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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #100 on: May 14, 2013, 11:24:04 AM »
Hahaha.... Minami's clones are so cute... like a small children....

Atsuko is so happy being surrounded with so many Minami...

Poor real Minami... so jealous unable to be near Atsuko or getting Atsuko's attention at all.

The clone Minami is molesting Atsuko in the end...  :lol:

Wah... they were going to kiss each other.... AH... Mariko and Miichan have very bad timing...

Oh.. They are going on trip with the rest of the master puppets and puppets...

What's going to happen during the trip?

Would there be battles?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #101 on: May 15, 2013, 04:39:45 PM »
Ahaha!
I found your update at midnight and can't stop reading!!
Atsumina is cute! They always are~~ :P
Jurina! Teach more spells to Atsuko!  :thumbsup

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #102 on: May 15, 2013, 06:31:46 PM »
Minna! It's time for chapter 10 two part special! There's going to be lots of laughs and fun but also some serious battles! Lets see what happens to everyone and I hope you like the update!
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Chapter 10 part 1

Atsuko and Minami had to get up early because the ride was going to be long. They helped each other pack and then they set off to the school where they would meet. When they arrived, Yuki, Mayu, Rena and Jurina were already there. Jurina was fast a sleep in Rena's arm while Mayu was comfortably resting on Yuki's lap. Atsuko looked like she was about to pass out as well but she had to stay awake. A couple minutes later Sae and Sayaka showed up. Everyone was here but where was Mariko and Miichan? They waited for ten minutes until finally, a small bus pulled up. Mariko and Miichan stepped out and greeted everyone.

"Ohayou! You guys ready for an awesome trip?" Mariko asked.

No one responded because they were all too tired.

"Well lets get going then."

They loaded all the luggage and then got on the bus. Minami and Atsuko sat in the back and Mayu and Yuki sat in front of them. Sayaka and Sae were in the front and Rena and Jurina were across from Yuki and Mayu. Once everything was situated, the bus took of on it's long journey. For the first half hour Atsuko passed out and slept on Minami. When she woke up, she saw everyone was up now and were doing whatever they pleased. In the front Sayaka was reading a book while Sae was texting someone. Behind them Jurina was being fed by Rena. Across from them Mayu was playing a video game while Yuki watched. Atsuko looked up at Minami who was staring out the window. She sat up and Minami greeted her.

"Ohayou."

"Ohayou..."

Atsuko stretched her arms and looked outside. The whole scenery had changed from buildings and cars to trees and mountains. The scenery was beautiful that Atsuko had never seen such lush forests. The temple must be one of those really old and ancient ones you see in movies. The two sat there for awhile until suddenly there was a loud growl. Atsuko realized that was her stomach and she was hungry. Minami smiled and said,

"It's a good thing I packed some snacks."

She reached into her bag and pulled out a little sack of candies.

"Say ah~"

"Minami you don't have to do that."

"Yes I do now say ah."

"Ah~"

Minami places the candy in Atsuko's mouth and she ate it happily. The candy was sweet with a little tang in it and some pop. The candy was something she never had before and wondered where Minami got them. She ate a couple more and then put the bag away. The two sat there in silence watching the scenery pass by and then suddenly there was a bump. The bus stopped and everyone looked up to the front. Mariko smiled and said,

"We're here!"

"Here?"

Everyone looked out and say nothing but the end of the road. It was just a giant wall of rock. Everyone was really confused about it at first but then Mariko made everyone get out. She had all the puppets line up along the wall and told them to try to push the wall out of the way. All the puppets focused their power onto the wall but it wouldn't move. Then Mariko made Miichan help and with just push the whole wall split revealing a tunnel.

"Wah sugoi! How did you do that Miichan?" Jurina asked.

"Secret~"

"Alright everyone grab your things! We're walking." Mariko said.

"EHH?!"

Having no choice everyone grabbed their things and started walking up a trail. They walked past high trees and over a river. After a half hour they finally saw the temple and it was huge. It looked like one of the palaces you see in the old samurai movies. They walked up a hill and then finally made it to the temple. Everyone set down their things and collapsed onto the floor. They thought they were going to rest but then Mariko came out carrying cleaning supplies. She set them down and said,

"Grab a towel and a bucket. We need to clean this place!"

"Are you serious!" Mayu said.

