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Hope you all enjoy. Comments, critics, flamethrower are welcome too.(except for the last part, of course.) xD

I realized it was kinda short. :shocked

BEGINNER
Prologue- Be Ready(down there)
Game 1- The Promise
Game 2- The Rules
Game 3- Let the Game Begin
Game 3.5- Takamina's Life
Game 4- Stand Up, Together

BEGINNER

Summary: If you have a chance to reborn, would you rather fight for it, or let it be?

Prologue- Be Ready

It was raining. A girl with an umbrella was walking down the road peaceful, enjoying the view of rain droppings from the sky, landed harshly to the ground. Her deep brown eyes narrowed warily as a deafening metallic screech ripped through the raining night. She turned around, only to found that a black sleek car was coming in full speed. She wanted to scream, but no sound came out. She wanted to run, but her legs betrayed her, stood there, not moving.

A loud bang echoed in the velvet sky, painted with few birds flying in panic.

The umbrella landed on the ground softly.

The black hair girl was now lying on the ground, motionless. Her lungs constricted achingly within her chest, forcing her to take shallow breaths. With her sense muffled and paralyzed, she could only feel cold steel against her burning skin. Delirious with pain, she whimpered feverishly and tried to move her leaden limb.
She was lying on the ground, decorated with crimson liquid flowing through her body.

“A-c-chan… A-c-c-h-a-n…”

 Her name was repeated by a flat voice similar to that of a dusty music box. The unique, stretched out syllables coaxed her to open her eyes, to find out whom the speaker was.

Murmurs and gasped were heard, talking softly about the accident. Atsuko tried to focus her mind about the mysterious speaker, yet her injury proved to be too overwhelming, disrupting her thoughts and preventing her from remembering anything clearly.

“Mi-na-mi…” She rasped with excruciating effort. Through her blurry vision, she could see a white silhouette about her, where a pair of unreadable yet intense orange orbs was peering at her.

“Wrong~~, Acchan guessed wrong~” The dusty music box voice sang. It was a faint feeling, but she felt that the white hair girl was cradling her. Atsuko tried to gather her strength, yet it slipped away from her grasp like the crimson liquid flowing down her arm.

She tried to open her eyes; all she saw was the silhouette’s smile, and she knew no more.
« Last Edit: April 05, 2013, 07:06:43 AM by Hirasawaizumi »

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2013, 01:30:48 PM »
Uwaa~~~ Acchan~~~~ What the HECK happened to you?!?!?!?!?! :panic:

A mysterious voice calling her name, that sounds like a music box??? :huhuh

And a girl with white hair and orange glowing eyes????? :? She must be a guardian angel! :grin:

But then, why did Acchan say she was Takamina?! :shocked :banghead:

This is amazing! Can't wait for update! :twothumbs
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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #2 on: March 23, 2013, 01:38:33 PM »
Acchan~!!!!!

Who's that girl in white hair?

Where's Taka when you need her?!

Update soon~!!!

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #3 on: March 23, 2013, 01:56:16 PM »
Wow interesting  :cow:
And of course another Atsuminaaaa YAY!  *IhopeitsAtsuyuu
Ooopss LOL just kiddin  :banghead:

But still there are too many question to anwer
Soooo
*Waiting for chapter 1 O(∩_∩)O
WELCOME  ^O^
Oh oh and btw you're funny  :D
Thank you.
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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #4 on: March 23, 2013, 02:05:11 PM »
Well..........~~

*white silhouette with a flat voice of a music box* Attention, please wait patiently as this writer is trying to squeeze chapter 1 out, thank you. I'm a character from the story and story is under processing.

tehehe. *geki laugh*
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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #5 on: March 23, 2013, 02:13:10 PM »
woah great prologue! Seems really interesting! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Great start to the fic, thanks for the update :D

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #6 on: March 23, 2013, 02:20:23 PM »
woah great prologue! Seems really interesting! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Great start to the fic, thanks for the update :D
no no, thank you for reading my story. <3

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #7 on: March 23, 2013, 05:36:42 PM »
This fic is awesome

Really love it  :heart: :heart:

Can't wait for the next update

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #8 on: March 23, 2013, 05:55:17 PM »
great prologue
I think this fic will be very interesting
Please make the chapter 1 soon

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #9 on: March 23, 2013, 09:43:27 PM »
Nice plot very mysterious!
I wanna know what's next author san  :kneelbow:

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #10 on: March 23, 2013, 10:02:05 PM »
The story is going to be interesting...

