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« Reply #140 on: March 10, 2007, 06:27:29 PM »
Wow. I read this chapter twice. And might I add it seems really cool when you have "THe Point of no Return" playing in the background.

And the Phantom's face was revealed as Maki was Kicking Miki's ass...how perfect was that timing?

but DAYUM...I can't make ANY comments on this chapter. Not that it was crappy, I just don't want the living shit slapped out of me by you.
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« Reply #141 on: March 11, 2007, 06:35:12 AM »
The fight between Reina and Miki... phew it wasn't as bad as I thought it'll be, Reina really has some guts to attack Miki like that... thank god Maki and Yossi came to her rescue!

Gaahhhhhhhh... What a cute way to confess her feelings! But eh... arn't they rushing their relationship alittle too fast? Reina just confessed and then they had sex...

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« Reply #142 on: March 13, 2007, 11:05:50 PM »
Yuuyami: XD I might write a perv on RenaiRev if it's requested enough by le readers. :D Oh, and it was your 666th posts! I think that's considered good luck for vampires, right? :ONwahaha:

Rei.rev.07: XD Spitting in the face is always a good tatic if you're desperate.

JFC: I read this comment at school and roffled. XD

Estrea: Woo! Thank you very much~!

rndmnwierd: You STILL want her dead? :ON@_@:

len.chan: Let your imagination fly as much as you want. XD

coachie: XD Not quite what you expected, right? I was actually thinking of putting Maki there, but decided it'd be cooler if Reina put up more of a fight. She's yankii after all.

Amarghetta: Yay! Thank you for reading. ^^- I'm glad you like it.

KrazyForKamei: Ah, if there is a secret behind Yossie, it will be revealed later. >:3 But there's always the possibility that there is indeed no secret to it and Miki was just weak from le fight and not eating.

black velvet: It wouldn't be my fic without a bit of awkwardness in it. XD

YoukaiChica: Love can cause great blindness, even if your life is in danger.

sLaVe: A pissed Miki is always hawt. <3

Tanachan: You are getting smarter. XD -pats head- Maybe I'll let you post a normal comment without slapping you sometime.

stefy: There was a lot of sexual tension between them, a LOT. XD
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Chapter Tweleve - A Day of Filming
« Reply #143 on: March 13, 2007, 11:07:47 PM »
Although the memories of the prior night were rather enjoyable, the wonky eyed teen started to mentally panic slightly.

What if this was a one night thing!? What if Tsunku finds out!? What if my mom finds out!? And Yuko wouldn’t let me live it down…And what if that was all a dream? Oh my gahh!!! What if NACCHI finds out!?

Reina felt Maki move slightly, and turned to see if the soloist was awake. As soon as she faced Maki, she was greeted with a kiss and all of Reina’s mental panicking vanished as she kissed the other back.

“G’morning.” Maki said with a smile as she sat up, scanning the room for her clothes, which were scattered across the floor.

“Very good mornin’.” Reina said, returning the smile as she too sat up, both of them blushing horribly.

Damn…This isn’t a time for me to be all shy… The two thought in unison.

Neither of them had much more to think, or say, before that familiar FLAME song started to play from somewhere in the room. “Ugh…” Reina groaned slightly, reaching for her cell phone that was on the floor next to the bed.

“’Ello?” Reina said sleepily into the phone. “What do you mean where am I?” she asked, raising an eyebrow. “What!? We have filming today? Yeah, I’ll be there soon. I’m very sorry.” she hung up the phone, pretty much falling out of the bed while she started to gather her clothes quickly, pulling them on.

Maki also started to get up, grabbing her own clothes and putting them on. “You’re not going in those, are you?” she asked as Reina picked up her bloodstained jeans. “And your shirt is just as bad.”

“Umm…” Reina scratched the back of her head, laughing lightly.

“You can borrow some of my clothes.” Maki said with a small laugh, opening her dresser. “I’m sorry I made you late.”

