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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.12 06/17/2014 Update!
« Reply #120 on: June 19, 2014, 11:23:12 PM »
Ah spending valentine at minami's home more better than go outside  :twothumbs
right timing when minami parents left her alone Lol
finally minami realized that all this time acchan were waiting for her :shy1:
so acchan will sleepover? or? kyaaaaa not just spending valentine, but also spending one night together  :drooool:
aaaw what am i thinking??  XD it's not 'something' will happen at night, rite?? or can be?? LOLJK

waiting yoo for the update  :cow:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.12 06/17/2014 Update!
« Reply #121 on: June 22, 2014, 12:50:47 PM »
Kyaaaaa! !  Your story is so cutee~
I‘m dying of the cutenes between Takamina and Acchan  :heart:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.12 06/17/2014 Update!
« Reply #122 on: June 23, 2014, 08:08:37 PM »
@Haruko: yes another kiss! and more to come lol
@FoxKing: why does aachan always do the work? you think it's unfair?
@jumpcx: new reader? nice to meet ya! and yes that's exactly i was thinking on the last scene hehe
@ayudewi6: i can't wait for the rest of the story, too! sorry if i update slow
@cisda83: hey... i noticed you keep on suggesting troubles... so let's start with trouble #1 at the end of this chapter lol
@IamNot_Glad: i also had a toothache while writing this... LITERALLY. i already took mefenamic but the pain won't just go away T^T
@Feat: yup! it's the 3rd one... why are we counting again? lol
@korin48: okay let's make their kisses countless from now on hehe
@Justqle: ooohh i was actually waiting for someone to bring that up... anyone to second that motion?
@taenylove: yay! another new reader! more cuteness coming up! :)

When the Time Stops
Chapter 13


Winter season hasn't ended yet and despite of the cold atmosphere, my body temperature keeps on rising. We shared our third kiss. I can feel the softness of her lips moistened with tears against mine. The warmth of her breathe is making me lose my mind. I feel like I'm in a different space right now, where everything is timeless when I'm with her. I want us to stay like this forever.

"Minami... I guess I shouldn't stay." She said breaking off our kiss.

"Atsuko, I'm sorry... I know I hurt you but please... you don't have to go." I begged her again.

"If I stay any longer... I might do something I'll regret."

"Letting you go is more regretful. Atsuko, I meant it when I said you're important to me... I... I do love you, too!"

She just smiled with my answer and said...

"I know you'd say that. You're really kind, Minami. But you don't have to return my feelings out of pity."

"That's not true!" I yelled.

"You don't understand! The love I feel for you is different... I... I... need to go..."

She's reaching again for the doorknob again but I grab her wrist to stop her.

"Minami, let go of my....."

I captured her lips with mine. My actions became more aggressive and I don't plan to hold back anymore. I've never been so sure in my life like this. I know exactly what I feel for her.

"W-What are you do...." She tried to resist but I didn't stop. I can taste her mouth each time she opens it to protest. I didn't mean to... it just happened.

Our kiss deepens and it's making my knees go weaker, so I had no choice but to look for support. I pinned her against the door still not leaving her lips untouched. She's slowly putting her defenses down, she's now kissing me back.

What's happening? My body is now moving on its own. It's like my overwhelming emotions towards her is controlling me. Maybe she's right. I still don't know her, that's why I do want to know her more.

"Minami, wait!" She slightly pushed me off. "I-I'm not ready for this yet..."

Eh? Ready for what? My God... was she actually thinking that I'll do something to her?! I came back to my senses and immediately stepped back.

"I-I'm sorry! I-It's not what you think! I was carried away... I just want to prove you wrong and make you stay..." I apologized.

"This is your way of saying that? I admit... I was a bit surprised. But alright then, I won't leave tonight. So you don't have to worry." Atsuko smiled.

"Hontou ni? Thank you!!!" I jumped to hug her. Then I realized I got closer to her again.

"I-I'm sorry..." I moved back. "I just need to prepare things first so that we can sleep already." I left her and went to the bathroom.

