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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #100 on: June 28, 2013, 03:18:26 AM »
the wand... hrm...
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #101 on: June 28, 2013, 03:20:22 AM »
but yuki loved sae right?

she could not break with sae so quickly just because she realized that the person she loves is mayu
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #102 on: June 28, 2013, 03:35:14 AM »
YAY AN UPDATE

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #103 on: June 28, 2013, 04:26:00 AM »
Mayu is becoming too close to Yuki for her own good but I wonder what she'll do to win over Yuki and knock Sae out of the way
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #104 on: June 28, 2013, 04:53:44 AM »
I'm more of a SaeYuki fan than a MaYuki fan but...I can deal... :nervous
I'll Imagine Sae & Mayu's Parts the other way around if it does turn MaYuki  :cathappy:
Thins Fic is Awesome!  :twothumbs
The Ending Randomness Really made me Laugh  :lol:
Keep up the Good Work!  :thumbup
I can't wait for the next installment!  :panic:

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #105 on: June 28, 2013, 09:19:29 AM »
So Mayu's emotion affected to her magic and aslo the wand :ding:
I love it :luvluv1:
Even the things didn't go well like Mayu's guess but after all, Saeyuki had a kiss under the rain :on cloudeye:
The sugar cubes was totally right when they shown exactly what Mayu's feel :on gay:
I wonder what Mayu think about that :dunno:
Will she win over Yuki :prayers:
I'm sure there'll be lots of drama between SaeMayuki :kekeke:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #106 on: June 28, 2013, 09:27:50 AM »
finally mayu knows that she loves  yuki

now should mayu seduce yuki hehe maybe with her danso  :wub: :wub:

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #107 on: June 28, 2013, 12:40:16 PM »
Hahaha... Mayu ruined Yuki's date somehow....

But Sae seemed to be able to adjust to the chaos...trying to make the date worked somehow.

now that Mayu herself notice her feeling for Yuki... What would she do about that..?

Can't wait to see the next one...

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #108 on: June 30, 2013, 07:55:46 AM »
No you cant mayu it will ruin yovr fìnal exam as a witch
Yuki happiness is more important.
Curious what yuki felt to mayu

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Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #109 on: July 03, 2013, 05:30:22 PM »
Chapter 13-Black Kiss


Mayu's POV


No way... I'm in love with Yuki?

"Mayu."

My eyes widen as I heard a familiar voice.

I turned around and saw her, wearing a white hat and jacket with a long pure white cape.

She had purple ribbons for accessories on her jacket and hat, and there was also gold lining.

I only heard her voice to recognize her, and I confirmed my guess was right when I saw that smile.

Her cat-like smile.

"It sure has been a while... Jurina."

"Being the same as ever... Mayu?"

She generated her signature light orb and threw it at me, but I was able to catch it in my hand and crush it.

"Same as ever, huh?"

"No," she said with a smirk. "I learned some new tricks, too."

She flew in the air and tackled me straight to the ground.

And then...


*Going into troll mode!!!! :P *


Yuki's POV

We finally walked over to Sae's home.

We got changed into some comfy pajamas and decided to spend the rest of our night inside.

*Sneeze*

"Ah! You okay? Hahaha, I guess we stayed out in the rain too long!"

I blew my nose and blushed a bit, covering my mouth.

"You were kissing me!"

"YOU started it!"

"EHHH?!?!?! No way!!! That was ALL you!!!"

She started laughing as loud as possible, clapping her hands.

"Mou~ stop! It's not funny."

She pouted and crawled over to me. Ahh~ she's so cute.

"But I wuv you, Yukirin~!"

She pressed my cheeks together and cuddled in my chest like a cat.

"I rub yuu~ I rub yuu~ I RUB YUU~~~~!!!!!"

"Mou~ Sae!!!!"


Mayu's POV

"Hahahahahahahaha!!!! Sto~~~p!!!! Jurina-AAAAAHHHH!!!!!"

"Tickletickletickletickletickletickletickletickletickletickle~~~~!!!!!"

"Hahahahahahahahahaha!!!!! Aaaaaahhhh~ hahahahahaha!!!!"

