oh, and one thing."
“What is it?” said Jurina "Don't tell anyone you're from Zanarkand, okay? Yevon says it's a holy place. You might upset someone." She said again

Jurina mutters "Oh...uh okay", and then leans on the railing.

It goes black

"My Zanarkand, some kind of holy place? Yeah right, I thought."
"Since when?"
"Yevon? Sin? Luca?"
"I thought Sin just took me to a faraway place, that I could go back in a day or two."
"But a thousand years into the future?"
"No way!"


Jurina kicks the crane area and falls, a loud rumble is heard, and the ship shakes. In the distance, something blasts out of the water. The door opens people run onto the deck and fall down. Something in the water approaches the ship.

"Sin!" said the one of the guys "Sin ec lusa!" ("Sin is come!")

"Ihtan ic! Ihtan ic!" ("Under us! Under us!")

“AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” Jurina falls overboard and gets sucked into a whirlpool. It goes black again


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Re: -From Past To The Future- Chapter 2: A Thousand years in the Future
« Reply #11 on: January 23, 2013, 05:18:15 AM »
Totally FFX to the core

Miichan as an Al-bhed? That catches my interest.

I wonder who shall appear in this fic :roll:
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Re: -From Past To The Future- Chapter 2: A Thousand years in the Future
« Reply #12 on: January 23, 2013, 06:12:50 AM »
yep yep yep, totally /credits to; Final fantasy X\ ( ̄︶ ̄)> <( ̄︶ ̄)/ (‵﹏′) ╮(‵▽′)╭

there will be a (or more) Ronso too :)

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« Reply #13 on: January 23, 2013, 06:41:04 PM »
So here I wonder who will be the YUNA, lol. Miichan seems like perfect choice as Rikku. Kinda surprised you had Mayuyu as Auron, though  :nervous
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« Reply #14 on: January 26, 2013, 03:54:39 AM »
@Yuki88-san : I think you wont be suprised about Yuna  :smoke:  Miichan and Rikku both are playful character so... yeah  :nervous and sorry for making Mayu-chan an old man  :on lol:
I already drew their version of Final Fantasy in anyways :sweat:

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Re: -From Past To The Future- Chapter 2: A Thousand years in the Future
« Reply #15 on: January 27, 2013, 05:26:49 PM »
Hi, I'm new here. I found your fic hehe! Totally FFX. I remember playing the game way way back. Reading your story made me remember the dialogue hehe!

Anyhoo, is this WMatsui? If it is, it kinda makes sense considering in real life Rena's ideal is Tidus, so we can pass it of as her being Yuna hehe! It would be really interesting who will be Wakka and Lulu since they end up together. Atsumina, Saeyuki maybe? Would that fit? Oh well, looks like I'll just have to wait til they get to Besaid.

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« Reply #16 on: February 10, 2013, 02:12:03 PM »
From Past to The Future


Chapter 3: Besaid – Blitzball – and Summoner

Jurina is  floating face down in some water. He wakes up, looking around, “What the.. where am I again..?” then he tries to call for Minami

"Mina--- Ouch! What the hell is that!” He said rubbing his head and turns back. He gets hit in the head by a blitzball. He looks at the shore, where several people are gathered "Blitzball!"

"Hey! You okay?" Asked a guy with blonde hair to him

"Heeey!" Jurina goes under water, hits the ball into the air with his head, and once in the air, does a double-legged bicycle kick. The person on the beach with blonde hair narrowly avoids the ball hitting his head.

"Whoa whoaa!" said the blonde haired guy surprised.

He looks at Jurina, smirks, and smiles. Jurina approaches the group on the beach. Two people turn away from the one who spoke before and leave. The person turns around and his mouth opens in surprise. Him and his posse surround Jurina

"Yo! Hi there!” said Jurina
"Y-you wanna try that move one more time?" Asked the blonde haired guy

"Finally, things were starting to look up."

A blitzball is thrown into the air. The group steps back. The blitzball bounces off of Jurina’s forehead, he then proceeds to bicycle kick it at an incredible speed into the water. Everyone gasps.

"You're no amateur. Who you play for?" asked the blonde haired guy
"The Zanarkand Abes!" said Jurina

Everyone gasps and talks amongst each other

"What team you say again?" the guy asked again
"Uh, I meant... Forget that." Said Jurina. "I got too, uh...close to Sin and my head's all foggy-like. So I don't know where this place is. Or even where I came from….. well you know!"

