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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #80 on: May 28, 2008, 05:29:23 AM »
uhh oh! forget someone Ai? Poor Risa! She's probably still waiting on the phone like the lil lovesick puppy she is. And now Ai will find out the truth..or her father will dodge the subject. Either way Risa will know a whole lot more about why she is acting this way and maybe now she wont be so confused or annooyed at her for constantly spacing on her because she will know she is thinking about her little sister and the rest of her family. Ohh but I really hope they get together, it would be sooo sweet. Especially how Risa will probably try to be Ai's rock through this, and help her get through it.

 I just hope that Ai realises how precious Risa really is.
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #81 on: June 06, 2008, 08:29:42 AM »
XD someone should slap me because I know (basically) what I want to put into the next chapter...but I'm having a hell of a time actually sitting down to write it
bleh...
so I'm going to respond to comments and HOPEFULLY it will give me motivation
(because I notice how many of you were glad about this fic coming back in your comments from my short story topic so I really want to try and get a chapter up ASAP for all of you!)

aww don't feel bad about the chapter~  It was very enjoyable! 
:wub: i enjoyed it! cant' wait for the next one!

Thanks both of you! I really wasn't sure about this chapter...but its nice to hear it was good =]

I hope Ai will soon know how Gaki feels towards her. Unrequited love is quite sad. Plus I hope that Gaki will overhear the conversation at Ai's house.  :P

I love this part! Cheeky Miki rocks :shifty:

You plan to intertwine AixGaki with Miki's side in the next chapter?  :cry: I expect some tears...

Unrequited love is sad...always the sucky parts of life. But they make stories more interesting haha...

Cheeky Miki FTW
That was probably my favorite part to write

There might be some tears...but not right away =]

AI-CHAN!!! HELLOOOZ! Risa is totally in love with you!!! I know your family has a buncha secrets you want to find out but please don't make her sad!!!!!  :mon geek:

I knew it was Yossy! She and Miki seem to have something more than friendship but where does that leave Ayaya?  :dunno: Was she just Miki's senpai or did they have something more and then something happened to her? So many questions! But even though some get answered as you update, I come up with more!!! But I wouldn't have it any other way!

So the stories are gonna overlap? I think someone's gonna die.... :pleeease:

XD that first part made me laugh

hmm...the questions
were you someone who voted you liked it because of the unanswered questions?
man...I hope I remember to answer them all sometime in the story...or I could always leave some parts to your imaginations =]

Death seems to be a pretty big part of this story, no?

Strange that everyone thinks that Miki and Koharu are grim reapers, and yet Koharu is worried about getting caught via forensic evidence.  Take into account what has been said in the two most recent chapters about what they do, and this could possibly mean that they're not reapers, but instead members of some sort of secret society of assassins...or they really are reapers and Koharu is just a real noob at it. :P

I should probably rewrite that part of the story then to make it more clear...because basically its just that Koharu is a n00b haha...

Yomiki  :luvluv1:

poor takitty, she is very worry about all the aika thing  :farofflook:

pleease, waiting next chapter (and if in it appear yossy, so much better) XD

How did I know that the YoMiki-ness would get you of all people excited about this fic XD

Ai's a caring person =]

*tries to write again*
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*fails...*

Ahh! This story has so many secrets  :dizzy: But it's damn exciting :w00t:

I can't wait to find out about Aika's past but I guess what I really can't wait for is Aya appearance XD I wonder what kind of connection was between her and Yossy and Miki :mon dunno:

I'm glad its keeping you entertained =] I'm trying really hard

Hmm Aya...shes a key role in a very odd way

YoMiki  :inlove: The tease and the gullible  XD

Hopefully I will find some way to put more YoMiki lub in the story =]

uhh oh! forget someone Ai? Poor Risa! She's probably still waiting on the phone like the lil lovesick puppy she is. And now Ai will find out the truth..or her father will dodge the subject. Either way Risa will know a whole lot more about why she is acting this way and maybe now she wont be so confused or annooyed at her for constantly spacing on her because she will know she is thinking about her little sister and the rest of her family. Ohh but I really hope they get together, it would be sooo sweet. Especially how Risa will probably try to be Ai's rock through this, and help her get through it.

