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Take as much time as you need to absorb all the information. Take a hiatus if you want, but OTP does not stop there. The members are still part of AKB as they are of us. As long as AKB doesn't fall into the shadows with this change, I'm perfectly fine with this. I guess I'm the type to easily adapt to things when the time is right. And I, for a fact, am used to reading fictions that are put on hiatus and never continued again. Ever.

Eventually, I think you will come back to the 48 fandom though. I don't think this should stop you. If AKB is continuing to step forward as a renewed group, I think you should too, but as an AKB fan/wota(?). :bingo:
« Last Edit: August 25, 2012, 04:37:42 AM by Crossing Crossroads »
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hmm...i know u are shock... it's hard to accept it anyway. I also lost at the moment i saw Mayu's name in Team A... and then Yuki is not the captain anymore.

I didnt know what to do, or what will happen to Mayuki... my precious couple...There were a lot of things happen in the concert this time... No one think that they will reshuffle the group again.

I was depressed for the whole day, no energy to do any effing thing, just thinking about them broke me. But thinking about it, there's still a chance for them, Mayuki i mean ( other couple is hopeless). Mayu and Yuki are the 2nd and 3th senbatsu members, so they will probably together to perform their single, photoshoot or at least some TV shows together. We still have hope in them, right?

I know being in the same team will be much better, but at least im glad that Aki-P didnt transfer Mayu or Yuki to those freaking JKT or SHN.. or whatever idk.

As their shipper, i believe in them...i believe that all those sweet moments between them are not all for fan-service. I believe that all those 5-6 years relationship they have spent together wont vanish when they are not in the same team anymore.

If they still manage to show us their sweet moment later on the show, or blog or something like that, isn't that also mean that they are real? Being separated is nothing but to make each other realize how important the other is, right ?

Looking at those heartbroken picture tear our heart apart, but we can see the pain in it. Mayu cried when she heard her name being called. Yuki could do nothing but looking and crying hopelessly. Isnt that show us how hurt, how disappointed, and how broken they were? Isn't that enough for us to know that they are real, that we can believe in them?

So please, just stay calm ( i know it's hard T-T) and believe in them, believe in what we have been believed for all those times. Also support the new team, it will be hard for them, too. It's not only us who are in the pain, they are also hurt. Being moved away from their close friends whom they have been together is not easy at all.

Takamina had said that this is a new beginning for them, so we should listen to our beloved captain and follow her. I believe she will lead us to a new future.

Enough with me rambling. Over all, this is just my poor opinion... i love ur fic tho :) U can take a break and try to adapt to the new things for now... Thank u for writing the fic and for ur time reading my silly post ( if u ever read it)

Have a nice day........ i hope :)
« Last Edit: August 25, 2012, 05:41:15 AM by lovefate »

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Take as much time as you need. I was seriously shocked too. Everyone is. But if you need proof, look at the 3rd picture you posted. They've come to an understanding backstage. Although their smiles are sad, I think it shows that they're always gonna keep in touch. They know that even though they're in separate teams now, they're still close friends and they won't let that stop them. So cheer up! The fans will weather this together and see just how strong their friendship is.

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To all of you who gave me support. To every reason you told me. That was equal to ONE SLAP. ONE VIRTUAL SLAP. And guess what ? That virtual slap brought me back to my senses. Much more hope and inspiration before the Shuffle happened. I'm actually grateful the Shuffle happened. It brought me to what I am now. And Aki-P ? Yes, I still want to kill him BUT I realized he really did know what he was doing. Appointing some other members to overseas 48 groups was a great chance for them to go beyond famous. I mean, think about it. We need 48 groups aside from AKB|SKE|NMB to be famous ! As for the MaYuki and other OTPs, Im actually not really worried anymore. I recalled why I fell in love with MaYuki. It was because of their loyalty for eachother. Therefore, being in different teams wouldn't stop them. Just like KojiYuu. They were never in the same team in the first place. So, people out there who are going crazy and can't accept the fact, don't go out and tell the world, " OH GOSH, HEY, I'M THROWING A TANTRUM AT MY HOUSE ! VIDEO ME AND SEND IT TO AKI-P " Why ? Because You would look stupid and dumb just like a dork who didn't analyze the situation  :rofl:  :rofl:
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Update yay lol  :grin:




