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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 5
« Reply #200 on: June 24, 2013, 02:52:31 AM »
Yuki having that flashback is only making her realize her mistake in the past
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 5
« Reply #201 on: June 24, 2013, 05:45:45 AM »
Ah... Yuki was remembering her past with Mayu...

And also her desire regarding Mayu...

Wah... Yuki seemed so upset with Sae there....

Here Sae was supposed to be her girlfriend...

Yuki treated Sae badly here....

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 5
« Reply #202 on: June 24, 2013, 08:52:15 AM »
Eh~ The first part is just the flashback in Yuki's dream :stoned:
OMG, Yuki dreams that she and Mayu are making out :kekeke:
That's suprise me a lots :wahaha:
Now, Yuki has realized her feeling toward Mayu but it's too late :err:
Mayu's now happy with Jurina :on speedy:
Crush you, Sae! Why're you calling for Yuki and disturb her dream :scolding:
Sae's going home soon :shock:
Can't wait to see what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 5
« Reply #203 on: June 24, 2013, 11:44:43 AM »
Hum hum hum hum yes its kind of late but not soo late.they still doesn't married you know keke
Yuki still had a chance to steal mayu keke
Let me see how she doing it kekeke

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 5
« Reply #204 on: June 24, 2013, 12:44:53 PM »
Yeah!!! U finally updated!!!

It is quite confused actually.... Is that just a dream or flashback?

It felt like real but they didn't make out in the previous chapter.....

Sae is coming back and are u going make Yuki confuse about her feelings?

Hope u can update soon

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 5
« Reply #205 on: June 24, 2013, 04:56:50 PM »
Whoa that make out sesion its not happen in first season right,so i guess its just yuki real desire at that time,it just the thing that she should do at that time but it never happen because she idiot to not knowing herself feeling.i dont blame her LOL its normal when you fall in love.


Yeah yuki had a chance,but dont know.its yuki POV now

We dont know what mayu thinking,she a great actress right

I felt her real blank face LOL ,she looks fine and happy but dunno if in the back her blank face is total chaos



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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 5
« Reply #206 on: June 24, 2013, 08:44:16 PM »
Ohman! It was just a dream! I thought it was the real thing! :banghead: Well dreams is our subconcious mind and from there where our desires lies. Where our thoughts hide that can't express. Ohwell!

Uwaaa~ Sae's coming back! Oooh! Yuki you better realize your feelings for Mayu quickly or else..

Ohmygosh! I can't wait to witness what's next.. :fap

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #207 on: June 25, 2013, 08:56:57 PM »
Chapter 6



It’s Sunday noon, around 1:48 pm I heard a knock on my door and when I open it, it’s Sae holding some plastic bag.

“Ohh, Sae”

I said, she just smile at my reaction and kiss me on the cheek and  give me the plastic bag then she entered in my apartment.

“I’m back!!! Did you miss me?”

she said, I just smile at her and nodded my head. I look up what’s inside the bag and pulled out the contents

“Kani?”

I asked, but she just smiled at me and signal me to come closer to her

“yeah kani, since you didn’t say anything I just buy you a kani. That’s the town specialty”

She said, then I smile at her and clasp my hand

“Hmm I should cook it then?”

I said, Sae just widen her eyes and snatch the bag of kani of me. And make me sit in the living room, while she open the TV and smile at me

“Nee Yuki I think I should cook it since it’s my gift for you ehh”

She said, and go to the kitchen and prepare our meal. I try to enter my kitchen but Sae push me out. I know I’m not a good cook but I can help her out right? I tried to offered her some help but she just kiss me and make me sit on the living room again.

after some minutes, Sae then called me in and show me her dish. It’s looks good and taste good, we talked about her trip and my activity while she’s gone. After our meal, she help  out cleaning our mess, while I’m washing the dishes Sae suddenly hug me from behind and started  kissing my neck, I giggled from her action

“What’s wrong Sae?”

I asked her but she just kiss my ear and whisper to me

“Yuki I miss you”

I just looked at her, then I saw her eyes, it looks like sad, and lonely. I just give her a reassuring smile

“Sae it’s just three days”

I said, but she hold my chin give me a passionate kiss, I broke our kiss because of lack of air. While I was trying to catch my breath she touch my cheek and make me look at her

“It’s not that, It’s just you been cold to me lately”

she said, while looking down. I smile at her and give her a kiss

“Really?”

I asked,  but she grab my arm and started to cry, I panicked when I saw her so I give her a hug

“Sae why are you crying?”

