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Title: The Breakout (it's a working title)
Rating: R – NC17
Genre: Survival Horror
Author's Note:

WARNING This fiction may contain possible deaths of members. Read at your own risk.

This idea came to me a few months ago and I never had the intention on writing this down but because I promise a friend of mine that if she'll update her fic, I'll start writing it.



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Prologue





It was eight in the evening and in a certain dance studio, people inside are still practicing. They started at early morning and by noon, some of the members have already left to go to their separate works. The remaining members haven’t left the room since, putting their full focus to their routines.

“Again. From the top.” A small girl yelled to a room full of exhaust girls. After hearing the command of their general manager, they dragged their worn out bodies to their respective spots. They wanted to complain for dancing nonstop for two hours without any breaks, but they all knew what will happen if they didn’t follow her.

“Takamina’s more of an S than you are, ne Mariko?” A brown haired girl said, leaning her tired body to a tall girl’s shoulder.

“So does that make us M’s?” Mariko replied while pouring down the sports drink down to her mouth, drinking like there’s no tomorrow.

“We better go to our places now, Yuko.” The two girls pushed their bodies off the bench and went to their respective teammates. As the captain of team K, Yuko clapped her hands to gather the attention of her remaining members while Mariko went to the general manager and fellow teammate’s side.

Mariko then said “I know that you’re nervous for the upcoming concert, but let them take a break. Not only them, but you as well. You had been dancing since morning. Don’t push yourself too hard, Takamina.”

Takamina wiped the sweat from her forehead and looks up to Mariko.

“OK... but after we finish this routine.” Takamina responded. It was their new and upcoming single which will be performed for the first time. The overall performance so far is still not ready to perform in front of an audience.

“Fine.... Hey guys, after we’re done with this, let’s have a 30 minutes break.” The members then quickly went to their places, anticipating for the break given. They gave their remaining energy as the intro of the song played.

 After the end of the song, Takamina turned around and loudly said “Ok 30 minutes break. But we still need to work on Sayonara Crawl.”

The girls then went to their bags and sat down at the floor to rest their sore legs and back. Yuki, Mayu and Sashihara fell asleep at the side, ignoring the chatter of Paruru with her team captain Ayaka while Kitahara, Ami and Sayaka ate their bento.

“You’re really working us till we drop dead Takamina.” A black haired girl breathed heavily while laying flat on the floor.

“Miichan’s right. I can’t feel my legs.” Haruna massaged her thighs while sitting next to the tired girl. Takamina stared at her two companions as both of them pant heavily. Maybe she’s been too hard on them, but as the sokantoku, she has her responsibilities. She needs to make sure that everything is ready for the concert.

“Yo Takamina, Miichan, Haruna.” A certain genki approached the trio.
“Sae-chan I haven’t seen you in a while since you transfer to Shanghai. It’s too bad that the other overseas transfer can’t be here” Miichan sat up to greet Sae.

“Too bad? They’re lucky they’re not here. Takamina’s killing us.” Haruna said which earn her a glare from Takamina.

“Nah it’s ok. I really miss practicing like this. It’s been a while since I sweat like this.” Sae gave a smile to the trio. They look at her and know that Sae really miss being with AKB after her decision to transfer.

“You know, Sayaka really miss you.” Miichan can see the smile slowly fading away from Sae’s face. She had heard her decision to graduate through Sayaka’s blog and she felt guilty about it. She always knew the transfer will affect her friend and she doesn’t know if this is her fault.

“I’ll talk to you later. I have to go talk to her.” Sae smiled again and left them. Then, two girls approached them, carrying towels in their hands.

“Hi two Tomos.” Miichan waved at the two while they sat beside them.

“I’m going to miss these long and tiring practices.” Tomomi~ wiped her face with the towel while Tomochin stares at her. This will be her last concert before graduating.

“Don’t be sad Tomochin. We’re still going to see each other. And besides, you’re graduating too. Chiyuu~” Tomochin~ wrapped her arms around her friend, comforting her.

“We’re going to miss you guys.” Miichan said teary eyed.

“Don’t be such a cry baby Miichan. Just like Tomomi~ said, we’re still going to see each other.” Haruna said as she looks at the two Tomos.

