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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #40 on: December 01, 2013, 11:06:25 PM »
aww~ there goes my essay ._.

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #41 on: December 01, 2013, 11:08:43 PM »
pat pat Ashu.
Well, me: pours water on fighting, "forget this ever happened. Peace nyaaa"

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #42 on: December 01, 2013, 11:12:35 PM »
... *hits Shino with a balloon*
This is war, Shino! XD 

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #43 on: December 01, 2013, 11:14:00 PM »
Okay, Tanchan. They really don't like how you are expressing yourself, so you should just shut up, right?....
There is no point, because they don't want to hear you. For us they are wrong, and for them we are wrong, so.... let's just be the better people and back off...
It's a shame this thread and poll turn out like this. The author should just ignore us and go on with the story and the couples she/he wants...
If you think of yourself as a grown up, you would stop arguing and let it GO... Let's just back off and see what happens?
I'm DONE with this topic!!

Thanks for coming back for a post even though you said you would be gone after that last post. I will not continue arguing if there's no more argument needed here, unless my point being quoted and brought up for argument again. OTherwise, I'll stay put. Peace

May be when the OP sees this he/she would erase the poll altogether since their thread has turned into a battlefield XD and ignore all of us and go for a crack pair instead i.e. Marimii or even better, Atsunyan :inlove:

p.s.: my apology to the author for creating this heated war in your newly opened thread.

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #44 on: December 01, 2013, 11:15:16 PM »
Huhuhu...
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(It just makes me laugh how there's 3 pages of weirdness now...)
looks like there's no more war now,
the next thing we wait for is Louise-san to say something

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #45 on: December 01, 2013, 11:15:29 PM »
First of all, let's have a quick break with this ridiculous and silly argument and comment on poor writer, Louise-sama. I will admit, I have been procrastinating and busy with my life to comment, but I just had to seeing how laughable this entire matter is. (I apologize if that sounded anyway rude or offensive to anyone.) And no, I am NOT bringing back up the issue so we can fight over it but rather I'm just inputting my opinion on the matter. Doesn't hurt to throw in your thoughts when you want to. :nervous So anyway, let me apologize in regard to the rest of the members, both readers and/or writers, from up above from causing a ruckus in your thread. Guess it doesn't help when you're merely asking for what pairings your readers would highly look forward to. :sweatdrop:

So let's start off with the opening! Very interesting and though I haven't myself voted since, well, I haven't, LOL, I sense angst. As a writer who likes to revolve her stories around angst, this one caught my attention quickly. (I think the colors also helped, LOL) The little prequel truly does show the individual yearning for the attention and love of another person they had their eyes on. Oh dear... Love triangle much? :panic:

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In this war for love, deceits and lies are inevitable. Who can withstand the pain will take the blame. Either way, I won't cry, 'hearts don't break even.'

I really like this quote. Somehow... it struck something inside of me. Wonder what this could mean, haha :huhuh Maybe it's because we think that 'hearts don't even break even' is more on a literal sense? But if we think about it, people do actually do of being heartbroken... Though not necessarily the heart itself being broken. :nervous Forgive me for that little ramble. :sweatdrop:



Alright, now in regard to the voting poll incident... Anou, I'm sure the author here merely wants to know what pairings everyone favors. I mean, that's a reason why there's a poll, yes? If the author really wants to write, let's say, Atsuyuu badly, then she/he will take it down and plaster that beautiful bracket/parenthesis/whatever around the pairing title 'Atsuyuu'. And of course, that could go to the same as Atsumina. If she/he wanted Atsumina, down goes the poll and up goes the pairing that leads the story (along with some others I presume).

Doesn't matter if one bribes another with voting. I mean... It's just voting, haha. If it didn't click, it's you know, a popularity contest of the pairings. Not too surprising, LOL. And I'm pretty sure someone could say/think: "Oh what the hell, I wanna vote for Atsumina anyway even if I did say I wanted Atsuyuu" :nervous Dude, if one wants Atsumina/Atsuyuu, please go over to another writer that is willing to scrawl a drabble or two about the pairings. Or... you could take it to the next level and actually write it yourself. Hey, I mean, you get to have control over the story this time and how you wanted to portray these characters. :sweatdrop: If you think about it, this is... just one fiction out of the many in the fan fiction section of the forum here. It's not much of a big deal. :sweatdrop:

So what if Atsuyuu wins? And so what if Atsumina wins? It's just a poll for the writer to set into stone what characters/pairings they want to revolve around it as. It's not like we're going to go to jail due to the less populated voted option, haha. And I'm quite sure that the author himself/herself would stick to the pairings since, you know, that's a reason why there's a poll (unless it's an opinionated polling, then that's a different matter). Now mainstream or not, everyone had their viewpoints on the situation at hand. Um, I will admit, I myself do say that Mayuki is quite mainstream alongside the more popular pairings, but it doesn't matter. I'm sure there are others who never dived into the Mayuki realm of shipment and view that the pairing is quite a rarity, thinking that Saeyuki is mainstream instead! :sweatdrop:

Writing is writing. It's just... words with our favorite characters. If you really want, I suggest you can mentally erase the names of the characters and input in the ones you desired and wa-la, you got yourself a fiction with pairings you fully want in the plot. :nervous

Not saying that both parties are wrong, but it's just a conflicting desire of which pairing should be the main lead of the story. Opinions are opinions after all. :nervous And I'm not trying to act like I know it all, but merely stating my thought bubble. We should keep this thought in mind though if there are future polls. :nervous Anyway, looking forward to this fiction, Louise-sama! :bow:

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #46 on: December 01, 2013, 11:16:32 PM »
now this is Good. if only I can reverse my vote and vote for atsuharu

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #47 on: December 01, 2013, 11:17:15 PM »
They really don't like how you are expressing yourself, so you should just shut up, right?....

First of all, please don't make the now-healthy conversation into something which will root for further arguments. Thank you.

There is no point, because they don't want to hear you. For us they are wrong, and for them we are wrong, so.... let's just be the better people and back off...

Saying this will not make things any better either. And please don't generalize too much.  :( Please honor each other's stand as much as I respect everybody's. I voted for AtsuYuu, Yes. That doesn't mean I'm against AtsuMina ( omg not to mention the Atsumina FanVids I DLed form Youtube  XD )

It's a shame this thread and poll turn out like this. The author should just ignore us and go on with the story and the couples she/he wants...

Yes, the final decision still lies on the writer's hands. So chill out~

If you think of yourself as a grown up, you would stop arguing and let it GO...

We are not arguing. We are stating facts here and observations.

and again, please avoid judging people without any relevant proof.

cheers!  :)


/end of conversation. MOVE ON.
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #48 on: December 01, 2013, 11:22:08 PM »
now this is Good. if only I can reverse my vote and vote for atsuharu

You know I think we could be good fellows if Takamina and Yuko never joined AKB XD

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #49 on: December 01, 2013, 11:27:43 PM »
now this is Good. if only I can reverse my vote and vote for atsuharu

You know I think we could be good fellows if Takamina and Yuko never joined AKB XD

now That's cruel man. but who cases about OTP's! *high-fives* I finally found a comrade on this ship! 

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #50 on: December 01, 2013, 11:30:33 PM »
Lol lol lol *high fives*. I can't believe you and I are the only ones who board Atsuharu's ship. *whisper* we could tell the author to change into writing for the couple that has the least votes.


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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #52 on: December 01, 2013, 11:35:04 PM »
sadly. I've only found like, three os's bout them on le internet. and one of them is mine XD but it's Good to know that I'm not shipping them alone in this whole forum :lol:

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #53 on: December 01, 2013, 11:37:37 PM »
I think I've read yours already. Can you PM me the other two?

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #54 on: December 01, 2013, 11:55:43 PM »
I'll PM you if I could find them. (did you know how hard it was to even get ahold of those rare gems?!)

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #55 on: December 02, 2013, 12:00:11 AM »
and how come neither of you voted for AtsuHaru..... is lifebuoy enough for you two and + the other two writers of that 'gems'...?

well, AtsuHaru is really shippable you know,  :lol: YOU JUST HAVE TO BE VOCAL FOR YOUR SECRET SHIPS! And voila! le hiding wild pokemon shippers shall appear one by one!  :rofl:
« Last Edit: December 02, 2013, 12:05:46 AM by imteedee »
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #56 on: December 02, 2013, 12:04:54 AM »
Actually, Louise just added it after I voted, so I can't change my votes XD

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #57 on: December 02, 2013, 12:05:46 AM »
Looks at battlefield again.
The tanks and heavy artillery are coming out...
Watches from behind a rock.
Louise-san... I'm guessing you might not've expected this to happen.
Atsuyuu~ :D

Hell, yeah! Who would've thought I'd read a 3-page rebuttal this morning when I woke? Oh....
I feel like dying~~~!

I'm glad that the storm has calmed down than hours before.

Everyone! First of all, I'd like to apologize for the ruckus I've caused.

First of all, let's have a quick break with this ridiculous and silly argument and comment on poor writer, Louise-sama. I will admit, I have been procrastinating and busy with my life to comment, but I just had to seeing how laughable this entire matter is. (I apologize if that sounded anyway rude or offensive to anyone.) And no, I am NOT bringing back up the issue so we can fight over it but rather I'm just inputting my opinion on the matter. Doesn't hurt to throw in your thoughts when you want to. :nervous So anyway, let me apologize in regard to the rest of the members, both readers and/or writers, from up above from causing a ruckus in your thread. Guess it doesn't help when you're merely asking for what pairings your readers would highly look forward to. :sweatdrop:

So let's start off with the opening! Very interesting and though I haven't myself voted since, well, I haven't, LOL, I sense angst. As a writer who likes to revolve her stories around angst, this one caught my attention quickly. (I think the colors also helped, LOL) The little prequel truly does show the individual yearning for the attention and love of another person they had their eyes on. Oh dear... Love triangle much? :panic:

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In this war for love, deceits and lies are inevitable. Who can withstand the pain will take the blame. Either way, I won't cry, 'hearts don't break even.'