Before the Dawn


" Centre. "

" Yes, Master ? "

" Where is L ? "

" Outside. Shall I call him for you ? "

" Very well. " Centre nodded and called for L

L bowed " You called for me ? "

" L, I am not satisfied with Centre taking the lead. I want you to lead from now on. "

" Okay. "

" Wait, what ?! What do you mean ?! " Centre called out

The master looked at Centre " You are too soft. L will be taking your place from now on. "

" .. Fine. " L smirked at Centre " You got lucky this time, you. "

" This time.. My plan shall be a success. "

" What shall I do, Master ? "

" I want you to seduce her. She'll be very good for bait. "

" Hmm Okay. I'm on it. "

" Now, go. " L nodded and in a swift of wind, he was gone


∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞


" Hey, where exactly are we going, huh ? " Yuko kept on following Nezumi

" To search for more clues, duh. " Nezumi replied with bland tone

" Why didn't you bring Yuki, then ? " Nezumi suddenly stopped and fell silent " ..... "

" Oi. " Yuko waved her hand in front of Nezumi's face " Oi ! Did you guys fight or something ? "

" What ?! No. " Nezumi blushed

Yuko smirked " Awwe come on ! You guys obviously fought ! "

" We didn't fight, okay ?! It was just... " Nezumi fell silent again

" It was just what ? "

" Wait, we didn't fight ! I.. I just got tired of her, okay ? I don't need people who go against me. "

" Dude, " Yuko patted Nezumii's back " Yeah, you don't need people like that, but I assure you that you need Yuki. "

" I don't need her ! " Nezumi shook off Yuko's hand " I lived without her once. I'm sure I can do it twice. "

" Then, tell me what you're gonna do to let her go, hmm ? "

" Why do you care ? " Nezumi glared at Yuko

" I care because I can. Let's just get to the point. You like Yuki, don't you ? "

" N-No ! I d-don't l-like her ! "

" Come on, LIKING isn't a part of the Stains. " Yuko sweat dropped

" Oh, yeah. I knew that. " Nezumi sighed " But hey, LIKE might turn into LOVE. "

" Hmm so you do like her " Yuko smirked again

" I said, I don't, you Squirrel ! " Nezumi smacked Yuko

" Ittai ! " Yuko rubbed her head " Geez, chill, okay. I'm just trying to get you to realize your feelings. "

" I don't like her ! " Nezumi blushed

" Ahh blooming young love~ " Yuko leaned to a wall " If you don't like her, then why are you stuttering ? "

" Because I want to ! "

" Now, you're just making excuses, you mouse. " Yuko shook Nezumi's shoulders making her hoodie fall

" Face it, Mayu ! You LIKE her ! You L-I-K-E, LIKE her ! "

" Okay, Okay ! Stop shaking me ! " Yuko kept in shaking her until she felt a BUZZ " Ahh, ittai ! Stupid mark ! "

" Ha ! Don't forget that I'm still your master ! " Mayu stuck a tongue at Yuko

" Geezz.. "

" Okay. I have to admit. I. ABSOLUTELY. DO. NOT. LIKE. KASHIWAGI. YUKI. "

" Then, what is it that you feel for her, then ? " Yuko looked at Mayu in the eyes

" I.. I'm not sure. All I know is that I need her. "

" YES ! See ? I was correct ! High five me now ! " Yuko lifted her hand up the air but Mayu pulled it down

" You are not helping at all. "

" Sorry. " Yuko grinned showing her dimples

" Why do I need her ??? "

" I don't know, okay. You have to figure out the answer all by yourself. "

" You're right... "

" Anyway, does Yuki know you're out at this hour ? "

" Ummm no ? Why does she care though. " Mayu snobbed

" You effing mouse, she'll get worried ! "

" That's her punishment for getting goodie-goodie with that Miyazabutt. "

" Ohoho ! " Yuko smirked " So, you're jealous of Sae boy, eh ? "

" I wanna rip his teeth off of his face ! " Mayu clenched her grip

" Hold on. What did he exactly do ? " Yuko scratched her head

" Well, it was like this.. "


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" Good evening, Dr. Watanabe. "

