Tsunku is trying to tell me that Goto will receive punishment even if I drop the charges against her to convince me to settle it out of courts to reduce her sentence. He’s such an asshole, Miki-tan would say. He’s just trying to save his soloist.Oh, how I love how they're so in sync with each other. :oops:
Miki asked, “What’s it about? You’ve been in a daze for some time.”
“It’s from Tsunku; nothing much though,” Aya replied and crushed the letter and threw it into the bin.
“He’s such an asshole.
Dear AyaPoor Maki, getting dragged into all this because of her initial jealousy of Aya. She probably wouldn't have done what she did if she wasn't pushed into it the way she was. :(
It’s me Goto Maki. I’m now in a world far away from yours and it’s the memories of us that keep me going in the hellish place. I remember how I learn LoveNamidaIro just to sing to you; I remember the day whereby I waited for you in the pavilion; I remember how angry and upset you were when you found out about the plot; I remember the night in the studio; I remember our first night. Though the time we spent together was short, you were my best friend in my life. I know that I’m just a substitute for Miki and I have never and will never replace her in your heart. We have known each other at the wrong place, wrong time. How much I hope life can start all over again and things may be different. I know I have hurt you with my selfish actions and I will not expect you to forgive me. I only request you to allow me to continue to keep those memories of us in my heart secretly. From the other side of the world, I pray for your happiness. shiawase wo inoru wa. Gocchin
“She’s good at words. Way better than me, “Miki said coldly.While it's still somewhat understandable that Miki would be harbouring some ill feelings towards Maki, she has to realize that Aya made her choice. She saw what Maki was involved in, and more important, she saw how important Miki was to her. Miki doesn't have anything to worry about, words alone won't make Aya leave her.
“I love you, Miki-tan.” Aya stared at Miki with her teary eyes.
Invitation card:Wonder if Miki can skip this? :P XD
Dear Morning Musume members both ex and current, you are warmly invited to join the annual compulsory ‘Morning Musume get-together’ held at a private bungalow at the outskirts of Tokyo (details attached behind) on 6 December 2007. You are required to report sharply at venue by 8.00am. It is compulsory to spend 2 nights at the chalet with the rest of the MM members away from civilization. Please don’t dump this card into the bin or else you know what will happen to you. Absence from this gathering is strictly prohibited. As mentioned earlier, this is COMPULSORY.
Love,
Nakazawa Yuko
Just as the clock ticked 8 am, the last taxi arrived at the bungalow. As Mari, Yuko and Kaori stepped out of the taxi, the younger members gathered around and cheered. Yuko glanced at her watch and commented, “Well, we’re punctual. Is everyone here already?”So she basically scares the other members into making sure that they arrive on time, if not early to avoid her wrath, and then she herself makes it just in time?
Miki, who was staring at her phone intently, was brought back to reality by Kaori. Kaori snatched the phone from Miki and said, “You know this is prohibited, right? Come on, get in. I’ll take care of your phone for you in the time being.” Miki remained silent and shot her an angry glare before entering the bungalow.Now why aren't phones allowed? :? What if there's an emergency?
As the Morning Musume members stepped into the bungalow, many were at awe of its magnificence. The bungalow was 4-storey high and it had huge glass panels which made it look bigger than it actually was by allowing sunlight to enter the interior. Overall, it had an authentic feel with wooden floorings and antique furniture centered at the ground floor. It had a feel of the old meeting the new which paralleled the gathering held in it.A 4-storey high bungalow? Considering that bungalows are, by definition, a small, one-floor house, someone sure is stretching the meaning here. :-X
“Whose place is this?” Risa asked curiously to no one in particular while admiring the interior design.Oh? Her parents' house? Or maybe, some other rich family member?
“Uh, it’s Ishikawa,” Kaori answered.
“Charmy?” Sayumi, Kusumi, Aika and Risa exclaimed in unison.
“When did you have such a big place?” Mari nudged the girl beside her for an answer.
“It’s a long story but this is technically not mine…”Rika answered rather awkwardly.
The Morning Musume girls were sitting in a huge circle with Natsumi in the middle of the circle in the living room. Natsumi started the gathering by saying, “The aim of this gathering is to foster better relationships between members of different generations and to develop personalities. Please take it seriously.”Really now?
“Do I sound like Yuu-chan just now?” She laughed to herself. The other members, perplexed, gave her weird looks.Nacchi = :mon sweat:
“Ok, we will start with treasure hunt! Members from the 1st and 2nd generations are excluded because of the high likelihood of getting injured from this. I’ll give out the clues now.”Well...that's not exactly encouraging.
The pairs were Risa and Ai, Junjun and Aika, Sayumi and Kusumi, Eri and Miki, Rika and Linlin.Poor Rika has been blinded by her feelings for Yossi to accept that she (Yossi) wasn't innocent at all in this. If she hadn't involved herself in the plot against Aya and Miki, she would be there at the gathering instead of sitting in a cell somewhere.
Rika frowned when Eri and Miki walked past her. I hate Fujimoto Miki! Normally I would have Yossie to pair up with but this year I don’t and it’s because of you! Now I ended up pairing with this Chinese junior. You took my Yossie away so you will pay for it, I swear…
*SAYU INCIDENT*Where's Junjun? :grin:
QuoteAs the Morning Musume members stepped into the bungalow, many were at awe of its magnificence. The bungalow was 4-storey high and it had huge glass panels which made it look bigger than it actually was by allowing sunlight to enter the interior. Overall, it had an authentic feel with wooden floorings and antique furniture centered at the ground floor. It had a feel of the old meeting the new which paralleled the gathering held in it.A 4-storey high bungalow? Considering that bungalows are, by definition, a small, one-floor house, someone sure is stretching the meaning here. :-X
Quote*SAYU INCIDENT*Where's Junjun? :grin:
Lol, other than For Your Information, this came into mind F.Y.I --> For You Ishikawa.
LOL For your information, FYI is for you Ishikawa :PI think you meant to say: "Fyi, FYI is fyI" XD
:lol: Hmm, F.Y.I has something similar to Gomattou as to how the names are arranged. Oops.
I really like when you delve into Yossuis thought processThanks a lot. It makes me feel really happy especially when I enjoy reading your stories so so much! :P I enjoyed writing that part quite a bit :)
Those parts are especially well written in my opinion
:hiakhiakhiak: i loved the ending
So I'm guessing that the sequel is going to be more of an ishiyoshi with a little gam on the side... which i should have picked up on when you had mentioned the whole FYI F.Y.I is fyI :P
The bad girl is Eri, because she likes Reina, so she get a revenge!!!!
Eh.. Now im doubting if Rika actually did it.. But it still makes me think Charmikitty..
Does Yossie really love Miki? The way she's acting i couldn't tell, either she does and is guilty of admitting it cause of Rika, or Rika is getting her to think of it otherwise..
The bad girl is Eri, because she likes Reina, so she get a revenge!!!!
i'm delirious
i would like that yossie love miki, but i think it won't be like that
Guess I've given too many hints in here XD Hmm, it won't be a she-is-the-mastermind-planning-it-all like in Gomattou but rather one thing leads to another. What I want to say is it's not the end yet (far from it) :mon corn: (I'm getting hungry :lol: )
WELL,, i'll still cheer for KAMEI!..mwahah..go KAMEI~Haha, you're so biased. You're too crazily in love with Eririn :wriggly:
Thanks for the support! Glad that you enjoy the story up till now :P
so aya interrumped miki and yossy, no~~
eri is madly in love, that's interesting
and... junjun, just lovely
waiting next chapter
This is going to take some major getting used to.:lol: I just thought that hardly anyone writes about the Chinese girls so I decide to feature Junjun in...as for Linlin, oh well, there's always a next time. :mon sweat: During this ep of Haromoni, apparently Junjun cried after Aika was mean to her during the memory game and I thought this is a kinda interesting pair.... hehe
Ohh.. Don't tell me this is going to have some YoMiki bits in it?^Hmm YoMiki..Hmm :roll:
Eri is in love with.... Reina?? Was i not paying attention when this happened? So she was the one who wanted revenge...
Lol, you confused me at the end. I though it was Risa saying that stuff about Ai instead of JunJun about Aika lol. Anyway, wandering if you'll do that pairing the first way or the second way... in other words will Nakazawa get to Aika in time or will JunJun get shot down by Aika who doessn't realise she likes her yet...?????sorry for confusing you XD You're getting me excited...Will Nakazawa be in time to tell Aika... :oops:
Hey, Yuko didn't ask Eri! She got away easy. Lol at Mari, everyone sounds suspicious to her.Risa sort of mentioned about Eri and Mari distracted Yuko by saying that Risa was suspicious :D
Junjun and Aika.. that was fast! Yuko sure is the mastermind of all. Even Yossie and Rika!
Hmm.. Yossie and Rika met in friendster... wow, that's so funny! Friendster goes a long way! Nice Ishiyoshi fluff!Thanks :D Actually to be frank, I got the idea from personal experience :lol: so I'm glad it's funny...
What was Kei thinking? Why didn't she continue? Is it something about interrogation???*hint* What she thought had something to do with what Miki just said ... :twisted:
Haha the friendster thing was funny. I didn't know it existed, let alone exist like seven years ago! Wow, it gets around! Except to me...btw what's friendster? lol, I seriously don't know.I think friendster (http://www.friendster.com) existed then if I remember correctly...7 years ago, some friends were using it (of coz now everyone switch to facebook but oh well...) Geez, I can remember things 7 years ago, I'm getting old... :cry:
Guess we can still blame Reina for it all but it just seems like she is hiding something or someone there. Like maybe she was really doing it for Eri. Because I don't think that she really hated Miki so much because she groped a few people or something. I mean seriously. Maybe Eri is the secret mastermind lol and she influenced her to do this all because she was in love with her. Lol, wow, I confuse myself sometimes.Thanks for liking it :D ^That's a pretty good idea...
Waaaaaaah~ I'm tired now. I'll see if you're on msn, and if not then I will just ....... I dunno, do some other stuff I guess. cya, mwah! Keep up the great work, I love you and your story!Sorry I went for some concert last night...you made it sound like I stood you up or something :tears:
Yuko nodded knowingly. “Where is Nacchi?”Busted. :lol:
Natsumi yawned and exclaimed happily, “I’m here~”
“You just took a nap, didn’t you?” Nacchi shook her head defensively. “Yes, you did.” Yuko looked straight into her eyes.
After a moment or two, Nacchi conceded defeat by saying, “Ok, I did.”
Yuko nodded. “What about you Sayu?”:rofl:
Kusumi replied, “I ‘killed’ her! I was escorting her back to the living room when you came and informed us about what had happened. We surrender our hand phones to Kaori this morning already!” Kaori nodded.
“Aika, where were you then?”Awwwwwwwwwww...Junjun was protecting Aika! :love:
“I was hiding with Junjun in her room.”
“I thought you are supposed to hide on your own.”
Aika retorted, “But…I feel safe with Junjun.” Junjun blushed. “We thought that there was some commotion out there so Junjun left the room first. She said if the ‘murderer’ was out there, at least only 1 of us would be caught and I would be safe.”
“I see.” Yuko winked at Junjun. “Junjun, why are you so nice to Aika as to sacrifice yourself for her?”AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
...
“Because I like you, Aika,” Junjun whispered.
Aika kissed Junjun on her cheeks and exclaimed, “I like you too, Junjun!” Junjun blushed.
Eri yawned as she stepped into her room alone. She was sharing the room with Aika but Aika was still enjoying herself, talking and laughing in the dining room. A year ago, I used to be able to talk and laugh like that. You left and took away my happiness as well. Now I’m soulless and I will remain like that until the day you appear again. It’s all Fujimoto Miki’s fault! Why couldn’t we manage to kill her? How come she was so lucky to escape death twice?OMFG IT WAS ERI!?!??! She's trying to get revenge because Miki got Reina thrown in jail!!!
After some time when Eri had finally stopped crying, Miki said, “I admire your guts to attack me directly and your maturity to realize and admit that you have done something wrong. I won’t pursue this matter anymore and let’s just pretend that this conversation never exists.”Damn, Miki's brain must have really been starved for oxygen when Eri attacked her for her to say something like this.
“Miki-tan, promise that the GAM’s bond will never break no matter what happens in the future.”
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!I'm a big fan of angst XD Very big fan :lol:
it's eri?!?!?!?!?!?!
... so ishiyoshi is fighting over nothing.... that's so sad...
Miki is so smart..hahah...Yeah as always :wahaha: *Look at the poll results* I think she is and prepare yourselves for more angst :cry:
so is Goto coming back?...
Nooo!!! OMG I let you down, tito!!! Soo sorry, I only come on this site every few days....whaaa !!! Curse you fun job, with all your wild animals and endless barage of people I must entertain and educate while driving around in endless circles!! grr ...um...would it help if I said that I :mon love: ?Yeah it does I :mon love: too :D Your job sounds so interesting...Clown was the first thing that came to my mind :mon sweat:
Eri is the one that tried to kill Miki?!?! I never saw that comming, but it makes perfect sense! So poor Rika got blamed for what someone else did! Hmmm...so Rika and Eri both hate Miki for the same reason....do I detect a future partnership?Hmmm....I don't want to give spoilers :lol: but it will soon NOT be the same reason though..
emm possible yomiki?? wow... just friends i thinkI'm not going to say anything about this...read on XD
sorry for no comments in the last chapter, i hadn't read it^It's ok :vv: As long as you do read it, I'm happy!
Damn, Miki's brain must have really been starved for oxygen when Eri attacked her for her to say something like this.Yeah pretty much. Probably when Eri cried and rambled about stuff, she just got soft-hearted (again) and decided to let it rest. :-\
hmmm, why do I get a feeling that Maki and Aya will be reconciling and perhaps will be lovey dovey again*Look at poll results again* I really shan't give any spoilers :oops:
i dun believe her somehow... but.... dunno.... if eri has become the good guy, then who will become the antagonist? hmmmm...I wonder if this chapter has an answer :roll: I highly doubt so though...
Mr. Moonlight part I > :cry: angst~..XD.. yay? :twisted:Just give you something to laugh about before more angst sets in :wahaha:
Mr. Moonlight part II > OMG..thats effin hilarious...all a dream... :shakeit:
happy summer wedding LOL^That song had been playing in my head all day even when I was writing :oops:
PD: and... when will be turn to yomiki's fans?
I knew it!~ and now I get to say "I told you so" to all the non believers....so......... soshite "I told you so! " I think you may have got some of the lyrics wrong. For starters you totally left out the Maki Nacchi bit where they go " Hey, everybody sing a~ha (a~ha)...." and so on. I love that bit~!Sorry about that^ I was copying and pasting the chunk of translation from kiwimusume and didn't take notice.. :(
I think I know who the baddie will be now. Not Eri, but the person you least expect. Yoshi. (You thought I'd say Rika, didn't you?) Cause think about it.. She said so herself she would've done it before. She doesn't believe her own girlfriend when she says she didn't hurt her. She almost accidentally ended up blaming her for it all even though she didn't do it. And she slapped her girlfriend. I think she might do something to Miki in the heat of the moment. She might get angry and hurt her. She shouldn't but she is very agro. She doesn't listen to reason.You have no idea where this story is heading to... :mon fyeah:
ishiyoshi ishiyoshi ishiyoshi ishiyoshi...;) hehe, I wonder how you will feel with the new chapter....
*smile now plastered on face permanently*
... got your hint...Oh, I'm so touched :shy2: *true_harmony hints me back* lol, you don't need to, I'll still read it :D
"She’s prettier and better at everything than me. What should I do?”
“At least you know what she wants. Sometimes, I just don’t know what Rika thinks and what she wants from me.”
She knew what Rika was thinking of. She thought, “Rika must have felt that I am cheating on her. Now she must be seeing Fujimoto not as that girl who landed me in jail but as the 3rd party in our relationship.
i like this story a lot you know??^This so totally makes my day! :wub:
i actually imagine so much things with the titleI hope this chapter didn't disappoint your imagination..
OMG YOMIKI!!! thank you lolI thought the conversation was quite dumb :lol: You're such a Yomiki fanatic..I promise to write a total Yomiki fic (if you didn't read what I posted elsewhere :) )
they're so funny
btw... poor rika
Pyshco Jealous Rika is always interesting^Sadism? I kinda agree though.. :grin:
ishiyoshi... i'll burn myself as fuel just to keep the fire between you two burning... GGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHTheir love is like a candle placed in the middle of a windy garden ( :lol: another of my weird metaphors )
... rika... don't do anything stupid... please... for the love of god... and yossui...
Man, Rika's got major insecurity issues.I almost wanted to put godmother but I realised Junjun isn't a really motherly character and that will be so much meaner XD
And oh crap Junjun's gonna be devastated when she finds out.
Their love is like a candle placed in the middle of a windy garden ( another of my weird metaphors )
I swear, that girl could get smacked upside the head with the truth and she would still believe a lie...... :@ BAH! And she is making Yoshi so miserable! I mean, she just got out of jail, Lord knows what she went through, and then comes back to this? Seriously! What is Rika thinking? She came straight to her and just because she doesn't want to kill the person that put her in jail because she was just protecting her own girlfriend by doing so, she just fuckin dogs her like that! that is nasty. And then she comes up with all these excuses and accusations and lies! Why doesn't she just say what is in her heart?^Pretty much sums up the ishiyoshi relationship up till now :cry:
And yosshi! Yoshi yoshi yoshi. Where do you get off losing your temper and snapping at everyone? Sure you've had a rough couple of months, but that doesn't justify what you're doing. And as who you are you really should know better. You are supposed to be there for them, be their friend, especially Rika's. Just say something right for gods sake! When Rika asks about you and her, don't just say that Rika is the only one for you, make some promises you are actually willing to keep....share a bed...kiss her.......tell her how YOU feel.....tell her how much you love her, or that you've even dreamed about her.....and don't just yell back at her, you'll scare her!
Aww, and Rika's dream was so sweet, but it kinda shows that Rika still lives in the past and sees Yossy as Mr. Moonlight, but Yossy's changed (just like Miki says). Rika's angry at Miki for taking Yossy away, but truthfully its Rika herself thats not excepting that things have changed. If she wants to stay with Yossy she needs to except this and grow from there, however it seems that Rika is to stubborn/bitter to do that.Exactly :)
Another thing that's interesting to me is the friendship between Miki and Yossy, I rather like it, but I hope this teaches Miki to except Aya's feelings toward Goto. After all its sorta the same, both girls have affection for one of their conspirators, I hope Miki will somehow realize this...This comment came at a pretty good timing...next chapter will have some answers, I hope
both of them are stuck with their ideas of the relationship when it started... i think they got fixated with the villa as a monument of their old love...Exactly what I wanted to show. :cry: And major trust problem too
that is so sad
those two have a big communication problem...
I'll post the next chapter up tomorrow morning and it's quite an important chapter
"Yes.” You know I treat you differently as well, right?
“That’s because I see you as someone special.”
Is she about to say what I want to say? Junjun blushed. “You’re special to me too.”
“I admire your strong character and your courage and from time to time, when I feel down, I look at you and you give me the strength to carry on,” Aika paused before adding, “I wonder whether we can take our relationship to a higher level.”
A higher level? What does she mean? I think she is implying what I plan to say. This is too good to be true…“Of course,” Junjun spoke happily and smiled.
Aika’s eyes brightened. “Can you be my…”
“Yes?” Lover?
“Godsister?”
Aika’s eyes brightened. “Can you be my…”Junjun = :cry:
“Yes?” Lover?
“Godsister?”
Junjun was stunned to hear that. Her jaws dropped. She thought, “Godsister? So you see me as your godsister all along? So it’s only wishful thinking on my part, huh? I feel as though you had taken me on your wings and flew to the sky and then dropped me from the uppermost atmospheric layer.
‘Junjun, people take years to realize they love each other and confess. Don’t rush into it.’ Oh man, maybe Yossie was right about it. Maybe what we need is a little more time.”Can always hold out hope. After all, you never know. :)
“Isn’t that Ayaya? Am I seeing wrong?” Natsumi asked as she entered the dining room.Eeps. :O
Aya walked towards Natsumi with a silly grin plastered on her face and exclaimed, “Ayaya is here!”
Natsumi laughed. “Where is Yu-”
Mari interrupted, “Nacchi, Aya is our secret guest for this year gathering and it’s all planned by Yuko.”
“Oh I see,” Natsumi murmured. She then turned to Aya and said, “Ayaya, it’s great that you’re here. I have something to talk to you about.” Aya raised her eyebrows. “It’s not really convenient to talk about it here. Let’s go to my room.”
Aya smiled. “I heard from Miki that she didn’t attend last year’s gathering.”Oh really now? Maki not liking being in MM? That's a twist.
“Not just her. Maki as well.”
...
“But I know that was just an excuse. She hates Morning Musume’s gathering because she feels that she doesn’t fit in. Sometimes when I put myself in her shoes, I feel sad for her. Seniors don’t talk to her because she grabs most of the limelight away from us and juniors don’t talk to her because they see her as god. It is just lonely, you know?”
“I feel that way too, Nacchi. I feel out of place in H!P sometimes.”K, are we going to be feeling sorry for Maki?
“Well, at least you have Miki. She doesn’t.”
She used to have me. “True.”
When she neared the room, she heard Natsumi mention her name. “Why are they talking about me? So Nacchi’s secret talk with Aya revolves around me?” Miki wondered. She placed her ears on the door and she could hear Aya say, “True.” What was true? Her ears were literally touching the door now as she tried her best to eavesdrop into their conversation.Misunderstanding coming up.
“I visited her a couple of days ago and she looked really haggard and lifeless. She just seemed to be so tired of life itself and she was crying very badly. She said she regretted everything that she had done and she was sorry that she disappointed everyone in H!P, her fans and you. She wanted me to pass a message to you: ‘I made the wrong choice so I should suffer from it. Please allow me to suffer.’ I asked her why she said that but she just said you would understand. I hope you do. I don’t know why she mentioned you separately and she didn’t tell me what happened between the 2 of you but I just thought that it’s appropriate for you to know.”Ummm...okay...
Anger was piling up in Miki’s chest as she listened to their conversation. She thought, “Why did Aya make me sound like a bad person? Even though I hate Maki and I hate it when you cry whenever you think of her as though you miss her, I won’t stop you if you want to forgive her. I’m perfectly fine about it. Why can’t you understand how I think? I can’t stand it when people don’t know how I feel and go about rambling about their own opinion of my feelings, do you know that? I’m even more disappointed, frustrated and upset that even you do that, my dear. I thought you will understand how I feel. At least don’t go around shooting your own opinion of how I feel!”Oh this isn't good.
*MIKI-RIKA TALK*Yeah...not good at all.
miki-maki-ayaya... i don't know how i should feel about them right now... reallyMaybe you will feel something about them soon. Really soon. :P
Rika... please don't kill miki... please... there's nothing going on... really...It's the Rika version of "Please punish me!" :lol:
I'll call yossui 'hitomi' too... kill me instead! don't make things matters worse
rika you will have to give up and let yomiki be *dream*It's FYI after all (FUJI-YOSSI-ISHI) Hmm why not? Anything is possible :P
naah i know that it won't happen why??!!
well... uf, aya part is so sad, poor maki i want that aya drops the charges, she still loves maki?? (naa i really want that it could be so, and then... miki would run to yossy's harms)You are such a big Yomiki fan! You can twist the story in 1000000 ways to end up Yomiki :lol:
* JFC facepalms.:wahaha: I promise the same thing in Gomattou won't happen here. In my opinion, it makes things far worse than that :cry:
* JFC facepalms with both hands.
QuoteRika... please don't kill miki... please... there's nothing going on... really...It's the Rika version of "Please punish me!"
I'll call yossui 'hitomi' too... kill me instead! don't make things matters worse
It's FYI after all (FUJI-YOSSI-ISHI) Hmm why not? Anything is possible
1. Junjun talking with the toothbrush in her mouth
2. The smacking butt part
3. Nacchi talking seriously
Charmy-sama, with your rabu-rabu mercy, smite me!!!:rofl: :rofl: BE MERCILESS!
that's a possibility i am very willing to entertain... as long as nobody is killed by rika (except me, perhaps)... that's all that matters to me now...*Pass the knife to Rika* j/k :lol: *Start to PRAY :mon pray2:*
GAM foreverrr :PHaha, just realise everyone is asking for different pairings. Moi is confused :? I haven't thought of how to end it yet although I have a pretty good idea how to go about screwing everyone up :D
(AyaMiki or AyaMaki?) hehehehehehe....
@tru_harmony: Don't be angry. I haven't started writing the next chapter yet
How about asking for ANOTHER different pair... Miki/Maki PUHLEASE!?Yeah, got your point! You make me happy :D Miki/Maki? Woo, that's new :D
Aya can end up with no one for all I care... I don't like this Aya
But don't think that means your writing is bad coz it doesn't! It means the opposite seeing I know enough about the character to have a passionate disliking of them (didn't come out how I wanted it to )
@tito: please get the knife out... i need to stab myself... rika+orgy=GGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHTsk..you're fantasizing...Rika, smite her! I don't care, I'll just pass Rika the knife and see what she will do with you! :twisted: sweeety, you can add tru_harmony in as well :oops:
Ok so we now have the end of F.Y.I thanks to sweeety... I like this ending too... They should also be strapped to a mild electric chair so the others can electrocute them when they don't like someone's answer (stolen from the Simpsons!)Because it's TV or else sweeety will grope everyone. She doesn't want to get killed by ishiyoshi + GAM fans *points at tru_harmony* :twisted:
Wait... You just said no to joining in with them!? That alone makes you very unique sweeety dear
Thanks for writing tito, nice ending there
Tsk..you're fantasizing...Rika, smite her! I don't care, I'll just pass Rika the knife and see what she will do with you! :twisted: sweeety, you can add tru_harmony in as well :oops:
Because it's TV or else sweeety will grope everyone. She doesn't want to get killed by ishiyoshi + GAM fans *points at tru_harmony*
“I know you hate Fujimoto Miki especially her attitude. I have a plan to tame her and I hope you can join me.”
“Sorry, I won’t injure or kill anyone.”
“Relax. I don’t plan to kill anyone. I just want to tame her.”
“Not even injuring anyone?”
“Nope.”
“Aya, let’s drop it.”
Drop the topic? Why do you forgive Yossie and refuse to forgive Maki? Is it because of our relationship? But it’s over between us! Why are you so selfish? “We shouldn’t have even talked about her in the first place,” Aya murmured.
“I mean drop the charges.”
Bewildered, Aya’s eyes widened. “Are you sure?”
Miki nodded. “Just don’t ever go to bed with her again.”
Aya laughed. “I’m exclusive to you since that day when you confessed to me, don’t you know that?”
Miki hugged Aya and kissed her on the lips. When their lips parted, Miki whispered, “I love you, Aya-chan. Let’s trust each other more from now on.”
Aya tried to shake the image of Miki and Yossie holding hands out of her mind. “I love you, Miki-tan. Let’s build trust.”
the hostages are fine... no need to rescue them just yet...Now my turn to take hostage :D
there... see how easy it is to communicate?:roll: Hmm...
yossui, rika... you're next!!!
OMG who is this who called rika?!!It's actually who Rika called ;) Up for guess :lol:
poor ayaya... but yomikiEven if there aren't scenes of Yomiki, will you still love me? :shy1:
tito i love you (like a fan xD) and your fanficI'm so happy! :usagiii: Feel like flying to the sky and never come back to land again..
I'm dying..no wait This was too funny!! *sobers* um, is it wrong to laugh at someone else's pain? Sorry JunJun, butDon't die! I still need readers! :P
I'm glad GAM has done so well in communicating it shows that their relationship is strong...hmm...but is it strong enough to over come both of the girls' attractions to Maki and Yossy?I love your comments. They always come at great timing! :wub:
oooo~ yeah! looks like a Rika and Eri partnership is blooming...things just got a little more difficult for Miki...
Quotepoor ayaya... but yomikiEven if there aren't scenes of Yomiki, will you still love me? :shy1:
Quotetito i love you (like a fan xD) and your fanficI'm so happy! :usagiii: Feel like flying to the sky and never come back to land again..
December 23 (9.31am)Oooooooooooooooooooooh...so that's what the phone call was about. :O
She stepped out of the huge gate. For the first time in many days, she looked up at the early winter’s sun and smiled. It felt good to be free once again. Never in her life had she seen freedom as something of such great importance. She thought about what had happened over the past year. It had been a roller-coaster ride of hatred, jealousy, guilt and love for her. She swore to herself, “I, Goto Maki, will never be back here again.”
ehhhh???Be patient..I'll work on the next chapter after I finish my homework *pray that I can understand mole concept* That appointment was nice. While waiting for the bus, I had some inspirations :roll: :oops:
Whats going on with Ayas letters and phone calls!
I wanna know
skip your damn appointment and write another chapter lol
OMG. Goto is back.. XDVS
OMG!!! maki is back!! party party:lol: dream harder than that! :mon innocent:
nonono, you MIGHT to come back, you have to write!!Ok, I just fell back to earth. :wub: Might fly again... :squirrel:
Oooooooooooooooooooooh...so that's what the phone call was about. :ONot quite... :wub:
OMG I Can't believe she let her out and didn't tell Miki! Wwhat did she think? that she wouldn't find oout? She's freakin famous! ARgh! I think dr love might come back and slap her a bit with a large trout.She did tell Miki... :hehehe:
I knew she was doing something like that. It explains all the mails and such. It was probably people asking her to drop the charges or thanking her for doing it.