Thank you for the great prologue...

So mysterious....

I like it...

Can't wait to see the next

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #11 on: March 24, 2013, 03:14:46 AM »
The intro leaves a lot of things to be answered. You got me. I'll be stalking this thread.

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings
« Reply #12 on: March 24, 2013, 11:39:58 AM »
Thank you so much for your comments!! kya~~ it makes my day.
I managed to squeeze game 1!! hope you all enjoy!!

Atsumina part Atsumina part.... there are~~
Comments and critics and daggers  :sweatdrop:  are welcome.( mend for those Takamina shippers, you may wanna do that.) :banghead:
anyway, enjoy~

BEGINNER
Game 1:The Promise.

“I want you~ I need you~ I love you~”

White. All she saw was white. Vast and void space, can’t tell that where the end was. Everything was blank, except for her, brown orbs widen as she saw a white silhouette, dancing and singing happily like a music box.

She heard the voice before, but when was it?

“…. Ano…?” She spoke. The white hair girl seemed unnoticed, continuing singing her song.

“atama no naka…~” Atsuko titled her head, wondering why this girl was ignoring her. When she was about to turn away, the white hair girl appeared in front of her. Atsuko took a step back, shocked. The midget grinned, and murmured… no, sang the lyrics, as Atsuko started to feel dizzy, mind spinning around and landed on the ground.

“Atama no naka, gan gan natteru music, Heavy Rotation!!”

She remembered everything; from the accident, met this girl, the music box voice… memories came into her head, flipping through her page of life. The white hair girl smile slyly, and helped Atsuko to stand up. “So, I bet you have a lot a lot of questions in your mind, right?”

The ace remained silence, only kept her eyes focused on the white silhouette.

“I know I’m cute, but please don’t keep staring at me, it’s embarrassing.” She pouted. Atsuko’s stare did not stop, but moving closer and closer to the midget, as to examine her meticulously. Unable to defend herself, she tried to push the ace away, while she and the girl’s distance getting closer…

“…Ta..takamina?” Their face was an inch close, almost could felt her breath on her face. The white hair girl blushed furiously and managed to push the poker-face girl to the side. The girl fell right to ground, expressionless. Her face was still as red as a tomato.

“I’m not Takamina, as I said before, even though I assemble her.” Pulling up Atsuko’s hand, she said.

“Where am I? I remembered that I was lying on the ground….and then…” She scratched her head, hopping it could help her remember but did not work.

“… You died.”

Such simple words, yet it hurts Atsuko like a thousand blades slashing through her heart. Deep brown orbs widen, covering her head, as she mumbled, “I’m dead…? I’M DEAD…?”

She can’t accept the fact that she died, because of her best friend. She made a promise to her, and now she broke it.

“Acchan, live on without me, be strong.”

That was the last words muttered by her, Takahashi Minami. Atsuko still remembered the gory scene, where a figure was lying on the ground with pale expression. The ace grabbed her weak, painted with blood hand, close to her face. She was murdered, yet no one knew. Everyone thought that Minami committed suicide but in Atsuko’s heart, she knew that the midget had been murdered.

Minami was not an idiot, she would not kill herself.

The dagger that left in Minami’s body was thrown away by Atsuko. The ponytailed girl coughed, unable to suppress the pain from the deep wound. Atsuko tried to call the ambulance, but was stopped by her best friend. “Hey, I’m dying here, and I don’t want to die in an ambulance…” She smiled wryly. Atsuko watched the midget with a pair of watery eyes, as she tried hard to grab the ace’s hand back. She sighed, and gave her a weak pat on her head. Tears started flowing as she leaned over Minami, pressing her lips against hers. The electrifying overwhelmed all the other senses, even pain, and she found herself responding to the hungry kiss, unconsciously wanting more of this thrilling feeling. Even it was a slight, she felt that Minami gently stroking her tongue against hers. She opened her mouth, giving the midget a better access. While their tongue battled, she tasted something salty.

