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~Yuri-shotS~: A Maeda Atsuko Favor Part 4-Update -07/31/13
« on: August 08, 2011, 02:39:37 PM »
Hello! :) Welcome to my thread! :welcome I created links for the previous chapters for easy access to those who just stumbled upon this page! :yep: And to you people out there, yes, I'm talking to you  :yep: the fanfics below aren't originally mine. You heard me right, but I didn't plagiarized this or something  :sweatdrop:. The thing was, stories below were based from mangas and maybe you already read them. I just happen to have time and put it into words and changed the characters into AKB48 gals. I added some scenes and interactions, and that's all that belongs to me. Thanks for reading this shit, love ya ol!  :thumbsup
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YURI CASE NO.1 - LOVE UNDER THE SAKURA TREE
STATUS: Case Closed
PAIRING: TomoTomo
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

YURI CASE NO.2 - 18x21 SHOUJO-AI TACHI YO
STATUS: Under Investigation (On Hold)
PAIRINGS: AtsuYuu, TakaHaru, AtsuMina, KojiYuu
Chapter 1

YURI CASE NO.3 - THE FAVORS
-A Maeda Atsuko Favor-
STATUS: On Going
PAIRINGS: AtsuMina
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

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Since I love Yuri Anime and Yuri couples, especially AKB48 I decided to copy the other amazing writers/authors to have a separate thread of one-shots whenever i feel like writing one. So, bear with me because I'm still new at this.....and gah whatever. If you don't like the story then you all can just ignore this....nanchatte~ :P


Yuri Case No.1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part I

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Peaceful, quiet, serene, that’s the words rang through my ears as I was lying down under a Sakura tree, eyes closed, trying to bring myself into slumber. To sleep off my growling stomach that was empty since this morning.  Yes, I, Itano Tomomi, a second year student majoring in Information Technology was penniless. Nada! Flat broke, in short I was living alone with no enough money to support myself. That is why; sleeping is the only option for me to forget all my problems and my protesting stomach. And right now, I’m-

“I always thought you’re an amazing person, Kasai-san.”

“…Um…I’m sorry…”

-was rudely interrupted from my nap time to find a guy being shot down. Worse thing? I was smack dab in the middle of the spring-time of youth, lying in a comfortable smooth grass just opposite the talking couple. Yay!

“Maybe they’ll go away…” I grumbled to myself as I opened my eyes, clearly pissed off for being interrupted by this stupid couple as the clear blue sky greeted me. The sight was really beautiful and comforting. Urging myself to sleep back, I closed my eyes again to resume my nap time…..or so I thought.

“Are you in love with someone else?”

“No…but-”

Common, this guy was pathetic. Can’t he take the hint the girl doesn’t like him? Let it go and move on so I could go back to sleep, damn it. And I can’t even move because if I did, then it will alert them that their love-love time wasn’t private as they thought.

“T-then-….”

‘Rinnnngggggggg’

Urk! Oh shit. And my damn phone that was sprawled on the ground with my things chose to ring at the moment. Clumsily, I tried fumbling with my phone to turn it off, not wanting to alert the couple they’re not alone out here. But I guess that was too late now.

Sigh.

If only I was a ninja….was my wistful thought as the couple peered over to stare at me, having heard my accursed phone’s non-stop ringing. My eyes meet theirs for a moment but I look away immediately. Now they would thought I was eavesdropping in their conversation. With a resigned sigh, I got up into a kneeling position, my head bow as I said.

“…I’m sorry for interrupting…”

As I looked up, I saw the guy blushing to the roots of his hair, avoiding my eyes.

“Oh! N-no it’s- -forget about it, uhm… see ya.”

And just like that, the guy was off like someone was chasing him. Er- this isn’t my fault, right? The girl already shot him down so he couldn’t blame me for unintentionally interrupting him. Besides I got here first than them. Yeah, it’s their fault not mine.

But when I turn to look at the girl, my inner musings and all my coherent thoughts went flying in different direction as she smiled at me.

Whoa.

“She’s cute….” I mumbled to myself, not aware that I was dumbly staring at her. She giggled cutely, bringing her left hand to her chest as she continued to stare back at me. And realization hit me hard as I finally got my senses back, my eyes widened. She heard what I said. Oh shit!

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“You caught me in a weird moment before. I’m Kasai Tomo~mi…uhmm?”

Tomo~mi?

Now sitting at a nearby bench from the Sakura Tree, we silently agreed to settle the incident that happened just minutes ago.

“Itano…Itano Tomomi.” I introduce myself, glancing sideways. My eyes caught her surprised reaction when she heard my name. But after awhile she smiled, her sweet smile I find to be rather cute like she was.

“Tomomi….same name as me.” She tilted her head, trying to catch my eyes as I nod. Her smile was still in place as she moved closer to sit just beside me. I ignore it and just let her.

“Then……hmm…Tomochin, huh? Thanks, you saved me. That guy just wouldn’t let it go.” Still refusing to meet her eyes I felt my left brow twitch slightly as I heard her call me, Tomochin? She giggled when she said that, clearly not really bothered by the confessions that just happened.

Glancing sideways to regard her, I replied in a dry tone. “He seemed pretty cool though...”

The guy before was kinda look familiar to me and after some several searching in the depths of my memories, the name Naitou Koji pops out from it. Naitou is popular among girls for being the former captain of their soccer team back in high school, and it seems his popularity only increased the time he became a university student. What a waste. And I heard he's rich too. What a total waste indeed.

“Oh….well, I guess.”

Kasai replied, her brows lightly knitted as she looked up to the sky. But in one sudden motion she turned towards me, her eyes gleaming with utmost happiness coupled with her blinding yet sweet smile as she uttered the most unbelievable words that shocked my delicate ears.

“…But I like girls.” And she giggled again, my mouth slightly agape towards her. Hearing no response from me she playfully poked the tip of my nose. I frowned, and she laughed lightly.

“Does that gross you out?”

Clearly since my orientation is straight as a pole. But coming from her, a cute girl saying that doesn’t really affect me like it would affect me under normal circumstances. And right now I felt like I was smitten by her cuteness as I was struggling to answer her question.

“No…it doesn’t gross…me out.”

My eyes locked with hers as those exact words left my mouth. A coy smile appeared on her angelic face as she moves much closer to me.

“Wanna… try it then?”

She asked in a sultry voice, eyes half-lidded as she brought her right hand to cup my right cheek. The sudden contact of her smooth hand to my cheek startled me, but it seems my body has frozen still. Escape was impossible; it was like I was under a spell unable to move as I watched her head slowly descend. I panicked, my brain telling me to snap out and stop the girl… but I didn’t.

And as our lips collided, a strong bolt of electricity run through my body, my eyes closing involuntary as I move my lips in sync with hers. She was kissing me….and I was fully kissing her back. I was kissing a girl….a girl….yet I liked it.

Feeling appalled all of a sudden ‘cause of the unexpected feelings that brought by the kiss, I moved away and did the thing a normal person would do. I slapped her….hard.

“…you hit me.” She stated the obvious, cradling her now warm cheek. Her eyes a little teary as I looked down at her. Momentarily, I closed my eyes and exhaled slowly, urging my rapid heartbeat to calm down.

“Uh-huh…” Was my only reply as I picked up my things from the bench.

“That’s….the first time someone’s ever hit me….I think.” She pouted cutely as she said that, her face portrays like an innocent child who just discovered something new. I bit my inner cheek to restrain myself from growling at her. What’d she expect then after kissing me just like that?

“That’s good then...” I replied sarcastically, turning my back towards her as I begun to walk away.

Now that I’m not under with her spell of the sort, I stopped at my tracts as I turn my head towards her. She was still holding the side of her cheek that I slapped as she looked down at her shoes. Her brows furrowed like she was immerse in a deep thought.

“Y’know, you might think you were just trying things out, but you shouldn’t do stuff like that anymore.” She looked up at me upon hearing my voice and the only reply I got was a smile. That made my blood boils a little and I frowned. Really, this girl is weird. Rolling my eyes off, I walked away thinking about the bizarre encounter I had with this cute girl under the Sakura tree.

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As Itano Tomomi’s figure retreating in a steady pace, Kasai Tomo~mi stands in her full height.  Smile still in place as she brought up her cute pink digital camera dangling around her neck, snapping a photo of the girl’s back.

“Tomochin…” She uttered the name in a soft voice, touching her lips that still tingling from the kiss she shared with her.

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“Oh! There you are Tomo.”

A distance away from me was my best friend, Maeda Atsuko. She was smiling brightly as she waved at me. Her cheery mood made me forget about the encounter I had with the strange girl. Strange but…a really cute girl.

“Where were you? Class is about to start, and you didn’t answer my call.” Atsuko frowned, hooking her left arm to mine as she drags me towards our room.

“…Kissing a pretty girl...?” I uttered unconsciously and Atsuko abruptly stopped from dragging me. I mentally kicked myself for slipping out that one as she looked at me with a confused expression written on her face. She’s really adorable right now, by the way.

“Huh? What did you just say?” She asked, her right brow arched towards me. I inwardly cursed as I gave her my best innocent look.

Shaking my head lightly, I let out a laughed. Muttering it was only a joke as I dragged her myself towards our classroom. With that said, the girl’s question rang through my head.

‘Does that gross you out?’


“Definitely not.”

Surprisingly, a genuine smile appeared on my face as the answer to her query comes out from my mouth like it was the natural thing to say considering the circumstances that brought out the situation. And for the second time of the day, I received a confused look from my best friend. And this time, I can’t help but pinched her cheek playfully as her adorableness was tugging at my heartstrings.

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Since I love Chiyuu because she's too adorable and has a sexy cute voice, my first Yuri Case was dedicated to her. XD
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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.1
« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2011, 02:56:25 PM »
ohhh i know this one but i can't remember the title wee   :OMG:

i guess it will come out soon  :hiakhiakhiak:

Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2011, 03:00:28 PM »
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wahehehe~ the above story was base on a manga i read a long time ago, so yeah. It's no surprise someone will recognize it :cathappy:




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« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2011, 05:52:58 PM »
ITS SO CUTE !!!!!!!!!Tomochin  so tsundere :lol:  please write a sequel  XD I want more please :grin:

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« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2011, 06:19:41 PM »
Tomotomo!!!!!!!! Yeah a sequel please!!

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« Reply #5 on: August 08, 2011, 09:13:29 PM »
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wahehehe~ the above story was base on a manga i read a long time ago, so yeah. It's no surprise someone will recognize it :cathappy:
Otsu Hiyori (Maple Love). :3
I like her stuff, you should put a note to say it's based off her work.

Also I like TomoTomo.

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« Reply #6 on: August 09, 2011, 08:50:46 AM »
Gyahahahahaha TomoTomo fic  :deco:
I like this pairing.....  :thumbup

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« Reply #7 on: August 09, 2011, 03:23:40 PM »
@blughise Im happy you like my first yuri case  :bow: I love TOMOTOMO as well and yes, Tomochin's the tsundere type XD

@kahem Deshou? TomoTomo is quite the cute couple XD, with Tomochin being the tsun-tsun while Chiyuu being or sorta the Yuko-ish type :lol:

@kuji Yes, it was based from the manga Maple Love and i love her work as well. I will say it was based from that manga the next i wrote something like this, thanks for reminding me. :)

@moekare Woohoo! :yossi: another TomoTomo fan. We're eternal comrades from now on. hehe :rofl:

To all silent readers, thanks for reading this. And also to those who pressed the 'thank you' button.  :bow: Arigatou :cathappy:
As for the sequel....okay!  :lol: But i noticed that TomoTomo fans are rare here and TakAcchan fans are crawling everywhere  :lol: I'll write more TomoTomo shots to promote their coupling and KojiYuu as well.... :inlove: Thank you again.  :thumbsup




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« Reply #8 on: August 12, 2011, 09:53:41 AM »
yo aya-chan! nice fic! tomo~mi like girls than boys :wub:! wow!  :inlove:

it's not the end right? ^^

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« Reply #9 on: August 14, 2011, 05:15:59 AM »
@khryz421 yes. but i'd like to think that she likes Tomochin above all else XD

DISCLAIMER: This story was base on manga titled Maple Love. I don't own it, except for the additional scenes  :)

Yuri Case No 1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part 2

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Kasai’s POV

I thought yesterday was one of those days I really hate. Shutting down a guy isn’t really easy as they thought and every time I do it, my heart clenched…..…but something interesting happened that made me feel all fuzzy and warm inside. I kissed a girl for the first time. I don’t know why I had done it. And so you know, I’m restraining myself not to squeal right now. You can’t blame me, Tomochin’s really cute. The first time my eyes laid on her, I know it’s her that I’m looking for. She’s my destiny, my fate. Though she slapped me and mind you it really hurts, but just thinking of the kissed we shared erased all the pain I felt. Her lips keep popping into my head, making me groaned in frustrations that our kiss was cut-short.

So today, I promised myself to do everything and no matter what the cost to get closer to the girl who captured my heart. I just hoped she wouldn’t slap me again if ever I tried to kiss her. The thought of kissing her again send warm feelings to my heart, making me let out a girlish giggle.

And so, I’m on a mission to hunt my destiny girl…

“Aha! I had a feeling you’d be back here again.” I smiled in delight as I spotted her. She was lying under the Sakura tree again; an open book was covering her face.  Probably to block the sunlight that was streaming through the Sakura leaves. Her other things lay beside her and her cute whitish-pink phone was settled on top of one of her books.

Slowly, she removed the book from her face, looking up at me. I smiled at her. Using all my will power, I restrain myself from jumping at her and drown her with kisses.

“You’ll get sunburn if you nap out here.” I commented as she continued to look at me, a cute frown forming on her face.

“…Kasai….san?” My smile widened hearing her call my name. I’m so happy she remembered it. My respect and love points for her increased for a hundred and ten percent. Kya!

I crouched down to sit beside her and she did the same, getting up to settle in a comfortable sitting position under the Sakura tree. Like yesterday, we’re sitting side by side with only a short distance as a gap. I can’t help but laughed softly as memories of us kissing flooded into my mind.

“Tomochin, you don’t have to use ‘san’ with me.” I said to her while smiling. I was so tempted to grab her hand just beside me, that’s why I played with the pendant of my necklace instead. I don’t want to scare her away so I chanted the words ‘self restrain’ over and over inside my head.

“Did you want something…?” She asked, my smile faltered a bit by her straightforwardness. But I refused to give up, not when the person destined for me was just before my eyes.

“Um…you see…” I trailed off, building up all my courage to say what my mind has been nagging all night. And with one last exhale, I cheerfully confessed to her.

“I think I’ve fallen for you, Tomochin. Please go out with me.”  And it was accompanied by my most irresistible smile that guys find hard to resist. It was a do or die situation, no matter what her answer is I’m-

“Oh…..but I don’t like you, so I can’t go out with you.” The smile on my face fell off as she flat out rejected me without batting an eye. I stilled my twitching heart from crumbling into pieces as I mask my surprised with a heartily laugh. She scowled at me, not expecting for me to laugh after being rejected.

“Haha~ You sure are an interesting person, Tomochin.” I wiped the tears from the corners of my eyes for laughing too much. Somehow, it was kind a bit funny and depressing how I was easily rejected. Now I know how the guys felt after I shot them down. Is this the famous thing they called Karma?

“Friends! Friends then…. can we be friends?” I asked after I calmed myself, though deep inside I was praying that she’ll agree to become my friend. I don’t know what I would do if she’ll reject me for the second time.

As I was internally praying to all the divine mercy I can think of, I heard her mumbled the word ‘interesting?’ while looking at me. She was like scrutinizing my whole being, or trying to figure out what I was thinking. I just hope that she wouldn’t think I’m a pervert or something.

“Oh…okay then.” Her affirmation to my request is all I need as I breech the gap between us. Yelling a YAY! as I grabbed her arm to pull her towards me. She was startled and was about to pull away…but stop when she saw what I was trying to do.

“This is to commemorate our friendship….ichi, ni, san, say chii~zu!” And I snapped a picture of us both, using my beloved camera I always carry around my neck.

The picture turned out cute despite it was taken without any warning. She was still very pretty regardless of her obvious discomfort with what my free arm around her shoulder, side hugging her. She was just too cute I can’t help but tease her.

“Ahahaha~ you aren’t photogenic, Tomochin.” I laughed lightly as I looked at our picture. Already, I was planning to print this one and put it in a frame.

“How rude.” She grumbled, her brows furrowed at me.

I think I’m becoming a masochist. I’m dying here right now, Tomochin’s so adorable I might lost control of my self-restrain. Distracting myself from any ill thoughts towards the desirable girl just beside me, I continued to humour her.

“Why? That’s a good thing, y’know? It means you’re more impressive in person.” I guess I can’t help myself from flirting with her a little. I smiled when I saw her cheeks colored slightly as she averted her gaze away, mumbling a simple ‘I see’.

Though she surprised me when she suddenly yanked my hand that was holding the camera. I felt myself blushed as her hand touched mine, and her sudden closed proximity made my heart jumped with happiness. Her face…was just inches from mine that I can feel the warm air when she breathes. Her scent intoxicating me as it enveloped my whole being. And all I can do right now, is just to stare at her beautiful face as she silently looks at our picture.

“You’re right. You’re not photogenic yourself either, Tomo.” She said after awhile, still looking at the picture and is still touching my hand as well. Tomochin called me just Tomo. And she complimented me like it was nothing. Don’t tell me she’s an unwitting flirt?

Despite with her simple words it rendered me speechless and stunned, my heart beating wildly as I rewind those words she said to me in my head. I think I’m going to pass out if she’ll say any heartwarming words to me again.

“? Hey, do you always carry this around with you?” Her melodic voice asking me snapped me out of my stupor. I immediately smiled at her, praying there wasn’t any drool on my face.

“My camera?” I asked back, wanting to hit my head for asking a dumb question when she looked at me with her brows furrowed again. I laughed awkwardly as I put the camera back around my neck.

“Well yeah. I like pictures. I always take photos that made me happy that day, or cute things I ran across.” When I said that, I looked directly to her eyes. Silently conveying that taking her photo just now with me means she made me happy. Even if the only thing she does is frown or scowl at me, it’d still make me happy.

“Like a diary?” She asked again, meeting my eyes. I was impressed she didn’t look away, considering with our close proximity I could just lean forward and catch those inviting lips of hers. Er, bad thoughts.

“Yes, like a diary….Oh hey, Tomochin, don’t you eat lunch? Lunch time just started, right?” Now that I think about it, she’s also here yesterday during lunch time, taking a nap under the Sakura Tree. Is this her special hang-out place? If it is, then it’ll be our special place from now on. The thought made me smile, and thinking I’m going to spend more time with her from now on brought an overwhelming happiness within me.

“…I live alone, and I don’t have any money, so I just nap here during lunch.” That brought down the happiness I felt after hearing what she said.

“What?! But you gotta eat, Tomochin. Let’s go eat lunch. My treat.”

When she said those things, it wasn’t in a self-pity voice but rather in a bored tone. She also wasn’t ashamed of admitting it to me. Knowing these things now, I just can’t sit here and do nothing if I can help her. And so, I grabbed her hand and pulled her towards the school cafeteria, liking the feeling of her hand against mine.

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I enjoyed writing Chiyuu's POV  XD I hope you do as well  :nervous
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« Reply #10 on: August 14, 2011, 11:46:04 AM »
This is great!!! I have read the manga but u turned it into a fanfic that's awes
E!!! Pls update more :D I will check everyday to make sure I don't miss any chapters xD

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« Reply #11 on: August 14, 2011, 01:08:10 PM »
finally a tomotomo fanfic!

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« Reply #12 on: August 14, 2011, 02:21:10 PM »
YAH Tomo~mi makes me laugh!!! I really like this !!!
Her point of view is so cute and interesting!!!

I'm actaully Atsumina FAn but I'm liking TomoTomo more  now because of your fic!!!!

update asap XD

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« Reply #13 on: August 15, 2011, 12:11:14 PM »
I'm liking itttt :)

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« Reply #14 on: August 15, 2011, 01:27:02 PM »
Yay! A hardcore TomoTomo's fan is here and I love your fanfic  :cathappy:

I'm gonna follow this fic till the very end  :thumbup

Tsundere Tomochin  :heart:

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« Reply #15 on: August 19, 2011, 03:18:29 AM »
@jehovachiabi - I'm glad you like the fanfic version of Maple Love  XD and thank you for the full support. I'll do my best for the 3rd part which is still half-away finish. ahahaha :lol:

@A1 -  deshou? A TomoTomo fic should flourish in fanfiction thread. Aren't you guys tired reading the usual TakAcchan? hahaha kidding

@blughise - Well, what can i say, i used my inner girl self while writing Chiyuu's POV  :lol: and I'm happy your opening your eyes and mind that besides the famous AtsuMina pairing, TomoTomo exist which more likely resembles the KojiYuu relationship  XD Don't worry, I'm working on the 3rd part so you don't have to wait that long...hopefully.  :P

@Arakawa -  I hope you'll learn how to love this very cute pairing too  XD thanks for reading TomoTomo  :cathappy:

@Alex.S1 - I'm a hardcore TomoTomo fan, hell yes!  XD XD XD and i love you for loving my fics ahahaha kidding  :P i also love Tsun-Tsun Tomochin  :heart:


And as always, my sincere gratitude to  all who read my version of this awesome manga that made my  :heart: go doki-doki while reading it  XD Thanks a bunch to those who pressed the  thank you button (khryz0421, Tejinashi, anoni2, blughise, RenaChii, Alex.S1, immo) :cathappy: to the silent readers and esp. to those amazing people that left a comment. Domo!  :love:




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« Reply #16 on: August 19, 2011, 03:35:07 AM »
DISCLAIMER STILL STANDS!  XD
And as promised, here is the third installation, so help yourselves!  :nervous Though I can't say there's more to it so gomen in advance if I fail you  :panic:

Yuri Case No 1: Love Under the Sakura Tree Part 3

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Itano’s POV

The other day was a weird day and yesterday was weirder. Weird….but in a good way I think. Well, being kissed and confessed to by a cute girl named Kasai Tomo~mi was very unexpected. But what I didn’t expect was for me to actually like her company. She wasn’t only a pretty face and a jolly girl. The time we spent together made me realized she’s also a bright person, especially when in it comes to photography. Her love for pictures amazes me. She always takes photo randomly, saying she finds it cute and that it made her happy. And before I realized something, she already has lots of stolen shots of me, making me blushed as her reason of taking photos rang through my head. Tomo finds me cute and that I made her happy. Somehow, this little realization made me feel warm inside.

Right now I’m inside the library, sitting in a table with my best friend and our other friend Minegishi Minami as I flip the pages of my book. My thoughts filled not about my research project I was working on but by the enigmatic Tomo~mi. The girl left a big impression on me. Her smiling image flashing in my mind making me groaned in frustrations as I can’t concentrate or even start with my schoolwork.

“Oh! Tomochin! Heya!” I looked up and was greeted by the familiar smile of the girl that filled my thoughts lately.

“Oh…hey, Tomo.” I smiled back, finding it now easy to do so. The smile on her face even brightened when she heard my reply. But I was caught off-guard when she suddenly kissed me on my cheek.

From the corner of my eyes, I can see Miichan’s eyes widened while Atsuko frowned.

“W-what…y-you…-” I uttered incoherently as I frantically looked back and forth between my friends and Tomo.

“Your hair’s in a curly style today. Tomochin’s so stylishly cute.” Tomo’s smile never faltered as she complimented my hairstyle for today, disregarding the fact that she just kissed me in front of my friends.

The only thing I can do? I sighed a resigned sigh as I thank her. And as fast as she appeared, it’s as fast as she disappeared. Saying her goodbye after explaining she’s looking for a book, but not without promising to meet up with me later. Now that she’s gone, I turn to my friends to be only welcome by two sets of different inquiring eyes. I shifted on my sit uncomfortably seeing the frown on my best friend’s face.

“That was Kasai Tomo~mi, right? I didn’t know you two know each other.” Miichan said unsurely, her brows knitted as she looked towards the direction where Tomo disappeared.

“Y-yeah…I made friends with her the other day.” I cough lightly to clear my throat. I don’t know but I suddenly felt –

“You two seemed rather close, considering you just made friends with her not long ago.” Atsuko’s monotone voice clearly says she’s not happy. And she said it without looking at me; her eyes solely focus on her book she was browsing randomly.

“It’s nothing like that at all.” She snorted in response as if mocking my answer. Somehow it doesn’t sit well on me why she’s acting kinda bitchy for some unknown reason. I was about to ask what’s her problem when she suddenly looked up, her left brow arched towards me.

“And Tomochin, huh?” She added, a frown forming on her face as she continued to look at me. How should I reply to that? I mean, does Atsuko doesn’t like my new found friendship with Tomo~mi?

“Uhm…everyone knows she steals her friend’s boyfriend. So, I don’t think it’s good if you associate with her, Tomochin.” Miichan interrupted, breaking the unofficial staring contest I had with Atsuko as we turned to look at her instead. She’s saying that about Tomo while using the nickname she made for me? Miichan realized her mistake and she immediately corrected herself when she received a displeased looked from Atsuko.

“Well, I guess it doesn’t matter since you don’t have one right now anyway…” Miichan chuckled, grinning widely at me.

“Still, I don’t like it.” Atsuko muttered, shrugging her shoulders as she moved closer to me. I scowled at her, not liking that my own best friend doesn’t like Tomo~mi. I was about to ask her why, but stop when she brought her left hand up holding a cute pink handkerchief, wiping my cheek.

“She left a kissed mark on your cheek.” She said dryly and moved back. As a reflex my hand automatically shoots up to my cheek where Tomo had kissed me. I felt like blushing when images of us kissing flashed through my mind. I feigned a coughed and grab the book closer to me. The one I was browsing awhile ago as Miichan snickered at me, her grin still in place. I rolled my eyes at her, making her grin widely.

“But seriously, are you sure that’s not some sort of mistake? About Tomo, that is.” I asked after awhile, trying to act like I’m not interested and was just plainly asking.

“Huh? I heard she even made Yukirin cry the other day.” Miichan replied, looking at her expression revealed she doesn’t like Tomo as well.

“….But she was such a nice girl….” I said without thinking, earning disbelief looks from both of my friends.

“What makes you so sure about that? You only know her for days…” Atsuko’s words hit the nail directly. She’s right; I don’t know Tomo that long. But then, why do I feel…happy when I’m with her? Unable to come up a decent answer from my best friend’s remark, I said the first thing that pops on my mind.

“She treated me to lunch the other day, so she’s a good person.” I lightly laughed at my own answer. It sounded so lame and I felt like I was only defending Tomo ‘cause of the food she bought for me.

“Uh-huh, so she’s feeding the animal….” Miichan said lazily as she yawned, glancing at the wall clock that reads 11:45am. I chose not to respond to that since she’s quite right, so the only thing I do was shrug my shoulder and mumble a ‘whatever’.

“Well, maybe you shouldn’t get too involve with her. You don’t know what she might do to hurt you.” It was the pensive voice of my best friend that stops me from glaring at Miichan as the other girl was grinning at me again. And it was also Atsuko’s voice saying those things that bothered me to the extent I never started anything on my schoolwork.

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“That’s what she said….is it true?”

I was so bothered at what my friends told me, so here I am. In a café near at our university, having my free lunch courtesy by no other than the cute girl I just met few days ago, Kasai Tomo~mi. The girl who keeps popping into my head without warning. Who most likely bewitched me with her enchanting smile.

‘And seduced you with her endearing yet sweet kiss’


My inner self added, reminding me of the incident that would forever engrave in my heart and soul and my mind. Making my cheeks felt warm all of a sudden, and making me choke on the food I was eating.

‘Cough!’ ‘Cough!’


“Tomochin, are you alright?” Tomo was suddenly at my side, rubbing my back up and down. Her soft hand touching my back sending shivers all over my body, and her scent suddenly attacking my nose wasn’t helping me calm down from my coughing fit.

“Yeah…I-Im fine.” I said hoarsely, drinking the water she offered.

“Mou…don’t make me worry like that again, Tomochin. I thought my heart was going to explode seeing you hurt and all.”

She pouted at me, her tone scolding me a little as she cupped my right cheek. When our eyes met I was overwhelmed by her presence and close proximity that I have to look away and also to hide my blushing face. I feign a cough as her soft hand left my cheek.

“I’m not hurt….so, were the rumors true?” I reminded her with my earlier question.

“Oh that?” She giggled.

“It’s because my friend’s boyfriends just go and fall for me. Y’know cause I’m so cute.” And she giggled again, cheekily pointing at her face while donning the cutest smile I ever seen. What a brat.