"What you think I got this place for free? We had to pay somehow. Now get moving or you don't get dinner."

"Hai..."

Everyone got up and split up to start cleaning. Minami and Atsuko went upstairs and started changing the sheets and dusting the shelves. Jurina and Mayu were having races cleaning down the hall while Sayaka and Sae were outside sweeping the front. Yuki and Rena were down stairs cleaning the windows and basement as well. Atsuko was cleaning a window when Minami called to her.

"Atsuko can you help me? I can't reach this spot."

"You mean this?"

Atsuko reached out but slipped and fell onto Minami.

"Itai.. Nee are you ok Minami?" Atsuko said.

"H-hai..."

"Minami?"

Atsuko sat up and looked down and saw Minami's face really close to her. With her legs straddling Minami's waist and hands on her stomach, it looked like Atsuko was about to make love to Minami. Her face quickly turned red and then backed up. She helped Minami up and brushed her off. The two were silent and then got back to work. After a while there was a loud scream outside. Minami and Atsuko looked out and saw Mayu and Rena running down the hall. Yuki and Jurina were chasing after them trying to catch them. When Minami asked what happened, Yuki said Mayu got a bunch of baby spiders on her and they got on Rena as well. The two freaked out and ran around trying to get them off and they were trying to catch them. Minami ran out and managed to grab Mayu while Atsuko grabbed Rena. Then Sae and Sayaka took a broom and swept all the spiders off them. Mariko and Miichan came down and saw everyone.

"Well everything looks clean. So who's ready for lunch?"

They walked down into the kitchen and saw a nice feast for them to eat. Well the masters anyways. Meanwhile the puppets went to the side of the room and talked. After lunch Mariko said to follow her outside. Outside there was something like a battle arena. Mariko said they were going to have a little battle tournament. The winner gets two heart shards and the first to get in the hot spring afterwards. She would draw everyone's name and whoever got picked would go first. The first two names pulled were Jurina and Rena against Yuki and Mayu. Jurina smiled like a playboy and Mayu grinned evilly. It looks like they were both looking forward to this battle. Atsuko was also interested in the battle and couldn't wait to see it unfold. The two walked out into the arena while the others watched.

"Ready... Go!"

Mayu transformed and was the first to strike. She launched out at Rena and tried to attack with a low kick. However Rena got out of the way in time and fought back with a strike from above. She hit Mayu either parasol and then backed away right as Mayu shot a couple rounds from her cannon. Rena couldn't get out of the way in time so she took her parasol and opened it. The blasts bounced off and then Rena dashed forward. She swung high but Mayu moved and then kicked Rena from below. Rena stepped back and Mayu took this opportunity to attack again. She got behind Rena and pointed her cannon right at Rena's back.

"Gotcha~"

Mayu shot and Rena was sent flying forward. It was then Jurina decided to use a blood spell by pulling out a knife and cutting her finger. She drew a star on her mark and suddenly Rena's body started to glow. When the start finished, Rena turned around while still in midair and opened her parasol. In the sky, five orbs of energy appeared and shot something at Rena's parasol. It started to glow brightly and then when it was ready, Rena closed it and then aimed it right at Mayu with the point facing her. Mayu saw what was coming and decided to charge her larger cannon. Since Jurina used a spell then Yuki decided to use one as well. She cut her finger and then drew a diamond on her mark. Mayu's cannon grew twice the size and added another cannon to the side. Mayu began charging but Rena was almost to her. She was about to strike but then the cannon fired and Rena was sent way back into the walls. The battle had ended and Rena could no longer move.

"Rena!"

Jurina walked over and helped her up.

"I'm sorry..." Rena said.

"It's ok you did your best."

"Thank you Jurina."

The next ones up were Sayaka and Sae against Minami and Atsuko. Atsuko had never battled Sayaka before so she thought this was going to be an interesting match. The two got into their battle positions and then went into it. Sayaka swung her stand and managed to bash Minami in the side. However Minami also fought back and and sliced Sayaka's arm. The two stepped back trying to rethink their moves but then Sayaka decided to jump up and come down hard on Minami. Minami was quick though and managed to dodge.

"Holy crap!"

