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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 7
« Reply #80 on: May 10, 2013, 01:52:34 PM »
Wow, Geki's so strong, she almost killed Minami  :shocked

But she's gone, Rena's back to her master
Jurina...I cried while reading that scene, but Ju-chan could make all the injures come into her?
Now good kiddo, be a better master :D hope WMatsui'll be fine



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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 7
« Reply #81 on: May 10, 2013, 06:06:52 PM »
great update :thumbsup
waiting for more from you
thanks for great fic :cow:
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 7
« Reply #82 on: May 10, 2013, 06:11:53 PM »
I'll squeal about this update for you personally, honey~  :deco:

Waitin~ for the next chapter
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 8
« Reply #83 on: May 12, 2013, 04:00:17 AM »
@Sherin: Ahh I'll explain all that as the story progresses~ Don't wanna give away all my secrets yet  :P

Minna this chapter focuses on Saeyaka but there's also a little Atsumina surprise in the end so I hope you like the update!
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Chapter 8

It had been a week since the incident with Rena and Jurina but now things have moved on and everything was pretty good. Minami and Atsuko were sitting on a bench in the school garden when Sayaka walked over to them. She stood in front of Minami with a sad look on her face and tears in her eyes. Her head was aimed down toward her feet and her hands clenched into fists. Minami stood up and patted Sayaka's shoulder and then asked,

"What's wrong Sayaka?"

"It's Sae... I'm worried about her.." she said.

"What do you mean?"

"Sae is always going after girls. She's a player always using them for whatever she needs and then leaves them with a broken heart. I hate seeing the girls who fall because of her and their lives practically ruined because of her."

"Then what do you want us to do?"

"I want you to help me stop her. If she keeps it up she may meet a girl one day that won't let go and do something horrible to her. I've tried talking to her but she just ignores me and moves onto her next target."

"Then how can we help you?"

"I need you guys to help me lure someone."

Turns out Sayaka had a plan to get Sae to stop her from hitting on the other girl by getting her heart so crushed that there was no turning back. Her plan was to get someone she really liked and have them pretend to like Sae. They do a couple romantic things and then the girl dumps Sae in the most horrible way possible. There was only one person who fit that description and that person was Kashiwagi Yuki. The only problem was that Mayu was always protective with her and there was no way that she would let Yuki do that. Therefore Sae's plan was to lure Mayu away while Sayaka talked to Yuki. Mayu and Yuki were sitting together at the lunch table when Minami walked over and said,

"Nee Mayu can you come with me and look at something for me?"

"Sure."

Once Mayu and Minami were gone, Sayaka and Atusko made their move. They sat next to Yuki wedging her between them and both stared at her with an intense look. She looked at the two and then said,

"Do you need something?"

"We need you to date Sae." Atusko said.

Yuki nearly spat out her lunch when she heard those words. When she finally calmed down she said,

"Go out with Sae?!"

"Yes. Can you please go out with Sae?"

"No way!"

"Yuki please! I'm trying to save Sae and I need your help." Sayaka said.

"The answer is no now leave."

Sayaka pounded her fist on the table hard enough to make it split in half. Then she stood up and looked down on Yuki with a dark look in her eyes. She placed her hand on Yuki's shoulder and then softly said,

"Please.. she's my only friend and I don't want to lose her..."

Yuki took her hand and patted it gently.

"Alright I'll do it but you have to do something for me afterwards."

"Whatever you want."

"Good. Ah here she comes now."

Sae was walking towards them and when she saw Yuki she put on her cool ikemen personality and strutted forward. Yuki also got up and elegantly walked over to Sae until the two met at a middle. Yuki and Sae stared at each other with intense looks and then when Sae was about to say something, Yuki said,

"I like you let's go out together."

Everyone in the lunch room gasped all waiting to see what would happen next. Sae herself was a little taken back but then composed herself and said,

"I'll be happy to."

She then help Yuki close to her all the girls cried. Mayu walked in on the scene and when she saw Sae and Yuki, she went into crazy killer and started running towards the two. However as she was about to punch Sae, Yuki got in front and made her stop. She ordered Mayu to leave the two alone and Mayu ended up running out of the lunch room crying. Then after Sae and Yuki left while Atsuko ran after Mayu to try to calm her down and explain what was going on. A couple minutes later Mayu came running back in and gave Sayaka a mega punch to the chest sending her flying back.

"You're gonna pay when this is all over!"