“I see, must be hard being cute and all…” I replied in a bored tone. Somehow hearing the confirmation directly from her, about the rumors which weren’t rumors after all made me feel…irritated?

“…Tomochin, you were supposed to jump in with a witty retort there.” She whined childishly, grabbing my left arm while shaking it. I groaned, rolling my eyes at her as I pry her hands off of me.

“But now that you asked about it, I actually have taken a friend’s boyfriend just so he’d break up with her. That didn’t go well…” I detect no regrets on her voice as she said that, which a frown made its way to appear on my face.

“Obviously! The last time I checked, stealing someone’s boyfriend is a back stabbing bitches’ job.” That came out from my mouth without warning as I glared at her. Her eyes widened in surprised.  I bit my lower lip when I saw the sad expression on her face.

“I know…I’m sorry.” Tomo said softly, her eyes downcast as she looks back at me.

“That just happened once, and I swear to myself not to do it again. Do you…do you hate me now, Tomochin?” Her eyes, her eyes were pleading as worry etched to her cute face. Her voice trembling as she asked that. Hate her? My eyes softened at the pain visible in Tomo’s face.

“No, I don’t hate you Tomo.” I replied softly as I can.

“Really?”

“Yes.”

“Thanks God. I don’t know what to do if you really hate me.” She sighed, slumping her back uncharacteristically on the soft chair were sharing. She closed her eyes as a ghost of a smile appeared on her face.

“Just promised me you won’t do it again.” That is to stop the rumors going around the campus. I know what she did was unforgivable, but people change and you have to give them a chance to renew themselves of-

Suddenly she was up, eyes glinting partnered with a mischievous smile as she leaned closer to me. I stopped myself from moving away, refusing to back down and show that what she’s doing wasn’t affecting me.

“Don’t worry, that won’t happen ever again. Besides, the only one for me now is Tomochin.”

Her voice dropped a couple of decibels, making it sound so sexy to my ears. Her eyes locking with mine I was unable to look away this time. Feeling a déjà vu, like what happened the first time we meet under the Sakura Tree where we shared our first kiss. The thought of it made my heart jump. Is she going to kiss me again?

As her face keeps moving closer, I unconsciously close my eyes. Waiting for those inviting lips to connect to mine….but it never came. Instead, I felt a slight pressure on the tip of my nose, then to my right cheek and finally to my left before she pulled back. Mischievous smile still intact on her face as she looks lovingly at me.

“…I thought we agreed to be just friends?” I asked while scrunching up my nose she just kissed instead of my lips. Whoa…wa-wait, why do I feel frustrated that she didn’t kiss me on the lips? This is bad.

“We are friends…” She giggled cutely, playfully pinching my left cheek. And as you expected, I automatically frowned.

“…It just that…I happen to be in love with you too, Tomochin.” Tomo let out a light girlishly laugh though if you look carefully, she still held that look towards me. The loving and longing look I saw the first time we meet under the Sakura Tree.

“I see…” Was the only reply I could come up while trying to tame the beating of my heart. 

Kasai Tomo~mi, we sure do have an interesting friendship. I said to myself as a smile crept to the corner of my lips. Friendship…huh?

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Argh! when i finished writing this i immediately post it up so gomen for the errors  :nervous and to those who were disappointed ahahaha  :lol:
« Last Edit: September 26, 2011, 11:38:15 AM by ayase909 »




Offline anoni2

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.3
« Reply #17 on: August 19, 2011, 03:38:50 AM »
admit it already tomochin u also have the same hots for her!!!  :lol:

thx for updating  :cathappy:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.3
« Reply #18 on: August 19, 2011, 10:16:47 AM »
Thanks for the update!! u are doing an awesome job :D
This story is getting more and more romantic <3
looking forward to the next update~ :twothumbs

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Re: ~Yuri-shotS~: Yuri Case No.3
« Reply #19 on: August 19, 2011, 03:06:14 PM »
I'm liking and liking them even more now!!!!

Is Atsuko jealous over Chiyuuu?
Are you making a love triangle between the three....that'll be interesting too see,
Though I don't want Acchan to be sad and so give her Takamina here :P SINCE I LOVE MY ATSUMINA :P

update soon

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