Thanks for all your comments and everyone who has finished this fic! I was a bit worried that this weird pairing layout won't be for anyone. People who like Mayuki may need to wait too long, while Saeyuki is not real and Saeyui is also not a popular pairing...so I am really happy that you guys are willing to read it. As promised, I am back with a one-shot. It's originally gonna be all Mayuki, with Saeyui just setting the scenes but it somehow turned like this below. The next OS will be in the over-18 section, as promised when I wrote the Mayuki special 2 chapters back. Then the more Mayuki letters.
@clubhappy: Nezumi is smart in MG so I made her like this in this fic too! Glad you enjoyed the ending. The first OS below touches on some key elements that kept their relationship going. I anticipate more letters on the next one.
@olive29: Thanks for liking the story. Please enjoy the OS below! Yay for Mayu!
@fuu_kun: Thanks for commenting all the way till the end. The OS has both pairings. Please enjoy!
@jell_o_jello: Thanks for your comments too! I reread some parts and realized they're still littered with mistakes, so I need to do a better job of editing! Maybe after that, the story will run smoother. Hope you'll find the OS interesting too!
@geki geki: Thank you! I will do my best to write about them...I wonder what their daily lives are like now that Sae's grown up? Haven't really thought about it yet.
@qweakb: Thanks! A bit of those 13 years are written in the OS below, but as I said, it turned out more Saeyui in the end...
so please look out for more updates in the future.
@millca: thanks millca!! I'm sure you'll find today's OS interesting...heehee
@Shinoki: Thank you!! It's a short ride, but it's happy ending for most people! I do realize there are way too many traffic accidents, but still, Mayu is alive, so I consider this a comedy
@Yuki88:
That's right! Otabe-hairstyle made an appearance lol! I didn't think Yui was kakkoi at all until MG2. I always liked how she looks with NY, but Otabe is the character that lets me discover Yui's other side...I'm so glad to have written a fic about her, thanks for pointing this out!
@LoyalFlutist: Wow, this is way too flattering, thank you so much! I am so happy you enjoyed the fic, even though my writing style tends to be plain and repetitive. It's true that I try to portray all types of emotion in all primary characters because I love happy endings and funny stuff, but I always feel that happy things aren't really happy if there's no hardship/sadness in them. But I do think I have a lot to work on when it comes to evil or bad characters. So maybe my main characters in the next fic will be crazy-ass bad/selfish people...lol, no nvm, I don't think I can stand seeing my oshis' acting like biatches.
@rochilu: thank you, and thank you for sticking with Mayuki and Saeyui through thick and thin!
@Tupi: thanks a lot! I wrote an OS below as a start. I hope you'll enjoy it too!
@mo-chan: Thanks for reading till the end! And...and thanks for still waiting! I promise "Heaven on Earth" will have an ending! I regret to not have written everything before I start posting. I already have the key plot elements and ending in mind, but I'm just too lazy to finish it
Looks like I'll have to write 70% of everything before I start a new fic again in the future. But here you go with an OS on this fic first!
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White DayIt's....it's white-day today! One month since we're together, going strong as ever! Yosh....Miyazawa, is everything ready? Box of chocolates in the fridge? Check. Surprise gift in my bag? Check. Rope to climb into her room? Check. Ok, let's go!!! I fist-pumped to myself, packed everything and left the house.
I climbed over the wall near the bushes at the front yard of Yui's house. It's past afternoon already, but the sun's not down yet and Yui's mom is back already. She should be busy at the kitchen, so I sneaked to the other side of the house, and aimed at the opened window on the second floor. As expected, Yui's opened the window for fresh air. She doesn't know I'm coming today so I must go up as quietly as possible. I threw the rope with a climbing hook fastened at the end and secured it at the railing near the window. Looking around to make sure no one's at the deserted little suburban pathway, I scooted up as quickly as I could. This is a crazy idea...I've only been back at her place around 3 times so far, and it's always when no one's in. Yui let me in through the front door, but last time, her mum came back earlier than expected, so I had to climb down through the window. That's when I realized that it's not that hard to reach up her room. So today...wakakakaka.....I can't wait to see Yui's shocked face!
I peaked in the window and saw Yui practicing headstand near the door, while Bisu sits lazily in the bed watching her. My crazy girlfriend sure does weird things at home. I put my backpack down inside as softly as possible. She's not really looking this way, but Bisu turned.
"Sh...." I made a gesture and hoped the cat could understand. It opens its mouth and I held my breath. Luckily it just closes its eyes again and starts yawning....Phew!!
I flipped myself inside just when Yui backed down from her headstand. She finally saw me as I finished my move in a beautiful front-roll, rising up right in front of her.
