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Title: F.Y.I 29 - Recurring Moments
Post by: tito on May 21, 2008, 01:07:47 PM
Here I bring to you the sequel to Gomattou (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=15120.0) - F.Y.I (I realise this means something :lol: ) It's okay if you treat this as a separate fanfic. Just note that: 1. Maki knocked Aya down and is in jail now. 2. Rika hates Miki. (as to why, it's quite lengthy to explain. Go read gomattou  :P )

FYI links
Chapter 1 - Letters (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg481216#msg481216)
Chapter 2 - Mysterious Spectrum (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg481934#msg481934)
Chapter 3 - Blue Love  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg482372#msg482372)
Chapter 4 - Soul mate~Stalemate  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg482812#msg482812)
Chapter 5 - Bridge  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg483056#msg483056)
Chapter 6 - Repeat  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg483335#msg483335)
Chapter 7 - Three Promises (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg483785#msg483785)
Chapter 8 (I) - Mr. Moonlight Part I (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg484071#msg484071)
Chapter 8 (II) - Mr. Moonlight Part II (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg484092#msg484092)
Chapter 9 - CHANGE (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg484341#msg484341)
Chapter 10 - Unspoken Words (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg484734#msg484734)
Chapter 11 - Exclusive  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg484882#msg484882)
Chapter 12 - Haunt (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg485031#msg485031)
Chapter 13 - Fate of GAM (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg485290#msg485290)
Chapter 14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg485572#msg485572)
Chapter 15 - Love Genre~Ballad (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg485893#msg485893)
Chapter 16 - Yume Kara Samete  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg486049#msg486049)
Chapter 17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg486337#msg486337)
Chapter 17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg486609#msg486609)
Chapter 17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg486861#msg486861)
Chapter 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg487142#msg487142)
Chapter 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg487417#msg487417)
Chapter 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg487679#msg487679)
Chapter 19 - REVERSE (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg488095#msg488095)
Chapter 20 - Puppet (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg488311#msg488311)
Chapter 21 - Definitions of Love (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg489049#msg489049)
Chapter 22 - Never-ending Cycle (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg489779#msg489779)
Chapter 23 - Pact (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg491555#msg491555)
Chapter 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg492924#msg492924)
Chapter 25 - Truth VS Falsehood  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg493976#msg493976)
Chapter 26 - Love Prison  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg496647#msg496647)
Chapter 27 - Angel with broken wings  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg515362#msg515362)
Chapter 28 - Unanswered Questions  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg722962#msg722962)
F.Y.I

Chapter 1

Letters

Two weeks later

4 December (8.31pm)

“Miki-tan! Mails are here!” Aya announced as she stepped into her own apartment. Ever since Miki was discharged a week ago, they had been spending a lot of time together alternating between each other’s apartment.

“Aya-chan, you went to my place just to collect the mails?” Miki rushed towards Aya with a smile plastered on her face.

Aya twisted her lips. “I just happen to pass by your area so I just pop by to collect the letters.”

“Lying.”

“No, I am not.”

Miki poked Aya’s cheeks. “Obviously you’re.” Miki loved the sheer innocence that Aya possessed. Perhaps, everyone wants their lover to be a bad liar.

“Miki~~” Aya leapt towards Miki and planted a short kiss on Miki’s lips. Kissing – the best thing to do when you are at a loss for words. 

When their lips parted, Miki blushed and said, “Ok. Let’s read our mails.”

“Both of us have mails!”

“Open yours first.”

“Why mine?”

“Because I love you.”

“That’s so ridiculous.”

Miki kissed Aya on her forehead. “Yeah, I’m ridiculously in love with you. Open it.”

The first letter Aya opened read as followed: Dear Matsuura Aya-san, this is pertaining to your assaulter, Goto Maki, who was involved in your hit-and-run-incident (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=15120.msg463626#msg463626) on November 17 2006. She would be brought to high courts in 2 weeks time and you have 2 choices: one is to settle the case outside of the courts and drop the charges against her and second is to bring her to high courts. However, it must be noted that she would still receive punishment even if you drop charges as hit-and-run is considered a criminal offence. Please think through before deciding. Thanks.                                                  Tsunku

Aya took in a deep breath as she contemplated the situation. Such a weird and formal letter from Tsunku. I thought Goto has a lawyer. Tsunku is trying to tell me that Goto will receive punishment even if I drop the charges against her to convince me to settle it out of courts to reduce her sentence. He’s such an asshole, Miki-tan would say. He’s just trying to save his soloist.

Miki asked, “What’s it about? You’ve been in a daze for some time.”

“It’s from Tsunku; nothing much though,” Aya replied and crushed the letter and threw it into the bin.

“He’s such an asshole. Open your second one and it will be my turn.”

Aya smiled to herself. I should have let Miki read the letter and curse Tsunku. But, I didn’t want to remind her of Goto again. Why didn’t Miki question the content of the letter? Why did she just accept what I say? Why did she trust me so much? I must show her that I trust her as much as she trusts me like what every lover does. Love builds on trust. “Ok,” Aya paused before adding, “why not let’s read the letter together?” Miki nodded.

Dear Aya
      It’s me Goto Maki. I’m now in a world far away from yours and it’s the memories of us that keep me going in the hellish place. I remember how I learn LoveNamidaIro just to sing to you; I remember the day whereby I waited for you in the pavilion; I remember how angry and upset you were when you found out about the plot; I remember the night in the studio; I remember our first night. Though the time we spent together was short, you were my best friend in my life. I know that I’m just a substitute for Miki and I have never and will never replace her in your heart. We have known each other at the wrong place, wrong time. How much I hope life can start all over again and things may be different. I know I have hurt you with my selfish actions and I will not expect you to forgive me. I only request you to allow me to continue to keep those memories of us in my heart secretly. From the other side of the world, I pray for your happiness. shiawase wo inoru wa.               Gocchin


Tears welled up in Aya’s eyes as she read through the letter. Memories of the 2 of them together flooded her mind. She tried to knock herself out from the nostalgic mood as it was not fair to Miki who loved and protected her all these while. Miki was next to her silently reading it. “It’s incredible how a year has passed,” Aya eventually said after long moments of silence.

“She’s good at words. Way better than me, “Miki said coldly.

“I love you, Miki-tan.” Aya stared at Miki with her teary eyes.

Miki gazed at the girl she loved. Those tears weren’t caused by her. Aya cried because she was touched by the letter and not because of sadness or remorse. What should she say now to protect the girl she adored and keep her by her side? Obviously she still had some sort of feelings towards Maki. She could see that day as well when Aya was told that Maki was caught, she appeared to be cool on the surface but deep inside, she was sad. Was Maki the substitute for her or was she the substitute for Maki? Now, she knew she shouldn’t doubt Aya but her eyes were betraying her. “Have you forgiven her?” Miki asked. Beating around the bush just wasn’t her style.

Aya avoided eye contact. “Tsunku wanted me to drop charges against her.”

“Oh…so are you planning to do so?”

“I really don’t know. What do you think Miki-tan?”

“Stop calling me Miki-tan when you’re thinking of someone else!” Miki shouted. “It’s up to you. If you’re magnanimous to forgive her, go ahead! I won’t stop you!”

The couple fell silent. Aya felt guilty for thinking about forgiving Maki even though she knew that Miki worked very hard to get those girls behind the bars even at the expense of her own life. Maki was somehow a victim of the plot as well just like me. She had been cheated into abandoning our love affair by Reina and Yossie. Even though she wasn’t a good lover, she wasn’t a bad person as well. Selfishness is something that everyone possesses. Should I forgive her? But what about Miki who loves me so much to a point whereby she is willing to give up her life for me? I won’t be fair to her. What should I do?

Miki opened her only mail in silence.

Invitation card:
   Dear Morning Musume members both ex and current, you are warmly invited to join the annual compulsory ‘Morning Musume get-together’ held at a private villa at the outskirts of Tokyo (details attached behind) on 6 December 2007. You are required to report sharply at venue by 8.00am. It is compulsory to spend 2 nights at the chalet with the rest of the MM members away from civilization. Please don’t dump this card into the bin or else you know what will happen to you. Absence from this gathering is strictly prohibited. As mentioned earlier, this is COMPULSORY.
                     Love,
                        Nakazawa Yuko


“I have a MM gathering on 6 December. You make the choice on your own,” Miki said and left the apartment leaving her letter behind. She was crying as she entered the lift. I shouldn’t have treated Aya like that. It wasn’t her fault that Goto sent that sort of letter. To an emotional innocent person like Aya, she would definitely feel something after reading such a letter. Why did I put her in a tight spot? Which choice will she make? I cannot lose Aya again. Not to Goto Maki.

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6 December (8.00am)
Just as the clock ticked 8 am, the last taxi arrived at the villa. As Mari, Yuko and Kaori stepped out of the taxi, the younger members gathered around and cheered. Yuko glanced at her watch and commented, “Well, we’re punctual. Is everyone here already?”

Risa made a quick head count and reported, “Yes, everyone’s here. Shall we begin the party?”

Yuko nodded and said, “The 1st part of the morning belongs to you, Nacchi.”

She threw a glance at yawning Natsumi and Natsumi immediately stopped her actions and looked constipated for a moment. Sayumi and Kusumi, The Miracle, could not help but to laugh at their senpai. Natsumi said, “Well, let’s get in, it’s getting cold out here.”

Miki, who was staring at her phone intently, was brought back to reality by Kaori. Kaori snatched the phone from Miki and said, “You know this is prohibited, right? Come on, get in. I’ll take care of your phone for you in the time being.” Miki remained silent and shot her an angry glare before entering the villa.

As the Morning Musume members stepped into the villa, many were at awe of its magnificence. The villa was 4-storey high and it had huge glass panels which made it look bigger than it actually was by allowing sunlight to enter the interior. Overall, it had an authentic feel with wooden floorings and antique furniture centered at the ground floor. It had a feel of the old meeting the new which paralleled the gathering held in it.

“Whose place is this?” Risa asked curiously to no one in particular while admiring the interior design.       

“Uh, it’s Ishikawa,” Kaori answered.

“Charmy?” Sayumi, Kusumi, Aika and Risa exclaimed in unison.

“When did you have such a big place?” Mari nudged the girl beside her for an answer.

“It’s a long story but this is technically not mine…”Rika answered rather awkwardly.

“You know what? You own us a long explanation but this can come later. Let’s see what Nacchi is up to this year,” Mari spoke.

6 December (8.30am)

The Morning Musume girls were sitting in a huge circle with Natsumi in the middle of the circle in the living room. Natsumi started the gathering by saying, “The aim of this gathering is to foster better relationships between members of different generations and to develop personalities. Please take it seriously.” She muttered towards the end of the speech, “Do I sound like Yuu-chan just now?” She laughed to herself. The other members, perplexed, gave her weird looks. “Ok, we will start with treasure hunt! Members from the 1st and 2nd generations are excluded because of the high likelihood of getting injured from this. I’ll give out the clues now.”

Rika, Risa, Ai, Sayumi, Eri, Miki, Kusumi, Aika, Junjun and Linlin were the only players of the treasure hunt. They decided to pair up to stand a higher chance of winning this and to protect each other in this unknown villa. The pairs were Risa and Ai, Junjun and Aika, Sayumi and Kusumi, Eri and Miki, Rika and Linlin.

Rika frowned when Eri and Miki walked past her.  I hate Fujimoto Miki! Normally I would have Yossie to pair up with but this year I don’t and it’s because of you! Now I ended up pairing with this Chinese junior. You took my Yossie away so you will pay for it, I swear…

6 December (11.06am)

By this time, the girls were tired from the treasure hunt and were taking breaks at different parts of the house while the seniors were reminiscing about old days around a table. Suddenly, there was a high pitch scream which reverberated around the villa. Everyone rushed towards where the scream came from as fast and as accurate as they could. It was Sayumi who was on the ground.

“Everyone back off! What happened?” Yuko shouted.

Kusumi rushed through her words, “Sayu has stepped on a banana skin and slipped!”

“What?” Yuko rolled her eyes. “Can’t you LOOK where you are going?”

Sayumi, with tears in her eyes, said in a whiny voice, “It wasn’t here when I went to the toilet, I swear! It was here only when I came out.”

“You mean someone placed a banana skin right outside the toilet after you went in?” Yuko laughed.

“Ya…”

“Kusumi, as her partner, tell me what happened.”

“I don’t know, I was in a daze because I thought she would be safe in the toilet!”

“Rubbish. Ok, game resumes,” Yuko announced.

“But I’m not lying…”Sayumi murmured.

 Miki shook her head, bent down and picked up the banana skin. “The flesh obviously was eaten long time ago as part of the interior skin has rotted,” Miki commented.

Sayumi’s eyes widened. “You believe me, Mikitty?”

Miki shrugged. “It doesn’t prove anything.”

After Miki walked off, Mari and Kei picked up and examined the banana skin. Mari whispered to Kei, “It took her less than 2 seconds to come up with such a conclusion.”

“She’s not a simple creature. Not at all,” Kei commented. 

(Really want to know what you guys think about this sequel  :k-hello: )
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: ringo-hime on May 21, 2008, 02:52:09 PM
wah yeayyy!
a sequel!
oh im excited about maki..meeeh. :sweatdrop:
and the treasure huntingg!! :twisted:

ganbare~ :muffin:
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: takagakifan on May 21, 2008, 07:29:03 PM
yay!!! sequel  :cow: Miki waskinda cool in the end when she was able to deduce (induce :? ) that the banana was eaten a while ago
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: JFC on May 22, 2008, 05:07:57 AM
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Tsunku is trying to tell me that Goto will receive punishment even if I drop the charges against her to convince me to settle it out of courts to reduce her sentence. He’s such an asshole, Miki-tan would say. He’s just trying to save his soloist.

Miki asked, “What’s it about? You’ve been in a daze for some time.”

“It’s from Tsunku; nothing much though,” Aya replied and crushed the letter and threw it into the bin.

“He’s such an asshole.
Oh, how I love how they're so in sync with each other.  :oops:



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Dear Aya
      It’s me Goto Maki. I’m now in a world far away from yours and it’s the memories of us that keep me going in the hellish place. I remember how I learn LoveNamidaIro just to sing to you; I remember the day whereby I waited for you in the pavilion; I remember how angry and upset you were when you found out about the plot; I remember the night in the studio; I remember our first night. Though the time we spent together was short, you were my best friend in my life. I know that I’m just a substitute for Miki and I have never and will never replace her in your heart. We have known each other at the wrong place, wrong time. How much I hope life can start all over again and things may be different. I know I have hurt you with my selfish actions and I will not expect you to forgive me. I only request you to allow me to continue to keep those memories of us in my heart secretly. From the other side of the world, I pray for your happiness. shiawase wo inoru wa.               Gocchin
Poor Maki, getting dragged into all this because of her initial jealousy of Aya. She probably wouldn't have done what she did if she wasn't pushed into it the way she was.  :(



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“She’s good at words. Way better than me, “Miki said coldly.

“I love you, Miki-tan.” Aya stared at Miki with her teary eyes.
While it's still somewhat understandable that Miki would be harbouring some ill feelings towards Maki, she has to realize that Aya made her choice. She saw what Maki was involved in, and more important, she saw how important Miki was to her.  Miki doesn't have anything to worry about, words alone won't make Aya leave her.



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Invitation card:
   Dear Morning Musume members both ex and current, you are warmly invited to join the annual compulsory ‘Morning Musume get-together’ held at a private bungalow at the outskirts of Tokyo (details attached behind) on 6 December 2007. You are required to report sharply at venue by 8.00am. It is compulsory to spend 2 nights at the chalet with the rest of the MM members away from civilization. Please don’t dump this card into the bin or else you know what will happen to you. Absence from this gathering is strictly prohibited. As mentioned earlier, this is COMPULSORY.
                     Love,
                        Nakazawa Yuko
Wonder if Miki can skip this? :P  XD



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Just as the clock ticked 8 am, the last taxi arrived at the bungalow. As Mari, Yuko and Kaori stepped out of the taxi, the younger members gathered around and cheered. Yuko glanced at her watch and commented, “Well, we’re punctual. Is everyone here already?”
So she basically scares the other members into making sure that they arrive on time, if not early to avoid her wrath, and then she herself makes it just in time?

Definitely sounds like something Yuko-sama would do. :lol:



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Miki, who was staring at her phone intently, was brought back to reality by Kaori. Kaori snatched the phone from Miki and said, “You know this is prohibited, right? Come on, get in. I’ll take care of your phone for you in the time being.” Miki remained silent and shot her an angry glare before entering the bungalow.
Now why aren't phones allowed? :?  What if there's an emergency?




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As the Morning Musume members stepped into the bungalow, many were at awe of its magnificence. The bungalow was 4-storey high and it had huge glass panels which made it look bigger than it actually was by allowing sunlight to enter the interior. Overall, it had an authentic feel with wooden floorings and antique furniture centered at the ground floor. It had a feel of the old meeting the new which paralleled the gathering held in it.
A 4-storey high bungalow? Considering that bungalows are, by definition, a small, one-floor house, someone sure is stretching the meaning here.  :-X



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“Whose place is this?” Risa asked curiously to no one in particular while admiring the interior design.       

“Uh, it’s Ishikawa,” Kaori answered.

“Charmy?” Sayumi, Kusumi, Aika and Risa exclaimed in unison.

“When did you have such a big place?” Mari nudged the girl beside her for an answer.

“It’s a long story but this is technically not mine…”Rika answered rather awkwardly.
Oh? Her parents' house? Or maybe, some other rich family member?




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The Morning Musume girls were sitting in a huge circle with Natsumi in the middle of the circle in the living room. Natsumi started the gathering by saying, “The aim of this gathering is to foster better relationships between members of different generations and to develop personalities. Please take it seriously.”
Really now?
:mon unsure:



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“Do I sound like Yuu-chan just now?” She laughed to herself. The other members, perplexed, gave her weird looks.
Nacchi = :mon sweat:
Others =  :mon huh:



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“Ok, we will start with treasure hunt! Members from the 1st and 2nd generations are excluded because of the high likelihood of getting injured from this. I’ll give out the clues now.”
Well...that's not exactly encouraging. 



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The pairs were Risa and Ai, Junjun and Aika, Sayumi and Kusumi, Eri and Miki, Rika and Linlin.

Rika frowned when Eri and Miki walked past her.  I hate Fujimoto Miki! Normally I would have Yossie to pair up with but this year I don’t and it’s because of you! Now I ended up pairing with this Chinese junior. You took my Yossie away so you will pay for it, I swear…
Poor Rika has been blinded by her feelings for Yossi to accept that she (Yossi) wasn't innocent at all in this. If she hadn't involved herself in the plot against Aya and Miki, she would be there at the gathering instead of sitting in a cell somewhere.



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*SAYU INCIDENT*
Where's Junjun?  :grin:
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: zay05ohayou on May 22, 2008, 05:41:38 AM
Great start of sequel! Is this gonna be about Rika now? Aya still has some feelings for Maki! A bit of chance?!?   :w00t:
Lol, other than For Your Information, this came into mind F.Y.I --> For You Ishikawa.  XD
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: tito on May 22, 2008, 02:33:57 PM

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As the Morning Musume members stepped into the bungalow, many were at awe of its magnificence. The bungalow was 4-storey high and it had huge glass panels which made it look bigger than it actually was by allowing sunlight to enter the interior. Overall, it had an authentic feel with wooden floorings and antique furniture centered at the ground floor. It had a feel of the old meeting the new which paralleled the gathering held in it.
A 4-storey high bungalow? Considering that bungalows are, by definition, a small, one-floor house, someone sure is stretching the meaning here.  :-X

Hmm, I guess you are right :P I'll change it to villa now. Thanks for the corrections. Damn why didn't I think of that when I write?  ;)

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*SAYU INCIDENT*
Where's Junjun?  :grin:

Hmm... :wub:

BTW, just want to say I like the Mikitty in your sig :lol: Killer eyes  :drool:

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Lol, other than For Your Information, this came into mind F.Y.I --> For You Ishikawa. 

:lol: Hmm, F.Y.I has something similar to Gomattou as to how the names are arranged. Oops.

LOL For your information, FYI is for you Ishikawa :P
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: zay05ohayou on May 22, 2008, 03:29:01 PM
Lol so does that mean I was right? or was it that i was slow to catch up on it? or r u just mocking me?  XD
so im guessing u arent gunna write a bit of charmikitty here huh?  :D
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: tito on May 22, 2008, 03:38:23 PM
Nah, I was just playing around with the F and Y and I. Haha, if I understand you right, you may be partially right :D . (OMG this rhymes! :lol: )

I'll post another chap over the weekends I suppose. Charmikitty, quite interesting pair :P Hmm....

Somehow I enjoy writing this more than Gomattou  :O
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: zay05ohayou on May 22, 2008, 03:57:13 PM
Oooh, i'm confused now..  :sweatdrop: lol your rhymes are cracking me up!  XD
Yeaaa Charmikitty! any chance of a bit of it somewhere in ur story? even a tiny subtle hint of it?  :P
You like writing this more than Gomattou? Is it because this has more angst?  8)

P.S. By the way. Saw u in the RpG! Yay! Any chance of u pairing with Maki? *wink* wink* lol but u have a pair alredy right?
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: JFC on May 23, 2008, 01:34:36 AM
LOL For your information, FYI is for you Ishikawa :P
I think you meant to say: "Fyi, FYI is fyI"  XD
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: Yukari on May 23, 2008, 03:43:27 AM
:lol: Hmm, F.Y.I has something similar to Gomattou as to how the names are arranged. Oops.


F= Fujimoto
Y= Yoshizawa
I= Ishikawa

i think that when i read it
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: sweeety on May 23, 2008, 08:09:00 AM
I can't believe I only just found this *looks around angrilly* no one told me!!!!!

 Anyway, I can already see the ending XD It would be funny and ironic if Rika does get her Yoshi.... in jail XD
 
 :P lol, great story, this one looks like it'll be more interesting. I hope you keep up the great work. Let's talk on msn again soon about (you know) the umm thing...

 how about
Fried
Yellow
Ishikawa....
or
Friendly
Yoshi with
Ishikawa
 and no charmikitty whatsoever..or IshiYoshi XD
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: kRisZ on May 24, 2008, 02:34:07 PM
I read Gomattou last night, and it was a good read.

Bitter unclosed chapters tend to heal longer and the feelings tend not to be forgotten that easily, that’s how I see Aya’s feeling towards Maki  :pimp:

A serving of vengeance coming up
Title: Re: [Sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 01 - Letters
Post by: tito on May 24, 2008, 02:46:44 PM
Here's the next chapter! Probably I'll edit it if I have time :D This chapter is mainly just setting the stage for what happens later in the story so some parts you may find them random now. The reason why I like to write this more is mainly because there's more characters so it has more flavour and I try to make this seem a detective-fic (I hope it does seem like one) crossed with H!P romance. So it is more interesting and challenging to write :P

Enjoy!

F.Y.I

Chapter 2

Mysterious Spectrum

6 December (1.23pm)
After Sayumi’s fateful accident, everyone continued to play the treasure hunt as though nothing happened. Even though 2 hours had passed since the accident, no one had managed to find the ‘treasure’. The seniors, who had told the juniors earlier that they could only gather in the dining area for lunch provided that someone found the treasure, were becoming increasingly bored. Natsumi poked Kei on the cheeks and inquired, “Why do they take so long? I thought someone of Fujimoto caliber would have found the treasure in less than an hour.”

Kei laughed, tickled Natsumi’s tummy and replied, “Well, I guess she didn’t even try.”

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In the doorway, Risa and Ai searched for the treasure in vain and in silence. Ai glanced at the girl beside her and asked, “Gaki-san, you’re sweating quite a bit. Do you want a tissue?” With that, she offered her a tissue. Risa shook her head and continued the search rather intently.
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“Junjun, why did you choose to join Morning Musume?” Aika asked. The pair was in the study room treasure-hunting.

Junjun stared at the hiragana and katakana in the encyclopedia book in her hands that she couldn’t understand. “I love MM all along. Now I’m happy to be part of it. Though at times, I feel that I don’t quite fit in here.”

Now Aika’s eyes were fixated on her partner. “Why?”

Junjun pointed to the words in the book that she was holding with tears welling up in her eyes. “I don’t understand half of what is written inside. I just feel-”

Aika placed her hands on Junjun’s shoulders. “I can teach you. Don’t be bothered by these. It doesn’t matter. Not at all.” Junjun nodded and leaned on the girl beside her.
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In the toilet alone, Rika sat on the edge of the empty dry bathtub and wondered, “Is that new Chinese girl still waiting outside? This game is so stupid and meaningless. I’m being mean to her but why should I care? No one cares for me here! Just let her wait for as long as she wants. I need to plan…why can’t I think of anything? Yossie, why aren’t you here?” Tears rolled down her cheeks uncontrollably as loneliness overwhelmed her.
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In a bedroom in the villa, Miki was sitting on the bed reading a story book which she found under the pillow. Eri, her partner, stood beside the window and gazed at the clear blue sky. She clenched her fists, turned to face Miki and asked, “Uh, when are we going to find the treasure?”

Without looking at Eri, Miki answered, “Keep quiet. This story is getting interesting.”

“Are you reaching the end?”

“Half-way through.”

“Don’t you feel hungry? Let’s just hurry up and find the treasure.”

Miki nodded but did not move. After some time, Miki said, “Eri, read the clues to me.”

Can’t you read for yourself? Am I your servant? How does Aya stand working with her? Eri took out the crumbled piece of paper and read, “Inside of something that lies inside the bungalow has magical powers to move 12 girls. Time and patience is needed to find such enlightenment. Eventually, you will find out what Morning Musume is all about from it.”

“It sounds so Kei-style. Too fairytale-like to my liking.”

“It sounds incredible. Do you have any ideas?”

“I think it’s this book. ‘Inside of something’ refers to the content of the book and it is certainly a moving book. I mean if I get touched by it, all of you should be. It took me about an hour plus to read this so that explains ‘time’ and ‘patience’. As to what MM is all about, I don’t think it is the book itself but the searching process that shows what MM is about.”

“Ok, let’s go since you already know the answer.”

“Wait. Let me finish this.”

Eri frowned but didn’t rebuke her although she would like to. She turned to face the sky again and allowed her thoughts to wander.
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6 December (2.30pm)

“Finally it’s lunch! I’m so hungry!” Kusumi exclaimed as she neared the dining table.

“It’s sushi! I love sushi!” Sayumi cheered.

Mari shook her head. “Hey you girls were slacking around after Sayu’s accident while the rest went to find the treasure. At least you should thank the person who made this lunch possible.”

In unison, they yelled, “Thank you Mikitty!”

Miki didn’t respond and proceeded towards the table in silence. Mari moved towards Miki and whispered, “Fujimoto-”
 
“Cut the crap. Let’s tuck in,” Miki snapped. Mari shot her a look of disgust before walking away.

Risa leapt towards the table and asked, “Mikitty! You’re so smart to find the treasure! How did you manage to dissect the clues? Thanks so much!”

“Shut up and start eating,” Miki said coldly and proceeded to grab a sushi and headed towards a corner of the room.

Ai who was now beside Risa commented, “Mikitty is so intelligent. MM needs someone as smart as her to lead.”

Risa hugged Ai and whispered into her ears, “Have more confidence in yourself. I’m sure you will make a good leader.”

“Sure?” Tears welled up in Ai’s eyes as she asked.

“Yes.”

Eri tapped Ai on the shoulders and interrupted, “Actually she isn’t that smart. She just wanted to take a short nap and when she laid her head on the pillow, she felt some unevenness on the pillow. Then she found the book under the pillow and started reading it.”

Ai twisted her lips. “But still, she could relate the clues to the book in hand.”

“What I mean is-”

“I know what you mean, Eririn. Thanks. You’re unlike yourself today. Is it because of her?”

Eri retorted, “No, nothing to do with her!”

“Okay, okay, just asking.”

“Excuse me,” Rika said as she pushed her way to the dining table.

“Rika, what happened to you? We went about the whole place calling the girls in for lunch but we couldn’t find you. We only found Linlin alone,” Risa said in a concerned voice.

“Oh, I was in the restroom,” Rika replied coldly.

“Are you okay?”

“Yeah, I’m fine.” Rika took a sushi and left towards an empty corner of the room.

“Another one unlike herself,” Ai commented after Rika moved away from the table.
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At the side dining table whereby desserts were available for self-service, Junjun and Aika were eating mango pudding and laughing. “Junjun, it’s so weird that we’re eating desserts when everyone else is eating sushi!”

“I love mango pudding so I’m scared that it will run out later.”

Aika laughed. “I can see that.” She then inched towards Junjun and wiped the milk from the top of her lips off with her fingers.

Junjun laughed. “I guess I shouldn’t eat so much pudding for HaroMoni.”

“Junjun, can I speak to you for a moment?” Yuko interrupted their conversation. Junjun nodded and smiled at Aika before she followed Yuko out of the room.

When they were alone, Yuko commented, “I can see that Aika and you are quite close.” Junjun smiled and nodded in an attempt to hide her fear for the older girl.  “What do you think about her?”

“She’s a nice friend. I can talk to her at ease and I’m happy to be with her.”

“Nice friend?”

“Yes, she’s nice.”

“No, I mean she’s just a friend to you?” Junjun nodded. “You were staring at her just now when she went to take her pudding.”

“But we were together so it’s natural for me to look at her-”

“If she’s Linlin or Sayu, will you stare that much?” Junjun remained silent. “Admit it, you don’t treat her like a friend. Friends don’t stare or talk or laugh the way the 2 of you do.”

Perplexed, Junjun asked, “But if we are not, what are we?”

“You like her,” Yuko paused to allow the effects of her words to sink in. “You like her the way someone likes a girl. You like her in the way a lover does.” Junjun’s eyes widened. “You’re not the 1st one to feel this way towards another MM member so fret not. Come on, get back in before she starts to miss you. If you can find a chance today, tell her how you feel and I guarantee that you will instantly become a lot happier as a MM member. Trust my words.”

As Junjun made her way back to the dining room, she thought about what Yuko had said. She smiled to herself.

“Yuko, don’t tell me you went about polluting another girl’s mind again,” Kaori said in a disapproving tone after Junjun entered the room.

“When did you come?”

“I heard everything already.”

“Oh well, I’m just helping them.”

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6 December (3.12pm)

The girls were still in the dining room enjoying their lunch when the doorbell rang. Before long, there was a knock on the door and when the door swung open seconds later, everyone in the room was shocked to see her. Mari, who was beside her, murmured “Mysterious” and started to hum THE Manpower audibly.

(*mysterious*  :ph43r: this is quite an easy guess  :lol: )
Title: Re: [sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 02 - Mysterious Spectrum
Post by: zay05ohayou on May 24, 2008, 03:28:46 PM
Wooo! I love Detective stories!  :inlove:
Mysterious! = Yossie!!!!  :wub: :w00t:
Title: Re: [sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 02 - Mysterious Spectrum
Post by: takagakifan on May 24, 2008, 08:59:11 PM
“Yuko, don’t tell me you went about polluting another girl’s mind again,” Kaori said in a disapproving tone after Junjun entered the room

 :wahaha: you call it polluting I call it hot-effin-ness :twisted:
Title: Re: [sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 02 - Mysterious Spectrum
Post by: wings4dreams on May 25, 2008, 06:00:47 AM
Yay!! This sequel is a lot of fun!  Some of my fav. things about this story so far...

*Rika is psycho :heart: ( She's keeping appearances  up on the outside but on the inside she's all like : 'I'm gonna cut that b#$&h, Fujimoto!'   :lol: This cracks me up for some reason...)

*Miki is on top of things and pwns all  :cool1:

*Aya's still seems a little hooked on Maki...but seriously what's she thinking? (No, Aya! how could you even think about helping Maki after what Miki went through for you!!! *sigh* You're lucky you're so d@$m cute... :farofflook:)

*Yuko's matchmaking the young'uns (once they start knockin boots, she'll introduce them to the joy of alcohol  ;).  yup, just like she brought up the other gens... :twisted:) 

*and I'm more then just a little interested in the Aika/Junjun pairing...(its strange to me and I love strange pairings...)
Title: Re: [sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 02 - Mysterious Spectrum
Post by: Yukari on May 25, 2008, 09:57:00 AM
Yossy said the "mysterious" so i think that it could be her   :kekeke:

aaaaw aika and junjun... that's so sweet  :shy2:

Mikitty and the book... XD cool  :hiakhiakhiak:

waiting next chapter!
Title: Re: [sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 02 - Mysterious Spectrum
Post by: sweeety on May 25, 2008, 12:54:26 PM
*puts on Manpower*

 Heeyyyy wtf? Its yoshi! How can she come? Unless... but dude, she is supposed to be in jail! Does this mean that Rika will give up the chase? lol, as if. Anyway gj

 I knew it! It was the book! Miki sama found it! Of course it was! It must've been!

 Also, poor Rika! I loved the inner toilet monologue! It was sweet and angsty and sad.

 And of course Yuko sama knows best. But she should have had a chat with Aika too to make sure those feellings are not unrequited. It would suck If JunJun got turned down. :(

 Aww why is Miki sad? Of course Aya is messing with her heart again. This time she's playing soccer with it. Why do you have to hurt her like that Aya? Why? And gosh Miki, you are together, why don't you just get a lil less self conscious and down on yourself and open up to Aya? She wont bite, (out of the bedroom, roar! ;) so please would tell her how you really feel?
Title: Re: [sequel to Gomattou] F.Y.I 02 - Mysterious Spectrum
Post by: tito on May 26, 2008, 08:26:25 AM
Yeah! First day of school holidays! I shall celebrate by posting the 3rd chapter of FYI :D This is one of my favourite chapters that I've ever written. Enjoy :P

F.Y.I (At the end of this chap, it's quite obvious what this stands for...)

Chapter 3

Blue Love

December 6 (3.14pm)
“Hey everyone! What’s this reaction for?” she asked and laughed while the rest of the girls gaped and remained silence.

“Yossie! Is that really you?” Rika asked as she ran forward and embraced the girl standing in front of her tightly. Tears ran down her tears as she did so. “Yossie, I miss you so much…Is this real? Is this just a dream?” It had been quite some time since she last felt the warmth of her beloved seeping into her body. How much she wished for this moment to stretch to eternity.

Yossie returned the hug and stroked Rika’s long hair. Yossie whispered into her ears, “I’m real, silly girl. I miss you too dear. Now I’m back so don’t cry anymore baby. Come on, everyone is watching us.” Yossie tried to pull herself away from Rika as the eyes of the rest of MM were fixated on them. However Rika refused to let go and held on to her even tighter than before. Yossie said to the rest of the girls, “I guess I’ll be back later.” Yossie looked at the girl in her arms and spoke as tenderly as she could, “Rika, let’s go.” With that Yossie and Rika left the room.

Immediately after they left, the first question that ran through everyone’s minds was, “Why was Yossie at this gathering when she was just arrested about 2 weeks ago?” No one had the answer for that. Not even Miki.

Yuko shifted towards Junjun, tapped her on the shoulders and whispered, “See, that’s a classic example.”

Rika and Yossie headed into the bathroom in silence. They didn’t know who was the one leading the other towards there but somehow both knew that they ought to go there. In the bathroom, Yossie pulled Rika towards her with great force and kissed her passionately. When their lips eventually parted after some time, Yossie asked softly, “Why didn’t you ask me why I’m here?” She wiped off the tears on Rika’s cheeks gently as she spoke.

“It doesn’t matter…I just want you back.” Rika burst out in tears as she completed the sentence.

Yossie laughed. “You’re like a little puppy, my Charmy.” On the surface, she was flirting as usual. However, deep inside, she was trying her best to keep her emotions under control. As for the first time, she realized just how much Rika loved her truly and needed her. She didn’t expect Rika to have such a strong reaction. Even though they were dating, she was just simply flirting around most of the time with her and didn’t attach much feelings to their relationship. She thought Rika all along enjoyed just simply playing along with her flirting but today, she realized it wasn’t as simple as that. Rika loved her not in the flirtatious way but in the purest Charmy way. Guilt piled up in her as the main reason why she decided to pop up in this gathering was more because she wanted to shock the girls rather than to see Rika who loved her deeply.

“I mean it, Yoo-chan, I do.”

“Yoo-chan sounds so girlish. Stop calling me that!” Yossie laughed in another futile attempt to make herself feel less guilty. Yossie pulled Rika towards her and hugged her tight. I shouldn’t talk like this anymore. That girl loves me more than I love her!  But then, what should I say? I’ve never said anything other than those pick-up lines to her during moments like this.
 

“Yossie.”

“Hmm?”

“I love you.”

“I love you too.” Ok, this doesn’t really sound like a pick-up line right? Or does it?

“I-”

“Yes?”

“I thought you won’t be here so-”

“Silly thing I’m here now.” Oh come on Charmy, you can come up with something better than that. Why are we having such a boring conversation that is not heading anywhere?

“Yossie, I plan to-”

“Hmm?” Kiss me? Or get married? Come on, come up with something better than these.

“I plan to seek vengeance for you.”

“What?” Yossie raised her voice.

“Although I don’t quite know how to go about doing it and I’m quite scared, I plan for it to happen over these 2 days.”

“Why?” Yossie pulled herself away from Rika.

“Because that idiot Fujimoto Miki separates us! I hate her!” Rika spoke angrily.

“Rika, you’re not going to do that.”

“Why shouldn’t I?”

“Because it’s wrong.”

“I’m doing this for you!”

“Nope, you’re doing this for no one.”

“Is it because you like her?” She started crying again.

The guilt that was piling inside Yossie evaporated and all she felt now was anger. Love is all about trust. Doesn’t she know that? She chided, “You’re getting ridiculous Rika. Get your mind right. Just remember not to do it. Okay, I’m out of here.” With that, Yossie left the bathroom and slammed the door.

Rika fell onto the ground on her knees and cried wildly. Why didn’t Yossie want revenge? Why didn’t Yossie love her more for what she was about to do for her? It must be Fujimoto Miki! My greatest fear is coming true. This can’t happen to me. This can’t.

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December 6 (3.32pm)

After Yossie quarreled with Rika, she went into an empty bedroom and sat on the armchair and began to organise her thoughts. Rika loves me more than I love her so I should treat her well. That’s logical and rational but why must she plan to do something like that to ruin her innocence? She’s doing this because she loves me…Damn, I shouldn’t have spoken to her in that mean tone. It must have hurt her. But why must she doubt my love for her? Why must she bring in Fujimoto? I only see her as a friend but I see Rika as my lover. Just when I decided to prove to you that I love you in a non-flirtatious way, you say this kind of things to ruin it all… Tears welled up in her eyes as she thought about the poor timing and sequence of things that happened between her and Rika.

“Hey, what’re you doing in here?” That’s a familiar voice. Yossie looked up and saw the lean girl glaring down at her.

Yossie waved at her. “Hey Fujimoto. Long time no see.” Miki rolled her eyes. “Why are you here then?”

“Because this is my room,” Miki said coldly.

“Oh I’m sorry. I didn’t know it was yours-”

“Hey why are you here?” Miki interrupted.

“I just wanted some quiet time and I didn’t know it was yours.”

“I mean, why are you at the gathering and not in jail?”

Yossie laughed. “Apparently there wasn’t enough concrete evidence against me.  Furthermore, Gocchin told the cops that even though I was aware of the plan, I didn’t participate directly in the project. Tsunku popped by to pay the fine for me which wasn’t really a big sum so now I’m out. How do you feel now, the Great Fujimoto Detective?” Yossie winked.

“Why was Goto so nice to you? Why must that bitch act this way?”

Yossie looked at Miki straight into her eyes and whispered, “Because she loves me. Just like everyone else in H!P. Including you.”

“Stop being narcissistic, I never like you.”

“Don’t be in a denial Fujimoto, I know how you feel.” 

“Other than Rika, no one is happy to see you.” Yossie fell silent. “Oh yes, where is your Charmy?”

Yossie gazed out of the window at the cloudy sky. “Fujimoto, I admire the way you love Aya. I admire the way you are willing to sacrifice your life for the sake of Aya. Have your love for Aya ever waver?”

“Never,” Miki said without thinking.

Tears welled up in Yossie’s eyes. “How do you show her that your love never wavers?”

“You’re asking weird questions, Yossie.”

Yossie smiled weakly. This is so unlike me to talk like this. I need to act more confident than this. “Let’s get back in before we miss out some fun.” This was a lousy way to end a conversation as both of them knew that there wasn’t much fun anyway to be missed.

Just as when they left the room together, Rika walked out of the bathroom. Miki couldn’t be bothered to look at her and strode off. When Miki was a distance away, Yossie smiled and said, “It isn’t what you are thinking of.”

Rika shouted accusingly, “How do you know what I’m thinking of? Now I know why you are against my plan!”

“Rika, I’m against it because I’ve been through all these already and trust me, this will only end up hurting yourself.”  Please trust me, Rika. Why don’t you trust me? If you don't, at least just this one time.

“You’re such a bad liar!” Tears ran down her cheeks uncontrollably.

“I don’t want to see you hurt. It pains me, Charmy.”

“Stop calling me Charmy!” Rika ran off and didn’t turn back.

Yossie, alone in the empty corridor, started to cry softly to herself.  Nothing is going right for me today. I flirt around but I only love you. Why can’t you see that? Please don’t do anything silly girl. Please don’t.

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December 6 (4.13pm)

All the girls were in the living room chatting while waiting for the next task. No one dared to ask Yossie the sensitive question of why she was here as even the youngest Aika could see that she was in a bad mood. Anyway, to most of them, the answer didn’t quite matter.

Mari cleared her throat and announced, “Girls, I’m in charge of the next segment. It will be called ‘Murderers’ but it is basically just hide-and-seek. The ‘victims’ will hide and the ‘murderers’ will seek. There will be 2 ‘murderers’ and the rest will be ‘victims’. If you are found please assemble here and please don’t cheat. The game will end at 7pm promptly and at that time, everyone including the unfound ‘victims’ or ‘murderers’ must assemble back here. Then we will tally to see which side wins. I’ll hand out the cards and everyone please randomly pick one and please don’t let other people see your card. The card will determine whether you are a ‘victim’ or ‘murderer’.”

The girls went forward one by one to take a card. Some were eager but most were rather unwilling as they were still quite exhausted by the earlier treasure hunt. This time round, everyone including the older generation members and Yossie were involved in the game. Mari sounded the bell and everyone ran off as only 5 minutes were given as grace period for the victims to find a safe hiding spot.

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December 6 (5.04pm)

Miki who was hiding behind a cupboard in the dark and empty storeroom was becoming increasingly bored by the game. The room had this murky smell and it was very humid in there. She recalled the earlier conversation she had with Yossie. Has my love for Aya ever waver? Obviously not. Why did she ask such a question? That girl is getting stranger by the days…Why isn’t Aya here? How are you Aya? Are you still angry at me for raising my voice at you that day? Are you taking your meals regularly? She smiled to herself as she indulged herself in thinking of her dearest. Time spent with Aya never seemed enough; time spent without Aya seemed more than required. She recalled the love confession that she had. It didn’t come out the way she wanted it to be but who cares? It was a sweet, sweet victory.

Suddenly, she felt a rope around her neck and it tightened. She struggled but the grip around her neck just became tighter. She couldn’t breathe and the only person who ran through her mind was Aya. She thought of the way Aya smiled and laughed in that innocent manner. Aya, I want to see you again. I’m not going to die here in this stupid villa for no reason. Who the hell is the person strangling me? Yossie? But she had a pretty good chance just now in my room… I only have one chance to survive through this to see you again.

Using all the strength that she could muster, she banged herself sideways hard against the cupboard and she could feel the assaulter losing grip on the rope around her neck instantaneously. Will I succeed? Will I see you again? Is this just a dream? She lost conscious.

 :imdead:
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 03 - Blue Love
Post by: heyyouhiya on May 26, 2008, 08:54:55 AM
MIKI!!! NOOOOO
She better survive damnit  :(

I really like when you delve into Yossuis thought process
Those parts are especially well written in my opinion
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 03 - Blue Love
Post by: zay05ohayou on May 26, 2008, 12:56:58 PM
O__O uwaah! Miki! its great dat Yossies back but Miki!
 ishiyoshi---<3
Miki! is it Rika with za rope?
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 03 - Blue Love
Post by: sweeety on May 26, 2008, 02:14:29 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO POOOOOOOOOOOR MIKITAN! TOMOROW I SHALL MARY THEE! I HOPE YOU MAKE IT TILL THEN! HAving a horrible night now. My mum came home and started bitching again. She really is horrible.. aparently if I don't get straight A's I wont get to look at the computer again let alone touch it because that's what's expected of me. Good God I hate her. She's like Hitler with a second ball or something. lol. Anyway, hanging off the edge off my seat waiting for the next chapter.. Oh crap I fell..... anyway see ya...... luv you, mwah, see you in the early afternoon. lol Ganbare Tito san
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 03 - Blue Love
Post by: takagakifan on May 26, 2008, 04:31:51 PM
 :hiakhiakhiak: i loved the ending

So I'm guessing that the sequel is going to be more of an ishiyoshi with a little gam on the side... which i should have picked up on when you had mentioned the whole FYI F.Y.I is fyI  :P I'm really slow that way... as for yossie I hope she can express her feelings to rika so she(Rika) doesn't kill off all of H!P in a fit of jealousy :mon mad:

@sweeety:  YAY your mom sounds like my mom except shes not home most of the time so I get hours of computer time  :mon beam:... before I hear the door unlock and I rush to look busy with school work  :mon study: or else she steals that little cord that hooks up the to the internet AND takes my laptop so I'm completely internet-less  its like good god woman I'm 18yrs old leave me be  :mon whine:
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 03 - Blue Love
Post by: gloopip on May 26, 2008, 06:43:40 PM
RIKAAAA!!!!!  :OMG:
stop acting like a jerk! please!!!! :pleeease: yossie loves you damnit! :scolding:

Title: Re: F.Y.I. 03 - Blue Love
Post by: tito on May 27, 2008, 03:29:03 AM
I really like when you delve into Yossuis thought process
Those parts are especially well written in my opinion
Thanks a lot. It makes me feel really happy especially when I enjoy reading your stories so so much!  :P I enjoyed writing that part quite a bit  :)

:hiakhiakhiak: i loved the ending

So I'm guessing that the sequel is going to be more of an ishiyoshi with a little gam on the side... which i should have picked up on when you had mentioned the whole FYI F.Y.I is fyI  :P

Completely right but GAM will be something more than just a little :D

@sweeety: I thought your mum will be satisfied with the pizza you made..Straight 'A's? She sets such high standards for you. If my mum does that, I will never get to touch my comp ever again.  XD

Actually I'm quite interested to know: Who do you think is the one with the rope?  :hee:
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 03 - Blue Love
Post by: heyyouhiya on May 27, 2008, 03:33:36 AM
^ I think its Yossui for some reason
like I guess
If I was in Yossuis position and I thought Rika was going to do something I would try and choke Miki until she passed out
then keep her safe


but it would make the most sense for it to be Rika...
Just part of me keeps screaming ITS YOSSUI
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 03 - Blue Love
Post by: tito on May 28, 2008, 03:03:46 AM
This chapter has pretty much reference back to Gomattou. I wonder if you guys have forgotten about what happened then  :(

FYI

Chapter 4

Soul mate~Stalemate (It rhymes!  :pandaaa:)

December 6 (5.05pm)
“Miki, I love you. Hang in there. I love you...” The familiar voice and silhouette faded and all that she could see was darkness.
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“What happened? Geez, it’s dark here,” Risa commented more to herself than to anyone else as she stepped into the storeroom after hearing the loud bang. As soon as her eyes grew accustomed to the darkness, she caught a glimpse of the ex-subleader in the corner of the room. She was unconscious and there was blood on her head. She had never been in such a situation before and was instantly thrown into a panic state. Oh my god, is she still alive? What should I do? Oh yes, I should call for help!

Just as when she was about to scream, she heard a shriek behind her. It was Eri. Risa made her way towards Eri and asked out of concern, “What happened?”

Tears welled up in the younger girl’s eyes. “I hit something just as I rushed in here because I thought something had happened…and it hurts!” Eri showed Risa her right wrist.

Even though it was dark, Risa could see that there was blood on it. “Something happened to Mikitty over there. I’ll get help and you stay here and don’t move around, clumsy turtle.”

“Someone should just switch on the lights in here,” Yuko spoke sternly. “What happened? Some clumsy girl slipped on banana again?”

As Yuko entered the room, the lights were on as if it was on cue. Kei, Natsumi and Ai followed closely behind her. Her initial nonchalant look turned worried when she saw Miki lying in a corner. She rushed towards the unconscious girl and immediately placed her fingers beneath Miki’s nose. Thank god, she’s still breathing. “Girls, I think we need help here. Kei, Natsumi, let’s get the girl out of here and Ai and Risa, go and find Rika and get the First Aid Kit while I inform the rest that the game has been terminated.” The girls stood there, shocked. “Go, carry up!” Kei and Natsumi approached Miki and carried her up.

“Is someone looking for me?”

“Rika, it’s great that you’re here finally. Go and grab the First Aid Kit. This is your place,” Yuko commanded.

“I was the one who switched on the lights. What happened?”

“Something bad happened to Mikitty. Stop talking and get moving!” Rika grinned and left the room.

As she strolled down the corridor, someone grabbed her from behind. “Just what on earth do you think you are doing?” she hollered.

“Yossie, don’t grab me like that. It hurts. I’m getting the First Aid Kit.”

“At the speed you are walking, she will be dead by the time you get back!”

“Let her be dead then. You’re too worked up.” If I am the one being assaulted, will you care so much?

Yossie avoided eye contact with her. “Hey why did you attack her?”

“I didn’t.”

“Stop lying.”

“I’m not.”

“You are.”

“You just don’t trust me.”

“Did you trust me when you went about strangling her?”

“She was strangled?”

“Don’t act dumb.”

“I’m not.”

Yossie looked straight into Rika’s eyes and spoke softly, “Listen up, Rika. There’s nothing between Miki and I. Nothing. The only reason why I stopped you from carrying out the stinky plan was because I love you and I don’t want you to be hurt.”

“Why do you even act as if you care? Now that you mentioned about it, how much I wish that there’s something between the 2 of you. How much I wish that it pains you to see her getting hurt. How much-”

Yossie could no longer control her temper and slapped Rika hard on her right cheek which she usually kissed. Yossie shouted, “At least she was willing to sacrifice her life for the one she loved and I admire her for that! What about you? You’re just being childish and have you ever thought of how I feel now?” Rika ran off with tears in her eyes. After she was a distance away, Yossie murmured, “I’m sorry Rika.” For the 2nd time in the day, Yossie could feel the tears welling up in her eyes. Why did you wish for me to be in pain? Was that the true reason behind the attack? I would rather prefer you to be seeking for revenge for me though I’m not for the idea. At least it’s because you love me. Do you love me?

Rika ran towards the unused room which had the First Aid Kit and slammed the door hard behind her. I’m sorry Yossie, I shouldn’t have spoken like that. Why can’t you trust me? You were angry when you spoke to me just now. Was that a true indication that you love her? Was it just admiration or was it love? Do you love me?
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December 6 (5.32pm)

Miki stirred in her sleep and she muttered, “Aya, are you there? I need you…”

“I’m Ai, not Aya,” Ai, who was instructed to stay to take care of Miki, replied.

“Aya, I’m sorry for all that I’ve said. Please forgive me.”

“I’m not Aya,” Ai repeated.

“Forgive me, Aya…” Tears were welling up in Miki’s eyes.

It was apparent to Ai that the girl with the rope-mark on her neck didn’t hear her. All she could do was to hold Miki’s hands and pray that she would be fine. Too much had happened over the past month and Miki almost lost her life for the second time. She wondered, “Why are all these things happening to Miki? Why did Reina attack her? Why didn’t Tsunku tell us why Reina did so? He mentioned that it was alcohol but it seemed more like an excuse than anything else. All along, it was evident that Reina loathed Miki. Why were Yossie and Maki involved and how were they involved? Who is the assaulter this time around?” She gazed at the sleeping girl in front of her and wondered just how much answers she had to her questions.

“Aya…” Her thoughts were disrupted once more and she smiled at the love-sick girl. Getting the answers from her didn’t seem as important as doing something else that seemed just. For a moment, she didn’t care whether she would get a lashing from Yuko as she took out the phone that she kept illegally and started dialing a rather unfamiliar number.

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Yuko called Kei, Mari and Kaori for a meeting in her room right after they had phoned for the ambulance and tucked Miki in. Yuko decided not to beat around the bush and asked, “Mari, did you do it?”

Mari laughed. “Come on, I’m too short to do that!”

“No, I mean, did anyone of you here plan for it in any ways?”

“Yuko, why do you just interrogate us? Do you honestly believe that those younger girls are innocent? Look what happened over the past month-” Mari’s eyes widened. Oops, I just let it out of the bag.

“That’s where I’m getting at. I know you girls are playing detective seeking for the truth about the whole incident which landed the 3 girls behind the bars. I guess none of us was satisfied by what Tsunku said and you girls wanted to use this opportunity to find out more.”

Kei frowned as if in deep thoughts for some time before she spoke, “Seriously Yuu-chan, don’t you think that Fujimoto Miki is more than just a victim in it? We are talking about Goto, Yoshizawa and Tanaka here and not any other girls.”

Mari added, “Goddamnit, the videos given to the police weren’t even revealed to the public. I wonder how much Tsunku paid them. Anyway they shouldn’t contain much useful evidence since Yoshizawa is already out.”

Yuko spoke sternly, “Okay, I know this whole case has got you girls’ attention but I have yet got to my point. Was the assault on Miki part of your plan to find out more about the incident?”

Kaori shook her head. “I don’t know what you think of us, Yuu-chan, but we won’t risk her life just to get some information from it. And by the way, does it help us to attack her in any way?”

Yuko smiled. “God knows. Maybe you were torturing her because she refused to say.”

The 3 girls laughed. Kaori replied, “Oh come on, only the Great Nakazawa Yuko can think of such things.”

“Thanks for your compliment. I can’t believe that you have such an agenda during our annual gathering. Guess only Nacchi and I are doing something proper and innocent.”

Kaori laughed. “I know Nacchi is genuinely trying to give everyone a good time here. But as for you, you are just messing the girls around!”

“No, I’m trying to help them.”

“Many girls’ innocence had been eroded by you! How long are you planning to keep this up?”

“As long as Morning Musume last. Those girls obviously like each other so I just offer them a rope and said, ‘Between the 2 of you, there’s no friendship but love. Tie yourselves up with something that is more lasting. Take it or leave it.’ It really works. See last year, I was pairing Eri with…who was it?”

Kei laughed. “Reina. The Great Nakazawa Matchmaker had too many cases that she couldn’t remember her clients.”

Kaori nodded in agreement. “This year she’s tying Junjun and Aika. Oh yes, I heard you telling Junjun all about it but have you told Aika?’

Yuko’s eyes widened. “Shit, I haven’t!” The 3 other girls in the room didn’t seem at all surprised by her answer.
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December 6 (5.50pm)

In the living room, the Morning Musume girls, except the leader who was taking care of Miki gathered, as instructed by Yuko. As they had nothing to do before the older members arrived for the urgent meeting, they started speculating about the earlier incident. Risa started the ball rolling by asking, “Who do you think is the one behind the rope?”

Eri answered, “Will it be a stranger, maybe a big Otaku?”

“You mean someone from the outside?” Risa asked. Eri nodded. “It’s possible but that person must have pretty good knowledge of what’s going on in here or else that person will just pop in the middle of a meeting or something.”

Aika added, “I agree with Gaki-san. Even if it’s a stranger, someone in here must have helped. Or maybe the assaulter is among us.”

Sayumi gaped. “It must be! First she starts with putting the banana-”

Risa laughed. “Oh please, don’t mention about the banana. It’s too hilarious.” Sayumi pouted and started rambling about the pain she was suffering from.

“Eri, is your hand getting any better?” Aika asked. Eri nodded and waved to Aika with her injured hand which had the bandage around its wrist.

The doorbell rang. The girls looked at each other and they had the same thought. Was that the assaulter? It rang again. No one dared to move. Was that person planning to kill them all? It rang for the 3rd time. That person probably was impatient by now. They could hear footsteps rushing towards the door and Ai was shouting, “Give me a moment please!”

 :mon heh: Trust Rika?  :P 2nd mysterious... :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 04 - Soul mate~Stalemate
Post by: zay05ohayou on May 28, 2008, 03:40:54 AM
Eh.. Now im doubting if Rika actually did it.. But it still makes me think Charmikitty.. XD
Does Yossie really love Miki? The way she's acting i couldn't tell, either she does and is guilty of admitting it cause of Rika, or Rika is getting her to think of it otherwise..
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 04 - Soul mate~Stalemate
Post by: Yukari on May 28, 2008, 03:50:29 AM
The bad girl is Eri, because she likes Reina, so she get a revenge!!!!  :mon zoom:

i'm delirious  :mon scare:

i would like that yossie love miki, but i think it won't be like that  :mon cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 04 - Soul mate~Stalemate
Post by: gloopip on May 28, 2008, 04:24:38 AM
The bad girl is Eri, because she likes Reina, so she get a revenge!!!!

i think yukari's right! maybe eri's also seeking for revenge :twisted:
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 04 - Soul mate~Stalemate
Post by: tito on May 28, 2008, 04:42:19 AM
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Eh.. Now im doubting if Rika actually did it.. But it still makes me think Charmikitty..
Does Yossie really love Miki? The way she's acting i couldn't tell, either she does and is guilty of admitting it cause of Rika, or Rika is getting her to think of it otherwise..

Yeah~You're thinking the way I want the readers to think :D I'm not going to say much about what Yossie thinks here because after all she is 'mysterious' :lol: I promise to reveal more in the next chaps   :k-wink:

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The bad girl is Eri, because she likes Reina, so she get a revenge!!!!

i'm delirious 

i would like that yossie love miki, but i think it won't be like that

Guess I've given too many hints in here  XD Hmm, it won't be a she-is-the-mastermind-planning-it-all like in Gomattou but rather one thing leads to another. What I want to say is it's not the end yet (far from it)  :mon corn: (I'm getting hungry :lol: )
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 04 - Soul mate~Stalemate
Post by: Yukari on May 28, 2008, 04:49:39 AM
Guess I've given too many hints in here  XD Hmm, it won't be a she-is-the-mastermind-planning-it-all like in Gomattou but rather one thing leads to another. What I want to say is it's not the end yet (far from it)  :mon corn: (I'm getting hungry :lol: )

i love F.Y.I, so i'm happy that the end is far away in the time :mon lovelaff:

so, i was right?? it's a miracle!!  :mon XD:
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 04 - Soul mate~Stalemate
Post by: JFC on May 28, 2008, 06:36:27 AM
Props to Aichan for having the good sense to secretly keep her phone for emergencies like this. :yep:
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 04 - Soul mate~Stalemate
Post by: sweeety on May 28, 2008, 10:31:12 AM
Yey,new chap. I hope you keep it up buddy, can't wait for the next.

 Ok, I know who did it and why. Its pretty obvious.. You left three clues. ANd its safe to say it was Eri, and she did it for Reina cause they are together.
 
 Now about ishiyoshi. It seems like RIka is purposely pushing Yoshi away. Yoshi keeps trying to reconcilliate but it is her that keeps pushing her away cause she thinks yoshi doesn't love her. But Yoshi keeps coming  back and saying she does. So why does she keep pushing her away? I know but you will have to wait and see. mwahahaha
 
 GJ, keep it up. I wonder if Miki will put the clues together. Also I want you to write what happened with the phone call. I wanna know what she told Aya and if the person at the door is her or the ambulance people.
 You're doing great kid. Keep it up.
Title: Re: F.Y.I. 04 - Soul mate~Stalemate
Post by: ringo-hime on May 28, 2008, 11:30:52 AM
YAY! new chap~
cnt wait for the person on the door. :w00t:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: tito on May 29, 2008, 02:17:37 AM
@JFC: Actually I got the 'secretly kept phone' from your earlier comments. Thanks  :)
@sweeety: Yeah, wrote about the phone call.  :wub:
@ringo-hime: The person at the door is........*shan't spoil*  :P
Hope that I'm not posting too fast...

F.Y.I

Chapter 5

Bridge

December 6 (5.51pm)

“Miki, are you still asleep?” she asked as she neared the ever charming girl. The door to her room was left open and she was surprised that Miki was lying there alone.

Miki stirred and she murmured, “I love you…”

She flinched. Did she just say ‘I love you’? Probably she meant ‘I love you Aya’. “You’re so love-sick Miki even in a semi-conscious state,” she commented as she sat on the chair beside the bed.

“Aya,” Miki spoke rather weakly just as her eyes opened. It was clearly evident that she was disappointed at the identity of the person sitting beside her.

“You’re finally awake.” Miki didn’t reply. “How are you feeling?”

“A lot better, thanks Yossie.”

“You’re welcome.” The 2 girls fell into silence for sometime before Yossie asked, “So who do you think did this to you?”

“You,” Miki replied in a fragile voice.

Yossie laughed. “Oh come on!”

“It can’t be. With your strength, I would have been dead. Probably you get someone weaker to do it instead. Smart move.”

Yossie looked away from her and gazed at the sky which was already dark now. Winter was obviously coming. Yossie spoke softly, “Miki, I’m really sorry for what I’ve done. I’ve never wanted to seek revenge or anything because I reaped what I sowed. I can’t forgive myself. I was not a good friend at all. I’m sorry.”

For the first time since her graduation concert, she was moved by what Yossie said. Yossie had spoken with such sincerity and trueness that she felt like saying, “It’s fine. I forgive you for all that you’ve done.” Instead, she said with tears in her eyes, “I just feel quite cheated by what you have done.”

You ought to feel that way. “I’m sorry.”

“Let’s not talk about the past anymore. What’s up between Rika and you?”

Let’s not talk about the past? Miki, what do you mean by that? Have you forgiven me? A person like me has no right to seek forgiveness…How did you know something happened between Rika and me? Yossie scratched her head. “We had a…quarrel.”

“Lovers’ tiff?”

“No,” Yossie hesitated for a while before she said, “I slapped her.”

“You did?”

Yossie nodded. “She was being ridiculous and she thought that there was something between-”

“Miki-tan! Are you okay?” Aya rushed into the room and interrupted the conversation they had rather abruptly. Ai was following closely behind.

Miki smiled and tried to wave at Aya in her rather fragile state. “I’m fine, Ayachan. How did you get here? Yuko will never agree on you intruding a Morning Musume gathering.”

Ai answered, “I phoned Aya using my handphone.”

Miki laughed. “Oh I see, the current MM leader illegally kept her phone…”

“But-”

“Ai, let’s get out of here. I think they need private time alone,” Yossie interrupted. As she left the room, she turned back and glanced at Miki for one last time before she closed the door. She smiled to herself. You seem so much happier with Aya around you. I’m glad that you’re ok, Miki. Among the H!P members, I feel most comfortable talking to you. You seem to know everything but you never say more than necessary to show off your knowledge. Can we ever be friends again?

After they left the room, despite her weariness, Miki tried to speak in her chirpiest voice, “Aya-chan! I miss you so much!”

Aya held her hands in hers and replied, “I miss you too, Miki-tan. Oh gosh, who did this to you? Are you sure you are fine?”

Miki laughed. “I’m still alive and kicking. I’ve a feeling I know who the culprit is but I’m too tired now to confront that person.”

“I think you should rest. I’ll keep you company here. Sleep tight.”

Miki closed her eyes as instructed by Aya. As saying went, “It was always darkest before dawn.” To Miki, Aya was the dawn. She regarded the gathering up till now and the incident that almost killed her to be the darkest period. It seemed too good to be true that Aya was beside her now. It seemed more like a dream than reality. Miki murmured, “Aya-chan, am I dreaming?”

“No, you aren’t,” Aya spoke reassuringly.

“Aya-chan, I love you.”

“Miki-tan, I love you.” Aya kissed Miki on her forehead.

“Aya-chan, before I lost conscious earlier, I saw an image of you telling me to hang in there.”

Aya laughed. “What does that mean?”

“It shows that you’re an angel.” Aya didn’t reply as she was at a loss for words. Pick-up lines weren’t her forte. Silence descended upon them for some time before Miki asked the sensitive question, “What have you done with the letter?”

“I did nothing. I will do anything that you want me to do with it,” Aya replied.

“Are you sure?”

“Yes, anyway Tsunku sent you a similar letter regarding Reina.”

“Did you throw it away?”

“Nope, it’s your decision after all.” Miki nodded. Silence fell between them once again. Aya gazed through the window at the dark sky with a bright star hanging there. To Aya, Miki was the bright star in her life and everything else could be regarded as the less important darkness. Miki lighted up all aspects of her life and gave her meaning in her career as well as life. She thought about how she flagged a taxi and told the driver that she would pay him twice the cab fare if he could reach there in less than half an hour after she received Ai’s phone call. Indeed, he was a fast and reckless driver and he only took 18 minutes. It was dangerous and it might have cost her life but she didn’t care. Ai made it sound as though it would be the last chance for her to see Miki…

“Aya…”

“Ai-chan, what’s up?”

“Miki was strangled and she’s now calling for you in a semi-conscious state. I tried talking to her but it was to no avail. She keeps on calling you and…she is very weak. She is saying  things like, ‘Forgive me Aya’ and she-”

“Okay, I’ll be there in a moment time.”

“Do you have the address-”Aya had already hung up.


“I was never angry at you to start with, Miki-tan,” Aya spoke softly with tears welling up in her eyes. There was no response. “Miki-tan?” Aya quickly placed her fingers beneath Miki’s nose. She’s still breathing…She gazed at the sleeping girl and smiled. Although this was the same girl whom she befriended with years ago, she seemed so much different now both physically and mentally. Physically, she seemed more weathered and she seemed far more exhausted than before. Mentally, she had been tortured all these while by Aya herself and those pain and agony had made her a different girl. I love you no matter who you become and what happen between us in the future. I’ll not make you suffer anymore. I promise. Let’s cross the bridge of life hand in hand together.

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December 6 (5.58pm)

Ai and Yossie made their way back to the living room in silence. Ai didn’t know what to say and Yossie didn’t want to speak as she tried to memorize every single line that Miki and her exchanged earlier. In the past, she wouldn’t have done this but now it was different. To be able to talk to Miki seemed a big thing to her now. “Hi! We’re back!” Ai announced as she stepped into the room. Yossie could sense that Ai was so much more at ease with the current MM members than with her. It made logical sense as she was a criminal. Even though it was part of history already, she still regarded herself as a criminal as she couldn’t forgive herself. She couldn’t quite cross the bridge that linked her past and present and she needed some help. But no one seemed to want to help her. No one.

“Ai-chan! You should have told us you phoned Aya. We were so frightened when the doorbell rang. We thought it was the assaulter,” Kusumi spoke.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t know what you girls were thinking of,” Ai apologized.

Yossie thought, “If Miki is the leader, she will ask Kusumi to shut up and leave MM if she’s scared. I don’t even think Kusumi will dare to say such things right into her face. Oh well, maybe she’ll make a fierce and horrible leader and terrify the younger girls…why am I trying to convince myself that what I did was just? No matter what, it doesn’t give me a right to do that. Not to a friend.”

Ai walked towards Eri and asked out of concern, “How is your hand? Why are you so clumsy?”

Eri smiled and replied, “It’s getting better but it’s still quite painful. I’m sorry that I’ve made everyone worry for me.” I know the girls are nice people but they are just asking for the sake of asking. If you are here, you’ll make sure that I don’t even get a chance to lift my hand. You’ll talk about everything and make me laugh so much that I can forget about the physical pain. How’re you? I believe that you will agree with what I’ve done for you. She’s a witch! She ought to be killed…the pain that I feel on my wrist is incomparable with the pain that I’m suffering from in my heart. I’m alone even though there are so many people around me. I’m alone because you are not here.

Aika whined, “When are the seniors coming?”

Risa replied, “I don’t know. I don’t think anyone knows.”

Junjun gazed blankly at the girl in front of her. A couple of hours ago, I was able to converse normally with you but now, I can’t even find a starter. You suddenly seem so much prettier than before. Yuko-sama is right, friends don’t stare at each other. What do you think of me? Do you like me with the same intensity? How will you feel towards me if you know that I like you? I want some form of fairy-tale like the one between Rika and Yossie to exist between us. I want to you to share your sorrow and happiness with me. I know you’re younger than me in terms of age but I’m never so comfortable with someone before…is this love?

The door swung open and Yuko, Kaori, Kei and Mari entered the room.
 
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I wonder what you guys think of this chapter  :roll: Quite curious to know: where do you think this story is heading to?  :pandaaa:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: ringo-hime on May 29, 2008, 03:58:01 AM
OMG. so it was ERI.. XD..poor her..no Reina..LOL.
Ohh..Junjun... :D

YAY! it was AYA.. :muffin:...

and omg. poor rika..since she didnt do it..

WELL,, i'll still cheer for KAMEI!..mwahah..go KAMEI~ :cow:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: Yukari on May 29, 2008, 04:59:46 AM
yay

so aya interrumped miki and yossy, no~~  :fainted:

eri is madly in love, that's interesting  :hehehe:

and... junjun, just lovely  :luvluv1:

waiting next chapter
Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: JFC on May 29, 2008, 05:00:43 AM
Man...Junjun/Aika...

...


:dizzy:


...


...



This is going to take some major getting used to.
Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: zay05ohayou on May 29, 2008, 06:59:15 AM
Ohh.. Don't tell me this is going to have some YoMiki bits in it?
Thank gosh Aya arrived.. phew~ Poor Miki uttering Aya's name even though she wasn't there.
Eri is in love with.... Reina?? Was i not paying attention when this happened?  :O So she was the one who wanted revenge...
And Rika got slapped for nothing.. geez..  :(
and Junjun  :heart: Aika? Heeeee~
I like where this is going  ;) cept for Rika being wronged..
Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: sweeety on May 29, 2008, 08:37:55 AM
hehehe i was right again.
ok, Im gonna go ahead and guess that from what Yoshi just told Miki she might think that the culprit is Rika. She might think that she was jealous or did it for her or something. So she might confront her or something. I don't think they'll find out the truth for a while.... I wonder if this story will span till the end of the gettogether or if it will keep going. It will be like that game if it's just the weekend...This guessing game where someone dies and everyone has like a weekend to figure out who the killer is or something.

 I kinda feel sorry for Eri now though. I mean sure it was bad when I first thought of it but I was more focused on the motive and such, not caring about her feellings. But that paragraph about her hand was just really touching.... I wish that Reina would be good and come out soon and then Eri will be happpy..but why do I have the feeling that she is gonna meet up with her in jail or something. I mean it's sad enough already..what next? Nacchi as the prison girl one more time? lol

 And about Maki. Boy will she raise hell when she gets out. Cause I don't think she'll be in there for long either. But you have to feel sory for her. She is the only one who is single out of the jailed MM girls..she has no one waiting for her I mean....cause I'm sure some butch chick called Bob has already called dibs on her...unless she sold her already for like twenty packs of cigarettes to Kouta (yet another butch chick)..

 Ok, I'll admit it. The first thing I thought when I read they were going to jail was "Hoooolly shit, Maki's fucked! At least Reina has street smarts and Yoshi's kinda buff....but Maki is definitely fucked!" She's probably sitting in her cell, writing more letters with broken arms, bloody lips and black eyes lol... also she may or may not have been raped but if any of them at all have seen her video clips then she has most likely been raped. XD Poor Maki. Can anyone at all imagine how life in jail must be like for her?

 Do you think Eri even visited Reina in jail though? It seemed last story that Reina didn't really value their relationship much.. so even if Eri loved Reina maybe Reina wouldn't care so when/if Eri went to jail as well then god only knows what's in store for her.. Poor Eri :'(

 I hope she doens't go to jail thoug and that the other two get reformed or something...maybe brainwashed or something and just feel remorsefull about Miki and that they get out soon so that Eri will stop doing this.

 Lol, you confused me at the end. I though it was Risa saying that stuff about Ai instead of JunJun about Aika lol. Anyway, wandering if you'll do that pairing the first way or the second way... in other words will Nakazawa get to Aika in time or will JunJun get shot down by Aika who doessn't realise she likes her yet...?????

 oh well, can't wait for the next chap! Luv ya honey! Mwah! Cya on msn maybe.
Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: tito on May 29, 2008, 02:36:27 PM
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WELL,, i'll still cheer for KAMEI!..mwahah..go KAMEI~
Haha, you're so biased.  You're too crazily in love with Eririn  :wriggly:
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so aya interrumped miki and yossy, no~~ 

eri is madly in love, that's interesting 

and... junjun, just lovely 

waiting next chapter
Thanks for the support! Glad that you enjoy the story up till now   :P

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This is going to take some major getting used to.
:lol: I just thought that hardly anyone writes about the Chinese girls so I decide to feature Junjun in...as for Linlin, oh well, there's always a next time.  :mon sweat: During this ep of Haromoni, apparently Junjun cried after Aika was mean to her during the memory game and I thought this is a kinda interesting pair.... hehe

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Ohh.. Don't tell me this is going to have some YoMiki bits in it?
Eri is in love with.... Reina?? Was i not paying attention when this happened?  So she was the one who wanted revenge...
^Hmm YoMiki..Hmm :roll:
 I thought you caught that part earlier when Yuko spoke to the seniors in Chap 4... :farofflook:

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Lol, you confused me at the end. I though it was Risa saying that stuff about Ai instead of JunJun about Aika lol. Anyway, wandering if you'll do that pairing the first way or the second way... in other words will Nakazawa get to Aika in time or will JunJun get shot down by Aika who doessn't realise she likes her yet...?????
sorry for confusing you  XD You're getting me excited...Will Nakazawa be in time to tell Aika... :oops:

:lol: I'm surprised that not a lot is commented about Yossie...after all, she's the 'Y'  :)


Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: wings4dreams on May 30, 2008, 05:12:59 AM
Its weird, but I can't quite trust Yossy...

I know that Rika's sorta the 'bad guy' so to speak, but in the back of my mind I remember that Yossy was in the plot against Miki and Aya in the other story.  It's like she almost has two personalities, the one that genuinely loves her friends and the darker one that can plot\lie while smiling lovingly...its really hard to tell if she's being sincere to Miki and the others or not. I find this intriguing... 

Hmmm... :mon dunno:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: tito on May 30, 2008, 11:44:23 AM
@wings4dreams: Yeah, Yossie will remain intriguing for quite some time :D

F.Y.I

Chapter 6

Repeat

December 6 (5.59pm)

“Who’s not here?” Yuko asked in her normal authoritarian voice.

Ai replied instantly, “All of Morning Musume is here and Yossie as well. Only Miki, Rika and Nacchi aren’t here.”

Yuko nodded knowingly. “Where is Nacchi?”

Natsumi yawned and exclaimed happily, “I’m here~”

“You just took a nap, didn’t you?” Nacchi shook her head defensively. “Yes, you did.” Yuko looked straight into her eyes.

After a moment or two, Nacchi conceded defeat by saying, “Ok, I did.”

Yuko frowned and shook her head disapprovingly. “Where is Rika then?”

Natsumi shrugged her shoulders. “I’ll look for her then,” she spoke before she left the room.

As Yossie listened to the exchanges between Natsumi and Yuko, she grew worried and her mind was off the conversation that Miki and her had earlier for the first time since she stepped into this room minutes ago. Yossie thought, “Rika, where are you? Are you ok? I should have looked for you but I wanted to give you sometime on your own to reflect on what you had done and our relationship. Furthermore, I wanted to see Miki’s state because after all, you almost caused her death…Nacchi, please find her. Please.”

 After Natsumi left the room, Yuko addressed the girls in front of her, “Okay, I guess everyone here knows what happened to Miki. If you are intelligent enough, you will have figured out long ago that someone in here either strangled her herself or helped in the process. Now, I want you girls to report to me where you were during that time and I want you to surrender any electronic devices such as hand phones or pagers now before things turn ugly. Start with you, Ai.”

Ai froze when she heard her name. What will Yuko think of me as the leader when she sees this? Will I be regarded as the culprit? Ai spoke softly in trepidation, “I…was in a spare room when I heard a loud bang and went to the storeroom. I reached there with Nacchi and Kei, right?” Kei nodded. Yuko stared straight into Ai’s eyes. Ai trembled at Yuko’s relentless stare at her. Should I tell her? Is it better for me to tell her? What about my reputation as MM leader? But I don’t want to be seen as the culprit. Ai mumbled, “I’m sorry Yuko.” She quickly took out her phone from the right pocket of her jeans and put it in Yuko’s hands before running off.

Mari whispered to Yuko, “Hey that girl is suspicious.” Yuko didn’t reply as she was engrossed in exploring the phone in her hands. She smiled and shook her head when she saw, ‘Last Dialed Number: Matsuura Aya. 6.12.2007 17.33’

Yuko put the phone away and spoke, “Ok, Risa, you’re next.”

“I was walking along that particular corridor when I heard the loud bang-”

Yuko interrupted, “Did anyone come out of the room?”

Risa shook her head. “Then I went in and I saw Miki lying over there. Eri came in soon later. I don’t have any electronic devices with me, by the way.”

Mari whispered to Yuko, “This one is suspicious too. The 1st to arrive at the scene has a very high possibility to be the culprit.”

“Yossie, it’s your turn.”

“I was in the toilet alone. My phone isn’t with me now. I left it in my room.”

Mari whispered, “She’s suspicious as well. She doesn’t have any alibi at all and she might have a good motive to kill Miki.”

Yuko nodded. “What about you Sayu?”

Kusumi replied, “I ‘killed’ her! I was escorting her back to the living room when you came and informed us about what had happened. We surrender our hand phones to Kaori this morning already!” Kaori nodded.

“Aika, where were you then?”

“I was hiding with Junjun in her room.”

“I thought you are supposed to hide on your own.”

Aika retorted, “But…I feel safe with Junjun.” Junjun blushed. “We thought that there was some commotion out there so Junjun left the room first. She said if the ‘murderer’ was out there, at least only 1 of us would be caught and I would be safe.”

“I see.” Yuko winked at Junjun. “Junjun, why are you so nice to Aika as to sacrifice yourself for her?”

Is Yuko giving me a chance to tell her how I feel towards her? Is this the ‘chance’ that she was talking about earlier?
Junjun gazed at the girl who insisted to hide with her earlier and took in a deep breath. I was courageous enough to cross the borders to join Morning Musume. Nothing would be too difficult for me to accomplish here. Nothing would be too difficult for me to express. “Because I like you, Aika,” Junjun whispered.

Aika kissed Junjun on her cheeks and exclaimed, “I like you too, Junjun!” Junjun blushed.

Yuko cleared her throat and addressed everyone, “Ok, now I’ve a rough idea about where you were during that time. Now you are free to go off. Dinner will be served in an hour’s time. By the way, if you want to ask, I’ve already interrogate the seniors earlier.”

The girls dispersed pretty quickly after that and Yossie just about caught the girl she wanted to speak to, pulled her to one side and asked, “Hey why are you blushing?”

Junjun replied, “Am I? I thought that is a normal reaction after someone kissed you!”

“Say, what did Yuko tell you earlier?”

Junjun was stunned. How did she know that Yuko had told her something? Were her emotions too obvious? Damn, maybe Aika had sensed something as well. “She-”

Yossie whispered into her ears, “She told you that you like Aika and you should take advantage of this gathering to tell her how you feel, right?”

Spot-on. But why does she know? She wasn’t even here when Yuko told me about this… “How-”

Yossie interrupted, “I guess I’m correct. This girl never changes. Never. She hooked us up about 7 years ago.”

“You mean Rika and you?”

“Smart.”

“So the 2 of you got together because of her?”

Yossie smiled as memories of the past flooded her mind. Then they were still innocent and impressionable.  7 years ago, she attended her 1st MM annual gathering and it was the most unforgettable one.
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7 years ago

‘Ishikawa Rika has added you as a friend.’ Yossie was puzzled at the message popped up on her Friendster. She had just created an account an hour ago and she hadn’t told any of her friends about it yet. Ishikawa Rika…who is she? Is she another random girl who has a crush on me in school? Since I’m quite free now, I shall just fool around with her. She clicked on ‘CONFIRM’ and sent her new friend a message on Friendster, “Hello do I know you?” It was a nicer way of saying, “Hello, do you think I will know you, stalker?”

Minutes later, the reply came, “I’m sorry I think I added the wrong person. I’m really sorry. By the way, I’m Ishikawa Rika. Nice to know you~ :D”

Oh she isn’t some random girl who has a crush on me.
“I’m Yoshizawa Hitomi. Nice to know you. It actually meant, “Nice to know that you are not some crazy stalker of mine.”

“You like to play soccer?”

Oh man, this girl sucks at conversation starters and she has been reading up on my information on Friendster. “Yeah, do you have any favourite singers or bands?” This is such a lousy question but at least it is way better than hers though.

“I like Morning Musume a lot! My friends say I’m crazy over them ^_^”

I heard of them before. What songs do they have? She went to do a quick google for Morning Musume’s songs
. “I like Morning Musume too and I love Love Machine!” Gosh, how does the song even sound like?

“I love it too! Do you want to go for the 4th generation audition together? No one wants to go with me  :cry:”

Poor lonely girl but what if she turns out to be a freaking old man?
“I’ll like to but I can’t sing…”

“Oh well, it’s ok :D ! I sent you the picture I took with Goto Maki last year…”

Goto Maki? The name sounds familiar. This girl has no internet literacy at all. After she viewed the photo, she sent a message, “Hey let’s go for the audition together.”

At the gathering (June 2000)

“Hitomi-”

“Yuko, can you please don’t call me ‘Hitomi’? Call me Yossie or Yossi. Please.”

“Okay. Well, I guess only she can call you Hitomi.”

Puzzled, Yossie asked, “She?”

“Yeah, the girl you’ve been staring at for the past hour.”

Yossie said defensively, “I wasn’t staring at her! I was just maintaining eye contact with her during our conversation!”

“You don’t seem to be maintaining that much eye contact with me though.”

“That is because-”

“That is because she’s special to you. That is because you like her.”

Yossie laughed. ‘Oh come on! We’re just friends!”

“It’s only about a month plus since the 4th generation joined. Why are the 2 of you so close?”

Because we know each other before we joined. Ever since that day they knew each other, they had met up several times to practise for the audition. Perhaps it was hard work that paid off or maybe it was just sheer luck, both of them got into Morning Musume as part of the 4th generation.  “I don’t know.”

“That’s why I say you like her.”

“Hitomi~” Rika exclaimed as she ran towards them.

Yossie chided, “I told you a zillion times not to call me that!”

“Ok, I shan’t make you angry, Yossie.”

“I am not angry.”

“You are.”

“No I am not.”

Rika smacked Yossie on the butt and teased, “That must have hurt right? Hitomi.”

Yossie laughed and pinched Rika’s cheeks. “If you call me that again, you will end up with a square face I swear.”

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Yossie was shot back to reality as she recalled how she had slapped Rika earlier on those cheeks that she used to pinch for fun.

“Yossie, you were in a daze for so long. Did Yuko get the 2 of you together?”

“Junjun, people take years to realize they love each other and confess. Don’t rush into it.” Yossie felt tears welling up in her eyes as nostalgia overwhelmed her once more. She smiled and said, “I’ll help the 2 of you so don’t worry too much about it. See you.”

December 6 (6.40pm)

She opened the door and was shocked to see Aya sitting on the chair beside Miki’s bed. “Aya, why are you here?”

“Kei-chan, I just came a while ago. Ai called me.”

I wonder how Yuko will react to this.
“Uhh, is she still asleep?”

“Is someone looking for me?” Miki asked in a half-asleep voice.

“Yes, I’m but I can pop in later. Rest-”

Her eyes were still closed. “It’s ok, Kei, just shoot.”

“Uh, it’s fine,” Kei said as she headed for the door.

“If you want to ask me who I think the culprit is, I’m sorry to disappoint you. I don’t plan to find out who the culprit is. She has the guts to attack me unlike-”

Aya interrupted, “Miki-”

“As long as she doesn’t hurt Aya, it’s fine. I’ll make sure that won’t happen.”

Kei was at a loss for words. She didn’t know whether she ought to admire Miki’s love for Aya or chide her for being so confident that she wouldn’t die even if that culprit was at large. If she doesn’t even want to find the culprit who almost killed her, how can we find out more about that incident that landed the 2 girls in jail? How do we find out how that weird brain of hers works? Unless we…no, I shouldn’t even think of that. No, I need to erase that thought…

Side-note: :lol: I hope the Friendster idea is fine. Please comment  :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I.06 - Repeat
Post by: zay05ohayou on May 30, 2008, 01:04:55 PM
Hey, Yuko didn't ask Eri! She got away easy. Lol at Mari, everyone sounds suspicious to her.
Junjun and Aika.. that was fast!  :w00t: Yuko sure is the mastermind of all.  ;) Even Yossie and Rika!  :love:
Hmm.. Yossie and Rika met in friendster... wow, that's so funny! Friendster goes a long way! Nice Ishiyoshi fluff!  :D
Aya's still with Miki! Yay! Uh-oh, Yuko still doesn't know..  :O
What was Kei thinking? Why didn't she continue?  :O Is it something about interrogation???
Title: Re: F.Y.I.06 - Repeat
Post by: sweeety on May 30, 2008, 03:13:48 PM
  Hope Yuko doesn't get mad at Aya for coming in. I don't think she will. But it might come as a shock for her if she like sees her in the kitchen the next morning getting brekky for Miki all of a sudden XD

  Haha the friendster thing was funny. I didn't know it existed, let alone exist like seven years ago! Wow, it gets around! Except to me...btw what's friendster? lol, I seriously don't know.

 I love the new chapter, I hope that Yoshi regrets what she did more. Also hope she doesn't get blamed for what hapenned to Miki. I'm glad Miki doesn't want to pursue it because I know either Rika or Yoshi would have gotten blamed for it, but I also hate it cause Eri will get away scott free, but I'm also sad for Eri who is lonely without Reina. If only she hadn't done it. Then I wouldn't have had to feel sory for her because she wouldn't be in jail.

  Guess we can still  blame Reina for it all but it just seems like she is hiding something or someone there. Like maybe she was really doing it for Eri. Because I don't think that she really hated Miki so much because she groped a few people or something. I mean seriously. Maybe Eri is the secret mastermind lol and she influenced her to do this all because she was in love with her. Lol, wow, I confuse myself sometimes.

 Waaaaaaah~ I'm tired now. I'll see if you're on msn, and if not then I will just ....... I dunno, do some other stuff I guess. cya, mwah! Keep  up the great work, I love you and your story!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.06 - Repeat
Post by: tito on May 31, 2008, 01:29:42 AM
It's 7 a.m over here so pardon me if my words jumble up or something. By the way, I set up a poll as I'm now planning for the later chapters. You know it makes a hell of difference whether she appears or not...Please help me with the planning of FYI by voting :D

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Hey, Yuko didn't ask Eri! She got away easy. Lol at Mari, everyone sounds suspicious to her.
Risa sort of mentioned about Eri and Mari distracted Yuko by saying that Risa was suspicious :D
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Junjun and Aika.. that was fast!  Yuko sure is the mastermind of all.  Even Yossie and Rika!