The stand crushed into the ground leaving a huge indent. It was then Minami realized how strong Sayaka was. She was going to have to be careful if she was going to win without any serious injuries. Sayaka jumped over Minami and hit her in the back knocking her forward. She was about to finish it off with one big blow but then Atsuko decided to use a blood spell. She cut her finger on her boot and then drew a triangle and a circle on the mark. Minami's body glowed red and the barrier rose. However as soon as it was up, Sayaka easily smashed it. Minami tried to attack but when she attacked it didn't do any damage. Minami was left stunned and confused but she didn't have time to mess with because Sayaka was charging once again. This time Sae used a spell and Sae drew a rectangle on her mark.

"Sayaka go!"

Sayaka's stand grew to the size of a huge hammer and she raised it above her body. She swung it down waiting to smash Minami into a pancake. Atsuko had to think fast and then came up with an idea.

"Minami hold out your sword!"

"Like this?!"

Minami held her word up pointing it towards Sayaka. Atsuko took her blood and drew little three triangles making one big triangle. Minami's sword grew ten times her sword and she struggled keeping it up. However with enough strength and power, she pushed forward and Sayaka and Mianmi collided. There was a bright flash and an explosion. Smoke was all around so it was hard to see who was still standing. When the smoke cleared, Sayaka was knocked out cold.

"What?! How?" Sae said.

Everyone looked over and saw Minami standing with a very large barrier around her. Minami was left unharmed because of the barrier and when they looked at Atsuko they saw three circles around her mark. Atsuko and Minami won the battle which means the moved on to the final round between them and Mayu and Yuki. The two stepped up to the battle field ready to fight. However before the battle started Mariko said,

"No blood spells this time!"

They all agreed and then Mayu said,

"We were going easy on you last time. Don't think we will be so merciful this time!"

"Sure you were. Lets go cyborg!"

"Bring it on midget!"

The two charged at each other and the last battle began. As the two were foghtingn though, they didn't see the three mysterious figures standing outside of the gates watching them silently. They didn't know what it was but there was someone there watching them but what they would soon find out was that they would turn into their most challenging battles yet.

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #103 on: May 15, 2013, 07:22:13 PM »
oho the battles are so interesting XD
thanks for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #104 on: May 15, 2013, 07:27:32 PM »
I wonder how they will fo without the blood spells.  A cannon against a sword yay
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #105 on: May 15, 2013, 08:24:33 PM »
OMg, finally she's here~~!!!! I waited for this moment so long!! Next chapter is where my most fav appearance will take place~!!!! YAY~!!  :cow: :cow: :cow:
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #106 on: May 16, 2013, 01:24:16 AM »
Secret base... and they need to clean them 1st....  :lol:

Rena is still weaker than everyone else.... Why is that.. I thought Rena and Geki become one... so she should be strong right?!

Wah... Atsuko is clever... she was able to make her own spell to protect Minami before Sayaka's attack arrived...

Ah... why did Miichan and Mariko never fight with them?

Who is the mysterious figure that was watching them?

What kind of battles are they going to be in?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #107 on: May 16, 2013, 04:40:03 AM »
Oh, I knows who's coming... I knows who's coming... YEHEY!!!!! It was them right?  XD XD XD

I can't wait to see that....!!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #108 on: May 16, 2013, 12:45:11 PM »
Eh? Eh? Who's coming. Seems like everybody knows who's coming.... :banghead:
But I don't know~~
Me want updates!!  :lol:

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #109 on: May 16, 2013, 01:11:35 PM »
There's gonna be new enemies...

There's gonna be a brawl...

And, I SWEAR there's gonna be a KISS!!!!!!!!
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #110 on: May 16, 2013, 01:49:39 PM »
Cisda83 is right!

Rena~ don't worry, Jurina and will always love you no matter how bad or weak you are.

New enemies? Kojiyuu and another one? Wait did Kojiyuu made their appearences yet? Need to check. ^^'


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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 2
« Reply #111 on: May 18, 2013, 10:49:40 PM »
Well everyone I hope that you guys like the update! A lot of interesting things happen with some pervy and some very interesting things. New characters and new powers! Hope you like it!
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Chapter 10 part 2

In the end Minami and Atsuko won the battle which meant they got the bath first. They stripped down and got into the hot spring. The water was warm and soothing with a nice relaxing scent of cherry blossoms. Minami and Atsuko were relaxing nicely under the full moon and thought things couldn't get any better. Then suddenly Atsuko noticed something on Minami that she had not seen before. There on her mark was a scar that looked like it had been there for a long time. There was a name on it but it was hard to read because the steam blocked it. When Atsuko tried to read it, the door opened and the sound of foot steps came running through.

