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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 19
« Reply #180 on: July 04, 2013, 04:35:30 AM »
Thanks for the update!! Atsuko's worries are understandable. Hopefully she can figure things out.
And wow, now I'm really curious about Atsuko and Minami's past and connection!!! Can't wait to find out more :D

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 19
« Reply #181 on: July 04, 2013, 08:16:01 AM »
interesting fighting

eh.... what does minami mean by 'it was for Yuko'?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #182 on: July 11, 2013, 04:27:55 AM »
Well here's the next update so I hope you guys like it!
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Chapter 20 part 2

The next day the individual battles were now going to take place. While everyone was gathering to get ready for the first match, Atsuko was sitting in the room staring out the window. Minami walked over to her and shook her shoulder.

"Atsuko let's go."

"Right."

Minami remembered the words that Yuko had told her last night but she really wondered if Atsuko was truly ok. This whole battle things must be a huge rush to her so she was worried that Atsuko wasn't going to be able to handle the pressure. It must be getting to her seeing how she was being very unresponsive to things and shaking sometimes. Minami knew she was going to have to reassure Atsuko when it came time to battle but the question was when will it be theirs? The first round was about to begin and the ones who were fighting was Mayu and Yuki. As they walked into the arena everyone cheered and Minami was worried about Mayu. She remembered how Mayu was anxious about this moment but she thought that Mayu would be ok. The starting shot went off and the battle began. Minami was going to focus on the battle but then she felt something chill down her spine. She looked over and saw Atsuko who was staring at the battle with a strange look on her face. There was something wrong with her and she didn't know what to do.

"Atsuko?"

Atsuko was still silent. Minami thought that she was just concentrating on the battle and decided to leave her. However she couldn't help but feel that same bone chilling feeling in her that she didn't know what it was. Meanwhile with Atsuko she felt something slowly creep into her mind. Everything grew quiet and the background turned dark. She didn't know what was going on but everything suddenly got cold. When Atsuko looked around she saw herself alone and no one was with her. Then suddenly Minami was standing there in front of her. Atsuko reached out and was about to touch her but then suddenly she bursted into flames. Atsuko watched as all of her friends had turned into flames and disappeared. As she sat there in the ashes crying of the lost of her friends, she felt something touch her shoulder. She looked over and saw someone who she had seen before. It was the master of the puppet Yuko. She was the other champion Haruna.

"Tell me.. Do you want to stop this from happening?" she asked.

Atsuko nodded her head and Haruna pulled out a small red crystal. She held it in front of Atsuko and said,

"If you take this you will be granted with enough power to take down anyone in your way. Even me."

"Why are you doing this?" Atsuko asked.

"Because someone needs to end this horrible tournament. I've been the champion for hundreds of years and I've seen many people die. I need someone to put an end to all of this and that someone is you Atsuko."

"So you want me to kill you?"

"Yes.. When I die everything will end and there will be no more puppets."

"What about Minami?"

"She will turn into a human as promised."

Atsuko thought about about it for a long time and then finally she nodded her head.

"Alright I'll do it."

"Good. Then close your eyes and when you open them you'll feel stronger than ever."

Atsuko closed her eyes and she felt something warm enter her chest. The feeling overwhelmed her and she thought she was going to scream. Then suddenly she opened her eyes and just like Haruna said, she did feel stronger. The energy flowing in Atsuko was beyond her wildest imagination and she couldn't believe who good it felt. Atsuko now had more confidence in her body knowing that she could win. As Atsuko was sitting there watching the battle, Minami could feel that something had changed. She looked at her and for a moment she thought she saw a faint black aura surround her. Minami wasn't the only one who noticed it for she could see other puppets slowly backing away from Atsuko. Something had happened to her but the question was what was it. Minami was about to do something but then there was a loud shot and the match had ended. Minami looked down and was relieved to see Mayu standing victorious and the other puppet gone.

The next ones up to battle was Minami and Atsuko. They walked into the arena where their opponent was waiting for them. Their opponent was a puppet who carried twin machetes. Minami transformed into her battle form and when she did she felt something different in her. She felt like there was a strong urge of power inside her. She looked over at Atsuko who had a wild look on her face and Minami wasn't sure what was going on but there wasn't time to think for the puppet came running towards her. Minami jumped up and started to fly high in the air. She then started to fly around the puppet until she found the right spot and then she attacked slicing the puppet's waist. Then she jumped up before the puppet could strike again and then sliced his leg. As the puppet went down Minami was going to finish it with one final slash to the neck. However the puppet wasn't going to give up because it ducked and that was when it held up one of it's machetes. The machete cut Minami's wing and it made her crash.

"Minami look out!"

Minami looked up and saw the puppet coming at her with another blade. Minami didn't have time to get out of the way so instead she used her arm to defend herself. The blade dug deep into Minami and just as the puppet was about to take off Minami's arm entirely, something happened and there was a huge burst of strength in Minami. She grabbed the puppet's arm and then ripped the whole thing off. The puppet stepped back and that's when Minami pulled out the blade and then stepped forward. She swung the blade but the puppet managed to step back. Using his good arm her grabbed the other blade and swung only to miss. Minami swung the blade once again and this time she took off a leg. As the puppet tried to hop away Minami tripped him with the blade and then stood over him. She placed her foot on his chest keeping him in place as she prepared for the final swing.

"Stop!"

Minami looked up and saw the master of the puppet staring at her with pleading eyes. It was obvious she didn't want to die and was now begging for her life. Minami stared at the master for a long time and didn't even notice the puppet raising his other blade and then cutting right into Minami's side. Minami was expecting pain but instead she felt nothing. It was as if the blade never hit in the first place. Minami looked down at the puppet with dark eyes and it was at that moment she felt something burst inside her. The energy was overflowing and was looking for a place to be released. Without even thinking Minami raised the blade and chopped the puppet's head off watching it fly and land next to the body. The battle was over and Minami had won. Slowly she felt the power fade and everything started to calm down inside her. She looked over at Atsuko and was surprised to see something she had never seen in Atsuko before. There was a wild look in her eyes. She looked as if she wanted to kill something but the thing inside her calmed down. Minami was about to walk over to her but then Atsuko walked over to the body of the now dead master. She bent over and then started poking the dead body. Her small pokes turned to slaps and then hard punches. There was laughing coming from her as she continued to punch the body and that was the moment Minami ran over and pulled her back.

"Atsuko get a hold of yourself! Stop this they're dead!"

"Eh? I could've swore I saw her move." Atsuko said.

"Atsuko..."

