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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 13
« Reply #140 on: May 26, 2013, 12:09:15 PM »
Mayu's evolution: I'll have to see the video; that outfit sounds cute. Plus, windup key/sword=Clever~

Rena's evolution: Aw yeah! Marionette puppet gonna take ya down, Gachapin!
That was so cool and so cute!!

Sayaka's evolution: Oh my God.
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Minami's uhh.... ???: Woah! What the HECK just happened?!
Hope she can evolve. I imagine her transforming into "Jane Doe" and maybe using that chain thing she had as a weapon.

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #141 on: June 01, 2013, 11:28:53 PM »
Sorry if the update is kind of lame but I was having a hard time coming up with an idea! Hope it doesn't suck too bad!
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Chapter 14

Atsuko and Minami were resting comfortably when Mariko walked into the house. She sat down and said,

"Ok so what I found out is that Minami isn't ready to evolve yet."

"Eh?"

"Minami's evolution still needs more time to develop but we don't know when it will actually happen. What happened before is that we pushed Minami too hard and her body couldn't handle such a huge change. I think this happened because Minami hasn't been around as long as the others."

"So then what are we supposed to do?" Atsuko asked.

"I think you two should wait a while. Don't do any battles and instead go out and have some fun or something. I think maybe a little bonding time will help the process."

"Ok then I will do my best!"

After Mariko left, Atsuko told Minami they were going to go out and have some fun. They decided to go to a park where they would relax and have a nice afternoon. However when they arrived they were surprised to see a lot of different pets. Apparently it was a pet day for the park so people had brought their pets to enjoy the park as well. Atsuko and Minami were relaxing by the trees when suddenly a dog ran over and started sniffing Minami. Minami was a little freaked out and tried to back away but soon more dogs started to gather. Minami had no idea what was going on but the dogs kept coming and coming. Finally Minami stood up and started to run and the dogs followed.

"Minami wait!"

Atsuko chased after Minami who was being chased by the dogs. Minami ran all the way to a big tree where she started to climb it. She climbed all the way to the top and Atsuko had no choice but to follow. When they made it to the top they thought they were safe but then suddenly a bunch of birds started diving down on them. The strange birds kept pecking and diving until Atsuko suddenly fell over and started to fall off the tree. Luckily Minami grabbed Atsuko and managed to hold on but not for long because a bird pecked Minami's hand making her slip as well. The two fell and landed hard onto the ground.

"Are you ok?" Minami asked.

"Un..."

"You don't sound good."

"Uh Minami.."

Minami looked down and saw that she was on top of Atsuko in a very hot position. Her arms were on the side of Atsuko's head while her legs were around hers. When Minami realized this, she got up and backed away. Atsuko got up and brushed herself off and then helped Minami up. They were about to walk away but then suddenly a bunch of cats came over and jumped on Minami. They all swarmed her licking her check and rubbing against her arms and legs. At one point Atsuko thought she heard Minami moan from all the rubbing and meows. Atsuko helped Minami up and that's when she saw something on Minami's back. There was a strange charm on her back with three symbols on it. There was a cat paw, a dog paw, and a bird wing. Atsuko wondered where it came from but then suddenly she looked over at Minami and nearly jumped.

"M-Minami! Y-Your head. It's got cat ears!"

"Eh?!"

Atsuko showed Minami a mirror and there on her head was a pair of cat ears. The two were both very confused but they didn't have time to argue as the pets started to chase after them once more. The two ran into the city where the pets couldn't find them and they blended in with the people. They thought they were safe but then suddenly someone grabbed Minami and pulled her over with a bunch of other random girls. They all had cat ears on and it looked like they were posing for a photo. The girl who grabbed Minami made her do a cute pose and then when the photo was taken Minami was pushed into the building. Atsuko followed where inside there was a bunch of cat ear girl cosplay. It was very strange seeing all the girls but Atsuko was more concerned about finding Minami. She walked around and then saw Minami standing over by a table wearing a strange battle suit.

"Atsuko help!"

Atsuko ran over to Minami and tried to grab her but then someone grabbed Atsuko. The two looked over and saw a big man with a dark look on his face. He pulled Atsuko and said,

"No touching the girls."

"But she doesn't work here!" Atsuko said.

"I said no touching!"