Dammit Aya, she already told you you had her support no matter what youu didl. Instead of assuring her that you will be with her regardless of whether she stays in jail or not you go behind her back and free her.
WHy'd you have to go and make her hurt so bad?'Her' refering to Maki? Kill Miki?? :?
Why'd you have to go and kill Miki? owohhh Kii~ll Miki!
WAAAAAWWWW!!! chapter 12 was really cool!!Thanks :wub:
i'd like her to fight for aya, or even just shake their relationsip a bit... but i dun want her to end up with Aya... >_<Cool, just waiting for someone to request this pairing XD
I Love GAM too much hahaha.... so i prefer GREAT AYA MIKI
i'm guessing rika called reina? or maybe eri?No comments but reina is still in jail
ow, I have 4 unread pages... I'll be back tomorrow to read 'em... I'm just so atmTake your time :P
Hmmm, I'm guessing the phone call and mail are from Rika (with a voice distorter of course) or the chick Rika is plotting with... Rather then physically hurting Miki, she's just threatening Miki's life through Aya in hopes Aya will be pushed towards her and not let her go thus Miki can't hook up with Yossy... But Gocchin coming back may ruin that plan:shifty:
As much as I don't like Aya in this, I hope she ends up with Maki! Miki deserves better... WAIT!?!?!Another pairing not requested yet (Rika and Aya :lol: )
End result: Miki with Yossy, Aya with Rika and Maki helps Reina get out of jail and 'tames her' falls in love with her and Eri runs into the arms of Sayu for comfort.... Now THAT is better!
Plus I can't wait for what you promised me in a few chapters, you better deliverI fitted it in in my plan for chap 21 but if possible, I can add it in earlier :w00t:
Another pairing not requested yet (Rika and Aya :lol: )I'm good at those ;)
I fitted it in in my plan for chap 21 but if possible, I can add it in earlier :w00t:Wow you really do plan ahead well... I'll be sitting in this thread waiting for chapter 21 now (or an earlier 'appearance')... btw, I like being secretive like this :lol:
tru_harmony is posting so fast..I guess I'll not study in the morning and finish up chap 13 ;)
Wow you really do plan ahead well... I'll be sitting in this thread waiting for chapter 21 now (or an earlier 'appearance')... btw, I like being secretive like this*Looks at the rest* hehe, you don't know what it is about :twisted:
Who needs study when we have H!P fanfics to be writtenAt least I ought to finish chap 13...
pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaassssssse study... i wouldn't want to ruin your education!!!!Anyway I'll be out pretty soon..probably another tiring day :( Since you are in the mood, I can't ruin it for my readers and your readers :lol:
and don't rush it...
i'm only posting fast today to make up for yesterday... i still owe you chapters!!!!!!!!!!!
.. is that last paragraph a foreshadowing of who our mystery hate mail writer is?Hmm...shan't comment on this XD
Yossui?!?!?!
.. why are you posting fast now? ... i can't keep up... GGGGAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!After next week, I will start full-fledged studying for 2 weeks and disappear from the forum for a fortnight..ok, I might sneak a chapter or 2 but it will really go really slow :(
yossy is a great friend to miki *inheaven*Come back down to read the next chap! don't disappear in heaven! :lol:
i hope that yossy isn't the mails writer*start praying* :mon pray2:
Hm... to figure out who the mysterious hate mail sender is I will have to use all of my natural problem solving instints ...oh, wait, I don't have any of those err...in that case I'll just make a random stab in the dark and say it is Rika and Eri who sent those messages.Hmm...shan't comment on this as well :P
Interesting, they may have found a way to hurt Miki in a much deeper and more painful way then running her over with a car or beating her with a blunt object ever could...Reading your comments always give me motivation to write on..probably the premonition is too strong or something :oops:
“Oh well, it’s ok ! I sent you the picture I took with Goto Maki last year…”From Chap 6, surprisingly no one picks it out :O
Goto Maki? The name sounds familiar. This girl has no internet literacy at all. After she viewed the photo, she sent a message, “Hey let’s go for the audition together.”
“I see her as my godsister…is this weird? Is this wrong?”
I know that. She’s prettier and better at everything than me. What should I do?”
I think the sender is Reina or Maki, Miki's phone is at home and when Aya reads it she will get the wrong idea, same for Rika. I smell trouble. Instead of assuring Aya, I have a bad feeling she will end up fighting with her. That's gonna suck and I hope it isn't so. I also hope that Rika doesn't get jealous to the point of looking at Yoshis message and thinking the "More than friends" act is a romantic suggestion.Stay tuned... :P
I seriously thought "trouble" when I read the message. Why are you such an idiot Yoshi? Why?
Somehow, I want Aya+Maki and Miki for Yossie in this ficHmm..I will open a poll for pairings later.. :lol:
rika rejects the calls from miki??? i don't think that yossy did it (supposing that miki called yossy )Hmm..maybe the next chapter will shed some light into this..promise to reread the last bit after the next chap is posted, yeah? :D
wooo i want to read what will do aya with makiYou gonna be a little more patient..*Points at the Ishiyoshi fans*
oh man, you posted again!! i'm toast!!!Maybe Rika likes toast :roll: :lol:
oblivious ayaya... is annoying...You can join the 'I hate Aya in Gomattou/F.Y.I group'
where is my ishiyoshi???Be patient...it will happen soon after you complete your 4.5 ^-^
^ i agree... rika is screening yossui's calls...^same as what I said to Yukari..reread this chap after the next chap is posted, k? I promise it will make more sense :)
... i still don't think rika is the culprit...This is love, tru_harmony..you are in love :wub:
i belive(sic) in you, Charmy-sama... please in your rabu-rabu mercy, don't fail me!!!!
I still think Rika and Eri are the letter people... Just the 'innocent immaturity' of there insults sounds like themShan't comment on this.. :P
Awww, i'm gonna jump on the Yukari train and start chanting for YoMiki ... Miki needs someone better than Aya, and so does Maki!^Join that group..I can open one on facebook :lol:
It's as if Aya never thinks of anyone but herself... After everything Miki did and gave up for her, she still expects to walk along her merry way and have Miki follow along with no complaints!
Can I kill Aya and then console Miki myself? (she'll never know it was me )You're getting violent :( *tito runs away with Aya*
At least let me slap the bitch and maybe ruin her hair
Someone I don't feel like writing today..oh man, this sucks
Weren’t Aya’s innocence and naivety the very things that had attracted Miki to her in the very first place and had all along given her the urge to protect her?...Miki's realizing now that playing protector gets kinda old after a while when the protectee is happily oblivious to the gravity of what's going on...
I'm imagining Maki will stay or Aya will go with her and Miki will have Yossie and Rika will be happy alone or with meHmm... :roll:
WRITE! If you don't write now you will ruun out of holidays! And then you wont be able to write even more! And besides, Miki's dying out there!Yeah I'm writing now.. :D
And what is everyone going on about? Rika screening Yoshi's calls? First of all what the hell is screening? Second of all, they didn't even show up on that chapter! It was just Miki and Aya fighting ( Cry ) and Miki trying to get Aya back by calling her on the phone only to get hung up on and rejected when Aya realilsed it was her because she is too dumb to do anything right! And then making plans to sleep with the enemy-oops, I mean, go out for a day date with the other woman-I mean have lunch with Maki.It will end up as one whole chunk of a chapter if I put ishiyoshi in as well..be patient, wait for the next one :)
Poor GAM...They were slowly going in different directions all along...It seems that Miki is more determined and dedicated to the relationship then Aya. I don't think Aya's selfish, necessarily, I just think she's really naive and truly believes that she can just ignore all the problems and they'll go away, but the result is that Miki is the one who has to pick up the slack and try to salvage things, imo...Exactly :grin: :grin:
...Miki already knew that though...
...Miki's realizing now that playing protector gets kinda old after a while when the protectee is happily oblivious to the gravity of what's going on..Exactly! :D
hopefully you'll feel like writing soon *tries to think of how to help...* um...here, have a charm thingy :omamori:I don't know what it says though...Thanks for the help :wub: It means shiawase/happiness.. how nice is it to be a Chinese :P
tito, please, don't wait for my 4.5 updates... i can't stay online that long today... ... please just write... a flying brick just missed my head this morning with the words 'write 4.5 or else'... someone out there desperately needs to read a new chapter from you... i promise to post 9 chapters on monday if you post an update today...Sorry, I was just feeling cranky last night and whether you write or not, I wouldn't have written anything last night. Ok, promise :) Stay around, I will update a new chap ASAP!
Wearing a short skirt on an early winter evening, she felt cold standing out there on the streets. Her mother would never approve of that length of skirt on such evenings. But she knew Rika would approve of it.
Yossie raised her eyebrows. “Don’t you always wear them?”
“I do but you don’t and I don’t wear short skirt on a cold evening like this. I wonder why you do.” Ai winked.
“Ok fine. I’m meeting Rika later. Satisfied?”
“Having a date, I see? So nice!”
“What are you doing in here then, Ai?”
“I want to buy a pair of matching necklaces-”
“For Risa?”
Ai blushed. “Yeah, but I can’t decide on one.”
She has grown up as well…
“Rika!” Yossie shouted and waved at her. Rika looked at her and appeared shocked. It wasn’t an everyday affair for Yossie to walk around Tokyo in a skirt, let alone a short one. Rika looked down at the similar skirt that she was wearing and she grinned. She knew that they were thinking of the same thing when they went through their own wardrobes earlier before the dinner date.
When Rika’s eyes were fixated at her after she called her name, Yossie blushed. She wished that time would pause at that very second when their eyes met. They were wearing matching skirts on a cold evening and their eyes never left the other. It was such a magical moment which she promised to store in the hard disk in her head for life.
Yossie nodded and told the waitress, “Can you get me a plate of fried rice? Do you have Chinese ramen here for her? Oh she meant Chinese noodles. Thank you.”
Rika laughed. That was how nervous she was on her first date with Yossie. She had wanted Chinese ramen then. What a joke. She felt touched that even though 7 years had passed, Yossie still remembered the intrinsic details of their first date.
“See, I still remember,” Yossie whispered and winked.
Yossie laughed. Her eyes met Rika’s again and she smiled. “I love you, Rika especially when we wear matching skirts. Do you know why I am wearing a skirt today?”
“Why?” Rika asked rather innocently.
Yossie ran her fingers up Rika’s legs and murmured, “Skirts are easier…”
At this moment, Yossie’s handphone on the table vibrated and her ringing tone, Osaka Koi no Uta, played. Yossie picked up her phone but Rika took it away from her. Nothing could be more important than this. No one had the right to disturb this magical moment. Rika then leaned over and kissed Yossie on her lips. There was no one dining near them and she didn’t give a damn to paparazzi or anyone at that very moment when their lips touched. Yossie didn’t give a damn about the phone call as well. The only person in Yossie’s mind now was Rika.
When she flipped open her phone, she was shocked that the caller was Miki. Ever since that day when Miki called to confide in her that she had fallen in love with someone who was, no doubt, Aya, she hadn’t been calling Yossie. Why did she call me? It must be something important. She won’t call me for nothing…
Yossie pressed the dial button and held the phone close to her ears. It was engaged. She tried for the second time and it was engaged as well. A gut feeling told her that something bad had happened to Miki. She dialed again and this time around, Miki’s phone was still engaged. She thought of the different things that might have happened to Miki and prayed that Miki would pick up her call soon. It was so worrying.
“Yossie, who are you calling?” Rika asked. She could see from Yossie’s expression who that person was but she wanted to hear her confirmation.
Yossie gazed at the girl sitting beside her. She knew she shouldn’t lie to her. She knew that honesty was important in love. She murmured under her breath, “Fujimoto.”
I knew it, it’s her. “What happened?”
Yossie frowned for the first time that evening. “I don’t know. Something is wrong with her. She called me.” She clicked on the dial button on her phone and her eyes were fixated on the phone.
If that person is me instead of her, will you care as much? “Is she not picking up your call?” Rika asked with tears welling up in her eyes. She wanted the attention back. She wanted Yossie to stare at her again and not at the unanimated object in front of her.
Yossie nodded. “Something must have happened to her.”
“Yossie…”
“Hmm?” Yossie asked without even looking at Rika.
“Do you like her?”
Taken aback, Yossie looked at the girl sitting beside her and shook her head repeatedly. “What are you thinking of? I only love you in my life! You’re my one and only.”
Rika shook her head in dismay. “Those are pick-up lines, Yossie. Your actions don’t go with your words.”
“I’m sorry Rika but I’m really worried for Miki as a friend. Trust me on that. We are nothing other than friends.”
Yossie pressed on the dial button and this time round, it wasn’t engaged. Almost immediately, Miki picked up the phone. Miki shouted, “What’s your problem? Why did you call me so many times?”
“Hey, you were the one who called me,” Yossie retorted.
“Did I?”
“Yes, you did.”
“Shit, I must have dialed the wrong number. I thought I was calling Aya. But you shouldn’t have called me so many times! Just send me a message will do.”
I should have guessed as much. You just called the wrong number. I feel dumb worrying about you. “I didn’t know that you dialed a wrong number. I mean how on earth will I know? I thought something had happened to you and I was worried.”
“Sorry, I ought to be calling Aya now. See you!” Miki hung up.
When Yossie put down her phone, she was furious. For the first time, she felt Miki’s daggers of words piercing through her heart. Miki didn’t even appreciate her concern at all. She tried to convince herself that maybe something bad had happened between Miki and Aya but it couldn’t stop the pain in the heart. She asked to no one in particular, “Did I overreact to her phone call?”
Rika gazed at the girl sitting beside her. She knew that even though Yossie was next to her, she was thinking of another girl. Should I even attempt to answer her question? I think I ought to. “Yes, you did. A friend won’t be so worried and call the other numerous times just because of a missed call.” You see her more than just a friend. Admit it.
“But the point is she hasn’t called me for a few months already and she isn’t that kind who calls random people for nothing-”
Rika interrupted, “At least today you learn that there is something called ‘wrong number’.”
“True.”
“Aren’t you eating a bit? Your fried rice is getting cold.”
Yossie shook her head. “I’m not really hungry.” In actual fact, she had lost her appetite because of what Miki had said to her. Those words had pierced her heart.
Silence fell upon them for a while. Yossie gazed at the girl eating next to her. She ought to be fair to her. She couldn’t spoil the beautiful evening just because of a phone call. Yossie said, “After you finished eating, let’s go to my place-”
“Yossie, I have almost forgotten that my mum is coming over to my place tonight and I need to keep her company. Another day then,” Rika lied.
Yossie nodded. She knew she had ruined the entire evening. “Sorry Rika,” she murmured.
Rika laughed. “For what?”
“For spoiling the entire evening. It’s my fault.” Rika should have just confiscated my handphone.
“It’s not your fault. Ok, I’m done with my noodles. Let’s go.” Rika stood up and walked out of the restaurant with Yossie following closely behind. Rika recalled the image of them walking hand-in-hand into the restaurant and she shook her head. It was less than half an hour but the emotions that she had earlier and now and then were different. Earlier she was elated and excited about the date but now, she just felt upset and dismayed. The string tying to Yossie’s heart was no longer in her hands. She could no longer affect how Yossie felt and thought. It was in Miki’s hands now. She thought she had managed to keep Yossie beside her by sending those letters but it seemed as though it had brought about a very different effect.
She knew she wasn’t fair to Rika as she was thinking of Miki almost for the entire evening. She recalled Rika’s expression when she asked her whether she liked Miki or not and the pain in her heart exacerbated. For the first time, she wondered whether what Rika said was true.
hhh, what are you doing to me!?That's tito for you :lol:
Now I want IshiYoshi to stay together, not YoMiki
About Aya just being niave and oblivious, that's no excuse for her to treat my Mikitty like that anymore. After being like that before she almost lost Miki forever and vowed at the hospital that she would be like that again and would love and protect Miki she has done for her so many times! Miki keeps giving her everything to Aya and still isn't getting the same treatment in return... You suck Aya!It's always easier said than done...
Ohhhh, I almost forgot, YOU PUT MY TAKAGAKINESS IN THERE!!! YAYAY... I love you! But you know I still want moreI decide to pop in a chapter in between so you will have to wait till chap 22 for them to appear again :D Shall see whether it can come earlier but no guarantees
you got me! wojojojo bad Yukari take the control i just love that Yossy at least have doubts about her feelings for MikiSorry I can't comment on each comment but what I want to say is you are crazy over Yomiki :wub: Though this is more of an ishiyoshi chap than a yomiki one :D
ok it was a long comment O.o i realized that i don't do it oftenCan I say I love long comments? Reading long comments make me feel happy :wub:
I'm really looking forward to chapter 22 :D
You keep talking about it so now I'm expecting something gooood ;) :wub:
Btw, what number chapter are we one now? :lol: :oops:
But she didn’t want to appear as a weak girl to Yossie. If Yossie liked Miki, then Yossie wouldn’t like weak girls. She didn’t want to let go of Yossie no matter what…
The image of Rika accusing her that she liked Miki came to her mind. She was confused. She didn’t quite know how she felt towards Miki. All along, she felt comfortable talking to Miki but was that really love?
She shook her head and wondered, “Who am I thinking of now when I look at the stars in the sky?”
Miki felt tears running down her cheeks and she made no attempt to hide them because she was alone in the dark. Darkness. Loneliness. How familiar she was to such an atmosphere and to such an emotion.
She pressed on the reply button and typed: “I love you, Miki-tan.” She then pressed on the send button before she switched off her phone.
I promise it won’t affect us, Miki-tan. I promise.
She had hurt Aya too much. Maybe it was a good time for a brand new start for both of them. Maybe it was high time for her to leave Aya’s life.
How much she hoped that Yossie could be right beside her now counting the stars in the sky with her like what they used to do in the past.
I remember when I'm looking at the night stars
As Yossie gazed at the sky and the sea which were merged into infinite darkness, she wondered whether Rika was looking at the same sky as well. How much she wished that Rika was next to her lying on her shoulders now.so heartbreaking! :mon cry:
I'm still looking at the same sky and same sea now
The image of Rika accusing her that she liked Miki came to her mind. She was confused. She didn’t quite know how she felt towards Miki. All along, she felt comfortable talking to Miki but was that really love?
Hey, you can hear my voice
She shook her head and wondered, “Who am I thinking of now when I look at the stars in the sky?”
Hey, you can feel my heart
A land breeze blew past her and it disrupted her train of thoughts. She shivered.
This wind will bring it to me, just like always
She had called Aya 28 times and Aya hung up on her every single time except for that one occasion whereby her phone was engaged. Miki knew that Aya was avoiding her. She had sent 51 messages to Aya asking her to pick up her call and telling Aya that she was really sorry. Aya only messaged her one single line at the end of the day: ‘what we need is time’. Perhaps Aya was right that all they needed was some quiet time on their own to sort out their thoughts.i don't like aya in this fic :mon annoy: she makes miki suffer so much
Miki felt tears running down her cheeks and she made no attempt to hide them because she was alone in the dark. Darkness. Loneliness. How familiar she was to such an atmosphere and to such an emotion.NOOOOOOO~~ MIKI!! :mon runcry:
Tears streamed down her cheeks as she read through each and every message again. She didn’t mean to avoid Miki but she was certain that they needed time on their own. At least, she needed time to sort out her thoughts alone. She knew that Miki loved her very much but all along, she didn’t quite know how to reciprocate her love. She hated herself for saying that they should just stay as friends and to be exact, she wasn’t avoiding Miki. She was avoiding herself.that hurts :mon emo:
She pressed on the reply button and typed: “I love you, Miki-tan.” She then pressed on the send button before she switched off her phone. She thought, “Should I tell Miki about the meeting I’m having with Maki tomorrow? The timing just seemed to be wrong. Perhaps I shouldn’t even have agreed on meeting up with her. But I should keep to my words. I promise it won’t affect us, Miki-tan. I promise.”
She recalled how she had begged Aya for forgiveness for the hit-and-run incident and how they confessed their love for each other and how she broke up with Aya.
My memories are changing, they're fading
She had hurt Aya too much. Maybe it was a good time for a brand new start for both of them. Maybe it was high time for her to leave Aya’s life.
I'll welcome a new tomorrow
Yossie took a tissue and wiped off the tears on Miki’s face. Miki allowed Yossie to do so. “You don’t have to worry about GAM. In the worst scenario whereby GAM is fully terminated, it shouldn’t matter as much as before now that you have hooked up with her.”Yossi's right. Even if they can't be an official group, they're still together in the more important way. :oops:
When they were out of the bar, Yossie took out her handphone and saw that there were one new message which read as followed: Yossie, let’s meet up for dinner later at that same Chinese restaurant. Is 6pm fine with you? Forever waiting for you – Charmy Rika ^^Yeah, considering how Rika freaks out at any mention/hint of Miki, better safe than sorry.
“Is your darling looking for you again?” Miki teased.
“Yeah, I got to go back to bathe and change up before I meet up with her. I don’t want to have the Fujimoto’s smell when I meet up with her later.”
“That isn’t a bad scent.”
“Yeah, but it gives the wrong impression to her.
See you!” Yossie exclaimed. She then flagged a taxi and jumped into it. Inside the taxi, she waved to Miki and sent her a text message: If anything goes wrong, just call me. I’m just so glad that you confided in me. It shows that you don’t view me just as an ordinary friend. Thanks for giving me another chance, Fujimoto. Yossie smiled.Yossi made sure to send it to the correct number, right?
*GAM ARGUMENT*:OMG: :cry:
*AYA-MAKI CONVO*Oh crap...this isn't going to end well.
When she flipped open her phone, she was shocked that the caller was Miki. Ever since that day when Miki called to confide in her that she had fallen in love with someone who was, no doubt, Aya, she hadn’t been calling Yossie. Why did she call me? It must be something important. She won’t call me for nothing…Careful Yossi, don't let Rika find out that Miki's calling you or vice versa, especially now.
“Yossie, who are you calling?” Rika asked. She could see from Yossie’s expression who that person was but she wanted to hear her confirmation.Oh crap...
Yossie gazed at the girl sitting beside her. She knew she shouldn’t lie to her. She knew that honesty was important in love. She murmured under her breath, “Fujimoto.”
I knew it, it’s her.
She thought, “Should I tell Miki about the meeting I’m having with Maki tomorrow?Probably not, but it probably wouldn't be good either way, if you think about it. Chances are Miki's going to find out about their meeting anyway. If Aya doesn't tell her, Miki will flip out because she kept it a secret from her. If Aya DOES tell her, Miki will flip out because Aya agreed to the meeting.
wow, it's heartbreaking and awesomely awesomeThis makes me very happy :wub:
mmm, sounds fishy:glasses:
yeah, a good time to start a new life... together^This cracks me up! XD
first... i love this song, it's beautiful, i'm not a takitty fan but even i listen to it a lot, and i like how you write song ficThanks! This makes me happy :wub: That song always pops up in my head when I visit the beaches..
so heartbreaking! :mon cry:*Piece back Yukari's heart* Oh man, this reminds me of Humpty Dumpty... :lol:
wow poor Yossy, i hope that she should can clarify her feelings :mon wind:Hmm..hopefully :P
that hurts :mon emo:Though you dislike Aya but you still feel for her..nice emotional one, girl! :lol:
it could affect them... :mon scare:*Drum rolls*
maki... :mon waterworks: this chapter is so saaaaaaaaaaaadOh man, I didn't intend to make it so sad at first you know? Really..
There's also another potential source for all that hate-mail, but I'm hoping that I'm wrong about it.Yey! JFC is back :) *Tries to read JFC's mind* Ok, I think I fail :depressed:
Oh crap...this isn't going to end well.*Drum rolls*
Probably not, but it probably wouldn't be good either way, if you think about it. Chances are Miki's going to find out about their meeting anyway. If Aya doesn't tell her, Miki will flip out because she kept it a secret from her. If Aya DOES tell her, Miki will flip out because Aya agreed to the meeting.It will be bad either way for them... :(
Today wasn't a very good day for me and I'm quite affected by the fact that my team lost this morning to our arch-rival.. Guess the fastest I can start writing the next chapter and post it up is tonight ;)
i'll wait!! :mon nap:I love you :wub: :wub: now I'm more in the mood already but I need to finish my Math assignment first :angry:
i'm not a nice emotional girl :mon scare: it's just that even if i don't like aya in this fic, i don't hate her :mon exhaust:
so much drum rolls... something will happen *drum rolls*
waiting next chaptaaa!
hey tito... can you calculate how many i owe you now? i lost count...Think it is 9+4.5 = 13.5 .. minus away the one you just posted, it is 12.5..enjoy writing! :D
you wrote that last one well... i actually wanted to write something with that "under the same sky" thing... you beat me to it... oh well... haha...Thanks..yeah I have this idea for some time already from Namie Amuro's Wishing under the same star song but I just don't know where to put it..oh well, don't write that! If that happens, it means Ishiyoshi in Runaway will separate! NO!! :cry:
from my fic's charmy to your fic's charmy: Don't give up... Positive Charmy!!!Ganbatte! For the sake of the one and only Prince Charmy.. I mean, Charming :lol:
i'll wait!! :mon nap:I love you :wub: :wub: now I'm more in the mood already but I need to finish my Math assignment first :angry: Don't fall asleep! XD
i'm not a nice emotional girl :mon scare: it's just that even if i don't like aya in this fic, i don't hate her :mon exhaust:
so much drum rolls... something will happen *drum rolls*
waiting next chaptaaa!
I haven't read it yet but I refuse to be rationale!See, that's a Mikitty-fanatic attitude :P
I shall always protect my Mikitty... even it means using a knife
It wasn't that bad... But once we get to Aya's POV I'll probably flip outIn anticipation for next part, I guess? :D
I like Maki, even in this story she still makes me wanna fall for her so if she can be happy at the expense of Miki's happiness, I don't mind that too much. I'm sooo torn... Can't we have YoCharMikitty/IshiYoshiKitty or whatever the hell it is, and somehow make Aya miserable and Maki happy... PUHLEASE~~~!Threesome? Hmm...*looks at tru_harmony* hmm...
We're really gonna need some TakaGaki love to make up for all this sad angst*reads this for the 2nd time* Remember the chapter number that I told you last time round? I thought using Yume kara Samete for earlier chapter will make you happy and distract you from TakaGaki for a while ;) :oops:
WHY DID YOU UPDATE SO SOON?!*Transfer reason to Runaway thread* You can do it! Makenaide! :D
i won't be able to meet my quota now... *falls apart* GGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
... *picks up pieces of self and tries to put self back together*...
AYA, IT'S ALMOST KURISMASU!!!!!! what are you doing with maki?! you should be with miki!!!!! ... if not, she might end up in yossui's arms... if that happens, what will happen to my Charmy-sama?!?!?!?!If that happens, Charmy will spend Christmas with you :lol:
i want my ishiyoshi chapter... *takes out a knife**Check plan for FYI* Ok, wait patiently for next chapter (that is different from parts) :D
If that happens, Charmy will spend Christmas with you
*Check plan for FYI* Ok, wait patiently for next chapter (that is different from parts)
Threesome? Hmm...*looks at tru_harmony* hmm...SHE CAN BE WITH REINA! :D (my fave Maki pairing :heart: )
How can Maki be happy without Aya? Maybe there is a way..arghh, I'm confused!!
*reads this for the 2nd time* Remember the chapter number that I told you last time round? I thought using Yume kara Samete for earlier chapter will make you happy and distract you from TakaGaki for a while ;) :oops:I got excited with that heading coz I thought Ai would be there, but no :(
:rofl: That's the right attitude ;)QuoteIf that happens, Charmy will spend Christmas with you
If that happens, my rabu-rabu will leave me... ... oh well.
If that happens, my rabu-rabu will leave me... ... oh well..I think I'm dumb..I don't get what you are getting at...is rabu-rabu a person? ;) :( :D
...i am waiting... ... *still holding knife*You know it partially depends on your updates as well, right? Chill, girl, put the knife aside. We can have a nice girl talk without knife. Yeah, put it away.. :)
SHE CAN BE WITH REINA! (my fave Maki pairing )Then Eri will get in between TakaGaki? Oh man, you just want a miserable and sad Aya.. XD
But she can still have Aya, provided Aya is miserable but hides it very well from Maki
I got excited with that heading coz I thought Ai would be there, but noI gave you a chance to listen to Ai's song while reading F.Y.I..So thoughtful of me, right? :wub:
It was still sweet of you to use that song though
And I know, I'm still waiting for 22 but I'm just so desperate
Relax..don't hurl your knives at Aya or Maki. And most importantly, don't throw those knives at tito
damn, that was funny, very funnyLol, I'm scared.. :O XD :lol:
KrisZ I agree fully..
that Miki should go to Yossie.?. yeah be thankful to lollipopgirlThat the TakaGaki makes me drool... :lol: ^I'm not really in a position to agree to that XD *Worship the studying girl*
*keeps knife in drawer... takes out blender... grabs everybody (rika, yossui, miki, ayaya, maki) and puts them in blender*That's fivesome!! Wow :wub: everyone here wants that blender..^yey, good metaphor (is that one? my lit sucks) *pass the toaster to lollipopgirl*
~RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!~ there... that should keep everyone happy...