"Sin's toxin got to you. But, you're still alive." Said the blonde haired guy "Praise be to Yevon!" he continues.

Everyone does this gesture right forearm over left forearm, fingers spread out, hands curved in the shape of a circle, and bow. It's the exact same gesture the kids did to Jurina back in Zanarkand at the start of the game. It'll be known henceforth as the "prayer gesture"

"All right, back to practice!" said The blonde haired guy
"I'm Kai, Takahashi Kai. Coach and captain of the Besaid Aurochs, brudda."
“Whoaa that’s nice!” said Jurina “Even I don’t know what team is this…” he thoughts.

Jurina’s stomach growls

"What? You hungry?" asked Kai "Okay! Back to the village. I'll get you somethin' for ya!"

"I felt like I could trust this Kai, so I just had to ask." Jurina thought
"Hey!” Jurina calls for Kai, and he turns back “It's true Zanarkand was destroyed, right? A thousand years ago?"
"So it's just a big pile of rubble now, isn't it?"

"Long time ago, there were a whole lot of cities in Spira. Big cities with machina--machines--to run 'em." Kai said "People played all day and let the machina do the work. And then, well, take a look." He continues
"Sin came, and destroyed the machina cities. And Zanarkand along with 'em."
"Yeah, that was about a thousand years ago, just like you said. If you ask me, Sin's our punishment for letting things get out of hand. What gets me, though... is we gotta suffer, 'cause of what some goofballs did way back when! Course, we must always repent for our sins! That's important! It's just that, it's hard to keep at it sometimes, you know?" he laughs

“It was just as Minami said. Kai and Minami couldn't both be lying. Why would they?"

"But you from the Zanarkand Abes--that was a good one!" Kai said looking at Jurina "Hey, I'm not saying that team never existed, ya?" he said again, "But you gotta figure a team living in luxury like that'd be pretty soft, eh?"

"I appreciated the fact that Kai is trying to cheer me up. But at that time, all I think is... everything that happened to me--all this--started with Sin. Maybe if I could find Sin one more time, I could go home! For now, I'd just live life until that time came. No more worrying about where, or when, I was. Sure it was hard not to think of home. But I started to feel better already. A little better...maybe."


"Hey! It's this way!" Kai said. Jurina follows him

Kai runs and Jurina still follows him. He eventually approaches Kai, as the two of them stand over a ledge. Below the ledge is a large body of water. Jurina looks down at the water, while Kai stealthily moves behind him

"Huh?" Jurina said looks at his back. Kai pushes him with one arm. “Heyyy!” Jurina falls and goes "Waaah", landing with a splash. Kai, jumped there, dives into the water after Jurina

"What's the big idea?" said Jurina

Jurina and Kai make their way through the water. At one part, Kai goes up behind Jurina and gets him in a headlock

"Heyy, let me go! ahahahah" Jurina yells at Kai that started to tickle him "Got a favor to ask ya."

"You want me on your team, right?" Jurina asked . Kai let go of Jurina sinks, then surfaces again

"A major blitz tournament's coming up. All the teams in Spira'll be there! It's so huge, I'm sure someone there will recognize you! Then you can go back to your old team, right? It'll be fun! What do you say, huh? Come on, come on!" said Kai

Jurina solemnly floats, looking at the guy "Sure thing." He said then swims away

"Dude! Our team is gonna rock, eh?" said Kai and swims after him.

"I thought then that blitzball and Sin were the only things that Spira and Zanarkand had in common. I wasn't too far off, either." Jurina thought

Jurina, now on solid ground, walks to the edge of a cliff with Kai. Below the cliff, in the distance, is a village

"This is where I was born. I started blitz when I was five. I joined the Aurochs at thirteen...ten years ago. Ten years...and we never won a game…. Well, after last year's tournament, I quit. Time seemed right.” Kai said a little disappointed
Kai walks to the village. Jurina' stomach growls, and he follows him

"So, after quitting, I got this new job, ya? But every time my mind wandered, I thought about the game." Kai said

"Ten years without a single win'll do that." Jurina replied

"My first match last year was my big chance." Kai said “But something else was on my mind. I couldn't focus."

"Nice excuse." Said Jurina
"Hey, hey!" Kai calls for him

"So you want to win the next tournament--go out with a bang."
Jurina said to Kai, Kai nods.
"So, what's our goal?"

