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« on: September 10, 2006, 12:06:11 PM »
So guys^^ I really like ypur fanfics!!! they are coo!^^ Well i give it a try too:)  I hope you guys like it!^^ Ah and before i start i have to say 2 things^^:
1. I'm still learning english in school :evil:
2. There is a person named Yumiko.^^ Well Yumiko is me. But only in the Story^^^^XD :P :D ^^


______Part 1______________________________

[A room somewere in a building]

Maki had to make some photos for her new Single.

"Ok we are finished! Good work!" said the photograph.
"Hai, okay! Good work everyone!" said Maki and went to Tsunkus Office because he wanted to talk to Maki about her new Photobook.

[Tsunkus office]

"Hi Maki, i want to talk to you because your new Photobook." Tsunku said.
"Yeah ok. So where do i make it then? And who will photographe me?"

I hope it´s not a old man.... i remembered the last photobookmaking very well...

"Ok in two days you will fly to Hawaii again. The last Photobook was very popular to the people." said Tsunku and pointed at the door and said "And she will photographs you."

The door opend and 1,69m tall girl camed in.

"That is Kasaki Yumiko, she is 20 years old and came from Germany." said Tsunku.

"Nice too meet you! It will be a honour to phatographe you!" Yumiko said and smiled.
"I'm Goto Maki nice to meet you too!" Maki said and smiled too.

After a while they sitting next to eachother and they didn't talked anything.

Then Yumiko asked
"Do you want something to drink or to eat or something like that?"
She went completly red after saying that.

She seems to be shy...but it looks cute.

Maki began to laugh a little. Yumiko thougt she said something wrong and went totaly red.

"You are nice. I think you will take wonderfull pictures of me right?" said Maki and smiled at Yumiko.

"Eeeeeee...eeee...yes of course i will!!!" Yumiko said it very shy.
"Let's go to my place and plan something for the new Photobook." Maki said and went to the door.
"Ah yes..." Yumiko's legs were shaky.

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" Yossie stop it!! " screamed Miki.
"I'm just tickling you! " Yossie said and laughed.
" Yeah but its much.... ahahaha stop it!"
" You know to be with you in Hongkong was very nice right?"
"Ohh...yes it was so much fun!" Miki slaped Yossie in her face.
"ouuuuch! what was that for?!"
"Sorry it was just a reflex!"
"And why?" yossie looked a little bit scared.
"Hahaha it was just a reflax! But i thought about doing this..." Miki kissed yossie softly on her lips.
"Ah i remember this kiss!" Yossie screamed.
"Yossie i always kiss you like this...whats so special?" Miki said
"Yeah but it felt like the kiss in Hongkong...so it is special!" Yossie laughed

Yossie kissed Miki on the cheek " like you are special for me" said Yossie very lovely and smiled.
"Ahhhhhhh~ yossie!!!" Miki shouted and snuggeled with Yossie

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Part 2
« Reply #1 on: September 10, 2006, 02:52:16 PM »
part 2
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"Here we are." said maki und pointed at the door.
Maki opend the door. "come in"
Yumikos legs were very shaky.
Maki put some tea on the table and some housemade cookies.
"Anno...Goto san did Tsunku told you that we share one room together?" Yumiko went red.
"Ah...is that so? Well i have no problem with that. Do you have a problem with that?" Maki smiled.
"errr..... nno iii ddon`t have a problem with that" said yumiko with wide opened eyes when she saw makis face.
"You are very shy! Is everything ok?" Maki laughed.
"err yes its allright!" she looked at Maki again and then it happend!
Her nose was starting to bleed.
"ahhh.....kuso...." Yumiko whisperd.

Her nose bleeds when she is looking at me?

"Ah im sorry!!"

"Eh its ok... well lets start to plan for the photobook."
"Ok so how do you want to pose?"Yumiko asked.
"In some nice summer clothes and of course in bikinis!" Maki said that and began to laugh.

Not again!!!!!!!Yumiko thought when her nose started to bleed again.

"Are you ok?"

"yeah I´m fine!!"


[Finaly in Hawaii

Maki and Yumiko had 2 days time to know eachother better. But yumiko hadn't a good start with Maki. Her nose bleeded everytime when she saw Maki laughing and smiling. But the two girls get along very well.

Yumiko found a very nice place at the beach to photographe Maki. There were lots of Big and small Stones.
" well ok Maki it would be nice if you sit right there and then i can take pictures.... is that ok?...Maki??..." Yumiko looked behind a stone and Maki was sitting there in a Bikini.

Ahhh no~~~~~~~~~~~~ not again

"Im ready Yumiko....Ehhhh?????????????? your nose is bleeding again?" Maki screamed.