 I just hope that Ai realises how precious Risa really is.

I'm really rooting for there relationship too (and its my story XD)
but thats actually one of the very few little things I'm having a hard time debate on whether it should happen or not...cuz the story could work either way
hmmm...we shall see




Okay...hopefully I can write now XD maybe seeing my topic at the top of the board but without a new chapter will make me feel bad and write faster
I am now banning myself from reading anyone else's fics or going on Hello-online until I finish a new chapter!!!
Hopefully I won't fall to far behind in reading and will get this chapter cranked out soon...

BTW: I added chapter titles (which I normally don't do...)
I did it yesterday because I was also trying to motivate myself to write
as you can see that didn't work either
I PROMISE though that I will NEVER completely abandon this fic
It will get done...I'm just having some trouble =[

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #82 on: June 06, 2008, 06:17:51 PM »
take your time, we'll just wait   :mon trudge:  :grin:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #83 on: June 06, 2008, 07:25:50 PM »
BTW: I added chapter titles (which I normally don't do...)
I did it yesterday because I was also trying to motivate myself to write
as you can see that didn't work either
I PROMISE though that I will NEVER completely abandon this fic
It will get done...I'm just having some trouble =[

thank you for promise it  :mon inluv:

but like kRisZ, we'll wait...  :mon determined:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #84 on: June 07, 2008, 07:58:32 AM »
I found motivation! Avoiding parents XD

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Chapter six: Father

Mr. Takahashi looked at his daughter with concern in his eyes, “Of course. You can always talk to me about anything.” He smiled and set down what he was doing and walked over putting an arm around her. “Now, what’s the matter?”

“It’s about Aika.” Mr. Takahashi was silent as he stared down at the floor. He knew Ai would start asking questions at some point. “I know she isn’t my sister…but what…I mean…why does mom seem to hate her so much? It’s like she’s jealous or something…”

Mr. Takahashi went over to the door to the living room and looked in on Aika. She was pleasantly watching Television. He smiled softly as he walked back over to Ai, “let’s go talk about this in your room. Aika doesn’t need to know right now.”

Ai nodded and followed her dad to her room where he shut the door and they both set down on her bed.

* * * * *

“But, that’s not really a reason to hate Aika is it? Just because of your family?” Ai asked, appalled at the reason behind her mother’s hatred.

Her father shrugged a little, “I know it seems silly. But to her what they did before hand is unforgivable. She doesn’t see why we should help them even though it’s my family.” He looked down at the floor his eyes welling up a little. Ai had never seen her father in an emotional state, he had even staid just fine through their entire conversation but now… “It’s ironic by the fact that what she is doing now is…exactly what they said she would be like.”

Ai looked down at the floor. As much as she didn’t want this to become a reality, she felt too bad for Aika…it was wrong. “So, why don’t you divorce her?”

Mr. Takahashi sighed and looked over at Ais dresser where a family portrait of all four of them was. “Because as bad as she is currently acting…I still love her…I can’t explain it.”

Ai nodded and leaned her head on her father’s shoulder. “I’m sorry.” They didn’t speak for a moment and then she heard her father sigh heavily.

“It’s alright,” he gently stroked Ai’s hair before suddenly jumping up. “Dinner!”

“Huh?” but he had already run out of her room and into the kitchen. With the door open even Ai could smell the burning food. She got up and began to go help when she noticed her phone was still on. “What?” She picked it up and held it to her ear. “Hello?” No one answered and so she hung up. “Strange.”

“We might be ordering in tonight girls!” She then heard her father yell. Ai smiled to herself before going out to meet the smoke that was now filling up the kitchen and her father standing there laughing at his own foolishness. Ai couldn’t help but think that he was a pleasant and fine guy. She was lucky to have him as a father. Ai glanced over at Aika who was now also laughing.