It’s another reason why Takamina wants this concert to be perfect, it’s not just any ordinary concert, this will be Tomomi~’s  last concert. She wants a concert to be the best not only for Tomomi~ but also for the fans. Spending 7 years in the group, she deserves a memorable concert.

“Are you ready Tomomi~?” Takamina asked as she sat at the floor to join her friends.

A simple nod was Tomomi~’s short reply to their sokantoku.

25 minutes had past and everyone hasn’t recovered from their last session. Miichan, Haruna and Takamina was now prepping their things to get ready while the others are chatting with each other. Suddenly, Sato Amina entered the room running, catching the attention of all of the girls.

“What happen to you?” Yuko immediately went to her side and gave her bottled water. Soon enough, the girls gathered around her.

“Oh….. it’s….. nothing.” She said in between breaks as she catches her breath.

“What happen to your arm?” Sayaka noticed the scratch on her right shoulder. The wound created a shallow cut which appears to be created by a sharp pointed object. “Let me get the first aid kit.”

Sayaka left while the rest of the girls led her to side benches. Amina stabilized her breathing as Sayaka came back with a first aid kit and handed it over to Yuki.

“I was walking outside to take some fresh air but then, this guy came towards me. He looks a really pale and he walks a little funny, I think his drunk. Then, he suddenly took my shoulder…. and I tried to shake him off but he has a strong grip on me.” Amina said as Yuki treats her wounds. “But I’m ok now so it’s not a big deal.”

“IT is a big deal. What if that guy did something to you? What if you didn’t get away?” Takamina said worryingly. For the past 7 years, she has been looking out for each and every member. She treats them like family and it’s hard to see someone get hurt.

“Don’t worry about it. It’s just a scratch.” Amina helped Yuki strap the bandage to her shoulder. She can see the concern in Takamina’s eyes, making her feel grateful.

“Let’s have another 30 minutes break. You need to rest.” Takamina said to Amina.

“No. It’s just a scratch, it’s not life threatening.” Amina smiled to her and she stood up from the bench and walk over to her respective spot.

The rest of the girls went and followed her. Seeing Amina’s determination, they all wanted to do their best too.

After an hour of perfecting Sayonara Crawl, they headed the last group hurdle for today’s session. It was getting late and all of the members are all tired. As usual, Takamina led the group and gave a few reminders.

“Today’s AKB practice is a success. We are now done with Sayonara Crawl. The setlist is now complete with SKE and NMB had their practice yesterday. And tomorrow I want you-. “ Takamina didn’t finish her sentence when she can see Amina looking a little pale.

“Are you alright? You’re really sweating. Do you have a fever?” Takamina walk over to check for her temperature.

“Y-Y-Yeah I-I’m fine.” She shivered and clutched tightly to her jacket.

“You’re burning up. We need to get you to a hospital.” Takamina felt Amina’s burning forehead and help her get up.

“N-No I-It’s fine. J-Just let me rest for a while. I’ll be fine.” She closed her eyes and quickly went to sleep.

Takamina, seeing the poor little girl body shiver, took her jacket and put it on Amina. Then, she went back to finish the announcement.

“Just what I was saying, the sister groups had their own practice yesterday and they will be joining us for the final rehearsal and-“ Takamina stopped and looked towards to Amina who is now standing from her position.

“Amina, are you sure you’re alright?” Amina didn’t respond, she opened her eyes revealing a fade color pupil.

“Oh my god, we really need to go to the hospital. Come here.” Takamina walked towards her, she can see the swollen wound under the bandage and the paleness of her skin. Her friend turned her head towards her and slowly steps forward.

Suddenly, her friend charges forward her, pinning her into the ground. She was overpowered, the weight pressing down on her was too hard to push, she grabs her friends shoulder and takes her friend within arm’s length as she keeps lunging her head towards hers.

“What the-“ Takamina was struggling to keep her friend from crushing her and then, Sayaka grabbed Amina to separate them. The other girls, shocked at what’s going on, stand back from the scene.

“What are you doing?” Amina now lunge towards Sayaka but she stopped her coming closer. She looks carefully the odd behavior she’s showing as she keeps on diving her mouth .With a last push, the girl loses her balance and fell to the ground.

While the girl was down, Takamina stood up and was going to help Amina, but was stopped by Sayaka.