... TG need not be included... they're in the toaster... it's getting hot...
still waiting for ishiyoshi goodnessYou'll have to wait for some time really :D
Dear readers (especially Miki's fans), please promise that you will stay rational and calm after reading this. You can put your knives away just in case..:shifty:
I picked up my phone and dialed Aya’s manager and to my delight, he picked up my call. “Hello, may I know Aya’s schedule for the day? Fujimoto Miki here.” I went straight into my point.Oh hell I knew it. Aya probably mentioned to her manager that she was going out, and thus the manager assumed it was with Miki. This now means that Miki will probably go looking for Aya.
“Hi Miki, today is Aya’s rest day. I thought she’s with you,”
“She’s not with me.” It’s just so painful to admit to this. “Do you have any idea where she is now?”And heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere we go.
“Hmm, I’m not very sure where she is,” he paused before adding, “ Oh Maki is leaving Japan this afternoon so maybe Aya is with Maki now. After all they are-” I hung up abruptly.
December 24 (11.23am)Unfortunately, something tells me Aya won't see it that way.
After an agonizing one and a half hour ride on the taxi, I finally reached Narita Airport. Well, as saying goes, “It’s better to be safe than sorry.” I didn’t doubt you. I was just playing safe.
Just as when I was about to leave the airport, from the corner of my eyes, I saw 2 girls who resembled Maki and Aya strolling towards Starbucks. I turned my head to face the 2 girls and blinked several times in an attempt to knock away the hallucination. I must be looking out for them for too long that I hallucinated. But as I moved closer towards the pair who was now seated across each other in a cozy corner in Starbucks, I realized that it wasn’t my hallucination. I couldn’t believe my eyes. They were Goto Maki and Matsuura Aya.:badluck:
I strode towards them. Maki turned and greeted me with that stupid grin on her face, “Hi Miki.”Maki knows that Miki and Aya are together now, right?
*hurls knives at tito* :angry:
Oh wait
-thinks back to own storys-
damn...I hurt Miki all the time too
What the hell should I say to her this time round? I had already apologized to her and I had said “I love you” 14 times. I held my phone close to my ears and said softly, “Aya-chan, I know I shouldn’t have spoken like that to you yesterday. I’m sorry about that. Can you at least give me a chance to make amends for what I have done? Please.”
“Hi Miki, today is Aya’s rest day. I thought she’s with you,” he replied and cackled when he completed his sentence.f------- manager!! you hadn't to say her!!! :mon zoom:
I frowned as the sense of irritation grew in me. Why did he say that ‘I thought she’s with you’? He made me feel like an irresponsible lover. Why did he even cackle? Couldn’t he just learn how to laugh properly? I took in a deep breath before I spoke so that I wouldn’t flare up at him, “She’s not with me.” It’s just so painful to admit to this. “Do you have any idea where she is now?”
“Hmm, I’m not very sure where she is,” he paused before adding, “ Oh Maki is leaving Japan this afternoon so maybe Aya is with Maki now. After all they are-” I hung up abruptly. I knew what he was about to say. They are lovers. No, they were lovers. Maki, why did she come into the picture again? Or perhaps she was always in the picture and had never left. He was just bullshitting. Aya wouldn’t meet up with her. Maki knocked her down. Maki dumped her. Why would Aya go and see her and be reminded of all the unhappiness in the past? Maybe Aya didn’t view their past as unhappy memories. Maybe Aya still liked her. No, I shouldn’t doubt Aya. Doubt would only shake our relationship even more. Aya wouldn’t.
Just as when I was about to leave the airport, from the corner of my eyes, I saw 2 girls who resembled Maki and Aya strolling towards Starbucks. I turned my head to face the 2 girls and blinked several times in an attempt to knock away the hallucination. I must be looking out for them for too long that I hallucinated. But as I moved closer towards the pair who was now seated across each other in a cozy corner in Starbucks, I realized that it wasn’t my hallucination. I couldn’t believe my eyes. They were Goto Maki and Matsuura Aya.nooooooooooooooo~~ bad for gam... good for Yomiki... omg now i'm confused :mon scare:
Why didn’t Aya tell me about their meeting? Why did she keep it as a secret? Were my greatest fears turning into reality? I didn’t know exactly how I felt then. Jealous? Not quite. Depressed? Not exactly. Angry? Maybe.
After some time, Maki leaned towards Aya with a grin plastered on her face. Aya sat there, unmoving and from my angle, I couldn’t quite see the expression on her face. Their faces were just inches apart. I couldn’t take this any longer. This couldn’t happen to me. After all that I had done for Aya, things couldn’t go back to square one. What did I do wrong to deserve this? So that was why Aya didn’t tell me about their meeting. I thought she loved me ever since that day I confessed to her. When did she fall in love with Maki again? Or maybe she was still in love with her all along. I was the one in delusion.mikiiiii~~ nooo~~ :mon scare:
I strode towards them. Maki turned and greeted me with that stupid grin on her face, “Hi Miki.”i love maki~~ :mon inluv: gocchin might take Aya to another country :mon dance:, if she won't do that... :mon mad:... i still will love her :mon lovelaff:
I hated her innocence. I hated her pretence. I could no longer contain the anger and hatred in me and I swung my arm and slapped her hard on her cheeks. She didn’t look shocked. In fact, she looked somewhat relaxed after the slap. What the hell. She even deprived me of the satisfaction a person gets after slapping another person. Who would appear relaxed after a slap? I didn’t know what to say. I didn’t know what to do. I ended up doing something quite cowardly. I bit my lips and ran off as quickly as I could with tears running down my cheeks.
I heard Aya call my name but I didn’t turn back. What did she want to say? She lied to me. She cheated on me. Why the hell did she message ‘I love you’ to me last night when she didn’t mean it? Why did she make me feel loved? Or maybe she had been two-timing all these while. Fujimoto Miki never likes to share pies with other people. Never.that's Miki!!! great miki-sama!! :mon yeah:
you have all the right tito
school - ganbatte neThanks... :(
MIKI!!!!!!Please don't do anything bad to Miki in One Minute..don't. Ok I think you will :cry: :cry:
Oh wait
-thinks back to own storys-
damn...I hurt Miki all the time too
grrr...I think you did..my heart is in pain :lol:
*throws one more knife*
Sorry if I hit you with any of those!
Maki knows that Miki and Aya are together now, right?Hmm, I didn't quite reveal whether Maki knows about them or not..more will be covered in Mat's and Go's POVs :D
* JFC takes shelter and awaits for teh shitz to fly.
Yeah , I understand what you mean... Miki's just so... hurtable in ficsAgree... :cry:
hi hi!! i read it when you posted it, but i was log out, and i go to sleep, now i have rings under my eyesOh man, now I feel bad..rings, rings, GO AWAY!! :lol:
nooooooooooooooo~~ bad for gam... good for Yomiki... omg now i'm confusedFor a moment, I thought I killed your love for Yomiki...
that's Miki!!! great miki-sama!!Matchmaker Yukari in action! :mon dance:
now i'm calling yossy to let her know about it...
i won't kill you tito, i want updates! LOLYeah!~ If you don't see me posting around in the next hour, it probably means that I'm out but I doubt that will be the case though..Anyway, if I'm out, you should catch some rest..don't make me feel bad :P XD
and about aya, im sure she still likes maki.. its either that or thats what i want to believe..Stay tuned for the next POV! :P
hmm.. maki got slapped by miki and she is still smiling.. doesnt that tell miki anything??
hmm... i'll comment more if i can.. times almost up.. i'll try and make up for it if you want titoI miss you tooo!!! :wub: Hope to see you commenting soon! I know you're catching every single chapter dutifully even without a comp! I love you! :wub:
I missed yoouuu!!
Yeah!~ If you don't see me posting around in the next hour, it probably means that I'm out but I doubt that will be the case though..Anyway, if I'm out, you should catch some rest..don't make me feel bad :P XD
I flipped open my phone and pressed the ‘on’ button several times and I was frustrated that my phone’s screen was blank. I came to one conclusion: my phone’s battery was flat. Shit, I should have charged it yesterday. Why did I fall asleep on my bed before I charged it?Ah,so that's why she didn't get the umpty-million messages Miki was leaving and why she herself hasn't called Miki.
She asked in that same tender voice, “Shall we go in?” I nodded. I hated the familiarity. How much I wanted to just hail a cab right now and leave Narita.Awkward...and little do either of them know that Miki's actually there at the airport too, and, if the timing is right, she's probably witnessing them walking together RIGHT NOW!
“Do you like Starbucks?” she asked again when we entered the airport. Personally I preferred Coffee Bean but this wasn’t the correct time to say that. I nodded in agreement and we strolled towards Starbucks in silence. I didn’t know how to describe that silence. It wasn’t exactly awkward but neither was it comfortable.
We were seated across each other in a cozy corner in Starbucks after I grabbed a cup of cappuccino and she got latte for herself.You mean Maki didn't get her usual Caramel Macchiato? :P
As an artist, I was used to sitting in corners. But this corner just seemed to be too cozy to my liking and it brought back too much memories. Way too much. I tried to shake off those memories but I failed.Ok, the fact that Aya's having this conflict IS rather unsettling. Considering this, it's not that surprising that Miki would be insecure and scared about losing Aya the way she has been.
Maki took a sip of the latte she ordered before she whispered, “I’m sorry for dumping you like that. It was all my fault. I never expect you to forgive me. I never expect us to be anything again,” she paused and she looked straight into my eyes. I gazed at her and I instantly realized that was a very big mistake. That pair of penetrating eyes looked hurt and it was just too familiar to my liking. Penetrating eyes, lips…No, I shouldn’t be thinking of this. I loved Miki.
When our faces were inches apart, I could hear someone stomping towards us. Maybe it was someone who was late for his or her flight and had to rush his or her lunch. Maki turned her head and greeted that person, “Hi Miki.” My jaws literally dropped when I heard the name.Aya = :mon wtf:
“Go and chase after her. She likes you,” Maki spoke with a smile on her face.Well, if Maki didn't know before, she's pretty much figured it out now.
Without saying a word, I took off my heels, dashed off and ran after Miki. I knew I wouldn’t be able to catch Miki wearing those heels. But without the heels, would it be possible for me to catch up with the former Gatas player? I had no choice but to chase. It was my one and only chance to catch her heart.RUN AYA! RUN LIKE DA WIIIIIIIIIIIIIND!!!
jujuju pleaaaaaaaaaase pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase don't catch her!!! :mon ref:^Pretty true about the gratitude part..I wonder whether you look forward to Aya/Maki kiss more or YoMiki as a result of that :lol: Such a redundant question
aya don't love miki :mon annoy: she just feel gratitude, 'cause she can't betray miki for all the things that she do for her :mon headbang:
capuccino jojojo maki could just kiss ayaya :mon wind:
and and... who can understand maki goto?? :mon noprob:This cracks me up! :rofl:
that's my comment, i want to read maki pov :mon dunno:Patience..probably tonight or tomorrow..I really got to go already :(
]You mean Maki didn't get her usual Caramel Macchiato? :PErr..change of taste? Ok, I admit that I didn't know about this.. ;)Oh well, change of taste! :lol:
Aya = :mon wtf::lol: ^Accurate portrayal!
And yeah, the fact that Maki remained smiling throughout the whole thing is kinda suspicious, if not just downright weird/creepy.Maki's POV coming up soon! :wub:
[/quote]QuoteWithout saying a word, I took off my heels, dashed off and ran after Miki. I knew I wouldn’t be able to catch Miki wearing those heels. But without the heels, would it be possible for me to catch up with the former Gatas player? I had no choice but to chase. It was my one and only chance to catch her heart.RUN AYA! RUN LIKE DA WIIIIIIIIIIIIIND!!!
Miki = :mon runcry:
Aya = :mon rush: (closest I could come up with, it's not like we have many running smileys here :P)
aya... run quick... if miki runs into yossui's arms, you are going to get it...The way you guys twist the story and request for different pairings crack me up! XD
*breaks into, steals and revs up RFP yossui's z4*
it you want rubber on your head and asphalt under, walk daintily...
...still waiting for sweet ishiyoshi reconciliationThat..you really got to be much more patient and pray hard :D
^Pretty true about the gratitude part..I wonder whether you look forward to Aya/Maki kiss more or YoMiki as a result of that :lol: Such a redundant question
Suddenly, Maki leaned across the table towards me, smiled and spoke rather gently, “There’s some cream on your face, Aya. Don’t move.” I obeyed and didn’t move an inch. As she came closer to me, I could feel her breathing. It was just so familiar. Shit, I shouldn’t have drunk it. Shit, I shouldn’t have even ordered cappuccino. Those memories surfaced themselves again and I couldn’t shake them off. They were overwhelming and suffocating me.aww.. it was too good to be true.. though this is Aya's POV i bet Maki was thinking of kissing her just before she leaves.. 8) lol, my wishful thinking again..
Maki didn’t appear shocked though. In fact, she looked relaxed. Maybe she had suffered a lot in there and this slap wasn’t something great or maybe she just wanted to taunt Miki by depriving Miki of the satisfaction of slapping. Or maybe she had already expected it to come. This girl was just simply too difficult to be read. I couldn’t understand what was going through her mind. I never understand.Hmm.. what if... all of what she thought were true... she suffered a lot so it didnt matter and since she saw Miki she expected the slap but wanted to deprive her of satisfaction... :D Everything must be going through her mind.. or.. planned out.. ;)
“Go and chase after her. She likes you,” Maki spoke with a smile on her face. I felt pissed off by what she had just said.Lol, maybe Maki said it because Aya was still there and didn't move but only called her out, Maki even had a chance to slip in two sentences which could've made up the time if Aya already ran after Miki.
Why did she teach me what to do? I knew I needed to chase after her. Did she think that I didn’t know Miki liked me?Well... I don't know that either.. :sweatdrop: What does Maki know actually? I feel lost.. :-\
I had no choice but to chase. It was my one and only chance to catch her heart.Go and catch it Aya! Before Miki drops it and falls on the ground and shatters into very tiny pieces!! :O
But you already caught it. The problem is that you also picked up Maki's. And you never gave yours to Miki. So you really should be running to her in order to either give it back, or give her yours!Quite true...
who knows... i have maki goto complex :mon noprob:Hmm..the JFC version of them running just shows that Aya can never catch up with Miki :D Or will she? XD Haha, do you see Miki as a ball? :lol: Yeah, you can imagine that for the time being...Because there are quite a lot of characters so it might take some time for ishiyoshi to come in (short or long depends on how much you want it :D )
i laughed a lot with aya and miki running (JFC version) XD XD XD
i just can see Aya tripping over :mon XD:
and now yossy will be a goalkepper and stop miki :mon inluv:
ishiyoshi is far far away?? wojooo (don't kill me ishiyoshi fans n.nU)
take your time tito, you have things to do and it's ok :grin:
I finally got access on the computer thanks to my step dad's computer. Let's just hope he doesn't come home early and kicks me off it. Everything internet accessible has passwords and finger print scanners to prevent me from touching it..*Pray for zay05ohayou*
Lol, maybe Maki said it because Aya was still there and didn't move but only called her out, Maki even had a chance to slip in two sentences which could've made up the time if Aya already ran after Miki.It's more of because Aya was lagging there thinking of what Miki could be thinking so lost some time..
Well... I don't know that either.. What does Maki know actually? I feel lostIn theory, Maki didn't know that they hooked up because she was caught on the day Miki confessed to Aya..but does she know? :P
it would be quite suspicious to have a face when you get discovered.. not that I knew what Aya looked like at the time.. and it shouldn't even be a secret to meet up with Maki since she's leaving anyway..I hope you can find the answers in the next part of this chapter... :D
I can't wait for Maki's POV, i just hope she doesn't turn into a bad guy that tries to steal away other people's girlfriends.. Just someone who charms them to her.. huh i confused myself... oh well.. titooooo!!!
Time for Maki's POV! Wedge~Yeah, I'm excited about it too :) Woo-hoo...
Well, that also wasn't as bad as I expected... I don't hate Aya anymor ethen I already did... I thin you're safe from the knifes coz no matter what Maki says or do, she'll get away with it coz I adore her oh so much Glad to see her starbucks addiction used in your fic... she really is crazy about that crap, errr stuff:lol: I just went into Starbucks 2 hours ago.. :lol: Starbucks is cool~ *sigh of relief* I see Gocchin is so well-loved, eh? :wub:
Maybe we should pair Maki and Yossy and screw up both Yukari and Tru's hopesNice suggestion and Rika ends up with Aya and Miki with no one..haha, my fic will be boycotted if that happens :lol:
WAAAAAAAAAAAIT, something I just noticed... I know you said you split this into the three POVs, but does that mean they are ALL parts are 'chapter 17', which means even longer to 22I think it won't help a bit if I say that the next chapter will be split as well right? *pats back* *whispers to lollipopgirl: Next part will have some bits of them..I'm trying to incorporate them into the different parts here and there. DON'T BE SAD! :D*
I'm so tired, i don't know what else I wanted to say nowRest and study hard! :)
When I imagined what would happen at the date, I always imagined Miki finding out, going there, giving Aya a dirty and runing away from herr. But I was pleasantly surprised when Aya chased her back... Sweet!That's quite a typical view, maybe? :lol: sweeety is back! :D
Although my favourite is aya, i'm kind of pissed off with her now >_< miki suffered enough but you still haven't given yourself fully to miki!!Wow! The first and perhaps only person here who likes Aya in Gomattou/F.Y.I! :wub: Can't blame her too much really..there is a saying that goes 'old flame dies hard' or something..
Maybe we should pair Maki and Yossy and screw up both Yukari and Tru's hopes :twisted:
*praying for ishiyoshi... builds an altar for burnt sacrifices... takes out one electric guitar*Burning electric guitars? What about Yoshizawa Jin instead?
CHARMY-SAMA, TAKE ONE OF MY ELECTRIC GUITARS AS A SACRIFICE!!! RETURN TO F.Y.I. IN YOUR FULL RABU-RABU GLORY...
bring back the angst! Been waitin. if I make it out of this (you know what) alive I wanna read more GAMu rabu and I hope Aya catches up...not so much as the symbolism, just care to see what would happen I gotta go now Cry Bye bye.Angst is in the near future...relax, you will be back here. I'm sure of it! Ganbatte! I love you too! :)
In case we never see each other again....
I love you.
it couldn't be that bad... maybe Maki-Yossy-MikiI'll seriously open a poll for it after the next chapter...threesome accepted? :lol:
nonono >.< or it would be Yomaki and Charmikitty... and leave ayaya alone muajajaja (only in this fanfic i don't like her... or maybe two)
YocharmikittyEven tru_harmony has joined the anti-Aya in Gomattou/F.Y.I gang...wow FOURSOME! :rofl:
Yocharmaki
Yocharmikittymaki
as long as charmy is with yossui, i'm fine... it doesn't matter who else conserves water with them... excpet aya...
let ayaya wither away alone...
F.Y.I
Chapter 17
Cracked Heart
Go’s version
My train of thoughts was disrupted abruptly when I heard someone called my name. It was Risa. Probably she came to send me off but she was early. Way too early. I asked rather courteously, “Why are you here so early? My plane is only flying off at 3.25pm.”
She blushed. Oh well, she wasn’t the first Hello! Project girl who blushed when she talked to me. After all, I was Goto Maki. She rushed through her words, “I heard there’s a nice sushi restaurant in the airport. I think it’s quite romantic to dine in the airport with a clear view of the planes.”
“Oh,” I replied. I had absolute no interest in Gokkies but it would be okay to entertain her provided that Aya didn’t turn up.
“So I’m waiting for Ai-chan here.”
I laughed. Ai-chan? So it wasn’t about Goto Maki after all.
“Why didn’t you just come here with Ai?” I asked.
“It won’t be the same. I think she will be touched to see me waiting here,” she replied. These girls really had grown up. A couple of years back, they wouldn’t even make an extra effort to make the other feel touched. That was pretty sweet of her to do so. Would Aya be touched to see me waiting here for her? I doubt so. I had hurt her too much for her to feel this way towards me. As much as I wanted her to be touched, I didn’t want to her to feel anything towards me which could spoil her happiness.
A taxi stopped in front of us and Ai came out of the taxi. Her eyes widened when she saw Risa standing there at the drop-off point waiting for her with a wide grin. Ai scratched her head and said awkwardly, “Oh shit! How long have you been waiting? Sorry that I arrived late!”
Risa shook her head, blushed and spoke gently, “You aren’t late…I’m just early. I want to wait for you…”
Ai smiled and said, “Maki, we are getting in first. See you later!” I waved to them without exchanging much eye contact. I just didn’t want to look at them. It was just too painful to do so. They reminded me so much about us. Ai took Risa’s hand and they entered the airport complex together. I prayed that they wouldn’t have a similar ending as that of Aya and I.
Not before long, a taxi stopped and Aya popped out from the taxi. It had been some time since I last saw her. She seemed tired with the dark rings beneath her eyes and she was in deep thoughts. Bad signs. She looked in my direction once but she didn’t see me. She was too lost in her thoughts. Very bad sign. “Aya,” I called out. Even though I had been mouthing her name all these while to myself, it just seemed weird when I said it out loud to the girl I always loved.
I asked gently, “Shall we go in?” She nodded in agreement. Well, she didn’t have much of a choice there. When we were in the complex, I asked her, “Do you like Starbucks?” She nodded, avoiding eye contact with me. She was correct doing so. I was a jerk. She shouldn’t even speak to me at all. Maybe things weren’t that bad.
We walked to Starbucks in silence. I knew she didn’t want to speak to me and I didn’t want to talk while we walked. I mean, I didn’t prepare a lot of things to talk to her about and I would rather talk to her in Starbucks where I could have a good look at her while I spoke.
When we were in Starbucks, I led her to a cozy corner and we sat across each other after we bought our respective coffees. I took a sip of the latte in an attempt to calm my nerves before I spoke softly, “I’m sorry for dumping you like that. It was all my fault. I never expect you to forgive me. I never expect us to be anything again,” I paused and gazed at her.
Her eyes, nose and lips were still the same as before. No, I shouldn’t think of that. I lost my chance. She looked at me in the eyes and for that one moment, our eyes met. I wouldn’t be able to forget that moment. I could see the pain she was suffering from her eyes. Maybe I was the cause of the pain. Damn, I shouldn’t have agreed to help her. Maybe it wasn’t me. Damn, she might be right about it.
I continued, “Thank you for dropping your charges. Thank you, Aya.” Well, I really had to thank her. Jail wasn’t the best place on earth. But most of all, I wanted to thank her for those days that we spent together in the past. They were the best days of my life. I wondered if she got my message.
She smiled and spoke rather flatly, “I heard from Nacchi about you and I just sympathize with you. That’s all.” I didn’t quite know how to feel after I heard this line. Should I be upset that all she felt towards me was just sympathy? Or should I be delighted that she had already found happiness that I no longer mattered at all?
After she said that, she drank the cappuccino she had ordered rather clumsily. I couldn’t help but to smile. She was such a clumsy person but this made her all the more likable. I leaned across the table towards her and said gently, “There’s some cream on your face, Aya. Don’t move.” She obeyed and she didn’t move an inch.
Our faces neared. I could hear her heartbeat quickened. This was way too familiar for me. It was as though we had gone back in time and we were back in those days where we waited for each other. When our faces were inches apart, I summoned all my strength to stop myself from kissing her. As much as I wanted to taste her again, I didn’t want to ruin it all for her. I had to control myself.
Just at this moment, I heard footsteps moving towards us. I turned and to my horror, it was Miki. What timing. Maybe she was right about it. Miki was just an insecure lover who couldn’t trust Aya. Aya just looked shocked beyond words to see Miki. How much I wanted to just grab Aya and kiss her at that moment. Why couldn’t she just trust Aya? But I didn’t want to spoil their happiness. After all, I was just part of the test.
My acting skills didn’t fail me this time round as I smiled and greeted her, “Hi Miki.”
I could see the rage inside her and I was expecting her to do something to me. Splash me with latte? Or maybe a slap? She raised her arm and slapped me hard on the cheeks. Real hard. How much I wanted to congratulate Fujimoto Miki for living up to her name. It was a really hard slap.
I concealed the pain I was experiencing and gave her a nonchalant look. I just wanted to spite her by depriving her of the satisfaction of slapping. Not that it was part of the ‘test’ but I just wanted to do so. I mean what else could she do after slapping me if I looked relaxed? From her eyes, I could see anger as well as menace. She bit her lips and ran off as quickly as she could.
Aya stood up and shouted ‘Miki-tan’ several times but Miki didn’t turn back. I knew I needed to say something. Aya, the blur queen, might just stand there calling her for the whole afternoon without moving a bit. “Go and chase after her. She likes you,” I said with a smile on my face. A worried and desperate Aya looked so adorable. Aya took off her heels and ran after her.
I took another sip of the latte before I took out the plane ticket from my bag and tore it up. There were things for me to do in Japan. This was getting interesting. Maybe I could even step in somewhere. Just maybe.:mon crazyinlove:
tito's Q & A: What's Maki up to? :lol: Let's see who can understand Gocchin... :mon thumb:
I stood at the drop-off point in Narita Airport with my back leaning against the wall. I wondered for the hundredth time whether it was correct for me to be part of this test. It wouldn’t hurt anyone physically and I just wanted to make sure.
I wished for Aya’s happiness and I wanted to see that for myself before I leave the country. After all, I had hurt her greatly and this was the least I could do for her.
It was Risa. Probably she came to send me off but she was early. Way too early. I asked rather courteously, “Why are you here so early? My plane is only flying off at 3.25pm.”
I laughed. Ai-chan? So it wasn’t about Goto Maki after all. “Why didn’t you just come here with Ai?” I asked.
“It won’t be the same. I think she will be touched to see me waiting here,” she replied. These girls really had grown up. A couple of years back, they wouldn’t even make an extra effort to make the other feel touched. That was pretty sweet of her to do so. Would Aya be touched to see me waiting here for her? I doubt so. I had hurt her too much for her to feel this way towards me. As much as I wanted her to be touched, I didn’t want to her to feel anything towards me which could spoil her happiness.
Not before long, a taxi stopped and Aya popped out from the taxi. It had been some time since I last saw her. She seemed tired with the dark rings beneath her eyes and she was in deep thoughts. Bad signs. She looked in my direction once but she didn’t see me. She was too lost in her thoughts. Very bad sign.
My acting skills didn’t fail me this time round as I smiled and greeted her, “Hi Miki.”
I could see the rage inside her and I was expecting her to do something to me. Splash me with latte? Or maybe a slap? She raised her arm and slapped me hard on the cheeks. Real hard. How much I wanted to congratulate Fujimoto Miki for living up to her name. It was a really hard slap.
Aya stood up and shouted ‘Miki-tan’ several times but Miki didn’t turn back. I knew I needed to say something. Aya, the blur queen, might just stand there calling her for the whole afternoon without moving a bit. “Go and chase after her. She likes you,” I said with a smile on my face. A worried and desperate Aya looked so adorable. Aya took off her heels and ran after her.
I took another sip of the latte before I took out the plane ticket from my bag and tore it up. There were things for me to do in Japan. This was getting interesting. Maybe I could even step in somewhere. Just maybe.
wojoooooooooooooooooooo you killed me!!Oh man.. :mon hanky: *tito tries to revive Yukari*
oooh it's so sad... well, not yet, but i know it'll beThis isn't the saddest chapter..not at all :D Ok, but when it involves Maki, everything will be sad...
they are so sweeeeeeeeetYey! Finally put in something sweet..it needs to reduce the angst of the main story :mon lol: *look for lollipopgirl*
there is love~~ i know it~~:mon love: <-- Maki :lol: Ok, I am lame..I know that..
kawaii~~ :mon lovelaff: but it's baaaaad, or good?? i don't know :mon unsure:I don't know too :mon sweat: Depends on which pairing you support, I guess..
Bad Maki: kiss her kiss her :mon star:I love this :D Shows the dilemma Maki is in very well and it's freaking hilarious!! :wahaha:
Good Maki: no~~ you don't have to do it~~ she is happy with miki~~ :mon cry:
Bad Maki: wojojo but still... do it! :mon star:
Good Maki: shut up bad maki!! it's all your fault!! if you had choose her over your career it would be sooo different!! you dork!! :mon mad:
Bad Maki: ... :mon yo:
wojojo you maki badass, i knew she had do it because she don't want to give miki the satisfaction :mon evillaff:Consider what had happened in Gomattou and how much Miki loathed Maki...it's a great time for Maki to get back to her! :lol:
omg... aya couldn't be SO blur!!! :mon headbang:Go and tou love her for that though... :mon blblbl:
i know i know! Maki realized that Aya isn't completely happy with Miki, so she tought that she even have a opportunity :mon dance:Partially right about that..what about the 'test'? :mon misch:
and about that tou said that i see miki as a ball... i imagined it literally!haha that is freaking funny..*super impose a yossie in there as goalkeeper* :lol:(http://www.imgur.com/files/080610/Th.miki_ball.jpg) (http://www.imgur.com/i.php?i=080610/miki_ball.jpg)
i'm done n.nU i realized that i had comment all the chapter...I LOVE YOU!! :mon love:
to make up for the updates i won't be writing for today... i'll make my very first SUPER COMMENT!!!! :cow:yeah! on FYI! I love you :D :mon loveflower:
test?... hmm... what is this test? :dozing: ... TEST?!?! OMG I HAVE A TEST!!!!! ... anyway... moving on...Brain-teaser huh? hehe, :mon fyeah: Test? I thought you just started school yesterday! ARGHH :angry:
i wait for my rabu-rabu all the time... it is pretty touching when someone waits for you... ... :gmon love2: sweet... except when it is for ayaya...The anti-Aya virus is spreading really fast...*to rabu-rabu: Stop making tru_harmony wait for you*
the acting skills did fail!!! miki saw through the acting... :gmon getout:Did she? :mon misch: Maybe....
enraged miki should've slapped ayaya instead of maki... :mon slapself:Miki just enjoys slapping Maki too much..*visualise how Miki slaps Aya* :mon mischief:
run like the wind, ayaya... or else i will make you the burnt sacrifice in my prayer ritual :prayers: to Charmy-sama!!! :mon mad::mon trudge: <-- Aya :lol: Nah, throw Yoshizawa Jin in there first!! :)
maki, you can step in anywhere except between my ishiyoshi!!! that would sound awful: ishigoyoshi... :on_plug:Ishiyoshi? soon..ok will it help if I tell you that one of them will appear in the next chap? :wub:
i liked this update... third person perspective in the GAM romantic dynamics...