They were both lucky…

* * * * *

“Don’t sleep the whole day away.”

Miki stirred slightly and peeked her eyes open a little to see Yossui standing over her dressed only in jeans and a sports bra. Miki groaned and pulled the covers up and over her head. “The sun is too bright.”

Yossui laughed and yanked the covers down off of her and onto the floor revealing her naked body. “What did you use up too much of your energy last night?”

“That was not my fault,” Miki exclaimed pointed at the culprit named Yoshizawa Hitomi. She reached down next to the bed and grabbed her towel from last night off of the floor and wrapped it around herself as she stood up. “You’re the one who basically attacked me as soon as I stepped out of the bathroom.”

The taller girl laughed again and walked up behind Miki placing her arms around her waist. “Yea, but you enjoyed yourself,” she whispered into her ear.

Miki rolled her eyes and pulled away from Yossui and headed towards the bathroom. “We also didn’t get to sleep until about three in the morning thanks to you. What the hell time is it anyways?”

“It’s just about ten.”

“See! Only seven hours of sleep.” Miki complained leaning against the door frame to the bathroom.

Yossui shrugged, “You have to look for your assignment.”

“I have two whole months.”

“So, that could mean it’s a hard person to find.”

Miki laughed, “You know perfectly well the time frame given to us never is based upon how easy or hard they are to find. I swear it’s all just very random.”

“True,” Yossui smirked as she looked Miki up and down.

Miki eyed Yossui suspiciously, “What?”

“I was just thinking…” she paused and walked up to Miki and gently caressed her cheek. “You look so much better without that towel.”

* * * * *

A good hour and fifteen minutes later Miki was finally all dressed and able to get away from Yossui to look for this Takahashi Ai girl. “It’s a wonder how that girl with all her own assignments still finds the time to come pester me.” She smiled to herself none the less…she really liked Yossui. They had a good relationship together…that was mainly just sleeping together. Though on a rare occasion Yossui could be quiet the romantic.

Miki shook her head to clear her thoughts, she needed to focus. Glancing down at her watch she flipped through the information on the girl one more time. It just had name and age and a description of her appearance. “This is no help,” on the last page though it had the route she took home from school. “Well, at least I have her address.”

She began to walk along the streets until she was about a block away when a girl ran past her, almost knocking her down in the process, mumbling something about being really late. Miki watched the girl run away, “she looks an awful lot like…”

She shrugged, she had two months. It was possible that was her so why not check it out. Miki broke into a run and chased after the girl being careful to not be noticed and thought of as stalking the poor girl, which was technically what she was doing.

A couple blocks later the girl finally slowed down and Miki noticed they were now in front of a Zoo.

“AI!” Miki whirled around looking for who had said that and saw another girl of waving to the persons she had been stalking for the past five blocks. She ran up to said girl, “You’re late like always.”

“I’m so sorry,” she bowed.

“Ai you’re going to be late to your own funeral.”

Had it really been that simple to find her new assignment?

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #85 on: June 07, 2008, 08:56:00 AM »
keep updating.. cause i cant wait.. and you going to make takahashi die.. lolx.. and i thinking is it really die.. or miki is going to help her not dying.. lolx

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #86 on: June 07, 2008, 08:57:03 AM »
okay...so we still don't get to know what's up with her mom!...darn  :smoke:

as for Ai chan...wow I'm surprised she could mention divorce so easily....I forgot but I always assumed that Ai chan's mom was her real mom right?  poor girls... so I guess Aika comes from a relative from her dad's side of the family?  I'm still very curious about the whole situation...hopefully niigaki can get the answers from ai XD

I was really hoping you would reveal the assignment in this chapter instead of leaving it as a cliffhanger and I'm so glad you did!  (even though I expected it to be Ai chan it was still exciting to find out!)  now that I know it's really Ai chan....I can't help but feel sad that Miki is so going to destroy their family in 2 months by killing ai off and leaving only her parents and aika...actually I'm sure that's not how the story ends but still!  I like how you make Miki pretty likable so that you can't hate her for what she does...