^You sure? :roll:
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Hmm.. Yossie and Rika met in friendster... wow, that's so funny! Friendster goes a long way! Nice Ishiyoshi fluff!
Thanks :D Actually to be frank, I got the idea from personal experience :lol: so I'm glad it's funny...
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What was Kei thinking? Why didn't she continue?  Is it something about interrogation???
*hint* What she thought had something to do with what Miki just said ... :twisted:

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Haha the friendster thing was funny. I didn't know it existed, let alone exist like seven years ago! Wow, it gets around! Except to me...btw what's friendster? lol, I seriously don't know.
I think friendster (http://www.friendster.com) existed then if I remember correctly...7 years ago, some friends were using it (of coz now everyone switch to facebook but oh well...) Geez, I can remember things 7 years ago, I'm getting old... :cry:

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Guess we can still  blame Reina for it all but it just seems like she is hiding something or someone there. Like maybe she was really doing it for Eri. Because I don't think that she really hated Miki so much because she groped a few people or something. I mean seriously. Maybe Eri is the secret mastermind lol and she influenced her to do this all because she was in love with her. Lol, wow, I confuse myself sometimes.
Thanks for liking it :D ^That's a pretty good idea...
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Waaaaaaah~ I'm tired now. I'll see if you're on msn, and if not then I will just ....... I dunno, do some other stuff I guess. cya, mwah! Keep  up the great work, I love you and your story!
Sorry I went for some concert last night...you made it sound like I stood you up or something :tears:

Title: Re: F.Y.I.07 - Three Promises
Post by: tito on June 01, 2008, 02:13:56 AM
The comments are getting fewer and fewer and that means the number of readers also getting fewer and fewer :cry: Oh man, I'm getting depressed. *shake away the thought*  :( Even if there are only 2 readers, I'll write for them...

Here is a 'happier' chapter but just a spoiler: It hasn't ended yet  :oops:

F.Y.I

Chapter 7

Three Promises

December 6 (8.26pm)

During the buffet dinner, Natsumi dragged Yossie out of the dining room and said, “Rika is in her room now but she refuses to unlock the door.”

You must be hungry now. Why are you doing this to yourself? It hurts me more when you do this than what you did to Miki, you know that? “Thanks Nacchi, I’ll look for her now.”

Yossie grabbed some sushi and sprinted down the corridor towards Rika’s room. She lost her way several times as she wasn’t sure of the actual location of her room even though she had been here once some years ago. When she eventually reached Rika’s room, she knocked the door and shouted, “Hey Rika! It’s me. Open the door please. I brought some food over.” There was no response. Rika, why aren’t you unlocking the door? Are you trying to hurt me? Oh god, don’t tell me you have gone to the extreme to… “Rika, I know you are angry with me but please don’t do anything silly.” No response. Yossie placed the sushi on the floor and used her body to bang hard against the door several times. It was painful but she was more afraid that the worst might have happened to her beloved.

The door opened just as Yossie was getting ready to bang against it for the fifth time. “What the hell are you trying to do?” she spoke. Her voice was muffled and it was obvious that she had been crying quite a lot.

Yossie hugged Rika tight even though Rika tried to resist her touch. “I was afraid that you will do something silly,” Yossie whispered. “Thank god you didn’t.”

“Why would I commit suicide for you?”

“Because you want to make me sad and hurt,” Yossie spoke with tears streaming down her cheeks. She caressed Rika’s cheeks and asked, “Is it still painful? I’m sorry about it.”

Is Yossie crying? I’ve never seen Yossie cry before. What should I say? “It hurts but the physical pain isn’t as bad as the emotional pain I’m suffering from.”

“I’m sorry.” They remained in the hugging position and silence fell between them for some time before Yossie said, “Rika, do you remember the first time we hugged?”

“It happened on the second practice session that we had before the audition.”

“Do you remember what I said then?”

Rika thought for a while before she said, “You said you promise that nothing could separate us; not even the audition’s results. You said you wished that we could hug each other forever. You said that if we got famous, we could buy a small villa in the suburb just for ourselves so that we will have a nice place to hide away from the paparazzi.” Tears ran down her cheeks as she spoke.

This girl still remembers…“Just look at how gorgeous our little place is. We only came here once years ago right before your graduation. How I wish we can just stay here and ignore the world. How I wish we can hug each other like that forever and nothing gets between us.”

“Fuji-”

Yossie interrupted sharply as she didn’t want their conversation to turn bitter again, “Do you remember how Yuko hooked us up 7 years ago? Now she’s trying with Junjun and Aika.”

Rika laughed. “I remember how she tried to hook us up. So how is their progress?”

Yossie pressed herself against Rika. “The main thing is we manage to eventually. Unfortunately, they aren’t going anywhere. Rika, do you want to help them?” Perhaps this may be able to reignite our love. At least we will have some other things to talk about other than Miki. I know it’s wrong to avoid talking about Miki but, at least, now I just want us to love and feel loved just like what we used to be like before all these happened.

Honestly, I don’t give a damn about helping them but perhaps, it can improve our relationship. At least Yossie won’t accuse me of attempted murder on Fujimoto Miki every time we meet. It just hurts me to hear her say that. “Ok.”
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December 6 (9.01pm)

Miki was reading the book she found earlier during ‘Treasure Hunt’ after she had dinner which was brought into the room by Ai. She wasn’t a fan of romance but this story was an exception. Somehow it reminded her of the love between Aya and her. The couple started out as friends and went through their own romance and heartbreaks before realizing that the soul mate had always been so near.

“Miki-tan.”

“Hmm?” Miki’s eyes were still fixated on the book.

“Can you put the book away for a while? Let’s talk. I’m getting bored.”

I have completely ignored her for the past hour when I read the book. She should feel bored by now. I’m sorry. Miki placed the book beneath the pillow, smiled and said, “I’m sorry Aya-chan, let’s talk.”

Aya frowned as she thought about topics to talk about. Should I ask her who she thinks the assaulter is? But judging from what she told Kei earlier, I shouldn’t talk about it. Come on, I need to think of something. After a while, Aya said, “Why not we talk about last year’s gathering?”

“I didn’t attend.”

“Why?”

“If you can remember, last year’s December you just recovered from amnesia and Goto and you were super close then. How on earth do I find the mood to attend such a stupid and useless gathering?”

“I can’t believe it’s just one year since it happened.”

“Time flies.”
 
This was a wrong topic to talk about. Damn, I need to think of something. Why is it that Goto somehow or rather will pop up in our conversation each time we talk? “Miki-tan, this is the 1st time I’m attending a Morning Musume gathering. Although I am not invited, I’m glad to be here,” Aya spoke softly.

“There isn’t anything great about this. It is stupid and lame. If I have the choice, I will skip this just like last year.”

“At least, Miki-tan, you belong somewhere unlike me. Although everyone is under H!P, it’s obvious that there is a special exclusive bond among Morning Musume members. Sometimes I just want to be part of it-”

Miki interrupted, “Aya, you have me. GAM is more than enough for both of us. Who gives a damn about Morning Musume?” Miki kissed Aya hard on the lips and Aya allowed Miki’s tongue to venture in her mouth. When their lips eventually parted, Miki spoke suggestively, “This is THE special bond exclusive to GAM. Kisu ga tomaranai anata no sei ne.”

Aya smiled. “Konna koto bakari suru tame ni umarete kita…” she continued the chorus of the song that belonged solely to GAM. Miki has misinterpreted what I said. I meant to say that I feel left out at times especially during H!P concerts because I’m not part of Morning Musume. Even though I can talk to the girls, I just feel that they won’t miss me if I am not there. Oh well, maybe like Miki said, GAM is more than enough for both of us. Both of us sacrificed quite a bit for GAM so we must make sure that that special bond could withstand anything that may come. We must. Aya touched Miki’s chin and whispered, “Miki-tan, promise that the GAM’s bond will never break no matter what happens in the future.”

“You’re such a fan of promises. I promise,” Miki replied before they had another round of kissing. Who will have the ability to break our bond? That Goto Maki is already gone for good and the most she may be able to do is to strain the bond. I’ve worked so hard to develop such a bond between us. I won’t let anything or anyone to even attempt to break it.”
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December 6 (10.03pm)

Eri yawned as she stepped into her room alone. She was sharing the room with Aika but Aika was still enjoying herself, talking and laughing in the dining room. A year ago, I used to be able to talk and laugh like that. You left and took away my happiness as well. Now I’m soulless and I will remain like that until the day you appear again. It’s all Fujimoto Miki’s fault! Why couldn’t we manage to kill her? How come she was so lucky to escape death twice? She switched on the lights and was shocked to see her seated on the armchair in her room.

“Eri.”

“Why are you in my room?” Shit, I thought I had locked the door. It must be Aika’s fault. She’s such a careless and gullible girl.

“Ai told me earlier that you injured your hand shortly after Risa found me and it bled quite a bit.”

“So?” Sweat trickled down her cheeks as she anticipated what the other girl was about to say.

“I guess you aren’t as clumsy as what Ai said about you.”

“What are you trying to imply?”

“Come clean with me. You were the person who tried to kill me right?” Eri remained silent and she shivered slightly. “Guess I’m right.”

Eri started crying. “It’s my own fault. I shouldn’t have lost grip on the rope when you banged yourself against the cupboard. If I haven’t lost grip, I won’t have injured my hand and you won’t be able to guess. I-”

Miki interrupted, “You’re wrong. I already guessed as much that you were the assaulter before Ai told me about your hand. The injury just confirmed my hypothesis. After all, you like Reina.” Miki walked towards Eri and said, “The main reason why I made sure that she ended up in jail was because she planned the hit-and-run incident on Aya. If she had the guts to attack me right from the start, perhaps she would have a better ending.”

“You’re such a liar! Even if she had attacked you right from the start, you would still pursue the incident and make sure that she ended up behind the bars!” Eri shouted. This was what she always wanted to say to the older girl.

Miki frowned. “So do you think that she was correct in using violence to chase me out of MM this way? Eri, I think you are smart enough to think for yourself what is right and what is wrong.”

Eri remained silent for a while before she said with tears running down her cheeks, “I know she isn’t right in doing so but I can’t stop myself from loving her…I can’t stop myself from feeling lonely now that she isn’t around.”

Miki placed her hands on Eri’s shoulders and met her eyes. “You are blinded by love, Eri. I know how it feels to be in love and many a times, you will tend to do irrational things in the name of love. I do those things sometimes too. When you become sober, you will realize how silly those things are.”

Eri hugged Miki and cried her heart out. Miki didn’t resist. “I am sorry, Miki,” she repeated this line several times.

After some time when Eri had finally stopped crying, Miki said, “I admire your guts to attack me directly and your maturity to realize and admit that you have done something wrong. I won’t pursue this matter anymore and let’s just pretend that this conversation never exists.”

“Miki, thank you, I promise I won’t do it again,” Eri mumbled.   

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Hopefully more comments this time around...
Title: Re: F.Y.I.07 - Three Promises
Post by: tru_harmony on June 01, 2008, 02:34:40 AM
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

i was totally blindsided by that!!!

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!

it's eri?!?!?!?!?!?!

... so ishiyoshi is fighting over nothing.... that's so sad...

hugs forever!!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.07 - Three Promises
Post by: ringo-hime on June 01, 2008, 03:19:16 AM
nice ishiyoshi helping junjun and aika..

YAY for GAM!~

Miki is so smart..hahah...
so is Goto coming back?... :twisted:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.07 - Three Promises
Post by: wings4dreams on June 01, 2008, 04:44:46 AM
Nooo!!!  :OMG: I let you down, tito!!! Soo sorry, I only come on this site every few days....whaaa :mon runcry: !!!  Curse you fun job, with all your wild animals and endless barage of people I must entertain and educate while driving around in endless circles!! :grr: ...um...would it help if I said that I :mon love: ?

Eri is the one that tried to kill Miki?!?! I never saw that comming, but it makes perfect sense!  So poor Rika got blamed for what someone else did! Hmmm...so Rika and Eri both hate Miki for the same reason....do I detect a future partnership?

as for Aika and Junjun...

“Aika, where were you then?”

“I was hiding with Junjun in her room.”

My pervy mind:  hiding eh?  just hiding? hm? hmmmmmm?  :mon misch:

I know she was innocently sincere, but that still cracked me up  XD

Title: Re: F.Y.I.07 - Three Promises
Post by: Yukari on June 01, 2008, 05:07:23 AM
so it was eri after all  :mon lol:

emm possible yomiki?? wow... just friends i think :mon determined:

sorry for no comments in the last chapter, i hadn't read it  :mon suspect:

waiting next chapter!!  :mon bye:

PD:yey aika and junjun :mon misch:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.05 - Bridge
Post by: JFC on June 01, 2008, 08:06:12 AM
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Yuko nodded knowingly. “Where is Nacchi?”

Natsumi yawned and exclaimed happily, “I’m here~”

“You just took a nap, didn’t you?” Nacchi shook her head defensively. “Yes, you did.” Yuko looked straight into her eyes.

After a moment or two, Nacchi conceded defeat by saying, “Ok, I did.”
Busted. :lol:



Mari found everyone suspicious. XD



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Yuko nodded. “What about you Sayu?”

Kusumi replied, “I ‘killed’ her! I was escorting her back to the living room when you came and informed us about what had happened. We surrender our hand phones to Kaori this morning already!” Kaori nodded.
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“Aika, where were you then?”

“I was hiding with Junjun in her room.”

“I thought you are supposed to hide on your own.”

Aika retorted, “But…I feel safe with Junjun.” Junjun blushed. “We thought that there was some commotion out there so Junjun left the room first. She said if the ‘murderer’ was out there, at least only 1 of us would be caught and I would be safe.”
Awwwwwwwwwww...Junjun was protecting Aika!  :love:



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“I see.” Yuko winked at Junjun. “Junjun, why are you so nice to Aika as to sacrifice yourself for her?”

...

“Because I like you, Aika,” Junjun whispered.

Aika kissed Junjun on her cheeks and exclaimed, “I like you too, Junjun!” Junjun blushed.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
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Eri yawned as she stepped into her room alone. She was sharing the room with Aika but Aika was still enjoying herself, talking and laughing in the dining room. A year ago, I used to be able to talk and laugh like that. You left and took away my happiness as well. Now I’m soulless and I will remain like that until the day you appear again. It’s all Fujimoto Miki’s fault! Why couldn’t we manage to kill her? How come she was so lucky to escape death twice?
OMFG IT WAS ERI!?!??! She's trying to get revenge because Miki got Reina thrown in jail!!!
:mon wtf:



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After some time when Eri had finally stopped crying, Miki said, “I admire your guts to attack me directly and your maturity to realize and admit that you have done something wrong. I won’t pursue this matter anymore and let’s just pretend that this conversation never exists.”
Damn, Miki's brain must have really been starved for oxygen when Eri attacked her for her to say something like this.
:?
Title: Re: F.Y.I.07 - Three Promises
Post by: kRisZ on June 01, 2008, 08:37:02 AM
The house is Ishiyoshi's  :wub:

Code: [Select]
“Miki-tan, promise that the GAM’s bond will never break no matter what happens in the future.”
hmmm, why do I get a feeling that Maki and Aya will be reconciling and perhaps will be lovey dovey again
Title: Re: F.Y.I.07 - Three Promises
Post by: tito on June 01, 2008, 09:11:15 AM
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!

it's eri?!?!?!?!?!?!

... so ishiyoshi is fighting over nothing.... that's so sad...
I'm a big fan of angst  XD Very big fan :lol:
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Miki is so smart..hahah...
so is Goto coming back?...
Yeah as always  :wahaha: *Look at the poll results* I think she is and prepare yourselves for more angst  :cry:

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Nooo!!!  OMG I let you down, tito!!! Soo sorry, I only come on this site every few days....whaaa !!!  Curse you fun job, with all your wild animals and endless barage of people I must entertain and educate while driving around in endless circles!! grr ...um...would it help if I said that I :mon love:  ?
Yeah it does I  :mon love: too :D Your job sounds so interesting...Clown was the first thing that came to my mind  :mon sweat:

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Eri is the one that tried to kill Miki?!?! I never saw that comming, but it makes perfect sense!  So poor Rika got blamed for what someone else did! Hmmm...so Rika and Eri both hate Miki for the same reason....do I detect a future partnership?
Hmmm....I don't want to give spoilers  :lol: but it will soon NOT be the same reason though..
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emm possible yomiki?? wow... just friends i think 
I'm not going to say anything about this...read on  XD
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sorry for no comments in the last chapter, i hadn't read it 
^It's ok   :vv: As long as you do read it, I'm happy!
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Damn, Miki's brain must have really been starved for oxygen when Eri attacked her for her to say something like this.
Yeah pretty much. Probably when Eri cried and rambled about stuff, she just got soft-hearted (again) and decided to let it rest.  :-\

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hmmm, why do I get a feeling that Maki and Aya will be reconciling and perhaps will be lovey dovey again
*Look at poll results again* I really shan't give any spoilers  :oops:

Title: Re: F.Y.I.07 - Three Promises
Post by: cierl03 on June 01, 2008, 01:54:00 PM
wow, eri seriously think she's wrong?
i dun believe her somehow... but.... dunno.... if eri has become the good guy, then who will become the antagonist? hmmmm...
anyway, I'd love to see Goto back!!! XD i wanna see how she affects aya & miki relationship hahahah

and please don't stop writing...!!!!!!!!!!!!  :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.07 - Three Promises
Post by: tito on June 02, 2008, 02:37:04 AM
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i dun believe her somehow... but.... dunno.... if eri has become the good guy, then who will become the antagonist? hmmmm...
I wonder if this chapter has an answer  :roll: I highly doubt so though...

F.Y.I

Chapter 8

Mr. Moonlight

December 6 (10.45pm)

She stepped out of the room and was rather surprised to see her coming out of the younger girl’s room. “Hey Fujimoto, what are you doing in Eri’s room? Does Aya know about this?” she teased.

Miki turned and glared at her. “Why do I meet you everywhere? Whose room did you just come out from then, Mr. Moonlight?”

Yossie smiled at Miki flirtatiously. “This is affinity, Fujimoto. Before you go about accusing me of sleeping around, I tell you that’s Rika’s room.”

“Oh I see. I’ll spread the news around. No worries.” Miki smiled.

“You haven’t told me why you were with Eri.”

“Do I have to tell you?”

“Yeah, you ought to, now that I caught you leaving her room at 10.45pm.”

“Do I need to report my every move to you?”

Yossie laughed. “You don’t need to. But I reckon it has some connections with the earlier attack. You’re not the kind who will pop in other people’s rooms late at night for nothing especially when Aya is around.” Yossie paused before adding suggestively, “That’s of course excluding my room.”

Miki laughed. “You’re a brave soul to flirt right outside Rika’s room.” Somehow I do miss flirting around with Yossie. Harmless flirting is fine, right Aya?

“I meant my words.”

“You don’t.”

Silence fell upon them for a while before Yossie said, “Hey, tell me whether my hypothesis is correct.”

“What hypothesis?”

“Eri was involved in attacking you and you just confronted her.”

Miki twisted her lips. “It’s partially right.”

“So you confronted her for some reason just now, right?”

“No, it’s the other way round.”

“So she is involved?” Miki nodded. “What do you plan to do about her?” So Rika’s accomplice is her…she couldn’t have acted alone. I should have known that. Rika isn’t a girl who thinks about strangling someone 24/7. I probably triggered her to by appearing here…

“Nothing.”

“What?” Yossie raised her voice.

“I plan to do nothing.”

Yossie heaved a sigh of relief. She’s not doing anything meaning that Rika should be fine. No, I should ask her to play safe. “What about Rika?”

“What about her?” Miki seemed taken aback by her question.

“Nothing.” She doesn’t seem to know anything about Rika. I shouldn’t make Rika sound suspicious to her. Ok, I should change topic before the detective starts suspecting her. Yossie said, “Why aren’t you doing anything about it?”

“She was brave enough to go straight for me instead of knocking Aya down like some cowardly assholes.” Shit, why did I rake up the past?

Hell, why did she mention about it? I need to change topic before things turn ugly. “I’m sorry,” Yossie lowered her voice. “Did you tell her the reason why you aren’t pursuing the matter?” It’s such a redundant question…

“Yes.”

Yossie’s eyes widened and she bellowed, “Hey do you know that you are hinting to her that it’s ok for her to try to kill you again? What the hell are you thinking of?”

“She won’t. I’m sure of that.”

“What makes you so sure?”

“It’s my gut feeling.”

“God damn it your gut feeling may fail you, do you know that? You might lose your life next time round. Do you really think that you are an immortal?”

Miki shouted, “Hey who are you to tell me all these? I know what I’m doing. You also tried to kill me last time around! Please stop acting like a sage!”

Yossie hollered, “I wasn’t the one who tried to kill you! It was Tanaka Reina!”

“So? You could have stopped her do you know that?”

Yossie fell silent. She just hit the nail. Miki is right, I could have stopped her. I should have stopped her but I was so afraid that my reputation will be ruined after those videos were revealed. I wouldn’t have minded killing you then if Reina asked me to. Damn, you are right. I have no rights to tell you off. I’m also a villain. “Fujimoto, I’m sorry. I was just concerned about your safety. Guess I overdid it.” Tears welled up in her eyes.

Miki shook her head. “I overreacted as well. I know that’s dumb of me to tell her all that but something in me tells me that I ought to trust her and give her another chance. I trust my gut feeling. It has never failed me. Anyway I will be keeping a close eye on her to make sure that she doesn’t have anything up her sleeves.”

What if this is the one and only time that your gut feeling fails you? “I guess you are tired already. Rest early,” Yossie said and she walked briskly down the corridor to her room and locked the door.

She thought about the conversation that they just had and tears uncontrollably ran down her cheeks. Sometimes I just get carried away too easily but I’m really worried for you. She may kill for love. I mean that was what Rika felt as well when she did it. Yoshizawa Hitomi, wake up! Miki is nice to be talking to you again! Why do you have to say so much to her such that she ended up raking up the past and throwing the ugly facts right at your face? I hate you for that Yoshizawa Hitomi. Please don’t go around thinking that you’re Casanova, Mr. Moonlight.

Eri, who had overheard their conversation as the 2 girls were shouting at each other, began to weep. This time round, those tears weren’t caused by sorrow or loneliness; they were caused by overpowering guilt. “Miki…” she mumbled.
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December 6 (11.02pm)

After washing up, Rika went into the dining room as part of her ‘mission’. She smiled when she saw the young girl dancing to the choreography of ‘Happy Summer Wedding’ in the middle of the room with Kusumi, Sayumi, Junjun, Linlin and Risa.  As she watched the girls dance to her favourite song, she was reminded of her first few months at Morning Musume 7 years ago. “Umarete kita kara ano hito to meguriaeta wa unmei no hito” she lip-synced the verse of the song. Those days were tough because Yuko had scolded her many times then for lacking in personality and therefore she had to try her very best to create a personality for herself. Thankfully, Yossie was there to support her during those painful days.
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7 years ago

“Yuko scolded you again today?”

“Yes. I just can’t seem to find my own personality…” she spoke. Her voice was muffled because of the tears that were streaming down her cheeks.

“Don’t take it too hard on yourself. This sort of thing takes time.”

“I know but you seem to discover your own personality so easily…”

Yossie held her hands and said, “It varies from people to people. I struggled sometimes as well but I just don’t show to anyone.”

“Not even to me?”

“Yes, it’s my personality.” Yossie winked. They fell silent for a while before Yossie whispered, “I like how you share problems with me. It makes me feel special.”

“Does it?”

“Yes.”

“I will reserve all my problems from now on just for you to make you feel even more special!” Rika exclaimed.

Yossie laughed. “Sure, I don’t mind being your listening ear. Oh wait, if you reserve all your problems for me then you will be a happy girl in front of everyone else. See that is a budding personality!” Rika laughed.

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She was brought out of her daze when the girls started laughing which signified the end of the dance. She smiled to herself as she indulged herself in thinking about Yossie and her shared past. Back then we were so innocent. I wonder when I started falling in love for you. I didn’t even realize that I was in love with you until my graduation. Was it when you played Mr. Moonlight? Wait maybe it was earlier. Maybe it was during the practice sessions before the auditions. Or maybe it was when you helped me develop my personality. I love you Yossie. I want us to talk and laugh just like what we were like before this gathering. It hurts to see you speak to Fujimoto Miki and it hurts even more to hear from you that you don’t want her injured. Are you even aware of what I am thinking of, Mr. Moonlight?

She walked to her target and said, “Can I talk to you for a while?”

The younger girl was obviously shocked that Rika had initiated a conversation with her. She followed her out of the room into one of the many spare rooms along the corridor. Junjun watched Aika follow Rika out of the room and her heartbeat quickened. “What did Rika want to talk to Aika about?” she wondered.

In the spare room, Rika went straight into the topic. “What did Yuko talk to you about?”

“Oh, she asked me where I was when Miki was attacked and I said-”

Rika interrupted, “Ok, other than that.”

Aika thought for a while before she said, “Nothing much. I think.”

“Did she mention about Junjun?”

Aika gave her a puzzled look. “No, why?”

Rika nodded. This girl obviously doesn’t know anything. What should I say then? Do I need to spell it out for her? “What do you think of Junjun?”

“I like her. She’s a very nice person!”

Innocent child.
“What else?” Aika fell silent. Okay, maybe she isn’t as innocent as what she looks.

“I don’t know whether it is wrong for me to think this way but…”

Good. She isn’t that innocent after all.
“You can just tell me Aika. I swear I’ll keep it a secret.”

“Actually I don’t just see Junjun as a friend like what everyone does you know. I always want to tell her how I feel but I’m scared she will ignore me after that.”

This is really getting simpler. “You can tell me. I will see whether I can help.”

“I see her as my godsister…is this weird? Is this wrong?”

Rika tried her utmost best to hide her astonishment. “That’s fine. It’s common in Morning Musume. I think she will be happy.” This is getting tough and I seriously doubt that she will be happy.

“Thank you Rika!” Aika then left the room and headed back to the dining room and Rika could vaguely hear her talk to Junjun in that chirpy voice.
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I think I screwed up YossixMiki's conversation...damn :( The RikaxAika conversation just doesn't seem that good too  :cry: Or maybe I was in a crappy mood when I wrote this but I hope that you can get what I'm trying to show in those conversations..Pls comment XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I.08 - Mr. Moonlight
Post by: Yukari on June 02, 2008, 04:50:46 AM
naaa, they were nice conversations  :wub:

yomiki  :wahaha:

godsister??? damn! and yes aika, it's wrong xD  :scolding:

waiting next chapter

PD: Eri...  :farofflook:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.08 - Mr. Moonlight (Part I & II)
Post by: tito on June 02, 2008, 06:34:31 AM
@ Yukari, thanks a lot, I'm happier now :D
Because the next part will be in the morning, I decided not to skip so many hours so now I present Mr. Moonlight (part II)! This is kind of light-hearted so enjoy  :grin: More ishiyoshi for ishiyoshi fans  :wahaha:

Mr. Moonlight (part II) Credits to Kiwi-Musume for the translation :D

Rika's POV

6 December (2.03am)

Give me love... wa!
(Mr. Moonlight upside down)


Yossie, in her Mr. Moonlight outfit, grabs me and looks at me straight into the eyes.

We’re young and kind of cheeky
We’re upside down, it’s quite a stylish move


“Tonight I’m yours…” I whisper suggestively into your ears.

Oh baby baby tonight’s an upswing
Wanna dance? Paradise
(Mr. Moonlight upside down)

“Wanna dance?” you ask and I nod. We dance to the beat of Mr. Moonlight in the empty dance floor. Nothing matters as long as she is beside me.

We’re young and kind of crybabies
It’s ‘cos we’re all weak, up and down

I used to be a crybaby but tonight when I am in your arms, I feel confident of myself. I feel that I will never ever cry again as long as you are beside me. 

Oh baby baby there’s an update tonight


“Wanna sing? Paradise,” you sing with that charming smile on your face. I nod even though I am not sure of the lyrics. There isn’t anyone there to criticize me for going off-tune. I know you won’t.

Oh! We’re lovers 24 hours a day
Ah I want to stick with you all the time
But! But that’s not a lady’s job


So what if that isn’t a lady’s job? I will still do it. I don’t want you to go around flirting with another girl when I’m not around. I want to be your full-fledged lover.

Love’s like a local train
It doesn’t progress very quickly


Of course I hope that our love will be like a bullet train but I’m fine with a local one. At least our love is going somewhere.

(Mr. Moonlight) I swear tonight
(Mr. Moonlight) That I’ll love
(Mr. Moonlight) As much as I can
Be up and doing! Future is mine!


You smile at me at the end of the chorus and hug me tight. “I’ll love you,” you whisper into my ears.

And I just can’t get enough of your smile
So let’s do everything in our power
To make these days happy


I blush. I have never felt like this before. Even though I’ve heard you said that many times, it just feels so romantic to be hearing it in the middle of “Mr. Moonlight.”

And la la la, I feel full of love
La la la, let’s sing about it
La la la let's singing! Sing a song


Let’s sing ‘Happy Summer Wedding’ next, Yossie.

Oh! What’s that? Your heart hurts?
Ohhh – baby, that’s love...you’re sick with love.
It must be because you met me...you’ve fallen in love with me, haven’t you?
It’s OK, I’m here now
Come on, let’s dance!

Yes, I am sick with love because I love you too much. You’re right about it, Yossie. You kiss me on my cheeks and wink at me. I blush again. Cheeky Mr. Moonlight.

We’re young, so let’s not rush
I mean, let’s just take life step by step


You’re the one who is stepping on the accelerator of our love train.

Hey, baby baby, tonight let’s just forget everything
Wanna dance? Paradise

Not just tonight, I’ll forget everything other than you from now on…

Oh! Since we’re lovers, I wanna kiss you
Ah, I wanna smooch you
But you don’t taste like lemon


You’re getting dirty, Mr. Moonlight but I still love you. In fact I love you more now.

Sometimes love starts quickly
And sometimes it breaks down quickly


“Ours won’t I swear,” I whisper with a grin and kiss you on the lips. You look shocked. See, I am also quite good at it, Mr. Moonlight.

(Mr. Moonlight) I swear to you
(Mr. Moonlight) That I’ll probably always
(Mr. Moonlight) Love you
Be up and doing! Future is mine!


Probably? It’ll become ‘definitely’ soon.

Now let’s make meatloaf together
Let’s spend Christmas together
Let’s make a whole lot of memories together


Let’s have a romance that can last till we are old. I want to grow old with you hand-in-hand.

And la la la, let’s measure our love
La la la, today as well
La la la let's singing! Come on! Sing a song
La la la... la la la... let's singing! Sing a song
And la la la, let’s measure our love
La la la, today as well
La la la let's singing! Come on! Sing a song
La la la... la la la... let's singing! Sing a song


You embrace me and kiss me passionately on the lips. I can feel your tongue in mine. Your arms move from my hips upwards and they caress my breasts. Don’t stop…

(Mr. Moonlight) I swear tonight
(Mr. Moonlight) As much as I can
(Mr. Moonlight) I love you
(Mr. Moonlight) I’ll probably always
(Mr. Moonlight) Love you
(Mr. Moonlight) I’ll love you
(Mr. Moonlight) As much as I can
Be up and doing! the future is mine!


You are no longer singing to the song. I mean how can you sing when your tongue is in my mouth? The future is ours…

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Rika woke up and she smiled to herself. She visualized the image of Yossie kissing and groping her in the Mr. Moonlight outfit. How much she wished that the dream was a reality. “I love you Yossie…” she whispered to herself.

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Yeah, the front part is all a dream!! Haha :tantrum:
* Play Mr. Moonlight.. :mon misch:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.08 - Mr. Moonlight (Part I & II)
Post by: ringo-hime on June 02, 2008, 06:49:55 AM
Mr. Moonlight part I >  :cry: angst~..XD.. yay?  :twisted:
Mr. Moonlight part II > OMG..thats effin hilarious...all a dream... :shakeit:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.08 - Mr. Moonlight (Part I & II)
Post by: Yukari on June 02, 2008, 07:28:04 AM
mujajaja you got me  :mon XD:

happy summer wedding LOL

waiting next chapter!!

PD: and... when will be turn to yomiki's fans?  :mon POd:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.08 - Mr. Moonlight (Part I & II)
Post by: sweeety on June 02, 2008, 09:36:28 AM
Do'h my fave song just turned into a wet dream!

 I loved those chapters. they were funny....though you left something out of the last one....Yoshi was groping the song finished but you never said what happened next ;) lol, jks..

 I knew it!~ and now I get to say "I told you so" to all the non believers....so......... soshite "I told you so! :P " I think you may have got some of the lyrics wrong. For starters you totally left out the Maki Nacchi bit where they go " Hey, everybody sing a~ha (a~ha)...." and so on. I love that bit~!

 I think I know who the baddie will be now. Not Eri, but the person you least expect. Yoshi. (You thought I'd say Rika, didn't you?) Cause think about it.. She said so herself she would've done it before. She doesn't believe her own girlfriend when she says she didn't hurt her. She almost accidentally ended up blaming her for it all even though she didn't do it. And she slapped her girlfriend. I think she might do something to Miki in the heat of the moment. She might get angry and hurt her. She shouldn't but she is very agro. She doesn't listen to reason.

 But I hope it's not her. She only just got out. It does look like Rika is the one with the grudge on Miki  but she hasn't followed through with anything yet so I think it might be safe to assume she wont in the future. Though since her own girlfriend has already cast her the role of the assaulter she might get pissed off and do something drastic like fill in those shoes. It's like aneveryone thinks she would so she has no chance because no matter what she'll probably end up getting some blame so she might as well do it type thing.
Title: Re: F.Y.I.08 - Mr. Moonlight (Part I & II)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 03, 2008, 03:22:43 AM
i've always thought of doing a song fic with mr. moonlight... never got to do it, though...

ishiyoshi ishiyoshi ishiyoshi ishiyoshi...

*smile now plastered on face permanently*

... got your hint...

hahaha...

waiting for next chapter...
Title: Re: F.Y.I.08 - Mr. Moonlight (Part I & II)
Post by: tito on June 03, 2008, 03:32:36 AM
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Mr. Moonlight part I >  :cry: angst~..XD.. yay?  :twisted:
Mr. Moonlight part II > OMG..thats effin hilarious...all a dream... :shakeit:
Just give you something to laugh about before more angst sets in  :wahaha:
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happy summer wedding LOL
^That song had been playing in my head all day even when I was writing  :oops:
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PD: and... when will be turn to yomiki's fans?

When you start typing PS instead of PD... :mon misch: and start  :mon pray2:  ......
 
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I knew it!~ and now I get to say "I told you so" to all the non believers....so......... soshite "I told you so! " I think you may have got some of the lyrics wrong. For starters you totally left out the Maki Nacchi bit where they go " Hey, everybody sing a~ha (a~ha)...." and so on. I love that bit~!
Sorry about that^ I was copying and pasting the chunk of translation from kiwimusume and didn't take notice.. :(
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I think I know who the baddie will be now. Not Eri, but the person you least expect. Yoshi. (You thought I'd say Rika, didn't you?) Cause think about it.. She said so herself she would've done it before. She doesn't believe her own girlfriend when she says she didn't hurt her. She almost accidentally ended up blaming her for it all even though she didn't do it. And she slapped her girlfriend. I think she might do something to Miki in the heat of the moment. She might get angry and hurt her. She shouldn't but she is very agro. She doesn't listen to reason.
You have no idea where this story is heading to... :mon fyeah:
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ishiyoshi ishiyoshi ishiyoshi ishiyoshi...

*smile now plastered on face permanently*
;) hehe, I wonder how you will feel with the new chapter....
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... got your hint...
Oh, I'm so touched  :shy2: *true_harmony hints me back* lol, you don't need to, I'll still read it :D

I'm still working on the next chapter now..hopefully it can be up in an hour time or two.. :P Stay tuned (whoever that is staying tuned..)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.08 - Mr. Moonlight (Part I & II)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 03, 2008, 03:50:57 AM
@ tito's hehe, I wonder how you will feel with the new chapter.... :

i don't like the sound of that...

OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

don't doom my ishiyoshi!!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: tito on June 03, 2008, 04:21:39 AM
@tru_harmony:  :wahaha: I wonder whether it's as doomed as what you think  XD

F.Y.I

Chapter 9

Change

December 7 (8.03am)

“Do I have to go? I am not invited,” Aya said unhappily.

“Since you are here, you should just take the chance to mingle with the other girls, right? Anyway, you are hungry right?” Miki replied.

“Yes, I’m hungry but what if they don’t welcome me? I mean this is a Morning Musume gathering after all and I’m not part of it…”

“They will welcome you, I promise,” Miki said with a grin plastered on her face and then pushed Aya into the dining room where breakfast was served. The initial chatter and laughter in the room died down when they turned to see who just came in. The girls in the room then were Ai, Risa, Mari, Kaori, Yuko and Yossie. The others either slept late last night like the younger MM girls or just simply enjoyed sleeping like Natsumi. Were they more shocked to see the girl who was assaulted in the dining room so early or were they more shocked to see the uninvited girl? “Hey, what’s that reaction for? All of you look as if 2 ghosts just stepped into the room!” Miki spoke rather rudely. Well she didn’t intend to be rude early in the morning but it just came out like that.

Mari pointed at Aya and asked, “Why are you-”

Yuko interrupted, “Uh, actually Aya was invited to the gathering and she was the secret guest who arrived yesterday. Right, Ai? I put you in charge of that.”

Ai was shocked to hear her name mentioned. She nodded although she knew that was far from the truth.

Mari murmured, “Oh I see.”

Yuko smiled and addressed the girls, “Girls, let’s get back to breakfast. Remember not to leave the guest out.”

 “Ayayaya!” Risa exclaimed and hugged her. “When you came in yesterday, I thought you were Miki’s assaulter planning to kill everyone!”

Aya laughed and replied, “You have wild imagination, Risa. Do I look like a killer in any way?”

“Of course not! Come, Aya, have a muffin. It’s really nice.” Risa led her to the long table where the food was placed and they ate and indulged in idle chatter.

Miki, who was standing a distance away from the table, thought, “See Aya, I told you it will all be alright. Even though I used to be MM sub-leader, the girls prefer talking to you than to me. It shows that you just fit in there dear. My stomach is growling but I don’t want you to notice my presence. I want you to enjoy yourself feeling like part of MM for once. That’s what you want, right Aya?”

“Fujimoto, aren’t you eating a bit?”

Miki turned and wasn’t surprised at the identity of the person speaking to her. “I’m not that hungry,” she lied.

Yossie nodded. “Do you want to take a walk with me in the garden?”

“Okay.”

They walked out of the house in silence and when they reached the well-maintained garden, Yossie whispered, “I’m really sorry about what I said yesterday, Fujimoto. I had been thinking about it and I felt horrible about it. You were right. I have no right to tell you what to do.”

A late autumn morning breeze blew past them. Miki smiled as the sense of tranquility overwhelmed her and she spoke softly, “I thought about it as well. You’re just been concerned about me and I overreacted. Thanks for your concern.” Silence descended upon them for a while before Miki spoke, “This is a nice place. Rika is fortunate to have a place like this. Have you been here before?”

Yossie nodded. “Actually this villa belongs to Rika and me.” Miki’s eyes widened. “We made a pact long ago that we would save up money to buy a suburb villa so that we could escape from the paparazzi. I know it’s a dumb thought but those were the days.” Yossie smiled and a wave of nostalgia washed over her soul. How much I wish we live those days when you weren’t Charmy and I weren’t Mr. Moonlight again. How much I wish nothing has changed.

“That’s very sweet. How much I wish Aya and I have a small villa too just for ourselves .”

“Speaking of Aya, why aren’t you with her?”

Miki smiled. “You know something? Aya always wants to be part of Morning Musume and I always take MM for granted. What a joke. I just want to give her a chance to feel how a MM gathering is like and I know if I am there, the girls will avoid us and she won’t have a chance to experience.”

“You’re such a nice lover.”

“No, I’m not.”

“At least you know what she wants. Sometimes, I just don’t know what Rika thinks and what she wants from me.”

“Oh, this reminds me. What happened between you and Rika? Did she think that we were sleeping together yesterday?” Miki winked.

“Yes, she thought I popped by to screw you up and it doesn’t help that we had just quarreled before she saw us together.”

“What did you quarrel about?” Yossie fell silent. “It’s ok if you don’t tell me. So what did you do after that, Mr. Moonlight?”

She flinched. I wish I won’t ever hear anyone call me that again. I hate being branded. “I went to her room, apologized and hugged her.”

“What else?”

“Nothing.”

Miki eyed her suspiciously. “Didn’t you kiss her or even try to-”

Yossie interrupted, “Never! The atmosphere wasn’t really right for that and I didn’t want her to say things like, ‘Are you trying to compare me with Miki?’”

Miki laughed. “I assume that the 2 of you patched up last night one way or another.”

“I’m not sure. Although it looks as if we have patched up, deep inside I feel that we are not. We used to be able to talk about everything and now it is so hard to think of starters. There is even a sensitive topic that we avoid talking about all together. Do you know how depressing it is? I really love her.” She didn’t want to tell her the ‘sensitive topic’ she referred to was Miki herself.

“Yossie, people change. You changed. Rika changed too. You should think about new topics to talk about instead of dwelling on the past’s happiness and on the sensitive topic.” She wanted to add that Maki was Aya and her sensitive topic and whenever the name ‘Maki’ popped up in their conversation, things just turned awkward and ugly. But she held back her words as she remembered Maki and Yossie were crime partners. How nice it will be if you haven’t participated in that dumb project. Even though I know I shouldn’t be talking to you so much and so nicely, you are the only person other than Aya in H!P I can talk comfortably to. I still don’t quite trust you though. You will change for the better, won’t you? I hope so.

“Thanks Miki.”

“When did you start calling me Miki?”

“Now. Do you like it?”

 “Not really, Hitomi.”

Yossie laughed. “You don’t call me that, Miki!”

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Rika woke up and although she was disappointed that Yossie didn’t appear in her subsequent dream when she went back to sleep at 3am, she felt happy. At least Yossie appeared in one of my dreams. When she opened the window to allow the cool morning breeze to enter her room, she was shocked to see the 2 girls talking in the garden right before her eyes and stunned when she heard Miki said, “Not really, Hitomi.”The whole world knows that only I can address you as ‘Hitomi’ and because you dislike it, I stop calling you that. Why did you laugh when she call you Hitomi? Does she have the right to do so? Yossie, why do you look so happy when you are beside her? No, I can’t allow this to happen. I can’t allow Fujimoto Miki to take away Yossie from me.

She left her room hastily and took the shortest route to the garden. After all, she came here every 6 months to make sure that the cleaners and gardener were doing their jobs. What should I tell her? Oh yes, Aika. Thank god she suggested that we helped them or else I will have a hard time thinking of what to talk about. She shouted, “Yossie, I have something to tell you!”

Yossie was rather shocked to see her. She spoke, “Fujimoto, I got to go as you can see. See you!” Yossie winked.

Rika led Yossie back to her room, shut the door and said monotonously, “I spoke to Aika yesterday. She said she saw Junjun as her godsister. I think we can’t do anything about it if they don’t like each other.”

“Oh man, that sucks. I thought we could show to Yuko that we are better at matchmaking than her. What can we do to help them?”

“We can’t do anything if they don’t feel anything towards each other.” Why not you spend your time thinking of how to help us instead of being a nosey-parker?

“But I promise Junjun already. Damn.”

 She could feel the anger piling up in her chest.  Do you even remember your promises to me? “Yeah, that’s about it. You can go,” Rika whispered. Tears welled up in her eyes.

Yossie held her hands. “What’s wrong with you? Are you okay?”

“I’m fine-”

“Are you angry because I was talking to her? We were just talking about random stuff because we didn’t feel like eating at 8am!”

“I need to rest.” If you sneak out with her for a private chat, then just tell me straight in the face! Why did you come up with this poor lie that 2 of you coincidentally didn’t feel like eating and went out for a walk? Damn Fujimoto, you have Aya already! Why are you still flirting around and dating my Yossie as though you are still single? You are so greedy!

“Don’t think so much about it, okay? I love you,” Yossie whispered into her ears and left the room.

When Yossie left the room, Rika broke down in tears. She thought, “Just last night, I dreamt of us together in love dancing to Mr. Moonlight. In the morning, I saw the 2 of you together talking and laughing. Are you trying to tell me that it’s all wishful thinking on my part? Don’t say you love me when you are thinking of another girl. I’m losing you, Yossie. I know that. She’s prettier and better at everything than me. What should I do?”

Yossie didn’t head back to the dining room instead she went to her own room even though her stomach was growling. She knew what Rika was thinking of. She thought, “Rika must have felt that I am cheating on her. Now she must be seeing Fujimoto not as that girl who landed me in jail but as the 3rd party in our relationship. How do I convince you? Should I stop talking to Miki all together? But she is the person I feel most comfortable talking to in H!P other than you…Maybe Fujimoto is right. We have changed and I shouldn’t dwell on the past’s happiness anymore. But I don’t know what exactly do you want, Rika. Can’t I have a right to have a friend in my life?”   
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Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: Yukari on June 03, 2008, 04:45:58 AM
muajajaja  :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke:

i like this story a lot you know??  :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke:  :mon determined:

i actually imagine so much things with the title  :mon crazyinlove:

OMG YOMIKI!!! thank you  :on lol:  :mon misch:

they're so funny  :mon XD:

btw... poor rika   :mon sweat:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 03, 2008, 05:44:51 AM
"She’s prettier and better at everything than me. What should I do?”

Thats' right Rika... Finally your thoughts are correct... Miki IS prettier and better at everything than you  :P

Pyshco Jealous Rika is always interesting :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 03, 2008, 05:53:11 AM
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

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“At least you know what she wants. Sometimes, I just don’t know what Rika thinks and what she wants from me.”

vs.

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She knew what Rika was thinking of. She thought, “Rika must have felt that I am cheating on her. Now she must be seeing Fujimoto not as that girl who landed me in jail but as the 3rd party in our relationship.

ishiyoshi... i'll burn myself as fuel just to keep the fire between you two burning... GGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH

... rika... don't do anything stupid... please... for the love of god... and yossui...
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: JFC on June 03, 2008, 05:58:08 AM
Man, Rika's got major insecurity issues.

And oh crap Junjun's gonna be devastated when she finds out. :cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: tito on June 03, 2008, 06:59:56 AM
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i like this story a lot you know?? 
^This so totally makes my day!  :wub:
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i actually imagine so much things with the title
I hope this chapter didn't disappoint your imagination..
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OMG YOMIKI!!! thank you  lol 
they're so funny 
btw... poor rika   
I thought the conversation was quite dumb :lol: You're such a Yomiki fanatic..I promise to write a total Yomiki fic (if you didn't read what I posted elsewhere :) )
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Pyshco Jealous Rika is always interesting
^Sadism? I kinda agree though.. :grin:
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ishiyoshi... i'll burn myself as fuel just to keep the fire between you two burning... GGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH

... rika... don't do anything stupid... please... for the love of god... and yossui...
Their love is like a candle placed in the middle of a windy garden ( :lol: another of my weird metaphors )
You shall see  :mon misch:
P.S. You make my day too, tru_harmony!  :cow: (I just read the intro thread  :D )

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Man, Rika's got major insecurity issues.

And oh crap Junjun's gonna be devastated when she finds out.
I almost wanted to put godmother but I realised Junjun isn't a really motherly character and that will be so much meaner  XD

BTW, I updated the first post for easier navigation
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: sweeety on June 03, 2008, 12:47:00 PM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

man, that last bit with yossui was just so sad! I can't believe that she feels like she should give them a break (Not GAM, Ishiyoshi). Under the circumstances this is the worst thing she could do. Especially since Rika is just gunna take it as her wanting to be with Miki in a more seclusive way.

 I swear, that girl could get smacked upside the head with the truth and she would still believe a lie...... :@  BAH!  And she is making Yoshi so miserable! I mean, she just got out of jail, Lord knows what she went through, and then comes back to this? Seriously! What is Rika thinking? She came straight to her and just because she doesn't want to kill the person that put her in jail because she was just protecting her own girlfriend by doing so, she just fuckin dogs her like that! that is nasty. And then she comes up with all these excuses and accusations and lies! Why doesn't she just say what is in her heart?

 And yosshi! Yoshi yoshi yoshi. Where do you get off losing your temper and snapping at everyone? Sure you've had a rough couple of months, but that doesn't justify what you're doing. And as who you are you really should know better. You are supposed to be there for them, be their friend, especially Rika's. Just say something right for gods sake! When Rika asks about you and her, don't just say that Rika is the only one for you, make some promises you are actually willing to keep....share a bed...kiss her.......tell her how YOU feel.....tell her how much you love her, or that you've even dreamed about her.....and don't just yell back at her, you'll scare her!

 Why don't you just kiss her? :'(
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: wings4dreams on June 03, 2008, 01:59:18 PM
lol I about died when Aika said that she wanted JunJun for a godsister!!!  :mon lmao:

Aww, and Rika's dream was so sweet, but it kinda shows that Rika still lives in the past and sees Yossy as Mr. Moonlight, but Yossy's changed (just like Miki says).  Rika's angry at Miki for taking Yossy away, but truthfully its Rika herself thats not excepting that things have changed.  If she wants to stay with Yossy she needs to except this and grow from there, however it seems that Rika is to stubborn/bitter to do that.

Another thing that's interesting to me is the friendship between Miki and Yossy, I rather like it, but I hope this teaches Miki to except Aya's feelings toward Goto.  After all its sorta the same, both girls have affection for one of their conspirators, I hope Miki will somehow realize this... 
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 03, 2008, 02:21:51 PM
both of them are stuck with their ideas of the relationship when it started... i think they got fixated with the villa as a monument of their old love...

that is so sad

those two have a big communication problem...

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Their love is like a candle placed in the middle of a windy garden (  another of my weird metaphors )

i like this metaphor. i will look for this garden with a box of matches and burn the whole thing! ... i think that's something rika would do in this situation... i hope she doesn't, though...
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: tito on June 03, 2008, 04:04:40 PM
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I swear, that girl could get smacked upside the head with the truth and she would still believe a lie...... :@  BAH!  And she is making Yoshi so miserable! I mean, she just got out of jail, Lord knows what she went through, and then comes back to this? Seriously! What is Rika thinking? She came straight to her and just because she doesn't want to kill the person that put her in jail because she was just protecting her own girlfriend by doing so, she just fuckin dogs her like that! that is nasty. And then she comes up with all these excuses and accusations and lies! Why doesn't she just say what is in her heart?

 And yosshi! Yoshi yoshi yoshi. Where do you get off losing your temper and snapping at everyone? Sure you've had a rough couple of months, but that doesn't justify what you're doing. And as who you are you really should know better. You are supposed to be there for them, be their friend, especially Rika's. Just say something right for gods sake! When Rika asks about you and her, don't just say that Rika is the only one for you, make some promises you are actually willing to keep....share a bed...kiss her.......tell her how YOU feel.....tell her how much you love her, or that you've even dreamed about her.....and don't just yell back at her, you'll scare her!
^Pretty much sums up the ishiyoshi relationship up till now  :cry:
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Aww, and Rika's dream was so sweet, but it kinda shows that Rika still lives in the past and sees Yossy as Mr. Moonlight, but Yossy's changed (just like Miki says).  Rika's angry at Miki for taking Yossy away, but truthfully its Rika herself thats not excepting that things have changed.  If she wants to stay with Yossy she needs to except this and grow from there, however it seems that Rika is to stubborn/bitter to do that.
Exactly  :)
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Another thing that's interesting to me is the friendship between Miki and Yossy, I rather like it, but I hope this teaches Miki to except Aya's feelings toward Goto.  After all its sorta the same, both girls have affection for one of their conspirators, I hope Miki will somehow realize this...
This comment came at a pretty good timing...next chapter will have some answers, I hope
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both of them are stuck with their ideas of the relationship when it started... i think they got fixated with the villa as a monument of their old love...

that is so sad

those two have a big communication problem...
Exactly what I wanted to show.  :cry: And major trust problem too

You guys are like professional relationship counselors and you are great in summing up their relationship problems! I'll post the next chapter up tomorrow morning and it's quite an important chapter :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 03, 2008, 04:27:35 PM
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I'll post the next chapter up tomorrow morning and it's quite an important chapter 

... i'll be waiting... hahaha... i won't update until you do... bwahahahaha!!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: sweeety on June 03, 2008, 06:44:54 PM
YOU'RE BRINGING GOTO BACK NOW!!!!!!! OMG!!! (how'd I guess eh? the clues)

 Omg, I got it riiiight~ aat least some of it! Awesome!~ goto be shakin up the house when she be cumin now!yahooo!


 ok, one thing I may have forgotten to say, THEY SHOULD JUST KISS!!! everyone needs their dose of rabu rabu!~ mmhmm!
 
Title: Re: F.Y.I.09 - CHANGE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 04, 2008, 12:28:53 AM
I'm holding my next chapter hostage!!!

... i'm still waiting tito....
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tito on June 04, 2008, 02:23:26 AM
@tru_harmony: You don't do that!  :( @sweeety: Sorry to say but no rabu-rabu for quite some time :( Here is the next chapter. :D  The title gives useful hints... :roll:

F.Y.I

Chapter 10

Unspoken Words

December 7 (8.33am)

Aika opened her eyes and she wasn’t shocked that her roommate was no longer beside her. She thought about what Rika told her yesterday and smiled. Maybe it is easier than what I think it is. I know we are of different nationalities but I feel more comfortable with you than with any other Japanese girl in MM. You won’t ignore me if I tell you how I feel, will you? Is it appropriate to tell you now?

“Aika, why are you still slacking on the bed?” Junjun spoke as she walked out of the bathroom with a toothbrush in her mouth.

Aika laughed. “You sound weird talking with a toothbrush in your mouth!”

Junjun laughed, took out the toothbrush from her mouth before she smacked her butt.  “Get up, lazy bum!”

Aika yawned audibly. “I’m still tired…Can’t I rest a while longer?” she grumbled.

Junjun nodded and proceeded back to the bathroom to brush her teeth. She thought, “Should I tell her? The gathering is about to be over. But she didn’t get it last time round. What will she think of me if I tell her how I feel? Will she reciprocate my love or will she ignore me? Damn, this is a golden opportunity. Should I say?”

“Junjun, I have something to tell you,” Aika whispered into her ears. Junjun was shocked and she screamed. Aika laughed.

“When did you sneak behind me?”

“Isn’t that a mirror in front of you? You should have seen me!”

“Sorry, I was in a daze just now. Ok, let’s talk.” They then walked to the couch in the middle of the room and sat side-by-side. “Actually I also have something to tell you,” Junjun spoke softly.

 “Is it? You say first.”

Junjun shook her head. I haven’t quite planned how to say it yet and I want to know what you want to say. “I want to hear what you want to say first.”

“Are you sure? You go first.” I want to hear what you want to say, Junjun. Maybe it will give me an indication whether you will like me as your godsister or not.

“You go first,” Junjun spoke sternly. Sorry, I don’t want to speak like that to you but this is the only way to make you speak first.

Aika nodded as though she conceded defeat. I guess I have no choice but to say. You seem to be angry. She made a short prayer before she said, “Junjun, you know I treat you differently from the rest, right?”

“Yes.” You know I treat you differently as well, right?

“That’s because I see you as someone special.”

Is she about to say what I want to say? Junjun blushed. “You’re special to me too.” 

“I admire your strong character and your courage and from time to time, when I feel down, I look at you and you give me the strength to carry on,” Aika paused before adding, “I wonder whether we can take our relationship to a higher level.”

A higher level? What does she mean? I think she is implying what I plan to say. This is too good to be true…“Of course,” Junjun spoke happily and smiled.

 Aika’s eyes brightened. “Can you be my…”

“Yes?” Lover?

“Godsister?”

Junjun was stunned to hear that. Her jaws dropped. She thought, “Godsister? So you see me as your godsister all along? So it’s only wishful thinking on my part, huh? I feel as though you had taken me on your wings and flew to the sky and then dropped me from the uppermost atmospheric layer. ‘Junjun, people take years to realize they love each other and confess. Don’t rush into it.’ Oh man, maybe Yossie was right about it. Maybe what we need is a little more time.”

“Junjun?” Aika interrupted her trains of thoughts.

“It’s fine with me, Aika,” Junjun tried to sound cheerful when she said that but she knew it was a failed attempt.

“Are you sure?”

Junjun nodded and smiled. Maybe I ought to take it step by step. But it’s just disappointing to hear you say that. Thankfully, you spoke first.

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December 7 (9.02am)

“Isn’t that Ayaya? Am I seeing wrong?” Natsumi asked as she entered the dining room.

Aya walked towards Natsumi with a silly grin plastered on her face and exclaimed, “Ayaya is here!”

Natsumi laughed. “Where is Yu-”

Mari interrupted, “Nacchi, Aya is our secret guest for this year gathering and it’s all planned by Yuko.”

“Oh I see,” Natsumi murmured. She then turned to Aya and said, “Ayaya, it’s great that you’re here. I have something to talk to you about.” Aya raised her eyebrows. “It’s not really convenient to talk about it here. Let’s go to my room.”

“Ok, let’s go. Miki…where is she?” She scanned the room but she couldn’t find her friend.

“She went for a walk with Yossie,” Risa said helpfully.

“Is it? Ok…” The grin on her face vanished. Why did you take a walk with Yossie? Did you leave me here so that the 2 of you can have private time? Stop Aya. You shouldn’t suspect Miki. She loves you.

Aya and Natsumi talked about nonsensical things as they strolled towards Natsumi’s room. Once they were in the room, Natsumi locked the door and she spoke seriously, “Aya, it’s great that you’re here this year. Last year’s gathering was really quiet…”

Aya smiled. “I heard from Miki that she didn’t attend last year’s gathering.”

“Not just her. Maki as well.”

Aya flinched when she heard that person’s name. “Is it?”

“Yes, Maki said she wanted to make sure that you were fine last year after your accident.”

Why must we talk about her? She just wanted to make sure that the plan would work.
“Oh.”

“But I know that was just an excuse. She hates Morning Musume’s gathering because she feels that she doesn’t fit in. Sometimes when I put myself in her shoes, I feel sad for her. Seniors don’t talk to her because she grabs most of the limelight away from us and juniors don’t talk to her because they see her as god. It is just lonely, you know?”

“I feel that way too, Nacchi. I feel out of place in H!P sometimes.”

“Well, at least you have Miki. She doesn’t.”

She used to have me. “True.”

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Miki walked briskly into the dining room and was shocked to see her lover no longer around. “Hey, where is Aya?” she asked aloud.

Ai replied, “She went off with Nacchi.”

Nacchi? Miki raised her eyebrows. “Where did they go?”

“Nacchi’s room. Nacchi said she had something to talk to Aya about and it’s not convenient to talk about it here.”

“Thanks,” Miki replied and left the room. She remembered vaguely where Natsumi’s room was and headed for it. She wasn’t trying to be possessive over Aya and depriving her of the freedom to talk to other members but rather, she was eager to know what Natsumi wanted to talk about that was so secretive. It’s so unlike Natsumi to behave like that.

When she neared the room, she heard Natsumi mention her name. “Why are they talking about me? So Nacchi’s secret talk with Aya revolves around me?” Miki wondered. She placed her ears on the door and she could hear Aya say, “True.” What was true? Her ears were literally touching the door now as she tried her best to eavesdrop into their conversation.
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“Maki told me some time this year that you were the best person she had ever met in her life. I know she was the one who knocked you down and I’m not trying to ask you to forgive her or drop charges. I just want you to understand how she feels because this is the least I can do for her as a friend, as a senior.”

“Nacchi, you’re a nice senior.” Subconsciously, images of Maki telling her that she was the best person she had ever met came to her mind. No, I must be tougher than this. I cannot allow myself to think of those days again. It’s unfair to Miki.

“I visited her a couple of days ago and she looked really haggard and lifeless. She just seemed to be so tired of life itself and she was crying very badly. She said she regretted everything that she had done and she was sorry that she disappointed everyone in H!P, her fans and you. She wanted me to pass a message to you: ‘I made the wrong choice so I should suffer from it. Please allow me to suffer.’ I asked her why she said that but she just said you would understand. I hope you do. I don’t know why she mentioned you separately and she didn’t tell me what happened between the 2 of you but I just thought that it’s appropriate for you to know.”

Tears welled up in Aya’s eyes as she visualized how haggard and tired Maki looked when she told Natsumi all these. She must be referring to Tsunku’s letter. She probably meant that I should not drop charges so that she can suffer longer. She has been suffering so much already in there both emotionally and physically, I can tell. All along, she has been suffering from loneliness in this H!P world. ‘I only request you to allow me to continue to keep those memories of us in my heart secretly’. I can never forget this line from your letter. It just brings tears to my eyes whenever I think about it. I hate you for choosing your career over me but I never hate you as a person.

After some moments of silence, Aya spoke softly with tears streaming down her cheeks, “Nacchi, she probably meant that I shouldn’t drop the charges against her so that she can be in there longer. After you told me about what she had said, I feel that I should just drop the charges once and for all. But Miki won’t be happy, you know that? Although it is my choice, I want to make one that Miki will be happy about and not something that we get awkward whenever we talk about it.”

“Why will Miki be angry?” Natsumi asked.

Aya fell silent. I shouldn’t tell her. It’s better for her not to know so much…

“It’s ok if you don’t tell me,” Natsumi whispered. This was one of the times Aya understood why Maki enjoyed talking to Natsumi so much. She was such a great listener.

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Anger was piling up in Miki’s chest as she listened to their conversation. She thought, “Why did Aya make me sound like a bad person? Even though I hate Maki and I hate it when you cry whenever you think of her as though you miss her, I won’t stop you if you want to forgive her. I’m perfectly fine about it. Why can’t you understand how I think? I can’t stand it when people don’t know how I feel and go about rambling about their own opinion of my feelings, do you know that? I’m even more disappointed, frustrated and upset that even you do that, my dear. I thought you will understand how I feel. At least don’t go around shooting your own opinion of how I feel!”

“Miki…”

Miki turned around and was rather shocked to see who was speaking to her. “What?” she asked, her brows furrowed. I’m in no mood to entertain. Back off!

“Yossie told me the 2 of you went out for a walk because you weren’t hungry then. Is that true?”

“Yes. Anything else?” she snapped. What the shit do you want?

“You called her Hitomi, didn’t you?”

Here, I am troubled and upset over my own relationship with Aya and you come asking me all these. She could feel the anger in her growing. “So what if I did?”

Rika tried to give a defiant look. “Only I call Yossie ‘Hitomi’ and even I stopped calling her that-”

The anger in her was too much for her to take. Miki tugged Rika’s shirt and shouted, “I’ll do whatever I like. If you don’t have the ability to trust her and keep your relationship with her steady, don’t be surprised when she gets snatched by someone else sooner or later. Get me?”

 Rika started crying. “Are you trying to-” Miki had already let go of her shirt and stomped off before she could finish her sentence. “Are you trying to snatch her away?” Rika murmured to herself, “I won’t let you do that. I won’t.”

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If you forget what Tsunku's letter and Maki's mushy mushy letter are about, refer to Chap 1  (http://http:/forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=16051.msg481216#msg481216)
Don't you just hope that the unspoken words are spoken and vice versa... :roll:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tru_harmony on June 04, 2008, 02:38:13 AM
^ a king's ransom!!!

1st reply to chapter!!!!

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"Yes.” You know I treat you differently as well, right?

“That’s because I see you as someone special.”

Is she about to say what I want to say? Junjun blushed. “You’re special to me too.” 

“I admire your strong character and your courage and from time to time, when I feel down, I look at you and you give me the strength to carry on,” Aika paused before adding, “I wonder whether we can take our relationship to a higher level.”

A higher level? What does she mean? I think she is implying what I plan to say. This is too good to be true…“Of course,” Junjun spoke happily and smiled.

 Aika’s eyes brightened. “Can you be my…”

“Yes?” Lover?

“Godsister?”

 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

miki-maki-ayaya... i don't know how i should feel about them right now... really

Rika... please don't kill miki... please... there's nothing going on... really...

I'll call yossui 'hitomi' too... kill me instead! don't make things matters worse

Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: Yukari on June 04, 2008, 05:52:42 AM
rika you will have to give up and let yomiki be *dream*  :mon cute:

naah i know that it won't happen  :mon runcry: why??!!  :mon cry:

well... uf, aya part is so sad, poor maki  :mon exhaust: i want that aya drops the charges, she still loves maki??  :mon scare: (naa i really want that it could be so, and then... miki would run to yossy's harms)  :mon inluv:

no no, bad yukari! xD

waiting for next chapter!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: JFC on June 04, 2008, 06:40:00 AM
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Aika’s eyes brightened. “Can you be my…”

“Yes?” Lover?

“Godsister?”

Junjun was stunned to hear that. Her jaws dropped. She thought, “Godsister? So you see me as your godsister all along? So it’s only wishful thinking on my part, huh? I feel as though you had taken me on your wings and flew to the sky and then dropped me from the uppermost atmospheric layer.
Junjun = :cry:
Well, it's still something. At least now Junjun knows that Aika doesn't see her as only an acquaintance or regular group-mate.



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‘Junjun, people take years to realize they love each other and confess. Don’t rush into it.’ Oh man, maybe Yossie was right about it. Maybe what we need is a little more time.”
Can always hold out hope. After all, you never know. :)



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“Isn’t that Ayaya? Am I seeing wrong?” Natsumi asked as she entered the dining room.

Aya walked towards Natsumi with a silly grin plastered on her face and exclaimed, “Ayaya is here!”

Natsumi laughed. “Where is Yu-”

Mari interrupted, “Nacchi, Aya is our secret guest for this year gathering and it’s all planned by Yuko.”

“Oh I see,” Natsumi murmured. She then turned to Aya and said, “Ayaya, it’s great that you’re here. I have something to talk to you about.” Aya raised her eyebrows. “It’s not really convenient to talk about it here. Let’s go to my room.”
Eeps.  :O




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Aya smiled. “I heard from Miki that she didn’t attend last year’s gathering.”

“Not just her. Maki as well.”

...

“But I know that was just an excuse. She hates Morning Musume’s gathering because she feels that she doesn’t fit in. Sometimes when I put myself in her shoes, I feel sad for her. Seniors don’t talk to her because she grabs most of the limelight away from us and juniors don’t talk to her because they see her as god. It is just lonely, you know?”
Oh really now? Maki not liking being in MM? That's a twist.




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“I feel that way too, Nacchi. I feel out of place in H!P sometimes.”

“Well, at least you have Miki. She doesn’t.”

She used to have me. “True.”
K, are we going to be feeling sorry for Maki?



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When she neared the room, she heard Natsumi mention her name. “Why are they talking about me? So Nacchi’s secret talk with Aya revolves around me?” Miki wondered. She placed her ears on the door and she could hear Aya say, “True.” What was true? Her ears were literally touching the door now as she tried her best to eavesdrop into their conversation.
Misunderstanding coming up.



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“I visited her a couple of days ago and she looked really haggard and lifeless. She just seemed to be so tired of life itself and she was crying very badly. She said she regretted everything that she had done and she was sorry that she disappointed everyone in H!P, her fans and you. She wanted me to pass a message to you: ‘I made the wrong choice so I should suffer from it. Please allow me to suffer.’ I asked her why she said that but she just said you would understand. I hope you do. I don’t know why she mentioned you separately and she didn’t tell me what happened between the 2 of you but I just thought that it’s appropriate for you to know.”
Ummm...okay...


...


Nice to see that Maki's taking responsibilty for her part in all of this, but holy frak can Nacchi make it sound any more sappy/depressing?




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Anger was piling up in Miki’s chest as she listened to their conversation. She thought, “Why did Aya make me sound like a bad person? Even though I hate Maki and I hate it when you cry whenever you think of her as though you miss her, I won’t stop you if you want to forgive her. I’m perfectly fine about it. Why can’t you understand how I think? I can’t stand it when people don’t know how I feel and go about rambling about their own opinion of my feelings, do you know that? I’m even more disappointed, frustrated and upset that even you do that, my dear. I thought you will understand how I feel. At least don’t go around shooting your own opinion of how I feel!”
Oh this isn't good.

/me facepalms.



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*MIKI-RIKA TALK*
Yeah...not good at all.

/me facepalms with both hands.
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tito on June 04, 2008, 09:00:15 AM
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miki-maki-ayaya... i don't know how i should feel about them right now... really
Maybe you will feel something about them soon. Really soon.  :P

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Rika... please don't kill miki... please... there's nothing going on... really...

I'll call yossui 'hitomi' too... kill me instead! don't make things matters worse
It's the Rika version of "Please punish me!" :lol:

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rika you will have to give up and let yomiki be *dream* 

naah i know that it won't happen  why??!! 
It's FYI after all (FUJI-YOSSI-ISHI) Hmm why not? Anything is possible  :P
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well... uf, aya part is so sad, poor maki  i want that aya drops the charges, she still loves maki??  (naa i really want that it could be so, and then... miki would run to yossy's harms) 
You are such a big Yomiki fan! You can twist the story in 1000000 ways to end up Yomiki :lol:

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* JFC facepalms.

* JFC facepalms with both hands.
:wahaha: I promise the same thing in Gomattou won't happen here. In my opinion, it makes things far worse than that :cry:

When I wrote Chap 10, I found some parts really funny when I visualised it. Just want to share:
1. Junjun talking with the toothbrush in her mouth
2. The smacking butt part
3. Nacchi talking seriously  :lol:
4. Maki tortured and wounded (not very funny maybe  ;) )
5. Rika saying only she could call Yossi Hitomi
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tru_harmony on June 04, 2008, 09:23:44 AM
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Rika... please don't kill miki... please... there's nothing going on... really...
I'll call yossui 'hitomi' too... kill me instead! don't make things matters worse
It's the Rika version of "Please punish me!"

Charmy-sama, with your rabu-rabu mercy, smite me!!! (http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff133/onionethan/onion_Emoticons/015_orz.gif)

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It's FYI after all (FUJI-YOSSI-ISHI) Hmm why not? Anything is possible

that's a possibility i am very willing to entertain... as long as nobody is killed by rika (except me, perhaps)... that's all that matters to me now...

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1. Junjun talking with the toothbrush in her mouth
2. The smacking butt part
3. Nacchi talking seriously 
 

now that you mentioned it, i visualized it too...  :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: cierl03 on June 04, 2008, 10:21:20 AM
Nice chapter!!  :D
argh mikiii.... if you don't say how you feel and just keep it in your heart nobody will understand!! even Aya!!!
i'm really hating rika right now  :twisted:

GAM foreverrr :P:P
(AyaMiki or AyaMaki?) hehehehehehe....

can't wait for your next chapter!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tito on June 04, 2008, 10:51:06 AM
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Charmy-sama, with your rabu-rabu mercy, smite me!!!
:rofl: :rofl: BE MERCILESS!
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that's a possibility i am very willing to entertain... as long as nobody is killed by rika (except me, perhaps)... that's all that matters to me now...
*Pass the knife to Rika* j/k  :lol: *Start to PRAY :mon pray2:*
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GAM foreverrr :P
(AyaMiki or AyaMaki?) hehehehehehe....
Haha, just realise everyone is asking for different pairings. Moi is confused :? I haven't thought of how to end it yet although I have a pretty good idea how to go about screwing everyone up  :D

@tru_harmony: Don't be angry. I haven't started writing the next chapter yet  :angry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 04, 2008, 11:32:34 AM
How about asking for ANOTHER different pair... Miki/Maki PUHLEASE!? :wub: :P
Aya can end up with no one for all I care... I don't like this Aya :mad:

But don't think that means your writing is bad coz it doesn't! It means the opposite seeing I know enough about the character to have a passionate disliking of them (didn't come out how I wanted it to :lol: ) ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tru_harmony on June 04, 2008, 12:13:26 PM
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@tru_harmony: Don't be angry. I haven't started writing the next chapter yet

i'll never get angry at you, dear... just keep on writing...

but please keep that knife away from Rika... i'm not done with my fic yet...:lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: sweeety on June 04, 2008, 01:20:05 PM
yeah we hope that the unspoken words are spoken and vice versa. ..... What is wrong with you? YOU are ruining these great couples! XD

 ook, seriously, how can this GAM have problems? I do not condone this behaviour! Aya should know all about Miki, they should get over the Maki thing, and lastly, they should be together happily. And now that Miki snapped at Rika, she is soo gonna go out for blood, we all know that. Damn you Miki, Aya, Yoshi and Rika, why are you soooooooooo stupid? Aargh!

  Also, Aya, stop hiding behind Miki! It's not her that you are worried about, it's yourself. Miki told you already that she wants you to choose, not what she wants but what you want. She wanted Aya to make the desicion she wants not the desicion she wants.. confusin much XD

 Miki miki miki! You my poor dear are turning into Yoshi now.. takingg it out on Rika, but even you don't know what will happen next. And why should you? You aren't psychic. But I must say, she is a little more justified in yelling at her, although another person has just yelled the wrong thing. They need a visit from Dr. Love!!!!!! *transforms into fanfic character created by self yet used on normal classes as alias, Dr Love*

 DRL: OK EVERYONE SETTLE DOWN! WE ARE ABOUT TO START! Now let's start with you Rika, and remember, you have to be honest, ok, did you have anything to do with Miki's so called accident?
 R: no
 DRL: Hear that Yoshi? She had nothing to do with it, now stop blaming her for it because we all know it is true as you are all hooked into lie detectors -DUM DUM DUUUUM!~-
 Y: I'm Soory I didn't believe you Rika, would you please frgive me?
 R: Only if we have some sex after the show!
 Y: DEAL!

 DRL: Now onto the next thing, Yoshi. Now, tell us how you really feel towards Miki
 Y: Well I think she's hot
 R: YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!!!!!
 Y: LLET ME FINISH
 DRL: Let her finish....you can kill her later....in bed........with a camera perhaps  :twisted: now Yoshizawa, answer the question
 Y: I really like her, and think she is the shit, but I am not in love with her and donn't think of her in that way. The only one I want to be with is you Rika! *Beeeeeeeeeeeep*
 DRL: A LIE!!!!!!!!
 Y: Ok........you and Marilyn Monroe, but we all know that's not gonna happen
 DRL: that's a good point.
 Y: Nah im kidding, I want to be with you in that way but I also want Miki as a friend. She has been very nice to me, and she even forgave me. So please, let me be yours and let her be our friend.. you know I only have eyes for you, but I need to have some friends of my own as well.
 R: I guess I understand that.....it makes sense.... ok, she can be your friend..and if you're good to me, she might even make it into our bedroom
 Y: YOU MEAN?:twisted:
 R:   :pimp:
 Y:  :shocked: .............................. :cow:
 DRL: OK BEFORE OUR VIEWERS GET OFF WATCHING YOU ARGUE ABOUT WHO YOU'RE HAVING THREESOMES WITH OR NOT, WE'LL MOVE ONTO OUR NEXT COUPLE BUT before we do, Yoshi tell us about those fights, then you Rika
 Y: I never meant those things I said, I wish I hadn't said them and I am so sory I slapped you... I can never get over what I did to you and I am soo sory!  :'(
 R: IM sory. IM sory I was so suspicious and that I didn't believe you and spent all my time thinking you didn't want me. Im sory because I brought this onto us and I forgive everything you did as long as you forgive what I did.
 Y: Agreed  :)

DRL: Another happy couple! Aren't you happy tito? What's that? You can't talk because I've bound and gagged you? AWWW WELL you should have thought of that before you started part two!!!!! Now, Miki do you love Aya and vice versa?
 
 M: Of course I love her!I freakin nearly died for her HellooooOO~
 A: I love her too! She nearly died for me HeloOOO~!
 M: baby, dont do that please
 A: Do what?
 M: Copy me
 A: Ok
 M: Huh?
 A: Huh?
 M: HEY
 A: HEY
 M: STOP IT!
 A: STOP IT!
 DRL: OK STOP IT U TOO! WE'RE GONNA HAVE A SHORT BRAKE YOU GUYS! WE'LL BE BACK SOON ON JPHIP! STAY TUNED! (whispers) stop fighting you two, aren't you lovers? And you two! You don't have to start screwing on the set. Wait till you get home! RIKA KEEP IT IN YOUR PANTS! OK CREW, SEND SOMEONE OVER WITH A SPATULA, I NEED TO PEEL THESE TWO APART! HEY STOP DRAGGING THE OTHER TWO IN YOUR BIG ORGY WE HAVEN'T RESOLVED THEIR PROBLEMS!!!!!!!!!! MIKI PUT THAT BACK ON! YOU TOO AYA!! Ok I think we have finished today's segment. This show isn't going as well as I'd hhoped. We'll be back with another fic perhaps, if we're not fired!!!! KYAAH~! RIKA LET GO I DONT WANNA JOOIN! IDONTWANNAJOINIDONTWANNAJOINIDONTWANNAJOINIDONTWANNAJOINIDONTWANNAJOINIDONTWANNAJOINIDONTWANNAJOINIDONTWANNAJOIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HELP ME SOMEBODY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ooh on the upside Tito is finally free...and holding a...............NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

End transmition. Camera brakes, Crew flees the building terified, leaving poor Dr Love alone with those maniacs...  :cry:
 (btw she was holding a whip)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tru_harmony on June 04, 2008, 01:27:03 PM
^nice segment there, Dr. Love... wanna write a whole fic about it?

@tito: please get the knife out... i need to stab myself... rika+orgy=GGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 04, 2008, 01:28:08 PM
Ok so we now have the end of F.Y.I thanks to sweeety... I like this ending too... They should also be strapped to a mild electric chair so the others can electrocute them when they don't like someone's answer :D (stolen from the Simpsons!)

Wait... You just said no to joining in with them!? :rofl: That alone makes you very unique sweeety dear :P

Thanks for writing tito, nice ending there ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tito on June 04, 2008, 01:42:31 PM
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How about asking for ANOTHER different pair... Miki/Maki PUHLEASE!?
Aya can end up with no one for all I care... I don't like this Aya

But don't think that means your writing is bad coz it doesn't! It means the opposite seeing I know enough about the character to have a passionate disliking of them (didn't come out how I wanted it to )
Yeah, got your point! You make me happy :D Miki/Maki? Woo, that's new :D

@sweeety, you cracked me up (as always :lol: ) I wanted to quote something but then, it will be everything  XD I'm inserted into my own fic! But AT LEAST, give me a chance to grope one of them and have fun! :) I give you the exclusive right to write alternative cracky endings now and then (because I know you will want to slap me and bound me and kill me pretty soon. ) It's EXCLUSIVE :P
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@tito: please get the knife out... i need to stab myself... rika+orgy=GGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
Tsk..you're fantasizing...Rika, smite her! I don't care, I'll just pass Rika the knife and see what she will do with you!  :twisted: sweeety, you can add tru_harmony in as well   :oops:

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Ok so we now have the end of F.Y.I thanks to sweeety... I like this ending too... They should also be strapped to a mild electric chair so the others can electrocute them when they don't like someone's answer  (stolen from the Simpsons!)

Wait... You just said no to joining in with them!? That alone makes you very unique sweeety dear

Thanks for writing tito, nice ending there
Because it's TV or else sweeety will grope everyone. She doesn't want to get killed by ishiyoshi + GAM fans *points at tru_harmony* :twisted:
NO!!! THIS IS TOO HAPPY TO BE REAL! I haven't inserted the angst yet! :cry:  :cry: Just when I'm writing Chap 11, it ENDED :cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 04, 2008, 02:00:53 PM
Miki/Maki isn't new to me :)
I think i have only read about them once but who wouldn't want to read about FujiGoto
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c319/lollipop_girl_/MikiandMaki.jpg)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tru_harmony on June 04, 2008, 02:58:09 PM
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Tsk..you're fantasizing...Rika, smite her! I don't care, I'll just pass Rika the knife and see what she will do with you!  :twisted:  sweeety, you can add tru_harmony in as well :oops:

*runs for dear life...* charmy-sama, mercy!!!!

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Because it's TV or else sweeety will grope everyone. She doesn't want to get killed by ishiyoshi + GAM fans *points at tru_harmony*

no groping at me please...

... i hope you write chapter 11 soon... i wouldn't want to hold anymore hostages here...

keep the ishiyoshi flame burning...
Title: Re: F.Y.I.10 - Unspoken Words
Post by: tito on June 04, 2008, 03:23:05 PM
@lollipopgirl: If only you have read the initial ending for Gomattou (not really an ending coz I was stuck at that dumb chap..oh well..) Maki is not looking at the cam in that pic..I wonder what she is looking at  :roll:

@Dr. Love: :lol: Get back to job! :P

Initially I wanted to post this up tomorrow but because of the hostage, it's up now!  XD @tru_harmony: 4.5!

F.Y.I

Chapter 11

Exclusive

December 7 (9.45am)

The girls were now in the garden for the last activity of Morning Musume gathering 07. Yuko addressed them, “Girls, this is the last activity for this year gathering. After lunch, you’re free to go. I hope you have enjoyed yourself this year. Now I pass the time to Kei who is in charge of this final segment. Let’s make the finale a great one!”

Kei nodded and announced, “This game is called SPEED and whoever is the fastest in each round of SPEED will win. At the end of the game, we will tally the scores and the person who emerges as overall champion will win an amazing prize! Of course you can choose to opt out but that means you will have a lower chance of winning. Without further a do, the game shall start and the first round is: SPEED at eating watermelons with bare hands!”

Sayumi and Kusumi screamed “USO” in unison.

Sayumi said, “It’s disgusting to eat watermelons with hands!” She pouted.

Kei smiled and said, “Ok, whoever dares to play, step forward.”

“Hey, Fujimoto, are you playing?” Miki, who was dazing at one side, was rather surprised to hear someone speak to her. Miki shook her head without even looking at the person talking to her. “Don’t you want to win?”

Miki replied flatly, “Sorry, I’m in no mood to play kiddy game. What about you, futsal captain?”

“Miki-tan, I’m Aya-chan!” Aya exclaimed.

Shocked, Miki turned to look at Aya who was grinning from ear to ear. She asked, “Why did you call me Fujimoto?”

“I thought it was fun…”

“Are you playing?” Aya nodded.

“Go ahead then, I don’t feel like playing now. Enjoy yourself.” Miki tried to sound cheerful. She watched Aya leap off towards the grass patch whereby the watermelons were placed and shook her head. Why did I feel so weird when you called me Fujimoto? Wait, why is ‘Fujimoto’ exclusive for Yossie anyway? She is just a friend. She’s not Aya who has the exclusive right to call me ‘Miki-tan’. 

“Fujimoto, are you okay?”

This time round, Miki turned around to face the person who talked to her before speaking. “I’m fine.”

“You’re obviously not. What happened?” Yossie asked out of concern.

“Nothing.”

“Tell me.”

Miki fell silent. I need to get all those thoughts out of my system before I flare up like just now. Shit, I shouldn’t have shouted at Rika. Anyway Yossie will understand better than anyone else. Miki spoke softly, “I overheard Nacchi and Aya’s conversation just now. Aya made me sound like an evil person who finds joy in seeing the pathetic and tortured Goto Maki suffer, you know? She said that I will be angry if she drops the charges against her but that’s not how I feel. I’m perfectly fine about it. Why the hell did she go around telling people her own opinion of how I feel? If it’s someone else, I won’t be so upset. But it’s Aya! It’s my lover!”

Yossie thought for a while before she asked, “Are you really perfectly fine about it?” Miki nodded. “Look at me in the eyes, are you really fine about it? You won’t scold Aya or anyone even if Maki tries to patch up with Aya in the future, will you?”

Miki hesitated. All along, she was confident that even if Maki tried to patch up with Aya, Aya would still stay faithful to her. After all, she almost lost her life to seek justice for Aya. But now, for the first time since the start of their romance, she was uncertain. Perhaps it was the way Yossie phrased it or maybe it was because of what Aya said to Natsumi earlier. She was uncertain about how strong their relationship was and their future. “I don’t know,” she conceded.

“Fujimoto, look at me in the eyes,” Yossie spoke seriously. Miki did as told. “It’s just a matter of time when she gets out. Unless Aya and you elope, there is a possibility that will happen.”

“I know that Yossie.”

“I don’t know whether I’m in the correct position to say this. Forgive her. Let her out. Drop the charges. I know deep inside you don’t really trust me because after all, Maki and I were partners in crime,” Yossie paused before she sighed and added, “I would prefer it to be partners in bed but well…”

Miki couldn’t help but to laugh. You, big flirt, can crack me up so easily even when I am feeling so frustrated and confused inside. How on earth can you joke in the middle of such a serious conversation? “Justify.”

“She’s pretty much a victim in it. She was our scapegoat. If you talk about punishments for the sins we have committed, I think I should be punished longer than her.” Tears welled up in her eyes as she spoke.

Miki nodded. She wanted to wipe off those tears that were surging their way out of her eyes but she held back. It just didn’t seem quite correct for her to do that. “Thanks Yossie, I know what to do. Anyway, you’re not that bad of a person. ” Miki paused for a while before adding, “In fact, you’re quite a good friend.”

Yossie smiled and held Miki’s hands. “Thanks, maybe Aya sees Maki as a friend as well.”

“Hope so.”

“Miki-tan! I won!” Aya exclaimed as she ran towards Miki. The initial grin on her face vanished when she saw Yossie holding Miki’s hands. “Sorry for interrupting your conversation,” Aya murmured and walked off.

“Yossie, I have to go as you can see. Thanks, you’re great company!” Miki patted Yossie on the shoulders before she chased after Aya.

Yossie gazed at the girl who was chasing after her lover. She murmured, “Thank you for forgiving me and seeing me as a good friend, Fujimoto. You are a nice person too.”

When Miki caught up with Aya, she said, “Aya, Yossie and I were just talking about Goto!” I should be honest and I should go straight to my point as always or else Aya might suspect Yossie and I were dating or something. Honesty is the best policy.

Aya turned around and asked, “Goto? What did the 2 of you talk about?”   

‘She told me to forgive her and let her out and drop the charges.’ No, Aya will think that I’m obeying her words. I should talk about something else. “Aya, what do you feel about Goto?”

Aya thought about the conversation she just had with Natsumi. I pity her a lot but how will you feel if I tell you that? You will probably scream at me again. “You have forgiven Yossie, haven’t you?”

“Sort of.”

“She was one of the key players in that project, you know and-”

Miki interjected, “Goto wasn’t a key player, I know that. Have you forgiven her?”

Aya nodded. She added quickly, “If you don’t want me to drop the charges, I won’t. After all you-”

“Aya, let’s drop it.”

Drop the topic? Why do you forgive Yossie and refuse to forgive Maki? Is it because of our relationship? But it’s over between us! Why are you so selfish? “We shouldn’t have even talked about her in the first place,” Aya murmured.

“I mean drop the charges.”

Bewildered, Aya’s eyes widened. “Are you sure?”

Miki nodded. “Just don’t ever go to bed with her again.”

Aya laughed. “I’m exclusive to you since that day when you confessed to me, don’t you know that?”

Miki hugged Aya and kissed her on the lips. When their lips parted, Miki whispered, “I love you, Aya-chan. Let’s trust each other more from now on.”

Aya tried to shake the image of Miki and Yossie holding hands out of her mind. “I love you, Miki-tan. Let’s build trust.”

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December 7 (2.03pm)

Ai emerged as the champion for SPEED and it was no surprise as she was daring enough to do most of the things which included mopping the corridor and reading a paragraph backwards. It was also to no one’s surprise that the ‘amazing prize’ was Morning Musume’s latest single’s Mikan. After lunch, the girls were officially dismissed from the eventful gathering. Morning Musume left as a group, the 2nd and 1st generations left together and GAM sneaked off on their own. Yossie looked around but she couldn’t find Rika anywhere in the villa. “Rika, where are you?” Yossie murmured. She took out her phone and dialed Rika’s number but it was engaged.

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“Hello, it’s Rika here.”

“Oh. Hi Rika.”

“I know you hate Fujimoto Miki especially her attitude. I have a plan to tame her and I hope you can join me.”

“Sorry, I won’t injure or kill anyone.”

“Relax. I don’t plan to kill anyone. I just want to tame her.”

“Not even injuring anyone?”

“Nope.”

“Ok, count me in.”

 :mon fyeah:
Next chapter will be 2 weeks later. I mean 2 weeks after the gathering..(Just feel like adding this in  :lol: )
Title: Re: F.Y.I.11 - Exclusive
Post by: tru_harmony on June 04, 2008, 03:53:52 PM
^ i'm not sure if i can make it... tomorrow's pretty jam packed! don't feel pressured to write quickly... please...

the hostages are fine... no need to rescue them just yet...

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“I know you hate Fujimoto Miki especially her attitude. I have a plan to tame her and I hope you can join me.”