After I freshened up, I looked for some
pajamas for her to wear. I handed them to her before her turn to go inside the bathroom. I was about to lay the futon down the floor when she got out.

"You can sleep on my bed, I'll just sleep on the futon." I told her.

"Minami, don't you want to sleep beside me? I don't bite." She said sitting down on my bed.

"It's not like that. This has always been the set-up whenever Yuko stays overnight here." I explained.

"Mou~ do you only treat me same as Yuko?"

"No... but..."

"We sleep on the same bed, okay?" She grabbed my arm and pulled me for a hug placing me on top of her.

"Hmm... this is so much better. And besides, your pajamas are a bit short for me. You should fix this, so you need to keep me warm tonight." She demanded and I couldn't complain about that.

I was totally caught off guard. Atsuko smells good. And with my head lying on her chest, I can hear her heart beat clearly. It's pounding so fast. I wonder if it's because of me.

"Ne, Minami... won't you give me a goodnight kiss first before you sleep?"

"Why are you so bold to ask for one?"

"I just took the courage to confess to you! That's even harder, you know!"

I give up, I know I can't win over this girl. I moved a little higher and planted a kiss on her cheek.

"Hey, that's not the kind of kiss you gave me earlier..." What is she whining about?

"Did I offend you? About that... I'm sorry I didn't mean to..."

"What are you apologizing for?" She cuts me off. "You made me happy when you did that. It's like you saying, you want to own me."

"I never do those kind of things before. You're my first kiss... and the only person I kissed." I confessed.

"Were you jealous when Mariko-senpai kissed me on stage?"

"Why are you asking about that now? What will you feel if you see me kiss somebody else?"

"Then, I'll kill you both." Atsuko's eyes are scary.
"Haha! Joudan da yo! I won't let that happen. Minami is only mine."

She's really scary for a moment there. I almost thought of backing out.

"So, where is it now?" She asked again.

"Nani?"

"My goodnight kiss..."

"But I already gave you one!"

"Fine, I'll go to sleep now..." She's about to face away from me.

This girl exactly knows how to push me over the edge. I stole a kiss from her lips again before she turned around from me. I plan to make it short but she pulled me back for more. She moved her lips and opened her mouth... Wait, what is she doing? Then I remember what she said earlier, that she wants me to own her and yes... I do want to.

Our kiss went on getting deeper and deeper... I feel like drowning myself to her... She's stealing my breath away and I want more... My body is aching for her... I feel like burning inside and I can't control myself anymore... This scares me... I need to stop... or else I might...

"Minami? Are you okay? You're sweating..." She asked after I used all my energy left to pull myself off.

I lay my head on her chest once more. The sound of her heartbeat calms me down.

"Atsuko... please hold me tonight."

"I will." She answered as she wrapped her arms around me.

And we stayed like that the entire night. I don't feel sleepy yet. Maybe because I feel like I'm already inside my dream.

"Atsuko... still awake?"

"Hmm?"

"You asked me earlier about what I want to be. And I think I know the answer now."

She didn't respond anymore but I still continue what I want to say.

"I want to be... with you..."

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I woke up before her the next morning. I opened my eyes and saw my angel sleeping right next to me. This is heaven, to see her beautiful face first thing in the morning. Thanks to my body clock, I had the chance to stare at her longer while she's still sleeping.

"Mmm... Minami..." She moved. Is she already awake? I closed my eyes again and pretended sleeping.

"I know you're already awake. Are you staring at my face the whole morning?" She asked.

I still didn't move. How did she know that?

"So, you won't wake up, huh. Alright, I'm now getting up from your bed and leaving your room."

She then sat up, so I immediately captured her and hugged her from behind.

"Mou~ I'm still sleepy... don't leave the bed, please?" I said still hugging her.

"Ah really, so what happened to your body clock?" She asked grinning.

Oh shoot! I totally forgot she also knows about that.

"Alright, I'm wide awake now... but please let's stay like this a little bit more." I requested.