" Good evening. "

Dr. Watanabe was finally done with his last operation. Since the surgery was a success, he wanted to reward himself by going to eat out. But he wanted to bring Yuki with him. Luckily, as he was strolling around the halls, he saw Yuki. As he was about to approach her " Yu-- " He saw a very annoying man beside Yuki " --ki. " He was left with a bitter tone at the last syllable

" Yuki-chan ! Yuki-chan ! "

" Eh ? " Yuki turned to her side " Oh, Dr. Miyazawa. Good evening. " Yuki smiled

" May I ask you a question ? "

" Um sure. "

" Why is your smile so beautiful ? Just so perfect ? "

Yuki blushed " I.. I'm not sure how to reply to that. Gomen. "

" I'm not satisfied. "

" I really don't know what the answer is. " Yuki smiled sheepishly

" In that case, I'll forgive you on one condition "

" What is it ? " Yuki tilted her head

" Go out with me for dinner ? "

Yuki blushed " Ummm.. Flirting is really not my type, Dr. Miyazawa. And I must decline your proposal. "

" I see.. Flirting ? I'm just being kind. "

" One does not simply make up an excuse to ask out a girl. " Yuki's black aura was starting to emerge

" Very clever. "

" I know. " Yuki glared at him. He was starting to get annoying

" Don't you like me, Yuki-chan ? "

" No. I like you in a acquaintance way. "

" I see.. So, Am I not your friend ? "

" Not a chance. "

" But.. I can be a lover, right ? "

" Yeah. You can be a lover to someone else. "

" Geez, Why are you so cold ? "


" Do you expect me to answer that and you know the answer already ? " Yuki sweat dropped

Dr. Miyazawa laughed " You're so hard to get.. but that won't stop me from going after you. "

Yuki blushed. " Since you won't accept anything I want.. " Dr. Miyazawa leaned in and kissed Yuki's cheeks making Yuki blush harder

Mayu, on the other hand, seeing this was hurtful for him. Life risky for his heart. He watched Dr. Miyazawa go away and leaving Yuki flustered. His anger rose up from beyond his expectations. He walked to Yuki with an angry face

" So, you like kisses from other people, huh ? "

" What're you talking about, Yuu--- Mayuyu ? "

" Don't tell me that. I know you know. "

" Hmm.. Oh ! That ! You saw that ??? "

" Of course, I did ! What did you expect ?! "

" I'm sorry. Are you mad ? "

" I'm not mad, Yuki. I'm frustrated. " Mayu looked down

" I'm still sorry. I guess I'm the reason why you're frustrated. I'm sorry, Mayuyu. " Yuki pulled Mayu in for a hug which he did not hug back

" Yes, you are. "

" I'm sorry. "

" Stop apologizing. "

" Are you jealous ?? "

" .... I don't know. I'm frustrated.. I'm frustrated to the fact if you are even happy or satisfied being with me. " Mayu pulled back and left Yuki with desperate, teary eyes.

" Oh my gosh. Mayu, you need anger management training ! "

" I wasn't angry nor mad, okay ! I was just frustrated. If she was happy or not.. "

" Of course she is ! Yuki is like a loyal puppy, Mayu ! " Yuko pushed her fist up the air

" Maybe, she is.. but what about me, Yuko ? " Mayu looked at Yuko with desperate eyes

" Eh ? "

" Help me. I'm not sure with what I feel. I might hurt her if I don't know what's real. "

Yuko smiled " So, you finally have a heart. "

" Shut up. " Mayu massaged her temple

" Well, first thought is that you felt jealous so it's obviously love, Mayuyu. "

" ... How can that be ? "

" Beats me. However, isn't love in the 7 Stains ? "

" Yeah. "

" Then, you cannot love her is what your father might say but what I say is, " GO FOR IT, MAYUYU " ! "

" You know, I wonder why.. Why is it that our seals do not react to the Stain called Love .. "

" Hmm I've been wondering that too. Well, maybe it's because Love is a wonderful thing. "

Mayu's expression turned blank " Everything wonderful is bad for you. "

" Sou ka... "

" Well, whatever. I'll go apologize to Yuki. I feel guilty for leaving her alone. "

" Uhn. Where are we, anyway ? "

" Eh ? " Mayu looked around " I don't know. I have never been here before. "

" Yes. That's because you fell into my Dimensional world. " Suddenly, a voice called out

" Eh ?! Who was that ?! " Yuko looked around while Mayu kept calm

" Come out, you coward. Face us personally and stop relying on your silly powers. "

A beam of light came from the sky and a man appeared before them. The man didn't fully reveal his face. He wore something to cover his lower face revealing only his eyes, hair and half of his nose.

" Yo. " The man sat down like a yankee

" .... Ha ? " Mayu and Yuko were confused

" I am L... Only L. "

"Ehhmm, " Yuko coughed " Okay, Only L-- "

" I said, it's L ! Only, L ! You stupid squirrel ! "

" Hey, don't call me stupid, you coward ! "

" Alright, Enough out of you two. " Mayu pulled her hoodie up and she turned to Nezumi " Yuko, what time is it ? "

" Umm.. " Yuko looked at her wrist watch " It's 4:30 AM. "

" Oh ? It's that late.. Yuki must be worried. "

Yuki ? L wondered

" Yep. She is. "

Nezumi smirked at L " I'll make this quick. I have to go back before the dawn. "

" Oh, please. I am not here to make conflict, Nezumi.. and uh.. err Squirrel. "

" Hey ! It's YUKO ! "

" Whatever. "

" Make this quick. "

" Hmm well, I just want to inform you that, that Yuki girl of yours is going to be mine soon. "

" Oh ? Announcing your wedding to us ? How adorable. So, you're inviting us ? "

" Stupid girl. Aren't you jealous ? "

" Jealous ? Jealous of who ? "

" Of me taking your Yuki away. "

" I have no Yuki. I have my Black. If you want Yuki, go talk to Mayu. " Nezumi looked at her nails, mocking L

" Tsch. Aren't you the same person ? "

Nezumi laughed at L " You. Are. Stu-pid. ' Her expression changed " We have the same body but we are two different sides if one person. "

" That doesn't exist. "

" Oh, it does. Your pathetic powers exist. Why couldn't my awesome side couldn't ? " Nezumi put on an insulting smirk

" Tch. You're annoying. "

" You're the one who is annoying. You randomly popped up. "

" Because I was told to. "

" Oh ? You're from Infinity ? "

" What do you think ? "

" Hmph. Tell your bitch of a Master to face me personally. That's what I told the last one but she didn't obey me. "

" Yeah, right. " L snobbed

" Well, I wouldn't want to waste my strength on you. So, we'd better be going now. "

" Oh, how are you going to get out of this dimension ? "

" Stop your fun and games or I'll break your bones. " Nezumi glared at L

" Hmph. Fine, then. I guess I would be smart enough to let you go. After all, I'm finished with my business-- "

" Oh, just let us go ! " Yuko scratched her head and stomped her foot

" Geez, okay, okay. Until we meet again. "

" I hope we won't though. " Yuko made an insulting face. L snapped his fingers and poof, they were back to an intersection with the wall.

" Were back. "

" Yeah.. Hmm, what time ? "

" Err.. 4:49 "

" Crap. Okay, where are you staying today ? "

" Oh, I'm staying at Nyannyan's~ "

" Hm. Okay. I'll go on first. "

" Oka--" Nezumi immediately dashed with her full speed, not waiting for Yuko's response " Geez, Mayu. "

Nezumi ran as fast as she could. Worrying what could've happened to Yuki without her. Like committing suicide or something. As she was running, she stumbled across a small rock. She tripped. She cursed the rock.

" Craaaaap ! It's bleeding !

However, the rock didn't stop her from running home. She ran and ran even though her knee hurts. When she arrived at her home, she opened the door and kept on panting. She rushed to Yuki's room and saw her looking at the window.

Nezumi took off her hood " Y-Yuki.. "

Yuki looked back " M-Mayu ! " Yuki ran and hugged Mayu causing the both of them to fall down and land on the floor.

" Easy there, Yuki. " Mayu heard sobs. Yuki started to cry on Mayu's chest

" Mayu, where have you been ?? "

" Did I make you worry ? " Mayu moved her hand back and forth against Yuki's hair

" Yes ! I thought you were going to leave me ! "

" I'll never leave you, Yuki. " Mayu smiled

" Really ? " Yuki looked at Mayu

" Uhn. Promise. "

" Then, I'm sorry about what happened earlier. "

" It's okay. As long as I know you are mine, you ARE mine. "

" That's cute... So does that mean you are mine, too ? "

Mayu blushed " Beats me.. "

" Stupid. " Yuki attacked Mayu's neck

" Kyaaa~ "



A/N : Not to get confused of the names but When Nezumi takes of her hood she's Mayu. If she puts it on, she's Nezumi. And Yuuma in the Hospital. And yes, it has to be HE.

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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #67 on: August 30, 2012, 01:16:12 PM »
PREDICTIONS, PREDICTIONS... AND I PREDICT... :glasses:

...IT'S SAE. SAESAESAE. But if L is Sae, I wonder why Sae got the name L? :dunno: LOL. L.L.L.L.*COUGHDeathnoteCOUGH* L.L.L.L. Hm? What? Did I say something? :hee: But to be honest, the moment I read L though, Deathnote was a second thought. Persona was the first thing that came up, if you understand me. :ding:

OhMayu.Youshallsoonlearn. Youshall. :glasses:
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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #68 on: August 30, 2012, 02:10:38 PM »
L? who is L? Sae?  :dunno:
I think it's Sae 'cause he in hospital he is colled to Yuki even Yuki is Yuuma's girlfriend  :angry1:
go away L  :temper:
Mayu blushed " Beats me.. "

" Stupid. " Yuki attacked Mayu's neck

" Kyaaa~ "
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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #69 on: August 30, 2012, 07:56:21 PM »
Yay update :D... i have been waiting for ur update XD ... and this chapter is as good as always :)

Sae again, why Sae always has to be in between Mayuki, i wonder XD... cant she just leave them alone for god sake ( but then the story will be so smoothly lame lolz)

I smell drama is coming, I think that "Only L" is Sae... lolz... He is trying to get, or seduce Yuki OAO.... i hope Yuki wont fall for him...or else Mayu will be so mad XD

Awwie Mayuki is so cutee.... at the end... aww...tsk tsk, this couple is just.. everytime they meet, there will be "something" happen.. eheehehe >:D and i like it...

Thank u for update Chuuu-chan >:D ! Im waiting for ur next update! Please update soon <3

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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #70 on: August 30, 2012, 08:40:25 PM »
It's just me..or this story is getting hot?  :w00t:

Tsundere Nezumi as always :lol:, but Nlack going to melt you out, nezumi.. just like what Yuki does :twisted:

Update soon will ya, chuuu-san  :bow:

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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #71 on: August 30, 2012, 08:51:24 PM »
SO i just want to know :P... Nezumi really have 2 personality/side? So Yuki also have 2 side because she is Black?

Unless it is a bluff from Nezumi??? :dizzy:

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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #72 on: August 30, 2012, 10:36:51 PM »
Yes I was wondering too if Yuki and Mayu have 2 personality...
And LOL that L was funny annoying...but so L...hrrm I wonder who...
Yuko the squirrel  :rofl:

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" It's okay. As long as I know you are mine, you ARE mine. "

" That's cute... So does that mean you are mine, too ? "

Mayu blushed " Beats me.. "

" Stupid. " Yuki attacked Mayu's neck

" Kyaaa~ "

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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #73 on: August 30, 2012, 11:13:23 PM »
It's love Mayu! Listen to Yuko! lol

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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #74 on: September 01, 2012, 04:20:28 PM »
LOVE is Mayu & Yuki!!  :heart: :inlove:

I WANT MORE OF THIS!PLEASE? :roll:
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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #75 on: September 01, 2012, 05:41:11 PM »
AH LoL never mind me asking of their personalities 
now I'm getting it when I reread it from the beginning  :lol:

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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
« Reply #76 on: September 06, 2012, 04:19:34 PM »
Hey ya~ I'm back ya~ YAY ya~ Wtf is with the ya ya ? Ok I'll stop now ..

@Crossing Crossroads : LOLOLOL L xD L xD I definitely know what you mean xD

@Mo-chan : Hmm I won't say anything about L ~ I don't like spoiling xD Read and observe the development ho ho ho

@Lovefate : Lol coz' we always expect something from MaYuki~

@Masokun : Then, I'm sorry for a late update.. I felt lazy for the past days xD

@Pwety & Megumi : So, seems like u guys r confused xD Sarehh~ So, Mayu does have another side. Well, to Yuki, she does too~ Basically, 2 diff personalities in 1 body  :deco:

@Kahem : Listen to ur oshiri sister lolol

@Cessy10 : Oh, suuree~ I'll update faster if ever I can LOL



Heart Shaped Virus

" Pick up your ass, Takabutt ! "

" Oi, what'd you call me ?! "

" stop talking big, midget ! "

" Who the hell are you calling midget huh, Midget !? "

" Shut up ! When Acchan is here, you suddenly hide your bitch mode ! "

" Oii Oii ! What the f*** did you say ?!-- "

SMACKKK

" Would the two of you shut up ! "

" Oww ! " The two midgets rubbed their head in agony " What was that for ? " The smaller one asked

" For being so noisy ! " The hooded girl face palmed herself while sighing

" Are we there yet, Takabutt ? "

SNAPPP

" I said shut up you, squirrel !! " The smaller one looked behind, forgetting she was driving, a truck was approaching wow that rhymed.. not really

HONKKK

" KYAAAAAAAAAA !! " The three of them screamed but the smart one, stirred the wheel to the other side, avoiding in getting into an accident

Nezumi sighed a big one and " WILL YOU PLEASE STOP FIGHTING ?! I'M GOING TO KICK YOUR ASSES IF YOU WON'T SHUT THE F*** UP !!! "

Takamina and Yuko got startled " Geez, alright, alright. Such a bad ass... " Nezumi sighed again and leaned to the side window

" Oi, I can see it now~ " Takamina pointed out her finger to a big tower which looked like it came out from a fairy tale book

" Waaaaaaw ! " Yuko jumped up and down on the back seat " Looks like there's a princess in there ! "

" Well, you're definitely not her knight.. " Mayu mumbled as she blew up her fringe partly covering her eyes " Oi, Takamina, pick up your pace. "

" Aye, Captain. " Takamina hit some red button on the wheel of her car " Buckle up~ "

" Wait what-- WAAAAAAAAHH !! " The car flew up in the air with a speed as quick as lightning. The squirrel behind was making Nezumi suffer from her screams. Within a minute, they landed gently.. okay maybe not gently, but they landed safely anyway.

BOINKKK

" Kya~ My oshiri bounced ! " Yuko blushed as she smiled sheepishly

" Geez, you don't have to say that, you know. " Takamina blushed too. She scratched the back part of her neck. The two midgets looked around and noticed Nezumi was already at the gates " Waaahh ! Wait for us, Nezumi ! " The two caught up to Nezumi as they entered the gates of the tower opened

" Who goes there ??? " Suddenly, a deep voice called out

" Don't have time for games, Tomo~mi ! " Nezumi kept up her black expression as always

" Ehhhh ? You're no fun, Mayuyu~ " The voice turned into a cute one " Maji de ?! " The two midgets looked at each other with shocked faces due to the sudden change of voice

" It's Nezumi, Tomo~mi. "

" .... " A silence developed " Neeeeeeehhh. Who cares~ Come in, anyway~ " The entrance door opened with a creaking sound

" Yikes, that's creepy ! " Yuko hugged Takamina unconsciously. Takamina pushed the other midget to the floor " Hanase ! "

BANGGG

" Aiyaa ! That hurts !! "

" Oi, you two. It's either you get killed or shut up ! "

" Gomen.. " The two of them bowed down, receiving a sigh as a response

" Mayuyu~~ " A tall and beautiful person came in to the picture and hugged Nezumi " It's Nezumi! Ne-zu-mi ! " The girl broke the hug and scanned Nezumi

" Mayuyu, you've grown too much ! Last time Chiyuu saw you was when you were 15 ! Now, you're a cute woman~ "

As the two of them were talking, Yuko whispered to Takamina " Ne, here oppais are squishabble ! "

SMACKKK

" Sh-shut up, Yuko ! "

" Oi, you two, "

" Hai ! "