“Don’t.”

“But-“

“Can’t you see that something is wrong with her?” Takamina looks over Amina, who is now slowly standing up, she gets ready to run full speed, but Sayaka quickly went back to her and hold her arms together.

“Yuko, grab that rope at the corner.” Sayaka kept a firm grip as she tries to break from Sayaka’s grasp.

“Why? What are you going to do?” Takamina took a long look at Sayaka, wondering if it is necessary. Amina is just sick, she doesn’t need to go that far.

“Just go get it. She isn’t stable and she might hurt us.” Sayaka kept a secure hold of her arms.

“Guys, what’s going on?” Miichan said as she looks terrified at the situation.

“Miichan, call an ambulance right now.” Without any question, Miichan quickly took her cell phone from her bag and dialed the hospital. It kept ringing and ringing, but no one on the other line answered.

“I can’t get through.” Miichan tried again and again but to no avail.

“I’ll call the management downstairs.” Takamina dialed the number of the management, but just like Miichan, it just kept ringing.

“No one’s answering.” Takamina tried again, the member took their own phones and tries to call their own management. They feel anxious as all of them can’t reach anyone.

As the group began to panic, Takamina glances at the close window. It was already late and the street is dark, but that’s not what surprises her. She can see a woman being chase by three men. They got blood on their hands and clothes and the woman got a wound her arm. She kept running and running until they corner her, the woman kept on screaming for help but no one came.

The three men ignore the cornered woman screams and they walk towards her. The woman kept yelling as she is being surrounded. Takamina saw the whole scene before her eyes and she was frozen on her place.

She can’t speak and she can’t move. She loses her grip on her phone and it fell to the ground. The other members stopped and look at her, confuse on what’s happening. Mariko quickly went to her side to see what’s happening with Takamina.

“What’s go-?” Before she can ask, she saw the same scene Takamina just witness. She quickly closed the curtain and took Takamina away from the window. They both look at each other, as if they can read each other’s mind.

“You saw what I saw?” Takamina asked Mariko, making sure that she wasn’t hallucinating. Mariko just nodded.

Sayaka, still holding Amina, took the rope from Yuko and tie it around her back. Then she tied her in a chair.

“No one will go near her. Understand.” Takamina said in a loud and clear voice causing the members to stop from their tracks.

“Takamina, i-i-is everything alright?” Haruna nervously stutter.

Takamina and Mariko remained quiet as everyone is looking at them. They both knew what they saw is not natural. If anything, this is beyond diabolical.



TBC


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What you think?. If you have any question, feel free to ask. Comment, criticisms, violent reactions are all welcome here.
About the title, I'm not really satisfied with it. Tell me what you think the title should be. Give me your suggestion
If you like this, I promise you I'll continue this but in the meantime, I'll go back to my other fic.


Next: Chapter 1:All Hell Breaks Loose

« Last Edit: April 30, 2014, 06:20:14 PM by maku »

Offline Shinoki

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2013, 04:02:57 PM »
Wow, this is really interesting
I'm pretty picky about the reaaly negative ones that kill the members but this is interesting
normally, when it's zombie? fanfic, they don't target a member first
and they don't have AKB even exist in that universe
so this is really good... plus real
but did Amina get bitten? or is the 'problem' transmitted some other way?
wasn't all that clear

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2013, 04:06:30 PM »
Interesting

so something is happening

is a mystery and where is acchen what pairings do you ship in this fic

and welcome maku-chan

feel free to ask us somrthing that you dont know okiii ^^
Love AKB
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Love this Pairing
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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2013, 04:13:18 PM »
Zombie out break...

Great idea... never seen that being made here... I think

It would be a great way to see the leadership of Minami...

How about Atsuko?

Can't wait to see how they are going to survive this...

Thank you for the nice interesting prologue

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #4 on: May 27, 2013, 04:41:42 PM »
OHMYGOOOOOSH! :w00t:

I love the theme of the story.. I'm soooo going to look forward on your updates.. ^.^ I'm so excited! XD

Thank you.. Hope you update soon..  :bow:

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #5 on: May 27, 2013, 05:17:19 PM »
yay another zombie themed fic...

I sense action scenes with broken bones,cracked skull,blood splattered everywhere will come...

can't wait for the continuation...