“It’s not your fault.” Reina said with a smile, “Apparently everyone found out around six this morning. Last minute things, of course.”

Maki nodded, and tossed Reina a t-shirt and jeans. The shirt was a bit baggy on her in certain areas, and the jeans a bit too long on her legs, but overall everything fit okay.

“Thank you very much.” Reina said as she was pulling on her shoes. “I owe you a lot.”

“Don’t worry about it.” Maki smiled, walking over to Reina. “Mind if I walk you there?”

Reina laughed, “It’ll be more like a run, but I‘d be more than happy if you did.”

Maki pulled on her shoes as well, and they started to jog as they talked.

“Umm…So about last night.” Reina finally brought herself to bring up. “Should we keep this whole thing about us a secret?”

Maki thought for a moment, “Well, I personally wouldn’t like to keep it a secret, but we could get into trouble with Tsunku.”

“Yeah, I don’t want to keep it a secret either.” Reina said, “But what if we just make sure Tsunku just doesn’t find out?” she gave a small smirk.

Maki also smirked, “Or the press.” she added.

“Or Nacchi.”

Maki laughed lightly. “Alright, that sounds like a good plan.” she said, “But what does Nacchi have to do with this?”

“I dunno, she just kinda intimidates me a bit I guess.” Reina said, “She thinks kissing between girls is completely wrong.”

“You started a fight with Miki, but you’re intimidated by Nacchi?” Maki gave a small laugh.

“Heh. Weird, ain’t it?” Reina also laughed.

Within minutes, the two reached the filming studio and entered the building. Reina gave Maki a quick kiss before running off to the changing rooms. She had ten minutes to get ready.

“There you are!” Eri said with a laugh as Reina walked into the room. “Where have you been? I was going to call you soon.”

Reina scratched the back of her head, “Well, I was--”

“She was off having sex.” A voice said with a smirk, Reina quickly turned her head to see who it was, not believing her ears.

This was worse than Miki.

Yuko smirked, walking over to the two girls. “And with Maki, I’m guessing.”

Reina felt her face turn red. “Erm…How--”

She was cut off again by Yuko. “How do I know?” she asked, laughing, “It’s obvious, m’dear. Your hair has that ‘I-just-had-sex-and-am-late-for-work’ look, you’re blushing, and lets not forget those hickeys.”

“Wah?!” Reina asked, running over to the mirror. “How do you know what peoples hair looks like after that?”

“I’ve seen that exact look on my little Turtle here after I had a bit of fun with her.” Yuko put an arm around a now horribly blushing Eri.

“Yuuuko!!” Eri said, looking away from the two girls.

Reina had no clue what to say at that moment, so she simply started to try and fix her hair.

“You should cover those up.” Yuko said with a laugh, “Use this.” she tossed a bottle of cover-up makeup to Reina. “It worked well with Eri when she had them.”

“Yuuuko!!” Eri cried again, blushing even more.

“Aww, you’re so cute when you blush.” Yuko said with a grin, kissing Eri quickly before running off to get ready on the set.

Reina took the makeup, and applied it quickly, luckily it did work rather well. Eri sat down, the silence annoyingly awkward.

“So…You two really did it?” Eri asked suddenly.

“Did you?”

“Well…Uh, yeah.” Eri said, glancing at Reina. “…But isn’t she like four years older than you?”

“Looks who’s talking, she's sixteen years older than you.”

“At least we’re legal.”

Before Reina could come up with a response, Yossie walked into the room “You have two minutes to get out here.” she said to the two with a smile, “Glad you made it, Reina-chan.”

Reina nodded to the leader, and stood up, very thankful that she had time to fix herself up. Both Eri and herself grabbed their kindergarten uniform for the World Children’s Games and put them on.

“Why is Nakazawa-san here anyway?” Reina enquired as they walked onto the set.

“Because I’m your teacher today.” Yuko said with a grin.

“Great.” Reina mumbled, “Just great.”