I really like this quote. Somehow... it struck something inside of me. Wonder what this could mean, haha :huhuh Maybe it's because we think that 'hearts don't even break even' is more on a literal sense? But if we think about it, people do actually do of being heartbroken... Though not necessarily the heart itself being broken. :nervous Forgive me for that little ramble. :sweatdrop:



Alright, now in regard to the voting poll incident... Anou, I'm sure the author here merely wants to know what pairings everyone favors. I mean, that's a reason why there's a poll, yes? If the author really wants to write, let's say, Atsuyuu badly, then she/he will take it down and plaster that beautiful bracket/parenthesis/whatever around the pairing title 'Atsuyuu'. And of course, that could go to the same as Atsumina. If she/he wanted Atsumina, down goes the poll and up goes the pairing that leads the story (along with some others I presume).

Doesn't matter if one bribes another with voting. I mean... It's just voting, haha. If it didn't click, it's you know, a popularity contest of the pairings. Not too surprising, LOL. And I'm pretty sure someone could say/think: "Oh what the hell, I wanna vote for Atsumina anyway even if I did say I wanted Atsuyuu" :nervous Dude, if one wants Atsumina/Atsuyuu, please go over to another writer that is willing to scrawl a drabble or two about the pairings. Or... you could take it to the next level and actually write it yourself. Hey, I mean, you get to have control over the story this time and how you wanted to portray these characters. :sweatdrop: If you think about it, this is... just one fiction out of the many in the fan fiction section of the forum here. It's not much of a big deal. :sweatdrop:

So what if Atsuyuu wins? And so what if Atsumina wins? It's just a poll for the writer to set into stone what characters/pairings they want to revolve around it as. It's not like we're going to go to jail due to the less populated voted option, haha. And I'm quite sure that the author himself/herself would stick to the pairings since, you know, that's a reason why there's a poll (unless it's an opinionated polling, then that's a different matter). Now mainstream or not, everyone had their viewpoints on the situation at hand. Um, I will admit, I myself do say that Mayuki is quite mainstream alongside the more popular pairings, but it doesn't matter. I'm sure there are others who never dived into the Mayuki realm of shipment and view that the pairing is quite a rarity, thinking that Saeyuki is mainstream instead! :sweatdrop:

Writing is writing. It's just... words with our favorite characters. If you really want, I suggest you can mentally erase the names of the characters and input in the ones you desired and wa-la, you got yourself a fiction with pairings you fully want in the plot. :nervous

Not saying that both parties are wrong, but it's just a conflicting desire of which pairing should be the main lead of the story. Opinions are opinions after all. :nervous And I'm not trying to act like I know it all, but merely stating my thought bubble. We should keep this thought in mind though if there are future polls. :nervous Anyway, looking forward to this fiction, Louise-sama! :bow:

THANK YOU, LoyalFlutist-sama for coming to this thread! (I'm your fan...lol)

When I started the poll, I just wanted to know what the community thinks would suit the teaser best. And thank you Tanchan for making me realize what had been missing. This story, as you can see, has a very tangled relationship. You wouldn't see a pureblood pair here. I wanted this to be a rumbling hearts powerhouse. I'm really cruel, huh? So basically, the story revolves around most of the pairs in the poll. But which would have the largest votes determines how this story will end.

I want to take responsibility for this. I'm the one to blame, really. Aw...kill me now~
I respect all of you and all of your opinions as well. I'm warning you: I'm just a novice and most of you had been in this forum for who knows how long. So don't expect too much from me. I just wanted to try to write. I'm sorry if I'm not good at handling this situation. Ah~~~ I was really surprised. But thank you for living by your pairs, and coming to this topic

You and your pairs are all AWESOME! Love you all.

For those unanswered inquiries about this topic, I'll get back to you when I reach home.
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #58 on: December 02, 2013, 12:14:47 AM »
No one is to blame, not even you. cheer up  :)
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #59 on: December 02, 2013, 12:49:29 AM »
and how come neither of you voted for AtsuHaru..... is lifebuoy enough for you two and + the other two writers of that 'gems'...?

well, AtsuHaru is really shippable you know,  :lol: YOU JUST HAVE TO BE VOCAL FOR YOUR SECRET SHIPS! And voila! le hiding wild pokemon shippers shall appear one by one!  :rofl:

Same as Ashurax, Louise-sama added the option after I had voted, otherwise I would definitely have voted for AtsuHaru though knowing they would not win :(.

@Louise: Can I ask one question? How hard would it be do you think to plan an ending based on the poll result? Sometimes when your story is going smoothly in one direction with undoubtedly logical sense, then the poll points in another direction, how would you change the plot of the story to make it happen without forcing it, especially when everything is settled down into their rightful place where if you change it, it's as good as writing a totally new story? That happens a lot with J and K dramas where they're airing the dramas and filming at the same time. At times the ending just don't click with the flow of the story. One example would be the Korean version of Kaseifu no Mita. Sometimes it strays from your original intention and results in an awkward ending while, otherwise, would have become an excellent story.

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