The man pulled and Atusko let out a cry. It was then Minami changed and instead of cat ears, dog ears popped out. Minami growled at the man before jumping on him and biting his arm. The man let go and then Atsuko grabbed Minami and ran out of the building. They ran all the way home and when they got inside they thought they were safe. However Minami was still angry and ready to fight anyone that got in her way. Atsuko scolded her and Minami retaliated by biting her. The move was a shock but then Atsuko decided to train Minami.

"Minami sit!"

Like a dog an it's owner, Minami sat obeying Atsuko's command. Atsuko thought she would have a little fun with the dog Minami so she started to command other tricks.

"Roll over!"

Minami followed and rolled over onto her stomach.

"Shake!"

Minami reached out and held Atsuko's hand who shook it. The overall experience was pretty fun but then something strange happened. Minami fell over and curled into a small ball. When she opened back up, the cat ears were there but there was something different about Minami. She got on top of Atsuko and pinned her down against the floor. Minami's face was red and her breaths were short. She looked at Atsuko with a strange look and wasn't sure what was going on. The suddenly Minami opened her mouth and said,

"Nya~"

She then licked Atsuko's cheek and nuzzled in her chest. Atsuko thought it was cute but then soon realize things got serious when Minami held Atusko's hands back and slid hers under her shirt. Atsuko blushed and tried to escape but Minami had a strong grip on her. This cat Minami was a cat in heat and it wasn't good for Atsuko. Atsuko managed to push Minami back and then quickly run out of the room. She locked the door and then decided to call Mariko for help. When she arrived Atsuko told her what happened and she said,

"Ah the animal tag! I placed it on Minami so she could awaken a new kind of power. That way it helps her build up her strength when she evolved."

"Ok that's nice but why is she all hot and touchy!"

"Oh well that's part of it. The user goes under a heat spell and basically wants to mate with anything."

"How long will it last?"

"About a couple hours."

"Oh ok then I'll just leave her be until she ca- wahh!"

Mariko pushed Atsuko into the room and locked the door.

"Don't come out until you finish your bonding time!"

Mariko left leaving Atsuko with the horny Minami. Atsuko turned around and saw MInami heading towards her. She then jumped onto Atsuko and licked her neck and cheek. Minami was eating Atsuko out slowly her body growing warmer and warmer. Minami made her way down to Atsuko's chest and was about to take off her shirt when something else happened. Minami screamed as she felt something stick out of her back. Atsuko watched as two wings came out of Minami's back. They were black and evil looking and they hung over Minami's body. Minami herself was knocked out but the wings were moving on their own. Minami got up and then flew out of the window.

"Minami!

Atsuko watched Minami fly away and Atsuko had no choice but to follow her.

"Mou Minami what are you doing?!" 

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Well there is the update after such a long time. Sorry if it sucks I'll work hard next time!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #142 on: June 01, 2013, 11:42:40 PM »
it's been a while... :D
why the wings looks like that?
and...thanks for the update... :twothumbs

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #143 on: June 01, 2013, 11:51:03 PM »
that was a nice update ;D horny Minami. xD lol

Kyaaa~ Takabear in Cat ears >///<

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #144 on: June 02, 2013, 12:30:47 AM »
why did takabird fly away le me is curious :P
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #145 on: June 02, 2013, 12:32:01 AM »
iiya~ Subarashii~ (ah... wonderful)
I can't believe I never decided to read this
it may have been due to the atsumina as main
but omg this was so epic!!
the geki arc had a few mysterious things...
friendship yay!!
eh?? curious about what happens to minami
nekomimi~~ interesting... but that would be lol

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #146 on: June 02, 2013, 02:53:37 AM »
huwaa an update! yay

Gahd the latest chapter is just so cute. I like the slow pacing of Atsumina's relationship but eventually I am expecting changes with their feelings. I'm rooting for Atsuko to slowly fall in love with her doll Minami because she has the human heart  :wub: :wub: :wub:
Maybe after Minami's evolution? wwww

Kyaaa I'm so excited to what will happen next..  :wub: :wub: Thanks for the update!!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #147 on: June 02, 2013, 06:04:48 AM »
Very funny.... :lol:

Poor Atsuko... she seem to always need to follow Minami around....

What's going to happen next to Atsuko and Minami?

Would Minami be able to evolve.... after being change around by those weird charm?