"What Minami? I was just making sure that we won. There's no harm in that is there?"

Minami was speechless for the rest of the day. She didn't know what had happened to Atsuko but when they got back into the stands, Atsuko had turned back to her normal self. Minami was curious as to what happened to her and thought maybe she should talk to her after the day was over. The next battle up was Jurina and Rena. As Atsuko was watching the battle Minami decided to try to take a peak into Atsuko's mind to see exactly what was going on. She closed her eyes and focused only on Atsuko. With all her strength Minami dove into Atsuko's mind and found herself in a strange room. There were several doors with different labels on them indicating different ages. Minami walked forward down a hall to where there was a large mirror in a room. Minami looked into the mirror and there she saw Atsuko looking normal and cheerful as always. There wasn't anything that Minami thought was wrong so she turned around and decided to leave before she was noticed.

When Minami came back out Jurina and Rena had won their battle and now it was Sayaka and Sae who were up next. Their battle was surprisingly short since their opponent was someone who wasn't really meant for fighting. They didn't even last five minutes before Sayaka blew their head off. That was all the battles for today and the day was over. Now it was time to head back and the next day they would continue the rest of the matches. Minami and Atsuko went back to the room where the others were there to congratulate each other on the wins.

"Hey you did pretty good out there." Mayu said.

"Thanks you too." Minami said.

"Minami you and Atsuko looked super cool out there!" Jurina said.

"I was surprised at how strong you two actually were." Sayaka said.

Atsuko smiled nervously and said,

"Well Minami have trained hard for this moment so we wanted to show how strong we've grown! Right Minami?"

"Right."

"Alright then let's go eat. I'm starving!"

While the masters went out to eat the puppets remained behind. As Atsuko was heading out, Minami saw it once again. There was that same red glow coming from Atsuko and Minami knew she saw it this time. She knew something was up and there was only one person who knew what it could be. When no one was looking Minami snuck out and then walked into the arena. There stacking rocks into piles was Yuko. When she saw Minami she smiled and ran over to her. She sat down next to her and then said,

"You did great today in the battle."

"Thanks.. I was surprised at myself to be honest." Minami said.

"Why? You're really strong Minami maybe you just don't know it."

"Yeah but something felt unnatural. It wasn't coming from me though but instead Atsuko."

With a giggle and sigh, Yuko looked at Minami and said,

"Well just go with it now because it could lead you to victory. From the way I see it this could be your chance to make it to the top and even take me down. But just because you're my friend doesn't mean I'll go easy on you~"

"Will you just shut it." Minami said.

"Hey hey aren't we friends?"

"No we aren't so quit it with the jokes."

"Jeez when did you become such a tight ass Takamidget."

Minami just sighed and looked over at Yuko. There was a heavy feeling in her chest that always weighed her down whenever she saw Yuko. Remembering what she really was, Minami could not accept what she was seeing right there and then. Instead Minami got up and said,

"You wear the mask of my friend yet you and I both know what you really are."

Yuko smirked and then said,

"The seed of evil has been planted. Now all it has to do is grow."

Hearing this made Minami curious but when she turned around to ask what that meant Yuko was gone. Minami decided to leave it for now and get back to the others.

"Atsuko~"

"Hmmm?"

Atsuko turned around and saw no one there. It was just her and the shadows that surrounded her. Atsuko continued to walk but once again she heard her name was called. When she stopped there was no one there though so Atsuko wondered if it was just someone pulling a prank on her. However when her name was called once more something changed.The whole scene changed and Atsuko was now standing before a large mirror. In the mirror she saw the reflection of herself. Then suddenly her reflection disappeared and a new one popped up. It was the reflection of a hooded figure and Atsuko couldn't tell who it was. Then the figure pulled down their hood and Atsuko was surprised to see it was her however there was something different about her. There were strange marks on her face and her eyes glowed red.

"Who are you?" Atsuko asked.

"You." she said.

"Really?"

"Yes! I'm the other you. The more powerful you."

"More powerful?"

"Yes and if you ever need my help just come and get me. I'll be here."

"Wow thanks but I think I'm fine on my own."

"Really? Then you didn't know that the reason you won today was because of my power?"

"Eh?"

Atsuko stared at the other her in the mirror and the reflection just laughed. Atsuko couldn't believe what the reflection had just told her but she then realized that she was right. That power was not hers but the reflections. Atsuko walked a little closer to the mirror and have a better look when suddenly the reflection reached out and tried to grab Atsuko. Luckily she had pulled back just in time and the reflection silently cursed to herself.

"I was so close!"

"Why are you here?" Atsuko asked.

"Because you brought me here. You created me and now I'm not going anywhere. So just remember this. If you ever find yourself in a sticky situation, call me and I'll be here to happily help you~"

"Ok.. thanks."

With that Atsuko came back to reality and saw that the others were calling her. She walked over to them and they all went to bed that night. Atsuko didn't know exactly what had just happened but she knew that it could possibly be trouble in the future. She wondered though if the other her really could help. She was stronger and it was because of her that they won. That night Atsuko started to reconsider what the reflection had said. Little did she know that slowly, the seed of evil was starting to grow inside her. Slowly it's roots dug into her flesh and were fusing with her body. It was something that she nor anyone else knew for now but in the future, it could cause very very horrible problems.

The next morning Atsuko woke up feeling very strange. It was as if there was a harsh burning in her chest. She walked into the bathroom and in the mirror she saw it. There on her chest was the red crystal Haruna have given her. It had burrowed itself into her body and whenever she tried to remove it, the crystal would burn her. She didn't have time to worry about it for it was almost time for the next battle and she had to hurry. Atsuko ran out into the main hall to catch up with the others but then she suddenly ran into someone. It was the man who had killed that one boy during the team battles. He had a smug smile on his face and when Atsuko tried to move around him he wouldn't move. Instead he pulled out a blade and said,

"I'm sorry but I don't think you'll make it to the next match."

He swung his blade and hit Atsuko cutting her arm. When Atsuko tried to run there was someone behind her preventing her from escaping. She was trapped and there was nowhere to go.

"Looks like this is the end for you."

The man raised his blade and then brought it down on Atsuko.

"Minami!"

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Wah what's gonna happen to Atsuko?! Find out on the next update!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #183 on: July 11, 2013, 04:52:56 AM »
Thanks for the update, looks like things are getting dangerous for Atsuko and Minami in more ways than one!

The power Atsuko accepted clearly is a dark power :O

And hm...did something take Yuko over or is she just no longer herself??? Can't wait to find out!

