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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #140 on: June 10, 2013, 03:35:48 AM »
I guess the shock of the slap came out but poor Mayu
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #141 on: June 10, 2013, 03:37:58 AM »
yuki~ yukiiii....... who's not gonna mad at you right now, its too much really...too much...for mayuyu LOL  :badluck:

why something like this happen to her....its painful...its have been for years already....but mayu still cared for you... :err:

jurina is hurt too...she's mayuyu girlfriend now,but seeing mayu do something like that just for yuki,it hurt...

because jurina would think that mayu still have a feeling for yuki...its still not fade away like a wind...

jurina try to win mayu and love her with all her might and she finally win.

but just simple meeting with yuki,just a moment mayu and yuki meet each other again ,ruin all her happiness...poor jurina  :fainted:

what happen next?

well i like it tooo the slapped LOL its minimize my anger for yuki...LOL  :wigglypanda:

what yuki respond after that slap? well sae might mad too, someone slap her yuki with no reason (well they had a reason)

acchan,takamina and kumi just silent,maybe they hold their anger at yuki...

they dont have the right to blame her...at least not them...so just wait jurina,she's mayu girlfriend,she had a reason to angered yuki... and bang! she slap her LOL




thank for the update, cant wait wait and wait for the next update...its painful POV!!  :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted:
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #142 on: June 10, 2013, 04:09:03 AM »
Yeah... season 2 started now...

And it's in Yuki POV... that's great...

You even put some background on her feeling about the high school and her life before Mayu's accident...

Ah... so Sae asked Yuki to come to the cafe for something... was Sae trying to propose to her?

Yuki was just there and couldn't do anything for Mayu... I think she was still in shock...

I could understand Jurina reaction... because of Yuki.. Mayu needed to be the bad guy and broke her heart in process...

Since there would be no way Yuki would like Mayu after the betrayel that Yuki thought Mayu had done....

Jurina was there always comforting and standing by her side always... waiting for Mayu to like her back...

After so long Jurina able to be with Mayu and also engaged to Mayu...

Now Mayu got hit by car to save Yuki... ALWAYS Yuki...

Poor Jurina... Mayu didn't think of Jurina or what would happen if she got hit by the car... she just wanted to save Yuki...

Jurina gave Yuki look that scared the hell of Yuki... and probably a look that promised world of pains.

What's going to happen to Mayu?

Why Sae could not save Yuki... She was nearer...?

What would Jurina said to Yuki?

What the other friends would say in this situation?

Can't wait to find out

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #143 on: June 10, 2013, 06:08:46 AM »
I didn't expect your update so fast, i'm happy >u<
but, goosh this chapter was so sad!! and i was like O.O
and then final! when Jurina came and slaped Yuki omg i'm dying.

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #144 on: June 10, 2013, 10:07:56 AM »
OMG!! Jurina slapped Yuki!!  :shocked
so it's Jurina is the one is going to tell her the truth  :huhuh
war start between Yuki and Jurina!!!  XD

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #145 on: June 10, 2013, 10:31:58 AM »
You update so fast :mon beam:
It's Yuki's POV so I guest there'll be lots of drama :mon star:
She even had a nightmare about Mayu and that guy holding hand and kissing in front of her :mon evillaff:
I'm sure she must be very sad about that :mon noprob:
Oh @@ Jurina slapped Yuki when she knew that Yuki's the reason Mayu got hit by a car :mon thumb:
Although it painful but I love it very much :mon love:
The other just stay silent when she saw Yuki, they must know why Mayu being like that :mon dunno:
But why Sae didn't save her :mon huh2: I thought she was closer to Yuki :mon wtf:
Not sure if Jurina would tell Yuki all :mon whine:
If she did, I really wanted to see her reaction or just her thought about it :mon XD:
I also want know what'll happen to Mayu :mon sweat:
Can't wait to see :mon scare:
Update soon, please :mon pray2:
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #146 on: June 10, 2013, 12:10:12 PM »
Whose POV were you gonna write from?

Also gotta love the slap from J. XD


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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #147 on: June 10, 2013, 12:43:54 PM »
Oh no, I feel so bad for Jurina :cry:
The second Yuki came back into Mayu's life, Mayu had to get hurt again.