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #148 on: June 02, 2013, 07:42:25 AM »
nice update  :twothumbs
ahh ~ bakamina fly away from atsuko u.u

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #149 on: June 02, 2013, 01:45:50 PM »
Such a hot scenes Atsumina got there ^^

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #150 on: June 04, 2013, 11:16:09 AM »
Dat minami cat  :drool:




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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #151 on: June 04, 2013, 08:57:13 PM »
Wow... Just wow...

Really wasn't expecting all that.

Can't wait for an update! Things are about to go down!!
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 14
« Reply #152 on: June 04, 2013, 09:26:16 PM »
Weird transformation for Minami hopefully it doesn't go into overload :nervous
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 15
« Reply #153 on: June 10, 2013, 12:24:46 AM »
Well here is the next update! Let's see what happens to Minami! We discover new powers and meet new friends!
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Chapter 15

Atsuko followed Minami to the roof of an old building where she was resting on the roof. There also on the roof was Mariko who was holding a strange staff. When Minami landed Mariko quickly ran over and held Minami down. Then she told Atsuko to take the staff and draw a circle around them. Atsuko did so and then Mariko stood up and the two watched as the circle glowed and then rods of light came out and stabbed Minami in various places keeping her down. Atsuko watched as her blood flowed down from the rods onto the reset of the circle which caused it to glow brighter. The circle went from a red to glow to a bright white. It was then something in Minami changed inside her. Her wings turned from black to white and feather scattered across the sky. They grew larger on her back and slowly her form started to change. When she came out, Minami was now back to normal and this time she was different. She wore a white jacket with feathers on the shoulder and end of sleeve with a black skirt and leggings (outfit from bird). There were some feathers in Minami's hair as well that glowed as she stood there. Minami faced Atsuko and then calmly walked over to her.

"Mi-Minami.. you-"

"Evolved." she said.

"Yeah.. You look so cool!"

Atsuko hugged Minami and then said,

"You finally did it Minami!"

"Yeah I'm so happy!"

"Good job Minami you've evolved. Ready to see what your new powers are like?" Mariko asked.

"Heck yeah!"

Minami and Miichan went into battle and Minami was excited to see what she could do. Minami was the first to move as she jumped up and flew into the air. She was excited about her wings and thought the overall feeling was incredible. However she had to a battle to focus on so she looked down at Miichan who pulled out her wooden sword and jumped up high. She was about to strike but when she did one of Minami's wings moved and protected her. When the sword hit it sounded like it had hit Minami. Atsuko looked closely and saw some of the feathers had turned into a strong metal almost like titanium. Miichan backed away and that's when Minami moved one of her wings and some feathers shot out aiming right for Miichan. She dodged some of them however some hit and left a couple cuts. Before Miichan could do anything Minami started to fly towards Miichan at a fast pace. Her wings started to glow and Miichan couldn't react in time for Minami flew faster and then straight past her. There was a moment of silence before Miichan suddenly fell back down and Minami landed beside her.

"Incredible power and speed." Mariko said.

"This is so cool!" Minami said.

"Well now that you got your new powers I think you should start battling. The tournament is coming up and is sounds like you guys don't have many shards."

"Ah you're right... Minami let's go!" Atsuko said.

"Now now you two it's late so you should go to bed. You can battle tomorrow ok?"

"Yes!"

The two went home and slept happy with what they had accomplished. Then the next day the two set off to find some challengers who would be willing to battle. Surprisingly there was one they found who had just finished a battle and now Minami wanted to challenge them. The person accepted and the went into battle. The person was very surprised at Minami's form because their puppet had no evolved yet. The puppet moved and tried to hit Minami with it's blade. Minami dodged and jumped into the air flying high above. Then she dove down and started to slash the puppet over and over until it could no longer move. In the end Minami won the battle and she got the heart shard.

"Alright we have five now! Let's get another one!" Minami said.