Maki looked so erotic in this bikini that Yumiko had completly a blackout.
"Come and take a seat. We didn't had time to chat a little bit." Maki said and smiled.
Yumiko sat down.
"Do you like me?" Maki asked suddenly.

Yumiko went comepletly red and had here mouth wide open.

"Do you like me i asked" She smiled.

"yyeah of course iii do..........wwwhy?" she blanked out.

She is really cute... i feel good when she is there.... i don't know why  Maki thought.

to be continued^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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« Reply #2 on: September 10, 2006, 02:59:01 PM »
aww this is fun, actually i would get a nose bleed aswell, if i saw maki in a bikini XD

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« Reply #3 on: September 10, 2006, 04:14:41 PM »
Welcome to the club!
If Helen Keller falls in the woods and no one is around, does she make a sound?

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part 3
« Reply #4 on: September 10, 2006, 05:00:00 PM »
thanks^^^^^^^^
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There was a nice atmosphere in Yossie’s apartment.
Lots of shining candles were on the table. It was very quiet.
Yossie put some wineglasses on the table. Miki was sitting in nice clothes on the sofa.
“Did you enjoy the meal?” yossie asked while she was giving wine in the glasses.
“It was very delicious!”  
While the girls were holding their glasses yossie said
“You look very sweet today”
“Thank you, you look nice aswell.”
Both said

“ To us!” and they drank a little bit of the wine.
“Do you think the other girls are ok during the little tour without us?”
Miki was really worried about that… Tsunku wasn’t happy about that.
“Don’t worry Miki!” Yossie sat down to Miki on the sofa.
She leaned her arm over Miki’s shoulders. “ Everything is gonna be ok.”
“Yeah but Tsunku… don’t you think he will throw us out if he knows whats going on between us?”
“I don’t think so. You are the only person who I want to be with. I need you Miki.”
“ I need you too.” Miki kissed yossie on the cheek.


In the Hotelroom Maki is taking a shower, while Yumiko is cleaning her nose again.
Suddenly Maki jumped in the livingroom only with a towel on the body.
“Waaaaahhhhhh ~~~” Maki screamed
“Eh? What happened?” Yumiko asked with a bleeding nose again.
“ I…I….d..on’t know… I heard something than I jumped out of the shower”
“Let go and see whats there”
“O…k I will be right behind yyou.” Maki’s legs were shaky.

Yumiko entered the hot bathroom. Maki was so scared that she clung Yumiko’s back.
Everytime when Yumiko see something at Maki her nose bleeds. Her nose didn’t stop to bleed.
“Eh Maki….”
“yes?....”
“Look…”
“Oh that was it?”
“Yes…”

A Shampoo bottle felt down in the shower. Maki was embaressed.

“I’m sorry! Really sorry!” Maki said .
“Nah it’s allright….that happen sometimes….it’s not a big deal.” She went completly red.

Suddenly the wind blowed very hard thru the opened window.
Yumiko could feel two hard little things at her back.

“Eh Yumiko……”
“yyyyyes….?”
“My towel flue away…..”
“I felt it……”


"WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~~~~~~~~" both of the girls screamed.


"Where is it????"
"I don't know!!"

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« Reply #5 on: September 10, 2006, 05:22:12 PM »
haha damn i wish i was in yumiko's position right now XD

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« Reply #6 on: September 10, 2006, 05:26:47 PM »
yay!^^
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Yossie and Miki were starting kissing on the sofa.
“Miki you know….we didn’t do anything exept kissing all the months…”
“Yeah I know” Miki’s voice started to get very erotic. “Do you wanna have an adventure?”

Miki said that with a such erotic voice that Yossie couldn’t resist to do more than only kissing her.

“So wanna lets go?” Yossie smiled.

They stand up and while they were going to the bedroom they took there clothes of very carefully and continued kissing eachother.
“You really want it?”
“Yeah I’m shure”
“Really?”
“Yes”

Both felt on the bed and they were kissing eachother very deep. You could call it “The battle of tongues”


Maki and Yumiko still were searching for the towel.

“I don’t understand were it could be?” Maki said.
“Um…yeah…”
“is everything ok?
“Ummm….” Yumiko pointed at Maki’s naked body.
“Ah~ I’m sorry!”

Maki wanted to put some of her own clothes but her case was still at the airport.

“Here” Yumikosearched for her clothes.
“It could be a little bit large for you but it will make it until you have your case back.”
“A That’s kind of you!” Maki kuddeled Yumiko…but she has forgotten that she hasn’t got any clothes on.
Yumiko went completely red and her nose bleeds again.
“Kuso~ why must my nose bleed everytime?”
“Maybe it’s because I’m hot?” whispered Maki.
“What did you say?” Yumiko didn’t understand what she was saying.
“N..Nothing”


Maki put on Yumiko’s clothes. They were large. But they smelled good.
She felt asleep.