"Time's up our turn!"

Mayu and Jurina came and jumped right in splashing water all over the place. Soon after Yuki, Rena, Mariko and Miichan followed in. Everyone was now in the hot spring and they were all enjoying the warm water. Jurina started to play games with Mayu while Rena and Yuki talked. Miichan and Mariko sat to the side and watched everyone quietly. Atsuko moved over towards Minami and decided to play a game with her. She took a towel and placed it over her eye. Then her hands quickly moved under the water and she pinched Minaimi's butt. Minami jumped up and yelped.

"Kya Atsuko! What are you doing?!"

Everyone was silent as they stared at Minami with wide eyes. It took Minami to realize that her entire body was completely exposed and everyone could see her. Then Jurina made a comment and said,

"Flat!"

Minami blushed and everyone giggled as she sat down and buried herself deep into the water with a dark red face. Atsuko walked over and patted Minami's head saying it was alright.

"Then how about I see yours!"

Minami reached out and grabbed Atsuko's oppai. Atsuko let out a yelp and Minami's eyes grew to the size of plates.

"Wah so soft! Mayu come check this out!"

"M-Minami... Yamete..."

"I like it. They're the perfect size for my hands."

"Minami!"

"Hey Minami check this out~"

Minami looked over and saw Mayu pull Yuki's towel off revealing her oppai. Everyone's jaws dropped but Rena quickly covered Jurina's eyes. Jurina tried to get around but Rena had her pinned down and in the end resulted in blindfolding her. Meanwhile Mayu was laughing as Minami became fascinated at how large Yuki's oppai were. She started walking towards them when suddenly Mayu pushed her back.

"Back off midget these are my oppai!"

To show ownership Mayu got behind Yuki and groped her. Yuki blushed and said,

"Mayu I told you to stop doing this!"

"Yuki's oppai are the greatest and they're all mine~"

Minami smirked and said,

"She makes up what you lack."

Mayu looked down and saw that her chest was very flat. Anger filled Mayu as she looked at Minami and said,

"Well you're flatter than me! If you didn't have long hair people would think you're a boy!"

"What did you call me?!"

"Takaboy Takaboy!"

"That's it come here you lolita cyborg!"

The two got into a fight and started splashing water everywhere. It was at that time everyone decided to get out and get dinner while the two fought in the bath. Mariko led everyone to the dinning room where there was a grand feast prepared for them. Yuki, Jurina, Atsuko and Mariko all sat the table and started to eat. Meanwhile Miichan and Rena sat to the side and talked about things. While eating, Mariko brought up the topic about the heart shards.

"So how many has everyone gotten so far?"

"Five!" Jurina said.

"Three." Yuki said.

"Four." Atusko said.

"Well it's good to see everyone is keeping up the competition. Remember everyone needs ten in order to enter the competition."

"How many do you have Mariko?" Jurina asked.

"Ten."

"EH?!" everyone yelled.

"Yep Miichan and I already got our ten. We're just waiting for the competition to start now."

"How much longer until the competition starts?" Atsuko asked.

"In a couple weeks."

"Oh gosh Mayu and I really need to work." Yuki said.

"Rena and I are ok since we're half way. If anything I can just pull out Gekikara and then we'll get plenty!"

"DON'T YOU DARE JURINA!" Rena shouted.

"I guess Minami and I have to get working as well."

All three of them started to think of where they could go for more battles. Then Mariko said,

"I would suggest the forest is a good place. Miichan and I found tons of puppets and masters all training. I would suggest you all go there as well."

"That sounds like a great idea! We'll all got there after we get back!" Jurina said.

Everyone agreed and ate happily the rest of their meal. Then suddenly the door opened and Mayu and Minami walked in. Their entire body was red like a lobster and the collapsed onto the floor. The two started to complain how hot they were and thought they were gonna die from the heat. It was obvious they had been in the hot spring for too long and were now feeling the after effects. Atusko and Yuki placed ice packs on the two and watched the ice melt as soon as it came into contact. They were almost on fire if it weren't for all the ice they had to cool them down. When they were finally cooled off, everyone went to bed and said their goodnights.

