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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 11
« Reply #120 on: May 20, 2013, 06:45:45 PM »
Master And puppet my Butt! They're gonna be lovers! XD ah~ the closer the bond the better but then... if takabear turns into a human wouldn't that spell danger of dying because of the other puppets off to kill them both? o.o

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 11
« Reply #121 on: May 20, 2013, 09:01:08 PM »
Don't tell me that Takabear is turning into a human!
 
Kyaah  :wriggly:

Puppets without mastars? They kill their masters? Dats not good  :smhid

Is this my first time commenting? Cause i've been reading this when you began writing it, Same with Great Escape :)

The chapter was awesome as always! Can't wait til the next one :)

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 11
« Reply #122 on: May 21, 2013, 12:01:29 AM »
Eh? They already going back home? They're not gonna fight the Wild dolls to collect the heart shards? O.o

Lol I thought dolls do sleep sometimes or power off...so they're not? O.o

And I lol real hard at the melon pan part! Another side of Rena in this chapter. XD


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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 11
« Reply #123 on: May 21, 2013, 11:16:36 AM »
when i read at the part of waking up the puppets
my expression was like:
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MaYuki: woahh what did Yuki said?? i think it kinda pervert :drool:
WMatsui: What the heck???? :shocked and then :lol:

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ps: but really WMatsui scene was kinda stupid, but still cute

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 11
« Reply #124 on: May 21, 2013, 11:49:52 AM »
Interesting ways of breaking the spell....kissing, whispering and melon-pan...  :lol:

Ah... Masterless puppets... why did they become like that?

Well what's happening with Atsuko's mark... it grew a tiny horns now...?

Eh.. Minami could go to sleep now... I thought she could not... what's going on?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #125 on: May 22, 2013, 05:44:42 PM »
Hi minna! I hope you like it guys! I have interesting news for all the puppets!
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Chapter 12

"Sleeping? But puppets don't sleep." Mayu said.

"I know which is why I wonder what exactly it is that Minami was doing." Atsuko said.

"Let's go find Mariko maybe she'll know." Yuki said.

Mayu, Yuki, Minami and Atsuko all walked to Mariko's home and knocked on the door. The door opened and Miichan was there in a apron covered in flour. Minami and Atsuko said they were looking for Mariko and so she let them in. They found Mariko in the kitchen stirring a bowl of chocolate. Mariko saw the others and told them to wait in the other room while she changed. She then came out and Miichan brought out some tea.

"So how may I help you?" Mariko said.

"I think Minami slept last night."

"Eh?"

Mariko paused and looked up at Atsuko with a disbelieving look. She was surprised and shocked and made Atsuko repeat herself. She heard it again and then leaned back to sip her tea. She thought about it for a while and then said,

"Let me see what happens."

Mariko had Minami lay on the couch for a while and try to recreate the scene that caused her to sleep. They waited twenty minutes before Mariko decided to try something different. She had Atsuko lay down with Minami and see if that worked. Atsuko held Minami close to her and stroked her hair. Minami felt very relaxed but not sleepy. After a while Atsuko passed out but Minami was still awake. Minami didn't feel anything and Mariko was about to give up. Then suddenly it happened and everything changed. Minami froze where she laid and her eyes opened wide. It was then Mariko and Miichan moved in and carefully carried Atsuko out of the room. They set her down and then watched Minami from a distance. Nothing was happening but Mariko did admit the sight was strange. Mariko had Mayu walk over and touch her to see of she'll come back. When Mayu touched Minami though, Mayu went into the same state as Minami. The two were completely still with their eyes open and bodies like stone. Yuki quickly grabbed Mayu and shook her waking her up.

"Mayu what happened?"

"I don't know but it was weird..." Mayu said.

"Like what?"

"Like I saw flashes of different scenes. I saw flowers and the sun. A clear sky and a lake. Everything looked so peaceful and it was flashing before me. I never got a clear view but at one point I thought I saw Minami sitting by a tree."

"So you saw everything Minami sees?" Atsuko said.

"Yeah.."

"Hmm I think I know what's going on."

Mariko walked over and pulled out a notebook and flipped through the pages. Then she walked over to Atsuko and unbuttoned some of her shirt. Atsuko yelped and stepped back.

"Mariko what are you doing?!"

"Checking something now hold still."

Atsuko stood as Mariko unbuttoned the rest of her shirt revealing her mark. Mariko looked at it and then said,

"I thought so."

"What is it?"

"Puppet evolution."

"Evolution?"