This was the first time that Yumiko’s nose didn’t bleed. But Maki was still cute at that moment.

Is that a sign?

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part 5
« Reply #7 on: September 10, 2006, 05:53:43 PM »
Gosh I’m 14 and have such bad ideas!^^
Hope you enjoy it^^

It was Morning in Hawaii and Yumiko woke up and the only thing she could see was Maki’s face above her

“Hah! Your nose doesn’t bleed!” Maki laughed.
“Eh? Morning….you are right” she smiled.

Yumiko’s body was shaky. Maki had her head directly above her own head.
She could feel Maki’s warm breath.

Then someone knocked on the door. Yumiko was surprised and banged her head directly against Maki’s head.

“Ouuuch!” Maki shouted.
“Ah.. I’m sorry…” she looked a bit sad.

Maki laughed and said
“Well you are a bit nervous. Invite me to a dinner or something like that than I will forgive you”
“Ehhhh????”  Yumiko was getting red.
“Looks like a date huh?” Maki smiled
Yumiko scratched her head “ Well ok I will try it…”
“Fine! So tonight me and you right?”
“uhhhh yes…”

Then both Girls had wide opened eyes.


“EHHHHHHHHHHH~~~ wasn`t someboday at the door????”
“Yeah forget it.” Yumiko had a big smile on her face.

What should I do? A date with Maki…. I don’t know what to do

She didn’t know what to do but she felt something special in her heart that she never felt before.

But it seemed that Maki felt the same thing in her heart too.

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« Reply #8 on: September 10, 2006, 06:14:56 PM »
Only 14? WOW! Respect!  
Keep up the great work.
I really enjoy it, I love it :heart:

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part 6
« Reply #9 on: September 10, 2006, 06:16:28 PM »
Puuuuuh it’s getting harder and harder^^ But I have written 5 chapters yet^^ on one day^^

Morning in Tokyo

Yossie and Miki had a wild night together.

“Ah~ Yossie…that was fun….you are very good.” Miki was completly  exhausted.
“Uhn…yeah…ah I’m totally finished….”
“Me too…”
“Well it’s early in the Morning we should sleep a bit until the other one come back from the tour.”
“Yeah right…yossie….” She didn’t finish the sentence.
“Yes?....”
“I love you….”Miki felt asleep.
“I love you too Miki…”  Yossie felt aswell to sleep.


Hawaii   8:00 pm

“Well I’m really exited!” Maki had a big smile on her face.

Yumiko didn’t answer.

They had a nice dinner. And then on the way to the hotel they made a break at a big hill with a wonderfull view over the sea.

“That was nice!” Maki smiled.
Yumiko didn’t answer.
“Why…?”
“Hm? What do you mean?”
“Why me? Why did you want to date me?” Yumiko went red.

Maki looked at the sky and said
“Well I…..”
“No Stop!” Yumiko shouted.
“eh?”
“Don’t say anything I only want to ask you questions and you answer ok?”
“ok…” Maki was nervous.

Yumiko looked directly at Maki’s eyes. Without nosebleeding.

“Do you like me?”
“Yes”
“Do you think the scene with the bathroom was nice?”
“Yes”
“Do you think it was nice to bang our heads together?”
Maki smiled “yes”

Yumiko’s heart started to beat very hard.

“Would…Would you kiss me?”

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« Reply #10 on: September 10, 2006, 06:21:18 PM »
Thank you!^^

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part 7
« Reply #11 on: September 10, 2006, 06:40:05 PM »
Ahhh my gosh hard work^^
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The Morning Musume Members arrived Tokyo.

Yossie and miki were sitting at the table and had breakfast.
They really looked tired.

“Yay!!! Hey you two! We are back!” shouted Gaki san.
Gaki san and ai were holding hands.
Miki looked at Yossie and smiled.
Ai whisperd in Gaki sans ear
“Do they know about us?”
“I don’t think so…or do they?”
Both of them were getting really red and they ran away.
“What is with them?” Yossie didn’t understand it.
“I don’t know…well it will be noisy again here….”
“Yes…wouldn’t it be nice to go on holiday? Only the two of us?”
“Yeah but Tsunku….would he be ok with this?”
“Lets go and ask him!”

Yumiko was getting really red.
Maki smiled.
“Yes.”
Yumiko’s heart started to bounce very very hard.

The two got closer and closer.
Finaly their lips touched.
Holding Maki in her arms and feeling maki’s heart too was a nice feeling.
Maki opend her eye’s again.
She didn’t say anything she was just looking down the ground.
“Are you ok?” Yumiko asked.

Maki get closer to Yumiko’s ear and whisperd
“I want some more…”


They continued kissing.

After ten minutes they went back to the Hotel and lay on the sofa.
“That was very nice” Maki layed her head on Yumiko’s shoulder.
Yumiko kissed her on her forehead.
Maki was feeling well in Yumiko’s arms.