I asked, but she let go of my arm and sit from the ground

“It’s just that, I’m feeling really insecure right now, and I don’t know why. I feel like I’m slowly losing you Yuki, and I don’t want that”


She said while her tears slowly dripping from her face. Then I suddenly remember Kumi. Is Sae feeling what Kumi feels like in Kanon?

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(flash back remember chapter 4)

After I accompany Mayu, I don’t feel like going home so I decided to go to the park, It’s dark I don’t think there’s a lot of people gonna come to the park at night.  It’s the perfect place for me to clear my mind, while I was driving to go to the park I saw Rena in the side road talking to her phone, and her expression seems like in trouble. So I park my car and go to her

“Rena”

I said when I approach her, she look at me and give a worried look

“Yuki, I think Kumi’s in trouble”

she said, while still trying to call Kumi

“huh?! What do you mean?”

I asked her, then she showed me her phone,

“Kumi called me earlier and she sound weird and she’s trying say something about Kanon, but when I asked her what’s wrong? I suddenly heard a glass breaking sound and our call had been  cut off”

Rena said fast, I almost didn’t understand her. So I offered her a ride in Kumi’s apartment to check on her. When we arrive there, It seems quiet, so Rena tried to knock Kumi’s door, but it suddenly opened allowing us to entered

“Excuse me…ehh!!!””

Rena scream, so I run beside her and look to where she’s looking. The whole room is a mess, broken glass everywhere and you could easily smell the stench of alcohol, broken bottle of vodka, broken vase other things could be seen from the room. And there’s Kumi in the middle crying.

“Kumi”

Rena whisper, then approach the girl in the middle of the room. And hug her, Kumi just continue her cries on Rena’s shoulder

“What happened?”

I said while checking on Kumi if she’s have any injuries

“It’s over”

Kumi said while sobbing, Rena and I look to each other first and nodded our heads

“What’s over Kumi?” Rena ask in a soft voice

“Kanon hates me now”

Kumi said and her cries got more worst, Rena just hug Kumi tight while I just rubbed her shoulder to calm her down

“Ehh why would Kanon hate you? You two are the perfect couple”

I asked, Kumi just look at me with her red and teary eyes

“Were not perfect, since she graduate college, she become cold to me, I always try to brushed it off, but It hurt me. I know she’s tired form work, and a busy with her own career, but she didn’t even call me, like it used to be”

Kumi said, Rena just grab Kumi and let her cry on her shoulder

“H-How??you two have been dating since middle school” Rena asked

“That’s one of the reason, I’m afraid. What if she got bored with me and want to try someone else, what if is fell inlove with some other girls. What if she tried to have sex with a man and actually like it. I could never win against that. I been with her since middle school, I don’t know what to do if I lost her”

Kumi said and wiped her tears, Rena and I just hug her

“What actually happened, why did you fight?” I asked

“I was waiting for Kanon after work, I want to surprised her and pick her up and go watch some movie or something, But to my surprise, when she got out from the building there’s a man resting his arm around Kanon’s shoulder, and smiling at her, I just rust and push the man off Kanon. Then started punching him, Kanon tried to stop me and separated me from the man, when I look at her she have tears in her eyes, I came closer to her but she slapped me and called me “Baka” I just run and drive my way”

Kumi said, I and Rena just looked at each other

“Kumi I think you should talk to Kanon to know what’s going on”

Rena said and I just nodded, Kumi just look at us with anger in her eyes

“No!!”

Kumi shout and get up and started pushing us out of the room

“But Kumi!!”

I said, But Kumi still didn’t listen and finally able to push us out to the room and close the door shut.

“Yuki I’ll just handle this tomorrow, I think It’s just a misunderstanding, Kumi become really insecure and stupid when it comes to Kanon ehh. And she doesn’t even think strait”

Rena said with a smile, I just nodded my head and let Rena handle this


(end of flashback)

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I grab Sae’s arm and make her stand up and brush some of her bangs on her forehead.

“Sae I’m sorry If I make you feel insecure, but you don’t have to worry about that I’m by your side right?”

I asked, and she just nodded and kissed me. But I suddenly remember flash of Mayu’s Image in my brain.

“You’re right Yuki, I don’t have to worry over nothing. And it’s late I need to go home .”


Sae said, then get up and started to leave. I just looked down “Why did I see Mayu’s Image?” I asked my myself. I felt guilt when I look at Sae’s back. I run to her and pulled her in

“Yuki!?”

she said, shock for my sudden action

“Sae please stay the night here”

I said and started kissing her with passion, she just reply my kiss with the same amount and lay me on the sofa and started removing my clothes. “I love Sae, right?” I asked myself, while we continue our action.



…………………………………..TBC

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« Last Edit: June 26, 2013, 03:58:23 AM by -gibson-mayulover »

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #208 on: June 25, 2013, 09:12:58 PM »
NO yuki you love mayu and you know it ^^

what happened to my kuminon I hope you have explanations author-san  :angry: :angry:

anyway cant wait for the next chapter ^^
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #209 on: June 25, 2013, 09:26:50 PM »
Oh! What happened? Kumin.. I guess she misunderstand the situation.. Hope KumiNon's relationship going to be fine..

Oh Sae about how you're feeling insecure for no reason.. Well instinct girlfriend, you know it, there's something wrong.. Oh well.. I don't want to see anyone who'll going to be broken hearted.. but that just the way it is.. Love, why you so complicated?! :banghead:

Will Yuki able to realize her feelings? What will Mayu do when she found out about Yuki's feelings? Will Yuki be hindrance on JuriMayu's relationship? Will someone freaking realizes their feelings somehow?! :banghead:

This is going to be hard.. My MaYuki feels.. :'(

Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup :twothumbs
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #210 on: June 25, 2013, 09:36:32 PM »
The KumiNon relationship seems strained at the moment and now Yuki and Sae may go into a moment of passion. 
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #211 on: June 25, 2013, 09:38:49 PM »
Oh no, what happened to KumiNon?
Poor Sae. Yuki needs to sort out her feelings now.

Thanks for the update!!

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #212 on: June 25, 2013, 11:14:11 PM »
Oh please gibson-san.you make yuki so dense again LOL

Nope yuki you dont love sae that much,you belong to mayu from the first place

Mayuki moment where? I missed it.
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #213 on: June 26, 2013, 12:32:20 AM »
looks like kurogumi-chan didn't give up and she wants for mayuki to be together   :)
But I think from the chapter 4 I think I gave up It's really hurts my mayuki~  :cry:
I know I ship other pairing like WMatsui, RenaYuki and JuriMayu  but still from the first of the fic I was into mayuki. Maube Mayuki is beast ship that's why     :sweatdrop:
but I think about it  you didn't put the pairing so we didn't know what is going to be at the end.  :nervous
and as I see even for you I think the end is not really clear in your mind or my guessing is wrong  :P
I know that I'm writing this comment but you're not going to answer me but I know that you are reading it  :grin:

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #214 on: June 26, 2013, 01:27:19 AM »
AH... Poor Sae... her feeling was spot on somehow...

And Yuki was so guilty over what Sae was feeling...

And how about Kumi and Kanon... are they really over?

What's going to happen next between Mayu, Yuki, Jurina and Sae?

Can't wait

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #215 on: June 26, 2013, 03:45:30 AM »
@mo-chan: actually i already give up on the first season LOL but it's not fair,at least i want they know each other feeling. i want at least yuki know that mayu ever loved her. or mayu know what yuki feeling now for her....LOL....this fic is good right?


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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #216 on: June 26, 2013, 09:36:15 AM »
NO~ Yuki! You doesn't love Sae much now :gyaaah: I guess it was transfered to Mayu :wahaha:
What happen to Kuminon in the past :dunno:
I think what Kumi saw is just a mistake :on ksweat:
Now, I slowly start giving up in Mayuki :on cloudeye:
Yuki's back to be dense like the old days :err:
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #217 on: June 27, 2013, 09:04:20 PM »
I think Yuki is confused and not being honest to herself. Hope she figures out what she really wants! Please update soon :)

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #218 on: June 28, 2013, 03:56:19 AM »
IM UPSET WITH YUKI
BUT SHE IN CONFUSED STATE NOW.
MAYU KEEP COMMING IN HER MIND.
SAE FELT LOST YUKI SLOWLY.WONDER IF JURINA TOO.
THESE TWO PERSON (MAYU AND YUKI) IF THEY BEING HONEST AT FIRST THIS NOT GOING HAPPEN TO THEM.
IF MAYU HONEST ABOUT HER FEELING TOWARD YUKI THIS NOT SUPPOSED HAPPEN.
IF YUKI NOT SOOO BLIND,THIS NOT SUPPOSED HAPPEN.
BUT OTHERWISE,IT HAPPEN NOW.
WONDER HOW IT TURN OUT.
IF IT KEEP SAME,WELL JUST ENDED YUKI AND SAE TOGHETHER BUT WITH A LITTLE DOUBT ON YUKI SIDE
AS FOR MAYU,WELL DONT KNOW THEY LOOKS FINE.

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 6
« Reply #219 on: June 29, 2013, 07:28:17 AM »
update sooon please why is so good fic


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