"I didn't know that Minami's clingy on bed... How cute..." She teased.

"No, I'm not!"

"Yes, you are!"

"So you want me to be clingy? Then let me show you..."

I grabbed her back to bed and started to tickle her body all over.

"Kyaaa~!!! Minami!!! Stop that!!!" She's laughing hard.

She tried to fight back and switch our positions. She's now on top of me to get revenge.

"You're dead, Minami. My turn!!!"

I'm expecting her to tickle me, too. But she only paused. She's holding both of the hands above my head.

"Minami, do you really love me?" She asked seriously, looking straight to my eyes.

"The one I love is the person right infront of me. Regardless, if she's that girl from the entrance exam or that actress from that stage." I answered.

Her face is now slowly getting closer to mine again. I know she's about to kiss me but suddenly the door bell rings.

"Is that your parents already?" She moved back.

"I don't think so. It's too early yet, and why would they have to ring the doorbell? They have keys."

I got up the bed and went downstairs to check who the person is.

"Takamina!!!" I opened the door and was surprised to see Yuko.

"E-Ehh? Yuko?! What are you doing here so early in the morning?"

"This is an emergency! I've been calling you since last night but you're not answering your phone. I wanted someone to talk to. I even called Aachan too but I can't reach..... her..... eeehh? Aachan?!"

Atsuko followed me down and Yuko saw her wearing my pajamas.

"The two of you are together last night?! So, that explains it all!"

"Yuko, it's not what you think, okay?"

"Did you actually spent the night together?"

"My parents left, so Atsuko just kept me company." I explained.

"So, you two are all alone?! Hey, what's going on in here?" Yuko suddenly rushed upstairs.

"Yuko, where are you going?" I ran after her.

She opened my door and entered my room.

"No futon on the floor and your bed is a mess... So the two of you shared one bed, huh?" She grinned.
"Is there something I should know?"

"Yuko, I already confessed to Minami last night." Atsuko said.

"Woah... finally! But did you guys... uhm..."

"Nothing happened, you perverted squirrel!!!" I yelled at her.

"Yeah, right... try to convince me more. Takamidget's a grown-up girl now! I'm so proud."

"Whatever, Yuko. Anyway, what is it that brought you here that you can't even wait for tomorrow?"

Her face suddenly saddened. I knew there was something wrong. She's not usually like this.

"Nyannyan..." She answered.

"Why? What happened to Kojiharu?" I asked.

"Nyannyan... She's... transferring."

TBC

since i still can't get over with the latest anime i watched...
let me ask a sample riddle connected in my story lol

"Another school year means new ____."

thanks for reading! :)

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.12 06/17/2014 Update!
« Reply #123 on: June 23, 2014, 08:15:06 PM »
since i still can't get over with the latest anime i watched...
let me ask a sample riddle connected in my story lol

"Another school year means new ____."

thanks for reading! :)

OOOH!!! This is like Akuma no Riddle, right? :inlove: I can't believe you made a reference.

OK, I wanna guess! Eh....

"Another school year means new beginnings."

Is that it? I hope so! :bow: I can't wait to see what happens next. Awesome update~ :heart: Ganbare~
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #124 on: June 23, 2014, 09:37:49 PM »
well... it's so great that they are able to confess their feelings to each other

and it seems their relationship is developing nicely...

How about the parents and the schoolmates?

Would they accept their love for each other?

Eh... nyannyan is transferring.... Poor Yuko

But running to Atsumina would do what?

Except that Yuko can complain and crying in front of them... there is nothing Atsumina be able to do about Haruna's decision on transferring...

Would Atsumina be asking Haruna as to why she's transferring?