"I don't care how we do. Long as we play our best. If we give it our all, I can walk away happy. Seeing everyone happy is enough for me." Kai said

"No, no, no, no, no. If I say ‘What's our goal?’ you have say ‘Victory!’ When you play in a blitzball tournament, you play to win!" Jurina said and punch the air

"Victory? You serious?" said Kai “Wait, now you really sounds like the cap’n here nyaahahahahaha”
“You said that you were their coach! So you’re the cap’n huh ahahahhahaha”

They both laughs so loud and.. Jurina’s stomach grumbles again. They make their way to Kai's town, along the way, the encounter two people the two who walked away from Kai when Jurina and Kai first met.

"Ah, the one from the sea!" said the one of the guys "Be on guard. There're fiends on the road today!" said the other guy
"After surviving your run-in with Sin, it would be a shame if something happened now." The first guy continues

"Who were they?" Asked Jurina
"Gon and Mori--Crusaders." Kai said "Crews of what?" asked Jurina
"Wha--, you forgot that too?" asked Kai shocked
Jurina hangs his head, "Hey, sorry. Don't worry about it, I'll help you out." Kai said.

Jurina just lifts his head "Cool..! In return, come tournament time, I'll make sure we take the cup!"

"Cool. Anyway, About the Crusaders, you can ask them yourself. They've got a lodge in the village."

They walks again and finally, they reach the village, 

"This is my village, it called ‘Besaid Village.’" Kai said
"They got any food there?" Jurina asked. “He doesn’t listen to me at all” Kai sighed, We'll get you something over there later. Take a look around first. Let's see..."

"The Crusaders lodge is over yonder. Gon and Mori are usually there." He points at the Crusaders lodge, which is a large blue tent, is shown
"Oh, right.. Over here!"

"Huh? What's up?" asked Jurina.
"You do remember the prayer, right?"

"I-I don't remember… tehehehe" Jurina said scratches his head.  "I didn't know it in the first place, to tell the truth."

"Man, you forget that too!? *sigh* that's like the basics of the basics. Alright, I'll show you." Then he does the prayer the hand gestrues that him and his Aurochs did to Jurina on the beach when they first met
"Go ahead, you try."
“Okay” Jurina tries it. "Hey, not bad."
"Okay, now go present yourself to the temple summoner." Kai said points at the temple. Not far in front of them, "Any blitzball player would know that prayer. It was the blitzball sign for victory."

“Ahh now I get it” Jurina goes to the temple. Several people are inside, praying to statues. Jurina looks around

"It was then, standing in that place. I began to realize how different this world was from my own."

Jurina approach a statue of a man, clad in a robe and holding a staff. A man approaches Jurina

"Ten years have passed since Lord Braska became high summoner. And finally we received a statue for our temple." Said that man

"What's a high summoner?" asked Jurina. Everyone gasps when they hear it.
"I...I got too close to Sin's, uh, toxin." He said acting like an idiot person. "It was funny hearing myself make the same excuse over and over. Funny, and a little sad."

“oh.. praised to the Yevon! And you’re still alive!” hearing that words comes out from that man just make Jurina  gave him a forced smile, really looks like that he already forgets almost everything from that ‘toxin’.
“Okay, let me explain. The summoners are practitioners of a sacred art, sworn to protect the people of Yevon. Only a chosen few become summoners, who call forth entities of great power: the aeons. The aeons hear our prayers and come down to us. They are the blessing of Yevon."

"So what he meant... was that we should respect some kinda great man or something like that...I figured."

After do the praying, Jurina heading back to Kai’s hut,
"Oh Jurina! Already do the pray?” asked KaI. Jurina goes “Uh-huh”
“That was fast! Err.. Sorry, man. No time for lunch yet. Just take a nap! You look bushed."
“Oh.. Okay”

Jurina sleeps. The man from the temple who spoke to Jurina enters the hut. Kai stands up.

"You could at least go see how they are doing." Said that man

"We can't interfere. It's a rule." Kai said

"But, it's been nearly..."

They both walk out of the hut.

Jurina has a dream/flashback- several people are gathered around on a dock, in front of a boat, in Zanarkand. They seem to be talking to a young woman

"But, it's been nearly..."

"It's been nearly a day already."

"Perhaps you could go look for us." 