The next morning Atsuko woke up to the smell of breakfast. She walked down stairs and  found the others eating happily. Atsuko walked over and sat next to Jurina who was snacking on some toast. She ate breakfast as well and then headed outside where Minami and Rena were playing a game. Minami was blindfolded while Rena was running around trying to avoid her. Atsuko saw Rena run ahead of her but didn't see Minami and ended up slamming into into Atsuko.

"Wah who's there?!"

"It's me Minami!"

"Atsuko? Wah I'm so sorry!"

Minami pulled off her blindfold and helped Atsuko get back up. She brushed her off and soon the others came out to join in on the group fun. They all decided to play a game of hide and seek. Minami was the one seeking while everyone else hid. She counted to ten and once everyone was ready she set off to find the others. Jurina and Rena were pretty easy to find because wherever Rena was Jurina was. She ended up finding them behind behind a tree with Jurina practically glued to Rena. She then went to find Mariko and Miichan who were hiding in the trees. Minami found Yuki easily because her oppai stuck out but Mayu was a little more challenging. Mayu was hidden under a log where she had somehow managed to wedge herself under there. The only one left to find was Atsuko.

"Atsuko? Where are you?"

Minami searched the forest endlessly looking for Atsuko. As she was searching she suddenly heard a noise from the bushes. She thought she found Atsuko so she snuck up and then right as she was about to attack, the thing jumped out and turns out it wasn't Atsuko but someone else. Someone she had never seen before.

"A-Atsuko?"

"I'm going to set you free. I saw you have friends as well so help us set them free as well."

The figure leaned in close to Minami and stared at her with a long and intense look. Then suddenly a purple light flashed into Minami's eyes and something entered inside her. The figure then said,

"Gather your friends and bring them out here under the full moon."

Minami nodded her head and then walked into the open field where the others were waiting. Atusko and the others were standing there watching Minami.

"There you are Minami! We were all getting worried about you." Atsuko said.

"Ah sorry. Hey can I talk to Rena for a second?"

Mayu and Minami stepped to the side where the two talked. Little did the others know, Minami flashed the same light into Mayu's eyes who then got the same glow as her. The two nodded and then said they needed to borrow Rena for a moment. Rena followed the two and then came out with the same purple glow in her eyes. The glow faded though and then the three were about to get Miichan but then they all got called for dinner. They ate well and then got ready for bed. Atsuko saw how Minami looked kind of strange and must have been tired. Atsuko carried Minami back into the room and set her in the futon. Minami complained how she wanted to be with Atusko but Atsuko said she didn't want to get too hot from Minami. Then she got into the separate futon and slowly started to fall asleep.

As she laid in the futon, she didn't feel Minami get up and walk into the kitchen. There she saw Mayu and Rena all standing there as well. They nodded their heads and then split up and walked into their rooms. They grabbed their masters and carried them outside to the garden. They placed them gently on the floor and and then Mayu held up a small glowing ball. She took one and placed it in Yuki's mouth and then the others followed by putting the balls inside of their masters. A couple seconds later the three woke up and suddenly clenched their chests in pain. It felt like there was something tearing their insides out and they didn't know what was going on but the pain was unbearable. Atsuko looked up at Minami and knew something was wrong. All three of them had glowing purple eyes. As she sat there she also saw three dark figures step forward.

"Good job you guys. Soon their seals will be weak enough and then when the time comes you will finally be free." one said.

"Aren't you guys excited?! Once you're free you'll be just like us!" another said.

"You won't be lonely anymore." the last one said.

The three giggled and Atsuko's vision slowly started to blacken until finally it was dark. The next time Atsuko woke up, she was tied to a table of some kind along with the others as well. Then she saw Minami standing over her with a knife aiming right at her chest. She raised the blade as it hovered above and then started to bring it down upon Minami.

"Minami no!"   

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 2
« Reply #112 on: May 18, 2013, 11:14:23 PM »
Uh-oh... Uh-oh, uh-oh, UH-OHH!!!! :shocked

This.... is not... good...

But, what I wanna know is... :?

WHERE THE HECK ARE SAYAKA AND SAE WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! :panic: :banghead:
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 2
« Reply #113 on: May 18, 2013, 11:18:01 PM »
The three in the end are trouble, I hope they can pull through
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 2
« Reply #114 on: May 19, 2013, 01:26:09 AM »
Dam DAm DAm DAm! *Dramatic song thingy lols* :scared:
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 10 part 2
« Reply #115 on: May 19, 2013, 10:02:44 AM »
Ah.. so funny.. the bath scene... Mayu and Minami  :lol:

Ah... Minami, Mayu and Rena got hypnotized

What do the other puppets mean... that they are going to be free?

