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« Reply #40 on: March 25, 2013, 05:11:52 PM »
Wah.. great follow up there

Who is the boss of Ryuu?

Ah... so Yuko and Atsuko are half dead...

Are they going to fight one another?

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

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« Reply #41 on: March 25, 2013, 08:54:49 PM »
Well, Ryuu was actually part of Takamina-( You'll know why when read the side story)
How and Why Takamina died is also included in the side story(which I finish it first before game 2 xD)

Ryuu suppose to be fierce, she's the one who control the enemies( in the beginner pv, those 'stuff' that kept attacking them, I called it 'enemies'.... :sweatdrop:)

Please wait patiently for next update. (
maybe the chapter will be longer.)

You're making it more mysterious now that I can't wait much longer. Somehow that reminds me of Voldemort who splits his soul into 7 parts :nervous

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« Reply #42 on: March 26, 2013, 04:47:09 AM »
Today is Mayuyu's birthday.
And the opening is about Mayuyu, but then....
ahaha.... read it yourself, won't you? :sweatdrop: :panic:

Anyway, Happy birthday Mayuyu! Otanjoubi Omedetou~~  :heart: :heart: :heart: :thumbup
Hopping to post in Mayu's birthday, I managed to finish it (which is super cause I kept on typing typing typing.... get scolded by mum  :cry:) XD
How you'll enjoy it!!  :bow: :wub: :wub:
This chapter is focusing on KojiYuu. KojiYuu fans, hope this made your day~ :P


BEGINNER

Game 3- Let the Game Begin

“In your. Position. Set!”

Lips twitched into a grin, she buckled up her gun with loads of bullets at her waist. The twin-tailed girl aimed focus on the big round ‘thing’ that moved. Before the ‘thing’ could react, she fired her gun continuously until it drained its life. The green bar was reducing to zero, and the ‘thing’ disappeared.

“That was easy…” She checked her weapon, although it looks fine.

The cyborg girl, known as Watanabe Mayu, walked carefully on the desultory space. Anything could stumble out, just like the ‘thing’ that Mayu encountered.

From the screen, Ryuu and the girl was watching the flash video.

“Should we do something?” Asked Ryuu in a polite matter.

“…I insist. Now go.”She grinned, twirling the twin-tailed puppet on her hand.

“Roger.” The white silhouette was now gone, like a spectral.

The girl smile enigmatically. Her hands kept on twirling the puppet, not wanting to stop. She stared at the screen, hopping to see any changes from the CG.

Mayu was surrounded. It launched an attack when she was unaware. The spears stroked through her body as she coughed blue liquid. Then, it took the chance to destroyed Mayu’s collar.

“OMG, Super Damage.” Written on screen.

The girl in the throne smiled again. This time, the puppet in her was not twirling anymore. It landed on the floor, slowly but flawless. The twin-tailed puppet fell to the floor with a soft thump, signaling the qualification of the CG was over.

On the other side, Mayu’s collar was disconnected from the tube. It poured out blue liquid instead of blood. Her blue orbs shut tight, fell to the ground and vanished out from sight.

“What a pity, Watanabe Mayu. You’re out of the game.” Smirking.

xxxxx

“You say that Nyan-nyan was here?” asked Yuko, giving the white silhouette a incredulous look.

“Yes, Haruna was here, like you, as a player.” Ryuu said empathically. She had repeated this for nth time! Yet this squirrel here kept asked the same questions over and over again!

Yuko looked down, thinking. If only one winner could win this game, it was either she or nyan-nyan, or worst, maybe other players will win.

Then, she can’t be with her beloved nyan-nyan anymore.

“Maybe you get to find her in the game…” Said Ryuu.

Ignoring the girl, she fumbled her pocket and took out a cat shaped necklace. She put it in her palm, softly kissed it.

“Wait for me, nyan-nyan. I’ll find you wherever you are.” She gritted her teeth.

xxxxx

Now, she was in the battlefield, searching for Haruna.

Yuko flickered her eyes open, focusing on the empty space, as she walked.

A round thing appeared. Yuko aimed at that thing, shoot continuously until it disappeared. After that, more and more of the round thing appeared, even bigger and stronger.

“DAMN YOU ALL GET OF MY WAY!!!” Raged Yuko.

Evolution, Box gun.

A moment later, the entire round thing vanished from her sight. She staggered a bit before fell to the ground, panting. The evolution had used up half of her vitality, making her hard to breath. She must rest for the sake of finding Haruna, and let her vitality rose up.

While she was in a mist of resting, a big box appeared. Yuko’s eyes dilated with fear as the box launched almost launched its attack. Before she could react, the box suddenly vanished in the thin air. She was shocked; she did not shoot it, how come this thing could disappear on its own?