The two went to a dark alley where they found one who was standing around looking for a battle. They said they wanted to fight and even mocked Minami for her height. This made Minami's fighting spirit even brighter and knew she was definitely going to win this battle. The battle begun and the first thing Minami did was take to the sky. This puppet was a different puppet from the last time and Minami had to be careful for its weapon was a gun. It shot rounds into the air and almost hit Minami who managed to dodge it. Minami tried to swoop down for a slice attack but the puppet shot and nicked one of her wings making flying a little difficult. Minami decided to try a different attack and this time flew high into the air. Then she stretched her wings out and then shot tons of feathers towards the puppet. They were fired at a speed similar to a machine gun and hit its mark every time. Minami kept going until Atsuko made her stop and the puppet fell to the ground. In the end Minami won and sadly that was the puppet's last heart shard. The two watched as both the puppet and master disappeared.

"I think we have enough for today Minami. Are you ready to go home?"

"Un!"

The two started to walk home when suddenly three girls came running out followed by a really big man. The man grabbed the smallest one and pulled her close while the other two tried to stop him. Obviously the three were in trouble so Minami and Atsuko decided to help and they beat up the man.

"Are you alright?" Minami asked.

"Yes thank you." the middle one said.

"Thank you so much for helping us!" the smallest one said.

"Well be careful next time ok?"

"Un thank you puppet!"

"You know I'm a puppet?"

"Of course! We could tell from the moment we saw you~"

"Well that's cool I guess. What is your name?"

"Kitahara Rie!" the left one said.

"Sashihara Rino." the middle one said.

"Maeda Ami." the right one said.

"Are you all puppets too?" Atsuko said.

"Well Rie I are puppets but Sasshi is our master." Ami said.

"You have two puppets?"

"Yep and I'm happy with both of them."

"Well we should battle sometime. I think it would be very interesting."

"Indeed. Let's meet up tomorrow at the park shall we?"

"Sure!"

They all said goodbye and then headed home. When they made it home Minami relaxed on the couch with Atsuko and the two cuddled for a while. Then Atsuko remembered the things Minami had done before and backed away a little. Minami who didn't know what was going on tried to get closer to her but Atsuko backed away more. Minami tried to jump on Atsuko but then got off the couch and ran into the other room. Minami ran after but Atsuko ran out and into the hall where Minami chased after. Soon enough the two were chasing each other in the house with Atsuko running and Minami chasing. They ran all around into the halls and through all the rooms. Atsuko even ran outside where she tried to climb a tree but then Minami grabbed her by the skirt and pulled her down. Her skirt came down but Atsuko didn't revealing pink panties with little hearts on them.

"Kawai~"

"Mou Minami!"

"Atsuko climbed down and that's when Minami pinned her against the tree."

"Now tell me why are you avoiding me?"

Atsuko didn't say anything but blushed and looked away. Minami started to lean closer and that's when Atsuko said,

"Well last night... you did a couple things to me that were... embarrassing.."

"Like what?"

Atsuko flipped Minami over and pinned her against the tree.

"Like this."

Atsuko kissed Minami's neck and started to make her way down where she stopped. She looked up at Minami who was staring at her with a clueless face and Atsuko just face palmed herself.

"Don't you see what you were doing?"

"No I don't."

"Mou you're so weird!"

Atsuko ran back into the house and Minami followed. The two played for a while and then decided to go to bed. As the two were sleeping, someone else was outside their home who had just finished watching them. The person ran away to two others who were there waiting.

"So what do you think Sasshi?" Ami asked.

"She's perfect."

"When can we have her?" Rie asked.

"Soon but for now we need to wait. Don't worry we'll soon have another one just like us."

"Yay I'm so excited!"

"This will be great she'll be the strongest on yet!" Ami said.

"I know but for now girls we wait."

The threw smiled and walked off leaving a feint purple glow behind.

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 15
« Reply #154 on: June 10, 2013, 12:40:25 AM »
wait...
sasshi, kitarie, and mayuge.... are like the rogue(masterless) dolls?
Takamina's outfit seems interesting...
pink... lol...

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 15
« Reply #155 on: June 10, 2013, 05:55:55 AM »
Yeah Minami evolved...

She got 6 shard of hearts already....

What was Sashi planning on doing to Minami...?

Could the master linked to more than one puppet?

How would they break the link between Minami and Atsuko?

What's going to happen to Minami on the battle against Rie and Ami?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 15
« Reply #156 on: June 10, 2013, 07:14:53 AM »
Aamin with Rie and Sasshi is such a great addition to the fic
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 15
« Reply #157 on: June 10, 2013, 07:26:22 PM »
can't wait to next update :)
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 16
« Reply #158 on: June 16, 2013, 07:22:48 PM »
Wah sorry it took me so long to update this I got back from vacation and I was caught up in all the relaxation~ Anyways enjoy the update! Lots of new stuff!
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Chapter 16

"Nee Sasshi are you ready?" Ami asked.