Are they going to break the bonds between the puppets and the masters?

What's going to happen to Mayuki, Atsumina and WMatsui?

Who would help them? MiiMari?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 11
« Reply #116 on: May 20, 2013, 05:43:01 PM »
So lets find out what happens to Minami and Atsuko! Enjoy!
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Chapter 11

"Minami no!"

The knife was about to come down on Atsuko when it suddenly stopped nearly centimeters away from her. Atsuko looked at Minami and saw a pained expression on her face. She also saw the purple in her eyes flicker trying to stay in control. However it looked like the real Minami was fighting as well and wasn't going to give up that easily. Atsuko started scouting at Minami telling her to fight it. Minami started to pull away but then one of the figures stepped forward and held Minami's hand.

"It's ok young one. Don't let her manipulate you with her words." it said.

"Minami no stop this!"

"Silence you piece of garbage! It's people like you who cause nothin but pain and suffering to us puppets."

"Minami I never hurt you did I? I never caused you any pain! Minami please stop this. It's me Atsuko remember?"

Minami struggled with her thoughts between killing Atsuko or saving her. She wanted to be free but the she couldn't kill the one closest to her. Minami struggled until finally the dark powers took over and she was going to kill Atsuko. She raised the knife and was about to bring it down but then suddenly something flew out and knocked the blade out of Minami's hand. Everyone looked over and saw Sae, Sayaka, Mariko and Miichan. They all ran over and helped out with Sayaka and Sae setting everyone free and Mariko and Miichan handling the strange figures. Atsuko got up and got on top of Minami pinning her down. Minami struggled and tried to throw Atsuko off. However Atsuko managed to keep her down and started shouting at her.

"Minami snap out of it!"

"Let go let go! You're just going to use me and then get rid of me! All you masters should just die and leave us puppets alone!"

"Minami!"

Atsuko pulled Minami up and pulled her in for a reassuring hug. She held her tightly as she struggled but Atsuko stayed and said,

"Would a master do this?"

Without a warning Atsuko leaned in and kissed Minami's lips. Minami froze not sure what to do but as soon as their lips came into contact, the spell on Minami broke and she turned back to normal. When she realized what happened she quickly pushed Atsuko back and looked away blushing.

"Acchan you baka!"

"Minami you're back!"

Atsuko hugged Minami tightly not letting her go. Minami was confused but all she knew was that Atsuko had kissed her and now she was just flustered. However their moment came to an end when Mayu came rushing in with the knife. She nearly stabbed Atsuko but then Yuku pulled her back. Yuki and Mayu were fighting and Jurina and Rena were also fighting. They had to break the spell somehow but the question was how? Atsuko looked over and saw Mariko and Miichan fighting the three figures. Atsuko was amazed when she saw how strong Miichan and Mariko were. Miichan was taking on all three of them like they were nothing. There was a reasons by they gained all those heart shards and that was because they're strong. Atsuko watched Mariko and Miichan fight and didn't even notice the flying blade aiming towards her head. Luckily Minami blocked it and then quickly pulled Atsuko back.

"Yuki do something about Mayu!" Minami said.

"I got you!"

Yuki grabbed Mayu and held her close to her body. She stroked Mayu's hair and whispered something to her that made Mayu's face turn bright red. However Mayu was back to normal and all that was left was Rena and Jurina. Rena was about five seconds away from stabbing Jurina when Sayaka stepped in and knocked her back. She was about to strike again but then Jurina pulled out something that looked very confusing to everyone. There in her hand she was holding a melonpan. Rena immediately snapped out of her spell and ran to Jurina like a puppy. She took the melonpan and opened the pack. Then she took it and placed it on top of her head wearing it like a hat. Atsuko and Minami were confused but as long as it got Rena back they didn't care. Now all that was left was the three figures. Sayaka and Sae managed to defeat one of them but the other two were still fighting. Soon the others came and was ready to help out in the fight. It was then the figures decided to retreat and run away. After everything settled down, Atsuko asked,

"What were those?"

"Puppets." Mariko said.

"Where were their masters?"

"They don't have masters."