& Atsuko is in trouble at the end there!!!!

looking forward to the next update :)

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #184 on: July 11, 2013, 05:23:02 AM »
Whoa Acchan is trouble and if Takamina don't come she is a goner
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #185 on: July 11, 2013, 01:50:03 PM »
so great... but so much stuff just happened...
ah... hard to say... the ending segment worries me

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #186 on: July 11, 2013, 04:45:12 PM »
This may sounds creepy. But, will you write more about atsuko getting evil,
like killing other Master with her own hand.
I really like the scene she slap the dead Master on her individual.
I kinda like the blackside of Atsuko because i think she endure too much,
I want her to let all burden flows out from her. Even its only in a fic.

Yoroshiku ne  :)
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48G FTW. Yoroshiku.

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #187 on: July 11, 2013, 07:05:51 PM »
Kowai~ Atsuko!!! :shocked This is some serious freaking business going on now!!!
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 2
« Reply #188 on: July 12, 2013, 12:56:45 AM »
WARNING: CONTAINS GRAPHIC VIOLENCE. PLEASE DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE DISTURBED BY GORE!!!!!!
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Chapter 20 part 2

"Minami!"

She heard it and knew exactly who it was. The shock in her body made her realize who was calling her. Atsuko was in trouble and now it was up to her to find her. Minami got up and ran inside trying to find her. She looked in every room in every hall but there was still no sign of Atsuko anywhere. Minami focused really hard trying to find her and then she felt a faint signal. It was coming from the very back and it was slowly growing weaker. Minami rushed over to the area and then stopped in front of a door. She could hear Atsuko inside and was ready to burst the door down when suddenly something stopped her. Minami fell to the ground and her body shook all over. It was as if something had just stopped her. There was something evil on the other side of the door. Something dark and powerful. She couldn't exactly tell what it was inside but she knew it wasn't good. Using her senses, Minami focused on trying to see what was on the other side of the door.

Inside the room Minami could see three different personas inside. She could see the white aura of Atsuko and there were two other ones. There was a blue one and a green one. The blue one was holding a sword above Atsuko and Minami knew that Atsuko was going to get killed if she didn't do something. Just as the blue one was about to swing the sword something happened that even Minami couldn't tell. However the next thing she knew, the blue aura had vanished and now only the green one remains. It was then Minami saw that there was Atsuko but there was also a black aura standing behind her. The black aura stepped forward and gabbed the green one. Then the green one vanished and there was a loud thud coming from inside. Minami watched as the black aura went back over to Atsuko and faded inside her. When Minami opened the door there sitting on the floor was Atsuko. Minami rushed to her and said,

"Atsuko are you alright?"

"Yes I'm alright." she said.

"What happened?"

"That master and his puppet were trying to kill me.."

"Well it's ok you're safe now."

Minami helped Atsuko up and then started to walk out into the main hall. On their way out, Minami saw just a glimpse of what had happened to the master and puppet. There was blood everywhere and two things that didn't even look like bodies on the floor. When they made it to the arena, there was a battle going on and it looked like it was about over. As they sat down Minami was focusing on Atsuko to make sure everything was ok and didn't even notice what was going on down in the arena. There was a loud scream from a voice that was very familiar to her. Minami looked down and there laying on the ground with a blade held up to her throat was Miichan. Minami couldn't believe it was her and she thought that it was just a joke. However suddenly the puppet brought their blade down and it was all over. Miichan's head was taken off and rolled off the arena stage.

"Mariko!"

Soon after Mariko's body vanished along with Miichan. The battle was over and now Mariko and Miichan were gone. Minami silently held her head down to honor the death of her close friend. When she looked over at Atsuko she was sobbing with tears gushing out of her eyes. Minami wrapped her arms around Atsuko trying to comfort her but instead Atsuko stood up and then ran into the arena. She wasn't supposed to be in there but Minami had no choice but to go in with her. She walked over to the puppet that had killed Miichan and said,

"I'm going to kill you!"

It wasn't their turn to battle but the champions allowed Atsuko and Minami to fight. Minami didn't even get a chance to transform for Atsuko was the one who went into battle. There were no rules saying that Atsuko couldn't fight so she went in. She was given a sword and that was all for she was fighting a puppet and there was nothing else they could do. Atsuko took the sword and charged straight towards the puppet. The puppet smiled and got ready to fight but then something happened. The puppet didn't move at all. As if frozen in time, the puppet was still and did not move. The master shouted at her to move but she did not move. Atsuko got closer and closer and then when she was right in front of her, Atsuko took the sword and sliced the puppet's arm off. Then she kicked her to the ground and got on top of her and stabbed the puppet's other arm pinning it to the ground. She then took the puppet's blade and held it up to her neck.

"Tell me what happens when you do this?"

Atsuko took the blade and stabbed the puppet's stomach. She sliced across the waist creating a  huge gash. The puppet screamed but Atsuko simply smiled and reached inside the wound. She grabbed whatever she could find and ripped it out of the puppet. Atsuko wasn't done yet for she took the blade and this time sliced it down the chest cavity. She tore open the chest revealing the puppet's heart. Using her hand Atsuko gently stroked the heart watching it glow with every beat. There was fear in the puppet's eyes as she watched Atsuko stare at the heart. She then decided to get off the puppet and walk over towards the master. The master tried to run but there was no escape. Atsuko grabbed the master and pulled her over next to her puppet. She then stabbed the master in the back of the knees so she couldn't run and then took two giant rocks and crushed her arms back. With both puppet and master side by side on the ground, Atsuko smiled wildly.

"Nee do you wanna know what it feels like to lose someone close to you?"

Atsuko giggled and then pulled out one of the blades she took. She moved down to the legs of the master and grabbed one of them. She grabbed the left foot and then with one chop she chopped off the foot of the master. The master screamed in pain and the puppet could do nothing but watch. She then grabbed the leg and stabbed the inner thigh. The girl screamed as her blood poured out but Atsuko still wanted more. She dragged the blade down all the way to the end of the leg. Then she grabbed the two pieces of flesh and split them open more exposing the bone. Atsuko did the same thing to the other leg and then she moved up to the chest. Atsuko took the blade and cut the master's cheeks showing more of her teeth. The master cried and tried to beg for Atsuko to stop but she didn't. Atsuko slid the blade between the master's teeth and made her open. Using the blade to hold the mouth open Atsuko took the master's foot and shoved it inside her mouth. Forcing it deep in throat the master gagged and even threw up. Because she couldn't get rid of it though, she was forced to swallow it. Gargling and twitching from all the pain, the master finally died after choking on her own vomit and blood.