anyways you're amazing and every chapter gets more and more interesting!  So keep up the good work  :k-wink:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #87 on: June 07, 2008, 09:50:40 AM »
Still we don't know much about Aika and Ai's mom  :P But it's ok since it was recompensed with another YoMiki moment  :wub: It's sad that Miki has to kill Ai, however the last sentence said by Gaki gave me some hope... XD

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #88 on: June 07, 2008, 10:09:03 AM »
heyyouhiya.... you started another story... GOD I'VE MISSED SO MUCH!!! ;__; I need to catch up ASAP!!! Like now! *starts reading*
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #89 on: June 07, 2008, 02:13:14 PM »
Ai is going to be killed?   :cry: I have a feeling Miki will see something similar between Risa/Ai and Aya/her in the past and perhaps with those emotions swirling in her head, she needed 2 months..Please update! :D

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #90 on: June 07, 2008, 03:29:48 PM »
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I found motivation! Avoiding parents

Why do I find this hilarious  XD



And they got laid  :luvluv2:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #91 on: June 07, 2008, 06:41:05 PM »
I wanna know more about Aika's past!!! TELL MEEEE! *whines like a crazy person*
Oh, and Yomiki is pretty hotness! Of course, right?
NOOOO! DON'T KILL AI-CHAN!!!! :(
oh, and I do believe I voted for the unaswered questions. They keep it interesting!

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #92 on: June 07, 2008, 07:50:31 PM »
Maaaaybe, Gaki offers to die in Ai's place OR Miki falls for Ai and can't do it so lets herself die instead or something... Forgive me, I just read part 3 of 'Three Months' so maybe I am confusing your Miki with having a heart as well :lol:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #93 on: June 07, 2008, 11:59:42 PM »
Yomiki is soooo hawt!!!  :hip drool:

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“I was just thinking…” she paused and walked up to Miki and gently caressed her cheek. “You look so much better without that towel.”

indubitably... :inlove: 

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #94 on: June 08, 2008, 08:15:21 AM »
And they got laid  :luvluv2:

*grabs a placard and chants* YoMiki YoMiki YoMiki


i'm in heaven too  :mon angel:

so takitty will die... i don't want it!!  :mon whimper:

waiting next chapter!

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #95 on: June 09, 2008, 02:46:52 AM »
So its Takahashi then huh *sighs* so sad.... things just seem to be going downhill for ai :cry: i hoping Risa will make things all better with her gaki-ness
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #96 on: June 10, 2008, 12:58:06 AM »
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“But, that’s not really a reason to hate Aika is it? Just because of your family?” Ai asked, appalled at the reason behind her mother’s hatred.

Her father shrugged a little, “I know it seems silly. But to her what they did before hand is unforgivable. She doesn’t see why we should help them even though it’s my family.” He looked down at the floor his eyes welling up a little. Ai had never seen her father in an emotional state, he had even staid just fine through their entire conversation but now… “It’s ironic by the fact that what she is doing now is…exactly what they said she would be like.”
You tease.

So basically someone in Aichan's father's side of the family (perhaps even Aika's own birth parents) did something that Aichan's mom can't forgive?  That's still not a good enough reason to treat Aika so badly. It's not like Aika had anything to do with whatever happened, after all.  If she wants to bear a grudge against those that were directly involved, then so be it, and unless Aika's one of those directly involved, Aichan's mom is unfairly using her as a scapegoat.



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Ai looked down at the floor. As much as she didn’t want this to become a reality, she felt too bad for Aika…it was wrong. “So, why don’t you divorce her?”