“Sorry, I won’t injure or kill anyone.”

“Relax. I don’t plan to kill anyone. I just want to tame her.”

“Not even injuring anyone?”

“Nope.”

nobody's gonna get killed! yay! rika is safe!

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“Aya, let’s drop it.”

Drop the topic? Why do you forgive Yossie and refuse to forgive Maki? Is it because of our relationship? But it’s over between us! Why are you so selfish? “We shouldn’t have even talked about her in the first place,” Aya murmured.

“I mean drop the charges.”

Bewildered, Aya’s eyes widened. “Are you sure?”

Miki nodded. “Just don’t ever go to bed with her again.”

Aya laughed. “I’m exclusive to you since that day when you confessed to me, don’t you know that?”

Miki hugged Aya and kissed her on the lips. When their lips parted, Miki whispered, “I love you, Aya-chan. Let’s trust each other more from now on.”

Aya tried to shake the image of Miki and Yossie holding hands out of her mind. “I love you, Miki-tan. Let’s build trust.”

there... see how easy it is to communicate?

yossui, rika... you're next!!!
 
Title: Re: F.Y.I.11 - Exclusive
Post by: ringo-hime on June 04, 2008, 06:03:31 PM
OMG who is this who called rika?!!  :twisted:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.11 - Exclusive
Post by: Yukari on June 04, 2008, 08:59:37 PM
wojojo i'm happy!!  :mon inluv:

poor ayaya... but yomiki   :mon bleed2:

tito i love you (like a fan xD) and your fanfic :mon love:

waiting next chapter!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.11 - Exclusive
Post by: wings4dreams on June 04, 2008, 11:45:09 PM
 :wahaha: @ JunJun being asked to be godsisters by Aika!!  :rofl: :rofl: I'm dying..no wait  :imdead: This was too funny!!  *sobers* um, is it wrong to laugh at someone else's pain?  Sorry JunJun, but  :lol:

I'm glad GAM has done so well in communicating it shows that their relationship is strong...hmm...but is it strong enough to over come both of the girls' attractions to Maki and Yossy? 

oooo~ yeah! looks like a Rika and Eri partnership is blooming...things just got a little more difficult for Miki...
Title: Re: F.Y.I.11 - Exclusive
Post by: tito on June 05, 2008, 02:23:57 AM
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the hostages are fine... no need to rescue them just yet...
Now my turn to take hostage :D
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there... see how easy it is to communicate?
yossui, rika... you're next!!!
:roll: Hmm...
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OMG who is this who called rika?!!
It's actually who Rika called  ;) Up for guess  :lol:
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poor ayaya... but yomiki   
Even if there aren't scenes of Yomiki, will you still love me?  :shy1:
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tito i love you (like a fan xD) and your fanfic
I'm so happy!  :usagiii: Feel like flying to the sky and never come back to land again..
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I'm dying..no wait   This was too funny!!  *sobers* um, is it wrong to laugh at someone else's pain?  Sorry JunJun, but
Don't die! I still need readers!  :P
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I'm glad GAM has done so well in communicating it shows that their relationship is strong...hmm...but is it strong enough to over come both of the girls' attractions to Maki and Yossy?

oooo~ yeah! looks like a Rika and Eri partnership is blooming...things just got a little more difficult for Miki...
I love your comments. They always come at great timing! :wub:

I don't think I can finish the next chapter before I leave the house  :( Anyway, I will try! Probably it will be up tonight.

Dr love, where are you?  :roll:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: tito on June 05, 2008, 03:59:30 AM
This is a comparatively shorter chapter..I hope it has its impact on you  :P Now, I'm officially late for the appointment but who cares?

F.Y.I

Chapter 12

Haunt

December 22 (2.45am)

“denwa mo mada konai  YEAH! MEERU mo mada konai YEAH…”


Aya stirred in her sleep and grumbled, “Miki-tan, I love Boogie Train but don’t sing it in the middle of the night. You freak me out.”

“hashiridasenai koi no BUGII TOREIN”

Miki murmured, “I’m not singing it. It’s your freaking ringing tone.”

Aya could barely open her eyes. She felt for her handphone on the side table and grabbed the rectangular object. She wanted to scream at the caller for disturbing their sleep. Who would that person be anyway? The caller’s number wasn’t reflected on the screen of her phone. She recalled the rule of thumb that is never to pick up when you are unsure who the caller is. She pressed the reject button, threw the phone on the side-table and lay beside Miki once more.

“Who is that?” Miki asked. Her eyes were still closed.

“I don’t know. Let’s get back to sleep.”

“denwa mo mada konai  YEAH! MEERU mo mada…”


“Aya-chan! Your stupid phone is ringing again!” Miki screamed. They had only fallen asleep about an hour ago after having ‘fun’ on bed and it was frustrating to be woken up by a phone call rather than the person next to her. This time round, she was fully awake. She sat up, leaned against the bed frame with her arms folded. Aya sat up as well and reached for her phone. The caller’s number wasn’t reflected again. Aya hesitated. “Just pick it up!”

Aya pressed the receive button and prayed that it was someone she knew. She smiled and asked as politely as she could, “Hello, who is this?” This was the only line she spoke to that caller for the entire phone call and after exactly 1 minute, she hung up and her face was white.

“Who was that? What did that person say?” Miki asked out of concern. Aya gazed blankly at the girl with the long curly hair beside her and trembled slightly. “Aya-chan, tell me what did that person say,” Miki whispered and she was staring straight into Aya’s eyes.

Aya tried to keep her mind off what that caller had said earlier. She shook her head and tried to smile. “Nothing much. Let’s get back to sleep.”

Miki frowned. “Are you sure?”

Aya nodded before she pressed her lips against Miki’s. 
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December 23 (8.31am)

“Aya-chan! The mails have arrived!” Miki exclaimed as she ran into Aya’s apartment.

“Where did you go, Miki-tan?”

“I went to buy breakfast from that auntie down the street. Oh, I collected your mails as well.”

Aya hugged Miki and kissed her on the lips. Dropping the breakfast and mails on the floor, Miki placed her hands on Aya’s hips and moved their way up. After a few minutes their lips parted and Miki whispered, “Aya-chan, will we ever get tired of these?”

“Never.” Aya winked suggestively.

Miki looked at the analogue clock on the dining table and exclaimed, “Shit! I got a photoshoot in an hour’s time. No more lazing around in Ayaya’s house.” Miki pouted.

“We shall have Part 2 at Mikitty’s place,” Aya whispered into her ears.

“Definitely. I will go and change first. You can eat first if you like,” Miki said as she walked towards the bedroom.

“Do you think that the breakfast will still be intact after you threw it down just now?”

Miki laughed. “If it’s not, you can have me for breakfast.”

Aya laughed. She picked up her mails from the floor and was shocked to see that there were quite a number of personal mails. She didn’t have a lot of friends outside H!P and those H!P friends wouldn’t be bothered to write her letters since they saw each other pretty often. “Maybe they are Christmas greetings,” she thought to herself. She opened the mails and read the letters one by one. As she read through them, her face turned white, horrified. She crushed each letter up and threw them straight into the bin after she read each of them. She thought, “Miki-tan, should I tell you? But the contents are just too…I don’t know how you will react to them.”

Miki dashed out of the bedroom and shouted in a high-pitch voice, “Aya-chan, I’m done! Are you waiting for your breakfast?”

Aya laughed. Maybe it is better that she doesn’t know. “I’m getting hungry…” Aya moaned.
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December 23 (9.31am)

She stepped out of the huge gate. For the first time in many days, she looked up at the early winter’s sun and smiled. It felt good to be free once again. Never in her life had she seen freedom as something of such great importance. She thought about what had happened over the past year. It had been a roller-coaster ride of hatred, jealousy, guilt and love for her. She swore to herself, “I, Goto Maki, will never be back here again.”

*****
:twisted:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: heyyouhiya on June 05, 2008, 04:10:24 AM
ehhhh???
Whats going on with Ayas letters and phone calls!
I wanna know
skip your damn appointment and write another chapter lol
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: ringo-hime on June 05, 2008, 05:19:05 AM
mystery calls and mails...

OMG. Goto is back.. XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: Yukari on June 05, 2008, 05:39:48 AM
OMG!!! maki is back!!  :muffin: :muffin: :muffin: party party  :muffin: :muffin: :muffin:

maki you will fight for aya!!!  :mon determined: *dream*

miki will be so jealousy, that she can't help to broke up with aya and go to yossy's harms  :mon inluv: *dreamagain*

wojojojojo

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poor ayaya... but yomiki   
Even if there aren't scenes of Yomiki, will you still love me?  :shy1:

i don't know... naaa it's a joke, i love whatever you write i think  :mon sweat:


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tito i love you (like a fan xD) and your fanfic
I'm so happy!  :usagiii: Feel like flying to the sky and never come back to land again..

nonono, you MIGHT to come back, you have to write!!  :mon determined:

waiting next chapter!! :mon geek:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: JFC on June 05, 2008, 06:05:00 AM
Chapter 11
H!P speed-eating watermelons? I'd love to see that. :lol:



Chapter 12
Am I the only one who's worried about that phone call? :?

And why do I get the feeling that all those letters were from the same, specific person?


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December 23 (9.31am)

She stepped out of the huge gate. For the first time in many days, she looked up at the early winter’s sun and smiled. It felt good to be free once again. Never in her life had she seen freedom as something of such great importance. She thought about what had happened over the past year. It had been a roller-coaster ride of hatred, jealousy, guilt and love for her. She swore to herself, “I, Goto Maki, will never be back here again.”
Oooooooooooooooooooooh...so that's what the phone call was about. :O
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: sweeety on June 05, 2008, 12:43:41 PM
OMG I Can't believe she let her out and didn't tell Miki! Wwhat did she think? that she wouldn't find oout? She's freakin famous! ARgh! I think dr love might come back and slap her a bit with a large trout. I knew she was doing something like that. It explains all the mails and such. It was probably people asking her to drop the charges or thanking her for doing it.  Dammit Aya, she already told you you had her support no matter what youu didl. Instead of assuring her that you will be with her regardless of whether she stays in jail or not you go behind her back and free her. That's gonna give herr the opposite message. She might even think that she is doing it to run away with her. She might even become violent :'( Oh ayaya, why'd you have to go and make a mess like that? Why'd you have to go and make the best things in life so hard~! *sweeety breaks into song*
WHy'd you have to go and make her hurt so bad?
Why'd you have to go and kill Miki? owohhh Kii~ll Miki!

 XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: tito on June 05, 2008, 01:50:20 PM
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ehhhh???
Whats going on with Ayas letters and phone calls!
I wanna know
skip your damn appointment and write another chapter lol
Be patient..I'll work on the next chapter after I finish my homework *pray that I can understand mole concept* That appointment was nice. While waiting for the bus, I had some inspirations  :roll: :oops:
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OMG. Goto is back..  XD
VS
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OMG!!! maki is back!!     party party 
:lol: dream harder than that! :mon innocent:   
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nonono, you MIGHT to come back, you have to write!!
Ok, I just fell back to earth.  :wub: Might fly again... :squirrel:
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Oooooooooooooooooooooh...so that's what the phone call was about. :O
Not quite... :wub:
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OMG I Can't believe she let her out and didn't tell Miki! Wwhat did she think? that she wouldn't find oout? She's freakin famous! ARgh! I think dr love might come back and slap her a bit with a large trout.
She did tell Miki... :hehehe:
 
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I knew she was doing something like that. It explains all the mails and such. It was probably people asking her to drop the charges or thanking her for doing it.

Not quite... :wub:
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Dammit Aya, she already told you you had her support no matter what youu didl. Instead of assuring her that you will be with her regardless of whether she stays in jail or not you go behind her back and free her.

It's a matter of time when she gets out of it..
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WHy'd you have to go and make her hurt so bad?
Why'd you have to go and kill Miki? owohhh Kii~ll Miki!
'Her' refering to Maki? Kill Miki?? :?

*stares around* My turn to hold hostages! :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: cierl03 on June 05, 2008, 03:09:14 PM
WAAAAAWWWW!!! chapter 12 was really cool!!

what's in the mails & phone calls???  XD XD XD

goto maki is back, yeah!
i'd like her to fight for aya, or even just shake their relationsip a bit... but i dun want her to end up with Aya... >_<
I Love GAM too much hahaha.... so i prefer GREAT AYA MIKI  :P

i'm guessing rika called reina? or maybe eri?
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: kRisZ on June 05, 2008, 05:54:05 PM
wow, I have 4 unread pages... I'll be back tomorrow to read 'em... I'm just so  :mon tweaker: atm
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 05, 2008, 06:22:32 PM
Hmmm, I'm guessing the phone call and mail are from Rika (with a voice distorter of course) or the chick Rika is plotting with... Rather then physically hurting Miki, she's just threatening Miki's life through Aya in hopes Aya will be pushed towards her and not let her go thus Miki can't hook up with Yossy... But Gocchin coming back may ruin that plan ;)

As much as I don't like Aya in this, I hope she ends up with Maki! Miki deserves better... WAIT!?!?!
End result: Miki with Yossy, Aya with Rika :lol: and Maki helps Reina get out of jail and 'tames her' falls in love with her and Eri runs into the arms of Sayu for comfort.... Now THAT is better! :heart:

Plus I can't wait for what you promised me in a few chapters, you better deliver  :twisted:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: tito on June 06, 2008, 02:49:57 AM
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WAAAAAWWWW!!! chapter 12 was really cool!!
Thanks :wub:
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i'd like her to fight for aya, or even just shake their relationsip a bit... but i dun want her to end up with Aya... >_<
I Love GAM too much hahaha.... so i prefer GREAT AYA MIKI
Cool, just waiting for someone to request this pairing XD
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i'm guessing rika called reina? or maybe eri?
No comments but reina is still in jail
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ow, I have 4 unread pages... I'll be back tomorrow to read 'em... I'm just so   atm
Take your time  :P
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Hmmm, I'm guessing the phone call and mail are from Rika (with a voice distorter of course) or the chick Rika is plotting with... Rather then physically hurting Miki, she's just threatening Miki's life through Aya in hopes Aya will be pushed towards her and not let her go thus Miki can't hook up with Yossy... But Gocchin coming back may ruin that plan
:shifty:
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As much as I don't like Aya in this, I hope she ends up with Maki! Miki deserves better... WAIT!?!?!
End result: Miki with Yossy, Aya with Rika and Maki helps Reina get out of jail and 'tames her' falls in love with her and Eri runs into the arms of Sayu for comfort.... Now THAT is better!
Another pairing not requested yet (Rika and Aya :lol: )
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Plus I can't wait for what you promised me in a few chapters, you better deliver 
I fitted it in in my plan for chap 21 but if possible, I can add it in earlier  :w00t:

tru_harmony is posting so fast..I guess I'll not study in the morning and finish up chap 13  ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 06, 2008, 03:01:38 AM
Another pairing not requested yet (Rika and Aya :lol: )
I'm good at those ;)

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I fitted it in in my plan for chap 21 but if possible, I can add it in earlier  :w00t:

tru_harmony is posting so fast..I guess I'll not study in the morning and finish up chap 13  ;)
Wow you really do plan ahead well... I'll be sitting in this thread waiting for chapter 21 now (or an earlier 'appearance')... btw, I like being secretive like this :lol:

Who needs study when we have H!P fanfics to be written :D :heart:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.12 - Haunt
Post by: tru_harmony on June 06, 2008, 03:13:08 AM
pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaassssssse study... i wouldn't want to ruin your education!!!!

and don't rush it...

i'm only posting fast today to make up for yesterday... i still owe you chapters!!!!!!!!!!!

GGGGGGGAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: F.Y.I.13 - Fate of GAM
Post by: tito on June 06, 2008, 03:44:41 AM
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Wow you really do plan ahead well... I'll be sitting in this thread waiting for chapter 21 now (or an earlier 'appearance')... btw, I like being secretive like this
*Looks at the rest* hehe, you don't know what it is about  :twisted:
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Who needs study when we have H!P fanfics to be written
At least I ought to finish chap 13...
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pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaassssssse study... i wouldn't want to ruin your education!!!!

and don't rush it...

i'm only posting fast today to make up for yesterday... i still owe you chapters!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyway I'll be out pretty soon..probably another tiring day  :( Since you are in the mood, I can't ruin it for my readers and your readers :lol:

@Yukari, I think you will like this :)

F.Y.I

Chapter 13

Fate of GAM

December 23 (2.30pm)

Miki hesitated before she knocked on the door. It had been quite some time since she last had a private meeting with him. Most of the time, she would enter this room with someone. Back in the Morning Musume days, that person was Yossie and now, that person was Aya. “Tsunku, are you looking for me?” she asked as she entered the room rather apprehensively.

“Miki, take a seat,” he spoke seriously. Miki glared at the guy sitting in front of her and couldn’t help but to recall his menace and hypocrisy in helping his daughter to secure a leadership role in Morning Musume. At least GAM was formed permanently because of that. When Miki was seated, he threw a pile of letters on the table and said, “Aya’s manager was filtering the fan-mails received a week ago this morning and he found all these. Take a look.”

Miki picked one of the letters from the pile and read. There was literally fury in her eyes when she finished reading the letter. She crushed it up and threw it on the floor. “What the hell is that?” she shouted.

“It’s supposed to be a fan-mail.”

“Like real. Will a fan write, ‘Miki sleeps around and she has the lousiest attitude in the whole of H!P. I hate her. I hate GAM. I want to kill you, Aya’?”

“It’s obviously not from a fan. There are still a lot more if you want to read.”

Miki flipped through the pile and read another one. It wrote: “Miki sucks like hell. Go to hell, GAM!”

Miki crushed the letter up and said, “These people have too much time to spare. They wasted their time cutting out the Japanese characters from newspapers and pasting it on sheets of paper and posting them only to be filtered by the manager.”

“This morning, Aya told her manager that she had been receiving mails to her private address and strange phone calls in the middle of the night.”

Anger piled up in her chest. Why didn’t you tell me anything? So that’s what that phone call that made you go white about. “They are most likely from one person.”

“Hope so.”

“Miki, those people hate you but they send those mails to Aya.”

“True. Cowardly assholes.”

“No, you missed the point.”

“What’s your point?” she asked defiantly.

“My point is those people hate you but they harass Aya. I won’t stand for that. I won’t allow that to happen to my key soloist.”

Key soloist? Why do I have a bad feeling about this? “What are you driving at?”

“To put it bluntly, I will rather have those people after your head than harassing Aya like that. I want to terminate GAM for the time-being.”

“What?” This can’t be real…

“If the letters are still flooding in after this temporary termination, then GAM will be terminated permanently.”

“What if they stop coming in?”

“Then I’ll announce that GAM will make a special appearance on some talk show and if the letters do come in after that announcement, then GAM will be terminated permanently because it shows that GAM is the cause of the letters.”

“Oh crap. Just because of this stupid letters you want to terminate GAM.”

“I want to play safe. I need to play safe. I don’t want my soloist harassed. Let alone harmed.”

“So the only thing I can do now is to pray that when that announcement comes, the letters will stop coming in, right?”

“Not just that, Miki. You can change that stinky attitude of yours in the meantime.”

Miki spoke sarcastically, “Thanks for your advice. Anything else?” Tsunku shook his head. Miki took her leave. She didn’t know how she should feel after this meeting. Should I be angry at Aya for not telling me all these? Should I be upset that I was the cause behind Aya’s harassment? Should I be frustrated at Tsunku’s decision? Should I be depressed that GAM is terminated temporary because of me? All these questions jumbled up in her mind making her confused. The only things she wanted to do now were to scream at and cry to someone now. She took out her phone and dialed the familiar number.

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December 23 (3.23pm)

Miki went into the bar and took a seat in the corner of the room. Being an artist, corner seemed to be the best place in every single place. Before long, she felt a tap on her shoulder and her friend acknowledged her, “Why are you drinking in the afternoon, Fujimoto?”

Miki shook her head. She had been drinking before Yossie arrived and her face was flushed. “Sorry to call you out, Yossie. I just need to talk to someone now.”

Yossie took a seat beside Miki and asked out of concern, “Hey, what happened?”

“Tsunku called me in for a meeting just now and told me that GAM would be terminated temporarily.” Tears welled up in her eyes as she started narrating what happened earlier.

Yossie’s eyes widened. “What? Why?”

“Apparently Aya had been receiving weird letters, phone calls and fan-mails and as her girlfriend, I don’t know anything about it until Tsunku shot the fan-mails in my face just now.”

“What’s weird about them?”

“Basically they said that, ‘Miki sucks! I want to kill GAM! I want to kill Aya!’ Those people are assholes to send this sort of things to Aya’s mails instead of mine.”

“So Tsunku terminated GAM to protect Aya?”

Miki nodded and there was anger in her voice when she spoke, “He’s a jerk. He only called me in for the meeting even though it concerned GAM because he wanted to keep his Ayaya innocent. What the hell.”

“Don’t you think that the timing of those letters and phone calls are just-”

“Yeah, I told Tsunku that those letters probably came from one person or maybe just a group but he said he would play safe.”

Yossie nodded knowingly. That was typical of Tsunku to do that. “So how are you feeling now?”

“Crappy. Why didn’t Aya tell me anything about those letters and phone calls? I was right beside her when she picked up the call…” Miki looked so vulnerable when she said that and tears were streaming down her cheeks.

“Maybe she didn’t want to worry you. Maybe she didn’t want you to go all out like what you had done last time round with us,” Yossie paused as she recalled their relationship. She was the villain and Miki was the heroine. No, I can’t think of that now. I need to help her. She took in a deep breath before continuing, “She didn’t want to endanger your life. Probably she thought that this sort of things happen once in a while to idols.”

Miki shook her head. “Maybe you are right about it.”

Yossie took a tissue and wiped off the tears on Miki’s face. Miki allowed Yossie to do so. “You don’t have to worry about GAM. In the worst scenario whereby GAM is fully terminated, it shouldn’t matter as much as before now that you have hooked up with her.”

“True.”

“As for Tsunku, he’s just an asshole.”

Miki laughed. “Thanks Yossie. Now I feel better. Is my attitude that stinky?”

“No, it’s Fujimoto Miki’s attitude. Just ignore that old man. Even if those letters say your attitude is stinky and they will kill Aya for that, you will be there to protect her, won’t you?” Miki nodded. “Stop drinking and get home to keep her company.”

Miki stood up and said, “Thanks a lot, Yossie. I don’t think I will find a better company than you.” She meant her words when she said that.

“It’s fine. You can call me up if you feel crappy again.”

Miki smiled and they left the bar together. When they were out of the bar, Yossie took out her handphone and saw that there were one new message which read as followed: Yossie, let’s meet up for dinner later at that same Chinese restaurant. Is 6pm fine with you? Forever waiting for you – Charmy Rika ^^

“Is your darling looking for you again?” Miki teased.

“Yeah, I got to go back to bathe and change up before I meet up with her. I don’t want to have the Fujimoto’s smell when I meet up with her later.”

“That isn’t a bad scent.”

“Yeah, but it gives the wrong impression to her.  See you!” Yossie exclaimed. She then flagged a taxi and jumped into it. Inside the taxi, she waved to Miki and sent her a text message: If anything goes wrong, just call me. I’m just so glad that you confided in me. It shows that you don’t view me just as an ordinary friend. Thanks for giving me another chance, Fujimoto. Yossie smiled.

Miki gazed blankly at the taxi that Yossie just hopped on and smiled to herself. Yossie, you are really a great friend. Now that I have talked to you, I feel much better and I won’t scream wildly at Aya later. You do know that you are important to me, don’t you? Yossie, I trust that you aren’t the person who sent those mails. Please don’t break my trust. Please don’t.    

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This chapter is quite hard to write because it's hard to think of things against Miki. After all, she's a goddess  :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I.13 - Fate of GAM
Post by: tru_harmony on June 06, 2008, 03:54:10 AM
... oh my, oh my, oh my, oh my, oh my....

... i have a feeling it's not rika sending hate mail...

she texted yossui...  :wub:

... is that last paragraph a foreshadowing of who our mystery hate mail writer is?

Yossui?!?!?!

... why are you posting fast now? ... i can't keep up... GGGGAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

 :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.13 - Fate of GAM
Post by: Yukari on June 06, 2008, 06:08:19 AM
OMG!!!

yossy is a great friend to miki *inheaven*  :gmon sing: :gmon shy:

fujimoto smell  :mon XD:

i hope that yossy isn't the mails writer  :mon ko:

waiting next chapter!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.13 - Fate of GAM
Post by: wings4dreams on June 06, 2008, 07:41:55 AM
Hm... to figure out who the mysterious hate mail sender is I will have to use all of my natural problem solving instints :bingo:...oh, wait, I don't have any of those :err:...in that case I'll just make a random stab in the dark and say it is Rika and Eri who sent those messages. 

Interesting, they may have found a way to hurt Miki in a much deeper and more painful way then running her over with a car or beating her with a blunt object ever could... :cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.13 - Fate of GAM
Post by: tito on June 06, 2008, 12:25:27 PM
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.. is that last paragraph a foreshadowing of who our mystery hate mail writer is?

Yossui?!?!?!
Hmm...shan't comment on this  XD
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.. why are you posting fast now? ... i can't keep up... GGGGAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
After next week, I will start full-fledged studying for 2 weeks and disappear from the forum for a fortnight..ok, I might sneak a chapter or 2 but it will really go really slow  :(
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yossy is a great friend to miki *inheaven*
Come back down to read the next chap! don't disappear in heaven!  :lol:
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i hope that yossy isn't the mails writer
*start praying*  :mon pray2:
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Hm... to figure out who the mysterious hate mail sender is I will have to use all of my natural problem solving instints ...oh, wait, I don't have any of those err...in that case I'll just make a random stab in the dark and say it is Rika and Eri who sent those messages. 
Hmm...shan't comment on this as well  :P
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Interesting, they may have found a way to hurt Miki in a much deeper and more painful way then running her over with a car or beating her with a blunt object ever could...
Reading your comments always give me motivation to write on..probably the premonition is too strong or something  :oops:

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“Oh well, it’s ok  ! I sent you the picture I took with Goto Maki last year…”

Goto Maki? The name sounds familiar. This girl has no internet literacy at all. After she viewed the photo, she sent a message, “Hey let’s go for the audition together.”
From Chap 6, surprisingly no one picks it out  :O

Unpaired pairings: Rika/Maki , Yossi/ Maki  , Yossi/Aya,  Rika/Miki  :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I.13 - Fate of GAM
Post by: sweeety on June 06, 2008, 01:09:42 PM
ok, my replies to your replies
@Trulie: she is posting fast to get you to post even faster
@Yukikuroi: Yoshi is without a doubt NOT the sender of those messages
@Chick'nWings: It wouldn't be Eri, would it now? Besides, she would not have the time as it said. I think it's Reina personally, she is in jail, has nothing to do, so what makes us think it couldn't be her? and yes, the best way to get to her is through Aya, I think she preoved it by now.

 Ok, last one
@tito: Have a nice shower, and dinner, I think the sender is Reina or Maki, Miki's phone is at home and when Aya reads it she will get the wrong idea, same for Rika. I smell trouble. Instead of assuring Aya, I have a bad feeling she will end up fighting with her. That's gonna suck and I hope it isn't so.  I also hope that Rika doesn't get jealous to the point of looking at Yoshis message and thinking the "More than friends" act is a romantic suggestion.

 I seriously thought "trouble" when I read the message. Why are you such an idiot Yoshi? Why?

 Anywayz, love it! I hope you update again soon, not just for this awesome storys' sake, but also because tru is starting to slack of...lol, jks, she/he is working hard as ever.

 oh you replied! I was gonna do that! lol, I procrastinated too long. lol, anyway, here is my sort of outdated reply, though now I am thinking that it might also be Maki involved in this.Maybe Maki is the one Reina called to help her or osmething.
Title: Re: F.Y.I.13 - Fate of GAM
Post by: kRisZ on June 06, 2008, 06:10:39 PM
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“I see her as my godsister…is this weird? Is this wrong?”

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I know that. She’s prettier and better at everything than me. What should I do?”

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Somehow, I want Aya+Maki and Miki for Yossie  in this fic :grin:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.13 - Fate of GAM
Post by: tito on June 07, 2008, 02:47:22 AM
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I think the sender is Reina or Maki, Miki's phone is at home and when Aya reads it she will get the wrong idea, same for Rika. I smell trouble. Instead of assuring Aya, I have a bad feeling she will end up fighting with her. That's gonna suck and I hope it isn't so.  I also hope that Rika doesn't get jealous to the point of looking at Yoshis message and thinking the "More than friends" act is a romantic suggestion.

 I seriously thought "trouble" when I read the message. Why are you such an idiot Yoshi? Why?
Stay tuned... :P

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Somehow, I want Aya+Maki and Miki for Yossie  in this fic
Hmm..I will open a poll for pairings later.. :lol:

Stay around for half an hour or less, I will post up the next chapter as soon as I finished it. (it's almost done already!) :wub:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: tito on June 07, 2008, 03:01:54 AM
Old-tito style of long paragraphs  XD

F.Y.I

Chapter 14

Love Genre ~Hip-hop

December 23 (6.05pm)

It had been around one and a half hour since she reached home. Initially she felt rather hopeful and somewhat happy after chatting with Yossie. But now, after staring blankly into space on her couch for almost 90 minutes, the hopefulness had long evaporated as she had run through the entire H!P name list in her mind several times and thought of all the different people with the different reasons to terminate GAM. After what Reina had plotted earlier, she had come to believe that anything was possible. She still strongly believed that the letters came from one source and they were from someone she knew. 

She thought, “Perhaps it is Maki who wants to separate us again. Rika is also a prime suspect because she hates me. Come to think of it, Eri might still hate me too. Those letters mentioned about my attitude right? Perhaps it’s Mari. She hates my attitude. I didn’t talk very nicely to Kei that time round as well. Not to forget that incident during the gathering when I glared at Kaori. Maybe Reina found a way to do something like that. Yossie may be the culprit too although I hope not. Maybe it’s one of the younger girls like Sayu or even Aika. I really don’t know what’s in the heads of those girls. Maybe Ai or Risa did it. Maybe it’s Tsunku’s way of getting back at me for playing detective last time round.” The names jumbled up in her mind, frustrating her.

Suddenly, the door bell rang and it was without any doubt that person was her girlfriend. After all, not everyone had the guts to knock on Fujimoto Miki’s door especially when they were uninvited. Miki opened the door and wasn’t surprised that the girl pounced onto her and kissed her on her lips immediately after the door was opened. Miki smiled as she tried her best to shake away those thoughts running wildly in her mind now.

Aya whispered into Miki’s ears when their lips separated, “I love you, Miki-tan. Keep Christmas Day free for me, ok? I have a surprise for you!”

This year I will definitely have a better Christmas than last year.. Miki nodded. “What surprise do you have in store for me, Ayaya? I’ll definitely keep it free for you. Promise.”

“I’m not going to tell you.”

“Ok then.” Miki pouted.

They fell into silence for sometime before Aya exclaimed, “You must have waited long for me! Sorry for coming home late! Tsunku called me up for a meeting.”

Meeting? Did Tsunku tell her all about it? No, it’s unlike him to do so. If he wants to inform her, he would have called her earlier in the afternoon with me. He just wants to distort the facts. “What did he say?” Miki asked rather half-heartedly.

Aya held Miki’s hands and spoke in that chirpy voice of hers, “You won’t believe what he told me earlier!”

“What did he say?” Miki repeated.

“He said I will be having a new single entitled ‘Kizuna’ in May next year!”

As expected. “What else did he say?” Miki tried to smile but she knew it was a failed attempt.

“He said that song will be the theme song for the 4th Special Olympics Japan Winter Games!”

“Oh, I mean what did he say about GAM?”

Aya smiled as though she had anticipated this question. “He said that GAM will not be disbanded but he will make the necessary amendments to the schedules such that I can cope with both my solo career and GAM.”

Necessary amendments? Well-phrased, Tsunku. “I see.”

“Anyway, I asked him about you and he said he might give you your solo career back next year as well! I told him that you will be happy. Am I right about it?” Aya winked.

Miki shook her head. This is Aya. Even with the facts thrown at her face, she is still oblivious about it. “Do you know what he was implying by that?” Aya shook her head. “He meant that GAM is over! If both of us go solo, it means that GAM is over!” Miki shouted. She didn’t mean to but she couldn’t stand it when someone couldn’t get something as simple as this. She wished she could take back her words but it was too late.

Aya frowned and spoke seriously, “He said that he will make the necessary amendments-”

“That means end of GAM!” Miki hollered.

Aya raised her voice as well, “Everyone in H!P treats bands as their stepping stone towards their own solo careers. Why are you so worked up about it?”

“Because I don’t see GAM as my stepping stone!” I never see GAM as my stepping stone. Why must you make sweeping statements like that?

“Me neither!”

“Then why did you say that?”

“What did I say?”

“Don’t go around telling people especially Tsunku how I feel when you don’t even know how I am feeling inside! I can’t stand it at all! Anyway, I’m not happy about it at all!”

“What’s wrong about saying that to Tsunku?”

“Nothing is correct about it!”

“What’s wrong with you today?”

“That reminds me. Why didn’t you tell me anything about those letters and phone calls? Why do I get to know about it from someone else? We are lovers for god’s sake!”

Aya appeared shocked. “Who told you all that?”

“Your dear friend, Mr. Tsunku and he said that GAM is terminated temporarily because of that!”

“To put it bluntly, so what if GAM is disbanded? I will still have you and you will still have me. We will still stay intact as lovers!”

“Don’t be silly. How on earth can we stay intact with contrasting schedules?”

“We were fine in the past when you were in MM and I was a soloist-”

“Last time we were friends but now we are different!”

“If this is the case, then we should stay as friends!” Aya shouted with tears streaming down her cheeks. She didn’t know why she said this. She knew it hurt Miki a lot but she couldn’t control her mouth in that moment of fury.

Tears welled up in Miki’s eyes and she closed her eyes to calm herself down. This conversation could just throw their relationship into their drain if it continued. That conversation was like a hip-hop song that had gone out of tune and out of rhythm. She thought about what Aya had said and felt that she herself had just over-reacted. Weren’t Aya’s innocence and naivety the very things that had attracted Miki to her in the very first place and had all along given her the urge to protect her? Why did she shout at her like that? She couldn’t believe that she just flared up at her girlfriend. I owe her an apology. I do. She opened her eyes and was ready to apologize but there was no one in the house except herself. Aya had left without a sound.

She burst out in tears and all she wanted was a shoulder to lie on now. The emptiness and loneliness in the apartment was just way too uncomfortably familiar to her. She knew she was the one who screwed the relationship up by hurling the daggers of words at Aya. She took out her handphone and dialed the all-too-familiar number. It went to the voice-mail. She dialed again and this time round, the receiver hung up on her. She dialed again and the receiver hung up again. She pressed the redial button and this time round, it was engaged.

Aya left the apartment hastily and once she was in the lift, she broke down in tears. She knew very much that she shouldn’t have said that ‘we should just stay as friends’. It hurt Miki but she didn’t understand why Miki flared up at her. Did Miki even trust our relationship? No, it doesn’t give me the rights to say that straight into her face. I screwed GAM up. What should I do now?

Just when she was crying over spilled milk, her handphone rang and the familiar Boogie Train played. Denwa wa mada konai… She pressed the reject button when she saw who the caller was. It was just so painful to hear that familiar voice now that she had broken Miki’s heart. She thought, “If I talk to her now, it might make things even worse between us. What we need is some time to ourselves to sort our thoughts out.”

Denwa wa mada konai… She pressed the reject button again. “Not now, Miki-tan,” she thought to herself.

Denwa wa mada konai… Just when she was about to press the reject button for the third time, she saw who the caller was and was surprised. She hesitated for a moment before she picked it up. “Hello,” she said in a rather flat voice.

“Hi Aya, it is Maki here.”

“Oh..” What should I say to her? Why did she call?

“I just got out today and tomorrow afternoon, I’m leaving to America. I just think that I need to leave this country for a while.”

“Oh…” Serious? When did you get out? Nice that you are leaving though.

“I know that you dropped the charges against me and I’m grateful for that. Is it possible to meet up with you for lunch tomorrow before I leave this place? It’s just lunch. Nothing else other than that.”

Aya recalled her schedule in her mind. She had nothing on the 24th. In fact, she was supposed to shop for Miki’s Christmas gift the next day. “Okay.”
Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: Yukari on June 07, 2008, 03:46:38 AM
rika rejects the calls from miki??? :mon evil: i don't think that yossy did it (supposing that miki called yossy XD)

wooo i want to read what will do aya with maki  :mon look:

waiting next chapter!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: tru_harmony on June 07, 2008, 09:05:25 AM
oh man, you posted again!! i'm toast!!!

oblivious ayaya... is annoying...

where is my ishiyoshi???

tsunku is an ass...

^ i agree... rika is screening yossui's calls...

... i still don't think rika is the culprit...

i belive(sic) in you, Charmy-sama... please in your rabu-rabu mercy, don't fail me!!!!

Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 07, 2008, 10:59:57 AM
I still think Rika and Eri are the letter people... Just the 'innocent immaturity' of there insults sounds like them :P

Awww, i'm gonna jump on the Yukari train and start chanting for YoMiki :heart:... Miki needs someone better than Aya, and so does Maki!
It's as if Aya never thinks of anyone but herself... After everything Miki did and gave up for her, she still expects to walk along her merry way and have Miki follow along with no complaints!   :angry:

Can I kill Aya and then console Miki myself? :D (she'll never know it was me ;) )
At least let me slap the bitch and maybe ruin her hair  :w00t:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: tito on June 07, 2008, 02:24:41 PM
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rika rejects the calls from miki???  i don't think that yossy did it (supposing that miki called yossy )
Hmm..maybe the next chapter will shed some light into this..promise to reread the last bit after the next chap is posted, yeah?  :D
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wooo i want to read what will do aya with maki
You gonna be a little more patient..*Points at the Ishiyoshi fans*
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oh man, you posted again!! i'm toast!!!
Maybe Rika likes toast  :roll: :lol:
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oblivious ayaya... is annoying...
You can join the 'I hate Aya in Gomattou/F.Y.I group'
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where is my ishiyoshi???
Be patient...it will happen soon after you complete your 4.5   ^-^
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^ i agree... rika is screening yossui's calls...
^same as what I said to Yukari..reread this chap after the next chap is posted, k? I promise it will make more sense :)
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... i still don't think rika is the culprit...

i belive(sic) in you, Charmy-sama... please in your rabu-rabu mercy, don't fail me!!!!
This is love, tru_harmony..you are in love :wub:
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I still think Rika and Eri are the letter people... Just the 'innocent immaturity' of there insults sounds like them
Shan't comment on this.. :P
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Awww, i'm gonna jump on the Yukari train and start chanting for YoMiki ... Miki needs someone better than Aya, and so does Maki!
It's as if Aya never thinks of anyone but herself... After everything Miki did and gave up for her, she still expects to walk along her merry way and have Miki follow along with no complaints!   
^Join that group..I can open one on facebook  :lol:
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Can I kill Aya and then console Miki myself? (she'll never know it was me )
At least let me slap the bitch and maybe ruin her hair 
You're getting violent  :( *tito runs away with Aya*

Someone I don't feel like writing today..oh man, this sucks  :(
Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: kRisZ on June 07, 2008, 03:08:24 PM
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Someone I don't feel like writing today..oh man, this sucks

 :O


I'm imagining Maki will stay or Aya will go with her  :grin: and Miki will have Yossie  :grin: :grin: and Rika will be happy alone or with me  :grin: :grin: :grin:  jeezzz gomen it's the headache  XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: sweeety on June 07, 2008, 05:10:53 PM
*cracks comrades whip* WRITE! If you don't write now you will ruun out of holidays! And then you wont be able to write even more! And besides, Miki's dying out there! And it's dog how Aya not only ran away without resolving this issue, but she also didn't talk to her. All Miki wanted was a hug and a kiss and a "everything will be alright!" :'( Waaaaaaaaaaaah~! Poor Miki sama!

 And what is everyone going on about? Rika screening Yoshi's calls? First of all what the hell is screening? Second of all, they didn't even show up on that chapter! It was just Miki and Aya fighting ( :'( ) and Miki trying to get Aya back by calling her on the phone only to get hung up on and rejected when Aya realilsed it was her because she is too dumb to do anything right! And then making plans to sleep with the enemy-oops, I mean, go out for a day date with the other woman-I mean have lunch with Maki.

 Also, there is no "IhateAyainGomattou/FYI" club. and even if there is it can't compete with the "I-hate-Aya-in-Kooi" club. Seriously, she does even worse there!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: wings4dreams on June 08, 2008, 12:36:42 AM
Poor GAM...They were slowly going in different directions all along...It seems that Miki is more determined and dedicated to the relationship then Aya.  I don't think Aya's selfish, necessarily, I just think she's really naive and truly believes that she can just ignore all the problems and they'll go away, but the result is that Miki is the one who has to pick up the slack and try to salvage things, imo...

...Miki already knew that though...
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Weren’t Aya’s innocence and naivety the very things that had attracted Miki to her in the very first place and had all along given her the urge to protect her?
  ...Miki's realizing now that playing protector gets kinda old after a while when the protectee is happily oblivious to the gravity of what's going on...

Aya is going to see Goto while she and Miki are still fighting...this might be bad, if Goto tries to reconcile, Aya's at her weakest...I can't help but wonder what will happen between them.

whoo~  a lot of emotion in this one (or maybe I'm already emotional, lol) but I'm eagerly awaiting what will happen!

hopefully you'll feel like writing soon *tries to think of how to help...* um...here, have a charm thingy  :omamori:  I don't know what it says though...  :dunno:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: tru_harmony on June 08, 2008, 02:55:39 AM
tito, please, don't wait for my 4.5 updates... i can't stay online that long today... ... please just write... a flying brick just missed my head this morning with the words 'write 4.5 or else'... someone out there desperately needs to read a new chapter from you... i promise to post 9 chapters on monday if you post an update today...

@sweeety: screening means that Rika has possession of Yossui's phone and is checking who calls her dear yossui... possibly without yossui knowing a thing... that means trouble...
Title: Re: F.Y.I.14 - Love Genre~Hip-hop
Post by: tito on June 08, 2008, 03:55:55 AM
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I'm imagining Maki will stay or Aya will go with her   and Miki will have Yossie    and Rika will be happy alone or with me
Hmm... :roll:
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WRITE! If you don't write now you will ruun out of holidays! And then you wont be able to write even more! And besides, Miki's dying out there!
Yeah I'm writing now.. :D
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And what is everyone going on about? Rika screening Yoshi's calls? First of all what the hell is screening? Second of all, they didn't even show up on that chapter! It was just Miki and Aya fighting ( Cry ) and Miki trying to get Aya back by calling her on the phone only to get hung up on and rejected when Aya realilsed it was her because she is too dumb to do anything right! And then making plans to sleep with the enemy-oops, I mean, go out for a day date with the other woman-I mean have lunch with Maki.
It will end up as one whole chunk of a chapter if I put ishiyoshi in as well..be patient, wait for the next one :)
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Poor GAM...They were slowly going in different directions all along...It seems that Miki is more determined and dedicated to the relationship then Aya.  I don't think Aya's selfish, necessarily, I just think she's really naive and truly believes that she can just ignore all the problems and they'll go away, but the result is that Miki is the one who has to pick up the slack and try to salvage things, imo...

...Miki already knew that though...
Exactly  :grin: :grin:
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  ...Miki's realizing now that playing protector gets kinda old after a while when the protectee is happily oblivious to the gravity of what's going on..
Exactly!  :D
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hopefully you'll feel like writing soon *tries to think of how to help...* um...here, have a charm thingy   :omamori:I don't know what it says though...
Thanks for the help  :wub: It means shiawase/happiness.. how nice is it to be a Chinese  :P
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tito, please, don't wait for my 4.5 updates... i can't stay online that long today... ... please just write... a flying brick just missed my head this morning with the words 'write 4.5 or else'... someone out there desperately needs to read a new chapter from you... i promise to post 9 chapters on monday if you post an update today...
Sorry, I was just feeling cranky last night and whether you write or not, I wouldn't have written anything last night. Ok, promise  :) Stay around, I will update a new chap ASAP!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.15 - Love Genre ~Ballad
Post by: tito on June 08, 2008, 04:56:54 AM
Read this slowly ok? Listen to a few ballads while you read and perhaps the effect will be better  :heart: Enjoy!

F.Y.I

Chapter 15

Love Genre~ Ballad

December 23 (5.54pm) (Around the same time as that of Chap 14 if you have forgotten...)

As Yossie turned into the familiar street, she glanced at her watch rather habitually. It was 5.54pm. Seeing that she was early for the date, she slowed down her footsteps. The sky was already dark by now and the cool wind caressed her cheeks and a wave of nostalgia washed over her soul. This street was where she first met Rika and the Chinese restaurant was where they had dined on their very first date. Rika had transformed from an innocent girl to a sexy woman since then. Those days just seemed to be so long ago, too long ago.

Wearing a short skirt on an early winter evening, she felt cold standing out there on the streets. Her mother would never approve of that length of skirt on such evenings. But she knew Rika would approve of it. She entered a rather empty jewellery shop to find some warmth and she was surprised to see a familiar girl in the same store. She sneaked behind her and tapped her on her shoulders. The girl turned and shock was written on her face when she saw the former Morning Musume leader. “Yossie! What a coincidence! You’re wearing a really short skirt!” she exclaimed.

Yossie raised her eyebrows. “Don’t you always wear them?”

“I do but you don’t and I don’t wear short skirt on a cold evening like this. I wonder why you do.” Ai winked.

“Ok fine. I’m meeting Rika later. Satisfied?”

“Having a date, I see? So nice!”

“What are you doing in here then, Ai?”

“I want to buy a pair of matching necklaces-”

“For Risa?”

Ai blushed. “Yeah, but I can’t decide on one.”

“Can’t you just drag her in and ask her what she likes?”

Ai shook her head. “But I want to give her a surprise for Christmas! What are you getting for Rika for Christmas?”

Yossie thought for a while before she replied, “I haven’t quite decided on it yet. But matching necklaces is a good idea.”

“I’m stuck in this shop since 4pm. Please help me, Yossie,” Ai begged.

Yossie smiled. “I don’t think I can help you on this, Ai.” Yossie glanced at her watch and it reflected 5.59pm. “Anyway, I have to go already! Wish you luck in deciding!” Yossie hastily left the shop and the image of a frustrated Ai who couldn’t decide on a Christmas gift was embedded in her mind. She has grown up as well…   

Yossie ran towards the Chinese restaurant so that her body could generate some heat to keep her warm inside. When she reached there, she was surprised to see Rika leaning against the wall right outside that restaurant with her arms folded. She was wearing a similar short skirt as well. She seemed to be in a daze and her eyes were looking at somewhere distant. She looked sexy despite the lonely aura around her. Yossie tried to look at where Rika’s eyes were fixated at and when she did, without a doubt, she knew what Rika was looking at. She was looking at their past.

“Rika!” Yossie shouted and waved at her. Rika looked at her and appeared shocked. It wasn’t an everyday affair for Yossie to walk around Tokyo in a skirt, let alone a short one. Rika looked down at the similar skirt that she was wearing and she grinned. She knew that they were thinking of the same thing when they went through their own wardrobes earlier before the dinner date.

When Rika’s eyes were fixated at her after she called her name, Yossie blushed. She wished that time would pause at that very second when their eyes met. They were wearing matching skirts on a cold evening and their eyes never left the other. It was such a magical moment which she promised to store in the hard disk in her head for life.

“Let’s get in Yossie. It’s getting cold out here,” Rika said as she locked her arms with Yossie’s. They then proceeded into the restaurant together and sat at the same corner as that of their first date. As opposed to their first date whereby they were still awkward with each other, now they were at ease together.

Right after they were seated, Yossie passed the menu to Rika and asked, “What will you like to have, Rika?”

“The same as our first time will do. Do you remember?”

Yossie nodded and told the waitress, “Can you get me a plate of fried rice? Do you have Chinese ramen here for her? Oh she meant Chinese noodles. Thank you.”

Rika laughed. That was how nervous she was on her first date with Yossie. She had wanted Chinese ramen then. What a joke. She felt touched that even though 7 years had passed, Yossie still remembered the intrinsic details of their first date.

“See, I still remember,” Yossie whispered and winked.

“Yossie,” Rika murmured and her eyes were fixed on Yossie. You’re so charming, baby. “I love you especially when you wear skirts.”

Yossie laughed. Her eyes met Rika’s again and she smiled. “I love you, Rika especially when we wear matching skirts. Do you know why I am wearing a skirt today?”

“Why?” Rika asked rather innocently.

Yossie ran her fingers up Rika’s legs and murmured, “Skirts are easier…” At this moment, Yossie’s handphone on the table vibrated and her ringing tone, Osaka Koi no Uta, played. Yossie picked up her phone but Rika took it away from her. Nothing could be more important than this. No one had the right to disturb this magical moment. Rika then leaned over and kissed Yossie on her lips. There was no one dining near them and she didn’t give a damn to paparazzi or anyone at that very moment when their lips touched. Yossie didn’t give a damn about the phone call as well. The only person in Yossie’s mind now was Rika. 

When their lips parted, Yossie said cheekily, “Our lip glosses match as well. It’s strawberry flavor.”

Rika whispered, “It is called telepathy. So that’s why you wear a skirt today.”

“Part II will be at Yoshizawa Hitomi’s house later.”

Rika smirked. “I hope it will be more exciting.”

“Definitely.” Rika passed Yossie’s handphone back to her and Yossie wanted to scream at whoever who called her. She guessed that caller was most probably Ai who called as she still hadn’t decided on which necklace to purchase. When she flipped open her phone, she was shocked that the caller was Miki. Ever since that day when Miki called to confide in her that she had fallen in love with someone who was, no doubt, Aya, she hadn’t been calling Yossie. Why did she call me? It must be something important. She won’t call me for nothing…

Yossie pressed the dial button and held the phone close to her ears. It was engaged. She tried for the second time and it was engaged as well. A gut feeling told her that something bad had happened to Miki. She dialed again and this time around, Miki’s phone was still engaged. She thought of the different things that might have happened to Miki and prayed that Miki would pick up her call soon. It was so worrying.

“Yossie, who are you calling?” Rika asked. She could see from Yossie’s expression who that person was but she wanted to hear her confirmation.

Yossie gazed at the girl sitting beside her. She knew she shouldn’t lie to her. She knew that honesty was important in love. She murmured under her breath, “Fujimoto.”

I knew it, it’s her. “What happened?”

Yossie frowned for the first time that evening. “I don’t know. Something is wrong with her. She called me.” She clicked on the dial button on her phone and her eyes were fixated on the phone.

If that person is me instead of her, will you care as much? “Is she not picking up your call?” Rika asked with tears welling up in her eyes. She wanted the attention back. She wanted Yossie to stare at her again and not at the unanimated object in front of her.

Yossie nodded. “Something must have happened to her.”

“Yossie…”

“Hmm?” Yossie asked without even looking at Rika.

“Do you like her?”

Taken aback, Yossie looked at the girl sitting beside her and shook her head repeatedly. “What are you thinking of? I only love you in my life! You’re my one and only.”

Rika shook her head in dismay. “Those are pick-up lines, Yossie. Your actions don’t go with your words.”

“I’m sorry Rika but I’m really worried for Miki as a friend. Trust me on that. We are nothing other than friends.” The same waitress walked towards them and placed the respective dishes in front of the 2 girls and went off. “Let’s eat. You must be hungry.”

Yossie pressed on the dial button and this time round, it wasn’t engaged. Almost immediately, Miki picked up the phone. Miki shouted, “What’s your problem? Why did you call me so many times?”

“Hey, you were the one who called me,” Yossie retorted.

“Did I?”

“Yes, you did.”

“Shit, I must have dialed the wrong number. I thought I was calling Aya. But you shouldn’t have called me so many times! Just send me a message will do.”

I should have guessed as much. You just called the wrong number. I feel dumb worrying about you. “I didn’t know that you dialed a wrong number. I mean how on earth will I know? I thought something had happened to you and I was worried.”

 “Sorry, I ought to be calling Aya now. See you!” Miki hung up.

When Yossie put down her phone, she was furious. For the first time, she felt Miki’s daggers of words piercing through her heart. Miki didn’t even appreciate her concern at all. She tried to convince herself that maybe something bad had happened between Miki and Aya but it couldn’t stop the pain in the heart. She asked to no one in particular, “Did I overreact to her phone call?”

Rika gazed at the girl sitting beside her. She knew that even though Yossie was next to her, she was thinking of another girl. Should I even attempt to answer her question? I think I ought to. “Yes, you did. A friend won’t be so worried and call the other numerous times just because of a missed call.” You see her more than just a friend. Admit it.

“But the point is she hasn’t called me for a few months already and she isn’t that kind who calls random people for nothing-”

Rika interrupted, “At least today you learn that there is something called ‘wrong number’.”

“True.”

“Aren’t you eating a bit? Your fried rice is getting cold.”

Yossie shook her head. “I’m not really hungry.” In actual fact, she had lost her appetite because of what Miki had said to her. Those words had pierced her heart.

Silence fell upon them for a while. Yossie gazed at the girl eating next to her. She ought to be fair to her. She couldn’t spoil the beautiful evening just because of a phone call.  Yossie said, “After you finished eating, let’s go to my place-”

“Yossie, I have almost forgotten that my mum is coming over to my place tonight and I need to keep her company. Another day then,” Rika lied.

Yossie nodded. She knew she had ruined the entire evening. “Sorry Rika,” she murmured.

Rika laughed. “For what?”

“For spoiling the entire evening. It’s my fault.” Rika should have just confiscated my handphone.

“It’s not your fault. Ok, I’m done with my noodles. Let’s go.” Rika stood up and walked out of the restaurant with Yossie following closely behind. Rika recalled the image of them walking hand-in-hand into the restaurant and she shook her head. It was less than half an hour but the emotions that she had earlier and now and then were different. Earlier she was elated and excited about the date but now, she just felt upset and dismayed. The string tying to Yossie’s heart was no longer in her hands. She could no longer affect how Yossie felt and thought. It was in Miki’s hands now. She thought she had managed to keep Yossie beside her by sending those letters but it seemed as though it had brought about a very different effect.

Yossie sneaked a kiss on Rika’s cheeks before Rika hopped onto the taxi. She knew she had ruined the evening and Rika was hiding her emotions from her. Rika wasn’t very good at putting up a façade and she could see Rika’s sorrow in her watery eyes. She knew she wasn’t fair to Rika as she was thinking of Miki almost for the entire evening. She recalled Rika’s expression when she asked her whether she liked Miki or not and the pain in her heart exacerbated. For the first time, she wondered whether what Rika said was true. 

 :cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.15 - Love Genre ~Ballad
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 08, 2008, 06:46:40 AM
Ahhh, what are you doing to me!?
Now I want IshiYoshi to stay together, not YoMiki :o
Poor Rika :cry: See i knew she sent the letters and in a sense it was justified BUT god she is dumb :lol: Lets push between Miki and Aya and expect Miki not to run to Yossy XD Although, i guess she thought Aya was more like her and Miki and Yossy and stand by Miki, not throw it back in her face.

About Aya just being niave and oblivious, that's no excuse for her to treat my Mikitty like that anymore. After being like that before she almost lost Miki forever and vowed at the hospital that she would be like that again and would love and protect Miki she has done for her so many times! Miki keeps giving her everything to Aya and still isn't getting the same treatment in return... You suck Aya! :mon annoy: :mon zoom:

Ohhhh, I almost forgot, YOU PUT MY TAKAGAKINESS IN THERE!!! YAYAY... I love you! :gmon heartu: But you know I still want more ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.15 - Love Genre ~Ballad
Post by: Yukari on June 08, 2008, 07:52:52 AM
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

Wearing a short skirt on an early winter evening, she felt cold standing out there on the streets. Her mother would never approve of that length of skirt on such evenings. But she knew Rika would approve of it. 

who can't approve it  :mon inluv:

Yossie raised her eyebrows. “Don’t you always wear them?”

“I do but you don’t and I don’t wear short skirt on a cold evening like this. I wonder why you do.” Ai winked.

“Ok fine. I’m meeting Rika later. Satisfied?”

“Having a date, I see? So nice!”

Takitty 1 Yossy 0  :mon lol:

“What are you doing in here then, Ai?”

“I want to buy a pair of matching necklaces-”

“For Risa?”

Ai blushed. “Yeah, but I can’t decide on one.”

Takitty 1 Yossy 1  :mon XD:


  She has grown up as well…

yep, we know that Ai has grown up  :mon misch:

“Rika!” Yossie shouted and waved at her. Rika looked at her and appeared shocked. It wasn’t an everyday affair for Yossie to walk around Tokyo in a skirt, let alone a short one. Rika looked down at the similar skirt that she was wearing and she grinned. She knew that they were thinking of the same thing when they went through their own wardrobes earlier before the dinner date.

When Rika’s eyes were fixated at her after she called her name, Yossie blushed. She wished that time would pause at that very second when their eyes met. They were wearing matching skirts on a cold evening and their eyes never left the other. It was such a magical moment which she promised to store in the hard disk in her head for life.

so cute!!  :mon inluv: why do they wear short skirts?  :mon fu:

Yossie nodded and told the waitress, “Can you get me a plate of fried rice? Do you have Chinese ramen here for her? Oh she meant Chinese noodles. Thank you.”

Rika laughed. That was how nervous she was on her first date with Yossie. She had wanted Chinese ramen then. What a joke. She felt touched that even though 7 years had passed, Yossie still remembered the intrinsic details of their first date.

“See, I still remember,” Yossie whispered and winked.

good one yossy  :mon noprob:

Yossie laughed. Her eyes met Rika’s again and she smiled. “I love you, Rika especially when we wear matching skirts. Do you know why I am wearing a skirt today?”

“Why?” Rika asked rather innocently.

Yossie ran her fingers up Rika’s legs and murmured, “Skirts are easier…”

so hot  :mon bleed2:

At this moment, Yossie’s handphone on the table vibrated and her ringing tone, Osaka Koi no Uta, played. Yossie picked up her phone but Rika took it away from her. Nothing could be more important than this. No one had the right to disturb this magical moment. Rika then leaned over and kissed Yossie on her lips. There was no one dining near them and she didn’t give a damn to paparazzi or anyone at that very moment when their lips touched. Yossie didn’t give a damn about the phone call as well. The only person in Yossie’s mind now was Rika. 

so it was rika as well  :mon annoy:

When she flipped open her phone, she was shocked that the caller was Miki. Ever since that day when Miki called to confide in her that she had fallen in love with someone who was, no doubt, Aya, she hadn’t been calling Yossie. Why did she call me? It must be something important. She won’t call me for nothing…

Yossie pressed the dial button and held the phone close to her ears. It was engaged. She tried for the second time and it was engaged as well. A gut feeling told her that something bad had happened to Miki. She dialed again and this time around, Miki’s phone was still engaged. She thought of the different things that might have happened to Miki and prayed that Miki would pick up her call soon. It was so worrying.

“Yossie, who are you calling?” Rika asked. She could see from Yossie’s expression who that person was but she wanted to hear her confirmation.

Yossie gazed at the girl sitting beside her. She knew she shouldn’t lie to her. She knew that honesty was important in love. She murmured under her breath, “Fujimoto.”

I knew it, it’s her. “What happened?”

Yossie frowned for the first time that evening. “I don’t know. Something is wrong with her. She called me.” She clicked on the dial button on her phone and her eyes were fixated on the phone.

If that person is me instead of her, will you care as much? “Is she not picking up your call?” Rika asked with tears welling up in her eyes. She wanted the attention back. She wanted Yossie to stare at her again and not at the unanimated object in front of her.

Yossie nodded. “Something must have happened to her.”

my reaction:  :mon love: :mon loveflower: :mon roll: :mon fyeah: :mon lovelaff: :mon inluv: :mon angel:

“Yossie…”

“Hmm?” Yossie asked without even looking at Rika.

“Do you like her?”

Taken aback, Yossie looked at the girl sitting beside her and shook her head repeatedly. “What are you thinking of? I only love you in my life! You’re my one and only.”

Rika shook her head in dismay. “Those are pick-up lines, Yossie. Your actions don’t go with your words.”

“I’m sorry Rika but I’m really worried for Miki as a friend. Trust me on that. We are nothing other than friends.”

i don't believe you Yossy, well... i don't want to believe you, really  :mon star:


Yossie pressed on the dial button and this time round, it wasn’t engaged. Almost immediately, Miki picked up the phone. Miki shouted, “What’s your problem? Why did you call me so many times?”

“Hey, you were the one who called me,” Yossie retorted.

“Did I?”

“Yes, you did.”

“Shit, I must have dialed the wrong number. I thought I was calling Aya. But you shouldn’t have called me so many times! Just send me a message will do.”

I should have guessed as much. You just called the wrong number. I feel dumb worrying about you. “I didn’t know that you dialed a wrong number. I mean how on earth will I know? I thought something had happened to you and I was worried.”

 “Sorry, I ought to be calling Aya now. See you!” Miki hung up.

and that's Miki  :mon exhaust:

When Yossie put down her phone, she was furious. For the first time, she felt Miki’s daggers of words piercing through her heart. Miki didn’t even appreciate her concern at all. She tried to convince herself that maybe something bad had happened between Miki and Aya but it couldn’t stop the pain in the heart. She asked to no one in particular, “Did I overreact to her phone call?”

Rika gazed at the girl sitting beside her. She knew that even though Yossie was next to her, she was thinking of another girl. Should I even attempt to answer her question? I think I ought to. “Yes, you did. A friend won’t be so worried and call the other numerous times just because of a missed call.” You see her more than just a friend. Admit it.

“But the point is she hasn’t called me for a few months already and she isn’t that kind who calls random people for nothing-”

Rika interrupted, “At least today you learn that there is something called ‘wrong number’.”

“True.”

wow, it's mean to both of them  :mon wind: bad Yukari: yep yep Yossy admit it  :mon star:

“Aren’t you eating a bit? Your fried rice is getting cold.”

Yossie shook her head. “I’m not really hungry.” In actual fact, she had lost her appetite because of what Miki had said to her. Those words had pierced her heart.

Silence fell upon them for a while. Yossie gazed at the girl eating next to her. She ought to be fair to her. She couldn’t spoil the beautiful evening just because of a phone call.  Yossie said, “After you finished eating, let’s go to my place-”

“Yossie, I have almost forgotten that my mum is coming over to my place tonight and I need to keep her company. Another day then,” Rika lied.

Yossie nodded. She knew she had ruined the entire evening. “Sorry Rika,” she murmured.

Rika laughed. “For what?”

“For spoiling the entire evening. It’s my fault.” Rika should have just confiscated my handphone.

“It’s not your fault. Ok, I’m done with my noodles. Let’s go.” Rika stood up and walked out of the restaurant with Yossie following closely behind. Rika recalled the image of them walking hand-in-hand into the restaurant and she shook her head. It was less than half an hour but the emotions that she had earlier and now and then were different. Earlier she was elated and excited about the date but now, she just felt upset and dismayed. The string tying to Yossie’s heart was no longer in her hands. She could no longer affect how Yossie felt and thought. It was in Miki’s hands now. She thought she had managed to keep Yossie beside her by sending those letters but it seemed as though it had brought about a very different effect.

wow it's so bad for ishiyoshi... :mon ko: Bad Yukari (or, at this moment, yomiki fan): wojojoooo a chance! :mon innocent:

She knew she wasn’t fair to Rika as she was thinking of Miki almost for the entire evening. She recalled Rika’s expression when she asked her whether she liked Miki or not and the pain in her heart exacerbated. For the first time, she wondered whether what Rika said was true.

you got me! wojojojo bad Yukari take the control  :mon fan: i just love that Yossy at least have doubts about her feelings for Miki  :mon angel:

ok it was a long comment O.o i realized that i don't do it often  :mon sweat:


waiting next chapter!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.15 - Love Genre ~Ballad
Post by: tito on June 08, 2008, 10:17:37 AM
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hhh, what are you doing to me!?
Now I want IshiYoshi to stay together, not YoMiki
That's tito for you :lol:
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About Aya just being niave and oblivious, that's no excuse for her to treat my Mikitty like that anymore. After being like that before she almost lost Miki forever and vowed at the hospital that she would be like that again and would love and protect Miki she has done for her so many times! Miki keeps giving her everything to Aya and still isn't getting the same treatment in return... You suck Aya!
It's always easier said than done...
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Ohhhh, I almost forgot, YOU PUT MY TAKAGAKINESS IN THERE!!! YAYAY... I love you! But you know I still want more
I decide to pop in a chapter in between so you will have to wait till chap 22 for them to appear again  :D Shall see whether it can come earlier but no guarantees
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you got me! wojojojo bad Yukari take the control   i just love that Yossy at least have doubts about her feelings for Miki 
Sorry I can't comment on each comment but what I want to say is you are crazy over Yomiki  :wub: Though this is more of an ishiyoshi chap than a yomiki one  :D
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ok it was a long comment O.o i realized that i don't do it often
Can I say I love long comments? Reading long comments make me feel happy  :wub:

Next chapter is kinda hard to write though..I hope I can finish it by tonight. As sweeety said, my holidays are ending :(
Title: Re: F.Y.I.15 - Love Genre ~Ballad
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 08, 2008, 10:26:15 AM
I'm really looking forward to chapter 22 :D
You keep talking about it so now I'm expecting something gooood ;) :wub:

Btw, what number chapter are we one now? :lol: :oops:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.15 - Love Genre ~Ballad
Post by: tito on June 08, 2008, 10:34:46 AM
I'm really looking forward to chapter 22 :D
You keep talking about it so now I'm expecting something gooood ;) :wub:

Btw, what number chapter are we one now? :lol: :oops:

Chap 15 :lol: Now I feel the pressure ;) I think it is quite predictable what will happen though... XD *cries*
Title: Re: F.Y.I.15 - Love Genre ~Ballad
Post by: tru_harmony on June 08, 2008, 10:48:43 AM
... CHARMY-SAMA, WHY DID YOU FAIL ME?!?!?!?!

... YOSSUI, WHY DID YOU WASTE THE MINISKIRTS??!?!?

...TITO, I OWE YOU 8.5 NOW!!!!!

you just made my heart burst in flames... that cellphone is pure evil...

Title: Re: F.Y.I.15 - Love Genre ~Ballad
Post by: sweeety on June 08, 2008, 02:23:50 PM
*gasp* it was Rika! I kinda saw it coming..... I mean, it's not like it was impossible for her to do it, what with what she did in the start and stuff...anywayz, I hope you keep up this nice string of multiple updates. mwah, luv ya!~
Title: Re: F.Y.I.15 - Love Genre ~Ballad
Post by: kRisZ on June 08, 2008, 02:55:23 PM
wrong number.?.  :O damn

Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: tito on June 08, 2008, 03:52:02 PM
@tru_harmony, the sorrow in that chapter overpowers that of the happiness..I thought the front part will make you happy! Now you owed me even more XD
@sweeety, thanks pal :D I will keep this up until next week..
@KRisZ, hmm, joining the Yomiki side, I see?

I'll be out tomorrow so I'm not sure whether I'll be able to update tomorrow..anyway, here is a transition chapter and I think it's quite crappy though ;) Credit to projecthello for translation and I recommend you to listen to the song while reading..I love this song :D Enjoy!

F.Y.I

Chapter 16

Yume Kara Samete

December 23 (10.30pm)

Rika sat on the floor of her own apartment alone and tears found their way to her eyes as she recalled what had happened earlier in the restaurant. She knew she was losing grip on the girl she loved and she felt helpless all of a sudden as she thought about it.

I've gotten a little used to it, but even so I yearn

How much she hoped that Yossie could be right beside her now counting the stars in the sky with her like what they used to do in the past.

I remember when I'm looking at the night stars


Perhaps she shouldn’t have lied to Yossie that her mum was coming up tonight. She wasn’t accustomed to loneliness.

Even though I chose this, I regret it, isn't it strange?


But she didn’t want to appear as a weak girl to Yossie. If Yossie liked Miki, then Yossie wouldn’t like weak girls. She didn’t want to let go of Yossie no matter what…

I'm still putting on the same show of courage


********
Yossie went to the beach alone and she sat on the soft sand. She wanted to just scream at the sea but she didn’t want to attract attention. Tsunku won’t approve of that.

Hey, you can hear my voice


Yossie thought, “Rika, can you hear that little voice inside me screaming an apology to you? I ruined our evening…I’m sorry.”

Hey, you can feel my heart


As Yossie gazed at the sky and the sea which were merged into infinite darkness, she wondered whether Rika was looking at the same sky as well. How much she wished that Rika was next to her lying on her shoulders now.

I'm still looking at the same sky and same sea now

The image of Rika accusing her that she liked Miki came to her mind. She was confused. She didn’t quite know how she felt towards Miki. All along, she felt comfortable talking to Miki but was that really love?

Hey, you can hear my voice

She shook her head and wondered, “Who am I thinking of now when I look at the stars in the sky?”

Hey, you can feel my heart


A land breeze blew past her and it disrupted her train of thoughts. She shivered.

This wind will bring it to me, just like always


************
There were nights like this when she just hoped that she was a mute or at least, she didn’t have that sharp of a tongue. Miki lay on her couch with her eyes wide open staring into space thinking of what had happened earlier.

If I could go back to the past, I'd cross time


The lights of her apartment were switched off as she wanted to hide herself in the darkness and she didn’t want to see her own tears. She recalled how Aya said they should just stay as friends and tears ran down her cheeks. It was just so painful to hear that from the very person she loved. 

Will you wait for me in that town?


She had called Aya 28 times and Aya hung up on her every single time except for that one occasion whereby her phone was engaged. Miki knew that Aya was avoiding her.  She had sent 51 messages to Aya asking her to pick up her call and telling Aya that she was really sorry. Aya only messaged her one single line at the end of the day: ‘what we need is time’. Perhaps Aya was right that all they needed was some quiet time on their own to sort out their thoughts.

Yes, I can hear your voice


Miki thought, “If time on our own is what we need, what should I be thinking of now that I’m alone? Should I be reminiscing about our past? I have done that for almost 2 hours already. Or should I think of what went wrong this afternoon? Ever since you left the house, I have been thinking about that and feeling guilty over it. Or should I think of what I should do next to help our relationship? But I can’t do anything if you don’t pick up my calls. Tell me what I should do, Aya-chan. Please. Maybe tomorrow will be better for us.”

Yes, I can feel your heart


Miki felt tears running down her cheeks and she made no attempt to hide them because she was alone in the dark. Darkness. Loneliness. How familiar she was to such an atmosphere and to such an emotion.

I wanted to see a dream with the same future and hopes


**********
She lay on her bed reading the 51 messages over again. 49. “Aya-chan, I’m sorry that I’ve hurt you with my words. I didn’t mean it.” 50. “Aya-chan, pick up my call, please!” 51. “I know you are avoiding me but this can’t go on forever…”

Yes, I can hear your voice


Tears streamed down her cheeks as she read through each and every message again. She didn’t mean to avoid Miki but she was certain that they needed time on their own. At least, she needed time to sort out her thoughts alone. She knew that Miki loved her very much but all along, she didn’t quite know how to reciprocate her love. She hated herself for saying that they should just stay as friends and to be exact, she wasn’t avoiding Miki. She was avoiding herself.

Yes, I can feel your heart


She pressed on the reply button and typed: “I love you, Miki-tan.” She then pressed on the send button before she switched off her phone. She thought, “Should I tell Miki about the meeting I’m having with Maki tomorrow? The timing just seemed to be wrong. Perhaps I shouldn’t even have agreed on meeting up with her. But I should keep to my words. I promise it won’t affect us, Miki-tan. I promise.”

I feel it with this skin, just like always


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Maki gazed out of her hotel room’s window and smiled. She would be leaving this city which she grew up in tomorrow and she would be meeting the person she loved tomorrow as well. She was grateful that Aya agreed to meet up with her especially after she had abandoned Aya for her own career. Those days where they linked hands and talked about everything seemed so far away.

When I awaken from my dream, you aren't here


She recalled how she had begged Aya for forgiveness for the hit-and-run incident and how they confessed their love for each other and how she broke up with Aya.

My memories are changing, they're fading


She had hurt Aya too much. Maybe it was a good time for a brand new start for both of them. Maybe it was high time for her to leave Aya’s life.

I'll welcome a new tomorrow


*****
I'm not a very good song-fic writer so pls comment..
Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: kRisZ on June 08, 2008, 04:09:26 PM
wow, it's heartbreaking and awesomely awesome


and I'm a 'YoAny' fan  :grin:



EDIT: *reads for the second time*

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But she didn’t want to appear as a weak girl to Yossie. If Yossie liked Miki, then Yossie wouldn’t like weak girls. She didn’t want to let go of Yossie no matter what…

that's the spirit


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The image of Rika accusing her that she liked Miki came to her mind. She was confused. She didn’t quite know how she felt towards Miki. All along, she felt comfortable talking to Miki but was that really love?

hmmm, maybe.?.  XD

 
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She shook her head and wondered, “Who am I thinking of now when I look at the stars in the sky?”

ummm, Miki.?.  :P


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Miki felt tears running down her cheeks and she made no attempt to hide them because she was alone in the dark. Darkness. Loneliness. How familiar she was to such an atmosphere and to such an emotion.

 :cry:


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She pressed on the reply button and typed: “I love you, Miki-tan.” She then pressed on the send button before she switched off her phone.

aww


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I promise it won’t affect us, Miki-tan. I promise.

hmmm, sounds fishy


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She had hurt Aya too much. Maybe it was a good time for a brand new start for both of them. Maybe it was high time for her to leave Aya’s life.

yeah, a good time to start a new life... together  XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: Yukari on June 09, 2008, 03:37:44 AM
first... i love this song, it's beautiful, i'm not a takitty fan but even i listen to it a lot, and i like how you write song fic

How much she hoped that Yossie could be right beside her now counting the stars in the sky with her like what they used to do in the past.

I remember when I'm looking at the night stars

As Yossie gazed at the sky and the sea which were merged into infinite darkness, she wondered whether Rika was looking at the same sky as well. How much she wished that Rika was next to her lying on her shoulders now.

I'm still looking at the same sky and same sea now
so heartbreaking!  :mon cry:

The image of Rika accusing her that she liked Miki came to her mind. She was confused. She didn’t quite know how she felt towards Miki. All along, she felt comfortable talking to Miki but was that really love?

Hey, you can hear my voice

She shook her head and wondered, “Who am I thinking of now when I look at the stars in the sky?”

Hey, you can feel my heart


A land breeze blew past her and it disrupted her train of thoughts. She shivered.

This wind will bring it to me, just like always

wow poor Yossy, i hope that she should can clarify her feelings  :mon wind:

She had called Aya 28 times and Aya hung up on her every single time except for that one occasion whereby her phone was engaged. Miki knew that Aya was avoiding her.  She had sent 51 messages to Aya asking her to pick up her call and telling Aya that she was really sorry. Aya only messaged her one single line at the end of the day: ‘what we need is time’. Perhaps Aya was right that all they needed was some quiet time on their own to sort out their thoughts.
i don't like aya in this fic  :mon annoy: she makes miki suffer so much

Miki felt tears running down her cheeks and she made no attempt to hide them because she was alone in the dark. Darkness. Loneliness. How familiar she was to such an atmosphere and to such an emotion.
NOOOOOOO~~ MIKI!!  :mon runcry:

Tears streamed down her cheeks as she read through each and every message again. She didn’t mean to avoid Miki but she was certain that they needed time on their own. At least, she needed time to sort out her thoughts alone. She knew that Miki loved her very much but all along, she didn’t quite know how to reciprocate her love. She hated herself for saying that they should just stay as friends and to be exact, she wasn’t avoiding Miki. She was avoiding herself.
that hurts  :mon emo:

She pressed on the reply button and typed: “I love you, Miki-tan.” She then pressed on the send button before she switched off her phone. She thought, “Should I tell Miki about the meeting I’m having with Maki tomorrow? The timing just seemed to be wrong. Perhaps I shouldn’t even have agreed on meeting up with her. But I should keep to my words. I promise it won’t affect us, Miki-tan. I promise.”

it could affect them...  :mon scare:

She recalled how she had begged Aya for forgiveness for the hit-and-run incident and how they confessed their love for each other and how she broke up with Aya.

My memories are changing, they're fading


She had hurt Aya too much. Maybe it was a good time for a brand new start for both of them. Maybe it was high time for her to leave Aya’s life.

I'll welcome a new tomorrow

maki...  :mon waterworks: this chapter is so saaaaaaaaaaaad

waiting next chapter!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: JFC on June 09, 2008, 06:27:25 AM
Ch. 13 -
So Aya was getting stalker mail, eh? :O

Cutting back on GAM's activities is a prudent decision to at least lessen the chance of one of these whacked out wota getting near Aya and Miki, but Tsunku's got some nerve making it sound like Miki's to blame for it.  :thumbdown:


There's also another potential source for all that hate-mail, but I'm hoping that I'm wrong about it.



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Yossie took a tissue and wiped off the tears on Miki’s face. Miki allowed Yossie to do so. “You don’t have to worry about GAM. In the worst scenario whereby GAM is fully terminated, it shouldn’t matter as much as before now that you have hooked up with her.”
Yossi's right. Even if they can't be an official group, they're still together in the more important way. :oops:



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When they were out of the bar, Yossie took out her handphone and saw that there were one new message which read as followed: Yossie, let’s meet up for dinner later at that same Chinese restaurant. Is 6pm fine with you? Forever waiting for you – Charmy Rika ^^

“Is your darling looking for you again?” Miki teased.

“Yeah, I got to go back to bathe and change up before I meet up with her. I don’t want to have the Fujimoto’s smell when I meet up with her later.”

“That isn’t a bad scent.”

“Yeah, but it gives the wrong impression to her.
Yeah, considering how Rika freaks out at any mention/hint of Miki, better safe than sorry.



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See you!” Yossie exclaimed. She then flagged a taxi and jumped into it. Inside the taxi, she waved to Miki and sent her a text message: If anything goes wrong, just call me.  I’m just so glad that you confided in me. It shows that you don’t view me just as an ordinary friend. Thanks for giving me another chance, Fujimoto.  Yossie smiled.
Yossi made sure to send it to the correct number, right?



Ch. 14 -
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*GAM ARGUMENT*
:OMG: :cry:


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*AYA-MAKI CONVO*
Oh crap...this isn't going to end well.




Ch. 15 -
Holy crap Aichan, stuck for almost 2 hours because you can't decide? :lol:
Admittedly, it is rather sweet when you think about it.



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When she flipped open her phone, she was shocked that the caller was Miki. Ever since that day when Miki called to confide in her that she had fallen in love with someone who was, no doubt, Aya, she hadn’t been calling Yossie.  Why did she call me? It must be something important. She won’t call me for nothing…
Careful Yossi, don't let Rika find out that Miki's calling you or vice versa, especially now.
:scared:



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“Yossie, who are you calling?” Rika asked. She could see from Yossie’s expression who that person was but she wanted to hear her confirmation.

Yossie gazed at the girl sitting beside her. She knew she shouldn’t lie to her. She knew that honesty was important in love. She murmured under her breath, “Fujimoto.”

I knew it, it’s her.
Oh crap...

...

Luckily it was just a wrong number. Normally one would think that this would mean that their evening can go a bit smoother now that it's clear that Miki wasn't intentionally calling Yossi just then, however Yossi's reaction kinda throws that idea for a loop.



Ch. 16 -
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She thought, “Should I tell Miki about the meeting I’m having with Maki tomorrow?
Probably not, but it probably wouldn't be good either way, if you think about it. Chances are Miki's going to find out about their meeting anyway. If Aya doesn't tell her, Miki will flip out because she kept it a secret from her. If Aya DOES tell her, Miki will flip out because Aya agreed to the meeting.


Can't help but wonder what Maki's going to do and why she wanted to see Aya. :?
Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: tito on June 09, 2008, 08:51:58 AM
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wow, it's heartbreaking and awesomely awesome
This makes me very happy :wub:
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mmm, sounds fishy
:glasses:
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yeah, a good time to start a new life... together
^This cracks me up!  XD
first... i love this song, it's beautiful, i'm not a takitty fan but even i listen to it a lot, and i like how you write song fic
Thanks! This makes me happy  :wub: That song always pops up in my head when I visit the beaches..
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so heartbreaking!  :mon cry:
*Piece back Yukari's heart* Oh man, this reminds me of Humpty Dumpty... :lol:
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wow poor Yossy, i hope that she should can clarify her feelings  :mon wind:
Hmm..hopefully  :P
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that hurts  :mon emo:
Though you dislike Aya but you still feel for her..nice emotional one, girl! :lol:
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it could affect them...  :mon scare:
*Drum rolls*
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maki...  :mon waterworks: this chapter is so saaaaaaaaaaaad
Oh man, I didn't intend to make it so sad at first you know? Really..
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There's also another potential source for all that hate-mail, but I'm hoping that I'm wrong about it.
Yey! JFC is back :) *Tries to read JFC's mind* Ok, I think I fail :depressed:
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Oh crap...this isn't going to end well.
*Drum rolls*
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Probably not, but it probably wouldn't be good either way, if you think about it. Chances are Miki's going to find out about their meeting anyway. If Aya doesn't tell her, Miki will flip out because she kept it a secret from her. If Aya DOES tell her, Miki will flip out because Aya agreed to the meeting.
It will be bad either way for them... :(

Today wasn't a very good day for me and I'm quite affected by the fact that my team lost this morning to our arch-rival.. Guess the fastest I can start writing the next chapter and post it up is tonight  ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: Yukari on June 09, 2008, 09:05:48 AM
Today wasn't a very good day for me and I'm quite affected by the fact that my team lost this morning to our arch-rival.. Guess the fastest I can start writing the next chapter and post it up is tonight  ;)

i'll wait!!  :mon nap:

i'm not a nice emotional girl  :mon scare: it's just that even if i don't like aya in this fic, i don't hate her  :mon exhaust:

so much drum rolls... something will happen *drum rolls*

waiting next chaptaaa!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: tru_harmony on June 09, 2008, 09:16:58 AM
hey tito... can you calculate how many i owe you now? i lost count...

you wrote that last one well... i actually wanted to write something with that "under the same sky" thing... you beat me to it... oh well... haha...

from my fic's charmy to your fic's charmy: Don't give up... Positive Charmy!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: tito on June 09, 2008, 09:26:19 AM
i'll wait!!  :mon nap:

i'm not a nice emotional girl  :mon scare: it's just that even if i don't like aya in this fic, i don't hate her  :mon exhaust:

so much drum rolls... something will happen *drum rolls*

waiting next chaptaaa!
I love you  :wub: :wub: now I'm more in the mood already but I need to finish my Math assignment first  :angry:
Don't fall asleep! XD
hey tito... can you calculate how many i owe you now? i lost count...
Think it is 9+4.5 = 13.5 .. minus away the one you just posted, it is 12.5..enjoy writing! :D

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you wrote that last one well... i actually wanted to write something with that "under the same sky" thing... you beat me to it... oh well... haha...
Thanks..yeah I have this idea for some time already from Namie Amuro's Wishing under the same star song but I just don't know where to put it..oh well, don't write that! If that happens, it means Ishiyoshi in Runaway will separate! NO!! :cry:
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from my fic's charmy to your fic's charmy: Don't give up... Positive Charmy!!!
Ganbatte! For the sake of the one and only Prince Charmy.. I mean, Charming :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: Yukari on June 09, 2008, 09:30:05 AM
i'll wait!!  :mon nap:

i'm not a nice emotional girl  :mon scare: it's just that even if i don't like aya in this fic, i don't hate her  :mon exhaust:

so much drum rolls... something will happen *drum rolls*

waiting next chaptaaa!
I love you  :wub: :wub: now I'm more in the mood already but I need to finish my Math assignment first  :angry: Don't fall asleep! XD

ok ok, but it's pretty late here... like 3:30 am...  :mon nap: just a minute more... zzzzzzz

however i'll wait, i can't go to bed when i knew that you will post something soon  :mon dunno:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.16 - Yume Kara Samete
Post by: tito on June 09, 2008, 10:29:54 AM
Oh man, I feel touched  :wub: and pressured  XD ... I just finished my assignment so it might take some time..if you are tired, go and rest first! Or at least nap and then return in an hour or two. I promise it will be up then  :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart
Post by: tito on June 09, 2008, 12:28:22 PM
Here is Chapter 17 as promised! :lol: I have split this chapter into 3 parts from 3 different POVs...
Dear readers (especially Miki's fans), please promise that you will stay rational and calm after reading this. You can put your knives away just in case.. :lol:

F.Y.I

Chapter 17

Cracked Heart

Tou’s version (as in GoMatTou)

December 24 (9.46am)

I called her for the 15th time this morning but I was yet again directed to her voice-mail as her phone was not switched on. “The number you are trying to reach is currently unavailable. Please leave a message after the tone. BEEP,” the familiar mechanical female voice sounded.

What the hell should I say to her this time round? I had already apologized to her and I had said “I love you” 14 times. I held my phone close to my ears and said softly, “Aya-chan, I know I shouldn’t have spoken like that to you yesterday. I’m sorry about that. Can you at least give me a chance to make amends for what I have done? Please.”

 I tried to convince myself that maybe she had something on this morning like a photoshoot or rehearsal that I wasn’t aware of. Maybe she wanted to tell me about her schedule for today yesterday before I flared up at her. Maybe she was still sleeping. Maybe.

I picked up my phone and dialed Aya’s manager and to my delight, he picked up my call. “Hello, may I know Aya’s schedule for the day? Fujimoto Miki here.” I went straight into my point.

“Hi Miki, today is Aya’s rest day. I thought she’s with you,” he replied and cackled when he completed his sentence.

I frowned as the sense of irritation grew in me. Why did he say that ‘I thought she’s with you’? He made me feel like an irresponsible lover. Why did he even cackle? Couldn’t he just learn how to laugh properly? I took in a deep breath before I spoke so that I wouldn’t flare up at him, “She’s not with me.” It’s just so painful to admit to this. “Do you have any idea where she is now?”

“Hmm, I’m not very sure where she is,” he paused before adding, “ Oh Maki is leaving Japan this afternoon so maybe Aya is with Maki now. After all they are-” I hung up abruptly. I knew what he was about to say. They are lovers. No, they were lovers. Maki, why did she come into the picture again? Or perhaps she was always in the picture and had never left. He was just bullshitting. Aya wouldn’t meet up with her. Maki knocked her down. Maki dumped her. Why would Aya go and see her and be reminded of all the unhappiness in the past? Maybe Aya didn’t view their past as unhappy memories. Maybe Aya still liked her. No, I shouldn’t doubt Aya. Doubt would only shake our relationship even more. Aya wouldn’t.

December 24 (11.23am)

After an agonizing one and a half hour ride on the taxi, I finally reached Narita Airport. Well, as saying goes, “It’s better to be safe than sorry.” I didn’t doubt you. I was just playing safe.

I spent more than half an hour dashing around in Narita Airport looking out for Aya and Maki. To my delight, I didn’t manage to find any traces of the 2 girls. I chided myself for being paranoid. I smiled because this confirmed that I was right about it. Aya wouldn’t meet up with that stupid ex-lover. I shouldn’t even have doubted her for one second. I dialed Aya’s number again but I was yet again directed to the voice mail. Well, I would prefer Aya to ignore me than to be with Maki now. At least, in the back of her head, she would be thinking of me. 

Just as when I was about to leave the airport, from the corner of my eyes, I saw 2 girls who resembled Maki and Aya strolling towards Starbucks. I turned my head to face the 2 girls and blinked several times in an attempt to knock away the hallucination. I must be looking out for them for too long that I hallucinated. But as I moved closer towards the pair who was now seated across each other in a cozy corner in Starbucks, I realized that it wasn’t my hallucination. I couldn’t believe my eyes. They were Goto Maki and Matsuura Aya.