“Aw, come on Reina-chan.” Eri said with a smile, “She’s not as bad as you think.”

“It’s not that.” Reina said, glaring in a certain direction, at a certain vampire who was now chatting with Yossie.

Eri looked from one yankii to the other with slight confusion. “You two get into an argument?”

“Something like that.” Reina said as Miki looked over at the wonky eyed teen, returning the glare with her own.

Reina and Eri sat down, and they started to film. The prize was doughnuts and they looked mighty delicious. Too bad they only got a little bit in the end, but Reina couldn’t help but to smile when she noticed Eri glancing at Yuko throughout the games whenever she spoke. Yet that smile quickly vanished when she noticed Miki’s little grab at Ai. That perverted demon seemed to put Reina in a horrid mood.

Although, throughout filming, she started to feel better. Yuko turned out to be the host for the main segment as well. It was a drawing game, and Reina was rather good at it. She even got sponge cake.

While filming the main segment though, Reina had to be next to Miki. Which almost killed her, and from the looks of it, Miki too. They refused to make eye contact with one another, and the one time their eyes met, it was a death glare from both sides while Yuko danced over to them.

Eri on the other hand, was having a lot of fun as she showed her interesting artwork (which looked very…original compared to the others), sang along with the songs, and the occasional glance at Yuko when the camera wasn’t looking. Reina was shocked that she hadn’t noticed them before, it was almost more than obvious the two had a thing for one another. But what shocked the wonky eyed girl even more was the fact that she started to see Eri and Yuko as a cute couple.

Before Reina had a chance to run off after filming, Eri told her that she should drop by and watch them film the News Segment. The turtle even promised that Reina would enjoy it, especially if she was pissed at Miki. A little amusement never hurt anybody. Plus, Maki was working at that time anyway.

Eri was right. Reina was amused.

Here she was, trying not to laugh while Miki Fujimoto was tied up in a chair, looking rather pathetic and helpless.

Yuko was taking Miki’s place, go figure. Reina personally thought that Yuko did a much better job than the vampire, it was like Maido Arii all over again.

After filming, Eri, Yuko, and Reina chatted before the couple ended up having to run off to do some errands.

Reina was just about to head out herself before a person stepped in front of her. “What are you doing here?” Miki said, trying to keep her tone normal but it ended up as a half growl.

“Eri wanted me to stop by.” Reina said, giving Miki a small glare. “Now let me through.”

“You’re lucky they showed up last night.”

“Damn right I am.” Reina said, pushing Miki aside as she started to walk towards the exit.

“You’re not leaving that easily.” Miki snatched the back of Reina’s shirt and shoved her into an empty room.

“Just because you don’t have Matsuura-san anymore doesn’t mean you have to try and get in my pants.”

Miki growled and shoved Reina against the wall. “I’ll kill you right here and now.”

“You know, you’re not very threatening with those clothes on.” Reina pointed out to Miki, who was still wearing her lolita outfit.

Miki punched the wall, centimeters from the teen’s head.

“Like I said, not so threatening.”

“Where’d you come up with a line like that?” Miki said, smirking. “Some American fan fiction about yourself?”

Reina pushed Miki away, but it caused a small amount of pain in her injured shoulder. She knew she couldn’t fight the vampire, so the best plan was to get away. She headed towards the door.

“Didn’t I tell you you’re not getting away that easily?” Miki stepped in front of the door, the only exit in the room.

“What do you want?” Reina snapped, “Didn’t you have enough fun beating the shit out of me last night, Lolita-chan?”

“Quit it with the nicknames.” Miki spat, twitching slightly.

Reina smirked slightly, she knew Miki hated those outfits. “Why don’t you go off to an anime convention? You’ll fit right in during the cosplay event.”

Before Miki could reply to, or hit, Reina, her cell phone started to ring. She picked it up and leaned against the door, reading the text.

“You’re lucky.” she spat, opening the door and headed for the changing rooms.