WHERE IS MY ISHIYOSHI?!?!?! :scolding:
Ishiyoshi? soon..ok will it help if I tell you that one of them will appear in the next chap? :wub:
I wondered for the hundredth time whether it was correct for me to be part of this test.Test??? WTF??? :?
It wouldn’t hurt anyone physically and I just wanted to make sure. As much as I wanted to see Aya, I didn’t want her to turn up. If she did, it would mean that what she said was true. I wished for Aya’s happiness and I wanted to see that for myself before I leave the country. After all, I had hurt her greatly and this was the least I could do for her.So then...this "she" that Maki spoke of got Maki to convince Aya to meet with her...
Ai smiled and said, “Maki, we are getting in first. See you later!” I waved to them without exchanging much eye contact. I just didn’t want to look at them. It was just too painful to do so. They reminded me so much about us. Ai took Risa’s hand and they entered the airport complex together. I prayed that they wouldn’t have a similar ending as that of Aya and I.That shouldn't be a problem, as long as neither of them tries to run the other down with a car. :roll:
Not before long, a taxi stopped and Aya popped out from the taxi. It had been some time since I last saw her. She seemed tired with the dark rings beneath her eyes and she was in deep thoughts. Bad signs. She looked in my direction once but she didn’t see me. She was too lost in her thoughts. Very bad sign. “Aya,” I called out. Even though I had been mouthing her name all these while to myself, it just seemed weird when I said it out loud to the girl I always loved.It almost sounds like this meeting wasn't Maki's idea in the first place.
I asked gently, “Shall we go in?” She nodded in agreement. Well, she didn’t have much of a choice there. When we were in the complex, I asked her, “Do you like Starbucks?” She nodded, avoiding eye contact with me. She was correct doing so. I was a jerk. She shouldn’t even speak to me at all. Maybe things weren’t that bad.
Maybe I was the cause of the pain. Damn, I shouldn’t have agreed to help her. Maybe it wasn’t me. Damn, she might be right about it.Again with the references that indicate that another girl might have been the one to plan this. But then, for what reason, and why would Maki agree to do it?
Just at this moment, I heard footsteps moving towards us. I turned and to my horror, it was Miki. What timing. Maybe she was right about it. Miki was just an insecure lover who couldn’t trust Aya. Aya just looked shocked beyond words to see Miki. How much I wanted to just grab Aya and kiss her at that moment. Why couldn’t she just trust Aya? But I didn’t want to spoil their happiness. After all, I was just part of the test.Right now, looks like it's option 2.
I took another sip of the latte before I took out the plane ticket from my bag and tore it up. There were things for me to do in Japan. This was getting interesting. Maybe I could even step in somewhere. Just maybe.WTF she's staying???
emmm about the test... oh sh-- emm maki is allied with someone, don't she? with... yossy?? :mon ko:Hmm... :mon dunno:
maujajaja i can't see miki's ball face, i laugh out everytime that i do it :tama-apeshit:yeah! Me too :) hahaha...when did Miki become a ball? Oh ya, the keeper! XD
which pair i support??... what do you think? :rockon:I dunno..as a pair it should be yomiki but when threesome and foursome come in, I become lost :stunned:
I reckon it was Rika. I think it was her. She obviously sent those messages. I think she did it out of jealousy and lack of trust. Perhaps in a years time she will coming out of jail to a Yoshi who has been waiting patiently like a lil dawg!:lol:That can be sequel part 3 LOL j/k :lol:
She just ends up making things worse because the only way for her to be happy, is with Miki.Sure? :D
err... am i really the ONLY ONE who likes Aya here??Yeah, you are *look around* Ok, I think you're the only one :wub: congrats! Don't succumb to peer pressure! XD :lol:
Stupid. That was the only word I could use to describe myself then. Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled all that I had done for her these few months. Maybe I was crying because I was frustrated. Maybe those tears were there because I felt cheated as I still loved her. No, I was stupid to love that two-timer. I was stupid to have even confessed to her. I was stupid to have thought of dying for her. That was the first time in my life that I felt so stupid. Fujimoto Miki never likes to feel stupid. Never.
I heard her calling me from behind but I didn’t turn back. Why should I look at her? She should just go back to Maki for goodness sake and enjoy their Starbucks experience. Why the hell was she chasing after me? She should just go back to Maki and finished the kiss which I had interrupted. Every time I heard her voice, I just sped up. I didn’t want her to catch up with me. Oh well, even if I didn’t do so, I doubted she would be able to catch me. I was the sub-captain for Gatas Brilhantes after all.
I didn’t know where I was running to though. I didn’t want to hail a taxi and leave this place as that would be what a crestfallen and weak person would do after witnessing such a scene. But I wasn’t such a person. I was Fujimoto Miki.
When I ran past an escalator, I saw Ai and Risa holding hands on it. Ai and Risa stared at me with wide open eyes as though I was some monkey in the circus. The last thing I needed now was for someone in H!P to see me running away from Aya with tears streaming down my cheeks. I glared at them and a split second later, their eyes were on each other. Good, my glare worked. But it wouldn’t be enough to win the battle against Aya. I needed something more than that.
When I reached the rather deserted viewing gallery almost at the other end of the airport, I could her calling me pretty vaguely which showed that she had fallen behind by some distance. There, an ‘an eye for an eye’ idea struck me when I saw her. It was an idea which I was determined to carry out no matter what and it was one which I greatly regretted after that.
Wearing a blue Japan football jersey, probably the one Hidetoshi Nakata signed on, and a low cap, she was gazing at the airplanes alone at the viewing gallery. She had this forlorn and lonely aura around her and she appeared to be deep in thoughts. I opened up my stride and sprinted towards her. When I was a few meters away from her, she turned and appeared somewhat shocked to see me running towards her. She then smiled, took off the cap and greeted, “Mi-”
Before she could complete her sentence, I had already pounced on her and pressed my lips against her. Initially she resisted but after 3 seconds, she allowed my tongue to venture in her mouth. Before long, I could feel her tongue in mine as well. From my angle, I could see a panting Aya horrified when she saw us together. I smiled.
Now we were all square.
When I looked at the girl in my hands, her eyes were fixated on Aya and she attempted to pull herself away from me. I pleaded with my eyes and began touching her butt in a suggestive manner.
I needed the victory.
She closed her eyes and began to caress my breasts. Soon our tongues were intertwined again. She was an expert at it and it wasn’t before long that I closed my eyes and was enjoying the moment and Aya was out of my mind.
When I opened my eyes after some time, Aya was no longer there. That was when the implications of what I had just done struck me and I pulled myself away from her and cried my heart out. That crazy moment of victory was over and my senses came back to me. I wanted to win so badly then but so what if I won?
She approached me and hugged me gently. I murmured in a muffled voice, “Thank you Yossie.” Tears ran down my cheeks like a running tap and soon that blue dry-fit jersey was drenched with my tears. I could hear the instrumental for the chorus of Osaka koi no uta playing. Mou owari ya nen…
Wearing a blue Japan football jersey, probably the one Hidetoshi Nakata signed on, and a low cap, she was gazing at the airplanes alone at the viewing gallery. She had this forlorn and lonely aura around her and she appeared to be deep in thoughts. I opened up my stride and sprinted towards her. When I was a few meters away from her, she turned and appeared somewhat shocked to see me running towards her. She then smiled, took off the cap and greeted, “Mi-”
Before she could complete her sentence, I had already pounced on her and pressed my lips against her. Initially she resisted but after 3 seconds, she allowed my tongue to venture in her mouth. Before long, I could feel her tongue in mine as well. From my angle, I could see a panting Aya horrified when she saw us together. I smiled.
Now we were all square.
When I looked at the girl in my hands, her eyes were fixated on Aya and she attempted to pull herself away from me. I pleaded with my eyes and began touching her butt in a suggestive manner.
I needed the victory.
She closed her eyes and began to caress my breasts. Soon our tongues were intertwined again. She was an expert at it and it wasn’t before long that I closed my eyes and was enjoying the moment and Aya was out of my mind.
Chapter 18:mon waterworks:
Shattered Love
When I looked at the girl in my hands, her eyes were fixated on Aya and she attempted to pull herself away from me. I pleaded with my eyes and began touching her butt in a suggestive manner.Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh shit...
I needed the victory.
OMG I feel so bad now coz I absolutely NEVER condone cheating but I really do hate this Aya, so I'm happy about it :oops: :o
YAYAYAYAY for YoMiki goodness, I guess I feel a little sorry for Aya but not really, I do hope she runs off to Maki and gets comforted by her... I'm worried about Rika though :o I feel REALLY sorry for her :(
Oh and Yossy being at the airport like that, it's gotta mean she was the one Maki was refering to with the test to see how strong the GAM love was... interesting!!!
This chapter did not turn out bad... it was fast paced and awesome!
Sorry about the crappy comment, its time for my afternoon nap you see ;)
Oh and Yukari, you make me smile with all ur comments :lol:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAt least now what you feel towards Aya is not just solely hatred.. :lol:
OMG poor Aya!!!
She didn't even kiss Maki...although we all know she wanted to
Miki why you must be so stubborn for the win I will never understand *sighs*That's Miki for you :bingo: Stubborn and competitive...
I feel soo bad for Aya I want to slap both Miki and Yossui (and I'm a YoMiki fan XD)
But stilllllllll
stubborn Miki...
hi~~ i'm still died for what i reaa~~d. :mon inluv:Don't die! *Revival attempt by tito*
you have to think that mon icons are my face... my reactions are pretty similar (it isn't 'cause i could have monkey face XD)Just imagine that you're Ai will do :wub:
run miki... run (read it as forest gum) :mon runcry::rofl:
i love you miki~~ :mon loveflower:Miki love in the air~~ :wub:
poor girls, that's surely scary :mon POd:*Try to visualise* Yeah, it must be scary :scared:
and now i go to the paradise, bye meaning world~~ :mon angel: :mon inluv: :mon mischief:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :mon crazyinlove: *heartcase* inhale, exhale, inhale, exhale, etc :mon blood:Guess as much you will react like that :tama-apeshit:
who is calling yossy??? rika?? :mon noprob:Maybe...
now... who is aya?? XDDDDDDDD mauajaja no, really... bah the best thing that she can does is go with maki :mon determined:Hmmm....oh well, supporters of Yomiki will definitely vote for GoAya (whatever that is called :lol:)
tito i REALLY love you btw :mon love:Really? :nya: :wriggly: *tito jumps to the moon*
waiting next chapter!! (oh no, i realized that it's my testament XD)*Read previous Yukari's comments...yeah, it is! XD
YOSSUI, WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU DOING IN THAT AIRPORT?!?!?!?To send Maki off? Though she isn't flying anymore...
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
*starts tearing up ishiyoshi altar* HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME, TITO!?!?!?! pleeease*tito attempts to fix it back* Chill...
i know... in my heart that my ishiyoshi will pull through... or else, it will be yossui's head between rubber and asphaltYossi's head between rubber and asphalt? What does that mean? :? You're really an ishiyoshi believer! Pray harder :prayers:
my goddess, charmy-sama will prevail... I belive(sic) in you charmy-sama... even if you have failed me before... i still believe...
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh shit...Precisely. :(
my my.. oh my... its like love triangle. but i wan miki and aya back together in the end.. lolxIt's like double love triangle. Maki-Aya-Miki Miki-Yoshi-Rika :lol: Yeah 1 more reader! We're from the same country! :) *Play love and peace hero ga yattekita*
Peace
OMG I feel so bad now coz I absolutely NEVER condone cheating but I really do hate this Aya, so I'm happy about it :oops: :oYeah, you finally feel something for Aya! :wub: At least you want her paired up with someone...As for Rika, hmm...I'll deal with her later :)
YAYAYAYAY for YoMiki goodness, I guess I feel a little sorry for Aya but not really, I do hope she runs off to Maki and gets comforted by her... I'm worried about Rika though :o I feel REALLY sorry for her :(
Oh and Yossy being at the airport like that, it's gotta mean she was the one Maki was refering to with the test to see how strong the GAM love was... interesting!!!Hmm...maybe.......
This chapter did not turn out bad... it was fast paced and awesome!Yeah! I'm so happy *Jump to Jupiter* :mon inluv:
Sorry about the crappy comment, its time for my afternoon nap you see ;)Enjoy your nap :) I still have to study in this hot weather :(
wojojoo someone share my happiness!! (or at least likes the yomiki godness) :onioncheer:^This is so funny! You make me smile tooand laugh like that--> :mon lmao:
and happy that i make you smile :hee: i feel happy now (not like Rika "HAPPY~~", i don't say it like that n.nU)
omg now i realized that i'm adicted to this fanfic!! :frustrated: it makes me comment so much, like i had never do in my entire life... well... i had written things longer that the comments here since i write fanfics too... but my reader is more potent that my writer inside :on lol:Is it? :shy2: *Feel guilty for making you addicted for 1 second* :hee: *Feel over the moon..I mean Neptune (where am I now?) that you love this fic so much and give nice and hilarious and encouraging comments* :tama-laff: :tama-heart:
tito you're the guilty! :mon inluv:
Yossi's head between rubber and asphalt? What does that mean? :? You're really an ishiyoshi believer! Pray harder :prayers:It means our sweet, little, innocent tru_harmony will be joining Reina in jail for yet another hit and run attack on a H!P member, tsk tsk!
Yeah, you finally feel something for Aya! :wub: At least you want her paired up with someone...As for Rika, hmm...I'll deal with her later :)I've always felt something for Aya, it's called hatred :P
*Feel over the moon..I mean Neptune (where am I now?) that you love this fic so much and give nice and hilarious and encouraging comments* :tama-laff: :tama-heart:I hope you aren't meant to be studying astronomy right now :lol:
It means our sweet, little, innocent tru_harmony will be joining Reina in jail for yet another hit and run attack on a H!P member, tsk tsk!
It means our sweet, little, innocent tru_harmony will be joining Reina in jail for yet another hit and run attack on a H!P member, tsk tsk!Comments to your comments on replies :P Oh no! Don't do that! :( If you are gone, runaway from the past will be there incomplete...Love and peace XD :lol:
I've always felt something for Aya, it's called hatred :PThis...is so funny!! :rofl: It's like I've always felt something for Aya *long pause*, it's called hatred...Hahaha :lol:
I hope you aren't meant to be studying astronomy right now :lol:Yeah, luckily I am not. I threw those things away 3 years ago *sigh of relief* I know I left out Mars, Saturn, Uranus and something something :lol: XD
btw, i meant to quote this too but must have deleted it, GoAya should be called 'GAM revisited' ;)GAM revisited? How did that come about? :?
you catch on quick, lollipopgirl!Ok..I'm the slowpoke here :( :lol:
but i won't hit and run yossui... i'm gonna hit her... then run over her again and again and again and again and again until charmy-sama asks me to be merciful and stop...Oh man that sounds mean..don't do that! Charmy-sama will definitely ask you to stop! Go visualise a pretty charming Yossi and the weapon in your hands will automatically drop :D
but that kiss did sound like a hot kiss... mm...Yeah nice afterthoughts after those violent tendencies :P
Yeah nice afterthoughts after those violent tendencies
I imagine the scenario when they kissed and Aya just stood there horrified many times and it's such an addicting image
... i think that yossui's a good friend for "helping" miki secure her "victory"... yossui's such a good friend.... :hee:Haha :rofl: :wahaha: Isn't it high time for a YOSHI's POV? Then you will see what she thinks..*tru_harmony starts praying* have you started? XD haha
... ... ... she did that as a friend ne~? :stoned: ne~? ... ... .... ... omg :tantrum: nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:pleeease: don't do this... my charmy's gonna get hurt... :err: :gyaaah: :stunned: :imdead:
GAM revisited = Great Aya and Maki... and its 'revisited' coz its the new version... Just ignore it, twas lameHmm..Just realise it can be Goto Aya Maki like some married couple :lol: Ok, I'm lame as well :rofl:
@tru_harmony: You'd do that to your Charmy-sama's beloved Yossy right in front of her... You'll break her into tiny pieces, awww (the car violence)LOL lollipopgirl is being so sarcastic today! Yeah, tru_harmony, you will crash Yossi and Rika's heart will be crushed! :P beloved
And I don't think Rika will see it as Yossy being a good friend But hell, she can just join in
Charmy is already hurt :lol:
WHAT?!?! ... is she...? ... ... ... :shock: OH MY GOD!!! ... she's... OH NO... ... ... ... NO WAY!!!!! ...As in she's hurt because of the phone call incident that ruin ishiyoshi date a day ago :)
... i have burnt out two electric guitars in my ritual sacrifices... i don't want to burn my acoustic guitars... :OMG: please, Rika... come back to this fic... ... no... ... ... wait... ... i take that back... ... ... don't come back Rika... ... ... not yet.. ... ... ... it's probably best for Rika to stay away for now... (SHE SHOULDN'T SEE YOSSUI KISSING MIKI LIKE THAT!!! but i would love to see that hot kiss...) ... :mon trudge: *stages a freak accident to stall Rika from coming back*Are we playing the 'which comment makes tito laugh the hardest' game? :rofl: ^That's so funny! You're contradicting yourself though..admit it, you worship Yossi as well :wub:
I HATE YOU I HATE YOUUUUU!!!!!! :angry: :angry: :angry:Oh no....don't hate me... :(
aaaaaaaaa POOR AYAAA...!! :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
that's really not fair!! STUPID MIKI!! IDIOT!
i need to calm down now........>_<
As in she's hurt because of the phone call incident that ruin ishiyoshi date a day ago
That's so funny! You're contradicting yourself though..admit it, you worship Yossi as well
I tried to keep my eyes off her cleavage
That pair of penetrating eyes looked hurt and it was just too familiar to my liking. Penetrating eyes, lips…No, I shouldn’t be thinking of this. I loved Miki.
That was the only word I could use to describe myself then. Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled all that I had done for her these few months. Maybe I was crying because I was frustrated. Maybe those tears were there because I felt cheated as I still loved her. No, I was stupid to love that two-timer. I was stupid to have even confessed to her. I was stupid to have thought of dying for her. That was the first time in my life that I felt so stupid. Fujimoto Miki never likes to feel stupid.
She approached me and hugged me gently. I murmured in a muffled voice, “Thank you Yossie.” Tears ran down my cheeks like a running tap and soon that blue dry-fit jersey was drenched with my tears. I could hear the instrumental for the chorus of Osaka koi no uta playing. Mou owari ya nen…
QuoteI tried to keep my eyes off her cleavage
my first reaction :lol:QuoteThat pair of penetrating eyes looked hurt and it was just too familiar to my liking. Penetrating eyes, lips…No, I shouldn’t be thinking of this. I loved Miki.
there's the sign, Yay! :cow: she loves... Maki still :PQuoteThat was the only word I could use to describe myself then. Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled all that I had done for her these few months. Maybe I was crying because I was frustrated. Maybe those tears were there because I felt cheated as I still loved her. No, I was stupid to love that two-timer. I was stupid to have even confessed to her. I was stupid to have thought of dying for her. That was the first time in my life that I felt so stupid. Fujimoto Miki never likes to feel stupid.
Let her go Miki and move on... with Yossie XDQuoteShe approached me and hugged me gently. I murmured in a muffled voice, “Thank you Yossie.” Tears ran down my cheeks like a running tap and soon that blue dry-fit jersey was drenched with my tears. I could hear the instrumental for the chorus of Osaka koi no uta playing. Mou owari ya nen…
I must admit, it's :cry:
and I could imagine Miki alone again because Rika's calling and Yossie will be running... hope not :prayers:
Go's version was ouches
and the kiss was hawt
...oh... i thought she saw them kiss... ah, heck... what on earth would rika be doing in an airport... hah! silly me...Will she be..? :mon misch:
... hey! ... okay... i admit, i worship yossui too... otherwise, i wouldn't have casted her in my own fic... but FYI yossui... i don't know...You're a crazy ishiyoshi fan *run away*
also... i think almost everybody loves her... ... ... but i worship her only in the context of my Charmy-sama...
i just noticed a stereotyping of characters in many fics everywhere:Pretty true..let's try to mix them up and see if it sounds ok
yossui - confused but accomodating 'friend'
rika - jealous and scheming
miki - haphazard and vengeful
aya- selfish and selfish
i still love this fic, no matter how much yossui is unintentionally hurting my charmy...Yeah~! :wub: *Pray for love to go on*
there's the sign, Yay! :cow: she loves... Maki still :POh ya, you are the GAM #2 (GoAya) supporter XD :lol:
Let her go Miki and move on... with Yossie XDThis cracks me up! :rofl:
and I could imagine Miki alone again because Rika's calling and Yossie will be running... hope not :prayers:Pray hard! :P
and the kiss was hawt:wub: coz it is YoMiki and they are hot :oops:
Noooo Miki! Why do you have to be so stubborn and vengeful? And Aya saw that and now thinks what she thought was true. And the whole gaze thing, where Yoshi looked at Aya then closed her eyes and kissed Miki more was just dog! If it were me I'd feel soooo cheap or something.Because she wanted Aya to think that it was true. An eye for an eye
But Yoshi is a good friend. She didn't have to do that. She should've pulled away though. She only kept going because Rika is making her think that she really does like Miki in that way, so she probably took that moment to compare or something. See if there are any sparks. But Miki.....sad sad Miki......
Now it's all ruined. I just hope that Aya blames Maki for all this, and not Miki. Miki'll be dificult at first, but she wont know the truth behind AYa and Maki's appointment, so she will just be stubborn, and she will hurt a lot because she wont be with Aya so she might not know for a while.In for some tears and angst? :)
Aya just saw that and probably thinks that Miki doesn't want her anymore so she will be almost as depressed as Miki. She might be angry, and all bets are she wont want to speak to Miki or something. If she ignores her like she always does, as is her pattern, to leave Miki when things get tough, then she will be away from Miki and not tell her the real reason behind the appointment etc.
But if, and this is a big IF, she does want to make things right, she will hopefully try to speak to Miki and tell her that she loves her and that Maki means nothing to her. Then hopefully she will get her back. But I kinda feel sorry for her. But it was her fault for the way she treated miki. NO wonder she caught her girlfriend sucking face with another one. I mean, this girl sacrificed her life for her and she treats her like this? It just makes me mad!
anyway, can't wait for Aya's POV, I don't think we need Maki's though. It's just gonna be something mean.
wojojo i love your comment kRisZ, i don't know why~~I know why! Because a Yomiki supporter will like GoAya responses :)
i want Yossy POV, pleaaaaaaaaaase :prayers: :mon prayer:Coming soon..after my breakfast :D
Yukari: oh Hi tru_harmony, are you praying here too? :hee::lol: You two are praying for 2 total different things :lol:
and if you ask why i post here so much, it's because i'm without class in my school (so i have free time), the students take over the school and so we don't have class, and we walk across the city XDDD demanding things to improve the education in my country :mon look:On strike? Ok, *pray for strike to prolong* You don't seem to be walking across the city though..Yukari seems to be stuck to the comp :lol: :P
.. *lift rocks and looks under* where is it? ... *runs behind trees and looks around* where? ... *opens trunk of car* ... it's not here either...Haha, up very soon..relax..Yossui's POV is now in tito's comp hard disk :P Pray on! Pray on!
tito, where is yossui's POV?
i need to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
F.Y.I
Chapter 18
Shattered Love
YOSHI POV
I stood at the viewing gallery alone watching the planes taking off and landing. I needed more time to sort out my thoughts before going back to Rika. I needed to be fair to her. I needed to be clear of what I felt towards her and Fujimoto first. A plane’s journey is just like a person’s life. We take off and then explore all the happiness, loneliness, excitement and sadness life offers before we land somewhere. I wondered where I would land. I wondered who I would land with.
I didn’t know that the viewing gallery was such a deserted and quiet place before I came here today to send Maki off. In fact, most of the people sitting around here were catching a nap. I came here to bid farewell to her and hopefully bid farewell to the ugly past.
I pressed my face against the glass panel and my thoughts drifted off to what had happened last evening. It started off with a heavy sense of nostalgia and then love. After Fujimoto’s call, the evening just turned bad as I grew worried for her and Rika became jealous. Of course, the climax arrived when Rika popped the question, “Do you like her?”Bad Yossy: *ujujuj i could be with miki and jujujujujujuj* :mon ignore:
It just didn’t feel the same after that dinner. Whenever I thought of Fujimoto after that, the word ‘like’ just popped up in my head like some irritating bug. Before that, what I felt towards her was mainly guilt and maybe friendship but now, from time to time, I started to wonder whether we could have a ‘future’ together. Bad. I shouldn’t be thinking of that.
Whenever I thought of Rika after last evening, I just felt guilty for that horrible evening I had given her and my lack of commitment in our relationship. I mean, I wasn’t that blur. I knew that Rika and I viewed our relationship differently. I was having fun using the pick-up lines on her and touching her. I just enjoyed the fact that we were lovers and there was someone for me to look for on lonely and boring nights.
But she was serious about it. Very serious. That took me almost 7 years to figure that out. Ok, I think I was the ultimate blur queen.
Then my train of thoughts was disrupted when I heard someone running towards me. I turned and I was shocked to see Fujimoto with tears in her eyes sprinting towards me. I mean, if she wanted to speak to me or something, she didn’t have to run as I was rooted to the ground, unmoving. There was no need to run like that.
I smiled in an attempt to conceal the confusing thoughts going through my mind right now and imitated the British by taking off my cap. I greeted her, “Mi-”
Before I could complete my sentence, she pressed her lips against mine and she forced her tongue into my mouth. I was completely shocked. I didn’t know how to react to this. What was she thinking of when she ran up to me and kissed me like that? What was her agenda? Did she like me? No, Miki only loved Aya.
I reciprocated and my tongue ventured in hers. I mean, it was pretty logical for me to that. When a girl as hot and sexy as Miki pounces on you and kisses you, there is no logic in resisting. You will do the same thing that I did. Furthermore, as a matter of fact, I, Yoshizawa Hitomi, enjoyed kissing quite a lot.
I watched her, still wondering what she was up to. Her eyes wandered away from me and she smiled. I knew something was wrong. I turned my head slightly to my left and I saw a panting Aya, standing a distance away, horrified. Her face was literally white and tears ran down her cheeks. Immediately, I tried to pull myself away from her as I realized the implications of what we had just done. It appeared as though Miki had cheated on Aya and I was the accomplice which wasn’t the case at all. We had hurt Aya greatly. Very greatly.
Then, Miki looked at me with those pleading eyes and began to caress my butt rather suggestively as though she wanted more. From her eyes, I could see lust. But she didn’t lust for me. She lusted for a betrayal. She was acting out a betrayal and I was part of her cast. How much I wanted to just let her go and stop this act.
Then I thought of Rika when she looked at me with those pleading eyes as she asked for more. No, I shouldn’t do continue the skit. But she wouldn’t be at the airport. Why would she? She wasn’t close to Maki at all. No, I shouldn’t continue with this act no matter what. But I was helping Miki with her act and I wasn’t lusting for her. Yeah, I shouldn’t feel bad about it.
From Aya’s eyes, I could see that she felt cheated and no words or actions could ever remove this image of us kissing from her mind. Oh well, I might as well finish the skit.
I closed my eyes. My tongue ventured in hers yet again and I moved my hands up from her hips and started touching her breasts. It might be my one and only chance to touch her in this manner. She didn’t resist. Why should she? Firstly, she was the one who initiated this skit. Secondly, I wasn’t bad at this. In fact, I was quite good at this.
I wouldn’t be able to forget this moment. She was sexy and she was an expert at this. All the thoughts that went through my mind earlier just disappeared into thin air as I enjoyed this sensual moment.
After a while, she pulled herself away from me and I knew why. The only audience had left so there was no need to act on. She started crying badly. To be honest, I had never seen her like that. Maybe I had but in the past, I could think of ways to console her. But now, I didn’t know what to say to her.
Should I say, “Hey, why are you doing this to Aya?” No, that’s too insensitive. What about “What has been done cannot be undone”? No, that sounded too cruel.
Eventually, I decided that I shouldn’t say a thing. I approached her and hugged her gently. That should be what she needed now – a shoulder to lie on and a chest to cry on. She pressed herself against me and I could feel her tears seeping through the jersey I was wearing.