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #6 on: May 27, 2013, 05:34:56 PM »
Is it a zombie fic? I'm not sure tho :P

Omg! I've always liked those kids if fanfics but there ain't many of them out there D:

And one more thing, did Amina become a zombie? It seems like that *le jumps around happily*

Are you new here or just been a silent reader?

This looks awesome and I can't wait until you update! *le huggles happily*

Ne,ne...will you update soon? Can't wait! :D

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #7 on: May 27, 2013, 05:48:30 PM »
OMG this is sooooo interesting.

Its kinda new to me but I love it..!

So its like the people only left is the AKB members? and Amina... what just happened? she got bitten? and in anytime she can be supernatural and
hurt the others? omfg. This is cool~

Please continue!!!  :bow:

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #8 on: May 27, 2013, 06:04:23 PM »
maku-san, thanks for a new and unique fic. I am also a fan of post-apocalyptic genres.

I hope there would be pairings  :heart:

And I wish that you wouldn't let my oshimen die :cry:, please  :bow:

or else  :twisted: <-- joke :P (but really, please don't kill her.)

Anyway, Update soon  :)


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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #9 on: May 27, 2013, 06:19:44 PM »
ZOMBIE?

It's quite scary to see members die, but I love this  XD

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #10 on: May 27, 2013, 07:49:53 PM »
Interesting start I wonder what will happen to them
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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #11 on: May 27, 2013, 09:48:38 PM »
woho bad-ass akb member killing zambies lols
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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #12 on: May 29, 2013, 03:34:52 PM »
AKB get to do action! Yey! v(^0^)v

Can't wait to see what will happen to them.. How will they survive the horror? Zombie breakout! Love it!

Great start! :thumbsup

Thank you :bow:

Hope you update soon :bow:

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #13 on: May 30, 2013, 04:56:42 AM »
this is really interesting :33

I feel sorry for Amina though :<

Now I'm worried about Acchan > .. < I hope
nothing bad happens to her > .. <

looking forward to the part where they have to
fight for survival XD

hope you update soon :33
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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #14 on: May 30, 2013, 11:47:25 AM »
Zombie break out awesome lol I can't wait to see wht hasppens next an I wonder whts happing to atsuko I hope she is safe minami go use Ur great leadership skills an help find Ur ace she needs Ur help

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Prologue
« Reply #15 on: May 30, 2013, 11:29:33 PM »
That was Awesome!  :twothumbs
I can't Wait for the next Part!  :panic:
Sae-Chan! :wub:

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Chapter 1
« Reply #16 on: June 07, 2013, 05:56:27 AM »
Hi there again  :)

I'm sorry if it took me a while to update this chapter. I was busy with enrollment back then. Sorry  :(
But any way, I would like thank each and everyone for reading the prologue. It really means a lot and I deeply appreciate it.

For the replies:
@Shinoki I was trying to leave that for the reader's imagination to decide. It was the prologue so I tried to make the readers guess what it is. And just like, I don't like members being killed but this genre is one of my favorites so I decided to give it a try. Thank you for reading  :)

@Elo This event took place before the Budokan concert 2013 so Acchan was now longer in AKB. I may or may not put her in the story but I have a friend who keeps telling me to include her. About the pairings, I'm not sure if I should put a pairing because of it's genre but if I 'did' put a pairing, I'm going to be subtle about it. And thank you for making me feel welcome and thank you for reading  :)

@cisda83 Yeah, it would be perfect for Takamina to display her leadership skill that's why I created this fic. And just like what I said to Elo-san, there's a chance I might include her. Thank you for reading  :)

@kenjoy12 Oh thank you for your support, I really appreciate it  :) I'll try my best to update soon. Thank you for reading  :)

@bunny_rabbit Just like you, I like zombie genres  :) I was wondering if there was another zombie genre in this forum and it turns out there is Yey!  :). Could you please tell me. Thank you for reading  :)

@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS It was still unclear what happen to Amina but in this chapter it may shed some light on the situation. Yeah, I was a silent reader since November and I'll try my best to update. Thanks for reading  :)

@AgentBlueBear This chapter and the continuing chapters will explain what happen. And yes, I'll continue this. Thank you for the support and for reading  :)

@Cessy10 I love post-apocalyptic genres that's why my mind gave me an idea for this fic. And about your oshimen, I can't promise you  :twisted: hahhaha but any way, Thanks for reading  :) PS: Mag update ka na din. Pangalawa ko na to.