“Apparently luck’s on my side today.” Reina said, blinking a couple times as she left the building as quickly as she possibly could.

After a few minutes, Miki had also exited the building, rereading the text she received from Aya:

‘Let’s finish this.’
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« Reply #144 on: March 13, 2007, 11:08:56 PM »
Dibs on first comment! <3

I love Yuko and Eri's chemistry so much xD So crackalicious, yet they're meant to be *____________* Especially when Yuko openly admitted that she's had fun with Eri and what she looked like afterwards, haha xD Then there's the whole Threatening-Miki-In-Lolita thing which I noticed you alluded to my fic yet again, roffle xD!!!!

Gahh damn I want to see this final fight with Aya and Miki! *________*; I will laugh if she runs out in her lolita costume xD But I doubt that would happen xD Looking forward to the big fight!...And hope Miki doesn't get killed this time o_o;... What's worse, what if it's a repeat and Miki goes after Reina after this again? o___O; I smell another sex scene with Reina and Maki >:] Then again, what kind of author repeats? haha, just the little crazy old man in me xD

I repeat, I look forward to the fight! <3
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« Reply #145 on: March 14, 2007, 03:15:04 AM »
This chapter cracked me up with all the funny references. XD I'll just name a few, because I don't want to stretch my whole post too much. :P

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“Well…Uh, yeah.” Eri said, glancing at Reina. “…But isn’t she like four years older than you?”

“Looks who’s talking, she's sixteen years older than you.”

Pot-kettle-black. XD

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“Where’d you come up with a line like that?” Miki said, smirking. “Some American fan fiction about yourself?”

THAT cracked me up. Subtle way to break the 4th wall! XD

And anyway, I agree with Yuuyami. Dying to see how the final showdown between Aya and Miki goes. Gonna be seriously hot. XD

*gets down on knees and prays* Let there be GAM, let there be GAM...

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« Reply #146 on: March 14, 2007, 03:45:31 AM »
Vampire-Slayer chick fight part 2!!!

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« Reply #147 on: March 14, 2007, 03:54:41 AM »
that chapter was gold
YukoXEri :heart: MakiXReina
LoliMiki confronting Reina XD

Ok, everybody's waiting for the BIG EPIC AyaXMiki fight, but I'll predict there won't be one! They gonna settle this somehow but not with a hand to hand fight.
Maybe a pillow fight XD

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« Reply #148 on: March 14, 2007, 05:31:01 AM »
Well dang, what's there to say that hasn't already been touched on?

Yuko/Eri? Check
Maki/Reina? Check-a-roo
Miki in Lolita dress('talking' to Reina)? Uh-huh
Witty Banter? You know it
GAM fight? Yep

Hmm, so what can I say...? Oh, I know!~ Reina in Maki's clothes! Heh heh, that's certainly one way to get into somebody's pants! *crickets chirp*
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« Reply #149 on: March 15, 2007, 04:32:16 PM »
Ahaha. Reina's afraid of Nacchi. Then again, I guess I would be too. My favorite part was her thoughts when she woke up. Amazing. Now a GAM fight is coming up, eh? You know, those two just need to admit that they want to get into each other's pants and be done with it. Maki and Reina did and it wasn't that hard. Then again, Reina and Maki weren't trying to kill each other...

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« Reply #150 on: March 15, 2007, 04:34:55 PM »
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Then again, Reina and Maki weren't trying to kill each other...


You know, the fact that Aya and Miki are trying to kill each other might make for hotter and rougher action when they finally come to their senses and do it.

...ok I did not just say that. =X

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« Reply #151 on: March 16, 2007, 01:30:27 AM »
Ooh <3 This is looking good

*bleeping himself out for fear of smackage starting now*
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« Reply #152 on: March 17, 2007, 11:36:19 PM »
Quote from: rndmnwierd;328841
Heh heh, that's certainly one way to get into somebody's pants! *crickets chirp*
I need to stop thinking...
xD don't worry, I cracked up... but that's only cuz im high up on iced caffine... So I need to stop thinking as well.