My phone vibrated and Osaka koi no uta instrumental played. What timing. It didn’t seem appropriate for me to pick up the call in a situation like this so I left it there to ring on its own. I didn’t know how long I stood there with Miki in my arms. It seemed to eternity before I let go of her and we trudged out of the complex.
As we plodded our way out of the place, I took out my phone and there were 7 missed calls from Rika. What timing. I gazed at the crying girl beside me and I placed my phone back in my bag.
Yeah Yossi's a jerk :mon scooter:I wonder who is the monkey at the back^ :lol:
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGThe OMG was copied and pasted or typed? It makes a nice border :lol: :D
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I'M MADLY HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY (still, no Ishikawa 'HAPPY~~') :tama-apeshit:
Bad Yossy: *ujujuj i could be with miki and jujujujujujuj* :mon ignore:This is so funny! :rofl: :rofl: Lol, you do that for every chapter, eh? :lol:
Good Yossy: *no~~ i have someone now, and miki is my friend~~* :mon cute:
Bad Yossy: *ehem you know that it's not true, don't you?, just imagine... miki and you...* :mon misch:
Good Yossy: KO!!!!!!!!! :mon blood:
i can understand you yossy... i just felt the same way sometimes :mon exhaust:, and the... the feeling of guiltyYeah, I admit I do 'under-love' some people some times when I shouldn't... :(
GOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAL!, yossy it's a bad goalkepper (thanks god!) :mon fyeah: :mon crazyinlove:Miki has won everything, eh? :wahaha:
oooh poor aya... bah, nobody believe me that :mon impatient:As a matter-of-fact, I don't believe as well! :lol:
well... here i totally died!!!!!!!!!!! *piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii* *electroshock* OMG i'm back :mon mischief: :mon crazyinlove: :mon bleed2: yossy groping miki... *drool**Revival attempt again* :sweat:
ujujuju she ignored the calls! UJUJUJUJJUUUUUUUUUUUUU :mon slapass:Haha, who else can it be? :lol: XD
where is my prize?? i said that it's Rika XDDDD naah i know that it isn't a prize :mon POd:
now i NEED to know... where are they going? :mon scooter:, what will they do??, What will happen between them??, what will happen with aya and maki??, What will happen with Rika?? i have so much questions and how i said... NEED answers :mon wtf:Yeah, there are a lot of unanswered questions here...bad exam, I can't update that quickly after this weekend :(
titoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i love your fanfic and you too :mon love:*Jump to Pluto wherever that is* :P :mon loveflower: --> Love you too!!!
PS: i will pray now that it would be a yomiki chapter again, it's almost impossible but howeverWhat's the difference between the good and bad one? Thought they are thinking of the same things... :mon misch:
:prayers: :mon prayer: <---- good yukari and bad yukari together praying
... your last update broke my heart... as much as i wanted to give my 200th post to you as a comment... i figured, it is best to give my 200th post to Charmy in the RIVE... ...Many apologies... :mon waterworks:
*cuts down some trees and starts constructing a coffin* ... this is supposed to be for Yossui...Don't kill Yossi..peace!! :D
in consolation... my 201st post goes out to FYI...Yeah! :)
i will try to understand how Yossui finds it in her heart to keep on hurting Rika like that and then saying that she loves Rika... ... then again... i think i do... because... I AM GUILTY!!! ... i hurt my rabu-rabu like that all the time...^Very true..I guess it's human nature to hurt others intentionally/unintentionally..nobody is a saint :mon angel:
... i hope Charmy-sama forgives me for all my transgressions...
why do we always end up hurting the ones we should never hurt?
i also hope that your next chapters will help heal this heart of mine...Hmm..hopefully :P
ishikawa??Hmm.. :wub: ;) :D
aah and tito, you have to pay the debt to the hospital :mon lmao:Oh noo..I'm penniless (ok, that's highly exaggerated) but you die too often! :P I can perform CPR for free though... ;):oops:
yep i simply love bad and good sides of people, but like i dramatized in my last post, the good yukari is KO with yomiki, so i'm one now (who knows untill when...) :mon yeah: :mon yeah: <--- (see, there are the two, like twins now)... the only different is how they see the relationship between miki and yossy, one is like :mon innocent: and the other :mon bleed2:Haha, I wonder when will you not KO with Yomiki..oh yeah? Be the bad one :mon bleed2: You crack me up again with the twin part! :lol:
i want a new chapteeer:cry: I hate the test too :(
i hate your test too
why do we always end up hurting the ones we should never hurt?
^Very true..I guess it's human nature to hurt others intentionally/unintentionally..nobody is a saint
ah yoshi, you just wanted to experiment! How could you though? And did you think that Rika would understand or did you just think she wouldn't find out?Both...oh man, I'm dying to write Rika's part XD
Oh god, I sooo cannot wait for the next chapter.Hopefully no one kills me for that *tito looks right and looks left*
ISHIKAWA!!!!Will Charmy change in FYI? What will she do?
Charmy... many people think you are a selfish, jealous, insecure, narrow-minded girlfriend... please prove them wrong... ... please!!!
. why is it so inhumane to be human?You're good at words. Very good at it. I will save this^ and probably quote it everywhere..
RFP Charmy to FYI Charmy: don't give up...^that girl ever since she regains her ability to talk has been communicating quite a bit...will the telepathy work? :)
You two are praying for 2 total different things
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wojojo i love your comment kRisZ, i don't know why~~
I know why! Because a Yomiki supporter will like GoAya responses
It just didn’t feel the same after that dinner. Whenever I thought of Fujimoto after that, the word ‘like’ just popped up in my head like some irritating bug. Before that, what I felt towards her was mainly guilt and maybe friendship but now, from time to time, I started to wonder whether we could have a ‘future’ together. Bad. I shouldn’t be thinking of that.
I closed my eyes. My tongue ventured in hers yet again and I moved my hands up from her hips and started touching her breasts. It might be my one and only chance to touch her in this manner. She didn’t resist. Why should she? Firstly, she was the one who initiated this skit. Secondly, I wasn’t bad at this. In fact, I was quite good at this.
You're good at words. Very good at it. I will save this and probably quote it everywhere..
When will this circle of pain end? :'( WHY DON'T THEY STOP HURTING EACHOTHER AND START LOVING EACHOTHER?If it ends, the story will end. I'm bad at writing sweet love story without any conflicts :P
But at least the one diference here is that for once, Miki is the one doing the hurting. But it's kind of fair. I mean think about it. She gave her life to Aya. She gave everything. And then she found her with another woman. The same woman who almost caused both their deaths. So if I was her I wouldn't just be pissed, I would've slapped Aya.True...Miki has the right to get pissed off with Aya...
Actually I would've just run away crying and gone home and been unreachable for a while as I am in my room crying and watching romantic dramas, probly Searching for David's heart or Suzzane's diary for Nicholas.....:rofl: The difference between sweeety and Mikitty :rofl:
i'm still mad at you for making aya suffer like that... >_<Oh man, don't be..peace! :P Everyone suffers in my story :wahaha:
but good luck for the test!! XDI'll see whether I can still write one or two more next week...thanks for the luck! I think I need it..^ :)
aaahh...it'll be so boring a week with just a chapter :cry:
wll coment later AHAHAHAH!^ :roll:Someone is going mad with Yomiki goody :wub:
YAYAYAY YOMIKI!!!
make that 3 *hides the true intention**Tries to enter KrisZ's mind* Nah, I failed..never mind, it will soon be revealed.. :P
You're not bad Yossie, not at all, please do continue thinking thingThis is so funny! :lol:
... thanks... and it's good that you're gonna quote it everywhere. I've always thought about that... thanks to your fic, I have articulated that question.Yeah, it's such a painful fic......it's a really sad though really :cry:
It is a sad thought, ne~?
@kRisZ and Yukari: I WILL OUTPRAY YOU!!!! :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer:You're so funny :rofl: Ok, stop burning guitars and the next chap will be up soon :P
CHARMY-SAMA!!!!
I stood by the huge window in my own apartment and gazed blankly at the sky. It was a bright sunny day with white fluffy clouds in the sky and if I lived my life behind a window, I could easily believe that it was a summer day. But the fact was I didn’t live my life behind a glass panel and I knew that winter was here.
I picked up my phone and hesitated for the hundredth time whether I should call her or not. She should be at the airport by now. What if she lied to me and she wasn’t going to the airport? What if she was having fun right now with the H!P girls? What if she was with Fujimoto Miki?
No, I should just call her no matter what. After what had happened last night, we ought to have a serious talk about our relationship. This shouldn’t go on anymore. Maybe I should invite her over for dinner tonight.
I dialed her number and held the phone close to my ears waiting for her to pick up. No, she didn’t. Perhaps she was buying lunch and it was a hassle to pick it up.
I pressed the redial button and again she didn’t pick up. Maybe she was walking and didn’t notice that her phone vibrated.
I dialed again and I was yet again directed to the voice-mail. Maybe she was having fun with the girls and didn’t notice that her phone was ringing.
I tried again and the result was still the same. Maybe she was in the toilet doing her business.
I called again. Maybe she had left her phone at home. A blur queen like her might have done so.
I dialed the same number for the 6th time but there was still no response from her. Maybe she had misplaced her phone. Oh yes, maybe she had lost her phone.
When I called for the 7th time and she still didn’t pick it up, I was convinced that she was with Fujimoto Miki.
When I placed my phone on the table, tears welled up in my eyes. No, I shouldn’t cry. I hadn’t lost this battle yet. So what if Yossie was with her? Last night when we were together, her mind was on Fujimoto Miki. Maybe when she was with Fujimoto Miki, her mind would be on me. Maybe.
Strange. Why was that woman with Yossie? Did my plan fail? Maybe Maki didn’t act well enough. But she is the best actress in H!P.
Oh crap. I picked up my phone and dialed a different number. This time round, on second ring, the receiver picked up. “Hello,” she said politely.
“Hey, Maki. It’s me, Rika.”
“Oh Rika, tell you something, I’m not leaving Japan.”
“What?” Why the hell was she staying? It’s not part of the test!
“Something happened over here. I can’t leave now.”
“What happened?”
“It’s complicated. Where should I start? Oh, you were right about it. Miki did turn up-”
“She did? What did she do?” Then why the hell would she be with Yossie? She should be with Aya.
“Yeah, well, she slapped me and ran off. Aya chased after her though and then…”
“What happened?”
She spoke in a very gentle tone, “Aya told me about it just now when she eventually stopped crying so I think it should be true. I mean, Aya witnessed it and she has no need to lie to me and-”
“What happened?” I interrupted.
“Yossie and Miki kissed.”
“What?” I shouted into the phone. Tears ran down my cheeks. Why did that happen? I didn’t intend for something like that to happen. Why did Yossie kiss that woman? She liked her, right? No, I should calm down and think rationally. There must be a reason.
After a few seconds, she replied, “My pick is Miki did it to take revenge on Aya because she thought that Aya and I were in for a kiss.”
I could no longer contain the anger piling in my chest and I shouted at her in angriest voice, “Why the hell did you kiss Aya?”
She said defensively, “No, I didn’t. I just wanted to wipe off some cream on her face.” At this point, I truly regretted asking her to test the strength of the love between GAM. I just wanted her to create some problems for them so that Fujimoto Miki would be troubled by her own relationship with Aya and wouldn’t bother Yossie that often. I didn’t ask her to mess up their relationship completely. Damn, Maki had her own agendas.
She disrupted my train of thoughts by saying, “Thanks for asking me to participate in this test. If I didn’t participate, I won’t know that Miki was such a jealous and insecure lover. I cannot forgive Miki for hurting Aya like that.”
“Oh..” What should I say? Frankly, I just wanted to scream at her for spoiling my plan and ruining everyone and everything. But I didn’t quite have the guts to mess with her. In fact, I somewhat regretted shouting at her just now. Maybe she would be mad at it and would backstab me or maybe….
“Anyway, Aya just came out of the shower so I got to go. Just remember: Don’t let go of Yossie no matter what happens. If you need help or something, you can just look for me. I’ve an idea how you can keep Yossie by your side.” She hung up on me.
Shower? I wondered where they were and what they were up to. With the image of Fujimoto Miki kissing my Yossie swirling in my head, I couldn’t quite be bothered with what they were doing. But, in a way, their little action would affect Yossie and me. She said she had an idea. I wondered what it was. I wonder aloud to myself, “Do I need her help? Crap, I can handle my love relationship on my own. Wait, maybe I do. Oh well, if everything I try on Yossie fails, at least I will have someone to turn to…”
At this point, I just want to say that I have figured out 2 different endings in F.Y.I and I'm debating which one to follow through with. In both of them, something will happen but the resultant pairings will be different and the ending will be different..Just set up a poll so you can go and vote and if you like, justify why. I put up different combinations so that you won't know what's up in my mind :P . I'll only look out for the pairings that I'm debating over but if you can, convince me of another pairing. :D
“Anyway, Aya just came out of the shower so I got to go. Just remember: Don’t let go of Yossie no matter what happens. If you need help or something, you can just look for me. I’ve an idea how you can keep Yossie by your side.” She hung up on me.Ok.. Aya out of the shower.. and Maki is with her.. :w00t:
ujujuju poor rika... she didn't know what was happening :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff:Haha..you don't seem to be sympathising with Rika! :lol:
wow, mean... it was the only response :mon ouch: :mon ouch:Mean Yossi :angry: :lol: or to link back.....maybe it's mean Maki :P
wojooo she know it now!! what could she do??? :mon spit: :mon spit: i imagined rika like -----> :mon mad::rofl:^ What will Rika do? haha, you are making me excited over my own fic...
maki prefered her own plan actually... :mon inluv: :mon inluv:Not the first time Maki takes things into her own hands..maybe it's the maki-style :oops:
so she is with aya... WOJOJOOO :mon inluv: :mon inluv:Will Maki help to revive ishiyoshi or will she leave Rika to rot? Oh man, I'm excited over my own fic again :lol:
Maki you won't have to say Rika how she can keep yossy :mon exhaust: :mon exhaust:
noooo~~ bad rika~~ :mon ko: :mon ko:Yeah, I leave that bit to your imagination :) :mon misch: Should I? Maybe I shan't.. Do you want a chapter on that? Oh man, the power of imagination is way stronger ;)
i wonder were they where too :mon wind: :mon wind:
i don't know how to convice peopleeeeee :mon ref: :mon ref: (remember, two monkeys everytime, they are twins XD)Will Miki? or will she stick to Aya like before? or will she allow herself to have a change of heart? damn, I'm making myself excited with the questions...
emm emm PLEASE YOMIKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII :mon loveflower: :mon loveflower: no?? well i don't know what to do... i have been all the fanfic praying for it :mon whimper: :mon whimper:
i voted yomiki, do i need to justify?? well... i love them, Aya doesn't love miki, and i want her to be happy with Yossy, besides Yossy doesn't love Rika anyway... aaaaand i don't believe in plains to be together with someone that doesn't love you. My only doubt is if Miki could some day love Yossy, i hope she can :mon pray2: :mon pray2: i hope that other people vote for it n.nU
emm actually, i wanted to vote for Gam #2, but then i think... it's almost certain that if yomiki will exist, Gam #2 too... but if only Gam# 2 exist, isn't sure that yomiki could...^You sure? XD :lol: Yomiki = GAM #2?
so i vote yomiki, i repeat
waiting a next chaptaaa titotitotitotitotitotitotitooooo :mon love: :mon love:haha, you are making me fall in love with my own nick..it rhythms (in a way) and it's easy to type.... :wub:
as expected, I voted for IshiYoshi... that's pretty much what everyone would expect...You're for a break-up? Maybe Yossi just didn't know how to love a person properly ;)
but thinking about it... I want YoMiki to win this one... Charmy doesn't deserve to be hurt like that...
sure, her karma might say otherwise for sending all that hate mail and doing this stupid test but... she doesn't love miki... that is the difference between her and Yossui...
Yossui claims to love her... but is it really love? She knows Miki's effect on Rika... why doesn't she do something about it? it is as if she's hurting Rika on purpose and then hides behind the glorious curtain of benevolence as a friend... Why is she letting Rika feel insecure?
Can't she go beyond the physical and emotional pleasure of kissing this extremely hot girl for the higher values of honesty, love and trust? Why doesn't she just tell Rika it's fucking over? Rika deserves to know...
Rika is not the perfect girlfriend... nor is Miki... ... but if loving means hurting the one you love and Yossui's just looking for someone to love... I concede... YoMiki wins it...It's not the end of the battle yet :) You mean Yossi to hurt Miki by loving her? Hmm......
I just hope Yossui 'loves' Miki better than Rika...
Fuuu~ This is a sneak comment! XDYeah! You're commenting again :) ^sums up pretty much what happened in chap 17 and 18
The Ishi and Yoshi POV! OMG.. Crazy...
Yossie thinks of Rika for a while but its all around Miki.. She's considering it.. :O
and Rika.. poor Charmy.. but she planned it.. :shocked: and it failed.. :(
No trust in Miki's side and Aya's just plain innocent.. *sigh*
but wait..
Ok.. Aya out of the shower.. and Maki is with her.. :w00t:I'll leave the GoAya part for your imagination for a while...Not that it's hard. Shower...there aren't many places with that :P
anyway.. Maki has an idea to keep Yossie with Rika.. sounds pretty sneaky.. like only one side would benefit.. and what would happen to Miki?? I know i go for Ishiyoshi and AyaMaki but Miki??? I don't want her to be set aside.. :-\
You're for a break-up? Maybe Yossi just didn't know how to love a person properly
You mean Yossi to hurt Miki by loving her? Hmm......
... it's hard for me to say this... but... at this point... I AM FOR BREAK UP... yossui has no idea how to love... she ruins rika's evening, rika tries to make it right. what does yossui do? grope another girl in public and ignore rika's efforts... just end it, yossui! i'd do a better job than you!Quite true..I can understand your frustration the more I think about it...it's more of they love each other in very different ways and view love differently. similar case with that of Aya and Miki ;)
if being yossui's girlfriend entails that much pain, i'll serve her to miki on a silver platter... i hope you enjoy your meal, miki...Oh man..you're being really sarcastic today..chill..chill :( XD :)
... waiting for next chapter where you will end IshiYoshi...Frankly, I haven't decided whether to end it or not..maybe I'll think through it tonight or something..now I just throw everyone in that mud and it can almost go anywhere from here...
the poll's not fair ~ I'm the only Aya fan here, (and probably only GAM fans)....
but well... I trust you!! please make this the best story possible regardless of the endings :)
aya please don't do anything stupid with maki!!
(and i'm really anxious to know her reaction after seeing that :cry:)
I hope it's not the end of GAM....but whatever, I just want aya happy XD
Chapter 18Gaddamit Yossi. We know you're confused about how you feel about Miki but fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck this ain't helping matters....:banghead:
Shattered Love
YOSHI POV
Chapter 18SUNNOVAFUCK THE "SHE" WAS RIKA!?!?!? :OMG:
Shattered Love
ISHI POV
After a few seconds, she replied, “My pick is Miki did it to take revenge on Aya because she thought that Aya and I were in for a kiss.”Yeah...you reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally thought this plan out well Rika.
I could no longer contain the anger piling in my chest and I shouted at her in angriest voice, “Why the hell did you kiss Aya?”
She said defensively, “No, I didn’t. I just wanted to wipe off some cream on her face.” At this point, I truly regretted asking her to test the strength of the love between GAM.
I just wanted her to create some problems for them so that Fujimoto Miki would be troubled by her own relationship with Aya and wouldn’t bother Yossie that often. I didn’t ask her to mess up their relationship completely. Damn, Maki had her own agendas.Geez, she's only realizing this NOW??? It should have been pretty obvious that Maki might try something considering how she's all rabu-rabu for Aya herself. :doh:
“Anyway, Aya just came out of the shower so I got to go. Just remember: Don’t let go of Yossie no matter what happens. If you need help or something, you can just look for me. I’ve an idea how you can keep Yossie by your side.” She hung up on me.Oh shit no...please Aya say you didn't... :shocked:
Shower? I wondered where they were and what they were up to.
“Do I need her help? Crap, I can handle my love relationship on my own. Wait, maybe I do. Oh well, if everything I try on Yossie fails, at least I will have someone to turn to…”Oh for Pete's sake...NOW what?
At this point, I just want to say that I have figured out 2 different endings in F.Y.I and I'm debating which one to follow through with. In both of them, something will happen but the resultant pairings will be different and the ending will be different..Just set up a poll so you can go and vote and if you like, justify why. I put up different combinations so that you won't know what's up in my mind :P. I'll only look out for the pairings that I'm debating over but if you can, convince me of another pairing. :DWhat if we want to see both endings? You could just choose one to be your "primary" ending and then post the other one as an "alternate" ending the next day.
the poll's not fair ~ I'm the only Aya fan here, (and probably only GAM fans)....Oh man, I can feel the pressure^..Ok, I'll try my best! :D
but well... I trust you!! please make this the best story possible regardless of the endings :)
aya please don't do anything stupid with maki!!See, I know there are people who like Aya...maybe it will take some time ;) I need to finish revising math and bio and... :angry:
(and i'm really anxious to know her reaction after seeing that :cry:)
I hope it's not the end of GAM....but whatever, I just want aya happy XD
you're not alone :mon beam: GAM forever!!!Hello! Nice to see you making your first post here! :P I'm happy! :wub: Post more often!
Gaddamit Yossi. We know you're confused about how you feel about Miki but fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck this ain't helping matters....:banghead:^Absolutely..she is just :? confused..
SUNNOVAFUCK THE "SHE" WAS RIKA!?!?!? :OMG:This ^ is so funny! :rofl:
...
Actually, I shouldn't be that surprised at this.
Yeah...you reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally thought this plan out well Rika.Rika isn't as scheming as Reina or Maki...probably this is the best she can think of :lol:
:mon suspect:
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Oh shit no...please Aya say you didn't... :shocked:did she? :P
What if we want to see both endings? You could just choose one to be your "primary" ending and then post the other one as an "alternate" ending the next day.^Good suggestion..I'll think about it but that's provided that no one kills me for ending 1 :P
:yep: :D :rockon:
btw, I voted for YoMiki cause they deserve to be with eachother as they are the only decent characters left.You make me feel as though I screwed up the story.. :(
But I only want a bit of thaat, I want Miki to get Aya in the end.. It wouldn't be fair not to have her after all she went through to get her and keep her, and then all the stuff she put her through.Hmm..perhaps.. ;) :)
But she also deserves better u know? Someone who isn't the type to neglect her and then get jealous of her even though she was the one to throw her away in the first place.
But they are both suffering at the hands of others. It's not their fault for what they are doing or how they are hurting. It's Rika and Maki's fault. I think that if Rika had not been there then Maki would've let go and GAM wouldn't have been having as many problems. And then Miki would not have come off so mean to Aya and she wouldn't have gone out with her etc.Absolutely! :)
But it's mean of Maki to try and get back in with Aya on a relationship which has foundation based on lies and deceit. She should have told Aya what she told Rika just now. She should have not taken advantage of Aya on this level. And she should not have gone to her place, she should have taken her to Aya's place or even Miki's and tried to make things good between them. But what am I saying, Maki isn't Aya's friend, she's just someone who basically wants to see her miserable. It's like Gomatou all over again.Haha..you are reading too much between the lines..I haven't yet revealed where they were or whatsoever.. :lol: XD As for Maki, I'll deal more with her agenda later.. :oops:
I dialed her number and held the phone close to my ears waiting for her to pick up. No, she didn’t. Perhaps she was buying lunch and it was a hassle to pick it up.
I pressed the redial button and again she didn’t pick up. Maybe she was walking and didn’t notice that her phone vibrated.
I dialed again and I was yet again directed to the voice-mail. Maybe she was having fun with the girls and didn’t notice that her phone was ringing.
I tried again and the result was still the same. Maybe she was in the toilet doing her business.
I called again. Maybe she had left her phone at home. A blur queen like her might have done so.
I dialed the same number for the 6th time but there was still no response from her. Maybe she had misplaced her phone. Oh yes, maybe she had lost her phone.
When I called for the 7th time and she still didn’t pick it up, I was convinced that she was with Fujimoto Miki.
“What happened?” I interrupted.
“Yossie and Miki kissed.”
She disrupted my train of thoughts by saying, “Thanks for asking me to participate in this test. If I didn’t participate, I won’t know that Miki was such a jealous and insecure lover. I cannot forgive Miki for hurting Aya like that.”
^ i know who i am... don't worry though... i stopped praying... i don't want to pray for ishiyoshi anymore...
Yukari and kRisz need not worry, i'm quitting the prayer contest...
i don't want yossui to end up happy...
charmy stopped listening to my prayers...
i also don't want to pray for miki to get hurt...
ayaya and maki should have their heads between rubber and asphalt...
(there are supposed to be just two people involved... i already mentioned rika... who's the other one?...)Maki.?.
Maki.?.
at least she's (Rika) decisive about her relationship... not like some other person we know who's involved in their supposedly exclusive relationship (there are supposed to be just two people involved... i already mentioned rika... who's the other one?...)
okay, I'm 50% with you on this one
where's the spirit *tries to find tru's spirit*
she definitely deserves some tru love
you're kidding right.?.
in denial mood :roll:Exactly^ XD
My first choice was YoMaki, so that neither of the two will get Yossie :P , and just to be different :grin:Hmmm....let's see about it... ;) :oops:
But I clicked GoAya... I could sense Aya loves Maki more despite the efforts of Miki and despite Maki’s past behavior. Well she was threatened and no one who’s in the right mind would prefer to be in jail just to prove their love.
And Yossie is confused, she’s saying she loves Rika but gets confused when Miki’s in the picture. I have two theories about thisBoth are possible and great theories :D Theorem B is more accurate :P
(1) Yossie and Rika are together for ages... maybe she’s bored and is looking for something to rekindle a spark or something. And besides it’s healthy for a relationship to look for a fling.
(2) Yossie’s the only person in HP that Miki trusts in spite of the scheme, so maybe Yossie’s feeling guilty or something, maybe it’s not love at all or maybe it started with the guilt and evolved.
i don't want yossui to end up happy... charmy stopped listening to my prayers... love sucks... i also don't want to pray for miki to get hurt... that would be unfair... ayaya and maki should have their heads between rubber and asphalt...:roll: Don't be so depressed! Cheer up! :)
rika's always the one people blame... at least she's decisive about her relationship... not like some other person we know who's involved in their supposedly exclusive relationship (there are supposed to be just two people involved... i already mentioned rika... who's the other one?...)I do agree with your point about Rika being more decisive about her relationship than, say, Yossi, Maki...I'll deal with Maki's relationship agenda later
*chill... come on, tru...* i just got home from the infamous coffeeshop of FYI fame, starbucks... i showed off ishiyoshi pics to my bandmates... they thought it was hot...Oh man, you sound sarcastic :( Cheer up girl!! :)
pleaase no000 :cry: where's the spirit *tries to find tru's spirit*Yeah..where's the cheerful believer of ishiyoshi? :( :)
she definitely deserves some tru love:lol:
very good one :lol:More of you want them to die together :lol:
it's in Runaway from the Past... running away from this past...No~~!!! :( Don't run away!! XD *Pull back pull back* If you are a GoAya believer back in Gomattou, I think you would have killed me..
no kidding... i lost two guitars already in my ritual sacrifices... ... Charmy-sama stopped listening to me... she said their wasn't enough IshiYoshi rabu-rabu in my most recent chapters... NOT MY FAULT!!! anyway... getting back on topic, i'm still waiting for updates where IshiYoshi will end... I believe still believe in the Ishi ... but not anymore in the Yoshi...Yeah..agree with Charmy on that :) I'll probably update at night at the quickest..time to study again ;) *throw in some charcoal to make sure that the flames don't die*
^ i know who i am... don't worry though... i stopped praying... i don't want to pray for ishiyoshi anymore...
i don't want yossui to end up happy... charmy stopped listening to my prayers... love sucks... i also don't want to pray for miki to get hurt... that would be unfair... ayaya and maki should have their heads between rubber and asphalt...
rika's always the one people blame... at least she's decisive about her relationship... not like some other person we know who's involved in their supposedly exclusive relationship (there are supposed to be just two people involved... i already mentioned rika... who's the other one?...)
*chill... come on, tru...* i just got home from the infamous coffeeshop of FYI fame, starbucks... i showed off ishiyoshi pics to my bandmates... they thought it was hot...
Yukari and kRisz need not worry, i'm quitting the prayer contest...
More of you want them to die together
Miki would be the opposite to Rika in a relationship
Not being able to trust
if being yossui's girlfriend entails that much pain, i'll serve her to miki on a silver platter... i hope you enjoy your meal, miki...
I shall admit, I'm as blinded by Miki as you are by Rika
But come on now, Rika wasn't trusting Yossy before all of it, hence her plans to keep Miki away which were backfiring
But I do like Rika here, so don't add me to your hit list
My gut feeling tells me you hate me more than any other people and more than anything.....
What I can say is the ending I have in mind is very different from whatever you are thinking of..
HHWWPSSPISM (Holding Hands While Walking Pa-Sway-Sway Pa In Slow Motion aka walking blissfully while holding hands)...
Basically, you hate Yossy as I hate Aya for hurting your Rika and my Miki
We are really on the same wave length here, just different characters
And don't worry, the machine gun only just grazed my shoulder
^hey... that's culture, man...