Would Atsumina be comforting Yuko only?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

thank you

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #125 on: June 24, 2014, 05:05:34 AM »
Im so happy for my atsumina.... but my kojiyuu T__T

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #126 on: June 24, 2014, 05:32:23 AM »
OMG This is so sweet! Oh my feelings for atsumina's coming back to 100% because of this. ww Can't wait for moree

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #127 on: June 24, 2014, 07:37:01 AM »
Ah, akuma no riddle XD
Another school year means new encounters
Thx for the update

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #128 on: June 24, 2014, 10:04:08 AM »
I'm glad you didn't let them go any farther than kissing. Atsumina (as well as any other couples for that matter) in this story, from my perception (based on your setting), could be best described as a type of first love :P and in my opinion, first love is the most innocent and purest form of love :wub: (usually takes place in high school setting), one that's not tainted by calculating agendas and society's influences often seen in grown-ups. First time falling in love, first time missing someone, first time feeling jealous, first time realizing that there's someone whom you really care for, first time clumsily confessing your feelings, first time experiencing heartbreak, etc. All of those first times will later on form into a memory you will never forget. That's how I feel about them in this story. Whether they end up becoming each other's last love or not doesn't really matter because first love is something you will always remember for the rest of your life and it will always occupy a special place in your heart.

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #129 on: June 24, 2014, 11:31:27 AM »
Yay! Countless kiss!!  :shy1: :nya: :shy2:
And... Poor Yuko...  :mon cry:
Update soon!  :mon bye:
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #130 on: June 24, 2014, 03:01:21 PM »
Takacchan they finally become couple(?)

Omg no Nyan Nyan dont transfer

Update soon

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #131 on: June 24, 2014, 06:49:40 PM »
so.....what i've missed???  :shocked Atsumina being so lovey-dovey like that, and what's with that intimacy?? OMG  :w00t:
here comes Yuko-sama the moment crusher!  :lol:
oh no..... is this the time for Haruna to go to Paris??  :(
looking forward for the next~  :yep: thankyou~!

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #132 on: June 24, 2014, 09:09:41 PM »
OhmyGod ohMyGosh ohMyWOW  :mon blood:
what the hell with that pervert squirrel?!! disturb my Atsumina momment like that  :doh:
ouch, but poor yuko..  i feel bad too :( what will happen to KojiYuu relationship??
Takamina, you should help your bestfriend with anything!  :panic:


I'm glad you didn't let them go any farther than kissing. Atsumina (as well as any other couples for that matter) in this story, from my perception (based on your setting), could be best described as a type of first love :P and in my opinion, first love is the most innocent and purest form of love :wub: (usually takes place in high school setting), one that's not tainted by calculating agendas and society's influences often seen in grown-ups. First time falling in love, first time missing someone, first time feeling jealous, first time realizing that there's someone whom you really care for, first time clumsily confessing your feelings, first time experiencing heartbreak, etc. All of those first times will later on form into a memory you will never forget. That's how I feel about them in this story. Whether they end up becoming each other's last love or not doesn't really matter because first love is something you will always remember for the rest of your life and it will always occupy a special place in your heart.
your explanation just too great  :twothumbs
first love is awesome experience indeed, the first love happiness and first love sadness mixed and create those unforgettable sparks in your heart.
and i really enjoyed this kind of story, whether it's happy-fluff or sad-angst  :yep:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #133 on: June 25, 2014, 01:06:05 PM »

@IamNot_Glad: i also had a toothache while writing this... LITERALLY. i already took mefenamic but the pain won't just go away T^T


Sasuga from our Soukantoku   :thumbup :thumbup

She respect Acchan so much  :wub: :wub: :wub:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.13 06/23/2014 Update!
« Reply #134 on: July 06, 2014, 09:54:24 AM »
hi everyone! the forum's back and i'm back, too! hehe :lol:

@Ruka Kikuchi: yep! akuma no riddle and as what kaiba said, there's no right answers to those riddles.. so i believe it depends on the person answering it :twothumbs
@cisda83: i guess you're right, running to them won't do anything.. maybe yuko just want some comfort from her friends
@Haruko, korin48, Justqle: to answer your worries, here's a special chapter for kojiyuu!
@Keisthename: hey there! just wanted to take the opportunity to thank you for updating contract
@jumpcx: hi thank you so much for answering the riddle!
@Tanchan: very well said :yep: i think everyone can relate with first love.. that's why i wanted to make my plot as light as possible.. i enjoy writing sweet stories like this one because it gives me a refreshing kind of feeling and i hope it also reflects on my readers as they read them
@Kirozoro: yep, atsumina's now a couple... finally!
@atsukojiyuu_C: hmm, they're still on their second year so.. let's see what happens in their 2nd special chapter!
@IamNot_Glad: yes, minami do respect aachan but actually... things like that didn't come to her mind at all.. that sensation is new to her :)

When the Time Stops
Chapter 14 KojiYuu Special

It was Valentines day and I wanted to see Nyannyan before the day ends. I decided to visit their house, since it's just few blocks away from ours. I was about to push the doorbell when I heard loud voices coming from inside.

"But, Mom!!! I already like it in here!!" It's Nyannyan's voice.

"Haruna, you do know very well that moving from one place to another is a part of my job." Her mother said.

"I know that.. I did nothing but to always understand you and your job! So why can't you understand my feelings, too? I don't want to transfer schools again!!!"

S-She's transferring?? I felt weak, I didn't try to come inside anymore. I turned around and just went back home. I don't want her to leave, but is there something that I can do to stop her?

I couldn't sleep that night so I tried to call Takamina's number, but she's not answering. I tried Aachan's too, but her phone's out of reach. I badly needed someone to talk to, so I went to Takamina's place the next morning. I found out that she and Aachan were finally together. I'm really happy for them. Then I told them about Nyannyan's situation. They advised me to stop worrying because the things I've heard were not confirmed yet. They said I need to wait first for Nyannyan to tell me herself.

Days have passed but I didn't hear anything from her, she never mentioned about her transfer of school. And it makes me sad, maybe she still doesn't treat me as a friend to open up things like that. I'm just starting to reach her, but why do I feel like the more I'm trying to, the farther she's getting away from me? It hurts to know that she's just right here beside me. I wonder if she'll soon forget about me after she leaves...

♪ Clouds flow
To somewhere faraway
They teach us
How broad is the sky ♪

♪ We laughed together
And we cried together
One day remember
That we were here ♪

"Yuuchan?"

I put off my headphones to hear what she's trying to say.

"Are you saying something, Nyannyan?" I asked.

"Nothing... I just notice that you sing sad songs lately." She said.

"Ahh, they just happened to be on my playlist. I'll change my choice of songs next time." I tried to put a smile on my face.

"I see... break time's up already. We should go back to class now." She stood up.

I will surely miss her here in the rooftop. I can't even imagine myself being alone here anymore. We go up here everyday, sitting right next to each other and looking at the sky above us, like this place is already our own. Eventhough we do different things, I'm on my iPod and she's on her PSP. Just being near her like this makes my heart contented with happiness.

We went back to our classroom. Our teacher announced that she'll be giving back our test papers from our last exam. Oh, no... I knew I didn't do well in that exam. I don't even have to look to know my result. She gave the paper first to the student who got the perfect score. Who else could it be? Ofcourse, our genius president, Takamina.

After classes, the four of us set to meet at Takamina's favorite restaurant where Tomochin works part-time. Nyannyan and I went ahead first. She chose a table then I sat beside her. I accidentally saw her folded test paper when she opened her bag.

"Nyannyan? You only got 8 points, too?"

"Huh?" She opens her folded test paper and her real score was revealed.

98 points!!! Sugoi~ I knew she's not just some pretty face. She's smart, too.

"Yuuchan, what do you mean by 8 points? Is that the score you got in the exam?" She asked.

Uh-oh.....

"Who got 8 points?" Perfect timing, Takamina arrived together with Aachan.

They joined our table and took the seats opposite to us.

"Oh, Yuko... not again..." Takamina saw Nyannyan's score so she already knew it was me.

"How about you, Atsuko? How's your exam?" Takamina asked.