"You're~ gonna get it! You're~ gonna GET IT!!!"

"No! No!! Nonononono!!!! AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!"

*A few minutes later*

I drank some of the water Jurina gave me and sighed.

"Ah~ that was fun."

"Yup. You're still ticklish and cute."

I stretched my arms, feeling the sun on my back.

A gush of wind blew my hat off, but Jurina flew up and caught it.

"Here."

"Thanks. So, what have you been doing?"

"I'm an idol now. I wanted to stay on Earth and make a successful living in music. What about you?"

"Actually, I don't know yet. I still have to pass the final test."

"Good luck!"

I smiled, but I think she noticed something.

I felt a little weird thinking about it. I looked at my star badge; it's gotten brighter since Yuki and Sae have gone out.

"What's wrong?"

"I've just been confused with a lot of things. It's nothing; don't worry."

She stood up and gathered some wind into her hand. She balled it in her fist and a tornado formed around her.

Gaining up her power, she punched her hand right towards me.


*Trolling again XD *


Yuki's POV

Sae covered my eyes and lead me towards somewhere in her house.

She stopped a bit and uncovered my eyes.

"Tada~!"

Right in front of my eyes was a really cool drum set.

"Wow! This is amazing!"

"Can you play?"

"Mm... I dabble."

She handed me the drum sticks excitedly.

"Show me!"

"OK~."



The sakura song plays on the streets
 The day of farewells comes in the blink of an eye
 On the corner walls of the school building
 Everyone secretly wrote their own messages

There's no need to wear uniforms anymore!
 Being swayed amidst the spring wind,
 All sorts of flowers scatter about
 to find a new dream

Hey friend, for all the memories we had
 let's believe that tomorrow will shine even brighter
 That's right, graduation is not the end but a new beginning
 Hey friend, just head on in your own path
 Don't say goodbye
 We will meet again very soon
 So let's high five for now



Mayu's POV

Right when she was about to punch me, I panicked and close my eyes.

But, nothing came...

I open my one eye and saw Jurina with a grin on her face.

"You've gotten soft."

I blushed a bit and turned away from her.

"What happened? Tell me."

"But, it's..."

She grabbed me by the collar and suddenly kissed me.

Ahh... I forgot Jurina likes to harass me like this.

She pulled away, a soft sigh escaping her lips, and looked at me with those dark, glowing black orbs.

"This is how I'll get my answer," she said with a smug look on her face. She can be an S sometimes.

"Wait, what do you--?! Mm!"

She started kissing me again, more intense than I ever felt her do before.

It sure has been a while since she's kissed me...

It's been so long... So lonely... I guess I did miss her at times...

I wanted someone there... To give me love...

To kiss me...

Kiss me....

"...Yukirin..."


Yuki's POV

"Ah~ Mm! Oishii!"

I handed Sae one more cookie and placed it in her mouth.

"Mm~!!! Mom makes the best cookies!"

"I guess that's where you get it. You eat so much chocolate, you're sweet inside and out."

"Mou~ Yukirin, YOU'RE too sweet!!!"

I giggled a bit, and prepared to feed her again, but she stopped me.

"No-no-no. I'll feed you this one."

"Eh?"

She climbed on top of me and dangled the cookie over my head.

She held it in between her teeth and placed the other end in my mouth.

Pushing herself forward, the cookie slip into my mouth.

She released me and Back away, a smirk on her face.

"Mm... maybe you're not as sweet as I thought."

"Hey, I'm sweet!" she said crawling back over to me. "I just have a little spice is all."

She kissed me again, groping my body in various places.

Ah... She's so sexy... So sweet...

Her kiss is so sweet...

I just want to kiss her...

Kiss me....

"...Mayu..."


Mayu's POV

Jurina released the kiss and stood up.

"I knew it."

She held out her hand and helped me up.

"What?"

"You're in love. You didn't kiss me like normal. Someone's got your heart racing faster than normal."

"Th-that's not true! Yukirin is just... m-my friend. And, I have to stay by her side until she's truly happy. That's my assignment! I'm not...!"