Soon after the puppet also died and there was nothing left. The crowd was silent for there were no cheers. Atsuko took the blade and cut off the head of the master and held it high. She screamed and then threw it on the ground. Then she walked over to Minami who was completely and utterly shocked. Atsuko grabbed Minami and looked at her with tears in her eyes.

"Minami.. Mariko is gone..."

Minami hugged Atsuko and tried to calm her down since she was crying so much. They walked inside and everyone who saw Atsuko backed up or ran away. Everyone was afraid of her and even Minami herself was afraid. When they walked into the room everyone was there and they all stared at Atsuko. Atsuko didn't say anything but instead she went to her bed and fell asleep. Minami told everyone to go outside and talk about what happened today.

"I can't believe Mariko lost.." Yuki said.

"I'm going to miss her so much." Jurina said.

"That was one of us but pretty soon who knows who will be next." Sayaka said.

There was a moment of silence before Rena suddenly said,

"Minami what happened to Atsuko?"

"I don't know." Minami said.

"She was insane! Like worse than Gekikara insane!" Jurina said.

"Whatever happened to her we need to figure it out before she does it again. We don't want her doing something that disturbing to anyone else. I saw ten people throw up in the stands while watching Atsuko today. I'm tell you Minami we need to control her or find out what caused this. We all know Atsuko is a sweet girl so whatever it is we need to figure it out." Sae said.

"Everyone keep an eye on her and if it happens again then let me know and I'll stop her." Minami said.

Everyone went to bed but Minami went to see Yuko. She walked over and there was Yuko standing in her usual spot. This time she walked over and pinned Yuko against the wall. She looked at her with a serious look and then said,

"What did you do to Atsuko?"

Yuko smirked and said,

"Me? I did nothing~"

"Yes you did now tell me."

"I''m telling you I did nothing. Maybe master did something."

"Where is she?"

"Up in the room probably."

"Take me to her."

Yuko led Minami up to the room they were staying in and when she walked in she was immediately pushed to the ground. She could feel her arms being tied and then sat up and brought to a chair. When she looked up she saw Yuko standing next to her master. She walked over to Minami and asked,

"So.. What brings you here?"

"I want to know what you did to Atsuko." Minami said.

"Ah you're master? I did nothing. I just gave her a little pep talk."

"By the looks of what happened today something tells me there was something more than just a pep talk."

The master giggled and said,

"Well we could say I also gave her a little present."

"What did you do?"

"I planted a seed and it has now spread it's roots inside her. Try to take it out and she will die."

"Why did you do this?!"

"Why? She was weak and frightened. She wanted to become stronger and so I gave her the strength. She wants to win so you can become human. She only wishes for your happiness and so I helped her."

"You made her go insane!"

"No I simply helped her. Now tell me.. how badly do you want to become human?"

Minami grew silent. She knew that she wanted to become human very badly but after seeing what she did to Atsuko, she's starting to reconsider her thoughts.

"Atsuko is doing this for you. Why are you trying to stop her?" Haruna said.

"Because this isn't her! This.. is something else. It's dark and evil. It isn't Atsuko."

"Say what you want but this is what she wants and if you stop her you'll only make things worse. She's already been corrupted and all that is left is to let it spread. Once it takes over she will be stronger than ever."

Minami couldn't say anything for she knew there was nothing she could do. Haruna had won and now all Minami could do is watch as Atsuko is slowly being eaten away by the darkness that she had accepted and now it feeds off her. She didn't know what was going to happen next but she knew that it wasn't going to be pleasant. As Minami was talking to Haruna and Yuko, Atsuko was in her bed dreaming.

"We did good today~"

"I can't believe I did all that..."

"Hey don't worry you'll get used to it after a while. Just relax~"

"Still did you really have to go that far? Why did you make them suffer?"

"They killed one of your best friends! Don't you think they deserved it?"

"Well..."

The reflection walked over to Atsuko and placed her hands on her shoulders. She hugged her from behind and said,

"If we keep things up like this, you'll win for sure. You'll win and give Minami her humanity back. Not to mention all the power you could have. You could even bring back Miichan and Mariko!"

"I can?"

"Yes and you can do much much more Atsuko. Just stick with me and I'll help you win."

"Wah thank you so much!"

Atsuko hugged her reflection and the reflection smiled and hugged her. Little did Atsuko know, the seed was slowly making it's way deeper and deeper closer to the one thing that is still untouched by darkness. Her heart.

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I think afer this chapter, a lot of my readers will think I'm mentally disturbed... Let's find out! Find out what happens next time!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 2 WARNING: EXTREME GORE
« Reply #189 on: July 12, 2013, 01:25:50 AM »
Well it helped the story along with the deaths and what not.

I feel Acchan will either get consumed or Minami will pierce the light into her.  (I'm feeling for the second one if they win because it would create a realistic sense of accomplishment) :nervous
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 2 WARNING: EXTREME GORE
« Reply #190 on: July 12, 2013, 01:35:34 AM »
hrm, that was great~~
it's ok, you aint mental~
...acchan.... me: doesn't know how to respond to how acchan is right now
takamina is worried... lots...

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 2 WARNING: EXTREME GORE
« Reply #191 on: July 12, 2013, 02:51:55 AM »
Kowai Kowai Kowai Kowai Kowai!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :shocked:

Now, what's gonna happen? I've had ideas on what, but... :catglare: I'm not give any away.
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 2 WARNING: EXTREME GORE
« Reply #192 on: July 12, 2013, 07:21:05 PM »
Mariko and Miichan.... :mon runcry:
well..they got avenged...but Acchan... woah...  :mon wtf:
Takamina...really worries for Acchan...  :mon noprob:
So Acchan believes that she can bring back Mariko and Miichan... huh... hmmm.....   :mon suspect:

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 20 part 2 WARNING: EXTREME GORE
« Reply #193 on: July 13, 2013, 09:33:08 AM »
Ow! My freaking limbs! That was... Atsuko... Scary.. :shocked

Anyway.. Great up! :twothumbs

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« Reply #194 on: July 24, 2013, 03:58:09 AM »
Well here's the next update! Sorry it took me so long but I hope you like it!
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Chapter 21

The next day it was time for the continuation of the individual battles. The last couple of pairs were Rena and Jurina, Sayaka and Sae, Yuki and Mayu, Atsuko and Minami. They were the only ones left in the tournament and now is the day to decide who will be victorious. The first battle up was betwen Yuki and Rena against Jurina and Rena. Atsuko watched as the four stepped up to battle arena. They stepped into the middle and then when the signal was given, they started the battle. Mayu was the first to move as she pulled out her sword and charged towards Rena. Rena stepped back as Mayu swung and then shot her threads out and wrapped around Mayu's body. She tightened the threads around her and was ready to squeeze her tight but then Mayu cut the threads and jumped up. She moved her sword downwards and managed to cut Rena's shoulder. However Rena also had some tricks in her for as Mayu was coming down, Rena used her threads and formed tiny drills. She launched them into Mayu's shoulder and leg and they drilled into her body. Mayu had to get far away from Rena and pull the drills out.