"*sigh*People are searching for him now."

then A man walks away, leaving the woman alone

"Thank you."

She clasps her hands, as if in prayer. Scene changes to a young Jurina and the woman, who is, in fact, his mother

"Who cares whether he comes back or not?" said the young Jurina

"But he might die! He.. he is your father, Jurina.. "

"Fine, let him!" Jurina yells

"Do you..... Do you hate him so?" the young Jurina nods "If he dies, you'll never be able to tell him how much you hate him.." said his mother

[Ends of FLASHBACK]

Jurina wakes up in the hut, all alone

"Kai?" he couldn’t find Kai in there. Jurina returns to the temple. Kai and the man from earlier are there

"Kai!” Jurina said approaches him, “Is something wrong?"
"*Sigh* The summoner hasn't returned from the trial." Kai said. He looks a little depressed
"Eh?"
"Well, apprentice summoner, really..." 
"Ah?"

"What the-- There's a room in there called the Cloister of Trials. Beyond is where the apprentice summoner prays. If the prayer is heard, the apprentice becomes a fully-fledged summoner, remember?" Kai explains "So someone is in there somewhere and they haven't come back out. Right, I got it." Said Jurina

"A day's already gone by..." Kai said
"Is it particularly dangerous in there?" Jurina asked
"Sometimes, yes.."
“HUH? Hey,  Why don't you go in and help?" he asked again “There's already guardians in there. Besides, it's forbidden."

“Gezz..” Jurina runs partway up the staircase that leads to the door to the Cloister of Trials, "Hey, but what if somethin' happens? What if the summoner dies!?"

"The precepts must be obeyed!"
"Like I care!"

“WHA- wait, JURINA!”

Jurina runs up the rest of the stairs and enters the door. The people in the temple gasp

“Maybe this wasn't such a good idea after all”.

Jurina makes his way through the Cloister of Trials. Kai eventually meets up with him

"Hey! What's gotten into you?!"
"Hey, it's okay. Only summoners, apprentice summoners, and their guardians can enter here. It's a tradition. Very important." Kai said

"So what about you?" Jurina said crosses his arms
"Hell, Me? I'm a guardian." Kai said pridefully. "hmm… a guardian?"
“Follow me” Kai takes hold on Jurina’s hand, and take him with he. They Standing on a stone platform elevator of sorts, they begin moving downwards


"Summoners go on a pilgrimage to pray at every temple in Spira. Guardians protect them. The guardians in there now... One of them's got a short fuse, and who knows what the other's thinking. Well, now that we've come this far... might as well go all the way!"

They walk into a room. There are two other people there: one, a woman with black short hair wearing a black dress (and big oppai) the other, a tall beast. The woman is the only one of the two who speaks

"What are you doing here? Didn't think we'd be able to handle it?" said that woman

"No, it's uh...it's just..." Kai turns to Jurina "See, I told you she gets mad easy." He whispers 

"Is the summoner all right?" Jurina asked

"Wait.. who are you?" asked the woman

Jurina, Kai, the woman and the beast stand in front of a large doorway. It opens up, and the apprentice summoner wanders out. She begins to tumble. Everyone gasps. The beast races forward and catches her, while growling. The apprentice summoner fixes her raven hair and stands up straight.

"I-I've done it. I have become a summoner!" said the summoner gives a bright smile

“Wha—“ Jurina said with his jaws opened. He was about to droll. “Hey, snap out!” Kai said, the woman goes “Tsk” while the beast just stay silence.
They back in the first room of the temple, several people surround the summoner and her guardians.

"Man, was I surprised. And here I was thinking summoners were all old geezers… but this one is too--- Adorable" Jurina said looking to that Summoner. Then he runs out of the temple

"Jurina, over here!" Kai said waved at Jurina.

Kai takes hold of Jurina and drags him towards a circle that the summoner and her female guardian are standing in. They join a group of people standing around the circle. The guardian steps out of the circle and joins them

"What? Ow!"
"Wait till you see this!"
"See what?! I can’t see anything!"

"Ready!" Kai said

"Okay."