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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #148 on: June 10, 2013, 02:46:34 PM »
WHY IM SO SELFISH,
ALREADY WANT AN UPDATE HAHAHA
ITS BECAUSE TODAY UPDATE IS KIND OF SAME WITH THE LAST UPDATE BEFORE
STILL ABOUT THAT ACCIDENT SCENE
I WANT TO KNOW HOW MAYU CONDITION AND HOW YUKI WHEN SHE KNOWING ALL
BUT STILL THANK FOR THIS UPDATE..

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #149 on: June 10, 2013, 07:55:32 PM »
I haven't checked this fic in a while, and went through everything since page 2! WOW, things are sure getting dramatic.

The plot is getting more and more exciting! Please update soon. This is the first (and so far, only) MaYuki story I'm reading.

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #150 on: June 10, 2013, 08:11:32 PM »
....

.... More hurt

Nooooo why!! :bleed eyes:
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 1
« Reply #151 on: June 11, 2013, 08:59:13 PM »
Chapter 2


Then suddenly our 34 minutes of quietness, broke when Jurina entered the hallways.

“You!!!”

she said, while crying and glaring at me. I just stared at her, and I could see all the anger in her eyes. It feels like she want kill me.

“PLANKK!!!”

I fall down when she slapped me, and I just stared at her, when I saw her eyes. For the first time, I felt scared like a prey being hunted by a predator.

“Hey you, why did you slap my girlfriend?!”

Sae asked, then approach Jurina and grab her collar. But Jurina just gave her a stare, that stare is so scary, if it could kill it will surely would kill me

“Get you’re filthy hand, off me!!!”

Jurina scream at Sae, then pushed Sae back. I just look at them, still processing everything. Jurina was about to attack me, but Kumi grab her, and trying to stop her.

“You, why did you came back?!”

Jurina scream at me while pointing her finger on me, Sae was about to attack Jurina, but Rena suddenly appeared out of nowhere and stop her.

“Hey!! Don’t talk to my girlfriend that way!!”

Sae said, Then continue their trash talk for several minutes. But all stop when, Takamina smack both of their head

“You two, be quiet, where in a hospital!!”

Takamina said, Yuko just sign then come near me.

 “We need to talk”

Yuko said,  I just nodded my head. Takamina and Kumi come with Jurina to get some fresh and still trying to clamed her down, while Rena talked to Sae. Nyan Nyan stayed  near the E.R room just in case if the there’s any news about Mayu, while me, Acchan and Yuko go to the café near the hospital, to talk.

“Yuki, I think it’s about time, that you need to know the truth”

Yuko said, with a serious voice, and Acchan just nodded her head

“Huh?”

I just looked at them, waiting for them to talk

“It’s about Mayu”

Yuko said, then look at me. I just look down and tighten my grip on my skirt

“What about Mayu?”

I asked her, then Yuko looked at Acchan, then they both nodded their head

“I didn’t told anyone that Mayu save you from that accident Yuki, only I, Nyan Nyan, Acchan and Takamina knows it, do you know why?”
Yuko asked me, I just looked down

“Why did she save me? Why won’t you tell the others that I’m the cause of her accident, huh?”

I asked them, They just look at each others, then Acchan grab my hand and made me look at them

“Yuki, please forget the past and forgive Mayu, she only did that to save you”

Acchan said, I look at them, and my chest felt being tighten

“Yes, Mayu save me from that car, but I still can’t forget that she betrayed me”

I said to them, I felt tear drops fall from my eyes

“Yuki, Mayu never betrayed you, it’s just an act”

Yuko said with a serious voice, I look at them with my already swollen eyes

“Act? What do you mean by that?”

I asked them, then Acchan tighten her grip on my hand, And tell me the whole story, how they all act and proceed Mayu’s plan just to save me from my ex. While they telling me their story, all of my memories from highschool suddenly flashes right into my mind, when Mayu come to my house and kissed me and give me that beautiful smile, before she act to stole my boyfriend, all of my happy memories of her, also her beautiful smile that she always give to me. I felt my heart stabbed when they continue their story. I just cry, as I know all the pained that I had cause to Mayu came to me. After they finish telling me their story, I just look at them

“Why? Why Mayu did that?”