@bimbo At first I was unsure about this because I don't want the members to die but..... I love this genre  :) hehehe Anyway Thank you for reading  :)

@kurosawa87 Oh thank you for the support. I hope you'll continue on reading. Thank you for reading  :)

@POPCAT Exactly my point hehehe  :)  Thank you for reading  :)

@mitsuhara_itsuko About Acchan, I told Elo-san cisda-san about her. Just like you, I'm looking forward with survival. Thank you for reading  :)

@XxRoByNxX78 Hehehe a lot of you is asking about Acchan  :) Please look at my reply to Elo-san. And about Takamina, I really see her as a great leader. Any way, Thank you for reading  :)

@DiVAGal2458 Thank you for thinking this was awesome. I hope I can update soon. Thank you for reading  :)

For the silent readers: Thank you very much for reading, I hope you enjoy this one.


WARNING This fiction may contain possible deaths of members. Read at your own risk.





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Chapter 1: All Hell Breaks Loose




The silence in the room is deafening. Apparent fear and confusion can be seen in everyone’s eyes as they keep staring back and forth at their sokantoku and their friend who is now tied up in a chair. They anxiously waits for any reply to what’s going on, but they only get silence as their answer.

It was past midnight when Takahashi finally moved from her spot and went to the door. She locked it and barricades it with chairs and benches. The rest are again stun on the situation as they look at each other, silently asking one another to speak up and ask but no one wants to try.

“I um….I just want to make sure.” Takamina clears her throat as she looks at the scared look from everyone.

“W-W-What’s going on?” Miichan was the first one to stand up to ask. She can feel everyone’s eyes looking at her.

“I….I don’t know how to explain this.” Takamina glanced at Mariko, silently asking for help. Both of them stare at each other. Sayaka noticed this so she went up to Takamina.

“I don’t know what’s happening but all I know is that this is not normal.” Sayaka whispered, not wanting the others to be alarm.

 “Maybe you should take a look at this.” Mariko walked up behind as she hears the conversation.

The three of them walked towards the window, ignoring the looks of everyone. Sayaka peeked at the curtain and was surprise. It was way worse to what Takamina and Mariko saw. Outside, not only three of them but a large horde of those things are roaming aimlessly at the streets of Tokyo.

“You should tell this to them. They have the right to know.” Sayaka said as she closes back the curtains.

“I don’t want them to panic.”

“They still need to know what’s going on. I know it’s hard but we can’t just idly sit by as this happen. They NEED to know.” Sayaka place her hand on Takamina’s shoulder, helping her find courage.

“We’ll support you Takamina.” Mariko nodded. After hearing her friend’s advice, she swallowed the lump in her throat and slowly went up in front.

“E-E-Everyone…..” Takamina slowly started. “…. I know that you’re feeling confuse on what’s going on and just like you, I don’t know the reason why this is happening….. I only knew that….that… it’s not s-safe anymore.”

The room began to fill with murmur as everyone is more confused on what’s happening.

“What do you mean not safe?” Sashi said as she looks at the scared look of Takamina.

“Is this something have to do with Amina?” Mayu added.

“Why can’t we call for help?”

“Can we go home?”

“Can we call the police?”

Questions are now being thrown to  the nervous Takamina as she faced them. Her knees are shaking from the pressure she’s in.

“Guys, one at a time. Give her a break.” Sayaka immediately stand besides Takamina, shielding her from the questioning eyes.

“I know that everyone is confused but please, try to understand.” Mariko joined Sayaka as she stands in front of Takamina.

Everyone was quiet again as they looking at the three people in front of them. The atmosphere settle down, making everyone settle down.

“We don’t really know what’s going on and why is this happening and I know what I have to say doesn’t make any sense but please…..believe me.” Takamina felt relieve as she spoke, finally having courage to say what everyone needs to hear. But it was short lived as she imaged again the unimaginable situation.

“I-I want you to look at the window.” Takamina said as he points at the closed curtain. “I want you to see for yourselves what’s going on.”