How much she wished she could go back to that night when Miki confessed to her.
Maybe it was time for her to do something un-Japanese.
Nooooo no no no no :cry:
You gonna end with GAM all nice and cosy and back together aren't you? And you're gonna make me like Aya in the process :angry:
AYAYAYAYAYA, listen to Maki, you and Miki aren't right for each other... Yes you love her but the reason you don't know how to show it is that you only love her as a friend! Don't Maki to the list of girls your hurting, poor Gocchin :(
Yukari, come pray so more... We need more hope for YoMiki, its not looking good :wub:
(only two more pointless chapters before 22 :D :P j/k)
“No one loves by hurting the other intentionally. This isn’t love at all,” Maki paused and commented as an afterthought, “Maybe you two shouldn’t even love each other in the first place.”
“Maki, you don’t understand. I love Miki regardless of what she does. I love her. It’s just that sometimes I don’t know how to love her. I can’t match her intensity of love.”
just want to go to a peaceful place right now and runaway from reality but there isn’t anywhere like that near here.”
“No, that’s Miki. I’m Aya. If I use her ‘an eye for an eye’ approach, everything between us will soon be over. Not even friendship will be left.”
Maybe it was time for her to do something un-Japanese.
ummm, why.?. :?Just Aya's thoughts to reverse time and go back to the past
I'm using my rabu-rabu's computer, I forgot to bring mine and she's like "discipline is fading, you're still that hooked" :mon scratch: damn :D , but I've changed, not anymore surfing while at work :mon sweat: I guess it's time to cut it even shorter :mon yo::rofl: you're doing fine :D Just don't say anything like what Miki/Rika/Aya said in FYI and everything will be ok :P
Nooooo no no no no :cry:Will they? :P What will happen between GAM? XD (why am I asking? I should be the one with the answers.. :lol: )
You gonna end with GAM all nice and cosy and back together aren't you? And you're gonna make me like Aya in the process :angry:
AYAYAYAYAYA, listen to Maki, you and Miki aren't right for each other... Yes you love her but the reason you don't know how to show it is that you only love her as a friend! Don't Maki to the list of girls your hurting, poor Gocchin :(
(only two more pointless chapters before 22 :D :P j/k):lol: You still remember..they appear quite frequently you know :D
I feel bad for all of them~Yeah, that's the way..it's a sad tragic fic plotted and created by tito :wahaha:
but ....... Aya you go and win back Miki!!! :onioncheer: It's just a big misunderstanding between them :err:Pray on Pray on! :D No wonder tru said GAM supporters hate Rika.. :lol:
Rika it's all your fault :scolding:
i pray with now!!! :prayers: :mon prayer::wahaha: I wonder what you will feel about the next chapter :oops: :lol: You know who are involved in the next one..
YOMIKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i don't want GAM :mon whimper: aya just hurt Miki, i don't want them together...
something unjapanese?? like what?? :mon huh:
well... i want GAM #2 too!! :mon zoom:
HEAR, HEAR!!!! so shouldn't Rika and Yossui...What should they?....... I really don't get it.. XD
... hey... you watched her make out with someone else right in front of you, and you still love her?! that sounds like a pretty intense type of love to me... HOPE FOR GAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hearing voices in head that chants: IshiYoshi lives... IshiYoshi lives... Ishiyoshi lives...* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! :on_plug: :scared: :imdead: Charmy-sama, i said i won't pray for IshiYoshi anymore!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!That's the way Aya loves (refer back to Gomattou :P) :lol: The spirit is back! :cow: tabun...
Runaway from the Past is a good place to runaway to... it's a thousand miles away from here... :lol: :lol: :lol::rofl: :rofl: This is so funny^! Maybe it is much better place than FYI
speak in Filipino? ... ... ... :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: ... that's sooooooooo not it!!!:rofl: :rofl: Now I'm 99.9% sure the old tru_harmony is back!
.. is it just me or the machine-gun is calling me again? :on_plug: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:Peace! Keep that violent object away from sight! :P Haha, GAM supporters, do you accept her apologies?
my Charmy-sama beckons me to keep the machine-gun... ... and get a grenade launcher instead... j/k :lol:
... ... GAM people must hate Rika really bad :mon surr:...
for the transgressions and lapses in judgement made by my Charmy-sama, i apologize... :kneelbow: ... especially to the GAM people...
:prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :omamori:
What should they?....... I really don't get it..
Yep, she is stupid... Maki tried to kill her and she still fell in love with her saying "oohhhh it doesn't matter my dear, just never try to run me over and leave me there for dead again... if you don't do that then it must mean you love me too and we can live happily ever after , staring at ourselves in the mirror while talking about how awesome I am and how much better than everyone else I am... MY GOD I'm perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" :roll: :)Quote... hey... you watched her make out with someone else right in front of you, and you still love her?! that sounds like a pretty intense type of love to me... HOPE FOR GAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hearing voices in head that chants: IshiYoshi lives... IshiYoshi lives... Ishiyoshi lives...* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! :on_plug: :scared: :imdead: Charmy-sama, i said i won't pray for IshiYoshi anymore!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!That's the way Aya loves (refer back to Gomattou :P) :lol: The spirit is back! :cow: tabun...
... ... GAM people must hate Rika really bad :mon surr:...
for the transgressions and lapses in judgement made by my Charmy-sama, i apologize... :kneelbow: ... especially to the GAM people...
:prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :omamori:
Peace! Keep that violent object away from sight! :P Haha, GAM supporters, do you accept her apologies?
Pray on pray on! :D
I don't really understand Rika's way of thinking though.
How could testing GAM's love help herself and Yossie?
... i meant that i agree!!! ... and that Yossui and Rika shouldn... shouldn... *stuttering like aibon in ganko skit* shouldn't lo-lo-lo-lo-lo-love each other anymo-mo-mo-mo-mo-mo-more... (that was so hard to say that)...This kinda reminded me of the last chapter of when love hurts and the author said something about sometimes love hurts but there's more to love than just pain and that's why we love :P Hmm..we will see about it :D
... because like aya-miki, they just hurt each other...
*still voices in head(getting louder by the minute) ISHIYOSHI LIVES, ISHIYOSHI LIVES, ISHIYOSHI LIVES!!!!!!!!!!*But if those voices are getting louder, maybe you should just believe :D Ah, finally I get what's going in that ishiyoshi believer's head. :D
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:fainted:
... i will not give in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
forgive me, Charmy-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! as much as i know you want you and yossui to end up together, i can't pray for that anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yep, she is stupid... Maki tried to kill her and she still fell in love with her saying "oohhhh it doesn't matter my dear, just never try to run me over and leave me there for dead again... if you don't do that then it must mean you love me too and we can live happily ever after , staring at ourselves in the mirror while talking about how awesome I am and how much better than everyone else I am... MY GOD I'm perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" :roll: :)Tell me my eyes aren't playing tricks on me..you added the last bit just a while ago, didn't you? TELL ME!! XD
@tru: Have you ever thought that maybe those voices in your head aren't normal and you should see someone about it :P OR, maybe it's just a sign for you to write more IshiYoshi love really soon in your fic ;)Yeah, tru, there is a professional right here :P
QuoteI don't really understand Rika's way of thinking though.
How could testing GAM's love help herself and Yossie?
why haven't i asked that question before?!?!?!?!
... o-kay... Rika, how could you do this to me?
in the i-don't-want-ishiyoshi-anymore-in-this-fic side of my brain... i think the test is for... ... ... ... ... I DON'T KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!
GGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!
i shot at people for nothing!!!!!!
tito?! what is the meaning of this?!
This kinda reminded me of the last chapter of when love hurts and the author said something about sometimes love hurts but there's more to love than just pain and that's why we love :P Hmm..we will see about it :D"I know the meaning of what people call great love. It’s not a fairy tail; it’s not about princes riding white horses or bewitched princesses waiting for a kiss to be free… Great love is that one that shakes your soul, the one that makes you smile even if you wanna cry, that changes the world around you…
Tell me my eyes aren't playing tricks on me..you added the last bit just a while ago, didn't you? TELL ME!! XD:lol: Yeah I did :oops: I saw how many typos there was in it, so when I went to fix them up I just couldn't help but to continue my insult of Aya :P
That sounds so Ayaya-ish though I reckon Ayaya's supporters out that won't like the sound of that :P
Yeah, tru, there is a professional right here :Plong way to go till I actually am a professional but exactly, listen to me :D
Yossy... mmm so pimp! she have to decide is she really loves Rika or not!! she is playing with Rika feelings, and it hurts her.
Rika... like i had said to tito, i know people like... rika-kind... and i don't like that they can trust in their lovers.
"I know the meaning of what people call great love. It’s not a fairy tail; it’s not about princes riding white horses or bewitched princesses waiting for a kiss to be free… Great love is that one that shakes your soul, the one that makes you smile even if you wanna cry, that changes the world around you…
That’s why, even if it hurts sometimes, I wanna love and be loved in return."
Ahhh, i love that line :wub: :heart:
:lol: Yeah I did :oops: I saw how many typos there was in it, so when I went to fix them up I just couldn't help but to continue my insult of Aya :PSpreading the hatred for Aya, huh? Aya fans, skip that comment! Don't read it! It's bad for your brain :lol:
...A lot? *tito counts*
i want yomiki... *traumatized*
i... omg :pleeease: now i feel depressed, so much GAM fans :mon whimper:
but but... T_T i forget what i want to said :mon fire: so... em... now i hate Aya (THIS Aya) she COULDN'T love that way, it isn't love at all... miki is a dork xD so impulsive, but what can we do, miki is miki. Yossy... mmm so pimp! she have to decide is she really loves Rika or not!! she is playing with Rika feelings, and it hurts her. Now... Maki, i just love her, but she is so... weird XD and Rika... like i had said to tito, i know people like... rika-kind... and i don't like that they can trust in their lovers.Nice analysis of the characters..no one knows how to love another properly in here. Will it change? XD yeah^ I remember that..oh well, sometimes when roles reverse, I think my behaviour then resembled that of Rika ;) *Flashback*
@lollipopgirl: ... how much do you charge? I seriously need help... THE VOICES!!!!! ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI!!!!Hey lollipopgirl, your first client. Do a good job :D
NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHARMY-SAMA, SAVE ME!!!!!
i know someone like that too... that person just happens to be my rabu-rabu ... .... WOAH! :w00t:... ... at least, now i know why i'm so addicted to this fic...Nice to see another person out there relating the fic to her life..I'm just glad that no one is in Maki's shoes..*look right and left* Please tell me there isn't anyone! XD :lol:
i hope to see an update soon... i don't know what i want anymore... i'm not even sure if i still don't want ishiyoshi together... :cry: ... i'm so confused... HELP!!!Think I'll keep you in suspense for some time till I finish revising Bio for today :angry:
@lollipopgirl: ... how much do you charge? I seriously need help... THE VOICES!!!!! ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI!!!!
NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHARMY-SAMA, SAVE ME!!!!!
well articulated, Yukari... you sure you still want miki with the jerk-we-know-by-the-name-Yossui?
i know someone like that too... that person just happens to be my rabu-rabu ... .... WOAH! :w00t:... ... at least, now i know why i'm so addicted to this fic...
Nice to see another person out there relating the fic to her life..I'm just glad that no one is in Maki's shoes..*look right and left* Please tell me there isn't anyone! XD :lol:
That's why I have difficulties with the ending..I can never write something as lasting and memorable as that
A lot? *tito counts*
no one knows how to love another properly in here
Hey lollipopgirl, your first client. Do a good job
Nice to see another person out there relating the fic to her life..
Think I'll keep you in suspense for some time till I finish revising Bio for today
Maybe you want whatever tito wants?
*gives tru_harmony a chance to read my mind*
woo i have the same voices... but they say me YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKI
i can read ishiyoshi and yomaki etc etc, commenting and feeling what the characters feels , untill... miki appears, if Miki appears... the voices too... i almost die when you put miki in RFP , but then i throw the voices away... uf it was close
do the voices sound like charmy's frantic speaking verse in shabondama?
mmm no, they sound like Miki and Yossy in egao yes nude
titooo we need a updateee, now we're insanes!!
woo i have the same voices... but they say me YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKIYou two are so funny! :P Why those voices never appear in my mind? XD
wojoo my ex lovers were like that too... so it was like ishiyoshi, and it's the reason why i understand Yossy in the fanfic :mon sweat:My fic is bringing back bad memories, I guess XD Apologies for pain caused..
maybe... :shifty: oh i have to go and get my car... i have work to do with it :shifty:Don't you try. I'll have 1 less reader XD
wujuju it will be yomiki right?? :mon evillaff:What do you think? :wub:
that's why i don't want to end Runaway from the Past... ever!!! ... it will just go on and on and on and on and on... :lol:Is that the real reason? *Looks straight at tru* Be frank........ :lol:
why hurt the inumerable GAM fans with a YoMiki ending when you can make them (GAM people) with a GAM ending? ... and if GAM lives... :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: ... *demonic possesion* IshiYoshi will live :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: *demonic possession over* ... wait a minute... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lollipopgirl, i need your help!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
*running away from suspense who is currently holding an ax and randomly hacking people to pieces* RUNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! STILL WAITING FOR UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mmm no, they sound like Miki and Yossy in egao yes nude :mon mischief: ooooh i'll call the voices :mon mischief:
nonono i can't!! it's not sane!! :mon surr:
titooo we need a updateee, now we're insanes!! :mon ghost:
*still running away from suspense who is now carrying a chainsaw but still hacking people to pieces* I DON'T WANT TO DIE YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Lollipopgirl, do your job! Try saving them, professional :P
these relationship thingie problem isn't that rare, you know... that's why i love FYI... it can really happen....
i just hope it doesn't..
why aren't you posting lazy butt?because I got to remember all those words without vowels in that green biology textbook/ black and white bio notes. :(
maybe it IS time for her to do something unJapanese.Hmmm...not quite the meaning of unJapanese ;)
That's right Aya, go get your woman!
Yossie nodded. With every single word that Miki spoke, her heart ached. She was just treated like a puppet despite her efforts to revive their friendship by trusting her and caring for her. She felt stupid thinking that they might be lovers. She wasn’t even treated like a friend. “Did you even feel anything when we kissed?” she asked softly. She dreaded the answer but she needed to know.
“This isn’t love at all,” Yossie murmured more to herself than to Miki.
Miki, with her ever sharp ears, heard that comment and questioned with her typical sharpness, “What do you know about love, big flirt?”
“Oh yeah? Even a horrible person like me knows that love doesn’t come from the mouth; love comes from the heart.”
“Don’t joke about this Yossie. You like Rika,” she paused before adding as an afterthought, “Our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love. Not even with the kiss.”
Yossie smiled in an attempt to mask the pain she was feeling inside. Was that how one felt after a rejection? Or was that how one felt in an unrequited love? Maybe she just had been thinking too much. “You’re right about it,” Yossie said as firmly as she could. What was she right about? The fact that I like Rika? Or the fact that our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love? Yossie spoke as happily as she could, “Fujimoto, I just remember that I left something behind in the studio yesterday. I got to go. Hope you are feeling better! Bye!”
:angry: :mad: :angry: If this keeps going at this rate, I shall stop reading after 22 :PDon't you dare :P :lol: Your heart has already been broken! XD
You'll break my heart :cry:
Miki and Ai :wub: I am sure Risa would have understood :-\ 8)I think Risa won't..;)
"Even a horrible person like me knows that love doesn’t come from the mouth; love comes from the heart.”Yeah! I'm so happy :D Happy morning!
There you go, you wrote a really awesome line that shall stay with me :D
Forgot to mention, I can't help tru and Yukari, they are beyond help ;):wahaha: The creator is not yet satisfied..not yet! Is the professional addicted too? :P
I shall, however, diagnose them with being too addicted to F.Y.I, its a new type of drug that rips your heart to shreds, then puts it all back together, only to rip it apart once more, continuing this process till its creator is pleased with herself... Those poor addicts :(
The song 'Suppin to Namida' is stuck in my head right not and all I can think of is that it must be how Maki in this fic is feeling (or was till Miki kissed Aya), makes me love her all over again my poor little darling... Gocchin :mon cry: :mon waterworks:When did Miki kiss Aya? 3rd last chap of Gomattou? :? *listen to suppin to namida while checking projecthello for translation* Ahh~ :cry:
so YoMiki is not one of the possible pairings at the end :mon determined:Hmm...maybe :D How is that monkey feeling about this^?
serves you right, jerkYossie^? Just keep those things! :lol:
... this is exactly the reason why my RFP rika is so "wimpy" ... she ain't like some people we know... *trying very hard to keep the machine gun and grenade launcher in the gun safe*
miki is really, in her own misguided way, the most mature person in this fic...Quite true....wait till you see the next chap or the next next one or the next next next one :P
feel the pain of insecurity you hubris-driven creature!!! THAT'S CALLED KARMA-- IN YOUR FACE!!!!Oh man, you really hate Yossi...I don't know why but when I read it, I feel like laughing :rofl:
puppets are everywhere...Agree...sad reality though ;)
stupid idiot miki!!! oh well... i really dun hv any idea where this fic is heading XD it's so fun!!:wahaha: No one can read my mind! *gives ciel03 a chance to read tito's mind* What about with Rika? :P
let's see.... I dun want Aya to end up with Maki, but not with Miki at this stage.... so she will be alone... :cry: :cry:
noo.....well... not with yossie obviously...but ah, i dun care :lol: i'm confused....
She thought, “At least I didn’t screw up our friendship, Yossie.”pssh.. yea right.. :sweatdrop:
Don't you dare :P :lol: Your heart has already been broken! XDThat's true :cry:
:wahaha: The creator is not yet satisfied..not yet! Is the professional addicted too? :PMaaaaaaaaaybe :P
When did Miki kiss Aya? 3rd last chap of Gomattou? :? *listen to suppin to namida while checking projecthello for translation* Ahh~ :cry:Oops I meant when Miki kissed Yossy.. silly me :oops:
heeeeee~ Miki was so blunt to Yossie. I feel as though Yossie deserved it though, if she felt something towards Miki, she should've ended up her relationship with Rika seriously, now she hurt hers and Rika's feelings.. :doh: and Miki was so dense about Yossie feeling anything for her so that's double ouch for the 'big flirt'. Hmm.. Miki is very irrational in this fic.. I wonder if she's waiting for Aya to call her..Miki regretted it definitely and yes, she's waiting for Aya :( She's just rash as always ;)
But I'm going for a week long rehab stay from next Tuesday anyway... Really hoping i get 22 before then but study comes first (I wish I felt that way for me :lol: )haha, I'll like to put it up before my exams come you know but before that, I must sort of make sure that those depressed people out there are feeling better, professional ;) I don't want to inflict more pain on you people..give you some time to recover ;)
Oops I meant when Miki kissed Yossy.. silly me :oops:SUPPIN dakara naite ii desho motto "suki" to ieba yokatta namida fuitara omoidetachi to "BAIBAI" shite kaeru ne Damn, you got the song stuck in my head! Now I start to imagine that image as well :cry:
*pictures Maki looking at herself in the mirror while singing Suppin to Namida and then breaking down into a crying mess on the floor* :O :( :cry:
"anata ga suki, mune ga itai, kowai keredo, uchiaketa no, tomodachi ni wa, modorenai wa ,Unazuite yo~~" f---- berryz song*read translation for song* Dearie, I'm so sorry to have hurt you and make you cry..Can you please forgive me? I'll give you time to recover from the pain for a while..tito isn't a person who uses humour in fic very well ;) I'm one who prizes sorrow and angst..Sorry once again to everyone :( Please accept my apologies or else I'll feel bad :(
now i'm hurt, it's just that i involve so much when i read, it's the only way someone can makes me cry... and the songs makes me cry too... badly
no monkeys today, i'm depressed...
anyway, i'm waiting next chapter... i want to read something untill the end...
PS: poor yossy... it's so similar that the situation touched me so much
Well, if anyone wants to kill you for ending 1, you can use ending 2 to try and save yourself. :DQuoteWhat if we want to see both endings? You could just choose one to be your "primary" ending and then post the other one as an "alternate" ending the next day.^Good suggestion..I'll think about it but that's provided that no one kills me for ending 1 :P
:yep: :D :rockon:
Even though she knew that the 2 girls weren’t for real, it still pierced her heart whenever she thought about it. Miki was intentionally hurting her.The nxt question is though, what, if anything, will Aya do because of what she saw? Furthermore, what will Maki do when she finds out what Aya saw?
Aya murmured, “Miki kissed Yossie just now…”A bit cold, but Maki is right when she says that Miki prone to acting rashly.
...
Bewildered, Maki’s eyes widened. She knew she shouldn’t say anything insensitive at this point in time even though she felt like slapping Miki for hurting Aya right now. She inhaled deeply before she asked, “Just because she thought that we were in for a kiss?” She could feel Aya’s chin moving up and down on her left shoulder which meant that she nodded in agreement. “She hasn’t changed a bit. She’s still an over-possessive and rash girl.”
Aya spoke in a muffled voice, “Maki, you don’t understand. I deserve it. I deserve the pain that I’m suffering from now. It’s long overdue. I ought to suffer earlier. I have made her suffered for too long.”Sure Miki obviously found it hard to deal with Aya dating Maki before, but it's not like she really made it obvious for Aya to see how she felt about her. She really shouldn't be blaming herself for not realizing how Miki felt about her sooner. Take a look at how good things turned out when Aya did find out. If Miki had been willing to take that step sooner and tell her, then she (Miki) wouldn't have been in as much angst over it for so long.
Maki’s heart sank when she heard that. Never in her life had she heard Aya said she loved someone else other than her. Even though she thought that she would be fine hearing this, it was just so painful to hear that. She wondered to herself, “Maybe this is how Miki felt in the past when Aya told her that she loved me. I just want to tell her that I love her right now but I don’t want to risk losing her because of that. No wonder Miki hates me so much.”Things change when you understand how the other side feels/is going through. :yep:
“If Miki knows about that I’m in Maki’s room now, it will definitely lead to more misunderstandings. But it shouldn’t even matter at all.” The images of the two girls kissing came to her mind again and more tears streamed down her cheeks. She shook her head. “No, that’s Miki. I’m Aya. If I use her ‘an eye for an eye’ approach, everything between us will soon be over. Not even friendship will be left.”Indeed. Aya needs to be the level-headed one, otherwise things will just get worse.
She turned off the tap and she quickly wore the G Emotion concert T-shirt and the track pants that Maki just lent to her. As she walked out of the bathroom, Maki quickly hung up her phone and dashed towards her. She asked in a concern voice, “Are you feeling better now?”The strange thing is...Aya's clothes should be perfectly fine for her to wear. It's not like they're all covered in dirt or anything. Considering how sensitive (and observant) Miki is, walking around with that particular T-shirt on sure isn't going to help matters if she's "spotted" (i.e. when Rika "accidentally" mentions that this happened the next time she's around Miki). :doh:
“I’m going…home. I’ll like to be alone. Thanks, Maki.”Aya knows that Maki means well, however her involvement is a big part of the problem right now. So yes, the best thing for Aya to do is to NOT be around Maki.
What did I do that was wrong? I thought I was doing alright…Did she eavesdrop into my conversation with Rika over the phone? “Aya, what’s wrong?”
Aya stared relentlessly into Maki’s eyes for some time before she replied, “If you want the best for me, let go of my hand now.” Maki obediently let go of her hand. “Thank you,” Aya said sincerely before she turned the door knob and left the room.
Maybe it was time for her to do something un-Japanese.This fills me with worry, to be honest. :O
After Miki stopped crying, Yossie led Miki in silence to the taxi stand as Yossie believed that they needed to leave this place and they hopped into a cab. When they were in the taxi, Yossie asked softly, “Where do you want to go?” Miki shook her head absently with tears running down her cheeks again. Yossie knew that Miki wanted to be away from the crowd now but she couldn’t figure out where exactly to bring her to. It must be somewhere that Miki felt comfortable in.Now let's hope that Yossi doesn't get any stupid ideas here and try to take advantage of the situation.
“Excuse me, where do you want to go?” the taxi driver asked impatiently. Yossie told the driver her address and she was not surprised that Miki didn’t comment on what she just said.
She thought, “Maybe Aya wanted to tell me about this lunch appointment with that bitch yesterday. But I flared up at her and she didn’t have a proper opportunity to tell me. Maybe Aya was smiling for the sake of smiling just now. Maybe Aya wasn’t in for a kiss with Maki just now. Why did my mind work so fast and rush into a conclusion just now? If only I didn’t think about it, maybe it will be fine. If only I didn’t come to the airport to play safe, maybe it will be fine…”Even Miki knows that she jumps the gun at times, she just can't help it.
Yossie remained silent throughout the whole journey. She didn’t know what to say to Miki. In fact, she didn’t quite know what was going on. Was that act just part of Miki’s game? What triggered her to do so? But why would Miki do so? She loved Aya. She felt an intense urge in her to ask Miki what had happened earlier but it seemed way too insensitive to ask now.The timing sucks, but Yossi's right. To make things better all the proverbial cards have to be laid out on the table. The more that's known, the better for all.
Yossie thought for a while before she spoke softly, “So you kissed me to take revenge on them. Or, to be more precise, you wanted to take revenge on Aya.” Miki didn’t respond which meant that her hypothesis was correct.Sometimes you have to give someone a little smack like that, even if they realize it themselves. Miki knows that what she did was stupid, which is good. However if Yossi does this right, she'll hopefully get Miki to realize that SHE needs to do something to fix it instead of just beating herself up over it.
Silence fell between them for almost 5 minutes before Miki whispered in a sincere voice, “I love Aya. I really do.”
“But if you do love her, why did you do that to hurt her?” Oops, those words just came out a little too quick. Yossie prayed that she hadn’t hurt Miki with that.
“This isn’t love at all,” Yossie murmured more to herself than to Miki.Funny how Yossi and Maki think the same thing like that.
Miki frowned and she said without exchanging any eye contact with Yossie, “I didn’t choose you. You just happened to be there.Dang, that's particularly painful considering how Yossi feels about Miki (who, of course, is completely oblivious to). Of course, in Miki's rashness, she wasn't thinking about anything else other than the pain she was feeling over what she thought she saw.
I wanted to choose Ai actually but I didn’t have the heart to spoil her little romance with Risa!”Yeah...while it WOULD have been interesting to see it, it's probably for the best that it ended this way instead.
Yossie stared blankly at the glass of orange juice that Miki had just drunk and interrupted in a soft voice, “What if I like you?”It's sort of ironic. At first it was Miki having feelings for Aya, who had no clue about it. Now Miki's involved in a virtually identical situation, only now it's HER that doesn't have a clue that she's being longed for by another (in this case, Yossi). :roll:
Miki laughed. “Don’t joke about this Yossie. You like Rika,” she paused before adding as an afterthought, “Our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love. Not even with the kiss.”
I wonder what's going to happen~ :mon chilly: Anyways, I hope you do well on your exam! :mon thumb:Thanks :P
I'll make some banners while I wait . . . :mon whimper:For F.Y.I? :D If you do, I will be so touched :) :lol:
titoooYeah, I need the luck XD The monkeys disappear again :P
i want answers!! XD
so i'll wait until you update
luck in your exams... :mon thumb:
Oh no, please don't tell me that Aya is gonna step back and let Miki do what she wants for a while and pretend she doesn't care... If she does, this is hitting really close to home :cry: Don't do it Ayaya, it sucks, get out while you can, before it hurts even more :( (yes you suck... I'm relating to and feeling sorry for Aya now... Not that I can relate her to earlier in the story though!)See, I manage to make you sympathize with Ayayaya :P :wahaha: Hopefully she heeds your advice ;) :D
I don't mind if IshiYoshi stay together (although it will be pretty sucky for them) but I don't want GAM!!! I hope they all meet up to break up :PPray on pray on :D
Yossy is on the right path to realising that it's not right being with Rika and now its Aya's turn!
THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! Christmas gifts for TakaGaki, is what should be the title :twisted: Shame I'll be away when you put it up, but hopefully you keep chapter 23 till after i am home so I get to comment all on 22 :PHaha, :lol: you're some psychic..predicted part of the next chap pretty well..Let's see whether you get the other part correct :P When are you coming back? It really depends on how much that bloody exam drain my energy away..
To all the sudden GAM fans, Yuki and I are prepared to battle you in a fight to the death... One side for the love the singers of the great lesbian love song "Melodies" and the other corner (the totally cool Yuki and I :cool1: ) fighting for the hotness and true connection of YoMiki love! FIGHTTTTTOOOOOOOOO~! :bangchair: :poke: :mon beam: :mon yeah: :mon zoom:You're so funny :rofl: *Looks at Yuki* Yuki hasn't agreed yet :lol:
To all the sudden GAM fans, Yuki and I are prepared to battle you in a fight to the death... One side for the love the singers of the great lesbian love song "Melodies" and the other corner (the totally cool Yuki and I :cool1: ) fighting for the hotness and true connection of YoMiki love! FIGHTTTTTOOOOOOOOO~! :bangchair: :poke: :mon beam: :mon yeah: :mon zoom:
“No one loves by hurting the other intentionally. This isn’t love at all. Maybe you two shouldn’t even love each other in the first place.” This line repeated in her mind.Oh great, Aya's over-thinking again. :doh:
She wondered, “Love. What is love? Isn’t love something that brings happiness? Why do we hurt each other even though we are in love? Why is love so painful? Before we loved each other, there wasn’t so much pain and angst in our relationship. Is this love?”