I asked them between my sob, Yuko just sign and smile to me

“Because you’re her bestfriend, she said, she wants to protect you”

Yuko said then smile to me

“How could I face Mayu now?”

I said between my sob, but Acchan and Yuko patted my back and my head

“Don’t worry about it, And beside her girlfriend and family doesn’t know that she save you”

Yuko said to me, I whipped my tear and look at her

“Girlfriend?”

I asked them, then Acchan and Yuko smile to me

“Yeah, Jurina is Mayu’s girlfriend, You should apologize to her later”

Acchan said, I just nodded my head, and followed them back to the hospital, But there’s something, I don’t know what, but feels kinda weird inside me

When we came back everybody looks clam, except for Sae and Jurina having a stare fight. When they saw me coming Sae rushed to me and hug me, while Jurina just give me again that scary stare that she give a few hours ago. I just came near Jurina and bow my head

“I’m sorry”

I sad to Jurina, but she just look at me, saying nothing

“Jurina, I told Yuki about Mayu’s secret in highschool”

Yuko said to Jurina, but Jurina just  widen her eyes, and emitting a scary aura

“You told her?”

Jurina asked, But Yuko nodded her head and grab her arm and drag her to the corner. After some few minutes, Jurina came closer to me

“I’m sorry about that slap”

Jurina said, I just smile at her and gesture to her that it’s okay. After some few hours of waiting the doctor came out, and we all came to him

“How was she doctor?”

Jurina asked with a worried voice

“She okay now, just minor injury, but she broke her arm, she will just need a good few months of rest then will be fine”

The doctor said, then all of us sign in relieved. And Jurina called Mayu’s family to tell them the news.

Then we all rushed in to see Mayu, she sleeping like an angel, with some few bandage with her and a dextrose attached to her arm.



………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

After a more than a  week she still sleeping, Jurina just get out to buy something while the others have work. Only me, Jurina and Sae come here to stay with Mayu because it’s my day off. I send Sae outside to buy some lunch for the three of us.

“Hmm…”

I  heard Mayu, so I came near her and hold her hand and look at her, She’s slowly moving her eyes, until it finally opened

“W- water”

she said weakly, so I give her water and assist her drinking it. After that she look at me

“Yuki”

She said, I just cried and hug her

“Ahhh….”

She said, I let go of the hug because I can see her pain when I hug her, and look at her, crying

“Sorry Mayu, I’m really sorry”

I said between sob, she just touched my face and whipped my tears using her thumbs. I look at her, she just give me a smile, but her eyes looks empty

“It’s okay Yuki”

She said, I grab her hand that touching my face and hold it tight, and kiss it. I kissed it and close my eyes

“No Mayu, since then all I do is cause you pain, and I can’t let that happen again”

I said, she let go her hand and make me face her

“so they already told you?”

I just nodded to her, and stare at her

“Mayu, I’m sorry, I’m really sorry”

I said, while crying, but she smile to me then look at me

“Yuki, I should be the one saying that” she said

“No, Mayu you just save me, and wake me up from my blindness ”

 I replied to her, she just give a smile and stare at me, her eyes looks different, it looks empty, and dark, not the one that I remembered back then in highschool

“Yuki, can we still be friends?”

she asked me, I nodded my head

“Of course Mayu, you’re my best friend”

I said, but I heard something dropped, and when I looked it up, it’s Jurina. She looks like she about to cry, and rushed in and give Mayu a bear hug. Mayu eyes soften and hug Jurina’s back

“Mayu, … don’t ever scared me like that ever again”

Jurina said between her sobbed, Mayu just whipped Jurina’s tear and give her that look and smile, that she used to give me back in highschool.
I watched the two love birds reunited, I felt weird watching those two making love in front of me, So I just leave them alone, Then I felt a little pain in my chest when I remember Mayu’s empty  stare that she gave me. I really miss Mayu’s smile her real smile, but I didn’t get any. She just gave it all to Jurina.