Atsuko stopped her movement and saw Minami, was crying with a grin. Her smile; a smile that could melt Atsuko’s heart instantly, was tainted with some blood on it. Actually, the ace wanted to continue, but seeing her in a state of this condition, she shook her head, declined the feeling towards the midget.

“… heh… Acchan… you took away my last breath…” Minami breathed heavily. “… I guess…this was a goodbye kiss…nee? Acchan…” Eyes almost half closed, part of her wanted to see more of the ace’s face, but mostly of her were tired, wanted to let it be. Atsuko grabbed her hand tightly, not wanting to let go. Her face was soaked in tears, with some stained blood on her lips as she got from Minami.

“Acchan, live on without me, be strong.”

The peaceful sky was broke by a shriek, moaning and yelling of the ace. She could not live without her best friend, but she promised her. She promised her that she will live on.

But then, right now, she had broken the promise.

“Such a pity, but you died.” The white silhouette chuckled lightly, but stopped as her orange orbs met the deadly glare of Atsuko’s.

They were still in the void space, watching the memories of Maeda Atsuko.

“Heh, but then, you are not officially dead yet, you are chosen to be one of the players!”

“..Eh? I’m not dead?”

“Nah, of course not, like I said, you have the qualifications to be reborn!”

“What…? Wait… that means I have a chance to reborn??! To live on as Maeda Atsuko?” Her glare softened.

“You’re talking silly, yes, that’s right, but only if you win the game…” replied the midget with a sly grin.

“Win….win the… game…?!”

how was it how was it?
oh yeah, try guess the song that I used.(Isn't that quite obvious?)
I know, Takamina died. I MADE TAKAMINA DIED...
Takamina's shippers, you may take daggers, knifes, spears and come.

for those who want updates, you can also stab me. ( even I died, I shall continue the epic story!!)

the game will be reveal more in next chapter.....
douzo douzo.  :twothumbs 
« Last Edit: March 24, 2013, 12:06:48 PM by Hirasawaizumi »

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings [UPDATED]
« Reply #13 on: March 24, 2013, 11:54:07 AM »
I hope Bakamina is in the game... So this is Yuko-sama, eeh? I hope she's in the game too... My mind is messed up after reading this... I'm gonna go and write some
AtsuMina while I still have some sanity left..

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings [UPDATED]
« Reply #14 on: March 24, 2013, 12:00:02 PM »
I hope Bakamina is in the game... So this is Yuko-sama, eeh? I hope she's in the game too... My mind is messed up after reading this... I'm gonna go and write some
AtsuMina while I still have some sanity left..

UPDATE SOON!! :bow:

AHahaha....... yesh of course, she will be playing a important role in a game~~hehehe...

apparently that's yuko-sama.....  :panic:

I shall reread....it....

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings [UPDATED]
« Reply #15 on: March 24, 2013, 12:19:28 PM »
Hohoho . THIS IS AWESOMEEEE .  :ding:

Please update soon !  :nya:
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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings [UPDATED-game 1]
« Reply #16 on: March 24, 2013, 01:33:27 PM »
This is SO sad~~~~ Acchan and Takamina both died :ptam-wub:

Maybe this "game" will make it so they can see each other again!

..But, what if they both fail? :ptam-cry:

So many questions need to be answered! I'll be waiting for you!!! :byebye:
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings [UPDATED-game 1]
« Reply #17 on: March 24, 2013, 01:52:37 PM »
Eh.... so Minami died already....

And this white hair girl has the same feature as Minami... but not Minami?!

Atsuko needs to play a game...?

What kind of game is it... like in 'GANTZ' comic....?!

Minami was murdered by Whom? Why? How?

Atsuko also died why? how?

I can't wait to see more

Thank you for the great update

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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings [UPDATED-game 1]
« Reply #18 on: March 24, 2013, 02:10:36 PM »
Atsuko needs to play a game...?

What kind of game is it... like in 'GANTZ' comic....?!

Isn't it the game like in "Beginner" MV?
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Re: BEGINNER-game start. AtsuMina n other pairings [UPDATED-game 1]
« Reply #19 on: March 24, 2013, 02:14:40 PM »
Arg !!! this chapter was so short I want more please update soon :)

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