Of course those pants are  gonna big on Reina! No one can fill thos hot hips and femine muscle-thighs... <3~
I just can't wait to see GAM fight, it's like the highlight of the day :ONwhistle:

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« Reply #153 on: March 19, 2007, 12:42:02 AM »
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“So…You two really did it?” Eri asked suddenly.

“Did you?”

“Well…Uh, yeah.” Eri said, glancing at Reina. “…But isn’t she like four years older than you?”

“Looks who’s talking, she's sixteen years older than you.”

“At least we’re legal.”
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« Reply #154 on: March 20, 2007, 06:21:25 AM »
GUESS WHO'S BACK AND CAUGHT UP!
It's your number one fan who's been too busy to post til now. (Yes even though it was spring break)

Writing the part where Maki and Reina (you know what in bed) was a really bold course of action, especially in a work-safe fanfic part of the forums. But I love it because both girls are sekushi!

I loved the updates, keep writing. ^_^
Sai-chan, may I give you a slice of cake for your hard work and effort? *blush*
I'll continue to read and appreciate this fan-fic as long as there'll be more chapters. *hands out piece of cake*
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« Reply #155 on: March 20, 2007, 08:34:32 PM »
Yuuyami: Yes, Eri and Yuko are ment to be. XD Gotta love them! You're beloved fight is here~!

Estrea: -pats head- Let's see if your praying worked. XD

glcorps2002: Nice title for it. XD

coachie: Ah, a pillow fight would of been funny. XD

rndmnwierd: I thought that was a good one joke. :ROFL

YoukaiChica: Ah, Estrea is right on that one. It COULD lead to rougher and hawter action. :ONkekeke:

Tanachan: I could smack you for the sake of what you could be saying. :O

sLaVe: Damn you got me thinking of Maki's hawt hips and femine muscle-thighs. :pen_bleed:

JFC: That's Yuko for ya. XD

Ame-kun: Yay! You're back. :panda_kiss: And you brought cake! <3 -munches on it- Yes, it was a slightly bold move but it's not like I could post in the perv anyway. ^^;;
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« Reply #156 on: March 20, 2007, 08:35:52 PM »
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« Reply #157 on: March 20, 2007, 08:36:53 PM »
Miki already knew where the fight would be, although it was never mentioned in the text she received from Aya. She opened up the large wooden doors to an abandoned building, Aya and her had spent many memories in that building, often going there if they wanted a nice quiet and peaceful place to walk around and just be themselves.

The vampire looked up at a pillar in the ceiling, from which then supported a platform that a person could sit on to get a good view of the place. Aya and Miki had spent hours in that spot talking, relaxing, and sharing secrets. She closed her eyes for a second, watching the memories fly by in her mind but quickly opened them after hearing that voice she knew all too well.

“So, you actually came, eh?” Aya said, leaning against a wall. She had a different look about her than normal, and Miki noticed it immediately.

She’s serious about this…You can see it in her eyes.

The two held gazes for seconds until Miki finally took the first step forward, “My best friend wouldn‘t try to kill me.” she said calmly.

“My best friend wouldn‘t be some monster!” Aya snapped, pulling out a long katana, in which a cross was engraved at the base.

Miki dodged the sword that was jabbed straight for her heart by grabbing the blade with her palms, the tip of the blade just millimeters from the groping devil’s breast.

“You wouldn’t want to ruin those, would you?” Miki said, taking a jump backwards before Aya attempted another attack.

There’s no choice…

After dodging yet another attack, Miki jumped high in the air, doing a front flip, landing behind Aya so the two were back to back. Quickly, Miki elbowed the other in the back before kicking the back of her knee, causing Aya to collapse onto the floor.

Aya gave a low growl, and spun her body, pushing herself up into a handstand while she kicked Miki in the chin and spun herself onto her feet while her opponent stumbled backwards. She took the opportunity vertically swung the sword at Miki.