…………………………….TBC………


(A/N: Yuko didn’t tell Yuki’s about Mayu’s feeling back then in highschool, she just told her that Mayu love her as a friend, and did all that things because Mayu is her best friend)

why?
Of course Yuko wouldn’t tell that, she don’t want  to ruin her Little sister love life, and beside She already asked Mayu if she moved on with Yuki, right?


Thank you for all the comments minna









« Last Edit: June 12, 2013, 04:16:46 AM by -gibson-mayulover »

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 2
« Reply #152 on: June 11, 2013, 09:16:04 PM »
It took that long to figure the act had ruin their relationship for so long that it had to be told now to mend whatever they could keep together
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 2
« Reply #153 on: June 11, 2013, 09:21:36 PM »
so yuki know the truth ^^

awww yuki is jealous of jurina because mayu gives all her attention to jurina

I cant wait how the drama will turn out ^^

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 2
« Reply #154 on: June 11, 2013, 09:25:48 PM »
noooooooooooooooooo  :stoned:
Mayu doesn't love Yuki anymore  :fainted:
I'm dead I can't wait to read the next  :on hobo:

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 2
« Reply #155 on: June 11, 2013, 09:45:18 PM »
Yay update!!

I feel bad for Yuki but I'm all JuriMayu now. I hope Mayu's blank stare to Yuki is not just an act :cry: Jurina is just too good for you to throw her away here, Mayu.


Btw, I really like the writing of this chapter. There's more dialogue and less narrative so it feels less rushed than the previous chapters. I wanted to tell you this before but didn't quite know how to say it. The new chapter is just in the right direction. Hope this encourages, and not discourages you  :thumbup :fap

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 2
« Reply #156 on: June 11, 2013, 09:57:19 PM »
Thank you, thank you. No amnesia! XD I wouldn't want Mayu to forget Jurina. I was reading while praying it won't be happening. I'm glad my prediction is off. >.<

Right now, I'm totally head over JuriMayu in this fic.  :heart:


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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 2
« Reply #157 on: June 12, 2013, 03:32:26 AM »
Thank you! Mayu just got a broken arm! ;)

Ohmygosh! Yuko.and Acchan told everything to Yuki. Yuko such a.good friend and big sister to Mayu. Aww. Now Yuki regret everything! That's right Mayu sacrificed her own happiness, her friendship to you, just to see you alright and she did that because she loves you so much Yuki!

Now, Mayu and Yuki are friends again.. Mayu loved Yuki before.. And Yuki came back.. Oh no! This going to be interesting! Can't wait to see more drama! :fap Even though it hurts me..

Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup :twothumbs

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 2
« Reply #158 on: June 12, 2013, 06:30:25 AM »
thank god it just a broken arm *wipe sweat in my forehead*
yuki knows the truth...
Omg i cant wait to read more!
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 2
« Reply #159 on: June 12, 2013, 09:12:14 AM »
Jurina was so angry with everyone especially to Yuki for being there...

She was scared that Yuki would make Mayu fell for her again after all these time...

Also she was so worried about Mayu that she needed a target to lash out...

Eh... Yuko and Atsuko were telling Yuki the truth about Mayu's betrayal as an act...

How did Yuki feel about it....?

What's the impact in Yuki's life from now on?

Ah... Yuki did not feel nice knowing that Mayu had a girlfriend

Yuki might have feeling for Mayu all this time but she thought it was her love for best friend...

Would Yuki's feeling turn to something more than friendship?

Why did Yuko and others not want Jurina and family to know the truth as to why Mayu got into the accident?

I thought Jurina and family had the right to know the truth...

Would Jurina and family know the truth later?

If known, what Jurina reaction on this matter?

Still wondering as to why Sae was not able to save Yuki... when She was near...?

Luckily Mayu able to come out with only minor injuries...

Ah... Mayu was happy that Yuki would not hate her again... and can be friends again...

But Yuki seem like she wanted more than friendship with Mayu now... why did she suddenly have an interest in Mayu?

Was Yuki always like Mayu back then... or just due to the heroic action... she became attracted to Mayu?

Ah... Jurina and Mayu look so lovey dovey... so cute... staring at each other full of love and tenderness...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

PS: 'those two making love in front of me' I would not have put it as 'making love'
       more like 'staring at each other full tenderness' something like that...

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