The image of that packed lift with Japanese squeezing in which paralleled her love story came to her mind. Those people squeezed in because they felt it was irrational to wait for the next lift as it would result in a loss of time and they felt obliged to squeeze into those packed lifts. But was it rational to squeeze in despite the discomfort? Who was the one who said it was an obligation? Maybe it was time to do something unJapanese. Maybe it was time to step back. Maybe it would be rational to give that lift a miss.Oooooooooooooo...nice analogy. :yep:
She typed a message on her handphone and clicked on the ‘send’ button to that familiar number. The word ‘unJapanese’ was stuck in her mind as she did so. This was perhaps the biggest decision she had made in her life.3 questions though:
Then she visualized the way Yossie and Miki probably kissed today and she frowned. She felt angry because Miki had somehow tweaked her plan in a way that she became much more intimate with Yossie.Well, in all fairness if Rika hadn't made this "plan" to begin with, none of it would have happened (or at least, not in this manner).
She felt depressed because she felt that Yossie had cheated behind her back. There was also a burning and surging desire in her to win back Yossie’s heart. But the question was: how?When you consider that Miki was pretty much the instigator (a detail that Maki evidently neglected to mention as she had only generically said that the two had kissed), one could say that it wasn't really cheating. But then again, Yossi didn't really make much of an effort to stop her, now, did she?
Miki sat in the rather deserted park near her own apartment alone. It was raining Christmas Eve and most people would be in their homes. But she didn’t want to go back to that empty apartment. It would bring back too much happy memories. She felt that she didn’t have a right to feel happy after what she had done. Maybe she would obtain the right after Aya forgave her. But would Aya forgive her for doing something so childish and irrational?Miki won't find out either way, as long as she's just willing to proverbially sit on her hands. Nothing will happen if she doesn't take action. Right now what she did with Yossi is the big problem, so she has to be the one to take the first step to try and fix it.
She felt her handphone vibrated in her pocket. She immediately flipped open her handphone and read the message. Her heart skipped a beat when she saw who the sender was. It wrote as followed: Happy Christmas Eve. Let’s meet up at the park that is near to your place around 4pm tomorrow. See you.” She immediately replied, “Ok, see you then!”Well then...this could be promising, depending on what Aya says when they meet up. :O
There was only one voice-mail on her answering machine and it was from an unexpected person – Junjun. Junjun spoke in a chirpy voice, “Yossie, thanks for your help 2 weeks ago. I don’t think I need it anymore though. During the gathering, Aika said she saw me as her godsister and I agreed to play that role in her life. It has been 2 weeks and I feel really happy with where our relationship is heading towards. Maybe I just thought too much in the past. Maybe I’ve seen her just as a special friend all along and nothing else apart from that. Thank you very much for guiding and helping me.”Looks like Junjun's come to terms with the whole Aika situation, but is it really what she wanted?
All along, she was happy flirting around with Rika or simply, with anyone. A few days ago, she thought that she never dedicated herself fully to Rika. But the fact might be that she never dedicated herself at all. The guilt that she felt towards Rika piled up in her chest because she knew that Rika gave all that she had in their relationship.If this is true, then Yossi's definitely not being fair to Rika. If she's not able to give the same level of commitment, she needs to let Rika know now instead of leading her around with the belief that her intentions are the same.
Her handphone vibrated and she immediately grabbed it and read the message. It was from Rika. It read: Yossie, can we meet up tomorrow at that Chinese restaurant around 5pm? Merry Christmas in advance!” She replied okay and wished her Merry Christmas in advance as well.Is Yossi willing to take that big step?
The message just came so timely. She knew she needed to speak to Rika as well. She gazed at the hand-made book lying on her bookshelf. Perhaps that could be part of the Christmas present for her this year.
It had been a pretty tiring afternoon for Maki after Aya left as she went running from place to place and jostling with the crowds to buy the Christmas gift for Aya. She swore that this would be the last time she shopped on Christmas Eve. She entered her hotel room and gazed at the gift in her hand. She smiled to herself as she imagined Aya’s delighted look when she gave her the gift tomorrow.Oooooooooooooooooooh that's not going to help matters. :err:
She murmured to herself, “Perhaps I can earn that right back.”She at least knows that she doesn't have a chance of her and Aya getting back together, right?
“No one loves by hurting the other intentionally. This isn’t love at all. Maybe you two shouldn’t even love each other in the first place.”
She wondered, “Love. What is love? Isn’t love something that brings happiness? Why do we hurt each other even though we are in love? Why is love so painful? Before we loved each other, there wasn’t so much pain and angst in our relationship. Is this love?”
The image of that packed lift with Japanese squeezing in which paralleled her love story came to her mind. Those people squeezed in because they felt it was irrational to wait for the next lift as it would result in a loss of time and they felt obliged to squeeze into those packed lifts. But was it rational to squeeze in despite the discomfort? Who was the one who said it was an obligation? Maybe it was time to do something unJapanese. Maybe it was time to step back. Maybe it would be rational to give that lift a miss.
Yossie, the Prince Charming, popped up in her head as always. No matter how many years they had spent together and no matter how she dressed up, she was the Prince Charming in Rika’s mind. This fact would never change. Rika mouthed the words, “I love you…”
Then she visualized the way Yossie and Miki probably kissed today and she frowned. She felt angry because Miki had somehow tweaked her plan in a way that she became much more intimate with Yossie. She felt depressed because she felt that Yossie had cheated behind her back. There was also a burning and surging desire in her to win back Yossie’s heart. But the question was: how?
She thought, “What else can I do? I don’t want to lose her…but so what if everything went according to plan? Will life without Miki makes us a happy couple or is Miki just part of our problems? What is our problem?”
Honesty,
She took out her handphone from her bag and sent her a short message before praying for the Christmas lights to illuminate their love.
“I’m willing to die for Aya so that should be love. Is it true that love won’t hurt? Then, why is our love story full of pain? What is love then?”
She murmured to herself, “I deserve what I get…I reap what I sow…”
“Don’t joke about this Yossie. You like Rika. Our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love. Not even with the kiss.”
“I deserve what I get…I reap what I sow…”
The guilt that she felt towards Rika piled up in her chest because she knew that Rika gave all that she had in their relationship.
Images of the soulless and crying Aya in her embrace surfaced in her mind. How much she wanted to protect Aya and give her that sense of security. How much she wanted to kill Miki for hurting Aya like that. But she didn’t have a right to hate Miki because she had hurt Aya with the same intensity or even more in the past. She felt she didn’t have the right to protect Aya as well as she was the one who had thrown it out of the window when she decided to choose her career over Aya.
She murmured to herself, “Perhaps I can earn that right back.”
there are so many Definitions of Love... which one do you want to hear? the definition by philosophy? theology? chemistry? psychology? (i'll give the psych one to lollipopgirl)Man, defining love sucks for me seeing I don't really believe in it anyway :lol:
yeah i'm cool :glasses:... LOL jokeLOL, I think Ai. love took the monkeys away at one shot *bang* XD Crazy Yomiki fans :P
you don't have to request it, i'm your comrade :mon yeah:
we wan't hotness and connection!! YOMIKI FIGHTO!! :mon mad:
*prepared to the war* Lollipopgirl and Yuki against the GAM world!!! :mon dive: :mon hobo: :mon bat: :mon beam: :mon look: (all the freaks monkey will help us, they're my friends!)
Lollipopgirl i'll protect you :mon loveflower: oh s--- no~~ it isn't in the fanfic XD
if you want to join us... just do it!!
3) What was/is the "unJapanese" thing to do here?The answer is somewhere in the analogy :D
Well, in all fairness if Rika hadn't made this "plan" to begin with, none of it would have happened (or at least, not in this manner).True. But if you trace back, maybe it started with Yossi appearing in the gathering. Or maybe even with the jail incident. And that will lead all the way back to Gomattou. :D
When you consider that Miki was pretty much the instigator (a detail that Maki evidently neglected to mention as she had only generically said that the two had kissed), one could say that it wasn't really cheating. But then again, Yossi didn't really make much of an effort to stop her, now, did she?Yossi didn't of course..oh well, Aya didn't tell Maki clearly as well ;)
Well then...this could be promising, depending on what Aya says when they meet up. :OSuspense.. :pimp:
Looks like Junjun's come to terms with the whole Aika situation, but is it really what she wanted?Well, that's the most she can do in this situation - just look at the brighter side of things...
Is Yossi willing to take that big step?Suspense x2 :pimp: :pimp:
She at least knows that she doesn't have a chance of her and Aya getting back together, right?Tabun...;) :P
...
Come to think of it, there IS NO chance of that happening, right?
:mon cute:
GAM fighters UNITE!!!!*Click on save image* That's so funny :D For a split second, I wanted to grant your wish. Ok, that split second is gone..tito is sober and rational again :lol: Yeah, there's thanks and lululu and the wonderful futarigoto as well..oh man, how can you forget about that? XD
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It's not just about "Melodies"~ :mon sigh:
the damned computer at school f-ed up my comment so i'll be retyping the whole thing now...That sucks..this comment is long.. :(
there are so many Definitions of Love... which one do you want to hear? the definition by philosophy? theology? chemistry? psychology? (i'll give the psych one to lollipopgirl)Nice theory about love :wub: It very much depends on how one views love and that determines the outcome.
if it's philosophy... then love is that which liberates us. If one acts in love, that person is flexible to the circumstance and acts accordingly.
If two people 'in love' constantly hurt each other, could it be that it's not really love but fear that keeps them together? Could it be, Aya, that before you went exclusive with each other you were really in love and now you're just being tied down by that pact of exclusivity? Could it be that the obligation to be together made you fall out of love?
If this 'love' is causing pain to both of you, that it's just a yoke you burden yourselves with, shouldn't you two let each other be free now? I think that's what love is... not necessarily letting go but setting each other free from obligation, uncertainty and fear. If you realize by your freewill that regardless of the flaws and hardships you two must go through, you will still choose to love each other, then go on loving. If you realize that you are only being bound by empty promises and 'I love yous', let go-- it's the most loving thins you can do.
are you sure you've actually won the heart before?This is a really good question.
i think your prayer will be answered... given that the love actually existed before...You sure?
although that saying is true, i don't see where you planted the bad seeds to get this kind of harvest... i think someone *throws evil glance at rika* sabotaged your crop... i wish that the real seeds of love that you planted grow soon... i can water them if you want...LOL, this is the first time you look at Rika like that :lol:
you think it's that easy?!Will it be? :P
I'll pray for you in your exams!!!!!Thanks for the prayers! :D I doubt my hands can even move after the exams though ;) Shouldn't have time to doze off but while studying for it, there's a tendency to doze off.........
:prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon study: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer:
:mon study: :mon yeah: :mon yeah: :mon yeah: :mon yeah:
don't do this: :dozing:
Now, Aya, Miki, Yossy, Rika and Maki, listen up! There are a few different definitions of love psychologically, at least one of you has suffered from misattribution of emotions (I don't remember who I said that about) which isn't really a good thing, but another concept, that none of you have really developed, is the one you should be aiming for to some degree... Fusion! That's where two people love each other so much in a relationship, they become one with each other. Essentially, they complete each other, its not just being clingy, but they are soulmates. Being able to tell what the other thinks and feels without them saying it coz you understand them completely, is not something any of you have mastered, nor will you unless you split up into the pairings I want :PCome on, listen to the professional! The misattribution of emotions is for Aya (for the post that you tried to convince me of GoAya and Yomiki :P) :lol: It all sounds so professional until the last bit about 'unless you split up into the pairings I want' :P
Interestingly though, fusion is most prevalent in lesbian relationships, so girls, there is hope ;)
Why am I talking :roll: SHUT UP MEEEE, stop acting so high and mighty! :angry:
@Ai.love: I love GAM but when YoMiki is at stake :lol: But you almost won our battle then by hypnotising me with all those flashing monkeys! WAAAAAY COOL! :w00t:I'm obsessed over the gif as well :) Almost? Go Ai.love!!!! :wub:
Quotealthough that saying is true, i don't see where you planted the bad seeds to get this kind of harvest... i think someone *throws evil glance at rika* sabotaged your crop... i wish that the real seeds of love that you planted grow soon... i can water them if you want...LOL, this is the first time you look at Rika like that :lol:
yeah... and i wasn't even possssed by the devil when i did it... kinda feels liberating... not that i don't worship her anymore... just that... well sh did put herself into this situation with the scheming shit she did...Turning rational already! That's a good sign! :P You know tito will take the water away anyway right? :lol:
@miki: the watering the seeds offer is still up...
goodluck to your exams... Bio (life) kills... ironic, ne~?
everyone's heart broken :(^You officially earned the 'most sadistic person' award :D
the YoMiki vs GAM makes me :w00t: *gets some popcorn, sits at the corner and waits for the FIGHTO!* :twisted:
the pa-sway pa-sway ishiyoshi date in case you can't rememberisn't it pa-sway sway? lol, i'm getting confused.. was that a taglish phrase you used? :D
Is it? Damn, sorry my spelling mistake XD I was trying to learn from our one and only RFP writer :DQuotethe pa-sway pa-sway ishiyoshi date in case you can't rememberisn't it pa-sway sway? lol, i'm getting confused.. was that a taglish phrase you used? :D
the story is going round in circles!! im getting dizzy!!Sorry about the dizzy part..I just don't want to put it somewhere in front and spoil the suspense XD
btw r u gunna put eri and reina povs somewhere in this fic?
... Rika, what did you get yourself into? :err:Yep, you're right :P
the pa-sway sway date is the one with the miniskirts, right?
... and Rika was really part of that strangle miki to death?!?! :scared: :imdead: :mon wtf:No, dear, she wasn't. Yossi was just making a big fuss over it back then. It was all Eri's doings :P *Come back alive*
:mon runcry: *back to RFP*I'm pretty sure you will run back again :D
oh my~!! eri in the prank call thing too???!! lolYEP. She was the person Rika called at the end of Chap 11 :D Peace is what we need.....but angst will be what you get here :lol: :P
Peace
wow o.oThe monkeys are back~~!! :wahaha: Oh man, you are crazily in love with Maki :P Where is that twin monkey?
maki i love you~~ :mon lovelaff:
well, now about the chapter... :mon dunno:
maki i love you~~ (again, it's like a song in my head now) mmm poor Miki, some people don't like her i suppose, but i don't think it's her fault... :mon mad:
mm... Charmaki??? i had never saw it i think :mon huh2: curious
eri loves madly reina actually :mon star:Kinda fit into the Sukeban image :lol: The door...will that be a ghost? :lol:
and rika is a bad person in this fanfic!! such a bad person... :mon exhaust:
i believe that really someone knock the door... :mon pissed:
The monkeys are back~~!! :wahaha: Oh man, you are crazily in love with Maki :P Where is that twin monkey?
@Ai.love: I love GAM but when YoMiki is at stake :lol: But you almost won our battle then by hypnotising me with all those flashing monkeys! WAAAAAY COOL! :w00t:
LOL, I think Ai. love took the monkeys away at one shot *bang* XD Crazy Yomiki fans :P
GAM fighters UNITE!!!!
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It's not just about "Melodies"~ :mon sigh:Quote*Click on save image* That's so funny :D For a split second, I wanted to grant your wish. Ok, that split second is gone..tito is sober and rational again :lol: Yeah, there's thanks and lululu and the wonderful futarigoto as well..oh man, how can you forget about that? XD
I'm obsessed over the gif as well :) Almost? Go Ai.love!!!! :wub:
well... i don't wanted to worry you but... if you ask... he/she is very sick now... she needs a yomiki transfusion or he/she will die... :mon ref:Go and reread memoir or something XD I love that series :) Hmm...I thought that kiss was enough. You're so greedy!!!! :mon heh:
oooh poor my monkey brother/sister :mon cry:
... ah... okay...Yeah, you'll run away from the past but I'll keep updating so you will run back again (just being lame XD ) Oh gah, there calls for Yomiki and here prays for Charmy :lol: She'll definitely appear again, fret not! :)
... anyway... yeah, you're right... no matter how many times i run away from this fic, i still kepp on coming back...
*rebuilds Charmy-worship altar* CHARMY-SAMA!!!! make an appearance in this fic once more!!!
Aww~ Tito not being sober and unrational is way better for GAM's sake ...... :mon innocent:Hmm...never mind, I'm sober already despite staring at that for I-dunno-how-long :lol: . Speaking of GAM, I've been thinking of them for the last hour or something when I was travelling back home..Cool ideas came to mind :wahaha: I better pen it down before I forget about its coolness :P (LOL, it's tito's definition of coolness XD ) Just a little spoiler or warning here :P IT'S COOL~
time to use an onion once again~ :wahaha:Onion, why?
Now about Chapter 22, all I have to say is that Rika is soo evil~ :mon speechless: and Maki has easily fallen into Rika's planMaki is gullible both in real life and here...poor girl :( Evil Rika is kinda cute though *watches Sukeban* Aww... :wub:
Hmm...I thought that kiss was enough. You're so greedy!!!! :mon heh:
Hmm...never mind, I'm sober already despite staring at that for I-dunno-how-long :lol: . Speaking of GAM, I've been thinking of them for the last hour or something when I was travelling back home..Cool ideas came to mind :wahaha: I better pen it down before I forget about its coolness :P (LOL, it's tito's definition of coolness XD ) Just a little spoiler or warning here :P IT'S COOL~
Onion, why?
Maki is gullible both in real life and here...poor girl :( Evil Rika is kinda cute though *watches Sukeban* Aww... :wub:
Does this mean there won't be any YoMiki!?!? :mon mischief:Up for guess :P
eh~ coolness? cool? This must mean something pleasant is going to happen, since it's supposebly "cool" right? :mon fyeah:Let's see how well you know tito :lol:
Unless, you mean cool as in, cold and not happyish!?!? :mon suspect:
Poor Gocchin~ :mon hanky: Rika is still evil and ....... cute~ :mon ehh:Funny how we can love and hate someone..hmm...
:rofl: My dear, you are sooo very cute! I love you :heart: :wub:The monkeys are back~~!! :wahaha: Oh man, you are crazily in love with Maki :P Where is that twin monkey?
well... i don't wanted to worry you but... if you ask... he/she is very sick now... she needs a yomiki transfusion or he/she will die... :mon ref:
oooh poor my monkey brother/sister :mon cry:
Oh bloody shit luck...:lol: You sound like such a true blue Aussie there XD I'm proud! :D
^You officially earned the 'most sadistic person' award
:rofl: My dear, you are sooo very cute! I love you :heart: :wub:
... that is ultra bad news... :( ... man... does this mean we won't find out what's gonna happen within this week?Yes and hopefully it will not stretch to next week....my freaking exams are ending on this friday. I want to use the weekend to put up another chapter and my brother will never allow me to use his comp for 3 to 4 hours writing it :( Yeah, more time and attention to studies for you and me :P Ok, maybe not you *hints at RFP* :D
Oh bloody shit luck...
oh well... more time and attention to studies for the mean time...
Well, maybe I shouldn't comment out of spite, but I will seeing it's for a good cause, MAKI'S BACK KIDS YAY!!! :wub:Yeah, it's all because of you mentioning about singing suppin to namida in front of the mirror :lol: I was searching for a song on projecthello to insert into the scene and subconsciously, I just used suppin to namida XD
I'm really glad you used that song too, for obvious reasons :P
As much growing up Maki did in jail, she still has so much to do! She may love Aya but she needs to learn when she should stick her nose and when she just needs to stay out of the way :( I still loooove you Gocchin! :heart:Hopefully, they take the advice from the pro :P Damn, it's comment like this that makes me wanna write and then go 'hehe, you will see for yourself! :P "
I honestly don't think Rika is evil... I think she is misunderstood and she honestly thinks she is doing the right thing by her relationship... she's pretty blinded by love, but she's no Reina! I feel for her, and think she needs to concentrate on herself (just like Maki) before she does anymore!
Your 'cool' GAM ideas don't sound good to me, so maybe it's a good thing you lost the plans :oops: No, I don't mean that... it really sucks so much, you poor thing :( *huggles**Accepts huggles* I just wrote that idea down on a hard copy..unless you sneak into my house and steal that, I doubt it will change! Coolness :P
Someone's influence! :heart:Oh bloody shit luck...:lol: You sound like such a true blue Aussie there XD I'm proud! :D
This is so hilarious! Let's see.....maybe I'll hold the award ceremony another day...maybe you won't be soon :PQuote^You officially earned the 'most sadistic person' award
is this the time to :muffin: for earning an award.?. :dunno:
:mon dunno: okay, yay! got an award! :muffin: :P
titoooo poor girl... what happened with you comp?? how die it?? :gmon ringu:I don't know. I was reading RFP and suddenly it hung and I restarted it manually because it wasn't responding at all and then, it just gave out this weird sound and *pang* :cry: That monkey brother died as well?
oooh i know!!! he miss my monkey brother so it wanted to go with him :mon cry:
naah, seriously, it's such a bad what happened with your pc :mon sweat:
MAKE THEM HAPPY TITO!!! or the next that will die is you MAUJAJAJAJA *yuko mode on* naa joking :mon geek::wahaha: I love Yuko, I don't fear her! :wahaha:
still... waiting a update, even if it will be in a year! :mon yeah:Yeah, that's the attitude :P *pray that the guy whoever he is can repair my comp* :mon prayer:
I don't know. I was reading RFP and suddenly it hung and I restarted it manually because it wasn't responding at all and then, it just gave out this weird sound and *pang*
The answer is somewhere in the analogy :DOh, don't tell me Aya's going to suggest she and Miki do like Ross and Rachel did near the end of the second season? :bleed eyes:
Maybe all that I could do now was to try my best to convince the devil in me to resort to any method to make sure that the very one whom I loved would attain happiness. That’s the least I could do for her.BUT! With whom would said happiness be? Is Maki truely going to be able to do this if it means "losing" Aya to Miki?
I was in the taxi heading towards the airport when she called. “Hello,” I said. I was pretty shocked that she was the first person to call me. We weren’t even considered close in H!P.Damn, so Rika was the one that convinced Maki to do "the test." :O
“Aya and Miki are together.”Ah, so Maki didn't know about them? It must have then been the surprise of the revelation that made her agree to do what she did.
My eyes widened as I visualized how they held hands on the streets and how they made out on the bed. No, this couldn’t be true. It was too fast. We had just broken up a month ago and now they were together
“Do you want to test the strength of their love? I mean if they can’t even overcome the obstacle that we set, they won’t be happy in the future. Aya won’t. You want to make sure she has happiness before you leave right?”Oh fuck that's sneaky. And it's not even the real/true intentions of it to begin with. We all know what Rika's focus is; she could care less about Miki or Aya's happiness.
Eri and I had sent some hate-mails and prank-called Aya over the past week. The contents just threatened Aya and expressed our dislike and hatred towards Miki. Probably Tsunku will speak to them about the fate of GAM and if their love isn’t strong enough, it will just crumble because of that. Miki will leave Aya. Surely, you don’t want to leave Aya in the hands of such a lousy lover right?”WTF?
I shook my head. Her plan didn’t sound professional at all but it should somewhat test their love. But why did she plan something like that? Aya and Miki….they didn’t have any direct connections with her.The lack of connection should have been enough to convince Maki to NOT take part in such a hair-brained scheme. There's NO way that a plan like that would ever do ANYTHING but hurt everyone who was affected by it.
Now, I knew more about Miki that lousy lover and I couldn’t leave Aya in her hands.Oh no...Maki missed the whole point of what happened.
...
Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled how lifeless Aya was when she was in my embrace earlier. I threw the chance away back then. But now, another chance came knocking. Was I wrong to open it?
The answer is somewhere in the analogy :DOh, don't tell me Aya's going to suggest she and Miki do like Ross and Rachel did near the end of the second season? :bleed eyes:
BUT! With whom would said happiness be? Is Maki truely going to be able to do this if it means "losing" Aya to Miki?Really good question. Keep it in mind as you read the subsequent chapters :D
This is the second time that Maki's allowed herself to be manipulated/used in someone else's plan. First it was Reina who wanted to stir shit up so she could take Miki's "spot" in MM, and now Rika's wanting her to help find out about their (Miki/Aya/Yossi) relationships (when she SHOULD be trying to make things better within her own).Yeah, Rika just didn't want Yossi to know that she was coming up with something funny by asking Maki to help her because after all, Aya and Yossi are not really directly related.
That doesn't make any sense at all. How the hell did Rika come to that conclusion? If anything, it would bring the 2 of them closer together. Think about it, would Rika leave Yossi if someone had been sending her anti-Yossi hate-mail? Fuck no.You're right that it will make them even closer. That's what Rika wants. She wants Miki to be as far away from Yossi as possible....so the one who was senseless was the one who was obsessed over Aya's happiness and had a subconscious feeling that Miki wasn't the one for Aya. Yeah.
Now it makes sense why Rika's plan backfired on her. She's not thinking rationally and quite frankly, being really stupid.
Oh no...Maki missed the whole point of what happened.Yeah pretty much. ;)
:mon oshitwc:
Super ultra bad news..my comp has decided to die on June 22 6.53pm local time :( Now I'm using another comp but all the drafts and plan are gone! Oh bloody shit luck
“I’m sorry…”Ishiyoshi?!?! :w00t:
“Don’t apologise. There’s no need for apologies. I love you.” she whispered before she pressed her lips against that of the older girl. Their tongues intertwined and the younger girl sneaked her hand under the other’s blouse and moved its way up…
“No, I didn’t!” Miki shouted and she clenched her fists. She took the phone away from her ears for a split second and look at the caller ID. No, that number wasn’t in her contacts. Who the hell changed her phone and number on Christmas? Who the hell thought that she was supposed to call Miki at 11 am on Christmas?Omgsh! Is that one of those 'Sorry, wrong number!' :lol:
Just when she was about to ask for the caller’s identity, the caller said in a muffled voice, “Why are you like that? I got you Mikitty’s photobook – COEUR with her autograph on it for Christmas this year you know. Do you know how hard it is to get her autograph? You should be happy, Yumiko-”
“Mikitty rocks but you got the wrong number,” Miki commented flatly before she hung up.
There were five more hours before the Christmas date with Aya. She didn’t anticipate it as much as she dreaded it. She prayed that it would turn out as well as the weather was today.Damn... :(
She trudged out of her room and switched on the TV in an attempt to kill time. The female broadcaster reported that there would be snow later in the afternoon. “What a joke,” she murmured to herself. She caught a glimpse of the disc lying on top of the TV set and she smiled to herself. She wondered aloud to herself, “Will that last us through winter?”
Aya could no longer stand watching the two girls anymore and she walked off away from the room. She made a conscious attempt to drag her feet so as to remind the girls to close the door properly. It was just painful to watch the girls smooching as the friendship between the 2 girls bore too much resemblance with that between her and Miki.She couldn't bare the TakaGaki goodness.. GAM is what she needs.. :cry:
She remembered that they spent the first Christmas together at the park near Miki’s place 6 years ago when Miki joined the project. Miki bought a pair of matching bracelets and she remembered that she insisted that she wanted the one with the small pink heart on it. That was when they made that pact – a simple yet unforgettable pact. She wondered, “If things between us can become simple again, probably it will form part of our shared unforgettable memories. Will it?”
Miki sat on the bench in that park near her place that they did on the 1st Christmas that they spent together and she could visualise how Christmas was spent 6 years ago. On that very 1st Christmas, she took out a pair of matching bracelets and told Aya to pick the one she liked and she would settle for the other one. She could still remember that Aya chose the one with the small pink heart on it and she took the one with the diamond. Then, they put the bracelets on for each other – Aya wore on her left hand while Miki wore on her right. After giggling and putting the bracelets on for the other, they held hands and the bracelets hit onto each other and produced the sharp metal sound. It was at that symbolical moment when they made that simple pact.They're sharing the same memories! Aw.... :( :wub:
When she eventually found the disc, she held onto it in her bag and she hid it from Aya’s view as she wanted to give Aya a surprise. She smiled and whispered, “Aya-”Shoot.. :O Don't like where this is going..
“Miki-tan, let me do the talking for today ok?” Miki nodded reluctantly wondering what Aya would say. There wasn’t even the tiniest smile on her face when she said, “Today let’s be honest with each other and not even keep a single thought to ourselves, ok?”
“Now I give you 2 options. 1, let’s miss this packed lift and give ourselves time to think whether we want to catch it or not the next time. So that means let’s not be seeing each other for, say, the next 30 days. Let’s use the time to think about our relationship and the sources of the problems in it and after exactly 30 days, we’ll meet up again and see whether we still love each other. If we cannot even pass this test of time, I doubt we can last forever.”Darn it Aya! What are you doing?! Just spend christmas together!!! :angry:
“And 2 is?”
Aya closed her eyes in an attempt to summon courage to say this. She dreaded saying this. “2, let’s just not take the lift and maybe take stairs instead. It means let’s call it quits today.”
Miki’s heart sank when she heard that. She thought, “I wasn’t left with much of an option to choose from. So ending us is one of the options? I should have guessed as much. After all, I was different from Goto Maki.”