The members look at each other, waiting for someone to go and look. They feel tense and scared for they will finally know what makes the others anxious. One by one, they step forward and slowly made their way to the window.

The curtain is the only thing that separates them knowing the truth, for beyond the glass lies the most excruciating thing they may have seen. Leading the group, Yuko took hold the end of the curtain, readying herself from what may come.

In a one swift motion, Yuko moved the curtains away as they finally see the dark sky. They looked down and saw those things wander the misty streets. Without warning, they can hear screams of terror from what appears to be someone is trap in the corner while he was being surrounded by them.

“W-W-What the hell are does things? Are those people?” Yuko turned around as she asked Takamina. The rest of the group took a long look at the once normal streets.
The streets they walked to everyday, the street they once knew. Maybe it’s already gone.

Their knees began shaking from shock. Their eyes widen in confusion. Their hearts beating fast. Haruna can’t take it anymore as she collapsed to the floor. Without a moment of delay, Mariko went to catch her. Wrapping her arms around the trembling body as she tries to soothe the fallen girl.

“That’s enough.” Sayaka immediately closed the curtain, preventing them from seeing any longer.

 They went silent. They keep staring into space with blank looks at their faces. Silence soon filled the entire room.

Seeing her friends, Takamina felt each and everyone is afraid. Afraid what may come next.

 “That’s why I want us to stay here for awhile, just until this thing subsides.” Takamina spoke with a small voice, breaking the heavy tension.

“D-Do you t-think this thing will be gone?” Haruna said stuttering while Mariko is patting her back.

“….. I don’t know.” This was the only response Takamina can give. She doesn’t know what happen. They have been in this studio the entire day. It was normal before. How can things change so much in less than a day?

“How about we can contact someone from the outside?” Yuki suddenly asked. The members snapped back to reality from this little idea which prompt them took their phones and start dialing. Most of them tried to call their love ones while other’s tried to call the police.

Takamina slowly fished for her phone from her pocket, wondering if someone would answer. The capacity of this plague is still unknown to them but knowing the sheer truth is something no one would ever accept.

She remembers her mother that’s currently staying with her for a few weeks, thinking that its better if she said no before, then she would be positively sure that she’s safe. They lived in an apartment a few blocks from here which made her more worried than ever.

She dialed her mother’s phone and she waits as the phone kept ringing, silently praying someone would pick it up. And just as the second she would give up, a familiar voice responded to her. It was a voice she would want to hear over and over again and unknowingly, a tear fell from her eye.

“Mom.” Takamina said as stream of tears began falling down, finally relive to know she’s alive.

“Minami, sweetie.”The person in the other lined said with relieve, like a huge spike was remove from her heart.

“Where are you Mom?” Takamina can’t control the tears falling as it stained the hard wood floor. The phone in her hands shakes as she spoke.

“I’m safe dear. The military took us to the evacuation center at the very west side of Tokyo.” As Takamina heard these words, her knees suddenly collapse knowing her mother is now safe.

“They won’t tell us anything on why this happen but they told us that Akihabara is the hot zone. They said that they…..c-can’t g-get the people from there t-to evacuate.” Her mother said in between sobs, worried for her daughter.

“Don’t worry mom, we’re safe….. I’m safe.” Takamina said these encouraging words not only for her mother but also for herself.

“Is that Takamina?” Takamina can hear another woman’s voice in the other line.

“Takamina is that you?” A familiar voice can be heard as she took the phone from her mom.

“H-Hai.” Takamina said.

“Can you put on Sayaka for me?” The woman tries to hold her tears as she ask her.

From the sound of the woman’s voice, it must be Sayaka’s mother. Without thinking, she called Sayaka who is busy dialing her own phone. Takamina motioned her phone to her and she immediately went over.

“H-Hello.” Sayaka said as she holds the phone near her ear, waiting for the other line to speak.

“S-Sayaka.” Her mother burst into tears as she said her name.

“I’m here.” She assured her as she tries to put on a brave face.

“Sayaka, something happen to your brother.” Her mother was trembling as she kept on crying. Sayaka’s eyed went wide, her heart began beating real fast. Her mind telling her that something bad happen but her heart keeps on denying.

“W-W-What happened? Please tell me.” She can’t hold the tears any longer.