Mr. Takahashi sighed and looked over at Ais dresser where a family portrait of all four of them was. “Because as bad as she is currently acting…I still love her…I can’t explain it.”
You know that the situation is bad when a child asks a parent why they DON'T get a divorce. :O



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“We might be ordering in tonight girls!” She then heard her father yell. Ai smiled to herself before going out to meet the smoke that was now filling up the kitchen and her father standing there laughing at his own foolishness. Ai couldn’t help but think that he was a pleasant and fine guy. She was lucky to have him as a father. Ai glanced over at Aika who was now also laughing.

They were both lucky…
Yeah, lucky he didn't burn the whole place down. :lol:



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Miki stirred slightly and peeked her eyes open a little to see Yossui standing over her dressed only in jeans and a sports bra. Miki groaned and pulled the covers up and over her head. “The sun is too bright.”

Yossui laughed and yanked the covers down off of her and onto the floor revealing her naked body. “What did you use up too much of your energy last night?”

“That was not my fault,” Miki exclaimed pointed at the culprit named Yoshizawa Hitomi. She reached down next to the bed and grabbed her towel from last night off of the floor and wrapped it around herself as she stood up. “You’re the one who basically attacked me as soon as I stepped out of the bathroom.”

The taller girl laughed again and walked up behind Miki placing her arms around her waist. “Yea, but you enjoyed yourself,” she whispered into her ear.
Oh man...:drool:



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Yossui shrugged, “You have to look for your assignment.”

“I have two whole months.”

“So, that could mean it’s a hard person to find.”

Miki laughed, “You know perfectly well the time frame given to us never is based upon how easy or hard they are to find. I swear it’s all just very random.”
So the time frames change from assignment to assignment? Makes one wonder if any of hem have ever missed an assignment because they weren't given sufficient time? :?



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Miki eyed Yossui suspiciously, “What?”

“I was just thinking…” she paused and walked up to Miki and gently caressed her cheek. “You look so much better without that towel.”
In all likelihood, yeah. :jerk:



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A good hour and fifteen minutes later Miki was finally all dressed and able to get away from Yossui to look for this Takahashi Ai girl.

...

“AI!” Miki whirled around looking for who had said that and saw another girl of waving to the persons she had been stalking for the past five blocks. She ran up to said girl, “You’re late like always.”

“I’m so sorry,” she bowed.

“Ai you’re going to be late to your own funeral.”

Had it really been that simple to find her new assignment?
ONOES! MIKI'S NEXT TARGET IS AICHAN!
:OMG:




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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #97 on: June 10, 2008, 05:09:30 AM »
I realized how much I like replying to comments so I'm going to make this a frequent thing
I've almost finished the next chapter...what am I saying I haven't written anything but the title XD
But I outlined it in great detail so it will be posted her sometime tonight

keep updating.. cause i cant wait.. and you going to make takahashi die.. lolx.. and i thinking is it really die.. or miki is going to help her not dying.. lolx

Peace

When I first read this I read "Cause I cant wait...you're going to make takahashi die" like you couldn't wait for her to die XD

okay...so we still don't get to know what's up with her mom!...darn  :smoke:

as for Ai chan...wow I'm surprised she could mention divorce so easily....

I was really hoping you would reveal the assignment in this chapter instead of leaving it as a cliffhanger and I'm so glad you did! 

I like how you make Miki pretty likable so that you can't hate her for what she does...

anyways you're amazing and every chapter gets more and more interesting!  So keep up the good work  :k-wink:

I almost put the stuff about her mom...but I decided to leave that until later
(or I was just too lazy to write about it haha...)

I want to try and portray Ai as a very strong person...so thats kind of why she was able to mention it. Like she knows its something that should be done I guess

Yay Miki is likable! Success...