“Are you ok? Thank god I passed by. I managed to strike that thing with my ‘triangule’ before it hits you…”

Yuko brown orbs filled with tears as she recognized the owner’s voice. She took the tall girl’s hand, and buried herself in her embrace. The tall girl flinched, but calmed down after seeing this cute squirrel crying and playing tantrums like a small kid.

“…nyan-nyan… I-I-I thought I lost you… Where…did you go?” Haruna gently pinched Yuko’s nose. “Hey… At least I’m here, right Yuko?” The squirrel smiled wryly.

“I miss you…I miss you, you know…”

“Yeah… Me too, Yuko. But now we’re reunion!” Said the cat while punching her fist to the air.

“…But this is just temporally…” Yuko sniffled, rubbing of the tears on her cheeks.

“You know what Yuko, you’re not the same anymore.” Nyan-nyan’s tone was serious.

“…Eh? Why?”

“Because the Yuko I know is cheerful in anyway, anytime… But now, this Yuko has sad and negative thoughts… Maybe you’re not-…”

“I AM! I AM THE GREAT YUKO-SAMA!” She shouted.

“Really? Prove it!” Saying, Their face was an inch closed.

“Nnn-gh” The words were silence by a harsh kiss. Haruna grabbed the midget’s waist tightly, for not letting her fell down. Her hungry kiss was responded by the squirrel, trying to pry open her lover’s lips for access. Her tongue managed to slip inside, earning a small moan by the taller girl. Their tongue battled in dominance, until they were out of air.

“…Heh… you’re one good kisser, nyan-nyan.” Panting, she was holding the cat’s wrist.

“Well, thank you for your compliment, hentai.”

“Ahh… so you wanted another round, eh?” Losing her grip, Haruna managed to break free from Yuko’s clutches, and ran slowly.

“If you can catch me, I’ll give you not only the lips, but the whole body as well, Yuko-sama.” Said Haruna with a seductive voice. Being unable to control herself anymore, the perverted squirrel started her chasing journey with her most beloved lover, nyan-nyan.

xxxxx

“This will be here, that will be there.” Takamina put two puppets on her hand; one was a cheerful girl, another was a tall girl.

Lips twitched, she took the tall one on her palm, gripping furiously until the puppet’s shape changed. A mockery was heard behind her. It was Ryuu.

“Should I send more army?”

“We’ll see. Let’s see how long this lovey-dovey couple can survive in this game.” A heavily chuckled.

The girl in the throne smiled. She wanted to see how long they could survive in this game. This game was a heavenly game made by her, and she doesn’t want to see it end so fast.

Hmm… Why did she create this game?

For fun? For excitement? For pleasure?

She died. And she was here, meeting Ryuu.

“The first player is always the creator of the game”

The words were ringing loudly in her ear.

Yes, she did create this game. But the purpose?

She can’t remember.

Wait.

She remembered.

She wanted other people suffered like her. She wanted other people to know that there was a hope, but it will be taken by others if you don’t fight for it.

Just like her.

She had chosen the wrong path. Now, she could only walk down the road.

She solemnly regretted.

She had a chance, yet she let slip away.

This game, BEGINNER is her creation.

Her way of changing her path.

She wanted to meet Atsuko.

So, she brought her in.

She knew that this game will be more exciting with her existence.

The tall puppet fell to the ground, headless.


Ahaha~~ updates!!
I dream of Acchan, singing blue rose, while me burried in her embrace. LOL. strange. I kept dreaming of AKB48 these days.... :shocked :oops:
Well, I like it. so....yeah. :D :D :D

KojiYuu spotted! XD :lol:
« Last Edit: March 26, 2013, 05:07:27 AM by Hirasawaizumi »

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« Reply #43 on: March 26, 2013, 04:54:08 AM »
KOjiyuu you two should be fighting with enemies not making out kissing right there

NOw I wonder what path Takamina chose?
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« Reply #44 on: March 26, 2013, 07:17:43 AM »
thank you for this update ;)
Yeah Kojiyuu I love this couple
Please update soon :)

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« Reply #45 on: March 26, 2013, 10:06:13 AM »
Interesting update.
So Takamina created this game? Does she really want people to suffer like she dis?
And she brought Acchan into the game?
KojiYuu!! Whaf the heck are you doing?? You should be fighting not making out! xD
Update soon.

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« Reply #46 on: March 27, 2013, 04:04:29 AM »
interesting story as always

How the relationships are developing?

How about Atsumina and KojiYuu?

I can't wait to see more

Thank you for the lovely update

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« Reply #47 on: March 27, 2013, 11:29:49 AM »
Gahh.. Kojiyuu, they can make out in this situation
and Takamina..is the creator of this game
and why she brought Acchan here I thought they are in love :O
too curious
thanks for update I will wait for your next chap :welcome
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« Reply #48 on: March 27, 2013, 05:10:17 PM »
So, I post this side story first, after this only post chapter 4~
This part explains Takamina's life. Before she died. Enjoy~ :lol:

BEGINNER

Side Story 1: Takamina’s life.

“One… two…three…” The midget counted. She was alone in her classroom, waiting for someone, while staring at the gloomy sky that produced raindrops a moment ago. Her mind was blank, and her crush was going to be here in any minute. Her heartbeat was beating fast, breaths became abnormal as she heard pairs of footsteps…

Wait, wasn’t one? Pairs?

“…This is the girl I told you…” She clearly heard the sentence, and turned back in shocked. This guy, that so-called crush of her, brought some friends. Their expression were irritating, like some thugs loitering around the streets. “Heh, she’s cute~ you sure this is for us?” One of his friends asked, smirking.

What…that bastard… He asked me to wait just for these? And wh-…. Shiver crawl up her spine, alarming her that she was in danger. “Oh shit…This is bad…crap…” Minami muttered softly.

“Why don’t you come with us, girl? We’ll treat you nicely and everything’s fine,” A loud guffaw.

One of them grabbed Minami’s hand, trying to take the opportunity. Takamina gave the thug a fist in to stomach, made him fell to the floor. But there were some guys grabbed both her hands as their mate was down, and Minami’s strength was too weak to defend.

“You better be nice, or else…”

Shimata… I’m dead… my purity… She thought as the guy started moving his filthy hands across her tiny body…

“STOP WHAT YOU’RE DOING!!!” Takamina flickered her eyes, only to be greeted by a broom stick on the guy’s head. Everything was in slow motion, and the black hair girl was pulling her hands tightly, not wanting to let go. They kept on running, out of the school, to the girl’s house. The midget was dumbstruck by this brave girl’s action. Tears started forming as they went in to the house.

The nameplate was written “Maeda”.

xxxxx

After taking a warm shower, she sat quietly on her bed, observing everything in the room; Books, pictures, teddy bears, CDs…

Something caught her eye, at the corner of the study table, there was a book, with a picture…

… A picture of her eating ice cream.

Takamina was curious about the picture. How come she didn’t know that she had been capture on camera? She wondered, and saw the girl was standing at the entrance. Her mouth was slightly ajar; her whole face was in tomato state. Quickly, she stole the picture from the midget’s hand and hid it, turned her back without noticing how confused Takamina was.

“I-I-It’s not th-that I stalked you or something…” Said the girl with an angry yet happy expression… Whats that word again…! Ah yes, Tsundere.

“Well, you save my life from those idiotic bastards, so…” Takamina gave her a big grin. “My name is Takahashi Minami, Yoroshiku!”

“…. My name is Atsuko, Maeda Atsuko.” Said Acchan with her redden face.

“Then, I shall ask you some questions, Maeda-san…”

“Just call me Acchan, that’s fine with me…”

“…o-ok… A-Acchan… I want to ask you some questions-“

“Is that how you say thank you to your savior, by asking questions?” She shuddered.

Takamina’s anger rose up as this woman was interrupting her. But her anger died down as she saw the innocent face of Atsuko, trying to look at her yet dare not to. Was there something on her face…?

“Are you stalking me…?” That was a very straight forward question she gave to Atsuko. It seemed like the ace was clearly rattled by a simple question. She looked down, not wanting to answer the question.

“I-I like you, that’s all. And… I wanted to be your friend, so… I stalked.” Finally, she spoke.

Minami shrugged her shoulders, giving the blushed girl a gentle pat. “Ahaha, and your stalking had save me. So now, we’re friends.” Atsuko tilted her head, pouting cutely with a pair of puppy eyes. Her dark black orbs met hers. The midget looked away as she can’t stand the sight of cute innocent humans like her.

“Yoroshiku, Minami!”

xxxxx

Time flies as Atsuko and Minami became best friends, after the incident. They will always be seen together, anywhere, anytime. The bond within them deepened so fast that they looked like having a relationship of long time.

However, fate was cruel.

Takamina was chase by a group of thugs, which was from the incident. The thugs wanted Minami to pay after what she had done to them. She kept on running until she reached a dead end. The midget cursed and faced the thugs.

“You’ll pay!!”

Words were spoken, but they did not move a muscle. They gasped in horror as blood splattered out like a paint, decorating the dull alley bright red.

The dagger was stab in Takamina’s stomach.

“I’m sorry, Acchan…” She muttered in her breath.

She stabbed herself. She hated them. She wanted them to feel guilty for their rest of their lives.

It cost her life.

Her visions became blurry; only saw that Atsuko’s panic and horrified face came to her.

That innocent cute face… Takamina was going to miss it.

Acchan must thought that she was killed. She smirked. The ace knew that this friend of her was not stupid enough to kill herself.

But she did.

She committed suicide.

The midget flinched as Atsuko pressing her lips against hers. She relaxed herself, responded to that kiss. She tried to deepen the bond between them as she prided open the ace’s mouth, earning a small moan.

The electrifying kiss took away all her pain, leaving her and Atsuko in their own world.

Tears rolled down as the black hair girl broke the kiss, trying to get some air. Takamina felt that she wanted more, but she controlled her inner self after seeing her friend’s nervous expression.

She knew that her time was up, yet she wanted to stay. She wanted to live with Atsuko.

But, she had chosen this path.

She knew everything cannot be turned or twisted.

With shrill and shirking of the ace, thus she left the world…

…into a brand new dimension.

xxxxx

The white silhouette, Ryuu was sitting on a throne, waiting for Takamina.

As she landed, she was greeted with a wolfish grin by Ryuu.

“Welcome, first player.” Ryuu reassembled the midget, as she spoke, Minami flinched.

“Must you ask that why I reassemble you, isn’t it?”

Takamina gulped, took a step back.

“Relax, I’m just taking your soul, so that’s the reason.” A sly smile formed on Ryuu’s face.

“Wh-…” “That was the rule. You, as the first player of the game, had lot more benefits than other players. In other words, you get to observe every single player’s movement…Isn’t that fun?”

The white silhouette jumped down from the throne, moving closer to her.

“But in exchange, I have to take your soul.”

“What if I don’t want? What kind of game is this?” She asked with a hint of nervous.

“Oh, don’t you want to play, for the sake of your best friend?”

“…”

She looked down, clenching her fist tightly as she thought about Atsuko. After a moment, she had made the decision. She wanted to live on with Atsuko badly, yet because of her idiocy, she let the chance slipped away.

“Very well, Ryuu. I accept.”

Ryuu was confused, how come the midget knew her name… maybe it was soul reacting to her. Interesting… This human was so interesting…

“So, I announce that the game, BEGINNER, has found its first player!”

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« Reply #49 on: March 27, 2013, 05:30:53 PM »
This is getting MORE and MORE interesting!!! You're really good. I'll be waiting for an update!! :twothumbs
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« Reply #50 on: March 27, 2013, 06:56:37 PM »
Thank you for update
Poor Takamina :(
Please update soon ;)

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« Reply #51 on: March 27, 2013, 07:43:23 PM »
Chapter 3 and 3.5 were great! Thanks for the updates!! Kojiyuu was awesome haha, but they should def be careful :P

& i liked the explanation of Minami's past & her relationship with Atsuko & how she came to be part of the game.

Looking forward to ur next update! :D

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« Reply #52 on: March 27, 2013, 09:21:30 PM »
Ah... Minami did kill herself.... She prefer the ended everything better than being hunted down by the thugs....

Ah... Minami indeed like or even love Atsuko...

So Minami is the 1st player

I can't wait to see more players and the story behind the death

Thank you for the background story about Minami

Can't wait to see more

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« Reply #53 on: March 28, 2013, 01:06:23 AM »
Uwaaah~~~ YESSSS!!!!!!  :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: A NEW Atsumina!!! xD woot woot  :wriggly: just saw this today xD but man! the update is fast!! (a good thing for us)  :on lol:
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« Reply #54 on: March 28, 2013, 01:23:28 AM »
oh Takamina is the bad guy, interesting

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« Reply #55 on: March 28, 2013, 02:56:54 AM »
At first Ryuu seems like the one in charge but later on the master became Takamina?

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« Reply #56 on: March 28, 2013, 04:18:26 AM »
At first Ryuu seems like the one in charge but later on the master became Takamina?
Ryuu was in charge. Yes. And Takamina is the one who create the game... Ryuu is her assistance  :twothumbs :theking

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« Reply #57 on: March 28, 2013, 04:52:10 AM »
Isn't Ryuu the one inviting Takamina to the game? I thought he/she would have been the one creating it. Somehow later on Takamina became Ryuu's boss.

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« Reply #58 on: March 28, 2013, 06:09:44 AM »
Isn't Ryuu the one inviting Takamina to the game? I thought he/she would have been the one creating it. Somehow later on Takamina became Ryuu's boss.
:cow: :cow:  Ryuu's waiting for her, She and Takamina create the game but mostly is Takamina's idea. So, she become the creator rather than Ryuu becoming one. (It'll be no fun if Ryuu was the who control the game XD:panic: :panic: :thumbup :sweatdrop:

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« Reply #59 on: March 28, 2013, 06:56:58 AM »
So how are they related? You said earlier on that Ryuu's part of Takamina?

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