The vampire once again jumped backwards to avoid the sword but soon found it was now taking a horizontal swing at her. Miki quickly fell on her back to try to dodge the sword but it managed to graze her cheek before she hit the floor.

Aya then made another attempt to slice Miki, who had almost nowhere to run at that moment. The sword came down and such a fast pace, Aya closed her eyes at the last second before it would kill the vampire. After feeling her sword contact, she opened her eyes to find that the sword was pressed into the bottom of Miki’s hooker boots from her lolita outfit.

Aya didn’t know exactly what to think, and Miki took advantage of that moment by kicking her in the ankles, causing her to fall, but the hunter caught herself with her hands to keep from smashing her face into the concrete.

“How dare you try to murder me! After all we've been through?!” Miki yelled as they both got up, wiping the blood away with her hand, the wound would take longer to heal thanks to the engraved cross on the other’s sword.

“The connection between us is dead!”

Aya quickly pulled out a dagger and just as Miki had time to realize what was going on, she sidestepped, and the dagger flew into the wall behind her. It seemed as soon as Miki pulled out the dagger, Aya felt a small sting on her cheek. She ran a finger across it, just a graze, just as Miki had received earlier. After all, an eye for an eye they say.

Now with fire in her eyes, the younger charged at Miki with full force, her katana pointed right at the other. Miki jumped up at the last possible second, holding onto a ceiling pillar while watching Aya, who’s katana was now stuck into the wall much like her dagger was moments ago.

Miki dropped down quickly before Aya had a chance to get her katana and grabbed her shoulder. The other turned to face Miki, making an attempt to punch her but was blocked swiftly and Miki made a jab for her stomach which was blocked as well.

“You’re holding back!” Aya spat as her fist finally made contact with Miki’s shoulder.

Miki punched Aya’s jaw out of reaction from the hit she took, causing Aya to stumble backwards. “And you’re not?! After all, would someone fight their best friend like this!?”

“We’re not best friends!” Aya ripped her sword out of the wall as Miki grabbed the best weapon she could find for her own defense in that time. Which was a crowbar.

Although, one might think it was rather pathetic of her to use a crowbar, it managed to block the katana from carving into Miki’s skin.

Aya attacked with more force, Miki could tell she was really going all out this time and had no choice but to fight back with all she had as well. The metal of their weapons clashed against each other, neither had a half a second to think of anything but of the attacks they were sending or receiving. Finally, Miki kneed Aya in the stomach, sending her backwards.

“Not best friends?! What are we then?! I thought I knew you, Aya!” Miki said, trying to catch her breath as she spoke, or rather yelled.

Aya lunged at Miki, swinging the blade down with all of her might. Though, the vampire raised her crowbar just in time to block the move. In that brief momentum, Miki had enough power to actually push Aya higher into the air with her block. So when Aya was launched, Miki jumped high in attempt to land a good hit on the hunter’s chest. However, Aya managed to block that hit, but accidentally propelled herself even higher into the air with the sheer force.

They both might have fallen from there, but the situation did not call for it. As if there was an invisible ledge, the vampire also launched herself higher in the air by kicking off that invisible ledge, and tried again with the aerial attack, for those kinds of attacks are supposed to be a vampire’s specialty. She made the mistake of thrusting her crowbar instead of swinging it, so Aya winded up dodging it by using her own sword as a counter to move herself away from the attack.

After that, she gained the advantage of gravity as she fell towards the ground, but not without carrying Miki with her. She clung to Miki’s waist and then flipped over so that Miki’s head would be the first to bash into the floor.