Then she left with a pout on her face and steam coming from her head. Sayaka sighed knowing she was going to be in a lot of trouble when everything is sorted out. In the meantime however, Sayaka said she was going to follow Yuki and Sae after school. They all waited until school was over and then when the time came Sayaka, Atsuko and Minami all followed Sae and Yuki to a cafe where they sat and watched the two. Yuki was smiling and laughing but on the inside everyone could see the dark aura oozing from her very being. Sae being thick though couldn't sense it and just kept going on about how great she was. At one point Yuki got up to go use the bathroom and during the time, another girl walked over to Sae.

"I know that girl!" Sayaka said.

Sayaka explained how that girl was one of Sae's ex-girl friends and wondered what she was doing back there. The girl looked angry at Sae who was staring at her with an unamused look on her face. She said something and made the girl cry and run into the bathroom right as Yuki came out. She walked back over and sat down and the two continued there so called "date" Then when everything was done, the two got up and left, the girl from before came out with a cup of something. She walked over to Yuki and held it above her head ready to pour it. Sayaka saw this and quickly ran over and got in the way. Turns out it was hot coffee and it got all over Sayaka. Sayaka then turned around and pushed the girl out of the cafe before Sae could see her. The girl shouted at Sayaka and then left.

"Sayaka are you ok?!" Minami said.

"I'm fine.." Sayaka said.

"Your clothes are ruined. We should let you change." Atsuko said.

"I said I'm fine."

"No you're not now come with me. Minami stay and watch Sae and Yuki."

"I'm on it."

The three split up and Atsuko took Sayaka to a clothing store where the two looked for a new outfit. Seeing how Sayaka only wore jerseys or boy like clothing, she decided to make Sayaka wear something more to her style. She made Sayaka try on a short black dress with lace on the back and heels to match. They went to the bathroom where Atsuko washed out the coffee in her hair and used the hand driers as a hair dryer. Then she took some of her perfume and sprayed some on Sayaka as well as a little make up. When it was all done, Sayaka looked beautiful and couldn't believe how well dressed she looked. She was almost unrecognizable if Atsuko didn't know her so well. Sayaka was a little embarrassed about the whole outfit but they didn't have time to complain as the final plans were coming together and they had to move.

They met up with Minami in the park where Yuki and Sae were sitting in front of the fountain. They were talking when Sayaka arrived and when Minami saw her she nearly blew their cover if Atsuko hadn't covered her mouth. They watched Yuki and Sae and watched Sae wrap her arm around Yuki's shoulder. Then she faced her and started to lean in ready to kiss her. Yuki was backing away though and looking around for someone to help her. Out of nowhere the girl from before came out and this time she wasn't alone. She had a little group of guys who all looked pretty angry. Sae stood up and faced them.

"You wanna go?! Bring it!"

All the guys started to attack at Sae who started punching and kicking anyone she saw. Meanwhile Yuki faded into the background and moved over to where Minami, Atsuko and Sayaka were hiding. They were watching Sae fight off the guys and then Minami said,

"Shouldn't we do someting?"

"No she's fine." Yuki said.

They all watched Sae as she took out every guy one by one until there was none left. The girl stood there all alone and now Sae was more mad than ever. She was about to smack her but then the girl backed away and pulled out a knife. Sae was going to move out of the way and attack but then two more guys got in the way and held her back. Sae was trapped and the girl was aiming the knife right at Sae's neck. She started to charge and that was when Sayaka stepped forward and knocked the knife out of the girl's hand.  Atsuko and Minami knocked the other two guys out and all that was left was Sae and Sayaka. Sayaka turned around to face Sae who looked at her with a stunned look.

"Are you arlgiht?" Sayaka asked.

"Yeah..." Sae said.

Sayaka helped Sae up and Sae said,

"I don't know who you are but you're gorgeous. Would you like to go on a date with me?"

"Sae it's me Sayaka."

"Eh?! Uso!"

"I'm serious."

"Woah Sayaka... You look hot!"

"Thanks Sae..."

"What are you doing out here?" Sae asked.

"Well I came here to stop you from screwing up on something big."

"Nani?"

"Sae, you always go after all these girls and then you break their hearts. If you keep doing that you're going to end up getting hurt like you did today. I'm worried about you and I want to protect you. It's my job as your puppet to protect you and I will keep my word until the day I die. I know you don't care but I do and just remember that no matter what you do, I'll always be here for you whenever you need me."

Sayaka turned around getting ready to leave when Sae grabbed her. She hugged Sayaka close and said,

"Sayaka... I'm so sorry for all the trouble I've put you through. I'm sorry for everything.. Please forgive me..."

Sae started crying and Sayaka just patted her back and told her everything was going to be alright. Minami, Atsuko and Yuki decided to leave the two be so they could make up and do what they needed to do. Overall though they were happy that the two made up.

The next day the two didn't show up for school and Mayu and Yuki needed someone to do the things that Sayaka owed them so they took it out on Minami and Atsuko. Mayu made Minami her personal slave and had her follow her everywhere and do whatever she wanted and Yuki made Atsuko deal with all the boys who were trying to get together with her. It was a long day of hard work and in the end the two were both tired. However Mayu and Yuki were satisfied and decided to leave the two alone. They went home and sat on the couch together more tired than ever.

"Nee Atsuko.."

"Yes Minami?"

"Why are we so nice to people?" Minami asked.

"Well it's because we are." Atsuko said.

"Yes but still, I something wish we didn't have to get involved with every little situation that requires help. I mean we're also risking out lives by doing this and I worry about you."

"Aww Minami relax~ We're fine so there's nothing bad that's gonna happen."

"But Atsuko-"

Minami was silenced with a kiss to the cheek making her blush a dark red.

"Just relax and trust me ok? I know that if anything bad ever happens to me you'll always be here and protect me right?"

"Of course!"

"Good then let's go to bed ok? I'm tired~"

"Hai!"

The two went to bed together after such a long day however there was something that Atsuko didn't know was going on. In the middle of the night, the mark on Atsuko's chest started to grow and and mutate into something different. The heart started to grow two bulges on it's sides that didn't stick out much but slowly, the mark was starting to change into something else. Neither one of them knew what was happening and it was something for them to find out later on in the future.   

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Nyaha so many things happen today~ Oh what's gonna happen to Minami and Atsuko? Find out next time!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 8
« Reply #84 on: May 12, 2013, 04:22:52 AM »
YAY~~~~~~~ SAEYAKAAAAAAAAAAAAAA :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

LOL, Sae didn't even recognize Sayaka-chan as a her; she saw her as another hot chic!!!!

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 :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: And, so cute. Hope to see some more romantic scenes from them~ :wub: :wub: :wub:

 :deco: :deco: :deco: This really makes my day! Thankz! :twothumbs
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 8
« Reply #85 on: May 12, 2013, 05:09:40 AM »
Thanks for the update!  The sayaka and sae focus was nice in this chapter :)
& lol at Mayu and Yuki taking it out and Minami and Atsuko :O
& wow, more questions regarding Minami and Atsuko now, but this time involving the mark.

Can't wait to read what happens next!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 8
« Reply #86 on: May 12, 2013, 05:44:40 AM »
Stingy. >.<

Ahh~ too bad there was no WMatsui cameo, but still I enjoyed this chapter.

You know, I'm a really picky reader (or so my fellow wota friends said) and usually read only WMatsui or JuriMayu, but I've read almost all of your fics. XD You're just that awesome.


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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 8
« Reply #87 on: May 12, 2013, 06:39:31 AM »
So the SaeYuki didn't pan out but in the end SaeYaka got together
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 8
« Reply #88 on: May 12, 2013, 09:53:08 AM »
Ah... even I understand Sayaka situation...

What is so good about that...?

Sae would know later that everything was just planned... Would that cure her...?

Poor Mayu... at least she was able to understand... what's going on.

Sayaka is in a lot of trouble indeed once it's over.

Eh... Sae would just ask every single hot person that come across her...

Does she even know the meaning of love... I think she is just someone that like every pretty things...?

Yeah.. I agreed with Minami... why did they need to be involved in others' problems...?

Why did the mark on Atsuko's chest evolve to something else?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 8
« Reply #89 on: May 12, 2013, 10:26:52 AM »
isn't it evolving because the connection between the two got deeper and they got a bit closer?

I think they are now connected even more, nee?

I also want wMatsui~ *puppy eyes*

Honey~ onegai~ at least a cameo appearance~

And I loved Sayaka here, she looked gorgeous in that dress  :twothumbs
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 8
« Reply #90 on: May 12, 2013, 03:09:12 PM »
aww sayaka is so sweet trying to protect sae :heart: :yep: its good in the end those two made up :deco:
lol minami was mayu's personal slave and atsuko had to help yuki dealing with the boys :lol:
poor mayu though :(
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 8
« Reply #91 on: May 12, 2013, 06:04:08 PM »
Minami and Acchan are so kind   :)
after help Sayaka now they have to replace Sayaka to repay Yuki and Mayu  :lol:
the mark in Acchan's chest change maybe coz connection between them became strong  :?
cant guess .. I'll wait for next update

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #92 on: May 13, 2013, 05:47:48 PM »
Hope you guys like the update! Atsuko unlocks a new power so lets see what happens!
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Chapter 9

Atsuko and Minami were eating lunch together when Jurina and Rena walked over and sat with them. They talked about how things were going better for them and they're really starting to get along. As they were talking, Atsuko suddenly asked,

"Nee Jurina."

"Hai?"

"Back when we battled you did this one move where you somehow managed to separate Rena from Gekikara. How did you do that?

"Ah the blood spell!"

"Blood spell?"

"Yeah it's a spell that enhances the powers of a puppet."

"How do we do that?"

"We'll you draw blood and then you draw the symbol of the spell you wanna use onto your mark."

"Can you show me?"

"Sure!"

Jurina, Minami, Rena and Atsuko all went out to the field after school. They changed into their battle outfits and then the training session began.

"Now since you've never used a blood spell before let's start out with something small! Now first we need to make you bleed so Rena."

Rena walked over and made a small cut on Atsuko's finger.

"Now draw a circle around your mark!"

Atsuko drew a circle and the mark started to glow. She looked over at Minami and saw a barrier surround Minami. Rena swung her parasol at Minami and Atsuko watched it bounce off.

"That was a safety spell. It's one of the weaker ones though so they'll fade away quickly depending on how much damage it takes."

Rena hit the barrier again and it cracked and shattered. Jurina then told Minami to try to spilt a huge boulder in half. Minami tried but it didn't work.

"Now draw a triangle around your mark."

Atsuko drew a triangle and Atsuko watched Minami's body glow a red aura. Jurina had Minami strike the boulder once more and this time it split right down the middle.

"Again it's a weak spell but it's an attack spell that raises your power levels for a short time."

"Then what was the one that you used?"

"That was a duplication spell. It separated your puppet into clones depending how many times to divide your mark. My intention was to separate Rena from Gekikara but you could divide more."

"Let me try!"

Atsuko took her hand and divided her mark into two. Soon after Minami's body split and there was a second Minami standing before her.

"Wah sugoi!"

"Acchan!"

The Minami clone jumped on Atsuko and hugged her tightly.

"Oi oi what are you doing?!"

"One thing you should know is that the clone only has half the intelligence level of the original one. In other words she's as dumb as a box of rocks."

"Acchan~"

The Minami clone cuddled close to Atsuko and the real Minami had a dark look on her face. She walked over and pulled the other Minami off of Atsuko and stabbed it. The clone went down and Minami stared at Atsuko with a mean glare. Atsuko didn't say anything but giggled when she saw how jealous Minami was. She patted her head and then said that it was ok. However suddenly, the clone stood up and then divided into another clone making two of them. Minami thought they were dead so she sliced both of them. However those two came back and divided making four clones. She was going to slice them again but Jurina stopped her. She said she had to wait for the spell to ware off and when Atsuko asked how long it would take Jurina said two hours for every clone. There were four clones so eight hours and Minami told her she wasn't going to like it.

The day went on and Minami was already coming to the point of snapping. All day the clones clung to Atsuko like she was their mother and Minami couldn't get anywhere close to her. Minami wanted to just kill them all but she knew if she did then she would only make more. When school ended, the first clone faded leaving three left. They decided to go out with Rena and Jurina for ice cream but Minami was in no mood for it. She just wanted to go home and chain the other three clones and wait for them to die. Atsuko wanted ice cream though so they went and the get together was very awkward. Minami sat at the end if the table while the other clones clung to Atsuko asking for her to feed them. Jurina and Rena were laughing but Minami was getting angry.

"Relax Minami they're almost gone~"

Atsuko handed Minami a small parfait but Minami pushed it away and said,

"Puppets can't eat remember."

When they finished their ice cream another clone passed leaving two left. The girls decided to go to the shopping mall and look for some new clothes. Atsuko told her that she was gonna look for something sexy for Minami to wear. Minami was excited at first but when they got inside, the clones dragged Atsuko into the toy store and made her play with them. Already steaming mad, Rena decided to take Minami to a different store to let her cool down. She took her to a shop and the two looked around. Out of the corner of her eye Minami saw something that she thought would be a good gift for Atsuko. It was a cell phone strap making kit and Minami had the perfect idea for Atsuko. She bought the kit and quickly hid it in her pocket just as Atsuko finally came out with just one clone on her back. There was only one left and Minami couldn't wait.

They said goodbye to Jurina and Rena and then went home. Atsuko cooked her dinner and then sat at the table to eat. Minami ran off into her room and pulled out the kit she got and started to get to work. With some glue and some hair and a little glitter the gift was done. Minami finished proud of her work and walked into the main room. She was going to present her work to Atsuko but when she walked in, she gasped seeing something she never thought was possible. The clone was on too of Atsuko pinning her down. Atsuko's face was flushed and the clone had a smirk on it's face as it stroked Atsuko's body. The anger inside Minami had finally snapped and she lashed out on the clone. She tackled her clone hard to the ground and punched its face. The clone tried to fight back but Minami kicked it and it slammed into the wall. That was enough as the clone faded and now all the clones were gone. Minami calmed down and then faced Atsuko.

"Atsuko are you ok?"

"Yes.. I'm fine.."

Atsuko sat up and Minami hugged her tightly.

"Mou those clones were really stupid."

"That's what I've been trying to tell you." Minami said.

"I'm sorry Minami.." Atsuko said.

"It's ok. They're gone now and there's no need to worry."

"But for the rest of the day you were ignored. I feel so bad for ignoring you.."

"It's fine~"

Minami leaned in and kissed Atsuko's cheek. Atsuko blushed and then Minami pulled out the gift she made for her. Atsuko was stunned seeing the little charm she made. The charm was like a little chibi Minami in her battle outfit. Atsuko was speechless and didn't know what to say. The feeling of joy in her was overwhelming that she didn't know what to do. Instead, she blushed and pulled out a bag she had bought while shopping. She handed it to Minami and told her to go change into the outfit inside. Minami walked away and then she came back with a blushing red face.

"So sexy~"

"Mou Atsuko!"

Minami was in a short red dress with black lace on the end and shoulders and crystals on the chest area. Atsuko walked over and took Minami's hair out of her pony tail and watched it fall down naturally. Seeing the waves flow down to her shoulders and make the perfect frame of her face made Atsuko awe in beauty. Minami on the other side was blushing and didn't know what to say. The two stared at each other for a long time in silence until Atsuko suddenly stepped closer. She held Minami in her arms and slowly moved her lips closer to hers. Minami thought she was going to explode if Atsuko kept moving but was too stunned to move. Their lips were nearly inches apart and then suddenly the door opened.

"Hello!"

"Kya!!!"

Atsuko and Minami both jumped back and looked at who was standing at the door. It was Mariko and Miichan. Minami's face turned red and she ran into her room and changed then came out still hot. Mariko and Miichan laughed and then  Mariko said,

"Are we interrupting something?"

"No!" the two said.

"We'll we came to tell you that all the puppet masters are going on a trip and wanted to know if you wanted to come." Miichan said.

"Where are we going?"

"We're going to a temple where we can spend the night and even having some sparring matches. There's also a hot spring where we can relax."

"Sounds awesome! We'd love to go." Atsuko said.

"Great then we'll see you tomorrow ok?"

"Ok!"

"Alright then we'll be going. Have fun you two~"

"We weren't doing anything like that!"

"Sure~ have fun~"

Mariko and Miichan left and Minami was still blushing. Atsuko hugged her and said,

"You excited for the trip?"

"Yeah but um Atsuko..."

"Hai?"

"Nothing perverted ok?" Minami said.

"Hai hai~ nothing beyond hugs but in the hot springs I may get a little touchy~"

"Mou! Atsuko!"

"Kawai~"

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Well there's the update! I hope you guys liked it!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #93 on: May 13, 2013, 06:23:30 PM »
Minami and Atsuko are getting closer with everyday that passes by.  Although puppets cannot eat seems kinda funny yet you want to just show it for kicks :nervous
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #94 on: May 13, 2013, 06:32:15 PM »
Yay~ Hot Spring episode~

Don't worry Takamina, there WILL be sth pervert going on. XD

Need to prepare my yuri-google.

Ah! It would be nice if Geki join too. >.<
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #95 on: May 13, 2013, 07:09:21 PM »
the spells are so cool XD
haha minami's clone is dumb but keeps hugging acchan :lol:, cute jealous minami :P
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #96 on: May 13, 2013, 07:14:50 PM »
Haha without the Marimii's interruption it would be too easy lol

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #97 on: May 13, 2013, 07:56:32 PM »
thanks for the update! Fun chapter lol. Jealous Minami is cute :P The blood spells are an interesting concept and it's good Atsuko knows about them now. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #98 on: May 13, 2013, 09:41:44 PM »
mehehehe acchan aw you  :kekeke:
Wait a minute hot spring u said  :shy1:  :on bleed:
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 9
« Reply #99 on: May 14, 2013, 03:04:49 AM »
Aw Minami's getting jealous even though the clones are hers.... she's so cute!!!!!  :wub: :wub: :wub:

Hot spring ehh..... Better bringing some Yuri detecting shades.....  XD XD XD

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