"Mayu watch out!"

Mayu looked up and saw Rena coming close to her with a large drill. Mayu didn't have time to dodge and had no choice but to try and block. Using her sword, Mayu placed it in front of her at the right time. The metal clashed and sparks flew. The two were pushing each other back trying to take over. Then suddenly Mayu's sword broke and the drill pushed forward. Mayu ducked and the drill impaled her left shoulder. As it drilled into her body Mayu screamed in pain and tried to get away. However the more she struggled the more damage she did to herself. Mayu was trapped and so Rena was ready to make the final move. She made a drill with her other hand and was getting ready to take off Mayu's head. Then suddenly Mayu was gone and there was nothing there. No one knew where Mayu went until Jurina shouted,

"Rena above you!"

Rena looked up and saw Mayu coming down on her with only one arm. Rena tried to step back but something prevented her from moving. She looked down and saw Mayu's other arm holding onto her leg. Mayu came down hard and slashed Rena's right arm. Now both of them only had one arm and now the battle was about to get serious. Something happened to Mayu that not even Yuki knew. It was something inside Mayu that suddenly came out and was now ready to burst. Her legs started to glow and looked like they were vibrating at an incredible speed. On Rena's side, Rena was now leaving and Gekikara came out. With her right arm gone, Gekikara couldn't use her fire punch but only the chaos touch which only works when she has a hold of Mayu. However the new thing with Mayu was something no one knew. Gekikara lashed out and tried to attack but Mayu vanished and reappeared behind her. Mayu threw a punch and then vanished again. It took a while for Rena to realize it but Mayu was actually moving at an incredible speed. She was moving so fast that it look like she was disappearing and reappearing.

"Can't catch me!"

Mayu started running circles around Gekikara and throwing punches at her. Gekikara may have strength but Mayu had speed and was much faster than Gekikara. The more Mayu punched the weaker Gekikara became. Then at one point, Mayu struck and hit one of Gekikara's eyes. Now blinded in one eye, Gekikara's chance of winning was becoming very low. Gekikara shouted and screamed trying to grab Mayu but had no luck. Mayu threw another punch to the stomach and this time Mayu didn't have time to run. Gekikara managed to grab Mayu and hold her tightly. A blast of black lightening shot from Gekikara to Mayu and entered her body. When Gekikara let go, Mayu fell to the ground and started shaking.

"Mayu snap out of it! Don't let the madness take you!" Yuki shouted.

Mayu was now screaming and crying on the ground. Kicking and thrashing Mayu looked like she was having a seizure. Gekikara giggled and then started to search for the sword Mayu had. As Mayu was screaming in agony Gekikara searched through the rubble.

"Mayu please wake up. It's not real!"

"I'm sorry Yuki I'm so sorry!!"

"Mayu wake up!"

"Finish her now Gekikara!" Jurina said.

Gekikara found the sword and was now slowly making her way over to Mayu. However suddenly something happened and Gekikara fell to the ground as well. There was something happening where Mayu somehow turned Gekikara's power against her and now she was suffering from the power as well. Not sure what to do, Jurina decided to grab the sword herself and finish Mayu off. However that's when Yuki came in as well and tackled Jurina to the ground. The two fought for the sword scratching and pulling each other's hair. The fight was fierce but eventually Jurina got the sword and was now running towards Mayu. She got on top of her and was about to plunge the blade into Mayu but then suddenly Mayu opened her eyes and saw Jurina. Quickly she reacted and pulled out a hidden dagger she had. She stabbed Jurina in the chest and seconds later Jurina died.

"JURINA!!"

That was the last thing Gekikara said before she turned into ash and faded away. The winner of the battle was Mayu and Yuki and Jurina and Rena were gone. With that Mayu's arm came back and the two walked off the stage hand in hand but with a cold expression on their faces. When the two were gone, the next battle was preparing and the ones battling were Atsuko and Minami against Sayaka and Sae. The four walked onto the battle arena and prepared for the final battle. Minami and Atsuko were ready and weren't going to show any mercy towards Sayaka and Sae. They knew this day would come and they knew this would happen eventually. The time has come and now it is time to decide who will be victorious.

"Minami let's go."

Minami jumped up and flew high into the air and that was exactly what Sayaka was waiting for. Sayaka shot out her rose petals and they surrounded the air. When Minami got close to one, the petal started to glow and soon after it exploded starting a chain reaction of explosions. Minami did her best to try to avoid the explosions and managed to get past most of it. However Minami didn't notice it but Sayaka managed to get a petal into one of Minami's feathers. The petal went of and it blew off Minami's entire left wing. Minami crashed onto the ground and was now unable to fly.

"Minami watch out!"

Minami looked up and saw more petals heading towards her. They made a spiral tunnel and surrounded Minami trapping her in it. Knowing what would happen if she moved, Minami remained perfectly still. Slowly the flower petals started to move closer and closer to her and soon they will completely swallow her and blow her to pieces. There was nowhere for her to escape and now it was only a matter of time before the petals closed in. However suddenly there was something surging inside her that was slowly growing. Then there was a sharp burning sensation on her back. She could feel something stretching and growing until suddenly she felt something warm surround her. The petals touched and there was a loud explosion. There was a lot of smoke but everyone was expecting Minami to be dead. However to their surprise Minami was alive. There in the smoke was a small white ball. The ball started to move and then stood up on two feet. There standing in a silver plated armor was Minami. Her feathers on her other wing turned into a protective cover and covered her entire body. 

"Sayaka don't let that stop you! We can still win!" Sae said.

Sayaka shot more petals at Minami and this time Minami didn't move. The petals hit but there was no damage. The feathers protected Minami and weren't letting anything touch her. Minami decided to use this to her advantage and decided to charge towards Sayaka. She swung and punched Sayaka hard in the face. Sayaka fell back and Minami tried to punch her again but Sayaka managed to get away and shoot a rose petal that produced smoke. In the smoke Sayaka got further away and then this time she pulled out a very large rose. She threw it into the air and then multiple roses came out of it. They surrounded Minami and then started firing multiple rounds. The rounds had no effect on Minami and instead Minami took her right hand and formed a really sharp blade from the feather armor. Minami turned to Sayaka and then charged at her.