"What?!"

Everyone looked at Mariko with a surprised look. Mariko calmed them down and explained her reasoning.

"There are some puppet who live without their masters. They manage to survive and live on their own."

"How did they get like that?" Minami asked.

Mariko grew silent for a moment and then said,

"They killed their masters... They killed them and removed their hearts and then put them in their own bodies. By doing this the body of the puppet fuses with the body of the master and therefore it can still live even without a master."

"That's horrible..." Atsuko said.

"It is indeed a horrible thing. What causes them to do such things no one knows but it truly it is saddening."

"So why were they trying to get Minami and the others to kill us?" Jurina asked.

"They probably want more supporters. More puppets to fight with them." Miichan said.

"So then how will we know if a puppet is heartless or not?"

"Well look for a purple glow or a large scar on their chest." Mariko said.

"Ok then everyone be on the look out!" Minami said.

"Then for now let's take one last dip in the hot spring!"

"Yeah!!!"

Everyone rushed to the hot spring where they had a nice relaxing bath. Minami and Atsuko were were talking with Mayu and Yuku while Jurina and Rena were talking with Sae and Sayaka. Turns out Sayaka and Sae weren't there the first time because they got stuck back at the arena and couldn't find a way out. They were trapped in there for the night and so Sae was starving. As everyone was bathing, Mayu and Minami got into it again and this time Sayaka got involved as well. Everyone was surprised when they saw how flat Sayaka was and started to pick on her. It then Sayaka went gorilla on them and nearly drowned Mayu and Minami. Sae had to practically restrain Sayaka and drag her to their room to calm down. When dinner was ready the masters ate while the puppets talked some more. Then everyone turned in for bed and said their goodnight. Minami got into the futon with Atsuko and cuddled with her. Atsuko turned around and patted Minami's head saying,

"Even if you turned on me.... I would never hurt you Minami."

"Mou don't say that Atsuko! I would never turn against you!" Minami said.

"I know I know but I'm just saying."

"Baka you shouldn't think those things."

"Hai hai~ I'm going to sleep now so I'll see you tomorrow. Night~"

"Night~"

Atsuko fell asleep and Minami watched over her right by her side. However at some point something was starting to change again in Atsuko. The mark other chest started to change again and the bulges on the side of the mark grew. When one looked at them they looked like tiny horns. Atsuko and Minami didn't know it was happening but they would soon find out.The next morning everyone had to get up early and get on the bus for a long way home. The bus ride felt shorter this time probably because Atsuko was asleep for a long time. When they arrived home they were so relieved. The first thing the two did was lay down on the couch and lounge around like a bunch of lazy bones. They were happy they were finally home but they were a little upset knowing that they were going back to school. They couldn't do anything about it so they just relaxed and enjoyed the rest of the day.

The next morning Atsuko woke up and found Minami laying on top of her. She didn't know what was going on but it was a bit strange even for Minami. She tried to pull her off her but she wouldn't budge.

"Minami? Are you ok?"

Minami was still with her eyes wide open. Atsuko shook Minami really hard and eventually she fell off the bed. Minami came back and was dazed and confused.

"Itai!" Minami said.

"Minami what were you doing?" Atsuko asked.

"I don't know. I remember laying in the bed next to you and after that everything blacked out.."

"Blacked out?"

"Yeah like everything got quiet and dark. I wasn't thinking or doing anything just laying on you."

"Uh Minami... I think you were sleeping."

"Ehhhh?!"

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Uh oh something's wrong with Minami! Or is it wrong? Find out next time!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 11
« Reply #117 on: May 20, 2013, 06:04:20 PM »
Hmmm... let me guess!

MINAMI TURNS INTO HUMAN??!!!

SHE BECOMES A HUMAN, right??!!

Yeaaaayy!!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 11
« Reply #118 on: May 20, 2013, 06:10:58 PM »
Slowly turning into a human because they are getting closer as master and puppet
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 11
« Reply #119 on: May 20, 2013, 06:23:18 PM »
thanks for the update! Really interesting about the lone puppets with no masters, but it's a cruel way to gain their freedom.
Atsumina was cute! And everyone was pretty badass :D

& interesting, still wondering what's up with Minami and Atsuko. Minami falling asleep is not something puppets do, so it'll be interesting to find out why and how that is happening.

Thanks! Looking forward to the next chapter!

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