"Sae!....Sae!!!!!!" She yelps frantically in surprise, fanning her cheeks as she said this. I quickly covered her mouth to stop her from screaming further, but we both heard footsteps coming up from the stairs.
"Quick, under the bed." I rolled underneath while I heard Yui jumped into the bed above me. The door clicks open.
"Yui-chan, is everything ok?" Yui's mom asked with concern.
"I...I was just taking a nap..." Yui answered in a slight panic. I heard the sound of bedsheets ruffling.
"Are you having nightmares?" The bed squeaks as her mum sits on the bedside. "I heard you...you calling out for...Miyazawa Sae." She said my name reluctantly.
"Mum...I'm fine." Yui just answered softly.
"It's almost a year already, my dear daughter, tell me, do you really miss her that much?" Without waiting for Yui to answer, she continued. "It's ok, you're my daughter, how could I not know how you feel? But...she's...she's a girl. She's also a yankee."
"I love her, mum."
"I am afraid you're going to say that, but," She sobs as she makes a tiny chuckle. "I am even more scared that I will lose you forever when I forbade you to see her. I actually feel relieved to hear your honest feelings. I don't want to lie to you either; I can't accept this yet, but I will try. Please give Mummy some time, could you?"
"Thanks..." Yui answered as I heard her mum's footsteps to the door. "Take some rest, I will go back down now." The door clicks closed. Wow...that's intense....should I really come? But I'm already here, there's nothing else I could do but to roll back out from under the bed.
I didn't even have a chance to stand up before Yui pins me down on all fours and glare at me seriously with a honmayan face.
"Why are you suddenly here?" She hisses. "You scared the death out of me!!"
I flash my white teeth with a beam. It always works. "Yui-hhhhan, don't be mad, I have a surprise for you...Don't you remember what today is?" I reached up and pecked on her lips, stunning her at the right moment so I could squiggle off her claws easily.
"Don't....don't think you can get away with this!!" The flushed girl hits my backside as I pounce off and grabbed my backpack.
"Come on, come on..." I rolled back with the backpack, taking out the contents and threw my arm round her shoulders so she couldn't move away. "Look at this!" The beautifully wrapped box sparkles under our gaze. Yui goes reaching for it but I hold it back slightly, shaking my head. "Not so fast."
"Why?" Yui scowls her serious face defiantly. "It's white day and you're supposed to repay the chocolates I gave you." She emphasized the 'I' with a snobbish face. I can't help but laugh at these cute expressions.
"Fine. I was going to remind you of how you threw the box at me on Valentine's day, breaking all the chocolates inside. But I lovvve you tooo much to keep it away from you." Grinning at her happily, I presented her the box and opened it.
"Wow..." Yui gasped in amazement, "You even made a smiley face pattern with white chocolate among the dark ones.... o wait, is that really you??" She looked up at me, then down at the immaculately arranged chocolates. It seems that she has trouble believing that I made them, but in truth, I'm really not a bad cook!!
"If you are trying to see if we look alike, then sorry to disappoint you, I am not a piece of chocolate." I took one piece of dark chocolate out and started eating.
"Sae!" She whispers angrily as she tries to pry my mouth open. "I'm supposed to be the one to eat this." She took another piece from the box and chewed it furiously. Seeing how quick she is, I took another piece, which makes up the eye of the smiley, and ate it. "Yummo!!" I exclaim as I savor the white chocolate. Yui smacks my head and quickly grabs the other 'eye' before I have a chance. We started engaging in a silly eating competition, and soon, even the lethargic Bisu joins in for a share.
The box is not exactly huge so we finished everything in no time. We're now sitting across each other on the floor to recuperate from the 'fight'. I'm starting to regret this...
"Wuhuhuhu....I spent hours making this...all this time imagining you to taste it one by one, smiling sweetly at your girlfriend's fabulous gift..." I pouted playfully and started to fiddle my fingers.
"You started it..." Yui picks up Bisu and starts caressing its stomach. The fully satiated cat closes its eyes with a smile and lay relaxedly on Yui's crossed legs.
"Mou...I want it too!" I lay flat on my back and starts to beckon Yui to come to me with my teasing smile. "You're still 100 years too early for this." Yui smirks arrogantly and put Bisu back on bed. Even though she refused me, she still approached and sighs. "But since you already asked, I might as well...." Yippy! Yappari, I am irresistible to Yui!! I close my eyes and anticipate Yui's soft rub on my full stomach.
"You wish!" A sudden ticklish sensation shot up my brain as Yui sat on top of me and started attacking with her fired up fingers.
"Crap...no..ha..ahahhaa, please....stop...wakaka" I'm so defenseless when it comes to Yui's tickles. I squirm and wriggle and try to contain my laughs since Yui's mum is downstairs. This is worse than torture!!!
Yui is smiling wickedly like she always does when she's into something like this. "Ne, Miyazawa-san, you better not scream out or my mum will find out. Let me turn this torture level up a notch." With that said, her tickling intensifies and my silent laughs, or grunts, intensifies. Ahhhhhhhhhh...I can't take it anymore. Reaching for her back, I pulled her down towards me, and in her lapse of balance, I rolled over and switched to the top, gasping for my breath as I pin her arms down.
"Wait..." I said as I take in oxygen desperately. "I...need...to....woooooooh! Yui, you almost killed me!"
Yui giggles and replied, "Serves you right for eating all my chocolate, but...but thanks a lot for giving me this surprise." She smiles at me gently, looking like a princess the first time today...which reminds me of my other surprise.
I rolled off and took the other box out of the backpack. "I really, really made the chocolates without anyone's help, but this....this is inspired by my mamas." I handed her the flat box with both hands.
Her face is truly lit in surprise when she unboxed the gift, as the white fabric of the dress reflects its glow on her face. It's a simple knee length one piece made of satin and silk, decorated by soft collars.
"A white dress for white day." I wink as she took it out and measure it in front of herself at the mirror. "Looks like it'll fit you perfectly." I continued to admire at my beautiful girlfriend.
"It's...beautiful." She twirls around with the dress.
"Try it on." I urged her. Yui looks around the room and gives me a troubled look. "I..." She stammers.
"What? Come on, try it now!" I already start to imagine her in this lovely, summer outfit, walking gracefully beside me as we go on a date to Disneyland, having everyone's envious looks on us.....
"I can't change in front of you!" Her face reddens as she explains the reason of her hesitation.
I gape in realization....But then, the thought of Yui changing clothes have completely filled my mind this second. Is she wearing white underneath too?? I wonder as I gaze at her mickey-mouse t-shirt.
"Miyazawa! Stop drooling like a pervert!!" She smacks my head and brings me back to reality.
"I...I totally didn't mean to...it's just, you know, the gift idea." I stumble in my own words. "The gift in white day is this white dress, which I picked up after shopping for hours. But, but the idea I got from the beginning, it came from the letters mamayu sent to mamarin."
"Really?" Yui puts down the dress and came close to me, sitting down again in crossed legs. "Please continue, tell me!!" She looks at me eagerly and I cleared my throat to begin the story.
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(Letter from Mayuyu to Yukirin in the first year of their separation)
Dear Yukirin,
I got your chocolates, thanks a lot! It warms me up as I read your letter and ate them beside the fireplace. It's not snowing but it's still chilly to go outside, and weather is as gloomy as always. I'm wearing the bunny earmuffs you knitted right now, even though my house mates keep laughing behind my back. Lucky that I'm in Sixth Form this year....boarding school is so boring I can't wait for it to end soon!!!
The people here are all wimps; none of them is my match, so I'm sure even if you came, you'll find life boring as hell. Not to mention, I don't want Sae-chan to pick up a British accent! Speaking of which, is she doing fine? Did you take her to get all the vaccines needed? Did you buy her enough clothes for winter? Babies grow out of their clothes quickly, so be sure to keep an eye on her. Also, it's time to let her crawl around so she can be strong enough to walk. Don't strap her behind your back all the time!! I hope you're still having a great time at the supermarket. I'm not surprised that the massage parlor didn't find your quick moves appealing to their customers at all. You should really learn how to be more, how should I say it, calculating...no, emphatic. If they just wanted the standard stuff, they could've used a massage chair for a much cheaper price. But you know what, I don't like to see you flirt with others either. You belong to me, so leave your seducing looks to ONLY me!!
I've been thinking about what to get you in return. By the time this letter reaches you, it should be white day soon, therefore, enclosed with the letter in a package, is my gift to you. I had wanted to give you something else....but I couldn't. I've been walking around the local cemetery near the church lately. It's not that I have a penchant for morbid things, but there are some plain white flowers decorating the woods, and it reminds me of the secret garden we both shared as kids. If I could send you those flowers, I would, right away! But of course, it will be silly to just pick them up and snatch their lives out of them. As I was thinking and looking, I met an old lady also wandering in there. She told me those flowers are "forget-me-nots," or Myosotis, which means, mouse ears! She even told me a legend about a German knight who tripped over into the river bank as he tried to pick those flowers up for his girl. As he's about to drown, he threw the bouquet towards her and shouted, "Forget me not!", so that's how the plain tiny flowers got their name. I've decided from that day that this will be our flower, because I love you even more than the knight's love towards his maiden. Forget me not, Yukirin, especially when you come across those mouse ears in the woods or on the roadside! (Sae's voice: Mama-yu's nickname at school was Nezumi/Rat)
The lady was apparently surprised at my interest in all these flowers. She's a local florist and I decided to take up a part-time job at her place to kill time, so I need to hop out soon. By the way, I have a special request, which you're not allowed to say 'no' to. Take a picture of you using my white-day gift and send it to me.
Love,
Mayuyu
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"Aw, I didn't think Mayu-obachan can be such a romantic! The legend about the knight's undying love for his lover is so cool!!" Yui exclaims.
"Deshou?" I nod in agreement.
"But wait, so what did she give Yuki-obachan? A white dress like mine?" Yui asks as she touches the smooth fabric.
"There's a twist in the story..." I smile cunningly. "Listen till the end and you'll be thankful I didn't copy Mama-yu's idea!"
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(Letter from Yukirin in reply to last message)
Dear Mayuyu,
I can't believe you gave me that! I'm still thinking about whether I should fulfill your wish as I'm writing this, but don't you dare do this again! I'm delighted that you loved my chocolates, even though I didn't make them. I know you wouldn't eat it if I told you I made them, right? That's why I wrote explicitly in the last letter that I bought it in a French chocolatier store in the city. Sae-chan helped choose the box too...I remember that's what I wrote.
But in truth, I made them. Of course, Sae-chan did help choose the box, so it wasn't a complete lie. Come on now, you gotta admit I got better at it right? When you tasted it with your unbiased tongue, they did taste good, right? Otherwise, you wouldn't have kept eating it! So! Don't worry about me from now on, I can cook! Sae-chan's eating porridge I make every now and then and she's fine, except maybe once or twice when...(Sae's voice: "She scribbled that last phrase off and didn't continue, but I could tell it's not happy ending, do you know it's not till I'm 7 or 8 when food starts to become edible!?") Ok, anyway, thanks for inquiring and worrying about our baby, she's fine and she called me "Mama" just two days ago in the supermarket! I was so emotional that I cried in front of the obasan paying for her food at the checkout. I wish you were there too...Sae-chan is really growing up! The obachan told me that after her first words, Sae-chan will start to speak a lot very soon. She seems to like the sun a lot, and her skin is already quite dark. I will bring her out a lot more so she can play with other people. She doesn't look like the shy type to me. Maybe you could record something so I will play to her and she can hear you or see you?
I know this must make you miss Sae-chan a lot....in truth when I see our Sae-chan, I think about Gakuran sometimes. (Sae's voice: "Gakuran was mama-rin and mayu-mama's friend, who died around the time I was born.") This must be doubling the pain for you. I wonder how you're doing in the flower shop? I bet it's better than going to classes at school, and trying to mingle with those lady-like classmates, isn't it? Because of you, I bought a book about horticulture at the bookstore today. I think I'll also try to find a job in this area because that massage parlor thing is really not for me. Since you told me such a lovely story about "Forget-me-not", and must be suffering a lot of loneliness without Sae-chan and me around, I will send the photo with this letter. But as I said, don't you dare, ask me to do this again. If you're wondering who took it, one of my clients at the massage parlor did it for me. What a lovely guy!
Love,
Yukirin
PS I love the gift. It feels very good, thank you.
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"The photo? Have you seen the photo? What's she wearing??" Yui shakes my shoulders and asks me earnestly.
"Hehehe, I brought it here." I patted my bag proudly. "Don't tell my mamas or they'll kill me! Promise me first!"
"Ok, promise." Yui nods eagerly.
I took the photo out and showed her. Her eyes bulged.
"Yup..." I said as we admire the photo together. A young lady in straight, jet-black hair is smiling seductively at us with her painted red lips. She's leaning against the wall, hands resting on the sides of her waist in a sexy pose, wearing a pair of white high heels, standing crossed legged.
"She's..." I can hear Yui's gulp. "She's so well endowed."
"Too bad we are not genetically related." I bit my lip and continue to admire the girl dressed in white, laced lingerie, showing off her ample assets. I never thought she'd ever do that. I mean, it's Black for god's sake. But love is blind, love is indeed blind....maybe one day, I could make Yui...
"I know what you're thinking," Yui suddenly smacks my forehead and said. "I can't even change in front of you. Do you think I will do this one day? Stop dreaming!"
"Okay Okay, my hime-sama, I won't think about it anymore." I raise my arms in surrender. "But can I at least have a kiss? It's white day...and, and it's our one month anniversary!"
"No...I'm still troubled....who took your mama's picture?" Once Yui's fixated with a topic or problem, she wouldn't let go that easily.
"Eh?" I never really thought about that. "The...the parlor client?" I answered as I recall Mamarin's letter.
"Baka-chan!" Yui smacks my head for the umpteenth time today. "She's not silly like you. Sometimes, I wonder how two smart women could stand taking care of you."
"W...wait! I...I am not stupid!" I threw myself at her and suppressed any sounds she's trying to make with my kisses, which always work. Ah....what a lovely white day!
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