Thank you thank you thank you
when I read that part of the comment I couldn't stop smiling =]

It's sad that Miki has to kill Ai, however the last sentence said by Gaki gave me some hope... XD

Hmm it could be potential foreshadowing? XD I actually hadn't thought of it being anything like foreshadowing or something until your comment...but it only might be foreshadowing haha...again I'm not even sure how I want to end this
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heyyouhiya.... you started another story... GOD I'VE MISSED SO MUCH!!! ;__; I need to catch up ASAP!!! Like now! *starts reading*

Let me know what you think when you catch up! =]

Ai is going to be killed?   :cry: I have a feeling Miki will see something similar between Risa/Ai and Aya/her in the past and perhaps with those emotions swirling in her head, she needed 2 months..Please update! :D

Hmm...
must resist saying things to give stuff away...

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I found motivation! Avoiding parents

Why do I find this hilarious  XD


Because it is hilarious... =P

I wanna know more about Aika's past!!! TELL MEEEE! *whines like a crazy person*
Oh, and Yomiki is pretty hotness! Of course, right?
NOOOO! DON'T KILL AI-CHAN!!!! :(
oh, and I do believe I voted for the unaswered questions. They keep it interesting!

Don't worry I will tell you guys...-checks really badly written outline-
Hmm...thats actually sooner than I thought it would be
but still not that soon...I don't think
bleh its a horribly written story outline XD I should fix it

Ah the main question in my head: To kill Ai-chan...to not kill Ai-chan...that is the question!

i'm glad its staying interesting =]

Maaaaybe, Gaki offers to die in Ai's place OR Miki falls for Ai and can't do it so lets herself die instead or something... Forgive me, I just read part 3 of 'Three Months' so maybe I am confusing your Miki with having a heart as well :lol:

Miki? Have a heart?
Nah...it'll never happen XD

Yomiki is soooo hawt!!!  :hip drool:

Yes....yes it is
 :drool:
And they got laid  :luvluv2:

*grabs a placard and chants* YoMiki YoMiki YoMiki


i'm in heaven too  :mon angel:

I love how pro-yomiki everyone is
XD

So its Takahashi then huh *sighs* so sad.... things just seem to be going downhill for ai :cry: i hoping Risa will make things all better with her gaki-ness

I feel bad for Ai too...

You tease.

So basically someone in Aichan's father's side of the family (perhaps even Aika's own birth parents) did something that Aichan's mom can't forgive?  That's still not a good enough reason to treat Aika so badly. It's not like Aika had anything to do with whatever happened, after all.  If she wants to bear a grudge against those that were directly involved, then so be it, and unless Aika's one of those directly involved, Aichan's mom is unfairly using her as a scapegoat.

. . .

Yeah, lucky he didn't burn the whole place down. :lol:

. . .

So the time frames change from assignment to assignment? Makes one wonder if any of hem have ever missed an assignment because they weren't given sufficient time? :?


Yes. A tease I am.
Well...its not like the mother has ever hit Aika...so thats good I guess

Haha if I had him burn there house down Ais life would REALLY suck
like more than it currently is...

I'm going to be explaining all of the like time things and what Interfectors are eventually  *whistles*

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #98 on: June 10, 2008, 06:02:44 AM »
I'm going to be explaining all of the like time things and what Interfectors are eventually  *whistles*
Miki-sama can be my "Interfector" any day. :twisted:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 6)
« Reply #99 on: June 10, 2008, 09:13:15 AM »
Chapter Seven: Choices

“I’m so sorry,” Ai bowed again and then began to try and explain that she was late because her dog had hidden her other shoe.

Gaki just laughed and pat her friend on the back, “Chill. I’m only giving you grief about it. I really don’t mind.” She paused and looked down at the floor with a mildly sad look on her face.

“Gaki?” Ai questioned leaning down to meet her friend face.

She immediately woke up and shouted surprised, “what!?”

Ai began to laugh, “You react way too strongly to everything.” She continued laughing and Gaki pouted a little.

“Don’t be mean Ai.”

“I’m sorry,” she laughed again. “Come on lets go.” Gaki smiled brightly when Ai linked her arm with her own and began to lead them over to the zoo gates.

Miki watched the two girls for a while as they talked, laughed and went into the zoo together arm in arm. She felt a ting of longing to be so carefree before her emotions were interrupted by her thoughts. She needed to focus and watch her prey to figure out when was going to be the best time for her to carry out her mission without raising too many eyebrows at her.

“I guess I’m going to spend the day at the zoo,” she sighed and followed the two inside. Miki highly doubted that this stalking was necessary because it was unlikely this girl made frequent trips to the zoo. But it was a good opportunity to observe her behavior.

After paying for her ticket she discreetly followed the “couple” around to all the various exhibits and watched them laugh and enjoy themselves. But all the while Miki observed that Ai would space out a lot and basically ignore her friend.

“Maybe that’s why…” Miki mumbled to herself.

Soon they both stopped by a small ice cream stand and then went and sat down on a nearby wall next to the monkey exhibit. Miki sat down about two yards away on the same wall and watched them out of the corner of her eye. There was that Ai girl being all distant again. She was starring at the monkeys with a glazed look over her eyes while her friend just talked and talked.

Eventually Gaki slowly stopped talking and stared over at Ai. She had completely eaten all of her ice cream but Ai hadn’t taken more than one or two bits and it was now slowly dripping down her hand. She hadn’t even said more than a mumble since they sat down.

“Ai…” Gaki softly said and put her hand hesitantly on the older girls shoulder. She didn’t break her gaze from the exhibit; she just nodded her head to show she at least heard that.  “Ai I…” Gaki wasn’t even sure what she was about to say. Part of her wanted to tell Ai exactly how she felt towards her. Another part wanted to ask her about the conversation she had last night with her dad. Of course, Gaki had heard a very little part of it before feeling awkward about inadvertently eavesdropping and she hung up the phone. Then the last part of her was telling her to just not mention either of them because both could hurt their friendship.

At that moment Ai accidentally dropped her ice cream onto the floor and she finally woke up a little from her trance. She laughed, “I can be so spacey.”

Gaki just sheepishly smiled, that wasn’t true. Ai had never been this spacey and distant, especially towards Gaki who she told everything to, before these last two weeks. “Do you want me to buy you another one?” Gaki asked politely.

Ai shook her head, “Nah I wasn’t that hungry anyways. Thanks for buying them in the first place. I can pay you back-“

“No no, its fine really,” Gaki cut her off and smiled.

“What we’re saying before I dropped that?” Ai asked innocently.

Gaki shook her head, “It’s nothing.” She had made up her mind to just, for now, not saying anything about either subject.

“Look who else is here,” Ai suddenly said as she pointed over and across the zoo.

Gaki looked over and was surprised to see none other than there Kamei Eri holding one Michishige Sayumi from behind and playfully whispering something into her ear. They laughed and Eri kissed Sayumi lightly on the cheek. They were so carefree and happy as they linked their fingers together and walked away.

Ai smiled, “So cute. It makes you wish that you were also in a loved like that, doesn’t it?”

“Yea,” Gaki sighed and got up from the wall. “Shall we finish looking at the rest of the animals?”

“Of course,” Ai jumped down from the wall and held out her hand for Gaki who sighed a little. Ai had no idea how much the simple action of holding hands made her heart swell up and burn at the same time.

They began to walk away from the monkey exhibit when Gaki suddenly commented, “You know, you look a lot like those monkeys.”

Ai laughed, “I guess so.” As they continued to walk to the next animal Gaki again noticed the glaze look beginning to form on Ais face. She was trying to run on autopilot, which Ai was no good at.

Miki got up from the wall and instead of following the two she headed off to the exit. Obviously she wasn’t going to learn much else about Takahashi Ai today besides that she was extraordinarily distant from people. So far, it still didn’t add up…but these things usually didn’t until you watched them more. Miki sighed, she was probably the only one concerned with their actions anyways. Most of the other Interfectors she knew just did their job without questioning it at all.

It was kind of surprising that Yossui didn’t question it anymore. It was something Aya had tried to teach them to do… Miki never quiet understood how Aya had ended up as one of them in the first place. She shouldn’t have even been presented with the choice.

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