Aya was smiling and chatting with that girl. The scene in front of me reminded me of Aya’s birthday this year when I stood outside the café and watched how Maki gave Aya her birthday gift. Did I go back in time because I had cried too hard yesterday? Tears welled up in my eyes as I watched the pair chat happily.

Why didn’t Aya tell me about their meeting? Why did she keep it as a secret? Were my greatest fears turning into reality? I didn’t know exactly how I felt then. Jealous? Not quite. Depressed? Not exactly. Angry? Maybe.   

After some time, Maki leaned towards Aya with a grin plastered on her face. Aya sat there, unmoving and from my angle, I couldn’t quite see the expression on her face. Their faces were just inches apart. I couldn’t take this any longer. This couldn’t happen to me. After all that I had done for Aya, things couldn’t go back to square one. What did I do wrong to deserve this? So that was why Aya didn’t tell me about their meeting. I thought she loved me ever since that day I confessed to her. When did she fall in love with Maki again? Or maybe she was still in love with her all along. I was the one in delusion.

I strode towards them. Maki turned and greeted me with that stupid grin on her face, “Hi Miki.”

I hated her innocence. I hated her pretence. I could no longer contain the anger and hatred in me and I swung my arm and slapped her hard on her cheeks. She didn’t look shocked. In fact, she looked somewhat relaxed after the slap. What the hell. She even deprived me of the satisfaction a person gets after slapping another person. Who would appear relaxed after a slap? I didn’t know what to say. I didn’t know what to do. I ended up doing something quite cowardly. I bit my lips and ran off as quickly as I could with tears running down my cheeks.

I heard Aya call my name but I didn’t turn back. What did she want to say? She lied to me. She cheated on me. Why the hell did she message ‘I love you’ to me last night when she didn’t mean it? Why did she make me feel loved? Or maybe she had been two-timing all these while. Fujimoto Miki never likes to share pies with other people. Never.

Relax..don't hurl your knives at Aya or Maki. And most importantly, don't throw those knives at tito  :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 09, 2008, 12:32:11 PM
I haven't read it yet but I refuse to be rationale!
I shall always protect my Mikitty... even it means using a knife :P

*goes to read tentatively*

Ok i got through it!
It wasn't that bad... But once we get to Aya's POV I'll probably flip out :lol:
I like Maki, even in this story she still makes me wanna fall for her so if she can be happy at the expense of Miki's happiness, I don't mind that too much. I'm sooo torn... Can't we have YoCharMikitty/IshiYoshiKitty or whatever the hell it is, and somehow make Aya miserable and Maki happy... PUHLEASE~~~! :cry:

We're really gonna need some TakaGaki love to make up for all this sad angst ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 09, 2008, 12:47:09 PM
WHY DID YOU UPDATE SO SOON?!

i won't be able to meet my quota now... *falls apart* GGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!

... *picks up pieces of self and tries to put self back together*...

AYA, IT'S ALMOST KURISMASU!!!!!! what are you doing with maki?! you should be with miki!!!!! ... if not, she might end up in yossui's arms... if that happens, what will happen to my Charmy-sama?!?!?!?!

i want my ishiyoshi chapter... *takes out a knife*
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: tito on June 09, 2008, 01:35:32 PM
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I haven't read it yet but I refuse to be rationale!
I shall always protect my Mikitty... even it means using a knife
See, that's a Mikitty-fanatic attitude  :P
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It wasn't that bad... But once we get to Aya's POV I'll probably flip out
In anticipation for next part, I guess?  :D
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I like Maki, even in this story she still makes me wanna fall for her so if she can be happy at the expense of Miki's happiness, I don't mind that too much. I'm sooo torn... Can't we have YoCharMikitty/IshiYoshiKitty or whatever the hell it is, and somehow make Aya miserable and Maki happy... PUHLEASE~~~!
Threesome? Hmm...*looks at tru_harmony* hmm...
How can Maki be happy without Aya? Maybe there is a way..arghh, I'm confused!!
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We're really gonna need some TakaGaki love to make up for all this sad angst
*reads this for the 2nd time* Remember the chapter number that I told you last time round? I thought using Yume kara Samete for earlier chapter will make you happy and distract you from TakaGaki for a while  ;) :oops:
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WHY DID YOU UPDATE SO SOON?!

i won't be able to meet my quota now... *falls apart* GGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!

... *picks up pieces of self and tries to put self back together*...
*Transfer reason to Runaway thread* You can do it! Makenaide! :D
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AYA, IT'S ALMOST KURISMASU!!!!!! what are you doing with maki?! you should be with miki!!!!! ... if not, she might end up in yossui's arms... if that happens, what will happen to my Charmy-sama?!?!?!?!
If that happens, Charmy will spend Christmas with you :lol:
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i want my ishiyoshi chapter... *takes out a knife*
*Check plan for FYI* Ok, wait patiently for next chapter (that is different from parts)  :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 09, 2008, 01:55:08 PM
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If that happens, Charmy will spend Christmas with you

If that happens, my rabu-rabu will leave me... ... oh well..

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*Check plan for FYI* Ok, wait patiently for next chapter (that is different from parts)

...i am waiting... ... *still holding knife* :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 09, 2008, 02:03:47 PM
Threesome? Hmm...*looks at tru_harmony* hmm...
How can Maki be happy without Aya? Maybe there is a way..arghh, I'm confused!!
SHE CAN BE WITH REINA! :D (my fave Maki pairing :heart: )
But she can still have Aya, provided Aya is miserable but hides it very well from Maki :P

*reads this for the 2nd time* Remember the chapter number that I told you last time round? I thought using Yume kara Samete for earlier chapter will make you happy and distract you from TakaGaki for a while  ;) :oops:
I got excited with that heading coz I thought Ai would be there, but no :(
It was still sweet of you to use that song though :wub:
And I know, I'm still waiting for 22 but I'm just so desperate :cry:

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If that happens, Charmy will spend Christmas with you

If that happens, my rabu-rabu will leave me... ... oh well.
:rofl: That's the right attitude ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: tito on June 09, 2008, 02:13:43 PM
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If that happens, my rabu-rabu will leave me... ... oh well..
I think I'm dumb..I don't get what you are getting at...is rabu-rabu a person? ;) :( :D
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...i am waiting... ... *still holding knife*
You know it partially depends on your updates as well, right? Chill, girl, put the knife aside. We can have a nice girl talk without knife. Yeah, put it away.. :)
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SHE CAN BE WITH REINA!  (my fave Maki pairing  )
But she can still have Aya, provided Aya is miserable but hides it very well from Maki
Then Eri will get in between TakaGaki? Oh man, you just want a miserable and sad Aya.. XD
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I got excited with that heading coz I thought Ai would be there, but no
It was still sweet of you to use that song though
And I know, I'm still waiting for 22 but I'm just so desperate
I gave you a chance to listen to Ai's song while reading F.Y.I..So thoughtful of me, right?  :wub:
Let's see..hmm *stares at lollipopgirl sig* If you flood me with TakaGaki's photos especially wallpapers so that I'll have a higher chance of staring at TakaGaki, then they may come in earlier  ;) :oops: :wub:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 09, 2008, 02:18:17 PM
sooo not talented enough for wallpapers yet but glad to see your falling for the great TG ;)
Do these help:
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c319/lollipop_girl_/Momusu8301.jpg)
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c319/lollipop_girl_/TakaGaki2-1-1.jpg)
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c319/lollipop_girl_/TakaGaki.gif)
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c319/lollipop_girl_/TakaGaki1.jpg)
:lol: :oops:

I'm so gonna fail my exam tomorrow :imdead:
(Sorry, i don't know how to thumbnail)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: kRisZ on June 09, 2008, 02:19:09 PM
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Relax..don't hurl your knives at Aya or Maki. And most importantly, don't throw those knives at tito

damn, that was funny, very funny  :lol:


okay, run fast Miki, don't look back and go to Yossie :P


EDIT

*looks at previous post*  :drool:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: tito on June 09, 2008, 02:29:52 PM
What can I say? I love the gif one!  :wub: Go study! *Pray that you'll do well with new TakaGaki love* Thanks for the photos..I will see what I can do about it :P

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damn, that was funny, very funny
Lol, I'm scared.. :O XD :lol:
EDIT: KrisZ I agree fully.. :wub: Because of that, no one should kill me!  :P Yeah, lollipopgirl saves my life!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: kRisZ on June 09, 2008, 02:35:10 PM
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KrisZ I agree fully..

that Miki should go to Yossie.?.  :P :D yeah be thankful to lollipopgirl  ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 09, 2008, 02:45:34 PM
yes, my rabu-rabu is a person... who will leave me if Charmy-sama spends Christmas with me...

*keeps knife in drawer... takes out blender... grabs everybody (rika, yossui, miki, ayaya, maki) and puts them in blender*

~RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!~ there... that should keep everyone happy...

... TG need not be included... they're in the toaster... it's getting hot...

still waiting for ishiyoshi goodness

Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: tito on June 09, 2008, 02:58:08 PM
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that Miki should go to Yossie.?.    yeah be thankful to lollipopgirl 
That the TakaGaki makes me drool... :lol: ^I'm not really in a position to agree to that  XD *Worship the studying girl*
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*keeps knife in drawer... takes out blender... grabs everybody (rika, yossui, miki, ayaya, maki) and puts them in blender*

~RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!~ there... that should keep everyone happy...

... TG need not be included... they're in the toaster... it's getting hot...
That's fivesome!! Wow  :wub: everyone here wants that blender..^yey, good metaphor (is that one? my lit sucks) *pass the toaster to lollipopgirl*
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still waiting for ishiyoshi goodness
You'll have to wait for some time really  :D

*Play I WISH* Ok, I'm going off already..remember the updates! PEACE! :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: kRisZ on June 09, 2008, 03:13:05 PM
I was half certain that's why I was playing  :grin:  and you have all the right tito  ;)

school - ganbatte ne :)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: heyyouhiya on June 09, 2008, 06:48:05 PM
*hurls knives at tito*  :angry:

MIKI!!!!!!

Oh wait
-thinks back to own storys-
damn...I hurt Miki all the time too



grrr...

*throws one more knife*

Sorry if I hit you with any of those!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: JFC on June 09, 2008, 07:06:57 PM
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Dear readers (especially Miki's fans), please promise that you will stay rational and calm after reading this. You can put your knives away just in case..
:shifty:


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I picked up my phone and dialed Aya’s manager and to my delight, he picked up my call. “Hello, may I know Aya’s schedule for the day? Fujimoto Miki here.” I went straight into my point.

“Hi Miki, today is Aya’s rest day. I thought she’s with you,”
Oh hell I knew it. Aya probably mentioned to her manager that she was going out, and thus the manager assumed it was with Miki. This now means that Miki will probably go looking for Aya.



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“She’s not with me.” It’s just so painful to admit to this. “Do you have any idea where she is now?”

“Hmm, I’m not very sure where she is,” he paused before adding, “ Oh Maki is leaving Japan this afternoon so maybe Aya is with Maki now. After all they are-” I hung up abruptly.
And heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere we go.
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December 24 (11.23am)

After an agonizing one and a half hour ride on the taxi, I finally reached Narita Airport. Well, as saying goes, “It’s better to be safe than sorry.” I didn’t doubt you. I was just playing safe.
Unfortunately, something tells me Aya won't see it that way.



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Just as when I was about to leave the airport, from the corner of my eyes, I saw 2 girls who resembled Maki and Aya strolling towards Starbucks. I turned my head to face the 2 girls and blinked several times in an attempt to knock away the hallucination. I must be looking out for them for too long that I hallucinated. But as I moved closer towards the pair who was now seated across each other in a cozy corner in Starbucks, I realized that it wasn’t my hallucination. I couldn’t believe my eyes. They were Goto Maki and Matsuura Aya.
:badluck:



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I strode towards them. Maki turned and greeted me with that stupid grin on her face, “Hi Miki.”
Maki knows that Miki and Aya are together now, right?

/me takes shelter and awaits for teh shitz to fly.
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: poets on June 09, 2008, 07:11:57 PM
*hurls knives at tito*  :angry:

Oh wait
-thinks back to own storys-
damn...I hurt Miki all the time too


Yeah  :-\ , I understand what you mean... Miki's just so... hurtable in fics
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: Yukari on June 10, 2008, 03:09:10 AM
hi hi!! i read it when you posted it, but i was log out, and i go to sleep, now i have rings under my eyes  :mon suspect:

but... i love the chaptaaa!!  :muffin: :muffin: long comment for it!  :cow:

What the hell should I say to her this time round? I had already apologized to her and I had said “I love you” 14 times. I held my phone close to my ears and said softly, “Aya-chan, I know I shouldn’t have spoken like that to you yesterday. I’m sorry about that. Can you at least give me a chance to make amends for what I have done? Please.”

poor miki, how many times she had apologized??  :mon cry:

“Hi Miki, today is Aya’s rest day. I thought she’s with you,” he replied and cackled when he completed his sentence.

I frowned as the sense of irritation grew in me. Why did he say that ‘I thought she’s with you’? He made me feel like an irresponsible lover. Why did he even cackle? Couldn’t he just learn how to laugh properly? I took in a deep breath before I spoke so that I wouldn’t flare up at him, “She’s not with me.” It’s just so painful to admit to this. “Do you have any idea where she is now?”

“Hmm, I’m not very sure where she is,” he paused before adding, “ Oh Maki is leaving Japan this afternoon so maybe Aya is with Maki now. After all they are-” I hung up abruptly. I knew what he was about to say. They are lovers. No, they were lovers. Maki, why did she come into the picture again? Or perhaps she was always in the picture and had never left. He was just bullshitting. Aya wouldn’t meet up with her. Maki knocked her down. Maki dumped her. Why would Aya go and see her and be reminded of all the unhappiness in the past? Maybe Aya didn’t view their past as unhappy memories. Maybe Aya still liked her. No, I shouldn’t doubt Aya. Doubt would only shake our relationship even more. Aya wouldn’t.
f------- manager!! you hadn't to say her!!!  :mon zoom:


Just as when I was about to leave the airport, from the corner of my eyes, I saw 2 girls who resembled Maki and Aya strolling towards Starbucks. I turned my head to face the 2 girls and blinked several times in an attempt to knock away the hallucination. I must be looking out for them for too long that I hallucinated. But as I moved closer towards the pair who was now seated across each other in a cozy corner in Starbucks, I realized that it wasn’t my hallucination. I couldn’t believe my eyes. They were Goto Maki and Matsuura Aya.
nooooooooooooooo~~ bad for gam... good for Yomiki... omg now i'm confused  :mon scare:

Why didn’t Aya tell me about their meeting? Why did she keep it as a secret? Were my greatest fears turning into reality? I didn’t know exactly how I felt then. Jealous? Not quite. Depressed? Not exactly. Angry? Maybe.

she didn't feel so much jealous?? jujujujuju :mon noprob: (yeah, i'm crazy :mon whimper:)

After some time, Maki leaned towards Aya with a grin plastered on her face. Aya sat there, unmoving and from my angle, I couldn’t quite see the expression on her face. Their faces were just inches apart. I couldn’t take this any longer. This couldn’t happen to me. After all that I had done for Aya, things couldn’t go back to square one. What did I do wrong to deserve this? So that was why Aya didn’t tell me about their meeting. I thought she loved me ever since that day I confessed to her. When did she fall in love with Maki again? Or maybe she was still in love with her all along. I was the one in delusion.
mikiiiii~~ nooo~~  :mon scare:

I strode towards them. Maki turned and greeted me with that stupid grin on her face, “Hi Miki.”

I hated her innocence. I hated her pretence. I could no longer contain the anger and hatred in me and I swung my arm and slapped her hard on her cheeks. She didn’t look shocked. In fact, she looked somewhat relaxed after the slap. What the hell. She even deprived me of the satisfaction a person gets after slapping another person. Who would appear relaxed after a slap? I didn’t know what to say. I didn’t know what to do. I ended up doing something quite cowardly. I bit my lips and ran off as quickly as I could with tears running down my cheeks.
i love maki~~  :mon inluv: gocchin might take Aya to another country  :mon dance:, if she won't do that...  :mon mad:... i still will love her  :mon lovelaff:

I heard Aya call my name but I didn’t turn back. What did she want to say? She lied to me. She cheated on me. Why the hell did she message ‘I love you’ to me last night when she didn’t mean it? Why did she make me feel loved? Or maybe she had been two-timing all these while. Fujimoto Miki never likes to share pies with other people. Never.
that's Miki!!! great miki-sama!!  :mon yeah:

now i'm calling yossy to let her know about it...  :mon evillaff:

i won't kill you tito, i want updates! LOL

waiting next chaptaaa!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: zay05ohayou on June 10, 2008, 03:33:12 AM
wooohoo i finally got access to a computer in ages.. except this is a library computer..  :sweatdrop:
i missed out on commenting on a lot of chapters..  :cry: and i couldn't voice out my opinion for quite a while..
maki's back so awesome!! but she's leaving so waah!!
and there's a one sided yomiki going on... very one sided.. poor charmy..  :(
and about aya, im sure she still likes maki.. its either that or thats what i want to believe..  :)
hmm.. maki got slapped by miki and she is still smiling.. doesnt that tell miki anything??  :doh:
well lets hope its because maki invited aya overseas and she accepted..  ;)
hmm... i'll comment more if i can.. times almost up..  :'( i'll try and make up for it if you want tito  ;)
I missed yoouuu!!  :wub:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: tito on June 10, 2008, 03:56:19 AM
Firstly, I was quite pissed off with my mum a while ago but now, after I read the comments, I feel happier. Too happy! :wub:
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you have all the right tito

WAHAHAHAHA :lol:
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school - ganbatte ne
Thanks... :(
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MIKI!!!!!!

Oh wait
-thinks back to own storys-
damn...I hurt Miki all the time too
Please don't do anything bad to Miki in One Minute..don't. Ok I think you will :cry: :cry:
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grrr...

*throws one more knife*

Sorry if I hit you with any of those!
I think you did..my heart is in pain :lol:
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Maki knows that Miki and Aya are together now, right?

* JFC takes shelter and awaits for teh shitz to fly.
Hmm, I didn't quite reveal whether Maki knows about them or not..more will be covered in Mat's and Go's POVs  :D
Probably you will need to find a big shelter..maybe some others will like to join you there later  XD :lol:
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Yeah  , I understand what you mean... Miki's just so... hurtable in fics
Agree... :cry:
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hi hi!! i read it when you posted it, but i was log out, and i go to sleep, now i have rings under my eyes
Oh man, now I feel bad..rings, rings, GO AWAY!! :lol:
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nooooooooooooooo~~ bad for gam... good for Yomiki... omg now i'm confused
For a moment, I thought I killed your love for Yomiki...
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that's Miki!!! great miki-sama!!

now i'm calling yossy to let her know about it...
Matchmaker Yukari in action! :mon dance:
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i won't kill you tito, i want updates! LOL
Yeah!~ If you don't see me posting around in the next hour, it probably means that I'm out but I doubt that will be the case though..Anyway, if I'm out, you should catch some rest..don't make me feel bad  :P XD
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and about aya, im sure she still likes maki.. its either that or thats what i want to believe..
hmm.. maki got slapped by miki and she is still smiling.. doesnt that tell miki anything??
Stay tuned for the next POV!  :P
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hmm... i'll comment more if i can.. times almost up..  i'll try and make up for it if you want tito
I missed yoouuu!!
I miss you tooo!!! :wub: Hope to see you commenting soon! I know you're catching every single chapter dutifully even without a comp! I love you! :wub:

Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Tou's version)
Post by: Yukari on June 10, 2008, 04:37:40 AM
Yeah!~ If you don't see me posting around in the next hour, it probably means that I'm out but I doubt that will be the case though..Anyway, if I'm out, you should catch some rest..don't make me feel bad  :P XD

sorry, i didn't want you to feel bad!  :mon whimper:

now... what should i say?? oh yep yep i don't have rings  :roll:

i'm going to do my work like cupid  :wub:


LOL!

waiting again!  XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: tito on June 10, 2008, 06:29:20 AM
Ok, I'm officially late for the gathering. 1 and a half hour. Oh gosh. Here is the next part for everyone who has been waiting!  :wub: The most hated Aya POV :lol:

F.Y.I

Chapter 17

Mat’s version

December 24 (10.40am)

In the taxi on my way to the Narita Airport, I thought for the gazillion time, “Am I right to meet up with Maki today? Why did I even agree to meet up with her yesterday? What am I going to say to her later? She crushed my heart! I hadn’t talked to her ever since that day I desperately begged her to stay as friends in the studio. I’ve nothing to say to her. Shit, I shouldn’t have agreed on meeting up.”

I took out my handphone from my bag as I wanted to text Miki that I was going to the airport to send someone off today in case she was worried for me. Strange, my phone didn’t even vibrate once this morning. I thought Miki would have called or at least messaged me. Maybe I shouldn’t avoid her like what I had done yesterday but I couldn’t face up to her after what I had said. I couldn’t face up to myself. Maybe she was with Yossie. No, I shouldn’t doubt her. Miki loved me.

I flipped open my phone and pressed the ‘on’ button several times and I was frustrated that my phone’s screen was blank. I came to one conclusion: my phone’s battery was flat. Shit, I should have charged it yesterday. Why did I fall asleep on my bed before I charged it?

The first thing that crossed my mind when I realized that my phone’s battery was flat was that Maki couldn’t reach me and our lunch appointment wouldn’t be possible. I mean, Narita Airport was quite big and she wouldn’t be able to find me. I wouldn’t be bothered to look for her. After all, she didn’t tell me where we were meeting exactly yesterday. The only way was that she waited for me at the drop-off point. But that would be so silly of her to wait there.

Then Miki crossed my mind. Miki must be trying hard to reach me the whole morning. She must be thinking that I was avoiding her by switching off my phone. What would she think of me if she happened to know that I was meeting up with Maki today? She probably would think that I still liked Maki. But how would she know? I didn’t tell her and Tokyo wasn’t a small place.

December 24 (11.45am)
After I paid the taxi driver and came out of the taxi at the drop-off point, I heard a familiar voice calling my name from behind. I turned and saw her leaning against the wall. She looked weathered and much more haggard than before despite the make-up she wore. I tried to keep my eyes off her cleavage revealed by her loosely worn blouse. The old memories of those nights we spent together began to surface themselves in my mind. No, I mustn’t think about them for the sake of Miki. No, I mustn’t.

She asked in that same tender voice, “Shall we go in?” I nodded. I hated the familiarity. How much I wanted to just hail a cab right now and leave Narita.

“Do you like Starbucks?” she asked again when we entered the airport. Personally I preferred Coffee Bean but this wasn’t the correct time to say that. I nodded in agreement and we strolled towards Starbucks in silence. I didn’t know how to describe that silence. It wasn’t exactly awkward but neither was it comfortable.

We were seated across each other in a cozy corner in Starbucks after I grabbed a cup of cappuccino and she got latte for herself. As an artist, I was used to sitting in corners. But this corner just seemed to be too cozy to my liking and it brought back too much memories. Way too much. I tried to shake off those memories but I failed.

Maki took a sip of the latte she ordered before she whispered, “I’m sorry for dumping you like that. It was all my fault. I never expect you to forgive me. I never expect us to be anything again,” she paused and she looked straight into my eyes. I gazed at her and I instantly realized that was a very big mistake. That pair of penetrating eyes looked hurt and it was just too familiar to my liking. Penetrating eyes, lips…No, I shouldn’t be thinking of this. I loved Miki. She continued, “Thank you for dropping your charges. Thank you, Aya.”

I didn’t quite know how to react to this. I wasn’t mentally prepared for this. What should I say? I must be fair to Miki after all that she had done for me. I mustn’t think about our past. I mustn’t. I smiled in an attempt to calm my nerves and replied in a rather flat voice, “I heard from Nacchi about you and I just sympathize with you. That’s all.” Maybe it did sound harsh because she appeared to be somewhat taken aback by my response but it couldn’t be helped. I mustn’t let her think that she stood a chance between GAM. I took a sip of the cappuccino placed in front of me.

Suddenly, Maki leaned across the table towards me, smiled and spoke rather gently, “There’s some cream on your face, Aya. Don’t move.” I obeyed and didn’t move an inch. As she came closer to me, I could feel her breathing. It was just so familiar. Shit, I shouldn’t have drunk it. Shit, I shouldn’t have even ordered cappuccino. Those memories surfaced themselves again and I couldn’t shake them off. They were overwhelming and suffocating me.

When our faces were inches apart, I could hear someone stomping towards us. Maybe it was someone who was late for his or her flight and had to rush his or her lunch. Maki turned her head and greeted that person, “Hi Miki.”  My jaws literally dropped when I heard the name. Why would Miki be here? She didn’t know that I was with Maki here. Who did she hear it from? What timing. I turned my head and I saw a furious Miki raising her arm and she slapped Maki hard on her cheeks.

Maki didn’t appear shocked though. In fact, she looked relaxed. Maybe she had suffered a lot in there and this slap wasn’t something great or maybe she just wanted to taunt Miki by depriving Miki of the satisfaction of slapping. Or maybe she had already expected it to come. This girl was just simply too difficult to be read. I couldn’t understand what was going through her mind. I never understand.

I had never seen that expression on Miki’s face before. It was a mixture of anger, disappointment and sorrow. She bit her lips and ran off. Confused, I stood up and shouted several times, “Miki-tan!” She didn’t even look back once. I knew what she was thinking of. She thought that I deliberately met up with Maki on the next day after our quarrel to spite her or hurt her. She thought that Maki and I were in for a kiss. She thought that I cheated on her.

“Go and chase after her. She likes you,” Maki spoke with a smile on her face. I felt pissed off by what she had just said. Why did she teach me what to do? I knew I needed to chase after her. Did she think that I didn’t know Miki liked me?

Without saying a word, I took off my heels, dashed off and ran after Miki. I knew I wouldn’t be able to catch Miki wearing those heels. But without the heels, would it be possible for me to catch up with the former Gatas player? I had no choice but to chase. It was my one and only chance to catch her heart.
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: Yukari on June 10, 2008, 06:46:07 AM
jujuju pleaaaaaaaaaase pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase don't catch her!!! :mon ref:

aya don't love miki  :mon annoy: she just feel gratitude, 'cause she can't betray miki for all the things that she do for her  :mon headbang:

capuccino jojojo maki could just kiss ayaya  :mon wind:

and and... who can understand maki goto??  :mon noprob:

that's my comment, i want to read maki pov  :mon dunno:

waiting next chapter!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: JFC on June 10, 2008, 06:47:14 AM
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I flipped open my phone and pressed the ‘on’ button several times and I was frustrated that my phone’s screen was blank. I came to one conclusion: my phone’s battery was flat. Shit, I should have charged it yesterday. Why did I fall asleep on my bed before I charged it?
Ah,so that's why she didn't get the umpty-million messages Miki was leaving and why she herself hasn't called Miki.

Aya =  :doh:



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She asked in that same tender voice, “Shall we go in?” I nodded. I hated the familiarity. How much I wanted to just hail a cab right now and leave Narita.

“Do you like Starbucks?” she asked again when we entered the airport. Personally I preferred Coffee Bean but this wasn’t the correct time to say that. I nodded in agreement and we strolled towards Starbucks in silence. I didn’t know how to describe that silence. It wasn’t exactly awkward but neither was it comfortable.
Awkward...and little do either of them know that Miki's actually there at the airport too, and, if the timing is right, she's probably witnessing them walking together RIGHT NOW!
:mon scare:



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We were seated across each other in a cozy corner in Starbucks after I grabbed a cup of cappuccino and she got latte for herself.
You mean Maki didn't get her usual Caramel Macchiato? :P



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As an artist, I was used to sitting in corners. But this corner just seemed to be too cozy to my liking and it brought back too much memories. Way too much. I tried to shake off those memories but I failed.

Maki took a sip of the latte she ordered before she whispered, “I’m sorry for dumping you like that. It was all my fault. I never expect you to forgive me. I never expect us to be anything again,” she paused and she looked straight into my eyes. I gazed at her and I instantly realized that was a very big mistake. That pair of penetrating eyes looked hurt and it was just too familiar to my liking. Penetrating eyes, lips…No, I shouldn’t be thinking of this. I loved Miki.
Ok, the fact that Aya's having this conflict IS rather unsettling. Considering this, it's not that surprising that Miki would be insecure and scared about losing Aya the way she has been.



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When our faces were inches apart, I could hear someone stomping towards us. Maybe it was someone who was late for his or her flight and had to rush his or her lunch. Maki turned her head and greeted that person, “Hi Miki.”  My jaws literally dropped when I heard the name.
Aya = :mon wtf:



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“Go and chase after her. She likes you,” Maki spoke with a smile on her face.
Well, if Maki didn't know before, she's pretty much figured it out now. 

And yeah, the fact that Maki remained smiling throughout the whole thing is kinda suspicious, if not just downright weird/creepy.



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Without saying a word, I took off my heels, dashed off and ran after Miki. I knew I wouldn’t be able to catch Miki wearing those heels. But without the heels, would it be possible for me to catch up with the former Gatas player? I had no choice but to chase. It was my one and only chance to catch her heart.
RUN AYA! RUN LIKE DA WIIIIIIIIIIIIIND!!!
Miki =  :mon runcry:
Aya = :mon rush: (closest I could come up with, it's not like we have many running smileys here :P)
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 10, 2008, 06:56:48 AM
aya... run quick... if miki runs into yossui's arms, you are going to get it...

*breaks into, steals and revs up RFP yossui's z4*

it you want rubber on your head and asphalt under, walk daintily...

...still waiting for sweet ishiyoshi reconciliation
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: tito on June 10, 2008, 07:10:52 AM
I'll do a quick reply to comments..shucks, I really should be going off already  :angry: ;) :lol:
jujuju pleaaaaaaaaaase pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase don't catch her!!! :mon ref:

aya don't love miki  :mon annoy: she just feel gratitude, 'cause she can't betray miki for all the things that she do for her  :mon headbang:
capuccino jojojo maki could just kiss ayaya  :mon wind:
^Pretty true about the gratitude part..I wonder whether you look forward to Aya/Maki kiss more or YoMiki as a result of that :lol: Such a redundant question
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and and... who can understand maki goto??  :mon noprob:
This cracks me up! :rofl:
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that's my comment, i want to read maki pov  :mon dunno:
Patience..probably tonight or tomorrow..I really got to go already  :(
]You mean Maki didn't get her usual Caramel Macchiato? :P
Err..change of taste? Ok, I admit that I didn't know about this.. ;)Oh well, change of taste! :lol:
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Aya = :mon wtf:
:lol: ^Accurate portrayal!
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And yeah, the fact that Maki remained smiling throughout the whole thing is kinda suspicious, if not just downright weird/creepy.
Maki's POV coming up soon!  :wub:
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Without saying a word, I took off my heels, dashed off and ran after Miki. I knew I wouldn’t be able to catch Miki wearing those heels. But without the heels, would it be possible for me to catch up with the former Gatas player? I had no choice but to chase. It was my one and only chance to catch her heart.
RUN AYA! RUN LIKE DA WIIIIIIIIIIIIIND!!!
Miki =  :mon runcry:
Aya = :mon rush: (closest I could come up with, it's not like we have many running smileys here :P)
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 :mon fyeah: That's so hilarious! Why aren't there many running smileys?
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aya... run quick... if miki runs into yossui's arms, you are going to get it...

*breaks into, steals and revs up RFP yossui's z4*

it you want rubber on your head and asphalt under, walk daintily...
The way you guys twist the story and request for different pairings crack me up! XD
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...still waiting for sweet ishiyoshi reconciliation
That..you really got to be much more patient and pray hard :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: sweeety on June 10, 2008, 07:27:47 AM
"I had no choice but to chase. It was my one and only chance to catch her heart. "

 But you already caught it. The problem is that you also picked up Maki's. And you never gave yours to Miki. So you really should be running to her in order to either give it back, or give her yours!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: Yukari on June 10, 2008, 07:41:34 AM
^Pretty true about the gratitude part..I wonder whether you look forward to Aya/Maki kiss more or YoMiki as a result of that :lol: Such a redundant question

who knows... i have maki goto complex  :mon noprob:

i laughed a lot with aya and miki running (JFC version)  XD XD XD

i just can see Aya tripping over  :mon XD:

and now yossy will be a goalkepper and stop miki  :mon inluv:

ishiyoshi is far far away?? wojooo (don't kill me ishiyoshi fans n.nU)

take your time tito, you have things to do and it's ok  :grin:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: zay05ohayou on June 10, 2008, 08:05:45 AM
Weeee Love you to tito!!  :wub: I finally got access on the computer thanks to my step dad's computer. Let's just hope he doesn't come home early and kicks me off it. Everything internet accessible has passwords and finger print scanners to prevent me from touching it..  :banghead:
Anyway, ok Ayaya's POV!!

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Suddenly, Maki leaned across the table towards me, smiled and spoke rather gently, “There’s some cream on your face, Aya. Don’t move.” I obeyed and didn’t move an inch. As she came closer to me, I could feel her breathing. It was just so familiar. Shit, I shouldn’t have drunk it. Shit, I shouldn’t have even ordered cappuccino. Those memories surfaced themselves again and I couldn’t shake them off. They were overwhelming and suffocating me.
aww.. it was too good to be true.. though this is Aya's POV i bet Maki was thinking of kissing her just before she leaves..  8) lol, my wishful thinking again..

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Maki didn’t appear shocked though. In fact, she looked relaxed. Maybe she had suffered a lot in there and this slap wasn’t something great or maybe she just wanted to taunt Miki by depriving Miki of the satisfaction of slapping. Or maybe she had already expected it to come. This girl was just simply too difficult to be read. I couldn’t understand what was going through her mind. I never understand.
Hmm.. what if... all of what she thought were true... she suffered a lot so it didnt matter and since she saw Miki she expected the slap but wanted to deprive her of satisfaction...  :D Everything must be going through her mind.. or.. planned out..  ;)

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“Go and chase after her. She likes you,” Maki spoke with a smile on her face. I felt pissed off by what she had just said.
Lol, maybe Maki said it because Aya was still there and didn't move but only called her out, Maki even had a chance to slip in two sentences which could've made up the time if Aya already ran after Miki.

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Why did she teach me what to do? I knew I needed to chase after her. Did she think that I didn’t know Miki liked me?
Well... I don't know that either..  :sweatdrop: What does Maki know actually? I feel lost..  :-\

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I had no choice but to chase. It was my one and only chance to catch her heart.
Go and catch it Aya! Before Miki drops it and falls on the ground and shatters into very tiny pieces!!  :O

Ok so we get 2/3 of the parts.  So everything comes to a misunderstanding.. and Aya regrets meeting up with Maki.. but she shouldn't feel guilty if she doesn't feel anything for Maki anymore.. unless she does..  ;) and it would be quite suspicious to have a  :O face when you get discovered.. not that I knew what Aya looked like at the time.. and it shouldn't even be a secret to meet up with Maki since she's leaving anyway..  :yep:

I can't wait for Maki's POV, i just hope she doesn't turn into a bad guy that tries to steal away other people's girlfriends.. Just someone who charms them to her..  :? huh i confused myself... oh well..  XD titooooo!!!  :love:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: sweeety on June 10, 2008, 09:21:16 AM
Time for Maki's POV! Wedge~
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 10, 2008, 09:29:53 AM
Well, that also wasn't as bad as I expected... I don't hate Aya anymor ethen I already did... I thin you're safe from the knifes coz no matter what Maki says or do, she'll get away with it coz I adore her oh so much :P Glad to see her starbucks addiction used in your fic... she really is crazy about that crap, errr stuff ;)

Maybe we should pair Maki and Yossy and screw up both Yukari and Tru's hopes :twisted:

WAAAAAAAAAAAIT, something I just noticed... I know you said you split this into the three POVs, but does that mean they are ALL parts are 'chapter 17', which means even longer to 22 :cry:

I'm so tired, i don't know what else I wanted to say now :(

@JFC: those running ones are perfect coz Aya has the heels so I could totally imagine the girly little prance while Miki runs for her life :lol: XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: sweeety on June 10, 2008, 11:15:55 AM
When I imagined what would happen at the date, I always imagined Miki finding out, going there, giving Aya a dirty and runing away from herr. But I was pleasantly surprised when Aya chased her back... Sweet!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: cierl03 on June 10, 2008, 11:56:15 AM
Coolll......~ i love these chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Although my favourite is aya, i'm kind of pissed off with her now >_< miki suffered enough but you still haven't given yourself fully to miki!!  :( :(

can't wait for goto part!!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: tito on June 10, 2008, 11:58:08 AM
Firstly I must say that I love to be out of the house from time to time because it always brings new inspirations to me.. :D The Maki POV may take a longer time to be written because..oh well I shouldn't explain ;) ..
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But you already caught it. The problem is that you also picked up Maki's. And you never gave yours to Miki. So you really should be running to her in order to either give it back, or give her yours!
Quite true...
who knows... i have maki goto complex  :mon noprob:

i laughed a lot with aya and miki running (JFC version)  XD XD XD

i just can see Aya tripping over  :mon XD:

and now yossy will be a goalkepper and stop miki  :mon inluv:

ishiyoshi is far far away?? wojooo (don't kill me ishiyoshi fans n.nU)

take your time tito, you have things to do and it's ok  :grin:
Hmm..the JFC version of them running just shows that Aya can never catch up with Miki :D Or will she? XD Haha, do you see Miki as a ball? :lol: Yeah, you can imagine that for the time being...Because there are quite a lot of characters so it might take some time for ishiyoshi to come in (short or long depends on how much you want it :D )
Thanks....I'll try to finish the next chapter at least before school reopens a.k.a exam starts :(
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I finally got access on the computer thanks to my step dad's computer. Let's just hope he doesn't come home early and kicks me off it. Everything internet accessible has passwords and finger print scanners to prevent me from touching it..
*Pray for zay05ohayou*
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Lol, maybe Maki said it because Aya was still there and didn't move but only called her out, Maki even had a chance to slip in two sentences which could've made up the time if Aya already ran after Miki.
It's more of because Aya was lagging there thinking of what Miki could be thinking so lost some time..
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Well... I don't know that either..   What does Maki know actually? I feel lost
In theory, Maki didn't know that they hooked up because she was caught on the day Miki confessed to Aya..but does she know?  :P
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it would be quite suspicious to have a   face when you get discovered.. not that I knew what Aya looked like at the time.. and it shouldn't even be a secret to meet up with Maki since she's leaving anyway.. 

I can't wait for Maki's POV, i just hope she doesn't turn into a bad guy that tries to steal away other people's girlfriends.. Just someone who charms them to her..   huh i confused myself... oh well..   titooooo!!! 
I hope you can find the answers in the next part of this chapter... :D
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Time for Maki's POV! Wedge~
Yeah, I'm excited about it too :) Woo-hoo...
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Well, that also wasn't as bad as I expected... I don't hate Aya anymor ethen I already did... I thin you're safe from the knifes coz no matter what Maki says or do, she'll get away with it coz I adore her oh so much  Glad to see her starbucks addiction used in your fic... she really is crazy about that crap, errr stuff
:lol: I just went into Starbucks 2 hours ago.. :lol: Starbucks is cool~ *sigh of relief* I see Gocchin is so well-loved, eh?  :wub:
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Maybe we should pair Maki and Yossy and screw up both Yukari and Tru's hopes
Nice suggestion and Rika ends up with Aya and Miki with no one..haha, my fic will be boycotted if that happens  :lol:
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WAAAAAAAAAAAIT, something I just noticed... I know you said you split this into the three POVs, but does that mean they are ALL parts are 'chapter 17', which means even longer to 22
I think it won't help a bit if I say that the next chapter will be split as well right? *pats back* *whispers to lollipopgirl: Next part will have some bits of them..I'm trying to incorporate them into the different parts here and there. DON'T BE SAD! :D*
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I'm so tired, i don't know what else I wanted to say now
Rest and study hard!  :)
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When I imagined what would happen at the date, I always imagined Miki finding out, going there, giving Aya a dirty and runing away from herr. But I was pleasantly surprised when Aya chased her back... Sweet!
That's quite a typical view, maybe? :lol: sweeety is back! :D
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Although my favourite is aya, i'm kind of pissed off with her now >_< miki suffered enough but you still haven't given yourself fully to miki!!
Wow! The first and perhaps only person here who likes Aya in Gomattou/F.Y.I!  :wub: Can't blame her too much really..there is a saying that goes 'old flame dies hard' or something..
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 10, 2008, 12:42:25 PM
*praying for ishiyoshi... builds an altar for burnt sacrifices... takes out one electric guitar*

CHARMY-SAMA, TAKE ONE OF MY ELECTRIC GUITARS AS A SACRIFICE!!! RETURN TO F.Y.I. IN YOUR FULL RABU-RABU GLORY...

don't fail me...

*still waiting...

j/k ... i'm actually more patient now... especially now that i owe you chapters... lalalalala... please take your time...
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: sweeety on June 11, 2008, 12:28:03 AM
bring back the angst! Been waitin. if I make it out of this (you know what) alive I wanna read more GAMu rabu and I hope Aya catches up...not so much as the symbolism, just care to see what would happen :( I gotta go now :'( Bye bye.
In case we never see each other again....

  I love you.
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: Yukari on June 11, 2008, 01:25:41 AM
Maybe we should pair Maki and Yossy and screw up both Yukari and Tru's hopes :twisted:

it couldn't be that bad... maybe Maki-Yossy-Miki  :mon mischief:

nonono >.< or it would be Yomaki and Charmikitty... and leave ayaya alone muajajaja (only in this fanfic i don't like her... or maybe two)   :mon dunno:

noooo~~~~ i want yomiki, one fanfic at least  :mon waterworks:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 11, 2008, 01:36:53 AM
Yocharmikitty :pimp:

Yocharmaki  :pimp:

Yocharmikittymaki  :pimp:

as long as charmy is with yossui, i'm fine...  :cow: it doesn't matter who else conserves water with them... excpet aya...

let ayaya wither away alone...
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Mat's version)
Post by: tito on June 11, 2008, 01:42:47 AM
So coincidental that we are online around the same time...
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*praying for ishiyoshi... builds an altar for burnt sacrifices... takes out one electric guitar*

CHARMY-SAMA, TAKE ONE OF MY ELECTRIC GUITARS AS A SACRIFICE!!! RETURN TO F.Y.I. IN YOUR FULL RABU-RABU GLORY...
Burning electric guitars? What about Yoshizawa Jin instead?
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bring back the angst! Been waitin. if I make it out of this (you know what) alive I wanna read more GAMu rabu and I hope Aya catches up...not so much as the symbolism, just care to see what would happen  I gotta go now Cry Bye bye.
In case we never see each other again....

  I love you.
Angst is in the near future...relax, you will be back here. I'm sure of it! Ganbatte! I love you too!  :)
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it couldn't be that bad... maybe Maki-Yossy-Miki

nonono >.< or it would be Yomaki and Charmikitty... and leave ayaya alone muajajaja (only in this fanfic i don't like her... or maybe two) 
I'll seriously open a poll for it after the next chapter...threesome accepted? :lol:
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Yocharmikitty

Yocharmaki

Yocharmikittymaki

as long as charmy is with yossui, i'm fine...  it doesn't matter who else conserves water with them... excpet aya...

let ayaya wither away alone...
Even tru_harmony has joined the anti-Aya in Gomattou/F.Y.I gang...wow FOURSOME!  :rofl:

Stay around friends, Maki's POV will be up soon! Very soon!  :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version)
Post by: tito on June 11, 2008, 02:18:20 AM
This may be confusing....

F.Y.I

Chapter 17

Cracked Heart

Go’s version

December 24 (11.00am)
I stood at the drop-off point in Narita Airport with my back leaning against the wall. I wondered for the hundredth time whether it was correct for me to be part of this test. It wouldn’t hurt anyone physically and I just wanted to make sure. As much as I wanted to see Aya, I didn’t want her to turn up. If she did, it would mean that what she said was true. I wished for Aya’s happiness and I wanted to see that for myself before I leave the country. After all, I had hurt her greatly and this was the least I could do for her.

My train of thoughts was disrupted abruptly when I heard someone called my name. It was Risa. Probably she came to send me off but she was early. Way too early. I asked rather courteously, “Why are you here so early? My plane is only flying off at 3.25pm.”

She blushed. Oh well, she wasn’t the first Hello! Project girl who blushed when she talked to me. After all, I was Goto Maki. She rushed through her words, “I heard there’s a nice sushi restaurant in the airport. I think it’s quite romantic to dine in the airport with a clear view of the planes.”

“Oh,” I replied. I had absolute no interest in Gokkies but it would be okay to entertain her provided that Aya didn’t turn up.

“So I’m waiting for Ai-chan here.”

I laughed. Ai-chan? So it wasn’t about Goto Maki after all. “Why didn’t you just come here with Ai?” I asked.

“It won’t be the same. I think she will be touched to see me waiting here,” she replied. These girls really had grown up. A couple of years back, they wouldn’t even make an extra effort to make the other feel touched. That was pretty sweet of her to do so. Would Aya be touched to see me waiting here for her? I doubt so. I had hurt her too much for her to feel this way towards me. As much as I wanted her to be touched, I didn’t want to her to feel anything towards me which could spoil her happiness.

A taxi stopped in front of us and Ai came out of the taxi. Her eyes widened when she saw Risa standing there at the drop-off point waiting for her with a wide grin. Ai scratched her head and said awkwardly, “Oh shit! How long have you been waiting? Sorry that I arrived late!”

Risa shook her head, blushed and spoke gently, “You aren’t late…I’m just early. I want to wait for you…”

Ai turned and greeted me. She shouldn’t have even bothered greeting me. How much I wished I was invisible then. I nodded as an indication that I acknowledged her before I gazed at somewhere far away. I didn’t want to look at them as they brought back too many memories to me. We used to say cheesy things like that and we used to wait for the other. No, I shouldn’t think of those days. Aya’s happiness was the top priority even if that person she spent her life with wasn’t me.

Ai smiled and said, “Maki, we are getting in first. See you later!” I waved to them without exchanging much eye contact. I just didn’t want to look at them. It was just too painful to do so. They reminded me so much about us. Ai took Risa’s hand and they entered the airport complex together. I prayed that they wouldn’t have a similar ending as that of Aya and I.

Not before long, a taxi stopped and Aya popped out from the taxi. It had been some time since I last saw her. She seemed tired with the dark rings beneath her eyes and she was in deep thoughts. Bad signs. She looked in my direction once but she didn’t see me. She was too lost in her thoughts. Very bad sign. “Aya,” I called out. Even though I had been mouthing her name all these while to myself, it just seemed weird when I said it out loud to the girl I always loved.

I asked gently, “Shall we go in?” She nodded in agreement. Well, she didn’t have much of a choice there. When we were in the complex, I asked her, “Do you like Starbucks?” She nodded, avoiding eye contact with me. She was correct doing so. I was a jerk. She shouldn’t even speak to me at all. Maybe things weren’t that bad.

We walked to Starbucks in silence. I knew she didn’t want to speak to me and I didn’t want to talk while we walked. I mean, I didn’t prepare a lot of things to talk to her about and I would rather talk to her in Starbucks where I could have a good look at her while I spoke.

When we were in Starbucks, I led her to a cozy corner and we sat across each other after we bought our respective coffees. I took a sip of the latte in an attempt to calm my nerves before I spoke softly, “I’m sorry for dumping you like that. It was all my fault. I never expect you to forgive me. I never expect us to be anything again,” I paused and gazed at her.

Her eyes, nose and lips were still the same as before. No, I shouldn’t think of that. I lost my chance. She looked at me in the eyes and for that one moment, our eyes met. I wouldn’t be able to forget that moment. I could see the pain she was suffering from her eyes. Maybe I was the cause of the pain. Damn, I shouldn’t have agreed to help her. Maybe it wasn’t me. Damn, she might be right about it.

I continued, “Thank you for dropping your charges. Thank you, Aya.” Well, I really had to thank her. Jail wasn’t the best place on earth. But most of all, I wanted to thank her for those days that we spent together in the past. They were the best days of my life. I wondered if she got my message.

She smiled and spoke rather flatly, “I heard from Nacchi about you and I just sympathize with you. That’s all.” I didn’t quite know how to feel after I heard this line. Should I be upset that all she felt towards me was just sympathy? Or should I be delighted that she had already found happiness that I no longer mattered at all?

After she said that, she drank the cappuccino she had ordered rather clumsily. I couldn’t help but to smile. She was such a clumsy person but this made her all the more likable. I leaned across the table towards her and said gently, “There’s some cream on your face, Aya. Don’t move.” She obeyed and she didn’t move an inch.

Our faces neared. I could hear her heartbeat quickened. This was way too familiar for me. It was as though we had gone back in time and we were back in those days where we waited for each other. When our faces were inches apart, I summoned all my strength to stop myself from kissing her. As much as I wanted to taste her again, I didn’t want to ruin it all for her. I had to control myself.

Just at this moment, I heard footsteps moving towards us. I turned and to my horror, it was Miki. What timing. Maybe she was right about it. Miki was just an insecure lover who couldn’t trust Aya. Aya just looked shocked beyond words to see Miki. How much I wanted to just grab Aya and kiss her at that moment. Why couldn’t she just trust Aya? But I didn’t want to spoil their happiness. After all, I was just part of the test.

My acting skills didn’t fail me this time round as I smiled and greeted her, “Hi Miki.”

I could see the rage inside her and I was expecting her to do something to me. Splash me with latte? Or maybe a slap? She raised her arm and slapped me hard on the cheeks. Real hard. How much I wanted to congratulate Fujimoto Miki for living up to her name. It was a really hard slap.

I concealed the pain I was experiencing and gave her a nonchalant look. I just wanted to spite her by depriving her of the satisfaction of slapping. Not that it was part of the ‘test’ but I just wanted to do so. I mean what else could she do after slapping me if I looked relaxed? From her eyes, I could see anger as well as menace. She bit her lips and ran off as quickly as she could.

Aya stood up and shouted ‘Miki-tan’ several times but Miki didn’t turn back. I knew I needed to say something. Aya, the blur queen, might just stand there calling her for the whole afternoon without moving a bit. “Go and chase after her. She likes you,” I said with a smile on my face. A worried and desperate Aya looked so adorable. Aya took off her heels and ran after her.

I took another sip of the latte before I took out the plane ticket from my bag and tore it up. There were things for me to do in Japan. This was getting interesting. Maybe I could even step in somewhere. Just maybe.

******
tito's Q & A: What's Maki up to? :lol: Let's see who can understand Gocchin... :mon thumb:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version)
Post by: Yukari on June 11, 2008, 04:29:15 AM
wojoooooooooooooooooooo you killed me!! :mon inluv:


F.Y.I

Chapter 17

Cracked Heart

Go’s version

oooh it's so sad... well, not yet, but i know it'll be  :mon cry:


My train of thoughts was disrupted abruptly when I heard someone called my name. It was Risa. Probably she came to send me off but she was early. Way too early. I asked rather courteously, “Why are you here so early? My plane is only flying off at 3.25pm.”

She blushed. Oh well, she wasn’t the first Hello! Project girl who blushed when she talked to me. After all, I was Goto Maki. She rushed through her words, “I heard there’s a nice sushi restaurant in the airport. I think it’s quite romantic to dine in the airport with a clear view of the planes.”

why did she likes to go out to an airport??  :mon noprob:


“Oh,” I replied. I had absolute no interest in Gokkies but it would be okay to entertain her provided that Aya didn’t turn up.

“So I’m waiting for Ai-chan here.”

I laughed. Ai-chan? So it wasn’t about Goto Maki after all.

maki isn't the sex symbol now  :mon XD:


“Why didn’t you just come here with Ai?” I asked.

“It won’t be the same. I think she will be touched to see me waiting here,” she replied. These girls really had grown up. A couple of years back, they wouldn’t even make an extra effort to make the other feel touched. That was pretty sweet of her to do so. Would Aya be touched to see me waiting here for her? I doubt so. I had hurt her too much for her to feel this way towards me. As much as I wanted her to be touched, I didn’t want to her to feel anything towards me which could spoil her happiness.

it's beginning to be saad~~  :mon exhaust:


A taxi stopped in front of us and Ai came out of the taxi. Her eyes widened when she saw Risa standing there at the drop-off point waiting for her with a wide grin. Ai scratched her head and said awkwardly, “Oh shit! How long have you been waiting? Sorry that I arrived late!”

Risa shook her head, blushed and spoke gently, “You aren’t late…I’m just early. I want to wait for you…”

they are so sweeeeeeeeet  :mon inluv:

Ai smiled and said, “Maki, we are getting in first. See you later!” I waved to them without exchanging much eye contact. I just didn’t want to look at them. It was just too painful to do so. They reminded me so much about us. Ai took Risa’s hand and they entered the airport complex together. I prayed that they wouldn’t have a similar ending as that of Aya and I.

maki is such a good person, she have nice feelings  :mon innocent:

Not before long, a taxi stopped and Aya popped out from the taxi. It had been some time since I last saw her. She seemed tired with the dark rings beneath her eyes and she was in deep thoughts. Bad signs. She looked in my direction once but she didn’t see me. She was too lost in her thoughts. Very bad sign. “Aya,” I called out. Even though I had been mouthing her name all these while to myself, it just seemed weird when I said it out loud to the girl I always loved.

I asked gently, “Shall we go in?” She nodded in agreement. Well, she didn’t have much of a choice there. When we were in the complex, I asked her, “Do you like Starbucks?” She nodded, avoiding eye contact with me. She was correct doing so. I was a jerk. She shouldn’t even speak to me at all. Maybe things weren’t that bad.

We walked to Starbucks in silence. I knew she didn’t want to speak to me and I didn’t want to talk while we walked. I mean, I didn’t prepare a lot of things to talk to her about and I would rather talk to her in Starbucks where I could have a good look at her while I spoke.

silence... why??!! aya let yourself be!!!  :mon POd:

When we were in Starbucks, I led her to a cozy corner and we sat across each other after we bought our respective coffees. I took a sip of the latte in an attempt to calm my nerves before I spoke softly, “I’m sorry for dumping you like that. It was all my fault. I never expect you to forgive me. I never expect us to be anything again,” I paused and gazed at her.

Her eyes, nose and lips were still the same as before. No, I shouldn’t think of that. I lost my chance. She looked at me in the eyes and for that one moment, our eyes met. I wouldn’t be able to forget that moment. I could see the pain she was suffering from her eyes. Maybe I was the cause of the pain. Damn, I shouldn’t have agreed to help her. Maybe it wasn’t me. Damn, she might be right about it.

there is love~~ i know it~~  :mon misch:


I continued, “Thank you for dropping your charges. Thank you, Aya.” Well, I really had to thank her. Jail wasn’t the best place on earth. But most of all, I wanted to thank her for those days that we spent together in the past. They were the best days of my life. I wondered if she got my message.

She smiled and spoke rather flatly, “I heard from Nacchi about you and I just sympathize with you. That’s all.” I didn’t quite know how to feel after I heard this line. Should I be upset that all she felt towards me was just sympathy? Or should I be delighted that she had already found happiness that I no longer mattered at all?

aya you're so mean  :mon duh:

After she said that, she drank the cappuccino she had ordered rather clumsily. I couldn’t help but to smile. She was such a clumsy person but this made her all the more likable. I leaned across the table towards her and said gently, “There’s some cream on your face, Aya. Don’t move.” She obeyed and she didn’t move an inch.

kawaii~~  :mon lovelaff: but it's baaaaad, or good?? i don't know  :mon unsure:


Our faces neared. I could hear her heartbeat quickened. This was way too familiar for me. It was as though we had gone back in time and we were back in those days where we waited for each other. When our faces were inches apart, I summoned all my strength to stop myself from kissing her. As much as I wanted to taste her again, I didn’t want to ruin it all for her. I had to control myself.

Bad Maki: kiss her kiss her  :mon star:
Good Maki: no~~ you don't have to do it~~ she is happy with miki~~  :mon cry:
Bad Maki: wojojo but still... do it!  :mon star:
Good Maki: shut up bad maki!! it's all your fault!! if you had choose her over your career it would be sooo different!! you dork!!  :mon mad:
Bad Maki: ...  :mon yo:

Just at this moment, I heard footsteps moving towards us. I turned and to my horror, it was Miki. What timing. Maybe she was right about it. Miki was just an insecure lover who couldn’t trust Aya. Aya just looked shocked beyond words to see Miki. How much I wanted to just grab Aya and kiss her at that moment. Why couldn’t she just trust Aya? But I didn’t want to spoil their happiness. After all, I was just part of the test.

My acting skills didn’t fail me this time round as I smiled and greeted her, “Hi Miki.”

I could see the rage inside her and I was expecting her to do something to me. Splash me with latte? Or maybe a slap? She raised her arm and slapped me hard on the cheeks. Real hard. How much I wanted to congratulate Fujimoto Miki for living up to her name. It was a really hard slap.


maki is a good actress!!  :mon slapass:


I concealed the pain I was experiencing and gave her a nonchalant look. I just wanted to spite her by depriving her of the satisfaction of slapping. Not that it was part of the ‘test’ but I just wanted to do so. I mean what else could she do after slapping me if I looked relaxed? From her eyes, I could see anger as well as menace. She bit her lips and ran off as quickly as she could.

wojojo you maki badass, i knew she had do it because she don't want to give miki the satisfaction  :mon evillaff:


Aya stood up and shouted ‘Miki-tan’ several times but Miki didn’t turn back. I knew I needed to say something. Aya, the blur queen, might just stand there calling her for the whole afternoon without moving a bit. “Go and chase after her. She likes you,” I said with a smile on my face. A worried and desperate Aya looked so adorable. Aya took off her heels and ran after her.

omg... aya couldn't be SO blur!!!  :mon headbang:


I took another sip of the latte before I took out the plane ticket from my bag and tore it up. There were things for me to do in Japan. This was getting interesting. Maybe I could even step in somewhere. Just maybe.
:mon crazyinlove:

tito's Q & A: What's Maki up to? :lol: Let's see who can understand Gocchin... :mon thumb:

i know i know! Maki realized that Aya isn't completely happy with Miki, so she tought that she even have a opportunity  :mon dance:

mm MAKI MAKI MAKI!! *cheer up*  :mon dance: :gmon twirl: :pen_whirl: :mon trannie: :mon roll: :onioncheer:

and about that tou said that i see miki as a ball... i imagined it literally!

(http://www.imgur.com/files/080610/Th.miki_ball.jpg) (http://www.imgur.com/i.php?i=080610/miki_ball.jpg)

i'm done n.nU i realized that i had comment all the chapter...

waiting next chapter!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 11, 2008, 06:41:24 AM
to make up for the updates i won't be writing for today... i'll make my very first SUPER COMMENT!!!! :cow:

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I stood at the drop-off point in Narita Airport with my back leaning against the wall. I wondered for the hundredth time whether it was correct for me to be part of this test. It wouldn’t hurt anyone physically and I just wanted to make sure.
 

test?... hmm... what is this test? :dozing: ... TEST?!?! OMG I HAVE A TEST!!!!! ... anyway... moving on...

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I wished for Aya’s happiness and I wanted to see that for myself before I leave the country. After all, I had hurt her greatly and this was the least I could do for her.

i support maki!!!  :mon beam:... except in the ayaya happiness part...  :on_pick:

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It was Risa. Probably she came to send me off but she was early. Way too early. I asked rather courteously, “Why are you here so early? My plane is only flying off at 3.25pm.”

 :mon cam: presumptuous maki...

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I laughed. Ai-chan? So it wasn’t about Goto Maki after all. “Why didn’t you just come here with Ai?” I asked.

“It won’t be the same. I think she will be touched to see me waiting here,” she replied. These girls really had grown up. A couple of years back, they wouldn’t even make an extra effort to make the other feel touched. That was pretty sweet of her to do so. Would Aya be touched to see me waiting here for her? I doubt so. I had hurt her too much for her to feel this way towards me. As much as I wanted her to be touched, I didn’t want to her to feel anything towards me which could spoil her happiness.

i wait for my rabu-rabu all the time... it is pretty touching when someone waits for you... ...  :gmon love2: sweet... except when it is for ayaya...

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Not before long, a taxi stopped and Aya popped out from the taxi. It had been some time since I last saw her. She seemed tired with the dark rings beneath her eyes and she was in deep thoughts. Bad signs. She looked in my direction once but she didn’t see me. She was too lost in her thoughts. Very bad sign.

ayaya's true form!!!

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My acting skills didn’t fail me this time round as I smiled and greeted her, “Hi Miki.”

the acting skills did fail!!! miki saw through the acting... :gmon getout:

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I could see the rage inside her and I was expecting her to do something to me. Splash me with latte? Or maybe a slap? She raised her arm and slapped me hard on the cheeks. Real hard. How much I wanted to congratulate Fujimoto Miki for living up to her name. It was a really hard slap.

enraged miki should've slapped ayaya instead of maki... :mon slapself:

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Aya stood up and shouted ‘Miki-tan’ several times but Miki didn’t turn back. I knew I needed to say something. Aya, the blur queen, might just stand there calling her for the whole afternoon without moving a bit. “Go and chase after her. She likes you,” I said with a smile on my face. A worried and desperate Aya looked so adorable. Aya took off her heels and ran after her.

run like the wind, ayaya... or else i will make you the burnt sacrifice in my prayer ritual  :prayers: to Charmy-sama!!!  :mon mad:

 
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I took another sip of the latte before I took out the plane ticket from my bag and tore it up. There were things for me to do in Japan. This was getting interesting. Maybe I could even step in somewhere. Just maybe.

maki, you can step in anywhere except between my ishiyoshi!!! that would sound awful: ishigoyoshi...  :on_plug:

i liked this update... third person perspective in the GAM romantic dynamics...

WHERE IS MY ISHIYOSHI?!?!?! :scolding:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version)
Post by: tito on June 11, 2008, 07:06:40 AM
Yeah! Long comments! I love long comments :wub:
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wojoooooooooooooooooooo you killed me!!
Oh man.. :mon hanky: *tito tries to revive Yukari*
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oooh it's so sad... well, not yet, but i know it'll be
This isn't the saddest chapter..not at all :D Ok, but when it involves Maki, everything will be sad...
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they are so sweeeeeeeeet
Yey! Finally put in something sweet..it needs to reduce the angst of the main story  :mon lol: *look for lollipopgirl*
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there is love~~ i know it~~
  :mon love: <-- Maki :lol: Ok, I am lame..I know that..
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kawaii~~  :mon lovelaff: but it's baaaaad, or good?? i don't know  :mon unsure:
I don't know too  :mon sweat: Depends on which pairing you support, I guess..
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Bad Maki: kiss her kiss her  :mon star:
Good Maki: no~~ you don't have to do it~~ she is happy with miki~~  :mon cry:
Bad Maki: wojojo but still... do it!  :mon star:
Good Maki: shut up bad maki!! it's all your fault!! if you had choose her over your career it would be sooo different!! you dork!!  :mon mad:
Bad Maki: ...  :mon yo:
I love this :D Shows the dilemma Maki is in very well and it's freaking hilarious!! :wahaha:
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wojojo you maki badass, i knew she had do it because she don't want to give miki the satisfaction  :mon evillaff:
Consider what had happened in Gomattou and how much Miki loathed Maki...it's a great time for Maki to get back to her!  :lol:
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omg... aya couldn't be SO blur!!!  :mon headbang:
Go and tou love her for that though... :mon blblbl:
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i know i know! Maki realized that Aya isn't completely happy with Miki, so she tought that she even have a opportunity  :mon dance:
Partially right about that..what about the 'test'?  :mon misch:
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and about that tou said that i see miki as a ball... i imagined it literally!

(http://www.imgur.com/files/080610/Th.miki_ball.jpg) (http://www.imgur.com/i.php?i=080610/miki_ball.jpg)
haha that is freaking funny..*super impose a yossie in there as goalkeeper*  :lol:
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i'm done n.nU i realized that i had comment all the chapter...
I LOVE YOU!! :mon love:
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to make up for the updates i won't be writing for today... i'll make my very first SUPER COMMENT!!!! :cow:
yeah! on FYI! I love you :D  :mon loveflower:
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test?... hmm... what is this test? :dozing: ... TEST?!?! OMG I HAVE A TEST!!!!! ... anyway... moving on...
Brain-teaser huh? hehe,  :mon fyeah: Test? I thought you just started school yesterday! ARGHH :angry:
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i wait for my rabu-rabu all the time... it is pretty touching when someone waits for you... ...  :gmon love2: sweet... except when it is for ayaya...
The anti-Aya virus is spreading really fast...*to rabu-rabu: Stop making tru_harmony wait for you*
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the acting skills did fail!!! miki saw through the acting... :gmon getout:
Did she?  :mon misch: Maybe....
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enraged miki should've slapped ayaya instead of maki... :mon slapself:
Miki just enjoys slapping Maki too much..*visualise how Miki slaps Aya*  :mon mischief:
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run like the wind, ayaya... or else i will make you the burnt sacrifice in my prayer ritual  :prayers: to Charmy-sama!!!  :mon mad:
:mon trudge: <-- Aya :lol: Nah, throw Yoshizawa Jin in there first!!  :)
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maki, you can step in anywhere except between my ishiyoshi!!! that would sound awful: ishigoyoshi...  :on_plug:

i liked this update... third person perspective in the GAM romantic dynamics...

WHERE IS MY ISHIYOSHI?!?!?! :scolding:
Ishiyoshi? soon..ok will it help if I tell you that one of them will appear in the next chap?  :wub:

Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version)
Post by: Yukari on June 11, 2008, 07:29:47 AM
emmm about the test... oh sh-- emm maki is allied with someone, don't she? with... yossy??  :mon ko:

Ishiyoshi? soon..ok will it help if I tell you that one of them will appear in the next chap?  :wub:

woooooooojooo could it be rika or yossy  :mon dunno:

maujajaja i can't see miki's ball face, i laugh out everytime that i do it  :tama-apeshit:

which pair i support??... what do you think?  :rockon:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version)
Post by: JFC on June 11, 2008, 07:52:06 AM
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I wondered for the hundredth time whether it was correct for me to be part of this test.
Test??? WTF??? :?



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It wouldn’t hurt anyone physically and I just wanted to make sure. As much as I wanted to see Aya, I didn’t want her to turn up. If she did, it would mean that what  she said was true. I wished for Aya’s happiness and I wanted to see that for myself before I leave the country. After all, I had hurt her greatly and this was the least I could do for her.
So then...this "she" that Maki spoke of got Maki to convince Aya to meet with her...


...


...


to test the strength of Aya and Miki's relationship?!?!? :stunned:



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Ai smiled and said, “Maki, we are getting in first. See you later!” I waved to them without exchanging much eye contact. I just didn’t want to look at them. It was just too painful to do so. They reminded me so much about us. Ai took Risa’s hand and they entered the airport complex together. I prayed that they wouldn’t have a similar ending as that of Aya and I.
That shouldn't be a problem, as long as neither of them tries to run the other down with a car.  :roll:



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Not before long, a taxi stopped and Aya popped out from the taxi. It had been some time since I last saw her. She seemed tired with the dark rings beneath her eyes and she was in deep thoughts. Bad signs. She looked in my direction once but she didn’t see me. She was too lost in her thoughts. Very bad sign. “Aya,” I called out. Even though I had been mouthing her name all these while to myself, it just seemed weird when I said it out loud to the girl I always loved.

I asked gently, “Shall we go in?” She nodded in agreement. Well, she didn’t have much of a choice there. When we were in the complex, I asked her, “Do you like Starbucks?” She nodded, avoiding eye contact with me. She was correct doing so. I was a jerk. She shouldn’t even speak to me at all. Maybe things weren’t that bad.
It almost sounds like this meeting wasn't Maki's idea in the first place.



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Maybe I was the cause of the pain. Damn, I shouldn’t have agreed to help her. Maybe it wasn’t me. Damn,  she might be right about it.
Again with the references that indicate that another girl might have been the one to plan this. But then, for what reason, and why would Maki agree to do it?

[bgcolor=#000000]It could be Reina. If she and Maki were in the same prison she could have hatched up this plan knowing that it could/would mess things up between Aya and Miki. Or it could be Yossi, who might feel more for Miki than she's lead on, which would mean this could be some scheme for her to determine if she has a chance with her.[/bgcolor]




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Just at this moment, I heard footsteps moving towards us. I turned and to my horror, it was Miki. What timing. Maybe she was right about it. Miki was just an insecure lover who couldn’t trust Aya. Aya just looked shocked beyond words to see Miki. How much I wanted to just grab Aya and kiss her at that moment. Why couldn’t she just trust Aya? But I didn’t want to spoil their happiness. After all, I was just part of the test.
Right now, looks like it's option 2.
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I took another sip of the latte before I took out the plane ticket from my bag and tore it up. There were things for me to do in Japan. This was getting interesting. Maybe I could even step in somewhere. Just maybe.
WTF she's staying???
:mon wtf:


Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version)
Post by: sweeety on June 11, 2008, 01:35:10 PM
I reckon it was Rika. I think it was her. She obviously sent those messages. I think she did it out of jealousy and lack of trust. Perhaps in a years time she will coming out of jail to a Yoshi who has been waiting patiently like a lil dawg! XD

 I hate Maki even more now! It's like she wants Aya back, but she wont admit it. Because she wants to see Aya happy. But she heard filth about Miki from Rika who is making it sound like she is a bad gf to Aya. So seeing Aya in that state she had to intervene because now she thinks she is unhappy with her and wants to break them up to make her happy. She just ends up making things worse because the only way for her to be happy, is with Miki.

 And Rika is just so insecure that she plays on that and makes herself misinterpret everything and believe that Yoshi is looking for someone else. Miki just happened to be the direction she is channeling this all oout to because she hasn't got the fact right and believes that it was her fault that she is like this. She thinks it was her that is the reason that Yoshi went to jail and for that (taking her away for a while) she wants to kill her. But when Yoshi came out and didn't want to hurt her she thought it was because she loved Miki, not because she never wanted to in the first place, and because she is her mate.

 So now an angry Rika who believes Miki is stealing her gf, is doing everything in her power tto make her suffer by going after GAM and ruining their relationship. Either because she thinks Miki ruined hers, or because she thinks that YOshi likes her and she is trying to get her message across, very dumbly. Either way she's being an idiot, because breaking them up will only make Miki more available to Yoshi, instead of making her stay away from her, and she is gonna end up creating a relationship where there was none!
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version)
Post by: cierl03 on June 11, 2008, 01:40:47 PM
that "her" must be RIKA!!! Wonder what she agreed to help with  XD

err... am i really the ONLY ONE who likes Aya here?? :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I.17 - Cracked Heart (Go's version)
Post by: tito on June 11, 2008, 02:58:18 PM
emmm about the test... oh sh-- emm maki is allied with someone, don't she? with... yossy??  :mon ko:
Hmm... :mon dunno:
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maujajaja i can't see miki's ball face, i laugh out everytime that i do it  :tama-apeshit:
yeah! Me too :) hahaha...when did Miki become a ball? Oh ya, the keeper!  XD
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which pair i support??... what do you think?  :rockon:
I dunno..as a pair it should be yomiki but when threesome and foursome come in, I become lost  :stunned:
@JFC: Hmm...interesting theory..shan't comment much about it in case I spoil it.. :D *waiting to see JFC's reaction for the next chap*
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I reckon it was Rika. I think it was her. She obviously sent those messages. I think she did it out of jealousy and lack of trust. Perhaps in a years time she will coming out of jail to a Yoshi who has been waiting patiently like a lil dawg!
:lol:That can be sequel part 3 LOL j/k  :lol:
@sweeety: Firstly I must say I'm glad to see you around alive!  :lol:
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She just ends up making things worse because the only way for her to be happy, is with Miki.
Sure?  :D
You basically sum up ishiyoshi up till now..neat theory..shan't comment much on it coz I don't wanna leak too much out..
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err... am i really the ONLY ONE who likes Aya here??
Yeah, you are *look around* Ok, I think you're the only one :wub: congrats! Don't succumb to peer pressure!  XD :lol:

Just realise T&T's Kiseki shows how Maki feel pretty well..good song! :D I'll try to get a chapter up tomorrow if I'm not too tired..
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tito on June 12, 2008, 04:15:21 AM
Pretty short one...another POV chapter and it will be the last POV chapter for some time...Pls comment..I'm really scared that this chapter comes out weird or something  :(

F.Y.I

Chapter 18

Shattered Love

FUJI’s POV

December 24 (11.58am)

Stupid. That was the only word I could use to describe myself then. Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled all that I had done for her these few months. Maybe I was crying because I was frustrated. Maybe those tears were there because I felt cheated as I still loved her. No, I was stupid to love that two-timer. I was stupid to have even confessed to her. I was stupid to have thought of dying for her. That was the first time in my life that I felt so stupid. Fujimoto Miki never likes to feel stupid. Never.
   
I heard her calling me from behind but I didn’t turn back. Why should I look at her? She should just go back to Maki for goodness sake and enjoy their Starbucks experience. Why the hell was she chasing after me? She should just go back to Maki and finished the kiss which I had interrupted. Every time I heard her voice, I just sped up. I didn’t want her to catch up with me. Oh well, even if I didn’t do so, I doubted she would be able to catch me. I was the sub-captain for Gatas Brilhantes after all.

I didn’t know where I was running to though. I didn’t want to hail a taxi and leave this place as that would be what a crestfallen and weak person would do after witnessing such a scene. But I wasn’t such a person. I was Fujimoto Miki. I neither wanted to concede defeat nor wanted to give them the satisfaction of winning especially Aya. She didn’t have the rights to play with my feelings like that. No one has. Though I still had no idea what to do in order to have a comeback victory over them, I knew I shouldn’t leave the place.

When I ran past an escalator, I saw Ai and Risa holding hands on it. Ai and Risa stared at me with wide open eyes as though I was some monkey in the circus. The last thing I needed now was for someone in H!P to see me running away from Aya with tears streaming down my cheeks. I glared at them and a split second later, their eyes were on each other. Good, my glare worked. But it wouldn’t be enough to win the battle against Aya. I needed something more than that.

When I reached the rather deserted viewing gallery almost at the other end of the airport, I could her calling me pretty vaguely which showed that she had fallen behind by some distance. There, an ‘an eye for an eye’ idea struck me when I saw her. It was an idea which I was determined to carry out no matter what and it was one which I greatly regretted after that.

Wearing a blue Japan football jersey, probably the one Hidetoshi Nakata signed on, and a low cap, she was gazing at the airplanes alone at the viewing gallery. She had this forlorn and lonely aura around her and she appeared to be deep in thoughts. I opened up my stride and sprinted towards her. When I was a few meters away from her, she turned and appeared somewhat shocked to see me running towards her. She then smiled, took off the cap and greeted, “Mi-”

Before she could complete her sentence, I had already pounced on her and pressed my lips against her. Initially she resisted but after 3 seconds, she allowed my tongue to venture in her mouth. Before long, I could feel her tongue in mine as well. From my angle, I could see a panting Aya horrified when she saw us together. I smiled. 

Now we were all square.

When I looked at the girl in my hands, her eyes were fixated on Aya and she attempted to pull herself away from me. I pleaded with my eyes and began touching her butt in a suggestive manner.

I needed the victory.

She closed her eyes and began to caress my breasts. Soon our tongues were intertwined again. She was an expert at it and it wasn’t before long that I closed my eyes and was enjoying the moment and Aya was out of my mind.

When I opened my eyes after some time, Aya was no longer there. That was when the implications of what I had just done struck me and I pulled myself away from her and cried my heart out. That crazy moment of victory was over and my senses came back to me. I wanted to win so badly then but so what if I won?

She approached me and hugged me gently. I murmured in a muffled voice, “Thank you Yossie.” Tears ran down my cheeks like a running tap and soon that blue dry-fit jersey was drenched with my tears. I could hear the instrumental for the chorus of Osaka koi no uta playing. Mou owari ya nen… 
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: heyyouhiya on June 12, 2008, 04:22:54 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OMG poor Aya!!!
She didn't even kiss Maki...although we all know she wanted to
Miki why you must be so stubborn for the win I will never understand *sighs*
I feel soo bad for Aya I want to slap both Miki and Yossui (and I'm a YoMiki fan XD)
But stilllllllll
stubborn Miki...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: Yukari on June 12, 2008, 05:20:48 AM
hi~~ i'm still died for what i reaa~~d. :mon inluv:

you have to think that mon icons are my face...  my reactions are pretty similar (it isn't 'cause i could have monkey face  XD)

Stupid. That was the only word I could use to describe myself then. Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled all that I had done for her these few months. Maybe I was crying because I was frustrated. Maybe those tears were there because I felt cheated as I still loved her. No, I was stupid to love that two-timer. I was stupid to have even confessed to her. I was stupid to have thought of dying for her. That was the first time in my life that I felt so stupid. Fujimoto Miki never likes to feel stupid. Never.

yay!! that's my miki-sama  :mon yeah:


I heard her calling me from behind but I didn’t turn back. Why should I look at her? She should just go back to Maki for goodness sake and enjoy their Starbucks experience. Why the hell was she chasing after me? She should just go back to Maki and finished the kiss which I had interrupted. Every time I heard her voice, I just sped up. I didn’t want her to catch up with me. Oh well, even if I didn’t do so, I doubted she would be able to catch me. I was the sub-captain for Gatas Brilhantes after all.

run miki... run (read it as forest gum)  :mon runcry:


I didn’t know where I was running to though. I didn’t want to hail a taxi and leave this place as that would be what a crestfallen and weak person would do after witnessing such a scene. But I wasn’t such a person. I was Fujimoto Miki.

i love you miki~~  :mon loveflower:

When I ran past an escalator, I saw Ai and Risa holding hands on it. Ai and Risa stared at me with wide open eyes as though I was some monkey in the circus. The last thing I needed now was for someone in H!P to see me running away from Aya with tears streaming down my cheeks. I glared at them and a split second later, their eyes were on each other. Good, my glare worked. But it wouldn’t be enough to win the battle against Aya. I needed something more than that.

poor girls, that's surely scary  :mon POd:


When I reached the rather deserted viewing gallery almost at the other end of the airport, I could her calling me pretty vaguely which showed that she had fallen behind by some distance. There, an ‘an eye for an eye’ idea struck me when I saw her. It was an idea which I was determined to carry out no matter what and it was one which I greatly regretted after that.

Wearing a blue Japan football jersey, probably the one Hidetoshi Nakata signed on, and a low cap, she was gazing at the airplanes alone at the viewing gallery. She had this forlorn and lonely aura around her and she appeared to be deep in thoughts. I opened up my stride and sprinted towards her. When I was a few meters away from her, she turned and appeared somewhat shocked to see me running towards her. She then smiled, took off the cap and greeted, “Mi-”

definitely... Yossy  :mon angel:

Before she could complete her sentence, I had already pounced on her and pressed my lips against her. Initially she resisted but after 3 seconds, she allowed my tongue to venture in her mouth. Before long, I could feel her tongue in mine as well. From my angle, I could see a panting Aya horrified when she saw us together. I smiled. 

Now we were all square.

and now i go to the paradise, bye meaning world~~  :mon angel: :mon inluv: :mon mischief:


When I looked at the girl in my hands, her eyes were fixated on Aya and she attempted to pull herself away from me. I pleaded with my eyes and began touching her butt in a suggestive manner.

I needed the victory.

mm using her groping skill  :mon inluv: :mon star: :mon evillaff:


She closed her eyes and began to caress my breasts. Soon our tongues were intertwined again. She was an expert at it and it wasn’t before long that I closed my eyes and was enjoying the moment and Aya was out of my mind.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :mon crazyinlove: *heartcase* inhale, exhale, inhale, exhale, etc  :mon blood:

When I opened my eyes after some time, Aya was no longer there. That was when the implications of what I had just done struck me and I pulled myself away from her and cried my heart out. That crazy moment of victory was over and my senses came back to me. I wanted to win so badly then but so what if I won?

She approached me and hugged me gently. I murmured in a muffled voice, “Thank you Yossie.” Tears ran down my cheeks like a running tap and soon that blue dry-fit jersey was drenched with my tears. I could hear the instrumental for the chorus of Osaka koi no uta playing. Mou owari ya nen… 

poor miki... but she has Yossy now, i don't know if like friend or what, but she has her...  :mon innocent:

who is calling yossy??? rika??  :mon noprob:

now... who is aya?? XDDDDDDDD mauajaja no, really... bah the best thing that she can does is go with maki  :mon determined:

tito i REALLY love you btw  :mon love:

waiting next chapter!! (oh no, i realized that it's my testament XD)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 12, 2008, 06:51:26 AM
as an insane ishiyoshi fan i have decided to comment only on this part of the chapter:

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Wearing a blue Japan football jersey, probably the one Hidetoshi Nakata signed on, and a low cap, she was gazing at the airplanes alone at the viewing gallery. She had this forlorn and lonely aura around her and she appeared to be deep in thoughts. I opened up my stride and sprinted towards her. When I was a few meters away from her, she turned and appeared somewhat shocked to see me running towards her. She then smiled, took off the cap and greeted, “Mi-”

Before she could complete her sentence, I had already pounced on her and pressed my lips against her. Initially she resisted but after 3 seconds, she allowed my tongue to venture in her mouth. Before long, I could feel her tongue in mine as well. From my angle, I could see a panting Aya horrified when she saw us together. I smiled. 

Now we were all square.

When I looked at the girl in my hands, her eyes were fixated on Aya and she attempted to pull herself away from me. I pleaded with my eyes and began touching her butt in a suggestive manner.

I needed the victory.

She closed her eyes and began to caress my breasts. Soon our tongues were intertwined again. She was an expert at it and it wasn’t before long that I closed my eyes and was enjoying the moment and Aya was out of my mind.

YOSSUI, WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU DOING IN THAT AIRPORT?!?!?!? :angry1:

GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! :temper:

*starts tearing up ishiyoshi altar* HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME, TITO!?!?!?! :pleeease:

j/k

i know... in my heart that my ishiyoshi will pull through... or else, it will be yossui's head between rubber and asphalt

my goddess, charmy-sama will prevail... I belive(sic) in you charmy-sama... even if you have failed me before... i still believe...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: JFC on June 12, 2008, 08:34:59 AM
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Chapter 18

Shattered Love
:mon waterworks:


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When I looked at the girl in my hands, her eyes were fixated on Aya and she attempted to pull herself away from me. I pleaded with my eyes and began touching her butt in a suggestive manner.

I needed the victory.
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh shit...
:mon scare:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: kinbari on June 12, 2008, 08:51:04 AM
my my.. oh my... its like love triangle. but i wan miki and aya back together in the end.. lolx

Peace
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 12, 2008, 09:40:15 AM
OMG I feel so bad now coz I absolutely NEVER condone cheating but I really do hate this Aya, so I'm happy about it :oops: :o
YAYAYAYAY for YoMiki goodness, I guess I feel a little sorry for Aya but not really, I do hope she runs off to Maki and gets comforted by her... I'm worried about Rika though :o I feel REALLY sorry for her :(

Oh and Yossy being at the airport like that, it's gotta mean she was the one Maki was refering to with the test to see how strong the GAM love was... interesting!!!

This chapter did not turn out bad... it was fast paced and awesome!

Sorry about the crappy comment, its time for my afternoon nap you see ;)
Oh and Yukari, you make me smile with all ur comments :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: Yukari on June 12, 2008, 09:51:48 AM
OMG I feel so bad now coz I absolutely NEVER condone cheating but I really do hate this Aya, so I'm happy about it :oops: :o
YAYAYAYAY for YoMiki goodness, I guess I feel a little sorry for Aya but not really, I do hope she runs off to Maki and gets comforted by her... I'm worried about Rika though :o I feel REALLY sorry for her :(

Oh and Yossy being at the airport like that, it's gotta mean she was the one Maki was refering to with the test to see how strong the GAM love was... interesting!!!

This chapter did not turn out bad... it was fast paced and awesome!

Sorry about the crappy comment, its time for my afternoon nap you see ;)
Oh and Yukari, you make me smile with all ur comments :lol:

wojojoo someone share my happiness!! (or at least likes the yomiki godness)  :onioncheer:
and happy that i make you smile  :hee: i feel happy now (not like Rika "HAPPY~~", i don't say it like that n.nU)

omg now i realized that i'm adicted to this fanfic!!  :frustrated: it makes me comment so much, like i had never do in my entire life... well... i had written things longer that the comments here since i write fanfics too... but my reader is more potent that my writer inside  :on lol:

tito you're the guilty!  :mon inluv:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tito on June 12, 2008, 10:26:29 AM
Reply to comments time!  :cow:
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OMG poor Aya!!!
She didn't even kiss Maki...although we all know she wanted to
At least now what you feel towards Aya is not just solely hatred.. :lol:
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Miki why you must be so stubborn for the win I will never understand *sighs*
I feel soo bad for Aya I want to slap both Miki and Yossui (and I'm a YoMiki fan XD)
But stilllllllll
stubborn Miki...
That's Miki for you  :bingo: Stubborn and competitive...
hi~~ i'm still died for what i reaa~~d. :mon inluv:
Don't die! *Revival attempt by tito*
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you have to think that mon icons are my face...  my reactions are pretty similar (it isn't 'cause i could have monkey face  XD)
Just imagine that you're Ai will do :wub:
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run miki... run (read it as forest gum)  :mon runcry:
:rofl:
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i love you miki~~  :mon loveflower:
Miki love in the air~~ :wub:
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poor girls, that's surely scary  :mon POd:
*Try to visualise* Yeah, it must be scary  :scared:
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and now i go to the paradise, bye meaning world~~  :mon angel: :mon inluv: :mon mischief
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Come back~~!!! *Revival attempt #2*
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :mon crazyinlove: *heartcase* inhale, exhale, inhale, exhale, etc  :mon blood:
Guess as much you will react like that  :tama-apeshit:
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who is calling yossy??? rika??  :mon noprob:
Maybe...
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now... who is aya?? XDDDDDDDD mauajaja no, really... bah the best thing that she can does is go with maki  :mon determined:
Hmmm....oh well, supporters of Yomiki will definitely vote for GoAya (whatever that is called :lol:)
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tito i REALLY love you btw  :mon love:
Really?  :nya: :wriggly: *tito jumps to the moon*
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waiting next chapter!! (oh no, i realized that it's my testament XD)
*Read previous Yukari's comments...yeah, it is!  XD
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YOSSUI, WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU DOING IN THAT AIRPORT?!?!?!?

GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
To send Maki off? Though she isn't flying anymore...
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*starts tearing up ishiyoshi altar* HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME, TITO!?!?!?! pleeease
*tito attempts to fix it back* Chill...
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i know... in my heart that my ishiyoshi will pull through... or else, it will be yossui's head between rubber and asphalt

my goddess, charmy-sama will prevail... I belive(sic) in you charmy-sama... even if you have failed me before... i still believe...
Yossi's head between rubber and asphalt? What does that mean? :? You're really an ishiyoshi believer! Pray harder  :prayers:
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Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh shit...
Precisely.  :(
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my my.. oh my... its like love triangle. but i wan miki and aya back together in the end.. lolx

Peace
It's like double love triangle. Maki-Aya-Miki Miki-Yoshi-Rika :lol: Yeah 1 more reader! We're from the same country!  :) *Play love and peace hero ga yattekita*
OMG I feel so bad now coz I absolutely NEVER condone cheating but I really do hate this Aya, so I'm happy about it :oops: :o
YAYAYAYAY for YoMiki goodness, I guess I feel a little sorry for Aya but not really, I do hope she runs off to Maki and gets comforted by her... I'm worried about Rika though :o I feel REALLY sorry for her :(
Yeah, you finally feel something for Aya!  :wub: At least you want her paired up with someone...As for Rika, hmm...I'll deal with her later  :)
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Oh and Yossy being at the airport like that, it's gotta mean she was the one Maki was refering to with the test to see how strong the GAM love was... interesting!!!
Hmm...maybe.......
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This chapter did not turn out bad... it was fast paced and awesome!
Yeah! I'm so happy *Jump to Jupiter*  :mon inluv:
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Sorry about the crappy comment, its time for my afternoon nap you see ;)
Enjoy your nap :) I still have to study in this hot weather  :(
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wojojoo someone share my happiness!! (or at least likes the yomiki godness)  :onioncheer:
and happy that i make you smile  :hee: i feel happy now (not like Rika "HAPPY~~", i don't say it like that n.nU)
^This is so funny! You make me smile tooand laugh like that--> :mon lmao:
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omg now i realized that i'm adicted to this fanfic!!  :frustrated: it makes me comment so much, like i had never do in my entire life... well... i had written things longer that the comments here since i write fanfics too... but my reader is more potent that my writer inside  :on lol:

tito you're the guilty!  :mon inluv:
Is it? :shy2: *Feel guilty for making you addicted for 1 second*  :hee: *Feel over the moon..I mean Neptune (where am I now?) that you love this fic so much and give nice and hilarious and encouraging comments* :tama-laff: :tama-heart:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 12, 2008, 10:59:11 AM
Comment on comment replies :P

Yossi's head between rubber and asphalt? What does that mean? :? You're really an ishiyoshi believer! Pray harder  :prayers:
It means our sweet, little, innocent tru_harmony will be joining Reina in jail for yet another hit and run attack on a H!P member, tsk tsk!