She swung her blade and managed to cut Sayaka's arm but when she tried to attack again she missed and Sayaka punched her in the mouth. Minami stepped back and Sayaka advanced forward with another powerful blow to the gut. Even though she had the armor on, she could still feel the punch. If she wasn't wearing the armor Minami was sure that there would be a hole where Sayaka had punched her. Sayaka went in for another punch but this time Minami ducked and kicked her in the leg pushing her down. As her head went down Minami raised her foot above it and was preparing to bring it down on her. However her foot ended up hitting nothing and instead Sayaka kicked Minami shooting her back. Then Sayaka pulled out a blue rose with light and dark blue petals. Sayaka bit her finger and then dripped some of her blood onto the rose. The rose glowed and then suddenly a large sword came out of it. The rose had turned into sword and not just any sword but a sword meant for quick movements. Sayaka took the sword and charged towards Minami. Minami formed on of her own out of the armor and the two began a sword fight.

Minami thought she was invincible with the armor she had on but sadly she was wrong. When Sayaka sliced into Minami's leg she actually cut through and scratched her leg a little. There was something about the sword that was letting it cut through and Minami needed to know what it was. Sayaka swung and Minami blocked it with her sword. Then she reached out and when she felt the sword she felt a harsh burning sensation coming from the sword. The thing was as hot as lava which explains why it was able to cut through so easy. The sword was practically blue fire. Minami knew this was going to be a problem if she didn't do something soon so she backed away and then pulled out two little daggers. She charged towards Sayaka who was waiting for her and when they collided Sayaka managed to block one but the other dagger Minami had went straight into her leg. To make things worse the dagger was actually a feather and when Minami let go of it, the feather expanded making the wound worse. Sayaka fell back and that was the moment Minami thought would be perfect to finish her off.

However Sayaka had a little surprise of her own for she puffed her cheeks and spat out blue fire. The fire burned Minami and melted some of the armor on her. Minami's head and chest was now exposed which wasn't good for her. Sayaka spat more flames and Minami did her best to try to avoid them. However suddenly Sayaka held out her sword and Minami ran right into it. The sword sliced Minami's arm causing major damage. Then Sayaka grabbed her by the head and slammed her into the ground. She placed her foot on her chest and raised her sword above her head. Minami thought it was the end but there was something in Sayaka that Minami noticed. Her hands were trembling and there were tears running down her eyes.

"I... I can't.." she said.

Minami realized that Sayaka didn't have the strength to kill her. She didn't know what to do because everything seemed to have stopped for a moment. Seeing Sayaka's crying face made Minami realize that she was being forced to kill one of her best friends. Something no human or puppet would want to do. Because fate is cruel though, here they were fighting to the death. In this very moment, Minami was reminded of her past. What she had done back then and what Sayaka is doing now. She understands the pain of it all.

"Minami get up and kill her!" Atsuko screamed.

Minami wouldn't move. She didn't care what Atsuko said this was something that only her and Sayaka were allowed to handle.

"Sayaka she's not your friend remember! We want to win don't we?!" Sae shouted.

"I can't!"

Sayaka dropped her sword and fell to her knees.

"I can't do it.."

Minami stood up and looked down upon Sayaka with a sad look on her face. With her sword in one hand and a fist in the other, Minami bit her lip regretting the thing she was about to do. She looked at Sayaka who kept her head down and continued to cry silently. Minami sighed and patted Sayaka's head gently. Then she raised the sword high into the air and said,

"Any last words?"

Sayaka looked up and said,

"Yeah... Win Minami. Win for not just yourself but everyone who sacrificed their lives for this. For Mariko, Miichan, Rena, Jurina, Sae and me.. Win for us Minami so we know that we didn't die for nothing."

Hearing those words left a heavy feeling in her heart and understood Sayaka's final wish. She knew that she was going to win for everyone for their honor and sacrifice. Minami nodded her head and then prepared to make the final strike. However suddenly someone pushed her out of the way and Minami fell to the ground. She looked up and she saw Atsuko with an angry look on her face. She grabbed the sword and quickly stabbed Sayaka in the neck. As her body fell to the ground Minami heard Sayaka's last words to her.

"Arigatou.."

Then her body turned into a cluster of blue rose petals. Meanwhile Sae's body turned into a cluster of red rose petals and the wind carried the petals away. As the petals faded into the distance, Atsuko looked down at Minami. She raised her hand and then slapped Minami hard in the face. With a dark glare in her eyes Atsuko said to her,

"Next time I tell you to kill someone you do it."

Then she walked out of the arena leaving Minami alone. Later on that night, she met up with Mayu and Yuki and the three of them talked. They were happy that they made it to the final round but were also kind of sad. All of their friends were now gone and it was just them. They were also concerned about Atsuko. There was something about her that was changing and it was up to Minami to figure out what it was. The three said goodnight and then went to bed. However Minami went up to Haruna's room and this time planning on finding and explanation. She charged in and she then knocked Yuko out quickly and pinned Haruna down.

"I don't care if what you did to Atsuko is making her stronger it's making her mad. She only cares about winning and killing. This isn't Atsuko. I want my Atsuko back!"

Haruna smiled and said,

"I'm afraid I can't do that. The seed has taken a liking to Atsuko and I don't think it'll be leaving anytime soon."

"Take it out or I'll take you out.."

"Do you really think you can?"

Haruna vanished and then reappeared behind her. She pulled her arm back and then pinned her against a table. She leaned in and whispered,

"The damage has already been done."

Minami struggled but Haruna pressed her down further.

"Tell me do you know what happens when the puppet wins?" she asked.

"Yes they get their humanity back." Minami said.

"And do you know where they get that humanity from?"

"...Where?"

"The master."

"You're lying!"

"I'm afraid not. You see in order to obtain humanity you cannot create it so easily. It takes time and effortless work. Instead we've developed a way to gain it much easier. That way is by taking the humanity away from the master itself."

"Then what will happen to the master?"

"With its humanity lost, the master will become a puppet and become the most power puppet earning the title as the puppet master."

Minami's body froze as if it was stone. What Haruna just said made everything in Minami's head crash and explode into pieces. If the humanity comes from the master then that means that if Minami wins then she will take Atsuko's humanity and Atsuko will become a puppet.

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Well now that Minami knows the truth, what will happen between her and Atsuko? Find out in the next update when they go into the battle before the final round. Who will in? Find out next time!

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 21
« Reply #195 on: July 24, 2013, 07:22:42 AM »
Omg lots of people died already...

Now, Minami knew that if she win.. She would take Atsuko's humanity..,

What's she going to do about the tournament now?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 21
« Reply #196 on: July 24, 2013, 01:09:48 PM »
shock shock shock
so much just happened...
Acchan baka!!
WMatsui died... Sayaka died...? (TT_TT)
Master's humanity transfers to puppet and becomes a puppet? Waa...
Can't wait for update... wanna know... well, no pressure, take your time

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« Reply #197 on: July 24, 2013, 06:20:15 PM »
Well the best thing seems to be find another life source to gain her humanity back or risk dying in the next round
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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 22
« Reply #198 on: July 27, 2013, 02:06:37 AM »
Time for the final battle! We all know who's gonna win but let's watch anyways! Hope you like it~
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Chapter 22

It was time for the final battle. Everything now came down to this and there was no way out. It was time to find out who will remain victorious and who will die. Everything has been set into place and now all that's left to do is move it into action. Minami and Atsuko walked out into the main battle arena where Mayu and Yuki were already waiting. They stepped forward and waited for the battle to start. When the signal went off, the battle begun and no one moved. There wasn't a single sign of movement with either Minami a or Mayu. It was just a silent stare down. Then suddenly, Mayu was the first to make a move where she pulled out her sword only this time she stabbed it into the ground. The sworded fused with the ground and suddenly threads shot out of the ground and surrounded the two in a capsule like structure. No one outside could see or hear them. It was just Mayu and Minami no one else. Atsuko and Yuki were outside not sure what exactly was going on. Minami herself was also confused for the only one who seemed to know what was going on was Mayu.

"We need to talk." she said.

"Aren't we supposed to be fighting?" Minami said.

"There's something I want to warn you about."

"And what is that?"

"There is something about Atsuko that we all noticed a long time ago"

"What?"

"Rena and I talked about before and agreed that there is something inside Atsuko that is eating her. The Atsuko you know is being eaten away and replaced with something else. Something horribly dark."

"So what should I do?"

"You need to get rid of it."

Minami had no idea what was going on but outside there was a storm brewing. Inside Atsuko's mind the other person inside her was slowly taking over.

"What are they doing?!" Atsuko asked.

"They're talking about something. I have no idea what though." the reflection said.

"I wanna know what they're saying."
 
"Well we won't know unless we get in there."

"But I can't! I'm too weak."

"No but we know someone who can~"

The reflection pointed to Yuki who was sitting on the ground waiting for Minami and Mayu. Together Atsuko and the reflection started to move towards Yuki planning to do something really really bad. Meanwhile inside, Mayu was explaining how to remove the thing that is eating Atsuko.

"So I just have to remove the crystal in her chest and she'll go back to normal?" Minami asked.

"That's what I think."

"Alright thanks Mayu."

"Then I'm going to release the barrier and when I do we grab Atsuko and rip that thing out of her deal?"

"Deal."

With that Mayu removed the sword and the threads went away. When Minami looked around she didn't see Atsuko anywhere. Then suddenly she heard a scream and when she looked over there was Atsuko on top of Minami with her hands wrapped around her neck squeezing the life out of her. Mayu rushed over to her and pulled Atsuko off of Yuki. Then Minami grabbed Atsuko and pulled her back. Atsuko was shaking and thrashing like a wild dog. She was determined to kill Yuki and if Minami had let her go then who knows what could have happened. When Yuki was alright Mayu walked over to Atsuko who was still fighting Minami. Mayu was about to open Atsuko's shirt but then Atsuko knocked Minami back and then grabbed Mayu's sword. She charged towards Yuki and was ready to stab her. However Minami managed to get to her first and pull her back. When she touched her though, something happened that even Minami couldn't comprehend. It was as if something slid it's way into her and took over her body. There was a cold shiver throughout her entire body and then she heard a dark whisper.

"Kill them all.."

Minami let go of Atsuko who remained unconscious on the ground. Meanwhile the there was something changing in Minami that she didn't really know what was happening but she couldn't stop it when she tried. She looked over at Mayu and she didn't see Mayu herself. She just saw a blank face and a strange fuzzy outline. There was something inside Minami's chest that was wanting to burst out yet something was holding it back. She felt a tight grip around her neck and something like knives sticking out of her back. The same voice whispered to her,

"Kill her.."

Then like that Minami's body moved on instinct and she was aiming towards Mayu. It was like Minami could control her body yet she couldn't. There was something that was just telling her over and over to kill Mayu. The voice was telling her that Mayu was only going to betray her. Minami didn't know what to believe. Her mind was somewhere else but her body was moving on whatever it felt like doing. All emotions and feelings had left Minami and now she was just a moving mass. She punched her hard in the stomach and then threw her high into the air. As she came down, Minami pulled out one of her wings and watched as Mayu fell right next to the wing. When Minami looked back she saw Mayu's side bleeding. She was hoping the wing would cut the neck but Mayu must have moved. Mayu got up and quickly backed away trying to get away from Minami. Then to make sure that Yuki would be safe, Mayu put a barrier around her. Then she turned to face Minami and said,

"I didn't want to do this."

Minami stood there not sure what Mayu was doing but the thing she saw next was something truly horrifying. Mayu opened her chest, reached in, and pulled out her own heart. Minami thought it was suicide but on the contrary it was something much different. Mayu was still alive only in her eyes there was only plain white and her body was glowing a strange blue aura. Mayu took her heart and palced it inside the barrier that Yuki was inside. She closed the barrier and then turned to face Minami. The aura grew and grew and then slowly Mayu's body started to change. Blades came out of Mayu's forearms and calves. Her legs grew a little taller and shoulders elongated along with her hair turning white. Minami had no idea what was happening to Mayu but whatever it was it didn't look good. It was almost as if Mayu had evolved again. A third evolution. Mayu turned to look at Minami and then she vanished. Not knowing where she went Minami tried to look around but then suddenly she felt a sharp pain to her right shoulder. She looked over and saw it cut and bleeding and pain was pulsing throughout the wound.

"Please this is nothing.."

The wound healed on it's own and it was as if nothing was there. Minami looked over and saw Mayu staring at her with a blank expression on her face. She then charged at Minami again this time aiming low with her legs. Minami dodged it but Mayu moved up somehow and then kicked Minami in the chest cutting it open. The wound healed quickly however Mayu was still attacking and made several more cuts to Minami's waist and abdomen. Minami fell and while she was taking the time to heal Mayu aimed towards Atsuko who was still knocked out. Minami knew it would be the end of her if she got to her. Therefore Minami sprung into action and dashed towards Mayu at full speed. This is what Mayu wanted for when Minami was close enough, Mayu grabbed Minami by the head and slammed her into the ground. Before Minami had the chance to move out of the way Mayu slammed her foot onto Minami's head and pushed it deep into the ground preventing any movement.