Nezumi pointed out the girl beside her " This is Kasai Tomomi. She's a witch. Tomo~mi, this is Yuko and Takamina.  "

" Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat ?! "

" I supposed you haven't believe that witches don't exist, right ? Call me Chiyuu~ " Tomo~mi smiled like she was an angel. Yuko's jaw dropped, making Takamina raise it up ward. " Geez, and you think your breath doesn't stink ? " Tomo~mi chuckled

" Ehmm.. Then, lets get to business, shall we ? " Nezumi spoke out

" Oh, right ! Come with me~ " They climbed up the stairs for an hour. After an hour of tired work, they finally arrived. The two midgets were panting hard

" Don't you have an elevator, for God's sakes ! " Takamina panted

" Oh, I do ! Over there ! " She pointed to the side

" Wat "

" Hehe, you never asked that's why~ " The three face palmed themselves " Anyway, follow me chiyuu~ "

Yuko nudged Nezumi " She's even a worse of a air head that Nyannyan ! " Nezumi ignored Yuko's statement " Geez. Kid needs to talk more. "

" Were here~ " Tomo~mi pushed the doors and revealed her experiment room. It had full of potions and tubes but it wasn't a laboratory at all. Big pots and a big bird could be seen too.

" Woah. Wicked ! " The two midgets eyes widened " Thank you ne~ " Tomo~mi went inside the room and gestured for them to follow. She stopped at a table full of tubes of different shapes and colors " Here it is~ "

" All of these ? " Nezumi chewed her gum while observing all of the tubes

" Of course not ! " She went to another table to do something while Nezumi spotted a bottle that had a heart shape " Oi, Tomo~mi, what's this bottle ? " Nezumi turned around and raised the bottle

" Ah ! That's it ! " Tomo~mi rushed to Nezumi and took the bottle " This is it. A step to getting perfection~ "

" Perfection ? " Takamina asked

Tomo~mi smiled " Yes. This potion is one of the things you need for perfection! "

" So, what does it do ? " Yuko scratched her hair

" Well, one sip of this, and ... you'll have to find out for yourselves~ " Tomo~mi winked " But remember, it takes an hour to take effect. So, you might feel a little drowsy before it starts. "

" Ahhh... " Nezumi snatched the bottle " Yes ! Finally ! I lay my hands on this bottle ! "

" Be careful, Mayuyu. It's like limited edition ! "

" I know. Well, can I drink it now ? " Nezumi opened the bottle and took a whiff of it

" Um sure. But don't drink too mu-- " Nezumi sipped a big amount leaving only half of the liquid " ch.. " Tomo~mi was left with a redundant tone

" Hey, this tastes good~ " Nezumi smiled cheekily

" Ne, is that a part of the effect ? " Yuko nudged Tomo~mi " Of course. But she drank a little too much so you might want to keep an eye on her. "

" She's drunk. " Takamina sighed " We know ! " Tomo~mi and Yuko said in unison

" Hey, take note that the more you drink, the more it will take less to effect ! It's gonna work soon ! "

" When will this end exactly ? "

" Well,... that's actually a love virus made into a potion. So, if she loves the person she sees first, her love won't end. EVER. " Tomo~mi smiled " WHAT ?!?! " The to midgets fell to the floor

" It's one of the keys to perfection. "

" But but but Love is a Stain !! "

" Not really. Love is one of the greatest perfection of all~ Mayuyu must gain that perfection~ " Luckily, Nezumi was running around not hearing anything

" Ehh... "

" Well, we have to take her home. Shall I use my magic to transport you back ? Looks like less than 5 minutes, she's going to fall in love~ "

" YES, PLEASE ! " Yuko begged

" But what about my car ?! "

" Don't worry, I'll transport it to your house tomorrow~ "

" Okay. Thank you, Tomo~mi ! "

" Chiyuu~ " Yuko chased after Nezumi and finally got her. " Hai ! I got her ! "

" Okay~ Ready ? Set ! " Tomo~mi snapped her fingers and poof, they arrived inside the house. Yuko and Takamina looked at eachother ...

" HOLY CRAP ! WHAT SHOULD WE DO ?!?!? "

" Hey, what's going on here ? " Suddenly, Yuki appeared before them.