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Yeah, you finally feel something for Aya!  :wub: At least you want her paired up with someone...As for Rika, hmm...I'll deal with her later  :)
I've always felt something for Aya, it's called hatred :P

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*Feel over the moon..I mean Neptune (where am I now?) that you love this fic so much and give nice and hilarious and encouraging comments* :tama-laff: :tama-heart:
I hope you aren't meant to be studying astronomy right now :lol:

btw, i meant to quote this too but must have deleted it, GoAya should be called 'GAM revisited' ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 12, 2008, 11:53:29 AM
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It means our sweet, little, innocent tru_harmony will be joining Reina in jail for yet another hit and run attack on a H!P member, tsk tsk!

you catch on quick, lollipopgirl!

but i won't hit and run yossui... i'm gonna hit her... then run over her again and again and again and again and again until charmy-sama asks me to be merciful and stop...

but that kiss did sound like a hot kiss... mm... 
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tito on June 12, 2008, 12:08:33 PM
It means our sweet, little, innocent tru_harmony will be joining Reina in jail for yet another hit and run attack on a H!P member, tsk tsk!
Comments to your comments on replies :P Oh no! Don't do that!  :( If you are gone, runaway from the past will be there incomplete...Love and peace  XD :lol:
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I've always felt something for Aya, it's called hatred :P
This...is so funny!! :rofl: It's like I've always felt something for Aya *long pause*, it's called hatred...Hahaha  :lol:
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I hope you aren't meant to be studying astronomy right now :lol:
Yeah, luckily I am not. I threw those things away 3 years ago *sigh of relief* I know I left out Mars, Saturn, Uranus and something something  :lol: XD
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btw, i meant to quote this too but must have deleted it, GoAya should be called 'GAM revisited' ;)
GAM revisited? How did that come about? :?
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you catch on quick, lollipopgirl!
Ok..I'm the slowpoke here :( :lol:
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but i won't hit and run yossui... i'm gonna hit her... then run over her again and again and again and again and again until charmy-sama asks me to be merciful and stop...
Oh man that sounds mean..don't do that! Charmy-sama will definitely ask you to stop! Go visualise a pretty charming Yossi and the weapon in your hands will automatically drop :D
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but that kiss did sound like a hot kiss... mm... 
Yeah nice afterthoughts after those violent tendencies :P
I imagine the scenario when they kissed and Aya just stood there horrified many times and it's such an addicting image :)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 12, 2008, 12:25:38 PM
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Yeah nice afterthoughts after those violent tendencies 
I imagine the scenario when they kissed and Aya just stood there horrified many times and it's such an addicting image

... i think that yossui's a good friend for "helping" miki secure her "victory"... yossui's such a good friend....  :hee:

... ... ... she did that as a friend ne~?  :stoned: ne~? ... ... .... ... omg  :tantrum: nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :pleeease: don't do this... my charmy's gonna get hurt...  :err:  :gyaaah:  :stunned:  :imdead:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 12, 2008, 12:29:15 PM
GAM revisited = Great Aya and Maki... and its 'revisited' coz its the new version... Just ignore it, twas lame :lol:

@tru_harmony: :o You'd do that to your Charmy-sama's beloved Yossy right in front of her... You'll break her into tiny pieces, awww :( (the car violence)
And I don't think Rika will see it as Yossy being a good friend :P But hell, she can just join in ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tito on June 12, 2008, 12:41:14 PM
... i think that yossui's a good friend for "helping" miki secure her "victory"... yossui's such a good friend....  :hee:

... ... ... she did that as a friend ne~?  :stoned: ne~? ... ... .... ... omg  :tantrum: nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :pleeease: don't do this... my charmy's gonna get hurt...  :err:  :gyaaah:  :stunned:  :imdead:
Haha  :rofl: :wahaha: Isn't it high time for a YOSHI's POV? Then you will see what she thinks..*tru_harmony starts praying* have you started?  XD haha
Charmy is already hurt :lol:
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GAM revisited = Great Aya and Maki... and its 'revisited' coz its the new version... Just ignore it, twas lame
Hmm..Just realise it can be Goto Aya Maki like some married couple :lol: Ok, I'm lame as well  :rofl:
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@tru_harmony: You'd do that to your Charmy-sama's beloved Yossy right in front of her... You'll break her into tiny pieces, awww (the car violence)
And I don't think Rika will see it as Yossy being a good friend But hell, she can just join in
LOL lollipopgirl is being so sarcastic today! Yeah, tru_harmony, you will crash Yossi and Rika's heart will be crushed!  :P beloved
Join in?  :? will Rika?  :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 12, 2008, 12:56:40 PM
i haven't stopped praying since you i read that last chapter...  :mon prayer: :prayers:

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Charmy is already hurt  :lol:

WHAT?!?! ... is she...? ... ... ...  :shock: OH MY GOD!!! ... she's... OH NO... ... ... ... NO WAY!!!!! ...

crashes crush...

... i have burnt out two electric guitars in my ritual sacrifices... i don't want to burn my acoustic guitars...  :OMG: please, Rika... come back to this fic... ... no... ... ... wait... ... i take that back... ... ... don't come back Rika... ... ... not yet.. ... ... ...  it's probably best for Rika to stay away for now... (SHE SHOULDN'T SEE YOSSUI KISSING MIKI LIKE THAT!!! but i would love to see that hot kiss...) ...  :mon trudge: *stages a freak accident to stall Rika from coming back*
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: cierl03 on June 12, 2008, 01:09:24 PM
I HATE YOU I HATE YOUUUUU!!!!!!  :angry: :angry: :angry:

aaaaaaaaa  POOR AYAAA...!!  :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

that's really not fair!! STUPID MIKI!! IDIOT!

i need to calm down now........>_<
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tito on June 12, 2008, 01:43:57 PM
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WHAT?!?! ... is she...? ... ... ...  :shock: OH MY GOD!!! ... she's... OH NO... ... ... ... NO WAY!!!!! ...
As in she's hurt because of the phone call incident that ruin ishiyoshi date a day ago  :)
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... i have burnt out two electric guitars in my ritual sacrifices... i don't want to burn my acoustic guitars...  :OMG: please, Rika... come back to this fic... ... no... ... ... wait... ... i take that back... ... ... don't come back Rika... ... ... not yet.. ... ... ...  it's probably best for Rika to stay away for now... (SHE SHOULDN'T SEE YOSSUI KISSING MIKI LIKE THAT!!! but i would love to see that hot kiss...) ...  :mon trudge: *stages a freak accident to stall Rika from coming back*
Are we playing the 'which comment makes tito laugh the hardest' game?  :rofl: ^That's so funny! You're contradicting yourself though..admit it, you worship Yossi as well  :wub:
*tru_harmony cuts herself with a knife*
*tito shows concern and abandons FYI*
*Rika never comes back*
 :rofl: :lol:
I HATE YOU I HATE YOUUUUU!!!!!!  :angry: :angry: :angry:

aaaaaaaaa  POOR AYAAA...!!  :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

that's really not fair!! STUPID MIKI!! IDIOT!

i need to calm down now........>_<
Oh no....don't hate me... :(
 :lol:
Life is never fair to start with....peace  :wub:
Shucks, should have put a warning in front to Aya's supporters not to kill me..oh man, but it's just you  :oops:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 12, 2008, 02:14:26 PM
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As in she's hurt because of the phone call incident that ruin ishiyoshi date a day ago

...oh... i thought she saw them kiss... ah, heck... what on earth would rika be doing in an airport... hah! silly me...

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That's so funny! You're contradicting yourself though..admit it, you worship Yossi as well

... hey! ... okay... i admit, i worship yossui too... otherwise, i wouldn't have casted her in my own fic... but FYI yossui... i don't know...

also... i think almost everybody loves her... ... ... but i worship her only in the context of my Charmy-sama...

i have three guitars left!!! ... okay... i'll stop burning them now... i'll just wait for the next update... if yossui hurts rika, i'll just smack her head with a guitar...

i just noticed a stereotyping of characters in many fics everywhere:

yossui - confused but accomodating 'friend'
rika - jealous and scheming
miki - haphazard and vengeful
aya- selfish and selfish

anyway... i am still waiting for the glorious return of charmy...

i still love this fic, no matter how much yossui is unintentionally hurting my charmy...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: kRisZ on June 12, 2008, 04:29:08 PM
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I tried to keep my eyes off her cleavage

my first reaction  :lol:


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That pair of penetrating eyes looked hurt and it was just too familiar to my liking. Penetrating eyes, lips…No, I shouldn’t be thinking of this. I loved Miki.

there's the sign, Yay!  :cow: she loves... Maki still  :P


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That was the only word I could use to describe myself then. Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled all that I had done for her these few months. Maybe I was crying because I was frustrated. Maybe those tears were there because I felt cheated as I still loved her. No, I was stupid to love that two-timer. I was stupid to have even confessed to her. I was stupid to have thought of dying for her. That was the first time in my life that I felt so stupid. Fujimoto Miki never likes to feel stupid.

Let her go Miki and move on... with Yossie  XD


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She approached me and hugged me gently. I murmured in a muffled voice, “Thank you Yossie.” Tears ran down my cheeks like a running tap and soon that blue dry-fit jersey was drenched with my tears. I could hear the instrumental for the chorus of Osaka koi no uta playing. Mou owari ya nen… 

I must admit, it's  :cry:

and I could imagine Miki alone again because Rika's calling and Yossie will be running... hope not  :prayers:



Go's version was ouches

and the kiss was hawt
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: sweeety on June 12, 2008, 04:59:52 PM
Noooo Miki! Why do you have to be so stubborn and vengeful? And Aya saw that and now thinks what she thought was true. And the whole gaze thing, where Yoshi looked at Aya then closed her eyes and kissed Miki more was just dog! If it were me I'd feel soooo cheap or something.

 But Yoshi is a good friend. She didn't have to do that. She should've pulled away though. She only kept going because Rika is making her think that she really does like Miki in that way, so she probably took that moment to compare or something. See if there are any sparks. But Miki.....sad sad Miki......

 Now it's all ruined. I just hope that Aya blames Maki for all this, and not Miki. Miki'll be dificult at first, but she wont know the truth behind AYa and Maki's appointment, so she will just be stubborn, and she will hurt a lot because she wont be with Aya so she might not know for  a while.

 Aya just saw that and probably thinks that Miki doesn't want her anymore so she will be almost as depressed as Miki. She might be angry, and all bets are she wont want to speak to Miki or something. If she ignores her like she always does, as is her pattern, to leave Miki when things get tough, then she will be away from Miki and not tell her the real reason behind the appointment etc.

 But if, and this is a big IF, she does want to make things right, she will hopefully try to speak to Miki and tell her that she loves her and that Maki means nothing to her. Then hopefully she will get her back. But I kinda feel sorry for her. But it was her fault for the way she treated miki. NO wonder she caught her girlfriend sucking face with another one. I mean, this girl sacrificed her life for her and she treats her like this? It just makes me mad!
 anyway, can't wait for Aya's POV, I don't think we need Maki's though. It's just gonna be something mean.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: Yukari on June 12, 2008, 08:36:14 PM
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I tried to keep my eyes off her cleavage

my first reaction  :lol:


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That pair of penetrating eyes looked hurt and it was just too familiar to my liking. Penetrating eyes, lips…No, I shouldn’t be thinking of this. I loved Miki.

there's the sign, Yay!  :cow: she loves... Maki still  :P


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That was the only word I could use to describe myself then. Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled all that I had done for her these few months. Maybe I was crying because I was frustrated. Maybe those tears were there because I felt cheated as I still loved her. No, I was stupid to love that two-timer. I was stupid to have even confessed to her. I was stupid to have thought of dying for her. That was the first time in my life that I felt so stupid. Fujimoto Miki never likes to feel stupid.

Let her go Miki and move on... with Yossie  XD


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She approached me and hugged me gently. I murmured in a muffled voice, “Thank you Yossie.” Tears ran down my cheeks like a running tap and soon that blue dry-fit jersey was drenched with my tears. I could hear the instrumental for the chorus of Osaka koi no uta playing. Mou owari ya nen… 

I must admit, it's  :cry:

and I could imagine Miki alone again because Rika's calling and Yossie will be running... hope not  :prayers:



Go's version was ouches

and the kiss was hawt

wojojo i love your comment kRisZ, i don't know why~~

i want Yossy POV, pleaaaaaaaaaase  :prayers: :mon prayer: Yukari: oh Hi tru_harmony, are you praying here too?  :hee:

and if you ask why i post here so much, it's because i'm without class in my school (so i have free time), the students take over the school and so we don't have class, and we walk across the city XDDD demanding things to improve the education in my country  :mon look:

waiting next chapter!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 13, 2008, 12:18:55 AM
... *lift rocks and looks under* where is it? ... *runs behind trees and looks around* where? ... *opens trunk of car* ... it's not here either...

tito, where is yossui's POV?

i need to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@Yukari: yep...  :mon prayer: :prayers:

Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tito on June 13, 2008, 02:13:51 AM
*Yawn :mon tweaker:* Just woke up...*After reading comments* -->  :mon heh: :mon fyeah:
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...oh... i thought she saw them kiss... ah, heck... what on earth would rika be doing in an airport... hah! silly me...
Will she be..? :mon misch:
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... hey! ... okay... i admit, i worship yossui too... otherwise, i wouldn't have casted her in my own fic... but FYI yossui... i don't know...

also... i think almost everybody loves her... ... ... but i worship her only in the context of my Charmy-sama...
You're a crazy ishiyoshi fan *run away*
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i just noticed a stereotyping of characters in many fics everywhere:

yossui - confused but accomodating 'friend'
rika - jealous and scheming
miki - haphazard and vengeful
aya- selfish and selfish
Pretty true..let's try to mix them up and see if it sounds ok
yossui - haphazard and vengeful
rika - confused but accomodating 'friend'
miki - selfish and selfish
aya - jealous and scheming
 :mon lmao: ^Interesting fic! :lol:
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i still love this fic, no matter how much yossui is unintentionally hurting my charmy...
Yeah~! :wub: *Pray for love to go on*
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there's the sign, Yay!  :cow: she loves... Maki still  :P
Oh ya, you are the GAM #2 (GoAya) supporter  XD :lol:
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Let her go Miki and move on... with Yossie  XD
This cracks me up! :rofl:
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and I could imagine Miki alone again because Rika's calling and Yossie will be running... hope not  :prayers:
Pray hard!  :P
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and the kiss was hawt
:wub: coz it is YoMiki and they are hot  :oops:
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Noooo Miki! Why do you have to be so stubborn and vengeful? And Aya saw that and now thinks what she thought was true. And the whole gaze thing, where Yoshi looked at Aya then closed her eyes and kissed Miki more was just dog! If it were me I'd feel soooo cheap or something.

 But Yoshi is a good friend. She didn't have to do that. She should've pulled away though. She only kept going because Rika is making her think that she really does like Miki in that way, so she probably took that moment to compare or something. See if there are any sparks. But Miki.....sad sad Miki......
Because she wanted Aya to think that it was true. An eye for an eye
High time for Yossi's POV :)
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Now it's all ruined. I just hope that Aya blames Maki for all this, and not Miki. Miki'll be dificult at first, but she wont know the truth behind AYa and Maki's appointment, so she will just be stubborn, and she will hurt a lot because she wont be with Aya so she might not know for  a while.

 Aya just saw that and probably thinks that Miki doesn't want her anymore so she will be almost as depressed as Miki. She might be angry, and all bets are she wont want to speak to Miki or something. If she ignores her like she always does, as is her pattern, to leave Miki when things get tough, then she will be away from Miki and not tell her the real reason behind the appointment etc.

 But if, and this is a big IF, she does want to make things right, she will hopefully try to speak to Miki and tell her that she loves her and that Maki means nothing to her. Then hopefully she will get her back. But I kinda feel sorry for her. But it was her fault for the way she treated miki. NO wonder she caught her girlfriend sucking face with another one. I mean, this girl sacrificed her life for her and she treats her like this? It just makes me mad!
 anyway, can't wait for Aya's POV, I don't think we need Maki's though. It's just gonna be something mean.
In for some tears and angst?  :)
Hmmm... Yeah, there won't be Maki's this time round ;)
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wojojo i love your comment kRisZ, i don't know why~~
I know why! Because a Yomiki supporter will like GoAya responses  :)
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i want Yossy POV, pleaaaaaaaaaase  :prayers: :mon prayer:
Coming soon..after my breakfast  :D
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Yukari: oh Hi tru_harmony, are you praying here too?  :hee:
:lol: You two are praying for 2 total different things  :lol:
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and if you ask why i post here so much, it's because i'm without class in my school (so i have free time), the students take over the school and so we don't have class, and we walk across the city XDDD demanding things to improve the education in my country  :mon look:
On strike? Ok, *pray for strike to prolong* You don't seem to be walking across the city though..Yukari seems to be stuck to the comp  :lol: :P
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.. *lift rocks and looks under* where is it? ... *runs behind trees and looks around* where? ... *opens trunk of car* ... it's not here either...

tito, where is yossui's POV?

i need to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haha, up very soon..relax..Yossui's POV is now in tito's comp hard disk :P Pray on! Pray on!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (FUJI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 13, 2008, 02:22:20 AM
 :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 13, 2008, 02:58:36 AM
@tru_harmony: Make your 200 posts here! :D
This is slightly longer than the previous one..

F.Y.I

Chapter 18

Shattered Love

YOSHI POV

December 23 (12.08pm)

I stood at the viewing gallery alone watching the planes taking off and landing. I needed more time to sort out my thoughts before going back to Rika. I needed to be fair to her. I needed to be clear of what I felt towards her and Fujimoto first. A plane’s journey is just like a person’s life. We take off and then explore all the happiness, loneliness, excitement and sadness life offers before we land somewhere. I wondered where I would land. I wondered who I would land with.

I didn’t know that the viewing gallery was such a deserted and quiet place before I came here today to send Maki off. In fact, most of the people sitting around here were catching a nap.  I came here to bid farewell to her and hopefully bid farewell to the ugly past.

 I pressed my face against the glass panel and my thoughts drifted off to what had happened last evening. It started off with a heavy sense of nostalgia and then love. After Fujimoto’s call, the evening just turned bad as I grew worried for her and Rika became jealous. Of course, the climax arrived when Rika popped the question, “Do you like her?”

It just didn’t feel the same after that dinner. Whenever I thought of Fujimoto after that, the word ‘like’ just popped up in my head like some irritating bug. Before that, what I felt towards her was mainly guilt and maybe friendship but now, from time to time, I started to wonder whether we could have a ‘future’ together. Bad. I shouldn’t be thinking of that.

Whenever I thought of Rika after last evening, I just felt guilty for that horrible evening I had given her and my lack of commitment in our relationship. I mean, I wasn’t that blur. I knew that Rika and I viewed our relationship differently. I was having fun using the pick-up lines on her and touching her. I just enjoyed the fact that we were lovers and there was someone for me to look for on lonely and boring nights.

But she was serious about it. Very serious. That took me almost 7 years to figure that out. Ok, I think I was the ultimate blur queen.

Then my train of thoughts was disrupted when I heard someone running towards me. I turned and I was shocked to see Fujimoto with tears in her eyes sprinting towards me. I mean, if she wanted to speak to me or something, she didn’t have to run as I was rooted to the ground, unmoving. There was no need to run like that.

I smiled in an attempt to conceal the confusing thoughts going through my mind right now and imitated the British by taking off my cap. I greeted her, “Mi-”

Before I could complete my sentence, she pressed her lips against mine and she forced her tongue into my mouth. I was completely shocked. I didn’t know how to react to this. What was she thinking of when she ran up to me and kissed me like that? What was her agenda? Did she like me? No, Miki only loved Aya.

I reciprocated and my tongue ventured in hers. I mean, it was pretty logical for me to that. When a girl as hot and sexy as Miki pounces on you and kisses you, there is no logic in resisting. You will do the same thing that I did. Furthermore, as a matter of fact, I, Yoshizawa Hitomi, enjoyed kissing quite a lot.

 I watched her, still wondering what she was up to. Her eyes wandered away from me and she smiled. I knew something was wrong. I turned my head slightly to my left and I saw a panting Aya, standing a distance away, horrified. Her face was literally white and tears ran down her cheeks. Immediately, I tried to pull myself away from her as I realized the implications of what we had just done. It appeared as though Miki had cheated on Aya and I was the accomplice which wasn’t the case at all. We had hurt Aya greatly. Very greatly.

Then, Miki looked at me with those pleading eyes and began to caress my butt rather suggestively as though she wanted more. From her eyes, I could see lust. But she didn’t lust for me. She lusted for a betrayal. She was acting out a betrayal and I was part of her cast. How much I wanted to just let her go and stop this act.

Then I thought of Rika when she looked at me with those pleading eyes as she asked for more. No, I shouldn’t do continue the skit. But she wouldn’t be at the airport. Why would she? She wasn’t close to Maki at all. No, I shouldn’t continue with this act no matter what. But I was helping Miki with her act and I wasn’t lusting for her. Yeah, I shouldn’t feel bad about it. 

From Aya’s eyes, I could see that she felt cheated and no words or actions could ever remove this image of us kissing from her mind. Oh well, I might as well finish the skit.

I closed my eyes. My tongue ventured in hers yet again and I moved my hands up from her hips and started touching her breasts. It might be my one and only chance to touch her in this manner. She didn’t resist. Why should she? Firstly, she was the one who initiated this skit. Secondly, I wasn’t bad at this. In fact, I was quite good at this.

I wouldn’t be able to forget this moment. She was sexy and she was an expert at this. All the thoughts that went through my mind earlier just disappeared into thin air as I enjoyed this sensual moment.   

After a while, she pulled herself away from me and I knew why. The only audience had left so there was no need to act on. She started crying badly. To be honest, I had never seen her like that. Maybe I had but in the past, I could think of ways to console her. But now, I didn’t know what to say to her.

Should I say, “Hey, why are you doing this to Aya?” No, that’s too insensitive. What about “What has been done cannot be undone”? No, that sounded too cruel.

Eventually, I decided that I shouldn’t say a thing. I approached her and hugged her gently. That should be what she needed now – a shoulder to lie on and a chest to cry on. She pressed herself against me and I could feel her tears seeping through the jersey I was wearing.

My phone vibrated and Osaka koi no uta instrumental played. What timing. It didn’t seem appropriate for me to pick up the call in a situation like this so I left it there to ring on its own. I didn’t know how long I stood there with Miki in my arms. It seemed to eternity before I let go of her and we trudged out of the complex.

As we plodded our way out of the place, I took out my phone and there were 7 missed calls from Rika. What timing. I gazed at the crying girl beside me and I placed my phone back in my bag.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: katatsumuri on June 13, 2008, 05:34:24 AM
Yeah Yossi's a jerk  :mon scooter:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: Yukari on June 13, 2008, 05:39:48 AM
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I'M MADLY HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY (still, no Ishikawa 'HAPPY~~')  :tama-apeshit:

F.Y.I

Chapter 18

Shattered Love

YOSHI POV

 :luvluv1:

I stood at the viewing gallery alone watching the planes taking off and landing. I needed more time to sort out my thoughts before going back to Rika. I needed to be fair to her. I needed to be clear of what I felt towards her and Fujimoto first. A plane’s journey is just like a person’s life. We take off and then explore all the happiness, loneliness, excitement and sadness life offers before we land somewhere. I wondered where I would land. I wondered who I would land with.

jujujuuuuuuuuuuuu i can say you yossy~~  :mon evillaff:

I didn’t know that the viewing gallery was such a deserted and quiet place before I came here today to send Maki off. In fact, most of the people sitting around here were catching a nap.  I came here to bid farewell to her and hopefully bid farewell to the ugly past.

uuuuuuuuujujuju the perfect stage to the next act  :mon fan:

I pressed my face against the glass panel and my thoughts drifted off to what had happened last evening. It started off with a heavy sense of nostalgia and then love. After Fujimoto’s call, the evening just turned bad as I grew worried for her and Rika became jealous. Of course, the climax arrived when Rika popped the question, “Do you like her?”

It just didn’t feel the same after that dinner. Whenever I thought of Fujimoto after that, the word ‘like’ just popped up in my head like some irritating bug. Before that, what I felt towards her was mainly guilt and maybe friendship but now, from time to time, I started to wonder whether we could have a ‘future’ together. Bad. I shouldn’t be thinking of that.
Bad Yossy: *ujujuj i could be with miki and jujujujujujuj*   :mon ignore:
Good Yossy: *no~~ i have someone now, and miki is my friend~~*  :mon cute:
Bad Yossy: *ehem you know that it's not true, don't you?, just imagine... miki and you...*  :mon misch:
Good Yossy: KO!!!!!!!!! :mon blood:

Whenever I thought of Rika after last evening, I just felt guilty for that horrible evening I had given her and my lack of commitment in our relationship. I mean, I wasn’t that blur. I knew that Rika and I viewed our relationship differently. I was having fun using the pick-up lines on her and touching her. I just enjoyed the fact that we were lovers and there was someone for me to look for on lonely and boring nights.

But she was serious about it. Very serious. That took me almost 7 years to figure that out. Ok, I think I was the ultimate blur queen.

i can understand you yossy... i just felt the same way sometimes  :mon exhaust:, and the... the feeling of guilty

Then my train of thoughts was disrupted when I heard someone running towards me. I turned and I was shocked to see Fujimoto with tears in her eyes sprinting towards me. I mean, if she wanted to speak to me or something, she didn’t have to run as I was rooted to the ground, unmoving. There was no need to run like that.

I smiled in an attempt to conceal the confusing thoughts going through my mind right now and imitated the British by taking off my cap. I greeted her, “Mi-”

Before I could complete my sentence, she pressed her lips against mine and she forced her tongue into my mouth. I was completely shocked. I didn’t know how to react to this. What was she thinking of when she ran up to me and kissed me like that? What was her agenda? Did she like me? No, Miki only loved Aya.

GOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAL!, yossy it's a bad goalkepper (thanks god!)  :mon fyeah:  :mon crazyinlove:

I reciprocated and my tongue ventured in hers. I mean, it was pretty logical for me to that. When a girl as hot and sexy as Miki pounces on you and kisses you, there is no logic in resisting. You will do the same thing that I did. Furthermore, as a matter of fact, I, Yoshizawa Hitomi, enjoyed kissing quite a lot.

who can't enjoy kissing??  :mon mischief:, and OMG just as Yossy say... is so sexy and hot  :mon blood:

I watched her, still wondering what she was up to. Her eyes wandered away from me and she smiled. I knew something was wrong. I turned my head slightly to my left and I saw a panting Aya, standing a distance away, horrified. Her face was literally white and tears ran down her cheeks. Immediately, I tried to pull myself away from her as I realized the implications of what we had just done. It appeared as though Miki had cheated on Aya and I was the accomplice which wasn’t the case at all. We had hurt Aya greatly. Very greatly.

oooh poor aya... bah, nobody believe me that  :mon impatient:

Then, Miki looked at me with those pleading eyes and began to caress my butt rather suggestively as though she wanted more. From her eyes, I could see lust. But she didn’t lust for me. She lusted for a betrayal. She was acting out a betrayal and I was part of her cast. How much I wanted to just let her go and stop this act.

liar liar, i know that you want to continue  :mon bleed2:

Then I thought of Rika when she looked at me with those pleading eyes as she asked for more. No, I shouldn’t do continue the skit. But she wouldn’t be at the airport. Why would she? She wasn’t close to Maki at all. No, I shouldn’t continue with this act no matter what. But I was helping Miki with her act and I wasn’t lusting for her. Yeah, I shouldn’t feel bad about it.

yossy can be blur, but she isn't stupid  :mon noprob:

From Aya’s eyes, I could see that she felt cheated and no words or actions could ever remove this image of us kissing from her mind. Oh well, I might as well finish the skit.

I closed my eyes. My tongue ventured in hers yet again and I moved my hands up from her hips and started touching her breasts. It might be my one and only chance to touch her in this manner. She didn’t resist. Why should she? Firstly, she was the one who initiated this skit. Secondly, I wasn’t bad at this. In fact, I was quite good at this.

I wouldn’t be able to forget this moment. She was sexy and she was an expert at this. All the thoughts that went through my mind earlier just disappeared into thin air as I enjoyed this sensual moment. 

well... here i totally died!!!!!!!!!!! *piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii* *electroshock* OMG i'm back  :mon mischief: :mon crazyinlove: :mon bleed2: yossy groping miki... *drool*

After a while, she pulled herself away from me and I knew why. The only audience had left so there was no need to act on. She started crying badly. To be honest, I had never seen her like that. Maybe I had but in the past, I could think of ways to console her. But now, I didn’t know what to say to her.

Should I say, “Hey, why are you doing this to Aya?” No, that’s too insensitive. What about “What has been done cannot be undone”? No, that sounded too cruel.

Eventually, I decided that I shouldn’t say a thing. I approached her and hugged her gently. That should be what she needed now – a shoulder to lie on and a chest to cry on. She pressed herself against me and I could feel her tears seeping through the jersey I was wearing.

that's the best thing that she could do... and console her  :mon scratch:

My phone vibrated and Osaka koi no uta instrumental played. What timing. It didn’t seem appropriate for me to pick up the call in a situation like this so I left it there to ring on its own. I didn’t know how long I stood there with Miki in my arms. It seemed to eternity before I let go of her and we trudged out of the complex.

As we plodded our way out of the place, I took out my phone and there were 7 missed calls from Rika. What timing. I gazed at the crying girl beside me and I placed my phone back in my bag.

ujujuju she ignored the calls! UJUJUJUJJUUUUUUUUUUUUU  :mon slapass:

where is my prize?? i said that it's Rika XDDDD naah i know that it isn't a prize  :mon POd:

now i NEED to know... where are they going?  :mon scooter:, what will they do??, What will happen between them??, what will happen with aya and maki??, What will happen with Rika?? i have so much questions and how i said... NEED answers  :mon wtf:

titoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i love your fanfic and you too  :mon love:

waiting next chapter!

PS: i will pray now that it would be a yomiki chapter again, it's almost impossible but however 

:prayers: :mon prayer: <---- good yukari and bad yukari together praying
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 13, 2008, 07:06:25 AM
 ... your last update broke my heart... as much as i wanted to give my 200th post to you as a comment... i figured, it is best to give my 200th post to Charmy in the RIVE... ...

*cuts down some trees and starts constructing a coffin* ... this is supposed to be for Yossui...

in consolation... my 201st post goes out to FYI...

i will try to understand how Yossui finds it in her heart to keep on hurting Rika like that and then saying that she loves Rika... ... then again... i think i do... because... I AM GUILTY!!! ... i hurt my rabu-rabu like that all the time...

... i hope Charmy-sama forgives me for all my transgressions...

why do we always end up hurting the ones we should never hurt?

i also hope that your next chapters will help heal this heart of mine...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 13, 2008, 07:24:50 AM
After lunch replies to comments ! :wub:
Yeah Yossi's a jerk  :mon scooter:
I wonder who is the monkey at the back^ :lol:
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
I'M MADLY HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY (still, no Ishikawa 'HAPPY~~')  :tama-apeshit:
The OMG was copied and pasted or typed? It makes a nice border :lol: :D
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Bad Yossy: *ujujuj i could be with miki and jujujujujujuj*   :mon ignore:
Good Yossy: *no~~ i have someone now, and miki is my friend~~*  :mon cute:
Bad Yossy: *ehem you know that it's not true, don't you?, just imagine... miki and you...*  :mon misch:
Good Yossy: KO!!!!!!!!! :mon blood:
This is so funny!  :rofl: :rofl: Lol, you do that for every chapter, eh?  :lol:
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i can understand you yossy... i just felt the same way sometimes  :mon exhaust:, and the... the feeling of guilty
Yeah, I admit I do 'under-love' some people some times when I shouldn't... :(
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GOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAL!, yossy it's a bad goalkepper (thanks god!)  :mon fyeah:  :mon crazyinlove:
Miki has won everything, eh?  :wahaha:
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oooh poor aya... bah, nobody believe me that  :mon impatient:
As a matter-of-fact, I don't believe as well!  :lol:
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well... here i totally died!!!!!!!!!!! *piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii* *electroshock* OMG i'm back  :mon mischief: :mon crazyinlove: :mon bleed2: yossy groping miki... *drool*
*Revival attempt again*  :sweat:
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ujujuju she ignored the calls! UJUJUJUJJUUUUUUUUUUUUU  :mon slapass:

where is my prize?? i said that it's Rika XDDDD naah i know that it isn't a prize  :mon POd:
Haha, who else can it be?  :lol: XD
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now i NEED to know... where are they going?  :mon scooter:, what will they do??, What will happen between them??, what will happen with aya and maki??, What will happen with Rika?? i have so much questions and how i said... NEED answers  :mon wtf:
Yeah, there are a lot of unanswered questions here...bad exam, I can't update that quickly after this weekend :(
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titoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i love your fanfic and you too  :mon love:
*Jump to Pluto wherever that is*  :P :mon loveflower: --> Love you too!!!
waiting next chapter!
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PS: i will pray now that it would be a yomiki chapter again, it's almost impossible but however 

:prayers: :mon prayer: <---- good yukari and bad yukari together praying
What's the difference between the good and bad one? Thought they are thinking of the same things... :mon misch:
... your last update broke my heart... as much as i wanted to give my 200th post to you as a comment... i figured, it is best to give my 200th post to Charmy in the RIVE... ...
Many apologies... :mon waterworks:
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*cuts down some trees and starts constructing a coffin* ... this is supposed to be for Yossui...
Don't kill Yossi..peace!! :D
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in consolation... my 201st post goes out to FYI...
Yeah! :)
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i will try to understand how Yossui finds it in her heart to keep on hurting Rika like that and then saying that she loves Rika... ... then again... i think i do... because... I AM GUILTY!!! ... i hurt my rabu-rabu like that all the time...

... i hope Charmy-sama forgives me for all my transgressions...

why do we always end up hurting the ones we should never hurt?
^Very true..I guess it's human nature to hurt others intentionally/unintentionally..nobody is a saint  :mon angel:
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i also hope that your next chapters will help heal this heart of mine...
Hmm..hopefully :P
The previous chapter followed 'Tou', 'Mat', 'Go'
This one is 'Fuji', 'Yoshi' so the next one is...............
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: Yukari on June 13, 2008, 07:43:36 AM
ishikawa??

aah and tito, you have to pay the debt to the hospital  :mon lmao:

yep i simply love bad and good sides of people, but like i dramatized in my last post, the good yukari is KO with yomiki, so i'm one now (who knows untill when...)   :mon yeah: :mon yeah: <--- (see, there are the two, like twins now)... the only different is how they see the relationship between miki and yossy, one is like  :mon innocent: and the other  :mon bleed2:

i want a new chapteeer

i hate your test too
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 13, 2008, 08:02:33 AM
ishikawa??
Hmm.. :wub: ;) :D
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aah and tito, you have to pay the debt to the hospital  :mon lmao:
Oh noo..I'm penniless (ok, that's highly exaggerated) but you die too often! :P I can perform CPR for free though...  ;):oops:
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yep i simply love bad and good sides of people, but like i dramatized in my last post, the good yukari is KO with yomiki, so i'm one now (who knows untill when...)   :mon yeah: :mon yeah: <--- (see, there are the two, like twins now)... the only different is how they see the relationship between miki and yossy, one is like  :mon innocent: and the other  :mon bleed2:
Haha, I wonder when will you not KO with Yomiki..oh yeah? Be the bad one :mon bleed2: You crack me up again with the twin part!  :lol:
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i want a new chapteeer

i hate your test too
:cry: I hate the test too :(
After this chapter, I will abandon this for a short while to study ;) and hopefully I can and will return to continue. Might sneak a chapter or 2 next week if I find the time and energy to write..... :(
AHHHHH!!!!!!! :angry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: sweeety on June 13, 2008, 08:48:33 AM
ah yoshi, you just wanted to experiment! How could you though? And did you think that Rika would understand or did you just think she wouldn't find out? Shame! You should've pulled back, you saw the pain in Aya's eyes!

 Oh god, I sooo cannot wait for the next chapter.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 13, 2008, 11:07:03 AM
ISHIKAWA!!!!

Charmy... many people think you are a selfish, jealous, insecure, narrow-minded girlfriend... please prove them wrong... ... please!!!

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why do we always end up hurting the ones we should never hurt?

^Very true..I guess it's human nature to hurt others intentionally/unintentionally..nobody is a saint 

but to hurt that one person whom she loves, the one person who should never receive pain from her... why is it so inhumane to be human?

RFP Charmy to FYI Charmy: don't give up...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 13, 2008, 11:26:56 AM
ah yoshi, you just wanted to experiment! How could you though? And did you think that Rika would understand or did you just think she wouldn't find out?
Both...oh man, I'm dying to write Rika's part  XD
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Oh god, I sooo cannot wait for the next chapter.
Hopefully no one kills me for that *tito looks right and looks left*
ISHIKAWA!!!!

Charmy... many people think you are a selfish, jealous, insecure, narrow-minded girlfriend... please prove them wrong... ... please!!!
Will Charmy change in FYI? What will she do?
Oh man, you make me feel like writing the next chapter right now even though I ought to be studying.. :( XD :D
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. why is it so inhumane to be human?
You're good at words. Very good at it. I will save this^ and probably quote it everywhere..
That's a really good question...Yoshi hurt Rika, Miki hurt Aya, Maki hurt Aya....life is so painful or is it just my fic?  :(
Reminds me of DAI's song - Hiiragi Love that song :D
We keep making mistakes and soon will come to a stop we aren't strong enough to take on everything
As we gather the pieces of ice we can no longer fill the cracks in our hearts

 :lol:
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RFP Charmy to FYI Charmy: don't give up...
^that girl ever since she regains her ability to talk has been communicating quite a bit...will the telepathy work?  :)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: sweeety on June 13, 2008, 02:52:17 PM
When will this circle of pain end? :'( WHY DON'T THEY STOP HURTING EACHOTHER AND START LOVING EACHOTHER? But at least the one diference here is that for once, Miki is the one doing the hurting. But it's kind of fair. I mean think about it. She gave her life to Aya. She gave everything. And then she found her with another woman. The same woman who almost caused both their deaths. So if I was her I wouldn't just be pissed, I would've slapped Aya.

 Actually I would've just run away crying and gone home and been unreachable for a while as I am in my room crying and watching romantic dramas, probly Searching for David's heart or Suzzane's diary for Nicholas.....
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: cierl03 on June 13, 2008, 03:17:12 PM
i'm still mad at you for making aya suffer like that... >_<

but good luck for the test!!   XD
aaahh...it'll be so boring a week with just a chapter  :cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 13, 2008, 04:26:04 PM
wll coment later AHAHAHAH!
YAYAYAY YOMIKI!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: kRisZ on June 13, 2008, 05:09:23 PM
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You two are praying for 2 total different things

make that 3  XD *hides the true intention*  :P


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wojojo i love your comment kRisZ, i don't know why~~
I know why! Because a Yomiki supporter will like GoAya responses

 :muffin:


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It just didn’t feel the same after that dinner. Whenever I thought of Fujimoto after that, the word ‘like’ just popped up in my head like some irritating bug. Before that, what I felt towards her was mainly guilt and maybe friendship but now, from time to time, I started to wonder whether we could have a ‘future’ together. Bad. I shouldn’t be thinking of that.

You're not bad Yossie, not at all, please do continue thinking thing  :grin:


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I closed my eyes. My tongue ventured in hers yet again and I moved my hands up from her hips and started touching her breasts. It might be my one and only chance to touch her in this manner. She didn’t resist. Why should she? Firstly, she was the one who initiated this skit. Secondly, I wasn’t bad at this. In fact, I was quite good at this.

 :luvluv1: :imdead:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 14, 2008, 12:57:54 AM
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You're good at words. Very good at it. I will save this and probably quote it everywhere..

... thanks... and it's good that you're gonna quote it everywhere. I've always thought about that... thanks to your fic, I have articulated that question.

It is a sad thought, ne~?

@kRisZ and Yukari: I WILL OUTPRAY YOU!!!! :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer:

CHARMY-SAMA!!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (YOSHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 14, 2008, 02:12:58 AM
Ok, I'm more or less done with the next chapter already..will be up pretty soon I guess..damn, I just can't control myself. Ok, this is the last one for the week (which is today and tomorrow ;) )
When will this circle of pain end? :'( WHY DON'T THEY STOP HURTING EACHOTHER AND START LOVING EACHOTHER?
If it ends, the story will end. I'm bad at writing sweet love story without any conflicts  :P
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But at least the one diference here is that for once, Miki is the one doing the hurting. But it's kind of fair. I mean think about it. She gave her life to Aya. She gave everything. And then she found her with another woman. The same woman who almost caused both their deaths. So if I was her I wouldn't just be pissed, I would've slapped Aya.
True...Miki has the right to get pissed off with Aya...
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Actually I would've just run away crying and gone home and been unreachable for a while as I am in my room crying and watching romantic dramas, probly Searching for David's heart or Suzzane's diary for Nicholas.....
  :rofl: The difference between sweeety and Mikitty  :rofl:
i'm still mad at you for making aya suffer like that... >_<
Oh man, don't be..peace! :P Everyone suffers in my story  :wahaha:
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but good luck for the test!!   XD
aaahh...it'll be so boring a week with just a chapter  :cry:
I'll see whether I can still write one or two more next week...thanks for the luck! I think I need it..^ :)
wll coment later AHAHAHAH!
YAYAYAY YOMIKI!!!
^ :roll:Someone is going mad with Yomiki goody  :wub:
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make that 3   *hides the true intention*
*Tries to enter KrisZ's mind* Nah, I failed..never mind, it will soon be revealed.. :P
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You're not bad Yossie, not at all, please do continue thinking thing 
This is so funny! :lol:
Oh no, I killed a 2nd person with FYI  :( :lol:
... thanks... and it's good that you're gonna quote it everywhere. I've always thought about that... thanks to your fic, I have articulated that question.

It is a sad thought, ne~?
Yeah, it's such a painful fic......it's a really sad though really  :cry:
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@kRisZ and Yukari: I WILL OUTPRAY YOU!!!! :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer:

CHARMY-SAMA!!!!
You're so funny :rofl: Ok, stop burning guitars and the next chap will be up soon :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 14, 2008, 02:41:07 AM
Here's the next one..if you are wondering where Rika comes in, read on :D

F.Y.I

Chapter 18

Shattered Love

ISHI POV

December 24 (12.12pm)

I stood by the huge window in my own apartment and gazed blankly at the sky. It was a bright sunny day with white fluffy clouds in the sky and if I lived my life behind a window, I could easily believe that it was a summer day. But the fact was I didn’t live my life behind a glass panel and I knew that winter was here.

I picked up my phone and hesitated for the hundredth time whether I should call her or not. She should be at the airport by now. What if she lied to me and she wasn’t going to the airport? What if she was having fun right now with the H!P girls? What if she was with Fujimoto Miki?

No, I should just call her no matter what. After what had happened last night, we ought to have a serious talk about our relationship. This shouldn’t go on anymore. Maybe I should invite her over for dinner tonight.

I dialed her number and held the phone close to my ears waiting for her to pick up. No, she didn’t. Perhaps she was buying lunch and it was a hassle to pick it up.

I pressed the redial button and again she didn’t pick up. Maybe she was walking and didn’t notice that her phone vibrated.

I dialed again and I was yet again directed to the voice-mail. Maybe she was having fun with the girls and didn’t notice that her phone was ringing.

I tried again and the result was still the same. Maybe she was in the toilet doing her business. 

I called again. Maybe she had left her phone at home. A blur queen like her might have done so.

I dialed the same number for the 6th time but there was still no response from her. Maybe she had misplaced her phone. Oh yes, maybe she had lost her phone.

When I called for the 7th time and she still didn’t pick it up, I was convinced that she was with Fujimoto Miki.

When I placed my phone on the table, tears welled up in my eyes. No, I shouldn’t cry. I hadn’t lost this battle yet. So what if Yossie was with her? Last night when we were together, her mind was on Fujimoto Miki. Maybe when she was with Fujimoto Miki, her mind would be on me. Maybe.

Strange. Why was that woman with Yossie? Did my plan fail? Maybe Maki didn’t act well enough. But she is the best actress in H!P.

Oh crap. I picked up my phone and dialed a different number. This time round, on second ring, the receiver picked up. “Hello,” she said politely.

“Hey, Maki. It’s me, Rika.”

“Oh Rika, tell you something, I’m not leaving Japan.”

“What?” Why the hell was she staying? It’s not part of the test!

“Something happened over here. I can’t leave now.”

“What happened?”

“It’s complicated. Where should I start? Oh, you were right about it. Miki did turn up-”

“She did? What did she do?” Then why the hell would she be with Yossie? She should be with Aya.

“Yeah, well, she slapped me and ran off. Aya chased after her though and then…”

“What happened?”

She spoke in a very gentle tone, “Aya told me about it just now when she eventually stopped crying so I think it should be true. I mean, Aya witnessed it and she has no need to lie to me and-”

“What happened?” I interrupted.

“Yossie and Miki kissed.”

“What?” I shouted into the phone. Tears ran down my cheeks. Why did that happen? I didn’t intend for something like that to happen. Why did Yossie kiss that woman? She liked her, right? No, I should calm down and think rationally. There must be a reason.

After a few seconds, she replied, “My pick is Miki did it to take revenge on Aya because she thought that Aya and I were in for a kiss.”

I could no longer contain the anger piling in my chest and I shouted at her in angriest voice, “Why the hell did you kiss Aya?”

She said defensively, “No, I didn’t. I just wanted to wipe off some cream on her face.” At this point, I truly regretted asking her to test the strength of the love between GAM. I just wanted her to create some problems for them so that Fujimoto Miki would be troubled by her own relationship with Aya and wouldn’t bother Yossie that often. I didn’t ask her to mess up their relationship completely. Damn, Maki had her own agendas. 

She disrupted my train of thoughts by saying, “Thanks for asking me to participate in this test. If I didn’t participate, I won’t know that Miki was such a jealous and insecure lover. I cannot forgive Miki for hurting Aya like that.”

“Oh..” What should I say? Frankly, I just wanted to scream at her for spoiling my plan and ruining everyone and everything. But I didn’t quite have the guts to mess with her. In fact, I somewhat regretted shouting at her just now. Maybe she would be mad at it and would backstab me or maybe….

“Anyway, Aya just came out of the shower so I got to go. Just remember: Don’t let go of Yossie no matter what happens. If you need help or something, you can just look for me. I’ve an idea how you can keep Yossie by your side.” She hung up on me.

Shower? I wondered where they were and what they were up to. With the image of Fujimoto Miki kissing my Yossie swirling in my head, I couldn’t quite be bothered with what they were doing. But, in a way, their little action would affect Yossie and me. She said she had an idea. I wondered what it was. I wonder aloud to myself, “Do I need her help? Crap, I can handle my love relationship on my own. Wait, maybe I do. Oh well, if everything I try on Yossie fails, at least I will have someone to turn to…”
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At this point, I just want to say that I have figured out 2 different endings in F.Y.I and I'm debating which one to follow through with. In both of them, something will happen but the resultant pairings will be different and the ending will be different..Just set up a poll so you can go and vote and if you like, justify why. I put up different combinations so that you won't know what's up in my mind :P . I'll only look out for the pairings that I'm debating over but if you can, convince me of another pairing.  :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: Yukari on June 14, 2008, 03:53:29 AM
now my comment

I stood by the huge window in my own apartment and gazed blankly at the sky. It was a bright sunny day with white fluffy clouds in the sky and if I lived my life behind a window, I could easily believe that it was a summer day. But the fact was I didn’t live my life behind a glass panel and I knew that winter was here.

she realized that she don't live in a bubble... she has to realize others things too  :mon scare: :mon scare:

I picked up my phone and hesitated for the hundredth time whether I should call her or not. She should be at the airport by now. What if she lied to me and she wasn’t going to the airport? What if she was having fun right now with the H!P girls? What if she was with Fujimoto Miki?

No, I should just call her no matter what. After what had happened last night, we ought to have a serious talk about our relationship. This shouldn’t go on anymore. Maybe I should invite her over for dinner tonight.

ujujuju poor rika... she didn't know what was happening  :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff:

I dialed her number and held the phone close to my ears waiting for her to pick up. No, she didn’t. Perhaps she was buying lunch and it was a hassle to pick it up.

I pressed the redial button and again she didn’t pick up. Maybe she was walking and didn’t notice that her phone vibrated.

I dialed again and I was yet again directed to the voice-mail. Maybe she was having fun with the girls and didn’t notice that her phone was ringing.

I tried again and the result was still the same. Maybe she was in the toilet doing her business. 

I called again. Maybe she had left her phone at home. A blur queen like her might have done so.

I dialed the same number for the 6th time but there was still no response from her. Maybe she had misplaced her phone. Oh yes, maybe she had lost her phone.

When I called for the 7th time and she still didn’t pick it up, I was convinced that she was with Fujimoto Miki.

wow, mean... it was the only response  :mon ouch: :mon ouch:

When I placed my phone on the table, tears welled up in my eyes. No, I shouldn’t cry. I hadn’t lost this battle yet. So what if Yossie was with her? Last night when we were together, her mind was on Fujimoto Miki. Maybe when she was with Fujimoto Miki, her mind would be on me. Maybe.

i don't think so  :mon dunno:  :mon dunno:

Strange. Why was that woman with Yossie? Did my plan fail? Maybe Maki didn’t act well enough. But she is the best actress in H!P.

Oh crap. I picked up my phone and dialed a different number. This time round, on second ring, the receiver picked up. “Hello,” she said politely.

“Hey, Maki. It’s me, Rika.”

“Oh Rika, tell you something, I’m not leaving Japan.”

“What?” Why the hell was she staying? It’s not part of the test!

“Something happened over here. I can’t leave now.”

“What happened?”

“It’s complicated. Where should I start? Oh, you were right about it. Miki did turn up-”

“She did? What did she do?” Then why the hell would she be with Yossie? She should be with Aya.

“Yeah, well, she slapped me and ran off. Aya chased after her though and then…”

“What happened?”

She spoke in a very gentle tone, “Aya told me about it just now when she eventually stopped crying so I think it should be true. I mean, Aya witnessed it and she has no need to lie to me and-”

“What happened?” I interrupted.

“Yossie and Miki kissed.”

“What?” I shouted into the phone. Tears ran down my cheeks. Why did that happen? I didn’t intend for something like that to happen. Why did Yossie kiss that woman? She liked her, right? No, I should calm down and think rationally. There must be a reason.

wojooo she know it now!! what could she do???  :mon spit: :mon spit: i imagined rika like ----->  :mon mad:

After a few seconds, she replied, “My pick is Miki did it to take revenge on Aya because she thought that Aya and I were in for a kiss.”

I could no longer contain the anger piling in my chest and I shouted at her in angriest voice, “Why the hell did you kiss Aya?”

She said defensively, “No, I didn’t. I just wanted to wipe off some cream on her face.” At this point, I truly regretted asking her to test the strength of the love between GAM. I just wanted her to create some problems for them so that Fujimoto Miki would be troubled by her own relationship with Aya and wouldn’t bother Yossie that often. I didn’t ask her to mess up their relationship completely. Damn, Maki had her own agendas. 

maki prefered her own plan actually...  :mon inluv: :mon inluv:

She disrupted my train of thoughts by saying, “Thanks for asking me to participate in this test. If I didn’t participate, I won’t know that Miki was such a jealous and insecure lover. I cannot forgive Miki for hurting Aya like that.”

yay Maki, fightooo fightooo  :mon yeah: :mon yeah:

“Oh..” What should I say? Frankly, I just wanted to scream at her for spoiling my plan and ruining everyone and everything. But I didn’t quite have the guts to mess with her. In fact, I somewhat regretted shouting at her just now. Maybe she would be mad at it and would backstab me or maybe….

“Anyway, Aya just came out of the shower so I got to go. Just remember: Don’t let go of Yossie no matter what happens. If you need help or something, you can just look for me. I’ve an idea how you can keep Yossie by your side.” She hung up on me.

so she is with aya...  WOJOJOOO  :mon inluv: :mon inluv:
Maki you won't have to say Rika how she can keep yossy  :mon exhaust: :mon exhaust:

Shower? I wondered where they were and what they were up to. With the image of Fujimoto Miki kissing my Yossie swirling in my head, I couldn’t quite be bothered with what they were doing. But, in a way, their little action would affect Yossie and me. She said she had an idea. I wondered what it was. I wonder aloud to myself, “Do I need her help? Crap, I can handle my love relationship on my own. Wait, maybe I do. Oh well, if everything I try on Yossie fails, at least I will have someone to turn to…”

noooo~~ bad rika~~  :mon ko: :mon ko:

i wonder were they where too  :mon wind: :mon wind:

At this point, I just want to say that I have figured out 2 different endings in F.Y.I and I'm debating which one to follow through with. In both of them, something will happen but the resultant pairings will be different and the ending will be different..Just set up a poll so you can go and vote and if you like, justify why. I put up different combinations so that you won't know what's up in my mind :P . I'll only look out for the pairings that I'm debating over but if you can, convince me of another pairing.  :D

i don't know how to convice peopleeeeee  :mon ref: :mon ref: (remember, two monkeys everytime, they are twins  XD)

emm emm PLEASE YOMIKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII  :mon loveflower:  :mon loveflower: no?? well i don't know what to do... i have been all the fanfic praying for it   :mon whimper: :mon whimper:

i voted yomiki, do i need to justify?? well... i love them, Aya doesn't love miki, and i want her to be happy with Yossy, besides Yossy doesn't love Rika anyway... aaaaand i don't believe in plains to be together with someone that doesn't love you. My only doubt is if Miki could some day love Yossy, i hope she can :mon pray2: :mon pray2: i hope that other people vote for it n.nU

emm actually, i wanted to vote for Gam #2, but then i think... it's almost certain that if yomiki will exist, Gam #2 too... but if only Gam# 2 exist, isn't sure that yomiki could...

so i vote yomiki, i repeat

waiting a next chaptaaa titotitotitotitotitotitotitooooo  :mon love: :mon love:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 14, 2008, 06:56:17 AM
as expected, I voted for IshiYoshi... that's pretty much what everyone would expect...

but thinking about it... I want YoMiki to win this one... Charmy doesn't deserve to be hurt like that...

sure, her karma might say otherwise for sending all that hate mail and doing this stupid test but... she doesn't love miki... that is the difference between her and Yossui...

Yossui claims to love her... but is it really love? She knows Miki's effect on Rika... why doesn't she do something about it? it is as if she's hurting Rika on purpose and then hides behind the glorious curtain of benevolence as a friend... Why is she letting Rika feel insecure?

Can't she go beyond the physical and emotional pleasure of kissing this extremely hot girl for the higher values of honesty, love and trust? Why doesn't she just tell Rika it's fucking over? Rika deserves to know...

Rika is not the perfect girlfriend... nor is Miki... ... but if loving means hurting the one you love and Yossui's just looking for someone to love... I concede... YoMiki wins it...

I just hope Yossui 'loves' Miki better than Rika...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: zay05ohayou on June 14, 2008, 07:52:36 AM
Fuuu~ This is a sneak comment! XD
The Ishi and Yoshi POV! OMG.. Crazy...
Yossie thinks of Rika for a while but its all around Miki.. She's considering it..  :O
and Rika.. poor Charmy.. but she planned it..  :shocked: and it failed..  :(
No trust in Miki's side and Aya's just plain innocent.. *sigh*
but wait..
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“Anyway, Aya just came out of the shower so I got to go. Just remember: Don’t let go of Yossie no matter what happens. If you need help or something, you can just look for me. I’ve an idea how you can keep Yossie by your side.” She hung up on me.
Ok.. Aya out of the shower.. and Maki is with her..  :w00t:
anyway.. Maki has an idea to keep Yossie with Rika.. sounds pretty sneaky.. like only one side would benefit.. and what would happen to Miki?? I know i go for Ishiyoshi and AyaMaki but Miki??? I don't want her to be set aside..  :-\
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 14, 2008, 08:17:17 AM
Post-lunch reply to comments :D
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ujujuju poor rika... she didn't know what was happening  :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff:
Haha..you don't seem to be sympathising with Rika! :lol:
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wow, mean... it was the only response  :mon ouch: :mon ouch:
Mean Yossi  :angry:  :lol: or to link back.....maybe it's mean Maki :P
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wojooo she know it now!! what could she do???  :mon spit: :mon spit: i imagined rika like ----->  :mon mad:
:rofl:^ What will Rika do? haha, you are making me excited over my own fic...
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maki prefered her own plan actually...  :mon inluv: :mon inluv:
Not the first time Maki takes things into her own hands..maybe it's the maki-style  :oops:
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so she is with aya...  WOJOJOOO  :mon inluv: :mon inluv:
Maki you won't have to say Rika how she can keep yossy  :mon exhaust: :mon exhaust:
Will Maki help to revive ishiyoshi or will she leave Rika to rot? Oh man, I'm excited over my own fic again  :lol:
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noooo~~ bad rika~~  :mon ko: :mon ko:

i wonder were they where too  :mon wind: :mon wind:
Yeah, I leave that bit to your imagination :)  :mon misch: Should I? Maybe I shan't.. Do you want a chapter on that? Oh man, the power of imagination is way stronger ;)
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i don't know how to convice peopleeeeee  :mon ref: :mon ref: (remember, two monkeys everytime, they are twins  XD)

emm emm PLEASE YOMIKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII  :mon loveflower:  :mon loveflower: no?? well i don't know what to do... i have been all the fanfic praying for it   :mon whimper: :mon whimper:

i voted yomiki, do i need to justify?? well... i love them, Aya doesn't love miki, and i want her to be happy with Yossy, besides Yossy doesn't love Rika anyway... aaaaand i don't believe in plains to be together with someone that doesn't love you. My only doubt is if Miki could some day love Yossy, i hope she can :mon pray2: :mon pray2: i hope that other people vote for it n.nU
Will Miki? or will she stick to Aya like before? or will she allow herself to have a change of heart? damn, I'm making myself excited with the questions...
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emm actually, i wanted to vote for Gam #2, but then i think... it's almost certain that if yomiki will exist, Gam #2 too... but if only Gam# 2 exist, isn't sure that yomiki could...

so i vote yomiki, i repeat
^You sure?  XD :lol: Yomiki = GAM #2?
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waiting a next chaptaaa titotitotitotitotitotitotitooooo  :mon love: :mon love:
haha, you are making me fall in love with my own nick..it rhythms (in a way) and it's easy to type.... :wub:
as expected, I voted for IshiYoshi... that's pretty much what everyone would expect...

but thinking about it... I want YoMiki to win this one... Charmy doesn't deserve to be hurt like that...

sure, her karma might say otherwise for sending all that hate mail and doing this stupid test but... she doesn't love miki... that is the difference between her and Yossui...

Yossui claims to love her... but is it really love? She knows Miki's effect on Rika... why doesn't she do something about it? it is as if she's hurting Rika on purpose and then hides behind the glorious curtain of benevolence as a friend... Why is she letting Rika feel insecure?

Can't she go beyond the physical and emotional pleasure of kissing this extremely hot girl for the higher values of honesty, love and trust? Why doesn't she just tell Rika it's fucking over? Rika deserves to know...
You're for a break-up? Maybe Yossi just didn't know how to love a person properly  ;)

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Rika is not the perfect girlfriend... nor is Miki... ... but if loving means hurting the one you love and Yossui's just looking for someone to love... I concede... YoMiki wins it...

I just hope Yossui 'loves' Miki better than Rika...
It's not the end of the battle yet :) You mean Yossi to hurt Miki by loving her? Hmm......
Fuuu~ This is a sneak comment! XD
The Ishi and Yoshi POV! OMG.. Crazy...
Yossie thinks of Rika for a while but its all around Miki.. She's considering it..  :O
and Rika.. poor Charmy.. but she planned it..  :shocked: and it failed..  :(
No trust in Miki's side and Aya's just plain innocent.. *sigh*
but wait..
Yeah! You're commenting again :) ^sums up pretty much what happened in chap 17 and 18
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Ok.. Aya out of the shower.. and Maki is with her..  :w00t:
anyway.. Maki has an idea to keep Yossie with Rika.. sounds pretty sneaky.. like only one side would benefit.. and what would happen to Miki?? I know i go for Ishiyoshi and AyaMaki but Miki??? I don't want her to be set aside..  :-\
I'll leave the GoAya part for your imagination for a while...Not that it's hard. Shower...there aren't many places with that :P
Yeah, what will happen to Miki? There are 5 characters so one ought to be alone and lonely..I wonder who will that be.. XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 14, 2008, 08:37:23 AM
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You're for a break-up? Maybe Yossi just didn't know how to love a person properly

... it's hard for me to say this... but... at this point... I AM FOR BREAK UP... yossui has no idea how to love... she ruins rika's evening, rika tries to make it right. what does yossui do? grope another girl in public and ignore rika's efforts... just end it, yossui! i'd do a better job than you!

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You mean Yossi to hurt Miki by loving her? Hmm......

if being yossui's girlfriend entails that much pain, i'll serve her to miki on a silver platter... i hope you enjoy your meal, miki...

... waiting for next chapter where you will end IshiYoshi...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 14, 2008, 08:44:51 AM
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... it's hard for me to say this... but... at this point... I AM FOR BREAK UP... yossui has no idea how to love... she ruins rika's evening, rika tries to make it right. what does yossui do? grope another girl in public and ignore rika's efforts... just end it, yossui! i'd do a better job than you!
Quite true..I can understand your frustration the more I think about it...it's more of they love each other in very different ways and view love differently. similar case with that of Aya and Miki  ;)
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if being yossui's girlfriend entails that much pain, i'll serve her to miki on a silver platter... i hope you enjoy your meal, miki...
Oh man..you're being really sarcastic today..chill..chill  :( XD :)
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... waiting for next chapter where you will end IshiYoshi...
Frankly, I haven't decided whether to end it or not..maybe I'll think through it tonight or something..now I just throw everyone in that mud and it can almost go anywhere from here...
Chill, girl, chill  :)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: cierl03 on June 14, 2008, 09:19:19 AM
the poll's not fair ~ I'm the only Aya fan here, (and probably only GAM fans)....
but well... I trust you!! please make this the best story possible regardless of the endings :)

aya please don't do anything stupid with maki!!
(and i'm really anxious to know her reaction after seeing that  :cry:)
I hope it's not the end of GAM....but whatever, I just want aya happy  XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: Ai.love on June 14, 2008, 09:53:17 AM
the poll's not fair ~ I'm the only Aya fan here, (and probably only GAM fans)....
but well... I trust you!! please make this the best story possible regardless of the endings :)

aya please don't do anything stupid with maki!!
(and i'm really anxious to know her reaction after seeing that  :cry:)
I hope it's not the end of GAM....but whatever, I just want aya happy  XD

you're not alone  :mon beam: GAM forever!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: JFC on June 14, 2008, 10:05:24 AM
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Chapter 18

Shattered Love

YOSHI POV
Gaddamit Yossi.  We know you're confused about how you feel about Miki but fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck this ain't helping matters....:banghead:




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Chapter 18

Shattered Love

ISHI POV
SUNNOVAFUCK THE "SHE" WAS RIKA!?!?!? :OMG:

...

Actually, I shouldn't be that surprised at this.




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After a few seconds, she replied, “My pick is Miki did it to take revenge on Aya because she thought that Aya and I were in for a kiss.”

I could no longer contain the anger piling in my chest and I shouted at her in angriest voice, “Why the hell did you kiss Aya?”

She said defensively, “No, I didn’t. I just wanted to wipe off some cream on her face.” At this point, I truly regretted asking her to test the strength of the love between GAM.
Yeah...you reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally thought this plan out well Rika.
:mon suspect:

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I just wanted her to create some problems for them so that Fujimoto Miki would be troubled by her own relationship with Aya and wouldn’t bother Yossie that often. I didn’t ask her to mess up their relationship completely. Damn, Maki had her own agendas.
Geez, she's only realizing this NOW??? It should have been pretty obvious that Maki might try something considering how she's all rabu-rabu for Aya herself.  :doh:




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“Anyway, Aya just came out of the shower so I got to go. Just remember: Don’t let go of Yossie no matter what happens. If you need help or something, you can just look for me. I’ve an idea how you can keep Yossie by your side.” She hung up on me.

Shower? I wondered where they were and what they were up to.
Oh shit no...please Aya say you didn't... :shocked:



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“Do I need her help? Crap, I can handle my love relationship on my own. Wait, maybe I do. Oh well, if everything I try on Yossie fails, at least I will have someone to turn to…”
Oh for Pete's sake...NOW what? 
:err:




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At this point, I just want to say that I have figured out 2 different endings in F.Y.I and I'm debating which one to follow through with. In both of them, something will happen but the resultant pairings will be different and the ending will be different..Just set up a poll so you can go and vote and if you like, justify why. I put up different combinations so that you won't know what's up in my mind   :P. I'll only look out for the pairings that I'm debating over but if you can, convince me of another pairing.   :D
What if we want to see both endings?  You could just choose one to be your "primary" ending and then post the other one as an "alternate" ending the next day.
:yep: :D :rockon:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: sweeety on June 14, 2008, 11:51:35 AM
I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I knew it was Rika!

 btw, I voted for YoMiki cause they deserve to be with eachother as they are the only decent characters left. But I only want a bit of thaat, I want Miki to get Aya in the end.. It wouldn't be fair not to have her after all she went through to get her and keep her, and then all the stuff she put her through.

 But she also deserves better u know? Someone who isn't the type to neglect her and then get jealous of her even though she was the one to throw her away in the first place.

 But they are both suffering at the hands of others. It's not their fault for what they are doing or how they are hurting. It's Rika and Maki's fault. I think that if Rika had not been there then Maki would've let go and GAM wouldn't have been having as many problems. And then Miki would not have come off so mean to Aya and she wouldn't have gone out with her etc.

 But it's mean of Maki to try and get back in with Aya on a relationship which has foundation based on lies and deceit. She should have told Aya what she told Rika just now. She should have not taken advantage of Aya on this level. And she should not have gone to her place, she should have taken her to Aya's place or even Miki's and tried to make things good between them. But what am I saying, Maki isn't Aya's friend, she's just someone who basically wants to see her miserable. It's like Gomatou all over again.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 14, 2008, 12:26:49 PM
Short Study Break now.. :) First of all, I must start by saying I'm happy with the different responses and all but, like mentioned earlier, it's not 'majority wins'..The poll is useful nevertheless but actually, out of the 6 options, I'm only looking out at 2 of them....The rest are just fillers so that you can't read my mind :P
P.S. Don't kill me if I can't get a chapter up tomorrow...

the poll's not fair ~ I'm the only Aya fan here, (and probably only GAM fans)....
but well... I trust you!! please make this the best story possible regardless of the endings :)
Oh man, I can feel the pressure^..Ok, I'll try my best! :D
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aya please don't do anything stupid with maki!!
(and i'm really anxious to know her reaction after seeing that  :cry:)
I hope it's not the end of GAM....but whatever, I just want aya happy  XD
See, I know there are people who like Aya...maybe it will take some time ;) I need to finish revising math and bio and... :angry:
you're not alone  :mon beam: GAM forever!!!
Hello! Nice to see you making your first post here! :P I'm happy!  :wub: Post more often!
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Gaddamit Yossi.  We know you're confused about how you feel about Miki but fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck this ain't helping matters....:banghead:
^Absolutely..she is just  :? confused..
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SUNNOVAFUCK THE "SHE" WAS RIKA!?!?!? :OMG:

...

Actually, I shouldn't be that surprised at this.
This ^ is so funny!  :rofl:
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Yeah...you reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally thought this plan out well Rika.
:mon suspect:

[/sarcasm]
Rika isn't as scheming as Reina or Maki...probably this is the best she can think of  :lol:
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Oh shit no...please Aya say you didn't... :shocked:
did she? :P
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What if we want to see both endings?  You could just choose one to be your "primary" ending and then post the other one as an "alternate" ending the next day.
:yep: :D :rockon:
^Good suggestion..I'll think about it but that's provided that no one kills me for ending 1 :P
 
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btw, I voted for YoMiki cause they deserve to be with eachother as they are the only decent characters left.
You make me feel as though I screwed up the story.. :(
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But I only want a bit of thaat, I want Miki to get Aya in the end.. It wouldn't be fair not to have her after all she went through to get her and keep her, and then all the stuff she put her through.

 But she also deserves better u know? Someone who isn't the type to neglect her and then get jealous of her even though she was the one to throw her away in the first place.
Hmm..perhaps.. ;) :)
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But they are both suffering at the hands of others. It's not their fault for what they are doing or how they are hurting. It's Rika and Maki's fault. I think that if Rika had not been there then Maki would've let go and GAM wouldn't have been having as many problems. And then Miki would not have come off so mean to Aya and she wouldn't have gone out with her etc.
Absolutely!  :)
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But it's mean of Maki to try and get back in with Aya on a relationship which has foundation based on lies and deceit. She should have told Aya what she told Rika just now. She should have not taken advantage of Aya on this level. And she should not have gone to her place, she should have taken her to Aya's place or even Miki's and tried to make things good between them. But what am I saying, Maki isn't Aya's friend, she's just someone who basically wants to see her miserable. It's like Gomatou all over again.
Haha..you are reading too much between the lines..I haven't yet revealed where they were or whatsoever.. :lol: XD As for Maki, I'll deal more with her agenda later.. :oops:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: kRisZ on June 14, 2008, 04:15:04 PM
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I dialed her number and held the phone close to my ears waiting for her to pick up. No, she didn’t. Perhaps she was buying lunch and it was a hassle to pick it up.

I pressed the redial button and again she didn’t pick up. Maybe she was walking and didn’t notice that her phone vibrated.

I dialed again and I was yet again directed to the voice-mail. Maybe she was having fun with the girls and didn’t notice that her phone was ringing.

I tried again and the result was still the same. Maybe she was in the toilet doing her business. 

I called again. Maybe she had left her phone at home. A blur queen like her might have done so.

I dialed the same number for the 6th time but there was still no response from her. Maybe she had misplaced her phone. Oh yes, maybe she had lost her phone.

in denial mood  :roll:


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When I called for the 7th time and she still didn’t pick it up, I was convinced that she was with Fujimoto Miki.

 :lol:


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“What happened?” I interrupted.

“Yossie and Miki kissed.”

damn, that's ouches


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She disrupted my train of thoughts by saying, “Thanks for asking me to participate in this test. If I didn’t participate, I won’t know that Miki was such a jealous and insecure lover. I cannot forgive Miki for hurting Aya like that.”

no comment

 XD



My first choice was YoMaki, so that neither of the two will get Yossie  :P , and just to be different  :grin:   

But I clicked GoAya... I could sense Aya loves Maki more despite the efforts of Miki and despite Maki’s past behavior. Well she was threatened and no one who’s in the right mind would prefer to be in jail just to prove their love.

And Yossie is confused, she’s saying she loves Rika but gets confused when Miki’s in the picture. I have two theories about this

(1) Yossie and Rika are together for ages... maybe she’s bored and is looking for something to rekindle a spark or something. And besides it’s healthy for a relationship to look for a fling.

(2) Yossie’s the only person in HP that Miki trusts in spite of the scheme, so maybe Yossie’s feeling guilty or something, maybe it’s not love at all or maybe it started with the guilt and evolved.



EDIT

outprays the one who tried to outpray (aka--> you know who you are  XD)

 :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 14, 2008, 05:18:53 PM
^ i know who i am... don't worry though... i stopped praying... i don't want to pray for ishiyoshi anymore...

i don't want yossui to end up happy... charmy stopped listening to my prayers... love sucks... i also don't want to pray for miki to get hurt... that would be unfair... ayaya and maki should have their heads between rubber and asphalt...

rika's always the one people blame... at least she's decisive about her relationship... not like some other person we know who's involved in their supposedly exclusive relationship (there are supposed to be just two people involved... i already mentioned rika... who's the other one?...)

*chill... come on, tru...* i just got home from the infamous coffeeshop of FYI fame, starbucks... i showed off ishiyoshi pics to my bandmates... they thought it was hot...

Yukari and kRisz need not worry, i'm quitting the prayer contest...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: kRisZ on June 15, 2008, 02:20:15 AM
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^ i know who i am... don't worry though... i stopped praying... i don't want to pray for ishiyoshi anymore...

:O you're kidding right.?.  :(


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Yukari and kRisz need not worry, i'm quitting the prayer contest...

pleaase no000  :cry: where's the spirit *tries to find tru's spirit*


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i don't want yossui to end up happy...

okay, I'm 50% with you on this one


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charmy stopped listening to my prayers...

ummm...


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i also don't want to pray for miki to get hurt...

she definitely deserves some tru love


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ayaya and maki should have their heads between rubber and asphalt...

very good one   :lol:


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(there are supposed to be just two people involved... i already mentioned rika... who's the other one?...)
Maki.?.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 15, 2008, 02:45:14 AM
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Maki.?.

no... and i quote:

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at least she's (Rika) decisive about her relationship... not like some other person we know who's involved in their supposedly exclusive relationship (there are supposed to be just two people involved... i already mentioned rika... who's the other one?...)

it's yossui...

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okay, I'm 50% with you on this one

i jumped into the sea head first...

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where's the spirit *tries to find tru's spirit*

it's in Runaway from the Past... running away from this past...

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she definitely deserves some tru love

i can do a better job than yossui... ask my rabu-rabu...

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you're kidding right.?.

no kidding... i lost two guitars already in my ritual sacrifices... ... Charmy-sama stopped listening to me... she said their wasn't enough IshiYoshi rabu-rabu in my most recent chapters... NOT MY FAULT!!! anyway... getting back on topic, i'm still waiting for updates where IshiYoshi will end... I believe still believe in the Ishi ... but not anymore in the Yoshi...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 15, 2008, 03:09:43 AM
If I have time later, I will finish the next chap and post it up *pray that I have time* Just FYI, I have already figured out an ending for FYI and my pick is it will shock most of the readers :twisted:...unless there is any major changes, I'll stick to that.. XD
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in denial mood  :roll:
Exactly^ XD
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My first choice was YoMaki, so that neither of the two will get Yossie  :P , and just to be different  :grin:   

But I clicked GoAya... I could sense Aya loves Maki more despite the efforts of Miki and despite Maki’s past behavior. Well she was threatened and no one who’s in the right mind would prefer to be in jail just to prove their love.
Hmmm....let's see about it... ;) :oops:
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And Yossie is confused, she’s saying she loves Rika but gets confused when Miki’s in the picture. I have two theories about this

(1) Yossie and Rika are together for ages... maybe she’s bored and is looking for something to rekindle a spark or something. And besides it’s healthy for a relationship to look for a fling.

(2) Yossie’s the only person in HP that Miki trusts in spite of the scheme, so maybe Yossie’s feeling guilty or something, maybe it’s not love at all or maybe it started with the guilt and evolved.
Both are possible and great theories :D Theorem B is more accurate :P
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i don't want yossui to end up happy... charmy stopped listening to my prayers... love sucks... i also don't want to pray for miki to get hurt... that would be unfair... ayaya and maki should have their heads between rubber and asphalt...
:roll: Don't be so depressed! Cheer up!  :)
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rika's always the one people blame... at least she's decisive about her relationship... not like some other person we know who's involved in their supposedly exclusive relationship (there are supposed to be just two people involved... i already mentioned rika... who's the other one?...)
I do agree with your point about Rika being more decisive about her relationship than, say, Yossi, Maki...I'll deal with Maki's relationship agenda later
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*chill... come on, tru...* i just got home from the infamous coffeeshop of FYI fame, starbucks... i showed off ishiyoshi pics to my bandmates... they thought it was hot...
Oh man, you sound sarcastic  :( Cheer up girl!! :)
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pleaase no000  :cry: where's the spirit *tries to find tru's spirit*
Yeah..where's the cheerful believer of ishiyoshi? :( :)
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she definitely deserves some tru love
:lol:
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very good one   :lol:
More of you want them to die together :lol:
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it's in Runaway from the Past... running away from this past...
No~~!!! :( Don't run away!! XD *Pull back pull back* If you are a GoAya believer back in Gomattou, I think you would have killed me..
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no kidding... i lost two guitars already in my ritual sacrifices... ... Charmy-sama stopped listening to me... she said their wasn't enough IshiYoshi rabu-rabu in my most recent chapters... NOT MY FAULT!!! anyway... getting back on topic, i'm still waiting for updates where IshiYoshi will end... I believe still believe in the Ishi ... but not anymore in the Yoshi...
Yeah..agree with Charmy on that :) I'll probably update at night at the quickest..time to study again ;) *throw in some charcoal to make sure that the flames don't die*
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: Yukari on June 15, 2008, 03:24:34 AM
^ i know who i am... don't worry though... i stopped praying... i don't want to pray for ishiyoshi anymore...

i don't want yossui to end up happy... charmy stopped listening to my prayers... love sucks... i also don't want to pray for miki to get hurt... that would be unfair... ayaya and maki should have their heads between rubber and asphalt...

rika's always the one people blame... at least she's decisive about her relationship... not like some other person we know who's involved in their supposedly exclusive relationship (there are supposed to be just two people involved... i already mentioned rika... who's the other one?...)

*chill... come on, tru...* i just got home from the infamous coffeeshop of FYI fame, starbucks... i showed off ishiyoshi pics to my bandmates... they thought it was hot...

Yukari and kRisz need not worry, i'm quitting the prayer contest...

cheer uuuuuuuuuup pleaaaaaaaaaase  :mon cry:

i would become depressed too...  :mon wind:

nonono we need energy!! like makoto lol :onioncheer: :cow:  :banana: :leek: i sing for you!!  :leek: "ai araba It's all right, taiyou wa subete omitooshi sa, kodawareba It's all right, mirai wa It's all right" HAPPY~~  :mon rockstar:

^^
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: kRisZ on June 15, 2008, 04:02:23 AM
Yukari sings for for and I will try to summon whoever to summon to give it back to you *starts the chant* ahmmm ahmmm ahmmm we call upon thee, give it back or else sharp knives will be coming your way ahmmm ahmmm ahmmm

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More of you want them to die together

 :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 15, 2008, 07:33:31 AM
I know you said you already pick the ending but I shall still justify my vote for the poll.
I vote for YoMiki (GAM #2 on the side as well)
Reasoning: Despite tru being blinded by her love for Rika :P, as much as Yossy doesn't deserve her, she doesn't deserve Yossy... Not being able to trust Yossy when she should have (before she was thinking of Miki), pushing her away and telling her that she likes Miki, coming up with stupid plans to hurt everyone just to get what she wants... selfish, evil, wrong! Plus, she really isn't very bright with her plans :lol:
Aya doesn't deserve Miki for obvious reasons... I'm not falling for the "she's innocent" thing... She nevr loved Miki as much as she loved Maki and she shouldn't have tried to drag it along like she did... Psychological, she suffered from 'Misattribution of emotions' so I guess I can't be too mad at her, but she should have realised earlier :(
Maki i s simply more suited to Aya then Miki coz Aya actually is in love with her :P
Yossy, she shouldn't have done what she did, that's a given, but Rika is certainly NOT innocent in her doing that... I wouldn't blame Rika, but she planted the seed in her gf's head and she is the Pimp, you can't do that and expect nothing to happen... I think Yossy actually did try to make Rika secure but just grew tired of it coz Rika wouldn't throw her a bone. I can relate to Rika coz in the past I have been similar to her with planting the seed and screwing everything up coz of it, so I DO feel sorry for her, but without trust, there is nothing and IshiYoshi were never on a good road and never will be again.
Miki: She is really the only one out of the 5 that I want happy :lol: Again, she shouldn't have kissed Yossy BUT honestly, can anyone blame her... She risked her life entirely for Aya and even if she wasn't going to get GAM in the end, she would have done the same... but Aya told her she loved her and on a 'give-and-take' level of a relationship, treated her like shit!!!
The biggest thing Miki did wrong was to believe Aya loved her and gave up everything for her... all she wanted was to be loved in return as much she loved... Poor Miki :cry:

In conclusion (my god this is a longer rant then I thought it would be :oops: ) Miki, more then anyone, deserves to be loved and treated right... She didn't try to kill someone (Maki), she didn't plan out nasty things just to hurt others and get what SHE wanted (Rika) and she didn't emotionally burn her lover's feelings (Aya & Yossy)... I think Miki and Yossy can learn to love each other and I think Miki would be the opposite to Rika in a relationship, which would be good for Yossy... Maki and Aya then should be together coz of their feelings for each other and well Rika, she deserves much more then Yossy can give her so I don't know what should happened to her :lol:

Plus, you know, YoMiki is hot :P

lalalalalalala...  :mon heh:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 15, 2008, 07:58:50 AM
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Miki would be the opposite to Rika in a relationship

Rika:
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Not being able to trust

really now...

miki made out with another girl after thinking maki was going to kiss aya... rika called yossui 7 times before concluding that yossui was with miki...

yeah... they really are opposites...

i am so excited for the YoMiki ending!!!

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if being yossui's girlfriend entails that much pain, i'll serve her to miki on a silver platter... i hope you enjoy your meal, miki...


make it good, tito... i'm really looking forward to all the 'love'...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 15, 2008, 09:09:17 AM
^ I shall admit, I'm as blinded by Miki as you are by Rika :P
But come on now, Rika wasn't trusting Yossy before all of it, hence her plans to keep Miki away which were backfiring... But I do like Rika here, so don't add me to your hit list :cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tito on June 15, 2008, 09:51:22 AM
I just went out and I'd been thinking about FYI all these while...I find the next chap and the next next one pretty hard to write so please be patient with me..(You should know what they will be about or at least who are involved, right? XD )well, at least I have managed to get a couple of supporters for each character and each pairing :wub:

@Yukari+KrisZ: You're nice people! Let me join in the dancing and singing..'Sou sa minasan It's All right Say' :D

@lollipopgirl: Haha, you brought in psychology in your analysis...shows that it is worthed your time learning that and writing those essays :lol: Wonder how long you took to write that..everything shows rational except the last 2 lines  :lol:

@tru_harmony: My gut feeling tells me you hate me more than any other people and more than anything.....Oh god, damn :( What I can say is the ending I have in mind is very different from whatever you are thinking of..I'm definitely in your hit list...lollipopgirl, accompany me  :cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 15, 2008, 10:34:00 AM
i have just replenished my Positive Charmy energies... so... yeah... i'm chilled now... i'm sorry if i was too intense in my previous comments... i really tend to do that... i'm working on it now (counseling j/k)... sorry to those who got a bit scared...

comments on comments on comments replies

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I shall admit, I'm as blinded by Miki as you are by Rika

... i lost my sight when the second guitar burned out of control... i can see again now by Charmy-sama's rabu-rabu mercy... but i still hate yossui...

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But come on now, Rika wasn't trusting Yossy before all of it, hence her plans to keep Miki away which were backfiring

i concede to that... i just don't like how all the blame's on rika all the time, everywhere... come on,it takes two to tango... early on in their relationship, they should've drawn the proper lines especially since yossui is so popular with girls... that's all... i don't hate miki (as much as some people probably hate rika...i seriously don't know who you people are...) ... i still hate yossui...

although she says she doesn't get Rika or she's a blur, you can read from her thoughts (as articulated by tito very well) that she does understand what's going on and why rika's all psycho... she knows... if she really did love rika in the way that she claimed to be... she would never let herself hurt rika...

of course, rika herself here doesn't love yossui as much as she claims either ... she doesn't trust yossui... she's just as close minded, just as blurry and just as in denial as yossui... but at least, she wanted to open an avenue... probably the most mature thing she wanted to do in this fic: talk...

that's what they're supposed to be doing... not making out... not having dinner... not just assuring each other with that "you're the only one i love" shit... not wearing matching skirts... not HHWWPSSPISM (Holding Hands While Walking Pa-Sway-Sway Pa In Slow Motion a.k.a. walking blissfully while holding hands)...

just talk about what what matters to each of them and evaluate if their relationship is really leading to that which makes them happy (in the way the Yukari DOESN'T say it) ... then only after that can they define what their relationship really is... their relationship isn't really that much of an outside entity... it's is a reflection and a part of who they are... it is also a WAY (yes just a way) for them to find their destiny (happiness aka who they really are)

but the pretext for YoMiki also might end up like this... they're just both on rebound... Miki just derived pleasure from knowing that she 'defeated' Aya and Yossui is... well... deriving pleasure from that really hot kiss...

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But I do like Rika here, so don't add me to your hit list

sorry if i hit you with my machine-gun comment there... no intentions to do that... really... i just hate yossui so much... i'm sorry if miki was also a casualty... i really was just aiming at yossui... the machine-gun kinda went out of control...

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My gut feeling tells me you hate me more than any other people and more than anything.....

... not really... i still love you, tito... ... even after everything you put rika through (j/k)... i actually like how much i hate yossui in this fic... kinda gives a foil to my dashing prince yossui in Runaway from the Past... just so people won't get diabetes from my ishiyoshi sugary sweetness... i can hate characters but never writers and readers...

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What I can say is the ending I have in mind is very different from whatever you are thinking of..

... it doesn't really matter who ends up with who... as long as rika is happy~ (in the way that Yukari DOESN'T say it)... and yossui... i don't know... if she is part of rika's happiness... i'm all for it... if not... can't do shit about it, ne~? if everybody ends up alone... ... at least that would give them space to re-think what human relationships are all about and what they really want from this life...

and besides... i'm greatly out numbered here... no point in waging a battle over people who can't love, right?...

i still love you all despite our conflicitng favorite pairings... 
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 15, 2008, 10:56:36 AM
^I really want Rika to be happy here and yes she deserves more then Yossy can/will ever give her.
Basically, you hate Yossy as I hate Aya for hurting your Rika and my Miki :P
We are really on the same wave length here, just different characters :lol:

And don't worry, the machine gun only just grazed my shoulder ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: kRisZ on June 15, 2008, 11:07:55 AM
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HHWWPSSPISM (Holding Hands While Walking Pa-Sway-Sway Pa In Slow Motion aka walking blissfully while holding hands)...

Filipinisms over the internet always make me  XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I 18 - Shattered Love (ISHI POV)
Post by: tru_harmony on June 15, 2008, 01:16:41 PM
^hey... that's culture, man...

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Basically, you hate Yossy as I hate Aya for hurting your Rika and my Miki
We are really on the same wave length here, just different characters

yeah yeah yeah...

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And don't worry, the machine gun only just grazed my shoulder

*gets bandages* really sorry, girl...

now, all i'm praying for is the next chapter... i hope it comes out soon...

 :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer:

... and happiness to everyone... ... ... except yossui... unless Charmy-sama's happiness depends on yossui's happiness...

:omamori:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tito on June 15, 2008, 03:47:35 PM
@lollipopgirl: Same degree of hatred? Are you sure? :lol:
@tru_harmony: Nice to see your spirit back again! :cow: :cow: Thanks for not hating me :) I have been working on the new chapter for about 2 hours already and here is it! :P Cast the red-hot FUJI-YOSHI-ISHI part aside for a while :lol: Enjoy!

F.Y.I

Chapter 19

REVERSE

December 24 (12.34pm)

It had been almost half an hour since Aya was gone chasing after Miki and Maki had already finished her cup of latte alone. Maki thought, “Perhaps Aya didn’t catch up with Miki or maybe they had a quarrel.” She shrugged her shoulders, stood up and began hunting for Aya which was similar to searching for a needle in a haystack in this gigantic international airport.

However, the search didn’t turn out as hard as she thought. After she had traveled some distance, she saw Aya plodding with tears in her eyes. Aya just looked as though her soul had been sucked out of her. It was not that hard to find a trudging Aya amidst the crowd as most of the people were rushing from place to place. In a city whereby time never seemed to be enough, no one could be bothered to slow down his or her footsteps to show concern to a crying stranger. That was the harsh reality.

There was nothing going through Aya’s mind right now except the images of the 2 girls kissing and groping in front of her. How much she wanted to step forward at that time and shout, “Good take!” It was obviously an act. Even though she knew that the 2 girls weren’t for real, it still pierced her heart whenever she thought about it. Miki was intentionally hurting her.   

As Maki ran up to Aya, she called out, “Aya!” Aya didn’t respond in any way even though she was within hearing range. Maki shook her head. Something bad must have happened. No, something worse than bad happened. Maki grabbed Aya’s right arm and asked softly, “Are you ok?” It was such a redundant question. Obviously she’s not.

Aya shook her head without making any eye contact with Maki. She didn’t feel like explaining anything to Maki right now. She wasn’t the right person to talk to and so what if she knew about it? The rivalry between Maki and Miki was so great that Maki might just do something dumb to worsen the situation.

After a period of silence, Maki reckoned that Aya would not say anything and Maki whispered, “It’s ok if you don’t tell me. I won’t force you to say.” She paused before adding, “Can you allow me to stay beside you?” She didn’t know what else to say at this moment. She had never seen Aya so fragile and lifeless before. Maybe it was because she was the one hurting her in the past but now, she hoped she would be the one healing her heart.

She remembered vaguely in the movies that she had acted in what the lead actor did when the lead actress was as lifeless as Aya. She made a short prayer wishing that it would turn just like in the movies before she approached Aya and hugged her gently. Aya didn’t resist. Maki could feel Aya trembling in her arms with tears running down her cheeks.

The kissing scene that Aya had witnessed just now replayed itself in her mind and those tears that she had been trying to hold back flowed down her cheeks. How much she wished that she hadn’t turned up in the airport today. How much she wished she didn’t flare up at Miki that day. How much she wished she had told Miki everything about the letters and phone calls back then. How much she wished she could go back to that night when Miki confessed to her.

They stayed in that position for what seemed to be an eternity before Aya murmured, “Miki kissed Yossie just now…” She could no longer stand the painful scene replaying itself in her mind and piercing her heart every single time it played. She felt that she needed to tell someone about it. Anyone.

Bewildered, Maki’s eyes widened. She knew she shouldn’t say anything insensitive at this point in time even though she felt like slapping Miki for hurting Aya right now. She inhaled deeply before she asked, “Just because she thought that we were in for a kiss?” She could feel Aya’s chin moving up and down on her left shoulder which meant that she nodded in agreement. “She hasn’t changed a bit. She’s still an over-possessive and rash girl.”

She could feel Aya’s chin moving right and left on her shoulder which meant that she shook her head. Aya spoke in a muffled voice, “Maki, you don’t understand. I deserve it. I deserve the pain that I’m suffering from now. It’s long overdue. I ought to suffer earlier. I have made her suffered for too long.”

“No one loves by hurting the other intentionally. This isn’t love at all,” Maki paused and commented as an afterthought, “Maybe you two shouldn’t even love each other in the first place.”

Aya’s chin on her shoulder moved right and left again but this time round, it was a much more vigorous movement and that meant she disagreed to a large extent. She spoke gently, “Maki, you don’t understand. I love Miki regardless of what she does. I love her. It’s just that sometimes I don’t know how to love her. I can’t match her intensity of love.”

Maki’s heart sank when she heard that. Never in her life had she heard Aya said she loved someone else other than her. Even though she thought that she would be fine hearing this, it was just so painful to hear that. She wondered to herself, “Maybe this is how Miki felt in the past when Aya told her that she loved me. I just want to tell her that I love her right now but I don’t want to risk losing her because of that. No wonder Miki hates me so much.”

After about half a minute of silence, Maki decided that they should end this topic because there was nothing she could say if Aya insisted strongly that she loved Miki. Maki asked, “Where do you want to go now?”

Again, Aya’s chin moved right and then left. “I don’t know…I don’t want to go anywhere now. It’s just so painful. I just want to go to a peaceful place right now and runaway from reality but there isn’t anywhere like that near here.”

“I’m staying at the airport hotel. Do you want to wash up or something? At least it won’t bring back any painful and bad memories there.”

After almost 20 seconds, Aya’s chin moved up and down on her shoulders and that meant that after some hesitation, she agreed.

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December 24 (1.02pm)

After they had reached Maki’s hotel room, Aya borrowed a set of clothes from Maki and went to take a shower. As the lukewarm water from the showerhead ran down her body, the tears, which had stopped on the way to the hotel, found their way to her eyes again. The harsh reality struck her yet again as she thought of how her life had changed in the past hour. She crouched and cried as hard as a human being possibly could.

After some time, she wondered, “If Miki knows about that I’m in Maki’s room now, it will definitely lead to more misunderstandings. But it shouldn’t even matter at all.” The images of the two girls kissing came to her mind again and more tears streamed down her cheeks. She shook her head. “No, that’s Miki. I’m Aya. If I use her ‘an eye for an eye’ approach, everything between us will soon be over. Not even friendship will be left.”

She turned off the tap and she quickly wore the G Emotion concert T-shirt and the track pants that Maki just lent to her. As she walked out of the bathroom, Maki quickly hung up her phone and dashed towards her. She asked in a concern voice, “Are you feeling better now?”

Aya nodded. She picked up her handbag on the dressing table and headed for the door. She knew she shouldn’t stay in here any longer as she learnt earlier that it was better to be safe than sorry. Miki might just pop up now at the door. Even though she was emotionally damaged by what had happened, she still remembered what her relationship with Maki was and she had no intentions of changing the status of their relationship in any way now.

Maki held her right hand and asked in a worried voice, “Are you going off? Where are you going? Do you need my company?”

Without exchanging any eye contact, Aya replied rather flatly, “I’m going…home. I’ll like to be alone. Thanks, Maki.”

What did I do that was wrong? I thought I was doing alright…Did she eavesdrop into my conversation with Rika over the phone? “Aya, what’s wrong?”

Aya stared relentlessly into Maki’s eyes for some time before she replied, “If you want the best for me, let go of my hand now.” Maki obediently let go of her hand. “Thank you,” Aya said sincerely before she turned the door knob and left the room.

The door slammed shut on her. Maki stood rooted to the ground as she was still wondering what she had done wrong. She consoled herself by thinking that Aya, like what she just said, needed some time on her own. She thought about what Aya had told her just now and an idea struck her. Maybe that would be what Aya needed most right now. Maybe that would be the best Christmas gift to Aya now.

After Aya left the room, she ran to the lift hoping that Maki would not be able to catch her if Maki was to do so. When she entered the almost packed lift, her heart sank as she realized she had nowhere to go to right now. She didn’t want to go to anywhere with crowds. Maybe home was the best choice.

One level below the level which Maki’s room was situated on, the lift stopped and 6 Japanese squeezed into the packed lift. She smiled weakly as she suddenly realized how similar her love story was to the Japanese culture of squeezing into packed places. Maybe it was time for her to do something un-Japanese.
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The last paragraph just popped up in my head a while ago...wonder what you think about it :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: kRisZ on June 15, 2008, 04:19:22 PM
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^hey... that's culture, man...

I know.., just can't help but feels   XD


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How much she wished she could go back to that night when Miki confessed to her.

ummm, why.?.  :?


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Maybe it was time for her to do something un-Japanese.

like what  :dunno:


I'm using my rabu-rabu's computer, I forgot to bring mine and she's like "discipline is fading, you're still that hooked"    :mon scratch:  damn  :D , but I've changed, not anymore surfing while at work  :mon sweat: I guess it's time to cut it even shorter  :mon yo:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 15, 2008, 04:25:19 PM
Nooooo no no no no :cry:
You gonna end with GAM all nice and cosy and back together aren't you? And you're gonna make me like Aya in the process :angry:
AYAYAYAYAYA, listen to Maki, you and Miki aren't right for each other... Yes you love her but the reason you don't know how to show it is that you only love her as a friend! Don't Maki to the list of girls your hurting, poor Gocchin :(

Yukari, come pray so more... We need more hope for YoMiki, its not looking good :wub:

(only two more pointless chapters before 22 :D :P j/k)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: Ai.love on June 15, 2008, 09:43:48 PM
I feel bad for all of them~ but ....... Aya you go and win back Miki!!!  :onioncheer: It's just a big misunderstanding between them  :err:

Rika it's all your fault  :scolding:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: Yukari on June 16, 2008, 12:30:38 AM
Nooooo no no no no :cry:
You gonna end with GAM all nice and cosy and back together aren't you? And you're gonna make me like Aya in the process :angry:
AYAYAYAYAYA, listen to Maki, you and Miki aren't right for each other... Yes you love her but the reason you don't know how to show it is that you only love her as a friend! Don't Maki to the list of girls your hurting, poor Gocchin :(

Yukari, come pray so more... We need more hope for YoMiki, its not looking good :wub:

(only two more pointless chapters before 22 :D :P j/k)

i pray with now!!!  :prayers: :mon prayer:

YOMIKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i don't want GAM  :mon whimper: aya just hurt Miki,  i don't want them together...

something unjapanese?? like what??  :mon huh:

well... i want GAM #2 too!!  :mon zoom:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 16, 2008, 02:13:35 AM
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“No one loves by hurting the other intentionally. This isn’t love at all,” Maki paused and commented as an afterthought, “Maybe you two shouldn’t even love each other in the first place.”

HEAR, HEAR!!!! so shouldn't Rika and Yossui...

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“Maki, you don’t understand. I love Miki regardless of what she does. I love her. It’s just that sometimes I don’t know how to love her. I can’t match her intensity of love.”

... hey... you watched her make out with someone else right in front of you, and you still love her?! that sounds like a pretty intense type of love to me... HOPE FOR GAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hearing voices in head that chants: IshiYoshi lives... IshiYoshi lives... Ishiyoshi lives...* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! :on_plug: :scared: :imdead: Charmy-sama, i said i won't pray for IshiYoshi anymore!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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just want to go to a peaceful place right now and runaway from reality but there isn’t anywhere like that near here.”

Runaway from the Past is a good place to runaway to... it's a thousand miles away from here...  :lol: :lol: :lol:

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“No, that’s Miki. I’m Aya. If I use her ‘an eye for an eye’ approach, everything between us will soon be over. Not even friendship will be left.”

... finally... someone actually starts thinking in here!!!

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Maybe it was time for her to do something un-Japanese.

speak in Filipino? ... ... ...  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: ... that's sooooooooo not it!!!

... is it just me or the machine-gun is calling me again? :on_plug: :banghead:  :banghead:  :banghead:

my Charmy-sama beckons me to keep the machine-gun... ... and get a grenade launcher instead... j/k  :lol:

... ... GAM people must hate Rika really bad :mon surr:...

for the transgressions and lapses in judgement made by my Charmy-sama, i apologize... :kneelbow: ... especially to the GAM people...

 :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :omamori:

still praying for happi~ness (in the way the Yukari DOESN'T say it)

and still waiting for the next chapters....
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tito on June 16, 2008, 02:38:23 AM
Reply to comments time! I woke up early today so that hopefully I'll have time to write the next chapter which is kinda hard to write...arghhh
:wahaha: It seems like no one got the un-Japanese part right! Or maybe the way I think is just weird :lol: No one commented on Maki's Christmas gift as well..... :P

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ummm, why.?.  :?
Just Aya's thoughts to reverse time and go back to the past

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I'm using my rabu-rabu's computer, I forgot to bring mine and she's like "discipline is fading, you're still that hooked"    :mon scratch:  damn  :D , but I've changed, not anymore surfing while at work  :mon sweat: I guess it's time to cut it even shorter  :mon yo:
  :rofl: you're doing fine :D Just don't say anything like what Miki/Rika/Aya said in FYI and everything will be ok :P
Nooooo no no no no :cry:
You gonna end with GAM all nice and cosy and back together aren't you? And you're gonna make me like Aya in the process :angry:
AYAYAYAYAYA, listen to Maki, you and Miki aren't right for each other... Yes you love her but the reason you don't know how to show it is that you only love her as a friend! Don't Maki to the list of girls your hurting, poor Gocchin :(
Will they? :P What will happen between GAM? XD (why am I asking? I should be the one with the answers.. :lol: )

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(only two more pointless chapters before 22 :D :P j/k)
:lol: You still remember..they appear quite frequently you know :D
I feel bad for all of them~
Yeah, that's the way..it's a sad tragic fic plotted and created by tito  :wahaha:
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but ....... Aya you go and win back Miki!!!  :onioncheer: It's just a big misunderstanding between them  :err:

Rika it's all your fault  :scolding:
Pray on Pray on! :D No wonder tru said GAM supporters hate Rika.. :lol:
i pray with now!!!  :prayers: :mon prayer:

YOMIKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i don't want GAM  :mon whimper: aya just hurt Miki,  i don't want them together...

something unjapanese?? like what??  :mon huh:

well... i want GAM #2 too!!  :mon zoom:
:wahaha: I wonder what you will feel about the next chapter :oops: :lol: You know who are involved in the next one..
Continue praying as always..You didn't end with your testament this time round :D
HEAR, HEAR!!!! so shouldn't Rika and Yossui...
What should they?....... I really don't get it.. XD
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... hey... you watched her make out with someone else right in front of you, and you still love her?! that sounds like a pretty intense type of love to me... HOPE FOR GAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hearing voices in head that chants: IshiYoshi lives... IshiYoshi lives... Ishiyoshi lives...* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! :on_plug: :scared: :imdead: Charmy-sama, i said i won't pray for IshiYoshi anymore!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's the way Aya loves (refer back to Gomattou :P) :lol: The spirit is back! :cow: tabun...
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Runaway from the Past is a good place to runaway to... it's a thousand miles away from here...  :lol: :lol: :lol:
:rofl: :rofl: This is so funny^! Maybe it is much better place than FYI
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speak in Filipino? ... ... ...  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: ... that's sooooooooo not it!!!
:rofl: :rofl: Now I'm 99.9% sure the old tru_harmony is back!
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.. is it just me or the machine-gun is calling me again? :on_plug: :banghead:  :banghead:  :banghead:

my Charmy-sama beckons me to keep the machine-gun... ... and get a grenade launcher instead... j/k  :lol:

... ... GAM people must hate Rika really bad :mon surr:...

for the transgressions and lapses in judgement made by my Charmy-sama, i apologize... :kneelbow: ... especially to the GAM people...

 :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :omamori:
Peace! Keep that violent object away from sight! :P Haha, GAM supporters, do you accept her apologies?
Pray on pray on! :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 16, 2008, 03:20:45 AM
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What should they?....... I really don't get it..

... i meant that i agree!!! ... and that Yossui and Rika shouldn... shouldn... *stuttering like aibon in ganko skit* shouldn't lo-lo-lo-lo-lo-love each other anymo-mo-mo-mo-mo-mo-more... (that was so hard to say that)...

... because like aya-miki, they just hurt each other...

*still voices in head(getting louder by the minute) ISHIYOSHI LIVES, ISHIYOSHI LIVES, ISHIYOSHI LIVES!!!!!!!!!!*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:fainted:

... i will not give in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

forgive me, Charmy-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! as much as i know you want you and yossui to end up together, i can't pray for that anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 16, 2008, 03:37:21 AM
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... hey... you watched her make out with someone else right in front of you, and you still love her?! that sounds like a pretty intense type of love to me... HOPE FOR GAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hearing voices in head that chants: IshiYoshi lives... IshiYoshi lives... Ishiyoshi lives...* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! :on_plug: :scared: :imdead: Charmy-sama, i said i won't pray for IshiYoshi anymore!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's the way Aya loves (refer back to Gomattou :P) :lol: The spirit is back! :cow: tabun...
Yep, she is stupid... Maki tried to kill her and she still fell in love with her saying "oohhhh it doesn't matter my dear, just never try to run me over and leave me there for dead again... if you don't do that then it must mean you love me too and we can live happily ever after , staring at ourselves in the mirror while talking about how awesome I am and how much better than everyone else I am... MY GOD I'm perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" :roll: :)

@tru: Have you ever thought that maybe those voices in your head aren't normal and you should see someone about it :P OR, maybe it's just a sign for you to write more IshiYoshi love really soon in your fic ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: Ai.love on June 16, 2008, 03:39:52 AM
... ... GAM people must hate Rika really bad :mon surr:...

for the transgressions and lapses in judgement made by my Charmy-sama, i apologize... :kneelbow: ... especially to the GAM people...

 :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :omamori:
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Peace! Keep that violent object away from sight! :P Haha, GAM supporters, do you accept her apologies?
Pray on pray on! :D

It's all good as long as it's GAM and IshiYoshi :mon prayer: I don't really understand Rika's way of thinking though.
How could testing GAM's love help herself and Yossie? :mon huh2: 
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 16, 2008, 03:55:52 AM
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I don't really understand Rika's way of thinking though.
How could testing GAM's love help herself and Yossie?

why haven't i asked that question before?!?!?!?!

... o-kay... Rika, how could you do this to me?

in the i-don't-want-ishiyoshi-anymore-in-this-fic side of my brain... i think the test is for... ... ... ... ... I DON'T KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!

GGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!

i shot at people for nothing!!!!!!

tito?! what is the meaning of this?!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tito on June 16, 2008, 03:57:45 AM
... i meant that i agree!!! ... and that Yossui and Rika shouldn... shouldn... *stuttering like aibon in ganko skit* shouldn't lo-lo-lo-lo-lo-love each other anymo-mo-mo-mo-mo-mo-more... (that was so hard to say that)...

... because like aya-miki, they just hurt each other...
This kinda reminded me of the last chapter of when love hurts and the author said something about sometimes love hurts but there's more to love than just pain and that's why we love :P Hmm..we will see about it :D

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*still voices in head(getting louder by the minute) ISHIYOSHI LIVES, ISHIYOSHI LIVES, ISHIYOSHI LIVES!!!!!!!!!!*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:fainted:

... i will not give in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

forgive me, Charmy-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! as much as i know you want you and yossui to end up together, i can't pray for that anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But if those voices are getting louder, maybe you should just believe :D  Ah, finally I get what's going in that ishiyoshi believer's head. :D
Yep, she is stupid... Maki tried to kill her and she still fell in love with her saying "oohhhh it doesn't matter my dear, just never try to run me over and leave me there for dead again... if you don't do that then it must mean you love me too and we can live happily ever after , staring at ourselves in the mirror while talking about how awesome I am and how much better than everyone else I am... MY GOD I'm perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" :roll: :)
Tell me my eyes aren't playing tricks on me..you added the last bit just a while ago, didn't you? TELL ME!! XD
That sounds so Ayaya-ish though I reckon Ayaya's supporters out that won't like the sound of that :P

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@tru: Have you ever thought that maybe those voices in your head aren't normal and you should see someone about it :P OR, maybe it's just a sign for you to write more IshiYoshi love really soon in your fic ;)
Yeah, tru, there is a professional right here :P
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I don't really understand Rika's way of thinking though.
How could testing GAM's love help herself and Yossie?

why haven't i asked that question before?!?!?!?!

... o-kay... Rika, how could you do this to me?

in the i-don't-want-ishiyoshi-anymore-in-this-fic side of my brain... i think the test is for... ... ... ... ... I DON'T KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!

GGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!

i shot at people for nothing!!!!!!

tito?! what is the meaning of this?!

Rika thought that Miki had ample time to spend with Yossi because there aren't any problems between Miki and Aya so she created the 1. letters +phonecalls and the 2. Airport incident so that Miki would have her own relationship problems and stop bothering Yossi. This, Rika thought, would cease the problems in ishiyoshi. Of course, she didn't know that Miki went to kiss and grope Yossi after that.
The testing love part was just some random crap that Rika told Maki so that Maki could help her with the plan..
Yup :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 16, 2008, 04:38:39 AM
This kinda reminded me of the last chapter of when love hurts and the author said something about sometimes love hurts but there's more to love than just pain and that's why we love :P Hmm..we will see about it :D
"I know the meaning of what people call great love. It’s not a fairy tail; it’s not about princes riding white horses or bewitched princesses waiting for a kiss to be free… Great love is that one that shakes your soul, the one that makes you smile even if you wanna cry, that changes the world around you…

That’s why, even if it hurts sometimes, I wanna love and be loved in return."

Ahhh, i love that line :wub: :heart:
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Tell me my eyes aren't playing tricks on me..you added the last bit just a while ago, didn't you? TELL ME!! XD
That sounds so Ayaya-ish though I reckon Ayaya's supporters out that won't like the sound of that :P
:lol: Yeah I did :oops: I saw how many typos there was in it, so when I went to fix them up I just couldn't help but to continue my insult of Aya :P

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Yeah, tru, there is a professional right here :P
long way to go till I actually am a professional but exactly, listen to me :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: Yukari on June 16, 2008, 04:43:04 AM
...

i want yomiki... *traumatized*

i... omg   :pleeease: now i feel depressed, so much GAM fans  :mon whimper:

but but... T_T i forget what i want to said  :mon fire: so... em... now i hate Aya (THIS Aya) she COULDN'T love that way, it isn't love at all... miki is a dork xD so impulsive, but what can we do, miki is miki. Yossy... mmm so pimp! she have to decide is she really loves Rika or not!! she is playing with Rika feelings, and it hurts her. Now... Maki, i just love her, but she is so... weird XD and Rika... like i had said to tito, i know people like... rika-kind... and i don't like that they can trust in their lovers.

... and i love 'When love hurts'... i just read it everytime i need yomiki... it's my fauvorite fanfic and the first that i read *memories*

it was another comment  :mon POd:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 16, 2008, 06:15:01 AM
@lollipopgirl: ... how much do you charge? I seriously need help... THE VOICES!!!!! ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI!!!!

NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CHARMY-SAMA, SAVE ME!!!!!

... anyway back to topic...

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Yossy... mmm so pimp! she have to decide is she really loves Rika or not!! she is playing with Rika feelings, and it hurts her.

well articulated, Yukari... you sure you still want miki with the jerk-we-know-by-the-name-Yossui?

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Rika... like i had said to tito, i know people like... rika-kind... and i don't like that they can trust in their lovers.

i know someone like that too... that person just happens to be my rabu-rabu ... .... WOAH!  :w00t:... ...  at least, now i know why i'm so addicted to this fic...

i hope to see an update soon... i don't know what i want anymore... i'm not even sure if i still don't want ishiyoshi together...  :cry: ... i'm so confused... HELP!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tito on June 16, 2008, 06:27:25 AM
Post-lunch comments :D
"I know the meaning of what people call great love. It’s not a fairy tail; it’s not about princes riding white horses or bewitched princesses waiting for a kiss to be free… Great love is that one that shakes your soul, the one that makes you smile even if you wanna cry, that changes the world around you…

That’s why, even if it hurts sometimes, I wanna love and be loved in return."

Ahhh, i love that line :wub: :heart:

That's why I have difficulties with the ending..I can never write something as lasting and memorable as that XD
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:lol: Yeah I did :oops: I saw how many typos there was in it, so when I went to fix them up I just couldn't help but to continue my insult of Aya :P
Spreading the hatred for Aya, huh? Aya fans, skip that comment! Don't read it! It's bad for your brain :lol:
...

i want yomiki... *traumatized*

i... omg   :pleeease: now i feel depressed, so much GAM fans  :mon whimper:
A lot? *tito counts*
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but but... T_T i forget what i want to said  :mon fire: so... em... now i hate Aya (THIS Aya) she COULDN'T love that way, it isn't love at all... miki is a dork xD so impulsive, but what can we do, miki is miki. Yossy... mmm so pimp! she have to decide is she really loves Rika or not!! she is playing with Rika feelings, and it hurts her. Now... Maki, i just love her, but she is so... weird XD and Rika... like i had said to tito, i know people like... rika-kind... and i don't like that they can trust in their lovers.
Nice analysis of the characters..no one knows how to love another properly in here. Will it change? XD yeah^ I remember that..oh well, sometimes when roles reverse, I think my behaviour then resembled that of Rika ;) *Flashback*

@lollipopgirl: ... how much do you charge? I seriously need help... THE VOICES!!!!! ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI!!!!

NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CHARMY-SAMA, SAVE ME!!!!!
Hey lollipopgirl, your first client. Do a good job :D

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i know someone like that too... that person just happens to be my rabu-rabu ... .... WOAH!  :w00t:... ...  at least, now i know why i'm so addicted to this fic...
Nice to see another person out there relating the fic to her life..I'm just glad that no one is in Maki's shoes..*look right and left* Please tell me there isn't anyone! XD :lol:

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i hope to see an update soon... i don't know what i want anymore... i'm not even sure if i still don't want ishiyoshi together...  :cry: ... i'm so confused... HELP!!!
Think I'll keep you in suspense for some time till I finish revising Bio for today  :angry:
Maybe you want whatever tito wants? XD *gives tru_harmony a chance to read my mind*
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: Yukari on June 16, 2008, 06:32:01 AM
@lollipopgirl: ... how much do you charge? I seriously need help... THE VOICES!!!!! ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI ISHIYOSHI!!!!

NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CHARMY-SAMA, SAVE ME!!!!!

woo i have the same voices... but they say me YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKI

i can read ishiyoshi and yomaki etc etc, commenting and feeling what the characters feels  :luvluv1:, untill... miki appears, if Miki appears... the voices too... i almost die when you put miki in RFP  :stoned:, but then i throw the voices away... uf it was close  :sweat:

well articulated, Yukari... you sure you still want miki with the jerk-we-know-by-the-name-Yossui?

mmm yes, i want them together, 'cause i love yossy anyway and i understand her... *memories*  :mon wind:

i know someone like that too... that person just happens to be my rabu-rabu ... .... WOAH!  :w00t:... ...  at least, now i know why i'm so addicted to this fic...

wojoo my ex lovers were like that too... so it was like ishiyoshi, and it's the reason why i understand Yossy in the fanfic  :mon sweat:

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Nice to see another person out there relating the fic to her life..I'm just glad that no one is in Maki's shoes..*look right and left* Please tell me there isn't anyone!   XD :lol:

maybe...  :shifty: oh i have to go and get my car... i have work to do with it  :shifty:

TITO WE WANT UPDATE!!!!!!! but you have to study u.u

wujuju it will be yomiki right??  :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 16, 2008, 06:49:05 AM
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That's why I have difficulties with the ending..I can never write something as lasting and memorable as that

that's why i don't want to end Runaway from the Past... ever!!! ... it will just go on and on and on and on and on... :lol:

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A lot? *tito counts*

why hurt the inumerable GAM fans with a YoMiki ending when you can make them (GAM people) with a GAM ending? ... and if GAM lives...  :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: ... *demonic possesion* IshiYoshi will live  :twisted:  :twisted: :twisted: *demonic possession over* ... wait a minute... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lollipopgirl, i need your help!!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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no one knows how to love another properly in here

you just hit the nail on the head...

... that goes out to you too, Rika... you don't know how to love yossui properly... now, please stop sending these demons and these voices... i get it but i still refuse...

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Hey lollipopgirl, your first client. Do a good job

yeah...

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Nice to see another person out there relating the fic to her life..

these relationship thingie problem isn't that rare, you know... that's why i love FYI... it can really happen...

i just hope it doesn't...

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Think I'll keep you in suspense for some time till I finish revising Bio for today

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! suspense kills...

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Maybe you want whatever tito wants?

if you want rika to get hurt... no way... but whatever ending as long as rika is happy~ (the way that Yukari DOESN'T say it) ... i'm cool...

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*gives tru_harmony a chance to read my mind*

damn, i think your mind is written in japanese or something... i can't understand a thing!!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

*running away from suspense who is currently holding an ax and randomly hacking people to pieces* RUNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! STILL WAITING FOR UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

whoops somebody posted while i was typing...

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woo i have the same voices... but they say me YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKI

do the voices sound like charmy's frantic speaking verse in shabondama?

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i can read ishiyoshi and yomaki etc etc, commenting and feeling what the characters feels  , untill... miki appears, if Miki appears... the voices too... i almost die when you put miki in RFP  , but then i throw the voices away... uf it was close 

why can't i throw the voices off?! AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! ISHIYOSHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII~

eh? ... ... they stopped! ... but that means i have to pray for an ishiyoshi ending... damn... ... ... no, Charmy-sama... i will not give in!!! i'm stronger now!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: Yukari on June 16, 2008, 07:38:34 AM
do the voices sound like charmy's frantic speaking verse in shabondama?

mmm no, they sound like Miki and Yossy in egao yes nude  :mon mischief: ooooh i'll call the voices  :mon mischief:

nonono i can't!! it's not sane!!  :mon surr:

titooo we need a updateee, now we're insanes!!  :mon ghost:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tru_harmony on June 16, 2008, 08:43:33 AM
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mmm no, they sound like Miki and Yossy in egao yes nude

... we're not hearing the same voices...

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titooo we need a updateee, now we're insanes!!

*still running away from suspense who is now carrying a chainsaw but still hacking people to pieces* I DON'T WANT TO DIE YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: sweeety on June 16, 2008, 09:04:36 AM
why aren't  you posting lazy butt?

 maybe it IS time for her to do something unJapanese.

 That's right Aya, go get your woman!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: tito on June 16, 2008, 11:45:39 AM
woo i have the same voices... but they say me YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKI YOMIKI
You two are so funny! :P Why those voices never appear in my mind?  XD
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wojoo my ex lovers were like that too... so it was like ishiyoshi, and it's the reason why i understand Yossy in the fanfic  :mon sweat:
My fic is bringing back bad memories, I guess XD Apologies for pain caused..
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maybe...  :shifty: oh i have to go and get my car... i have work to do with it  :shifty:
Don't you try. I'll have 1 less reader XD
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wujuju it will be yomiki right??  :mon evillaff:
What do you think? :wub:
that's why i don't want to end Runaway from the Past... ever!!! ... it will just go on and on and on and on and on... :lol:
Is that the real reason? *Looks straight at tru* Be frank........ :lol:
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why hurt the inumerable GAM fans with a YoMiki ending when you can make them (GAM people) with a GAM ending? ... and if GAM lives...  :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: ... *demonic possesion* IshiYoshi will live  :twisted:  :twisted: :twisted: *demonic possession over* ... wait a minute... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lollipopgirl, i need your help!!!!!
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

*running away from suspense who is currently holding an ax and randomly hacking people to pieces* RUNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! STILL WAITING FOR UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mmm no, they sound like Miki and Yossy in egao yes nude  :mon mischief: ooooh i'll call the voices  :mon mischief:

nonono i can't!! it's not sane!!  :mon surr:

titooo we need a updateee, now we're insanes!!  :mon ghost:
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*still running away from suspense who is now carrying a chainsaw but still hacking people to pieces* I DON'T WANT TO DIE YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lollipopgirl, do your job! Try saving them, professional :P
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these relationship thingie problem isn't that rare, you know... that's why i love FYI... it can really happen...

i just hope it doesn't..
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*Pray for everyone as well* Well, though, I guess, at least once in everyone's life, we will be in the shoes of one of the characters be it insecure (rika), confused (yossi), over-possessive (miki), blind lover (aya) or just simply not in the correct shoes to love the other (maki) :D
why aren't  you posting lazy butt?
because I got to remember all those words without vowels in that green biology textbook/ black and white bio notes.  :(
The fastest I can finish is tonight or maybe tomorrow morning. Suspense.........
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maybe it IS time for her to do something unJapanese.

 That's right Aya, go get your woman!
Hmmm...not quite the meaning of unJapanese ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 19 - REVERSE
Post by: sweeety on June 16, 2008, 01:12:51 PM
hmmm..... then stupid/risky? help me out here! btw u know I didn't mean that! Study your little petite ass off! And then write. Write to get a new ass!
 I just hope Aya goes up to Miki, apologises, cries, and then she forgives her, they go home and make sweet rabu! or rabbu rabu! Double the rabu! Boo yah~! Pikapika boo? Boo sha!~
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: tito on June 16, 2008, 03:02:29 PM
This chapter took me almost twice the amount of time than the previous one.The convo was kinda hard to write.. XD Enjoy!
WARNING: To everyone just to play safe, please put away your knives especially....ok, I shan't name but please put those dangerous objects away :lol:

F.Y.I

Chapter 20

Puppet

December 24 (1.01pm)

After Miki stopped crying, Yossie led Miki in silence to the taxi stand as Yossie believed that they needed to leave this place and they hopped into a cab. When they were in the taxi, Yossie asked softly, “Where do you want to go?” Miki shook her head absently with tears running down her cheeks again. Yossie knew that Miki wanted to be away from the crowd now but she couldn’t figure out where exactly to bring her to. It must be somewhere that Miki felt comfortable in.

“Excuse me, where do you want to go?” the taxi driver asked impatiently. Yossie told the driver her address and she was not surprised that Miki didn’t comment on what she just said.

Almost immediately after the driver stepped on the accelerator, Miki began to cry hard hoping that the engine noise could cover her sobs. She placed her hands over her eyes to cover her tears. Whenever the taxi stopped at a traffic junction, she would hold back her tears hoping that the driver wouldn’t notice that she was crying that badly.

It was just so typical of Miki to do so. Even when she was depressed, somehow her mind would subconsciously function in such a way that she still made sure that her image and ego were still intact. How much Miki wished at this moment that this subconscious function of her mind which she was always proud of never existed.

What had happened over the past hour replayed in her mind like a broken record and the more she thought about it, the more she was convinced that she shouldn’t have done that. She thought, “Maybe Aya wanted to tell me about this lunch appointment with that bitch yesterday. But I flared up at her and she didn’t have a proper opportunity to tell me. Maybe Aya was smiling for the sake of smiling just now. Maybe Aya wasn’t in for a kiss with Maki just now. Why did my mind work so fast and rush into a conclusion just now? If only I didn’t think about it, maybe it will be fine. If only I didn’t come to the airport to play safe, maybe it will be fine…”

Yossie remained silent throughout the whole journey. She didn’t know what to say to Miki. In fact, she didn’t quite know what was going on. Was that act just part of Miki’s game? What triggered her to do so? But why would Miki do so? She loved Aya. She felt an intense urge in her to ask Miki what had happened earlier but it seemed way too insensitive to ask now.

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December 24 (2.34pm)

After around an hour and a half ride, they arrived at Yossie’s apartment.  Miki wiped the tears off her own face and asked flatly, “Where are we?”

Yossie was quite taken aback by Miki’s question. Damn, maybe she doesn’t want to come to my place now after whatever that had just happened. Or maybe she just was lost in her thoughts just now and didn’t pay attention to what I said. Or maybe she hasn’t been coming up to my place and has forgotten where my place is and how it looks like. “My apartment. Is that fine with you?” Miki frowned and after a while, she nodded reluctantly.

When Miki entered the apartment, she sat on the couch and closed her eyes in an attempt to indulge herself in those blissful memories. Her eyes hurt when she closed it because she had been crying too hard for the past hour. She shook her head conceding defeat. A simple action of shutting her eyes brought pain to her eyes; a simple thought about the future brought pain to her heart. All she had left was an even harsher reality without the very one whom she loved with all her heart.

She took out her handphone from her bag and stared at it. There was no new message as expected. What would Aya say to a girl who had shattered her heart with her own hands? She clicked ‘inbox’ and reread the messages Aya had sent her days ago.

The last one was dated December 23 4.03pm and the message was: “Miki-tan, I’ll be home very soon. Don’t miss me too much. Take a nap. Or have a kit-kat. ^^”

It sounded so innocent like always and she wondered whether she would receive a similar message dated somewhere after December 23. She had spoiled their relationship with her own rashness, jealousy and competitiveness.

For almost 7 years, she had worked hard on this relationship and eventually it evolved from friendship to love. She treasured every single smile and every single tear between them. She had long forgotten how life was without Aya and it seemed impossible to live on without Aya. How much she wished that this was a nightmare and Aya would be right beside her when she woke up.

Just as she was beginning to cry again, Yossie offered her a glass of orange juice. Miki took a sip of the juice before she placed it on the coffee table and continued crying. The sourness that she had just tasted just confirmed that this wasn’t a nightmare. It was reality.

Yossie sat beside Miki and waited for an opportunity to ask Miki what had happened. This was the worst feeling ever – wanting to console someone you care for but not being about to do so because you don’t know what have happened.

After about 10 minutes, Miki stopped crying and Yossie decided that it was time to ask. She wanted to console Miki in the best way ever apart from been there for her. Yossie held her hand and whispered, “What happened?”

Miki stared blankly at the fruit juice for some time as she debated over whether she should tell Yossie or not. It was just too painful to say it out but it would be unfair to Yossie if she didn’t tell her. After all, she made use of her.

Miki rushed through her words, “Aya went to see Maki behind my back and Maki almost kissed her. I got pissed off so I…” Miki’s voice trailed off as she started crying again. Those scenes and emotions hurt her so badly whenever she thought about it. She wondered just how much she had hurt Aya. It must be at least 100 times greater than what she was experiencing right now.

Yossie thought for a while before she spoke softly, “So you kissed me to take revenge on them. Or, to be more precise, you wanted to take revenge on Aya.” Miki didn’t respond which meant that her hypothesis was correct.

Silence fell between them for almost 5 minutes before Miki whispered in a sincere voice, “I love Aya. I really do.”

“But if you do love her, why did you do that to hurt her?” Oops, those words just came out a little too quick. Yossie prayed that she hadn’t hurt Miki with that.

Miki shook her head. Tears ran down her cheeks as she spoke, “I don’t know, bad, horrible and crazy thoughts ran through my mind and it culminated into revenge…I didn’t mean to hurt her. I love her…”

“This isn’t love at all,” Yossie murmured more to herself than to Miki.

Miki, with her ever sharp ears, heard that comment and questioned with her typical sharpness, “What do you know about love, big flirt?”

“At least I won’t hurt her intentionally,” Yossie said defensively.

Miki felt as though Yossie was taunting her with that statement. She was frustrated with herself inside and the last thing she needed now was for someone to taunt her like that. She looked at Yossie right in her eyes and said flatly, “Oh yeah? Even a horrible person like me knows that love doesn’t come from the mouth; love comes from the heart.”

 “At least I won’t take on the ‘an eye for an eye’ approach and kiss a hot chick so as to deliberately hurt my lover and screw up my love relationship.” She knew she was going overboard but she didn’t like the fact that Miki had hit the nail on its head a moment ago with what she said. Oh well, she was just applying the Fujimoto Miki’s ‘an eye for an eye’ approach. 
 
Miki frowned and she said without exchanging any eye contact with Yossie, “I didn’t choose you. You just happened to be there. I wanted to choose Ai actually but I didn’t have the heart to spoil her little romance with Risa!””

Yossie stood up and raised her voice, “What do you mean by that? So you think that it’s ok to spoil my romance with Rika by doing that?”

“That didn’t cross my mind…”

“So you just treated me like a puppet? Or to be more exact, the replacement puppet for Ai?”

“So what if I did? I already apologized!” What’s your freaking problem, Yoshizawa Hitomi?

Yossie rolled her eyes. “You mean that silly ‘I’m sorry’ after you kissed me just now? Did you even think about how I feel?”

Miki lowered her voice, “Sorry.”

Yossie held her shoulders and shouted with tears welled up in her eyes, “Did you think about how I feel at all? Did it even cross the great Fujimoto Miki’s mind? Tell me!” You’re such a selfish moron, Fujimoto Miki!

Miki closed her eyes which were still hurting as much as before. This would go down as the worst day in her life. It started with losing her lover because of her actions and now, she was on the verge of losing her friend because of her words. She said firmly, “I’m sorry, I didn’t.”

Yossie nodded. With every single word that Miki spoke, her heart ached. She was just treated like a puppet despite her efforts to revive their friendship by trusting her and caring for her. She felt stupid thinking that they might be lovers. She wasn’t even treated like a friend. “Did you even feel anything when we kissed?” she asked softly. She dreaded the answer but she needed to know.

Miki shook her head. “I’m sorry if you did feel something. But why would you? There-”

Yossie stared blankly at the glass of orange juice that Miki had just drunk and interrupted in a soft voice, “What if I like you?”

Miki laughed. “Don’t joke about this Yossie. You like Rika,” she paused before adding as an afterthought, “Our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love. Not even with the kiss.”

Yossie smiled in an attempt to mask the pain she was feeling inside. Was that how one felt after a rejection? Or was that how one felt in an unrequited love? Maybe she just had been thinking too much. “You’re right about it,” Yossie said as firmly as she could. What was she right about? The fact that I like Rika? Or the fact that our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love? Yossie spoke as happily as she could, “Fujimoto, I just remember that I left something behind in the studio yesterday. I got to go. Hope you are feeling better! Bye!”

She ran out of her own apartment and slammed the door shut behind her. It was such a dumb excuse. It was even dumber for her to leave her own apartment like that. But she didn’t want to be with Miki right now as she feared that Miki would be able to tell that what she said earlier wasn’t entirely a joke.

Miki took another sip of the orange juice and she smiled to herself. She thought, “At least I didn’t screw up our friendship, Yossie.” After that thought had flown out of her mind, she stared blankly at her phone again, waiting for that miracle to happen. She felt that if the phone was to vibrate at this very second, her heart would stop beating. Thankfully or unthankfully, her phone didn’t vibrate and her heart beat on and she lived on in this nightmare that she created with her own hands. 

*Play Love and peace hero ga yattekita*
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 16, 2008, 03:22:09 PM
:angry: :mad: :angry: If this keeps going at this rate, I shall stop reading after 22 :P
You'll break my heart :cry:

Miki and Ai :wub: I am sure Risa would have understood  :-\ 8)

"Even a horrible person like me knows that love doesn’t come from the mouth; love comes from the heart.”
There you go, you wrote a really awesome line that shall stay with me :D

Sorry about the short comment this time stupid studiness :(

EDIT:-
Forgot to mention, I can't help tru and Yukari, they are beyond help ;)
I shall, however, diagnose them with being too addicted to F.Y.I, its a new type of drug that rips your heart to shreds, then puts it all back together, only to rip it apart once more, continuing this process till its creator is pleased with herself... Those poor addicts :(

EDIT #2:-
The song 'Suppin to Namida' is stuck in my head right not and all I can think of is that it must be how Maki in this fic is feeling (or was till Miki kissed Aya), makes me love her all over again my poor little darling... Gocchin  :mon cry: :mon waterworks:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: kRisZ on June 16, 2008, 03:49:54 PM
so YoMiki is not one of the possible pairings at the end  :mon determined:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: tru_harmony on June 16, 2008, 04:08:45 PM
WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yossui should be bleeding to death now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

if that is so, revenge is soooooooooooooooooo sweet... sweeter than RFP...

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Yossie nodded. With every single word that Miki spoke, her heart ached. She was just treated like a puppet despite her efforts to revive their friendship by trusting her and caring for her. She felt stupid thinking that they might be lovers. She wasn’t even treated like a friend. “Did you even feel anything when we kissed?” she asked softly. She dreaded the answer but she needed to know.

serves you right, jerk

... this is exactly the reason why my RFP rika is so "wimpy" ... she ain't like some people we know... *trying very hard to keep the machine gun and grenade launcher in the gun safe*

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“This isn’t love at all,” Yossie murmured more to herself than to Miki.

Miki, with her ever sharp ears, heard that comment and questioned with her typical sharpness, “What do you know about love, big flirt?”

you said it miki!!!! kick that jerk's ass...

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“Oh yeah? Even a horrible person like me knows that love doesn’t come from the mouth; love comes from the heart.”

for saying that, you are no longer in my horrible people list...

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“Don’t joke about this Yossie. You like Rika,” she paused before adding as an afterthought, “Our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love. Not even with the kiss.”

miki is really, in her own misguided way, the most mature person in this fic...

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Yossie smiled in an attempt to mask the pain she was feeling inside. Was that how one felt after a rejection? Or was that how one felt in an unrequited love? Maybe she just had been thinking too much. “You’re right about it,” Yossie said as firmly as she could. What was she right about? The fact that I like Rika? Or the fact that our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love? Yossie spoke as happily as she could, “Fujimoto, I just remember that I left something behind in the studio yesterday. I got to go. Hope you are feeling better! Bye!”

feel the pain of insecurity you hubris-driven creature!!! THAT'S CALLED KARMA-- IN YOUR FACE!!!!

puppets are everywhere...


Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: cierl03 on June 16, 2008, 04:26:32 PM
stupid idiot miki!!! oh well... i really dun hv any idea where this fic is heading  XD it's so fun!!
let's see.... I dun want Aya to end up with Maki, but not with Miki at this stage.... so she will be alone...  :cry: :cry:
noo.....well... not with yossie obviously...but ah, i dun care  :lol: i'm confused....
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: tito on June 17, 2008, 01:54:08 AM
:angry: :mad: :angry: If this keeps going at this rate, I shall stop reading after 22 :P
You'll break my heart :cry:
Don't you dare :P :lol: Your heart has already been broken!  XD

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Miki and Ai :wub: I am sure Risa would have understood  :-\ 8)
I think Risa won't..;)
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"Even a horrible person like me knows that love doesn’t come from the mouth; love comes from the heart.”
There you go, you wrote a really awesome line that shall stay with me :D
Yeah! I'm so happy :D Happy morning!
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Forgot to mention, I can't help tru and Yukari, they are beyond help ;)
I shall, however, diagnose them with being too addicted to F.Y.I, its a new type of drug that rips your heart to shreds, then puts it all back together, only to rip it apart once more, continuing this process till its creator is pleased with herself... Those poor addicts :(
:wahaha: The creator is not yet satisfied..not yet! Is the professional addicted too? :P
@Addicts: You've to suffer about 3-4 days at least without an update because my exams are next week!!!!
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The song 'Suppin to Namida' is stuck in my head right not and all I can think of is that it must be how Maki in this fic is feeling (or was till Miki kissed Aya), makes me love her all over again my poor little darling... Gocchin  :mon cry: :mon waterworks:
When did Miki kiss Aya? 3rd last chap of Gomattou? :? *listen to suppin to namida while checking projecthello for translation* Ahh~ :cry:
so YoMiki is not one of the possible pairings at the end  :mon determined:
Hmm...maybe :D How is that monkey feeling about this^?
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serves you right, jerk

... this is exactly the reason why my RFP rika is so "wimpy" ... she ain't like some people we know... *trying very hard to keep the machine gun and grenade launcher in the gun safe*
Yossie^? Just keep those things! :lol:
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miki is really, in her own misguided way, the most mature person in this fic...
Quite true....wait till you see the next chap or the next next one or the next next next one :P
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feel the pain of insecurity you hubris-driven creature!!! THAT'S CALLED KARMA-- IN YOUR FACE!!!!
Oh man, you really hate Yossi...I don't know why but when I read it, I feel like laughing :rofl:
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puppets are everywhere...
Agree...sad reality though ;)
stupid idiot miki!!! oh well... i really dun hv any idea where this fic is heading  XD it's so fun!!
let's see.... I dun want Aya to end up with Maki, but not with Miki at this stage.... so she will be alone...  :cry: :cry:
noo.....well... not with yossie obviously...but ah, i dun care  :lol: i'm confused....
  :wahaha: No one can read my mind! *gives ciel03 a chance to read tito's mind* What about with Rika? :P

Okay I'm going out so probably no updates for today:) Take care of yourselves addicts! :P In the meanwhile, you can imagine what is going to happen on Christmas Day and who the Santa Claus will be (if there is even one) :wahaha:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: zay05ohayou on June 17, 2008, 02:03:42 AM
heeeeee~ Miki was so blunt to Yossie. I feel as though Yossie deserved it though, if she felt something towards Miki, she should've ended up her relationship with Rika seriously, now she hurt hers and Rika's feelings..  :doh: and Miki was so dense about Yossie feeling anything for her so that's double ouch for the 'big flirt'. Hmm.. Miki is very irrational in this fic.. I wonder if she's waiting for Aya to call her..
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She thought, “At least I didn’t screw up our friendship, Yossie.”
pssh.. yea right..  :sweatdrop:
lol i'm still cheering for the possible Charmikitty pairing or IshiGoma!!  :grin:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 17, 2008, 03:06:23 AM
Don't you dare :P :lol: Your heart has already been broken!  XD
That's true :cry:

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:wahaha: The creator is not yet satisfied..not yet! Is the professional addicted too? :P
Maaaaaaaaaybe :P
But I'm going for a week long rehab stay from next Tuesday anyway... Really hoping i get 22 before then but study comes first (I wish I felt that way for me :lol: )

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When did Miki kiss Aya? 3rd last chap of Gomattou? :? *listen to suppin to namida while checking projecthello for translation* Ahh~ :cry:
Oops I meant when Miki kissed Yossy.. silly me :oops:
*pictures Maki looking at herself in the mirror while singing Suppin to Namida and then breaking down into a crying mess on the floor*  :O :( :cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: Yukari on June 17, 2008, 03:46:53 AM
"anata ga suki, mune ga itai, kowai keredo, uchiaketa no, tomodachi ni wa, modorenai wa ,Unazuite yo~~" f---- berryz song

now i'm hurt, it's just that i involve so much when i read, it's the only way someone can makes me cry... and the songs makes me cry too... badly

no monkeys today, i'm depressed...

anyway, i'm waiting next chapter... i want to read something untill the end...

PS: poor yossy... it's so similar that the situation touched me so much
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: tito on June 17, 2008, 02:36:04 PM
heeeeee~ Miki was so blunt to Yossie. I feel as though Yossie deserved it though, if she felt something towards Miki, she should've ended up her relationship with Rika seriously, now she hurt hers and Rika's feelings..  :doh: and Miki was so dense about Yossie feeling anything for her so that's double ouch for the 'big flirt'. Hmm.. Miki is very irrational in this fic.. I wonder if she's waiting for Aya to call her..
Miki regretted it definitely and yes, she's waiting for Aya :( She's just rash as always ;)
But I'm going for a week long rehab stay from next Tuesday anyway... Really hoping i get 22 before then but study comes first (I wish I felt that way for me :lol: )
haha, I'll like to put it up before my exams come you know but before that, I must sort of make sure that those depressed people out there are feeling better, professional ;) I don't want to inflict more pain on you people..give you some time to recover ;)
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Oops I meant when Miki kissed Yossy.. silly me :oops:
*pictures Maki looking at herself in the mirror while singing Suppin to Namida and then breaking down into a crying mess on the floor*  :O :( :cry:
SUPPIN dakara  naite ii desho motto  "suki" to ieba yokatta namida fuitara omoidetachi to "BAIBAI" shite kaeru ne Damn, you got the song stuck in my head! Now I start to imagine that image as well :cry:
"anata ga suki, mune ga itai, kowai keredo, uchiaketa no, tomodachi ni wa, modorenai wa ,Unazuite yo~~" f---- berryz song

now i'm hurt, it's just that i involve so much when i read, it's the only way someone can makes me cry... and the songs makes me cry too... badly

no monkeys today, i'm depressed...

anyway, i'm waiting next chapter... i want to read something untill the end...

PS: poor yossy... it's so similar that the situation touched me so much
*read translation for song* Dearie, I'm so sorry to have hurt you and make you cry..Can you please forgive me? I'll give you time to recover from the pain for a while..tito isn't a person who uses humour in fic very well ;) I'm one who prizes sorrow and angst..Sorry once again to everyone :( Please accept my apologies or else I'll feel bad :(
the end? what do you mean? :?
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: Ai.love on June 18, 2008, 04:15:49 AM
I would've liked to have read Miki and Ai~ XD

GAM~ :mon lovelaff:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 20 - Puppet
Post by: JFC on June 19, 2008, 12:39:55 AM
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What if we want to see both endings?  You could just choose one to be your "primary" ending and then post the other one as an "alternate" ending the next day.
:yep: :D :rockon:
^Good suggestion..I'll think about it but that's provided that no one kills me for ending 1 :P
Well, if anyone wants to kill you for ending 1, you can use ending 2 to try and save yourself. :D


Chapter 19

REVERSE
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Even though she knew that the 2 girls weren’t for real, it still pierced her heart whenever she thought about it. Miki was intentionally hurting her.
The nxt question is though, what, if anything, will Aya do because of what she saw?  Furthermore, what will Maki do when she finds out what Aya saw?



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Aya murmured, “Miki kissed Yossie just now…”

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Bewildered, Maki’s eyes widened. She knew she shouldn’t say anything insensitive at this point in time even though she felt like slapping Miki for hurting Aya right now. She inhaled deeply before she asked, “Just because she thought that we were in for a kiss?” She could feel Aya’s chin moving up and down on her left shoulder which meant that she nodded in agreement. “She hasn’t changed a bit. She’s still an over-possessive and rash girl.”
A bit cold, but Maki is right when she says that Miki prone to acting rashly.



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Aya spoke in a muffled voice, “Maki, you don’t understand. I deserve it. I deserve the pain that I’m suffering from now. It’s long overdue. I ought to suffer earlier. I have made her suffered for too long.”
Sure Miki obviously found it hard to deal with Aya dating Maki before, but it's not like she really made it obvious for Aya to see how she felt about her.  She really shouldn't be blaming herself for not realizing how Miki felt about her sooner.  Take a look at how good things turned out when Aya did find out. If Miki had been willing to take that step sooner and tell her, then she (Miki) wouldn't have been in as much angst over it for so long.



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Maki’s heart sank when she heard that. Never in her life had she heard Aya said she loved someone else other than her. Even though she thought that she would be fine hearing this, it was just so painful to hear that. She wondered to herself, “Maybe this is how Miki felt in the past when Aya told her that she loved me. I just want to tell her that I love her right now but I don’t want to risk losing her because of that. No wonder Miki hates me so much.”
Things change when you understand how the other side feels/is going through. :yep:



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“If Miki knows about that I’m in Maki’s room now, it will definitely lead to more misunderstandings. But it shouldn’t even matter at all.” The images of the two girls kissing came to her mind again and more tears streamed down her cheeks. She shook her head. “No, that’s Miki. I’m Aya. If I use her ‘an eye for an eye’ approach, everything between us will soon be over. Not even friendship will be left.”
Indeed. Aya needs to be the level-headed one, otherwise things will just get worse.

...

Doesn't mean that Maki's involvement will make things any easier (intentionally or unintentionally).



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She turned off the tap and she quickly wore the G Emotion concert T-shirt and the track pants that Maki just lent to her. As she walked out of the bathroom, Maki quickly hung up her phone and dashed towards her. She asked in a concern voice, “Are you feeling better now?”
The strange thing is...Aya's clothes should be perfectly fine for her to wear. It's not like they're all covered in dirt or anything. Considering how sensitive (and observant) Miki is, walking around with that particular T-shirt on sure isn't going to help matters if she's "spotted" (i.e. when Rika "accidentally" mentions that this happened the next time she's around Miki). :doh:



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“I’m going…home. I’ll like to be alone. Thanks, Maki.”

What did I do that was wrong? I thought I was doing alright…Did she eavesdrop into my conversation with Rika over the phone? “Aya, what’s wrong?”

Aya stared relentlessly into Maki’s eyes for some time before she replied, “If you want the best for me, let go of my hand now.” Maki obediently let go of her hand. “Thank you,” Aya said sincerely before she turned the door knob and left the room.
Aya knows that Maki means well, however her involvement is a big part of the problem right now. So yes, the best thing for Aya to do is to NOT be around Maki.



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Maybe it was time for her to do something un-Japanese.
This fills me with worry, to be honest. :O




Chapter 20

Puppet
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After Miki stopped crying, Yossie led Miki in silence to the taxi stand as Yossie believed that they needed to leave this place and they hopped into a cab. When they were in the taxi, Yossie asked softly, “Where do you want to go?” Miki shook her head absently with tears running down her cheeks again. Yossie knew that Miki wanted to be away from the crowd now but she couldn’t figure out where exactly to bring her to. It must be somewhere that Miki felt comfortable in.

“Excuse me, where do you want to go?” the taxi driver asked impatiently. Yossie told the driver her address and she was not surprised that Miki didn’t comment on what she just said.
Now let's hope that Yossi doesn't get any stupid ideas here and try to take advantage of the situation.



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She thought, “Maybe Aya wanted to tell me about this lunch appointment with that bitch yesterday. But I flared up at her and she didn’t have a proper opportunity to tell me. Maybe Aya was smiling for the sake of smiling just now. Maybe Aya wasn’t in for a kiss with Maki just now. Why did my mind work so fast and rush into a conclusion just now? If only I didn’t think about it, maybe it will be fine. If only I didn’t come to the airport to play safe, maybe it will be fine…”
Even Miki knows that she jumps the gun at times, she just can't help it.



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Yossie remained silent throughout the whole journey. She didn’t know what to say to Miki. In fact, she didn’t quite know what was going on. Was that act just part of Miki’s game? What triggered her to do so? But why would Miki do so? She loved Aya. She felt an intense urge in her to ask Miki what had happened earlier but it seemed way too insensitive to ask now.
The timing sucks, but Yossi's right. To make things better all the proverbial cards have to be laid out on the table. The more that's known, the better for all.



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Yossie thought for a while before she spoke softly, “So you kissed me to take revenge on them. Or, to be more precise, you wanted to take revenge on Aya.” Miki didn’t respond which meant that her hypothesis was correct.

Silence fell between them for almost 5 minutes before Miki whispered in a sincere voice, “I love Aya. I really do.”

“But if you do love her, why did you do that to hurt her?” Oops, those words just came out a little too quick. Yossie prayed that she hadn’t hurt Miki with that.
Sometimes you have to give someone a little smack like that, even if they realize it themselves.  Miki knows that what she did was stupid, which is good. However if Yossi does this right, she'll hopefully get Miki to realize that SHE needs to do something to fix it instead of just beating herself up over it.



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“This isn’t love at all,” Yossie murmured more to herself than to Miki.
Funny how Yossi and Maki think the same thing like that.



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Miki frowned and she said without exchanging any eye contact with Yossie, “I didn’t choose you. You just happened to be there.
Dang, that's particularly painful considering how Yossi feels about Miki (who, of course, is completely oblivious to).  Of course, in Miki's rashness, she wasn't thinking about anything else other than the pain she was feeling over what she thought she saw.



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I wanted to choose Ai actually but I didn’t have the heart to spoil her little romance with Risa!”
Yeah...while it WOULD have been interesting to see it, it's probably for the best that it ended this way instead.



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Yossie stared blankly at the glass of orange juice that Miki had just drunk and interrupted in a soft voice, “What if I like you?”

Miki laughed. “Don’t joke about this Yossie. You like Rika,” she paused before adding as an afterthought, “Our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love. Not even with the kiss.”
It's sort of ironic. At first it was Miki having feelings for Aya, who had no clue about it. Now Miki's involved in a virtually identical situation, only now it's HER that doesn't have a clue that she's being longed for by another (in this case, Yossi).   :roll:



Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: tito on June 19, 2008, 02:43:06 AM
@Ai. Love: Nah, I think more prefer Yomiki kiss :P
@JFC: Nice to see you commenting around again! You're right about the irony part. Kinda sucks ;) I think ending 2 can just serve as a continuation of ending 1 and hopefully, I have time to write it ;)

To everyone who is waiting or pestering me for this, here is chap 21! I was depressed when I wrote this and I felt even more depressed after writing it..But it doesn't seem so depressing when I read it though. Nothing much happens in here but it serves as the platform for the subsequent chapters! It turns out way longer than I expected.. Enjoy :wub: BTW, the GAM supporters popped out of nowhere! *points at poll* :roll:

Chapter 22 will take some time though..my exams are pressing near :( Probably it will come in, hopefully, a week's time ;)

F.Y.I

Chapter 21

Definitions of Love

December 24 (8.02pm)

Aya lay on her couch and closed her eyes in an attempt to forget what had taken place over the past 3 days. Everything started with those phone calls in the middle of the night. Then, it was a relatively sweet day before they quarreled in the evening. Today marked the climax with the meeting with Maki followed by that kiss. Those images just seemed too vivid and they overwhelmed her such that whenever she thought of Miki, that kissing image just surfaced in her mind.

The thunder roared and grey clouds hung low in the sky. She feared thunder until she met Miki who was ever so protective of her. Miki always gave her the sense of security and she felt as though she could conquer mountains even when there was a thunderstorm simply because Miki was beside her. But it wasn’t the case tonight. It wouldn’t be the same case again.

She reread the old messages that Miki had sent her years ago and she smiled to herself. It was one of those many messages sent by Miki that she kept. Almost a split second later, she was shot back to reality. How much she wished that she was blind literally and didn’t witness that scene. Tears rolled down her cheeks as she compared the beautiful past with the harsh reality. They always talked about future but would that shared future still exist for them? That same image popped up in her head again and brought pain as usual to her heart.

If Miki called her at this very second, what would she say to Miki? In the past, this question never popped up in her head and she could just talk to Miki about anything and everything. But now, she didn’t know what to say to her. It was almost as hard to start a conversation with Miki as with Maki.

“No one loves by hurting the other intentionally. This isn’t love at all. Maybe you two shouldn’t even love each other in the first place.” This line repeated in her mind.

She wondered, “Love. What is love? Isn’t love something that brings happiness? Why do we hurt each other even though we are in love? Why is love so painful? Before we loved each other, there wasn’t so much pain and angst in our relationship. Is this love?”

The image of that packed lift with Japanese squeezing in which paralleled her love story came to her mind. Those people squeezed in because they felt it was irrational to wait for the next lift as it would result in a loss of time and they felt obliged to squeeze into those packed lifts. But was it rational to squeeze in despite the discomfort? Who was the one who said it was an obligation? Maybe it was time to do something unJapanese. Maybe it was time to step back. Maybe it would be rational to give that lift a miss.

She typed a message on her handphone and clicked on the ‘send’ button to that familiar number. The word ‘unJapanese’ was stuck in her mind as she did so. This was perhaps the biggest decision she had made in her life.

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Rika ate the bowl of noodles in that rather empty Chinese restaurant alone. Somehow, nowadays, she was much more accustomed to loneliness than before. The bowl of noodles she ordered was the same as usual but the noodles tasted different. Maybe it was because she was alone or maybe it was because of the mixed emotions she was having now.

Yossie, the Prince Charming, popped up in her head as always. No matter how many years they had spent together and no matter how she dressed up, she was the Prince Charming in Rika’s mind. This fact would never change. Rika mouthed the words, “I love you…”

Then she visualized the way Yossie and Miki probably kissed today and she frowned. She felt angry because Miki had somehow tweaked her plan in a way that she became much more intimate with Yossie. She felt depressed because she felt that Yossie had cheated behind her back. There was also a burning and surging desire in her to win back Yossie’s heart. But the question was: how?

She had devised a plan to create troubles for GAM such that Miki would spend less time with Yossie but in the end, it had the direct opposite effect. She felt as though she was losing Yossie. It was Christmas Eve and there wasn’t even a single call or message from her. Usually, in the past, they would spend Christmas Eve at one of their apartments and count down to the day of giving together. This year was tragically different.

She thought, “What else can I do? I don’t want to lose her…but so what if everything went according to plan? Will life without Miki makes us a happy couple or is Miki just part of our problems? What is our problem?”

Tears welled up in her eyes as she grew confused. Her eyesight blurred because of the tears and she thought she saw the short-haired Yossie sitting across the table devouring a plate of fried rice. She rubbed her eyes. No, it was just a hallucination.

What was different between now and the past? Back then, they were young, impressionable, innocent and honest…Honesty, was that the key? She recalled just how much she had been keeping from Yossie and shook her head. Even if it wasn’t the key, it should be part of that key which would bring them back to the blissful past and to future happiness.

She took out her handphone from her bag and sent her a short message before praying for the Christmas lights to illuminate their love.

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Miki sat in the rather deserted park near her own apartment alone. It was raining Christmas Eve and most people would be in their homes. But she didn’t want to go back to that empty apartment. It would bring back too much happy memories. She felt that she didn’t have a right to feel happy after what she had done. Maybe she would obtain the right after Aya forgave her. But would Aya forgive her for doing something so childish and irrational? She had put herself in Aya’s shoes numerous times for the past few hours and every single time, she came to the same one conclusion and ending. It was the very same conclusion and ending that she dreaded.

The rain poured down on her. She felt that the sky was punishing her for the sins that she had committed earlier and the pain that she had inflicted on another human being. I deserve the punishment… She felt at ease sitting on that bench under the rain. At least it concealed her tears.

What went wrong? Was she supposed to give Aya some space? The image of Maki appearing relaxed after the slap came to her mind. She clenched her fists. Perhaps, it was that look on her face that took away her rationality. Was it anger towards Maki or jealousy because she loved Aya? She couldn’t trace back on what she had been thinking of back then. Her mind just worked too quickly earlier jumping into conclusions.

This isn’t love at all. Yossie’s line repeated itself in her mind like a broken melody. She wondered, “I’m willing to die for Aya so that should be love. Is it true that love won’t hurt? Then, why is our love story full of pain? What is love then?”

She felt her handphone vibrated in her pocket. She immediately flipped open her handphone and read the message. Her heart skipped a beat when she saw who the sender was. It wrote as followed: Happy Christmas Eve. Let’s meet up at the park that is near to your place around 4pm tomorrow. See you.” She immediately replied, “Ok, see you then!”

She could imagine how Aya said that lifelessly in that blunt and flat voice. There wasn’t the usual ‘I love you’ or something along that line in that message. But what could she expect after hurting her so badly? She had no rights to make Aya feel obliged to say ‘I love you’. She felt delighted that they were meeting up tomorrow but what could she say to Aya apart from ‘I am sorry’? What would Aya say to her anyway? Would she give her that Christmas gift that she dreaded?

She murmured to herself, “I deserve what I get…I reap what I sow…”

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Yossie entered her apartment and she wasn’t surprised to see Miki gone without a note or anything. In fact, she was happier alone. At least she would have the chance to sort her thoughts out.

“Don’t joke about this Yossie. You like Rika. Our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love. Not even with the kiss.” That painful few lines inadvertently popped up in her mind. She asked herself, “If this is not, what will a relationship heading towards love feels like then?”

Frustrated that she couldn’t answer her own question, she decided to listen to the voice-mails on her answering machine. Maki always told her that engaging in daily chores could allow one to momentarily forget all the troubles. She reckoned that this was a pretty good and tested method as Maki had quite a lot of troubles and worries.

There was only one voice-mail on her answering machine and it was from an unexpected person – Junjun. Junjun spoke in a chirpy voice, “Yossie, thanks for your help 2 weeks ago. I don’t think I need it anymore though. During the gathering, Aika said she saw me as her godsister and I agreed to play that role in her life. It has been 2 weeks and I feel really happy with where our relationship is heading towards. Maybe I just thought too much in the past. Maybe I’ve seen her just as a special friend all along and nothing else apart from that. Thank you very much for guiding and helping me.”

She thought, “Special friend? Are you my special friend? Is that where our relationship is heading towards, Fujimoto? Is that how I feel towards you? If it is the case, then how does a love relationship feel like? How does it feel to be in love?”

Even a horrible person like me knows that love doesn’t come from the mouth; love comes from the heart.   That line repeated itself in her head. Not that Miki was a horrible person but she knew that she used pick-up lines to represent love and she never loved with her heart. Maybe that’s why she never felt any pain in this 7 years love because she never even loved at all. Now the pain she was suffering from wasn’t because of love but because she didn’t know how to love.

All along, she was happy flirting around with Rika or simply, with anyone. A few days ago, she thought that she never dedicated herself fully to Rika. But the fact might be that she never dedicated herself at all. The guilt that she felt towards Rika piled up in her chest because she knew that Rika gave all that she had in their relationship.

She thought, “I had said ‘I love you’ over a million times in my life already. But, have I even once meant those words? Have I even once said them from the bottom of my heart? I have a lover but I have never been in love - that kind of real love that breaks one’s heart before mending it back.”

Her handphone vibrated and she immediately grabbed it and read the message. It was from Rika. It read: Yossie, can we meet up tomorrow at that Chinese restaurant around 5pm? Merry Christmas in advance!” She replied okay and wished her Merry Christmas in advance as well.

The message just came so timely. She knew she needed to speak to Rika as well. She gazed at the hand-made book lying on her bookshelf. Perhaps that could be part of the Christmas present for her this year.
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It had been a pretty tiring afternoon for Maki after Aya left as she went running from place to place and jostling with the crowds to buy the Christmas gift for Aya. She swore that this would be the last time she shopped on Christmas Eve. She entered her hotel room and gazed at the gift in her hand. She smiled to herself as she imagined Aya’s delighted look when she gave her the gift tomorrow.

Images of the soulless and crying Aya in her embrace surfaced in her mind. How much she wanted to protect Aya and give her that sense of security. How much she wanted to kill Miki for hurting Aya like that. But she didn’t have a right to hate Miki because she had hurt Aya with the same intensity or even more in the past. She felt she didn’t have the right to protect Aya as well as she was the one who had thrown it out of the window when she decided to choose her career over Aya.

She murmured to herself, “Perhaps I can earn that right back.”

Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: Ai.love on June 19, 2008, 04:48:28 AM
I wonder what's going to happen~ :mon chilly: Anyways, I hope you do well on your exam!  :mon thumb:

I'll make some banners while I wait . . .  :mon whimper:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: Yukari on June 19, 2008, 04:54:39 AM
titooo

i want answers!! XD

so i'll wait until you update

luck in your exams...  :mon thumb:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 19, 2008, 05:28:28 AM
Oh no, please don't tell me that Aya is gonna step back and let Miki do what she wants for a while and pretend she doesn't care... If she does, this is hitting really close to home :cry: Don't do it Ayaya, it sucks, get out while you can, before it hurts even more :( (yes you suck... I'm relating to and feeling sorry for Aya now... Not that I can relate her to earlier in the story though!)

I don't mind if IshiYoshi stay together (although it will be pretty sucky for them) but I don't want GAM!!! I hope they all meet up to break up :P
Yossy is on the right path to realising that it's not right being with Rika and now its Aya's turn!

THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! Christmas gifts for TakaGaki, is what should be the title :twisted: Shame I'll be away when you put it up, but hopefully you keep chapter 23 till after i am home so I get to comment all on 22 :P

To all the sudden GAM fans, Yuki and I are prepared to battle you in a fight to the death... One side for the love the singers of the great lesbian love song "Melodies" and the other corner (the totally cool Yuki and I :cool1: ) fighting for the hotness and true connection of YoMiki love! FIGHTTTTTOOOOOOOOO~!  :bangchair: :poke: :mon beam: :mon yeah: :mon zoom:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: tito on June 19, 2008, 05:45:33 AM
I wonder what's going to happen~ :mon chilly: Anyways, I hope you do well on your exam!  :mon thumb:
Thanks :P
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I'll make some banners while I wait . . .  :mon whimper:
For F.Y.I? :D If you do, I will be so touched :) :lol:

titooo

i want answers!! XD

so i'll wait until you update

luck in your exams...  :mon thumb:
Yeah, I need the luck XD The monkeys disappear again :P
Oh no, please don't tell me that Aya is gonna step back and let Miki do what she wants for a while and pretend she doesn't care... If she does, this is hitting really close to home :cry: Don't do it Ayaya, it sucks, get out while you can, before it hurts even more :( (yes you suck... I'm relating to and feeling sorry for Aya now... Not that I can relate her to earlier in the story though!)
See, I manage to make you sympathize with Ayayaya :P :wahaha: Hopefully she heeds your advice ;) :D
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I don't mind if IshiYoshi stay together (although it will be pretty sucky for them) but I don't want GAM!!! I hope they all meet up to break up :P
Yossy is on the right path to realising that it's not right being with Rika and now its Aya's turn!
Pray on pray on :D
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THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! Christmas gifts for TakaGaki, is what should be the title :twisted: Shame I'll be away when you put it up, but hopefully you keep chapter 23 till after i am home so I get to comment all on 22 :P
Haha, :lol: you're some psychic..predicted part of the next chap pretty well..Let's see whether you get the other part correct :P When are you coming back? It really depends on how much that bloody exam drain my energy away..
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To all the sudden GAM fans, Yuki and I are prepared to battle you in a fight to the death... One side for the love the singers of the great lesbian love song "Melodies" and the other corner (the totally cool Yuki and I :cool1: ) fighting for the hotness and true connection of YoMiki love! FIGHTTTTTOOOOOOOOO~!  :bangchair: :poke: :mon beam: :mon yeah: :mon zoom:
You're so funny :rofl: *Looks at Yuki* Yuki hasn't agreed yet :lol:

Here will turn into a bloody battlefield and the middle-person (me XD ) will try to shout for peace as much as she can :P Maybe the borders will have to be redrawn for those who change sides. GAM vs Yomiki :lol: Start fighto!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: Yukari on June 19, 2008, 06:02:13 AM
To all the sudden GAM fans, Yuki and I are prepared to battle you in a fight to the death... One side for the love the singers of the great lesbian love song "Melodies" and the other corner (the totally cool Yuki and I :cool1: ) fighting for the hotness and true connection of YoMiki love! FIGHTTTTTOOOOOOOOO~!  :bangchair: :poke: :mon beam: :mon yeah: :mon zoom:

yeah i'm cool  :glasses:... LOL joke

you don't have to request it, i'm your comrade  :mon yeah:

we wan't hotness and connection!! YOMIKI FIGHTO!!  :mon mad:

*prepared to the war* Lollipopgirl and Yuki against the GAM world!!!  :mon dive: :mon hobo: :mon bat: :mon beam: :mon look: (all the freaks monkey will help us, they're my friends!)

Lollipopgirl i'll protect you  :mon loveflower: oh s--- no~~ it isn't in the fanfic XD

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Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: JFC on June 20, 2008, 03:08:43 AM
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“No one loves by hurting the other intentionally. This isn’t love at all. Maybe you two shouldn’t even love each other in the first place.” This line repeated in her mind.

She wondered, “Love. What is love? Isn’t love something that brings happiness? Why do we hurt each other even though we are in love? Why is love so painful? Before we loved each other, there wasn’t so much pain and angst in our relationship. Is this love?”
Oh great, Aya's over-thinking again. :doh:




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The image of that packed lift with Japanese squeezing in which paralleled her love story came to her mind. Those people squeezed in because they felt it was irrational to wait for the next lift as it would result in a loss of time and they felt obliged to squeeze into those packed lifts. But was it rational to squeeze in despite the discomfort? Who was the one who said it was an obligation? Maybe it was time to do something unJapanese. Maybe it was time to step back. Maybe it would be rational to give that lift a miss.
Oooooooooooooo...nice analogy. :yep:



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She typed a message on her handphone and clicked on the ‘send’ button to that familiar number. The word ‘unJapanese’ was stuck in her mind as she did so. This was perhaps the biggest decision she had made in her life.
3 questions though:
1) What was the message?
2) To whom did she send it?  and
3) What was/is the "unJapanese" thing to do here?



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Then she visualized the way Yossie and Miki probably kissed today and she frowned. She felt angry because Miki had somehow tweaked her plan in a way that she became much more intimate with Yossie.
Well, in all fairness if Rika hadn't made this "plan" to begin with, none of it would have happened (or at least, not in this manner).



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She felt depressed because she felt that Yossie had cheated behind her back. There was also a burning and surging desire in her to win back Yossie’s heart. But the question was: how?
When you consider that Miki was pretty much the instigator (a detail that Maki evidently neglected to mention as she had only generically said that the two had kissed), one could say that it wasn't really cheating. But then again, Yossi didn't really make much of an effort to stop her, now, did she?



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Miki sat in the rather deserted park near her own apartment alone. It was raining Christmas Eve and most people would be in their homes. But she didn’t want to go back to that empty apartment. It would bring back too much happy memories. She felt that she didn’t have a right to feel happy after what she had done. Maybe she would obtain the right after Aya forgave her. But would Aya forgive her for doing something so childish and irrational?
Miki won't find out either way, as long as she's just willing to proverbially sit on her hands. Nothing will happen if she doesn't take action. Right now what she did with Yossi is the big problem, so she has to be the one to take the first step to try and fix it.



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She felt her handphone vibrated in her pocket. She immediately flipped open her handphone and read the message. Her heart skipped a beat when she saw who the sender was. It wrote as followed: Happy Christmas Eve. Let’s meet up at the park that is near to your place around 4pm tomorrow. See you.” She immediately replied, “Ok, see you then!”
Well then...this could be promising, depending on what Aya says when they meet up. :O



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There was only one voice-mail on her answering machine and it was from an unexpected person – Junjun. Junjun spoke in a chirpy voice, “Yossie, thanks for your help 2 weeks ago. I don’t think I need it anymore though. During the gathering, Aika said she saw me as her godsister and I agreed to play that role in her life. It has been 2 weeks and I feel really happy with where our relationship is heading towards. Maybe I just thought too much in the past. Maybe I’ve seen her just as a special friend all along and nothing else apart from that. Thank you very much for guiding and helping me.”
Looks like Junjun's come to terms with the whole Aika situation, but is it really what she wanted?



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All along, she was happy flirting around with Rika or simply, with anyone. A few days ago, she thought that she never dedicated herself fully to Rika. But the fact might be that she never dedicated herself at all. The guilt that she felt towards Rika piled up in her chest because she knew that Rika gave all that she had in their relationship.
If this is true, then Yossi's definitely not being fair to Rika. If she's not able to give the same level of commitment, she needs to let Rika know now instead of leading her around with the belief that her intentions are the same.



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Her handphone vibrated and she immediately grabbed it and read the message. It was from Rika. It read: Yossie, can we meet up tomorrow at that Chinese restaurant around 5pm? Merry Christmas in advance!” She replied okay and wished her Merry Christmas in advance as well.

The message just came so timely. She knew she needed to speak to Rika as well. She gazed at the hand-made book lying on her bookshelf. Perhaps that could be part of the Christmas present for her this year.
Is Yossi willing to take that big step?



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It had been a pretty tiring afternoon for Maki after Aya left as she went running from place to place and jostling with the crowds to buy the Christmas gift for Aya. She swore that this would be the last time she shopped on Christmas Eve. She entered her hotel room and gazed at the gift in her hand. She smiled to herself as she imagined Aya’s delighted look when she gave her the gift tomorrow.
Oooooooooooooooooooh that's not going to help matters. :err:



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She murmured to herself, “Perhaps I can earn that right back.”
She at least knows that she doesn't have a chance of her and Aya getting back together, right?


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Come to think of it, there IS NO chance of that happening, right? 
:mon cute:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: Ai.love on June 20, 2008, 03:25:34 AM
GAM fighters UNITE!!!!

(http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a63/---Munkee---/Emoticons/thmagi.gif)

It's not just about "Melodies"~  :mon sigh:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: tru_harmony on June 20, 2008, 03:53:55 AM
the damned computer at school f-ed up my comment so i'll be retyping the whole thing now...

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“No one loves by hurting the other intentionally. This isn’t love at all. Maybe you two shouldn’t even love each other in the first place.”

... don't believe her ayaya... love doesn't exist in a vacuum... we're all human after all... people sometimes do things that could hurt others, intentionally or unintentionally... no one said that the road to true happiness was a happy path...

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She wondered, “Love. What is love? Isn’t love something that brings happiness? Why do we hurt each other even though we are in love? Why is love so painful? Before we loved each other, there wasn’t so much pain and angst in our relationship. Is this love?”

there are so many Definitions of Love... which one do you want to hear? the definition by philosophy? theology? chemistry? psychology? (i'll give the psych one to lollipopgirl)

if it's philosophy... then love is that which liberates us. If one acts in love, that person is flexible to the circumstance and acts accordingly.

If two people 'in love' constantly hurt each other, could it be that it's not really love but fear that keeps them together? Could it be, Aya, that before you went exclusive with each other you were really in love and now you're just being tied down by that pact of exclusivity? Could it be that the obligation to be together made you fall out of love?

If this 'love' is causing pain to both of you, that it's just a yoke you burden yourselves with, shouldn't you two let each other be free now? I think that's what love is... not necessarily letting go but setting each other free from obligation, uncertainty and fear. If you realize by your freewill that regardless of the flaws and hardships you two must go through, you will still choose to love each other, then go on loving. If you realize that you are only being bound by empty promises and 'I love yous', let go-- it's the most loving thins you can do.


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The image of that packed lift with Japanese squeezing in which paralleled her love story came to her mind. Those people squeezed in because they felt it was irrational to wait for the next lift as it would result in a loss of time and they felt obliged to squeeze into those packed lifts. But was it rational to squeeze in despite the discomfort? Who was the one who said it was an obligation? Maybe it was time to do something unJapanese. Maybe it was time to step back. Maybe it would be rational to give that lift a miss.

... that depens on your values... if you value comfort over time, step back... if you have to satiate your need to make it on time, squeeze in... many people want immediate satisfaction for their craving be it food or attention or love... choose wisely, Aya...

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Yossie, the Prince Charming, popped up in her head as always. No matter how many years they had spent together and no matter how she dressed up, she was the Prince Charming in Rika’s mind. This fact would never change. Rika mouthed the words, “I love you…”

the storybook was vividly colored all those years ago, Charmy... take a second look at the pages... i think the colors have faded... and the happily ever after, The end page was torn from the book... Can you make your own ending?

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Then she visualized the way Yossie and Miki probably kissed today and she frowned. She felt angry because Miki had somehow tweaked her plan in a way that she became much more intimate with Yossie. She felt depressed because she felt that Yossie had cheated behind her back. There was also a burning and surging desire in her to win back Yossie’s heart. But the question was: how?

are you sure you've actually won the heart before?

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She thought, “What else can I do? I don’t want to lose her…but so what if everything went according to plan? Will life without Miki makes us a happy couple or is Miki just part of our problems? What is our problem?”

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Honesty,

BINGO!!!!!

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She took out her handphone from her bag and sent her a short message before praying for the Christmas lights to illuminate their love.

i think your prayer will be answered... given that the love actually existed before...

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“I’m willing to die for Aya so that should be love. Is it true that love won’t hurt? Then, why is our love story full of pain? What is love then?”

... *sigh* ... miki... aya didn't know how to love you...

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She murmured to herself, “I deserve what I get…I reap what I sow…”

although that saying is true, i don't see where you planted the bad seeds to get this kind of harvest... i think someone *throws evil glance at rika* sabotaged your crop... i wish that the real seeds of love that you planted grow soon... i can water them if you want...

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“Don’t joke about this Yossie. You like Rika. Our relationship isn’t heading anywhere towards love. Not even with the kiss.”

yossui should be the one murmuring this:

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“I deserve what I get…I reap what I sow…”

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The guilt that she felt towards Rika piled up in her chest because she knew that Rika gave all that she had in their relationship.

... right... she even sabotaged miki's crop because of you...

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Images of the soulless and crying Aya in her embrace surfaced in her mind. How much she wanted to protect Aya and give her that sense of security. How much she wanted to kill Miki for hurting Aya like that. But she didn’t have a right to hate Miki because she had hurt Aya with the same intensity or even more in the past. She felt she didn’t have the right to protect Aya as well as she was the one who had thrown it out of the window when she decided to choose her career over Aya.

come on, man... can't you leave her alone even for a second? they all need time...

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She murmured to herself, “Perhaps I can earn that right back.”

you think it's that easy?!

I'll pray for you in your exams!!!!!
 :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon study:  :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer:

:mon study: :mon yeah: :mon yeah: :mon yeah: :mon yeah:

don't do this: :dozing:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 20, 2008, 04:41:20 AM
there are so many Definitions of Love... which one do you want to hear? the definition by philosophy? theology? chemistry? psychology? (i'll give the psych one to lollipopgirl)
Man, defining love sucks for me seeing I don't really believe in it anyway :lol:

Now, Aya, Miki, Yossy, Rika and Maki, listen up! There are a few different definitions of love psychologically, at least one of you has suffered from misattribution of emotions (I don't remember who I said that about) which isn't really a good thing, but another concept, that none of you have really developed, is the one you should be aiming for to some degree... Fusion! That's where two people love each other so much in a relationship, they become one with each other. Essentially, they complete each other, its not just being clingy, but they are soulmates. Being able to tell what the other thinks and feels without them saying it coz you understand them completely, is not something any of you have mastered, nor will you unless you split up into the pairings I want :P
Interestingly though, fusion is most prevalent in lesbian relationships, so girls, there is hope ;)

Why am I talking :roll: SHUT UP MEEEE, stop acting so high and mighty! :angry:

@Ai.love: I love GAM but when YoMiki is at stake :lol: But you almost won our battle then by hypnotising me with all those flashing monkeys! WAAAAAY COOL! :w00t:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: tito on June 20, 2008, 06:39:14 AM
Firstly I want to thank all of you for reading and commenting. Seriously, this short 15mins I spent on this forum reading and rereading comments beats everything else I have been doing in the morning (that's studying Bio :lol: ) I love all of you!! :inlove:
yeah i'm cool  :glasses:... LOL joke

you don't have to request it, i'm your comrade  :mon yeah:

we wan't hotness and connection!! YOMIKI FIGHTO!!  :mon mad:

*prepared to the war* Lollipopgirl and Yuki against the GAM world!!!  :mon dive: :mon hobo: :mon bat: :mon beam: :mon look: (all the freaks monkey will help us, they're my friends!)

Lollipopgirl i'll protect you  :mon loveflower: oh s--- no~~ it isn't in the fanfic XD

if you want to join us... just do it!!
LOL, I think Ai. love took the monkeys away at one shot *bang*  XD Crazy Yomiki fans :P
3) What was/is the "unJapanese" thing to do here?
The answer is somewhere in the analogy :D
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Well, in all fairness if Rika hadn't made this "plan" to begin with, none of it would have happened (or at least, not in this manner).
True. But if you trace back, maybe it started with Yossi appearing in the gathering. Or maybe even with the jail incident. And that will lead all the way back to Gomattou. :D
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When you consider that Miki was pretty much the instigator (a detail that Maki evidently neglected to mention as she had only generically said that the two had kissed), one could say that it wasn't really cheating. But then again, Yossi didn't really make much of an effort to stop her, now, did she?
Yossi didn't of course..oh well, Aya didn't tell Maki clearly as well ;)
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Well then...this could be promising, depending on what Aya says when they meet up. :O
Suspense.. :pimp:
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Looks like Junjun's come to terms with the whole Aika situation, but is it really what she wanted?
Well, that's the most she can do in this situation - just look at the brighter side of things...
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Is Yossi willing to take that big step?
Suspense x2 :pimp: :pimp:
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She at least knows that she doesn't have a chance of her and Aya getting back together, right?


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Come to think of it, there IS NO chance of that happening, right? 
:mon cute:
Tabun...;) :P
GAM fighters UNITE!!!!

(http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a63/---Munkee---/Emoticons/thmagi.gif)

It's not just about "Melodies"~  :mon sigh:
*Click on save image* That's so funny :D For a split second, I wanted to grant your wish. Ok, that split second is gone..tito is sober and rational again :lol: Yeah, there's thanks and lululu and the wonderful futarigoto as well..oh man, how can you forget about that? XD
the damned computer at school f-ed up my comment so i'll be retyping the whole thing now...
That sucks..this comment is long.. :(

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there are so many Definitions of Love... which one do you want to hear? the definition by philosophy? theology? chemistry? psychology? (i'll give the psych one to lollipopgirl)

if it's philosophy... then love is that which liberates us. If one acts in love, that person is flexible to the circumstance and acts accordingly.

If two people 'in love' constantly hurt each other, could it be that it's not really love but fear that keeps them together? Could it be, Aya, that before you went exclusive with each other you were really in love and now you're just being tied down by that pact of exclusivity? Could it be that the obligation to be together made you fall out of love?

If this 'love' is causing pain to both of you, that it's just a yoke you burden yourselves with, shouldn't you two let each other be free now? I think that's what love is... not necessarily letting go but setting each other free from obligation, uncertainty and fear. If you realize by your freewill that regardless of the flaws and hardships you two must go through, you will still choose to love each other, then go on loving. If you realize that you are only being bound by empty promises and 'I love yous', let go-- it's the most loving thins you can do.
Nice theory about love :wub: It very much depends on how one views love and that determines the outcome.

Since we are talking about definitions of love, I'll just briefly touch on the different characters' definitions. Miki believes that love is giving to the extent of dying and because of her strong belief, it creates some form of problems for them. Aya believes in mutual love or like you put it, the exclusivity of love. As for Yossi, oh well, she just finds fun in 'love' by flirting around. Rika thinks love is more of clingy as in, she will like to be beside the other 24/7 but that is changing of course. Maki thinks love is bringing happiness to the one she loves and that's precisely why she took part in that plan with Rika. 
 
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are you sure you've actually won the heart before?
This is a really good question.
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i think your prayer will be answered... given that the love actually existed before...
You sure?

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although that saying is true, i don't see where you planted the bad seeds to get this kind of harvest... i think someone *throws evil glance at rika* sabotaged your crop... i wish that the real seeds of love that you planted grow soon... i can water them if you want...
LOL, this is the first time you look at Rika like that :lol:
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you think it's that easy?!
Will it be? :P
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I'll pray for you in your exams!!!!!
 :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :mon study:  :mon prayer: :mon prayer: :mon prayer:

:mon study: :mon yeah: :mon yeah: :mon yeah: :mon yeah:

don't do this: :dozing:
Thanks for the prayers! :D I doubt my hands can even move after the exams though ;) Shouldn't have time to doze off but while studying for it, there's a tendency to doze off.........
Now, Aya, Miki, Yossy, Rika and Maki, listen up! There are a few different definitions of love psychologically, at least one of you has suffered from misattribution of emotions (I don't remember who I said that about) which isn't really a good thing, but another concept, that none of you have really developed, is the one you should be aiming for to some degree... Fusion! That's where two people love each other so much in a relationship, they become one with each other. Essentially, they complete each other, its not just being clingy, but they are soulmates. Being able to tell what the other thinks and feels without them saying it coz you understand them completely, is not something any of you have mastered, nor will you unless you split up into the pairings I want :P
Interestingly though, fusion is most prevalent in lesbian relationships, so girls, there is hope ;)

Why am I talking :roll: SHUT UP MEEEE, stop acting so high and mighty! :angry:
Come on, listen to the professional! The misattribution of emotions is for Aya (for the post that you tried to convince me of GoAya and Yomiki :P) :lol: It all sounds so professional until the last bit about 'unless you split up into the pairings I want' :P
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@Ai.love: I love GAM but when YoMiki is at stake :lol: But you almost won our battle then by hypnotising me with all those flashing monkeys! WAAAAAY COOL! :w00t:
I'm obsessed over the gif as well :) Almost? Go Ai.love!!!! :wub:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: tru_harmony on June 20, 2008, 06:50:11 AM
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although that saying is true, i don't see where you planted the bad seeds to get this kind of harvest... i think someone *throws evil glance at rika* sabotaged your crop... i wish that the real seeds of love that you planted grow soon... i can water them if you want...
LOL, this is the first time you look at Rika like that :lol:

yeah... and i wasn't even possssed by the devil when i did it... kinda feels liberating... not that i don't worship her anymore... just that... well sh did put herself into this situation with the scheming shit she did...

@miki: the watering the seeds offer is still up...

goodluck to your exams... Bio (life) kills... ironic, ne~?
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: kRisZ on June 20, 2008, 03:38:00 PM
everyone's heart broken  :(

the YoMiki vs GAM makes me  :w00t:  *gets some popcorn, sits at the corner and waits for the FIGHTO!*  :twisted:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: tito on June 21, 2008, 10:29:53 AM
Maki is back, I'm really delighted about it!!!!!! :wub: :wub: To celebrate, I will write a chapter from GOCCHIN's POV!! when I've time of course. Probably later at night (also to prevent myself from having a fabulous Gocchin and crappy everyone's else ending!)

yeah... and i wasn't even possssed by the devil when i did it... kinda feels liberating... not that i don't worship her anymore... just that... well sh did put herself into this situation with the scheming shit she did...

@miki: the watering the seeds offer is still up...

goodluck to your exams... Bio (life) kills... ironic, ne~?
Turning rational already! That's a good sign! :P You know tito will take the water away anyway right? :lol:
Bio(life) makes life complicated as well.....
everyone's heart broken  :(

the YoMiki vs GAM makes me  :w00t:  *gets some popcorn, sits at the corner and waits for the FIGHTO!*  :twisted:
^You officially earned the 'most sadistic person' award :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tito on June 21, 2008, 02:25:44 PM
This is supposed to come in about 3 chapters down but I'll just put it in first because MAKI IS BACK~~~~~~~ :cow: :cow:
And I finished my revision early today so this is a bonus chapter from Maki's POV!!!! :wub:
To you-know-who-you-are, sorry this isn't the chap 22 that you're looking forward to XD

F.Y.I

Chapter 22

Never-ending Cycle

December 24 (11.30pm)

After taking a long bath, I habitually dried my long hair with a towel in front of the mirror. As I did so, I stared at my own reflection and I wondered which side of me was reflected by that mirror. Was it the devil that participated in that hit-and-run incident about a year ago and the ‘test’ earlier? Or was it the so-called angel that believed in love? Perhaps it was the former as ever since that day that I broke up with Aya and broke her heart into pieces, the angel in me had vanished into thin air and I could no longer find it. Not that I made an attempt to anyway.

Maybe all that I could do now was to try my best to convince the devil in me to resort to any method to make sure that the very one whom I loved would attain happiness. That’s the least I could do for her.   

Apart from that devil in me, I was certain that I saw my own loneliness being reflected off that inanimate mirror. Loneliness wasn’t something foreign to me because it had been stuck with me from the very first day I entered this project. But, because of the time I had with her last year, it became something that I dreaded. Oh well, maybe, sooner or later, I would get used to it again though I selfishly hoped not.

'mou inai  dare mo inai POTSUN to watashi dake' I smiled weakly to my own reflection. The lyrics of Suppin to namida popped up in my mind. How fitting that song was.

I exited from the bathroom with the towel wrapped around my body and moved towards the queen-sized bed where I placed my yukata on earlier. When I picked up the yukata to wear, I saw the plane ticket which I tore into pieces earlier lying beneath it. I smiled. I was still as messy as always. Some things just never change.

If it wasn’t because of her, I would have flown off today. If I had never played a role today, I would never know of how Miki mistreated Aya. I closed my eyes and recalled what had happened a day ago.

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December 23 (10.01am)

I planned to take the earliest flight to America and leave Japan for good once I was out of that place. I was in the taxi heading towards the airport when she called. “Hello,” I said. I was pretty shocked that she was the first person to call me. We weren’t even considered close in H!P.

“Maki, I heard that you’re out today.”

What a redundant comment. “Yes.”

“That’s great! You ought to celebrate! Do you want to have brunch with me?”

Honestly, I wasn’t in the mood to celebrate. I just wanted to escape from this place which held too many memories. But I didn’t have the heart to reject her good intentions so I agreed to it.

Half an hour later, I reached the tiny café located at the outskirts of Tokyo and I saw her seated in a corner. She stood up and waved happily at me when she saw me entering the café. I smiled and I was genuinely happy that someone out there was excited to see me even after all that I had done.

I waved back to her and said with a lilt in my voice, “Hello Rika!”

When I was seated across her in that pretty empty café, she smiled at me and asked, “What do you want to eat? It’s my treat.”

I scanned the menu. It felt good to have a choice again. Before I went into that hellish place, I had always been taking freedom and choice for granted. But now, it was different. I replied, “Mudpie will do.”

Rika called the waiter and ordered. She ordered a glass of orange juice for herself. After the waiter had walked off away from our table, she asked, “What are your plans?”

I was quite taken aback. I didn’t expect her to ask something as serious as this. I answered, “I plan to take the earliest flight and leave for America.”

She said sympathetically, “You must have suffered a lot inside. Poor girl.”

That was exactly why I wanted to avoid everyone and leave for America. I didn’t want to hear these words. I didn’t want to be sympathized by people I knew especially juniors. This just sucked away my pride. I nodded and asked in attempt to change the topic, “How was the gathering this year?” Frankly, I didn’t give that gathering a damn.

I knew I had hit a sensitive topic because I could see sorrow in her eyes once I said that. Maybe that was how my eyes looked like last year when I was with Aya. She always talked about the sadness in them. No, I didn’t have the right to think of her. Anyway, that was strange. There shouldn’t be anything sensitive about the dumb gathering.

After about 10 seconds of silence, she said softly without exchanging any eye contact with me, “Aya came for this year gathering.” She paused. Now she had hit a sensitive topic and she knew that she had as well. She continued, “Aya and Miki are together.”

My eyes widened as I visualized how they held hands on the streets and how they made out on the bed. No, this couldn’t be true. It was too fast. We had just broken up a month ago and now they were together. I was somewhat glad that there was someone loving and looking after her but I was quite shocked at the speed that they got together. Deep inside, I was feeling hurt. It was irrational of me to feel so because I was the one who initiated it and I was the one who broke her heart. How much I wanted to applaud Miki for capitalizing on the situation. I asked, “Are you sure?” It was such a redundant question but I wanted to know more about them.

Rika twisted her lips before she said in that same soft voice, “I’m sure about it.” She stared straight into my eyes before she continued, “How do you feel about it?”

I fell silent. Although I would like to share my feelings with someone, I felt that we weren’t close enough for me to share with her. But it would seem mean of me if I dodged the question. I murmured, “They got together pretty fast.” That was one-third of how I felt then. At least, I told her something.

She nodded knowingly before asking, “Are you fine with them together?”

It was strange that she asked me that. I mean, I never imagined that Rika would ask me something like that. I hesitated before answering honestly, “Yes, I’m fine with it provided that Miki can give Aya happiness. That’s all that I hope for.”

“Maki, do you want to make sure that Miki can give her happiness?”

That was indeed a very strange question. She seemed to be directing our conversation somewhere but I was still unsure where it was. Definitely, I wanted Aya to attain happiness even if I couldn’t give her that. The waiter came and served the mudpie and orange juice. After he left, I nodded with my eyes fixated on the mudpie. Not that I was hungry but I just didn’t want to look at her and give her a chance to trick me with her eyes or something.

“Do you want to test the strength of their love? I mean if they can’t even overcome the obstacle that we set, they won’t be happy in the future. Aya won’t. You want to make sure she has happiness before you leave right?”

“Quite true, but I don’t want to do anything to break Aya’s heart again.” I thought of how she looked like when she found out that I was part of Reina’s project. Tears welled up in my eyes. No, it couldn’t happen again.

“You won’t. You see, Eri and I had sent some hate-mails and prank-called Aya over the past week. The contents just threatened Aya and expressed our dislike and hatred towards Miki. Probably Tsunku will speak to them about the fate of GAM and if their love isn’t strong enough, it will just crumble because of that. Miki will leave Aya. Surely, you don’t want to leave Aya in the hands of such a lousy lover right?”

I shook my head. Her plan didn’t sound professional at all but it should somewhat test their love. But why did she plan something like that? Aya and Miki….they didn’t have any direct connections with her.

She continued, “If you meet up with Aya privately tomorrow before you leave and Miki turns up, it just shows that their love isn’t strong enough and Miki doesn’t trust Aya at all because after all, you are her ex-lover. Do you want to leave Aya in the hands of someone who can’t trust her?” 

I shook my head again. It was painful to hear that I was her ex-lover but I had it upon myself. I felt that it was pretty redundant to take part in the ‘test’ because from what I knew about Miki, she loved Aya crazily. Oh well, but I could just play safe just in case. Anyway, I needed to speak to Aya. I whispered, “Ok, Rika, I’m in it.”

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I was brought back to the reality when I heard a knock on my door. I quickly put on the yukata and opened the door. There was no one. Probably I was hallucinating again because I was thinking of Aya too much. I smiled to myself. I was glad that I participated in that ‘test’. Now, I knew more about Miki that lousy lover and I couldn’t leave Aya in her hands.

'SUPPIN dakara  naite ii desho motto "suki" to ieba yokatta.' Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled how lifeless Aya was when she was in my embrace earlier. I threw the chance away back then. But now, another chance came knocking. Was I wrong to open it?

Then I thought of Rika. Why did she devise such a plan? She liked Yossie. She said she worked with Eri and Eri liked Reina. Ah, now I got it. It was yet again targeted at Miki. This cycle never ends…

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:lol: Charmaki :lol: The flashback part comes in before GAM quarrel and the pa-sway pa-sway ishiyoshi date in case you can't remember XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: zay05ohayou on June 21, 2008, 03:50:20 PM
Hmm.. it is a never ending cycle.. I was just listening to Suppin to Namida a few minutes ago! How convenient!  XD
Ishigoma... very strange.. strange interaction here.. XD
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the pa-sway pa-sway ishiyoshi date in case you can't remember
isn't it pa-sway sway? lol, i'm getting confused.. was that a taglish phrase you used?  :D
the story is going round in circles!! im getting dizzy!!
btw r u gunna put eri and reina povs somewhere in this fic?
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tru_harmony on June 21, 2008, 04:39:03 PM
... Rika, what did you get yourself into? :err:

the pa-sway sway date is the one with the miniskirts, right?

... and Rika was really part of that strangle miki to death?!?! :scared: :imdead:  :mon wtf:

Rika, shame on you... i can't believe this... :stunned:  :pig cry:

this is too much... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

:mon runcry: *back to RFP*
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: kinbari on June 21, 2008, 07:01:29 PM
oh my~!! eri in the prank call thing too???!! lol

Peace
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: Yukari on June 21, 2008, 09:26:22 PM
wow o.o

maki i love you~~ :mon lovelaff:

well, now about the chapter...  :mon dunno:

maki i love you~~ (again, it's like a song in my head now) mmm poor Miki, some people don't like her i suppose, but i don't think it's her fault...  :mon mad:

mm... Charmaki??? i had never saw it i think  :mon huh2: curious

eri loves madly reina actually  :mon star:

and rika is a bad person in this fanfic!! such a bad person...  :mon exhaust:

i believe that really someone knock the door...  :mon pissed:

it's a kind of long comment, but without quotes XD

waiting next chapter!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tito on June 22, 2008, 03:19:58 AM
Morning reply to comments! :)
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the pa-sway pa-sway ishiyoshi date in case you can't remember
isn't it pa-sway sway? lol, i'm getting confused.. was that a taglish phrase you used?  :D
Is it? Damn, sorry my spelling mistake XD I was trying to learn from our one and only RFP writer :D
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the story is going round in circles!! im getting dizzy!!
btw r u gunna put eri and reina povs somewhere in this fic?
Sorry about the dizzy part..I just don't want to put it somewhere in front and spoil the suspense XD
^Not intending to but if the readers want it, I'll write :)
... Rika, what did you get yourself into? :err:

the pa-sway sway date is the one with the miniskirts, right?
Yep, you're right :P
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... and Rika was really part of that strangle miki to death?!?! :scared: :imdead:  :mon wtf:
No, dear, she wasn't. Yossi was just making a big fuss over it back then. It was all Eri's doings :P *Come back alive*
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:mon runcry: *back to RFP*
I'm pretty sure you will run back again :D
oh my~!! eri in the prank call thing too???!! lol

Peace
YEP. She was the person Rika called at the end of Chap 11 :D Peace is what we need.....but angst will be what you get here :lol: :P
wow o.o

maki i love you~~ :mon lovelaff:

well, now about the chapter...  :mon dunno:

maki i love you~~ (again, it's like a song in my head now) mmm poor Miki, some people don't like her i suppose, but i don't think it's her fault...  :mon mad:

mm... Charmaki??? i had never saw it i think  :mon huh2: curious
The monkeys are back~~!! :wahaha: Oh man, you are crazily in love with Maki :P Where is that twin monkey?

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eri loves madly reina actually  :mon star:

and rika is a bad person in this fanfic!! such a bad person...  :mon exhaust:

i believe that really someone knock the door...  :mon pissed:
Kinda fit into the Sukeban image :lol: The door...will that be a ghost? :lol:
Your testament is back :D


Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: Yukari on June 22, 2008, 03:29:36 AM
The monkeys are back~~!! :wahaha: Oh man, you are crazily in love with Maki :P Where is that twin monkey?

well... i don't wanted to worry you but... if you ask... he/she is very sick now... she needs a yomiki transfusion or he/she will die... :mon ref:

oooh poor my monkey brother/sister  :mon cry:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tru_harmony on June 22, 2008, 07:02:17 AM
... ah... okay...

... anyway... yeah, you're right... no matter how many times i run away from this fic, i still kepp on coming back...

*rebuilds Charmy-worship altar* CHARMY-SAMA!!!! make an appearance in this fic once more!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 21 - Definitions of Love
Post by: Ai.love on June 22, 2008, 08:03:16 AM
@Ai.love: I love GAM but when YoMiki is at stake :lol: But you almost won our battle then by hypnotising me with all those flashing monkeys! WAAAAAY COOL! :w00t:

 :lol:

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LOL, I think Ai. love took the monkeys away at one shot *bang*  XD Crazy Yomiki fans :P

 :wahaha:


GAM fighters UNITE!!!!

(http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a63/---Munkee---/Emoticons/thmagi.gif)

It's not just about "Melodies"~  :mon sigh:

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*Click on save image* That's so funny :D For a split second, I wanted to grant your wish. Ok, that split second is gone..tito is sober and rational again :lol: Yeah, there's thanks and lululu and the wonderful futarigoto as well..oh man, how can you forget about that? XD


Aww~ Tito not being sober and unrational is way better for GAM's sake ......  :mon innocent:

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I'm obsessed over the gif as well :) Almost? Go Ai.love!!!! :wub:


time to use an onion once again~  :wahaha:


Now about Chapter 22, all I have to say is that Rika is soo evil~  :mon speechless: and Maki has easily fallen into Rika's plan
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tito on June 22, 2008, 09:32:55 AM
well... i don't wanted to worry you but... if you ask... he/she is very sick now... she needs a yomiki transfusion or he/she will die... :mon ref:

oooh poor my monkey brother/sister  :mon cry:
Go and reread memoir or something XD I love that series :) Hmm...I thought that kiss was enough. You're so greedy!!!!  :mon heh:
... ah... okay...

... anyway... yeah, you're right... no matter how many times i run away from this fic, i still kepp on coming back...

*rebuilds Charmy-worship altar* CHARMY-SAMA!!!! make an appearance in this fic once more!!!
Yeah, you'll run away from the past but I'll keep updating so you will run back again (just being lame XD ) Oh gah, there calls for Yomiki and here prays for Charmy :lol: She'll definitely appear again, fret not! :)
Aww~ Tito not being sober and unrational is way better for GAM's sake ......  :mon innocent:
Hmm...never mind, I'm sober already despite staring at that for I-dunno-how-long :lol: . Speaking of GAM, I've been thinking of them for the last hour or something when I was travelling back home..Cool ideas came to mind :wahaha: I better pen it down before I forget about its coolness :P (LOL, it's tito's definition of coolness XD ) Just a little spoiler or warning here :P IT'S COOL~

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time to use an onion once again~  :wahaha:
Onion, why?

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Now about Chapter 22, all I have to say is that Rika is soo evil~  :mon speechless: and Maki has easily fallen into Rika's plan
Maki is gullible both in real life and here...poor girl :( Evil Rika is kinda cute though *watches Sukeban* Aww... :wub:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: Ai.love on June 22, 2008, 11:01:52 AM
Hmm...I thought that kiss was enough. You're so greedy!!!!  :mon heh:

Does this mean there won't be any YoMiki!?!?  :mon mischief:

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Hmm...never mind, I'm sober already despite staring at that for I-dunno-how-long :lol: . Speaking of GAM, I've been thinking of them for the last hour or something when I was travelling back home..Cool ideas came to mind :wahaha: I better pen it down before I forget about its coolness :P (LOL, it's tito's definition of coolness XD ) Just a little spoiler or warning here :P IT'S COOL~

eh~ coolness? cool? This must mean something pleasant is going to happen, since it's supposebly "cool" right?  :mon fyeah:
Unless
, you mean cool as in, cold and not happyish!?!?  :mon suspect:

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Onion, why?

I like the monkeys better~  :mon sweat:

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Maki is gullible both in real life and here...poor girl :( Evil Rika is kinda cute though *watches Sukeban* Aww... :wub:

Poor Gocchin~  :mon hanky: Rika is still evil and  ....... cute~  :mon ehh:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tito on June 22, 2008, 01:01:39 PM
Super ultra bad news..my comp has decided to die on June 22 6.53pm local time :( Now I'm using another comp but all the drafts and plan are gone! Oh bloody shit luck

Does this mean there won't be any YoMiki!?!?  :mon mischief:
Up for guess :P

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eh~ coolness? cool? This must mean something pleasant is going to happen, since it's supposebly "cool" right?  :mon fyeah:
Unless
, you mean cool as in, cold and not happyish!?!?  :mon suspect:
Let's see how well you know tito :lol:
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Poor Gocchin~  :mon hanky: Rika is still evil and  ....... cute~  :mon ehh:
Funny how we can love and hate someone..hmm...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tru_harmony on June 22, 2008, 01:07:24 PM
... that is ultra bad news...  :( ... man... does this mean we won't find out what's gonna happen within this week?

Oh bloody shit luck...

oh well... more time and attention to studies for the mean time...

Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 22, 2008, 02:44:51 PM
Well, maybe I shouldn't comment out of spite, but I will seeing it's for a good cause, MAKI'S BACK KIDS YAY!!!  :wub:
I'm really glad you used that song too, for obvious reasons :P
As much growing up Maki did in jail, she still has so much to do! She may love Aya but she needs to learn when she should stick her nose and when she just needs to stay out of the way :( I still loooove you Gocchin! :heart:

I honestly don't think Rika is evil... I think she is misunderstood and she honestly thinks she is doing the right thing by her relationship... she's pretty blinded by love, but she's no Reina! I feel for her, and think she needs to concentrate on herself (just like Maki) before she does anymore!

Your 'cool' GAM ideas don't sound good to me, so maybe it's a good thing you lost the plans  :oops: No, I don't mean that... it really sucks so much, you poor thing :( *huggles*

The monkeys are back~~!! :wahaha: Oh man, you are crazily in love with Maki :P Where is that twin monkey?

well... i don't wanted to worry you but... if you ask... he/she is very sick now... she needs a yomiki transfusion or he/she will die... :mon ref:

oooh poor my monkey brother/sister  :mon cry:
:rofl: My dear, you are sooo very cute! I love you :heart: :wub:

Oh bloody shit luck...
:lol: You sound like such a true blue Aussie there XD I'm proud! :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: kRisZ on June 22, 2008, 04:48:57 PM
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^You officially earned the 'most sadistic person' award

is this the time to  :muffin: for earning an award.?.  :dunno:

:mon dunno:  okay, yay! got an award!  :muffin:  :P



your computer's broken... that's  :(
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: Yukari on June 22, 2008, 11:56:52 PM
titoooo poor girl... what happened with you comp?? how die it??  :gmon ringu:

oooh i know!!! he miss my monkey brother so it wanted to go with him  :mon cry:

naah, seriously, it's such a bad what happened with your pc  :mon sweat:

i know... not more yomiki... *go and read when love hurts and memories in one afternoon*  :mon angel:

mm well... gam isn't so bad to me... if Miki is happy with it, i'll support her, like always  :mon determined: same thing to Yossy  :mon innocent:

MAKE THEM HAPPY TITO!!! or the next that will die is you MAUJAJAJAJA *yuko mode on* naa joking  :mon geek:

:rofl: My dear, you are sooo very cute! I love you :heart: :wub:

wiiii you make me happy~~ (actually...happier, 'cause i was happy yet since i read so much yomiki)

i love you too  :mon loveflower:  ;)

still... waiting a update, even if it will be in a year!  :mon yeah:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tito on June 23, 2008, 03:25:23 AM
K, I think I feel much better after reading your comments :P Way to go! :lol:
... that is ultra bad news...  :( ... man... does this mean we won't find out what's gonna happen within this week?

Oh bloody shit luck...

oh well... more time and attention to studies for the mean time...


Yes and hopefully it will not stretch to next week....my freaking exams are ending on this friday. I want to use the weekend to put up another chapter and my brother will never allow me to use his comp for 3 to 4 hours writing it :( Yeah, more time and attention to studies for you and me :P Ok, maybe not you *hints at RFP* :D
Well, maybe I shouldn't comment out of spite, but I will seeing it's for a good cause, MAKI'S BACK KIDS YAY!!!  :wub:
I'm really glad you used that song too, for obvious reasons :P
Yeah, it's all because of you mentioning about singing suppin to namida in front of the mirror :lol: I was searching for a song on projecthello to insert into the scene and subconsciously, I just used suppin to namida XD
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As much growing up Maki did in jail, she still has so much to do! She may love Aya but she needs to learn when she should stick her nose and when she just needs to stay out of the way :( I still loooove you Gocchin! :heart:

I honestly don't think Rika is evil... I think she is misunderstood and she honestly thinks she is doing the right thing by her relationship... she's pretty blinded by love, but she's no Reina! I feel for her, and think she needs to concentrate on herself (just like Maki) before she does anymore!
Hopefully, they take the advice from the pro :P Damn, it's comment like this that makes me wanna write and then go 'hehe, you will see for yourself! :P "
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Your 'cool' GAM ideas don't sound good to me, so maybe it's a good thing you lost the plans  :oops: No, I don't mean that... it really sucks so much, you poor thing :( *huggles*
*Accepts huggles* I just wrote that idea down on a hard copy..unless you sneak into my house and steal that, I doubt it will change! Coolness :P
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Oh bloody shit luck...
:lol: You sound like such a true blue Aussie there XD I'm proud! :D
Someone's influence! :heart:
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^You officially earned the 'most sadistic person' award

is this the time to  :muffin: for earning an award.?.  :dunno:

:mon dunno:  okay, yay! got an award!  :muffin:  :P
This is so hilarious! Let's see.....maybe I'll hold the award ceremony another day...maybe you won't be soon :P
titoooo poor girl... what happened with you comp?? how die it??  :gmon ringu:

oooh i know!!! he miss my monkey brother so it wanted to go with him  :mon cry:

naah, seriously, it's such a bad what happened with your pc  :mon sweat:
I don't know. I was reading RFP and suddenly it hung and I restarted it manually because it wasn't responding at all and then, it just gave out this weird sound and *pang*  :cry: That monkey brother died as well?

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MAKE THEM HAPPY TITO!!! or the next that will die is you MAUJAJAJAJA *yuko mode on* naa joking  :mon geek:
:wahaha: I love Yuko, I don't fear her! :wahaha:
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still... waiting a update, even if it will be in a year!  :mon yeah:
Yeah, that's the attitude :P *pray that the guy whoever he is can repair my comp* :mon prayer:
EDIT: Yuki, your sig is enchanting me like a magic spell or something. Oh damn.  :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tru_harmony on June 23, 2008, 03:33:18 AM
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I don't know. I was reading RFP and suddenly it hung and I restarted it manually because it wasn't responding at all and then, it just gave out this weird sound and *pang*

OMG!!! IT'S MY FAULT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'M SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: JFC on June 23, 2008, 11:49:43 PM
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The answer is somewhere in the analogy :D
Oh, don't tell me Aya's going to suggest she and Miki do like Ross and Rachel did near the end of the second season?  :bleed eyes:


F.Y.I

Chapter 22

Never-ending Cycle


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Maybe all that I could do now was to try my best to convince the devil in me to resort to any method to make sure that the very one whom I loved would attain happiness. That’s the least I could do for her.
BUT! With whom would said happiness be? Is Maki truely going to be able to do this if it means "losing" Aya to Miki?



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I was in the taxi heading towards the airport when she called. “Hello,” I said. I was pretty shocked that she was the first person to call me. We weren’t even considered close in H!P.
Damn, so Rika was the one that convinced Maki to do "the test." :O



This is the second time that Maki's allowed herself to be manipulated/used in someone else's plan.  First it was Reina who wanted to stir shit up so she could take Miki's "spot" in MM, and now Rika's wanting her to help find out about their (Miki/Aya/Yossi) relationships (when she SHOULD be trying to make things better within her own).



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“Aya and Miki are together.”

My eyes widened as I visualized how they held hands on the streets and how they made out on the bed. No, this couldn’t be true. It was too fast. We had just broken up a month ago and now they were together
Ah, so Maki didn't know about them? It must have then been the surprise of the revelation that made her agree to do what she did.



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“Do you want to test the strength of their love? I mean if they can’t even overcome the obstacle that we set, they won’t be happy in the future. Aya won’t. You want to make sure she has happiness before you leave right?”
Oh fuck that's sneaky. And it's not even the real/true intentions of it to begin with. We all know what Rika's focus is; she could care less about Miki or Aya's happiness.



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Eri and I had sent some hate-mails and prank-called Aya over the past week. The contents just threatened Aya and expressed our dislike and hatred towards Miki. Probably Tsunku will speak to them about the fate of GAM and if their love isn’t strong enough, it will just crumble because of that. Miki will leave Aya. Surely, you don’t want to leave Aya in the hands of such a lousy lover right?”
WTF?
:hip blink:

That doesn't make any sense at all. How the hell did Rika come to that conclusion? If anything, it would bring the 2 of them closer together. Think about it, would Rika leave Yossi if someone had been sending her anti-Yossi hate-mail? Fuck no. 

Now it makes sense why Rika's plan backfired on her. She's not thinking rationally and quite frankly, being really stupid.



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I shook my head. Her plan didn’t sound professional at all but it should somewhat test their love. But why did she plan something like that? Aya and Miki….they didn’t have any direct connections with her.
The lack of connection should have been enough to convince Maki to NOT take part in such a hair-brained scheme. There's NO way that a plan like that would ever do ANYTHING but hurt everyone who was affected by it.



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Now, I knew more about Miki that lousy lover and I couldn’t leave Aya in her hands.

...

Tears ran down my cheeks as I recalled how lifeless Aya was when she was in my embrace earlier. I threw the chance away back then. But now, another chance came knocking. Was I wrong to open it?
Oh no...Maki missed the whole point of what happened.
:mon oshitwc:



Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: tito on June 24, 2008, 02:48:51 AM
@tru: Not your fault really!

It's a sin not to reply to your epic comment ^
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The answer is somewhere in the analogy :D
Oh, don't tell me Aya's going to suggest she and Miki do like Ross and Rachel did near the end of the second season?  :bleed eyes:
Damn, I never catch FRIENDS :( I seriously went to google for it but I still don't know what happened then... XD
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BUT! With whom would said happiness be? Is Maki truely going to be able to do this if it means "losing" Aya to Miki?
Really good question. Keep it in mind as you read the subsequent chapters :D

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This is the second time that Maki's allowed herself to be manipulated/used in someone else's plan.  First it was Reina who wanted to stir shit up so she could take Miki's "spot" in MM, and now Rika's wanting her to help find out about their (Miki/Aya/Yossi) relationships (when she SHOULD be trying to make things better within her own).

Yeah, Rika just didn't want Yossi to know that she was coming up with something funny by asking Maki to help her because after all, Aya and Yossi are not really directly related.
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That doesn't make any sense at all. How the hell did Rika come to that conclusion? If anything, it would bring the 2 of them closer together. Think about it, would Rika leave Yossi if someone had been sending her anti-Yossi hate-mail? Fuck no. 

Now it makes sense why Rika's plan backfired on her. She's not thinking rationally and quite frankly, being really stupid.
You're right that it will make them even closer. That's what Rika wants. She wants Miki to be as far away from Yossi as possible....so the one who was senseless was the one who was obsessed over Aya's happiness and had a subconscious feeling that Miki wasn't the one for Aya. Yeah.
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Oh no...Maki missed the whole point of what happened.
:mon oshitwc:
Yeah pretty much. ;)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 22 - Never-ending Cycle
Post by: Ai.love on June 25, 2008, 11:34:34 PM
Super ultra bad news..my comp has decided to die on June 22 6.53pm local time :( Now I'm using another comp but all the drafts and plan are gone! Oh bloody shit luck

This really sucks~ I know how it feels ....... :mon hanky:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: tito on June 28, 2008, 03:36:28 AM
This chapter turns out way longer than I expected. Sorry to keep you waiting in suspense...hmm, this is for Aya as a birthday gift! (Ok she may not like it, I think :grin: whatever) It's pretty hard to sneak onto my brother's or my dad's comp and type this though. Good thing my brother isn't at home now and I can use his comp to complete the chapter. On a side note, 23 is my favourite number so I hope you will like this chapter!

F.Y.I

Chapter 23

Pact

December 25 (11.02am)

“I’m sorry…”

“Don’t apologise. There’s no need for apologies. I love you.” she whispered before she pressed her lips against that of the older girl. Their tongues intertwined and the younger girl sneaked her hand under the other’s blouse and moved its way up…
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“Konya arigatou mata aeru darou” The chorus of Thanks! played and she opened her eyes reluctantly. This was perhaps the first time she disliked the song. What timing.

She picked up her handphone lying on the side-table and yelled into the phone, “Hello!”

“Merry Christmas!” The female caller exclaimed excitedly.

“Merry your ass,” Miki snapped.

“Hey why are you been snappy today? You told me to call you-”

“No, I didn’t!” Miki shouted and she clenched her fists. She took the phone away from her ears for a split second and look at the caller ID. No, that number wasn’t in her contacts. Who the hell changed her phone and number on Christmas? Who the hell thought that she was supposed to call Miki at 11 am on Christmas?

Just when she was about to ask for the caller’s identity, the caller said in a muffled voice, “Why are you like that? I got you Mikitty’s photobook – COEUR with her autograph on it for Christmas this year you know. Do you know how hard it is to get her autograph? You should be happy, Yumiko-”

“Mikitty rocks but you got the wrong number,” Miki commented flatly before she hung up.

She gazed at the bottom left drawer near the window where she kept her own albums, singles and photobooks. She didn’t treasure them as much as she treasured Aya’s items with her autograph and personal messages on them. But those albums, singles and photobooks of her own with that trademark signature meant a lot to many others.

This was exactly why she joined H!P. She wanted to influence and make an impact on others’ lives just like the artists who had made an impact on hers. Because of the hectic lifestyle of an idol and the worries that come with that icon, many a times, she forgot her reason behind joining this company. The reason for joining and staying in the project had somehow simplified itself over the years into just one word – Aya. In a way, it seemed like a dream as it started off with admiration then friendship and now love. She wondered how the dream would end. Would it even end? She hoped not.

She thought back on the dream that she just had and smiled to herself. It seemed to be a simpler world in her dreams. Why was reality so much more complicated? She stared out of the window. There were little children running around on the streets and their parents were lagging behind them with their arms locked together. Bliss was definitely in the air. There were bits of fluffs hanging on the sky with the sun shining brightly near its noon position. Good weather ahead.

 There were five more hours before the Christmas date with Aya. She didn’t anticipate it as much as she dreaded it. She prayed that it would turn out as well as the weather was today.
 
She trudged out of her room and switched on the TV in an attempt to kill time. The female broadcaster reported that there would be snow later in the afternoon. “What a joke,” she murmured to herself. She caught a glimpse of the disc lying on top of the TV set and she smiled to herself. She wondered aloud to herself, “Will that last us through winter?”
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December 25 (2.12pm)

Aya walked briskly along the empty corridor with her eyes fixated on the blue heart-shaped clock pendant that was in her hands. She was elated that she could find the clock pendant which she earlier thought she had lost. Last night, she had searched her entire apartment for this item but she couldn’t find it. She only remembered around midnight that she had left it in the studio the other day as she was afraid that Miki would find the gift before Christmas if she left it lying in her apartment. There wasn’t anyone in the studio though. Who would be at her workplace on Christmas unless a concert was coming up?

She smiled with her eyes still fixed on the pendant clock which she had taken hours to choose. Blue was the colour that Miki always took when they bought things in pairs; heart represented their love and clock served to remind her of their shared timeless love. Would the pendant clock be of significance after the events that unfolded yesterday?

When she walked past one of the studios, she could hear chatter in it and the lights were switched on in the room. Curious, she peeked through the gap left between the wall and the half-open door and she wasn’t really surprised to see the 2 members of the 5th generation alone in the nicely decorated room. There were red and green balloons hanging on the ceilings and walls of the room and the 2 girls were close together in the middle of it. The scene seemed too fairy-tale like to be true.

Ai wore a necklace around Risa’s neck slowly like a gentleman to a lady and Risa just closed her eyes enjoying that special moment. After Ai hooked the ends of the necklace up, she planted a kiss on Risa’s right cheek. Risa’s face immediately turned red and she opened her eyes.

Risa looked at herself in the gigantic mirror plastered on the wall right in front of her and she smiled widely and commented, “The necklace looks nice on me! It really suits me! Did you buy a matching one?” Ai nodded shyly. “Do you have it now? I want to put it on for you…” Risa whispered slyly.

Ai took out an identical necklace and passed it to Risa. Risa took the necklace and began wearing it around the other girl’s neck and attempted to imitate the other girl’s actions. Ai’s eyes were fixed on Risa and she could feel the other girl’s breathing as their bodies neared. “Ai-chan, close your eyes,” Risa commanded cheekily probably trying to imitate Miki.

“But I want to look at you,” Ai replied with her unwavering eyes still fixed on the other girl. Ai placed her arms around Risa’s waist and she ran her fingers up and down the other girl’s back in an attempt to make this moment even more sensual. Risa shook her head with a grin plastered on her face. She was loving the moment with the leader. After she had hooked the ends of the necklace, she stared straight into Ai’s eyes and mouthed the words, “Merry Christmas.” She then leaned towards her best friend and kissed her on the lips.

Aya could no longer stand watching the two girls anymore and she walked off away from the room. She made a conscious attempt to drag her feet so as to remind the girls to close the door properly. It was just painful to watch the girls smooching as the friendship between the 2 girls bore too much resemblance with that between her and Miki.

She remembered that they spent the first Christmas together at the park near Miki’s place 6 years ago when Miki joined the project. Miki bought a pair of matching bracelets and she remembered that she insisted that she wanted the one with the small pink heart on it. That was when they made that pact – a simple yet unforgettable pact. She wondered, “If things between us can become simple again, probably it will form part of our shared unforgettable memories. Will it?”
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December 25 (3.55pm)

Miki sat on the bench in that park near her place that they did on the 1st Christmas that they spent together and she could visualise how Christmas was spent 6 years ago. On that very 1st Christmas, she took out a pair of matching bracelets and told Aya to pick the one she liked and she would settle for the other one. She could still remember that Aya chose the one with the small pink heart on it and she took the one with the diamond. Then, they put the bracelets on for each other – Aya wore on her left hand while Miki wore on her right. After giggling and putting the bracelets on for the other, they held hands and the bracelets hit onto each other and produced the sharp metal sound. It was at that symbolical moment when they made that simple pact.   

There were families with children strolling leisurely in the park and a group of high-school girls sat on another bench several metres away and chatted idly. They seemed to be so carefree as though there weren’t any problems in their lives. Even if there were problems, they had momentarily forgotten about them on Christmas Day. She couldn’t bring herself to do that. She couldn’t sweep away the problems and burdens swirling in her mind now.

She glanced at her watch. It was 5 minutes to four. She wondered what Aya would say to her. Would Aya say the thing that she dreaded? This wasn’t Miki-like to worry about a problem like that. Normally, she would take things into her own hands and solve any problems that came her way on her own. That was why she always felt that she was a different person when it came to Aya. But she enjoyed being different.

She began to compose a speech in her mind: “Aya-chan, I’m sorry about what I did yesterday. I know I have disappoint you with my childish and reckless actions. I’m really sorry about that. I don’t expect you to forgive me but I hope that you know that I love you more than myself. Please don’t leave me.” This was really cliché and mushy in a sense but she swore to herself that she would say that. Who cared about image when Aya was at stake?

Just when she was rehearsing the speech in her mind for the 3rd time, she saw Aya walking up to her from afar and she felt the butterflies fluttering in her stomach. It was as though this was their first date. She couldn’t read Aya’s emotions from her facial expression clearly. Aya seemed to be deep in thoughts and that meant that she was probably rehearsing a speech in her mind as well.

When Aya was within metres from her, Miki smiled as widely as she could, waved and greeted, “Hello Aya-chan. Merry Christmas!”

Aya smiled back and said rather graciously, “Merry Christmas to you too!” Aya then took out the blue heart-shaped clock pendant from her rather empty bag and said sweetly, “This is for you.”

Miki took the clock pendant and examined it in awe. It was not the most fabulous thing that she had ever seen but it was perhaps one of the most important gifts she had received in her life. “Thank you,” Miki said sincerely. She truly appreciated it. She fidgeted with the contents in her bag trying to find the disc. When she eventually found the disc, she held onto it in her bag and she hid it from Aya’s view as she wanted to give Aya a surprise. She smiled and whispered, “Aya-”

“Miki-tan, let me do the talking for today ok?” Miki nodded reluctantly wondering what Aya would say. There wasn’t even the tiniest smile on her face when she said, “Today let’s be honest with each other and not even keep a single thought to ourselves, ok?”

“Some form of trash talk?”

Aya twisted her lips and replied, “Something like that.”

“Ok.” Miki let go of the disc in her bag. This would probably take some time. This wasn’t the best situation for her. She might end up saying hurting words and worsen the situation. Fujimoto Miki, you aren’t gonna be obsessed with the idea of trash-talking and start rambling. Let Aya-chan do the talking.

 “Miki-tan, you know Japanese always like to squeeze into lifts no matter how packed they are. Think about it, it’s quite dumb.  From young, we were taught this was the way of life and when we saw people around us doing so, we squeezed in as well. Why do we force ourselves into such uncomfortable situations just because it seems right for us to do it?”

“What’s your point?” Force; uncomfortable situations; seems right….No, this seems bad. I have a stinky feeling about this.

“My point is most of the time when we squeeze into those packed lifts, we don’t keep in mind the reason for us to do so which is to save time or something. It just seems to be something natural-”

“What’s your point?” Hurry up Aya! Get to your point!

“My point is if we see those packed lifts as our love, I think we have forgotten why we love each other in the first place.”

“I still remember.”

“Don’t be so certain about it. Think about it. We ought to do something unJapanese in our relationship.”

“What do you mean by that?” This is getting scary. I don’t want to hear…

“Now I give you 2 options. 1, let’s miss this packed lift and give ourselves time to think whether we want to catch it or not the next time. So that means let’s not be seeing each other for, say, the next 30 days. Let’s use the time to think about our relationship and the sources of the problems in it and after exactly 30 days, we’ll meet up again and see whether we still love each other. If we cannot even pass this test of time, I doubt we can last forever.”

“And 2 is?”

Aya closed her eyes in an attempt to summon courage to say this. She dreaded saying this. “2, let’s just not take the lift and maybe take stairs instead. It means let’s call it quits today.”

Miki’s heart sank when she heard that. She thought, “I wasn’t left with much of an option to choose from. So ending us is one of the options? I should have guessed as much. After all, I was different from Goto Maki.”

“So what are you thinking about?” Aya spoke gently.

Miki remained silent. This wasn’t the correct time to be honest about her thoughts. Not when she was thinking about something like that. Maybe I can just inform Aya that I choose option 1 to change the topic. “Aya-chan, I choose-”

Aya stared straight into her eyes and said in an authoritative voice, “I said we need to be honest about our thoughts, right?”

She read what I was thinking of already. There is no point keeping it from her. It will only breach her trust if I do so. Miki gazed at the grass patch right in front of the bench and murmured, “If I were Gocchin, you wouldn’t have option 2 up there, right?”

“What-”

“You will beg me to stay with you and you will love me forever no matter how many times I cheat you.”

Aya’s eyes widened. From that look on her face, I knew Maki was in her mind but I didn’t expect her to say something like that. I still love you for your honesty, Miki-tan. “No, you can’t say that! It’s not exactly the same case.” Oh crap, that doesn’t sound convincing in any way.

“I see.”

Aya gazed at the huge clouds hanging above them. It seemed as though it was about to snow in any time. Now, it’s my turn to be honest. She said, “Sometimes I just find it hard to love you because I’m unable to match the intensity of your love you know?”

Miki shook her head. “It’s not that you are unable to match but you are unwilling to love. To be fair, it was the same case with Goto. But the difference is because we are on the same plane in our relationship so I expect some form of reciprocation. But Goto lied to you and she felt guilty about it so she didn’t expect you to reciprocate at all. If you did, that was just a bonus.”

Tears welled up in Aya’s eyes. Miki had hit a very sensitive topic. How could she compare love like that? Aya stared at Miki with the teary yet accusing pair of eyes and shouted, “So you think that I never give anything into our relationship? Anyway, we aren’t on the same plane. I don’t even know which plane you are on. I don’t have that detective mind of yours so I find it hard to complement to you and you just flare up at me whenever I don’t!”

Miki fell silent. What Aya just said was true. She knew she was not the easiest person on earth for another to complement to. Small snowflakes were falling from the sky and it stained some parts of her black overcoat white instantaneously. It snowed in the afternoon after all. Weather is so unpredictable.

Aya gazed at the snowflakes falling and smiled weakly. She commented more to herself than to Miki, “There weren’t so many problems between us in the past when we weren’t together in this way.”

“What are you implying?” Miki asked nervously. Was she hinting about Option 2?

“Nothing, I was just wondering. Because you are still you, you are still as short-tempered as before but in the past we really didn’t have so many problems. In a way, I miss those days when we were friends because when we see each other as friends, I can accept you-”

Miki interrupted, “Aya, you know something? I never see you as a friend at all. I love you right from the start.”

“Then why did you take so many years to tell me?”

“I told you before but I’ll tell you again. I’m afraid of losing you because I thought firstly, you may not like girls and secondly, you may not like me. Today I discovered a third point that is even though you like girls and you like me, you’re selfish and you prefer to be loved unrequitedly like what I did to you in the past, Ayaya.”

Miki knew where the strings were and those words hit those strings pretty hard with her words. She felt angered by those words not just because it was spoken with such sarcasm but because all that Aya had felt for her and given in their relationship didn’t seem to be noticed by the older girl at all. She made it sound as though it was an eternal unrequited love.

Aya bellowed, “What about you? Don’t speak of yourself as though you’re a sage! Did you come up with the whole detective plan of yours because of your love for me or because you wanted to win?”

Less than a second after she had completed her sentence, she felt a sharp pain on her right cheek. She didn’t quite catch the movement of Miki’s hand across her face though. Miki was so fast, so professional and…so hurt. It was the first time in her life that Miki slapped her.

Miki glared at her with tears welling up in her eyes. She had never experienced such pain before. Words almost killed her. Fujimoto Miki 1 – Matsuura Aya 1.

Aya attempted to read the words off Miki’s facial expression. She was probably thinking, “So that thought has been lurking at the back of her mind, huh?” Miki nodded as though she had conceded defeat and her eyes wandered off to the trail leading back to her apartment for a split second before she shot Aya another deadly glare and ran off. She meant, “Don’t chase after me.”

As Miki ran off, something fell out of her bag and Aya trudged over to pick it up. It was a disc and on its disc cover, it wrote in bright pink ink, “Merry Christmas Aya-chan! From me to you, momoiro kataomoi…” There was the trademark heart-shaped signature at the end which held so many memories and so much meaning.

Aya kneeled on the ground and burst out in tears. She scolded herself in her head, “I shouldn’t have said that. It must have hurt her to a great extent. Why did those words even come out of my mouth? I love you…why didn’t I say that instead? It is my fault that I make it feel like an eternal momoiro kataomoi even if we are now in a relationship. I can almost hear Miki singing ‘zutto suki de ii desu ka’ right now. Will I even have the chance to hear that after breaking her heart like that?”

The snow was getting heavier and one child, who was running, slipped and the candies in his hands fell onto the ground. Things were falling out of her hands as well. She gazed at the empty bench which they were seated on earlier and she could almost see the 2 short-haired girls in front of her hand-in-hand wearing matching bracelets in silence right now and in unison, the 2 girls declared and made a pact, “Let’s stay like this forever…”
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: zay05ohayou on June 28, 2008, 04:24:11 AM
Wow! Very intense chapter!

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“I’m sorry…”

“Don’t apologise. There’s no need for apologies. I love you.” she whispered before she pressed her lips against that of the older girl. Their tongues intertwined and the younger girl sneaked her hand under the other’s blouse and moved its way up…
Ishiyoshi?!?!  :w00t:

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“No, I didn’t!” Miki shouted and she clenched her fists. She took the phone away from her ears for a split second and look at the caller ID. No, that number wasn’t in her contacts. Who the hell changed her phone and number on Christmas? Who the hell thought that she was supposed to call Miki at 11 am on Christmas?

Just when she was about to ask for the caller’s identity, the caller said in a muffled voice, “Why are you like that? I got you Mikitty’s photobook – COEUR with her autograph on it for Christmas this year you know. Do you know how hard it is to get her autograph? You should be happy, Yumiko-”

“Mikitty rocks but you got the wrong number,” Miki commented flatly before she hung up.
Omgsh! Is that one of those 'Sorry, wrong number!'  :lol:

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There were five more hours before the Christmas date with Aya. She didn’t anticipate it as much as she dreaded it. She prayed that it would turn out as well as the weather was today.
 
She trudged out of her room and switched on the TV in an attempt to kill time. The female broadcaster reported that there would be snow later in the afternoon. “What a joke,” she murmured to herself. She caught a glimpse of the disc lying on top of the TV set and she smiled to herself. She wondered aloud to herself, “Will that last us through winter?”
Damn...  :(

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Aya could no longer stand watching the two girls anymore and she walked off away from the room. She made a conscious attempt to drag her feet so as to remind the girls to close the door properly. It was just painful to watch the girls smooching as the friendship between the 2 girls bore too much resemblance with that between her and Miki.

She remembered that they spent the first Christmas together at the park near Miki’s place 6 years ago when Miki joined the project. Miki bought a pair of matching bracelets and she remembered that she insisted that she wanted the one with the small pink heart on it. That was when they made that pact – a simple yet unforgettable pact. She wondered, “If things between us can become simple again, probably it will form part of our shared unforgettable memories. Will it?”
She couldn't bare the TakaGaki goodness.. GAM is what she needs..  :cry:

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Miki sat on the bench in that park near her place that they did on the 1st Christmas that they spent together and she could visualise how Christmas was spent 6 years ago. On that very 1st Christmas, she took out a pair of matching bracelets and told Aya to pick the one she liked and she would settle for the other one. She could still remember that Aya chose the one with the small pink heart on it and she took the one with the diamond. Then, they put the bracelets on for each other – Aya wore on her left hand while Miki wore on her right. After giggling and putting the bracelets on for the other, they held hands and the bracelets hit onto each other and produced the sharp metal sound. It was at that symbolical moment when they made that simple pact.   
They're sharing the same memories! Aw....  :(  :wub:

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When she eventually found the disc, she held onto it in her bag and she hid it from Aya’s view as she wanted to give Aya a surprise. She smiled and whispered, “Aya-”

“Miki-tan, let me do the talking for today ok?” Miki nodded reluctantly wondering what Aya would say. There wasn’t even the tiniest smile on her face when she said, “Today let’s be honest with each other and not even keep a single thought to ourselves, ok?”
Shoot..  :O Don't like where this is going..

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“Now I give you 2 options. 1, let’s miss this packed lift and give ourselves time to think whether we want to catch it or not the next time. So that means let’s not be seeing each other for, say, the next 30 days. Let’s use the time to think about our relationship and the sources of the problems in it and after exactly 30 days, we’ll meet up again and see whether we still love each other. If we cannot even pass this test of time, I doubt we can last forever.”

“And 2 is?”

Aya closed her eyes in an attempt to summon courage to say this. She dreaded saying this. “2, let’s just not take the lift and maybe take stairs instead. It means let’s call it quits today.”

Miki’s heart sank when she heard that. She thought, “I wasn’t left with much of an option to choose from. So ending us is one of the options? I should have guessed as much. After all, I was different from Goto Maki.”
Darn it Aya! What are you doing?! Just spend christmas together!!!  :angry:

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She read what I was thinking of already. There is no point keeping it from her. It will only breach her trust if I do so. Miki gazed at the grass patch right in front of the bench and murmured, “If I were Gocchin, you wouldn’t have option 2 up there, right?”

“What-”

“You will beg me to stay with you and you will love me forever no matter how many times I cheat you.”

Aya’s eyes widened. From that look on her face, I knew Maki was in her mind but I didn’t expect her to say something like that. I still love you for your honesty, Miki-tan. “No, you can’t say that! It’s not exactly the same case.” Oh crap, that doesn’t sound convincing in any way.

“I see.”
Omgsh!!! Stop it... They're just making it even harder for themselves... Geez..

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As Miki ran off, something fell out of her bag and Aya trudged over to pick it up. It was a disc and on its disc cover, it wrote in bright pink ink, “Merry Christmas Aya-chan! From me to you, momoiro kataomoi…” There was the trademark heart-shaped signature at the end which held so many memories and so much meaning.

Aya kneeled on the ground and burst out in tears. She scolded herself in her head, “I shouldn’t have said that. It must have hurt her to a great extent. Why did those words even come out of my mouth? I love you…why didn’t I say that instead? It is my fault that I make it feel like an eternal momoiro kataomoi even if we are now in a relationship. I can almost hear Miki singing ‘zutto suki de ii desu ka’ right now. Will I even have the chance to hear that after breaking her heart like that?”
Damn right! You two are both crazy!! Now look what happened..  :banghead:

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The snow was getting heavier and one child, who was running, slipped and the candies in his hands fell onto the ground. Things were falling out of her hands as well. She gazed at the empty bench which they were seated on earlier and she could almost see the 2 short-haired girls in front of her hand-in-hand wearing matching bracelets in silence right now and in unison, the 2 girls declared and made a pact, “Let’s stay like this forever…”
:k-sad: Nooooo~ U shouldn't be seeing the two of you!!! Ur suppose to do it again!! Not relive it!!  :k-sad:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: Yukari on June 28, 2008, 05:49:31 AM
woo it was so sad  :mon exhaust:

poor GAM, they were better as friends...

i want to read what will happen with rika and yossy now  :rockon:

(sorry, it isn't a long comment, but i don't have so much time like before  :cry:)

waiting a update!!  :mon lovelaff:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: tru_harmony on June 28, 2008, 06:13:31 AM
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December 25 (11.02am)

“I’m sorry…”

“Don’t apologise. There’s no need for apologies. I love you.” she whispered before she pressed her lips against that of the older girl. Their tongues intertwined and the younger girl sneaked her hand under the other’s blouse and moved its way up…

this HAS to be IshiYoshi  :shakeit: ... Tell me it is!  :cow: Please tell me it is!!!!!

GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

 :twisted: *demonic possession moment*

*grabs hacksaw from suspense and hacks suspense to pieces*  :twisted: ~tito~ .... ~where are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~?~ :twisted:
*demonic possession moment over*

. :? .. eh? ... what am i doing with this hacksaw? ... ... suspense? ... OH, MY GOD!!!! ... is suspense dead? ... ... it's moving... ... *drops hacksaw*

*runs away from the recently ressurrected suspense*
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

this doesn't sound right... they're not supposed to be kissing and reaching into blouses yet... they're supposed to be talking...

tito... explain.

btw, I missed reading a fresh F.Y.I chapter...

man, ayaya and miki are fighting again... how would this turn out?!

I pray for the results of your exams, may they be as high as.. um... ... ... ... i don't know...  XD i just hope you aced it...  :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 28, 2008, 06:24:43 AM
Yuki, I'll try to make up for your shorter post this time ;)

Will it ever end :mon cry: :mon waterworks: :pleeease:
Firstly YYYYYAAAAYYYY for TakaGaki, now everyone else in this story, that is love :heart: :wub: :gmon love2:
Awww I just can't help smiling at the thought of those two :oops:

Aya, I think I hate you again :angry: ... How could you accuse Miki of almost dying just to win, sure that may have been on her mind, but why did she want to win against Maki, COZ SHE LOVES YOU, YOU BIG IDIOT!!! (unfortunately she does  :cry: )
Miki, how can you let her keep hurting you so much and still wanna be with her, you don't deserve that pain as much as you think you do :( You've been together for a month (?) and not once have you seriously been able to work through one damn issue, there is no one option 1 would be good for you! Not seeing each other for a month, of course you will miss the other, you're best friends and once again you'd confuse that for something more... For Aya, it's one thing to love someone, but it's a whole other thing to be in love with them! I know you love Miki so do the right thing by her and let her go :mon surr:

Furthermore, Miki is very right, Aya wouldn't have given option 2 to Maki and the Yaya knows it. She was/is blinded by anything Maki does to hurt her and will always pine for her despite, that's part of being in love (stupidly)... Wake up and smell the pretty roses girls :mon mad: :mon headbang:

If the first part is IshiYoshi, why is Rika apologising, hmmm... (seeing it was the younger one who said the second line and kissed the older)  :hehehe: :mon huh2:

Why don't any of them think to ask TakaGaki how to love and be loved successful, they all know how good those two are at it and they can't say it's coz they are too young to understand, Ai and Aya are the same... Maturity wise you could argue Ai is lower then her age would suggest BUT going by the 'logic' of Aya, vengeful kiss by Miki, massively stupid letters and phone calls from Rika and Yossy's inability to love at all, I think Ai has the upper hand on all of them... Ah TakaGaki how I love you so :mon lovelaff:

At tito, Yuki, Zay, tru, sweeety (I know your hiding), Ai.Love (ever though ur a GAM fan here :P ), kRisz, JFC and any other regulars of this thread that I have forgotten, I looove you all  :mon loveflower: :gmon heartu: :mon cheek: :mon bleed2: :mon hanky:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: tito on June 28, 2008, 11:13:44 AM
Yeah, I got my new comp already! :wub: Replies to comments time! Such a joke, I'm saving my old chapters.. XD
Ishiyoshi?!?!  :w00t:
Nope...:P
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Omgsh! Is that one of those 'Sorry, wrong number!'  :lol:
That's short-form for 'oh my god shit' right? :lol: Yeah, it is.
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She couldn't bare the TakaGaki goodness.. GAM is what she needs..  :cry:
Totally in sync with lollipopgirl :D

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Darn it Aya! What are you doing?! Just spend christmas together!!!  :angry:
She probably reckoned that there were things to 'settle' and there's no need to push it to some other days :o
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Omgsh!!!
zay's way of cursing :P
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:k-sad: Nooooo~ U shouldn't be seeing the two of you!!! Ur suppose to do it again!! Not relive it!!  :k-sad:
Yeah..:(  :)
woo it was so sad  :mon exhaust:

poor GAM, they were better as friends...

i want to read what will happen with rika and yossy now  :rockon:

(sorry, it isn't a long comment, but i don't have so much time like before  :cry:)

waiting a update!!  :mon lovelaff:
Poor Yuki, is it wrong for me to pray for strike again? :P Nice that even though you are busy, you still pop into this thread! :grin: It makes me touched! Yeah, I'll work on ishiyoshi but please be mentally prepared! :P
this HAS to be IshiYoshi  :shakeit: ... Tell me it is!  :cow: Please tell me it is!!!!!

GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

 :twisted: *demonic possession moment*

*grabs hacksaw from suspense and hacks suspense to pieces*  :twisted: ~tito~ .... ~where are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~?~ :twisted:
*demonic possession moment over*

. :? .. eh? ... what am i doing with this hacksaw? ... ... suspense? ... OH, MY GOD!!!! ... is suspense dead? ... ... it's moving... ... *drops hacksaw*
Hmm...I know I might risk getting killed but I must tell you for the sake of a better world that's NOT ishiyoshi. *Waits for the hacksaw to fly past me* Oh wait, I need to pray that it will fly past me and not straight at me first. :lol:

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*runs away from the recently ressurrected suspense*
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Run run to RFP :P

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btw, I missed reading a fresh F.Y.I chapter...
Aww..tito is touched again :wub: VERY.

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man, ayaya and miki are fighting again... how would this turn out?!
Suspense...............

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I pray for the results of your exams, may they be as high as.. um... ... ... ... i don't know...  XD i just hope you aced it...  :D
Thanks! :D In the meantime, I will...I can't do anything can I? Maybe pray or....oh yes, I should write :P
Yuki, I'll try to make up for your shorter post this time ;)
Secret talk huh? I caught ya! XD
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Will it ever end :mon cry: :mon waterworks: :pleeease:
Hmmm....let's see, the ending is within sight already..
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Firstly YYYYYAAAAYYYY for TakaGaki, now everyone else in this story, that is love :heart: :wub: :gmon love2:
Awww I just can't help smiling at the thought of those two :oops:
Aha, that part is totally dedicated to you..serious! are you touched? :wub:
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Aya, I think I hate you again :angry: ... How could you accuse Miki of almost dying just to win, sure that may have been on her mind, but why did she want to win against Maki, COZ SHE LOVES YOU, YOU BIG IDIOT!!! (unfortunately she does  :cry: )
Miki, how can you let her keep hurting you so much and still wanna be with her, you don't deserve that pain as much as you think you do :( You've been together for a month (?) and not once have you seriously been able to work through one damn issue, there is no one option 1 would be good for you! Not seeing each other for a month, of course you will miss the other, you're best friends and once again you'd confuse that for something more... For Aya, it's one thing to love someone, but it's a whole other thing to be in love with them! I know you love Miki so do the right thing by her and let her go :mon surr:
Yeah, listen to the pro :) Last night when I was typing that part, I could imagine that you will shoot Aya like that (sort of) :lol:
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Furthermore, Miki is very right, Aya wouldn't have given option 2 to Maki and the Yaya knows it. She was/is blinded by anything Maki does to hurt her and will always pine for her despite, that's part of being in love (stupidly)... Wake up and smell the pretty roses girls :mon mad: :mon headbang:
  :rofl: 'Yaya' is so funny... :lol: Hmm...I love your sarcasm towards Aya in a way  ;) . Damn, I don't ought to feel this way..

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Why don't any of them think to ask TakaGaki how to love and be loved successful, they all know how good those two are at it and they can't say it's coz they are too young to understand, Ai and Aya are the same... Maturity wise you could argue Ai is lower then her age would suggest BUT going by the 'logic' of Aya, vengeful kiss by Miki, massively stupid letters and phone calls from Rika and Yossy's inability to love at all, I think Ai has the upper hand on all of them... Ah TakaGaki how I love you so :mon lovelaff:
Hmm...I feel like throwing a chapter to break them up  :twisted:

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At tito, Yuki, Zay, tru, sweeety (I know your hiding), Ai.Love (ever though ur a GAM fan here :P ), kRisz, JFC and any other regulars of this thread that I have forgotten, I looove you all  :mon loveflower: :gmon heartu: :mon cheek: :mon bleed2: :mon hanky:
This is quite random :wub: Ok, I should take the opportunity to thank Yuki, Zay, tru, sweeety (I know you're reading this), Ai.LOve, KRisz, JFC, lollipopgirl and others who read but are too lazy to post for frequenting here :) I really love you guys!! :luvluv1: :mon love: :mon santa2: :gmon love2: :mon crazyinlove:

Anyway, to answer to the question about the first part, I thought it was pretty obvious who they were though ;)
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She thought back on the dream that she just had and smiled to herself. It seemed to be a simpler world in her dreams. Why was reality so much more complicated?

Hmm...maybe you are too interested in the development of ishiyoshi here
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: lollipopgirl on June 28, 2008, 12:34:50 PM
^ as soon as I saw "Nope :P" at the start of the comment replies to IshiYoshi I remembered reading about saying it was a dream and when I was reading the chapter I did realize it was Aya/Miki but i must have forgotten by the time I commented :lol: :oops:

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She thought back on the dream that she just had and smiled to herself. It seemed to be a simpler world in her dreams. Why was reality so much more complicated?
Because life is meant to be complicated and challenge you, it's not fun otherwise! (have been quoting that to my father for day's, time Miki heard it too :) )

I am not only touched that you dedicated (or rather gave into my nagging) that whole TakaGaki part to me, but also touched that you were thinking about me when writing the stupid Aya part too... Awwwwwww you know how I react to things :wub: :heart: See GAM, that's a sign of love too ;)
Which reminds me, why was I last in your 'i love you guys' list :o :angry: :P (kidding, maybe XD )

Don't you dare through a break up TakaGaki chapter in (unless one of them gets to be with Miki :lol: ), although if you did at least I would get more of them, hmmm... But I just know ur gonna have it as GAM at the end so you don't really want to add something else to the fic that will make me even more mad :D

Oh and I didn't mean the end of the whole fic, I meant the end of the pain, and I'm pretty sure there will still be pain at the end :cry:

You want real randomness? I now have a headache from a nosebleed I just had... I blame Miki and Gaki's Manpower dancing... Note to self: don't watch Morning Musume concerts when sick, it only makes your fever worse :lol:

And i need to stop making typos/leaving words out when making these comments but oh well!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: kRisZ on June 28, 2008, 02:14:29 PM
break up is the most ouches in a relationship nee... ummm, no change it to cheating...  :mon mischief: okay maybe both  :grin:

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At tito, Yuki, Zay, tru, sweeety (I know your hiding), Ai.Love (ever though ur a GAM fan here ), kRisz, JFC and any other regulars of this thread that I have forgotten, I looove you all   monkey

This is quite random Ok, I should take the opportunity to thank Yuki, Zay, tru, sweeety (I know you're reading this), Ai.LOve, KRisz, JFC, lollipopgirl and others who read but are too lazy to post for frequenting here I really love you guys!! luvluv1


me  :gmon love2: you all too  :mon heh: 
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: kinbari on June 28, 2008, 03:52:40 PM
wa.. sad sad sad.. and very very intense.. feel like i'm going to burst in tears..

waiting for new update~!!

Peace
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: Yukari on June 28, 2008, 11:53:32 PM
i'm preparing my mind tito~~  :mon evillaff:

now i have class the saturday too  :thumbdown:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: tru_harmony on June 29, 2008, 03:48:13 AM
Ishiyoshi?!?!  :w00t:
Nope...:P
this HAS to be IshiYoshi  :shakeit: ... Tell me it is!  :cow: Please tell me it is!!!!!

GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

 :twisted: *demonic possession moment*

*grabs hacksaw from suspense and hacks suspense to pieces*  :twisted: ~tito~ .... ~where are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~?~ :twisted:
*demonic possession moment over*

. :? .. eh? ... what am i doing with this hacksaw? ... ... suspense? ... OH, MY GOD!!!! ... is suspense dead? ... ... it's moving... ... *drops hacksaw*
Hmm...I know I might risk getting killed but I must tell you for the sake of a better world that's NOT ishiyoshi. *Waits for the hacksaw to fly past me* Oh wait, I need to pray that it will fly past me and not straight at me first. :lol:

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*runs away from the recently ressurrected suspense*
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Run run to RFP :P

Hmm...maybe you are too interested in the development of ishiyoshi here[/size]

Ishiyoshi chapter please... as soon as you are absolutely free and willing to do it...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: tito on June 29, 2008, 08:50:12 AM
^ as soon as I saw "Nope :P" at the start of the comment replies to IshiYoshi I remembered reading about saying it was a dream and when I was reading the chapter I did realize it was Aya/Miki but i must have forgotten by the time I commented :lol: :oops:
:lol: You were just too obsessed with the ishiyoshi idea..oh well, it won't be tito-like to jump like that :P

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She thought back on the dream that she just had and smiled to herself. It seemed to be a simpler world in her dreams. Why was reality so much more complicated?
Because life is meant to be complicated and challenge you, it's not fun otherwise! (have been quoting that to my father for day's, time Miki heard it too :) )
Hmm, what a coincidence :D Maybe your dad and I were thinking similarly yesterday :lol:
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I am not only touched that you dedicated (or rather gave into my nagging) that whole TakaGaki part to me, but also touched that you were thinking about me when writing the stupid Aya part too... Awwwwwww you know how I react to things :wub: :heart: See GAM, that's a sign of love too ;)
Aww.. :wub:Yeah, I sort of guessed that you will pick out the 'it won't be the same case if it's Maki' part..Typo up there, it should be stupid-Aya part :lol: I thought at first glance that you meant my writing was dumb :lol:
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Which reminds me, why was I last in your 'i love you guys' list :o :angry: :P (kidding, maybe XD )
hmm, let's see do you want the truth or fallacy? Fallacy = I love you the most, duh. Truth is I copied your message, took off 'tito' and inserted 'lollipopgirl' at the end. Aww, but I still love you  XD :wub:

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Don't you dare through a break up TakaGaki chapter in (unless one of them gets to be with Miki :lol: ), although if you did at least I would get more of them, hmmm... But I just know ur gonna have it as GAM at the end so you don't really want to add something else to the fic that will make me even more mad :D
you sure I'm ending with GAM? :oops: Are you daring me? *switch on Miki mode*

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Oh and I didn't mean the end of the whole fic, I meant the end of the pain, and I'm pretty sure there will still be pain at the end :cry:
THIS, you are quite right about it ;) :D
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You want real randomness? I now have a headache from a nosebleed I just had... I blame Miki and Gaki's Manpower dancing... Note to self: don't watch Morning Musume concerts when sick, it only makes your fever worse :lol:
:rofl: :rofl:Maybe I shouldn't laugh. Take care girl!!
break up is the most ouches in a relationship nee... ummm, no change it to cheating...  :mon mischief: okay maybe both  :grin:
.............should I agree? hmm.. :)
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me  :gmon love2: you all too  :mon heh: 
Aww..... :wub:
wa.. sad sad sad.. and very very intense.. feel like i'm going to burst in tears..

waiting for new update~!!

Peace
Thanks..that's the intended effect :P
i'm preparing my mind tito~~  :mon evillaff:

now i have class the saturday too  :thumbdown:
Oh shucks, hate class on saturday..thank god my country has a 5-day week for students so in theory, we don't have to go school on sat. Oh well, that means killer weekdays :(
Ishiyoshi chapter please... as soon as you are absolutely free and willing to do it...
I'm absolutely free right now but I am kinda lazy to write..damn my laziness..I'm stuck at the first paragraph for half an hour because I kinda refused to write :O ;) The earliest I can put it up is tomorrow..
EDIT: Maybe this will be spoiler or maybe this can confuse you or maybe it can excite you..chap 24 will be somewhat parallel to 23 (I meant about 30%)  XD *pray that tru won't read this*
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: tru_harmony on June 29, 2008, 09:45:46 AM
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I'm absolutely free right now but I am kinda lazy to write..damn my laziness..I'm stuck at the first paragraph for half an hour because I kinda refused to write   The earliest I can put it up is tomorrow

bu~~

... oh well... write a good one... i'll be waiting...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: Ai.love on June 30, 2008, 02:24:27 AM
Awww~ I feel loved ..... so you all shall receive some love too!  :mon love:

It really sucks that I haven't been online for two days. These type of things happen when I don't go online. I could've read this chapter earlier~  :mon ref:

Aya should go run after her and make that dream come true~  :wahaha: Seriously, this chapter was sad but TakaGaki and the dream balanced it all out. Aya, why didn't you just say, "I love you"!?!?! You just had to hit Miki with another hurtful remark like you did before. See what you did, now I'm very disappointed with you Aya.

I hope this will end happily and there will be no breakups~   :mon dance:



Tito this isn't 'cool' ......  You made me call Aya stupid   :mon scare: At least I know your definition of 'cool' now~  :mon ehh:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 23 - Pact
Post by: JFC on July 02, 2008, 07:16:21 AM
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Oh, don't tell me Aya's going to suggest she and Miki do like Ross and Rachel did near the end of the second season? :bleed eyes:
Oh sunnovabitch, she did. :banghead:

Absolutely, bar none, the STUPIDEST move that Aya could have thought of.  If she wanted to help mend her relationship with Miki, she just ended up doing the complete opposite.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: tito on July 02, 2008, 03:14:44 PM
@Ai.Love: At the end of it all, maybe you will end up hating Aya like lollipopgirl :P Here is a less cool chapter (or is it cooler?) :grin:
@JFC: Oohh, so that's what happened there...yeah trash-talking isn't the GAM-thing.

Here is the next chapter! School has started and things are getting hectic for me so updates will be slower and slower...Chapter named after my comment on RFP :D

F.Y.I

Chapter 24

December 25 (2.20pm)

Garden of Love

She lay on the queen-sized bed and closed her eyes in an attempt to grab a nap after lunch. The girl with the shoulder-length hair gazing blankly into space surfaced in her mind. The girl’s silky hair swayed sideways as the wind blew past covering some parts of her face, including that pair of forlorn eyes, momentarily. Tears welled up in her eyes and she stared blankly into space. That girl in her mind was acting tougher than she actually was, enduring all the pain to herself. She felt tears in her eyes as that image in her head enlarged and duplicated itself.

Suddenly, she felt her handphone lying beside her vibrate and she picked it up on its 1st vibration. Her heart sank in disappointment when she saw who the caller was but she still picked it up anyway since it was Christmas. “Hello,” she greeted the caller.

“Uh, Merry Christmas to you,” the caller said flatly without even the tiniest hint of bliss and that didn’t sounded well –wishes at all.
 
“Merry Christmas to you too,” she replied trying not to sound too enthusiastic although this was the first call she received today.

It seems weird to sound enthusiastic when someone speaks to you in that flat and emotionless tone. She was certain that the caller didn’t call her simply to wish her Merry Christmas. It wasn’t her style.

“Hey-”

Ok, now she is going into the main point of the call. That’s so typical of her to do so. “Yes?”

“Why the hell did you try to kiss Aya yesterday? What the hell were you thinking of?” she asked. It was obvious that she was trying to control herself from screaming at the younger girl.

“I didn’t try to kiss her. I just wanted to wipe off the cream around her mouth. You know she is a careless and clumsy girl-”

“I don’t give a damn! Why the shit did you even meet up with her in the first place, Maki?” she screamed into the phone.

“Oh well, I just wanted to see her before I leave-”

“That reminds me. Why the hell are you still in Japan?” she shouted. Maki didn’t reply. It was hard to talk logic to someone who was screaming like that. “Oh, you are dumbfounded, I see. Next thing you will say is that is the power of love because you are still as crazily in love with her as before!”

“Yossie, I can’t talk properly if you keep screaming at me like that. If you just call for the sake of screaming and cursing me, go on,” Maki spoke calmly.

Yossie fell silent for a couple of seconds before she replied softly, “I’m sorry.”

“Don’t think that you have the right to scold me for this. You were the one who really went to kiss and grope Miki. Explain yourself, Yoshizawa Hitomi.”

“Ok, I admit it was my fault that I did that but Miki was the one who initiated it-”

“You could have rejected her advances, you know?” Maki bellowed. She took a deep breath before she spoke sarcastically, “Ok, it’s impossible for a flirt like to even think of rejecting a hot girl like Miki. That’s as hard as talking a starving lion out of eating a limped deer. ”

“Ok, I know it’s my fault,” she paused before she continued, “What about you? You are diverting the topic!”

“If you really want to know, I will tell you then. I meet up with her not because I miss her or anything along that line but because your darling told me to do so.”

“My darling?”

“Otherwise known as Ishikawa Rika. How many darlings do you have?”

“No, I’m just puzzled. Why will Rika ask you to meet up with Aya?”

“Yeah, I was puzzled initially as well but last night, I developed a theory. That’s she wants to hurt Miki. And the reason may be linked to Miki’s detective manoeuvres a month ago which landed you in there.”

Silence descended upon them for about a minute before Yossie whispered in an assertive voice, “Maki, that’s impossible. She dislikes Miki but she won’t do anything like that. I trust her for that,” she paused before she added as an afterthought, “Don’t fabricate a tale like that to spoil her name.”

“You’re free to think whatever you want. I have done my job already by telling you that. I’ve things to do so if you don’t mind, I will hang up now.”

“Ok, bye,” Yossie said flatly.

Maki hung up and she closed her eyes yet again and the same forlorn image of the girl whom she loved whole-heartedly surfaced in her mind. This time round, the wind had stopped blowing and the fringe was no longer covering her eyes. There were beautiful and colourful flowers surrounding the girl this time round. Tears were running down from that pair of reddened eyes.  That girl closed her eyes tight causing lines to appear on her forehead but that action didn’t stop the tears from flowing down her cheeks.
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December 25 (3.45pm)

Rika sat in the corner seat of the family cafeteria near her apartment and gazed at the people walking along the street through the glass panel of the cafeteria, forgetting her troubles momentarily. Little children dressed like Santa Claus in red strolled along the street with their hands held by the real Santa Claus in their lives – their parents. The one receiving somewhat appear to be the one giving. What an irony. But as long as the party who is actually giving loves the one who receives, no one will mind about the irony.

She attempted to convince herself for the 20th time today that it was okay not to give Yossie anything for Christmas this year. It seemed meaningless to give her something after all that had happened recently. Though the gift that she had bought for Yossie 2 months ago was lying in her apartment, she felt that the best gift she could give her now was honesty. She had never given something like that to Yossie before because they didn’t seem to need this in the previous years. But it seemed more than appropriate now to do so.

However, it seemed more than just weird to go up to the hottest girl in H!P and say, “Merry Christmas! I have a gift for you and guess what? It is honesty!” Yossie might just shoot her the confused and twisted look and laugh at her for that and maybe run off to kiss and grope Miki. But even if she might lose Yossie because of this, she felt strongly about doing that. That was perhaps the correct key to revive their relationship. That was perhaps the only gift that could show that she still loved her deeply in this 7-year-old relationship.

She took a sip of the hot mocha she had ordered and her gaze shifted from the people on the streets to the overcast sky. It seemed as though it would snow anytime now. Even if there was a blizzard and it didn’t stop by the appointed time, she would walk on strongly alone because of the undying burning flame symbolising love in her heart.
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December 25 (5.00pm)

Wearing a black overcoat, Yossie leaned against the wall right outside the Chinese restaurant and gazed at the snowflakes falling from the sky. She hugged the hand-made book close to her chest in an attempt to prevent the snowflakes from staining its sky-blue cover. With her eyes fixated at a snowflake making its descend to the ground, she rehearsed the speech in her mind for the umpteenth time. Never in her life had she wanted to say something like that. Never in her life had she made and wrote a book for another person. Never in her life was she so serious over Christmas.

The snowflake made a small spin in the air and flew in her direction. She bit onto her lips and tried to summon all her courage for possibly the most important date in her life. A few seconds later, it changed its direction and flew away from her towards the gift shop opposite to the restaurant.  Some things were just out of her control. Let it fly away. Let it be free.

When the snowflake eventually reached the ground in front of the grocery shop three stores away from the gift shop, she felt a tap on her shoulder. She was here. The time had come.

Rika smiled rather nervously at her and without saying anything, Rika walked into the restaurant with Yossie following closely behind. It was perhaps the first time that they entered the restaurant without holding hands or anything along that line. The female middle-aged boss, together with some of the waiters of the restaurant, was standing at the aisle welcoming customers into the restaurant as they wanted to appear hospitable and this wasn’t a peak hour. When they strolled down the aisle, she smiled widely at Rika as though she knew her for ages. It wasn’t usual for someone to patronise this place for 3 days in a row. Chinese food is something people get sick of quickly. She welcomed them in Chinese before wishing them Merry Christmas in English. Some words cross languages and translation is not needed to interpret them.

 They were seated across each other in the same cozy corner that they always did. The restaurant was pretty empty because it was only 5pm and most people preferred to have western meals on Christmas. At least they did not wish to take Chinese food. A waiter was positioned strategically near their table and was ready to take order any time. The girls quickly ordered their usual dishes from him and automatically, he folded the slip of paper in which he wrote the orders on and left, giving the girls the privacy that they needed.

When they were alone, the 2 girls smiled awkwardly at each other in silence. Not that they hadn’t anything to talk about but there were too much to be said that they didn’t quite know how to start. Yossie placed the book on her lap in an attempt to hide it from Rika’s view. It needed to be given to her but this wasn’t the correct time.

Yossie bit on her lips, inhaled deeply before she stretched out her right hand, smiled at the cute yet sexy girl seated across her and spoke gently, “Merry Christmas!”

Rika extended her right hand and shook her hand, smiled at the beautiful yet handsome girl sitting across her and said with a lilt in her voice, “Merry Christmas to you too!”

After Rika had spoken, the girls let go of each other’s hands as though they were on cue and silence descended upon them yet again. Those words that they had spoken hadn’t managed to break the ice between them.
 
Yossie leaned back against the chair she was seated on and she closed her eyes momentarily. She thought, “Yoshizawa Hitomi, be braver than that! You need to say those words to her no matter how much you hate doing so. Be more responsible! Act more like a human!”

Rika placed her arms in a folded position on the table and her head laid lazily on them. She wondered, “Ishikawa Rika, you know you need to tell her about what you have done right? Do that now! Hiding it from her isn’t helping us in any way! Be honest to her!  Be honest to yourself!”

“I have something to say,” the girls spoke at the same time. They rushed through their words in a similar way.

“You speak first,” they spoke in unison again. That induced a smile on both girls’ faces. They smiled knowingly at each other before falling back into silence. Both of them felt delighted deep inside how in sync they were with the other and that sweet feeling they now had eroded away the nervousness they were feeling earlier.

“Yossie, you go first,” Rika whispered with a tiny smile on her face. I shouldn’t speak first. Those words will ruin this somewhat pleasant atmosphere. Let me indulge myself in enjoying this moment with you for a little longer.

“Are you sure? You speak first, Rika,” Yossie replied with her eyebrows raised in an exaggerated and comical way. I will spoil this evening for sure after telling you that. Let me enjoy this moment with you for a while more.

 Rika couldn’t help but to laugh at her companion who had this exaggerated and constipated look on her face. “Yossie, I’m fine with it. You speak first,” Rika said with a wide grin on her face. Before Yossie had the chance to rebuke her, she added in a serious voice, “If you don’t, I will be mad at you.” 

Yossie nodded reluctantly. She held onto the book on her lap with both hands and when she was about to lift it above the table, the waiter strode over and placed the plate of fried rice and bowl of noodles in a professional manner on the table in front of Yossie and Rika respectively. Yossie quickly shifted the book down. Damn, what timing. That guy spoilt the moment.

After the waiter had set the dishes in front of the 2 female customers, he strode off and the girls had their privacy back again. Rika’s eyes were not on the food at all but rather on the girl whom she loved. She was anxious to know what she was about to say. Yossie took a deep breath, too deep of a breath that she felt like she was about to hyperventilate any moment now, before she raised the book and placed it on the table. She pushed the book towards Rika with both hands like what a high-school girl will do to her first crush and whispered with her eyes fixed on Rika, “This is for you.”

Rika received the gift with both hands and smiled widely. “So this is what Yossie wanted to say to me,” she thought. The front cover was sky-blue in colour and words were handwritten in pink ink. It wrote: Ishikawa Rika & Yoshizawa Hitomi monogatari. “Thank you! I love you!” Rika exclaimed in sheer delight. 

She flipped open the obviously hand-made book and on the first page it wrote:  February 12 2000. A girl added me on Friendster today. I initially thought she was just a random fangirl but it turned out that she wasn’t. Instead, she was a real beauty. I’m going for Morning Musume audition with her. Ganbatte Yossi! Fate somehow brought us together but will it make us last? Attached on the bottom of the page was the picture she took with Maki that she sent to Yossie 7 years ago.

Tears welled up in her eyes as she flipped through the pages and read the words and viewed the photos bearing Yossie’s thoughts on them and their memories respectively. She wondered, “She had definitely put in a lot of effort into this. When did she start on this mini book? When did she start thinking that I’m an important person in her life? Was it really the very first day? But since it was a book on our story, what did she mean by giving me this on Christmas? Does she imply that...”

Rika quickly flipped to the last page that was written on and read it anxiously. It wrote: December 25 2007. I needed to talk to her desperately. The guilt piling up in my chest is too much for me to bear with. I can’t be unfair to her. This is both wrong and selfish of me to do so. I’m sorry Rika...

Rika shut the book and tears welled up in her eyes. She had a sinking feeling about where this was leading to and what Yossie meant by the words on the final page. “Yossie, what do you mean by this?” Rika murmured, avoiding eye contact with the older girl. You have fallen for Fujimoto Miki and you want to be with her, right? That’s what you mean, right?

Yossie stood up before she took a step towards Rika and held her hands with her gentle eyes fixated on the long-haired girl. Yossie spoke, “Rika-”

Suki nan yo mada suki nan yo..
.Her handphone in her jeans’ pocket began to ring. Yossie’s eyes were fixed on Rika despite the vibration she felt on her right thigh. She chose to ignore the phone call and she cursed the caller under her breath. This wasn’t the right timing to pick up a call. She needed to say something much more important now.

Nando  nando  tsutaete mo dakedo...Rika gazed at Yossie’s right pocket relentlessly with tears running down her cheeks and she took her hands away from Yossie’s. The previous date and its unhappiness that they had in this restaurant several days ago came to her mind. Things kept repeating themselves so much so that the pain just increased exponentially each time. No matter how affectionately Yossie looked at her now, there was only one word stuck in her mind now – Miki.

Dakedo togireteru hanashi togireru...
Yossie stared at the girl in front of her and she could read what Rika was thinking of through her facial expression. That forlorn look accompanied by the tears only meant that she was thinking of that one person. Yossie shook her head and took out her handphone as implied by Rika’s little gestures. She glanced at the caller’s name and then held her phone in such an angle that Rika could see the screen on her phone. It wrote: Fujimoto Mikitty calling. Yossie waited for a few seconds before she pressed the reject button and placed the phone on the table. No one could call and disrupt their important conversation today. Absolutely no one. Not even Fujimoto Miki.

 Yossie stared at Rika firmly yet affectionately at the same time and held her hands. Nothing to do with Fujimoto, Rika. Please trust me... The tears had stopped flowing down her cheeks and Rika was looking into Yossie’s eyes. I think she understand... Yossie whispered, “Rika, the next time when I say ‘I love you’, I want to mean each and every syllabus of that phrase.” 

Rika kept her head bowed after Yossie completed her sentence. Yossie couldn’t see her face so she wasn’t sure how the other girl was feeling after hearing that. Was she crying? Did she understand?

Rika tried to stop herself from crying by shutting her eyes tight. She thought, “She is implying that she doesn’t like Miki. I have no choice but to believe her on that... But what does she mean by saying that she wants to mean each syllabus of ‘I love you’? Does she imply that she never mean it before? Does she imply that we should end this loveless relationship? But I...I love her way too much for me to leave this garden of love now...”

After about 2 minutes, Yossie decided to break the awkward silence and she murmured, “Rika, are you-”

Rika lifted her own chin and looked at Yossie with a grin on her face before she squealed, “I’ll wait for you!”

Not knowing quite how to respond, Yossie embraced the younger girl gently and closed her eyes. After fretting over it for hours, that moment was finally over. Maybe they were more compatible than she earlier thought they were. No matter how bad it had turned out, she had passed her first test under the Christmas lights. Now it was time to fret over her 2nd test.  It was a sweet feeling to hear that from Rika but it meant more responsibility from now on. However, she didn’t fear responsibility as much as before. She inched closer to Rika and murmured with tears running down her cheeks, “Thank you, Rika...”
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Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: tru_harmony on July 02, 2008, 03:59:07 PM
1st in!!!!

i missed you, tito...

i hear you on school-hectic-schedule-slow-updates...

... i love the chapter title (gardening services are still being offered... planting, pruning, watering) ...

ISHIYOSHI!!!!

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Though the gift that she had bought for Yossie 2 months ago was lying in her apartment, she felt that the best gift she could give her now was honesty.

FINALLY!!!!!