Minami felt Mayu grab one of her wings and then slowly, she ripped off the whole thing and threw it aside. The pain shot throughout her body and it was something that she could not bare. She thought she was going to black out but then suddenly she felt something shoot out of her back. It caused Mayu to back away and Minami was able to stand. She looked over and saw something moving on her back. It was shifting and changing until it created the shape of a wing. On her right side was a white wing and on the left was a black one. Quite an interesting turn out but Minami didn't care at the moment because Mayu was coming towards her once again. She was fast and too fast for Minami to keep up with so before Mayu could do anything Minami jumped up and took to the sky. She flew high thinking there was no way Mayu could reach her however she was wrong.

Mayu jumped up and reached to her level where she grabbed Minami and started to bring her down. Minami couldn't get out of Mayu's hold no matter how hard she struggled. Right as they were about to hit the ground Mayu let go and Minami slammed face first hard into the ground. Mayu wasn't done with her yet as she grabbed Minami's head and dragged it across the arena. She then threw Minami's body straight into a pillar that came down on her. Mayu thought that Minami was dead but to her surprise Minami was alive and very well. Black spikes shot out and impaled Mayu in several different areas. They lifted Mayu into the air and then out of the rubble came Minami with half of her face gone. Most of the interior structures could be seen moving and bleeding. However Minami didn't seem to care as she walked over to Mayu and looked at her for a long time. Mayu showed no sign of fear or emotion. It was as if she had become a lifeless doll. Minami twisted the spikes deeper into Mayu's body but there wasn't a single cry of pain. She ripped off her arms and legs and still nothing. The Mayu that Minami was gone and now all that was left was a lifeless shell. Minami kept stabbing Mayu's body repeatedly until suddenly her whole body vanished. Minami looked over and saw the barrier that was around Yuki had vanished. With the barrier gone Minami Yuki sitting there with a knife in her chest and in her hands was Mayu's heart.

"M..Ma...yu..."

As Yuki's body vanished, the heart fell out of her hands and rolled over to Minami. Minami just stared at it as she watched the blue glow slowly fade away. Deciding to end it all, Minami raised her foot and crushed the heart ending the battle and claiming her as the victor. As soon as the battle ended, the dark thing inside her slid out and left Minami feeling nothing but pain, sadness, and weak. She watched as the dark energy made its way back over to Atsuko and moved into her.

"We have our champions!!"

Haruna and Yuko came down clapping their hands. The two walked over to Minami and smiled at her.

"Congrats Minami. You made it all the way to the final round." Yuko said.

"S..Shut up..."

"You better go rest for tomorrow because it's going to be one hell of a battle."

Minami didn't have the strength to say anything because she was too weak. However she did manage to see Haurna walk over to Atsuko and pull open her shirt. There Minami saw the crystal embedded into Atsuko's chest glowing a bright red. It's roots looked like they stretched throughout her entire body. Haruna giggled and said,

"It's almost done. Soon the vessel will be ready."

"Vessel for what?" Minami thought.

That was the last thing Minami thought before she passed out completely. For once Minami's body had shut down and when it restarted it, she found herself in her room. She looked over and saw Atsuko staring at her with a worried look.

"Wah!"

"Minami calm down it's me Atsuko!"

Minami couldn't tell if it was the real Atsuko or not. She looked at her for a long time and didn't sense anything dark. She could see only worry in her eyes and not bloodlust. Therefore she concluded that the person she was talking to was Atsuko. Minami sat back up and said,

"What happened?"

"We won the battle!" Atsuko said happily.

"That's great..."

There was a moment of silence for they both realized that they had killed all their friends. Then Atsuko said,

"Nee whenever I see you and Yuko talk it looks like you know each other. Did you guys meet in the past?"

"Well..."

Minami thought it was about time Atsuko found out about her past since tomorrow may be the last time they ever see each other. It's time she came out with the truth. Minami took a deep breath and began her story,

"When I first became a puppet, it was just me and Yuko who were the only two puppets. We served the witch like her loyal dogs and did whatever she asked. The witch would go around making more puppets but the entire time Yuko and were always together. We were best friends and we could never be separated. Yuko helped me when I first realized I had turned. She helped me discover my powers and accept the fact that I would never be able to be human again. We were always together through the worst parts of our lives. Then on the day the witch was going to be hunted down and killed, we were running. The witch was badly injured and we had to carry her and hide somewhere. We hid in an old shed where it was then something horrible happened."

"What happened?"

"We were planning on leaving the witch but then.. The witch transferred her soul into Yuko."

"Eh?"

"You see another reason puppets were created was so that the witch could escape into their bodies when hers grew weak. With that in mind, the witch went into Yuko's body and took over completely. The last thing I remembered before being shut down was Yuko struggling with the witches soul. The last thing Yuko told me was to set her free somehow. Then I fell asleep and the next time I woke up, I found you. You woke me up after such a long time and now here I am nearly a battle away from setting Yuko free."

"Wow Minami.. Well tomorrow let's do our best and win! I'm sure if we do you can set Yuko free and I can bring everyone back!"

"Bring everyone back?"

"Ah nothing let's just sleep ok?"

"Ok.."

The next day Minami and Atsuko walked into a special battle arena where Haruna and Yuko were waiting for them. Minami transformed along with Yuko and Minami smiled when she saw Yuko in her old battle form. It was nothing but a simple blue and red sailor uniform with a long skirt and a red scarf. Minami thought she would never see that form again. The two were about to go into battle but then Haruna stopped them.

"Since this is such a rare occasion, I'm going to add a bonus. If you win, all the puppets and masters who died in this tournament shall be revived!" she said.

Atsuko's eyes widened and a bright smile came across her face.

"Alright! Minami we can do this!"

"However if you lose... Atsuko becomes my puppet~"

"Deal." Atsuko said.

"What?!" Minami said.

"Great then let the battle begin!"

With that Yuko and Minami charged at each other and the battle began.     

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Uh oh who's gonna win?! Find out next time~~

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Re: Atsumina: Puppet Master update Chapter 22
« Reply #199 on: July 27, 2013, 04:18:36 AM »
Minami defeated the final opponent for the tournament and now the final one to end it.

I wonder who will win :)
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