"Yes. You see when as a puppet and master bond and battle, they start to change and grow. This process is called puppet evolution and in a couple days Minami will evolve into a stronger form of herself. It's a good thing really. What's happening now is in order for the process to complete, the puppet has to store as much energy as possible. Therefore when the puppet is extremely relaxed, it goes into a temporary state of unconsciousness. They're not asleep because they can still hear everything but their mind is totally somewhere else."

Atsuko paused for a moment to try to figure out what Mariko just said. All the information took a while to process and then she understood and nodded her head. She asked when the evolution will happen and Mariko said that it would be during a battle. Atsuko was a little curious to see what would happen so she knew she wanted to get into a battle soon. However Mariko said that Minami needed at least a couple more dream stages and then she could battle. Atsuko agreed and then took Minami home. She set her down and then walked into the bathroom. She took off her shirt and then looked at her mark in the mirror. There she saw the two bulges sticking out of the side. Atsuko wondered what was going on but she'd find out soon enough. Atsuko walked back into the room and saw Minami still in that same state. She wondered what Minami was seeing so she decided to try to look in.

Atsuko leaned and pressed her forehead against hers. Nothing happened at first but as Atsuko was about to pull away Minami suddenly grabbed onto Atsuko and pulled her close. Then there was a flash and Atsuko could see everything Minami saw. She saw the sun and the sky, the lake and the trees. Flowers were everywhere and the air was cool. The place looked like a paradise fit for someone like Minami. She looked around saw a really big tree. There sitting under it was Minami who was staring out at the lake. Atsuko was about to walk over but then something happened. Minami stepped out and walked into the sunlight. Her body started to glow and the sky slowly grew dark. Minami glowed brighter until Atsuko started to see something. There on her back were two balls that had started to glow. The elongated into slits on her back that split open. Then slowly, something unfolded out of the slits. They stretched out and turned into something similar to wings. Was that what Minami evolved form would look like?

Atsuko continued to watch when suddenly everything turned dark and she woke up to the sound of Minami calling her name. Atsuko opened her eyes and saw Minami looking at her. Looks like she was back to normal which was a good thing. Atsuko hugged Minami and said,

"I can't wait for you to evolve."

"Evolve?"

"Never mind~ let's just go play some games ok?"

"Ok!"

(Over with Mayu...)

Mayu and Yuki were sitting on the couch when suddenly Yuki felt something strange coming from Mayu. She looked down and saw Mayu was in the same state as Minami was before. She looked at her mark and actually saw it starting to change. There was something coming out from above that looked like two round circles. Yuki had knew what was going on and then suddenly she got a phone call from Sae.

"Oi Yuki! Something is wrong with Sayaka! She's all frozen and my mark is changing!" Sae said.

"I know Mayu has it too what it is is- hang on I'm getting another call."

Yuki hit a button and saw it was Jurina.

"Yuki what's wrong with Rena?! She's all stiff and won't move!"

"I know Jurina listen meet at Atsuko's place tomorrow ok? Call Sae and tell too."

"Hai!"

Yuki hung up and then looked down. She stroked her hair and looked at her mark. She patted her head and then said,

"Looks like everyone is gonna evolve.. This will be interesting."

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #126 on: May 22, 2013, 06:11:19 PM »
They are going to evolve all at the same time :3
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #127 on: May 22, 2013, 06:46:18 PM »
eh? evolving huh. that means takamina is going to be more of a badass in fighting cant wait for her evolution ... :twothumbs  :lol: btw thx for updating!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #128 on: May 22, 2013, 07:03:06 PM »
YEHEY ALL OF THEM ARE IN EVOLUTION STATE~!!!!!  XD XD XD

I hope their battle outfit will be Majisuka Gakuen Uniforms.... Hehehehe

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #129 on: May 22, 2013, 07:13:46 PM »
Takabear is still a puppet..but..is that a..good thing or bad thing? Who cares Takapuppet is still cute to me :D

So not only Takapupp but the others to :D

Takapupp with wings (°~°)/ I musht shee dat!

Update soon I can't wait! :D

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #130 on: May 22, 2013, 08:59:03 PM »
oho its like everyones powering up :cathappy:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #131 on: May 23, 2013, 03:06:59 AM »
What are they? Pokemon? Digimon? XD

So is Miichan already evolved?


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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #132 on: May 23, 2013, 11:24:54 AM »
evolve~~
Puppets evolve! in a name of...




































...of....



























... Mariko-sama xD

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #133 on: May 23, 2013, 11:48:04 AM »
Yeah... interesting... everyone are evolving...

It's going to be interesting...