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“Merry Christmas! I have a gift for you and guess what? It is honesty!” Yossie might just shoot her the confused and twisted look and laugh at her for that and maybe run off to kiss and grope Miki.

i imagined it... so hilarious...  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

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But even if she might lose Yossie because of this, she felt strongly about doing that. That was perhaps the correct key to revive their relationship. That was perhaps the only gift that could show that she still loved her deeply in this 7-year-old relationship.

yeah yeah yeah!!! at last, some sensible thought from Charmy-sama...

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Yossie leaned back against the chair she was seated on and she closed her eyes momentarily. She thought, “Yoshizawa Hitomi, be braver than that! You need to say those words to her no matter how much you hate doing so. Be more responsible! Act more like a human!”

Rika placed her arms in a folded position on the table and her head laid lazily on them. She wondered, “Ishikawa Rika, you know you need to tell her about what you have done right? Do that now! Hiding it from her isn’t helping us in any way! Be honest to her!  Be honest to yourself!”

“I have something to say,” the girls spoke at the same time. They rushed through their words in a similar way.

“You speak first,” they spoke in unison again. That induced a smile on both girls’ faces. They smiled knowingly at each other before falling back into silence. Both of them felt delighted deep inside how in sync they were with the other and that sweet feeling they now had eroded away the nervousness they were feeling earlier.

why can't they be this in-synch on normal days? do these things always have to happen on dramatic scenes? (I'm guilty of this too, though...)

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Rika couldn’t help but to laugh at her companion who had this exaggerated and constipated look on her face. “Yossie, I’m fine with it. You speak first,” Rika said with a wide grin on her face. Before Yossie had the chance to rebuke her, she added in a serious voice, “If you don’t, I will be mad at you.” 

this happens to me and my rabu-rabu all the time...

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She pushed the book towards Rika with both hands like what a high-school girl will do to her first crush and whispered with her eyes fixed on Rika, “This is for you.”

Rika received the gift with both hands and smiled widely. “So this is what Yossie wanted to say to me,” she thought. The front cover was sky-blue in colour and words were handwritten in pink ink. It wrote: Ishikawa Rika & Yoshizawa Hitomi monogatari. “Thank you! I love you!” Rika exclaimed in sheer delight. 

i also received a gift like this!!! ... ~say~ you're not a stalker or something, are you? :lol:

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Suki nan yo mada suki nan yo...

awww... osaka koi no uta.... ... awwwww... .... .... ... aw.....awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... *wipes tears from eyes* .... ... awwwwwwwww

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Rika lifted her own chin and looked at Yossie with a grin on her face before she squealed, “I’ll wait for you!”

this line just killed me... I'll go bury my corpse now...

GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

you write awesome!!!!!

Rika grew up... i love it...

 :otomerika: way to go, rika...

now, what would happen at rika's turn to speak? ... but yossui already knows about that... hmmm...

i will look forward to how this turns out, girl...

good luck to your school activities... GO! GO! GO!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: Yukari on July 03, 2008, 02:27:09 AM
it's a good chapter but... it's just that i can't help it...  :mon sweat:

I DON'T LIKE ISHIYOSHI HERE!!!  :mon mad:

yossy is a dork!! how can she reject miki's call???!!! (it pissed me off)  :mon annoy:

i want to be yossy and go with miki~~  :mon ignore:

lalala~~ well... i want a new chapter!!!

PS.: i almost forget...  I LOVE YOU MAKI AND MIKI!!!  :mon loveflower: (and tito too) :roll:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: JFC on July 03, 2008, 08:10:21 AM
Goddamit now it's starting to sound like a bad, overly melodramatic Filipino soap opera (which is basically describes ALL Filipino soap operas). :banghead:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: zay05ohayou on July 03, 2008, 08:28:42 AM
Woohoo~ Update from tito!!  :w00t:
Sweeet Ishiyoshi goodness! Though I'm not really up for an Ishiyoshi today.  :(
Wait, does Yossie have more to say? I want Rika to get it over and done with. Though i think it won't end up well.

@JFC, lol what's wrong with Filipino soaps?  :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: JFC on July 04, 2008, 01:08:19 AM
@JFC, lol what's wrong with Filipino soaps?  :D
If you've seen one, you wouldn't need to ask.

Basically they're so bad they make American soap operas (even the really lame ones like Passions, if that's still on) look like they're worthy of awards.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: zay05ohayou on July 04, 2008, 11:16:21 AM
^ lol of course i've seen one, i'm Filipino after all.. XD
I agree with what you said, thats why I watch Jdorama's.. or lots of H!P videos  :lol: though some are pretty alright.. i think..
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: tito on July 04, 2008, 11:58:33 AM
1st in!!!!

i missed you, tito...
I miss you too :) In a way, I'm getting lazier to post nowadays...having to make a decision that will in a way affects my future over the weekend just wears me out..
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... i love the chapter title (gardening services are still being offered... planting, pruning, watering) ...
  :lol: Hopefully it's free...
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this happens to me and my rabu-rabu all the time...
You playing Rika or Yossie? :P
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i also received a gift like this!!! ... ~say~ you're not a stalker or something, are you? :lol:
Ahh, I may be one :P Or it's just telepathy  :lol:
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this line just killed me... I'll go bury my corpse now...
NOO!! I still need readers!! *revive tru* Thanks for your luck XD I think I need it.
it's a good chapter but... it's just that i can't help it...  :mon sweat:

I DON'T LIKE ISHIYOSHI HERE!!!  :mon mad:

yossy is a dork!! how can she reject miki's call???!!! (it pissed me off)  :mon annoy:

i want to be yossy and go with miki~~  :mon ignore:
Ah, the Yomiki spirit is getting back :P Think you are a more Yossie fan than Miki one :D
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PS.: i almost forget...  I LOVE YOU MAKI AND MIKI!!!  :mon loveflower: (and tito too) :roll:
Why tito in small font? :lol:
Goddamit now it's starting to sound like a bad, overly melodramatic Filipino soap opera (which is basically describes ALL Filipino soap operas). :banghead:
Hmm, personally I have never watched a Filipino soap opera before but I think maybe subconsciously, I am in for melodramatic stuff in a way or another..Oh well, even if it's bad, I think I should finish it for the sake of the people who are reading it.
Woohoo~ Update from tito!!  :w00t:
Sweeet Ishiyoshi goodness! Though I'm not really up for an Ishiyoshi today.  :(
Wait, does Yossie have more to say? I want Rika to get it over and done with. Though i think it won't end up well.
^Not really..
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: lollipopgirl on July 04, 2008, 08:22:51 PM
I don't know what's happening with me in regards to the pairings in this story, i keep changing my preferences :oops: But i think that might be a compliment to your writing ;)
I adored the IshiYoshi in this chapter and I'm now happy (really happy) if they stay together, no one can say Yossy isn't trying anymore, she just needed a big kick up the bum as a wake up call that if she kept going, she could have lost Rika.
They still have a lot to talk through but at least they are communicating properly and she did just give the best present ever (tru is so lucky :heart: ), oh crap,  no YoMiki is a given :cry:

I am really hoping for GAM II now, but if I root for them and IshiYoshi, Miki will be alone... I CAN'T DO THAT TO HER :cry:

I'll just add my confused feelings towards this fic to the rest in my life shall I? :P

Who needs school? Noone
Who needs your writing on a frequent basis? All your addicts :wub:
Weigh it up ;) :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: Yukari on July 05, 2008, 03:19:25 AM
Ah, the Yomiki spirit is getting back :P Think you are a more Yossie fan than Miki one :D

 :mon wtf: naah i love the two of them... and i wanted that yossy answer the call  :mon mad:

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PS.: i almost forget...  I LOVE YOU MAKI AND MIKI!!!  :mon loveflower: (and tito too) :roll:
Why tito in small font? :lol:

because...  :mon innocent: i wanted to put it in a small font? do you have a problem with it??? *yukomodeon*  :mon pissed:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: tru_harmony on July 05, 2008, 06:41:19 AM
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I miss you too  In a way, I'm getting lazier to post nowadays...having to make a decision that will in a way affects my future over the weekend just wears me out..
aww... you missed me... anyway, good luck in that decision... i hope whatever you choose in whatedver that is you are deciding about turns out for the best!

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Hopefully it's free...
gardening services are for free for IshiYoshi and AyaMiki... i hope they all resolve their issues and tend a garden of love...

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You playing Rika or Yossie?
the Rika... in that situation... :lol:

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Ahh, I may be one  Or it's just telepathy 
... woah... psychic connection...

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Hmm, personally I have never watched a Filipino soap opera before but I think maybe subconsciously, I am in for melodramatic stuff in a way or another..Oh well, even if it's bad, I think I should finish it for the sake of the people who are reading it.
the RFP filipino melodrama has rubbede off on you!!! :lol: ... i'm such a bad influence... i hope it isn't bad either... but i like it so it can't be bad... but that's just what it think... :lol:

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Who needs school? Noone
Who needs your writing on a frequent basis? All your addicts
I agree... ***** school... j/k

 :rofl: yuki's on yuko mode!!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: Ai.love on July 05, 2008, 09:55:08 AM
Sorry~ I'm late ....... I actually went out of the house and did some stuff because I was dying of boredom :mon lol: my summer break isn't that great~

IDK but I think I'm the only one who is confused about what happened ........ Does this mean that they broke up or are going to have a 'break'? Can someone please clarify what has happened for me~  :mon sweat:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: lollipopgirl on July 05, 2008, 10:24:01 AM
^ I forgot to mention in my post before... I am totally in love with your sig Ai.love, I love when Aya takes the control like that... It makes me all gooey inside and like i wanna cry :lol:

*is leaving now* :oops: :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: tito on July 05, 2008, 12:28:52 PM
:O I'm seriously surprised that this is still very alive..Since people are browsing this, I think it's a right chance for me to say this: Actually I have another idea on another fic in my head and I feel like writing it but there is only 1 weekend. Should I start another one or come up with another chapter? :D Anyway, probably I'll write something tomorrow. Have to start on math tonight ;)
I don't know what's happening with me in regards to the pairings in this story, i keep changing my preferences :oops: But i think that might be a compliment to your writing ;)
Hmm, I will treat it as one! *Cheers to myself for success in changing your preference again* :P P.S I miss you! :grin:
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I adored the IshiYoshi in this chapter and I'm now happy (really happy) if they stay together, no one can say Yossy isn't trying anymore, she just needed a big kick up the bum as a wake up call that if she kept going, she could have lost Rika.
They still have a lot to talk through but at least they are communicating properly and she did just give the best present ever (tru is so lucky :heart: ), oh crap,  no YoMiki is a given :cry:
:wub: You don't wanna a Yomiki in here :D
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I'll just add my confused feelings towards this fic to the rest in my life shall I? :P
Sure thing. That means that you will remember me for the rest of your life XD :lol:
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Who needs school? Noone
Who needs your writing on a frequent basis? All your addicts :wub:
Weigh it up ;) :lol:
OMG :rofl: This totally cracks me up and makes up my day! :lol: I guess I have to agree...
because...  :mon innocent: i wanted to put it in a small font? do you have a problem with it??? *yukomodeon*  :mon pissed:
What the hell :rofl:  *imagine Yuko* *bows down* I'm sorry, there's no problems ;) :lol:
aww... you missed me... anyway, good luck in that decision... i hope whatever you choose in whatedver that is you are deciding about turns out for the best!
Yeah, thanks. I think I decided on what to do. For the slim chance of wearing the school blazer, I shall work hard and join the smarties in the lesson! GANBATTE! :)
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the Rika... in that situation... :lol:
I think I'm making you like Rika even more with the newly found psychic connection XD
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the RFP filipino melodrama has rubbede off on you!!! :lol: ... i'm such a bad influence... i hope it isn't bad either... but i like it so it can't be bad... but that's just what it think... :lol:
Yeah, I knew I needed to write about ishiyoshi in this chapter but somehow it comes off with a strong filipino melodrama flavour ;) Oh man, it's your influence! Too much RFP! (But now it's too little :D )
BTW, I think I scrolled down a little too fast just now and for a moment, I thought tru was Yuki and Yuki has converted into an ishiyoshi fanatic by putting ishiyoshi in her sig! :lol: Oh well, I should have known that it's kinda impossible. Or is it? :P
Sorry~ I'm late ....... I actually went out of the house and did some stuff because I was dying of boredom :mon lol: my summer break isn't that great~
Wonder if this will make it better..Boredom can kill many..Being busy is bad too..Darn, it's so hard to find a moderation :)
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IDK but I think I'm the only one who is confused about what happened ........ Does this mean that they broke up or are going to have a 'break'? Can someone please clarify what has happened for me~  :mon sweat:
Hmm..*tito waits for someone else to answer this*
Agree with lollipopgirl on your sig! GAM is AWESOME! :wub: *Listens to Melodies :inlove: *
Title: Re: F.Y.I 24 - Garden of Love (愛の園)
Post by: kRisZ on July 05, 2008, 03:38:12 PM
wonder why Miki callled  *waits for the next update*


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I am really hoping for GAM II now, but if I root for them and IshiYoshi, Miki will be alone... I CAN'T DO THAT TO HER

If that happens, Miki will be in good hands, don't worry  :yep: nee Tito  :shifty:  :grin:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: tito on July 07, 2008, 08:08:04 AM
Update! :P @ KrisZ: hmm, *tito chooses to miss the hint* :D I don't know how you will react after reading this :O Anyway, enjoy! BTW, Winter Love is playing in my head when I wrote this especially the last bit..

F.Y.I

Truth VS Falsehood

Chapter 25

December 25 (6.03pm)

Seated on the backseat of the taxi, tears rolled down her cheeks uncontrollably as she recalled what her girlfriend had said a while ago. “I’ll wait!” That wasn’t what she was anticipating for. She thought that Rika would either just silently accept what she had said or maybe grab her and refuse to let her go. This just showed how little she knew about the girl she always thought she knew everything about.

Suki nan yo mada suki nan yo… She picked up the call almost immediately without even a glance at the caller’s name reflected on the screen of the phone. “Hello,” she said rather flatly while wiping the tears off her face so that she would sound normal on the phone.

“Hey why didn’t you pick up my call? Why?” she asked bitterly.

“Sorry Fujimoto,” she murmured. There wasn’t much to say other than apologies.

“It’s ok…” she spoke in a muffled voice.

The girls fell into silence and Yossie could hear Miki gasping in a queer rhythm. This was so unlike Miki. “Are you crying?” Yossie asked. Miki didn’t respond. The silence was growing awkward. “Are you ok?” Yossie asked again, this time round in a much more concerned voice.

“Yossie, Aya doubts my love. Even when I almost died for her, she still thinks that I did it for my pride instead of love.”

“I don’t think she means that. It’s not like her to think of something like that. She knows you love her more than yourself. I know that. She knows that,” Yossie said diplomatically.

“I just feel stupid. All along, I am led on and she just sees me as the replacement for Gocchin. Or maybe she just felt bad to reject me at that time because we were supposed to be ‘best friends’. I feel so dumb.”

“She loves you, Miki. She does.”     

Miki fell silent. Now her sobs were audible. Yossie thought, “Life is so unfair. Why doesn’t a crazy lover like Miki receive the love that she ought to get? Why does a lousy lover like me receive so much love? Why can’t she find true happiness?”

Miki mumbled, disrupting her train of thoughts, “Yossie, am I a person hard to complement to?”

Yossie paused, contemplating whether she should tell her the facts or not. She didn’t want to hurt her but as a ‘special friend’, she ought to tell her the truth. Yossie spoke seriously, “Sometimes. Probably you flare up easily at people whose wavelengths are different from yours. Maybe the next time when you are angry at someone, you can either tell yourself, “STOP!” or take a  deep, deep breath before you speak. I think it’ll help.”

“It’s over….”

Perplexed that Miki didn’t even make any references to what she had just said about her, Yossie could only make one deduction. “Are you drinking alone?”

“Maybe…”

That meant a yes. “Are you at home or at a pub?” Yossie asked worriedly. It would be dangerous if she was at the latter.

“I don’t know…”

“Hey! Answer me!” Yossie screamed into the phone hoping that it would make her somewhat sober. Miki didn’t respond. In fact, she didn’t hear her sobbing or gasping. That could mean either she was knocked awake or she hung up. Yossie took the phone away from her ears for a second and glanced at the screen and confirmed that Miki had done the latter. She hung up.

She told the driver to head towards their favourite pub. Probably and hopefully, she would be there. Yossie closed her eyes and made a short prayer for her friend. She knew better than anyone else that she was a better friend than lover. Let it remain like this for the time being.
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At the pub, Miki shouted, “1 more beer!” Her vision was blurring and she felt around for the bottle of beer and drank it unglamorously. Alcohol was making her dizzy. She felt a tap on her shoulder and she turned to face the person. She couldn’t see clearly but she could discern that that person was a young girl.

“Miki, you are drinking a lot. Stop!” she spoke and attempted to drag her off her chair but she didn’t have the strength to do so.

“Shut up! What do you know?” Miki bellowed. “I am about to, no, I just fell out of love! Young girl like you know nothing!” Miki pushed the younger girl away from her with such might that the younger girl almost fell.

“Miki…”

Miki leaned towards the other girl and spoke slyly, “If you want the best for me, get me another bottle or two.”

“Actually…I was the part of the group that came up with the letter plan. I’m sorry, Miki…I didn’t know it will have so much implications.”

The girls fell into silence for a moment or two before Miki murmured, “Who am you?”

“Eri.”

“Guess as much. Don’t feel bad. If she sees me as a prideful girl and doubts my love for her all along, this will happen…It’s just a
matter of time…” Tears rolled down her cheeks as she spoke. It was unlike Miki to show her weak side to the fellow Rokkie.

 “Miki…I’ll bring you home.”

“Don’t! Let me drink to my heart’s content for tonight!” Miki shouted.

Eri grabbed the older girls by her arms and pulled her with as much strength as she could muster despite the older girl’s refusals. This time round, she managed to pull her off the seat. She then literally dragged her out of the rather empty pub. When they were finally out on the streets, she met the former leader who immediately rushed towards Miki and pushed her into the taxi that she came out from.  Then, Eri and Yossie entered the taxi at both sides with Miki seated in the middle. It would be safer for her to take the middle seat. Then, the taxi took off and made its way down the beautifully decorated streets. None of them spoke in the whole duration.  None of them were in the mood for celebration.
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 December 25 (8.11pm)

Aya sat at the window seat of the family restaurant right across her apartment while staring at the clock pendant in her hands. She thought, “If time could go back, I would take back my words. Let her win the battle of words. Why did I say that to hurt her? Why did I make it sound like that is what I think of her all along?” She knew that what she had said was worse than witnessing Miki and Yossie kissed because she knew that Miki was putting up an act to win. But what she said sounded true and Miki probably saw it as the truth.

 Tears flowed down her cheeks as the past’s happiness blended with the present’s sorrow. She used to cry because she was touched but now, she was upset and regretful. Even tears had a different meaning now. What was lying ahead of her?
She stared at the pink words on the CD and clenched her fists. She felt like killing herself for ruining everything with her mouth. Momoiro Kataomoi… To Miki, this was still an unrequited love. She wondered for the hundredth time what the content of the disc was. Was it a recording of her confession? Or was it a recording of her views on her popular song? As much as she wanted to know the content, she didn’t want the painful moment to arrive. It would strike her hard that she was the one who did something stupid that ruined everything. 

Her phone rang and the familiar melody of Boogie Train 03 played. She immediately picked up and she didn’t conceal her disappointment when she heard that familiar voice. “Aya! Merry Christmas!” the caller exclaimed. Obviously she didn’t know what had happened to her. Oh well, why would she know anyway?

“Merry Christmas,” she replied flatly.

“I know you’re busy but I just want to ask, are you free on New Year Day?”

“Should be.”

“Great! I take that you’re coming home on New Year Day to spend the day with us!”

“Yes mum.”

“Does Mikitty have time? It’ll be nice if she can come in the afternoon. I will make delicious-”

Aya interrupted, “Mum, she is busy so she won’t come.” Tears rolled down her cheeks as it was so painful to even contemplate the possibility of spending New Year Day together.

“She has work even on New Year Day?”

“Yes…” Aya’s voice trailed off.

Aya, are you ok?” she asked out of concern. Probably her mum had heard her cry. She was bad at concealing that she was crying.

“I’m fine. Miki-tan sends her regards to you! Bye!” Aya spoke chirpily before she hung up. She gazed blankly at her handphone. The theme, wallpaper and handphone strap matched Miki’s. Those things brought back those memories of them browsing through the internet intently in search of a theme they both liked, arguing over which wallpaper to use and which handphone strap to buy. Everything reminded her of Miki. Those days wouldn’t be back, would they?

Even a normal conversation with her mum had Miki in it. She had definitely become an integral part of her life…She asked herself, “The reason why I don’t want to part with her is because I love her or I’m too used to her?”

 A family of four walked in and the mother was chiding her children for running down the slippery streets. Then, they took their seats and she asked her children what they would like to have for dinner. Scolding or quarrelling and then getting back with hugs and kisses are the normal cycle. Why couldn’t they follow it? Why was their relationship so fragile?

The waitress walked briskly towards her and placed the glass of iced lemon tea on the small round table disrupting her train of thoughts. She took a sip of the drink and its sweetness caused a chill to run down her spine. She murmured to herself, “Too sweet…” She smiled as she realized that it sounded so familiar just like how Miki criticized poorly brewed coffees.  Only coffees made by Aya with the exact correct quantities of milk and sugar could induce a smile on her face. The image of Miki taking a sip of the coffee and then shaking her head with a frown surfaced in her mind. How cute that was.

She gazed blankly out of the glass panel.  Moisture condensed on the warmer glass panel making it hard to discern what was happening outside. Aya rubbed her fingers on the glass in a circular motion and she could only discern that it was snowing pretty heavily out there. Even with the luxury of warmth, deep inside, her heart felt as though it was freezing. The only person who gave her warmth selflessly with a hug or just simply with her presence was not here. She wondered which option had Miki chose after what she had said. Whatever it was the case, she would stick to the first one using the days to learn how to love properly in a way that the other would know. Even if Miki had given up on their love, she swore that she would only love her from today onwards. No one else.

The familiar Boogie Train 03 played. denwa mo mada konai YEAH! She picked it up almost instantly. “Hello,” she greeted the caller.

“Aya! Merry Christmas!” she chanted.

“Merry Christmas to you too,” Aya replied rather flatly.

“Do you have time now? I’ve a surprise for you,” she said. 

She wasn’t the person Aya wanted to see or speak to now and she felt herself more inclined to find out the content of the disc than the surprise that she had up in her sleeves. “Maki, I’m sorry. I’m busy. I’m…with Miki-tan now.” It hurt to say a lie which should have been the truth.

She was standing right outside the family restaurant Aya was at facing the direction of her apartment under the snow. As she couldn’t conceal her excitement in giving Aya her gift, she walked in circles around the same spot. When she faced the direction of the family restaurant, she could see Aya sitting alone through the small clear region on the glass panel. Her heart sank instantly and the smile on her face vanished. What a liar. “Oh…is it?” Maki questioned.

“Yeah, Miki-tan is calling for me now. Bye!” Aya rushed through her words before she hung up. She was a lousy liar.

Maki clenched the gift that she had for Aya as she watched the girl take a sip of the drink in her hand.  Tears welled up in her eyes. She hated seeing Aya lonely and she knew Aya hated loneliness. But then why did Aya reject her company? Why did she lie? She typed a message on her phone in a last attempt to keep her company on Christmas night: Hey why did you lie?

About a minute later, the reply came. It wrote: Sorry Maki. I want to be alone tonight. Anyway, I am not sure how to put this to you: the only person whom I love and want to love is Miki-tan. I enjoyed our relationship but that’s it. It’s now just part of the memories. Don’t attempt to revive that dead love.

Maki’s heart sank as she read it but she understood what Aya meant by that. She loved Miki and she only wanted to find happiness with her. That was fair. After all she forsook her for the sake of her career. She murmured, “If you can be happy with another person, I’ll let you go, my love. I pray for your happiness, Aya.”

She tapped on the glass panel twice and placed the 2 air tickets with a transparent cover around them to Scotland against the wet glass panel. Then, she placed the tickets on the ground and left. Let her fly with the one she loved most.

Aya saw the familiar girl tap against the glass panel, place something against it and then walk off. She ran out of the restaurant and she was surprised to find a transparent cover with a ribbon around it and 2 air tickets to Scotland in it on the ground that the girl was standing at just now. The girl was nowhere in sight. Inside the cover, there was a note: You said you want to leave this place. I heard from some people that Scotland is a nice relaxing place and I think it suits you. Ikimasshoi!

 She thought, “Probably she bought it because she wanted to fly away with me…” She felt warm in her heart for a split second as she was touched by Maki’s actions before the coldness took over again as she remembered the disc that she hadn’t watched. She picked up the gift and held it close to her chest and mumbled, “Thank you Maki. I pray for your happiness too.”
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: kinbari on July 07, 2008, 01:08:12 PM
ahhh.. another part of the sad story.. and eri is back in the picture~~! lolx.. =x

Peace
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: tru_harmony on July 07, 2008, 02:32:07 PM
thanks for that update... but... hark!

what happened to Rika's speech?!?!?!  :mon look: where is it? where's the honesty gift????

GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I'm seriously surprised that this is still very alive..Since people are browsing this, I think it's a right chance for me to say this: Actually I have another idea on another fic in my head and I feel like writing it but there is only 1 weekend. Should I start another one or come up with another chapter? 


lalalalalalala both lalalalalalala... :lol: ...
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: lollipopgirl on July 07, 2008, 03:26:28 PM
Even a normal conversation with her mum had Miki in it. She had definitely become an integral part of her life…She asked herself, “The reason why I don’t want to part with her is because I love her or I’m too used to her?”
Excellent question Aya! :D
but the answer is a mix of both, you do love her, you're just not IN love with her... listen to meeeee :cry:

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Maki’s heart sank as she read it but she understood what Aya meant by that. She loved Miki and she only wanted to find happiness with her. That was fair. After all she forsook her for the sake of her career. She murmured, “If you can be happy with another person, I’ll let you go, my love. I pray for your happiness, Aya.”
If you love someone enough, you will let them go and be happy! I will always stand by that and I am glad to see Maki doing that (sorta seeing I want her with Aya) but at least she knows exactly where her feelings lie, awww! :heart:

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She tapped on the glass panel twice and placed the 2 air tickets with a transparent cover around them to Scotland against the wet glass panel. Then, she placed the tickets on the ground and left. Let her fly with the one she loved most.
:wub: That's so cute!!! I LOVE YOU MAKI, COME TO MEEEEEEEEEE! (and bring Miki :twisted: )

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She thought, “Probably she bought it because she wanted to fly away with me…” She felt warm in her heart for a split second as she was touched by Maki’s actions before the coldness took over again as she remembered the disc that she hadn’t watched. She picked up the gift and held it close to her chest and mumbled, “Thank you Maki. I pray for your happiness too.”
Ayayaya, can't you see how much she loves and how much you did (and still do) appreciate that :cry: think about it spud, it's not the same with Miki! Oh GAH, you all suck! :(

Mikitty should keep drown her sorrows, it's the best way :P
Yossy confuses me still, does she or does she not want to be with Rika... was she looking for an easy way out (as in Rika breaking up with her) when Rika said she'd wait... Gosh maybe I should be glad I'm not gay (or at least not a hot Japanese idol), it seems complicated :lol:

Sorry if this comment seems weird, I am sooo tired... My damn cat would let me sleep last night, she kept waking me up so I could pat her  :roll:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: tito on July 09, 2008, 11:02:04 AM
Wondering where the other readers are..  :roll:
ahhh.. another part of the sad story.. and eri is back in the picture~~! lolx.. =x

Peace
Haha yeah I'm fond of sorrow (how sadistic that sounds) :P
thanks for that update... but... hark!

what happened to Rika's speech?!?!?!  :mon look: where is it? where's the honesty gift????

GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I ate it up? Nah, it won't flow my dear..I mean there are things you wanna say but you can't say because you don't have the chance to right? XD
Hmm, I think I'll be writing FYI for the time being coz I wanna make sure the next few parts flow :)
Excellent question Aya! :D
but the answer is a mix of both, you do love her, you're just not IN love with her... listen to meeeee :cry:
Hmm, this sounds so logical that I can't help but to agree with you :D

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:wub: That's so cute!!! I LOVE YOU MAKI, COME TO MEEEEEEEEEE! (and bring Miki :twisted: )
Haha  :lol: This is so hilarious! You won't be surprised to see Aya dragged along if they happened to go to you :P
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Oh GAH, you all suck! :(
Haha :lol: I'm so influenced by this forum that I go around saying 'OH GAH' and everyone thinks something went wrong with me :lol:
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Yossy confuses me still, does she or does she not want to be with Rika... was she looking for an easy way out (as in Rika breaking up with her) when Rika said she'd wait... Gosh maybe I should be glad I'm not gay (or at least not a hot Japanese idol), it seems complicated :lol:
:rofl: Hmm, oh well, wait for the next update ;)
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Sorry if this comment seems weird, I am sooo tired... My damn cat would let me sleep last night, she kept waking me up so I could pat her  :roll:
Tell me I aren't seeing things and you edited this part..Darn, I can imagine living in an animal farm (sort of) ;) Anyway, it's good practice and I think you'll make a good mum :lol: (Don't babies wake up in the middle of the nigh and cry and cry and cry? :lol: )

EDIT: Oh yeah! I made the 4000 view of this thread!  :w00t: yon sen No special H!P meaning but I love the zeros  :wub:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: ayase909 on July 09, 2008, 07:23:33 PM
 :err: it wrecked my heart! they love each other but keep on hurting each other too........

 :grr: this is reality....... pride, one of the greatest sins,,,,,,hahaha

Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: Yukari on July 10, 2008, 05:23:48 AM
i want to know what will happen!!! :mon lurk:


dasdsadas miki, yossy and eri dsadasd i NEED to know!! titoooooooooooooooooooooooo *weird voice*  :mon scare:

so... it's my comment... i'm confused  :mon exhaust: i don't know what i want from this fanfic... just one thing

miki and yossy happy (i know that they won't end together, but anyway i want them to be happy) :mon noprob:

i feel bad 'cause i catch a cold... forgive me for the weird comment (even if all my comments are weird ò.o) :mon ill:

i want a update!!~~  :mon yeah: :mon prayer: (the prayer comes back jojojo)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: Ai.love on July 10, 2008, 06:48:19 AM
IshiYoshi really did break up ........  :mon dunno: why do I feel like everyone is going to end up single ......  :mon chilly:

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She tapped on the glass panel twice and placed the 2 air tickets with a transparent cover around them to Scotland against the wet glass panel. Then, she placed the tickets on the ground and left. Let her fly with the one she loved most.

Aya saw the familiar girl tap against the glass panel, place something against it and then walk off. She ran out of the restaurant and she was surprised to find a transparent cover with a ribbon around it and 2 air tickets to Scotland in it on the ground that the girl was standing at just now. The girl was nowhere in sight. Inside the cover, there was a note: You said you want to leave this place. I heard from some people that Scotland is a nice relaxing place and I think it suits you. Ikimasshoi!

 She thought, “Probably she bought it because she wanted to fly away with me…” She felt warm in her heart for a split second as she was touched by Maki’s actions before the coldness took over again as she remembered the disc that she hadn’t watched. She picked up the gift and held it close to her chest and mumbled, “Thank you Maki. I pray for your happiness too.”

When I read this part, I was thinking of 'Come Fly With Me' the whole time ......... that's a lovely song~ :mon hanky: Aya what will you do!?!?!?

^ I forgot to mention in my post before... I am totally in love with your sig Ai.love, I love when Aya takes the control like that... It makes me all gooey inside and like i wanna cry :lol:

*is leaving now* :oops: :P

That's exactly how I feel whenever I see GAM goodness~  :mon lol:

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Agree with lollipopgirl on your sig! GAM is AWESOME! :wub: *Listens to Melodies :inlove:*

Thank you, you two~  :mon love: GAM really is AWESOME!!!   :mon dance:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: kRisZ on July 11, 2008, 03:18:30 PM
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why do I feel like everyone is going to end up single ...... 

 :mon determined: hmmm... better that way than leaving one soul in tears or something  :yep:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: JFC on July 13, 2008, 08:32:47 AM
How the hell did Eri find Miki in the pub? She (Eri) isn't legally allowed to drink yet in Japan so how'd she get in?
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: tito on July 13, 2008, 03:29:10 PM
I guess I'll reply to the comments first. Probably write somewhere in the middle of the week or next week. Damn, this weekend I've been busy. :(
:err: it wrecked my heart! they love each other but keep on hurting each other too........

 :grr: this is reality....... pride, one of the greatest sins,,,,,,hahaha
Hi! :D Yeah, these things always happen ;) Sad fact of life
i want to know what will happen!!! :mon lurk:


dasdsadas miki, yossy and eri dsadasd i NEED to know!! titoooooooooooooooooooooooo *weird voice*  :mon scare:

so... it's my comment... i'm confused  :mon exhaust: i don't know what i want from this fanfic... just one thing

miki and yossy happy (i know that they won't end together, but anyway i want them to be happy) :mon noprob:

i feel bad 'cause i catch a cold... forgive me for the weird comment (even if all my comments are weird ò.o) :mon ill:

i want a update!!~~  :mon yeah: :mon prayer: (the prayer comes back jojojo)
Take care girl! Yeah, I'm sorry I can't answer to your prayer...and I seriously don't know what you will think of the next chapter :P
IshiYoshi really did break up ........  :mon dunno: why do I feel like everyone is going to end up single ......  :mon chilly:
Hmm..let's see about it..
I was rewatching GAM's 1st concert today and gosh, it brought back so much memories..GAM come back!!!
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why do I feel like everyone is going to end up single ...... 

 :mon determined: hmmm... better that way than leaving one soul in tears or something  :yep:
Hmmm................
How the hell did Eri find Miki in the pub? She (Eri) isn't legally allowed to drink yet in Japan so how'd she get in?
This question seems familiar :roll: Sneaked in? It isn't the hardest thing to do on earth..
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: kRisZ on July 13, 2008, 03:46:30 PM
thought thre's  a new update  :roll: but it's all cool, got som booze running my veins so I really can't concentrate atm  :grin:

hey tito  :) :)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 25 - Truth VS Falsehood
Post by: sweeety on July 13, 2008, 03:57:53 PM
I don't feel like I have anything else to say other than the stuff I already told you on msn... But I felt like commenting anyway. And since I don't feel like repeating myself.. as I hate that.... I will just say, great jpb girl, keep it up. I hope you keep up the drama, but give them a break eventually too.

 But the balance is that ... well the ball is on Miki's side of the court I think. But have you noticed she broke the pattern? I mean she has so far. But I think she might ruin it now. See, she didn't hurt Aya back when she hurt her. And the ball on her side of the court means that she's in control... or at least has more control than she thinks.

 So it is possible that she uses this to get the girl which hopefully she still wants. I'm not saying loves because it's freakin obvious like transparency that she is madly in love with Aya, I'm saying wants because even though she wants her, she might also want to hurt her. So she has to decide now if it's worth losing her and if she realises it's not, she has to make some ammends... or allow Aya to make ammends for what she did.

 I mean getting drunk is bad enough but being at her state right now, I think because of her vulnerability she might do something  bad. I have a bad feeling she might go out and kiss Eri or Yoshi and do god knows what else. So I fear that maybe this time that Aya hurt her, the reprecussions were too dire, and the guilt might kill their relationship.

 I have a feeling MIki'll wake up the next morning with a hangover, looking for her pants in alien surroundings. Or if I'm lucky she will be allright and decide to try her hardest to get Aya back.

 I just really hope this doesn't turn into Gomattou where Maki was slowly stealing Aya and Aya was pushing Miki onto the backseat of her life and letting Maki take over. And end up  hurting and abandoning Miki like she did before. I hope Miki gets what she deserves which is love and lots of it. And I hope Aya grows a brain. Maybe if she goes away for a little while she will learn to be a better lover and friend and she will understand more about her and she will be good enough for the relationship and then just get back with Miki and be as into it as she is. I mean I totally understood the bit about her not being ablt to match the intensity in which Miki loves her, but it's not Miki's fault, and she shouldn't be punished for it. I think Aya should just let Miki love her, and learn from that and go from there.

 Also I was the one to point out the bit aboutt Eri :3 It was last time we talked on msn XD
 And you didn't even bother answering me! Meanie! :'3
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: tito on July 19, 2008, 09:42:18 AM
@KrisZ: Sorry for hyping you up for nothing! :(
@sweeety: Uhh, twin telepathy at work again! XD
I hope this chapter will turn out fine...I'm so tired now. Probably I will put another up next weekend if I've time. School is terribly busy! Enjoy! :P
F.Y.I

Chapter 26

Love Prison

December 25 (8.31pm)

She stood in front of the white door and hesitated. The snowflakes fell on her as questions ran through her mind. Was it ok for her to intrude into the party? Would she spoil the party? Was she better off alone now? But she knew she needed to speak to someone. She glanced at the book in her hands and the image of the girl whom she loved most surfaced to her mind. She recalled the sorrow in her eyes when she spoke solemnly those words that both hurt and touched her heart.

She knocked on the door and waited for a few seconds before her friend with a lollipop in her mouth opened it. She didn’t conceal her shock to see the unexpected visitor as her eyes widened. Rika inched a step forward and hugged her friend and exclaimed with a grin on her face, “Merry Christmas Ayumi!”

Ayumi returned the hug and giggled. “Merry Christmas to you Rika!” she said with a lilt in her voice.

Then, she led her best friend to the hall whereby the small cozy party was held. The rest of the Melon Kinenbi were dancing to the Nikutai wa Shoujiki na EROS in the hall and laughing away. They didn’t even notice Rika’s presence as they were too engrossed in the dance though it was very messy. Masae was spinning round and round on the spot while Hitomi was doing the shimmy shaking her boobs. As for Megumi, she was diligently dancing to the rhythm though she appeared to be somewhat drunk. Rika couldn’t help but to wonder what Tsunku would think when he saw this scene. Should he be happy that they were still rehearsing on a rest day? Or should he be disappointed at the disorder in the dance?

 Watching the girls dance in front of her, it induced a smile on Rika’s face as it reminded her of the fun Morning Musume gathering that they had some years ago where they competed for ‘who could mess up the dance the best’. She attempted on Love Machine with the rest of the 4th generation and they won the contest. Those were the days.

“Rika, what brings you here? Christmas is always spent with Yossie, isn’t it?” Ayumi asked cheekily, bringing her back to reality once more.

Silence fell upon them for some time as Rika figured a way to tell her what had happened. Rika murmured, “Yossie gave me a book filled with our memories just now.” She passed the book to Ayumi and said without exchanging any eye contact, “She said the next time when she says ‘I love you’, she wants to mean every single word of that phrase.”

Ayumi nodded knowingly and asked, “So it’s over? What did you say?”

 “I told her I’ll wait for her…”

“What did she say?”

“She said thank you…”

Silence descended upon them before Ayumi held Rika’s hands tight and whispered, “How do you feel now?”

Rika shook her head and answered, “I feel…kind of free now as though I’ve broken free of the chains that imprisoned me. But people always say that love that can stand the 7 years test will last forever so I’m disappointed that we can’t pass the test even though I’ve tried my best.” Rika paused as she recalled all that had happened in this month and tears welled up in her eyes. Longing to jealousy to possessiveness to freedom, the rollercoaster of emotions had left her exhausted.

She glanced at Ayumi and noticed her friend looking worriedly at her. She smiled. Love wasn’t all in life. “Oh well, the ball is in her court now and if after this, she still chooses me, maybe then we can last forever.” She squeezed Ayumi’s hands to indicate that she was alright.

“Rika, if you have anything, you can look for me, you know? I will be your listening ears.”

“You can look for me too!” Hitomi placed her arms on Rika’s shoulder and exclaimed.

“Me too!” Masae raised her right hand up and screamed.

“Don’t leave me out!” Megumi shouted and hugged Rika from behind.

She didn’t know how much those girls knew about what had happened but with them beside her, it was enough. She felt warmth enveloping her and that feeling wasn’t due to chains of love but rather pure friendship. Tears rolled down Rika’s cheeks and she mumbled with a smile, “Thank you everyone…”
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December 25 (8.46pm)

Eri and Yossie struggled to carry Miki to her apartment as the drunken girl kept swinging her hands wildly and shouting incoherent words. When they were outside her apartment, Yossie fidgeted with her handbag and took out the key to the apartment and in the process of doing so, the clock pendant fell to the ground. Yossie bent down to pick it up and she noticed that there was a distinct crack in the middle of the clock. She thought, “She will kill me for this if this is from Aya. Hope not.”

When they were in the apartment, the 2 girls literally threw the protesting Miki on the bed in her room and let out sighs of relief. Yossie sat on the edge of the bed and gazed at the girl shouting incoherent messages on the bed and she shook her head.
“Why did she end up in this state?” Yossie asked to no one in particular.

Eri stood with her back on the door, staring at Miki. She confessed, “Actually I’m part of the reason why she became like that. We sent those letters to Aya. I never imagine that this will happen. I just wanted to tame her…”

“We?” Yossie asked softly without any eye contact with the younger girl.

“Rika and I,” Eri stated as a matter-of-fact. She added as an afterthought, “I’m sorry Yossie.”

Yossie shook her head. She was involved after all… “It’s not your fault. You didn’t intend for it to happen. It just somehow happened.” Silence fell upon them for a few seconds before Yossie added, “Anyway, if you want to drink, just remember not to get as drunk as this.” Eri nodded obediently.

Yossie took another look at Miki who was now rolling all over the bed. It seemed better for them to leave the place. Just when she was about to stand up, she felt Miki gripping her arms tight from behind. She turned and she was taken by surprise when the drunken girl began to kiss her on the neck and sneaked her hand under her blouse.

Yossie tried to push her off but it was to no avail. Miki was stronger than usual. Then she looked back at Eri who was watching the scene with her eyes wide open and rushed through her words, “I’ll settle it over here. You can go.” Eri raised her eyebrows as she watched Miki smooch the former leader of Morning Musume who was wearing the expression as though ‘settling it’ was a daily business. She then obediently left the room and the apartment. She would have a lot to say to her fellow MM mates. 

When Yossie heard the main door closing, she immediately turned to Miki and tried to push her away. But it was too late. Miki was already naked on top of her and she was unhooking her own bra. It felt weird to be in such a vulnerable position. Usually she was the one on top. Miki mumbled, “Aya…I-”

 “I’m not Aya,” Yossie said firmly and she held Miki’s arms tight.

Miki paused her venture for a moment and she gazed at Yossie in a seducing manner and she murmured, “I hate you but I want you, Aya…”

“Mi-” Before Yossie could finish her sentence, Miki had pressed her lips against Yossie’s and her tongue had intertwined with
Yossie’s. Her hands skillfully undressed Yossie and at the same time, turning her on as well. Miki was so hot even in her drunken state. Her legs were pressing on hers and that was a sensation that she never experienced before…

This is wrong! You can’t take advantage of her like that! She heard a voice shouting at her. Miki was her friend and things had gotten so bad between Miki and Aya and something like this would break their relationship. She thought, "If this is to happen between us, at least, she should know that she's having it with Yoshizawa Hitomi..."

Confused, Yossie remained unmoving. As much as she knew that this was wrong and she would be in a way taking advantage of her drunken state, she was turned on as well. Before she could even think coherently, she felt the other girl’s hands unbuttoning her jeans…
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December 25 (11.35pm)

Aya placed the disc carefully into the DVD player and sat on the couch in her own apartment. On the screen, Miki stood in one of the studio rooms with a wide yet shy grin on her face. Tears trickled down her cheeks as she thought, “Will I see that smile again?” After several seconds, Miki bowed and then said cheerily, “Merry Christmas Aya-chan! This is for you – momoiro kataomoi. Enjoy!”

Then, Miki imitated Aya’s actions and voice, “Ah ikou yo! 1, 2, 3!” Then, she began to dance like what Aya did all the time to the song and sang, “Momoiro no kataomoi  koishiteru MAJIMAJI to  mitsumeteru CHIRACHIRA tte  me ga aeba mune ga KYURURUN momoiro no FANTAJI…”

Aya smiled to herself as she watched Miki do the hip twist in the middle of the verse as she looked so comical. “Perhaps that was what Miki thought whenever she watched me dance,” she murmured to herself. Miki hated looking comical. But she always let down her ‘guard’ whenever she was with Aya as though that strong pride never existed before. Aya thought, “It was so obvious that Miki treated me differently from her smile, words and body language. Why did I take so long to realize? Why can’t I show that I love her and it’s not an unrequited love?” 

“Maji maji to yume miteru anata ni wa miemasu ka?…” Somehow that smile on her face vanished momentarily and was replaced by a slight frown when she sang that line. Probably that question ran through her head every now and then. She reprimanded herself, “I should have known it earlier and show that I know your love by reciprocating. I’m sorry, Miki-tan…” Tears ran down her cheeks as though they were testament to that true love that she threw away with her own hands.

“Momoiro no FANTAJI…” The music came to an end and so did the dance. Miki waved goodbye and she mouthed “Aishiteru” before the screen turned blank. The video ended with ‘I love you’. Would their love end with that as well?
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December 26 (10.24am)

Her eyes opened slowly and she was shocked to see herself naked alone on her bed. She jumped up from the initial resting position. “What had happened last night?” she asked aloud to no one in particular. No answer came. She was alone. She closed her eyes in an attempt to recall what had happened last night and an image of Eri and Yossie dragging her back to her apartment. A scary thought came to her mind which sent adrenaline pumping all over her body: Would it be them? Or would it be just one of them?

She began to experience a bad headache and she lay on the bed yet again in an attempt to shake the headache away. She then took deep breaths in an attempt to calm herself down. She closed her eyes yet again and this time round, she could vaguely remember Yossie pushing her off herself with such force that she ended up hitting the bed frame before she left the room………..
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: sweeety on July 19, 2008, 11:11:16 AM
About time.. now I'll just read it and post.


 OH MAH GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome. At least Miki still.... wants Aya? I'm just glad that Yoshi was a good friend and didn't take advantage. But I think she now knows what she wants. At least hopefully one of them. But I like how Aya is realising that she wants Miki and she wants to show her that but she doesn't know how. But the main thing is that she knows it. I think coming into that relationship she was confused and just didn't want to hurt Miki by turning her down because she wanted to keep her as a friend. But now she is realising that she loves her a lot like in a sexzual way too and now she's realising that she really wants her back.

 As for Rika I think she is close to accepting the way things are with her and Yoshi but I think Yoshi after that night will have something new to say as she knows now that Rika wasn't the innocent little girl she thought and once she figures out what she wants to do I think things are gonna change a lot. I also think Shibata likes Rika.

 Also, noticed the symbolism and I have a really really bad feeling things with Miki and Aya are gonna get worse.
 I mean the symbolism of the locket. I signifies their bond as GAM and now that it's broken I think it's over for GAM but hopefully that means they can have a new start as Aya and Miki instead :)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: kRisZ on July 19, 2008, 04:47:00 PM
aww, nothing happened  :roll: I want a 'YoMiki' something to happen  :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: tru_harmony on July 19, 2008, 06:08:43 PM
so that's why you didn't let rika give her damned honesty gift... i wonder what yossui will do now...

girl, i missed you... i was starting to feel like you've abandoned us... thanks for proving me wrong and i'm sorry that i ever thought that you would leave us hanging...

i love you, tito~~~! lalalalala....
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: Yukari on July 19, 2008, 10:29:35 PM
great chapter tito  :mon beam:

Yossy~~ what will she do?  :mon wind:

amaujajaj i can imagine Miki in momoiro kataomoi  :mon XD:

i want an update~~  :mon whine:

and some yomiki too  :mon innocent:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: ayase909 on July 20, 2008, 03:04:54 AM
 :frustrated: miki-tan............wah! well, im kind of hoping that somwthing will happened between miki and hitomi.......maybe that will  teach aya a lesson,,,,,,"do not mess with Fujimoto!"  :smoke:

well, im proud with yossie......ah! it takes a lot of will power to refuse such blessings in your front (naked miki) haha  :wahaha:

hmm.........an update?! :nya:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: JFC on July 20, 2008, 07:12:31 AM
Oh PLEASE say that Yossi was able to resist and did the right thing. :O
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: Ai.love on July 21, 2008, 12:43:57 PM
 :mon ghost: :mon ghost: :mon ghost: At least they still want each other~
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: sweeety on July 21, 2008, 01:53:02 PM
Love love love pri-soon.... love love love jailbars yeah yeah yeah yeah love love electric shock killing machine love love's not that wonderfull~
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: tito on July 21, 2008, 02:18:03 PM
Hi! Nice to read your comments! I'm really happy! :wub: I doubt I'll have time this week you know..nevertheless, I'll try my best to put up one soon! (Some kind souls can do the reminding, yeah? I'm afraid that I'll forget. Oh crap, that shouldn't be possible :grin: ) Replies to comments time!
About time.. now I'll just read it and post.


 OH MAH GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome. At least Miki still.... wants Aya? I'm just glad that Yoshi was a good friend and didn't take advantage. But I think she now knows what she wants. At least hopefully one of them. But I like how Aya is realising that she wants Miki and she wants to show her that but she doesn't know how. But the main thing is that she knows it. I think coming into that relationship she was confused and just didn't want to hurt Miki by turning her down because she wanted to keep her as a friend. But now she is realising that she loves her a lot like in a sexzual way too and now she's realising that she really wants her back.
Absolutely correct! I guess you basically sum up Aya's POV..good job! :D

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I also think Shibata likes Rika.
:wahaha: This cracks me up.

 
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Also, noticed the symbolism and I have a really really bad feeling things with Miki and Aya are gonna get worse.
 I mean the symbolism of the locket. I signifies their bond as GAM and now that it's broken I think it's over for GAM but hopefully that means they can have a new start as Aya and Miki instead :)
Great that you notice it! Honestly I'll use it in the next chap..will it be for the better or for the worse? :P
aww, nothing happened  :roll: I want a 'YoMiki' something to happen  :P
Hmm....dirty-minded little fellow over there!
so that's why you didn't let rika give her damned honesty gift...
Why? :?
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girl, i missed you... i was starting to feel like you've abandoned us... thanks for proving me wrong and i'm sorry that i ever thought that you would leave us hanging...
Yeah, I won't abandon you! This forum is like my online home..I won't abandon you without a word! Hmm...I guess at the rate you're posting RFP, I ought to forgive you :P

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i love you, tito~~~! lalalalala....
I love you too, tru!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wub:
great chapter tito  :mon beam:

Yossy~~ what will she do?  :mon wind:
I wonder.....
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amaujajaj i can imagine Miki in momoiro kataomoi  :mon XD:
*watches momoiro* Won't it be nice to see her in it for real? Mikitty!!!!1 XD

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i want an update~~  :mon whine:
Trying my best, my dear..I'm...

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and some yomiki too  :mon innocent:
I did promise you somewhere sometime right? Hehe, but I didn't say it will appear in FYI.. :P
:frustrated: miki-tan............wah! well, im kind of hoping that somwthing will happened between miki and hitomi.......maybe that will  teach aya a lesson,,,,,,"do not mess with Fujimoto!"  :smoke:

well, im proud with yossie......ah! it takes a lot of will power to refuse such blessings in your front (naked miki) haha  :wahaha:

Haha, yeah! Don't mess with Fujimoto!! Yeah, it sure takes hell lot of will power :P NAH, everyone should stop scolding Yossi, huh? ^ :lol:
Oh PLEASE say that Yossi was able to resist and did the right thing. :O
Hmmmmm, what do you think?  XD
:mon ghost: :mon ghost: :mon ghost: At least they still want each other~
I probably freak you out with the chap! :w00t: Yeah, hold that undying unwavering GAM spirit close to your heart! :P
Love love love pri-soon.... love love love jailbars yeah yeah yeah yeah love love electric shock killing machine love love's not that wonderfull~
Ahh, spamming the thread, huh? :lol:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: sweeety on July 21, 2008, 02:40:27 PM
am not!


 oh wait I am......


 still here :D

 btw, waiting for the next chapter.. and I can't wait long! I have this thing ......

 I don't think much happened. Miki did remember Yoshi throwing her off her.... but I think they made out a bit or did some stuff before it happened.

 Maybe if we're lucky when Miki wakes up the next morning she wants to try and be good so that Aya will have her back.

 And hopefully Aya will decide to break the ultimatum and go after Miki.

 Yoshi will probably have a little chat with Rika now. Hopefully it will involve her throwing Rika's ass outa here! I think she should dump her and end up with Makoto... it's right about the time she gets back... oh who am I kidding, this story is so far behind that Miki hasn't even gotten Friday'd yet... I think... actually what timing is this now? I forgot :blush:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: Yukari on July 21, 2008, 09:56:21 PM
we'll wait tito  :mon ghost: (mmm i'm like that because i almost didn't sleep last night, i had to study XD) :mon nap:

where do you will write a yomiki???  :mon loveflower: i'll be waiting for it too  :mon look:

i missed my monkeys  :mon sweat: :mon angel: :mon determined: :mon cute: :mon pissed: :mon inluv: :mon exhaust: :mon scare: :mon POd: :mon dunno: :mon yeah: :mon prayer: :mon psst: and my fauvorites  :mon noprob: :mon evillaff:

well it was spam ¬¬ i know, but it's spam that i do for you tito  :mon love:

miki~~ *dream*
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: sweeety on July 23, 2008, 02:19:01 PM
love prison... I'm a prisoner of love~ One that needs GAM rabu rabu to survive...

 I will keep making puns untill I get my next chapter fix!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: Ai.love on July 24, 2008, 05:43:44 AM
Tito!!! You did freak me out :mon wtf: and I will hold that undying unwavering GAM spirit close to my heart~  :pig lunch: << closest one I could find   XD

I'm with Sweety~ GAM rabu rabu needs to survive!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: lollipopgirl on July 24, 2008, 11:16:21 AM
I'm so sorry I haven't commented on this :(
I really love the title though, angsty sweet!
Gosh that MK Christmas Party seems a bit crazy... Boss scares me at the best of times so I would be completely petrified of her there :P
I little bit of YoMiki is better than none :twisted: But i do really hope (and i think it's how it did happen) that Yossy stopped it before it went too far... I don't care drunk and determined Miki may have been, Yossy is stronger than her, so no excuses!

awww at Miki's gift to Aya! Dammit, Miki still wants her too... with each new chapter I am more and more convinced it will end as GAM... or maybe, everyone well be single in the end :o :lol:

tru has really made me into an Ishiyoshi of late so I'm all nervous about Yossy confronting Rika about what Eri said now :cry:

Ok, my new prefered ending: GAM II, IshiYoshi and Miki is alone to give herself sometime to be independent and love herself for a while... She has always given herself to someone else (Aya), it's time to look after herself :heart: ... or something XD
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: sweeety on July 26, 2008, 07:46:40 PM
I am sooo sick of Miki being selfless! MIKI BE A BITCH ALREADY AND BLOODY GET WHAT YOU WANT! AND FYI I LIKED YOU BETTER WHEN YOU WERE GROPING PPL THAN WHEN YOU WERE BROODING ABOUT BEING DUMPED!

 Another fyi pun brought to you by yours truly.. now where's my GAM rabu rabu~? also how about GHM? GHitMaki? Maybe.. they have the jail and conspiracy in common.. XD and Maki is deep and has layers.

 or maybe to punish Yoshi you leave her with Rika in that unsatisfied marriage thingy they have. God it's like they're married except they can't do that!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: hotohori on August 01, 2008, 11:33:26 AM
Waaaah !!! :w00t:  I like the way it developed now
... please keep your work up  :kneelbow:  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

waiting for the next chapter :whistle: :hee:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: kRisZ on August 01, 2008, 01:25:50 PM
where is you.?. everything cool down there.?.  :) been almost half a month now, so ummm update.?.     :grin:  :mon sweat:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: Ai.love on August 03, 2008, 01:33:25 PM
Where are you Tito!? I miss you!!!  :mon hanky:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: sweeety on August 03, 2008, 04:26:18 PM
relax guys, she's just a lil busy, dw, you'll get your crack soon, she's busy but she hasn't forgotten this ok?
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: Rhysky on August 16, 2008, 11:42:11 PM
gosh... nice story...

everyone is getting hurt from their relationship... :fainted:

waiting for the next update...  :hee:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: wings4dreams on August 17, 2008, 03:41:15 AM
Yay! Yossie! Good girl!  You did the smart thing!  When I read the unbotton pants part and it seemed like Yossie was just gonna give in I was like  :angry: gah! dummy you'll ruin the friendship and trust you had worked so hard to gain back. 

wow i can't believe how stressed I was when I thought Yossie was just gonna...hehe  :bigdeal:

GREAT UPDATE!!  :farofflook:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: tito on October 04, 2008, 06:32:22 AM
Hi people! Sorry to abandon this thread for some time! I was having exams and stuff. Yup, now I'm back and I will finish up the story A.S.A.P yeah? Stay tuned! :)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on October 04, 2008, 08:17:36 AM
yay!!!! you're back!
great news!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 26 - Love Prison
Post by: Ai.love on October 04, 2008, 09:54:00 AM
wah! you're back~ i've missed you and your fic  :hee:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: tito on October 04, 2008, 11:49:01 AM
Uh, here is a short transition chapter, hope you guys like it! Enjoy! :P

F.Y.I

Chapter 27

Angel with broken wings

December 31 (2.04pm)

“Good job, everyone!” Aya exclaimed with a wide grin after recording the last Meringue no kimochi of the year. 2006 had been a torturous long year for her. She then quickly dumped the magazines and make-up kit on the messy dressing table into her bag out of habit before leaving the room hastily.

After Aya had departed from the room, one of the staff shook her head before she commented, “Aya, she is still the same as always. She’s always in a rush.” The others nodded in agreement.

Once she was out of the dressing room, she slowed down. Why am I rushing? There’s no point in doing so now that… Tears welled up in her eyes as she recalled those days when Miki waited for her along that particular stretch of corridor. Now, there was no one waiting for her. Now, there was absolutely nothing to look forward to. But she had no one to blame other than herself. She had chased the angel who was always there for her, who loved her more than anything in the world and who even broke her wings because of her. 

As she scolded herself for hurting Miki so badly, someone bumped into her and interrupted her train of thoughts. That person, who was wearing a low cap and a black T-shirt, immediately apologized and walked off. She thought, “How nice if that person was Miki.” She hadn’t been talking to Miki ever since Christmas and she could barely remember how the sexy voice sounded like. 5 days were all it took to forget something that she thought she always remembered since 2001. Memory is such a scary thing.

Suddenly, her handphone rang and she picked it up at the first vibration and exclaimed into the phone, “Miki-tan!”

“Aya, it’s me,” the caller replied enthusiastically.

Aya spoke in a flat voice, “Oh, hi mum.”

“You’re coming back tomorrow for New Year Day right?”

“Yes.”

“I miss you a lot-”

“Yes.”

“Is Miki-tan coming tomorrow like always? I miss her too.”

Aya remained silent.

“Why? Did the 2 of you quarrel or something?”

“No…” Aya lied.

“Then what happened? Will she come?”

“Mum, sorry, Miki-tan is busy with work and all so she can’t join us this year.”

“Oh is it? I thought the 2 of you are in the same band-”

“I’m quite busy now so see you tomorrow!” Aya hung up her phone and her heart felt as though it was pierced a million times. It was just so painful to admit that Miki was no longer part of her life. It was just so painful to face up to the fact. She needed time to accustom herself to life without that treasured angel.

 She stared at the clock pendant when she entered the empty lift and wondered what decision Miki had made. Would she wait or would she give up on their relationship? Perhaps, all along, Miki had been on an empty lift waiting for her to get on and had grown so tired of waiting that she finally gave up on their relationship. Maybe the time had come for their roles to reverse. She thought, “Even if the lift will be empty, even if this becomes an unrequited love, I’ll love you forever, Miki-tan, just like what you’ve been doing all these while.”
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December 31 (2.45pm)

The person with the low cap and black T-shirt made her way into an empty studio and waved to the other 3 girls who were already in the room. She then sat on an armchair before she said solemnly, “I think the 3 of you know why I called all of you here for an urgent meeting. I guess we were all on different wavelengths before this, or I was from all of you. I hope that from now on, we can work with the one common objective in mind.” She scanned the room quickly before she continued, “The project is entitled "NO STRINGS ATTACHED" and-”

Suddenly, the door opened and a short girl with blond hair stepped in and spoke defiantly, “Why did you leave us out?” She, together with some other girls, then entered the room and shut the door behind them.

The girl on the armchair shook her head, twisted her lips slightly before she said, “Ok, I’m sorry. Meeting resumes.”

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December 31 (3.02pm)

 Even from a distance, that silhouette still seemed that familiar, graceful and beautiful as always. She watched her angel plod out of the building and tears trickled down her cheeks. She wanted to move towards her and hug her tightly but she couldn’t because of that unspoken agreement that she had to stick to.

She glanced blankly at the blue clock pendant and murmured to herself, “24 days and 4 hours to go.”
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: hotohori on October 04, 2008, 04:10:21 PM
kya~ an update !!!!  :onioncheer:
I feel sorry for Ayaya...but as a Yomiki-fan I can´t let her get Mikitty  :cool1:

waiting for the next chapter  :luvluv1:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: kRisZ on October 04, 2008, 04:21:07 PM
yay  :muffin: :muffin: :muffin: welcome back!  :muffin: :muffin: :muffin:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: Ai.love on October 04, 2008, 10:21:06 PM
I've always love the chapter titles you come up with .... "Angel with Broken Wings"  :heart:

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someone bumped into her and interrupted her train of thoughts. That person, who was wearing a low cap and a black T-shirt, immediately apologized and walked off. She thought, “How nice if that person was Miki.”
It has to be Miki! :OMG:

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“24 days and 4 hours to go.”
geez that's a long time and enough time to fall out of love  :bleed eyes:

Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on October 05, 2008, 12:38:51 AM
poor Aya :cry:
I'm kind of confuse... Is Miki the person with the cap or she was part of the three girls waiting for the girl with the cap? :?
What's that time for?
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: tru_harmony on October 05, 2008, 01:59:36 AM
tito, you came back!!!

i missed you!!!!

thanks for the update!!!
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: JFC on October 05, 2008, 07:39:32 AM
Oh please say the person with the cap and black t-shirt was Miki!!!
:pleeease:
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: sweeety on October 05, 2008, 08:50:07 AM
nah, that person was definitely not Mikitty.

I reckon it was Maki or Rika or something. But I don't think it was Mikitty. But now I'm pissed off and angry at you tito cause you're gonna drag this story on even longer and make it into a trilogy or something. So I'm angry at you because even if they do get back together now there's bound to be something that tries to get between them soon.

-_-

And poor Aya. But it's kind of a good pain because now that she's sort of in Miki's shoes, she finally realises what it's like to be her. So now she really will be able to love her in the same way, just like she thought. But I reckon a whole month is too long. I think she should give up and run back to Miki, begging her to come back. And I want to see things as they are now from Miki's point of view. I think she'd be suffering more but I want to see her POV because I want to know if she's going to stay with her or not..... oh who am I kidding, I just miss Miki and wanna know how she's holding up although I bet it's not gonna be good and she'll be tortured and all and she might be angry even.

     Maan why do you make it sad again? It's always sad and sad and sadder. Gosh with the way things are going, this is turning out to be like freaking charmed except no one gets vanquished and they always come back and deal more and more damage. Damn it.

I thin we need to have a little talk. -_-

I'll be here, I can't hardly wait for the next chapter.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: Haruka on January 11, 2009, 04:54:56 AM
The Last Chap kills me TT_TT


I'm a Yomiki =D

So hope its the last thing you lose ~


YoMiki  4Ever <3~

xD
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: tito on May 21, 2010, 02:13:22 PM
Hi everyone! I'm back!  :D
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: tru_harmony on May 21, 2010, 03:04:59 PM
TITO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ZOMG I MISSED YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: tito on May 21, 2010, 03:12:36 PM
Hello tru_harmony! I miss you too ): I promise to finish this story soon. Sorry for the break, I had too many exams ):
 :) :) :)
Title: Re: F.Y.I 27 - Angel with broken wings
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on May 22, 2010, 04:47:09 AM
OHH!!! :w00t:  cool to see you back!
and I understand you, I'm having a really hard time with school too, but luckily is almost over :nervous
Title: Re: F.Y.I 28 - Unanswered Questions
Post by: tito on May 24, 2010, 03:37:46 PM
Okay, here is the long overdue chapter 28. Hope you will like it.  :) Please comment.. :D

F.Y.I

Chapter 28

Unanswered Questions

January 1 (2.00am)

She tossed in her bed yet again, unable to fight the insomnia that had been haunting her ever since that night when she pushed the other girl away from her. It was the start of winter yet the warmth she felt in the darkness of her room from the distant heater seemed to make her forget which season it was.

“I love you,” Yossie murmured to herself. She sighed loudly as the image of the girl lying on top of her and the sensation when their lips touched surfaced in her mind. “Is that love?” She asked aloud, not expecting any answers. After all, no one was there to grant her any answer when she was confused all these while as to where the line between love and friendship was and where her heart actually resided. Was it with the girl she always thought she loved? Or was it with the girl who had physical contact with her on that night? She could not answer her own question but all she knew for the time being was that whenever the phrase “I love you” popped up in her mind, she could only see Fujimoto Miki and hear her cries and pleads playing over and over again at the back of her head.

But whenever she heard the 3 words enunciated, the line “I’ll wait for you” would pop up in her head and she couldn’t help but to recall how innocently happy that girl was when she said that. That image used to bring her strength but now it brought her into a state of confusion. Innocence. She could not imagine how that same girl was capable of writing those senseless letters. How time can change someone. Was she supposed to like her for that? But after all, she knew that those letters were written because of her desire to keep her lover with her. Desire. It was a word that brought the image of the other girl back into her mind.

The heater rumbles, disrupting her train of thought and brought her back to reality. Yes, it was all a fantasy. It was all nothing but a dream.  When I eventually wake up, my one and only noisy and rude friend will still be beside me and there would be no awkwardness and guilt resting between us. Most importantly, there would not be that tingle of passion. And Rika will be beside me, giggling and laughing away. But she knew better than anyone else that it was not a dream.

The telephone rang, reiterating the fact that it was not a dream. She picked up the phone on the 5th ring and said rather flatly, “Hello.”

“Hey Yossie.”

She felt butterflies flutter in her stomach as she replied as nonchalantly as she could, “Hey Fujimoto, what’s up?”

“Sorry, did I wake you up?” she asked in a concerned manner.

“No,” she answered quickly.

“Oh okay,” Miki said softly. There was a short period of silence before she said in a rehearsed manner, “Yossie, sorry for calling at this hour of the night. I just want to get some things off my chest.”

“Shoot.” That sounds like the normal Yoshizawa Hitomi right? Yeah, that should be what I usually will say when she calls. That is.

“I know I have to say this to you but I don’t think I have the guts to say this when I see you so I decide to just say it over the phone,” she said in that same well-rehearsed manner.

“Are you drinking again?” she asked interrogatively. That is what I will usually say when she sounds so honest and sincere over the phone. I think so.

Miki let out a short laughter before she continued, “You know me so well. Yeah, I am. But I am still pretty much sober now.”

“That’s good.” She took in a deep breath upon completing the sentence in an attempt to calm herself down. Why am I so nervous?

“Yossie, thanks for bringing me to your house that night and I’m sorry for anything that I’ve done or said on that night.”

Does she remember what she actually did that night? Should I ask her? “No problem, Fujimoto. Do you-”

Miki interrupted rudely, “I didn’t intend to drink that much but it’s just that…the pain in my heart was too suffocating.”

Pain? Over the incident in the airport? “Are you feeling better now?”

“Not really, but it’s not as sharp as before.”

Yossie could hear the other girl’s soft sobs over the phone and decided to stay silent in the hope that she could tell her more about what had happened to her over the past few days that had weakened her considerably.

“I know I have no rights to feel hurt. After all, I was the one who inflicted pain on her in the first place. Why did it turn out this way? Why?”

Yossie knew all too well who she was referring to. She started, “Maybe-”

Miki interrupted again, “Maybe we are not meant to be together after all. Maybe we should just stay as friends... Then maybe I can speak to her in the same way I’m speaking to you now.”

Yossie fell silent. For the first time in many years, she did not know what to say to Miki. Why did she say this? What does she mean? What can’t she be rude and annoying as always? She murmured, “What a bad way to start the year - to find myself dumbfounded in a telephone conversation.”

“Oh by the way, Happy New Year leader,” Miki rushed through her words. “It’s getting late, you should turn in soon.”

“Happy New Year-,” Yossie said quickly as she was elated to be able to find some words to add to the conversation. Before she could complete her sentence, the caller hung up on her. She felt the tension in her chest easing and her heartbeat resuming its normal momentum. “Miki,” she said with a smile on her face as she recalled someone who told her that love is something that makes one behave abnormally. Maybe that was the answer she was looking for.

She made her way back to the bed and closed her eyes and allowed the telephone conversation that she just had to replay in her mind. “Maybe we are not meant to be together after all. Maybe we should just stay as friends... Then maybe I can speak to her in the same way I’m speaking to you now.” She knew very well that she should not take the words of a drinking lady seriously but she was happily deluded. She also knew very well that she still hadn’t figured out the boundary between love and friendship and what love truly meant but it didn’t matter at this moment as she wanted to live in this blissful dream for a while longer. She fell asleep soon after.
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January 1 (2.15am)

After she hung up the phone, she let out a sigh of relief. She then picked up the glass of orange juice on the coffee table and took a sip before smiling weakly to herself. How sad it was that she had to lie over the phone that she was drinking alcohol instead of orange juice to defend her pride and ego. How sad it was that she could not tell the person whom she trusted the most that those were her honest words. How sad it was that she had to express her gratitude and apologies vaguely even though she knew what she thanked her for and apologized for. She thanked her for always being there when she was most vulnerable and for pushing her away on that night and she apologized for using her to spite her lover and for that passionate act.

“I hope she knows what I’m referring to,” she said aloud. After all, if Yossie did not manage to grasp the meaning behind those words, no one would. And even if she didn’t manage to comprehend, she would not confront her; in fact she would not even mention about the conversation as she would knew that the conversation covered sensitive areas. She would. Maybe that’s why she enjoyed talking to Yossie. She never asked the wrong questions.

She placed the glass of orange juice gently on the coaster and switched on the television. The actor placed the ring on the actress’ left middle finger and promised to spend the rest of his life with her. She wondered how they felt when they had to say those mushy lines. Did they really put themselves in the shoes of the characters or did they just add in a lot of extra effects to make it seem as though they did? She would definitely have done the latter. “Why bother?” she would question whoever who asked her to put herself in the shoes of the character. But tonight, she tried. She tried to not be Fujimoto Miki. She tried to be truly honest and sincere in her conversation just like
any character in a television series.

But the natural defensive mechanism to safeguard her pride overpowered her determination to sound honest and sincere. She had to lie, rush through her words to make it sound as though it was a well-rehearsed script so that her pride would not be hurt. Tears welled up in her eyes as she thought, “If I cannot even reveal my true emotions to Yossie, then who can I reveal to? Who can I trust?”

On the screen, the leads survived the gunfire and swore to be with each other for the rest of their lives.

“How familiar,” she muttered. It reminded her of that day when she woke up in the hospital to find Aya sitting beside her and then they promised to love each other forever. Then, she recalled the series of events prior to that promise. Maybe Aya was right about my pride. I cannot even be damn honest to my good friend like any other girl over the phone. Tears rolled down her cheeks uncontrollably. Aya’s words played in her mind, “I think we have forgotten why we love each other in the first place.” Why did I love her? Because of her charm? Or because she was loved by someone else? When did I love her? Since the first day we met 7 years ago or since the first day when I saw her smiling happily at Goto? The questions replayed themselves in her mind relentlessly and eventually she cried herself into sleep.
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January 1 (9.03am)

“Happy New Year Aika!” Yossie exclaimed as she gave the young girl a tight hug.

As she made her way down the corridor towards her favourite café – one of the H!P members’ hangout area, she met a group of H!P kids and wished each and every one a Happy New Year and gave all of them a good tight hug. Maybe this was happiness.

As she entered the café and wished the waiters and waitresses a Happy New Year, the other customers turned and shot her weird looks. But it didn’t bother her. Maybe that was bliss.

Then from the corner of her eye, she saw the familiar silhouette alone in the corner of the restaurant. Suddenly, her heart sank. She felt as though she was shot right out of her dreamland where everything was simple into an uglier reality where there wasn’t an ‘Undo’ button. She walked towards the girl habitually, desperately thinking of a way to start the conversation. Eventually, it was her who said, “Happy New Year Yossie.”

She replied hastily, “Happy New Year Rika.” She clearly did not notice the girl’s awkwardness as she pulled out a chair and sat across her. “Rika why are you all alone?” she asked as flirtatiously as she could with a smile on her face as she was determined to have a ‘normal’ conversation after last night’s phone call that had left her dumbfounded for some seconds.

Rika leaned forward and placed her right index finger on her lips before she whispered softly, “I’m waiting for them to arrive.” She bowed her head like a shy high school girl who was about to confess before she said, “Yossie actually-”

“Them?” Yossie leaned forward and asked curiously. “Melon Kinebi?”

“No,” Rika answered flatly before she stood up and waved frantically at the group of girls who just entered the restaurant.

Yossie asked with an eyebrow raised, “You are waiting for Yuko, Nacchi and Mari? When did you guys become such good-”

Before Yossie could complete her sentence, she felt a slap on her back. “Hey Yossie, Happy New Year! Why did you not turn up for the meeting the last time round?” Yuko asked.

“Meeting? What meeting?” she asked with a frown on her face.

“No strings attached. You are part of the team right?” Yuko replied nonchalantly as she pulled out a chair and sat on it.

Yossie immediately turned and looked at Rika and grabbed her arms tightly. She raised her voice, “What is no strings attached? What the hell are you guys doing or planning to do?”

Rika replied weakly, “I wanted to tell you about the project just now.”

“What project?” This time round, she was literally shouting.

Nacchi placed both hands on Yossie’s back and whispered into her ears, “You don’t want the whole café to know what is going on in H!P right? Chill.”

Yossie took in a deep breath but she could not stop the anger from growing inside her. She recalled how frightened Eri looked when she told her about the threat letters and how terrible Miki looked when she cried on her shoulders in the airport and how hurt she was that night when she was drunk. She looked at Nacchi and said flatly, “Please sum up what you guys are up to.”

Nacchi smiled, glad that her junior obeyed her instructions, before she said, “The other day, Rika and Eri confessed to us that they were the ones behind those letters to Aya and Rika said it was just an attempt to tame Miki and to keep you with her.” Nacchi paused to allow the effects of her words to sink in before she continued, “They told us that things had evolved in a way beyond their imagination and they hoped that we could help in this project entitled ‘No strings attached’ designed to mend their relationship.” She winked before she said with a lilt in her voice, “They knew we are experienced matchmakers!”

The other 2 senior members laughed but Yossie remained silent as she did not quite know how to react. She felt glad that Rika was, in a way, taking responsibility for her actions and maybe, perhaps, the project may be feasible and she would not have to see Miki hurt and devastated again. But, then again, knowing how much these people around the table disliked Miki, it would be more possible for them to sit around and discuss ways to harm Miki than to help her. “Then maybe I can speak to her in the same way I’m speaking to you now…” This line played continuously in her head, urging her to protect the girl whom she finally decided she liked.

“Yossie, are you okay?” Nacchi asked as she held her junior’s arms gently, bringing Yossie back into reality.

Yossie ignored Nacchi’s concern and looked straight into Rika’s eyes and spoke as softly as she could, “Can you stop this project? You’ve hurt her and this fact will not change no matter what you do. And your plans are all so downright atrocious and lousy! You will just end up hurting her even more. Please stop.”

Yossie then rushed out of the restaurant with tears flowing out of her eyes. She knew that Rika did all these in an attempt to keep her heart but somehow the pain seemed unbearable when those words were pronounced. Prior to hearing these lines, she could still con herself into thinking that it was all an illusion. But now she could not live in delusion any longer. She had to face up to the fact that she was the reason why Miki was hurt so deeply and she did not deserve the bliss that she felt earlier.

Back in the restaurant, Mari asked aloud, “I wonder who Yossie is so concerned about. Is it Miki or Aya?”

No one answered her question. They knew who that person was in their hearts.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 28 - Unanswered Questions
Post by: tito on May 26, 2010, 02:56:48 PM
Hi my friend! haha, I realise I'm not the only busy one out here. Everyone is!  XD Oh well...yeah can understand why you get confused. That's mainly because I haven't been updating for a year plus? I promise to keep it coming...until it ends of course! :P
Title: Re: F.Y.I 29 - Recurring Moments
Post by: tito on May 28, 2010, 03:12:34 PM
Since I have the time now, I shall write more!  :) Hope you like it and please comment!  :D

F.Y.I

Chapter 29

Recurring Moments

January 3 (2.03pm)

From afar, she saw the lonely silhouette strolling towards the futsal training ground. Although she could not really discern the number on the back of the jersey the person was wearing, she knew who that person was. In the early stages of their relationship, she had never stared at her back for such a long period of time because whenever she saw her, she would run quickly towards her and hug her from behind. But recently, too many things had happened and on so many occasions in the past week, she was looking at her back from afar, imagining her voice when she stopped to speak to someone and her warmth when she hugged someone. Occasionally, she would question her own decision to wait for her whenever the fear of losing her penetrated her soul. But more often than not, she chose to believe that absence would make the heart grow fonder.

However, she knew she needed to approach her. She was evidently upset that day when she stomped off after hearing about the plan and she knew she needed to clarify. So she walked forward, concentrating on her footsteps and breathing, as she approached the silhouette that she daren’t near for some time.

“Yossie, please listen to me,” Rika pleaded softly as she grabbed her right hand from behind.

Without even glancing at her, Yossie replied flatly, “Sorry Rika. I’m afraid I can’t. Training is starting soon.”

At least she can recognize my voice. “Please, just one minute will do. The seniors came up with a simple yet effective plan to resolve whatever conflicts between them.”

Yossie stared blankly at the pavement leading to the futsal court located about 50 metres away from them. This route was so familiar to her so was the mix of trepidation and anticipation that she was feeling now because of this conversation.  She thought, “They always say that time will change situations. Why do I find myself in the same situation over and over again even as time passes by?”

After knowing Yossie for 7 years, Rika knew that Yossie, being a conversationalist, would never fall silent in a conversation unless she wanted the other party to continue but she was too angry or upset to ask the other party to do so. Rika said confidently in a well-rehearsed manner, “Yuko said the most effective way is to find some entity that symbolizes their relationship and make them realise and treasure the value of it. So we thought of Towao – their dog. Probably someone will be in charge of ‘kidnapping’ the dog and then we will inform them separately that the dog is lost and they will begin to search high and low for the dog. Then, like an ending scene from the movie, they will find the dog and when they look up, they see each other and they will live happily ever after.”

Rika leaned forward to try to get a glimpse of Yossie’s facial expression. She was wearing a frown on her face. Rika chose to believe that Yossie was digesting the information.

After a few moments of silence, Yossie asked, “Why are you doing this?”

Rika replied without any hesitation, “I want the two of them to be together-”

“You want the two of us to be together,” Yossie interrupted in a manner that sounded as though she was just correcting a grammatical error.

Rika shook her head. “No, Eri and I just felt guilty that we were the culprits behind this whole mess and that’s why we came up with ‘No Strings Attached’. And I felt terrible especially after hearing from Eri how devastated Miki was that night,” Rika defended herself vehemently.

Did Eri narrate the whole story to her? I bet not, or else she wouldn’t be so calm. But then again, she probably did or else she wouldn’t come up with this rotten new plan. This girl is hard to understand.
This time round, Yossie turned around and looked straight into her eyes – those eyes that she used to adore before saying, “Yes you want the two of us to be together.”

Rika bowed her head in an attempt to conceal the tears that were forming in her eyes. Why can’t she understand that I’m not doing this to keep her with me? It’s purely altruistic… 

Yossie shook her head and glanced at the blue sky instead. She couldn’t bear to see the innocent girl whom she once loved being devoured by hatred and jealousy right before her very eyes. It was a clear blue sky but, unlike summer, one hardly noticed the strong rays emitted by the sun unless one looked at the sky. However, today, even as her eyes were fixated on the sky, she only noticed the chilling wind. Maybe that was because she thought that however strong the rays were, it would never beat the wind in winter. Because it was winter.

From afar, Yossie saw a haggard girl plodding in her direction. The bag on her shoulders seemed too heavy for her. How fragile. Better don’t let her think that I’m part of the gang that caused her the pain.

She looked at Rika whose head was still bowed and said softly but quickly, “Anyway, I got to make a move first because the coach wanted to meet me before the training commences.” What a lousy lie. But she will believe.

She took one step forward before she stopped in her tracks and said flatly, “By the way, your plan A, B and C are all great except one thing – you forgot to consider the human factor.” She pointed at her own chest before she leaned forward and whispered into her ears, “Because of the mess you’ve created, my heart is now with Fujimoto Miki. I love her. Period.”

After saying that, Yossie strode past her while she stood there, rooted to the spot with tears flowing down her cheeks. Regardless of whether it was the truth or a lie, the pain in her heart was real. She knew there was a possibility that she was just intentionally hurting her because of anger but she could not bring herself to believe in that possibility. She felt a strong urge to go up to every single mother on the street and say, “Did you tell your child that honesty is the best policy? Bullshit! What crap! What a pack of lies!” Would the ending be different if she had lied to say that ‘No Strings Attached’ was initiated to keep Yossie’s heart? Would the ending be different if she had lied that she would not wait for Yossie and begged Yossie to stay with her? Would the ending be different if she had lied that she was not part of all these crap? Would the ending…

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January 3 (2.58pm)

“Ok girls, I know everyone is still in the celebration mode, but this is our very first training of the year so let’s forget about whatever New Year celebration we had or are going to have and just FOCUS on training for the next few hours alright?” Yossie paused for a moment before she exclaimed with a grin on her face, “Let’s train hard today!”

The younger girls shouted “Yes” rather energetically and in unison whereas some of the other members simply said it in a bored and unhappy manner. Yossie nodded her head with a smile plastered on her face. The reaction was expected and it was almost the same as previous years except for the missing loud chirpy voice and the vice-captain who would shout at the girls who had just given the lacklustre response. They were just simply leaning against the wall with their heads bowed, not uttering a single word. How much she missed their usual selves.

Yossie moved towards one of the two girls, pulled her to a corner, placed her hands on her shoulders and spoke gently, “Can you please show some zeal? This is not just about you. It will affect everyone.”

She stared blankly at her and nodded reluctantly.

While Yossie spoke to her, the other girl stood there, rooted to the spot with tears welled up in her eyes as she watched their every action. She couldn’t bring herself to bring herself to imagine what her most beloved said to that girl because it was just so painful to know that she could do nothing as she had lost the battle. And whatever form of struggle would only win some sort of sympathy and not love. What flooded her mind at that moment were not images of her most beloved but this one image of a little boy who ran down the hill with all of his might and shouted at the other shepherds that the wolf was there. However, her tale was not exactly a mirror image of ‘The Boy Who Cried Wolf’ because she couldn’t quite remember when she actually lied no matter how hard she tried. Maybe the trust was never built between them in the first place. That was perhaps the main reason why she cried.

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January 3 (5.33pm)

The training went as per normal from warm-up, drills to a mini match with the regular water breaks in between. By the time it ended at 5.30pm, most of the girls were extremely tired and were feeling somewhat warm inside despite the occasional cold wind that seeped through the gap between the door and the wall into the indoor futsal court. Some of the girls were lingering on the court, indulging in idle chatter while others made their way back into the locker room.

As Miki trudged towards the locker room alone, she stopped by the vending machine and contemplated on which drink to purchase to quench her thirst. It was not because she was extremely thirsty but it was more of because she wanted to be alone. She did not want to be with her teammates because she knew that they would note her presence and would ask questions like “How are you?” How was she supposed to answer this question? Even if she gave a half-hearted answer on the surface, her heart would ache deep inside. If it was not because of the sense of guilt she felt towards Yossie, she would not even bother to turn up for training today.

She would have wanted to buy a can of soda but Yossie would clearly disapprove it as it would hurt her stamina. There was orange juice as well and she would have opted for it as it was the healthier choice. But she did not want to be reminded of that night whereby she lied that the orange juice she was actually drinking was alcohol. She did not want to be reminded that she could not be honest even when she wanted to because of her pride.

Then her eyes rested on the can of coffee displayed on the vending machine and her heart sank instantly. In the past, she would not have even considered buying coffee from the vending machine at all because it would have paled in comparison with Aya’s specially made coffee. But that was in the past. Will I ever have the chance to taste that coffee again?

She pressed the button located below the can of coffee on display in the machine and before long, the can of coffee was ready for collection. She picked up the can, opened it and took a small sip. “Horrible,” she murmured under her breath. There was just simply too much sugar. How much I hope I can pinpoint the problems in our relationship as quickly and easily like this. Why can’t I find the source of the pain to my heart? Why can’t I?

 She walked briskly towards a trash bin and threw the can of coffee into it. Tears welled up in her eyes as the can landed on the heap of rubbish in the bin. It was just too normal and simple for her liking. It reminded her of those good old days when she volunteered to throw away the empty cans of soda into the trash bin when Aya and her ate together in one of their apartments. It was still the same action but now it was a very different scenario and sensation. Back then, it was pure bliss. Now, it was a mix of jealousy, sorrow, anger and that hurt pride.

She then dragged her feet towards the locker room and the empty corridor reminded her of her loneliness. How much she wished Aya was hiding behind one of the pillars and would leap towards her and hug her when she walked past. But with each step she took, she felt that her wish was drifting further and further away from her. How much she wished what she drank earlier was beer such that she would forget about the pain in her chest for a while. How much she wished she would be drunk until the day she regained the courage and confidence to speak to Aya and when she could finally cast away her pride and apologize to her and beg her to stay with her. 

She inserted the key into its slot on her locker door and turned the key in a clockwise motion. When she swung the door open, her heartbeat quickened when she saw its contents. Apart from her bag and other personal belongings, there was an unfamiliar pink cup with a lid in it. She’s the only one who has the spare key to my locker right? Perhaps, just perhaps… She turned around and scanned the quiet room quickly. Apart from Yossie, Mai and Erika, there was no one else in the room. The person she was looking for was not in the room. Or maybe it’s Yossie who is just trying to cheer me up. She smiled to herself as she imagined how sheepish Yossie looked when she placed the cup in her locker.

She picked up the cup and removed the lid. Instantly, there was a faint coffee smell in the air. Coffee. Will it be? No, I should stop creating false hopes. She took a small sip and she could feel a surge of adrenaline rush inside her.  The milk to sugar ratio felt so familiar but she could not quite trust her tongue so she took another sip. Yes, it is. It must be her! Without thinking, she dashed out of the room.

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January 3 (5.45pm)

Standing on the pavement leading to the futsal court, Aya smiled as she tried to imagine Miki’s face when she drank the coffee she made.  Would she be apprehensive? Would she smile after she tasted it? Or would she cry?

After spending hours thinking of a way to approach her, she figured that this was the best way because she did not know what to say to her. She was also afraid that the words that she said would hurt the girl she loved even more. She hoped that the familiar scent and taste of the coffee could mend the heart that she had broken. If only coffee can heal all forms of pain.
Title: Re: F.Y.I 29 - Recurring Moments
Post by: Rhysky on May 29, 2010, 09:23:04 PM
yeah!!!! U update a new chapter.... :D

Omg.... Yossy, how can u treat Rika like this??? Though i support YoMiki, but then it's hurtful to see Rika got this hurt when she telling all the truth. :(

Aya seems to know how to handle things between her & Miki. It's nice to see the coffee, cream & sugar. Haha. :)

Update soon..... Looking forward to a new one...... ^^