The summoner performs a series of motions and gestures. The aeon is summoned; a large multi-coloured bird-like creature. It descends; the summoner strokes its neck. Everyone is pleased. Kai and the female guardian enter the circle to congratulate the summoner

"I had never seen anything like it in my life. Sure, it was a little scary, but still... I could feel a strange kind of gentleness coming from it." Jurina thoughts “But truly that girl is way to beautifu~l”

“Valefor, my.. my first aeon! Said the summoner girl smiling


-Nighttime-

 Jurina and Kai are standing in front of the rest of the Besaid Aurochs

"Let me introduce you to the team. This guy here wants into the tournament so bad, I let him on the team. His memory's a little (so) fuzzy, so don't mind him if he says anything odd Hahahahaha, Come on, say hi."

Jurina steps forward, and scratches the back of his head. All is silent for a few moments

"Uh... Hi, guys.. I’m Matsui Jurina"

"Matsui?" said the one of the Aurochs
"Whoaa Are you related to lady Rena??" said the other person from Aurochs
"Sugeee"

"Wait,, What?!" Jurina asked suprised

"Lady Rena's full name is Matsui Rena-sama" said the first guy from the Aurochs
"Yea, Gon was right"

"Ugh.. Is this means that she is my great grand daughter?! No WAY!"

"M-maybe it was just a coincidence ahahaha"
"Well you got a point there"
"You right, Mocchi, his face is to different than Lady Rena"

"Well.... So what is our goal?" Asked Jurina
"To do our best!" Said the Aurochs

"Nope, we got a new goal now! Our new goal...is victory!" Said Kai “To win every match, defeat every opposing team! To bring the Crystal Cup back to our island! That's all we need to do to win! Easy, ya?"

"Victory..."

The Aurochs repeatedly say, and eventually yell, "Victory" over and over. Jurina looks over at the summoner, who's sitting down talking with a few of the townspeople

"Victory! Victory! Victory!" said the Aurochs

Jurina walks over to the summoner. Three people an old man, and old woman, and a kid, each have pleasant things to say to Jurina in succession

"You heathen!"

"Stay away from the summoner!"

"You're a bad man!"

The summoner stands up

"Lady Rena! Be careful!"

"But it was really my fault to begin with." The summoner replies, then she walks over to Jurina. "I'm Rena.. Thank you so much for your help earlier." She said bows at Jurina and gives him a bright smile like before

"I-I'm sorry about that. Wasn't that... Wasn't I not supposed to... Guess I...kind of overreacted." Jurina said a little blushed

"Oh, no. I was...overconfident." said Rena

"Umm, I saw that aeon thing. That's amazing!" said Jurina

"Really? Do you think I can become high summoner?" Jurina nods. Then a kid approaches

"Lady Rena, come play with me some more!"

Rena nods, and turns back to face Jurina

“Hell I’m going to kill that kid!”

"So, tomorrow, then." Said Rena

"T-Tomorrow?" asked Jurina surprisingly "We're going on the same boat, aren't we?" Rena answered "Oh, r-really?" “OH YEAH BABY!!”

"We can talk more, You can tell me all about Zanarkand! Jaa… Matta nee" then Rena walks away. Kai walks beside Jurina and gives him a light friendly elbow in the arm

"That night, we talked for the first time. I didn't know it then, but after that night, everything changed. For everyone... For me..."

"Hohoho he's cute, ya?"

"hell.. Yeah!" he said in agreement. “hey, Rena's a fox”

"Don't get no ideas." Kai said teasingly

"No promises there, big guy." He mockingly, "Hey, but what if she, like, comes on to me?" Jurina said smirking, gives Kai a perverted sight with his hand on his chin.


"That's not going to happen.. If you get tired, let me know. I had a bed made for you."

Jurina talk for a while with the Aurochs first before going to sleep. And then he approaches Kai

"Hm? Ready for bed?"
“Umm yeaa..” he said rubbing his eyes "Good. Sleep tight."

Jurina has a dream. He's sitting on a dock, staring out at the sea. He stands up and runs across the pier, meeting Rena, who's also standing there, looking out to sea

"Where's that boat?" Jurina asked

"Everyone will find us if it doesn't come soon." Said Rena

"You really sure this is okay?" Jurina asked

"Would you take me to Zanarkand?" Rena asked back to him

“Hey!” said Minami "You said you'd go with me!"

"Wha-- Oh, hey... I, uh..."
 
"I thought Kai told you not to get any ideas?" Minami asked

"He did?" Rena asked

"Yeah, so you're coming with me!" Minami said

"Hey! Stop dreaming, Juriboy!" a figure said standing on a beach

"You with a woman? You can't even catch a ball!" Kumi (Jurina’s father) said

a young Jurina is sitting on the pier, face-down, crying

"Oh, what's the matter?" Kumi standing on the beach, with Rena and Minami standing beside him

"Gonna cry again? Cry, cry. That's the only thing you're good for!"

"I hate you." The crying Jurina said

"Huh? What'd you say?" Kumi said. young Jurina standing up on the pier, looking downwards

"You have to speak loudly." Rena said giving him some efforts

Jurina looks up "I hate you!"

"Heeh?" Kumi said in a big confusion

"That's the spirit!" Minami said

"You can do it!" Rena said


[end of the dream]

Jurina wakes up

"I hate you!" He began to quiet. "He's dead, okay? Dead!" Jurina walks to the doorway and looks outside. The female guardian is speaking to Kai

"He does look a lot like Minami. I was surprised, too, the first time I saw him.”

“W-wait.. Minami?!” Jurina suprised

“But no matter what he looks like, he isn't Takamina.” Said the female guardian
“Atsuko!”
 
"You shouldn't have brought him here in the first place!" Atsuko said
"Yeah, but...he needed our help!" Kai said

"Excuses again?"

"Yeah, but..."

"That's it. No more. Enough, Kai!" Atsuko walks away. Kai signs and returns to the tent Jurina is in

"Wow.. Scary!"
"So, who's this Minami?" Jurina asked hoping that this one is not the same ‘Minami’ that he meet before

"My little brother, Takahashi Minami. He really looked like you."

"He's dead?" Asked Jurina

"He was with the Crusaders when they fought Sin last year. He didn't make it. I first heard on the day of the tournament."

"Oh, so that's why."

"I became a guardian to fight Sin, ya?"

"Oh.. so it’s a revenge, then?"

"That was the idea. I'm more worried about a stupid game now than avenging my brother. Well, after the next tournament, I'll be a guardian full-time. I know it kinda looks like I'm using you, but I'm not." Kai said. He kinda looks sad.

"Don't worry. I mean, I owe you a lot. You really helped me out, you know? What I mean is... thanks, Kai." Jurina extends his hand for a handshake. Kai lifts his hand, but pulls away

"Heyy, Stop, you're embarrassing me!" Kai said embarrassed

Resumes in the morning. Jurina exits the hut. Atsuko and Kai are talking Jurina runs up to them

"Hey! Sleepyhead! Something I want to give you!”

Kai hands Jurina a sword that is crystal blue

"Whoa! You're giving this...to me?"
"Yeah, use it well!"

"That's the sword you gave Takamina." Atsuko said looking at him
"Well, he never used it." Kai said stuck his tongue. “Where's Rena anyway?"

"We're taking the same boat as Rena, right? Why do we gotta wait here?" asked Jurina
"Rena came to this village ten years ago, when the last Calm started."

"The Calm?"

"Since then, she's been like a little sister to me and Atsuko. But she had the talent... She became an apprentice. Now, today, she leaves as a summoner."
 
"This is our journey... We should leave together." Atsuko said. Rena exits the temple with several suitcases

"W—What a… You really don't need all that luggage, Rena…"


"They're not really my things. They're gifts for the temples we're to visit." Said Rena

"This isn't a vacation, Rena." Kai said

"I guess...I guess you're right."

She leaves the luggage behind and approaches the trio

"Okay! Off we go!"

Rena takes one last look at the temple, and walks off. The four of them leave Besaid and make their way to the harbor.

“Okay, time to put this things on~” Kai said
“What was that?!”
“My special battle thingy hohohoho” Kai said laughing in horror holding that spiky metal blitzball that created for attack the fiends, and that chain.

“Somehow he looks evil when he touches that thing” Jurina thought.
 Along the way, a couple of fiends approach them.

“Okay.. some ‘fiend’” Jurina said to him self in ‘ready to fight’ mode. “You can fight right?” Kai asked holding his spiky things. “Just let this one to me!” Jurina sliced a beast in two. And tries to cut the flying one, “Hell wha—“ The flying creature success avoided Jurina’s attack.

“You’re good, but not good enough to beat that thing hahahaha. That thing is my specialist!” he said and then throws some of the chain that tied that flying creature, then trows that ball with full power. Which one makes that flying creature died in just one attack.

“Whooaa” Jurina said amazed
“Showing up eh, Kai. Usually you don’t need those chains to a small enemies like that” Atsuko smirks
“Stop it, Acchan!” Kai said blushing.