" Yukirin ! " Yuki glanced down at Nezumi and saw her hiccuping and burping " Oh my, is she drunk ?! "

" Err... annooo... " Yuko smiled sheepishly. Takamina whispered " I know now ! Lets leave Nezumi with Yuki ! "

" Good idea ! Ne, Yuki ! "

" What ? "

" Umm.. take Nezumi to her room and get her to rest. Oh, and change her clothes ! "

" Uh okay. " Yuki took Nezumi to her room and laid her on her bed. " Yuuukiiii~~ " Nezumi called out " Shh.. " Yuki took Nezumi's hood, and now, she was Mayu.

" Okay. Next is, your cloth-- Woaah ! " Mayu grabbed Yuki and now she was on top of Yuki " M-Mayuyu ?! " Yuki blushed

" Yukirin, I love you~ " Mayu captured Yuki's lips into a rough void of temptation.

" Ngghh Mayu...mhhh..stop, you're drunk! " Yuki pushed Mayu but now, Mayu dove into Yuki's exposed neck and began to kiss and lick it

" Mayuyu ! Stop ! " Takamina and Yuko peeked at them " Ohoho, Yukirin's moans sure are something ! "

" Shh let's go, Yuko. " The two midgets left

" Yukirin, I love you~ " Mayu started groping Yuki everywhere

" Mayuyu ! Stop it ! You're drunk ! "

" I'm not drunk, okay ?! I love you ! " Mayu kissed Yuki again, but more softer " Can't you feel it ? I love you ! "

" Mayu, I don't know whats wrong with you right now but I know you're more responsible than this ! " Yuki pushed Mayu off of her

" Ittai ! " Mayu rubbed her head. Yuki rushed over to Mayu " Oh my gosh, Mayu, are you okay ??? "

" I'm not okay, Yuki ! I'm not ! I don't know what's suddenly gotten into me ! One moment, I'm calm, the second, I'm groping and kissing you everywhere ! I don't know what I'm feeling right now but all I care about is that I love you, Yuki ! I love you ! " Mayu pinned Yuki to the floor

" Mayu.. Something is definitely wrong. I love you too, Mayu but I would prefer you doing this if you really know what you're doing. Please.. " Tears started to fall from Yuki's eyes

" No, don't cry, Yukirin. Even though I don't know whats real or not, I really do love you. I just.. I just don't know how to express it ? "

" No. You're under some kind of spell. You do not love me, Mayu. " The tears started flowing faster. Mayu kissed Yuki's tears " I'm sorry. I can't control myself now. "

" I understand.. "

" So, that means I can do this ! " Mayu suddenly gained strength and carried Yuki to the bed " Mayu, no! Mayu.. err.. anoo... Mayu, sit ! "

" Ha ! I'm not a dog ! " Mayu started marking Yuki everywhere " Please, Mayu.. "

" Don't worry. I won't be asking for more... for now. " A dark smirk appeared on Mayu's face

" I hope you realize what's gotten into you because I don't like it. I want the real you to love me, Mayu. I don't care if you don't love me in reality, all I care about is being with you. It's better to not be loved than be loved falsely. Because I love you. Yuki gave up.

TBC



A/N :

Lol lame end ;u;

There will be part 2~

Reviews ?  :cathappy: :deco:
« Last Edit: December 03, 2012, 02:01:29 PM by ChuuuPuffss »
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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
« Reply #77 on: September 06, 2012, 04:37:06 PM »
Ahhh~ I missed this!!!!

I dont want Mayu to be under a spell! Yuki do something! you dont want it too.......

Somohow I started liking Mayuki with bad ends....Im going to write a OS ~

Thanks for the update! and please update soon?
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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
« Reply #78 on: September 06, 2012, 05:30:11 PM »
Aaaaaah Really good fanfic. So they have 2 personality... Interesting XD

Mayu says she loves Yuki but it because of potion!! Poor Yuki XD

Loves this fanfic! thank you!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



Married?!-Mayuki fanfic (maybe it will have another pair)

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Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
« Reply #79 on: September 06, 2012, 09:34:11 PM »
But there's only 2 types of honest human in this world..

Children and drunks  :on crazygran:

So I'll take it as Mayuyu honest feeling  :twisted:

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