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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 21 UPDATED 12/19
« Reply #140 on: December 20, 2011, 06:38:46 AM »
I'm staying tuned all the time just to wait for your next update..... :p
Please update soon

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 21 UPDATED 12/19
« Reply #141 on: December 20, 2011, 08:03:57 AM »
So cute, they talk about marriage~
What will happen at home? Hehe

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 21 UPDATED 12/19
« Reply #142 on: December 20, 2011, 11:38:30 AM »
OMG!! Engagement Ring!!! :w00t:
Way to go Takamina!! :thumbup

Takamina as usual is really thoughtful~~ :wub:
Can't wait to read more about this :twothumbs
I agree with Flean I also want an Atsumina marriage!!! :wub:

Somehow I'm sensing something bad coming up... :smhid
Dramatic moments?? :?

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon~ :mon cute:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 21 UPDATED 12/19
« Reply #143 on: December 20, 2011, 11:44:09 AM »
What??!! An update??!! How come I didn't know?? :w00t:
Thank you for the update :kneelbow:

Yea~ Acchan and Minami~ so lovey dovey :wub:
This chapter is so great and sweet :inlove:

Need the next chapter ;)
Please update soon :thumbsup

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 22 UPDATED 1/14
« Reply #144 on: January 15, 2012, 05:11:11 AM »
Part 22
         
   “Can you please spend a night? Pretty please with a cherry on top!” the ace begged her girlfriend while holding onto her back with her chin on her shoulders. “Well, Okay.. But only because you rarely call me pretty.” Takamina starts to batter her eyelash.  “Ew, don’t do that.. it’s not cute” Acchan laughed. “Hey!! You only want to be sweet when you want something huh? Fine then, you’re sleeping alone tonight!” “No! noooo! I was just kidding, please stay!” the ace stomps her feet and whine. “Aww you’re so cute when you act like a child” Takamina patted her girlfriends head. “I’ll stay in one condition” “what is it?” “If you promise to love me forever.” Takamina grins.  “Of course I will.” Acchan replies trying to hide her blushing face by turning away. As soon as they walk through the door, the aces parents greeted them. “Ohayo,Takamina-san.” “Hello, Mr. and Mrs. Maeda” she greeted them back. “Oh, please just call us Mom and Dad.” Her father suggested. “M-mo-mom and Dad?” her eyes widened “Yes, why not? You’re just like a daughter to us now.” They smile reluctantly, not knowing that their daughter is in a forbidden relationship. Acchan was happy to hear such comments, but Takamina on the other hand was nervous. “Well it’s getting late; we should go to bed now. Good night mom, good night dad!” Acchan snatches Takamina’s hand and dashes up the stairs trying to avoid the awkward moment. “That was scary..for a second I thought they knew about us.”  “Yeah it was, well we have a big day tomorrow so we should get some rest.” “Uhn…”

   While lying in bed, Takamina lied on Acchan’s chest using it as a pillow rest. Just when she was about to fall peacefully asleep, Acchan opens her mouth. “Ne, Minami..” “Hmm?” she answered tiredly. “I’m scared. Do you think the world will ever accept us?” After hearing that question, Takamina got up and looked into her eyes. “I don’t know. But as long as I’m with you, nothing else matters.” She holds onto her hands.  Acchan’s worry instantly went away just by hearing those few words. “I love you Minami.” “Uhn..” The captain answers. “Aren’t you going to say it back?” Acchan pouted. “Even If I say I love you a thousand times, it would never be enough.” Takamina gently remove Acchan’s bangs out of the way and kisses her girlfriend on the forehead. “I’m glad I have you in my life.” Acchan smiled.”Ehh one more question before you sleep though.” “Hmm?” “Who is going to be our bridesmaid?” “How about I pick two and you pick two.” Takamina suggested. “Okay then I choose Miichan and Mariko.” “Eh, why Miichan?” “Why not?” “I just think it would be weird because she used to like you…who know maybe she still does.” “Are you jealous?” Acchan teases. “Of course not! Look who’s in bed with you right now.” Takamina smirks. “So who do you pick?” “Uh.. Haruna and Yuko. By the way I will be the one wearing the dress; I always wanted to know what it feels like.” Takamina snickered. “What!! Not fair..I want to wear the dress!!” “I think a tuxedo suits you more since you’re taller Atsuko.” “But I’m not the guyish one here!”Acchan laughed.  “Ha ha funny!” Takamina frowns. “Fine..how about we both wear a dress.” “Okay, but you do know marriage means graduation right?” “I know..there’s nothing in this world I want more than marrying the person I love.” Acchan pokes Takamina’s in the nose.  Takamina blushes. “Now I can sleep well tonight.” :)


   Next morning the alarm went off. Takamina wakes up; she stretches her arms out accidentally punching her girlfriend in the face. “Ah gomen gomen, I didn’t mean to hit you in the face.” She rubs Acchan’s face making sure it feels better. “Eh..this person. I hit her face and she still didn’t even wake up.” Takamina thought. “What a heavy sleeper, she sleeps just like a dead person hahahaha.” Takamina stares at her sleeping beauty, she couldn’t help but smile. She wondered what the ace is dreaming about since there was a smile across her sleeping face.”  Takamina smiled and moved closer to hear her breathe. “I don’t want this moment to ever end.” she thought. “HOLY our concert practice is today, I got to wake her up now but how…” Suddenly a light bulb appears on top of her head.  Takamina begins kissing her girlfriend everywhere in the face. *peck,peck,peck,peck,peck*  “I’m up, I’m up” she shouted and giggled. “Is this how you’re going to wake me up every time Minami?” “Mhmm!” “Oh god I should escape now before I get stuck with you.” The ace joked. “Be quiet!” she tickles her girlfriend ( playing and rolling all over the bed). “Stop!” Acchan yells in ticklish pain. “Acchan!  Takamina-san! Breakfast is ready” her father shouted. Thinking they didn’t hear him, he walked up the stairs and heard giggling. The door was a little crept open, as he looks inside, he seen something he should not have seen.“Stop! Hahha please stop” “I’ll stop if you give me a kiss” Takamina demanded. Acchan blushes. “Fine! There!”  She kisses Takamina really fast. “That’s it? I want a longer one.” She smirks. “Okay.” Takamina let loose and Acchan took the chance to push her off and runs into the bathroom. Catch me if you can!” She sticks out her tongue.

TBC…


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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 22 UPDATED 1/14
« Reply #145 on: January 15, 2012, 05:42:39 AM »
You update. Thank you.
Lovely moment for Atsumina

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 22 UPDATED 1/14
« Reply #146 on: January 15, 2012, 05:50:50 AM »
OMG!!!  OMG!!  OMG!!!!!!!!!! What's gonna happen???  :mon scare: Acchan's papa shouldn't have seen that!!!!  :tantrum:  or should he??  :dunno: 

I need another update!!! argh!!!!!!  :mon XD:  I hope nothing bad happen!!!!  :mon prayer:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 22 UPDATED 1/14
« Reply #147 on: January 15, 2012, 07:54:54 AM »
omg papa see them :O....

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 22 UPDATED 1/14
« Reply #148 on: January 15, 2012, 09:32:05 AM »
Yea!! Thank you so much for the Update XD I've been waiting for this :D
Takamina and Acchan :wub:
But.. OMG!! Papa saw them!!! :shocked
Oh No!! I hope Acchan papa would accept them.. I'm worried :panic:

Please Update Soon :kneelbow:
I want to know what happen next :mon cute:
Thanks again :thumbup :thumbup

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 22 UPDATED 1/14
« Reply #149 on: January 15, 2012, 07:51:28 PM »
Oh oh it's bad for them

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 23 UPDATED 1/16
« Reply #150 on: January 17, 2012, 03:39:38 AM »
Part 23

   After getting ready, the two girls went downstairs all jolly, for breakfast. Entering the kitchen they can sense a strange aura in the kitchen room.  Her father’s facial expression wasn’t as pleasant as usual. Somewhat he was giving off a glare and her mother gave the look of sympathy. Acchan didn’t think anything of it. She thought maybe they got into an argument again, so it’s not like it’s anything new. Silence filled the air as they ate. Finally her father broke off the silence. “So... What are you guys up to today?” he asks in a serious tone. “P-p-practice.” Takamina stuttered. “Really?”  He asked as if he didn’t believe a word she said. “Uhn..” the captain gave him a short and simple reply. “Dad, we have a big concert coming up this following week, will you guys be able to make it?” Acchan implied trying to get her dad to change his attitude. “That’s great; I assure you that we’ll be there to support you girls.” Her mom answered for him. “By the way a friend of mine is coming over today; make sure you make it home for dinner Acchan.” Her father stated. “Okay, well I got to get going now. See you later.” She hugs and kisses her parents on the cheek. Just as Takamina was about to leave too, he asked her to stay behind. Acchan didn’t know anything about it; she left in her own cab because she had a different project to go do before practice. “Do you love her?” he asked straight forwardly. ”Who?” she asked confused. “You  mean Acc—“ Before she could answer any further. He cuts her off. “Don’t play stupid. I know you and Acchan are seeing each other, I seen it with my own eyes.” “Oh.” She answered dumb founded due to how shock she was, that he knew. “I’m so sorry.” She answered again. “Don’t be sorry, I’m the one who should be sorry for giving birth to a stupid nasty Lesbian.” “Please don’t say that sir.. You can say she made a disappointing lifestyle decision but Acchan’s nothing near stupid and way far from nasty.” “And you..you probably influenced her this way..you must of put some kind of spell on her!” he shouted “I didn’t! I truly love her and she loves me too!” she retorted back. “I forbid you to see her anymore!!! Either you graduate and stay away from her or I will disown her as a daughter. And you know well we’re the only family she has! You wouldn’t want us to do that to her do you!?” “Please calm down honey.” Acchan’s mother said to her husband. “I’m so sorry Takamina, he’s just not taking it well right now.” she added. “Don’t say sorry to her!” he yelled. Takamina stood there with tears swelling in her eyes..She didn’t want the love her life to lose family over her..Honestly she didn’t know what to do. She can’t live without Acchan. “I want our daughter to live a normal life! Have kids and do what an ordinary couple should do. I’m going to set her up with my friends son whether you like it or not..so please don’t interfere!” “I won’t” she answered trying to catch a breath from crying.. “I promise I’ll stay away from her and announce my graduation the day of the concert.” “Good! Now get out of my sight! ” he snapped.

   Takamina ran crying her eyes out; she wondered why and how people can be so cruel towards lesbianism. Instead of practice, she ends up going home. *Ring ring* “Moshi moshi Takamina” “Aki-P, I’m sick today..I can’t come in.” she pretended to be. “Oh okay I will let everyone know.”  During practice, everyone was shocked that the captain is missing a day of practice (excluding all her incidents) especially with a big concert coming up. Acchan just came into practice, right away she started searching for her girlfriend. “ Hey Miichan, where’s Takamina?” “I hear that she’s sick and not coming in.” “That’s weird, she was fine this morning.” Acchan says worrily. “Ohh did you guys have a sleep over without me?” she chuckled. The ace shyly turns away.. “Miichan! But we’re a couple now.” “I know, I was just joking.” She smiles sheepishly. “Don’t you think it’s weird though?” Miichan questioned. “What’s weird?” “That Takamina misses a big practice over being sick?” “Yeah it is strange..usually when she’s sick she still comes to practice anyway.” “Yep that’s what makes her our mighty captain.” “Well I’ll be right back; I’m going to make a phone call to her.” “Okay, tell her to get well soon from me.” “Hai I will.” The ace pulls out her cell phone and made the phone call but the call kept going to voicemail. “I guess I’ll stop by after practice to make sure she’s okay..but oh yeah that’s right, dinner.. I’ll call again later instead.” Takamina blankly stares at the missed calls on her cell phone… She couldn’t help but cry seeing that Acchan’s picture keeps popping up on the screen. Finally she decides to call her back, Acchan was busy practicing so she didn’t pick up. Takamina then decided to leave a message. “Acchan..this is really hard for me..but I don’t think we should see each other anymore.” She said coldly, without any explanations.

   After practice, the ace didn’t have time to check her phone…she went straight home, not wanting to be late for dinner. The whole time she thought about her lover, when she reached for her phone to call her girlfriend at the doorstep…she remembered that she left it in the locker room. “Darn! They probably locked the doors by now. I really want to talk to her… But I can’t leave right now either; guests are over for dinner tonight. Hopefully I’ll see her tomorrow at practice.” She thought. “Acchan! You’re here! Come put you stuff down and come have a seat.” Her father said happily. Acchan thought it was weird how earlier this morning he seemed angry but now he’s all joyful. “I want you to meet someone…this is Mr. Sano and his son Izumi.” “Hello.” She bowed to the both of them. “Do you remember who he is Acchan?” “I don’t recall.” “Remember the arranged marriage? Well this is who you we’re supposed to get married to.” “I see..” she gives an uninterested short reply to it. “After you graduate from Akb, whenever that is..I still want you two to get married. So for now I want you to get to know one another.” ”WHAT!?” Acchan screams. “We made a deal dad!” “I know but this is what’s best for you.” “NO! I will not agree to this” She shouted again in front of everyone and ran up the stairs locking herself in her own room while sobbing. At this moment Acchan couldn’t think about anything else besides Minami. How badly she wanted to talk to her and how badly she needs to feel her touch. “Acchan!” her father called out. “Just leave her be.” Mr. Sano said. “I’m very sorry about this.” her mother apologized on behalf of her daughters’ behavior. “It’s fine, let’s not rush her into something she doesn’t want to do.” Mr.Sano suggested.  “But..” “No buts..It’s final, call the arrangement off again. We will be going now. “No hard feelings then?” “None taken.” They both let themselves out. “How dare she embarrasses me in front of these people!?” Mr. Maeda yelled furiously throughout the house. “I had this plan all set for her and she goes and ruin it!” ”Honey, it’s fine..calm down. ”

TBC…

Don't kill me  :nervous it wouldn't be fun if there's no drama  :grin:
« Last Edit: January 17, 2012, 03:47:11 AM by Loveforever »

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 23 UPDATED 1/16
« Reply #151 on: January 17, 2012, 04:25:33 AM »
aww i dont know if hate or love you because its a interesting fic... we know that most of the people dont know about love.. that doesn`t matter the gender.. but stupid people thinks that it is...

I like that this fic is realistic in that case... but i know that atsumina gonna to fight for their love..

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 23 UPDATED 1/16
« Reply #152 on: January 17, 2012, 04:55:03 AM »
Thanks for the update :)
But this chapter is so.. sad.. :cry:
Acchan papa is so cruel.. :banghead:
He should let Acchan decide who she want to be with herself!! :angry:
I feel bad for Takamina... is she really going to graduate?? Pls say NO!! :(

Thanks again for the update XD
Please update soon :mon cute:
I really want to know what happen next, I cant stop thinking about it.. :kneelbow:
Thank you :)

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 23 UPDATED 1/16
« Reply #153 on: January 17, 2012, 05:04:25 AM »
owh!!! update!!! I'll read later after class...

edit :

Argh!!!!!! what have you done to my AtsuMina!!!!!!   :frustrated:  Oh God!!! Taka!!! no graduation!!!!  :OMG:

Drama!!! I don't know if I hate it or like it!!!  :temper:  I'm depressed!!!  :gyaaah: I should make more drama then!!!  :on yellcard:
« Last Edit: January 17, 2012, 01:46:25 PM by Flean »

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 23 UPDATED 1/16
« Reply #154 on: January 17, 2012, 09:48:56 PM »
Don't worry it's not you who I want to kill right but Acchan's father! That *bip* of *bip* *bip*!!!! Argggg!!!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 23 UPDATED 1/16
« Reply #155 on: February 06, 2012, 01:23:03 AM »
I really love your stories and I hope you could update soon! I'm soo anxious to see what'll happen. D:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 23 UPDATED 1/16
« Reply #156 on: February 06, 2012, 02:32:27 AM »
Urrg! What's wrong with Acchan's father? I've thought he might a nice guy! Unbelief that he was so cruel with too much negative! Nice fic ,anw! XD

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 24 UPDATED 2/7
« Reply #157 on: February 07, 2012, 09:03:30 AM »
Thanks for reading guys!  :grin:

Part 24


Next day @ Practice


      “Has anyone seen Minami today?” Acchan went around asking. “She called in sick again I think.” Miichan answered. Soon as the ace heard that, she was worried sick about her girlfriend. “This is not like her at all..” she thought.  Acchan ran to the locker room to find her cell phone. On the screen, there is one missed call and a voice mail message. Acchan hurriedly checked it; she somehow knew it was from the captain herself. After she listened to it, she froze and tears formed in her eyes as she heard those painful words “let’s break up.” Too speechless by it she dropped the phone out of her hands and onto the ground. “Tell me this isn’t true. Minami please tell me you’re joking.” she started mumbling to herself with aching in her voice. Her face was expressionless, just like she lost someone dearly. ”No I won’t believe it until you say it to my face.” She packed up her belonging and rushed out of practice.

   Finally reaching her destination, Acchan knocked on the door repeatedly but no one answers. “Let me in! I know you’re in there Minami...Please let me in!” She shouted from outside. (Takamina parents are out of town, and only Takamina was home.)  From the bedroom window, Takamina begins to feel guilty and hurt watching as the person she loves begged and cried. “It’s for the best.” Takamina muttered to herself. Two hours has passed Acchan is still there crying, desperate to see her. “Please don’t do this to me.” she pled. “Tell me why you want us to break up! Please...I want to know the reason why!” She kept on being persistence, knocking and knocking until she ran out of energy. The ace was at the point where she was about to faint. Suddenly it started raining and pouring out really badly. In the rain, Acchan got down on both knees and kneeled down. “I won’t leave until you come out!”  She cries out. Takamina couldn’t stand to see the view so she turns away. Unexpectedly the ace loses her consciousness and fall to the ground. Takamina turns to look at her again, and seen that she was lying the ground with her eyes shut. Very panicked, she quickly run down the stairs and carried the ace back inside, fast as she could. “Acchan, I’m sorry.” She cried softly.  Takamina undresses her, dried her up and put her into bed. Although she had seen this image before, Takamina face begins to turn bright pink. She stares at her lovingly and brushed her cheeks. “I’m sorry for doing this to you Acchan. But I only want what’s best for you. Your parents are probably worried sick about you. If they knew you were here, they’d probably freak out.” She spoke to the sleeping ace. The captain hastily went out of the room and quietly called Miichan. “Can you please tell Acchan’s parent that she’s staying over your house tonight?” “Why, what happened?  “… Erm, It’s nothing.” “Don’t lie to me Takamina…If I’m going to lie for you, you have to tell me the reason why first.” “Alright, fine…but don’t tell anybody this, especially not Acchan. Okay?” “Okay, I promise.”  Takamina had told everything to Miichan that night. Miichan felt helpless about the situation. From night until morning Takamina stayed by the aces side at all times and fell asleep beside her.

   Next morning, Takamina had woken up earlier than usual and went to practice first. When the ace woke up, she was confused. She didn’t know how she ended up in Takamina’s room and all alone. “What happened last night and where is Minami?” she looked around searching for the captain. Realizing the captain isn’t there; she gotten dress and was on her way to practice. As soon as she got there, she spotted Takamina right away. The captain was standing right beside Tomochin.  In the corner of Takamina’s eye, she had seen that the ace was heading her way, so she grabbed onto Tomochin and planted a kiss on the clueless girl. The ace stopped before walking any further. Her chest begins to tighten from the heart breaking sight. At that moment she felt as if her heart just had been shattered into a million pieces. “So this is why…” she said softly to herself, trying to hold back her tears. However she couldn’t hold it in. Her tears streamed down her cheeks as she walked away. “Acchan, what’s wrong?” Miichan looked at her. The ace didn’t reply back and just hugged Miichan crying quietly.  Meanwhile… Tomochin pushes Takamina off. “What was that for!? Aren’t you with Acchan?” “I’m sorry, it was an accident. I gotta go!” Takamina rushed out of the building feeling hurt. “I’m sorry Acchan, I have to make you hate me somehow…”

TBC…

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« Reply #158 on: February 07, 2012, 09:17:34 AM »
Argh!!!!!!!!!!!  :temper: Takamina!! what are you doing!!!!  :frustrated:

and the heck!!! why did you kiss Tomo!!!!  :on voodoo:  OMG!!! I'm depressed!!  :fainted:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 24 UPDATED 2/7
« Reply #159 on: February 07, 2012, 09:46:11 AM »
i'm sorry flean!  :cry:

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