"Of course I am." Sasshi said.

"What if we lose the battle?" Rie said.

"Don't worry I took a couple heart shards that we can give. I have no doubt that you two will win. If it seems like you're going to lose, place this on her."

Sasshi handed the two a small purple bug. The two hid it and understood what to do next. At the same time Minami and Atsuko were just arriving. They went straight into battle and Ami and Rie transformed into their battle forms. Minami transformed as well and then the battle began. Minami kept her wings hidden feeling that it wasn't time yet to use them. Minami swung as Ami and managed to punch her in the chest but then Rie tried to come from behind and attack. Minami ducked right as she swung and then she kicked Rie knocking her over. Minami was about to go in for another attack but suddenly Ami came back up and punched Minami in the stomach. Minami started to go down and that was when Rie came back and kicked her in the side. Then the two grabbed her and pulled her forward making her fall down. They were about to move in for more but then there was a bright flash and gust of wind.

Minami had taken to the sky and was now high in the air. It was then the two pulled out their weapons and Atsuko knew there was going to be trouble. Ami had multiple daggers with chains attached to them while Rie had a twin pistols in her hands. The battle was now starting to get serious. Ami tried to throw her daggers but Minami flew out of the way right into the line of fire of Rie. Rie shot two rounds and one missed but the other scratched her side. Minami flew up and then shot out her feathers. The came down hard and stabbed the two in a couple of places. However it wasn't enough and it was then Ami short one of her daggers at Minami who protected herself with her wings. The dagger bounced off and then Minami dove down and slashed a huge cut in Ami's chest making her go down. Rie shot more rounds but Minami dodged them all and then moved and then cut down Rie in the neck. The two went down and the battle was over.

"Congrats on winning! Here's your prize."

Two heart shards were handed to Minami who thanked them and Atsuko said,

"How about we all head out to get ice cream?"

"Sure!"

As the two started to walk Sasshi leaned in and whispered,

"Did you plant the bug?"

"No.." Rie said.

"I managed to get one when I threw my dagger."

"That's good enough."

The five of them went to an ice cream place where Atsuko and Sasshi ordered some ice cream. The two ate happily while the others talked and chatted. While chatting Atsuko asked,

"How did you manage to get two?"

"Ah well first I met Rie and we were partners and then what happened was Ami was actually abandoned by her master. He broke the contract and left Ami to die. Rie and I came across and made a contract saving her and then the master died."

"That's terrible. Who would do such a thing to their puppet?"

"Well there  are some masters that aren't as nice people. You'll see a lot of them in the tournament."

"That's horrible... I would never do something like that to Minami. Right?"

Atsuko turned to face Minami and that was when Sasshi lightly placed another purple bug in Atsuko's shirt. When it was time to go the two said goodbye and left Sasshi, Ami, and Rie. They walked down the side walk until they ran into Rena and Jurina who happened to be at a cafe. The two walked over and Jurina said,

"What were you two up to?"

"We just won a battle against two puppets at the same time!" Minami said.

"Eh?"

"Yeah this master had two puppets so we battled and I won."

Jurina and Rena looked at each other and then Rena said,

"Minami.. That's not possible."

"What do you mean?"

"Well a master is only allowed one puppet. They can't have two."

"But the master said she saved the other one and formed a contract with her!" Atsuko said.

"That's not possible one you've made a contract with one you can't make one with another."

"Eh?!"

Atsuko and Minami were left baffled and confused but now they wanted to know exactly what did they do? The two got up and decided to go look for Sasshi and her puppets. She had some explaining to do as in how she got two puppets. They started to walk but then suddenly Minami collapsed and didn't get back out. Atsuko panicked and got Rena and Jurina to help her take Minami to Mariko. When they arrived Mariko had them place Minami on the bed so she could get a look at her. She said it was going to take a while so she told Atsuko to go out with Rena and Jurina for a while. Atsuko left and decided to walk with Jurina and Rena where they talked about what had happened earlier. They decided to try and look for Sasshi and her puppets so they went back to their original battle zone and started to look. As they were looking, Atsuko suddenly started to feel really tired. Eventually she fell down and couldn't move anymore. It was as if her body was completely drained of all energy. As Jurina and Rena tried to think of what to do there was a loud explosion not too far from them. They looked over and there standing there was Minami in her battle form.