"I-It went well... Y-You dont have to worry, Minami..."

"Atsuko, are you hiding something? If you won't let me see your score, then I'll just ask Tomochin about it..."

"Eh~ Why would you ask her!? You're just finding excuses to talk to her, don't you..." Aachan pouted.

"Ne, Takamina... sorry for not warning you about this before but... Aachan's a jealous monster!!! Whew.. That felt good! I can finally say that out loud in front of you. I don't need to follow someone to the restroom anymore." I teased.

"Shut up, Yuko. I'm not listening to someone who only got 8 points in the exam." Aachan responded irritatedly.

"Oh really... So how much score did you get, huh?" I dared her to show her exam results.

Aachan pulled out her test paper from her bag and showed us her score.

"T-Twelve points!? And you're proud of this?!" I can see Takamina's shocked reaction.

"Hey! At least I'm not the lowest scorer here. I'm still 4 points higher than Yuko!"

"That's still a failing grade, Atsuko..."

"And besides this is all your fault, Minami... since that night, I couldn't stop thinking about you... that's why it's hard to focus on my studying.." Aachan blushed for a moment there.

Nyannyan and I suddenly looked at each other after hearing those. Acchan's so bold to say such things infront of us.

"I really can't believe this.. Why have I let my own friends get this kind of scores? The upcoming test will be our final exams and I won't let anyone of you retake second year over again. I'll tutor Yuko tonight, and then it will be Atsuko's turn tomorrow." Takamina has decided to help us study.

"Mou~ why do you prioritize Yuko over me?" Aachan complained.

"Aachan, your score is higher than mine remember? So, let me borrow your precious Minami tonight!" I grinned at her.

"You little squirrel!!!"

I saw Nyannyan beside me took a deep sigh. She's just quietly listening to us. Was she also disappointed in me?

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Later that evening at home, I went to open the door when our doorbell rang thinking that it might be Takamina who arrived. She said she'll come after dinner.

"Nyannyan? What are you doing here?" I was surprised to see her instead.

"I'm here to tutor you." She answered.

"Eh~? I knew it! Takamina sent you so that she can go to Aachan, didn't she?"

"No... it's actually me who told her that I want to help you study and she agreed. If you don't want me here then I'll just leave."

"O-Ofcourse, I want! I just didn't expect it from you. Please come in!"

We then went straight to my room upstairs. Can I really study knowing she's here in my bedroom?

"Which subjects do you need help?" She asked.

"Zenbu..."

"All subjects? Alright, maybe we can start off first with the one you think is the hardest.."

"Suugaku.. it's hard for me to memorize, especially remembering formulas."

She took out her notes and placed them on my study desk. She shared her summary of math formulas and equations. She let me try solving the previous problems we had but I can't manage to answer even one.

"Ne, Yuuchan... Is there something bothering you? I feel there is because you're not yourself lately..."

I guess it's time for me to ask her about it already. I need to know.

"Nyannyan... why aren't you telling us that you're transferring schools?"

"H-How did you..."

"So, it's true..." I didn't let her finish what she's about to say.
"I overheard you and your mom fighting."

"Yuuchan, I'm sorry for not telling you... I just don't want to make you all worry..." She explained.

"I understand. That's okay, I will still visit you even if you transfer schools." I gave her a smile.

"My mom's next work won't be here in Japan anymore."

Did I hear it right? My chest suddenly hurts.

"You mean, you're studying abroad?" I asked to confirm it with her and she nodded.

"Mom's a freelance photographer, that explains why we always move from one place to another. The length of our stay depends on how long she can finish her work. She was offered a permanent job in Paris. It's her dream workplace... and mine as well."

"Yours?"

"Since I was a little kid, I've always dreamed to be a successful model someday. I used to model for my mom and I love how she smiles everytime she takes photos of me. I'll be going to a modeling school in Paris."

"Wow! That job suits perfectly on you, Nyannyan." I'm happy for her but why does it hurt to smile?

"But I hesitated to go."