She read what I was thinking of already. There is no point keeping it from her. It will only breach her trust if I do so. Miki gazed at the grass patch right in front of the bench and murmured, “If I were Gocchin, you wouldn’t have option 2 up there, right?”Omgsh!!! Stop it... They're just making it even harder for themselves... Geez..
“What-”
“You will beg me to stay with you and you will love me forever no matter how many times I cheat you.”
Aya’s eyes widened. From that look on her face, I knew Maki was in her mind but I didn’t expect her to say something like that. I still love you for your honesty, Miki-tan. “No, you can’t say that! It’s not exactly the same case.” Oh crap, that doesn’t sound convincing in any way.
“I see.”
As Miki ran off, something fell out of her bag and Aya trudged over to pick it up. It was a disc and on its disc cover, it wrote in bright pink ink, “Merry Christmas Aya-chan! From me to you, momoiro kataomoi…” There was the trademark heart-shaped signature at the end which held so many memories and so much meaning.Damn right! You two are both crazy!! Now look what happened.. :banghead:
Aya kneeled on the ground and burst out in tears. She scolded herself in her head, “I shouldn’t have said that. It must have hurt her to a great extent. Why did those words even come out of my mouth? I love you…why didn’t I say that instead? It is my fault that I make it feel like an eternal momoiro kataomoi even if we are now in a relationship. I can almost hear Miki singing ‘zutto suki de ii desu ka’ right now. Will I even have the chance to hear that after breaking her heart like that?”
The snow was getting heavier and one child, who was running, slipped and the candies in his hands fell onto the ground. Things were falling out of her hands as well. She gazed at the empty bench which they were seated on earlier and she could almost see the 2 short-haired girls in front of her hand-in-hand wearing matching bracelets in silence right now and in unison, the 2 girls declared and made a pact, “Let’s stay like this forever…”:k-sad: Nooooo~ U shouldn't be seeing the two of you!!! Ur suppose to do it again!! Not relive it!! :k-sad:
December 25 (11.02am)
“I’m sorry…”
“Don’t apologise. There’s no need for apologies. I love you.” she whispered before she pressed her lips against that of the older girl. Their tongues intertwined and the younger girl sneaked her hand under the other’s blouse and moved its way up…
Ishiyoshi?!?! :w00t:Nope...:P
Omgsh! Is that one of those 'Sorry, wrong number!' :lol:That's short-form for 'oh my god shit' right? :lol: Yeah, it is.
She couldn't bare the TakaGaki goodness.. GAM is what she needs.. :cry:Totally in sync with lollipopgirl :D
Darn it Aya! What are you doing?! Just spend christmas together!!! :angry:She probably reckoned that there were things to 'settle' and there's no need to push it to some other days :o
Omgsh!!!zay's way of cursing :P
:k-sad: Nooooo~ U shouldn't be seeing the two of you!!! Ur suppose to do it again!! Not relive it!! :k-sad:Yeah..:( :)
woo it was so sad :mon exhaust:Poor Yuki, is it wrong for me to pray for strike again? :P Nice that even though you are busy, you still pop into this thread! :grin: It makes me touched! Yeah, I'll work on ishiyoshi but please be mentally prepared! :P
poor GAM, they were better as friends...
i want to read what will happen with rika and yossy now :rockon:
(sorry, it isn't a long comment, but i don't have so much time like before :cry:)
waiting a update!! :mon lovelaff:
this HAS to be IshiYoshi :shakeit: ... Tell me it is! :cow: Please tell me it is!!!!!Hmm...I know I might risk getting killed but I must tell you for the sake of a better world that's NOT ishiyoshi. *Waits for the hacksaw to fly past me* Oh wait, I need to pray that it will fly past me and not straight at me first. :lol:
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
:twisted: *demonic possession moment*
*grabs hacksaw from suspense and hacks suspense to pieces* :twisted: ~tito~ .... ~where are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~?~ :twisted:
*demonic possession moment over*
. :? .. eh? ... what am i doing with this hacksaw? ... ... suspense? ... OH, MY GOD!!!! ... is suspense dead? ... ... it's moving... ... *drops hacksaw*
*runs away from the recently ressurrected suspense*Run run to RFP :P
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
btw, I missed reading a fresh F.Y.I chapter...Aww..tito is touched again :wub: VERY.
man, ayaya and miki are fighting again... how would this turn out?!Suspense...............
I pray for the results of your exams, may they be as high as.. um... ... ... ... i don't know... XD i just hope you aced it... :DThanks! :D In the meantime, I will...I can't do anything can I? Maybe pray or....oh yes, I should write :P
Yuki, I'll try to make up for your shorter post this time ;)Secret talk huh? I caught ya! XD
Will it ever end :mon cry: :mon waterworks: :pleeease:Hmmm....let's see, the ending is within sight already..
Firstly YYYYYAAAAYYYY for TakaGaki, now everyone else in this story, that is love :heart: :wub: :gmon love2:Aha, that part is totally dedicated to you..serious! are you touched? :wub:
Awww I just can't help smiling at the thought of those two :oops:
Aya, I think I hate you again :angry: ... How could you accuse Miki of almost dying just to win, sure that may have been on her mind, but why did she want to win against Maki, COZ SHE LOVES YOU, YOU BIG IDIOT!!! (unfortunately she does :cry: )Yeah, listen to the pro :) Last night when I was typing that part, I could imagine that you will shoot Aya like that (sort of) :lol:
Miki, how can you let her keep hurting you so much and still wanna be with her, you don't deserve that pain as much as you think you do :( You've been together for a month (?) and not once have you seriously been able to work through one damn issue, there is no one option 1 would be good for you! Not seeing each other for a month, of course you will miss the other, you're best friends and once again you'd confuse that for something more... For Aya, it's one thing to love someone, but it's a whole other thing to be in love with them! I know you love Miki so do the right thing by her and let her go :mon surr:
Furthermore, Miki is very right, Aya wouldn't have given option 2 to Maki and the Yaya knows it. She was/is blinded by anything Maki does to hurt her and will always pine for her despite, that's part of being in love (stupidly)... Wake up and smell the pretty roses girls :mon mad: :mon headbang::rofl: 'Yaya' is so funny... :lol: Hmm...I love your sarcasm towards Aya in a way ;) . Damn, I don't ought to feel this way..
Why don't any of them think to ask TakaGaki how to love and be loved successful, they all know how good those two are at it and they can't say it's coz they are too young to understand, Ai and Aya are the same... Maturity wise you could argue Ai is lower then her age would suggest BUT going by the 'logic' of Aya, vengeful kiss by Miki, massively stupid letters and phone calls from Rika and Yossy's inability to love at all, I think Ai has the upper hand on all of them... Ah TakaGaki how I love you so :mon lovelaff:Hmm...I feel like throwing a chapter to break them up :twisted:
At tito, Yuki, Zay, tru, sweeety (I know your hiding), Ai.Love (ever though ur a GAM fan here :P ), kRisz, JFC and any other regulars of this thread that I have forgotten, I looove you all :mon loveflower: :gmon heartu: :mon cheek: :mon bleed2: :mon hanky:This is quite random :wub: Ok, I should take the opportunity to thank Yuki, Zay, tru, sweeety (I know you're reading this), Ai.LOve, KRisz, JFC, lollipopgirl and others who read but are too lazy to post for frequenting here :) I really love you guys!! :luvluv1: :mon love: :mon santa2: :gmon love2: :mon crazyinlove:
She thought back on the dream that she just had and smiled to herself. It seemed to be a simpler world in her dreams. Why was reality so much more complicated?
She thought back on the dream that she just had and smiled to herself. It seemed to be a simpler world in her dreams. Why was reality so much more complicated?Because life is meant to be complicated and challenge you, it's not fun otherwise! (have been quoting that to my father for day's, time Miki heard it too :) )
QuoteAt tito, Yuki, Zay, tru, sweeety (I know your hiding), Ai.Love (ever though ur a GAM fan here ), kRisz, JFC and any other regulars of this thread that I have forgotten, I looove you all monkey
This is quite random Ok, I should take the opportunity to thank Yuki, Zay, tru, sweeety (I know you're reading this), Ai.LOve, KRisz, JFC, lollipopgirl and others who read but are too lazy to post for frequenting here I really love you guys!! luvluv1
Ishiyoshi?!?! :w00t:Nope...:Pthis HAS to be IshiYoshi :shakeit: ... Tell me it is! :cow: Please tell me it is!!!!!Hmm...I know I might risk getting killed but I must tell you for the sake of a better world that's NOT ishiyoshi. *Waits for the hacksaw to fly past me* Oh wait, I need to pray that it will fly past me and not straight at me first. :lol:
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
:twisted: *demonic possession moment*
*grabs hacksaw from suspense and hacks suspense to pieces* :twisted: ~tito~ .... ~where are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~?~ :twisted:
*demonic possession moment over*
. :? .. eh? ... what am i doing with this hacksaw? ... ... suspense? ... OH, MY GOD!!!! ... is suspense dead? ... ... it's moving... ... *drops hacksaw*Quote*runs away from the recently ressurrected suspense*Run run to RFP :P
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Hmm...maybe you are too interested in the development of ishiyoshi here[/size]
^ as soon as I saw "Nope :P" at the start of the comment replies to IshiYoshi I remembered reading about saying it was a dream and when I was reading the chapter I did realize it was Aya/Miki but i must have forgotten by the time I commented :lol: :oops::lol: You were just too obsessed with the ishiyoshi idea..oh well, it won't be tito-like to jump like that :P
Hmm, what a coincidence :D Maybe your dad and I were thinking similarly yesterday :lol:QuoteShe thought back on the dream that she just had and smiled to herself. It seemed to be a simpler world in her dreams. Why was reality so much more complicated?Because life is meant to be complicated and challenge you, it's not fun otherwise! (have been quoting that to my father for day's, time Miki heard it too :) )
I am not only touched that you dedicated (or rather gave into my nagging) that whole TakaGaki part to me, but also touched that you were thinking about me when writing the stupid Aya part too... Awwwwwww you know how I react to things :wub: :heart: See GAM, that's a sign of love too ;)Aww.. :wub:Yeah, I sort of guessed that you will pick out the 'it won't be the same case if it's Maki' part..Typo up there, it should be stupid-Aya part :lol: I thought at first glance that you meant my writing was dumb :lol:
Which reminds me, why was I last in your 'i love you guys' list :o :angry: :P (kidding, maybe XD )hmm, let's see do you want the truth or fallacy? Fallacy = I love you the most, duh. Truth is I copied your message, took off 'tito' and inserted 'lollipopgirl' at the end. Aww, but I still love you XD :wub:
Don't you dare through a break up TakaGaki chapter in (unless one of them gets to be with Miki :lol: ), although if you did at least I would get more of them, hmmm... But I just know ur gonna have it as GAM at the end so you don't really want to add something else to the fic that will make me even more mad :Dyou sure I'm ending with GAM? :oops: Are you daring me? *switch on Miki mode*
Oh and I didn't mean the end of the whole fic, I meant the end of the pain, and I'm pretty sure there will still be pain at the end :cry:THIS, you are quite right about it ;) :D
You want real randomness? I now have a headache from a nosebleed I just had... I blame Miki and Gaki's Manpower dancing... Note to self: don't watch Morning Musume concerts when sick, it only makes your fever worse :lol::rofl: :rofl:Maybe I shouldn't laugh. Take care girl!!
break up is the most ouches in a relationship nee... ummm, no change it to cheating... :mon mischief: okay maybe both :grin:.............should I agree? hmm.. :)
me :gmon love2: you all too :mon heh:Aww..... :wub:
wa.. sad sad sad.. and very very intense.. feel like i'm going to burst in tears..Thanks..that's the intended effect :P
waiting for new update~!!
Peace
i'm preparing my mind tito~~ :mon evillaff:Oh shucks, hate class on saturday..thank god my country has a 5-day week for students so in theory, we don't have to go school on sat. Oh well, that means killer weekdays :(
now i have class the saturday too :thumbdown:
Ishiyoshi chapter please... as soon as you are absolutely free and willing to do it...I'm absolutely free right now but I am kinda lazy to write..damn my laziness..I'm stuck at the first paragraph for half an hour because I kinda refused to write :O ;) The earliest I can put it up is tomorrow..
I'm absolutely free right now but I am kinda lazy to write..damn my laziness..I'm stuck at the first paragraph for half an hour because I kinda refused to write The earliest I can put it up is tomorrow
Oh, don't tell me Aya's going to suggest she and Miki do like Ross and Rachel did near the end of the second season? :bleed eyes:Oh sunnovabitch, she did. :banghead:
Though the gift that she had bought for Yossie 2 months ago was lying in her apartment, she felt that the best gift she could give her now was honesty.
“Merry Christmas! I have a gift for you and guess what? It is honesty!” Yossie might just shoot her the confused and twisted look and laugh at her for that and maybe run off to kiss and grope Miki.
But even if she might lose Yossie because of this, she felt strongly about doing that. That was perhaps the correct key to revive their relationship. That was perhaps the only gift that could show that she still loved her deeply in this 7-year-old relationship.
Yossie leaned back against the chair she was seated on and she closed her eyes momentarily. She thought, “Yoshizawa Hitomi, be braver than that! You need to say those words to her no matter how much you hate doing so. Be more responsible! Act more like a human!”
Rika placed her arms in a folded position on the table and her head laid lazily on them. She wondered, “Ishikawa Rika, you know you need to tell her about what you have done right? Do that now! Hiding it from her isn’t helping us in any way! Be honest to her! Be honest to yourself!”
“I have something to say,” the girls spoke at the same time. They rushed through their words in a similar way.
“You speak first,” they spoke in unison again. That induced a smile on both girls’ faces. They smiled knowingly at each other before falling back into silence. Both of them felt delighted deep inside how in sync they were with the other and that sweet feeling they now had eroded away the nervousness they were feeling earlier.
Rika couldn’t help but to laugh at her companion who had this exaggerated and constipated look on her face. “Yossie, I’m fine with it. You speak first,” Rika said with a wide grin on her face. Before Yossie had the chance to rebuke her, she added in a serious voice, “If you don’t, I will be mad at you.”
She pushed the book towards Rika with both hands like what a high-school girl will do to her first crush and whispered with her eyes fixed on Rika, “This is for you.”
Rika received the gift with both hands and smiled widely. “So this is what Yossie wanted to say to me,” she thought. The front cover was sky-blue in colour and words were handwritten in pink ink. It wrote: Ishikawa Rika & Yoshizawa Hitomi monogatari. “Thank you! I love you!” Rika exclaimed in sheer delight.
Suki nan yo mada suki nan yo...
Rika lifted her own chin and looked at Yossie with a grin on her face before she squealed, “I’ll wait for you!”
@JFC, lol what's wrong with Filipino soaps? :DIf you've seen one, you wouldn't need to ask.
1st in!!!!I miss you too :) In a way, I'm getting lazier to post nowadays...having to make a decision that will in a way affects my future over the weekend just wears me out..
i missed you, tito...
... i love the chapter title (gardening services are still being offered... planting, pruning, watering) ...:lol: Hopefully it's free...
this happens to me and my rabu-rabu all the time...You playing Rika or Yossie? :P
i also received a gift like this!!! ... ~say~ you're not a stalker or something, are you? :lol:Ahh, I may be one :P Or it's just telepathy :lol:
this line just killed me... I'll go bury my corpse now...NOO!! I still need readers!! *revive tru* Thanks for your luck XD I think I need it.
it's a good chapter but... it's just that i can't help it... :mon sweat:Ah, the Yomiki spirit is getting back :P Think you are a more Yossie fan than Miki one :D
I DON'T LIKE ISHIYOSHI HERE!!! :mon mad:
yossy is a dork!! how can she reject miki's call???!!! (it pissed me off) :mon annoy:
i want to be yossy and go with miki~~ :mon ignore:
PS.: i almost forget... I LOVE YOU MAKI AND MIKI!!! :mon loveflower: (and tito too) :roll:Why tito in small font? :lol:
Goddamit now it's starting to sound like a bad, overly melodramatic Filipino soap opera (which is basically describes ALL Filipino soap operas). :banghead:Hmm, personally I have never watched a Filipino soap opera before but I think maybe subconsciously, I am in for melodramatic stuff in a way or another..Oh well, even if it's bad, I think I should finish it for the sake of the people who are reading it.
Woohoo~ Update from tito!! :w00t:^Not really..
Sweeet Ishiyoshi goodness! Though I'm not really up for an Ishiyoshi today. :(
Wait, does Yossie have more to say? I want Rika to get it over and done with. Though i think it won't end up well.
Ah, the Yomiki spirit is getting back :P Think you are a more Yossie fan than Miki one :D
PS.: i almost forget... I LOVE YOU MAKI AND MIKI!!! :mon loveflower: (and tito too) :roll:Why tito in small font? :lol:
I miss you too In a way, I'm getting lazier to post nowadays...having to make a decision that will in a way affects my future over the weekend just wears me out..aww... you missed me... anyway, good luck in that decision... i hope whatever you choose in whatedver that is you are deciding about turns out for the best!
Hopefully it's free...gardening services are for free for IshiYoshi and AyaMiki... i hope they all resolve their issues and tend a garden of love...
You playing Rika or Yossie?the Rika... in that situation... :lol:
Ahh, I may be one Or it's just telepathy... woah... psychic connection...
Hmm, personally I have never watched a Filipino soap opera before but I think maybe subconsciously, I am in for melodramatic stuff in a way or another..Oh well, even if it's bad, I think I should finish it for the sake of the people who are reading it.the RFP filipino melodrama has rubbede off on you!!! :lol: ... i'm such a bad influence... i hope it isn't bad either... but i like it so it can't be bad... but that's just what it think... :lol:
Who needs school? NooneI agree... ***** school... j/k
Who needs your writing on a frequent basis? All your addicts
I don't know what's happening with me in regards to the pairings in this story, i keep changing my preferences :oops: But i think that might be a compliment to your writing ;)Hmm, I will treat it as one! *Cheers to myself for success in changing your preference again* :P P.S I miss you! :grin:
I adored the IshiYoshi in this chapter and I'm now happy (really happy) if they stay together, no one can say Yossy isn't trying anymore, she just needed a big kick up the bum as a wake up call that if she kept going, she could have lost Rika.:wub: You don't wanna a Yomiki in here :D
They still have a lot to talk through but at least they are communicating properly and she did just give the best present ever (tru is so lucky :heart: ), oh crap, no YoMiki is a given :cry:
I'll just add my confused feelings towards this fic to the rest in my life shall I? :PSure thing. That means that you will remember me for the rest of your life XD :lol:
Who needs school? NooneOMG :rofl: This totally cracks me up and makes up my day! :lol: I guess I have to agree...
Who needs your writing on a frequent basis? All your addicts :wub:
Weigh it up ;) :lol:
because... :mon innocent: i wanted to put it in a small font? do you have a problem with it??? *yukomodeon* :mon pissed:What the hell :rofl: *imagine Yuko* *bows down* I'm sorry, there's no problems ;) :lol:
aww... you missed me... anyway, good luck in that decision... i hope whatever you choose in whatedver that is you are deciding about turns out for the best!Yeah, thanks. I think I decided on what to do. For the slim chance of wearing the school blazer, I shall work hard and join the smarties in the lesson! GANBATTE! :)
the Rika... in that situation... :lol:I think I'm making you like Rika even more with the newly found psychic connection XD
the RFP filipino melodrama has rubbede off on you!!! :lol: ... i'm such a bad influence... i hope it isn't bad either... but i like it so it can't be bad... but that's just what it think... :lol:Yeah, I knew I needed to write about ishiyoshi in this chapter but somehow it comes off with a strong filipino melodrama flavour ;) Oh man, it's your influence! Too much RFP! (But now it's too little :D )
Sorry~ I'm late ....... I actually went out of the house and did some stuff because I was dying of boredom :mon lol: my summer break isn't that great~Wonder if this will make it better..Boredom can kill many..Being busy is bad too..Darn, it's so hard to find a moderation :)
IDK but I think I'm the only one who is confused about what happened ........ Does this mean that they broke up or are going to have a 'break'? Can someone please clarify what has happened for me~ :mon sweat:Hmm..*tito waits for someone else to answer this*
I am really hoping for GAM II now, but if I root for them and IshiYoshi, Miki will be alone... I CAN'T DO THAT TO HER
I'm seriously surprised that this is still very alive..Since people are browsing this, I think it's a right chance for me to say this: Actually I have another idea on another fic in my head and I feel like writing it but there is only 1 weekend. Should I start another one or come up with another chapter?
Even a normal conversation with her mum had Miki in it. She had definitely become an integral part of her life…She asked herself, “The reason why I don’t want to part with her is because I love her or I’m too used to her?”Excellent question Aya! :D
Maki’s heart sank as she read it but she understood what Aya meant by that. She loved Miki and she only wanted to find happiness with her. That was fair. After all she forsook her for the sake of her career. She murmured, “If you can be happy with another person, I’ll let you go, my love. I pray for your happiness, Aya.”If you love someone enough, you will let them go and be happy! I will always stand by that and I am glad to see Maki doing that (sorta seeing I want her with Aya) but at least she knows exactly where her feelings lie, awww! :heart:
She tapped on the glass panel twice and placed the 2 air tickets with a transparent cover around them to Scotland against the wet glass panel. Then, she placed the tickets on the ground and left. Let her fly with the one she loved most.:wub: That's so cute!!! I LOVE YOU MAKI, COME TO MEEEEEEEEEE! (and bring Miki :twisted: )
She thought, “Probably she bought it because she wanted to fly away with me…” She felt warm in her heart for a split second as she was touched by Maki’s actions before the coldness took over again as she remembered the disc that she hadn’t watched. She picked up the gift and held it close to her chest and mumbled, “Thank you Maki. I pray for your happiness too.”Ayayaya, can't you see how much she loves and how much you did (and still do) appreciate that :cry: think about it spud, it's not the same with Miki! Oh GAH, you all suck! :(
ahhh.. another part of the sad story.. and eri is back in the picture~~! lolx.. =xHaha yeah I'm fond of sorrow (how sadistic that sounds) :P
Peace
thanks for that update... but... hark!I ate it up? Nah, it won't flow my dear..I mean there are things you wanna say but you can't say because you don't have the chance to right? XD
what happened to Rika's speech?!?!?! :mon look: where is it? where's the honesty gift????
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent question Aya! :DHmm, this sounds so logical that I can't help but to agree with you :D
but the answer is a mix of both, you do love her, you're just not IN love with her... listen to meeeee :cry:
:wub: That's so cute!!! I LOVE YOU MAKI, COME TO MEEEEEEEEEE! (and bring Miki :twisted: )Haha :lol: This is so hilarious! You won't be surprised to see Aya dragged along if they happened to go to you :P
Oh GAH, you all suck! :(Haha :lol: I'm so influenced by this forum that I go around saying 'OH GAH' and everyone thinks something went wrong with me :lol:
Yossy confuses me still, does she or does she not want to be with Rika... was she looking for an easy way out (as in Rika breaking up with her) when Rika said she'd wait... Gosh maybe I should be glad I'm not gay (or at least not a hot Japanese idol), it seems complicated :lol::rofl: Hmm, oh well, wait for the next update ;)
Sorry if this comment seems weird, I am sooo tired... My damn cat would let me sleep last night, she kept waking me up so I could pat her :roll:Tell me I aren't seeing things and you edited this part..Darn, I can imagine living in an animal farm (sort of) ;) Anyway, it's good practice and I think you'll make a good mum :lol: (Don't babies wake up in the middle of the nigh and cry and cry and cry? :lol: )
She tapped on the glass panel twice and placed the 2 air tickets with a transparent cover around them to Scotland against the wet glass panel. Then, she placed the tickets on the ground and left. Let her fly with the one she loved most.
Aya saw the familiar girl tap against the glass panel, place something against it and then walk off. She ran out of the restaurant and she was surprised to find a transparent cover with a ribbon around it and 2 air tickets to Scotland in it on the ground that the girl was standing at just now. The girl was nowhere in sight. Inside the cover, there was a note: You said you want to leave this place. I heard from some people that Scotland is a nice relaxing place and I think it suits you. Ikimasshoi!
She thought, “Probably she bought it because she wanted to fly away with me…” She felt warm in her heart for a split second as she was touched by Maki’s actions before the coldness took over again as she remembered the disc that she hadn’t watched. She picked up the gift and held it close to her chest and mumbled, “Thank you Maki. I pray for your happiness too.”
^ I forgot to mention in my post before... I am totally in love with your sig Ai.love, I love when Aya takes the control like that... It makes me all gooey inside and like i wanna cry :lol:
*is leaving now* :oops: :P
Agree with lollipopgirl on your sig! GAM is AWESOME! :wub: *Listens to Melodies :inlove:*
why do I feel like everyone is going to end up single ......
:err: it wrecked my heart! they love each other but keep on hurting each other too........Hi! :D Yeah, these things always happen ;) Sad fact of life
:grr: this is reality....... pride, one of the greatest sins,,,,,,hahaha
i want to know what will happen!!! :mon lurk:Take care girl! Yeah, I'm sorry I can't answer to your prayer...and I seriously don't know what you will think of the next chapter :P
dasdsadas miki, yossy and eri dsadasd i NEED to know!! titoooooooooooooooooooooooo *weird voice* :mon scare:
so... it's my comment... i'm confused :mon exhaust: i don't know what i want from this fanfic... just one thing
miki and yossy happy (i know that they won't end together, but anyway i want them to be happy) :mon noprob:
i feel bad 'cause i catch a cold... forgive me for the weird comment (even if all my comments are weird ò.o) :mon ill:
i want a update!!~~ :mon yeah: :mon prayer: (the prayer comes back jojojo)
IshiYoshi really did break up ........ :mon dunno: why do I feel like everyone is going to end up single ...... :mon chilly:Hmm..let's see about it..
Hmmm................Quotewhy do I feel like everyone is going to end up single ......
:mon determined: hmmm... better that way than leaving one soul in tears or something :yep:
How the hell did Eri find Miki in the pub? She (Eri) isn't legally allowed to drink yet in Japan so how'd she get in?This question seems familiar :roll: Sneaked in? It isn't the hardest thing to do on earth..
About time.. now I'll just read it and post.Absolutely correct! I guess you basically sum up Aya's POV..good job! :D
OH MAH GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome. At least Miki still.... wants Aya? I'm just glad that Yoshi was a good friend and didn't take advantage. But I think she now knows what she wants. At least hopefully one of them. But I like how Aya is realising that she wants Miki and she wants to show her that but she doesn't know how. But the main thing is that she knows it. I think coming into that relationship she was confused and just didn't want to hurt Miki by turning her down because she wanted to keep her as a friend. But now she is realising that she loves her a lot like in a sexzual way too and now she's realising that she really wants her back.
I also think Shibata likes Rika.:wahaha: This cracks me up.
Also, noticed the symbolism and I have a really really bad feeling things with Miki and Aya are gonna get worse.Great that you notice it! Honestly I'll use it in the next chap..will it be for the better or for the worse? :P
I mean the symbolism of the locket. I signifies their bond as GAM and now that it's broken I think it's over for GAM but hopefully that means they can have a new start as Aya and Miki instead :)
aww, nothing happened :roll: I want a 'YoMiki' something to happen :PHmm....dirty-minded little fellow over there!
so that's why you didn't let rika give her damned honesty gift...Why? :?
girl, i missed you... i was starting to feel like you've abandoned us... thanks for proving me wrong and i'm sorry that i ever thought that you would leave us hanging...Yeah, I won't abandon you! This forum is like my online home..I won't abandon you without a word! Hmm...I guess at the rate you're posting RFP, I ought to forgive you :P
i love you, tito~~~! lalalalala....I love you too, tru!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wub:
great chapter tito :mon beam:I wonder.....
Yossy~~ what will she do? :mon wind:
amaujajaj i can imagine Miki in momoiro kataomoi :mon XD:*watches momoiro* Won't it be nice to see her in it for real? Mikitty!!!!1 XD
i want an update~~ :mon whine:Trying my best, my dear..I'm...
and some yomiki too :mon innocent:I did promise you somewhere sometime right? Hehe, but I didn't say it will appear in FYI.. :P
:frustrated: miki-tan............wah! well, im kind of hoping that somwthing will happened between miki and hitomi.......maybe that will teach aya a lesson,,,,,,"do not mess with Fujimoto!" :smoke:Haha, yeah! Don't mess with Fujimoto!! Yeah, it sure takes hell lot of will power :P NAH, everyone should stop scolding Yossi, huh? ^ :lol:
well, im proud with yossie......ah! it takes a lot of will power to refuse such blessings in your front (naked miki) haha :wahaha:
Oh PLEASE say that Yossi was able to resist and did the right thing. :OHmmmmm, what do you think? XD
:mon ghost: :mon ghost: :mon ghost: At least they still want each other~I probably freak you out with the chap! :w00t: Yeah, hold that undying unwavering GAM spirit close to your heart! :P
Love love love pri-soon.... love love love jailbars yeah yeah yeah yeah love love electric shock killing machine love love's not that wonderfull~Ahh, spamming the thread, huh? :lol:
someone bumped into her and interrupted her train of thoughts. That person, who was wearing a low cap and a black T-shirt, immediately apologized and walked off. She thought, “How nice if that person was Miki.”It has to be Miki! :OMG:
“24 days and 4 hours to go.”geez that's a long time and enough time to fall out of love :bleed eyes: