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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #180 on: May 11, 2013, 08:30:28 AM »
Thank you for giving me the answer :on drink:
Mayu touch Black's breast and thought it's big :on spit:
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“Black always brings her identity card with her. That’s all I can tell you.” Said Rena. She thought it was impossible for Mayuyu to take Black’s wallet from Black.
Rena was totally wrong :on lol: Mayu is Nezumi, after all :wahaha:
And she has known Black's name after took Black's wallet successfull :kekeke:
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A tall woman is watching at the beautiful scenery in front her eyes through the window.

Then she felt a pair of arms around her waist.
She smiles and turned around to look at the other person.
They both smiles to each other.
The she look out at the window again.

“I miss them.” Said the tall girl giving a sad smile.
Who're they? :dunno:
And who's that Kenzo guy? :on shady:
His father want to bring down that Watanabe then it's mean Mayu'll be involved in this :stoned:
But maybe Black'll protect her :hehehe:
Can't wait to see what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #181 on: May 11, 2013, 09:47:25 AM »
LOL!!!

Is too easy for mayu tdn rtealing black wallet! LOL


I bet it is haruna and yuko,the taller girl is haruna right?

Kenzo and his father,hmmm~

Rena and jurina start to know each other yay~



Mayuyu yukirin mayuyu yukirin B! B! B! Whashoi! Yeah









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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #182 on: May 11, 2013, 10:08:58 AM »
Ah... Mayu accidentally touching Yuki's breasts....  :lol: Both are so embarrass...  :sweatdrop:

Yeah... Jurina is so HAPPY  :wub: that she has Rena as her sister now...

Would the relationship develop from sisterly to lover?

Would Rena be able to prevent someone from going after Jurina?

The tall girl is Haruna right? With who.. Her lover is Yuko, isn't it?

Why did she need to leave Minami and Miichan...?

Can't wait to find out about Minami's past?

Kenzo... who is this person...? He was just release from jail... Kenzo and his father want to destroy Watanabe family .... Why?

He already has someone to help him.... I think it's Sae...

Would Black be able to protect Mayu?

And would Mayu and her father able to protect themselves from getting ruin?

Wah... Mayu is on a mission to steal Black's wallet... just because she wanted to know Black's real identity...

Ah... Nezumi is really good at stealing....

What Nezumi going to do with knowing Yuki's name?

What's Black going to do knowing that Mayu able to steal her wallet?

How about Miichan and Mariko's relationship? Would they get together?

What's going to happen next to everyone....?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #183 on: May 11, 2013, 11:43:50 AM »
MY SUNSHINE IS BACK!! WOW! WOOHOO WMATSUI! ARE THEY DATING?
MAYU KNOW BLACK REAL NAME!! YUKIRIN!!




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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #184 on: May 11, 2013, 01:04:12 PM »
kawaiii~
lol, nezumi is a pick pocket type character to begin with...
been some time since i read this~
all 3 are 'high school classmates'
i wonder if anyone has seen thriugh tje lie
minus those that arre related

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #185 on: May 11, 2013, 05:49:48 PM »
yeyyyy!
WMatsui sister are finally getting back together again
and nezumi pick pocket is always the best
i want to be her student

anyway nice update :thumbsup
it really shine my day now

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #186 on: May 12, 2013, 04:34:03 PM »
Sorry, I had miss a chapter again :kneelbow:  :mon slapself: :mon curtain:

Recently, I have been busy with my school stuff, thus I always read what the email that had notification about the updates and just went off.. hehe  :mon sweat:

Mayu, you are so pervert..haha..  :hiakhiakhiak:
and also well done to steal black's wallet and figure out her real name  :on lol:

WMatsui moment  :luvluv1:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 16 update 11/05/13
« Reply #187 on: May 14, 2013, 11:34:30 AM »
~You are My Sunshine Chapter 16~

~Ah! Finally an update! [I’m so happy]

~I am so happy WMatsui is together now...

~What will Wise Mayu going to do now that she knows Black real name?

~I can’t wait for the next chapter!

~Thanks :D

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #188 on: May 15, 2013, 12:47:20 PM »
Chapter 17


“Kashiwagi Yuki…” mumbled Mayuyu while smirking.
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“Ne…Rena-chan…”
“Hm? What is it Jurina?” said Rena while sitting next to Jurina on a bench.
“How are mom and dad died?” Asked Jurina looking at her sister. Even though Rena told her that their parent passed away but Rena did not tell her the reason of their death. Jurina was curious.
Rena was startled by the question. She was thinking for a while before answering to Jurina’s question.

‘Should I tell her the truth?’ thought Rena.
‘But it might hurt her…’ thought her again.
‘I don’t want her to be sad.’

“Rena-chan~” said Jurina seeing Rena spacing out.
“Hmm…Mom and dad died in an accident...on their way home.” Lied Rena looking down on the ground.
“I see…” whispered Jurina. She felt sad that she doesn’t have a chance to see or talk to her real parent. She even doesn’t remember anything about them…how they look like.
Seeing Jurina sad expression, Rena takes both her hand and hold them tightly.
“Jurina, don’t be sad okay? I promised from now on I’ll be your mom, dad and sister! I will take care of you~” said Rena smiling to Jurina.
Jurina smiles back to Rena.
“Thank you Rena-chan! “Said Jurina while hug her sister.


“Ermm...Rena-chan…can I ask you one more thing?” Asked Jurina.
“Yes?”
“W-why you don’t want me to live with you?” Asked Jurina looking at her in the eyes.
Rena looks at her.
“How about we buy a drink? You must be thirsty right? Come on~” said Rena didn’t answered Jurina’s question or trying to avoid it.
“Un.” Jurina just nodded and thinking maybe Rena is not ready yet to bring her to live with her.
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Acchan and Takamina were having a lunch at a restaurant since Takamina was so hungry.
Acchan giggled seeing Takamina eat like she haven’t eat for a weeks.

Acchan suddenly saw a man wearing black glasses outside the restaurant looking at Takamina.
‘Who is that?’ thought Acchan.
The man looks like he was looking at Takamina like he knows her.
But the way his eyes full of anger when he took off his glasses. It makes Acchan curious.
Then he looks at Acchan for a while and walks away like nothing happen.
‘Maybe he got wrong person.’ Thought Acchan again shrugged her shoulders
and turn her head to Minami who was busy with her foods.

“Slow down Minami~ the food is not running away from you~~” said Acchan looking at Minami who’s still munching her food.
“But it’s delicious! It’s my favorite!”Replied Minami with her mouth full.
“Don’t talks while your mouth full!” Said Acchan.
Then Takamina choked her food.
“See?! Now you’re choking!” said Acchan mad while giving a glass of water to her then patted her back.

~.~

They got out from the restaurant.

Acchan was holding Takamina’s hand and Takamina’s still pouting.
Acchan saw Takamina pout cutely because Acchan was mad at her just now.
Actually Acchan was just acting.

Then Acchan bent down the same level to Takamina’s eyes.
“Are you mad at me?” Asked Acchan seeing Takamina still silent and looking down pouting.
Takamina shakes her head saying no.
“Then what’s wrong?” Asked Acchan again.

“Acchan is mad at me…” mumbled Takamina.
Acchan sigh when she heard it but it’s cute.
“Noo…I’m not mad at you~” said Acchan smiling.
“R-really?” Asked Takamina looking at Acchan in front of her.

Acchan nodded.

“Now let’s put your best smile~ and let’s go to Miichan’s bakery!” said Acchan pinching Takamina’s cheeks to make her smile and then take her hand walking to Miichan’s bakery.
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At Miichan’s bakery

Miichan was having a break at her room at the back.
“Miichaaaan!” shout Takamina entering the room with Acchan.
“Hey~” said Miichan sitting lazily at her chair.
“Miichan, I have something to ask you…about Takamina.” Said Acchan looking at Miichan.
“Owh, have a sit then. What is it?” Asked Miichan.
Acchan took a chair and sit across Miichan while Takamina is playing with Miichan’s psp.

“What did Takamina do when she’s still normal? I mean before she’s like that…what is her job?” Asked Acchan curious.
Miichan close her eyes and took a deep breath before answering to the question.
“Well…since Mariko told me everything so I guess its fine if I tell you…” said Miichan.
“Actually…Takamina is a mafia.” Said Miichan making Acchan shocked.
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“Just kidding~ hehe~” said Miichan playfully.

Acchan frown.

“Sorry~ sorry~ I’ll be serious now.” Apologized Miichan.
“Takamina is a secret agent…along with me…and Haruna.”Said Miichan with serious expression.
“Secret Agent? Who is Haruna?” Asked Acchan.
“Yeah…Haruna is our friend…We’re called No3b. But when we’re in disguise, we’re Persona. We’re not working with cops, we have our own private company. We do what we like~ But it was all before…” Explain Miichan.

“Owh…”

“After Takamina’s incident that made her like that…we have stopped doing this kind of things.” Added Miichan.
“How about Takamina’s incident?” Asked Acchan again.
“Hmmmm…about that…she just got into some accident...” said Miichan.
“Where is Haruna?” Asked Acchan.
“I don’t know…she just left us without leaving any note or something. And Takamina really loves Haruna.” Said Miichan smirked.

“L-love?”Said Acchan.

“Are you jealous? Don’t worry she loves her like a sister only~ hehe~” said Miichan making Acchan blushed.
“Owh by the way Acchan, please take good care of Takamina and don’t let her go around any strangers that looks suspicious. Okay?” Said Miichan serious.

“I will.” Replied Acchan.
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*Mayuyu is still in the bathroom
“I need to put this back into her pocket without her knowing it.” Said Mayuyu while putting the wallet into her pocket.
Mayuyu told Black to walk through the crowded again so that she can put the wallet back into Black’s pocket.
Black walk followed by Mayuyu behind her.
As Mayuyu was putting the wallet into Black’s jacket, suddenly Black look behind and saw Mayuyu’s hand still holding the her wallet.
Mayuyu saw Black glaring at her.
“A-ah…I saw it was about to fall so I…hehehe~” said Mayuyu smiling then walk fast leaving Black in the crowd to avoid her black glare.

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“What did you do?” Asked Black to Mayuyu who was walking ahead.
“Do what?” Replied Mayuyu without looking back.
“I saw you holding my wallet.” Said Black.
“I was just trying to put it into your pocket since it was about to…fall.” Explain Mayuyu with her cyborg face.
“Nezumi…looks like you forgot to put my identity card back into its place.” Said Black gritted her teeth while taking out her wallet and showing it to Mayuyu.
“Oooppss~” Said Mayuyu in a low voice knowing that she makes a mistake and looks like black was really mad about it.

“You’ve gone too far, Nezumi.”
Black was mad walking away from Mayuyu without saying anything.
Mayuyu just watch her walking with a blank face.

‘She will come back eventually.’ Thought Mayuyu while also started walking the other way but she bumps into…


Sae.

“Mayuyu!” Shout Sae smiles.
Mayuyu with a cold face saying, “What do you want?”
“You!” Replied Sae with her charming smile.
“Whatever~” said Mayuyu.
“Come on Mayuyu! Let’s be friend! Looks like your bodyguard is leaving you~” Sae say putting her right arm around Mayuyu.

‘I guess it’s fine if I had fun with her~’ said Mayuyu to herself.

“Fine~” Replied Mayuyu.
“Then let’s go!” said Sae smirking.


‘Gotcha!’ said Sae in her mind.


T.B.C~


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Would the relationship develop from sisterly to lover?
Maybe~  :bigdeal:
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Would Rena be able to prevent someone from going after Jurina?
Maybe~  :bigdeal:
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The tall girl is Haruna right? With who.. Her lover is Yuko, isn't it?
Yes~  :glasses:
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Why did she need to leave Minami and Miichan...?
I don't know~ :P
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Can't wait to find out about Minami's past?
I can't wait too!  XD
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Kenzo... who is this person...? He was just release from jail... Kenzo and his father want to destroy Watanabe family .... Why?
He have so many rivals ehhh~  :bigdeal:
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He already has someone to help him.... I think it's Sae...
Bingo!  :bingo:
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Would Black be able to protect Mayu?
Of course! Mayuyu yukirin mayuyu yukirin B! B! B! Whashoi! Yeah  :mon determined:

qweakb-san~ you always miss me and my fic aren't you? hahah~  :on gay:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #189 on: May 15, 2013, 06:01:01 PM »
Woah.. secret agent!!
i like secret agent story!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #190 on: May 15, 2013, 08:13:09 PM »
making me more and more curious about takamina's past and no3b!  curiosity kill me now! :imdead:

what will happen between mayu and sae? i hope that sae won't do any stupid stuff to mayu :on lol:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #191 on: May 15, 2013, 10:31:36 PM »
baka mayu
no! black go and save her
wait this is too quick

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #192 on: May 16, 2013, 12:05:58 AM »
chiqinna-san, Thank you for trying to answer all my previous questions from my previous comment

Ara... Rena didn't want to tell Jurina anything whether about her parents and why she didn't want to live with Jurina...

Who was the man that was looking at Takamina with anger..?

Would Takamina be in danger?

Atsuko always seem to find Takamina so cute... Takamina always acted so cute....  :inlove:

Ah... No3b were private agents... as Persona...what happened to Takamina...? what was this accident?

Why did Haruna leave them behind without any contact whatsoever?

Did Haruna leaving them as anything to do with Yuko?

Would Atsuko be able to protect Takamina from any danger?

Ah... Black was so angry with Mayu that she left her alone...

Could Black be able to save Mayu from whatever trap Sae set for Mayu?

What's going to happen to Mayu?

Would Sae bring Mayu to Kenzo's father?

More mysteries again...

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

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« Last Edit: May 16, 2013, 07:20:06 AM by cisda83 »

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #193 on: May 16, 2013, 05:42:31 AM »
takaboy is a spy!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #194 on: May 16, 2013, 07:14:12 AM »
New update :on woohoo: It's more and more interesting :on gay:
So Takamina used to be an agent with Miichan and Haruna :on drink: No3b and Persona :nya:
The man looked at Minami with angry eyes, who is that? :dunno: Takamina's relatives? :wahaha:
Mayu's busted by Black when she was about to put Black's pocket to its place :on lol:
Black's mad at her :pleeease:
Where does Sae lead Mayu to? :stoned: Hope it'll bot happen something bad :prayers:
If she did, Black please saves Mayu :on cloudeye:
Can't wait to see your new update :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #195 on: May 16, 2013, 10:15:53 AM »
Why haruna leave?maybe because she's fall in love with yuko.
Yuki get mad and leave mayu

Bye bye mayu,hope your peace in sae place

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #196 on: May 17, 2013, 06:32:28 AM »

Yeah Good Bye Mayu......[whisper] "Forever~"   LOL!!!!  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:  im just kidding LOL

awww dont be mad black~ mayu just a little bit curious LOL





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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #197 on: May 20, 2013, 03:55:15 PM »
takamina is secret agent lol, looking forward to the next update :3  :thumbsup

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 17 update 15/05/13
« Reply #198 on: May 31, 2013, 04:03:13 AM »
Chiqinna SAN PLEASE~ HEHE

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 18 [preview]
« Reply #199 on: June 14, 2013, 03:21:05 PM »
Chapter 18


Mariko asked Acchan to meet her in her office room to discuss about something.

*knock knock*

"Come in." Invite mariko without looking at the door. She was looking outside the window.

"What is it that you want to talk about?" Asked Acchan as she sit down on the chair across Mariko.
Mariko turn her big chair around to face her group's ace.

'Does she want to ask me about work?' Thought Acchan.

"I-if you want to ask me about our businesses..we are doing fine so far..." tell Acchan.

Mariko smiled.

"It's not about that...I knew you were doing fine with our work. I just want to talk about you and...well Takamina.." the way mariko say it sounds like she was serious.

"Me and Takamina...?" Said Acchan curious.
'What is it about me and Minami? We are doing fine...'
"Do you really love her?" Asked Mariko.
Acchan started to blushed when Mariko asked her the question.

"W-well...I think so..?" Acchan was hesitating to answer it. She feels shy to answer
 'yes I really love her!' Or 'Minami is my first and last love!' Or any love lines... she was still new to this feelings.

*sighed*

"There is more you need to know about her Atsuko." Said Mariko.

The way she called Acchan looks like it was a serious matter.

"What do you mean?" Curiosity started to rise in her mind.

"First, you already know that Takamina is secret agent right?"

Acchan just listening to her without answering or nodding to the question.

"Takamina doesn't like mafia."

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