What are they going to evolve into?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 12
« Reply #134 on: May 23, 2013, 02:40:28 PM »
woahhhhh!!!
something's great is gonna happen :grin:
i wonder how will everyone evolve XD
especially Rena :drool:
i hope she will become an angel just like in my my dream

anyway nice update
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 13
« Reply #135 on: May 26, 2013, 06:46:49 AM »
Hope you like the update and the new evolutions guys!
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Chapter 13

Everyone had gathered to Atsuko’s house to discuss what they were going to do with the evolution of the puppets. They didn’t know exactly when it was going to happen but they knew it was going to be soon. The masters were in the kitchen discussing about what they would do while the puppets were in the main room talking. Over in the main room the puppets were showing each other their marks.

“Nee did you know that the marks show what our evolution will look like?” Mayu said.

“Really?! Show us.”

Mayu showed everyone her mark revealing the two bulges on the top of it. Minami showed her revealing the bumps on the side. Rena had something like strings on hers and Sayaka had weird points coming out of the sides. Everyone was anxious to see what their new evolved forms will look like and then they all looked at Miichan where her mark was already fully evolved. There were all kinds of patterns and shapes surrounding her mark. It was really unique to the puppets and now they were really looking forward to their evolution. After talking for a little longer, the masters came out and then Yuki stepped forward and said,

“Come one guys we’re going to make you evolve.”

They took the puppets to a part deep in the forest where no one would find them. They remembered the place Mariko had told them about and decided to go there. Then they had Miichan transform so the others could battle her. The first one up to battle was Mayu and Yuki who were eager to go first. Mayu transformed and then prepared for the battle. Then it began and Mayu was the first one to make a move. Mayu charged at Miichan with full force and ran tried to strike Miichan. However Miichan dodged it easily and then smacked Mayu with some kind off weapon. Mayu looked back and saw Miichan holding a wooden sword. They weren’t sure if that was her real weapon or not but it was interesting to see so Mayu and Yuki kept battling.

Mayu shot blasts at Miichan but she managed to dodge and then hit Mayu with a blow to the stomach. She pushed Mayu back and into a tree where she then knocked her head a couple times before falling back. Then Miichan was about to move in for another strike but suddenly Mayu shot a powerful blast at Miichan sending her flying back. Mayu then raced forward and elbowed Miichan in the stomach and kicked her in the jaw. Mayu thought she had won but then Miichan performed a surprise attack to the head knocking Mayu into the ground. Mayu looked like she had lost but then something happened.

Mayu’s body started to glow and she started to rise. A pink energy surrounded her and grew brighter and brighter until no one could see her. There was a loud burst and then out came a newly transformed Mayu. She wore a white blouse and shirt with frilly high heels and a cute hat. There was also a large wind up gear sticking out of her back that looked very interesting (outfit from synchro tokimeki) Mayu’s new look surprised everyone and was really cool to the others. Now the next question was what was Mayu’s new powers? Mayu looked at Miichan and then smirked realizing there were a whole bunch of new things she could do. Mayu snapped her fingers and then the gear in her back started to wind up. Then there was a pop and that’s when the windup gear came out and Mayu pulled it revealing a sword. Mayu didn’t even move all she did was swing the sword and a large slash of energy shot out and attacked Miichan. Miichan fell back and didn’t get back up. Mayu had won the battle and she was so happy to see her new evolved form.

“Yuki I did it!”

“I know Mayu you look so cool!”

The two hugged and then Jurina and Rena stepped up to fight. Rena transformed and then she started to attack. Rena swung her parasol but missed and Miichan kicked her back. Rena quickly got back up and punched Miichan in the face and then swung and hit her in the stomach. However Miichan pushed back and then was about to slam her sword into her but Rena opened her parasol and provided protection. Miichan saw this and that was when she moved down and kicked Rena in the side pushing her into the ground. Then she got up and was about to hit Rena again but Rena switched positions and managed to get Miichan onto the ground. Rena then took her parasol and hit low smacking her heard. Miichan however grabbed the parasol and pushed Rena up in to the sky. Then she jumped and kicked Rena deep into the ground. It didn’t look like Rena was going to get back up. Then there was that same glow and Rena came back up from the ground.

Rena was surrounded with a silver glow and then she vanished from the sight of the others. Then when the energy dispersed, there was a new Rena. There Rena was standing there in a light brown long skirt and a white blouse with stripes on it. There was a bow wrapped around her neck. There were red marks on her eyes that looked like tears and then there was a tape ruler in her hair. An interesting thing that the others noticed was there was something like threads tied around her arms.(outfit from UZA) The new Rena saw Miichan and acted fast shooting the threads out aiming straight at her. The threads wrapped around Miichan and then Rena pulled her close and punched her hard in the chest. She then pulled up hard and directed Miichan to the left where she swung her around and then off to the side. Miichan went down and stayed down knowing what would happen next if she continued to move.
"Rena sugoi! You look really really cute!" Jurina said.

