Author Topic: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!! (Read 39421 times)

blakwhite · « **Reply #120 on:** March 11, 2014, 01:55:13 AM »

yatta, an update

Quote from: fausto on March 10, 2014, 08:04:03 PM

Thank you for every comments, I update tonight, and next will be in another section
I was re-reading some fics yesterday and I realized that maybe I was too (how to put this... ) tough in my way to write smut scene. I don't know if you see what i mean, but usually in other fics (maybe not Ruka ) the words are cuter or more romantic, and I tend to be driven by the excitment of the scene so I write it with my way of seeing it... And maybe you guys feel a little lost because maybe it's too bold. Thing is I'm european and maybe our standards are not the same... Well, I was thinking of that, so sorry if there are too many "I want to f*ck you" or sth like that in my fics, but it's the way I write it

well, i dont mind :3, as long as u comfortable with ur writing style :3
and waiting for that update

cisda83 · « **Reply #121 on:** March 11, 2014, 02:40:49 AM »

Everyone has the time if thier life with the romance progressing smoothly

Can't wait to see your perv. Section, been a while

What's going to happen next?

Especially to thier relationship after Minami and Atsuko done the deed?

Thank you for the update

Kirozoro · « **Reply #122 on:** March 11, 2014, 02:48:37 AM »

Omg Takamina had already date 4 girls...well didn't see thaj coming

Wmatsui is so cute...Rena is jealouse

Update soon

Tiptip · « **Reply #123 on:** March 11, 2014, 02:53:59 AM »

Double update

Atsumina's da best

Wmatsui cute as always :3

takashu · « **Reply #124 on:** March 11, 2014, 09:45:10 AM »

I'm a new reader here

very enjoyable reading this fanfic

wow ... minami had already date 4

just like in reality, minami very popular with the girls

chichay12 · « **Reply #125 on:** March 11, 2014, 03:49:26 PM »

Quote from: blakwhite on March 11, 2014, 01:55:13 AM

Quote from: fausto on March 10, 2014, 08:04:03 PM
Thank you for every comments, I update tonight, and next will be in another section
I was re-reading some fics yesterday and I realized that maybe I was too (how to put this... ) tough in my way to write smut scene. I don't know if you see what i mean, but usually in other fics (maybe not Ruka ) the words are cuter or more romantic, and I tend to be driven by the excitment of the scene so I write it with my way of seeing it... And maybe you guys feel a little lost because maybe it's too bold. Thing is I'm european and maybe our standards are not the same... Well, I was thinking of that, so sorry if there are too many "I want to f*ck you" or sth like that in my fics, but it's the way I write it

well, i dont mind :3, as long as u comfortable with ur writing style :3
and waiting for that update

im totally agree with this

as long u enjoy what u doing just keep doing it.. i will support u all the way

back to your update..
kyaaaa double update

and thank god minami is safe (maybe im just thinking to much *teehee*)

Quote from: fausto on March 10, 2014, 08:04:03 PM

So next it's the pervy section!!!

OMG!!! i cant wait for this
update soon fausto!! like soon..maybe tomorrow

thank u for the update and have a nice day

IamNot_Glad · « **Reply #126 on:** March 12, 2014, 01:35:11 PM »

Hahahaha
I love the AtsuMina scene

Can't wait for the next update

ayudewi6 · « **Reply #127 on:** March 12, 2014, 03:04:33 PM »

I really liked your story, so interesting.. I hope you can update soon, I like your writing style. Thanks for updating, may you have a wonderful day then and keep spirit!

Akira ryusen sora · « **Reply #128 on:** March 12, 2014, 03:37:03 PM »

Wow!! Atsumina moment... I love this fic :3
Thanks for update...

triela · « **Reply #129 on:** March 14, 2014, 05:02:55 PM »

i cant wait for the next chapter atsumina

MayuxMatsuixMusic · « **Reply #130 on:** March 23, 2014, 08:55:09 AM »

Atsumina~~

Too bad I don't have an access in the perv section

But more atsumina

ryu201 · « **Reply #131 on:** March 24, 2014, 06:46:01 PM »

Yo! Fausto-san! It's me again!

Remember me? Im the new reader that ask u for PM me for ur missing chapter on another fanfic?
Well its ok if u dont remember me.
Hehehe.
Im here for do my promise to read ur another fanfic after all but unfortunely like before,i still can go to perv section

But i love this story and wait for ur another update so please update soon ne ^^
Ganbatte fausto-san!

River1721 · « **Reply #132 on:** March 25, 2014, 03:24:28 AM »

Ah~ such an amazing fic !

Please update soon!!

Archer1992 · « **Reply #133 on:** April 09, 2014, 09:15:35 PM »

Omg!!! At least you continue...thanks

Enviado desde mi HTC One mediante Tapatalk

takeshi77 · « **Reply #134 on:** April 22, 2014, 07:20:13 PM »

an update and plus its was double update

…I hate my own bustle get in my way

only now had time to read its

about the story…. Wow that a great development between them

i wonder how in the end their relationship will be

...is that they will just got happiness or still there is challenges await for them (whose know)

anyway thank you for the great update

also don’t worry about how the way u write the story ..its was fine and great already… each author had different style of writing and that what make them unique and can differentiate between each other …also the reader can recognize each of author work based on how the wrote the story

so no need to worry anything..just keep going write the way u comfortable with

fausto · « **Reply #135 on:** May 24, 2014, 02:02:55 AM »

Hey guys, I'm back again, and I just wanted to say that the update is in the pervy section, it's a short one, yes, but it's because I promised Chi-chan--->

(Kat Chichay) that I will be uploading today so

But next i will be doing the epilogue so it will come fast. Please, be nice to me

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=37680.new#new

Kakeru15 · « **Reply #136 on:** May 24, 2014, 03:43:20 AM »

Can't access

ubulubulbilu · « **Reply #137 on:** May 24, 2014, 03:47:46 AM »

Can't access. Pls update this fic

ayudewi6 · « **Reply #138 on:** May 24, 2014, 06:46:26 AM »

OMG! Author-san I can't access that one

lezperv · « **Reply #139 on:** May 24, 2014, 07:55:46 AM »

Interesting sex scene... I feel weird seeing Minami talk dirty though...