"What? But why? I thought it was your dream..." My hope was suddenly lightened up again.

"It's the first time I fought my mom back. I tried to talk to her and begged her to let me stay here. I don't want to leave our school, most especially my friends..."

Nyannyan...

"My mom loves me so much so she declined the job offer. But the company really wanted her work so they decided to extend it. We'll migrate to Paris right after I finish my highschool here in Japan."

So, I can still be with her for one year more.

"I'm staying, Yuuchan. So, you better study harder. Promise me, we'll graduate highschool together." She said.

I smiled at her and nodded.

Few hours later, I finally finished the math exercises Nyannyan gave me. I saw her already sleeping on my desk. She's really beautiful and her skin is so white and smooth. I went near her and planted a kiss on her cheek.

"Thank you, Nyannyan..." I softly whispered.

-

The results of our final exam went out.

"Tada!!! Look, I got 86 points!" I proudly showed my score to everyone.

"I'm still higher than you, Yuko!" Aachan also showed her test paper.

"87 points!? You're only one point higher than me!"

"Don't forget, I'm an actress! I'm good at memorizing scripts! And also... my tutor is really good." She looks at Takamina.

"I wonder if studying was the only thing you did in your room those nights..." I teased.

"We only studied, you perverted squirrel!!!" Amazing, they both said it in unison.

"Ne, Kojiharu... how is it studying with Yuko by the way?" Takamina asked.

"Surprisingly, she's well behave." Nyannyan answered. "Ah! Except for that one thing she stole."

"Nani?"

"Nandemo nai... Maybe, I was just dreaming." She gave me a weird smile.

Was she actually awake when I did that?

Before we know it, second year of highschool has ended and we're now entering our senior year.

One more year... I thought.

Many things still could happen. But my friends and I will surely overcome anything on our way... as long as we're all together.

TBC

"Another school year means new characters." ~ as well hehe

ch 15 is ready even before this one haha i'm so excited to write their senior year!
also we can now start the countdown of zenpen... :thumbsup

thanks for reading! :)
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.14 07/06/2014 KojiYuu Special
« Reply #135 on: July 06, 2014, 02:32:03 PM »
Having a smart girlfrined/boyfriend is sure awesome :lol: :lol:

I wish I had one XD XD XD
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.14 07/06/2014 KojiYuu Special
« Reply #136 on: July 06, 2014, 05:13:40 PM »
@Ruka Kikuchi: yep! akuma no riddle and as what kaiba said, there's no right answers to those riddles.. so i believe it depends on the person answering it :twothumbs

Ah~ naruhodo. Well, it was fun to try. :thumbsup

"Another school year means new characters." ~ as well hehe

ch 15 is ready even before this one haha i'm so excited to write their senior year!
also we can now start the countdown of zenpen... :thumbsup

thanks for reading! :)

So next is there senior year. That means they'll probably graduate and head to college or work by the last chapter, or something like that.

Can't wait to see what happens next! :heart:
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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.14 07/06/2014 KojiYuu Special
« Reply #137 on: July 06, 2014, 05:46:53 PM »
woah i don't expect this at all, thankyou for made a special chap for KojiYuu  XD
yeah Nyannyan, Paris can wait~
so much cuteness here  :wub:
okay, i'm looking forward to their senior year  :twothumbs

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.14 07/06/2014 KojiYuu Special
« Reply #138 on: July 06, 2014, 08:48:30 PM »
nice tutor for acchan and yuko  :twothumbs
so 1year left for kojiyuu  :cry:
they all will step out to reach their own dreams after graduate ..
must be lot things to happen in senior year, i'll wait for that  :cow:

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Re: [AtsuMina] ZENPEN: When the Time Stops Ch.14 07/06/2014 KojiYuu Special
« Reply #139 on: July 07, 2014, 03:07:20 PM »
Wondering what Yuko stole from Haruna?

Well it's nice that Haruna is staying until finish high school

But what's going to happen to them after graduation?

What about Atsumina?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you

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