"Eh?! Yada!" Rena said.

The next one up was Sayaka and Sae and the two were ready. Sayaka transformed and then ran into the battle head first. She swung her mic stand and managed to hit Miichan in the side and then push her back. Then she was about to swing but Miichan caught the stand and then kicked Sayaka way back. She was about to move again but then Sayaka came charging at her with a strong punch to the stomach. Miichan took the hit hard but wasn't going down yet as she took Sayaka's hand and managed to wrap her legs around her entire arm. Then she kicked Sayaka back and then gave her a hard blast to the face sending her back. Miichan then took her wooden sword and hit Sayaka's chest and several blows to her sides. Sayaka went down and didn't look like she was going to get up but then her evolution started. A purple energy started to form around Sayaka and then she was completely surrounded by it. When she came out, everyone couldn't believe what they were seeing.

There Sayaka stood in a black pants, a long sleeved white button up shirt and red tie. Her hair had a purple highlight in it and was in a pony tail and there was a red cape like cloth on her back. What's also very interesting about Sayaka's new form was she had fangs like a vampire. (outfit from Infinity play) Sayaka looked strong and everyone was waiting for her new powers. Sayaka pulled out a blue rose and aimed it towards Miichan. Then suddenly a large blue beam shot out of the rose and aimed straight at Miichan. Miichan managed to dodge but then she saw there were blue rose petals floating in the air. Then suddenly the petals started to glow and then exploded soon after in a series of powerful explosions. Miichan was sent flying and crashed hard. It was then everyone knew Sayaka had evolved.

"Awesome Sayaka! You were so great out there!" Sae said.

"Thank you Sae." Sayaka said while blushing.

The last  one up was Minami who was looking forward to the battle as much as everyone. Minami transformed and then waited for Miichan to make the first move. Miichan charged and swung but Minami managed to deflect with her sword. She pushed Miichan back and then swung and hit Miichan in the leg. As Miichan went down Minami attacked again and managed to cut the wooden sword. Miichan didn't have time to react as Minami came at her hard and cut her arm.Then she attacked the chest area but Miichan saw this and avoided it and then went it for a critical attack to the back. She hit Minami and caused her to fall over. At that time she took her sword and attacked her back again. Minami couldn't move but she was in extreme pain. Miichan was about to finish her off but then Minami's energy rose and a white energy surrounded her. This was the moment Atsuko was waiting for and she was excited to see her new form. It was something Atsuko was anticipating to see and she watched as the energy grew  brighter and brighter. However suddenly something happened and it started to worry the others. The energy turned black and then Minami came out looking like something not right.

There were sharp spikes coming out of her back and she was barely clothed. She was emitting a dark aura and her eyes glowed red. Something wasn't right with Minami but the question was what. Minami tried to stand up but something pushed her back down and made her scream in pain. There on her chest her mark was glowing black and there were cracks around it. Atsuko knew she had to stop Minami but the question was how? Minami screamed in pain and that's when Miichan stepped in. Miichan ran over and quickly punched Minami in the chest. Then a white circle appeared around her mark and then moved and surrounded the mark. Minami's mark glowed white and slowly she turned back to normal. Atsuko quickly ran over to her and checked to make sure she was ok. At the same time Mariko and the others walked over.

"What happened?" Atsuko asked.

"Something went wrong with the evolution." Mariko said.

"What could be wrong?"

"I don't know but I'll look into it. For now don't let her do anymore battles ok?"

"Hai.."

Atsuko picked up Minami and carried her to house.

"Don't worry Minami. We'll figure it out."

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 13
« Reply #136 on: May 26, 2013, 06:58:19 AM »
Great action scenes there...

And I like the evolved idea... and what kind of upgrade they were being...

Ah... But what happened with Minami...?

She seem to have a dark side there....

Like she was evolving into a demon...

Luckily Miichan understood what she was supposed to do to stop the evolution...

What's going to do with Minami...?

Would Atsuko be able to avoid fight anymore?

Would Atsuko be able to enter the competition... if she was not able to collect 10 heart sherd...?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 13
« Reply #137 on: May 26, 2013, 08:33:39 AM »
Eh.... WHAT HAPPENED TO MINAMI........  :? I hope she is alright...

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 13
« Reply #138 on: May 26, 2013, 11:08:45 AM »
Everyone went through their evolutions but Minami's one might be the most interesting of them all but it defected

Hope comes out better for her
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 13
« Reply #139 on: May 26, 2013, 12:07:38 PM »
what happen to Minami ???  :shocked
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