“We were heading towards the evacuation center with a group of other people. He was leading us as we run away from them b-but….” It went silent for awhile. The only thing can be heard are distant sobs.

“Mom. Mom. Are you there? Please say something.” She pleaded as she screams at the phone.

“But we got swarm by them as we almost reach the evacuation site. A small girl got pinned down to the ground but your brother save her…. He saved her…. But he got bit in the arm as he shields the little girl.” Sayaka’s mind went blank. Her brother was……gone. He saved the group to safety but he was…..gone. Enormous kinds of pain filled her body, she stand there….unmoved.

“I’m sorry.” These two words woke her up.

“Please don’t say that.” Sayaka said as she shakes her head.

“It’s my fault. It’s all my fault. I should have protected him. I should have done something.”

“Please don’t blame yourself. He saved you but also the other people, especially the small girl.” Sayaka said with conviction, knowing her brother died for a reason.

“How about you? Are you safe?”

“Yeah, we’re all safe.” Sayaka put the phone in speaker so that everyone can hear the situation outside.

“Now mom, tell me what’s going on over there.” The other girls went over to them as they can hear loud gunfire coming from the phone.

“The military is trying to evacuate as much as they can but they can’t reach Akihabara.” This made the members panic as they began asking lots of questions.

“Take everyone NOW.” From out of nowhere, a distant voice from the other line shouted. “Alpha one, take these people on the chopper now.”

“Mom what’s happening?” Sayaka said.

“Let’s move out. Move. Move. Move.” A military soldier shouted from the distance.

“Sayaka, they’re taking us somewhere. Those things are now coming here. They’re-“ She was cut off. The line went dead. It went nothing but static.

“Hello. Mom. Mom!” Sayaka took the phone to her ear as she screams for her mother.

Each and everyone froze and stood still with an unreadable expression. They stare into the nothingness while Sayaka tries to dial again the number but it can no longer be reach.




TBC



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So that was chapter 1. What you think?  If you have any question, feel free to ask. Comment, criticisms, violent reactions are all welcome here.
I would like to say sorry in advance if I can't update soon. Classes are now in session so I will be busier than ever but I'll try writing during Sundays.


Next: Chapter 2: It's Not Safe Anymore

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Chapter 1
« Reply #17 on: June 07, 2013, 07:15:45 AM »
an update :onioncheer:

akihabara is the red zone that means the ground zero is near by...since evac team can't reach there those girls are on their own...it is up to them to find a way to get out from there...and they should do it ASAP things will get worst as time goes by...

with amina being infected there's a chance another girl will get infected too...this add problem for them...

can't wait what will happen next :hehehe:

and yes, there are few other zombie stories here but I forget the titles...I'll give the list as soon as I can...

anyway,nice update here :on GJ:



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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Chapter 1
« Reply #18 on: June 07, 2013, 07:20:17 AM »
Maku-san... Thank you for the info about Atsuko

so Atsuko might be here in this story... but she was no longer in AKB...

At least Sayaka and Minami mothers are safe and being evacuated with choppers....

Poor Sayaka for losing her brother...

Ah... would they be able to get away safely...?

What about other cities....?

OMG... Akihabara is the hot spot for the zombie...

What's going on... why did this thing happening in Akihabara...?

They still didn't know that the monsters roaming on the street are zombies...

How are they going to protect themselves?

Eh... would the military people just abandoned Akihabara to themselves... ?

How Takamina would do about this now?

Luckily Sayaka and Mariko were there to support Minami... even though everyone still hope for Minami to do something about it...?

Can't wait to see more adventure

Thank you for the update

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Re: The Breakout [Survival Horror] Chapter 1
« Reply #19 on: June 07, 2013, 07:20:26 AM »
:shocked OH MY GOSH! My heart is beating so fast from excitement and anxiousness when i was reading it! :fap

Great update ! :thumbsup :fap

Oh! I just remembered resident evil and tv anime highschool of the dead correct me if i'm wrong with the title i love watching it and other zombie breakout films..Surely, i will love this fic.. :banghead: wth! i already loving it!

Will the girls and their family survive the horror? Are they going to stay to wait for help? Or going to take some action just to get out from the nightmare?

Can't wait.. Thank you :bow: :thumbsup :twothumbs

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