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Saeyaka Fanfic-Fire and Ice 2 (Chapter 6)
« Reply #80 on: July 24, 2013, 03:07:47 PM »
AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice 2

Chapter 6

Sayaka was firmly holding the silver knife to Sae's neck, completely under Jun's influence.

His devious smile reached from ear to ear, his hand slowly caressing her face.


"Surprised? I knew you would be."

"Nobunaga, why are you doing this? What do you want with her?"

He looked over at him, smiling again.

"Simple. The silver rose crystal."

Sae flinched for a second, hearing an unknown answer from him.

"The what?"

"This one special crystal is the key to fufilling my greatest wish. I will gain immortality and control the world."

He slowly turned her head and met Sayaka's eyes, putting her deeper under his spell.

"It is deep within her heart, and I intend to keep it all to myself."

"No! I won't let you!"

Sayaka turned the knife to barely meet her chest.

"Sayaka, no!"

"She can't hear you. It's impossible. If you try anything funny, I'll make her turn the blade on herself."

"Sayaka, please tell me you can hear me."


"Hold on just a bit longer... I'll save you."

Jun's smile disappeared, and was replaced with a snear.

"I said no funny business!"

Demonic shadows appeared and pinned Sae to a tree. One grabbed him by the waist and one wrapped around his neck.

Jun brought himself up to Sayaka's ear.

"Finish him."

She nodded her head and walked closer to him. The knife was aimed at his chest, prepared to rip his outfit and stab him.

"Don't worry. It only hurts for a second."

"Sayaka... *Coughs* Wake up..!"



The knife suddenly flew out of Sayaka's hand, not leaving a scratch on either of them.

"No more, Nobunaga!"

Yuko and the others jumped out from the bushes and started shooting the tentacles one by one, careful not to hurt Sayaka.

Then, they ran over and surrounded Jun.

"It's time to end this, Nobunaga."

"Sayaka, I'll take care of the hunters. Sae's all yours."

"Understood, Jun."

The hunters attcked him one by one, with varied success and failure.

Sayaka turned back and picked up the knife.

"This will all end soon."

She slowly poked his neck, a drop of blood running down his neck.

"Too bad you won't be here to see it."

"Sayaka, stop. This isn't you."

She gave him a sadistic smile, bringing the knife back down to his chest. She stared deeply at his chest, targeting the exact spot.

"Sayaka, wake up! Please! SAYAKA!!!"

Sayaka's body flinched suddenly, slowly removing the knife from it's position.



The hunters were flown back into the trees, severely hurt by Jun's attacks.
Guys, no!"

Jun held his hand out in Sayaka's position, putting her in deeper.

"Sayaka, I said finish him."

Her eyes glowed red again and aimed the knife to his chest. Sae pleaded for her to wake up, hoping he could still reach her.

"Sae... I can't resist him. He's too strong."

"Don't worry, I'm right here."

He looked down and held Sayaka's wrist. Then, he got an idea.

"Forgive me, Sayaka."

He threw Sayaka down on her back, releasing the knife and throwing it into the ice.

He knelt down and layed up against her, pinning her wrists to the ground.

"This was how we met, remember?"

The hunters watched them from afar.


"I think he can do it... But, I still feel like something's gonna go wrong."

Yuki watched them from the shadows, behind a large tree.

Sae and Sayaka stared into each other's eyes intensly. Sae's electric blue eyes tried to get through her blood red eyes into her heart.

He suddenly felt Jun pick him up, releasing his grip on her.

"You just WANT to get hurt, don't you, Miyazawa? The problem with you is... you're just too nice."

He threw Sae to the ground, pounding a heavy crater into the pavement.

Then, he walked over and stood Sayaka up. He slowly went up and kissed her again. As their lips met, the wounds and scars disappeared.

As he released, he sighed deeply and turned his head to Sae.

"This is the power of the silver rose. As long as I have her, I will never become weak and die."

He coughed and could barely sit up.

Somehow, only this weak Sae tugged on her heart. She walked over to him and picked him up.

She was able to resist a bit more. Seeing Sae so helpless reminded her of their love.

"Sayaka... I love you. No one can replace that feeling."

"....I know."

They held each other tightly, Sayaka crying over his shoulder.

Sae picked up the blue rose again, turning it back into it's sword form. He swung it in Jun's direction and slashed his chest, knocking him to the ground.

He turned back at Sayaka, gazing at her beauty.

She turned and met his gaze, still a little shaky from Jun's spell.

"Sayaka... You are everything to me. I just can't lose you. I'll do anything and everything to protect you..."

"Sae... You ARE too nice."

He looked down and bit his lip, tightening the grip on her shoulders.

"But, that's not a bad thing. You can never be too sweet, Sae."

They hugged each other again, tighter than before.

Sayaka closed her eyes, tears running down her cheeks. She was finally released from the spell and can be with Sae forever.

For that one sweet moment, everything was perfect.


Sayaka heard someone gasp in pain. She looked down and the back of Sae's white suit was replaced with red.

Jun threw a fragment of his ice sword directly at his back, deeply penetrating into him.


To be continued...

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Re: Saeyaka Fanfic-Fire and Ice 2 (Chapter 6)
« Reply #81 on: July 24, 2013, 11:42:57 PM »
What's going to happen next?

Would Sae survive?

Would Sayaka and Sae be together?

Can't wait to find out?

Thank you for the update

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Saeyaka Fanfic-Fire and Ice 2 (Chapter 7-Final Chapter)
« Reply #82 on: July 26, 2013, 05:24:19 PM »
AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice 2

Final chapter

Sayaka's POV
Sae's back was deeply stabbed by one of Jun's ice shards.

"I told you I wouldn't grow weak."

Sae tightened his grip and knelt down to the ground.