At this point in time though, Miki also had the advantage of gravity for she also tried to flip the other as well. Both women were in a twister of flipping as one tried to land the other on their head. Eventually, their cyclone of rolling was so fast that it even made them dizzy. Finally, the fated victim who landed first happened to be Miki. Aya got off of the vampire and held her sword at her side. “You got too laidback into thinking that you knew me…”

Miki got up despite the blood coming from her head. “Well is there anything else I don’t know about you?!” She charged with the crowbar in hand, ready to strike Aya hard in the head. The hunter ducked as the crowbar swung overhead, and then did an uppercut with her fist. The vampire caught Aya’s tactic and moved to the side, letting Aya miss, and then ramming into her full force with the back of her shoulder. The younger was thrown against another pillar. Aya then got up with the support of her sword.

“Oh, here’s a good one! What’s your favorite episode from Dragonball GT?!” Miki swung the crowbar at Aya’s head yet again. Instead of dodging it, Aya used the tip of the hilt of her blade to stop the attack altogether, and disrupted it by swinging her sword from that angle. Miki managed to back away in time, but the sword managed to cut off a lock of hair from her.

“Here’s another! How could you hate me so much?! Is your job more important than your best friend?!” Miki raised the crowbar again, ready to strike the incoming raging woman lunging at her. This time, it seemed like a true sword fight, regardless of the crowbar Miki wielded. Aya was pressing forward the attack, while Miki walked backwards trying to block all of Aya’s frantic hits. There were a few times where Miki had the upper hand and was the one walking forward with Aya blocking, but this battle seemed to favor the younger more than the older.

Miki felt her back press into a wall, nearly tripping if it hadn’t been for Aya’s holy blade causing her to throw out blocking moves every time. Because she didn’t have enough space for her arms to quickly block a move aimed for her chest, Aya managed to knock the crowbar out of Miki’s hands with a swift kick, and during that turn, Miki tried to punch the hunter, but Aya was too cunning for that. She slid against the punch and grabbed that fist. Miki tried throwing the other fist for a second punch but for some reason, Aya managed to pin that one too. Now, Aya was holding both of Miki’s wrists with her left hand, and raised them high over their heads, against the wall, while Aya quickly placed her sword horizontally against Miki’s neck, ready to force it forward in case the vampire tried something.

Miki was trapped.

“For one thing, if you knew me so well you would know that I don’t hate you. We’re not best friends because I thought we were something more than that. The only thing I hate is that you kept it a secret from me…”

Before Miki had a chance to do anything, the katana fell to the floor and she felt Aya’s lips press against her own. The older didn’t reply with words, nor did she need to as she placed her hands on younger’s hips and deepened the kiss.

Their once innocent playful kisses soon became more forceful, each wanting more and more of the other. The groping devil couldn’t resist any longer, her hands started to wander around Aya’s body, making their way up her shirt as she started to kiss down Aya’s jaw line. Just before Miki reached the younger’s collarbone, she started her way back up again to Aya’s cut on her cheek and licked the small amount of blood that trickled from it clean.

A good hour or two later, the two walked out of the building hand in hand. Aya seemed to be blushing rather horribly as she fixed her hair with her free hand, which caused Miki’s smirk to grow.

“A vampire and a hunter, who would of thought?” Miki said with a small laugh.

Aya looked forward to see the sun starting to set in the distance. “We’re not a vampire and a hunter…” she said softly.

“Eh, really?” Miki looked at Aya with a raised eyebrow.

The younger turned to face the other with a kind smile. “We’re simply people. Nothing more, nothing less.”
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« Reply #158 on: March 20, 2007, 08:38:41 PM »
Amazing fight! *_____* The hold Aya had on Miki for the final was kinky and hawt ;] Glad they love eachother... After beating the shit out of eachother, roffle xD

Hopefully, this means Miki won't beat the crap out of Reina anymore :]

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« Reply #159 on: March 20, 2007, 10:43:18 PM »
AHA I was right! XD XD XD

I love you for answering my GAM prayer! Hot fight....that last bit when they start kissing...:pen_bleed:

Can I beg for a perv version of their encounter? Pwease? :baa60776:

Love that last line. "We're simply people. Nothing more, nothing less." Amazing what love can do. XD

Can't wait for what happens next!

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