Jurina raised her eyebrow. I suddenly realized something.

"I'm... I AM in love with Yuki..."

"You should tell her."

"I can't! She's already dating someone..."

Jurina giggled a bit.

"Do you think something like that would stop me? Even when you were crushing on some other wizards, I never stopped loving you!"

"Yeah, but..."

She came closer, her hands on her hips. Her mouth curved into that cat-esque smirk again.

"Jurina, that's YOU. I... I just don't know."

She hugged me, patting my head.

"Don't worry."

"Eh?"

"When the time comes, you'll know what to do."

I felt better now, and hugged her back.

"Thank you, Jurina."


Yuki's POV

"Mayu?"

"Eh?"

Sae suddenly got up, a scared expression on her face.

"Did.. did you just say 'Mayu'?

"...What?"

"You just said her name! Why did you say her name?!"

My eyes widened and I suddenly realized what happened.

I unconsciously called out her name...

But, that means...

"Oh god..."

I ran out as fast as I could, covering my mouth.

Once I got back to my house, I ran into my room and cried into my pillow.

God... why did that happen?

That stupid dream messed up my head!

Why, Mayu?! Why did you...?

Why did you... make me fall in love with you?

"What is going on here?"


---TBC---
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #110 on: July 03, 2013, 05:41:25 PM »
oho a bit of jurimayu, I LOVED THE JURIMAYU SCENE!! :cathappy: jurina is such an sadist :lol:
yes finally yuki loves mayu!  :deco: :inlove: its not mayu's fault you like her yuki, you're the one who called out her name when kissing sae-chan :P
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
« Last Edit: July 13, 2013, 02:42:13 PM by mayuki_daisuki »
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #111 on: July 03, 2013, 05:48:01 PM »
That was interesting...

The magic finally turned into possession and Yuki finally got it and poor her in doing so
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #112 on: July 03, 2013, 06:19:47 PM »
Ohmygosh! :O

What's gonna happen next?

Can't wait for the next up! :fap

Thank you for the update :bow: :twothumbs :thumbsup

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #113 on: July 03, 2013, 06:27:19 PM »
Wow yuki saying mayu name! That would hurt sae,but its fine LOL

From the first place sae nothing to do in yuki life,its mayuyu who change yuki to better person

What kind of friend jurina is?kissing her friend like that LOL

What will yuki do? And mayu do?
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #114 on: July 03, 2013, 06:36:01 PM »
What kind of friend jurina is?kissing her friend like that LOL
Jurina's just all lovey-dovey with Mayu, and a bit of a perv.

BTW: Here's kind of a description on what Jurina's witch outfit looks like.

*Sorry 'bout the poor pic*

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:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #115 on: July 03, 2013, 06:40:18 PM »
pics are soo cute !!  XD
Jurina is really direct  :lol: but I prefert mayuki   :P

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #116 on: July 03, 2013, 11:58:57 PM »
the pics are too cute!! thanks for the update, grat chapter >u<
Jurina got a weird way to get what she want but in the end she get it, now she know what mayu was thinking hahaha i love that kid xDD
and Yuki mess the thinks up with Sae! :O i'm hope that she won't get too hurt haha

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #117 on: July 04, 2013, 07:50:51 AM »
getting interesting...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait

Thank you

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #118 on: July 04, 2013, 08:23:00 AM »
I love Jurina :on gay:
Thank you for making Mayu not deny about her love to Yuki anymore :on cny2:
Such a great friend :on GJ:
Jurina's surely a S :wahaha:
Eh~ Jurina's in love with the other wizard :shock: Who's that? :dunno: Maybe Rena :hehehe:
Ara~~ Yuki said Mayu's name when she was kissing with Sae :on drink: Too happy :nya:
Now, both Mayu and Yuki are realize their love to each other :wriggly:
Wonder what'll they do :ding:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
« Reply #119 on: July 07, 2013, 09:00:13 AM »
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT????? SAE NO!!!! (NO I DON'T CARE ABOUT HER KEKEKEKEK EVIL SMILE)

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