“I-I don’t wanna loose! Jurina yells. Then he tried to attack the one that looks like jelly. But he even can’t hurt that thing. “those weak to magic, give it to Atsu!” Kai said. Atsuko just smirks and use her magic to beat that Jelly-like creature.

“You have to teach me THAT!” Jurina said. Atsuko just stay silent. “She was so cold..” Jurina said whispers to Kai, Kai just give him a small laugh.

They continue the walk. And ‘again’ a fiend. But this one is a little different. This one is bigger and can fly.
“Are you going to beat that thing too, Kai?” Atsuko said smirking at him..

“Just let me do it using my new Aeon!” Rena suddenly appears from their back. Asked Acchan to let her beat this one. Acchan can’t refuse, and so she let Rena to do it. Rena summons Valefor, and it just take 2 minutes to beat that thing up.
Everyone was speechless.

After beating that fiend, they get to the cliff overlooking Besaid that Kai and Jurina were at earlier. Atsuko and Rena look at the village

"Take your time." Acchan said

"Let's get going, man!" Jurina said

"We're gonna wait." Kai said. Jurina goes "Huh?". And Rena walks in between them "Are you ready?" asked Kai to Rena

Rena nods and walks off. Atsuko follows, nods to Kai, and follows Rena

"What's going on?" Jurina approaches Kai, who's praying to a stone statue

"It's an ancient custom. People leaving the island pray here for a safe trip. Takamina didn't pray that day. Said he'd miss his boat." Kai explained

“Okay, Fine!” Jurina pray with him.

"That should do it!" Kai said

The group continues along the path of Besaid Island.  Rena's beastly guardian jumps down from several structures, landing in front of Jurina. He smashes his two fists into the ground and lets loose an incredible growl. A battle begins between the two of them. “Hell why are you attacking me?!!” Jurina Yells, but he didn’t answered, “You give me no choice!” They’re attacking each other. Seeing this things, Kai throws his ball right between Jurina and that beast as a warn.

"That's enough!"

Kai walks towards Jurina. The beast walks away,

"What's with that guy?"

Atsuko
"Akimahri Sayaka, of the Ronso tribe. He's learned the fiends' way of fighting."

"That's not what I meant!"

"He's another of Rena's guardians." Kai said. Jurina goes "huh?". Rena giggles and walks onto them.

"Sometimes we don't understand him either. Sayaka-san doesn't talk much anyway." Rena said. Kai says an exclamatory "hmm"
"But he has protected me since I was a child!" Jurina says an inquisitive "hmm"

“I have to be careful—ahahaha” Jurina said to himself

They make their way to the beach more specifically, the harbour, to where the boat is. As the boat leaves, Rena watches the dock, where people are gathered, sad to see that she's going. They wave and cry she does a couple of prayer gestures

"Goodbye." Rena said waving to the prayer


The boat leaves, and heads for Kilika Port




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Offline Ricchan_Sawa

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Re: -From Past To The Future- Chapter 3: Besaid – Blitzball – and Summoner
« Reply #17 on: February 10, 2013, 04:23:25 PM »
@hikari_043083 -san: Aaa so you also plays the game ararara.... you're right anyways, it's wMatsui wwwwwww
and guess what, you got an Al-Bhed Primer XI (English: G 、Al-Bhed: K) LOL xD
sankyuu for reading ;bows;

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Re: -From Past To The Future- Chapter 3: Besaid – Blitzball – and Summoner
« Reply #18 on: February 10, 2013, 05:32:11 PM »
LOL AKIMAHRI Sayaka!! I did think she was a pefect choice for Kimahri LOL xD

As for Wakka x Lulu, I think SaeYuki fits better, but that probably just me xD
Sae the athletic guy and Yukirin the yandere woman 8D *is shot by Yukirin-oshi*

So.... hmm i can't remember other characters other than Seymour lol. Can't wait till you reveal everyone :3
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Re: -From Past To The Future- Chapter 3: Besaid – Blitzball – and Summoner
« Reply #19 on: February 10, 2013, 05:46:33 PM »
@Yuki88 -san: Akimahri hell yea XD

for yuki and sae, you will meet them in kilika~ #uppsy.. (seals my mouth)

I dunno why did I choose AtsuMina anyways @@

and please don't hate me when you know who Seymour is <(_ _)>

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