"... You don't need to worry."

"Sae, stay with me! Please don't die!"

"I'll be just fine..."

"No, you're not fine! If you don't take care of this soon, you'll-"


His sudden voice startled me. He was holding on to me tight, tears falling freely from his eyes.

"No. Because, I protected you... As long a-as you're... s-still alive..." He slid closer and held me tight again. I could feel his warmth slowly fade away as time passed.

"I'm not afraid of dying..."

Jun crawled over and stumbled a bit in his step.

"You should be!"

He pushed the ice deeper into his back, making him scream in pain.

I pulled the ice out of his back and threw it into his chest, stabbing it.

Sae fell to the ground, losing his life energy. He could only barely sit up and struggled to keep his eyes open.

I picked up his body and held it close to me.

I could no longer control my tears, and let all my truest feelings out.

"This can't happen. I can't let you stay here and die..."

I could see Yuko watching me, having a worried look on her face, but I ignored it. All I cared about that one moment was Sae.

"What should I do? I'll be all alone now! Even though I found someone to love... Even though I met someone I can truly love..."

One of my tears fell down on Sae's cheek. He slowly raised his hand and cupped it in my cheek.

"You still... cried... I w-was always happy to see your face..."

He looked down and raised my own hand, letting it caress his cheek.

"We s-said... w-we'd always be together..."

"We will."

I brought myself in closer to his face and cupped my hand in his cheek. He smiled and did the same.

"I'm not afraid of anything anymore. I'll always be right here, with you... I'll protect you... Always. I promise."

"Thank you..."

I closed my eyes and held his hand, feeling every last bit of his warmth.

"Th-th-thank y-you... so mu-..."

I felt his hand turn cold and lifeless. When I opened my eyes, his skin was pale white and his eyes were closed.

"No, not yet! Don't go yet!"

I held on his hand tighter, trying to get him to respond.

"Look. Our love is here! The love between the two of us is..!"

The sound of his voice, his eyes, everything about him that was important to me...

Just like that, all of it was gone.

After a while, I released the grip on his hand and it slipped out. I grabbed it again before it fell on the ground.

"Sae, don't die!"

"Don't you see? He's already gone! He's slowly turning to dust in your arms..."

I could feel his body slowly crumbling away, but I never wanted to accept it. I couldn't let go of him when I just came back to him.



"No, I won't accept this!"

I picked him up a bit and lightly kissed him. As I let go, he still wasn't breathing. I shook my head and kissed him again, more intense than the last time.

"Why won't you let go?"

I tried breathing into him, but it became harder as the rest of his blood flowed out.

"I don't want to! I don't want anyone, but him!"

"Fine... If I can't have you," he said slowly picking up another ice shard, "NO ONE CAN!!!"

Please... Sae...

Let me see your smile, your light...

Just one more time...

As I kissed him one more time, another tear fell on his sword. It suddenly burst into blue flames and surrounded us.
End of Sayaka's POV

"This can't be..."

Yuki smiled from behind the tree.

"The flames of rebirth. If those could be created, then she really does have the crystal within her."

The flames became bigger and more intense.

Eventually, they engulfed Jun within it, melting the ice, and killing him.


"This kind of fate... is best fitted for a demon..."

Yuki turned around and left the park. Yuko and the others were frozen in their position, glad that he was defeated. But, Yuko was still worried about Sayaka.

As the fire disappeared, Sae's body was completely healed and his hair shined a brighter white than ever. As for Sayaka, the fire gave her one violet streak in her hair.

All the blood melted away like sand and he slowly opened his eyes.

Once their gaze met again, he smiled and hugged her tight.

"Sae... If it means we get to be this way forever, then..."

They slowly parted and met each other's eyes again.

"Then, let's do it."

Sae bit his lower lip, but smiled. As he looked down, he noticed a silver, rose-shaped broach in his hand.

"Is this...?"

"This, like the rose you gave me, will be our prized possession."

The silver rose crystal left Sayaka's body and was created into a broach form that would always protect them.

He pinned it on Sayaka's shirt and moved her hair to let the moon shine on it.


"If that is what must be done..."

He moved Sayaka's hair back, revealing the perfect space in her neck.

"To you, eternal life."

He slowly went in and bit her neck. As the venom flowed through her body, she held him close to her and absorbed all the renewed warmth of her boyfriend.

Yuko slowly got up and started to leave.


"Where are you going?"

"... It's over. I think they'll be just fine now."

As she walked off, the others soon followed her and left.

Sae released himself and met Sayaka's gaze again. They both smiled and kissed each other once more.

"You're not afraid, right?"

"No. As long as the two of us are together, we're strong. So, I'm not afraid as long as you're with me."

"I'll always be with you. I promise."

They stood up and held each other's hands again, looking up at the starry sky.

Just like the starry sky...

From now on, we are infinite.

And, that moment,
As the last piece of ice melted away,
They finally awakened a new, everlasting love...
And revealed the greatest treasure of all.

The End

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Re: Saeyaka Fanfic-Fire and Ice 2 (Final Chapter)
« Reply #83 on: July 26, 2013, 11:37:02 PM »
Great ending...

Sae and Sayaka are together...

Thank you for the update...

Can't wait to see more of your stories whether another sequel or others...

Thank you...

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Re: Saeyaka Fanfic-Fire and Ice 2 (Final Chapter)
« Reply #84 on: July 27, 2013, 12:35:47 AM »
Thank you very much for a nice ending to this wonderful story... :thumbup

I actually want to say a lot of things but I got speechless. Anyway, thanks!
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Re: Saeyaka Fanfic-Fire and Ice
« Reply #85 on: August 23, 2015, 06:51:58 AM »

I've recently read this one and I--I love it~!

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