"M-Minami?"

There was something different about Minami. She shouldn't be able to transform like that without Atsuko with her. Another thing that was different was that she had a purple glow in her eyes. She charged straight for Atsuko and was about to attack but then Rena got in front and protected her. She managed to push Minami back but not for long for Minami pushed Rena out of the way and headed straight for Atsuko. She was about to land a powerful punch but then something rushed by and grabbed Atsuko carrying her to safety. She looked up and saw it was Miichan who had saved her. Miichan set Atsuko down and told her to stay there. Then she ran back out to face the wild Minami. Mariko told Miichan and Rena to tie her down and keep her still. Rena shot her threads and wrapped them around Minami. The threads didn't hold her for long though as Minami broke free and headed towards Rena. Rena jumped and Miichan came forward and punched Minami hard in the face. That didn't stop Minami as she came back with a hard punch to the stomach on Miichan sending her flying back.

Rena stepped forward and did something Atsuko had never seen before. Rena's hands detached and shot out with chains connected to them. The hands wrapped around Minami's body and tightened the chains. The Miichan came forward and dug spikes into Minami's sides keeping her down. Mariko then threw one more thing which was a ring that wrapped around Minami's neck like a collar. The collar became heavy and weighed Minami's head down so she couldn't move an inch. Mariko then walked over and looked at Minami closely. Minami was on the other hand was going wild. She was growling and trying to bite Mariko. Mariko held Minami's head back and then saw what she was looking for. She reached out and pulled off the bug. Minami immediately calmed down and looked around wondering what was going on and why she couldn't move. Mariko removed the chains and ties and then went over to Atsuko who was still very weak. Atsuko looked over at Minami who was back to normal and was now staring at Atsuko with a worried look.

"Atsuko!"

Minami tried to help but Mariko made her step back. She looked at Atsuko and then suddenly pulled up her shirt revealing a cute pink lace bra. Minami blushed but that wasn't what Mariko was looking for. When she spotted it Mariko reached out and picked off a small bug.

"What is that?" Minami asked.

"These are heart suckers. They're parasitic bugs that feed off the energy of a master and then cause extreme anger in a puppet. The puppet goes after the master because it has the other bug that the one on the puppet hates." Mariko said.

"That's horrible. Who would do such a thing?"

"I'm guessing it was the heartless puppets. Only they can create things like this."

"Them again? But we don't know any or see any? How do we know it them?"

"I have an idea who. Miichan!"

It was at that moment Miichan shot up and grabbed someone who was hiding in the trees. She pulled them down and Minami was surprised to see Rie sitting there. Before she could escape Mariko tied her up and then said,

"I'm guessing she's one of them."

Mariko cut open Rie's shirt revealing the scar on her heart. Rie was a heartless puppet. Minami was shocked and Mariko told her to take Atsuko home and let her regain the energy she lost. Meanwhile she would take care of the heartless Rie. Minami, Rena and Jurina took Atsuko home and then Jurina and Rena left. Now it was just Atsuko and Minami who was watching over her. Minami couldn't believe she tried to kill Atsuko and felt horrible with herself. She took hold of Atsuko's hand and promised that she would never hurt her again. Even if it meant hurting herself she would never lay a hand on Atsuko anymore. Minami felt a warm feeling in her chest that she didn't know what it was. However as she started at Atsuko she felt the warm feeling grow within her. The sleeping Atsuko looked so beautiful that Minami wanted to see more of the beauty. Minami leaned in and was going to just touch Atsuko's soft looking lips. She was so close when suddenly something jolted her and she backed away. Then Minami remembered another one of the bad things about being puppets.

"Haha I forgot... Puppets can't love their masters..."
 
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Hope you liked the update guys! Look forward to the next one!!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 16
« Reply #159 on: June 16, 2013, 07:35:33 PM »
Finally an update....

As expected, they are really a bad guys...

And what in the hell in the world did you say that "puppets don't love masters" hmm????

And what's your doing right now? Kissing her right? Which means you're in love with her!!!!!

Waiting for your next update  XD XD XD XD
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