Than she said the sudden words that Yumiko wanted to hear from her.
She waited so long for those words.

“ I LOVE YOU”  Maki went asleep.
“I love you too….”

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« Reply #12 on: September 10, 2006, 06:51:37 PM »
This is great! Yumiko is hilarious but I think we'd all act the same if we met an H!P girl :P

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« Reply #13 on: September 10, 2006, 07:04:50 PM »
yes you are right^^

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part 8
« Reply #14 on: September 10, 2006, 07:24:22 PM »
Puuh^^


Ah~ I must catch some new ideas!^^
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Tock tock*

“yeah come in” Tsunku said.

“anno…Tsunku san…” Yossie started to talk.

Tsunku seemed to be very angry about something.

“What is?” he shouted.
“Anno… could Mikiand I get some day’s off?”
Tsunku looked really angry.

“What??!!! First you don’t get with us to the tour and now you want day’s off again??!!!”
“Well…yeah…” said Miki.
For Goddness sake!! You two are leaders!! You cant’t take free all the time! The answer is  pretty simple…. NO!”

“ok…” both of them said.
They wanted to go out of the office but than Tsunku said
“Fujimoto wait!”
“Eh?”
“Go ahead yossie I will come later” Miki said.
“ok…”

Tsunku didn’t look that scary anymore.
“Fujimoto you are taking too much time with Yoshizawa that I decided to do a new group. It is called GAM and you will join it with aya.”

Fujimoto couldn’t belive what Tsunku just said.
“No… does that mean I must go out of Morning Musume?” Fujimoto had klittle tears in her eyes.

“No. But you just have a bit more time with aya than with morning musume.”

“Ok…”

Fujimoto was crying very hard when she went to yossie.

“ I don’t want to work in a other group….”
“It will be okay Miki… We still can have time! I will be always there for you. Pleas remember that!”
“Yossie….” Miki kissed yossies lips and then they went out for dinner.

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« Reply #15 on: September 10, 2006, 07:31:06 PM »
i feel soo sorry for aya now!

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« Reply #16 on: September 10, 2006, 07:56:56 PM »
Wow! I'm out for twelve hours and this story is already into it's second page! It wasn't even here when I went to bed! Amazing, and I like the plot. Yossui/Miki and Maki/non-H!P girl. Keep up the good work!

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part 9
« Reply #17 on: September 10, 2006, 08:30:36 PM »
wow first thanks for the comments!^^
here some more stuff^^
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When yumiko woke up she was tired. It was the last day for making the photobook.

Suddenly Yumiko jumped up and down.

“Shit!! Shit!!!”
Maki woke up and asked
“Whats wrong?
“Shit!!! Weve forgotten something!!”
“And what?”
“We spend the last day’s together without shooting pictures for your photobook!!
“Ah….shit!!!!”
“Ok we can’t panic now! We must make some pictures! I don’t want to know what Tsunku might be saying to me…. I want to make photoshoots and stuff like that forever…but if I lose on my first job here  I can pack my things again and go back to Germany… but I don’t wont that!”
Maki kuddelt Yumiko and said “ I don’t wont to happen things like that….come we go out and make pictures!”
“yes!”

In the evening they were finished. The sun was going under. It was a wonderfull time for seeing the sun going under.
There they stood. Hand in hand. No worries anymore. Only being together was the nicest thing ever.

“What will happen when we are back in Tokyo?” Yumiko asked.
“Well I will take you to my mums house.” Maki smiled.
“Eee? Really? But what will your mother think?” Yumiko went red.
“I don’t gonna say something like ‘Mother this is Yumiko my girlfriend’ she would be surprised! That would be not so good” Maki laughed.
“I understand that”
“But do you know what we can do together when we are back in Tokyo?”
“No do you know something?”
“Yes! We take a bath together!” Maki laughed.
Yumiko’s nose bleeds again.
“Really?”

Yumiko saw Maki only one time naked. But she didn’t really looked at her.

“Yes of course! It will be nice! I’m exited!” Maki smiled.
“Well it sounds great to my ears and to my heart!”
Maki cleaned Yumiko’s nose.
“So it’s clean” Maki smiled.
“Ah thank you.”
“Why does your nose bleeds so often?”
“Because of you… you are so hot!”
Maki get red.
“You don’t must get red. It’s true “ she laughed.

Maki and Yumiko spend the last Night together without doing anything. Will something happen soon?

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« Reply #18 on: September 10, 2006, 08:45:59 PM »
omg omg, i'm loving this!!!, wow just one day lol, that fast! hehe
cant wait for the next part!

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« Reply #19 on: September 10, 2006, 08:47:40 PM »
thats so kind!!^^

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